tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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b288c6e16a3f	19C571180C49	but the students who took the class ultimately know what the students will need to pass the final tests.	Rebuttal	Effective
bbaf47f994b2	19C571180C49	By understanding and experiencing the challenges the class faced before and during the school year, The upperclassmen would be able to create a better summer assignment for the new students. throughout school, not only have i sought out upperclassmen, but underclassmen have came to me asking for advice on classes or help studying. Students for a bond with one another, despite the grade level, in order to survive in the educational ecosystem. Unlike teachers, students know what they need in order to succeed as well as regrets and mistakes they will urge the underclassmen not to do. What else would be better in helping new students for the year than a guided assinment created one of their own?	Concluding Statement	Effective
69a401aa01f2	19E57B0657A6	Summer projects are something that some schools require students to complete. They are given so students may continue to learn, even during their summer break. However, there is a debate whether summer projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed.	Lead	Effective
b2acdba71943	19E57B0657A6	While some may argue that a teacher-designed project would give some guidance for the students, others believe that a summer project designed entirely by students would allow students to let them be more creative,	Claim	Effective
54d7a0e3d94a	19E57B0657A6	students can choose a topic they like	Claim	Adequate
7dfc0ff8979f	19E57B0657A6	students can solve a problem they relate to	Claim	Adequate
5514b69bf5f9	19E57B0657A6	Summer projects should be entirely student-designed to give students a better learning experience during their break.	Position	Effective
0c192f8d68bb	19E57B0657A6	First, students can choose a topic that they are interested in for their student project. For example, if a student likes video games, then they would be more motivated to do their project than a summer project with the topic of gardening. The students will be more motivated doing something they like, simply because they enjoy it. No one wants to do a project that no one likes. In addition to that, students may also be more knowledgable in their topic if they are able to design their project. A student could know nothing about gardening and complete a poor project. However, if a student knows everything about video games, then that student can create a very excellent project, because its a topic they like	Evidence	Effective
aa24bf0cbd95	19E57B0657A6	Student-designed projects allows students to do what they want to do, and have control over it.	Claim	Effective
ee6dcc4e169d	19E57B0657A6	Next, with a student-designed project, students can have more freedom in what they want to do.	Claim	Effective
5b2e8d4f6410	19E57B0657A6	Some students may not like what topic the teacher gives for a project. This can decrease the motivation for some students to do it. However, with a student-designed project, students can be more creative with their project, because people like to learn what they are interested in. Freedom will also make students more motivated to complete their projects, because they are free to do anything.. Freedom can also allow students to be critical thinkers. Some students are the "go by the book" students. This means they always follow what they are supposed to do and not think outside the box. Student-designed projects allow students to think differently and not just use what they have always learned in school. Freedom is key for summer projects.	Evidence	Effective
c934495ff3b6	19E57B0657A6	Lastly, students can choose a problem that students relate to.	Claim	Adequate
1e7a05d11d4f	19E57B0657A6	If a projects asks for the solution to a problem, then students can choose a problem that affects them. This would allow students to have a better understanding of the problem and how to solve the problem. It would make students more motivated to try to create a solution, because of how the problem affects them. For example, if a student chooses a topic about global warming, most students know about the dangers associated with global warming, which gives that student a better understanding of the topic. In addition to that, the student would be more motivated in doing their project, because global warming affects that student and everybody else on Earth. Having a problem that students can relate to for a summer project would increase motivation and knowledge of the topic.	Evidence	Effective
05442a332de2	19E57B0657A6	Students should be able to design their summer projects to give students a better learning experience. The freedom to do anything, the ability to choose a topic, and solving a relatable problem are all associated with student-designed projects. Student projects will allow students to do whatever they want to do and be motivated. Motivation is the key idea for student-designed projects, because motivation is what drives students to succeed. After school is over, there will be no teacher-designed projects, and for good reason too. Students will have to do things on their own without someone telling them to in life. Student-designed projects are the key to a good education for all students during their summer break.	Concluding Statement	Effective
b3e1a31fef17	1A04C4505577	Some schools are requiring students to do a summer projects to assure that they are learning during their break. Do you think that this project should be designed by the teachers or students?	Lead	Ineffective
471997bc8b9c	1A04C4505577	Teachers should design the project	Position	Adequate
fcb60dbf0a28	1A04C4505577	they know what their students struggle on and could include some tips.	Claim	Adequate
4478b22ff239	1A04C4505577	Teachers are with their students the whole year so their most likely to know what each student struggles on, it may not be the whole class that struggles on one topic but the point of the project is to go over certain topics so you won't forget them. The main reason students take test are to see what they struggle on or lack knowledge in and with the teacher designing the project it will focus mainly on those topics. If the students were to design the project they could focus to much on one topic or may not include the most needed topic at all. For example, if it were a math project the student could struggle with their multiplication tables but have more knowledge on everything else, the student could forget to include the multiplication tables or they could just focus lightly on the topic they really need. Teachers could include a guide or some helpful tips to make sure that everything that is to be known about that concept will be there. Students could have payed attention to the topic but still couldn't comprehend it, the teacher could know some tips and tricks to help make it easier for a struggling student. Including helpful tips could also make it easier for the students who have learning disabilities.	Evidence	Effective
