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dbc7f74eaa28 | FA03BD616C6B | and if they have doubt that their nort going to make well the new inovations that wont hurt us and it will now longer be dangerous . | Evidence | Ineffective |
8ab98dc0c0fc | FA130E0C813E | Yes, I believe that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit also | Position | Adequate |
fb08beaa1795 | FA130E0C813E | In paragraph 4, it states "astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar sytem." It was once covered with large oceans. Venus has features such as valleys, mountains, and craters | Evidence | Adequate |
da68efa76871 | FA130E0C813E | If Earth was to end Venus would possibly be our best choice to go to. | Claim | Ineffective |
311773ef8089 | FA130E0C813E | Venus is referred to as Earth's "twin." Venus has the density and size closest to Earth | Evidence | Adequate |
0e5455df8e1b | FA130E0C813E | In paragraph 8, is states " Venus has value." Only because the insight we have so far on Venus is unbelievable. Studying more on this planet may lead us to many equally intimidating endeavors. | Evidence | Ineffective |
685ababaca72 | FA130E0C813E | There are also many more things we need to study about Venus, that may not be so safe. Venus is the second planet to our sun, which may be too hot for humans to be on. This planet is a very challenging place to examine | Counterclaim | Adequate |
524968757c34 | FA130E0C813E | Each mission that was sent to Venus no spacecraft has survived more than a few hours. In paragraph 2, it states "not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades." Not one person have been missioned to go to Venus for those reasons.
In paragraph 3, it states "temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." Also in paragraph 3, is saids "the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." These issues are way too dangerous for humans to be on. Solar power could be plentiful but the raditation would not exceed Earth levels. This may still be survival for humans.
In paragraph 6, it states "researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance." Like I have said no human has been on Venus because they will die right away | Evidence | Adequate |
ae1b1384e336 | FA130E0C813E | But, they believe they can make a machince that last long enough to live to take those samples. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
4bbd97fc5bb9 | FA130E0C813E | They would have to make that machine with mechanical parts so that it can be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. In paragraph 8, it states " Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. | Evidence | Adequate |
cc6941cdffef | FA130E0C813E | I believe they will and can studying farther than they have in the past years. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
e33ec697757f | FA15A1E3BF2C | Variouse forms of life, just like earth today, venus has some simliar stuff like earth it has valleys, moutains and craters and scientest think that venus was cover all in water like how earth was million years ago. Venus solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels,not easy condtions but survival for humans. | Lead | Ineffective |
116255d292de | FA15A1E3BF2C | Nasa is also doing still doing studeis today and sending people over there to study the planet to see if the conditons are getting any better or worst so they can studie and any maybe someday the human beigns can live there in another decade once they say the venus is a safe place to visit and live there.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
d21236ed56f2 | FA15A1E3BF2C | When you land of venus its dangerous, So people are creating ways that there makigng a ship that will hovering safley around ground condetions that cannot stad the dense of the ground of the atmosphere and rendering phitigraphhy and vidoeography and the most important they cant get smaples on rock,gas or anything else,In that case scientist are seeking to conduct missions on venus. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
bf7f585b3965 | FA20F1758F03 | Who wouldnt want to have a car? Thats a reason we get from desination A to destination B. Vauban, Germany they are gicing up their cars, like why would you give a object that gets you places faster than walking. | Lead | Adequate |
9a785679f1f4 | FA20F1758F03 | Thats not smart. | Position | Ineffective |
0f13c34ea024 | FA20F1758F03 | People that had cars have to give their car away in order to live in Germany. Vauban's streets are completely " car-free". 70 percent of Vauban's families do not have cars. | Evidence | Adequate |
3192393f5461 | FA20F1758F03 | Which mean the kids would have to walk everywhere they go, also the parents when you have jobs..what if you dont get to work on time? | Claim | Adequate |
e5385a2c943a | FA20F1758F03 | Paris enforced a partical driving ban to clear the airr of the global ci ty. If they didnt leave their cars at home they would have been fined for $31.
Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-years of intensifying smog. China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world . But paris typically has more smog than other European capitals.. Last week paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter .
President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gasemissions, unveiled last week will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior.
