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In case of an emergency, a phone would be great to have.
Claim
Effective
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What if, during lunch, my friend breaks a bone or gets an asthma attack. There would be no time to call a teacher for help and even if they did come, what would they do for help? Any student's first instinct would be to take out their phone and call 911. Once your done with that, you tell your friend to call a teacher from somewhere so that they can handle the situation. "Whew," you say. "thankfully I had my cell phone."
Evidence
Effective
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Another reason why having a functional mobile at school would be nice to have: a ride.
Claim
Effective
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I forgot I had basketball practice at the gym after school and what should I do? You can simply call your ride and telling them they need to come later. What if your ride was your mom and you didn't have your phone because you didn't want any phones in your school? Well I can almost imagine what will happen next: my mom comes to pick me up, she doesn't find me, and every mom's first reaction to this mishap will be, "MY SON/DAUGHTER HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED!" This "exciting" commotion happened because you decided to go with Policy 2.
Evidence
Effective
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Please consider this letter because if you don't, before you know it, our school's phone bill will increase because students will be needing to use school phones to call people. With this, our budget will decrease, leaving the school left with no money for more important reasons.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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I think that they should keep our despised method of choosing the president. The way we choose our president every 8 years is okay. Nothing is wrong with they way we change our presidents.
Lead
Adequate
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The electoral votes has done a great job with no complaints. The way now has been going for a long time and they shouldn't change it.
Position
Adequate
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The electoral college consists of many electorals. They consist of 538 electorals. Majority of the electoral votesare 270, which is required to elect the President. Under the 23rd Admendment of the Constitution, the District of Cloumbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state on purposes of the Electoral College. Each canidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. Afte the presidential election, your governor prepares a "Certificate of Ascertainment " listing all of the candidates who ran for President n your state along with the names of their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential canidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December of the election year. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but forr aslate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry,you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democtratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election,they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. It can be argues that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candiate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats on Texas,for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked up by popular vote.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I think that your fist policy is the best
Position
Adequate
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because if kids don't bring their phones to school then well they are not be able to call for help during a emergency like
Claim
Adequate
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E98F49492C8B
if the power went out or if the teacher is gone and there is a break in or if some staff member needs medial treatment and the power is out or if school gets out and a friend ask if you can come over after school
Evidence
Adequate
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If you chooses the other on people are still going to bring their phones to school anyway so why not let them have it at school just have rules for them not consequences.
Claim
Adequate
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Maybe if you let them more people will listen and not get in as much trouble.
Claim
Ineffective
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If people start to listen then well people won't get suspended as much. Now if you choose the second policy then people will not listen and bring there phones to school and you would just be suspending kids who just brought their phone to school. You would have a lot more suspicions or detentions.
Evidence
Adequate
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If the first policy is chosen then you wouldn't have to keep nagging kids to put away their cell phones or stay all night and wait for parents to come pick up their kids cell phone.
Claim
Adequate
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E98F49492C8B
If you pick the first policy the kids will be much happier and the parents happier they don't have to go pick up their kids phone. So please pick policy one. If you pick policy one then the kids will most likely like their principle and not hate her.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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I think that we should keep this electoral college because the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.
Position
Adequate
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E9938C48F7AB
On the other hand it would be way easier for people to vote.
Counterclaim
Ineffective
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E9938C48F7AB
Also a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation. Plus, each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. So this would be perfect for everyone to vote.
Evidence
Ineffective
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E9938C48F7AB
After the presidential election, your governor prepares a ' certificate of Ascertainment' listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of theelectors in december of the election year. Your states certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national Archives as part of the offical records of the presidential election.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Also, most States have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all the electors to the winning presidential candidate. however, maine and Nebraska each have a variation of 'proportional representation'. Under the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral college. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word 'state' also refers to the district of columbia.
Evidence
Ineffective
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so i really do think that we should keep this it would be a really good thing to keep. but this is why i think that we should keep it.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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Gravin states that it reminds her\him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.
