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46ff73164a57 | ABBA50242CFA | That might not be a big problem in summer or spring. But winter is the worst time of the year for students. The sun rises later than usually and sets earlier. It gets really cold and there is frozen ice on streets. Nobody wants to get up early and go to school or work when the sun hasn't even risen and frezzing weather outside. Of course they want to wrap around in their blankets and sleep in. | Evidence | Adequate |
57bf870a19c1 | ABBA50242CFA | But in the other hand, attending to school directly is better for some students. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d75b5f8978c7 | ABBA50242CFA | Leaning and teaching face to face is always easier than online. You could ask the teachers directly if you don't understand, and I think the teachers would be teaching and explaining in a better way face to face. Plus, you can meet new friends, socialize and participate in sports or any activities at school. So in the bottom line. | Evidence | Adequate |
4daac2ec952f | ABBA50242CFA | I think it's better to combine both ways. | Position | Ineffective |
d11f0ac04f1b | ABBA50242CFA | The students can attend school everyday, except for snow days. They can take classes online since they can't make it to school. Cut the students some slack on some Fridays. They can stay home and attend classes online. Or only apply on seniors. Because it's their last year and they have lots of work to do. | Evidence | Adequate |
3fa20d0891ad | ABBA50242CFA | But in my opinion. Attending clases online or directly at school don't matter. What matters is that the students find their best ways to learn and relieve stress. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
367d71731efc | ACCD71550365 | Do you think it is a good idea to succeed? I believe it is good to succeed in life, that is why seeking opinions from multiple people helps you succeed. | Lead | Adequate |
1ae5b2a20cd0 | ACCD71550365 | I believe seeking help from multiple people can help you make better decisions. | Position | Adequate |
03d5f9c955a8 | ACCD71550365 | It helps you succeed in life | Claim | Adequate |
b733e77a1e81 | ACCD71550365 | It helps when making a decision | Claim | Adequate |
83c347d491c9 | ACCD71550365 | that I made a great decision In my life. | Claim | Ineffective |
7e8b87a7b6d3 | ACCD71550365 | seeking multiple opinions helps people succeed in life | Claim | Adequate |
8934b2c13319 | ACCD71550365 | One way is when going to college. College is very important to people's life and people giving opinions to them is encouraging them that is will be fun. Another way is when a person is mad at somebody. People encouraging them to stop can help them stop being mad. The last reason is when somebody is taking a test they can get help. When they are stuck then can ask a question to the teacher and can get a opinion on the question and then that can help them get the question right. Get multiple opinions it will help you succeed in life.
| Evidence | Adequate |
2d90488152ce | ACCD71550365 | getting multiple opinions helps when making a decision | Claim | Adequate |
731c7eaf7ec1 | ACCD71550365 | It helps when picking out what shirt or shorts or any type of clothing they want. When they dont know what type of clothing they want to buy multiple opinions can help a lot when not knowing what to get. It also helps when picking which shoe they want and which one is the best for them. Opinions from parents and the workers that are helping the person will help them see if the shoes fits and if it is the right type for them. It also helps when the person doesnt know which place they want to go to. Getting opinions and ideas from friends will help when picking which place you want to go. Multiple opinions helps a person when making a decision. | Evidence | Adequate |
f83ac5018af2 | ACCD71550365 | The last one is that I made a good decision. | Claim | Ineffective |
3aeb2d899d86 | ACCD71550365 | One day I was playing basketball and this guy got mad because i blocked his shot. After I blocked his shot he wanted to fight me. So he came after me, he laid a punch on my chest. It hurt pretty bad. I wanted to fight him and punch him back so badly because I wanted to stick up for myself. Then, my friends who we were playing with said,"Don't punch back it is not the right thing to do," so i didint punch back and I walked away and went home. I was OK, but I had a big bruise on my chest. That is an example of how multiple opinions from others can help you make better decisions. If I would have not walked away, we would have got into a big fight. So, I am glad that I walked away. My parents were very happy as well. Always make the right decision and the good choice not the bad choice. | Evidence | Adequate |
