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018532bfc4f8 | 6060D28C05B6 | If they get classes at home they don't learning. | Position | Adequate |
feb7b1f1c4e7 | 6060D28C05B6 | Some Schools offter distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ce79f6940c3e | 6060D28C05B6 | students get distract at home. | Claim | Adequate |
973ba0bfc54e | 6060D28C05B6 | Students get fall in environment learning. | Claim | Adequate |
f8be32cce58e | 6060D28C05B6 | Students feel more pressure at home. But students can get relaxing at home. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9bb7af23ee90 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students can get distract at home because they have easy to use phones. | Claim | Adequate |
0100deb4dc54 | 6060D28C05B6 | They feel more bored at home because they need stay at home more time. Also students don't do anything at home because if they stay at home is esay to get more distract. If students sleep in class they want to sleep at home too. Many students work and they would tired and they don't want to learn.
Students don't pay attention in class they too don't pay attention at home because is more hard. Also they want to listening to music or play. | Evidence | Adequate |
3e22be6ff3c7 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students fall in environment learning because they learn at class when the teacher explain if students attend classes from home by online is hard they learn. | Claim | Adequate |
72fa3f155858 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students can ncreased to learn at home. Also is more hard to students understand by online. Also many students have hard time in class to understand that teacher explain in more hard they learn at home. | Evidence | Adequate |
9eceae011a3e | 6060D28C05B6 | Some schools affter classes from home because they think is good option to students. Also students can stay more relaxing from home. Students have more time to do homework. Also they feel more comfortable at home. Also they feel safe at home with their family. Also student sleep more and stay with more energy to receive the class by online. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8edc8865d746 | 6060D28C05B6 | But students get more distract stay near the family and they don't want to pay attention. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
80656e85752f | 6060D28C05B6 | Conclude if students get classes from home by online they don't want to pay attention because is more easy they get distract. Also they don't want to learn by online. Students can get fall in environment learning and is hard they learn at home. Also they want to play or use phone and not is good option to students get class at home they get distration and decrease to learning. Also students get frustration in class because they don't understand but if they get classes in online they don't learning too because is more hard they learning from home. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b7edc825407e | 6183574CA5FC | When you need advice who do you go to? Do you go to your mom, dad, family, friend or do you got to more than one? | Lead | Adequate |
5d917f66974e | 6183574CA5FC | Most people when they need advice they ask more than one person. | Position | Adequate |
11bc8afadfaa | 6183574CA5FC | get more opinions | Claim | Ineffective |
0a7e3bd7d3d0 | 6183574CA5FC | makes then think about what they are doing | Claim | Ineffective |
a5325845fbff | 6183574CA5FC | helps decide what to do. | Claim | Ineffective |
94f90fe95923 | 6183574CA5FC | Getting more than one opinion is very helpful | Claim | Adequate |
caa970ed4f34 | 6183574CA5FC | Someone may say something and the other another may say something way different. It shows different things to do in situations. With more than one opinion it shows the pros and cons about what your asking. Asking a lot of people for advice it very helpful so you can get more ideas and choices about what your going to do. | Evidence | Adequate |
79b31a9ed511 | 6183574CA5FC | It also makes you think | Claim | Adequate |
eca81b9f5b09 | 6183574CA5FC | Lets say you need to choice what career you wanted to do and you wanted to be either a nurse or a doctor. One person may say you should be a doctor because you will earn more money but another may say the opposite. They may say to become a nurse because later if you wanted to become a doctor you could go back to school and become a doctor. With those opinion it makes you think about the importance of what your going to do.
| Evidence | Adequate |
25fa94464b34 | 6183574CA5FC | it helps you decide what to do in situations | Claim | Adequate |
c3d4a7e025cb | 6183574CA5FC | Since you person can say one someone else another. Lets take the career choice example since one person said to become a doctor and the other a nurse. With those opinion it helps you decide what to do. You could become a nurse then see if you like the job or if not then you could go back to school and get your education to become a doctor. | Evidence | Adequate |
837115d38a65 | 6183574CA5FC | When asking for advice it is helpful to ask more than one person. Getting more than one opinion, thinking about it, and what to do are very helpful when you ask for advice from people. It makes things easier if you get more advice. The more people you ask the better because it will open up to choices you have may not realized existed. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6273f508a079 | 62FC97D29846 | Would students benefit from taking online classes from home?