Lead
Ineffective
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I think that by reading this passage and knowing a litte bit about it before it is just a natural landform not created by aliens.
Position
Adequate
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Aliens are not even real. People just think they are real.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I think it is a natural landform because not even humans could make something that looks just like a persons head that good
Claim
Ineffective
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It might be from the Earths winds pushing the sand over and making it look like it a face. It also could be the gravitation pull of the Earth. I think that you should believe that is not aliens because if it was aliens dont you thinl they would be doing more than just that? That means if it reall the aliens who made this they must have a lot of thinking and knowledge about stuff like that. That also means that when earth moves the face moves with the Earth. Does this have anything to do with the man in the moon?
Evidence
Ineffective
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E9BB013E0F33
People probably think that it is made by aliens because people don't go to Mars. People that go to Mars have to be very brave and other things too. the camera has taken pictures because it has to have proof that it really does look like a face. I think again that it is just a landform that has been made over the pass years by the gratational pull and Earths winds.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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I would rather want the changing of the election to popular vote because the Electoral college process causes many promblems
Position
Adequate
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First is that it consists of 538 electors and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president
Claim
Adequate
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Also perhaps it leads into a tie in the electoral votings.... it could possibly lead into a deadlocked election
Claim
Adequate
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This process of electoral college does not give the full rights to the voters... its not fair.
Claim
Ineffective
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538 electors is consisted of and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. this tells me that NO people can vote
Claim
Ineffective
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which really does not give you the right to do that because people have always that right to vote. In addition to that it can lead to a big catastrophe.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The electoral college process is unfair to voters.
Claim
Adequate
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Also why, all that can lead into a tie in the electoral votings. Which equals into a deadlocked election
Claim
Adequate
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Lastly, this process is outdated and irrational. arguments against direct elections are spurious and should completely vanish this process.
Claim
Adequate
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Community service is beneficial to many individuals, groups, and areas. It brings out the best in many people, including those who carry it out. It shows good personality and is superb for getting into college. However, if community service was to be necessary, then it would not be as beneficial.
Lead
Effective
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If community service was mandatory, it would not be viewed as a nice thing, it would not be enjoyed by all, and would not be as beneficial to the community.
Position
Effective
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To begin with, community service would not be viewed as such a nice thing if it were required.
Claim
Effective
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For example, two schools in an area have their 8th grade students do at least an hour of community service a day. Eventually, people would forget how nice it is because it would become a usual thing around the town. This shows that if everyone in 8th grade performed community service daily, or even weekly, citizens would view it as the students doing what they need to do, rather than how nice those students are.
Evidence
Effective
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Furthermore, community service is done by those who enjoy helping others.
Claim
Effective
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If all 8th graders had to do it then it would not bring out the best in them and would be dreaded by some. Supporting this, the whole 8th grade of 120 students have to do an hour of community service a day. 40 out of the 120 do not like the labor and dread it, causing them to have the thought of community service in their heads the whole day. This would cause changes in attitudes throughout daily life . In addition, it would lead to bad attitudes towards helping the community and bad habits for the future.
Evidence
Effective
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Finally, citizens would not view community service as beneficial for the community as they do now.
Claim
Effective
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For example, all the students of the 8th grade work every day for six months for the community. As the seventh month approaches, civilians cease to realize how helpful community service is because they are so used to it. This concept is the same as taking the ability to walk for granted. It demonstrates that when people are used to something, they begin to take it for granted. This will eventually result in little or no appreciation of community service.
Evidence
Effective
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Helping the community is great for personality, beneficial to the community, and excellent on a resume. If it became required for even just 8th graders, then community service would negatively change completely. In addition to community service itself changing, personality within students and some citizens will change, regarding community service. It is important to not take community service for granted because it helps the community and brings out the best in people.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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the Electoral College has always been a good way to elect our leaders, and it is the best way to do it
Position
Effective
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It has the ability to use swing states for better voting
Claim
Adequate
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larger and smaller states get diffrent amounts of electoral votes,
Claim
Adequate
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and presidents cannot be elected by a region alone.