e2cf1d1d9bd1	1A04C4505577	Students that struggle with a concept could teach themselves the wrong thing. A student that is struggling with a concept will probably use the internet to try to learn more about it, certain websites can teach the student the wrong thing or probably won't teach them at all.	Evidence	Effective
c58cd5f3642f	1A04C4505577	Teachers will use their knowledge and what they've learned to teach the student the correct way or how they're supposed to learn it	Claim	Adequate
b727f6c65741	1A04C4505577	Teachers can tell the students how to format the project in ways they won't forget it. Students might just write down the topics and not the way to do it or they could even just write down a problem about the topic and later on forget how to do it. Teachers can give the students a certain amount of problems so they won't forget or if it is a written or typed project it could tell the students how many sentences they will need. For instance, if it is a writing project it will tell the students how many spaces they will need, when they should indent their sentences or how they should use certain words. Telling the students how to format the project could even keep the paper neat, if the students were to write all of the topics together they could later be confused on which topic is which. It could even help you focus on the topics you struggle with the most. If the project was being graded formatting could make it easier to point the teachers in the direction of certain topics.	Evidence	Effective
2b308b71185e	1A04C4505577	Teachers informing the students on how to format could really save time and keep things neat.	Claim	Adequate
15b0ce06d814	1A04C4505577	I believe teachers should design the summer projects for the students. Letting the teachers designed the projects will make it easier for students who don't understand, students with learning disabilities and it will make it easier for teachers and others to understand.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
2ef5c72a4563	1A26AFD79998	According to the article there are new ways to find out how a person is feeling such ass computers.	Lead	Adequate
4a10964fb312	1A26AFD79998	Computers can tell how someone is feeling according to the article ''some new computers software that can recognize emotions''.	Claim	Adequate
34eb70660da1	1A26AFD79998	You might ask how can a computer tell how we feel. They can tell how we are feeling because of our face expression with our face expressions they know if we are feeling good or bad. Humans can tell how a friend or family member is feeling aswell by the same way computers can tell by our face expressions if your head is down or your face just doesnt look like youy wanna talk that mcould mean that your really not happy or when your face is heald high and you want to talk to everyone that can mean your really happy it all depends on your face expressions.	Evidence	Adequate
bc6b5d48536e	1A26AFD79998	The mona lisa demonstration is one of the paintings that showes how someone felt	Claim	Ineffective
2e6eda3e488e	1A26AFD79998	Accordig to the facial feedback ''theory of emotion movig your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them''.	Evidence	Ineffective
a1fb3b6d0434	1A26AFD79998	Students should have the technology to see how they feel	Position	Adequate
ea40228ed731	1A26AFD79998	because they would actually understand the emotions people are going through	Claim	Adequate
618ff82b5d05	1A26AFD79998	putting a happy face sometimes is not your real happy face it could just be a fake smile. you can see how fake your smile can be by looking in the mirror and doing these three things. 1. Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth 2. Then squint your eyes slightly to produce wrinkling at the corners of your eyes. 3. Holding that,raise the outer parts of your vheecks up toward your eyes.	Evidence	Adequate
a4eb6be943b8	1A26AFD79998	Dr. Huang even knew individuals showed degrees of exprssions	Claim	Ineffective
c4c0839c4ee6	1A26AFD79998	he used video imagaery to track the new facal movements on a real face. this software tracks all the facial movments and mixed emotions every face they get is compared to a neutral face. Dr. Huang is a colleage expert at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.	Evidence	Ineffective
670c84ef8bcb	1A26AFD79998	Imagine being able to communicate with a computer and being ablle too see how you feel. thats why now technology is getting better for us to interact with them and be able to communicate.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
8439cd59ceb5	1A30D1140E7D	Its not a good to thing to come up with some new technologie	Position	Adequate
564f1debcc4f	1A30D1140E7D	because you probabaly dont know what people been through	Claim	Adequate
063c0f5cd913	1A30D1140E7D	You dont no if sonmbody family remember passed or it could be anything	Evidence	Adequate
f3a30b8b1fca	1A30D1140E7D	i wouldnt want no new technologie about my feelings.	Claim	Adequate
fa5b08550291	1A30D1140E7D	My evidence i got out the article is imagine being able to detect exactly how other person feeling i got that out the article to help me withmy answer. Thats how i found out my answer cause i got it out the article. The main point of me saying my opion is because how the lady looking in this picture it look like she dont look to happy or less she just making up fake smile to hide her pain. In article two it says could you calculate your emotions like math my opion of that is no but in the way it seems like people could calculate your emotions like math.	Evidence	Ineffective
7034f13ca25d	1A72E7E7F1F2	The way the Author was telling us throughout the story was fasanating	Lead	Ineffective
cf7791face36	1A72E7E7F1F2	he let you know everything the hwole way. he studied about the pmanet Venus to let us all know about it and understand it better so we arent as worried to think aliens are on that planet but if they knew that no life forms live on that planet and people get a relief. They steady study about the the way Venus is what if thier is a living form okn the planet but just is hiding like no one would ever know but they are still trying to find things out and thier are things we do know about but are going to find out alot more about. They are trying to improve thier computers the way they do thinhgs just to get to where they need to be to be able to research what they want to research but we just have to eaiot and see wjat other things we have to go through and face with the earth we have right now is getting worse and worse people try and justify others when in order to judge someone you have to of went what they have went through and its hard but we try and move as a team to get to where we should be going. The better we get technology wise the farther we can look and just do things it would be amazing and just progress and everybodyu would be good.	Evidence	Ineffective