9abcf63631d5 | ACCD71550365 | I believe seeking a lot of opinions will help you make better decisions in life. Seeking multiple decisions can help you succeed in life, It can also help when making a decision and, lastly I made a very good decision in my life. Always seek a lot of opinions before doing things that they are not sure about. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0742f99270c0 | AD53B357BD0D | Have you ever had a really important decision you had to make? Did you feel overwhelmed because you didn't know what you should do? Asking for help or advise from people such as friends and family around you can really help alleviate all that stress. Most people encounter big decisions often throughout their lives, so getting advise from numerous people can help you get more input on something, and may end up helping you make a final decision. | Lead | Effective |
8f0a809595eb | AD53B357BD0D | Seeking multiple opinions can really help someone make a better choice when dealing with decision making. | Position | Adequate |
3805437e6abf | AD53B357BD0D | One way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is that by asking more than one person, they can get more input. | Claim | Effective |
520899f55ef5 | AD53B357BD0D | Asking numerous people can be a huge help when making an important decision. Not only are people getting different ideas of what they may want to do, they can also get advise from people who may be more experienced than themselves. For example, if someone was debating on which college they should apply to, they may end up asking people such as older siblings or parents for advise because they may have more experience with that matter. By asking multiple people, you can get multiple ideas, each of them being different in their own way. By getting more people's input, you may be able to start to make your own choice about the matter because of the advise you've gotten. | Evidence | Effective |
88e359938263 | AD53B357BD0D | Another way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by not getting any biased opinions. | Claim | Effective |
458539437e4c | AD53B357BD0D | By asking more than one person for advise on a subject, they can get more than one new idea that isn't one of their own. This way, they can get more than one person's thoughts on the decision, and have different ideas on it. For example, if someone were trying to make a decision on what sport they may want to tryout for at school, they could possibly ask their friends and family about which they should choose. However, they should also ask people like classmates and teachers, as they may have their own ideas, and won't give the person any biased ideas or information. Friends and family can have a great deal of influence on people, so it's important to always get people's thoughts that are on the outside. This will make it to where there's a greater chance of the decision maker not being biased, as they've heard numerous people's thoughts, and can make their own decision off of that.
| Evidence | Effective |
8706d0152112 | AD53B357BD0D | A final way seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is by being more prepared about the choice they're going to make. | Claim | Effective |
02f998fd360b | AD53B357BD0D | The decision maker can use all the advise they've gotten from different people to make their own choice, and feel better prepared. They will be more focused as they know what they want to do, and will feel more confident and less overwhelmed. Feeling less overwhelmed can be a big help as the person doesn't have to be so worried, so they won't have any distractions from making the best possible decision. For example, if someone is trying to decide what kind of car they want to get, and they've gotten advise from numerous people, they can make a better choice when picking. They'll know exactly what they want, as they've heard many thoughts from the people around them, and so they can make their final decision.
| Evidence | Effective |
46fc64bc31e3 | AD53B357BD0D | After getting advise from multiple people around them, the decision maker may be able to make the best choice possible, as they've gotten new thoughts and ideas. Asking for help or for some advise from those around you can help you make the best possible choice because you've gotten a lot of new information and opinions that you wouldn't have gotten if you had only asked one or no one at all for advise. Making an important choice can seem a little bit easier and less stressful after seeking advise from multiple people. Getting help from others around you can help you make the best choice you can. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d449805f85ac | AE6BE874B204 | Did any of the schools you attended as a child offer distance learning? Would you be interested in participating in distance learning? Schools are now offering distance learning as an option for their students. Distance learning allows students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Schools believe that there are benefits to distance learning, however there are various problems with the system of distance learning | Lead | Effective |
774e06993127 | AE6BE874B204 | Distance learning is not beneficial for students | Position | Adequate |
d4c52a737aa0 | AE6BE874B204 | because it will not prepare them for the set up of college | Claim | Adequate |
15bd5aa313d0 | AE6BE874B204 | they are not going to be able to interact or learn how to work with their peers, | Claim | Adequate |
a437d45680b9 | AE6BE874B204 | and they are more likely to get easily distracted when learning from home.
