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94fa2c0b28fe | 10E7A0414D14 | At this day's everyone be expose to any illness, that's one reason why online class is a good option. At this time study in the own house is a benefit; also working in the own house should be good thing. Is one option work in home when is bad climate or include someone who can not going to work. | Evidence | Adequate |
730349fc4f84 | 10E7A0414D14 | In one part should be great going to work place because there are another people and is great know about the team work. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d8de1963f888 | 10E7A0414D14 | I consider important the study, since, is all the necessary for comply the desire purpose. That why exist a lot of manner for having the complete study online, or in the school. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c315845a28b9 | 10E7A0414D14 | Also, exist the disadvantage of which online class have a high cost. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
5e6b58c838b0 | 10E7A0414D14 | That cause the low chance of opportunity to person's who not have the necessary budget to pay. | Evidence | Adequate |
578461f6278e | 10E7A0414D14 | think we live right now the perfect example for study online, cause of all things happen in a different school's and also the illness that everybody are confront around the world. | Claim | Adequate |
ec34e3125ea9 | 10E7A0414D14 | In the old year's people do not having help for study and make future plan. The new youth have a big opportunity for make future plan at this time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
95722e02262b | 10E7A0414D14 | Most people know that in this time the technology are the most important thing, therefore, it is possible do not be physical present in a classroom but can listening and see live class, basically the video conferencing | Claim | Adequate |
50d33b6443c4 | 10E7A0414D14 | Having class in the own house should a good option because, give us more time to do the homework and study. Some student's who can be present in the school, need complete class, so student's use online class to comply that. Furthermore, is a good help to student's. | Evidence | Adequate |
bfad194a2119 | 10E7A0414D14 | Finally, for my viewpoint will be a good benefit for many student's can study online. Taking consideration the problem's, and the different opportunity from each one, should be excellent option online class. People create another opportunity, showing that nothing is impossible for comply what people want. However is a benefit for all, having online class. It is necessary for what all can confront, and decide study online or physical in a school. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c286d93b6573 | 11168209A49C | I am writing this letter to inform you that I do believe in your decision in making all the students of
SCHOOL_NAME to do community service. | Position | Adequate |
0f6ce09f7454 | 11168209A49C | I think they should do it because community service it a great way to interact with younger children and the community. | Claim | Adequate |
b6a2af142180 | 11168209A49C | There are all sorts of things to do from spending time with the young and elderly to cleaning the city. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6161e658c15d | 11168209A49C | Some students think that doing stuff like that is boring because their not getting paid. | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
6d7847b98d05 | 11168209A49C | It doesn't matter who you are or what race you are it matter about everyone coming together as a family. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
8b80056c85c6 | 11168209A49C | When you here the words community service you automatically think that its for bad people , but it's not | Claim | Adequate |
2c320d20eb8b | 11168209A49C | I would describe community service as a chance to reach out to people. It's just not about cleaning up you can have fun raisers. You can also have community get-togethers to help support breast cancer or something like that | Evidence | Adequate |
e88e309d1b34 | 11168209A49C | It really doesn't matter just show your community some love | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f0b72b72aea0 | 113000585851 | There has beeen some recent heat on the topic of the Electoral College. | Lead | Adequate |
cb197f6b0946 | 113000585851 | I believe that it is only fair to keep the Electoral College. | Position | Effective |
b4d797c6def2 | 113000585851 | Although some voters may be upset with the fact that they don't define who wins the presidential election, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
bc688f186aa5 | 113000585851 | it is best that way. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
a97872396342 | 113000585851 | If there was no Electoral College people with no actual idea of whats going on would vote, and that could have a negative affect. | Claim | Effective |
12328ebf02c7 | 113000585851 | if there was no Electoral College there would be an unfair amount of votes in larger states. | Claim | Effective |
a3c9c7ccfdbd | 113000585851 | Swing States, which is also a very important part of the voting process. | Claim | Effective |
