tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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2bc32a5c5855	CFA591751173	scientific evidence,	Claim	Effective
1f10c9d9242c	CFA591751173	and measurements taken.	Claim	Effective
21867f211d81	CFA591751173	To start, NASA has taken recent picture of Cydonia in 2001 that shows it is just a natural landform that has developed on the Red Planet Mars. "On April 8. 2001--a cloudless summer day in Cydonia--Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degreesto center the Face in the field of view," said Garvin. "Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution." Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel inv the best 1976 Viking photo." (p. 10).	Evidence	Effective
c464cdff713c	CFA591751173	As discussed before, NASA has taken a new and better quality photo of the Face in Cydonia. Using our scientific equiopment at NASA, we have proven just how much better the resolution is on the new phototgraph taken is. ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size," he added. So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the gtround or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" (p. 11). This quote from the article shows	Evidence	Effective
f96aee1baa99	CFA591751173	Finally, NASA compares the Face landform with similar landforms on Earth in America. The scientist compares the Face with a landform called a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West. "it reminds me of Middle Buttle in the Snake ZRiver Plain of Idaho," says Garvin. "That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." (p. 12).	Evidence	Adequate
c30109008a27	CFA591751173	On the contrary, some people believe that the face is ""Bona fide" evidence of life on Mars--evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists" (p. 5).	Counterclaim	Effective
3d1c7a3fa131	CFA591751173	In defense, NASA has scientifically proven the "Face" is just a natural landform created on Mars. "What the picture really shows is the Martien equivalent of a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West." (p.12).	Rebuttal	Adequate
6899ce5ae34e	CFA591751173	In conclusion, some people may think there is alien life on Mars because of past picture or conspiracy theories. No one can denty however, that NASA has proven the Face to be nothing but a natural landform on the Red Planet Mars. NASA has proven this by recent pictures, scientific evidence, and real-life examples and measurements. Over the years, NASA has worked hard to figure out the mystery of the face, and just recently they have discovered, with pictyures, evidence, and measruements, that the Face is just a natural landform with unusual shadowing formed on the Red Planet Mars.	Concluding Statement	Effective
4a96441f4ebe	CFAFADA9A2C3	The author studys Venus is a worthy pursuit despite dangers becuse there are many things out there that could be discoverd worth thr dangers.	Position	Adequate
85d411741dcb	CFAFADA9A2C3	In paragraph 8, it says "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally could be explored and lead up to much bigger things.	Evidence	Adequate
b1d22b0a7af0	CFAFADA9A2C3	If we dont take the chance and explore we could be passing up many great discoverys, such as a new plant that couls help cure canser or even a animal that could help save the enviotment.	Claim	Adequate
5a90b9d30d34	CFAFADA9A2C3	Many people may say they dont want to risk peoples lifes or to scared of what could go wrong	Counterclaim	Adequate
18d18b14ad65	CFAFADA9A2C3	This is a risk that should be takes becuase if not there is a chance we could missout on a discover that could do big things.	Rebuttal	Adequate
4782a0002824	CFAFADA9A2C3	"our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" is what was stated in the story saying this is a big project we dont want nor need to miss out on.	Evidence	Adequate
ce7a49a11111	CFAFADA9A2C3	moral of the stoy we need to get out there and discover new things.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
91f9ca3e3740	CFB5BFF82CDE	When Luke was a little town boy he made a huge inprovment by becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. He saw a lot of stuff on the boat as you can tell on paragraph 5 he said, "Besides helping people,I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China." That would be a great experince for a small town boy.	Evidence	Adequate
82f7539c3b4f	CFB5BFF82CDE	it was a great idea to join the program because, you could tell your grandchildren about all the things you have seen and done.	Claim	Adequate
2bc6b42aa815	CFB5BFF82CDE	If his friend had not been there to tell him about it he would have been working two jobs his whole life. Luke is probably very greatful. Luke is also the best there because he has went threw the route nine time as you see on paragraph 6. Luke point of veiw would probably tell more about what he saw during the trip and what he did. He loves	Evidence	Ineffective
a63773fb0258	CFB5BFF82CDE	to help people by this job he has helped bring all the cattle/food.	Claim	Adequate
6dbb085874d5	CFB5BFF82CDE	Luke is very talented for having this job because you have to feed the animals about three times aday and keep them alive. You can state this information on paraghraph 6 and 7. He worked so much he got hurt and craked his ribs. He was happy to be alive. Therefore he had to stay at home to get better.	Evidence	Ineffective
1aa834baf0ae	CFB5BFF82CDE	how fun it was to work there and he would convince you that it is a realy good job.	Claim	Adequate
08e1bf1faef6	CFB5BFF82CDE	He was very happy to get this job beause he said, " I'm grateful for the opportunity." Luke created history and when he could not do the job any more people visited him all the time like students and many familys to live on all the history he made. It opened up Lukes world up when he got the job.	Evidence	Adequate
52340a52b370	CFB5BFF82CDE	Its also so cool how they played sports when they had free time to take the time away. Its amazing how he can get all those animals and pick them up on the boat and take them across the country and drop them off. He was realy good at his job to do that! That is how Luke Bomberger made history in America.	Evidence	Ineffective
f46d43aaede8	CFC1F5729C6D	I am with the idea of the FACS becaues it seems vary interesting.	Position	Adequate
22eb4b4a10f9	CFC1F5729C6D	The idea of a machine that can read emotions is cool. Though can be a little scary that commputer can tell if your happy or sad. But the idea is still cool to think about. I would like to see if they can even get the FACS to work on animals in the furture.	Evidence	Ineffective
60c61525fd84	CFC1F5729C6D	A reasion this could be a good idea is becaues you be able to tell if some one is lying to you.	Claim	Adequate
282917b84cd9	CFC1F5729C6D	Like if there is a bad persion in court and you wont to know if there lying to your face you just look at the machine and it would tell you. Though some people would like to keep some things a scorit you be able to tell is there lying to you and if there sad as well then you know its a secorit. Many people would be saved and devastated by this machine.	Evidence	Adequate
e696d48ca50f	CFC1F5729C6D	My second reasion for going with the FACS is becaues it may be able to uncover crimes like if the dead persion was sad or happy when they die.	Claim	Adequate
1cde547cd7f5	CFC1F5729C6D	Some family members may want to know that but will never know if they don't have the FACS. The FACS seem to be good on paintings so I was thinking that it may work on a dead body. Becaues if it works on Mona Lisa, then it should work on anything that dont use muscle ever or in the past like a dead body.	Evidence	Ineffective