| Claim | Effective |
66c6587f9af9 | AE6BE874B204 | One way that distance learning would not be beneficial for students is because it will not prepare them for the set up of college | Claim | Effective |
bd522561f5ad | AE6BE874B204 | In almost all colleges, the classes offered are in large lecture halls where you are face to face with the teacher and other students, and not separated by a screen. By participating in distance learning students may not be prepared for face to face interaction with their teacher and the other students. For example, my brother, who is now a senior in college, participated in a system similar to distance learning while he was in school. After having participated in online and video conferencing classes for almost all of his school career, he had a much harder time adjusting to the college style of teaching than the other students, from his same high school, that did not participate in distance learning. Another way that distance learning would not help students prepare for the set up of college is that the students that participate in distance learning will have trouble adjusting to having to leave their house to attend class. In college classes are not offered inside of dorms and students will have to travel outside of their living area. If students do not practice taking classes outside of their home in high school they may feel uncomfortable learning in an unfamiliar environment and that could affect their learning abilities when they get to college. | Evidence | Effective |
b7d577da2ac2 | AE6BE874B204 | Another downside to the distance learning system is that students would not have daily interaction or learn how to work with their peers. | Claim | Effective |
e8ee3af1fb03 | AE6BE874B204 | In school you meet many new people from around your town that may have very different cultural or ethnic backgrounds. If students were to participate in distance learning, although they would meet various other peers through activities like sports, clubs, or their hobbies, they would not meet as many people as they would if they were also in a classroom with twenty to thirty other kids. Because of this limited interaction with other kids their age, these students who participate in distance learning may not learn how to interact and collaborate with other students. For example, my brother had a difficult time making friends in college because he had little experience interacting with other children that he didn't already know and have a relationship with. He also struggled in group projects because he had not participated in one since elementary school, when he began distance learning. Not learning how to collaborate with others can be detrimental for a student because that will be a major part of their lives after they finish school. Whether they use the skill of interacting with other people in their future job, or even just to make to new friends after moving to a new town, the skill of interacting with others is very valuable and important to possess.
| Evidence | Effective |
79dcd379b43e | AE6BE874B204 | The final reason that distance learning is not beneficial to students is because it allows students to become more easily distracted | Claim | Effective |
92db5b081a1c | AE6BE874B204 | In a student's home they have access to toys and electronics such as phones, televisions, and computers that can take their attention away from learning. However if students took classes in a school building they would not have access to as many of these distracting things, and they would also have a teacher that would be able to take any distractions they find away from them. Another way that distance learning would allow students to become easily distracted is because their is no other students around to keep them on task. By taking their classes inside of a school building students would be surrounded by other students who are also doing work. Being surrounded by other students who are also doing their work will help motivate students to continue to focus on their own assignments. Personally, I prefer to do my homework at school, in my study hall period, as opposed to completing it at home. I would rather do my work at school because I am surrounded by other students that motivate me to finish my work, and also their is less distractions around me. One specific example of how doing my work in school benefits me is when I had to complete my history project on Andrew Jackson. Instead of working on my project during my study hall period, I decided to take a nap and told myself that I would be able to finish the project at home. However, when I got home, instead of working on my project, I was immediately distracted by the television and ended up watching a six episodes of one television show instead of finishing my project. When I received my grade back on the project I saw that I had received a C+ instead of my usual A. If I would have completed my project in study hall I would have been more focused on doing the project, due to the other students also working on assignments around me, and I would have received a better grade.
| Evidence | Effective |
1479bf0c8527 | AE6BE874B204 | Distance learning is not beneficial to students because it does not prepare them for the set up of college, they would not be able to learn how to interact and collaborate with their peers, and they are more likely to be easily distracted when learning from home. Although distance learning may provide some benefits to learners who may struggle with learning in a classroom setting, it will ultimately affect them in a negative way in the future. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
b4d6237bd9aa | AE7DE878CED5 | Imagine having a problem that no matter how hard you try, you can't figure out a way to solve it. Many of this have this issue often that it recalls to getting advice. Advice can help us in situations that we can't find an answer to our problems. Whether its asking a friend, a family member, coworker, neighbor, or anyone else that you can trust to give you a reasonably good answer to your problem. | Lead | Effective |
9ba638d2cda1 | AE7DE878CED5 | Many people ask more than just one person for advice, seeking different ways to solve their problem, and that results to making good choices | Position | Effective |
0969fd6d55b2 | AE7DE878CED5 | Seeking advice from multiple opinions can help people make better choices because they can view different viewpoints from others | Claim | Effective |
0fc0922a1d74 | AE7DE878CED5 | have a different understanding of the problem | Claim | Effective |
6dd63f7ab3e3 | AE7DE878CED5 | can find various way to solve the problem.