666927b75174	1A76F8E4EE76	Some people don't believe in alien lifeforms on other planets; they would say, other planets can't support life there due to multiple things: no oxygen, water, food, etc. We scientist respond to this with, "We have all those things here, there has to be some other planet like us."	Lead	Ineffective
6d523181a89e	1A76F8E4EE76	Humans need food, water, and air to live, but that doesn't mean that aliens do. They could be like plants and create their own food inside their bodies. As for water, NASA has discovered that there used to be water on the moon, so what is there to believe there couldn't be any water anywhere else. People can be very religious and about the Bible and God, but other people can be all about evolution and not creation. If humans evolved from animals, then we might not be the only ones. Which means that if humans can evolve into humans, then other organisms can evolve, also.	Evidence	Ineffective
0dde1b3a5724	1A76F8E4EE76	The Face on Mars might be a butte or mesa, but that doesn't mean other organisms don't live outside of the Solar System.	Position	Ineffective
d625ab84854e	1A76F8E4EE76	We can't leave here, so we won't ever be able to know. Life beyond Earth may be just a myth, but it also may be something truly amazing.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
2042d90b4f18	1A9893654A41	I do not believe we should use this on any students	Position	Adequate
43451318d046	1A9893654A41	because for the fact it reads all of our emotions, which we don't always like to show now.	Evidence	Adequate
ad4bff476cb2	1A9893654A41	"The process begins when the computer costructs a 3-D computer model of the face," to me that just sounds like something may go wrong for the fact we have the same kind of camrea for the Iphone and people have trouble with that.	Evidence	Ineffective
97d83a36bce6	1A9893654A41	Another problem for his idea is, "That facial expressions for each emotion are universal," I really don't know about the meaning of this but it doesn't sound good to me either.	Evidence	Ineffective
07231fe89fa4	1A9893654A41	lastly I would want them in schools because then I believe it will make schools have more bullies if someone had one and they used it.	Evidence	Adequate
bd13aab9e8e8	1A9893654A41	Plus they say that technology is going to take over the world, this just might be another reason for this to may be happen.	Evidence	Ineffective
bf9f955905a0	1AD1F738D48B	This technology would be useful in many ways. This technology could be very valuable, but it also could be too much for us to handle.	Position	Adequate
c693172d4252	1AD1F738D48B	With technology like this it might make learning things online more interesting.	Claim	Adequate
74e41f8310ef	1AD1F738D48B	Imagine reading a boring documentory about a hero you are writing about for class, as you continue to read the article, a suggested website pops up with interesting facts about your person with more information. Now you are more interested and the computer has done its job to change your feelings on this presentation.	Evidence	Adequate
8a81399b3c38	1AD1F738D48B	We could use this technology to do many other similar things like that.	Claim	Adequate
66ab5db3b855	1AD1F738D48B	Maybe one day you are just down in the dumps and all these videos you are watching are just making you feel worse and even more bored than before. Then a suggested video pops up and you are able to watch it and laugh and it was able to take your horrible day and turn it into just another good day. These are the nice things this kind of technology can do for us.	Evidence	Adequate
b069ca26e0f4	1AD1F738D48B	Although you might think it is strange to have a computer know exactly how you are feeling when you sit down at in front of it.	Counterclaim	Adequate
6507fcd8909f	1AD1F738D48B	There would never be a dull moment in front of the computer though.	Rebuttal	Ineffective
5119c806cd1d	1AD1F738D48B	Maybe you are just sitting around and you get bored and have nothing better to do so you get up and you make your way to the computer and play with the emotion detector just by making faces at your computer seeing if it can guess how you are feeling.	Evidence	Ineffective
0070a6ae29a1	1AD1F738D48B	Technology is advancing quick, it is nothing like it used to be, but either you have to run with it or get ran over.	Claim	Ineffective
dee1ab02135c	1AD1F738D48B	Things are changing fast we have to change with them. This is why this technology is so valuable, we can use it in many ways even if its not important. We can still get use out of it, so why not make it a thing? In the article it says "She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry" talking about the Mona Lisa painting. Now you cant tell me that that is not cool at all.	Evidence	Ineffective
e5720749615d	1AD1F738D48B	Its pretty amazing what they can do with technology these days so we might as well adjust to it instead of push it away. That is why we should be able to have technology like this.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
0a96138f4f29	1ADE56C19ACC	The technology to read a emotional expression is not valuable	Position	Adequate
be97fc852be3	1ADE56C19ACC	Because computer are wrong everyday they are the smarts thing on earth but they still get stuff wrong once in a while . They don't know the true feeling of happy and sad . They just computers .	Evidence	Adequate
f8c08b6801c0	1ADE56C19ACC	There millions of reason why it not valuable well for one a person could be looking happy in the picture but be reallly sad emotional	Claim	Adequate
316301555341	1ADE56C19ACC	I see it everyday at in the world .Like for explain when someone die and they go to a furel you got to look cool or happy ,but on the inside your heart broken and never be the same . And you take a picture on a computer and it would say you are happen but you really not because computer don't know emontional they just know knowledge .	Evidence	Adequate
989473b7d054	1ADE56C19ACC	I mean don't get me wrong it a good tool it see people emotional .	Counterclaim	Adequate
b9b694c544d4	1ADE56C19ACC	But that why we got eyes for , to look and see things	Rebuttal	Adequate
dbaad1484cd9	1ADE56C19ACC	We dont need computer to see people emotional we can tell by the way a person talk	Claim	Adequate
3f476073b839	1ADE56C19ACC	If that person sound like he or she got a additon (come back) that mean that person is in a bad mood and don't want to talk at that time . A computer wouldn't even know he or she in a good mood or not by the way they talk. Another good reason why it's not valuable.	Evidence	Adequate
53b0292dbb29	1ADE56C19ACC	Does computer even have emotional? I don't think so but they can't tell people emotinal .	Claim	Ineffective
3338b4002ba3	1ADE56C19ACC	Compuer don't know what true happence or sadness mean they just tell us whatever they programer put inside them. True happness is something you don't feel its just there . Sadness is somthing thats doesn't feel good something that hurts on the inside.	Evidence	Adequate
83c4a1988d91	1ADE56C19ACC	So yea computer really can't read people expressions just from the face . If it so great im looking in the computer now can you tell me my expression they probably say im sad but im not m just worry . to pass his test so yea computer are not valuable to expression for people emotional	Concluding Statement	Adequate