Modern technology has made tremendous leaps of growth in the past two decades, regarding accessibility to class work and instruction over the Internet. Within school systems, controversy has emerged over whether students would benefit from being able to attend school from home, through an online program or video-conference calls. | Lead | Effective |
0b6203683a7e | 62FC97D29846 | Although some view online classes as a source of increased procrastination and growth of anti-social tendencies | Counterclaim | Adequate |
eb230125f1aa | 62FC97D29846 | online classes would effectively help students | Position | Adequate |
53a42b6f45aa | 62FC97D29846 | to reduce stress, | Claim | Adequate |
28afbd8f3add | 62FC97D29846 | allow them to also prioritize hobbies and passions | Claim | Adequate |
705666408d7b | 62FC97D29846 | as well as compel the students to develop skills and traits to succeed.
| Claim | Effective |
8cb9108f4abf | 62FC97D29846 | Ability for students to take online courses would firstly, help students reduce their stress and academic burdens. | Claim | Adequate |
c9441c833591 | 62FC97D29846 | High school students must wake up quite early in the morning (typically before dawn), prepare for school, and drive through several minutes of traffic to arrive early: just to sit in various classrooms for ninety minutes at a time, completing classwork and receiving additional homework. How much more convenient it would be for some students to wake up whenever their body indicates it is adequately rested, get a healthy meal for breakfast, and work at their own pace in the comfort of their home. Such a relaxed schedule would be beneficial, especially for senior students in high school. Throughout the year, their minds are focused on completing college applications, applying for financial aid, sending in SAT scores and college transcripts. Taking online courses from home would allow those students to attend to their other responsibilities and manage classwork at their own convenience. In addition, some students, unfortunately, get bullied in school by their classmates. Studying at home would allow victims of bullying to be in their safe haven, away from those who oppress them and ridicule them for being different. Often times, high school students worry that colleges would view their decision to take online classes as lazy or careless, however, I have heard that colleges value how challenging the class is, the effort put in, and how well-rounded the student is. Furthermore, enrolling in online courses would improve the mental and physical health of students. | Evidence | Effective |
fba1e3cd0477 | 62FC97D29846 | Additionally, students would benefit form being able to attend school classes from home because it allows them to also prioritize their hobbies, passions and fulfill duties for the family. | Claim | Effective |
93fa7d0df644 | 62FC97D29846 | In the novel,
Educated, by Tara Westover, Tara's family did not allow her to go to public schools that were endorsed by the government. Instead, Tara was home schooled, inconsistently, by her mother, through her middle school years; but she primarily worked with her brothers and father in a junkyard. Westover and her family lived a simple, somewhat poor lifestyle in the mountains of Utah. Some families suffer from the same burdens and need their children to work on the farm or in the shop with them. Rather than quitting school altogether, the children could take online courses to receive the education required to build a better life for themselves, while at the same time, helping their family.
In the same way, not only would online courses allow students to fulfill duties to the family, such as working, students can also prioritize their hobbies and ambitions;. For example, in this generation, common teenagers gain fame and fortune from becoming social media influencers. This requires them to travel for meet and greets with fans, have tours, always take pictures, make videos and advertise products. Additionally, some athletes are apart of extremely competitive travel teams that require them to travel often for tournaments and competitions. Such extracurricular activities should not be given up because it interferes with school. Those activities are the passions and hobbies of some individuals and online schooling would allow them to get their education and participate in events they love.
