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1bbcbbf926e2	F6F4D85648D6	The electoral college has many ways that can help a candidate win the election and it might make things more easier for him/her.	Claim	Adequate
6faf7dca4f75	F6F4D85648D6	The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal. This means if the voter is from the south, they have no reason to campaign heavily in those sates. Instead they can spend more time in states that need a little more convincing fot the candidate to gain their vote. It also restores some of the weight in the political balance that a large states loses by virtue of the mal-appotrionment of the Senate decreed in the constitution	Evidence	Effective
2a4a7e92e8bb	F6F4D85648D6	Some may say that the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote is something to worry about.	Counterclaim	Effective
40a7f0f55e4f	F6F4D85648D6	But the Electoral College avoids the problem of there being a run-off election. If there was no Electoral College, this would put pressure for run-off elections, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, which it invariably produces a clear winner.	Rebuttal	Effective
dda63361cd9f	F6F4D85648D6	So all in all, the Electoral College should be kept and stay the way it is. It isn't complicated and makes the election run more smoothly. It provides multiple ways for a candidate to win the vote of a certain state and avoids major problem during the election.	Concluding Statement	Effective
34b67c4eca4d	F6F60CA6E983	I think we should keep the electoral collage	Position	Adequate
9ea3658c2eec	F6F60CA6E983	beacause it has worked this long for us so we know its gonna work so why not keeep it going.	Claim	Adequate
9a711b89d942	F6F60CA6E983	It keeps a steady stream when it comes time to vote because aslong as someone had 270 votes you know thats who will get picked. so why try changing that and have a whole new system put in and then not know what to do when it comes time to vote. And what if the new system dosent work, what if the new way of the voting process messes with the tallys and they come out wrong and no one will get picked, unlike the other way when u know everything will come out right and u know that we will have a president. I think its fair that they have it set at 270 for voting that way everyone havs a chance to vote instead of it being so low that only a few people get to vote before they shut it down because they have reached there number of tallys that they need. So if they change the number of tallys that a president needs to become president that will be stupid and people will act out on it because they wont think its right, and because the people who didnt vote will not like the fact that they didnt get to put there vote f in before they stoped the voting and because they meet the number that they needed. Its a vote why do they need to title it as a the vote of a president or a popular vote of a president. Why not just vote for there just electors instead of saying vote for your candidate when really you are just voting for the electors. If you are voting for a certin thing there is no reason that u have to re-word it just to vote, if you are voting for something do it the right way instead of changing stuff and making it seem one way when really its the other way. Why should the electoral get just as much as the winning presindent? They are not doing as much as the president and who is helping him out.. so they should not get the same reword.	Evidence	Ineffective
c92e7d62bfbd	F71A1E42E4B5	Driverless Cars is becoming the most advanced invention the world right now. The new project that every car company is producing is trying to find a way that there could be less accidents if a car is driving itself than the driver.	Lead	Adequate
f6cf1bf74a9d	F71A1E42E4B5	Many have suggested this idea to go on. It would be good for the safety of the people on the roads.	Position	Adequate
9dc7019e71ad	F71A1E42E4B5	Imagine all this cars driving on their own while the person can enjoy doing something else. This is what a producer or a person thinks of during a car like this made. In this state, many companies have made programs for the cars to drive on their own when nothing bad is going on. When an accident happens,the car will alert the driver or get its attention the driver must drive becasue the car isn't programed to do that yet.	Evidence	Adequate
554362522d08	F71A1E42E4B5	There would be less accidents when driverless cars than the actually driver.	Claim	Adequate
d24227a89c7f	F71A1E42E4B5	In most cases most of them are depending on the law and if these cars are sent out without any law for those types of cars, people could sue the company. Thats why google has a few just in case if anything happens like that cause. Thats why they wait and see what could hurt the law and what doesnt hurt the law. The big question is if technology fails and someone gets injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?	Counterclaim	Adequate
2d91f7c8f341	F71A1E42E4B5	In result of this big idea these cars will not come out depending on the company. The first one would be from tesla that can drive 90 percent of the time with autopilot. Other car companies plan to have these types of cars around by the year of 2020. Everyday something new has been made or to the world. We get closer each and everyday to a destination of new product.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
1811334ef1a3	F73601F409A5	The face on mars is most known as a alien creation , however people don't know if its a natural landform or a alien creation. People who would actually try to look in to it to find facts if its a alien creation or a natural landform.	Lead	Adequate
efb6f0977381	F73601F409A5	People don't always think that creations like that can be made by a natural landform	Position	Ineffective
65b929d62ecd	F73601F409A5	If you see in the article "Unmasking the Face on Mars" they give ecidence showing that the face on mars was actually a natural landform.	Claim	Adequate
73aa5608f5af	F73601F409A5	It states " A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see . The caption noted a "huge rock formation ... which resembles a human head," The qoute is saying that when they out the image closer it looks like a human head made by rocks "	Evidence	Adequate
19ec4058129e	F73601F409A5	"The image first appeared on a JPL website, reavealing ... a natural landform , there was no alien monment after all." According to the article "Unmasking the Face on Mars". This qoute is saying real evidence that there was no alien monument the face on mars was a natural landform.	Evidence	Adequate
572b50c2fda2	F73601F409A5	Although few scientists believe the face was an alien artifact, a scientist named Jim Garvin proved them wrong by saying "What the picture is actually showing is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms comman around the Amercian West." Scientists Garvin is proving that the face was a nautral landform.	Evidence	Adequate
0e446fe334d3	F737FB396F2E	I Think that no matter if you are taking online classes, or going to school, you always going to graduate you can loarn alot if you'r taking online classes.	Lead	Adequate
7f5ad2a33697	F737FB396F2E	Like if i were on the position of taking online classes, because im working and i don't have that much time i would loved to study when ever i could.	Position	Ineffective
