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2a3b157edcc4 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Though some places dont support online classes, there always other places to try out at that may offer similar classes to those you want to attend online, and they might have better benefits than those at a different school. | Evidence | Ineffective |
283bd32c70cf | 8D0E03A58CC9 | To begin this all off, money is a crucial thing in life no matter who you are. The people that are most affected by money problems are students, and this is due to class and material costs. Online classes are about 35-50 percent cheaper in some places. | Evidence | Adequate |
68bb9f17eaaf | 8D0E03A58CC9 | If you ever plan on attending a online class, always check the price compared to going to the campus or school in person. This can help you think about which classes to take and at which place. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a248db88e6af | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Online classes can also cut down on the cost of materials needed for the class you wanna take online. Though they may seem not worth it, a online class can cut the cost of a class by a lot, and this in turn helps the student pay for required materials he may need for the class to attend it. | Evidence | Adequate |
2d865336456b | 8D0E03A58CC9 | This is great for those who have to bend their schedule a some to fit in some class time during the week. Not only that, but online classes have even been shown to allow students to get jobs and make some money while they are attending these classes for things they need to advance in life. Online classes can even be scheduled nowadays, but that feature is only at some schools. This flexibility may come in handy for when you need to get a check up, or even if you have a serious medical issue and need to find out what it is. | Evidence | Effective |
9d7fd8f78a18 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | As a note though, always check to see if the class is very flexible, and this is due to being able to have time to make up for what you miss. | Evidence | Ineffective |
64d6bb73fb1e | 8D0E03A58CC9 | And as I have seen, many complain that classes are not flexible by much if not at all. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
39a6b85dbd8d | 8D0E03A58CC9 | This is due to the fact of who teaches the class, what class it is, and the school itself. Always make sure you double check the teacher, the class, and the school itself to see if it is flexible enough for you to attend it without feeling too confined or inflexible. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
aa76d5986a54 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Scientific research shows that this feeling can lower a students work effort by almost 100 percent. That is why you must always ask if a class flexible enough for you to take without feeling confined. | Evidence | Adequate |
b981ce9bd726 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Shyness is something students have a lot of. In fact, almost 60 percent of students have some shyness in them if not at all. This shyness can affect if not ruin the class, making new friends, and even doing classwork with other students when needed. Online classes can solve this as they can give a sense of friendliness towards strangers. | Evidence | Effective |
7117908c9335 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Though many complain that they are not shy and need to talk with someone in person, | Counterclaim | Effective |
4213d516819e | 8D0E03A58CC9 | online classes can help those who tend to be more shy than others are. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
a511495e18ef | 8D0E03A58CC9 | This allows even moderately shy students the ability to focus on their class, or classes, and not worry about having to be shy towards teachers and fellow students. | Evidence | Effective |
4716660039c6 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Multitasking is a crucial thing in life for you will need to do it most of your life anyway. From running errands to visiting your doctor on the same day, online classes are able to allow time for multitasking. In 2009, they found out those who did online classes multitask better than those who were always on campus to take the same class. This is very good since multitasking is a crucial life skill, and online classes can help this at home. when at home online classes can allow a person to do his laundry, clean his house, and even do dishes and still be in class. | Evidence | Effective |
6940abe53213 | 8D0E03A58CC9 | Another reason for multitasking is that it can improve your flexibility by at least 25 percent, and that is great for those who need to fit in time for other things in life such as exercise. | Evidence | Effective |
4840579c8f6a | 8D0E03A58CC9 | As I mentioned, online classes are popular and do benefit students. They do this by helping cut costs and help save them money for things they need most in life, flexibility to make up work and to do things that they need to in life, help a student build or gain confidence, and allow for multitasking. This all helps a student get through a class by improving the class conditions, or by making it more comfortable for them emotionally. Though online classes aren`t in person and some classes are not very flexible, they can help shy students feel less worried. And as I mentioned as well, there are a lot of schools that may offer the same class with better flexibility than the school you want to go for that class.