6f4e2017228e | 113000585851 | the Electoral College may make voters feel like they have no input on the election, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
99774ef97f49 | 113000585851 | but really they decide who the Electoral voters choose. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
c12aaef6de2d | 113000585851 | Without Electoral voters, there would be indecisive people voting for a candidate they know nothing about. | Claim | Effective |
8eb44deb2093 | 113000585851 | For example, many young voters base their votes off of popular opinion, not what they think is actually right. If there was no Electoral College, the Nation could be in a lot of trouble because many votes would be casted off of popular opinion. So it is good to have some control over what happens and who becomes president, but I think having the full decision to vote for whomever, and have it count, is overdoing it. | Evidence | Effective |
88d10053fa7b | 113000585851 | Secondly, I believe that having the Electoral College is great because, without it larger states would have more of a say on who becomes president. | Claim | Effective |
f35f816e2cc1 | 113000585851 | This would be very unfair to the smaller states for an obvious reason, population. Even though a few states might have a bigger population that doesn't particularly mean that everyone in the state will vote. There are still "independent voters". For example, as stated in paragraph twenty-one, the election voting in Florida was very close and relied a lot on popular votes. Florida ended up getting twenty-nine electoral votes, compared to Wyoming who only got three electoral votes. State size does matter because larger states will typically always get more attention from the presidential candidates than smalller ones. | Evidence | Effective |
694d3e0c3f0b | 113000585851 | Lastly, The Electoral College is a very important part of our voting process becaue of Swing States | Claim | Effective |
6858101b1b9e | 113000585851 | As stated in paragraph twenty, voters in toss-up states are "more likely to listen to the campaign and the competing candidates". These voters know that their votes wont make much of an impression on the election, but pay the most attention anyways. | Evidence | Effective |
8fbf9f831b9f | 113000585851 | People claim that the most involved voters should be able to decide the elections. | Counterclaim | Effective |
660b568400ba | 113000585851 | Although they don't have much of a say it is nice to know that people do care about the elections and do pay close attention to what is going on. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
b0b10aa89663 | 113000585851 | To conclude my previously stated reasons, I believe that having the Electoral College is a crucial part of the system. Because without it the nation would have so many voters that only cast their votes based off of popular opinion. Also without it larger states would have more of an affect on the votes than the smaller states do. Finally, Swing States are a very important part of voting because voters who know what is going on and actually pay attention do have one of the biggest affects. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
f24fd09c0fee | 1136D95D28E7 | 50%
of American students debate ! | Lead | Ineffective |
b5b05f7f50d5 | 1136D95D28E7 | Community service is very important . | Position | Adequate |
bfc1b5875017 | 1136D95D28E7 | But others think it takes too much time away from what they need or want to do . | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b3975e67e869 | 1136D95D28E7 | There are many ways in which students can help there communities . | Claim | Adequate |
56a8936b6cc3 | 1136D95D28E7 | I understand that there are those of you who will disagree that TEACHER_NAME
should require all students to perform community service , | Counterclaim | Adequate |
feb1d6dd0356 | 1136D95D28E7 | but research shows that 90% of students that perform community service will be doing themselves and there neighborhoods good !
Experts agree that doing community service will help the world ! | Rebuttal | Adequate |
9188bc404392 | 1136D95D28E7 | OTHER_NAME , award winning community service performer , says " by doing community service you are being a great citizen " | Claim | Adequate |
1afdac2944ed | 1136D95D28E7 | For instance , doing community service involves doing lots of things like picking up trash so that the environment can be more cleaner , Help recycle so we don't have to kill things like trees and forest , and even going to the nursery homes and showing the elders that they have not been forgotten . | Evidence | Adequate |
fa2bd13ac457 | 1136D95D28E7 | Not doing community service is like letting bad people escape from jail , | Claim | Ineffective |
abfb913a9dfb | 1136D95D28E7 | it make the world a less comfortable and even harder place to live in ! | Evidence | Adequate |
c145f04f5585 | 1136D95D28E7 | 12 out of 12 students will not regret making the choice of doing community service | Claim | Adequate |
a8acb7513e9e | 1136D95D28E7 | For example , when i was in 5th grade my school (SCHOOL_NAME) did community service by going outside in the school parking lots , playgrounds , and classrooms to pick up trash and all the litter .
