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Having 4 mirrors in total is the reason for a car, without mirrors you will be driving and have nothing to look forward to and also backwards.
Claim
Ineffective
8f9ed721eda7
4000B8222A07
Looking forward is the way to go because if you keep looking at what's beside you and behind you will cause a lot of commotion in traffic. If that can cause commotion imagine what looking down at your cell phone can do and what trouble it can put you in.
Evidence
Adequate
85396c477afc
4000B8222A07
Explaining all this to the police is a big mess when the situation can be resolved by just focusing on the road and what's in front of you.
Claim
Ineffective
b5411bdb24fd
4000B8222A07
More importantly is your life and you staying alive. If you need your GPS to get somewhere its best you buy a phone holder to hold the phone up on your window or just buy a GPS from a nearby store.
Evidence
Adequate
11bf1ebac895
4000B8222A07
In conclusion, stay off your phone! It's a trend now not only to you but to the whole world. It's impossible to do 2 things at one time while you control a steering wheel. You can take innocent lives fin a matter of seconds for a message or phone call that could have waited. If texting or being on the phone is more important just pull over.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
4c91ea9df6b9
405D9D4958DF
Making technology that can identify human emotions would be important, but not very much in everyday use
Position
Ineffective
e34318191d6a
405D9D4958DF
If a student were not able to identify their emotions when seeing a therapist or school counsoler, then this device would work best their specifically because therapists/counsolers are trained to help with humans and their emotions.
Evidence
Adequate
3ab3f00d4553
405D9D4958DF
Let's say that students are in a class to learn about psychology or somethig of the sort. It would be very useful to find out what a person is feeling down to the percent.
Claim
Adequate
ec064827c057
405D9D4958DF
This device would also be helpful there because it tells you about the muscles that move to show a certain emotion. 'For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when surprised...' (D'Alto paragraph 3); students can study their muscles that make their emotions by learning about these muscles.
Evidence
Ineffective
ae4d7dafe2d4
405D9D4958DF
In paragraph 9, it states '...Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them'
Claim
Adequate
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405D9D4958DF
Just by making faces and using this technology, students can learn so so much more about their emotions on a deep level that can help in many ways. It would benefit students, teachers, therapists, and more.
Evidence
Ineffective
cf28d9d6b540
405D9D4958DF
In conclusion, this device and technology can help many different people in many ways. Students can learn about their facial muslces, therapists can help their clients learn to identify what emotions they are feeling, parents can hep understand how their children are feeling, etc etc. Students can even help one another feel better in small classroom situatioins all together.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
fe972f250622
40936430B82D
In the first paragraph, the first sentence kind of threw me off a little bit, because when you say it like the paragraph did then it makes it sound bad knowing other people emotions.
Evidence
Ineffective
dfc184f87a2a
40936430B82D
I was sad or upset, and I was trying to hide it, I wouldnt want other people knowing it.
Claim
Adequate
673af478c077
40936430B82D
Say I was at a family dinner and something happened, then I wouldn't want the rest of my family knowing that I am upset.
Evidence
Adequate
c291922b06ce
40936430B82D
Yes, some of the arguments in the article can be good like, " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored."
Counterclaim
Adequate
12f279ba9974
40936430B82D
Thats great but honestly I dont think this would be the best thing in the world.
Rebuttal
Adequate
edda8f48703b
40936430B82D
The article asks us "Does your exspression in the mirror suggest an emotion?" Of course it does, just sometimes we may not know what kind of emotion it is. Sometimes you may not be able to tell it on your face but you can definitely feel it.
Evidence
Adequate
7a8d72a3761a
40936430B82D
Other people do not need to know what is wrong with you, rather you are upset, sad, angry or happy.
Claim
Adequate
faa0e84616ab
40936430B82D
If you have a smile on your face, thats great, the other person thinks your happy even if you arnt. If I want someone knowing what I am feeling, I am going to tell them. I dont just want them or some computer reading my muscles in my face and telling me what emotion I am feeling.
