tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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67661ead8561	815D2A09CF1B	What if you're taking a rode trip and you want to get some rest, you can't because your handle has to be positioned on the wheel at all times. Also if you have a important meating and you are trying to finish up your presentation,you can't. Eventhough it might do some incredible things but it aslo can mouth-function and leave you stranded.	Evidence	Adequate
83f393c96b74	815D2A09CF1B	Equally important, what about the laws for the car.	Claim	Adequate
28a2d17a6867	815D2A09CF1B	Most importantly i want to know who gets the ticket and pays for it if the car gets pulled over if going to fast is it you or the manufacturing company. Then it could overide and take far away from where you need to be because the smart car is really like a colassal mobile computer. If it over heats and blows who get blamed for someones death.	Evidence	Adequate
1e39b466cf97	815D2A09CF1B	Overall, I disaggre and also disapprove this vehicle. As a driver and owner of a smart car i would rather have it Barren like the ones we drive daily thats less worries. Also cheaper to get fixed and worked on then getting my car reprogramed and a whole new pc system in it.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
dea2a43a19c8	81745F5FFCB9	The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors , the metting of the electors where they vote for presidents and vice president,and counting of the electoral votes by congress.	Lead	Adequate
a465669ab9ca	81745F5FFCB9	You should always keep electoral votes. Would you know for sure who would win ?. .Electoral college is the best way to manage who would be the best. To see who would win out of the two people	Position	Adequate
7f0933b14a7e	81745F5FFCB9	Why wouldnt we use electoral colllege it helps us know that when two people thats running for a spot and they get the same percentage for popular vote you can use electorial vote to see which one each state , country, or city like.	Claim	Adequate
a8711805a2e0	81745F5FFCB9	The electorial college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes by the cast.	Claim	Adequate
6b5a70001517	81745F5FFCB9	for example when president obama and romney went against each other for president both of them had 51.3 percent so the electoral vote that change it all president obama got 61.3 percent electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the pouplar vote. This is the best way for people to know who really winning and won. I think its best for us to use the electoral vote. Its granteed to help with the prsident and the people to know who is really winning.	Evidence	Adequate
0616fae71f9d	81745F5FFCB9	The electorial college help you pick your candidate as well.	Claim	Adequate
3516922253f8	81745F5FFCB9	This is for the president to know who would be working for him or her. The best thing for you to do is keep electorial vote it helps with eveything that you need help with. It also help the president out to .You wouldnt want to go without a president do you.	Evidence	Ineffective
1667ac54f85f	81745F5FFCB9	The electorial college is a helpful thing it is really needed.	Claim	Adequate
a775afc616b3	81745F5FFCB9	I wouldnt take electoral college out. When you cant see who really is winning what you going to do then without it. Are you going to choose for yourself. But then the people is going to be mad and thats not fair. Maybe some people dont like the opne presidemt and the other people do.	Evidence	Ineffective
0351da370676	81745F5FFCB9	The eletoral college will tell one of the two people running for president if they would win. And it would help to see who the candidate is. Voters in presidential elections are people whi want to express a political perference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. so therefore you need the electorial vote to decide whether the person really win or not.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7f05011ec94a	81B0FFE6659F	The future is near and the talk about driverless cars is upon us	Lead	Ineffective
a157dd627dc2	81B0FFE6659F	Driverless cars give us the oppertunity to save thousands of dollars in buying cars and paying for repairs.	Claim	Adequate
21e9be3405fa	81B0FFE6659F	This also would be a lot more flexable than a bus because, the driverless cars could take us to our exact destination	Claim	Adequate
13bf7b81253e	81B0FFE6659F	Plus the driverless car idea would use half of the amount of fuel we use today.	Claim	Adequate
6e1c6986d576	81B0FFE6659F	Multiple teens who already stress because of school have to also handle a job on top of that just to buy a car. Some even have to give up activities they love because of their jobs. Adults spend thousands of dollars just to buy cars and then have the risk of having to spend even more money when they break down to repair them. Cars are expensive items and the money we spend on them could go to other things like vacations, bills, and food.	Evidence	Adequate