2ca57c80ee35	F737FB396F2E	For Example: some people that are here in the United States they have to go to school and work after school, and they got to pay rent, send money to their families back in there Contries. For Example: Some of the people don't have someone that can take them to school and the school is far away that the buses can not go all the way to their homes. For Example: There are some kids that don't go to school, having the school next to them, but there's alot of people out here thet would love to go to school or even take online classes but they can't because some of them are always working, some of them even have two jobs. For Example: My mom wouold loved to take online classes at less but she can't because she has to work in the very morning like at 7 am, and she comes back like at one she cleans the house and then like at 3pm she goes to her other job and she gets out like at 11:30 pm so she doesn't have time but she would love if she could do it. For Example: My dad he's going all the way to DC for school because he is taking classes for duster he pays each moth and my dad works to in countruction but weekends she goes to DC the classes start like at 10 and they end like at 1, if you like someting work hard for what you like. For Example: I have a friend that he takes online he work's everyday, he takes his computer to his work so when he's on break runs to the computer and he starts school online like that someone that wants to progress in this country.	Evidence	Ineffective
cb775757a1e2	F739195A9518	The freedom to make a hot cup of coffee while writing a book report, or watch a television series while doing math, undoubtedly sparks feelings of content among students. Throughout the country, some schools have worked to make this a reality, offering students the option of 'distance learning', which is a means by which students can take classes from home through online or video conferencing. In the 21st century, technological development is playing an increasingly larger role in several aspects of society, including educational institutions. The question of how and to what extent these innovations should be integrated serves as a subject for debate	Lead	Effective
1a58ebe5ad4d	F739195A9518	Distance learning should not be an option for all students	Position	Adequate
275d2383fc8e	F739195A9518	as it does not induce the same motivation as does a classroom setting,	Claim	Adequate
3e10a015dfc4	F739195A9518	it creates the possibility for students to take advantage of the freedom,	Claim	Adequate
7b9547a9255c	F739195A9518	students would not be given the chance to develop certain social skills necessary for their success in the real world.	Claim	Adequate
81c85cc6e92a	F739195A9518	One's home is, oftentimes, an environment which establishes a sense of comfort. This setting, compared to a classroom, removes the aspect of healthy competition among students and inhibits a student's drive to accomplish tasks through peer-to-peer interactions.	Claim	Effective
d320308d2ff9	F739195A9518	For example, to the student at home, his or her own grade is the highest, as it is the only point of comparison for him or her. However, at school, academic competition among peers allows for students to push themselves outside of their comfort zone, achieving their highest potentials. Additionally, the motivation of a student who takes classes from home is less than that of a student in a classroom as students at school are more exposed to the opportunities that other students have taken advantage of, such as sports and extracurriculars. This allows a student in school become motivated to simply engage in more activities and accomplish more in his or her fields of interest. The interaction that school promotes creates motivation among students and allows them to engage in healthy competition, while accomplishments more in their academic career.	Evidence	Effective
8e52d5275d57	F739195A9518	Beyond this, distance learning allows for students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, which undeniably serve as a distraction to their academics.	Claim	Effective
91889ce795ba	F739195A9518	For example, at home, a student may be tempted to watch television, or take a nap as there is no teacher or administrator to effectively enforce certain rules and guidelines on the student. This situation makes a student's ability to stay on task extremely difficult, hence negatively impacting that student's success academically. However, if the student were taking classes at school, they are required, by the teacher, to focus on the lesson and complete tasks in a timely manner for their grade. Taking classes at home allows a student to procrastinate their assignments, with no tangible consequence. Because of this, distance learning allows students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, which, in the long run, has a unfavorable effect on that student's academic success.	Evidence	Effective
307220ae5c1a	F739195A9518	Furthermore, taking classes at home hinders students' development of social skills, which are beneficial to the success of individuals in the real world.	Claim	Effective
3ead42d02e2e	F739195A9518	For example, students at school are frequently required to make presentations and connect with other students for group projects. At school, students can also ask their peers for help or advice on assignments. These opportunities at school sculpt a student's ability to develop imperative inter-personal skills, while promoting sociable behavior among students. Through distance learning, however, a student is not exposed to these situations; therefore, they are unable to make the same connections and develop these skills necessary for college or the real-life situations.	Evidence	Effective
5d2e21149942	F739195A9518	Although supporters of distance learning may argue against this point by claiming that taking classes at home could be made a possibility for younger students in elementary school as they are generally not required to give presentations,	Counterclaim	Effective
3c80b5eb6ee7	F739195A9518	this claim is unsupported as several important social skills are developed at a very young age, according to several studies regarding brain connections. Through distance learning, a student is unexposed to opportunities for developing integral social skills, which are necessary for his or her success in the future.	Rebuttal	Effective
333d310a4578	F739195A9518	Distance learning, the concept of making at-home classes an option for students, is unsupported due to the fact that it does not promote the same motivation as a classroom, allows students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, and does not allow student's to develop their interpersonal skills. These factors would negatively influence a student's academic success, which is irrefutably counter-intuitive to the intended purpose of educational institutions.	Concluding Statement	Effective
021a19715ea2	F73ADEA6A74B	I think it is a brilliant idea for us the students, to take on a opportunity to help out by doing community service	Position	Effective
be30447a6f07	F73ADEA6A74B	. I think it is brilliant because it would be like a win-win situation where it benefits both the community and us.	Claim	Adequate
63b40256e5ad	F73ADEA6A74B	If everybody gets a chance to help out the community I think we should take it! It would be great doing something to give back to our community seeing that not many people are interested in helping out.	Evidence	Ineffective
53f86673b2cb	F73ADEA6A74B	Not only will the environment become a safer place to live in but, it will also become a healthier place.	Claim	Adequate
f8f4f29c0f92	F73ADEA6A74B	What would happen if after a while no one took care of our community? For an example It's like taking care of your room, what if one day you decided not to put things in there proper places and just threw things anywhere and left it untidy? It might begin to smell, or you might even discover things missing. So taking care of our community is like taking care of own self. Doing this could be a really good deed, giving back to the community to make it a healthier place. For example, maybe we can go 2-3 times a week picking up trash, even just starting with our own football field.	Evidence	Effective