So why not want to do something to help your community ? | Evidence | Adequate |
231385c14977 | 1136D95D28E7 | Without a doubt , doing community service helps people to learn that it is not a time waster. | Claim | Adequate |
867f857735de | 1136D95D28E7 | OTHER_NAME , american citizen and community service program founder , says " doing community service is not a time waster if it's helping your community ! " Not helping your community is like not helping someone that really needs help , heartless! | Evidence | Adequate |
c0c3f86e188c | 11461A6C46C6 | I believe that we should change to the popular vote for the president of the United States. | Position | Adequate |
c676ba3f2522 | 11461A6C46C6 | There are three main reasons why. One, the people are being ruled by this president, don't you think every one should get a say in who they want the president to be | Claim | Adequate |
d796a6ff1a8d | 11461A6C46C6 | Two, Electoral College is not at all fair | Claim | Adequate |
6402a5a8135e | 11461A6C46C6 | Lastly if you have all the people of the United States vote then the process will be more accurate. | Claim | Adequate |
9fdc4e8496c7 | 11461A6C46C6 | When you're about to get a brand new car, what do you do? You take it out for a test drive, and see how it runs, and if you like the design and the features it has. Am I right? | Evidence | Ineffective |
977f6e578f51 | 11461A6C46C6 | Well think, if your about to get a new president, and let me remind you they will be in charge of the way you live, don't you think you want to have a say in wether or not you like him or her? | Claim | Adequate |
254c185f528f | 11461A6C46C6 | It's just like testing out a new car. You bring your family and take a vote on who likes it. The more votes you have the better, because then you see how many like it and how many don't. | Evidence | Adequate |
07328257dcbb | 11461A6C46C6 | This Electoral college is not fair at all | Claim | Adequate |
fbc7ad4dbe25 | 11461A6C46C6 | It only allows 538 people to get to vote for president. What if the majority of those people wanted a certaint president, and the people that didnt get to vote wanted the other president. Thats not fair. Those people didn't even have a chance. If you weren't apart of the Electoral college how would you feel? Isn't the United States "The land of the free." Then every one should have a say in who their president is going to be. | Evidence | Adequate |
343970b75698 | 11461A6C46C6 | If you have every one in the United States vote then the dominant vote will be much more efficent. | Claim | Adequate |
5fdc92e66ae2 | 11461A6C46C6 | More people will be satisfied, and less complaints and assinations. Think about it. The popular vote is the way to go. When your doing a science experiment they say to take as many trials as you possibly can because the experimentation results will be much more accurate. Well why wouldn't you do that for something that is going to affect the
ENTIRE
United States of America. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4a5f36a413a5 | 11461A6C46C6 | I hope we make this change. There are so many benefits to the popular vote, why do you think its called the popular vote? The citizens will be satisfied, the process will be much more accurate, and the it will also be fair. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
271b059271c1 | 1160237A1858 | I believe you should go with policy 1 its a good idea here are the reasons why | Position | Adequate |
6a312d00125b | 1160237A1858 | 1 because everyone has them and loves to use them to text there friends its faster and easier than calling. | Claim | Adequate |
ffb603d59c6f | 1160237A1858 | Another reason is that not everyone is in the same class as there best friend so they cant talk to them that much, but if you use this policy they could use the free time you give them and they can use there phone and they can talk to them. | Evidence | Adequate |
b576c00ab8ec | 1160237A1858 | Another good reason is that if you use policy 2 people will just use there phone in class when the teacher isn't looking, and they could cheat or they will just get distracted not listen to you and not get the stuff the teachers are teaching and get bad grades, | Claim | Adequate |
47cf0e5442c3 | 1160237A1858 | but if you use policy one they wont use there phone in class because they have a free time later to use it in school and they will have it off in there pockets. | Evidence | Adequate |
f743086a7684 | 1160237A1858 | I just hope you listen to me TEACHER_NAME
it will make all the students happy. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
76428cba02fd | 116ED6BCEA4E | I think student should be able to help do community service | Position | Ineffective |
a187830c9a20 | 116ED6BCEA4E | we should keep out community clean | Claim | Adequate |
1e03692ddade | 116ED6BCEA4E | help out people that is in need | Claim | Adequate |