c02646c0aa98	81B0FFE6659F	Buses today have a certain route they follow on a daily basis. They are only capable of taking you to the closest bus stop to your desired location, this could still be a mile walk away from your destination.	Evidence	Adequate
34c29f6f8838	81B0FFE6659F	With driverless cars it would serve to you more as a taxi that takes you where you want to go. This saves us a lot of time	Claim	Adequate
3cf2093285c8	81B0FFE6659F	The polution fuel causes would decrease by 50%	Claim	Adequate
8ddc7b225e6f	81B0FFE6659F	The driverless cars are projected to use only half the amount of fuel cars and buses are usuing today. This makes earth a lot healthier and safer to live on for you and your family.	Evidence	Adequate
f9badfbba22e	81B0FFE6659F	Driverless cars are a great change for the would.	Position	Adequate
5b8d1df1adca	81B0FFE6659F	Makes your life a lot cheaper, safer, and saves you a lot of time. The talk of the future is here and the driverless cars are near.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
deabbcb7c123	81B6F6345F55	I feel like driverless cars are an okay idea	Position	Adequate
fbdcb356b307	81B6F6345F55	in the artical it says that Google has had these types of cars since 2009 and they have been driven half a million miles without a crash,	Claim	Adequate
b0799d33a41d	81B6F6345F55	even though they are not actually 100 percent driverless	Counterclaim	Adequate
72619e96ffda	81B6F6345F55	A lot of manufacturers believe that it was not so much the car that needed to be "smarter" but the roads.	Evidence	Ineffective
eadca48e2b51	81B6F6345F55	The cars would have to use a whole lot of sensors to be able to be self driving	Claim	Adequate
ba1550aaa19e	81B6F6345F55	it would cost alot of money to get new roads and everything that is needed for the cars. In cars today we have alot of sensors because they help with an abundance of things such as antilock brakes, automatic windows and many more. in the artical it says that BMW in 2013 announced the development of "Traffic Jam Assistant". That means that the car could handle driving and functioning at speeds up to 25 miles per hour, as long as the driver had their hands on the wheel. Although the cars can steer, accelerate and break on their own the drivers are still notified when the road ahead requires human assistance.	Evidence	Ineffective
03fbe6af4d72	81B6F6345F55	Many people can argue and say "wont drivers get bored of waiting for their turn to drive?"	Counterclaim	Adequate
3b384c122fc8	81B6F6345F55	Although that is a concern the cars arent going to always be self driving, that can be changed with the push of a button or the flip of a switch. the driver can choose when he or she wants to drive and when they want the car to drive its self.	Rebuttal	Adequate
aa1de2e6c078	81B6F6345F55	In many states it has been lawed that the use or attempt to make such cars is illegal	Counterclaim	Adequate
6c25d3338af3	81B6F6345F55	but many manufacturers believe that whith in the next few years those laws will be changed, but if those are changed then new laws are going to have to be put in place. Those laws can help a company because the laws would either state that it was the drivers fault if they got hurt in the self driving car or if it was the manufacturers fault for making said car.	Rebuttal	Adequate
14b1ed7ce7f3	81B6F6345F55	Either way i believe that the making and use of driverless cars is a pretty good idea because now and days we live in a world where we have to be caught up with the latest and greatest things or we fall behind. The world of technology is evolving and so is human kind, so i believe that driverless cars will be a good addition to this ever changing world of technology.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
1e80731773f9	81E51029477E	. It clearly states in paragraph 1 why we need to keep the Electoral College there are so many reason why but only one can bring it to staying in the system."Electoale College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a comprise between election of the President by vote in Congress and elction of the President by a polular vite of quarified citizens".	Lead	Adequate
ed62b9450d18	81E51029477E	What i am clearly trying to state is the the Elecotoral College needs to stay in the system.	Position	Adequate
7123dac3ac99	81E51029477E	Many people will say different but only in my opinion we need ot keep the Elcectral College, it is part of the Constitution of the United Sates of America if it clearly staes stuff about the Electoal College in the Consistitution then that means you need to keep it in the sistem	Claim	Adequate
d0e2d83fa06c	81E51029477E	to help with all the dier need that the world has to offer for the Electoral College just dont get rid of it for no reason you need to have a really great suggestion to remove it out of the system.	Evidence	Ineffective