Evidence
Adequate
affff3291563
40936430B82D
Technology these days are getting to be way to much.
Claim
Adequate
2e106335c868
40936430B82D
Kids don't need to be told by a computer. "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored," Dr. Huang predicts. "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."
Evidence
Adequate
9718835d2ee2
40936430B82D
What if the computer messes up the facial exspression and does something "different" to try to "help" that kid, but honestly the computer detected the wrong facial exspression and changed the lesson for the kid, when he really understood it.
Evidence
Adequate
787234fc7a87
40936430B82D
This is why I dont think this is such a good idea
Position
Adequate
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40936430B82D
because sooner or later computers and technology are going to be running the world and later need updated or something and mess evereything up for our upcoming generations.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
43730706a3c3
4094C6225C49
If you thimk it is a alien civilisation you are mistaken.
Position
Adequate
825127b183f4
4094C6225C49
If you think it is where is the evadence like houses
Evidence
Adequate
4461ce1615df
4094C6225C49
It can be an astriod hiting the earth or it could very well be a mountain like we have on earth. Another thing i think it could be is an un earupted valcanneo like an other thing we have on earth. Also it can be where the inside of the planit has bin pushed out to cause a natural land form. There can also be other things it can be
Evidence
Ineffective
38a952bf72e0
4094C6225C49
The people that think that it is an alien civilisation they have to back there rason up with a lot of information and very detaild information to get me on there side. Even then I probibly wont believe them it would have to be a very low chance i would take there side.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
be7bbe7ba0dd
40A475C95D6B
The face on Mars is a natural landform.
Position
Adequate
6254d02bc963
40A475C95D6B
In the article it states"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet." A lot of people believe it is a natural landform but some people think it was put there. Some people think there is life on Mars. Do you think this face is a natural landform or a sign of life on Mars?
Evidence
Ineffective
dee4b3b67d41
40A475C95D6B
To you this might not be interesting but you will read about it everywhere.
Claim
Ineffective
5cc1b05f1ca3
40A475C95D6B
In the article it states"The 'face on Mars' has since become a pop icon." The news is everywhere in places you might not expect! I think the scientists are excited about what they found. Did you enjoy hearing all the news about the Face on Mars?
Evidence
Ineffective
469ef9b4b42a
40A475C95D6B
Were you ever reading a book or watching a film and you came across this?
Claim
Ineffective
e2025b6c0cd4
40A475C95D6B
The article states" It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!" People could just simply sit down to read a magazine and fined this amazing news. Someone could jump in the car just to hear the news that could make your mind race wondering how they found out the news. I wonder how many people were amazed by this news!
Evidence
Ineffective
fd9788e840b4
40A475C95D6B
In the article it states"Scientists figured it was just another maratian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh."
Claim
Adequate
f9356324925f
40A475C95D6B
This states it unually is common around Mars. People think it is just a landform. In the article it says it is hard to find the face. Everyone seemed excited they found the face on Mars!
Evidence
Adequate
20d36ff73f3e
40A475C95D6B
In the article it states"Some people think the Face is Bona Fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists." People think there is life on Mars. They dont believe that the face is a natural land form. Many people I bet still wonder how it got there
Counterclaim
Adequate
c97d3f02646d
40A475C95D6B
I think this face is a natural landform.
Rebuttal
Ineffective
707c8608453e
40A475C95D6B
In conclusion some people believe it is natural and some don't. People weren't the only one who thought it was life so did some scientists. The other scientists say it was a normal thing on Mars. Do you think it was life or not? I think the face is just a natural landform to Mars!
Concluding Statement
Adequate
ebac86bd7c95
40BDB6D6B9A7
People are facinated with the Man on the Moon and the idea of Martians, but most people do not think about life on Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun and shares many geographical features with Earth. However, studying this planet is made difficult by the dense and toxic atmosphere, high temperatures, and violent weather. Despite this, some people think that Venus should still be explored, and the author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is of this opinion.