Claim
Adequate
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The effect of having swing states because of the Electoral College is a positive one
Claim
Adequate
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because when a state feels like they have a chance of having their candidate win, they put more thought into the vote they cast knowing that their vote counts. Having voters put more thought into their votes instead of not caring as much gives the better candidate a greater chance of winning, if one candidate was truly better than the other. The more thoughtfull canidates in a swing state will pull more information from the candidates campaigns. Popular vote does not use the winner takes all method so the idea of swing states will no longer have any effect in the election.
Evidence
Effective
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Another great reason why the Electoral College is better than popular vote is because depending on the size of the states a certain amount of votes is given to the electors.
Claim
Adequate
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Larger states get more attention from presidential candidates because of the majority vote in the particular state.
Evidence
Adequate
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if there was only popular vote then presidential candidates could waste their time on smaller states when they could of been winning larger states.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The varying amount of electoral votes for each state depending on its size also allows for a more equal and fair election, due to the less populated states not being able to have more electoral votes then the more populated states.
Evidence
Adequate
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The Electoral College allows that presidential canidates cannot win the election by reigional appeal.
Claim
Adequate
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This means that if a particular reigion favors a candidate they cannot win by only a single regions votes. This makes the candidates campaign less in regions that are more likely to be won and more in other regions. But with the Electoral College this makes it harder for a candidate with only regional appeal to win because other regions feel like their votes will not be as effective towards the election. With popular vote a presidential candidate will not know where to campaign and where not because there is no winner take all method.
Evidence
Adequate
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This is why I belive that having the Electoral College is superior to popular vote when we the people vote for presidential candidates.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Theres so many positive and negative when we imagine the idea of driverless cars.
Lead
Ineffective
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I believe that driverless cars are very dangerous and can cause many conflicts.
Position
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
I know that even with the law of don't text and drive, people still do those things.
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
, if we allow driverless cars I know that people who are tired from work are going to fall asleep knowign the car is in control, but at the end when theres trouble, they will still be asleep
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
I believe that people will start sueing companies and people will not feel confortable of being stalked while driving.
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
there are many reckless drivers around us anyhow. How can we be sure that we are safe when driving?
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
In the passage " something not avaible to the drivers trying to text with a cell phone." I can not imagine but we do know for a fact that texting and driving is very dangerious but there are also people who are out there doing it. These situations can lead to mass accidents. If you are given the chance that your car does not need you and you do get bored off of the heads up display, what would you really do? Since our society is all about iphones and samsung , I do not think that its safe to be in a car with your cell phones on. I sense that teenagers are especially going to disobey the law because they just tend to think its going to be okay, which in reality its not. We should be very concerned of everyone driving safetly.
Evidence
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
I believe that exuausted and drunk people are going to take this advantage of having driverless cars.
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
What if you car needs your help, and youre asleep and that you're too drunk to get self concious? This will lead to more troubles because than people that are drunk will still drive and think that their car has it all in control."They can steer ,accelerate, and brake themself, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills" The driverless can be very dangerious if in case in need of a human skill if someone is really tired and drunk.
Evidence
Adequate
82918f477a84
EA234C38C696
I believe that your rights are being taken away when you're beign stalked on while driving.
Claim
Adequate
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EA234C38C696
I wouldnt want to be stalked on when i'm driving or anything. it violates someones privacy when youre watching them because some people od have to do certain things when they are parked for example like having to use an emergency or changing clothes. "While the driver watches the road , the car watches the driver" Do you really think that drivers are going to watch the road when they dont have to? I also believe that peopel will start sueing companies because who is at fault if theres an injury or accident?"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is al fault- the driver or the manufacturer? I think that people who are being responsible and driving with great cautions will be upset and it would not be fair to them if they are under control of their own car and than there is someone els thats not drving but lettign their car being controled by a computer than they get in an accidents. I do knwo that there are accidents from many reasons, but I believe that driverless cars can cause a lot of problems.
