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3337fc6358cb | 90F40592D04C | Studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers | Position | Adequate |
33e71c73af2e | 90F40592D04C | in the article it says that numerous spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, maybe thiss issue explains why nit a single spaceship has touched down on Venus more than three decades, Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to studydespite its proximity to us. Also, the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on surface. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography the dense videography ineffective. Venus is so hot that it can melt metal. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3a74649e658a | 90F9C06E19BC | I think that people should be able to use there own car when they to for there to get around aleats lower gas prices so people want be in there cars much as they u to be. Some people need to use there cars for the onlu way for transpartion to get doctors and dentisis appoinments | Lead | Adequate |
3df473578d90 | 90F9C06E19BC | they can also use there cars less | Position | Adequate |
7880521fe01f | 90F9C06E19BC | there wasting valuable resources in world | Claim | Adequate |
52fb0d73f736 | 90F9C06E19BC | because gas makes the car so that a valuavble resources we need to keep so maybe if people stay out thers cars it will make the gases prices go down they you can use for only if really need if you the car as a emgercy. | Evidence | Adequate |
3effbf19d79c | 90F9C06E19BC |
Why are there no cars on Vaubans street but expect there are only a few down town in but thats only if you are ride the tram to get around. I think every state should have a trams and bus and bullets trains to get them to one to another that would totally cut out the numbers of cars you will see on the so why not consider trying a new idea to get cars off the road maybe invent something that will occupie peoples so they want have to you there cars to get around I am try it and see though it might be good thing to do. | Evidence | Adequate |
e959f6cfcce9 | 90F9C06E19BC |
Why do people by more than one car its only one of them and mulitiply cars so why waste money more than one car when you can sell your for things that are important like paying a bill or get gorcery for you house or just helping otherss out so i thing that dumb for peole to have more than one car if you are not going to use the cars all time I understand that celebrites haves mulitiply cars because they show them but the car usage is still high but people can do what evere they want with there money who I am just a boy i coming telling you people with more than car is really really ricdulious to but hey I am going sit back and let people use up there gas in there so be it. | Evidence | Ineffective |
19fca4dc571b | 910B844ACCA1 | Nowadays, technology and science became one of important parts in human life, it makes life runs easier. With human's intelligent, technology is improved day by day. Many things are dicovered, or invented that we don't even know about their appearances. One of them is the Facial Action Coding System also known as FACS, which technology could identify human emotions was created by Dr. Paul Eckman. | Lead | Effective |
fecb53b27601 | 910B844ACCA1 | In my opinion, I think this techonology is useful, especially in order to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. | Position | Effective |
fbdcd53f976e | 910B844ACCA1 | Life contains many differences, includes positive and negative things, truthful or untruthful. Some people said emotions are never lie. We could figure out the statue of someone by looking at their face, and that's true. However, life is something really complicated, sometimes things in front of you don't mean like what you think. Likewise, even though the expression from people face is the most authenic, when they are trying to hide their feelings, we literally cannot know their real emotions. The changing of teenager is issue that causes headache for parents, their characters aren't the same like before, their emotions are changed. Both of them could not find the common speech, and push them further each other. That is the moment, the childrens easily fall in the darkness. For real instance, children or students aren't agree about their parent's thinking, or the education from school completely. Most of them don't say it out, or talk back. It's really affects about effective in studying and their plans in the future. | Evidence | Effective |
4fd968d6dc4d | 910B844ACCA1 | The creation of FACS is a way to solve this problem, it could read student's thinkings, from that parents and teachers could understand about expected of their kids, or their students. | Claim | Effective |
590e376d1689 | 910B844ACCA1 | Therefore, they could modify their ideas, lessons to able to suitable. It leads to success in learning of teachers and students; or it could make kids and parents get closer, and decrease the bad things happen. | Evidence | Effective |
49ce4730033c | 910B844ACCA1 | The use of the technology can read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It helps to understand students feelings, or reactions about the lessons, thus the teachers can recognize what are things helpful, and unhelpful. From that, the effective in studying will be increased. Besides that, it also brings advanges in communication between parents and child. The adults could realize their kids are struggling with something or not. Then, they could find the ways to share, or help. In order to not let anything bad could occur, as having negative thinkings and lead to suicide. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8232ec33b6b2 | 912848EF6E5E | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is the closest planet to Earth In the terms of the density and size, and on distance too, but each previos mission was unmanned, no spcaecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It's been three decades since a spaceship has touched down on Venus, Is a challenging planet for the humans to study even despite of the proximity to us. Also, there's a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets on Venus, but what's more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the Venus atmosphere.