| Claim | Effective |
b7e4105da070 | AE7DE878CED5 | Having advice from different viewpoints can conclude to various amount of opinions that the person giving you advice has. Talking to one person over and over again doesn't help with solving your problem, even many people do that today. Many people that I have known have gone through a similar problem, asking one person over and over again, and then once they told someone else the problem that they had, they found a different viewpoint of what the first person was giving them. Since then when they have a problem, they go to different people and asking for advice because it helps them in a way to understand the problem in different ways. This can be effective in problems people have that they can view viewpoints from other, and get different opinions from each one, finding a way to solve the problem more quicker and more easier and less stressful. Instead of making a bad choice, the person can make a good choice that could help solve the problem and make a benefit in their lives. | Evidence | Adequate |
fe7beb836b3c | AE7DE878CED5 | By seeking multiple opinions from other people, it can help the person get a better understanding of the problem, and help them find a solution that can hopefully can resolve the problem. When a different understanding is taken place, the person who has the problem can visualize the ending result, as one of my friend said to me over a discussion. When he a found a different understanding of the problem, he concluded that it helped him find a shortcut to a solution, and it helped him visualize the problem in a way that helped him find a way to solve the problem. Different understandings can make a person feel that there are easier and less stressful ways to solve a problem, they can understand how the problem was caused, and how to find a way to solve it. This briefly ties in with the person making a better choice about the problem linking to a different understanding because it helps the person really figure out how it can be solved, which could be finding one solution, or multiple solutions that can help the person understand what there dealing with and how they can solve the problem without having to panic that one solution could lead to bad things that could negatively impact there life, but with a different understanding of the problem, it can help the person make a better choice to the problem, and find an easy solution that doesn't do any harm to the persons life. | Evidence | Adequate |
2f18084238ac | AE7DE878CED5 | This can benefit the person because it can help them find more easier ways to solve their situation. When people have problems and ask more than one person for advice, it can result into find more ways to solve the situation because the person can find solutions that can either cause more harm to the persons life by making a bad choice, or just finding more than one choices that could the persons lives in many different ways. Having more than one solution to the problem is a good thing because when you try to solve the problem and it doesn't work out, you can always find more ways to try to solve the problem until you find a way that it works out for you. Finding multiple choices to solve a problem also ties in with different viewpoints and a different understanding of the problem. When these are applied, they can both help the person find multiple solutions because with different viewpoints, they can get others opinions and figure out an answer there, and with a different understanding of the problem, the person can find a deeper meaning of the problem, and find a easier solution there. Finding multiple ways to solve a problem can help lead people to better choices because when receiving advice from other people, it can lead to having multiple ways to solve the problem. | Evidence | Effective |
33e59c9a01f3 | AE7DE878CED5 | People asking for advice almost all the time when they have a problem to deal with. They can get answers from various amount of people, no matter who it is. Seeking advice from multiple opinions can help people make better choices because they can view different viewpoints from others, have a different understanding of the problem, and can find multiple ways to solve the problem. No matter in any situation, people can always find advice that can always lead them to find a solution. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1d51c871fea5 | AF345723174D | Did you know that asking multiple people for advice will help you make a decision faster? | Position | Ineffective |
5a012ead5dbf | AF345723174D | Asking multiple people for their opinions will also make you sure that you choice will be the right one. | Claim | Adequate |
447678b57ab5 | AF345723174D | You might be persuaded to change your opinion which could cause you to make the right decision | Claim | Adequate |
55867a3995e3 | AF345723174D | You can assure yourself that you are making the right decision because most of the people you asked had the same opinion or similar advice | Claim | Adequate |
c2f775e88dcc | AF345723174D | Asking multiple people for their advice will assure yourself that your choice is the right one | Claim | Adequate |
6cab83959b93 | AF345723174D | Only asking one person for their opinion might cause you to make the wrong choice, and asking multiple people will give you a higher chance to make the right decision. A couple weeks ago, my civics teacher gave our class a project that was due the next day, but I had a basketball game the same day which would end at 8:30pm. Since I didn't know what to do I asked my friend who told me to go to my basket ball game and try to finish the project at home. After she told me this I asked my civics teacher and a couple of other friends who advised me to skip my basket ball game so that I could finish the project without any stress. Since most of the people I asked advise from told me to skip my basket ball game which then made me feel like it was the right decision I did which caused me to finish my project without any stress. Other than assuring yourself that you are making the right decision, you could also change your opinion. | Evidence | Effective |
40aa43947ae3 | AF345723174D | People's opinions could change your decision. Asking more than one person who has the opposite opinion than you might persuade you to change your own opinion | Claim | Adequate |
d623ff7da06a | AF345723174D | Yesterday I asked multiple friends of mine for advice on what sport I should do. I could either do soccer which is every day from 4-8pm, or golf which is on Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays for 5-6:30pm.