With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting asa result of the recession may find less reasons to resume the habit | Evidence | Ineffective |
18c54ecf0957 | FA2BC6C3A09B | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Many of these summer projects are required for honors classes, such as AP or classes that are in preparation for them. Some think that summer assignments should be designed by teachers. Others think that students would benefit more if it were designed by the students themselves. | Lead | Adequate |
5b2d87edaaf5 | FA2BC6C3A09B | Summer projects should be teacher-designed | Position | Adequate |
dda2ee9c755f | FA2BC6C3A09B | students' lack of motivation, | Claim | Effective |
988bb25ba050 | FA2BC6C3A09B | students having inadequate knowledge of content, | Claim | Effective |
21c0aada74dc | FA2BC6C3A09B | the difficulty of coming to agreements. | Claim | Adequate |
c1e0425f4df5 | FA2BC6C3A09B | They tend to procrastinate a lot, especially during the summer. Students may go on summer vacation or have plans with friends; whatever the reason may be, many do not think of summer assignments as a priority. Teachers also have summer break, which many people tend to forget. If summer assignments were student-designed, teachers would most likely have to do routine progress checks, because of the lack of motivation shown by students. This would be inconvenient for both the teacher and the student. Although summer assignments are not necessarily a main priority, they are still vital for the upcoming school year, especially if a student is taking an honors class.
| Evidence | Effective |
93b9975c0fbd | FA2BC6C3A09B | Direction of content is almost, if not always, provided by the teacher. Teachers plan summer assignments ahead or use ones from previous years; however, they typically do not plan out the syllabus for the upcoming school year before summer break, mainly because it is too early and many adjustments can be made. | Evidence | Effective |
7f863586c21e | FA2BC6C3A09B | It must be taken into consideration that students would have varying opinions, considering what classes they are taking and/or will be; some may think that an assignment is asking for too much, while others may think it is asking for too little. | Evidence | Effective |
46396e972e68 | FA2BC6C3A09B | Although allowing students to create their assignments would most likely be more enjoyable for them, | Counterclaim | Effective |
ca29f44e450c | FA2BC6C3A09B | there is a higher chance it would make them less prepared for the course. Students would struggle to maintain responsibility towards the assignment. | Rebuttal | Effective |
ee1318558876 | FA2BC6C3A09B | As there are many benefits to having student-designed summer assignments, they are less reliable than if the assignment were to be teacher-designed. Teachers have a better understanding of the content, are well-prepared, and can answer questions easily. Although students may find it less enjoyable, they are incapable of producing an assignment that would help them be the most prepared for the course. Students' lack of motivation, inadequate knowledge of content, and difficulty of coming to agreements all make it unfeasible. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
1162118d08ac | FA35444BD9C6 | why are some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure that the students countinue learning during their break ? | Lead | Adequate |
634947e6ed35 | FA35444BD9C6 | some schools are better then some schools in the county of virgina. | Claim | Adequate |
c44c8460f576 | FA35444BD9C6 | the schools in the state are most likely to give out projects to keep students assure to countinue to learn during the break. student are likly to not do anything during a break because during the break student want to relax and go have fun with their girl firends and faimly members. | Evidence | Adequate |
ee70b88781fb | FA35444BD9C6 | student that are smart will do the project | Claim | Adequate |
6bee916c989a | FA35444BD9C6 | during the break the bad students be doing sexual things and having a nice time during the break and to the students that are mostly to do the project will be disapointed on how they failed the project | Evidence | Adequate |
e77ad31e76c2 | FA35444BD9C6 | student design there projects in a better way then teachers be doing because the way that teachers put there projects togeather to clarafie the way the project should be done | Position | Adequate |
c48881415881 | FA35444BD9C6 | why would shools require student to do a project during the break | Claim | Adequate |
ca772ce92cee | FA35444BD9C6 | do teachers know that the black community haves like twenty persent of our students in the class room are not going to do the project to help a student during a school break is to go to the student home a give him work or notes to studdy over the break. | Evidence | Ineffective |
031d16865928 | FA35444BD9C6 | to have a nice grade and to succsed in life is to do your work in the class room and to always be something in life and to be respectful to others and to do a project when it's do the next day for a person thats always doing a project that will make your teacher happy that you did it over the break. | Claim | Adequate |
b4f85bf395d1 | FA35444BD9C6 | some schools that hand out projects during a school break is not the class that i would want to be in because when the teachers put all that pesure on the student thats what makes us want do the projects when the teacher give it to us.