97edee41eb3a	CFC1F5729C6D	My therd reasion is if you make it be useable on animals then we can uncover a lot of mysteryes	Claim	Ineffective
ec0fc2f969fd	CFC1F5729C6D	Like if you wanted to know how your dog or cat felt about you all you had to do was turn on the FACS and see. We could also see if lions kill becaues there mean or becaues they dont know what eals to do. Many things could be uncover thnks to FACS.	Evidence	Ineffective
cd907609b1c5	CFC1F5729C6D	Thess are my reasions for choosinf the FACS becaues it can help humans in many ways. We could be one step closer to uncovering mystoryes. I like the idea but many people may dissagree becaues they might say that they want to keep things scroit. But like I sead earlyer use the machine if there lying but also sad then you know it is a scorit. So I beleve the FACS should be able to go to anyone that wants it but that is just a thought.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
12a6fe2fe338	D04FFF579D2D	The Venus is second planet from our sun. The Venus is the hottest surface remperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. It is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus is the closest planet to earth densigy. People sent numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud draped world. No spacecraft survived that land for more than a few hours. A long time ago Venus is cover with largely oceans and various froms of life just like Earth. Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on Eart. The planet has a surface or rocky asediment and includes familar feature such as valleys, mountains, and craters. At thirty-plus miles about the surface, temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degree Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.	Evidence	Ineffective
7ea45c823841	D04FFF579D2D	NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus.	Claim	Ineffective
8ed26f132b67	D04FFF579D2D	For example, like electronic made of silicon and it been tested in chamber simulation the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for three weaks in such conditions. They have another project to look back an old technology call mechanical computers. This devices make calculation by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick but tend to be more delicate when it come to exterme physical conditions. By comaprison, systems that use mecanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.	Evidence	Ineffective
f3cfaa689efc	D0733E25A2C7	students don't want to stay after school	Claim	Adequate
10b77e20bede	D0733E25A2C7	other students could have other events to attend to	Claim	Adequate
ddf9713786a1	D0733E25A2C7	that can get in the way of students education	Claim	Adequate
fa1cb5e616f1	D0733E25A2C7	If schools are already making it stressful for students think about how it might impact on their mental health and grades	Claim	Adequate
4eda1cea75dd	D0733E25A2C7	fewer students might not have interest about the programs that the schools are suggesting, this could also get in the way of spending time with your family, and that could increase major mental health issues to the students in the future.	Evidence	Adequate
488c59f93429	D0733E25A2C7	if schools are forcing students to do something that they don't want to do, that could develop a students safety and they might not want to go to school anymore.	Evidence	Adequate
dd5cc423f664	D0733E25A2C7	Maybe staying after school could help increase students self-confidence, make new friends, or increase their mental health.	Counterclaim	Adequate
3c2527faf898	D0733E25A2C7	It's always best to give students options, and letting them enjoy what they do best at, but it's not right to force them into doing what they don't want to do; yes I agree that after school activities should be in school, and open to all students. Don't force students into something they don't feel comfortable with, but recommend it to them so they can think about it.	Position	Effective
b96718655d20	D0733E25A2C7	Everyone should get the chance to stay after school just once, and if they don't like it they don't have to continue staying in an after school program.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
1372c6e83313	D0859D4FA7A8	Being known as Earth's twin, Venus is a planet most people are famliar with. Having rocky surfaces, sediments and mountains, this planet was most likely very close to earth long ago. The author states that the surface temperature reaches 800 degrees, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth	Lead	Ineffective
37a4fb4b93a2	D0859D4FA7A8	Then the idea is brought up, what if we lived on Venus? Exploration of this planet has begun, and with profound dangers, scientists are still pursuing the idea. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life.	Position	Ineffective
78e36f90570d	D0859D4FA7A8	Venus poses some very intense conditions, such an environment is something humans could never survive.	Claim	Adequate
fd2c3e4e99ca	D0859D4FA7A8	If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing futher visits to it's surface?	Evidence	Adequate
86829389bd85	D0859D4FA7A8	The author states that scientist noticed Venus was close in characteristics to Earth's. Large oceans probably covered in oceans and could've even supported living organisms. "Venus is the closest planet in terms of density and size	Evidence	Adequate
21e671a32aba	D0859D4FA7A8	Because of Earth's simularities to Venus, Scientists see this as an oppourtunity for collecting data and planetary visits.	Claim	Adequate
d761cfe6313e	D0859D4FA7A8	The upfront dangers of planetary visits are extreme, not to mention going to a planet with the heat to liquify metal	Claim	Adequate
067047d6d6c2	D0859D4FA7A8	Despite these challenges the author states we cannot let dangers get in the way of us exploring. "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavours." Our exploration should not keep us from collecting data and finding things about our Earth and Solar System. The author explains, we need to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation.	Evidence	Adequate
1fe2af0fcfcf	D0859D4FA7A8	Venus has many dangers, seeming to make it impossible for humans or any life to survive. Despite all this, scientist continue to strive for planet exploration. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
032238023c02	D0B6CE1FA38E	Studying venus is a amazing purduit because no human could not live in venus or go up to venus because its far away from earth and we haven't made a spaceship that could reach all the way up in venus because it could never make it	Lead	Ineffective
fc4f80c1c877	D0B6CE1FA38E	Another stuff you can be finding for venus is the clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus. And on the planet;s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure in 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These facts that you can research are very true because you could go up there and find out all theses stuff and these facts support my claim because you can research cool stuff about Venus and that other people didn't know about and thats how it supports my claim.	Evidence	Ineffective
df264f8678bf	D0B6CE1FA38E	And thisw concludes all the stuff in my essay if Venus is a worthy pursuit to study about Yes i think it is because you could be learning more than others about Venus.	Position	Adequate
ac388684df86	D0C6EB30D833	Did you know every summer students are assigned to summer reading? Students are required to read at least one book or more in order to stay engaged in learning.	Lead	Adequate