Overall, online classes can help a student get through a class cheaply, confidently, with flexibility, and with the ability of multitasking. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e47661ec19bc | 8D242A52F9B3 | Do you think that the Unmasing face on Mars was created by akiens? Well my friens joe that i work with believes that the face on mars was. Joe and I are sciemtist for NASA, and we are here to discus the Unmasking face on Mars. So my friend Joe believes that the face on Mars was created by aliens. So here are some reasons why he believes hat he does on this theory. Joe said that "Scientist figured it was jst another Martin Messa, comnmon enough aroung Cydnoia, only this one had unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyption Pjaraoh. | Lead | Adequate |
494208c19011 | 8D242A52F9B3 |
Joe and I have different belifes, although I agree with him on this one. Only because, there are already Martin Messas around Cyndonia. But there aren't any like this thats has ever been seen before. I also think that all theses UNmasking face on mars are created by aliens or martins only because, the name Martin Messa. The Martin must come from the word Martian so they must have some typr on relation going on. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2eb58d4f5182 | 8D242A52F9B3 | Also at the same time i do not believe Joe becuase we have no proof or eveidence that this was really created by alines. | Claim | Adequate |
70cad9ee6fd7 | 8D242A52F9B3 | Only beaucse we have no proof that aliens exsist either. I quit frankly think that this all rubish, but tbis is also my opianion i could be wrong. No one has proof of anything that has happened on mars. | Evidence | Ineffective |
730840c23642 | 8D242A52F9B3 | But then at the same time i still do agree with Joe, but at the same time i do not beileve with Joe. I know you are wondering why i am saything i agree then turn arounf and say i don't . | Claim | Ineffective |
d78995252459 | 8D242A52F9B3 | Well once again here is why i do agree and don't agree. i agree becuase it make scence that out of nowhere there is an unkown figure of a face on mars, but at the same time we do not know who did it. So we jump top conclusions that it ahd to be an ailen . But we have nop prrof that an alien is rwal and we have no proof that any of thid is real. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c44cd0e31507 | 8D242A52F9B3 | But these are just my opinion on hoe i feel aboiut this so i could be wrong i could be right, but unti we find out we have to continue to make obsevations on this until we find out the truth. So yeah that is how i feel on ths situation. | Position | Ineffective |
eda3626ad895 | 8D2688E8706E | It probaly seems like a terrific idea of a car that can drive it self i mean who wouldnt want a car that can drive it self when you can just relax in the driver seat?
| Lead | Adequate |
ce0812e3e5b9 | 8D2688E8706E |
All though it seems like a great idea for a car to drive it self there are some down falls with the idea it seems perfect but perfect can go all wrong. | Position | Adequate |
461b5229b591 | 8D2688E8706E | The idea of a car that can have a autopilot or can drive it self isnt a bad idea | Claim | Adequate |
2641137b7284 | 8D2688E8706E | because lets say your driving to another state an you dont want to drive for number of hours all you have to do is just switch to autopilot an have the car drive it self seems like a good idea doesnt it? Though it seems like a great idea from google...Did google ever stop an think about the saftey of others? Did google stop an think about safety period? | Evidence | Adequate |
b9ca2d726e57 | 8D2688E8706E | I feel that the smart car idea an development is a bad idea an kind of a waste of time because all that work of selling cars an making cars is going down the drain | Claim | Adequate |
ede9b15bbb21 | 8D2688E8706E | I say that because almost 90% of the world population have dreamed about driving a car an getting a car. | Evidence | Adequate |
967164171e7b | 8D2688E8706E | I dont know about you guys but the story said that the smart car is going to have a camera in the car while its driving it self to watch the driver to see if he or she is prepared to take the wheel at any moment | Evidence | Adequate |
0b8f833b16df | 8D2688E8706E | When I think about that statement I think to myself if theres gonna be a camera in the car watching me to see if im prepared or not shouldnt I just drive the car myself 24/7 365? | Claim | Adequate |
5109cd589be8 | 8D2688E8706E | The whole smart car idea yes its a great idea but what about getting your permit an you licsense? Im sure on a driving test we wouldnt be able to use our autopilot to park the car. | Evidence | Adequate |
45f35ad1e039 | 8D2688E8706E | The idea of the car driving it self its actually taking the fun out of learning how to drive learning how to park an other things. | Claim | Adequate |
fef99b553b44 | 8D2688E8706E | The smart car is a great idea by google but personally I feel that they should just keep that idea to themself | Claim | Ineffective |
70e4a8c83f88 | 8D2688E8706E | because anybody can get in a smart car not knowing how to drive an just turn on the autopilot then when its time for the driver to actuallly try an drive it might end up in a conflict with another pedestrian. Sources say it self that an alert or deffensive driver is the best driver because the driver is aware of traffic. Did google stop an ask if the computers were aware? Probaly not they think that the car is so perfect they probaly didnt stop an think safety.