| Counterclaim | Ineffective |
14c6aa6d6fcb | FA35444BD9C6 | students are require to complete summer projects to continue learning during their break to assure that when student come back that the studnet will have a clear mind that he or she will know how to to the work that he or she gives them. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
670cb65cdeca | FA3E37900E3D | My mother once told said "
It's good to try new things , but do what's best for you" | Lead | Adequate |
ef7c2aff26e9 | FA3E37900E3D | I do agree with the decision of students participating in a extracurricular activity like, sports or working on a specific project or idea. Even working with council members. | Position | Effective |
6dd984563686 | FA3E37900E3D | students need more to do then just the simple things. | Claim | Adequate |
8bf08059d9dc | FA3E37900E3D | everyone should try something different once in a while. | Evidence | Adequate |
51033f8e5e7d | FA3E37900E3D | competing in sports is more of a fun and energetic way to entertain yourself in what you do. | Claim | Adequate |
ee49025afa87 | FA3E37900E3D | 50% of people who participates in sporty events is more likely to get out there more and try newer things, | Evidence | Adequate |
5b1c9b8b80ea | FA3E37900E3D | , #1: Try new things but don't go too far with it. | Claim | Adequate |
2c52bfd1885f | FA3E37900E3D | The way that the new idea occurs may effect how you do things normally, | Claim | Ineffective |
7315a536e008 | FA3E37900E3D | Be safe and put forth your best effort in what you do and what happens. | Claim | Ineffective |
0712b853bf78 | FA3E37900E3D | I agree and believe that students should participate in sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council because, in my opinion students may try new things based on what they like and how they feel towards it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9c355a678f73 | FA4FE7706A1A | the use of a car limit using can help in different ways | Lead | Ineffective |
ba835c042896 | FA4FE7706A1A | it could help us save the planet from a greenhouse effect | Claim | Adequate |
13be3f766df6 | FA4FE7706A1A | improve safty as it woul be a lower chance to get into a car crash with can result in injury or death | Claim | Adequate |
be25fccd9c41 | FA4FE7706A1A | t would make the wourld a better place and here to explain why limit usage is good. | Claim | Adequate |
ec9612272866 | FA4FE7706A1A | in the story its says that as the population grows more in american they has to be a production in cars to help the person to get to one place to another. but however in january 1995 many americans were cash-strapped due to the decrease in driving along with the unemployed wasnt going to work aanyways as they try to recover underway. in another story it tells how people could live without cars but in germany as one of the family said "when i had a car i was always tense and im happier this way. As studys show that 70% of familes do not own cars but as well are happy just by walking or riding a bike beacuse cars make up the greenhouse gas. While in the vauban homes are being adopted in order to provide transportation with less spaced parking then walking all of the way to the mall. in america the agency of environmental are staring to promote and also want a "car reduced" area where they can help perserve the wild life as 80% of the law has gone to the highway and the other 20% is the transport its self. In other places they have a car-free day which means no cars or transport will be used through out the day as many people would take a bike or walk or even hike as one person said "its a good opportunity to take away stress along the pollution in the air" as it shows that there should be a limited usage of cars. As this could impact the world along with the enviorment around it. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9614fa4248ba | FA4FE7706A1A | the care usage limited idea is good | Position | Adequate |
cc89aa664056 | FA4FE7706A1A | it helps people support the enviorment along with decreasing greenhouse gas and smog as people will either take a bike or walk to get from place to place without having the traffic jam struggle. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
005239304fb9 | FACC34F1875E | Five cities have been reported to have had a day to where they banned cars. They call these days, "Car Free Days". Vauban, Germany; Paris, France; Bogota, Colombia; Cali Colombia; and Valledupar Colombia. This day ended with positive results.
| Lead | Adequate |
2fdb35a06ff0 | FACC34F1875E | For starters, the residents in Vaulban, Germany have given up their cars. Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbudden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg. Vauban's streets are completely "car free"--except the main thoroughfare. Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park--large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for forty thousand dollars, along with a home. As a result, seventy percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and fifty seven percent sold their cars just to move here. In the passage, "In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars", Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother of two, she quotes," When I had a car, I was always tense. I'm much happier this way."
Additionally, Cars are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai ten to make their homes. Experts say that that is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emmissions from tailpipes. Passenger cars are responsible for twelve percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to fifty percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.
Futhermore, after days of near-record pollution, Paris, France enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. "Paris bans driving due to smog" by Robert Duffer, states that congestion was down sixty percent in the capital of France, after just five days of intensifying smog. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ab9e536c678a | FACC34F1875E | there are some advantages of limiting car usage | Position | Adequate |
5d9305f52410 | FACC34F1875E | limiting car usage, you're also limiting pollution, carbon emissions, greenhouse gas emissions, etc. | Claim | Adequate |
e4a33cce51b5 | FACF20D0D847 | If you want a really excellent job, be a cowboy in the Seagoing Cowboy program. In fact, take it from me a cowboy who rides waves. | Position | Adequate |
ce5b9767fa54 | FACF20D0D847 | I became a Seagoing Cowboy when me frend invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. It was when World War II was going on. Some countries were left to die and had nothing. So they formed the UNRRA and hired ''Seagoing Cowboys.'' Both I and Don Signed up.