a7fbffbecdb8	F73ADEA6A74B	you should really think about this and decide to take part in it because it would make our community better and cleaner and it	Concluding Statement	Adequate
663477b9eccd	F744ABAAC3FB	The Electoral College is a process not a place.	Lead	Ineffective
841df5110f88	F744ABAAC3FB	There's nothing wrong wit people voting for the president	Position	Ineffective
c1c30769b943	F744ABAAC3FB	Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO, in their time , agreed on? Abolishing the electoral college. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Who picks the electors? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central comittee, sometimes the presidentail canidates themselves. Voters can't controls whom their electors vote for. Well not always .Voters sometimes get very confused about the votes in vote for the wrong canidate. The best arguement against the electoral college is called Disater Factor. The Americans should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in a century. Back in 1960, segregations in Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratics with new electors that would oppose John F. Kennedy. The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the canidates who recieve the most votes. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, it happened in 2000, but it's less likely than a dispute over popular vote. The Electoral College requires a presidential Canidate to have trans-regional appeal. No other region ( South, Northwest, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes. The electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For an example, nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes.	Evidence	Ineffective
36157da41b6b	F74C46C14E72	I understand there has been some contreversy between keeping or changing the Electoral College by popular vote for the president of the United States	Lead	Adequate
2f403150c294	F74C46C14E72	But We need to Keep the Electoral College	Position	Adequate
fe617afea674	F74C46C14E72	First things first, the Electoral College is a process,not a place. Also it consists of 538 electors but a majority of electoral votes needs to be 270 votes in order to elect a president. So each Canident has a 50/50 chance of winning or losing. The elctors are chosen by the political parties, which i can see how people would have a problem with that,bu	Evidence	Adequate
da74bcd517a8	F74C46C14E72	if they dodnt choose the canadents for us we probably would even know which person to elect as a canadent.	Claim	Adequate
cd07798a145e	F74C46C14E72	The presidental election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November, giving the citizens more than enough time to decide if they are happy with the president they have or if they should elect a new one,	Evidence	Adequate
d99d44960dd0	F74C46C14E72	usually there happy with the president they elected which means that the Electoral College process is working	Claim	Ineffective
356545319710	F74C46C14E72	Although the electorla college system is for the voters to vote for a slate of electors to elect the president the citizens still get a say in the election towards there president of choice.	Claim	Adequate
c24754cae9ce	F74C46C14E72	if the citizens could just elect a president from there personal votes then they would probably make the wrong decsion on who to choose, they might be fooled by the flashy ads on tv promising change when in reality, there promises are lies. Thats why having a slate of electors help to vote for a president if so important because they know how to point out there lies and know what there true intentions are	Evidence	Adequate
6ecb40ba9687	F74C46C14E72	Some say that the Electoral College system is 'Unfair' to the people but i strongly disagree. Infact, the Electoral College helper the people choose the right president for our country	Concluding Statement	Adequate
88c06795122d	F77057DAD75B	I think we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.	Position	Adequate
d5700d8f0a78	F77057DAD75B	I have a couple reasons for saying that. First, under the electoral college system, voters don't vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors who ends up voting for the president.	Claim	Effective
ce6bd678605f	F77057DAD75B	Second, you have to worry about the ties in the electoral vote.	Claim	Effective
3dc575d9586e	F77057DAD75B	So that means you actually don't get to vote for the president you want, the electors get to vote for the president they want and their choice might not be the same as yours. Here's an example that was in Source 1, "If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry." So you don't actually get to vote for a president. Also, in source 2, it states that the electoral college is unfair to voters because of how each state has the winner-take-all system, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states.	Evidence	Effective
29655e64b56a	F77057DAD75B	Source 2 states that if a tie happens, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. The senate would choose the vice-president. The state delegations may not vote for the president you want and the senate may not vote for the vice-president you want either.	Evidence	Effective
17495636cd1c	F77057DAD75B	I think the Electoral College process is a bad idea and it should be changed to popular vote for the president of the United States. Electoral college is unfair to voters and I think it should be gotten rid of.	Concluding Statement	Effective
8c2f064a0829	F772E0A3152A	People in the United states have a voice of opinion towards voting,but in the end it is the electoral college that has the final say. To many americans voting is a very important event. The united states is a democracy. A democracy is a form of government where people have the say, The United States does not follow that route because of electoral college. Senator of the United States,	Lead	Effective
57caf09744ff	F772E0A3152A	I ask that you put a stop to the electoral college.	Position	Adequate
0563d4907dd7	F772E0A3152A	First of all, I believe that The United States is a corrupted democracy.	Claim	Adequate
f8efd27d6ad6	F772E0A3152A	The electoral college is a unbeneficial way of voting because they may be bias towards the people, for example, one might know what another so it can be considered as favoritism. In a sense this voting system can be manipulated in ones favor. How the voting system works is considered wrong to many Americans.	Evidence	Ineffective
8c988490c952	F772E0A3152A	Workers in politics such as Richard Nixon or Jimmy Carter also do not believe in the electoral college and they even wanted to get rid of them!	Claim	Adequate
90aa84b1ff02	F772E0A3152A	Most people want to get rid of the electoral college because of the "winner take all' system. If it wasnt for the winner take all system George W. Bush would of never been elected as president while john kerry would've taken the spot. Many politicians believe ingetting rid of the electoral college such as Bob Dole when he said "abolish the electoral college!"	Evidence	Adequate
620964a16b34	F772E0A3152A	In conclusion Senate, Citizens of this country and I believe that we should put an end to the electoral college. Politicians even disagree with the idea of giving specific people to give the final vote. As senator you have the power to put a end to this unconstitutional doing. The United States is a democracy where everyone matters. Because of the electoral college our opinion on who should be elected has been taking away from us. this event is undemocratic and I ask you senator to think this through and take action on making this voting system to a popular voting system	Concluding Statement	Effective
