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MY SCHOOL SHOULD NOT FOLLOW THIS MODEL BY EXTENDING THE SCHOOL DAY BY TWO- HOURS
The addition of two hours to the school day will benefit the school poorly but,
will cause a huge disadvantage to students and the school as a whole. The four - day work week will not be beneficial to my school because,
it would reduce the amount of time students have for other activities,
and also this will result in the inability of students to learn more, and as a result students are affected mentally and psychologically.
To begin with, the school day has been designed in a special way which gives students, a reasonable amount of time to involve themselves in after school activities. These activities help the students acquire other skills different from what we acquire in school. For example, students who also take part in sports do not have enough time to practice or train after school if these 2 hours are added. Other students who work after school will begin to work fewer hours because they also need time to study and revise. As a student, time is needed to attain your goals and time also determines your future.
In addition to, the student brain can't function as well as an adult brain after some hours of serious work .The brain becomes tired and needs rest after some time, but the adult brain can do more because it is well developed than the student brain. After lunch, the students can study to a maximum of 3 hours only before feeling sleepy or tired and if these hours are extended, students will feel reluctant to study, which makes these extended hours a waste of time. Due to this, students won't take these hours seriously but will only disturb or disrupt the class which produces no positive result at the end of the class. The school makes sure that wastage of time is extremely prevented to produce positive outcomes and results.
Furthermore, to become a successful student, individuals must be mentally upright and psychologically sound to allow learning to be much easier and convenient. If these 2 hours are added to the school day, the students won't be mentally stable because, they would be stressed from pushing themselves to learn more even tho they are tired. Psychologically, this will reduce a student's ability to understand new things being thought and also prevents them from revising past information or work given. If this is happens, students will begin to forget past information and how to apply them which will become a problem in the near future.
Conclusively,this four - day work week would benefit other other institutions but won't benefit an institution like my school because my school works and remains successful mainly by the use of precious time and effort.
From,
Generic_Name.
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In my opinion I
think is better to work in group because has a lot of benefits. One of the example is the group help to think better,
each other and fast. second the workes is help to earn more money for the company and for the workes.
The first reason the workes is help to find information and internet or and books when some one had a problem like some one in the group is sick the other ones substitute in a job, sometimes in a group has a lot inconvenient like someone disagreement but then can fix an any problem to solve because they are professional.
The second reason is to earn money and hours,
when the workes work great an a job the company is pay more better , in a group is more beneficial for the company and for workers an extra hours,
because they do more efficient job, and also workes can help to earn more business with other companies and other countries more practical to work in a group they can help each other.
In conclusion I think is more beneficial to work in a group for several reason one of then is more easy to think in group help each other when the work is difficulty. Other reason is more practical to work and earn money for company and for workers and its beneficial to work with other companies.
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I am agree with the Emerson's statement, be yourself in a place where everyone else want you to be something else is a greatest accomplishment, because be who you are is really hard, more when people is trying to make you do things that you do not like or want, and ignore that kind of persons is a hard achievement. The differences in the people is what make us specials, because every vary has their own thing that they are good a it and they like to do it. And be in a place where is hard to be yourself is not easily to support it, and it is complicate it. Be who you are in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. Because stay in a place where no one let you be yourself is really difficult, desperate, and sadly.
Is difficult be yourself in a place where no body accept you by how you are, the immigrant know how that feels, because they came from a different country where they have different culture and believes. Mexicans immigrant is hard to be their self in USA, because the culture and language is different than the Mexican people specially the language, learn a new languages is hard and when Mexicans do not learn the language yet they feel like they are not accepted, because no one can understand them. The difficulty of be in an immigrant is that you have to learn the culture, and language of the country but you do not have to stop being yourself. Because I know that be in a different country is hard to be yourself.
it is desperate when people try to make you something else, most of teen anger got desperate when their parent try to make them something that they dont like. Teen angers just want to be their self and do things that they like. Because when parents, family or other people try to make you something different of what you were thinking is really stressful. Sometimes people try to make you something else, because they think that is going to be good for you but they dont think if is going to like or if you are good at it they just want you to do what they think is better for you but parents forget your opinion. Is desperate too when you doing something different than others and they tell you that you are wrong.
Being in a place where no body want you for being different of what they want is sadly, because people do not accept you for how or who you are, and persons that are different are mostly alone. A student that is immigrant could understand this because when a student that is immigrant go to a new school from other country have to learn a new language, and some other students that are from that country dont accept the immigrants just for be them self. And I think that is but people should accept other persons that are from other countries and let them be their self. In that way people can learn many new think that can be interesting, and everyone is going to be happy, but when people do not accept other people and dont let them be is sad, cause they are alone.