In August of 1945, they recived orders to go and report to New Orleans.''We arived August 14,'' Luke recalled ''the day the Pasific War ended.'' They got their seaman's papers and and borded the SS Charles. W. Wooster. They then headed for Greace.
Before I got to Greace he turned 18 wich ment the military could draft me .''When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip,they tolde me to just keep doing that for my service,'' Luke says.
''The cattle boat trips were an unbeliavable opportunity for a small-town boy,'' Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China.'' but seeing the Acropolis in Greace was very speacial. So was takeing a gondola ride in Vince, Italy a city with streets of water.''
It was also hard work. I had to clean, feed, and care for the anamals. I seved as a night wathman, meaning I had to cheak on all the anamals and report to the captin every hour. One ranny night after my hourly report I slipped on a ladder and fell on my backside. I was fine but couldn't work for a couple of days because of broken ribs. I also had fun too and played vollyball games in empty holdes and more.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
aa1c365f9e3d | FACF20D0D847 | So in conclusion, It's splendid to be a Seagoing Cowboy because it shows you the vertue of helpping others | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e80aec8c9dc0 | FAF91DDF582C | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to guarantee that students will continue to learn during their summer break. It is essential that students keep learning even though they are taking a break from school | Lead | Adequate |
711be2df93ad | FAF91DDF582C | these summer projects should be teacher-designed | Position | Adequate |
cbcfe2f6c748 | FAF91DDF582C | the student's teacher will know what that person needs to work on. | Claim | Adequate |
4da9922e4362 | FAF91DDF582C | If a student were to choose what they would like their project to be about, they could probably decide to work on something that does not require much effort | Claim | Adequate |
fe9627f34eb0 | FAF91DDF582C | therefore, it would be best if a professional particularly assigned a certain topic to help his or her pupil designated to help them grow and become more efficient in their academic life. However, if the student believes that there is a specific topic they believe they need to practice more than the teacher should consider to make an exemption. | Evidence | Adequate |
1a481fb7631c | FAF91DDF582C | This action would ensure that the student will be ready to tackle classroom assignments once they are back to school. | Claim | Adequate |
9ba087e57509 | FAF91DDF582C | Not only that but it would also let the student perfect their skills and be prepared in class. These projects designated to students will surely boost the alumni's knowledge and confidence on that specific topic. Therefore, the student will not struggle as much as they would have without the extra help. | Evidence | Ineffective |
07a99d0eed4a | FAF91DDF582C | if teachers assign students particular homework designed to help their alumni be more efficient in class, it is undeniable that their student's classroom performance will have a positive effect in their academic life. | Claim | Adequate |
a61634860b70 | FAF91DDF582C | The teacher ,being a professional, will have more understanding of what their student needs to work on. He or she can personalize the project to better help the student understand and learn about their assignment. The extra help given to the alumni will have positive results and they could use their knowledge acquired by the project on other classes, or these young adults can use this information outside of school to help them handle outside of school life situations. If trained professionals give students homework during summer break, then those students will be able to see how this extra work helped them master skills when school opens again. | Evidence | Adequate |
4f5d6443bd15 | FAF91DDF582C | Students should not be given the privilege to choose their own project assignments. Some students would pick easy topics that would not require them to put much effort, this will deeply harm the student academically. | Claim | Adequate |
7e4fcb7cfc54 | FAF91DDF582C | Instead of working hard to perfect an area in which the student struggles, they would rather choose something that is easy and would get done quickly. This is why it is better if teachers gave students their assignments | Evidence | Adequate |
9aa843a1d9a0 | FAF91DDF582C | However, it can not be guaranteed that the students will learn or understand the homework assignment. For that reason could be that maybe the student is not ready to take on that particular topic. Without a doubt, it is known that not all students learn the same way and not all understand what they have learned. Everybody learns at their own pace and in their own way | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c04d2333371f | FAF91DDF582C | If the student believes that the designated work is too hard, or maybe too easy, then they should talk to their teacher and suggest a different topic. Also, if the students thinks that there is another area they need to practice more, they should ask their teacher to consider their request. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