Google came up with the idea that when the driver should be prepared to take over the car flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays will appear thats a bad idea I say that because what if the lights appear on the dashboard an the driver begans to take over an soon as the lights go away the driver hits another car or a pedestrian?
Dr. Werner Huber said "why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?" Wouldnt drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?" | Evidence | Adequate |
177450a3c44e | 8D2688E8706E | The story also said "Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. | Claim | Adequate |
ef82d97ece6e | 8D2688E8706E | "If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer? Thats a good question an I say that because what if the car does get in a accident who can the other person blame? The driver or the car it self? Im sure that the other person is going to blame the driver because the driver should of been paying attention despite if the car was in autopilot or not. | Evidence | Adequate |
c083fa2fbac6 | 8D2688E8706E | Another point of mine is what if the sensors of the car go out an you have no idea that the car autopilot doesnt work? | Claim | Adequate |
54fdb43ea43e | 8D2688E8706E | Lets say that the smart car is the number one car in the world that is getting sold so is everyone going to have one? What if other people feel the same way as I do? That the idea of the smart car is a great idea but I want to stick with driving on my own. Is the world going to stop sellingg cars that drivers can malfuction on their own? If so thats a bad idea because not everyone is going to like the idea of the car it takes the fun an the expererince away from driving an learning how to drive. | Evidence | Adequate |
362f4668536d | 8D2688E8706E | The smart car might be a great idea for old people because what if they drop something in the car or they might need some type of assistance.
| Claim | Adequate |
9dd25eb6850f | 8D2688E8706E |
Ive came to the conclusion that the smart car is a great idea but I dont agree with it because it just takes the fun out of learning how to drive it seems safe but wouldnt you want a driver behind the wheel that is alert? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9ff4add8907c | 8D47E7F9968F | I think we should be able to bring cell phones to school | Position | Adequate |
461971451779 | 8D47E7F9968F | in case of an emergency one of the students can call 911 | Claim | Adequate |
86b6371a33ab | 8D47E7F9968F | Also maybe one of the students need to tell there parents they need to stay after school and they cant because they took cell-phones out of school | Claim | Adequate |
70a53c16ba1a | 8D47E7F9968F | Even though we students use them during class | Counterclaim | Adequate |
1f93332f4818 | 8D47E7F9968F | that's why a teacher is there for stopping them from using it. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
3c6f0fce8992 | 8D47E7F9968F | I feel like we should be able to bring them | Claim | Adequate |
2bec0dd137b0 | 8D47E7F9968F | they are a little part of our life it builds our social life and connects us with friends. | Evidence | Adequate |
34dcd343b2e4 | 8D47E7F9968F | if were walking home and its after school and we get hurt | Evidence | Adequate |
757b7c00404c | 8D47E7F9968F | how are we going to get help without our cell-phones | Claim | Adequate |
3e6fd890bea7 | 8D47E7F9968F | But i agree we should be able to bring our cell-phones and be able to use it during our free time because were not bothering no one or harming them. | Claim | Adequate |
bed417d6c65d | 8D47E7F9968F | I believe that we should only get in trouble when using our cell-phones is when we are using it during class. But besides that we shouldn't be getting in trouble just by using it during lunch. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d9f7e7b41977 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | Driverless cars should not be used on open roads | Position | Adequate |
2f4ed00bb7fe | 8D5DC914F9F3 | due to the extreamly dangerous potental the driverless car has. | Claim | Effective |
c481f4cfea38 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | If you were to get in a car accident who would be to blame ? The car or the driver ? | Claim | Effective |
5dcf117eb6f3 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | The computer of the car could have so many errors that could potentally injure another human on the roads.