Lead
Effective
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40BDB6D6B9A7
The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the rewards of studying Venus and the progress that has been made towards studying Venus.
Position
Effective
6b401b99ada1
40BDB6D6B9A7
First, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the many rewards of studying Venus
Claim
Effective
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40BDB6D6B9A7
After laying out the dangers of studying Venus, the author explains why scientists continue to study the planet. "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system" (4). By studying Venus, astronomers and geologists can predict what might happen to Earth in the future. Gaining an understanding of Earth's future may well allow scientists to predict what happened in Earth's past. Scientists are eager to learn about the early years of Earth's past, as it is shrouded in mystery, and this thirst for knowledge motivates them to study Venus. In describing how similar Venus was to Earth, the author says, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life" (4). If there was once life on Venus, the similarity between it and Earth would grow. As with geology, if biologists can understand what caused life to cease on Venus, they might be able to predict how life on Venus and on Earth might have started. The author shows that scientists studying Venus reap the reward of being able to learn about Earth's geology and early life. By laying out the various rewards to be had from studying Venus, the author is strengthening his or her argument that Venus should be studied.
Evidence
Effective
2ed9325d1ad0
40BDB6D6B9A7
Secondly, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the large amount of progress that has been made towards studying Venus
Claim
Effective
f44ab4b052c6
40BDB6D6B9A7
Although the author describes how Venus could be studied from the air, scientists still desire to learn about Venus from the planet's surface. One of their solutions to the problem of getting equipment to last on the surface of Venus is to expirement with new materials. "Simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's surface and have lasted of three weeks in such conditions" (7). Research and experimentation taking place on Earth is giving scientists and astronauts more options for studying Venus. Although conditions on Venus are not hospitable to life, these new scientific advances are making it possible for data-gathering equipment to be sent to the surface of Venus and last long enough to gather data. Other scientists are moving away from traditional electronics and looking into purely mechanical systems. "Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces" (7). The alternative that has presented itself to would-be explorers of Venus is older technology, like that found in the earliest computers. Scientists have realized that modern technology is too fragile and that more durable technologies are needed. By turning to other forms of technology, scientists are widening their options for ways to study Venus. The author mentions three different ways that scientists are making progress towards being able to study Venus - from the air, using new materials, and using old technologies. The author's postion that Venus should continue to be studied is supported by the scientific advancements that are serving to make studying Venus a reality.
Evidence
Effective
3807d1eb96e2
40BDB6D6B9A7
In conclusion, the author's opinon that Venus should continue to be studied despite the dangers is well supported by the rewards of studying another Earth-like planet and the advancements that have been made towards being able to effectively study Venus. Scientists have strong motivation for studying Venus, and new technologies are making it possible for them to overcome the challenges presented by Venus's harsh terrain. Although scientists studying Venus are unlikely to encounter any life forms, what they do discover will help them to understand Earth's past and shape our future.
Concluding Statement
Effective
b42c0f54dff2
40E7A7FDF48D
According to the passage using emotions and expression to show how we feel and animated characters using animations and showing facial expressions to express emotions and how they feel towards other things is not a bad idea.
Position
Adequate
c72ed2ca0ac8
40E7A7FDF48D
If a human gets hurt then the emotion and the expression would be squinting there eyes being loud or holding whatever got hurt.
Claim
Ineffective
e25d32593785
40E7A7FDF48D
So giving those types of animations and expressions to robots and video game characters would be good because you would not be able to tell what happened to them if they didnt have any emotion of when they got hurt or smiling. When a human is taing a picture and you want to make it look nice they would smile so they would open there mouth and show there teeth making there face wrinkle. They need to put the same emotion and such for animated characters in tv shows and video games. Also you have to use some muscles to smile and to show facial expressions towards everything like jobs,school,and even taking pictures.