| Evidence | Effective |
e234761c35d1 | 62FC97D29846 | Lastly, online schooling would compel students to develop valuable traits and skills. | Claim | Effective |
9f70ec3269f0 | 62FC97D29846 | Taking online courses is different from physically going into school buildings because in the buildings, students sit at a desk and are instructed by a teacher, versus, online classes require communication via email or conference call. As a result of this, online students must develop initiative and independence. They cannot rely on constant reminders from teaches and classmates about when assignments are due, additionally, because they have the freedom to complete assignments at any time prior to the due date, they must have time management skills so not all tasks are left undone until the last minute. The students must also acquire mental and emotional strength, as they will always be studying alone in their homes without the comfort of their peers. When the students learn to acquire these traits, success in their online courses and beyond would be inevitable. | Evidence | Effective |
5da670d33c77 | 62FC97D29846 | In conclusion, there are many benefits from being able to attend school classes from home through online school or video conference calls. Some examples include: reduced stress, ability to fulfill other responsibilities and prioritize hobbies, and finally, develop valuable skills that will assist with success in the online course and life after high school. Generic_School is very aware of the damage some students suffered from because they were compelled to attend school away from home, so they instituted the Hybrid Program and Virtual Generic_School, which allows the students to take either all their classes from the comfort of their home, or just a few so they take a few courses in the building and others at home. This gives the students the power to control their schedules and make their high school experience and academic load less stressful. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
fa989d35fd2a | 6348F3FAB2F4 | Needing help with a issue is a common problem that people often come across. Whether it is needing help with a relationship or just advice on what book to check out at the library, people often come to their peers and colleges for advice. Usually, people just come to one person for advice. Most this so that they can receive the most clean cut answer possible. However, this is not always the best option | Lead | Effective |
e24a81e66892 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | Asking multiple people for advice on the same problem can result in a better made choice | Position | Adequate |
ae75b3cc16d5 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | they will be more informed on the possible solutions to their issue, | Claim | Adequate |
1238fcf2d75e | 6348F3FAB2F4 | they are more likely to receive an unbiased opinion on the subject if they ask multiple people.
| Claim | Adequate |
83878b8ae31b | 6348F3FAB2F4 | When making a decision, having more information on all the possible solutions can allow for a more logical and precise solution. | Claim | Effective |
c9401a331adf | 6348F3FAB2F4 | The way most people collect this information is through other people. However, it is very common for people to listen to only one persons solution. They believe that you can get a more concise solution by doing this. Although this may be true, getting multiple solutions from multiple people gives you more information on the topic. One example for this would be receiving relationship advice from one friend verses multiple friends. On one side, asking one friend for help may result a good solution to the problem as it is more clear and simple and is not as complicated compared to receiving many different answers. On the other side however, getting one solution dose not allow for a compare and contrast of possible solutions through pros and cons, and does not give you all the information about the subject. This example shows that having one solution does not always allow for the best solution because most of the time you are not receiving all the information on the subject and arent able to compare and contrast solutions.
| Evidence | Effective |
ef26fa10d3f4 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | When asking for advice, unbiased opinions can result in a much better solutions. | Claim | Effective |
df4f2a89a05f | 6348F3FAB2F4 | This is because when you receive biased opinions and advice, the information you are receiving is often not as factual and more from the heart of what the person you are asking believes. This is why when asking only one person, you are more likely to find someone who is very biased. On the other hand, when you ask more than one person for the same advice, the odds are higher that you come across someone who is unbiased, and has probably done some research on the topic. An example that would show this is voting for an elected official using one persons advice verses voting an elected official using multiple peoples advice. On one side, using one persons advice can result in a much more simpler reason to vote for a official. This also allows for a lot less stressful voting process as you do not have to compare different candidates. However, using multiple people means it is more likely that you will get more unbiased results. This also means that you can kind of figure out what the general "popular vote" is, or in other words, what the general majority of people are voting. This example shows that asking one person for a solution does not always allow for the best solution because most of the time, you are not receiving unbiased opinions unless you ask multiple people. | Evidence | Effective |
5053b630a08f | 6348F3FAB2F4 |
Asking multiple people for advice allows for better made choices because they will have most of the information needed to make a decision, and asking multiple people will result in a higher probability to find someone that is unbiased. When trying to get the best choice for a solution asking multiple people can allow for your decision to be unbiased, informed, and the overall most common choice. Remember, the best choice can always be backed up by others. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
fa220ce7e57e | 63AFEF7824B1 | When people look to others for advice, it is because they cannot think of what to do themselves or they don't trust themselves enough to make good decisions on their own. | Claim | Effective |
9e4daea0643e | 63AFEF7824B1 | Some people find it good to have an outsider's perspective, so they can see the situation from a different viewpoint | Claim | Effective |
3dcde6cc9627 | 63AFEF7824B1 | They also like to ask others what they would do in that situation, because everyone handles things differently | Claim | Effective |
8c9b698fa34b | 63AFEF7824B1 | Occasionally people have gone through a similar situation, which often makes them knowledgeable on what to do. | Claim | Effective |
994159f29d3d | 63AFEF7824B1 | There are many ways to handle situations, but when in need of help you should confide in others for the best advice on how to make a better decision. | Position | Effective |
ac2f05895a32 | 63AFEF7824B1 | In an argument people tend to be very blindsided and naive, because they always think they are in the right. However there are always two sides to every story, and other people can help you see both. Many times you don't understand what someone else might be going through and it is always good for someone to humble you every now and then to make you understand others. Whenever something is going wrong, it's necessary to understand it ask someone else what they think by viewing all sides or the problem. | Evidence | Effective |
fe286f3f6f5c | 63AFEF7824B1 | Most people are either passive aggressive or just aggressive and this can change the way they do things. With my problems I tend to be more passive aggressive, because I don't like arguments or confrontation, but most of my friends are the opposite. In times where I would normally not do anything until it becomes a big mess, my friends would already haven confronted the situation a long time ago. That was some reasons why asking others what they would do can help you come up with what you should decide. | Evidence | Adequate |
4ffe0e77e570 | 63AFEF7824B1 | For example, when you need that push to do something you're scared of they can help you with that. When they tell you it went well for them, it helps you to follow in their footsteps. If there was a problem in their past experience they can warn you not to do that. One example might be that a girl dated this horrible guy who cheated on her, and she sees him with another girl so she talks to the the girl and warns the girl about what happened to her. Asking a person about their past experiences is one of the best ways to figure out what is right for you to decide.