06a71338aefd	F7E8813101B4	Why do we vote? We vote so we can choose a candidate that we can trust to make the best decisions for our country. But what's the point of voting if we have an Electoral College. We are not actually voting to ellect a president, we are voting for electors, who elect the president.	Lead	Effective
af6f6c389df7	F7E8813101B4	The Elecotral College should be shut down	Position	Adequate
13cf96021d50	F7E8813101B4	because everyone should have their right to vote for who they they want to vote for, not have electors do it for them.	Claim	Adequate
ff9837b5738f	F7E8813101B4	"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." This shows that more than half the voters, would rather just vote the president instead of having the Electoral College do it for them	Claim	Effective
4c61d9301194	F7E8813101B4	"This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency." This means that the President who gets the most popular votes is less likely to win over the electors votes. It seems like the electors are never agreeing with people's votes because, usually the popular vote never wins	Evidence	Adequate
f69a4e945aac	F7E8813101B4	But the Electoral College should stay up for certain reasons.	Counterclaim	Effective
cd2cd94f9ea7	F7E8813101B4	"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution."	Evidence	Adequate
8d634970f910	F7E8813101B4	The Electoral College helps with a certain percentage of people who aren't giving the best decisions on the candidate they are choosing.	Evidence	Ineffective
b909c6127d9e	F7E8813101B4	But that still doesn't mean that people shouldn't have their right to vote for who they think is best candidate. It should be the people's decision on who they want to vote for, not the electors. There would be no reason to vote if the people's vote don't really mean anything.	Rebuttal	Adequate
509e7d859e6d	F7E8813101B4	People should have their right to vote for who they think is best. That is why people are given the right to vote. The Electoral College just takes that right away. Presidents who win because of electoral votes, are not fairly chosen because, not many voters agreed on him, the electors did. The candidate that won popular votes, should be President, because most people agree on him and his choices. Let the people's votes count toward presidency.	Concluding Statement	Effective
0e3f39782ec5	F7F9373BAEA4	Today in society we have alot of disagreements on which president should be elected on the day all votes are finally counted and the votes are tallied up to the final result of who is going to be our new president of the United States, but what is our system for doing this? One way is Electoral College, Electoral college is a process consisted of thye selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the votes from congress. So if you think about it we are just electors for electors. This College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 votes can win the election for the President.	Lead	Adequate
a650df9cd2bf	F7F9373BAEA4	Under the Electoral college, voters dont vote for the president, they vote for state electors who in turn elect the president.	Evidence	Adequate
9ee4436c831c	F7F9373BAEA4	There are many veiw points of the Electoral College, but most would decied that its unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions whithout much basis in reality.	Position	Ineffective
e452c9962041	F7F9373BAEA4	People want to have their vocies hear for the country they live in, they want an opinion that matters! You can't have that when someone else is speaking for you...	Evidence	Ineffective
fb3bc9dbc788	F84CB4D0589A	I believe that it would be better to allow students to have their cell phones out during lunch or free time	Position	Adequate
6b4d1f36db02	F84CB4D0589A	because many teenagers think that their cell phone is an extension of their body or something that they need and can not live without	Claim	Ineffective
35899eb05082	F84CB4D0589A	If you let the students have their cell phones out during lunch or free time there would be less problems with someone texting in class.	Claim	Adequate
c5ed9078ee0e	F84CB4D0589A	I think that the reason people are so dependent of their cell phones is because it is a quick and easy way to talk to their friends.	Evidence	Ineffective
e43e5f859ef6	F84CB4D0589A	I think if you do not let them have their cell phones there would be more problems with them texting or calling people in class	Claim	Adequate
0800fad619cd	F84CB4D0589A	because as teenagers we do not like being told what not to do or what to do. So I believe that if you let them use their phones during lunch time or free time but not during class would be a better solution then taking their phones away completely.	Evidence	Adequate
6d15cdc3015a	F84CB4D0589A	granted a cell phone can be very useful during an emergency situation	Counterclaim	Adequate
38be5d59c4e4	F84CB4D0589A	but not during the time your supposed to learn.	Rebuttal	Adequate
6df330f8dfb1	F84CB4D0589A	But there are some drawbacks to allowing students to have their phones is that they may think that it is ok to use their phone during class	Claim	Adequate
5e38dd2e474d	F84CB4D0589A	so i believe that it would be best to put the student's name on the phone and place it in a bin in front of the class so you can know that the student is not texting or calling any one in class while the teacher is talking and you can see to it that they get their phone back after class.	Evidence	Adequate
81b88ff15736	F84CB4D0589A	That is why i believe that it would be wise to allow students to have their phones turned on during lunch or free time as long as the student has the cell phone turned off during class.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
aaa61731e0ec	F86616365497	I am writing to you today on the subject of community service.	Lead	Adequate
b0bb19da1e80	F86616365497	I do not support this requirement, not because i think it is bad, but the time it would take would be too much for some students.	Position	Effective
49f6d5cabcec	F86616365497	Some students are already very busy, and adding community service projects would just make it busier, and harder on them.	Claim	Effective
f0fb3ac64cca	F86616365497	Some students play sports, and have practices every night, others have band rehearsals. On top of all that, they all have homework, putting required community service projects on top of all that would confuse us students, we would have trouble focussing on our academics if we have to worry about getting so many things done.	Evidence	Effective
494d5c7cbdc9	F86616365497	I myself am in many extracurricular activities, i play many sports, i play in the band, and i sing in the choir, i have a sports practice every night, and i have homework to do after that. To me, requiring community service would set me over the limit. I myself am already extremely busy every night, and having to worry about getting my community service projects done would be too much for me to handle.	Evidence	Effective
171447c3c3f8	F86616365497	i also have many friends that play many sports, and other things. We are all very busy already, we barely have enough time now to do even our homework.	Evidence	Effective
00b7a4207582	F86616365497	I cant imagine how crazy my life would be if i had to practice sports every night, practice my musical instrument, and still find time in a week to do community service projects.	Evidence	Effective