Evidence
Adequate
9076ccdb4a6f
EA234C38C696
I do not agree the fact that driverless cars should be allowed. It has many safety issues for the community and it will cause a lot of problems. It will violate someones privacy,someone can take advantage of driverless cars when they are drunk or tired, and lastly peopel will be upset. I think it depends on the indivuals who are driving. People should start caring more for others when driving because someones life can be at risk if they driver recklessly. Driverless cars will lead into many big problems as well as to many life lost if youre not prepared when your car needs you.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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EA426FFE25E5
With the face on mars no one belived that it was actually a face they thought that it was and ancient monument on mars and when NASA first saw the face on mars they thought that it was the landging place of the viking 1's sister ship the viking 2. Then when they put that photo out of the face on mars people were using it in haunted grocery stores checkout lines, radio talk shows, magazines, books, and hollywood films. Then even some scientists belived that they face was an alien artifact so when people did not belive them they went and took more picture of the face but it was mars cloudy day and people still did not belive them. So NASA went back for another one but to get a better picture they had to get closer to the face and role the ship twenty five degrees to the center they also had to go over the face very often because it was hard to get the picture. The spaceship would look over mars like a faxing machine but lucky for them going around the face very often it got to a point to were their was no clouds and they were able to get a good shot of the face. So NASA was able to get a better picture of the face so that people would belive them that it was a face in the surface on mars. The face was not accutally formed from the viking 2 but from a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hight as the Face on the moon. So the face on mars was alo just a huge rock formation and the eyes nose and mouth was just an illussion formed from a shadow. Also about the alien articact their was not one they thought that their was a hidden alien artifact and hidden alien marking hidden by the haze.
Evidence
Ineffective
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EA5BFD706570
The topic of online learning is very controversial. Many schools offer online services to accommodate those who vary in schedules, need more time for assignments and comprehension, or even those who just work better alone. Now a days, schools are becoming more diverse in terms of the variation in which a student can learn. There are both current benefits and future benefits to online learning.
Lead
Adequate
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EA5BFD706570
Although some people think students have no benefits from online learning, it should be known that students do in fact benefit from online learning.
Position
Effective
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There are several ways students can benefit from online education currently. One benefit being that it gives students the chance to work at their own pace and not feel pressured to keep up with the rest of the class.
Claim
Effective
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EA5BFD706570
This would've needed to be done, had learning been set in a classroom setting. For example, a student may not understand a concept in math and want to try and fully understand the concept before being tested on it. In schools currently, many students are being forced to take tests having not have comprehended the topic of study. This also leads to the problem of social influence on a students learning. As humans, we tend to conform to the rest of society and value deeply what society has to say about us. Students self-esteem and self-efficacy go down when they don't understand a topic. Students tend to not want to be the outcast when it comes to not understanding a topic, so they just go ahead with a test, which results in them doing poorly on because not enough time was given to them. Online school provides this option, so a student is not given a test before they thoroughly understand the concept
Evidence
Effective
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This also pertains to the flexibility of a student's schedule. Some students may switch to online learning due to sports and can't afford to be continuously missing school
Claim
Adequate
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EA5BFD706570
For example, my friend Kady does gymnastics with me, and gymnastics meets happen almost every weekend. Online school is a great way for her to do school work on her own time, because work gets done depending on when she is available, aside from doing meets. There's less stress about having to do homework for the next day
Evidence
Adequate
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This leads me into another benefit to online learning. Another benefit to online learning would be that it is a potential stress reliever or minimizes stress.
Claim
Effective
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EA5BFD706570
Many students may feel better and be less stressed doing homework or school work, because of being in the comfort of their own home or in a space that is safe for them. Students feel free to take breaks and not be restricted to the overcrowded rooms that are common in regular schools. It's also proven that surroundings have an effect on mood and willingness to learn. If the atmosphere of a classroom is sad, depressing, or gloomy, then students may have a gloomy or depressing attitude when in that class, hindering them from learning at their fullest potentials. With online schools, the student chooses their place of study and knows what places motivate them to create high quality work and retain the most information.