Evidence
Ineffective
50fcfe73fd19
411AE0653A8C
I will be taking about the Unmasking the Face on Mars
Lead
Ineffective
cd80f7516420
411AE0653A8C
I believe that the aliens did not find the face on mars. I say people found it on mars.
Position
Ineffective
1c102c33472f
411AE0653A8C
Mars is now Famous for the face. The face was on mars. The face was a pop Icon. The evidence I have that it says that it was in Movies books Haunted grocery store. Thatfor I know it is a pop Icon. To Mars because nothing ever has been found on Mars because it is super hot to do anything on it and ut is made out of sand. So that for I know the face was there before the aliens found it. The Face was on mars because the title of the article is Unmasking the Face on Mars. If you read the Article you would now that. The face is important to Mars and to the scientist Becaus e this is the fist thing found on Mars. The Face will Stay on Mars as long as it does not get damaged some how or disform
Evidence
Ineffective
8daed8a223dc
411AE0653A8C
I conclued that the face will be there forever and ever. The Aliens did not fine the face. I am so mad that the you think that the aliens found the face but they did not The scientist found it so think again because if the Aliens did found out that they did find it then we should say sorry to the Aliens for thinking that we found it. I say That we should discuss with our own sicentist to find out who found the face on mars.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
9e9135d9bf73
4122443C74C6
I want others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program
Position
Adequate
d7cb37949a1b
4122443C74C6
it is a fun experience,
Claim
Effective
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4122443C74C6
it helps out animals,
Claim
Effective
e6859f58351d
4122443C74C6
you get to travel to many countries and see the many sights.
Claim
Effective
0e28c4a0535e
4122443C74C6
The Seagoing Cowboys program is a fun experience in many ways.
Claim
Effective
288539e9c727
4122443C74C6
One way is all the places that you travel to. I have seen many landmarks, such as the Acropolis in Greece, Venice, Italy, and I also have been through the Panama Canal on my way to China. Also it is a fun experience after the animals had to be unloaded, we all played baseball and volleyball games where the animals had been housed. Also there would be table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and many more fun activities. Those were all some ways we had a fun experience during the program.
Evidence
Effective
2a6d0d7ce387
4122443C74C6
Our program also takes care of animals, but that can also be fun in many ways.
Claim
Effective
8dbfc1b19565
4122443C74C6
One way is that it can keep you busy is when you are caring for the animals during crossing. They have to be fed and watered three times a day. What helped me prepare for hard work was when I would help on my Aunt Katie's farm as a boy. Also I would serve as a night watchmen, which meant I had to check on the animals every night. Once I almost died doing that job one rainy night. As you can see, taking care of animals can be hard but also fun here at Seagoing Cowboys program.
Evidence
Adequate
75ede427822e
4122443C74C6
My favorite part was traveling to many countries and all the beautiful sights.
Claim
Effective
be51927cce4a
4122443C74C6
I have gotten to see Europe and China during our journies. Cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. I have also toured an excavated castle in Crete, and have been on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, the city with streets of water. As you can see in the first paragraph, where it also shows I have been to many other places. In conlusion, you can see that traveling a one of the most fun parts of beingin the Seagoing Cowboys program.
Evidence
Adequate
eb4169db8761
4122443C74C6
Throughout the whole story, you can see that in the Seagoing Cowboys program, it is a fun experience, it helps animals, and you get to travel a whole lot. Those are some of the reasons that I would like others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
a02402d2aaaf
412F965FE701
Informing fellow citizens about the advantages of limiting car usage.
Position
Ineffective
0ca14e0db734
412F965FE701
In paragraph three it state, "As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way," saide Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor."
Evidence
Adequate
26245c4a286e
412F965FE701
What this statement is saying is that if you do not own a car or those who have sold their car(s), life will propably be less stresstful
Claim
Adequate
7b9cf3dbba08
412F965FE701
In paragraph fourteen it states, "Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...[The smog] rivaled Benijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.