1173a0b79d58	1B0B7D83419C	Th author did not do a very good job supporting his idea that we should explore Venus, despite the risks.	Position	Adequate
514a3e33a1a6	1B0B7D83419C	In this article, the author did not give reason why we should explore Venus. He just gave facts about Venus and its dangerous conditions.	Claim	Adequate
996d82d761fd	1B0B7D83419C	The author only explained the risk involved in exploring Venus, and not why we should, despite the risk. An example of a random fact that does not back up the authors suggestion: Spacecrafts that land on Venus never come back and only last about two to three hours.	Evidence	Adequate
821b9e09ac7d	1B0B7D83419C	At the end of the artcle, the author finally mentions his viewpoint on the subject. But during the actual article, it is not once mentioned that we should go to Venus.	Claim	Ineffective
7ea8b37246a8	1B0B7D83419C	In conclusion, the author does not support his suggestion that we should explore Venus but instead lists off random facts he knows about Venus and what we would do if we get there.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
c375d52dbad5	1B1FBDE25C2C	In my ophion, technology reading students emotional expressions is the dumbest thing ever	Position	Adequate
9c32425cbeb4	1B1FBDE25C2C	First, the apps they are using just changes the student indivaully like you can not make someone be happy on a computer you can make them look happy they should not change someone for who they want them to be vs what they are. Second, you should not change a photo or use any edits because thats changing you and you should just be you if you dont smile thats okay dont let people judge you on how you look you should impress your self not somebody eles. Third, People today need to realize that changing someone in any type of way could hurt them even worse. Yes, messing with peoples emotion or sometimes trying to figure it out whats wrong with them can set off alot of things.	Evidence	Adequate
2008539c54a7	1B1FBDE25C2C	Instead of making someone look happy people should talk to the person that is upset, trying to be there for them maybe thats all they need or tell them soemthing postive to brighten there day.	Claim	Ineffective
af41513a7ef5	1B1FBDE25C2C	In Conclusion, I think changing someones pictures to make them look like they are happy is the wose idea ever because deep down they know they are, but do you just because someone makes and upset face dosnt always mean they are.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
fa220301ca4c	1B2470F552CC	Have you ever wondered what people are feeling? well now you can. Their is this new software than can tell you what people are feeling eve tho they are hidding it. Dr. Huang's computer sinces a 3-D model (human musles). it can even read a painting, it want tellwhere your eyebrows should be and where they are and hiw suprised are you in that moment. It can tell you six diffrerent emotions, happiness, anger, fear, sadness, surprised, and disgust.	Lead	Adequate
13dd8c3506ea	1B2470F552CC	Dr. Huang's invention is very interesting	Claim	Ineffective
2b20da8d65b1	1B2470F552CC	one day I would love to use this meachine. its just so diffrenet from looking at your friend and seeing what you think their feeling that actually feeling what they are feeling. In this article they were testing da Vinci and they named a code for it. it is called "da Vinci code."	Evidence	Adequate
9118cce89d3c	1B2470F552CC	It's so crazy to think that a computer can tell if your sad or happy	Claim	Ineffective
374a49d5140f	1B2470F552CC	if you did a lab on if your partner can tell if your happy or sad. the comouter can tell if your faking a smile and if your really smiling, but in a humans eye it hard to see sometimes. people say that your faking a smile until your cheek bones move and tightin up.	Evidence	Adequate
b259f85bbaf4	1B2470F552CC	They should do one in a classroom to see if the kids are bored and what time they get bored and intertainded.	Claim	Adequate
9fd53b58b61f	1B2470F552CC	I wonder what peoples thoughts about seeing things online and see what their emotions are when their looking at stuff online. or like if you can read someones face when their walking into a interview and what they may be feeling.	Evidence	Adequate
973af481bdcd	1B2470F552CC	Whoever can revel so much of this tecnology could maybe make more things in the future and maybe make more products of the face reader and study peoples faces and show what they could be thinking somedays.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
d435013cb3cb	1B2470F552CC	i think this idea is pretty cool	Position	Ineffective
838d97455b89	1B4BA44BD3E9	Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness,surprise,anger,disgust ,fear and sadness. they are controlled by facial muscles above your eyes. People can tell when u are fake smiling or making a fake facial exspression. There is a new technology called the facial Action coding system enables computers to identify humans emotions. They also exsplain how people can tell what your emotion is by your facial exspressions. They can tell if you are happy or sad just by looking at you also when u fake smile specialist can tell because it streches your mouth sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle. A muscle called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraesus makes crow's feet around your eyes which is also a sign that u have a fake smile. They also explain the steps you can do to show what they are talking about with having "crows feet" when you are fake smiling. moving your facial muscles not only exspressses emotion, but also helps produce them and putting on a happy face eventaully works. some actors have to use these emotions and facial expressions when they are on stage.	Evidence	Ineffective
75878ac351bd	1B4BA44BD3E9	its crazy how making faces could show so much about emotions.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
bb3bdd7a7e0f	1B4E66B0BE0A	I do think that there are advantages to limiting car usage	Position	Adequate
103e11863936	1B4E66B0BE0A	because of pollution.	Claim	Adequate
6514f08f8d05	1B4E66B0BE0A	many different transportations	Claim	Adequate
0c3040142876	1B4E66B0BE0A	car culture.	Claim	Ineffective
210f8f088aa4	1B4E66B0BE0A	pollution.	Claim	Adequate
0451b4ef3431	1B4E66B0BE0A	Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog, the smog rivale Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gas. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines. Paris has more smog than other European capitals.	Evidence	Adequate
df2e17f23639	1B4E66B0BE0A	there are advantages to limited car usage because of many different acts of transportation. In Bogota, Colombia a program is set to spread to other countries. It was called a "Car Free" day which meant that you could not use your car for a whole day. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million.	Evidence	Adequate