6ab0deef9815	81E51029477E	All i am trying to say is that in my opinion if you care at all, the we need to keep the Electoral College alive dont just kick it out the system if it sates its name in the Constitution then it need to stay where its at dont delte it from the program just becauss of some stupid process you need a darn good reason to remove it not just because you feel like it thats not good enough you need to show emotion about how the Electoral College is in the Constisution	Evidence	Ineffective
43528026ea06	81E51029477E	look at the facts and you will see why i want the it to stay moving and not to be kicked out.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
16fce9582273	81E6FDB0A4BB	What is the electoral college? The electoral college is a process which consists of the selection of the electors, meeting where they vote for president, and the counting of the votes. The real question is, is the electoral college helping us or is it just bringing our government farther towards disaster?	Lead	Effective
bfef29f470af	81E6FDB0A4BB	The electoral college should be diminished	Position	Effective
a67b769a6a20	81E6FDB0A4BB	it is an unfair direct election	Claim	Effective
277fd6d38fc6	81E6FDB0A4BB	the disaster factor.	Claim	Effective
1dbd3fc231a4	81E6FDB0A4BB	To begin, by keeping the electoral college we could avoid run off elections. This would help our governmental system	Counterclaim	Effective
d96e9553b533	81E6FDB0A4BB	because as noted by Richard A. Posner, "There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast." By keeping the electoral college, we could help resolve run-off elections.	Evidence	Effective
8d6234335ff2	81E6FDB0A4BB	What we dont know is if it will permanantly work for our governmental system and is it worth the risk	Rebuttal	Effective
63471f9100db	81E6FDB0A4BB	The electors are the ones voting for the president, so we should question whether they should have control to help avoid these run-off elections. The writer notes, "... the pressure would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by electoral college..." (Posner)	Evidence	Adequate
99ef69ab228c	81E6FDB0A4BB	Although that is true, that is only one problem that would be resolved by the electoral college, and olne benefit is outnumbered by the numerous disadvantages to the electoral college.	Rebuttal	Effective
a189082c5d30	81E6FDB0A4BB	Moreover, the disaster facor has a huge impact on the electoral collage.	Claim	Effective
f0051dd72044	81E6FDB0A4BB	The writer states, "The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse" (Plumer). This disaster was not the first disaster to happen in the system. According to Plumer, the system has had much more effect and damage on the United States and this should not be repeated again. The writer also says, "electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please" (Plumer). This goes to show, not only is the electoral college unbeneficial, but they can be sneaky. The electoral college should be abolished because of the atrocious outcomes it is capable of doing to our government.	Evidence	Effective
a6535e1ed9a6	81E6FDB0A4BB	Not only is the electoral college capable of the disaster factor, but it also has no direct election.	Claim	Effective
01bb4519ca45	81E6FDB0A4BB	As stated in "What Is the Electoral College?", "... when you vote for your candidate you are acually voting for your candidate's electors." (Office of the Federal Register). This means, voters have no control over whom controls the country. That is outrageous that the lives of these people will be affected by someone they did not want in the overpowering decisions of their country. Writer Plumer states, "At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair too voters" as well as "The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational" (Plumer). Both of these point go to show that the electoral college is lowering our hopes for the government. The writer also notes, "candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states" (Plumer). This proves that the electoral government thinks about their winning chances instead of our countries government. Are we going to sit here and let them take advantage of their power that will lead us towards disaster?	Evidence	Effective
b0cb5af9fa49	81E6FDB0A4BB	All in all, the electoral collage should be banished from the government. Who wants our government to get weaker and more unfair to the citizens? By taking away the electoral college our government would gain back its strength and become the hard- working government we know it can be!	Concluding Statement	Effective
18065481a354	81F1DBD56E0D	Its a landfrom i tell you	Position	Adequate
333cb55ff878	81F1DBD56E0D	But still people don't think it is a landfrom. Its a landfrom there is proof that it is. This eassy is going to explain that it is a landfrom	Claim	Adequate
78129bc33ce8	81F1DBD56E0D	So what it looks like a face many things have that don't mean there is aliens.	Claim	Ineffective
be0730c26d2c	81F1DBD56E0D	Yes, it would be cool if there were aliens but there not as far as we know there not. How many things have we thing was a face but was some thing else? For exampal there was a toy in my brother room that look like a human face in the dark but it was a pokemon. So why can't these be some thing that looks like a face.	Evidence	Ineffective