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The electoral college has many ways that can help a candidate win the election and it might make things more easier for him/her.

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The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal. This means if the voter is from the south, they have no reason to campaign heavily in those sates. Instead they can spend more time in states that need a little more convincing fot the candidate to gain their vote. It also restores some of the weight in the political balance that a large states loses by virtue of the mal-appotrionment of the Senate decreed in the constitution

Evidence

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Some may say that the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote is something to worry about.

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But the Electoral College avoids the problem of there being a run-off election. If there was no Electoral College, this would put pressure for run-off elections, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, which it invariably produces a clear winner.

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So all in all, the Electoral College should be kept and stay the way it is. It isn't complicated and makes the election run more smoothly. It provides multiple ways for a candidate to win the vote of a certain state and avoids major problem during the election.

Concluding Statement

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I think we should keep the electoral collage

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beacause it has worked this long for us so we know its gonna work so why not keeep it going.

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It keeps a steady stream when it comes time to vote because aslong as someone had 270 votes you know thats who will get picked. so why try changing that and have a whole new system put in and then not know what to do when it comes time to vote. And what if the new system dosent work, what if the new way of the voting process messes with the tallys and they come out wrong and no one will get picked, unlike the other way when u know everything will come out right and u know that we will have a president. I think its fair that they have it set at 270 for voting that way everyone havs a chance to vote instead of it being so low that only a few people get to vote before they shut it down because they have reached there number of tallys that they need. So if they change the number of tallys that a president needs to become president that will be stupid and people will act out on it because they wont think its right, and because the people who didnt vote will not like the fact that they didnt get to put there vote f in before they stoped the voting and because they meet the number that they needed. Its a vote why do they need to title it as a the vote of a president or a popular vote of a president. Why not just vote for there just electors instead of saying vote for your candidate when really you are just voting for the electors. If you are voting for a certin thing there is no reason that u have to re-word it just to vote, if you are voting for something do it the right way instead of changing stuff and making it seem one way when really its the other way. Why should the electoral get just as much as the winning presindent? They are not doing as much as the president and who is helping him out.. so they should not get the same reword.

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Driverless Cars is becoming the most advanced invention the world right now. The new project that every car company is producing is trying to find a way that there could be less accidents if a car is driving itself than the driver.