| Evidence | Adequate |
202c8abd1a59 | 63AFEF7824B1 | The saying that other people show the best in you can be used when talking about giving advice, because people can show you new ways to see something or tell you something that you didnt know. Friends can show you the situation you are in from all different angles and not just the one you are stuck in. They can also tell you what they would do in your shoes, or how they would handle your position. Past experiences can change a persons perspective of their life so they don't make the same mistake twice, but they can also help others to not make the mistake at all. In conclusion, there are many ways others can help you for advice like sharing their past, saying what they would do, and showing you all perspectives. Everything talked about in this essay can help you come to your conclusion on what is best for you. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
0e6cad86c38e | 651CE6F22A06 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by online classes or video conferencing. | Lead | Adequate |
41576dddc9f2 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's can benefit more from an online class. | Position | Adequate |
615377cc124c | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes are good because you will have a greater chance of learning | Claim | Adequate |
10433c50074c | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes is a choice for some student's that attend school or an college | Claim | Ineffective |
f39a14edbecd | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes is a good plan for people who can't pay attention in class. | Claim | Adequate |
5b01856b1223 | 651CE6F22A06 | Some good things about online classes you can get on when you want you can be out of town and still have the option to get on | Claim | Adequate |
adbe45b1ebb8 | 651CE6F22A06 | In an online class students might have a chance of learning faster. Online class are good for student's that are shy or can't speak. There are difference reasons why student's use online classes. If you take an online class you can do difference actives all day. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e79683d32712 | 651CE6F22A06 | Here some reasons why student's will take school over online or video conferencing classes. Student's won't be able to play on one of the school's sports team | Counterclaim | Adequate |
597a935ee0b4 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's won't be able to do after school clubs or the band. You won't have the big welcome on the first day of school. You won't be able to go to the school games and cheer for your school you won't have fun like the student's that are in school. | Evidence | Adequate |
f067b05a1927 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's that take an online class I can call them smarter than me | Claim | Ineffective |
5c9a154b0a24 | 651CE6F22A06 | I feel like if you take an online class you have a greater chance of pasting to the next grade than me. I have an good and bad response to online classes. In an online class you have no consequences like student's in school have. Online classes is unique because you do what you want when you want. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c724e6ad4bea | 651CE6F22A06 | In conclusion if your online or in school your still learning and that's all that matter. Online and video conferencing and school are all the same your just learning in a difference manner. Some say that you can learn faster in an online class and some say difference. People say that online class are for college student's than grade school students. The only thing I can say is that you do what's good for you. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3624d39b777c | 669954011A4C | Do you think attending class online from home will benefit you and your studies? My sister took a class online that was required for her to graduate. She rushed through it and it was a huge waste of time. Therefore she didn't gain any knowledge. It would've been more beneficial if she took the class in school with a teacher in the same room as her with more instruction. | Lead | Effective |
326ed9c34375 | 669954011A4C | Attending a class online at home can prevent you | Position | Effective |
7ac9370e6b72 | 669954011A4C | learning your social skills | Claim | Effective |
6cda47f2f1e4 | 669954011A4C | participating with hands on work, | Claim | Effective |
42b5f793b8ec | 669954011A4C | learning time management skills. | Claim | Effective |
83b63e7cff85 | 669954011A4C | School is a very important part to peoples life. Not only the learning aspect is important, but also the social aspect. | Claim | Effective |
7b5151fa4b97 | 669954011A4C | You meet new people,not only in the beginning but also at the very end. You form relationships with others and get to make so many memories. I met my best friend in first grade and she is still my best friend. Her name is Generic_Name. She has introduced me to so many other people and has got me out of my comfort zone. My favorite part about the friendship is the memories we have made, the trust we gained, and the respect we have for each other. She has made me a better person and has opened up my eyes to be able to accept others no matter what they look like or how they feel on the inside. | Evidence | Effective |