I really wanted to play soccer, but most of my friends told me that I would be stressed since it's right after school and every day. They told me that golf would be less stressful and will give me time to finish schoolwork or have time to spend with friends and family. Because of this, I chose to play golf which caused me to feel less stressed and gave me free time to spend with family and friends. Seeking advice from more than one person will allow you to not feel confused. | Evidence | Effective |
4109479a9b98 | AF345723174D | You won't be confused on what decision you should make | Claim | Adequate |
2725e28611ae | AF345723174D | Asking multiple people for advice will assure you that you are either making the wrong or right decision. A couple days ago I wasn't sure if I should go to the library to study for my science test during lunch, or study in civics class which is right before my science class. After asking multiple people for their advice, they all said that studying during lunch time in the library would be less stressful and not cause me to miss anything important in civics class. Since most of the people I asked told me to study during lunch time in the library, I went to study in the library and as a result I ended up getting an A on my science test. Therefore, asking multiple people for advice will help you feel less confused. | Evidence | Effective |
b0a242c99685 | AF345723174D | In conclusion, asking multiply people for their opinions will cause you to make a decision faster. Asking more than one person for advice will also cause you to feel assured that you are making the correct decision. Other people's opinions could also cause you to change your own opinion. You also won't be confused as to which decision to make after asking more than one person for advice. Therefore, asking more than one person for advice will cause you to make a quicker decision | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
33d7b5d2725e | AF9AAA672210 | When you go shopping or are picking something out you often ask for multiple peoples advice. Why do you do this? Well it's mostly because you want the reassurance from others. It is a natural thing that we all do. For instance last September my sister went homecoming dress shopping. She brought a bunch of people so we could all give our opinions. But at the end of the day does it really help? | Lead | Effective |
ba142af085a6 | AF9AAA672210 | multiple opinions help someone make a better choice.
| Position | Adequate |
fd6840745a99 | AF9AAA672210 | The first person my sister asked for there opinion was our Grandma. After a while of my sister coming out in dresses the first thing I noticed was my Grandma always asking "Well what do you think of it?" before giving her opinion. I think this is a very good way to give your opinion without hurting any ones feelings. You are asking how the feel about the dress before you put your thought in. But there are some disadvantages to that. Let's say she walks out of the dressing room in a dress my Grandma really doesn't like and she asked my sister how she feels about it and my sister says she loves it. Then you have a hard decision to make. Do you say you like it so you don't hurt her feelings or are you going to be honest and say you don't like it with the possibility of making her upset. | Evidence | Effective |
0d4c03d8814a | AF9AAA672210 | even if I don't like to hear that they don't like it I would rather someone be honest with me then just lie and say they like it. | Claim | Effective |
fa21646c36d6 | AF9AAA672210 | The next opinion my sister asked for was my mom. I knew even before this trip started that my mom was going to have a very strong opinion on each dress. And I was not mistaken. Each dress came with a "thats too short" or "that shape does not flatter you and the color is to bright." I could easily tell this was overwhelming my sister and stressing her out a lot. And that is one reason why getting multiple opinions can be bad but again sometimes after my mom said that my sister would look in the mirror and realize well maybe it is too short. I think this is one thing that happens a lot. You will put on something you like and when you show it to someone they point out something you maybe didn't think about or realize. One example is when I was at Target one time and I picked out a shirt that I really liked and when I showed my mom she remembered that I already had that shirt. If she had not been there I would have never known that and I would have gotten the exact same shirt I already had. | Evidence | Effective |
251abbf735d9 | AF9AAA672210 | even though my mom can be brutally honest at least she can point out a lot of things you didn't notice and help you pick the right dress at the end of the day. | Claim | Effective |
d038f37d5423 | AF9AAA672210 | The last opinion my sister got and the most important one was Beyonce. She has been a family friend for a while and my sister has always really loved her fashion sense. So when Beyonce heard that my sister needed to go dress shopping she was more then happy to come along. Her job was to help my sister pick out the dresses to try on and then give her opinion. Her way of giving her opinion was just to first point out all the things she liked about the dress and then something that my sister maybe want to consider. I think Beyonce was the best at giving her advice because she has to do it all the time with her music and what she wears for all of her performances. | Evidence | Effective |