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but the students who took the class ultimately know what the students will need to pass the final tests.

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By understanding and experiencing the challenges the class faced before and during the school year, The upperclassmen would be able to create a better summer assignment for the new students. throughout school, not only have i sought out upperclassmen, but underclassmen have came to me asking for advice on classes or help studying. Students for a bond with one another, despite the grade level, in order to survive in the educational ecosystem. Unlike teachers, students know what they need in order to succeed as well as regrets and mistakes they will urge the underclassmen not to do. What else would be better in helping new students for the year than a guided assinment created one of their own?

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Summer projects are something that some schools require students to complete. They are given so students may continue to learn, even during their summer break. However, there is a debate whether summer projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed.

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While some may argue that a teacher-designed project would give some guidance for the students, others believe that a summer project designed entirely by students would allow students to let them be more creative,

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students can choose a topic they like

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students can solve a problem they relate to

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Summer projects should be entirely student-designed to give students a better learning experience during their break.

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First, students can choose a topic that they are interested in for their student project. For example, if a student likes video games, then they would be more motivated to do their project than a summer project with the topic of gardening. The students will be more motivated doing something they like, simply because they enjoy it. No one wants to do a project that no one likes. In addition to that, students may also be more knowledgable in their topic if they are able to design their project. A student could know nothing about gardening and complete a poor project. However, if a student knows everything about video games, then that student can create a very excellent project, because its a topic they like

Evidence

Effective

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Student-designed projects allows students to do what they want to do, and have control over it.

Claim

Effective

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Next, with a student-designed project, students can have more freedom in what they want to do.

Claim

Effective

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Some students may not like what topic the teacher gives for a project. This can decrease the motivation for some students to do it. However, with a student-designed project, students can be more creative with their project, because people like to learn what they are interested in. Freedom will also make students more motivated to complete their projects, because they are free to do anything.. Freedom can also allow students to be critical thinkers. Some students are the "go by the book" students. This means they always follow what they are supposed to do and not think outside the box. Student-designed projects allow students to think differently and not just use what they have always learned in school. Freedom is key for summer projects.

Evidence

Effective

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Lastly, students can choose a problem that students relate to.

Claim

Adequate

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If a projects asks for the solution to a problem, then students can choose a problem that affects them. This would allow students to have a better understanding of the problem and how to solve the problem. It would make students more motivated to try to create a solution, because of how the problem affects them. For example, if a student chooses a topic about global warming, most students know about the dangers associated with global warming, which gives that student a better understanding of the topic. In addition to that, the student would be more motivated in doing their project, because global warming affects that student and everybody else on Earth. Having a problem that students can relate to for a summer project would increase motivation and knowledge of the topic.