| Claim | Effective |
3ced64892fa6 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | The dangerous potental the car has is, it can accelerate on its own. | Claim | Effective |
57547b45c570 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | Imagine you're going down 267 here in Plainfield. You're in a driverless car and the car begins to accelerate, however it doesnt meet a constant speed. As the car continues to go faster and faster, its to late to stop because you already rearended the car infront of you. Causing the person in the car infront of you to spin out of controll and hit a telephone pole. Because of a computer error in the car an inicent bystander's life has been taken. That there just shows the potental danger the driverless car has just due to the "auto acceleration" programing in the car. | Evidence | Adequate |
ae6250ca40e8 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | In that car crash you have to give the poliece your insurance redgerstration ext. When you file the insurance claim whos fault it the accident? Yourself or the car manufacturers? | Claim | Effective |
716c3c203cb5 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | You could try to blame the manufacture however you're probably not going to get to far. It's not their fault the computer of the car had a glitch. There is nothing they can do about it. So now you could potentally be charged with wreckless driving and vehicular manslotter, even though you didn't intentually kill the person. Your insurance is most likely going to say it was your fault for not having controll of the car. Who is to say it was infact the car and not your fault? That's just the problem exactaly . | Evidence | Adequate |
6768e4c12fb6 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | Technology fails everyday so why put it in a car and put human lives at risk? | Claim | Effective |
5e8213f00f0b | 8D5DC914F9F3 | Using the heads-up system is a good idea | Counterclaim | Adequate |
85f8914a0b6e | 8D5DC914F9F3 | however it could also fail resulting in the faitality of another human | Rebuttal | Effective |
67f44c939bd7 | 8D5DC914F9F3 | Using the heads-up system could get the attention of the driver to let them know that they need to take over. What happens when the driver doesnt take over and the car continues to have a mind of it's own. Again possiable resulting in an accident and a possiable faitality. | Evidence | Adequate |
3ec804029184 | 8D5DC914F9F3 |
Admitting that technology is a great advantage and is used everywhere today. The point is greater technology than what we have now should stay off the roads. Keeping technology off the roads can save lives and prevent accidents waiting to happen. The danger of auto accelaration, heads-up system, and not knowing whos fault the accident was your's or the car's, is absalutely not worth the life of a human. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
502efb746920 | 8D69369DEDA2 | The electoral college is a very important process in congress. It gives citizens that are in the college a chance to meet the people that will be running for a very powerful position. Sometimes voices arent heard and of these 528 people, some will be humble. its also a good thing that they use a majority ruling system, which can make things easier instead of detailing. | Lead | Adequate |
3c9f05c1f7a6 | 8D69369DEDA2 | If the voting for election of president was changed to popularity vote only, then it wouldnt be quite as fair. | Claim | Adequate |
53dc25b18897 | 8D69369DEDA2 | Obviously the president who has apppeared more times on television or at meetings will win. This method screams unfairness. Whichever candidate has more money and funding will obviously become more popular, even if their intentions as president arent as good as the qualities the other candidate's are. | Evidence | Ineffective |
96c80dbc21fd | 8D69369DEDA2 | Although both methods by themselves seem a little unfair to work on, i say it would be better to work with both. | Claim | Adequate |
34e7c1358428 | 8D69369DEDA2 | If you leave it to the electoral college, then only those people will be able to have a say in who we want as president for the united states of america. However if we leave it to just popularity, whoever has more money will get the votes and win.
| Evidence | Adequate |
1c34d48530b4 | 8D69369DEDA2 | Some people say that the voice of the people in America is the most important and it really is. What is the point of being in charge of a country where no one is happy and everyone wants to get rid of you? By this standing pount, many people say its critical to use populartiy vote but as i stated before, whoever has more funding will win. But its also unfair to those who have less access to media. Whichever president they hear more about is the one they will unconsiously choose. Or some will rely on the trusting of their party ie. democratic or republican. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0be17c0571a9 | 8D69369DEDA2 | Both methods are extremely unfair by themselves, so we should not sigle out a voting process. | Position | Ineffective |
3ca75de9a687 | 8D69369DEDA2 | The way we have it now works perfectly well and should not be changed in my opinion. Taking the overall amount for all the different categories seems like the perfect solution. This way you get an opinion from those in congress, those in the senate, those in the Electoral College and most importantly the voices of the people. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
84966cfe139b | 8D7CBF2251F1 | The electoral college has been used for many years. Most people think that it is a place and not a process , well it is a process. the electoral college is the selection of electors. for the process they need 538 electors, for 270 electoral votes. Each canidate has their own group. The presidential election is held every four years to elect or keep the same president for 4 years. | Lead | Adequate |
fd449e13eda4 | 8D7CBF2251F1 | I think that its the way to vote ,and its worked for so many years why fix it if its hasnt had a problem yet. | Position | Adequate |
2367fdd99be5 | 8D7CBF2251F1 | The electoral college is well known and has always been the way to pick our president. its a non-democratic method of selectiing the president | Claim | Adequate |
30ba0e5d3984 | 8D7CBF2251F1 | the other side who are for popular vote think that the electoral college is unfair and that there is not a certainty of a fair outcome. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
532e39b36383 | 8D7CBF2251F1 | i say that if the outcome isnt fair then how are u supposse to win as a president. Having more votes as a canidate is not fair but thats how you win by having more votes.