Evidence
Effective
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There are also ways students can benefit from online education in the future. One benefit is that the student will be more independent.
Claim
Adequate
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EA5BFD706570
When doing online school, the student doesn't have access to a tangible teacher or access to a teacher 24/7. Sometimes students will have to wait for a teacher, if the teacher works for both online and public schools, to answer a question that the student has on a problem or concept. Sometimes students will have to figure out the concept themselves which develops their problem-solving skills. The independence and problem-solving skills can become useful later on when the student applies for a job. Many employers like employees who don't depend on the employer for everything but can try and solve problems on their own first. For example, when working at a McDonalds drive-thru with a line full of people, the employee doesn't have time to be asking the employer a series of questions if a problem occurs. Instead, the employee must find quick solutions and learn independence. The employee won't learn unless they try it.
Evidence
Effective
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Another benefit to online education is the student learns time management and responsibility.
Claim
Effective
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Although online education is flexible, school work still needs to be completed in a timely manner and it is the students responsibility to get it done, for there is no one around to set verbal due dates. Students still need to write papers in online school, but the only difference is there is no teacher to remind you of the due date and pressure you to complete it. Later in life, those online students are very aware of due dates and deadlines,for they have been accustomed to following them throughout their high school careers. Employers like employees who are punctual and have tasks or assignments done on time. This idea of time management also prepares the student for college if they choose to go to an actual college or university. Professors like assignments done on time and also won't give too many frequent reminders on when those assignments are due. Professors also like when students take accountability for their actions. It's not the teachers fault if work is not completed on time or is lost. The blame is solely put on the student.
Evidence
Effective
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Online schooling truly depends on the person at hand. What works for one person doesn't always work for another. Online school promotes both current and future benefits, as does public schools. There is no say in which one is better or worse. As individuals we are all different and possess different traits and qualities. With so many individuals in the world, it's important that we accommodate all people. A person may strive in one situation but stress in another. This means that online schooling should remain an option for students and families.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Out of the two possible policies you are considering I would have to say that i favor the second
Lead
Ineffective
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The idea of allowing students to use cell phones during free time makes absolute sense
Position
Adequate
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Not allowing the phones during class time is respectable as well, that way the learning isn't affected.
Claim
Adequate
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During free time, students aren't putting their time into anything anyway. Letting them use their phones will have no affect what so ever or anything important, such as school work.
Claim
Adequate
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There is really no downside to policy number one. It will make most students very pleased as well.
Evidence
Adequate
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Policy two however, I am against. The idea of no phones what so ever seems harsh and strict.
Claim
Adequate
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EAC3596461E7
What is the student is having a bad day and can't call a parents for a little help? That could affect how the learn in school, not being able to have outside connections. It would be like the student was in a cage for an entire school day, how would you feel to be locked up in a cage? The student's should be allowed their freedom.
Evidence
Adequate
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There is always a punishment for not following the rules, some will have to be thought of, of course, if the new policy that you choose is not followed.
Claim
Adequate
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Don't expect everything to run smooth at first, things may always be changed. Try out letting students use the phones during free time, it's just something new. It may lead to a happier environment, and maybe even better grades for students. Young people love freedom and being allowed to do what they want, giving them this freedom could have a tremendous outcome.
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I am sure that you have many other things to think about, so, with that I give you, thank you and goodbye.
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Policy 1 i believe in cause everyone is already using phone during class or out of the class room even in lunch so policy 1 is better than policy 2.
Position
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The reason i pick policy 1 is people are using phone in school already and some times the teacher catch kids but some time they don't
Claim
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i don't know we like our phone so we maybe want to use our phone anywhere, any day, any time that why u should let us our phones during school time.
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Second reason, i think it fair if we use our phones cause i bet all school in this world teacher use their phone that is a other reason.
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it unfair that the grow ups can but not us they need to do theirs job then if we need to do ours job and i hope you think about that to see us feel about it.
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