Evidence

Effective

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Students should be able to design their summer projects to give students a better learning experience. The freedom to do anything, the ability to choose a topic, and solving a relatable problem are all associated with student-designed projects. Student projects will allow students to do whatever they want to do and be motivated. Motivation is the key idea for student-designed projects, because motivation is what drives students to succeed. After school is over, there will be no teacher-designed projects, and for good reason too. Students will have to do things on their own without someone telling them to in life. Student-designed projects are the key to a good education for all students during their summer break.

Concluding Statement

Effective

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Some schools are requiring students to do a summer projects to assure that they are learning during their break. Do you think that this project should be designed by the teachers or students?

Lead

Ineffective

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Teachers should design the project

Position

Adequate

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they know what their students struggle on and could include some tips.

Claim

Adequate

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Teachers are with their students the whole year so their most likely to know what each student struggles on, it may not be the whole class that struggles on one topic but the point of the project is to go over certain topics so you won't forget them. The main reason students take test are to see what they struggle on or lack knowledge in and with the teacher designing the project it will focus mainly on those topics. If the students were to design the project they could focus to much on one topic or may not include the most needed topic at all. For example, if it were a math project the student could struggle with their multiplication tables but have more knowledge on everything else, the student could forget to include the multiplication tables or they could just focus lightly on the topic they really need. Teachers could include a guide or some helpful tips to make sure that everything that is to be known about that concept will be there. Students could have payed attention to the topic but still couldn't comprehend it, the teacher could know some tips and tricks to help make it easier for a struggling student. Including helpful tips could also make it easier for the students who have learning disabilities.

Evidence

Effective

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Students that struggle with a concept could teach themselves the wrong thing. A student that is struggling with a concept will probably use the internet to try to learn more about it, certain websites can teach the student the wrong thing or probably won't teach them at all.

Evidence

Effective

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Teachers will use their knowledge and what they've learned to teach the student the correct way or how they're supposed to learn it

Claim

Adequate

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Teachers can tell the students how to format the project in ways they won't forget it. Students might just write down the topics and not the way to do it or they could even just write down a problem about the topic and later on forget how to do it. Teachers can give the students a certain amount of problems so they won't forget or if it is a written or typed project it could tell the students how many sentences they will need. For instance, if it is a writing project it will tell the students how many spaces they will need, when they should indent their sentences or how they should use certain words. Telling the students how to format the project could even keep the paper neat, if the students were to write all of the topics together they could later be confused on which topic is which. It could even help you focus on the topics you struggle with the most. If the project was being graded formatting could make it easier to point the teachers in the direction of certain topics.

Evidence

Effective

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Teachers informing the students on how to format could really save time and keep things neat.

Claim

Adequate

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I believe teachers should design the summer projects for the students. Letting the teachers designed the projects will make it easier for students who don't understand, students with learning disabilities and it will make it easier for teachers and others to understand.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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According to the article there are new ways to find out how a person is feeling such ass computers.

Lead

Adequate

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Computers can tell how someone is feeling according to the article ''some new computers software that can recognize emotions''.

Claim

Adequate

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You might ask how can a computer tell how we feel. They can tell how we are feeling because of our face expression with our face expressions they know if we are feeling good or bad. Humans can tell how a friend or family member is feeling aswell by the same way computers can tell by our face expressions if your head is down or your face just doesnt look like youy wanna talk that mcould mean that your really not happy or when your face is heald high and you want to talk to everyone that can mean your really happy it all depends on your face expressions.

Evidence

Adequate

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The mona lisa demonstration is one of the paintings that showes how someone felt

Claim

Ineffective

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Accordig to the facial feedback ''theory of emotion movig your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them''.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Students should have the technology to see how they feel

Position

Adequate

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because they would actually understand the emotions people are going through

Claim

Adequate

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putting a happy face sometimes is not your real happy face it could just be a fake smile. you can see how fake your smile can be by looking in the mirror and doing these three things. 1. Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth 2. Then squint your eyes slightly to produce wrinkling at the corners of your eyes. 3. Holding that,raise the outer parts of your vheecks up toward your eyes.

Evidence

Adequate

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Dr. Huang even knew individuals showed degrees of exprssions

Claim

Ineffective

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he used video imagaery to track the new facal movements on a real face. this software tracks all the facial movments and mixed emotions every face they get is compared to a neutral face. Dr. Huang is a colleage expert at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Imagine being able to communicate with a computer and being ablle too see how you feel. thats why now technology is getting better for us to interact with them and be able to communicate.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Its not a good to thing to come up with some new technologie

Position

Adequate

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because you probabaly dont know what people been through

Claim

Adequate

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You dont no if sonmbody family remember passed or it could be anything

Evidence

Adequate

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i wouldnt want no new technologie about my feelings.

Claim

Adequate

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My evidence i got out the article is imagine being able to detect exactly how other person feeling i got that out the article to help me withmy answer. Thats how i found out my answer cause i got it out the article. The main point of me saying my opion is because how the lady looking in this picture it look like she dont look to happy or less she just making up fake smile to hide her pain. In article two it says could you calculate your emotions like math my opion of that is no but in the way it seems like people could calculate your emotions like math.