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Many have suggested this idea to go on. It would be good for the safety of the people on the roads.

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Imagine all this cars driving on their own while the person can enjoy doing something else. This is what a producer or a person thinks of during a car like this made. In this state, many companies have made programs for the cars to drive on their own when nothing bad is going on. When an accident happens,the car will alert the driver or get its attention the driver must drive becasue the car isn't programed to do that yet.

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There would be less accidents when driverless cars than the actually driver.

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In most cases most of them are depending on the law and if these cars are sent out without any law for those types of cars, people could sue the company. Thats why google has a few just in case if anything happens like that cause. Thats why they wait and see what could hurt the law and what doesnt hurt the law. The big question is if technology fails and someone gets injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?

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In result of this big idea these cars will not come out depending on the company. The first one would be from tesla that can drive 90 percent of the time with autopilot. Other car companies plan to have these types of cars around by the year of 2020. Everyday something new has been made or to the world. We get closer each and everyday to a destination of new product.

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The face on mars is most known as a alien creation , however people don't know if its a natural landform or a alien creation. People who would actually try to look in to it to find facts if its a alien creation or a natural landform.

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People don't always think that creations like that can be made by a natural landform

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If you see in the article "Unmasking the Face on Mars" they give ecidence showing that the face on mars was actually a natural landform.

Claim

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It states " A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see . The caption noted a "huge rock formation ... which resembles a human head," The qoute is saying that when they out the image closer it looks like a human head made by rocks "

Evidence

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"The image first appeared on a JPL website, reavealing ... a natural landform , there was no alien monment after all." According to the article "Unmasking the Face on Mars". This qoute is saying real evidence that there was no alien monument the face on mars was a natural landform.

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Although few scientists believe the face was an alien artifact, a scientist named Jim Garvin proved them wrong by saying "What the picture is actually showing is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms comman around the Amercian West." Scientists Garvin is proving that the face was a nautral landform.

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I Think that no matter if you are taking online classes, or going to school, you always going to graduate you can loarn alot if you'r taking online classes.

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Like if i were on the position of taking online classes, because im working and i don't have that much time i would loved to study when ever i could.

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For Example: some people that are here in the United States they have to go to school and work after school, and they got to pay rent, send money to their families back in there Contries. For Example: Some of the people don't have someone that can take them to school and the school is far away that the buses can not go all the way to their homes. For Example: There are some kids that don't go to school, having the school next to them, but there's alot of people out here thet would love to go to school or even take online classes but they can't because some of them are always working, some of them even have two jobs. For Example: My mom wouold loved to take online classes at less but she can't because she has to work in the very morning like at 7 am, and she comes back like at one she cleans the house and then like at 3pm she goes to her other job and she gets out like at 11:30 pm so she doesn't have time but she would love if she could do it. For Example: My dad he's going all the way to DC for school because he is taking classes for duster he pays each moth and my dad works to in countruction but weekends she goes to DC the classes start like at 10 and they end like at 1, if you like someting work hard for what you like. For Example: I have a friend that he takes online he work's everyday, he takes his computer to his work so when he's on break runs to the computer and he starts school online like that someone that wants to progress in this country.

Evidence

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The freedom to make a hot cup of coffee while writing a book report, or watch a television series while doing math, undoubtedly sparks feelings of content among students. Throughout the country, some schools have worked to make this a reality, offering students the option of 'distance learning', which is a means by which students can take classes from home through online or video conferencing. In the 21st century, technological development is playing an increasingly larger role in several aspects of society, including educational institutions. The question of how and to what extent these innovations should be integrated serves as a subject for debate

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Distance learning should not be an option for all students

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as it does not induce the same motivation as does a classroom setting,

Claim

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it creates the possibility for students to take advantage of the freedom,

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students would not be given the chance to develop certain social skills necessary for their success in the real world.

Claim

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One's home is, oftentimes, an environment which establishes a sense of comfort. This setting, compared to a classroom, removes the aspect of healthy competition among students and inhibits a student's drive to accomplish tasks through peer-to-peer interactions.

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For example, to the student at home, his or her own grade is the highest, as it is the only point of comparison for him or her. However, at school, academic competition among peers allows for students to push themselves outside of their comfort zone, achieving their highest potentials. Additionally, the motivation of a student who takes classes from home is less than that of a student in a classroom as students at school are more exposed to the opportunities that other students have taken advantage of, such as sports and extracurriculars. This allows a student in school become motivated to simply engage in more activities and accomplish more in his or her fields of interest. The interaction that school promotes creates motivation among students and allows them to engage in healthy competition, while accomplishments more in their academic career.

Evidence

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Beyond this, distance learning allows for students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, which undeniably serve as a distraction to their academics.

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For example, at home, a student may be tempted to watch television, or take a nap as there is no teacher or administrator to effectively enforce certain rules and guidelines on the student. This situation makes a student's ability to stay on task extremely difficult, hence negatively impacting that student's success academically. However, if the student were taking classes at school, they are required, by the teacher, to focus on the lesson and complete tasks in a timely manner for their grade. Taking classes at home allows a student to procrastinate their assignments, with no tangible consequence. Because of this, distance learning allows students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, which, in the long run, has a unfavorable effect on that student's academic success.