d5406139039e | AF9AAA672210 | it can be very hard to get lots of opinions and not be overly influenced and not listen to your own opinion. | Claim | Effective |
9c17c6362799 | AF9AAA672210 | After this very long and tiring journey I came to the conclusion that ever opinion is important ans really can help you make the best decision. I would highly recommend getting an opinion from everyone you can but make sure that you listen to your own opinion too. It can be especially hard with really big decisions and so for those I would still get a lot of advice from others but also take time to consider each option and like about the pros and cons. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
f518c1a76cf7 | AFF882607973 | Have you ever asked your friends for advice on an issue or to help solve a problem? If so, did you take that advice, or throw it to the wind without ever looking back? | Lead | Adequate |
c4418df5c2a4 | AFF882607973 | seeking multiple opinions allows for better decisions to be made. | Position | Effective |
22b7060455ca | AFF882607973 | it allows us to view an issue from multiple angles, | Claim | Effective |
0a8d6d55f662 | AFF882607973 | allows for a more unbiased response, | Claim | Effective |
8f74e7fef92c | AFF882607973 | hearing several opinions can change our thinking on a certain subject for the better. | Claim | Effective |
a114e0a4c2ca | AFF882607973 | Hearing several sides of a story or particular topic, can often have an affect on our decisions. Say you and a friend get involved in an argument and you aren't sure how to handle it. You ask some friends what to do. They explain that your friend is having a bad day and some family issues at home. Rather than be upset with your friend, you decide to do everything in your power to help your friend out. Hearing other angles or sides of a story changes the way we view an issue or person, therefore plays a key role in the making of that decision or series of decisions. | Evidence | Effective |
8a0564031048 | AFF882607973 | say a woman and her boyfriend have a disagreement. Asking her boyfriends best friend may not be such a great idea, seeing as he could be biased on the subject. Asking a group of neutral friends would prove most effective, therefore less biased. In more cases than none, one particular person may favor one side more than another, where as multiple people could appeal to both sides.
| Evidence | Adequate |
f0a2e98749e7 | AFF882607973 | An example would be, a friend of yours pulls a ruthless prank on you. Instead of laughing along with your friend, you become upset and infuriated. You make a split second decision to retaliate. Several people encourage you to inform your friend that their actions bothered you, rather than getting even. Hearing the same thing from several people can often affect the way we view a topic. Rather than repeating those infuriating actions towards your friend, you explain to that individual that you were offended and deeply upset by their prank. When we decide in our minds that something negative is a good idea, or our only option, hearing differently from multiple people with our best interest at heart becomes a deciding factor in the choices we make daily. | Evidence | Effective |
b94d79780ea1 | AFF882607973 | asking multiple people for advice is more efficient that asking only one. Hearing several opinions allows for neutral, unbiased advice. Receiving advice from several friends, teachers, peers, or family members can play a rather important role on our thought process on a given topic in a positive way. And viewing all sides of a story, instead of just our own, can allow for better, more beneficial choices to be made. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
2f6712034b24 | B0C3BBF86B9B | Whenever there is a roadblock in life, many people feel limited to who they can ask for help. They do not know that there is a tremendous number of others surrounding them ready to put forth advice. There are always people somewhere who would be willing to help with a problem. Getting help is the smartest choice to make when in need of help. | Lead | Effective |
fc7de5e7c55f | B0C3BBF86B9B | Talking to multiple people will never be the wrong choice, as it will almost always provide benefits for both parties. | Position | Effective |
ecc4205c9bed | B0C3BBF86B9B | new perspectives are provided | Claim | Effective |
dfc5bf0c4f2b | B0C3BBF86B9B | decisions are rethought | Claim | Effective |
16fe0d820c03 | B0C3BBF86B9B | new ideas are formed. | Claim | Effective |
1fc4f5591381 | B0C3BBF86B9B | There is no arguing that no two alike people walk on this planet. With different people, comes an uncountable number of differing opinions on topics worldwide | Evidence | Effective |
b96b1991d298 | B0C3BBF86B9B | When multiple opinions are acquired, a great sea of new perspectives begins to flow. | Claim | Effective |
75676bb35ac8 | B0C3BBF86B9B | In many situations, judgment can easily be corrupted. This can be caused by stress, deficient energy, or maybe just a busy schedule. With a corrupted field of judgment, decisions cannot be made with complete logic. In less then two minutes, someone's life can be changed. That is all it takes for a good or bad decision to be made. A great example is speeding up to a yellow traffic light rather than slowing down. There is a risk of crashing or getting pulled over, but also getting to the destination faster. The right decision may lead to a beneficial addition to the day. However, the wrong decision may lead to something grave. When making a decision, advice is a great way to try and stay on the right path | Evidence | Effective |