2114a0615f35	D0C6EB30D833	Summer projets should be teacher-designed	Position	Adequate
6a667d42094c	D0C6EB30D833	you get extra help,	Claim	Effective
fb3d6d5c3947	D0C6EB30D833	you worry less,	Claim	Effective
bdbaf3b247aa	D0C6EB30D833	you create a stronger bond with the teacher.	Claim	Effective
c1c27234b778	D0C6EB30D833	By getting extra help, you able to work on your mistakes and fix them. In this case, you are free to get assistence from you teacher regarding any concept you do not understand and he or she will be more than welcome to help you. For example, incase you are working on an assignment that is math related and there happens to be a question you have worked on several times but still can not figure out, you will then find the need to explain your weaknesses to your teacher so that they work on a solution for your concerns and questions about that specific problem you are trying to solve. As a matter of fact, if you happen to be struggling with any particular subject having teacher-designed projects is more helpful and significant hence you are attaining help and directions from a professional person who understands what they are doinig as well as what you need help on a much higher level that outstand that of a student-designed one. That being said, a teacher-designed summer project is a perfect way to continue learning because you are not only being assisted by getting extra help on a specific assignment, but you are getting more knowledge and benefiting your education even when you are not in school. In other words, you are learning from your mistakes by fixing them with the right tools you need through your teacher and that results in you being more confident and comfortable on that very topic or project you had issues with in the first place. Indeed, getting extra help from you teacher will help you get better grades and following a well teacher-designed summer project will put you in good position for working hard and working on your communication skills as well as keeping your brain sharp and training it to endure any complex situations such as making sure you complete any due work and homework on time.	Evidence	Effective
f9c05ac66f2a	D0C6EB30D833	Because students are on vocations, this is their time to get caught up on their favorite hobbies and fun activities with their friends and one last thing they would want to think about is doing some sort of homework during their free relaxing time with family and friends moreover on a summer morning. For instance, lets say a student wants to hang out with friends on a saturday evening, but they remember they have a whole packet of work that was assigned to them before summer vocation and that by the end of summer before school starts, they have to finish it. The student will most liekly be worried and concerned about getting it over with and that means they will either cancell hanging out with friends and stay home doing random summer assigned homework on a saturday, but this is not the case when you know you are working with you teacher and that they will be able to walk you through all the work. Students surely worry less when they are working with a teacher on summer projects hence them doing something fun and relaxing in their free time sinc their teacher is available at any given point. School related projects or assignments are more easier to handle when your teacher is always there to work with you on that specific assigned assignment. As a result, students are much likely to enjoy their time away from school without anything bothering them for whatsoever case. Since students have already endured and served their time on the previous school year, they do not need any kind of aspect worrying them to the point where they have to stay home rather than them having fun and enjoying themselves and having a good time on a summer beach day while having fresh air and cooling off. Therefore, summer projects should be teacher-designed since students are not getting overwhelmed with what they need complete, but rather having some fun time with their friends and telling jokes and laughing them off with their relatives and maybe their pets who knows.	Evidence	Effective
6a6400eeb7be	D0C6EB30D833	By doing so, teachers and students are most likely to get along with each other with no issues of any kind. Teachers are more than people who went to school and got their degree, but they are also regualr people just like everyone esle and at a certain point they become like family to us. So it is important for students to make sure they are in good terms with their teacher just in case they need help or guidance from the teachers, they will not get it if they behaved wrongly or cursed at their teachers which is something we often see in schools today. Well, if students and teacher manage to keep a steady and firm bond between one another, no obstacle or problem will come between their relationship, meaning they will be able to work with each other on a daily basis with no problematic concerns from either side.	Evidence	Effective
ae1a3d240fee	D0C6EB30D833	teacher-designed projects are best	Concluding Statement	Adequate
4241622695f7	D0D8097D243C	Some schools partake in making their students create summer projects to influence them to learn over break, and to ensure that any and all learning from the previous year wasn't completely lost.	Lead	Ineffective
bdbaaced9da6	D0D8097D243C	Summer time projects should definitely be assigned but with the students engagement.	Position	Adequate
848c9d509ba6	D0D8097D243C	To some, school brings more bad than good, but with proper summer time review and practice it could get better for the student, if they had the steering wheel for a change.	Evidence	Adequate
e062d85218b6	D0D8097D243C	allowing the students to design assignments could persuade students to engage more in school if they made their own rules and regulation	Claim	Adequate
4a6b21d81aed	D0D8097D243C	In addition, if teachers continue to design the majority of the students summer time projects, consequently, the project assigned will be either completed to its minimum rather to its maximum, and not to mention the overall quality would definitely be dramatically decreased	Evidence	Ineffective
d050f2fddeae	D0D8097D243C	students want more independence on the student designed assignment, rather than becoming more dependent on the teachers design.	Claim	Adequate
907a632891f9	D0D8097D243C	Furthermore, students may do sports over the summer, enjoy vacation with family, have enrollments in other schooling, or may even have an occupation	Claim	Adequate
1705702f4cac	D0D8097D243C	regardless of what the scenario is, if the reins were loosened a bit to let the student design the summer time project, chances are it may make the student happier, and eager to do more summer time projects before the next school year begins.	Evidence	Ineffective
e4c84769be70	D0D8097D243C	Over time the student creating his or her own assignment will lead to stronger and improved memory development for the many school years to come.	Claim	Adequate
568bf628b305	D0D8097D243C	Designing an over the summer assignment could possibly may be fun to the student. With proper curriculum over the summer, it will definitely help the students who really need it most. Maybe for extra credit, better classes to take for the next year, or just as a brain exercise, Its still always healthy to keep the mind of a student functioning at all times.	Evidence	Adequate