The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what is on planet Earth, the conditions are far more extreme than anything we humans encounter on Earth. Even if Mercury is closer to the sun, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet on the solar sytem and it also presents additional impedimentslike powerful earthquakes, erupting volcanoes. | Evidence | Ineffective |
26f355911e58 | 912848EF6E5E | If the scientists know everything about this why are they discussing about visiting Venus if it isn't a good place where we humans could be and live at, because we wouldn't even be able to live for a day just as the spacecraft that didn't even survided just only for a few hours. | Claim | Ineffective |
aa1f85c48cb0 | 912848EF6E5E | Probably long ago just as it says on paragraph 4 that, Venus was maybe covered largely with oceans and it could have supported various forms of life just like here on Earth and Venus then also has some features that are analogous to Earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
84b5992ffd3c | 912848EF6E5E | It's better to keep studying Venus then to just go visit it, because there would probably be stuff on Venus that the scientist don't even know about and then the people that would go visit Venus would be in such danger. | Claim | Ineffective |
e5eb0c5b6d73 | 912848EF6E5E | In conlusion, scientist should still be doing research about Venus, because everything they have known recently about Venus it sounds really dangerous just to go and see it on their own then they would put their lifes in danger, and I don't think that's what they want | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
dc76acca488f | 912848EF6E5E | It's better to keep doing more research about it instead of just going without knowing everything about the planet. | Position | Ineffective |
a58c40e66660 | 915D9EE27FFB | I think that this is pretty cool to be able to read for face experssions. Like you can tell if someones happy or mad by a computer just reading your face. It can tell because how your cheek bone and moves one way and they can tell your emotions. Its crazy too how fare we came to be able to have a computer be able to tell if your mad or sad or any emoetions you have. | Lead | Adequate |
4084603b9461 | 915D9EE27FFB | So I think its a good idea to have to something that able to do something like this. | Position | Adequate |
d8c4502e86ff | 915D9EE27FFB | I think this is a cool thing that your able to do | Claim | Adequate |
387cf9e40193 | 915D9EE27FFB | like how they knew Mona Lisas emetions. How she was "83 percent happy, 9 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry". There will still be people like how they are in paragraph 2. "How can a computer recognize the subtle facial movement we humans use to express how we feel?". I think alot of people will like it because its something so cool and new and everyone would want to go try it out and go buy one to do it. "The faical exoressions for each emotion are universal. | Evidence | Adequate |
be8e63d1d5b8 | 915D9EE27FFB | Its something thats really cool alot of people and little kids would like it. | Claim | Adequate |
5302cd36bfb5 | 915D9EE27FFB | Everyone would want to try and see what their emotions say. So if they did come out with something like this alot of them would sell quick and i know they wont be cheap. We have came so fare from having to wait 5 minutes to take a picture to now being able to tell a persons emotions by a computer just reading there face. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4ef049b945e5 | 916E7E75FC4A | The author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit | Position | Ineffective |
62c843f5cba7 | 916E7E75FC4A | because, venuse have been the most like earth planet in our solar system. they belive that long ago venus was probably coverd with large oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth."venus can sometimes be a nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel" | Evidence | Adequate |
6502a030d82a | 916E7E75FC4A | NASA has been thinking of many ideas to help humans explore venus, | Claim | Adequate |
e603d8f5116c | 916E7E75FC4A | possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray of venus. bump like vehical hovering over 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. like a jet airplane travel at ahigher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the deadly ground conditions by staying up and out of the their way. researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.