9ef64c6cabbf | 116ED6BCEA4E | Its an good idea to help out our community cause without our help our community would look trashy and dirty, for example the side walk is always fell with trash, help keep it clean by bringing people along and clean it up am sure that will make them have something to do. People will think that we don't take care of our community like we should if we don't. | Evidence | Adequate |
5198549a670e | 116ED6BCEA4E | and we need to help them out by for instant donating food for the food pantry, donating old clothes that you don't need, and more. We need to keep our community looking good and experience. | Evidence | Adequate |
932ccb004a2f | 116ED6BCEA4E | Helping our community will make you feel good about your self and helping somebody out will make you feel like you have achieve something in life. | Claim | Adequate |
cf09c7596d11 | 116ED6BCEA4E | From my experience helping your community will make you a better person in life and you could feel that you have done something important for your community. | Evidence | Adequate |
3af2319e246c | 116ED6BCEA4E | Finally students should be able to help our community out cause it will help them in school by bring their grades up or by getting an award from your principal. | Claim | Adequate |
3c873bb50a16 | 116ED6BCEA4E | So don't waste time playing and goofing around when somebody is in need, go a head an help them out am sure they will feel thankful that you have done something. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0b1b1de133f0 | 116FB053BEC7 | I believe they should change the voting to popular votes. | Position | Adequate |
a8edcfabda54 | 116FB053BEC7 | n my perspective voters are the most important in the elections. | Claim | Adequate |
fe9116478562 | 116FB053BEC7 | There opinion on the president should be able to count either way. Lots of voters feel left out like there opinion dont count. Sometimes the president elected by the electoral college is not the one every one wanted; he has diffrent points of view in what he want to do. | Evidence | Adequate |
cc07dbf7e71c | 116FB053BEC7 |
The president that the electoral college has elected is not always the one everyone expects to be. | Claim | Adequate |
fdda5791ada7 | 116FB053BEC7 | Lots of presidents have won by electoral college not by the voters. These presidents that are elected by the electoral college can possibly be the presidents to bring the United States to the ground. | Evidence | Adequate |
088cfcaa6e14 | 116FB053BEC7 | The voters feel they know what is best for our country. They always elect the person that will bring America to the top. | Claim | Adequate |
cb26aa549a12 | 116FB053BEC7 | For example Barack Obama he is helping immagrants go back to school be able to get a job and be something in life, like maybe a mechanic,doctor, or even a federal officer. They chances that he has gave us lets people know that these are the type of presidents we need.
| Evidence | Adequate |
e899ded6444f | 116FB053BEC7 | People feel left out because if the electoral college ar the people that are going to select the president what is the point in voting. | Claim | Adequate |
55bc81ef8a98 | 116FB053BEC7 | Lots of them feel that electoral college is more important than what we the people think. The electoral college doesn't let people feel that the person hat they have selected is the president that will help out the United States Of Americam to become number one. | Evidence | Adequate |
9a6b450308e2 | 116FB053BEC7 | On the other hand people believe that the electoral college is good and we should keep having it. They believe this because because they think that they know what is best for us. Also that their vote is the best option than ours. | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
882ff24d767f | 116FB053BEC7 | I believe that the president should be able to win by popular vote because we the people shall select the best president. The president that will once again put the U.S back on top. The president that wins should win by popular vote not by the electoral college. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2ad17420e964 | 11A4E36A48AF | the presidental election is to find a new leader of the united states he basicly has to pass laws and do taxes we vote to make sure we get the right president we dont want someone thats gonna make silly laws and taxes the people to much the president has to take charge has to go to world meetings has to be a role model for the younger people in the world the president has to do alot of work now the vice president has to do what the president cant do sometimes other times hes just there to help the president when he needs him like when the presidents gone on vaction the vice president does his work for him but sometimes the vice president messes up with paperwork so thats why we need to chose the best president not someone random that makes silly laws and to mess up on paperwork and to raise the taxes on the people the president also helps with things going on around the world he also a role model not only to college kids but to highschool kids to so thats why we vote not to pick someone to be specail for the job but to be specail rolemodel for the younger kids he also needs to speak for the people and for his