0f42352d1a7b	D0D8097D243C	letting students design their own summertime projects to their convenience, could change the relationship between students and teachers for the good and in the long run. Allowing them to let their minds run loose, be filled with creativity, and to be excited for the next assignment could potentially allow for better communication within students and teachers. Summer time is mainly filled with joy, and with a little tweaking, so could schooling!	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7574953e1e76	D0DAA0A3A4EA	I will be talking to you about how scientist's are thinking of putting things on the planet Venus and i wll also talk to you the fasinated thing our planet Venus has to offer.	Lead	Ineffective
19164e04e08c	D0DAA0A3A4EA	Well Venus is sometimes called a Evening Star. It's so bright that young stargazer would be able to find it. Venus is very hard to get a good look at, it's the second planet from the sun. It's name can be misleading, and the planet is refrred to earth as our " twin" plaents. We haven't been able to send a spacecraft over there yet because of the fact that the stuff we send over there are not able to survive for less than an hour. Scientist's have onle been able to send robots and teven they can't find a safe landing sight. The clouds on Venus very corrosive since they have sulfruic acid in them. The air is also 97 percent carbon dioxide. The planet also has the hostest surface, it's tempurature can reach 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric preasure is also 90 times greater than Earth's, but despite the planets dangers it would be a worthy pursuite. For example the planets atmospheric preasure is so strong that it crush a submarine that can go into the deepest part of the ocean. Scientist's are fascinated by the planets Earth-like apperence. They think that long ago there use be a form of life that could have been very much Earth-like. The main reasonfor why astronomer's are so fascinated by Venus is because it looks very much like Earth. For example it has valleies, river bank's, and even mountains. Scientist's are thinking of sending a blimp like aircraft that can fly or hover at least 30 if not higher miles the planet's surface. The tempurature would range around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The best part would be that there is plenty is solar power.	Evidence	Ineffective
e45fb8a94582	D12165A1A427	In this article the Author talks about the dangers of the planet Venus	Claim	Adequate
2076cb10d5a5	D12165A1A427	like its high ground temperatures of 800 degrees Fahrenheit or it's atmospheric pressure being stronger than even the deepest parts of our ocean and brings up the failed mission from the past.	Evidence	Adequate
bf28d8d36f12	D12165A1A427	The Author talks about how the scientist have come up with a new old idea of using a computer made of gears and levers,	Claim	Adequate
8734d84c3bc6	D12165A1A427	which won't be as technologiclly advanced as our current ones but will be able to survive harsher conditions.	Evidence	Adequate
a253943af2bc	D12165A1A427	The facts that are brought up about the planet and it's conditions and a way to get there are great well put together to the point where its makes you think this could be a possibility for us in the near future.	Position	Adequate
6fae4cc93561	D12165A1A427	Overall with the facts about the planets and information that was brought up by the different ideas of the scientist that were listed in an organized fashion, I think this was a great essay.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
29a974fbed04	D150C1CD72D5	Cars have been around for many years and generations. People rely on cars for transportation	Lead	Ineffective
43de9d7f3459	D150C1CD72D5	theres places where car usage is being limited	Position	Adequate
1eac070dc852	D150C1CD72D5	the pollution it causes to the environment	Claim	Adequate
49eb370072dd	D150C1CD72D5	help create a better environment for the people.	Claim	Adequate
7c5bd03eef67	D150C1CD72D5	one reason car usage is being limited is because of how much pollution it brings to the environment.	Claim	Adequate
5182da2d18c2	D150C1CD72D5	According to article 2 paragraph 17, Paris usually has the most smog than any other European capital. The smog cleared enough for the French party to remove the ban of odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. This means cars have been a great cause of the smog in the city. In Bogota Colombia, thers a car-free day in act. According to article 3 paragraph 21, the goal of the day was to promote other transportation and to reduce smog. This shows that people aren't considerate when it comes to the environment and don't realize the pollution they're causing. Therefore limiting car usage is beneficial.	Evidence	Adequate
3cbdf9d877b5	D150C1CD72D5	Another advantage to limiting car usage is that it can help create a healthier environment.	Claim	Adequate
246e190fbc63	D150C1CD72D5	According to article 2, people would participate in Day Without Cars regardless of weather. "The rain hasn't stopped people from participating." explained Bogota Mayor Antanas. The campaign brought constructs of 118 miles of bicycle paths. Parks and sport centers also grew. This demostrates that people are determine to make the environment they live in into a better place to live. Aritcle 4 states that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses each year. This shows America is probably leaving driving for better alternatives for the environment and their lives. And limitation to car usage was a big key to this behaviour change.	Evidence	Adequate
24058860b542	D150C1CD72D5	Although driving has been abused for years, places are beginning to limit the usage of cars. Some of the reasons cars are being ban are due to the pollution is causes and it helps create a better environment for the city and people lives. Would limitations of car usage ever completely get rid of cars as a transportation.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
4b938f873700	D169E2520168	The face on Mars cannot be created by aliens	Position	Adequate
c3b1d8d784c2	D169E2520168	if the NASA cameras did not see any people/aliens. On that fact if NASA did see any aliens on Mars they would have kept it top secret and wold have not showed the images to the world	Claim	Ineffective
f311776136d3	D169E2520168	Not saying its true but if NASA had shown an alien on Mars the world would freak out and we wold destroy each other. Now tell me if you seen an alien on Mars what would you do?	Evidence	Ineffective
79667cbc1685	D169E2520168	All I am saying is in 1976 if aliens did make that face then why are we still here? Why haven't the aliens came yet ?	Claim	Ineffective
94de45087d3e	D169E2520168	Because if aliens were to make that face on Mars then that means they seen NASA's cameras circling their planet so they would've found a way to get them down. But I think it's a big pain in the butt to the people that think thier is alien life on a planet in our Solier System	Evidence	Ineffective
a07a94d8ab9c	D169E2520168	I also want to no part in this discussing because if you don't want to belive me that is on you to look crazy if front of the world so do what you think is best about it I have to get to back to work.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
1a88965ab1c9	D18B9F0D2CB4	They come in red, blue, green, black, and white. They beep and honk while they ride on highways and transport people form place to place. Cars are everywear. What would the world be like if we didnt have cars? What are the benefits of life without cars?	Lead	Effective