NASA have come up with example of tool that can help build a safe ship for human to travel to venus. some simplified electronics made of silicon carbibe have been testred in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in venus conditions. mecchanical computers which is an old technology might help people explore venus. peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited on ground. most light cannot penetrate the dense atomoshpere, rendering standard forms of photograhy and videography ineffective. | Evidence | Adequate |
7fd3cda39c3c | 916E7E75FC4A | Even though venus is the close to earth twin there are still many dangers to exploring the planet. | Claim | Adequate |
01e535d1129f | 916E7E75FC4A | the atmospere contains 97 percent carboin dioxide. the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. on venus surface tempertures aveage over 800 degrees fahrenheit. the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what humans experiance on our own planet.
The condition on venus are far more extreme then anything humans can encounter on earth. the enviorment would crush even a submarine diving to the deepest parts of our oceans. venus has the hottest surface temperture than any planet. high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eurupting volcanoes. powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. | Evidence | Adequate |
58dc6444e981 | 916E7E75FC4A | striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value. because human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally intimidating enveavors. travelers on earth and beyond should not be limited by danger to explore venus more. venus should be expanded to help meet the edges of imagination and inovation.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
d2d3adac0102 | 916E7E75FC4A | i think that the more NSA workes together to make tool to go see mre of venus them they will be able to explore more anytime. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d2fd15daeae3 | 91AEF41A3766 | In the story "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves" Luke was a cowboy rode the waves. he helped people in Europe after War World 2. Luke went to Europe to help people that didn't have shelter, food or animals. When Luke just graduated highschool his friend Don asked him if he wanted to go to Europe. Luke knew he couldn't pass this opportunity of a lifetime up.44 Nations joined together to form
UNRRA [ther United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaton Administration.] "UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses, young cowes, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up." Luke wanted to help people if he didn't go he wouldn't like to help people.
'Luke did get some free time when he was on the boat he got to see Venice, Italy he also toured an excavated castle in Crete and mareled at the Panama
China" he got to see many things many people don't get the chance to ever see. It was an aventure for him. "it took about to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to china" It was hard work to keep ever animal safe and alive on the long journey and animals could have died of sickness and cancer and a lot of other thing like not getting any excercie. " Heping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared Luke for hard work, but not for dangers at sea. On Lukes second trip, Luke served as night watchman. His job awas to cheack on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captian, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's haert raced as he shot feet firt toward an opening on the side of the ship. a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overborad into the dark Atlantic. He was happy to be alive. But he couyld not work for a coulpe of days because of vraked ribs." He was really happy to be alive and he was ok with craked ribs because he was alive. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7821edf19861 | 91AEF41A3766 | Reasons that people like Luke became or are going to be a Seagoing
Cowboy is because they like to help people in need that need food a shelter. They don't just do it to go to Europe and see everything and to have fun, they do it because they care about other people. | Position | Adequate |
0b70d277bd6c | 91B2B7072E51 | Should we have a facial action coding system for schools?
I do and do not think we should. | Position | Adequate |
1a0973599c14 | 91B2B7072E51 | First off I think it would not be a good idea because it's gonna distract the teachers. | Claim | Adequate |
bb0d1db3f69c | 91B2B7072E51 | All the teachers are gonna be worried about how the students feel. Some students do not like talking about their problems at school. The teacher is already gonna know the students emotions before they sit down in their desks. | Evidence | Adequate |
0d8529a8fc5a | 91B2B7072E51 | I wouldn't want my teacher knowing all my emotions. Teachers are supposed to teach you but not only just teach but be there if you need to talk to them about something | Evidence | Adequate |
ef83f91c4a9d | 91B2B7072E51 | I feel like its invading privacy of the student. | Claim | Adequate |
7a530fa5717b | 91B2B7072E51 | I think we maybe should because it might actually help the teacher learn more about their students. | Claim | Adequate |
61b0ccaf23d7 | 91B2B7072E51 | Some students do not like going to talk to the teacher so maybe if the teacher talks to the student they might feel more better and the teacher will also know about that as well. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ae957517f25d | 91B2B7072E51 | I think if we got it in schools right now it would probably help. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
9bf3d36fc4fe | 91BE694E60E0 | In this article, the author is telling it's readers that traveling to Venus can be risky. | Position | Adequate |
9e0a539436db | 91BE694E60E0 | In the article it says ''Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system''. | Claim | Adequate |
78776bdea034 | 91BE694E60E0 | Venus was once covered with oceans and could have had life. Venus still has some features that are similar to Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment, and has similar features such as, valleys, mountains , and craters.