5b128b39e244 | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that you can make a best friend with the people you go to church with, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3e789d6ee8be | 669954011A4C | however you don't necessarily get to see them everyday which can lead to not communicating to them and loosing the bond you have with that person. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
cfa35b7138fd | 669954011A4C | I have made so many other friends through my Abby and we have such a strong bond with all of us its hard to break. I get so exited to wake up early and go to school just see my best friends, which always makes my day better. If I were to attend class online I wouldn't be the person I am today. | Evidence | Effective |
34e8cf83c3e6 | 669954011A4C | Participating with hands on work and instructions by a teacher is important to students learning abilities. | Claim | Effective |
ecd4eb20ef46 | 669954011A4C | Their job as a teacher is to inform you about the information your presented with, and be able explain it to you the best way possible. Therefore, you can retain it and be able to apply it when it comes into play. I was in my 7th grade science class on a Monday. The week before I took a test on the biology of a spider. I didn't learn anything about it because I was sick and wasn't present in the class for the lesson and instruction given by my teacher. I missed a whole week and in the week my teacher gave out ways to help remember the information about the spiders life. I struggled so much on the test and didn't perform well. My teacher gave me the opportunity to retake it. I stayed after school and took notes while she presented me with details and ways to remember the steps of the spiders biology. That night I went home and re wrote my notes out until I can remember all the information she taught me. I took the test. Later, I found out I scored perfect on it. Im a visual learner and have to be present in class to be able to comprehend what I learn. I have to write everything down or drawl it out so my brain will be able to remember the information. If I don't remember the information on a specific test I have coming up, I can go back into my notes I wrote and re-write it out so I see the words again and again which helps my brain remember it better.
| Evidence | Effective |
110a9443e1bc | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that, getting instruction by teachers is a waste of time, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d85c4d4d6f96 | 669954011A4C | however it helps students find clarity in the information they are presented with, which they are required to learn and know it. Its harder to learn over a screen and be able to retain the information that is just presented to you without explanation. | Rebuttal | Effective |
093e282641c7 | 669954011A4C |
Being able to managing your time with school work now is a very important tool you will also need for later in life. | Claim | Effective |
2cbd464e02aa | 669954011A4C | Being on top of your school work means being able to complete it and turning it in on time. My friend attended school online from 1st-8th grade. When she got to high school she didn't know how much time she should give her self to get all her work done. She struggled with it and ended up failing all her classes her first 2 years of high school. She was so distracted by other things while she was doing her work, likewise, she never completed the work that she needed to get done and ended up not turning the work in. The summer going into her junior year she was depressed but also was very stressed. She ended up committing suicide and it was very hard for me as well as a lot of people to comprehend. A lot of students have a hard time with this task because you have to plan it out and go step by step through the process, but also giving your self enough extra time just in case you dont get it done within that period of time. Its a hard task to map out due to peoples distractions happening internally or externally in their lives. | Evidence | Effective |
ae6bd0b62217 | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that you would dont need to manage your time because it won't effect your school life | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8911714615f2 | 669954011A4C | however, managing your time is such a helpful tool that will help you become a successful person not only in your academic life but also your work life when your older. With attending classes online could prevent you from learning how to manage your work and can significantly effect your mental health. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
f66d7cae7024 | 669954011A4C | Its important for you to attend class in a school environment for you to get the best education. It can also help set you up to be successful, become the best person you can be, and to learn tools that can help you later in life. In the past, students haven't obtained much information while attending online class and puts them below average. That effects their life in a negative way and adds a lot of stress into their lives. Students could be more involved with work and enjoy school if they attended school on a regular. If we get ride of students attending online classes it will help students become a more out going person, learn the task that will help their life be more successful, and teach them the best way they learn. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a0bf8e555ddd | 6867D67B3444 |