Evidence

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Furthermore, taking classes at home hinders students' development of social skills, which are beneficial to the success of individuals in the real world.

Claim

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For example, students at school are frequently required to make presentations and connect with other students for group projects. At school, students can also ask their peers for help or advice on assignments. These opportunities at school sculpt a student's ability to develop imperative inter-personal skills, while promoting sociable behavior among students. Through distance learning, however, a student is not exposed to these situations; therefore, they are unable to make the same connections and develop these skills necessary for college or the real-life situations.

Evidence

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Although supporters of distance learning may argue against this point by claiming that taking classes at home could be made a possibility for younger students in elementary school as they are generally not required to give presentations,

Counterclaim

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this claim is unsupported as several important social skills are developed at a very young age, according to several studies regarding brain connections. Through distance learning, a student is unexposed to opportunities for developing integral social skills, which are necessary for his or her success in the future.

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Distance learning, the concept of making at-home classes an option for students, is unsupported due to the fact that it does not promote the same motivation as a classroom, allows students to take advantage of their freedoms at home, and does not allow student's to develop their interpersonal skills. These factors would negatively influence a student's academic success, which is irrefutably counter-intuitive to the intended purpose of educational institutions.

Concluding Statement

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I think it is a brilliant idea for us the students, to take on a opportunity to help out by doing community service

Position

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. I think it is brilliant because it would be like a win-win situation where it benefits both the community and us.

Claim

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If everybody gets a chance to help out the community I think we should take it! It would be great doing something to give back to our community seeing that not many people are interested in helping out.

Evidence

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Not only will the environment become a safer place to live in but, it will also become a healthier place.

Claim

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What would happen if after a while no one took care of our community? For an example It's like taking care of your room, what if one day you decided not to put things in there proper places and just threw things anywhere and left it untidy? It might begin to smell, or you might even discover things missing. So taking care of our community is like taking care of own self. Doing this could be a really good deed, giving back to the community to make it a healthier place. For example, maybe we can go 2-3 times a week picking up trash, even just starting with our own football field.

Evidence

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you should really think about this and decide to take part in it because it would make our community better and cleaner and it

Concluding Statement

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The Electoral College is a process not a place.

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There's nothing wrong wit people voting for the president

Position

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Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO, in their time , agreed on? Abolishing the electoral college. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Who picks the electors? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central comittee, sometimes the presidentail canidates themselves. Voters can't controls whom their electors vote for. Well not always .Voters sometimes get very confused about the votes in vote for the wrong canidate. The best arguement against the electoral college is called Disater Factor. The Americans should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in a century. Back in 1960, segregations in Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratics with new electors that would oppose John F. Kennedy. The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the canidates who recieve the most votes. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, it happened in 2000, but it's less likely than a dispute over popular vote. The Electoral College requires a presidential Canidate to have trans-regional appeal. No other region ( South, Northwest, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes. The electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For an example, nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes.

Evidence

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I understand there has been some contreversy between keeping or changing the Electoral College by popular vote for the president of the United States

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But We need to Keep the Electoral College

Position

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First things first, the Electoral College is a process,not a place. Also it consists of 538 electors but a majority of electoral votes needs to be 270 votes in order to elect a president. So each Canident has a 50/50 chance of winning or losing. The elctors are chosen by the political parties, which i can see how people would have a problem with that,bu

Evidence

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if they dodnt choose the canadents for us we probably would even know which person to elect as a canadent.

Claim

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The presidental election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November, giving the citizens more than enough time to decide if they are happy with the president they have or if they should elect a new one,

Evidence

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usually there happy with the president they elected which means that the Electoral College process is working

Claim

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Although the electorla college system is for the voters to vote for a slate of electors to elect the president the citizens still get a say in the election towards there president of choice.

Claim

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if the citizens could just elect a president from there personal votes then they would probably make the wrong decsion on who to choose, they might be fooled by the flashy ads on tv promising change when in reality, there promises are lies. Thats why having a slate of electors help to vote for a president if so important because they know how to point out there lies and know what there true intentions are

Evidence

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Some say that the Electoral College system is 'Unfair' to the people but i strongly disagree. Infact, the Electoral College helper the people choose the right president for our country

Concluding Statement

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I think we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.

Position

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I have a couple reasons for saying that. First, under the electoral college system, voters don't vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors who ends up voting for the president.

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Second, you have to worry about the ties in the electoral vote.

Claim

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So that means you actually don't get to vote for the president you want, the electors get to vote for the president they want and their choice might not be the same as yours. Here's an example that was in Source 1, "If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry." So you don't actually get to vote for a president. Also, in source 2, it states that the electoral college is unfair to voters because of how each state has the winner-take-all system, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states.

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Source 2 states that if a tie happens, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. The senate would choose the vice-president. The state delegations may not vote for the president you want and the senate may not vote for the vice-president you want either.

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I think the Electoral College process is a bad idea and it should be changed to popular vote for the president of the United States. Electoral college is unfair to voters and I think it should be gotten rid of.

Concluding Statement

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People in the United states have a voice of opinion towards voting,but in the end it is the electoral college that has the final say. To many americans voting is a very important event. The united states is a democracy. A democracy is a form of government where people have the say, The United States does not follow that route because of electoral college. Senator of the United States,

Lead

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I ask that you put a stop to the electoral college.