Evidence
Adequate
df2a5d2be1ff
412F965FE701
This statement means that car traffic has gone done in a big amount of percentage, not only in the capital of France but in cities of big population. This one other advantage of limiting car usage.
Claim
Adequate
ff162b01e027
413FE0669882
This article is at the "The challenge of Exploring Venus."
Lead
Ineffective
9ed765dd6447
413FE0669882
"Evening Star" this article state in, venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. "Twin" this article state in, venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. "The venus blanked." The article state in the venus atmospere have almost of 97 percent of carbon dioxide. "Venus surface." the article state on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greateer than what we experience on our own planet. The article essay, thia articlo explain about "The challenge of Exploring Venus" venus is a planet nd look like a star because brightes points of light in the nigth sky, and tambien is a "twin" is the earth's twin, venus is it really closest at the eart and tambien look similar in the size and in the density, tambien look are similsr in the distance.
Evidence
Ineffective
643277623c55
416154D38103
New technology is being introduced to mankind almost every second in this world, and now, the latest techonology is a computer program called the Facial Action Coding System which can identify a person's emotions. The question is whether this technology is actually valuable and for what it could be used for. Experts suggest this technology could be used in a classroom to identify the state of mind of a student to adjust the lesson they are trying to comprehend. But, even though this technology may be helpful to teachers trying to keep students active and engrossed in their lessons, the question arises of whether this techonlogy is actually worth the recources or whether what experts think is a great idea is actually an invasion of privacy.
Lead
Effective
f315ff556868
416154D38103
This technology does sound helpful in the fact that it could gauge the state of mind of a student and help a teacher adjust their teaching methods to accomodate and keep their students students on track.
Counterclaim
Adequate
7a3aef0cfc2d
416154D38103
The article did state that the techonology could identify when a student is "confused or bored" and then "modify the lesson" to keep a student engaged. In this way, the technology is useful in the fact that it adapts to the needs of the student.
Evidence
Adequate
09cc9d107416
416154D38103
But what can this program do that a teacher's survey could not?
Rebuttal
Adequate
13290ff2b629
416154D38103
By the way the article talks about how a "home PC can't handle the complex algorithms" and about how complex the system is, it makes people wonder just how much this system would cost and how complicated it would be to enstate said system into a classroom. Compared to a quick survey done by a teacher who asks their students how they feel about their methods of teaching, it is seen how the system would be a waste of recourses and money.
Evidence
Effective
5afd333e5272
416154D38103
Therefore, although this system is useful in the fact that it can gauge the emotions of the students, it is not much more useful than a teacher who can do the same thing by questioning their students on their preferences and ideas.
Rebuttal
Effective
6d33cf99b668
416154D38103
Also, although technology is very much improved in these years, it is still not always accurate and infallible, and therefore may not be suitable for a classroom.
Claim
Effective
8fea1988dd01
416154D38103
The article states that the technology associates each emotion with "characteristic movements of the facial muscles" and then uses those movements to calculate the spectrum of emotions based on their facial display. But some people show emotions in various ways, and the technology most likely cannot accomodate for the many different ways people express the same emotion. For example, if a student has a resting face that seems generally happy, the system might confuse this dazed face as a satisfied face and think that the student is happy with their lessons when they are actually confused or not paying attention. In the same way, if a student has a resting face that looks naturally sad, the system may think they are unhappy with their lessons, even if the student feels they are learning a lot. A lot of students also try to hide their emotions, like frusteration or sadness, with a happier look on their face, and even though the article states that the system can detect a "false smile", it cannot always be accurate as a person may be good at hiding their emotions and displaying a genuine smile. Therefore, since technology is not always accurate and because human beings are so various in the way they behave, the technology would not be useful in a classroom where it may misread a student's state of mind and lead them in the wrong path of education.
Evidence
Effective
e1c403d5961a
416154D38103
Lastly, if the physical problems of the technology have not already been offputting, then maybe the moral problem of this technology will sway opinions against using it in a classroom. If this technology really can "indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one", then this means it can invade people's privacy and indicate an emotion which a person is trying to hide.