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and measurements taken.

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To start, NASA has taken recent picture of Cydonia in 2001 that shows it is just a natural landform that has developed on the Red Planet Mars. "On April 8. 2001--a cloudless summer day in Cydonia--Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degreesto center the Face in the field of view," said Garvin. "Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution." Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel inv the best 1976 Viking photo." (p. 10).

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As discussed before, NASA has taken a new and better quality photo of the Face in Cydonia. Using our scientific equiopment at NASA, we have proven just how much better the resolution is on the new phototgraph taken is. ""As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size," he added. So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the gtround or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"" (p. 11). This quote from the article shows

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Finally, NASA compares the Face landform with similar landforms on Earth in America. The scientist compares the Face with a landform called a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West. "it reminds me of Middle Buttle in the Snake ZRiver Plain of Idaho," says Garvin. "That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." (p. 12).

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On the contrary, some people believe that the face is ""Bona fide" evidence of life on Mars--evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists" (p. 5).

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In defense, NASA has scientifically proven the "Face" is just a natural landform created on Mars. "What the picture really shows is the Martien equivalent of a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West." (p.12).

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In conclusion, some people may think there is alien life on Mars because of past picture or conspiracy theories. No one can denty however, that NASA has proven the Face to be nothing but a natural landform on the Red Planet Mars. NASA has proven this by recent pictures, scientific evidence, and real-life examples and measurements. Over the years, NASA has worked hard to figure out the mystery of the face, and just recently they have discovered, with pictyures, evidence, and measruements, that the Face is just a natural landform with unusual shadowing formed on the Red Planet Mars.

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The author studys Venus is a worthy pursuit despite dangers becuse there are many things out there that could be discoverd worth thr dangers.

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In paragraph 8, it says "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally could be explored and lead up to much bigger things.

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If we dont take the chance and explore we could be passing up many great discoverys, such as a new plant that couls help cure canser or even a animal that could help save the enviotment.