709844f36dd0 | B0C3BBF86B9B | By asking multiple people, the pieces of advice may start to persuade someone to not make a certain decision or to make a different choice | Claim | Effective |
98fd0fed8eaa | B0C3BBF86B9B | In some of situations, the original plan is not always the best solution. Even if advice is given from multiple people, their advice might not be what is wanted | Evidence | Effective |
7ff8a8d61679 | B0C3BBF86B9B | As advice is given, sometimes combinations of many different opinions is the best suited for a specific person and topic. | Claim | Effective |
420cca6a2380 | B0C3BBF86B9B | To be more specific, if none of the advice given is liked, then new ideas begin to spark. For instance, someone is deciding whether to buy a big box of cookies or not and they ask two people for advice. One person says to buy it, and the other says not to. If neither idea sounds right, the idea to buy a smaller box surfaces which is both pieces of advice combined. If only one piece of advice was taken then, the decision could have been completely different and had a different consequence. | Evidence | Effective |
72cb3aa849cf | B0C3BBF86B9B | In conclusion, making the right decision is crucial for many aspects in life. Some of these aspects include happiness and success. In order to do that, advice from multiple people is needed. Advice is always beneficial from everyone when it comes to making the right choice. In some situations, advice can be more crucial than others but it is needed in all types of problems. It can be from friends, family, or anyone who could help give reputable advice. When multiple people put forth opinions, new perspectives are provided, decisions are rethought, and new ideas are formed. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cc85097203dd | B1687066F985 | With the growth of technology, options, other than the traditional schooling, have developed, leaving schools to wonder if they should adapt to the new technologies by allowing classes to be attended online via video conference | Lead | Adequate |
fe480e4dc258 | B1687066F985 | Although some may believe otherwise, students can benefit from being able to attend online class from home | Position | Effective |
1af2a994938b | B1687066F985 | students can manage their time | Claim | Effective |
8581091f3ae0 | B1687066F985 | can work at their own pace. | Claim | Effective |
9baa3a0f8f3d | B1687066F985 | First of all, students will benefit from online class because they can manage their own time. | Claim | Effective |
bfdc9d19a44a | B1687066F985 | For instance, my friend Generic_Name, who is a dancer and soccer player, takes classes online, so she has more time to attend her ballet classes and club soccer practices everyday. Because Generic_Name does not have to get dressed or commute to and from school, she can focus that additional time to dedicate to her interest in dance and sports while still maintaining her education | Evidence | Effective |
9ab94a2a1bc4 | B1687066F985 | In addition, after my ACL and meniscus surgery, I had to take a week off of school to recover, which is a difficult amount of time to miss when being enrolled in all AP and honors courses. In preparation for my surgery, I asked all my teachers for notes and assignments that I would be missing, however, I only anticipated to miss half a week, so I was two days behind on my school work. With online classes, I could have managed more time to allow for a proper recovery and would not have fallen behind. Thus, online classes are useful in facilitating the growth of other interests and compensating for states of emergency where one may not be able to physically attend school. | Evidence | Effective |
5e3685e7b0a1 | B1687066F985 | Secondly, students will benefit from attending class online because they can work at their own pace. | Claim | Effective |
7cc7a6f60c40 | B1687066F985 | In U.S. History, for instance, my teacher Generic_Name would talk through the notes very quickly, so it was difficult for me to keep up, especially since I am a slow writer. Fortunately, Generic_Name makes the powerpoints available on blackboard, so I use that during class, but I am so invested in trying to write down all the notes that I miss the important information that he was explaining. In this situation, it would have been beneficial to attend that class from home because I could listen to his lecture intently and then take the notes afterward, which I would not have been able to do in class because Generic_Name disapproves of people not taking notes. | Evidence | Effective |
109176a34b38 | B1687066F985 | Additionally, precalculus is a particularly easy class for me, so I often find myself sitting at my desk doing nothing after finishing the practice problems early. If I were to attend class online, I would be able to finish the lesson quickly and efficiently, shortening a 90 minute lesson to 30. Therefore, online courses enables students to utilize the time needed to take in and comprehend a lesson. | Evidence | Effective |
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