Claim
Effective
f2279f75a610
416154D38103
If a student is feeling sad or feeling stressed about home problems which they are trying to conceal, then the technology detects this and displays it for the teacher and the electronic lesson to see. This is an invasion of privacy, as the teacher does not need to know about a student's homelife or about their feelings outside the classroom. A teachers job should be to monitor how their students are feeling about their lessons, not about how their students are feeling about their life outside of school, and since this technology could pick up on digressing feelings, it should not be used in a classroom where a student's internal feelings are revealed to a teacher. Therefore, using Facial Action Coding could end up being an invasion of privacy that should not be introduced to the classroom.
Evidence
Effective
8718827d6432
416154D38103
The Facial Action Coding System is a bad idea for the classroom, as it could incorrectly read a student's emotions and give a misleading output that puts a student off track in their education, and also because it could invade a student's privacy of their inner mind.
Position
Effective
b6f2399dd42b
416154D38103
Therefore, installing this system in schools would be a waste of money and recourses, especially when teachers can gauge how their students are learning by simply asking their students in an anonymous survey how they feel about their teaching methods. In this society, technology is used to fix almost everything, but in this case, scientists should quit trying to force technology on behavioral issues and just let humans interact so they can benefit themselves with communication, no computerized middleman needed.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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4164C4264ABA
the author want to show you all the data he picked up good and bad.
Lead
Ineffective
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4164C4264ABA
venus is one of the most challenging planets but on the pther hand venus has struck the curasidity of many people
Claim
Adequate
5ca188b62fd0
4164C4264ABA
venus is looked at and called the "evening star" for being very bright but it can also be refered to the "twin" for having simaller charchaterists like in terms of density and size. on the other hand venus goes a very differnet speed then the other planets. leaving the abillity to go venture very dangerous. venus can have an atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which can be very harmful to humans along with the fact that it is 800 degrees Fahrenheit.
Evidence
Ineffective
b9b04e157193
4164C4264ABA
its hard but worth it to find out what we can on venus
Position
Adequate
bc239e60a87c
4164C4264ABA
and be aus eof this NASA hasnt given up yet trying to figure out ways to safely travel there and back.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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41C6D3432C49
Can you see the emotions in the Mona Lisa? A latest technology that can recognize emotions was the latest innovation from Prof. This technology claims it has the ability to read every emotion, even in pictures. Is this a reliable technology or is this something that isnt exact?
Lead
Adequate
b8eb2959d607
41C6D3432C49
The recent technology on seeing emotions talks about how the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguested, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. How can we know if this is true because we were not there to tell what her emotions where. Yes you can see some emotion in her painting, because it states that Da Vinci studied the human anatomy so that it would help him with painting facial muslces precisely to show emotion.
Evidence
Ineffective
33b704cfda3f
41C6D3432C49
This technology can be good for some purposes. Dr. Huang makes a statement saying, "A classroom computer could tell when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human structor."
Claim
Adequate
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41C6D3432C49
This is a good factor, because this can help students with school so theyre not falling behind.
Evidence
Adequate
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Overall this technology may have some pros, and it has some cons.
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If you put it to good use like for instince helping kids when theyre confused or bored it will show them other ways which is good.
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Then you have your cons. This technology might not always be precise and at some point this could lead to problems when trying to solve a serious situation.
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This technology is realiable at some points, theyre are multiple ways it can help and then there can be some disfunctions. Every technology has their flaws though.
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So picture you're at home, burdened with homework, rushing to get it all done and all of a sudden, your parent gets an email from the school saying that every student will have to take one extracurricular activity. Your parents are worried because extracurricular activities are expensive, how you'll get to and from that activity, and your school work. How fair is that? It puts stress on you and your family.
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extracurricular activities are great for growing teenagers, it can be a great safe space for them,
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but why should they be forced to take one?
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