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Many people may say they dont want to risk peoples lifes or to scared of what could go wrong

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This is a risk that should be takes becuase if not there is a chance we could missout on a discover that could do big things.

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"our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" is what was stated in the story saying this is a big project we dont want nor need to miss out on.

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moral of the stoy we need to get out there and discover new things.

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When Luke was a little town boy he made a huge inprovment by becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. He saw a lot of stuff on the boat as you can tell on paragraph 5 he said, "Besides helping people,I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China." That would be a great experince for a small town boy.

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it was a great idea to join the program because, you could tell your grandchildren about all the things you have seen and done.

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If his friend had not been there to tell him about it he would have been working two jobs his whole life. Luke is probably very greatful. Luke is also the best there because he has went threw the route nine time as you see on paragraph 6. Luke point of veiw would probably tell more about what he saw during the trip and what he did. He loves

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to help people by this job he has helped bring all the cattle/food.

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Luke is very talented for having this job because you have to feed the animals about three times aday and keep them alive. You can state this information on paraghraph 6 and 7. He worked so much he got hurt and craked his ribs. He was happy to be alive. Therefore he had to stay at home to get better.

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how fun it was to work there and he would convince you that it is a realy good job.

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He was very happy to get this job beause he said, " I'm grateful for the opportunity." Luke created history and when he could not do the job any more people visited him all the time like students and many familys to live on all the history he made. It opened up Lukes world up when he got the job.

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Its also so cool how they played sports when they had free time to take the time away. Its amazing how he can get all those animals and pick them up on the boat and take them across the country and drop them off. He was realy good at his job to do that! That is how Luke Bomberger made history in America.

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I am with the idea of the FACS becaues it seems vary interesting.

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The idea of a machine that can read emotions is cool. Though can be a little scary that commputer can tell if your happy or sad. But the idea is still cool to think about. I would like to see if they can even get the FACS to work on animals in the furture.

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A reasion this could be a good idea is becaues you be able to tell if some one is lying to you.

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Like if there is a bad persion in court and you wont to know if there lying to your face you just look at the machine and it would tell you. Though some people would like to keep some things a scorit you be able to tell is there lying to you and if there sad as well then you know its a secorit. Many people would be saved and devastated by this machine.

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My second reasion for going with the FACS is becaues it may be able to uncover crimes like if the dead persion was sad or happy when they die.

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Some family members may want to know that but will never know if they don't have the FACS. The FACS seem to be good on paintings so I was thinking that it may work on a dead body. Becaues if it works on Mona Lisa, then it should work on anything that dont use muscle ever or in the past like a dead body.

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My therd reasion is if you make it be useable on animals then we can uncover a lot of mysteryes

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Like if you wanted to know how your dog or cat felt about you all you had to do was turn on the FACS and see. We could also see if lions kill becaues there mean or becaues they dont know what eals to do. Many things could be uncover thnks to FACS.

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Thess are my reasions for choosinf the FACS becaues it can help humans in many ways. We could be one step closer to uncovering mystoryes. I like the idea but many people may dissagree becaues they might say that they want to keep things scroit. But like I sead earlyer use the machine if there lying but also sad then you know it is a scorit. So I beleve the FACS should be able to go to anyone that wants it but that is just a thought.

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The Venus is second planet from our sun. The Venus is the hottest surface remperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. It is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus is the closest planet to earth densigy. People sent numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud draped world. No spacecraft survived that land for more than a few hours. A long time ago Venus is cover with largely oceans and various froms of life just like Earth. Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on Eart. The planet has a surface or rocky asediment and includes familar feature such as valleys, mountains, and craters. At thirty-plus miles about the surface, temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degree Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.

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NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus.

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For example, like electronic made of silicon and it been tested in chamber simulation the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for three weaks in such conditions. They have another project to look back an old technology call mechanical computers. This devices make calculation by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick but tend to be more delicate when it come to exterme physical conditions. By comaprison, systems that use mecanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.

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students don't want to stay after school

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other students could have other events to attend to

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that can get in the way of students education

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If schools are already making it stressful for students think about how it might impact on their mental health and grades

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fewer students might not have interest about the programs that the schools are suggesting, this could also get in the way of spending time with your family, and that could increase major mental health issues to the students in the future.

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if schools are forcing students to do something that they don't want to do, that could develop a students safety and they might not want to go to school anymore.

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Maybe staying after school could help increase students self-confidence, make new friends, or increase their mental health.

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It's always best to give students options, and letting them enjoy what they do best at, but it's not right to force them into doing what they don't want to do; yes I agree that after school activities should be in school, and open to all students. Don't force students into something they don't feel comfortable with, but recommend it to them so they can think about it.

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Everyone should get the chance to stay after school just once, and if they don't like it they don't have to continue staying in an after school program.

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Being known as Earth's twin, Venus is a planet most people are famliar with. Having rocky surfaces, sediments and mountains, this planet was most likely very close to earth long ago. The author states that the surface temperature reaches 800 degrees, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth

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Then the idea is brought up, what if we lived on Venus? Exploration of this planet has begun, and with profound dangers, scientists are still pursuing the idea. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life.

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Venus poses some very intense conditions, such an environment is something humans could never survive.

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If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing futher visits to it's surface?