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to experience school from home? So many things have happened over the years in schools that have caused changes from receiving healthier food at school, to getting better technology. But the one thing that has definitely impacted school today is online classes. Online classes are something that if you asked people to view their thoughts on the subject, their opinions would be split. | Lead | Adequate |
697af2e0ff5c | 6867D67B3444 | Online Classes would be bad for students | Position | Effective |
39c0e7fa590d | 6867D67B3444 | it provides the student with more distractions, | Claim | Effective |
ea610f826ac1 | 6867D67B3444 | they do not receive much hands-on experience or practice | Claim | Effective |
6924d1f23cc1 | 6867D67B3444 | it prevents them from getting the true school experience. | Claim | Effective |
6cf9b2713142 | 6867D67B3444 | The first reason why students should not take online classes, is that it causes room for distractions. | Claim | Effective |
6977a1bc52db | 6867D67B3444 | In the modern world today, there are many things that could distract students such as electronics, pets, noises, etc. Imagine trying to work on a paper and all of a sudden the cat jumps up on the table and knocks over the diet cola that was sitting in a cup on the table; you would not only have to get up and clean the mess, but you would also have to move the cat elsewhere taking up precious time that could be spent working on an assignment. With online classes, everything is done at home. A student could be taking a test online and could hear just the tiniest noise and very easily get distracted. It is evident with the reasons I provided, why online classes provide such a high risk for distractions at home. | Evidence | Effective |
71896429041d | 6867D67B3444 | The second reason why students should not take online classes, is they are not receiving hands-on experience and practice. | Claim | Effective |
e8896e82414a | 6867D67B3444 | If a student was answering a question where a picture was shown about dissecting on a test for her anatomy class and it was asking where one of the incisions should be cut she would not have been able to answer it due to the fact that the closest she had gotten to seeing a dissection, was by watching the video provided by her teacher. In classes such as math, it would be hard to teach the kids online when a subject such as that involves a lot of hands-on practice to fully understand the concepts. Because they are taking it online, there is no way for them to really get in contact with the teacher considering they may live many states away or even countries! How can you learn from your mistakes if you do not know what you are doing wrong and what you can do to fix it if you are unable to talk to the teacher about it in person. So it is logical, that online classes do not give students the ability to achieve to higher standards because they are not able to learn as well if they are not learning from their teacher in person. | Evidence | Effective |
bc17e2cafb63 | 6867D67B3444 | The final reason that students should not take online classes, is that it prevents the ability to receive the true school experience | Claim | Effective |
1384a4dfef27 | 6867D67B3444 | If a student decides they want to participate in something like the school's 4th annual tricycle race, then they will, but if they decide instead of participating they want to watch then they can do that too. Some people may say that school is all about making memories and trying new things, but that is not always the case, your memories are what you choose to make them. But with online classes, they prevent the ability for students to try new things, or socialize with friends. Socializing with friends plays a big factor in why online classes should not be allowed, because what if the only way of communicating with your friend was by going to school during a certain block; you would not be able to because you would be too busy at home taking your online classes to do so. Some people do not like to talk to others online because in their mind it is just harder to so, and it not only decreases your social skills but it also decreases your grammar skills too if you are always texting someone online instead of having a conversation with them in person. So with the information I provided, online classes take away the ability to experience or try something new at the student's school.
| Evidence | Effective |
55bee792744e | 6867D67B3444 | Online classes according to some people are good because they provide the chance for the student to go out into the real world and get a job, they provide the student less stress, and it provides the chance for the student to be more comfortable with their surroundings. Jobs provide students the opportunity to gain real life experience. Working at home provides less things to stress over and makes the student more comfortable with their surroundings and less likely to get sick because they are not being surrounded by all those germs. | Counterclaim | Effective |
f2b8ed74688f | 6867D67B3444 | But because students are provided with more distractions, do not receive much hands-on experience or practice, and are prevented from getting the true school experience that they deserve, they should not take online classes from home and instead proceed with taking regular classes at their local school.
| Rebuttal | Effective |
f0e312551106 | 6867D67B3444 | So in conclusion, students will never succeed if online classes are always holding them back. This is why I urge you now to get up, take a stand, and fight for what's right! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
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