Evidence

Ineffective

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The way the Author was telling us throughout the story was fasanating

Lead

Ineffective

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he let you know everything the hwole way. he studied about the pmanet Venus to let us all know about it and understand it better so we arent as worried to think aliens are on that planet but if they knew that no life forms live on that planet and people get a relief. They steady study about the the way Venus is what if thier is a living form okn the planet but just is hiding like no one would ever know but they are still trying to find things out and thier are things we do know about but are going to find out alot more about. They are trying to improve thier computers the way they do thinhgs just to get to where they need to be to be able to research what they want to research but we just have to eaiot and see wjat other things we have to go through and face with the earth we have right now is getting worse and worse people try and justify others when in order to judge someone you have to of went what they have went through and its hard but we try and move as a team to get to where we should be going. The better we get technology wise the farther we can look and just do things it would be amazing and just progress and everybodyu would be good.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Some people don't believe in alien lifeforms on other planets; they would say, other planets can't support life there due to multiple things: no oxygen, water, food, etc. We scientist respond to this with, "We have all those things here, there has to be some other planet like us."

Lead

Ineffective

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Humans need food, water, and air to live, but that doesn't mean that aliens do. They could be like plants and create their own food inside their bodies. As for water, NASA has discovered that there used to be water on the moon, so what is there to believe there couldn't be any water anywhere else. People can be very religious and about the Bible and God, but other people can be all about evolution and not creation. If humans evolved from animals, then we might not be the only ones. Which means that if humans can evolve into humans, then other organisms can evolve, also.

Evidence

Ineffective

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The Face on Mars might be a butte or mesa, but that doesn't mean other organisms don't live outside of the Solar System.

Position

Ineffective

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We can't leave here, so we won't ever be able to know. Life beyond Earth may be just a myth, but it also may be something truly amazing.

Concluding Statement

Ineffective

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I do not believe we should use this on any students

Position

Adequate

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because for the fact it reads all of our emotions, which we don't always like to show now.

Evidence

Adequate

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"The process begins when the computer costructs a 3-D computer model of the face," to me that just sounds like something may go wrong for the fact we have the same kind of camrea for the Iphone and people have trouble with that.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Another problem for his idea is, "That facial expressions for each emotion are universal," I really don't know about the meaning of this but it doesn't sound good to me either.

Evidence

Ineffective

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lastly I would want them in schools because then I believe it will make schools have more bullies if someone had one and they used it.

Evidence

Adequate

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Plus they say that technology is going to take over the world, this just might be another reason for this to may be happen.

Evidence

Ineffective

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This technology would be useful in many ways. This technology could be very valuable, but it also could be too much for us to handle.

Position

Adequate

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With technology like this it might make learning things online more interesting.

Claim

Adequate

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Imagine reading a boring documentory about a hero you are writing about for class, as you continue to read the article, a suggested website pops up with interesting facts about your person with more information. Now you are more interested and the computer has done its job to change your feelings on this presentation.

Evidence

Adequate

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We could use this technology to do many other similar things like that.

Claim

Adequate

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Maybe one day you are just down in the dumps and all these videos you are watching are just making you feel worse and even more bored than before. Then a suggested video pops up and you are able to watch it and laugh and it was able to take your horrible day and turn it into just another good day. These are the nice things this kind of technology can do for us.

Evidence

Adequate

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Although you might think it is strange to have a computer know exactly how you are feeling when you sit down at in front of it.

Counterclaim

Adequate

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There would never be a dull moment in front of the computer though.

Rebuttal

Ineffective

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Maybe you are just sitting around and you get bored and have nothing better to do so you get up and you make your way to the computer and play with the emotion detector just by making faces at your computer seeing if it can guess how you are feeling.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Technology is advancing quick, it is nothing like it used to be, but either you have to run with it or get ran over.

Claim

Ineffective

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Things are changing fast we have to change with them. This is why this technology is so valuable, we can use it in many ways even if its not important. We can still get use out of it, so why not make it a thing? In the article it says "She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry" talking about the Mona Lisa painting. Now you cant tell me that that is not cool at all.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Its pretty amazing what they can do with technology these days so we might as well adjust to it instead of push it away. That is why we should be able to have technology like this.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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The technology to read a emotional expression is not valuable

Position

Adequate

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Because computer are wrong everyday they are the smarts thing on earth but they still get stuff wrong once in a while . They don't know the true feeling of happy and sad . They just computers .

Evidence

Adequate

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There millions of reason why it not valuable well for one a person could be looking happy in the picture but be reallly sad emotional

Claim

Adequate

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I see it everyday at in the world .Like for explain when someone die and they go to a furel you got to look cool or happy ,but on the inside your heart broken and never be the same . And you take a picture on a computer and it would say you are happen but you really not because computer don't know emontional they just know knowledge .

Evidence

Adequate

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I mean don't get me wrong it a good tool it see people emotional .

Counterclaim

Adequate

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But that why we got eyes for , to look and see things

Rebuttal

Adequate

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We dont need computer to see people emotional we can tell by the way a person talk

Claim

Adequate

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If that person sound like he or she got a additon (come back) that mean that person is in a bad mood and don't want to talk at that time . A computer wouldn't even know he or she in a good mood or not by the way they talk. Another good reason why it's not valuable.