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The author states that scientist noticed Venus was close in characteristics to Earth's. Large oceans probably covered in oceans and could've even supported living organisms. "Venus is the closest planet in terms of density and size

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Because of Earth's simularities to Venus, Scientists see this as an oppourtunity for collecting data and planetary visits.

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The upfront dangers of planetary visits are extreme, not to mention going to a planet with the heat to liquify metal

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Despite these challenges the author states we cannot let dangers get in the way of us exploring. "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavours." Our exploration should not keep us from collecting data and finding things about our Earth and Solar System. The author explains, we need to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation.

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Venus has many dangers, seeming to make it impossible for humans or any life to survive. Despite all this, scientist continue to strive for planet exploration. Venus is a planet that has tough conditions, but still may be suitibale for life.

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Studying venus is a amazing purduit because no human could not live in venus or go up to venus because its far away from earth and we haven't made a spaceship that could reach all the way up in venus because it could never make it

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Another stuff you can be finding for venus is the clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus. And on the planet;s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure in 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These facts that you can research are very true because you could go up there and find out all theses stuff and these facts support my claim because you can research cool stuff about Venus and that other people didn't know about and thats how it supports my claim.

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And thisw concludes all the stuff in my essay if Venus is a worthy pursuit to study about Yes i think it is because you could be learning more than others about Venus.

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Did you know every summer students are assigned to summer reading? Students are required to read at least one book or more in order to stay engaged in learning.

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Summer projets should be teacher-designed

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you get extra help,

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you worry less,

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you create a stronger bond with the teacher.

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By getting extra help, you able to work on your mistakes and fix them. In this case, you are free to get assistence from you teacher regarding any concept you do not understand and he or she will be more than welcome to help you. For example, incase you are working on an assignment that is math related and there happens to be a question you have worked on several times but still can not figure out, you will then find the need to explain your weaknesses to your teacher so that they work on a solution for your concerns and questions about that specific problem you are trying to solve. As a matter of fact, if you happen to be struggling with any particular subject having teacher-designed projects is more helpful and significant hence you are attaining help and directions from a professional person who understands what they are doinig as well as what you need help on a much higher level that outstand that of a student-designed one. That being said, a teacher-designed summer project is a perfect way to continue learning because you are not only being assisted by getting extra help on a specific assignment, but you are getting more knowledge and benefiting your education even when you are not in school. In other words, you are learning from your mistakes by fixing them with the right tools you need through your teacher and that results in you being more confident and comfortable on that very topic or project you had issues with in the first place. Indeed, getting extra help from you teacher will help you get better grades and following a well teacher-designed summer project will put you in good position for working hard and working on your communication skills as well as keeping your brain sharp and training it to endure any complex situations such as making sure you complete any due work and homework on time.

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Because students are on vocations, this is their time to get caught up on their favorite hobbies and fun activities with their friends and one last thing they would want to think about is doing some sort of homework during their free relaxing time with family and friends moreover on a summer morning. For instance, lets say a student wants to hang out with friends on a saturday evening, but they remember they have a whole packet of work that was assigned to them before summer vocation and that by the end of summer before school starts, they have to finish it. The student will most liekly be worried and concerned about getting it over with and that means they will either cancell hanging out with friends and stay home doing random summer assigned homework on a saturday, but this is not the case when you know you are working with you teacher and that they will be able to walk you through all the work. Students surely worry less when they are working with a teacher on summer projects hence them doing something fun and relaxing in their free time sinc their teacher is available at any given point. School related projects or assignments are more easier to handle when your teacher is always there to work with you on that specific assigned assignment. As a result, students are much likely to enjoy their time away from school without anything bothering them for whatsoever case. Since students have already endured and served their time on the previous school year, they do not need any kind of aspect worrying them to the point where they have to stay home rather than them having fun and enjoying themselves and having a good time on a summer beach day while having fresh air and cooling off. Therefore, summer projects should be teacher-designed since students are not getting overwhelmed with what they need complete, but rather having some fun time with their friends and telling jokes and laughing them off with their relatives and maybe their pets who knows.

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By doing so, teachers and students are most likely to get along with each other with no issues of any kind. Teachers are more than people who went to school and got their degree, but they are also regualr people just like everyone esle and at a certain point they become like family to us. So it is important for students to make sure they are in good terms with their teacher just in case they need help or guidance from the teachers, they will not get it if they behaved wrongly or cursed at their teachers which is something we often see in schools today. Well, if students and teacher manage to keep a steady and firm bond between one another, no obstacle or problem will come between their relationship, meaning they will be able to work with each other on a daily basis with no problematic concerns from either side.

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teacher-designed projects are best

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Some schools partake in making their students create summer projects to influence them to learn over break, and to ensure that any and all learning from the previous year wasn't completely lost.

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Summer time projects should definitely be assigned but with the students engagement.

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To some, school brings more bad than good, but with proper summer time review and practice it could get better for the student, if they had the steering wheel for a change.

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allowing the students to design assignments could persuade students to engage more in school if they made their own rules and regulation

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In addition, if teachers continue to design the majority of the students summer time projects, consequently, the project assigned will be either completed to its minimum rather to its maximum, and not to mention the overall quality would definitely be dramatically decreased

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students want more independence on the student designed assignment, rather than becoming more dependent on the teachers design.