| Evidence | Adequate |
ea6a248a3951 | 91BE694E60E0 | Venus now has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The average surface temperature is over 800 degrees in Venus. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. Even though Mercury is closer to the sun, Venus is still hotter because of the atmosphere. These conditions are far more extreme than any weather on Earth | Evidence | Adequate |
b874215fa6ae | 91BE694E60E0 | Even with these harsh conditions, scientists still want to visit this planet because of human curiosity.
| Claim | Adequate |
ff8197124752 | 91BE694E60E0 | NASA is working on approaches to study Venus. NASA is sending humans to study Venus, so we can have for knowlege of our sister planet. | Claim | Adequate |
ad69c5638095 | 91BE694E60E0 | Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is using devices that we used in the past here on Earth for studying Venus. | Evidence | Adequate |
2f87a779d061 | 91BE694E60E0 | Human curiosity is leading us to find more knowledge of our sister planet. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
3953ba5d19a8 | 9207F5E4EA09 | Luke had just graduated college and his friend Don Reist invited Luke to go to Europe with him. Luke said yes because it was an opportunity of a lifetime and he could not pass it up. Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy.
Luke said, "Being a Seagoing Cowboy he got to see Europe, China and he got to see the Acropolis in Greece." He got to see so many great sites. Luke toured an excaveted castle in crete and he marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.
Luke had to travel a lot. But, even though it took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United states and a month to get to China. On the long journey
Luke stayed busy by taking care of animals. Taking care of animals and traveling was not all Luke did on the boat, the cowboys played lots of games. Some of the games they played was baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals lived. They also did table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling and other games to pass time.
Luke said that "being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure." For Luke it opened up the world to him | Evidence | Ineffective |
dcb77aa58308 | 9207F5E4EA09 | Luke had a lot of fun seeing different sites, meeting new people, playing fun games and caring for people in a different, and better way. | Claim | Adequate |
c30766bb61c3 | 920DC8B0BC4E | The author supports the idea "that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit dispite the dangers it presents," by telling us why we need to know, | Claim | Adequate |
a2cc31c2a53d | 920DC8B0BC4E | how it affects us | Claim | Adequate |
6eca369c6fef | 920DC8B0BC4E | how we will | Claim | Ineffective |
eccb1c27f85a | 920DC8B0BC4E | This is something that has been well thought out by NASA and they always know what , why and how they are doing something. The author uses insite from NASA to support his idea. By doing this the author has shown us the importance of Venus. | Position | Adequate |
a07e304da800 | 920DC8B0BC4E | First, the author gives us reasons why we need to know this | Claim | Adequate |
cf54ae9e5f65 | 920DC8B0BC4E | The author says, "Often referred at Earth's "twin," Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionaly the closest in distance to,"(paragraph 2). This means, if Venus is that closely connected and similar to Earth then we can learn and adapt. They continue to find new discoveries in order to keep our civilization in tacked, and surviving. | Evidence | Adequate |
8958c1b35995 | 920DC8B0BC4E | Second, they explain how it affects us in our ordinary way of living. | Claim | Adequate |
4b6fd2e9e6a6 | 920DC8B0BC4E | They answer the question of, If it is so dangerous why study more? They found that it could have been another Earth once. I know this because in the text it says, "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system...The planet suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountins, and craters,"(paragraph 4). This means that by studying it no matter it's condition we can to learn about it and why Venus is in the condition it's in, maybe to even prevent it for Earth. | Evidence | Adequate |
4c7bece04719 | 920DC8B0BC4E | Lastly, the author supports their idea by telling us how we are going to uncover more information without loosing more. | Claim | Effective |
f031ecd17443 | 920DC8B0BC4E | They explain that NASA has a theory that sending anything electronic to it will die off within hours, where as sending parts from the 1800's - 1940's won't. I know this becaues in the text it states that, "NASA is studying other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lested about three weeks...These devices were first envisiond in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during the war...but, these devices made calculations by using gears and levers without electricity...By comparison, systems that use mechanical pats can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces"(paragraph 7). This means that hypothetically NASA could send older tech and find a way to uncover more information. | Evidence | Effective |