Evidence

Adequate

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Does computer even have emotional? I don't think so but they can't tell people emotinal .

Claim

Ineffective

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Compuer don't know what true happence or sadness mean they just tell us whatever they programer put inside them. True happness is something you don't feel its just there . Sadness is somthing thats doesn't feel good something that hurts on the inside.

Evidence

Adequate

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So yea computer really can't read people expressions just from the face . If it so great im looking in the computer now can you tell me my expression they probably say im sad but im not m just worry . to pass his test so yea computer are not valuable to expression for people emotional

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Th author did not do a very good job supporting his idea that we should explore Venus, despite the risks.

Position

Adequate

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In this article, the author did not give reason why we should explore Venus. He just gave facts about Venus and its dangerous conditions.

Claim

Adequate

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The author only explained the risk involved in exploring Venus, and not why we should, despite the risk. An example of a random fact that does not back up the authors suggestion: Spacecrafts that land on Venus never come back and only last about two to three hours.

Evidence

Adequate

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At the end of the artcle, the author finally mentions his viewpoint on the subject. But during the actual article, it is not once mentioned that we should go to Venus.

Claim

Ineffective

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In conclusion, the author does not support his suggestion that we should explore Venus but instead lists off random facts he knows about Venus and what we would do if we get there.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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In my ophion, technology reading students emotional expressions is the dumbest thing ever

Position

Adequate

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First, the apps they are using just changes the student indivaully like you can not make someone be happy on a computer you can make them look happy they should not change someone for who they want them to be vs what they are. Second, you should not change a photo or use any edits because thats changing you and you should just be you if you dont smile thats okay dont let people judge you on how you look you should impress your self not somebody eles. Third, People today need to realize that changing someone in any type of way could hurt them even worse. Yes, messing with peoples emotion or sometimes trying to figure it out whats wrong with them can set off alot of things.

Evidence

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Instead of making someone look happy people should talk to the person that is upset, trying to be there for them maybe thats all they need or tell them soemthing postive to brighten there day.

Claim

Ineffective

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In Conclusion, I think changing someones pictures to make them look like they are happy is the wose idea ever because deep down they know they are, but do you just because someone makes and upset face dosnt always mean they are.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Have you ever wondered what people are feeling? well now you can. Their is this new software than can tell you what people are feeling eve tho they are hidding it. Dr. Huang's computer sinces a 3-D model (human musles). it can even read a painting, it want tellwhere your eyebrows should be and where they are and hiw suprised are you in that moment. It can tell you six diffrerent emotions, happiness, anger, fear, sadness, surprised, and disgust.

Lead

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Dr. Huang's invention is very interesting

Claim

Ineffective

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one day I would love to use this meachine. its just so diffrenet from looking at your friend and seeing what you think their feeling that actually feeling what they are feeling. In this article they were testing da Vinci and they named a code for it. it is called "da Vinci code."

Evidence

Adequate

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It's so crazy to think that a computer can tell if your sad or happy

Claim

Ineffective

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if you did a lab on if your partner can tell if your happy or sad. the comouter can tell if your faking a smile and if your really smiling, but in a humans eye it hard to see sometimes. people say that your faking a smile until your cheek bones move and tightin up.

Evidence

Adequate

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They should do one in a classroom to see if the kids are bored and what time they get bored and intertainded.

Claim

Adequate

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I wonder what peoples thoughts about seeing things online and see what their emotions are when their looking at stuff online. or like if you can read someones face when their walking into a interview and what they may be feeling.

Evidence

Adequate

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Whoever can revel so much of this tecnology could maybe make more things in the future and maybe make more products of the face reader and study peoples faces and show what they could be thinking somedays.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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i think this idea is pretty cool

Position

Ineffective

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Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness,surprise,anger,disgust ,fear and sadness. they are controlled by facial muscles above your eyes. People can tell when u are fake smiling or making a fake facial exspression. There is a new technology called the facial Action coding system enables computers to identify humans emotions. They also exsplain how people can tell what your emotion is by your facial exspressions. They can tell if you are happy or sad just by looking at you also when u fake smile specialist can tell because it streches your mouth sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle. A muscle called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraesus makes crow's feet around your eyes which is also a sign that u have a fake smile. They also explain the steps you can do to show what they are talking about with having "crows feet" when you are fake smiling. moving your facial muscles not only exspressses emotion, but also helps produce them and putting on a happy face eventaully works. some actors have to use these emotions and facial expressions when they are on stage.

Evidence

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its crazy how making faces could show so much about emotions.

Concluding Statement

Ineffective

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I do think that there are advantages to limiting car usage

Position

Adequate

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because of pollution.

Claim

Adequate

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many different transportations

Claim

Adequate

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car culture.

Claim

Ineffective

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pollution.

Claim

Adequate

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Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog, the smog rivale Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gas. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines. Paris has more smog than other European capitals.

Evidence

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there are advantages to limited car usage because of many different acts of transportation. In Bogota, Colombia a program is set to spread to other countries. It was called a "Car Free" day which meant that you could not use your car for a whole day. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million.

Evidence

Adequate