cbfdf91c2091	81F1DBD56E0D	They took a lot of photos of it. But that don't mean its a face. NASA figered it out that it was a landfrom the have a very good camira	Claim	Adequate
e35026693c34	81F1DBD56E0D	on paragrafh seven it says,"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landfrom. There was no alien monument afther all."	Evidence	Adequate
b3680868e63f	81F1DBD56E0D	See there is your proof.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
5b55f6a4faf0	8248E7E6E2A0	I think that the new rules are kind of bad	Position	Adequate
95a3bc486852	8248E7E6E2A0	everyone should get there workout no matter what !	Claim	Adequate
1c202d1ad2fc	8248E7E6E2A0	so kids can stay healthy.	Evidence	Adequate
df12cea0c01f	8248E7E6E2A0	that's a students free time	Claim	Adequate
336fd5d66267	8248E7E6E2A0	we get to run around and just be free instead of sitting in the classroom all day long.	Evidence	Adequate
39c32f6c9b77	8248E7E6E2A0	Instead of them rules I think they should make a better rule. So we don't have to dress for gym or something at least like that	Evidence	Ineffective
24d8b234d861	8248E7E6E2A0	getting a B average can be hard to do sometimes	Claim	Adequate
f535310427aa	8248E7E6E2A0	if you don't like that pacific class or if your not good at that subject.	Evidence	Adequate
f9874a0accf2	8248E7E6E2A0	I think if this does happen students would really be upset because almost everyone likes gym because we do a lot of fun stuff in there and everyone should get a workout so yeah.. I think having gym at school is the most important because that's the only free time we ever get while we are in school. If we was to end up having gym rules where we couldn't participate only if we had a B average nobody would even want to go to gym because most people don't get A's and B's so the average of people not participating would be horrible!.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
b9a774bd7102	828FD0B64062	I would like to explame the importants of Electoral College. This'll explain what it is,its defenses to the attacks on getting rid of it,and finally why it was created in the first place.	Lead	Ineffective
9ef57d51dfe4	828FD0B64062	The Electoral College was a process created by the four fathers in the Constitution to established the election of the "President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."- Source 1: What Is the Electrol College,paragraph 1. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. Majority electorcal votes for President is 270. "Congressional delegtion: On for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators."- Paragrah 2,What Is the Electoral College. Yes this involves in the 23rd Amendment of the Contitution that Washington D.C or District or Columbia is allocated 3 electors and is treated like a state in the Electoral College. The electors for a candidate running for President has a group of electors generally by his/her's political party.	Evidence	Ineffective
e64266dd610e	828FD0B64062	Many believe there is something wrong with the Eledtoral College.	Claim	Ineffective
c452908d9c4b	828FD0B64062	Even some like "Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, And the AFL-CIO"- Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong. They all have in common is that they want to abolish the Electoral College. However the party will get to "select a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee."- Source 3 paragraph 2.	Evidence	Ineffective
0fc2db8d818e	828FD0B64062	However rarely do you actually see it's possible for the winner to get eletoral vote but not popular vote.	Claim	Adequate
8a3f9a060f33	828FD0B64062	in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes then Bush. But the agurement falls apart since it happens rarely. It was the frist time since 1888 that's about 112 years that this has happened. It's even highly unlikely it will end in a tie-as 538 is an even number it is divied to the states.	Evidence	Adequate
c1a222d24766	828FD0B64062	It was started by the founding fathers in order to have a informed government. It is rumored that they believed that the common person the person who votes for popularity is to uninformed to choose who will be President. So in the Constitution they put it as a "pompromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress by popular vote of qulified citizens.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
6f2483d854c1	82B3CF7114C7	Most people who reach the age of 16 are elated to be able to learn how to drive. When they reach that point in their lives, they feel independent, responsible. They would not like to have that priviledge taken away from them. In fact, though most teens start to question authority more around the age of 16, they would do anything to stay out of trouble and would never risk the chance of having their driving priviledge revoked. Driverless cars would eliminate the entire experience of learning how to drive and all the pleasure one feels from it.	Lead	Effective