e28c9214d70b | FAF91DDF582C | Schools that require students to continue learning during the summer will see positive results in students academic lives. Designated work from teachers will greatly help alumni master and perfect classroom skills. Not to mention, students will acquire more knowledge on these areas with the extra help that was provided. If the teacher knows what their students need to work more on, those students will soon be ready to take on anything once school is in cession again. If students were given the liberty to pick their projects, would the students actually learn from it? What happens if the student chooses an easy project, when they could have been working on some other topic that they know they have trouble with? This will certainly not be a good idea. As professionals, teachers know what is best for their students if they have been observing their classroom performance. However, Many teachers sometimes overlook a few things in which student have trouble with. When this happens the student should take a step forward and let their teacher know what it is they think they need to work. This way the teacher can look back and verify is this person does need to practice more in the areas that they may be struggling. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
50a6b19c35b5 | FB1553163CF5 | Imagine visiting a planet like ours, maybe it was just like ours at a point where it could have living animals, water, and maybe even trees. Venus has the type of look because it the only plant that looks more like our planet the Earth. | Lead | Adequate |
6e275db3e0a4 | FB1553163CF5 | First, on paragraph two of the article called " The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it says that "Venus is often reffered to as Earths twin, its the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size". | Claim | Adequate |
609d6433024d | FB1553163CF5 | This shows on how cool it would be too going into a planet that we havent been to and maybe it can be like ours | Evidence | Ineffective |
85b8164ff273 | FB1553163CF5 | its a worthy try even though dangerous thing happen because we never know what we could find. | Position | Adequate |
d779e85c61a7 | FB1553163CF5 | Also, because in paragraph 4 it states that "Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit" | Claim | Adequate |
91e338d155ff | FB1553163CF5 | this shows on how close it is to Earth and its worth a try trying to go there. | Evidence | Adequate |
cbc617c1cb6c | FB1553163CF5 | Lastly,it would give out new oppurtunities to go into other planets, because "venus is the second planet from the sun" | Claim | Ineffective |
8d5a87ef1247 | FB1553163CF5 | this shows and how dangerous it could be, but if we make it we can see stuff like the sun and notice stuff we cant see thru a camera. also, it would give out more conficence of going into space and going into a diffirent planet.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
a5db61e9eff9 | FB1553163CF5 | In conclusion, People should go into Venus because it show on new opportunities and find new things we didnt know about. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c6a4a42874d5 | FB528A6DAF0C | I think that participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is not a good idea and heres why, | Position | Ineffective |
17c1eca279a4 | FB528A6DAF0C | It might be fun to go and help others in need but what about your job, lots of things could happen. | Claim | Adequate |
bbfe242662e3 | FB528A6DAF0C | You might have an exiting time but what about all the responcebilities you have if you go. I mean I wouldin't go because of that or because what if one person doesin't want to do it any more, our someone gets car sick. A lot of things can happen and you know what, I dont want to get car sick if I were you. Also what about home, theres opportuneities here. What about the people who are in need right now. There is so much you could do right here right now. | Evidence | Adequate |
281b612b46ae | FB528A6DAF0C | You don't have to go somewhere els just too help somone | Claim | Adequate |
f2c2a9a829d3 | FB528A6DAF0C | there are people out here that are in need bad but your going to Greece just too help other people. It's a good idea but just think about what you good do here. I'm one of those people who love helping others but I know that I could just help someone here because going to Greece!! I wouldin't want too because I already have more than enuogh people I could help, things I could see, things I could do. There is just so much to do, and to see. I know that if you just think there will be something to do for our community just like that. Like I said you don't need to got to Greece to see that! | Evidence | Adequate |
f1d8757f0849 | FB528A6DAF0C | Those were some of my resons why you shouldin't go to Seagoing Cowboys program. Like I said,it would be fun but think about what could happen before you go and give it a try. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
210b437fe6bb | FB6A513EBFC6 | Venus is the second planet in the Milky Way solar system, that is so close yet so mysterious. Its conditions are unhabitable and unsafe for humans, making Earth seem safe despite some dangers it also has. Venus may well have also been covered with oceans like Earth currently has. | Lead | Effective |
9b0f5154ba7d | FB6A513EBFC6 | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents | Position | Effective |
6f511ed46932 | FB6A513EBFC6 | hovering | Claim | Effective |
443b7a2b5fa0 | FB6A513EBFC6 | silicon carbide | Claim | Effective |
c52f264be84a | FB6A513EBFC6 | mechanical computers.
| Claim | Effective |
b6e8157f91c9 | FB6A513EBFC6 | The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite dangers by his well written explantion of ship hovering. | Claim | Adequate |
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