country not for taxeing people or makeing laws its about the people always has been always will be about the people its up to older people and college kids to chose the perfect president if we chose the wrong president are country chould fail and laws chould be broken and taxes whould be high and fights whould happen just one president chould ruin it all for everyone the majority of the college students vote but some dont cause they dont care or either dont beleave in voteing for a guy to run our country some older people dont care for it either but they vote anyway the vice president cant do some of the jobs that our president can do like things to do with the army or with other world leaders it takes alot of skills to deal with alot of screaming people at you like big world leaders yelling at you all day cause you did something wrong or they did something wrong to eachother but the president does a good job cause we voted for a guy that can handle this job that he can handle them yelling at him he can take the pressaure of being a role model a president a father a teacher cause hes basicly teaching the college kids dont give up on your goals they can happen maybe one day a college student wants to be president and the president is their rolemodel basicly he has to teach the world that dont give up when the going gets tough cause if you do then you wont get anywhere in life but if you work hard you can do anything thats why we vote for the president not for a leader whos bossy and throws laws in our faces but a president whos a rolemodel a teacher a father a leader only one state casts one vote the single representavite from wyoming represents 500,000 voters so image that many voters voteing for one guy to run for our country thats alot of voters but we need that many votes cause we dont know if we pick the right president or the wrong one until he gets into office and starts makeing taxes and laws then we can tell if hes a good president or a bad one we spend a week after just watching what the new president does under pressure he has to go under some tests for a couple of weeks befor we know if hes bad or not the president has to get use to guards being around him every where he goes cause they have to protect him from danger like bombs and other stuff the president is targeted alot because hes the rolemodel for the usa so are enemies want to hurt him so thats why hes guarded 24/7 | Evidence | Ineffective |
c748d7899646 | 11A4E36A48AF | every day and every night and even when the presidents done being the president they still have guys protecting them from danger. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
e0fa54bf6eb1 | 11B1A5FB25A8 | I would say lets get rid of the electoral college | Position | Adequate |
bfd55d820915 | 11B1A5FB25A8 | because the voters vote for slate of electors. They really are not letting the people speak their mind about who should really be president. | Claim | Adequate |
f506bf915c40 | 11B1A5FB25A8 | Like it said in the story and I quote"
sometimes the slate of electors might vote for the other side
| Evidence | Adequate |
9d2a025129ee | 11B1A5FB25A8 | ". Also it says in the passage that the electoral college vote "is unfair, outdated, and irrational". The eletoral college vote is just a waste of time to be honest. | Evidence | Adequate |
f2c21b2d016b | 11B1A5FB25A8 | Another reason why I think we should get rid of the electoral college vote is because it really doesn't make any sense to have it. | Claim | Ineffective |
4af2298d38da | 11B1A5FB25A8 | The popularity vote should be the one that counts the reason is because it gives the voters the chance to vote for the president instead of having that eletoral college vote where they can't just easily just vote for the new president. The other thing is that in the electoral college votes it goes by slate of electors well some states have more electors than others like californa and texas all states should have an equal amount of voters instead of just giving the big states the all of the power. | Evidence | Adequate |
b37df0fe673e | 11B1A5FB25A8 | The last reason why I think we should get rid of the electoral college vote is because of the disaster factor. | Claim | Adequate |
165110ec3742 | 11B1A5FB25A8 | In the year of 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis. In 1960 segregationists in louisiana the lesgislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democrtic electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. the other thing is what if their is a tie between the two. The whole election would be thrown to the house of representitves. | Evidence | Adequate |
c9b47d7bdfdd | 11B1A5FB25A8 | These are all the reasons why I think we should get rid of the electoral college votes because it is more easy doing the popularity vote because it gives the people to speak on who they want to be president. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2effce473580 | 11D0BB882C79 | The electoral college is a process not a place | Lead | Adequate |
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