04467384a9a7 | 920DC8B0BC4E | Therefore, the author supports his idea, "that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents," by giving us multiple reasons why we need the knowlage, how it affects us and how we will accomplish that. First, by telling us that Venus is like our twin planet and learning what happened we could adapt. Secondly, by showing us that we are can prevent our own downfall. Lastly, the author tells us how NASA expects to pull this off. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
abd5d44bddcc | 922293101A74 | The author gives lots of evidence and resons on this idea throughout the article. The author also gives some facts that really helps supports this idea. There are some really good things that are in the article that gives this claim some meaning | Lead | Adequate |
e5badf8d5357 | 922293101A74 | In all, the author did really good with this article and also put some good time into this article too. I enjoyed reading this and learned some interesting facts about Venus. | Position | Ineffective |
f50b62af65c9 | 922293101A74 | One major things that caught my eye was that the author used NASA as some research in his article. | Claim | Adequate |
b9b2187bbf29 | 922293101A74 | He also uses NASA as a resource to help with the support of this idea. NASA is a wide known for space exploration and research for our solor system.
| Evidence | Adequate |
4d2167460af0 | 922293101A74 | At the beginning of the article, there is an introduction that gives some intesting facts about Venus. The author also talks about where Venus is in our solor system and how it is related to earth. This is a very good start in the introduction of Venus and what the article is about. In the third paragraph, he talks about what Venus atmosphere is like. There is termperature facts and the air you need to breath is useable. This starts to bring up the question. Is Venus worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? The fourth paragraph, he talks about the terrain. This starts to bring up the question even more than before. In paragraphs 5-7 NASA is the main idea for those paragraphs. In those paragraphs also NASA research and facts are presented about this topic. The last paragraph has a powerful meaning and a idea that is very strong. | Evidence | Adequate |
6e4425664792 | 922293101A74 | These facts lead to the evidence is many ways | Claim | Ineffective |
b6be745b18a8 | 922293101A74 | Facts are what built and help evidence today. There is a lot of evidence that support my claim. Here is a couple of pieces of evidence taht support my claim. The first piece is that the author used NASA. NASA has done a lot of research about this topic. The second piece is that he used lots of facts to convince the reader taht he has put some time into makeing this article. This helps show that the author did really good in presenting the topic and give some really good evidence to back up his article. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1a21c7fe68bb | 9224F001F074 | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. | Position | Adequate |
0af8b3ef5288 | 9224F001F074 | Studying Venus is a good idea and learn more about the Venus from other planet and Venus has a pretty good nickname and The National aeronautics and Space Administration has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. | Evidence | Ineffective |
454e9385fbf4 | 9224F001F074 | studying Venus might be dangerous but it good to learn more about other planets | Claim | Adequate |
bea28b514c69 | 9224F001F074 | than alwys studying our panet and Venus sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one od the brighest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur strgazer to spot. | Evidence | Adequate |
5cf786600ed3 | 9224F001F074 | Second, Venus is the most closet to Earth in terms od density ans size, ans occasionally the closet distance too | Claim | Adequate |
531fb59ac032 | 9224F001F074 | Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world | Evidence | Adequate |
97b3b3072f03 | 9224F001F074 | Third, Venus is a thick atmosphere of alomst 97 percent cabon dioxide blankets. | Claim | Adequate |
25e8b5577460 | 9224F001F074 | Even more challenging are the clouds of ighly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. | Evidence | Adequate |
583e398f026e | 9224F001F074 | In Conclusion, their is alot of ways to study and some of them are not the same as someoe who wrote it and studying Venus or Mars are very good to study in other planet it because Venus and Mar are the closet planet in Earth. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuase of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeovers. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a7241e9ebfbe | 922D3C44BE46 | You think technology can read emotional face expretion? | Lead | Ineffective |
2c93ed71acce | 922D3C44BE46 | Yes I think because the new technology are very avanced | Claim | Ineffective |
6aa9e608ac46 | 922D3C44BE46 | cameras have many fuctions and are very smart for take of pictures, the new cell phones have this technology one example is Iphone 7 or Galaxy 8 this smartphones have many technology, they know when are you sad or happy they have a special camera.