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Furthermore, students may do sports over the summer, enjoy vacation with family, have enrollments in other schooling, or may even have an occupation

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regardless of what the scenario is, if the reins were loosened a bit to let the student design the summer time project, chances are it may make the student happier, and eager to do more summer time projects before the next school year begins.

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Over time the student creating his or her own assignment will lead to stronger and improved memory development for the many school years to come.

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Designing an over the summer assignment could possibly may be fun to the student. With proper curriculum over the summer, it will definitely help the students who really need it most. Maybe for extra credit, better classes to take for the next year, or just as a brain exercise, Its still always healthy to keep the mind of a student functioning at all times.

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letting students design their own summertime projects to their convenience, could change the relationship between students and teachers for the good and in the long run. Allowing them to let their minds run loose, be filled with creativity, and to be excited for the next assignment could potentially allow for better communication within students and teachers. Summer time is mainly filled with joy, and with a little tweaking, so could schooling!

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I will be talking to you about how scientist's are thinking of putting things on the planet Venus and i wll also talk to you the fasinated thing our planet Venus has to offer.

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Well Venus is sometimes called a Evening Star. It's so bright that young stargazer would be able to find it. Venus is very hard to get a good look at, it's the second planet from the sun. It's name can be misleading, and the planet is refrred to earth as our " twin" plaents. We haven't been able to send a spacecraft over there yet because of the fact that the stuff we send over there are not able to survive for less than an hour. Scientist's have onle been able to send robots and teven they can't find a safe landing sight. The clouds on Venus very corrosive since they have sulfruic acid in them. The air is also 97 percent carbon dioxide. The planet also has the hostest surface, it's tempurature can reach 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric preasure is also 90 times greater than Earth's, but despite the planets dangers it would be a worthy pursuite. For example the planets atmospheric preasure is so strong that it crush a submarine that can go into the deepest part of the ocean. Scientist's are fascinated by the planets Earth-like apperence. They think that long ago there use be a form of life that could have been very much Earth-like. The main reasonfor why astronomer's are so fascinated by Venus is because it looks very much like Earth. For example it has valleies, river bank's, and even mountains. Scientist's are thinking of sending a blimp like aircraft that can fly or hover at least 30 if not higher miles the planet's surface. The tempurature would range around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The best part would be that there is plenty is solar power.

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In this article the Author talks about the dangers of the planet Venus

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like its high ground temperatures of 800 degrees Fahrenheit or it's atmospheric pressure being stronger than even the deepest parts of our ocean and brings up the failed mission from the past.

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The Author talks about how the scientist have come up with a new old idea of using a computer made of gears and levers,

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which won't be as technologiclly advanced as our current ones but will be able to survive harsher conditions.

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The facts that are brought up about the planet and it's conditions and a way to get there are great well put together to the point where its makes you think this could be a possibility for us in the near future.

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Overall with the facts about the planets and information that was brought up by the different ideas of the scientist that were listed in an organized fashion, I think this was a great essay.

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Cars have been around for many years and generations. People rely on cars for transportation

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theres places where car usage is being limited

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the pollution it causes to the environment

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help create a better environment for the people.

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one reason car usage is being limited is because of how much pollution it brings to the environment.

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According to article 2 paragraph 17, Paris usually has the most smog than any other European capital. The smog cleared enough for the French party to remove the ban of odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. This means cars have been a great cause of the smog in the city. In Bogota Colombia, thers a car-free day in act. According to article 3 paragraph 21, the goal of the day was to promote other transportation and to reduce smog. This shows that people aren't considerate when it comes to the environment and don't realize the pollution they're causing. Therefore limiting car usage is beneficial.

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Another advantage to limiting car usage is that it can help create a healthier environment.

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According to article 2, people would participate in Day Without Cars regardless of weather. "The rain hasn't stopped people from participating." explained Bogota Mayor Antanas. The campaign brought constructs of 118 miles of bicycle paths. Parks and sport centers also grew. This demostrates that people are determine to make the environment they live in into a better place to live. Aritcle 4 states that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses each year. This shows America is probably leaving driving for better alternatives for the environment and their lives. And limitation to car usage was a big key to this behaviour change.

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Although driving has been abused for years, places are beginning to limit the usage of cars. Some of the reasons cars are being ban are due to the pollution is causes and it helps create a better environment for the city and people lives. Would limitations of car usage ever completely get rid of cars as a transportation.

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The face on Mars cannot be created by aliens

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if the NASA cameras did not see any people/aliens. On that fact if NASA did see any aliens on Mars they would have kept it top secret and wold have not showed the images to the world

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Not saying its true but if NASA had shown an alien on Mars the world would freak out and we wold destroy each other. Now tell me if you seen an alien on Mars what would you do?

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All I am saying is in 1976 if aliens did make that face then why are we still here? Why haven't the aliens came yet ?

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Because if aliens were to make that face on Mars then that means they seen NASA's cameras circling their planet so they would've found a way to get them down. But I think it's a big pain in the butt to the people that think thier is alien life on a planet in our Solier System

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I also want to no part in this discussing because if you don't want to belive me that is on you to look crazy if front of the world so do what you think is best about it I have to get to back to work.

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They come in red, blue, green, black, and white. They beep and honk while they ride on highways and transport people form place to place. Cars are everywear. What would the world be like if we didnt have cars? What are the benefits of life without cars?

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