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First of all, I believe that The United States is a corrupted democracy.

Claim

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The electoral college is a unbeneficial way of voting because they may be bias towards the people, for example, one might know what another so it can be considered as favoritism. In a sense this voting system can be manipulated in ones favor. How the voting system works is considered wrong to many Americans.

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Workers in politics such as Richard Nixon or Jimmy Carter also do not believe in the electoral college and they even wanted to get rid of them!

Claim

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Most people want to get rid of the electoral college because of the "winner take all' system. If it wasnt for the winner take all system George W. Bush would of never been elected as president while john kerry would've taken the spot. Many politicians believe ingetting rid of the electoral college such as Bob Dole when he said "abolish the electoral college!"

Evidence

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In conclusion Senate, Citizens of this country and I believe that we should put an end to the electoral college. Politicians even disagree with the idea of giving specific people to give the final vote. As senator you have the power to put a end to this unconstitutional doing. The United States is a democracy where everyone matters. Because of the electoral college our opinion on who should be elected has been taking away from us. this event is undemocratic and I ask you senator to think this through and take action on making this voting system to a popular voting system

Concluding Statement

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Why do we vote? We vote so we can choose a candidate that we can trust to make the best decisions for our country. But what's the point of voting if we have an Electoral College. We are not actually voting to ellect a president, we are voting for electors, who elect the president.

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The Elecotral College should be shut down

Position

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because everyone should have their right to vote for who they they want to vote for, not have electors do it for them.

Claim

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"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." This shows that more than half the voters, would rather just vote the president instead of having the Electoral College do it for them

Claim

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"This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency." This means that the President who gets the most popular votes is less likely to win over the electors votes. It seems like the electors are never agreeing with people's votes because, usually the popular vote never wins

Evidence

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But the Electoral College should stay up for certain reasons.

Counterclaim

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"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution."

Evidence

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The Electoral College helps with a certain percentage of people who aren't giving the best decisions on the candidate they are choosing.

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But that still doesn't mean that people shouldn't have their right to vote for who they think is best candidate. It should be the people's decision on who they want to vote for, not the electors. There would be no reason to vote if the people's vote don't really mean anything.

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People should have their right to vote for who they think is best. That is why people are given the right to vote. The Electoral College just takes that right away. Presidents who win because of electoral votes, are not fairly chosen because, not many voters agreed on him, the electors did. The candidate that won popular votes, should be President, because most people agree on him and his choices. Let the people's votes count toward presidency.

Concluding Statement

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Today in society we have alot of disagreements on which president should be elected on the day all votes are finally counted and the votes are tallied up to the final result of who is going to be our new president of the United States, but what is our system for doing this? One way is Electoral College, Electoral college is a process consisted of thye selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the votes from congress. So if you think about it we are just electors for electors. This College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 votes can win the election for the President.

Lead

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Under the Electoral college, voters dont vote for the president, they vote for state electors who in turn elect the president.

Evidence

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There are many veiw points of the Electoral College, but most would decied that its unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions whithout much basis in reality.

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People want to have their vocies hear for the country they live in, they want an opinion that matters! You can't have that when someone else is speaking for you...

Evidence

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I believe that it would be better to allow students to have their cell phones out during lunch or free time

Position

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because many teenagers think that their cell phone is an extension of their body or something that they need and can not live without

Claim

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If you let the students have their cell phones out during lunch or free time there would be less problems with someone texting in class.

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I think that the reason people are so dependent of their cell phones is because it is a quick and easy way to talk to their friends.

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I think if you do not let them have their cell phones there would be more problems with them texting or calling people in class

Claim

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because as teenagers we do not like being told what not to do or what to do. So I believe that if you let them use their phones during lunch time or free time but not during class would be a better solution then taking their phones away completely.

Evidence

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granted a cell phone can be very useful during an emergency situation

Counterclaim

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but not during the time your supposed to learn.

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But there are some drawbacks to allowing students to have their phones is that they may think that it is ok to use their phone during class

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so i believe that it would be best to put the student's name on the phone and place it in a bin in front of the class so you can know that the student is not texting or calling any one in class while the teacher is talking and you can see to it that they get their phone back after class.

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That is why i believe that it would be wise to allow students to have their phones turned on during lunch or free time as long as the student has the cell phone turned off during class.

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I am writing to you today on the subject of community service.

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I do not support this requirement, not because i think it is bad, but the time it would take would be too much for some students.

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Some students are already very busy, and adding community service projects would just make it busier, and harder on them.

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Some students play sports, and have practices every night, others have band rehearsals. On top of all that, they all have homework, putting required community service projects on top of all that would confuse us students, we would have trouble focussing on our academics if we have to worry about getting so many things done.

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I myself am in many extracurricular activities, i play many sports, i play in the band, and i sing in the choir, i have a sports practice every night, and i have homework to do after that. To me, requiring community service would set me over the limit. I myself am already extremely busy every night, and having to worry about getting my community service projects done would be too much for me to handle.

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i also have many friends that play many sports, and other things. We are all very busy already, we barely have enough time now to do even our homework.

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I cant imagine how crazy my life would be if i had to practice sports every night, practice my musical instrument, and still find time in a week to do community service projects.

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