My opinion on that is why would losing be fair thats the point one canidate wins and one loses. of couse the other person who lost would have anger and therefore be upset and say that the electoral is an unfair jugdement. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
44dd0e373baa | 8D7CBF2251F1 | The candiate wins because of the majority vote in their designated states. if the other canidate dosent have as many states he could only win by the collected vote within the states that he/she has. | Evidence | Adequate |
b58483525dee | 8D7CBF2251F1 | popular vote would be awful and much harder to do as a process | Claim | Adequate |
0162af48f9c7 | 8D7CBF2251F1 | that would mean that every one in the United States would vote who they want and it be sent to the capital to see whos victorious. Popular vote has no process or stragey or base plan to vote , and what if states dont like this idea so they revolt against the goverment. states might get together with there senate and riot in order to stop this. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6773a5e6fbdf | 8D7CBF2251F1 | In my opinion popular vote is messy, controversial and just down right uncalled for there is a plan within the electoral college and i think that they should keep was has been working. yes we are evolving as a whole but somethings are left to be the same and not tamperd with | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0810bb83064c | 8D9D207D883C | I think we should banish the Electoral College becuse we the people decide who the president is not Electorals. | Position | Adequate |
2070ea624ce2 | 8D9D207D883C | We should just go back to basics and have a normal vote system | Claim | Adequate |
20a64d6a85b6 | 8D9D207D883C | This system is no working for our needs so we need a better and direct voting system. One big example for leting go of the Electoral college is the disater factor and it just unfair to voters.
| Evidence | Adequate |
7c3be2685a07 | 8D9D207D883C | The electoral college should be cancelled because there are too many things wrong with it. | Claim | Adequate |
8c2f01aba89e | 8D9D207D883C | Like one is the winnner-take-all sytyem, by a couple of votes off and one canidate takes all the points in that state. So with that, canidates will use mostly of he's/her's attention on big states to get all the big points there. And little states see little to no campaign ads for any candidates because of the electoral college. | Evidence | Adequate |
ebce72983e0e | 8D9D207D883C | Then swing states help us in the electoral college with dividing the points to the cadidates. | Claim | Ineffective |
e233fdf0df3d | 8D9D207D883C | Help with the winner-take-all system, it just the oppisite of it. | Claim | Ineffective |
2e9a44e81e4b | 8D9D207D883C | Also the electors rarely betrayed the voting. Then the are times where the candidate wins the elctoral vote, then loses the national popular vote. | Evidence | Adequate |
da80d1f2101f | 8D9D207D883C | With all of this infomation the Electoral College should be descarded because it is a non-democratic method and it just an anachronism. And when you are voting, you are voting for electors, not the priesident. And which candidate wins the popular vote wins the election. its just unfair to the voters because they dont really vote for the priesident. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4a75f388bc73 | 8DA3804EEB25 | I am for the development of these cars | Position | Adequate |
74bfceae69e3 | 8DA3804EEB25 | It sounds interesting to me | Evidence | Adequate |
232efd7bb5b3 | 8DA3804EEB25 | It can help those drivers who is unable to drive because of some kind disabilt in their body. | Claim | Adequate |
8fca2c18f308 | 8DA3804EEB25 | It keeps a driver from falling a sleep behind the wheel and hurting someone because if the car is driverless, you can fall a sleep with out hurting anyone. | Claim | Adequate |
ca17ddaeb973 | 8DA3804EEB25 | The passage says the cars can steer themselves. | Claim | Adequate |
bab55b84550f | 8DA3804EEB25 | The passage says that the public trainsport system will some day be driverless | Evidence | Adequate |
2c0c819e5ffb | 8DA3804EEB25 | The cars so far still need a driver for some of the things. The car can do the steering. That sounds easier than it is. It is realiy hard, it just take some time. Driverless cars are possible. The cars so far still need a driver for some of the things. The car can do the breaking. That is sounds easier than it is. It is realiy hard. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f660f0845359 | 8DA3804EEB25 | I am for the development of these cars. It sounds interesting to me. It can help those drivers who is unable to drive because of some kind disabilt in their body. It keeps a driver from falling a sleep behind the wheel and hurting someone because if the car is driverless, you can fall a sleep with out hurting anyone. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6abc6feb6124 | 8DE7DB4D3F8A | Many uncommon things happen causing people to be very fascinated with a certain subject. Any time something to do with space occurs, many people freak out or become fascinated with the subject. When something to do with space does occur, then usually people believe alien life forms. But with a cleaner and better camera the photos revealed | Lead | Adequate |
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