The news computers have many technology they are the best for this work because you can modify of system , you can put one camera and stard to work, you need create of program for analized of expretions and you can suporting with other student .
One need put of front to the camera and other need take picture and analized in computer, the next step is analized the facial expretions and see the muscles his face, eyes, cheeks or his smile the computer need analized the information and procces.
First student have a natural smile and computer detected this, he is happy, next student are crying, computer analized he is sad. but when student have pockarface the computer no detected nothing because no have any emotions, but what happen when one student make falce smile, but this is really good, I think of the computer detected he is happy.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
87e8f7a16450 | 922D3C44BE46 | I think of people need make manny technology because actual computers can be trick | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
99c23de91c09 | 923CD5D638A8 | Do you think the Face on Mars is a legit person or just a landscape? Is it just mother nature pulling tricks on us? | Lead | Adequate |
81fa27c913fe | 923CD5D638A8 | I think it's just a landscape trick. It happens all the time. Like the potatoe with a face on it. | Position | Adequate |
6424a35bbc4e | 923CD5D638A8 | Here is why. First, the face doesnt seem to have a body attached to it. | Claim | Adequate |
a1dd356c4a32 | 923CD5D638A8 | Second it looks like it is attached to the ground | Claim | Adequate |
4ee9eec6ee87 | 923CD5D638A8 | there has been no sign of life on mars. | Claim | Adequate |
1d2f183ee5a7 | 923CD5D638A8 | First of all th face looks like it was sculpted. It has no body that can be seen | Claim | Adequate |
fda79f5e964b | 923CD5D638A8 | Unless it is a decatetated head. The land scape couldv'e played an trick on us. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0f03e9ba515b | 923CD5D638A8 | Second of all It looks attached to the ground. | Claim | Adequate |
e444820cb883 | 923CD5D638A8 | f it were a readl head the end outline wouldnt be smoothed in to the ground. It would be laying on top and have a shadow showing the back side the the skull. | Evidence | Adequate |
e3911be4e375 | 923CD5D638A8 | Third, there have been no sign of life on mars | Claim | Adequate |
f0f8e7eebd4f | 923CD5D638A8 | Yes, we have found flowing water but we have not found any type of living orgamisim. | Evidence | Ineffective |
8cd6c726f0df | 923CD5D638A8 | So here is why I think that the landscape is playing illousions on us. First, The face looks scultped. Second, It lookes attached to the ground and third, there is no sign of life on mars. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
bf7c2f52556d | 924F1F4490F9 | In 1945 world war two was going on in Europe. Don Reist invited Luke Bomberger to go to Europe. When they got there Luke and Don both sighed up to help with the animals that were shiped overseas.
In the story it said, in August 1945,Luke and Don bolth got there orders to go to New Orleans. Luke and Don arrived they day the war ended. the they went to greece Luke turned 18 before arriving at greece and Luke might be able to get drafted foe the millitary.
Accroding to the text, By the time Luke was drafted he had already made 9 trips the most of any seagoing cowboy. Luke was traviling from the Atlantic Ocean to the eastern caost of the united states. Luke said it took about two weeks to cross the Alantic Ocean and a mounth to get to China. Luke was carring for the animals that were crossing and they had to fed and waterd two or three times a day.
the animals food had to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship so they could eat. Luke was prepard for this because he had to help out on his aunts farm.
Conclusion, On one rany cold night Luke was on watch to watch the animlas and he went to go tell the captian the report and he slipped down the ladder and had cracked ribs. | Evidence | Ineffective |
355a4a92c116 | 9263362F551D | The last ship to try to land on Venus was three decades ago. | Evidence | Adequate |
d482498d74ed | 9263362F551D | Astronots and scientists have been tryong to beat the challenges of Venus. | Position | Ineffective |
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