edfdb56ca244	82B3CF7114C7	Driverless cars are an brilliant idea and would reduce the number of casualties and deaths that are caused by car accidents every year. They would also, however, bring up new problems that would need to be solved.	Position	Effective
da4576aef88b	82B3CF7114C7	Not everyone would be able to afford a driverless car,	Claim	Effective
8934351a50b2	82B3CF7114C7	they would no doubt be extremely expensive, therefor not everyone would have one.	Evidence	Adequate
efc92541527f	82B3CF7114C7	If there were to be a mix of car types on the road, there would be the issue of accidents caused by cars with drivers.	Claim	Effective
ed359ca95ecc	82B3CF7114C7	Would the person with the driverless car be considered faultless everytime just because it is assumed that the driverless car has everything under control? Would the person driving their own car be to blame because they should be responsible enough to watch where they are going and navigate the roads safely?	Evidence	Adequate
8f8794ca1eb7	82B3CF7114C7	Another issue that would arise would be NASCAR.	Claim	Effective
67746694c60f	82B3CF7114C7	If driverless cars became the norm, what would be the point of racecars? Many people would lose their jobs because they had only worked in one position for a long period of time. The men and women in the pit stops would lose their jobs, as well as the drivers themselves. Companies that are funded by NASCAR would be in trouble as well because who would they have to help them out?	Evidence	Adequate
d46d0b7a2e8a	82B3CF7114C7	Driverless cars would eliminate some jobs, but also create some others.	Claim	Effective
7004eee822c3	82B3CF7114C7	Companies that make computer-driven cars would have a ton of business, therefor increasing the employment rates. That also increases the chance of theft by the companies' employees. With the new demand of different, more expensive parts, employees would more than likely be tempted to steal from one company to help another if it meant a larger paycheck. Which ever company was doing the best would have to be extremely careful and might even have to hirer extra security to protect themselves and their products.	Evidence	Adequate
ee969e3caa2b	82B3CF7114C7	Driverless cars would both solve and cause problems in the future, should they become the norm. If not everyone could afford the new, expensive cars, who would be blamed for the car accidents that are bound to happen? Sports that include car racing, such as NASCAR, would be eliminated and thousands of people would be left without jobs and, potentially, on the streets. Though the new cars would create new jobs as well, they would also cause new thefts by employees in companies to better the flow of there income. Driverless cars would cause more problems than they would be worth in the long run.	Concluding Statement	Effective
a488bc75fcca	82BBC3EC5C3A	You should require for all kids to help out on cleaning the school	Position	Adequate
888bd073364f	82BBC3EC5C3A	Our school would be cleaner and then everyone would be proud that they had some part into making the school a better place.	Claim	Adequate
6b8fd2c79388	82BBC3EC5C3A	Some Kid's might refuse to help out if so then there should be a consequence.	Claim	Adequate
bdb3a5b5b237	82BBC3EC5C3A	And so we don't have conflicts with a group of kids doing more work than other's and would feel used because they did most of the work while other people did part. There Should be a limit on how many pieces of trash or how much space you should clean up, how much time you should help a teacher out.	Evidence	Adequate
b8f4b3a55e99	82BBC3EC5C3A	This should not be during school, it would waste your learning time	Claim	Adequate
28212f0b847b	82BBC3EC5C3A	although after school would be good because you wont be disturbing anyone. If it's okay with the parents of the child then we should have community service for the school. Make this after school community service for us kids fun so we wont be bored and feel like if its not out responsibility to clean up and help out	Evidence	Adequate
0a7fcf86b3b9	82BBC3EC5C3A	For Example You Should Help out to and the deans, give us free dress day's as our reward i guarantee it will make a difference. We Should also re-paint parts of the school that have been tagged up or written on so it can look clean and not as bad as it is.	Evidence	Adequate
7fe88748b902	82BBC3EC5C3A	This Was My Perspective on what should you do with the community service for kids.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
dcde816cf1ad	82F7210163B5	When learning at school with other students who cause distractions it is always hard to focus would you be able to focus? Even though going to school makes you socialize with friends and they feed you it sometimes is hard for a student to show up to school or even learn.	Lead	Adequate
5a6fe3f87f8c	82F7210163B5	For me I would rather work on my assignments and others things my teacher would like me to do at home	Position	Adequate

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What if you're taking a rode trip and you want to get some rest, you can't because your handle has to be positioned on the wheel at all times. Also if you have a important meating and you are trying to finish up your presentation,you can't. Eventhough it might do some incredible things but it aslo can mouth-function and leave you stranded.

Evidence

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Equally important, what about the laws for the car.

Claim

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Most importantly i want to know who gets the ticket and pays for it if the car gets pulled over if going to fast is it you or the manufacturing company. Then it could overide and take far away from where you need to be because the smart car is really like a colassal mobile computer. If it over heats and blows who get blamed for someones death.

Evidence

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Overall, I disaggre and also disapprove this vehicle. As a driver and owner of a smart car i would rather have it Barren like the ones we drive daily thats less worries. Also cheaper to get fixed and worked on then getting my car reprogramed and a whole new pc system in it.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors , the metting of the electors where they vote for presidents and vice president,and counting of the electoral votes by congress.

Lead

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You should always keep electoral votes. Would you know for sure who would win ?. .Electoral college is the best way to manage who would be the best. To see who would win out of the two people

Position

Adequate

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Why wouldnt we use electoral colllege it helps us know that when two people thats running for a spot and they get the same percentage for popular vote you can use electorial vote to see which one each state , country, or city like.

Claim

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The electorial college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes by the cast.

Claim

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for example when president obama and romney went against each other for president both of them had 51.3 percent so the electoral vote that change it all president obama got 61.3 percent electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the pouplar vote. This is the best way for people to know who really winning and won. I think its best for us to use the electoral vote. Its granteed to help with the prsident and the people to know who is really winning.

Evidence

Adequate

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The electorial college help you pick your candidate as well.

Claim

Adequate

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This is for the president to know who would be working for him or her. The best thing for you to do is keep electorial vote it helps with eveything that you need help with. It also help the president out to .You wouldnt want to go without a president do you.

Evidence

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The electorial college is a helpful thing it is really needed.

Claim

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I wouldnt take electoral college out. When you cant see who really is winning what you going to do then without it. Are you going to choose for yourself. But then the people is going to be mad and thats not fair. Maybe some people dont like the opne presidemt and the other people do.

Evidence

Ineffective

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The eletoral college will tell one of the two people running for president if they would win. And it would help to see who the candidate is. Voters in presidential elections are people whi want to express a political perference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. so therefore you need the electorial vote to decide whether the person really win or not.

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The future is near and the talk about driverless cars is upon us

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Driverless cars give us the oppertunity to save thousands of dollars in buying cars and paying for repairs.

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This also would be a lot more flexable than a bus because, the driverless cars could take us to our exact destination

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Plus the driverless car idea would use half of the amount of fuel we use today.

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Multiple teens who already stress because of school have to also handle a job on top of that just to buy a car. Some even have to give up activities they love because of their jobs. Adults spend thousands of dollars just to buy cars and then have the risk of having to spend even more money when they break down to repair them. Cars are expensive items and the money we spend on them could go to other things like vacations, bills, and food.

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Buses today have a certain route they follow on a daily basis. They are only capable of taking you to the closest bus stop to your desired location, this could still be a mile walk away from your destination.

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With driverless cars it would serve to you more as a taxi that takes you where you want to go. This saves us a lot of time

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The polution fuel causes would decrease by 50%

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The driverless cars are projected to use only half the amount of fuel cars and buses are usuing today. This makes earth a lot healthier and safer to live on for you and your family.

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Driverless cars are a great change for the would.

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Makes your life a lot cheaper, safer, and saves you a lot of time. The talk of the future is here and the driverless cars are near.

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I feel like driverless cars are an okay idea

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in the artical it says that Google has had these types of cars since 2009 and they have been driven half a million miles without a crash,

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even though they are not actually 100 percent driverless

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A lot of manufacturers believe that it was not so much the car that needed to be "smarter" but the roads.

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The cars would have to use a whole lot of sensors to be able to be self driving

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it would cost alot of money to get new roads and everything that is needed for the cars. In cars today we have alot of sensors because they help with an abundance of things such as antilock brakes, automatic windows and many more. in the artical it says that BMW in 2013 announced the development of "Traffic Jam Assistant". That means that the car could handle driving and functioning at speeds up to 25 miles per hour, as long as the driver had their hands on the wheel. Although the cars can steer, accelerate and break on their own the drivers are still notified when the road ahead requires human assistance.

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Many people can argue and say "wont drivers get bored of waiting for their turn to drive?"

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Although that is a concern the cars arent going to always be self driving, that can be changed with the push of a button or the flip of a switch. the driver can choose when he or she wants to drive and when they want the car to drive its self.

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In many states it has been lawed that the use or attempt to make such cars is illegal

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but many manufacturers believe that whith in the next few years those laws will be changed, but if those are changed then new laws are going to have to be put in place. Those laws can help a company because the laws would either state that it was the drivers fault if they got hurt in the self driving car or if it was the manufacturers fault for making said car.

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Either way i believe that the making and use of driverless cars is a pretty good idea because now and days we live in a world where we have to be caught up with the latest and greatest things or we fall behind. The world of technology is evolving and so is human kind, so i believe that driverless cars will be a good addition to this ever changing world of technology.

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. It clearly states in paragraph 1 why we need to keep the Electoral College there are so many reason why but only one can bring it to staying in the system."Electoale College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a comprise between election of the President by vote in Congress and elction of the President by a polular vite of quarified citizens".

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What i am clearly trying to state is the the Elecotoral College needs to stay in the system.

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Many people will say different but only in my opinion we need ot keep the Elcectral College, it is part of the Constitution of the United Sates of America if it clearly staes stuff about the Electoal College in the Consistitution then that means you need to keep it in the sistem

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to help with all the dier need that the world has to offer for the Electoral College just dont get rid of it for no reason you need to have a really great suggestion to remove it out of the system.

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All i am trying to say is that in my opinion if you care at all, the we need to keep the Electoral College alive dont just kick it out the system if it sates its name in the Constitution then it need to stay where its at dont delte it from the program just becauss of some stupid process you need a darn good reason to remove it not just because you feel like it thats not good enough you need to show emotion about how the Electoral College is in the Constisution

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look at the facts and you will see why i want the it to stay moving and not to be kicked out.

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What is the electoral college? The electoral college is a process which consists of the selection of the electors, meeting where they vote for president, and the counting of the votes. The real question is, is the electoral college helping us or is it just bringing our government farther towards disaster?

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The electoral college should be diminished

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it is an unfair direct election

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the disaster factor.

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To begin, by keeping the electoral college we could avoid run off elections. This would help our governmental system

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because as noted by Richard A. Posner, "There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast." By keeping the electoral college, we could help resolve run-off elections.

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What we dont know is if it will permanantly work for our governmental system and is it worth the risk

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The electors are the ones voting for the president, so we should question whether they should have control to help avoid these run-off elections. The writer notes, "... the pressure would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by electoral college..." (Posner)

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Although that is true, that is only one problem that would be resolved by the electoral college, and olne benefit is outnumbered by the numerous disadvantages to the electoral college.

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Moreover, the disaster facor has a huge impact on the electoral collage.

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The writer states, "The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse" (Plumer). This disaster was not the first disaster to happen in the system. According to Plumer, the system has had much more effect and damage on the United States and this should not be repeated again. The writer also says, "electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please" (Plumer). This goes to show, not only is the electoral college unbeneficial, but they can be sneaky. The electoral college should be abolished because of the atrocious outcomes it is capable of doing to our government.

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Not only is the electoral college capable of the disaster factor, but it also has no direct election.

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As stated in "What Is the Electoral College?", "... when you vote for your candidate you are acually voting for your candidate's electors." (Office of the Federal Register). This means, voters have no control over whom controls the country. That is outrageous that the lives of these people will be affected by someone they did not want in the overpowering decisions of their country. Writer Plumer states, "At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair too voters" as well as "The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational" (Plumer). Both of these point go to show that the electoral college is lowering our hopes for the government. The writer also notes, "candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states" (Plumer). This proves that the electoral government thinks about their winning chances instead of our countries government. Are we going to sit here and let them take advantage of their power that will lead us towards disaster?

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All in all, the electoral collage should be banished from the government. Who wants our government to get weaker and more unfair to the citizens? By taking away the electoral college our government would gain back its strength and become the hard- working government we know it can be!

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Its a landfrom i tell you

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But still people don't think it is a landfrom. Its a landfrom there is proof that it is. This eassy is going to explain that it is a landfrom

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So what it looks like a face many things have that don't mean there is aliens.

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Yes, it would be cool if there were aliens but there not as far as we know there not. How many things have we thing was a face but was some thing else? For exampal there was a toy in my brother room that look like a human face in the dark but it was a pokemon. So why can't these be some thing that looks like a face.

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They took a lot of photos of it. But that don't mean its a face. NASA figered it out that it was a landfrom the have a very good camira

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on paragrafh seven it says,"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landfrom. There was no alien monument afther all."

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See there is your proof.

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I think that the new rules are kind of bad

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everyone should get there workout no matter what !

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so kids can stay healthy.

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that's a students free time

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we get to run around and just be free instead of sitting in the classroom all day long.

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Instead of them rules I think they should make a better rule. So we don't have to dress for gym or something at least like that

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getting a B average can be hard to do sometimes

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if you don't like that pacific class or if your not good at that subject.

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I think if this does happen students would really be upset because almost everyone likes gym because we do a lot of fun stuff in there and everyone should get a workout so yeah.. I think having gym at school is the most important because that's the only free time we ever get while we are in school. If we was to end up having gym rules where we couldn't participate only if we had a B average nobody would even want to go to gym because most people don't get A's and B's so the average of people not participating would be horrible!.

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I would like to explame the importants of Electoral College. This'll explain what it is,its defenses to the attacks on getting rid of it,and finally why it was created in the first place.

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The Electoral College was a process created by the four fathers in the Constitution to established the election of the "President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens."- Source 1: What Is the Electrol College,paragraph 1. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. Majority electorcal votes for President is 270. "Congressional delegtion: On for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators."- Paragrah 2,What Is the Electoral College. Yes this involves in the 23rd Amendment of the Contitution that Washington D.C or District or Columbia is allocated 3 electors and is treated like a state in the Electoral College. The electors for a candidate running for President has a group of electors generally by his/her's political party.

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Many believe there is something wrong with the Eledtoral College.

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Even some like "Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, And the AFL-CIO"- Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong. They all have in common is that they want to abolish the Electoral College. However the party will get to "select a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee."- Source 3 paragraph 2.

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However rarely do you actually see it's possible for the winner to get eletoral vote but not popular vote.

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in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes then Bush. But the agurement falls apart since it happens rarely. It was the frist time since 1888 that's about 112 years that this has happened. It's even highly unlikely it will end in a tie-as 538 is an even number it is divied to the states.

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It was started by the founding fathers in order to have a informed government. It is rumored that they believed that the common person the person who votes for popularity is to uninformed to choose who will be President. So in the Constitution they put it as a "pompromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress by popular vote of qulified citizens.

Concluding Statement

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Most people who reach the age of 16 are elated to be able to learn how to drive. When they reach that point in their lives, they feel independent, responsible. They would not like to have that priviledge taken away from them. In fact, though most teens start to question authority more around the age of 16, they would do anything to stay out of trouble and would never risk the chance of having their driving priviledge revoked. Driverless cars would eliminate the entire experience of learning how to drive and all the pleasure one feels from it.

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Driverless cars are an brilliant idea and would reduce the number of casualties and deaths that are caused by car accidents every year. They would also, however, bring up new problems that would need to be solved.

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Not everyone would be able to afford a driverless car,

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they would no doubt be extremely expensive, therefor not everyone would have one.

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If there were to be a mix of car types on the road, there would be the issue of accidents caused by cars with drivers.

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Would the person with the driverless car be considered faultless everytime just because it is assumed that the driverless car has everything under control? Would the person driving their own car be to blame because they should be responsible enough to watch where they are going and navigate the roads safely?

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Another issue that would arise would be NASCAR.

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If driverless cars became the norm, what would be the point of racecars? Many people would lose their jobs because they had only worked in one position for a long period of time. The men and women in the pit stops would lose their jobs, as well as the drivers themselves. Companies that are funded by NASCAR would be in trouble as well because who would they have to help them out?

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Driverless cars would eliminate some jobs, but also create some others.

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Companies that make computer-driven cars would have a ton of business, therefor increasing the employment rates. That also increases the chance of theft by the companies' employees. With the new demand of different, more expensive parts, employees would more than likely be tempted to steal from one company to help another if it meant a larger paycheck. Which ever company was doing the best would have to be extremely careful and might even have to hirer extra security to protect themselves and their products.

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Driverless cars would both solve and cause problems in the future, should they become the norm. If not everyone could afford the new, expensive cars, who would be blamed for the car accidents that are bound to happen? Sports that include car racing, such as NASCAR, would be eliminated and thousands of people would be left without jobs and, potentially, on the streets. Though the new cars would create new jobs as well, they would also cause new thefts by employees in companies to better the flow of there income. Driverless cars would cause more problems than they would be worth in the long run.

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You should require for all kids to help out on cleaning the school

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Our school would be cleaner and then everyone would be proud that they had some part into making the school a better place.

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Some Kid's might refuse to help out if so then there should be a consequence.

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And so we don't have conflicts with a group of kids doing more work than other's and would feel used because they did most of the work while other people did part. There Should be a limit on how many pieces of trash or how much space you should clean up, how much time you should help a teacher out.

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This should not be during school, it would waste your learning time

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although after school would be good because you wont be disturbing anyone. If it's okay with the parents of the child then we should have community service for the school. Make this after school community service for us kids fun so we wont be bored and feel like if its not out responsibility to clean up and help out

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For Example You Should Help out to and the deans, give us free dress day's as our reward i guarantee it will make a difference. We Should also re-paint parts of the school that have been tagged up or written on so it can look clean and not as bad as it is.

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This Was My Perspective on what should you do with the community service for kids.

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When learning at school with other students who cause distractions it is always hard to focus would you be able to focus? Even though going to school makes you socialize with friends and they feed you it sometimes is hard for a student to show up to school or even learn.

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For me I would rather work on my assignments and others things my teacher would like me to do at home

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