I am agree be yourself in world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the grates accomplishment, because being alone in a place where no one accept you for who you are is very difficult to live, is desperate hear things that you dont wanna do and people still try to tell you what to do to make you something else, and sadly when no one want you just for be different and you have to be alone. In conclusion be yourself and do not give up is the biggest achievement. Always is going to be hard to be who you are but never give up.
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Is it true that people can often credit their successes to having a good attitude? well yes it is, I have seen people like my uncle become successful in life because of their attitude. I have also seen people go from being successful to being unsuccessful. Some benefits of having a good attitude are that more people will like you another reason is that people will want to hang out with you and the last reason is that people will respect you.
Having a good attitude will get people to like you. It will get people to like you because you won't be mad all the time. It will also get people to like you because they will tank your a wonderful and positive person. Thats why I thank having a good attitude will get people to like you.
Having a good attitude can make people want to hang out with you. A reason why is because you won't be boring and will have positive things to talk about. Another reason why is because maybe you can make people happy or make their day by just saying one word. Thats why I thank that having a good attitude will make people want to hang out with you.
Last but not list having a good attitude will make people respect you. It will make people respect you because you will treat people with respect and theres a saying that says treat people how you would like to be treat. So if you want to be respected you have to respect others. That why i thank having a good attitude will make people respect you.
Those were all my expels of how having a good attitude will help you. It will help by making people like you, make people want to hang out with you, and make people respect you.
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Almost everyone in the world had a big problem in their life. Problem is not rare this days. However, if you think of it problems is not that bad as you think. Like what Duke Ellington said " A problem is a chance for you to do your best", and I agree on what he said. I have several reasons why I agree on Duke's statement. My reasons are that problem make us work/push harder, it creates/set our goals, and importantly it make you learn from your mistakes.
Problems make us work/push harder. Many buisnessman have many problems. But they work hard and hard because problems make us work harder. Like what the movie(Your My Boss) said "A Good Buisness-man Need Problems To Do Better". Problems make us to push harder. Its like we are the turtle in the race where the turtle and bunny/fox race. I compare it like that because the bunny/fox is like the problem we want to face it and end it.
My other reason is that problems create/set our goals. When a person have a problem of course their going to create/set a goal to complete. Like what happened to me when I was a kid. I never seen my brother since I was 3 years old. So, I created a goal that I want to see my brother again,and it did happen. Problems make us create goal to achieve. My brother and me are a great example of that. Problems are pushing to set a goal that we will create the opposite of problems. Problems set as goals that we would not do the same mistakes again.
Last but not the least, problems make us learn from our mistakes. Because before problems mistakes comes first. When I got a problem I always ask my self "What did I do wrong?". Then, when I know what's the reason I just dont do it again so no problems will be created. When you learned your mistakes and don't create another problem their where it proves that "Problems make us learn from our mistakes". Brain and feelings are created so we can't make the same mistakes as before. So we can prevent many similar problems in our life.
My reasons why I agree are that problem make us work/push harder, it creates/set our goals, and importantly it make you learn from your mistakes. All of these reasons are very important to know. So you can understand why problems are not bad as you think of. Problems make us push harder, create goals, and the most important part it make us learn from our mistakes. Problems are the reasons why the world is still together and not fighting. Problems make us go together and help each other. Humans are created to enjoy life and learn from problems to problems.
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A way of think or feeling about a fact or state becuasse a positive attitude it is something when you feel better to other people and continue with the attitude.
The positive attitude are important to the people. Becuase if you have a bad attitude old time you maybe feel bad or angry and, if that person wanna do something. He or she can not do nothing because he or she are angry or not feel good to do they what he or she wanna do. Also it is not good someone has a bad attitude you never know what that person think. A person who have a positve attitude all time feel happy. Because that person who has the positive attitude are better people to the other people does have a positive attitude.
I agree with a positive attitude is the key to succes in life. Becuase the quality that distinguishes a vital and functional being from dead body. Also inamate matpacity for metabolism, grow, reaction to stimuli, and reproduction. The reason it sample becuase if you alway you mat you can dead more fast that's why you have to has positive attitude.
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Many people think that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I agree with this statement, because first impressions is something that is hard to change in your life. And when someone tries to change their first impressions they always fail. First impressions are the reasons why people don't get along because they think different about each other.
In my experience on first impressions are always bad, because when I'm going to talk to someone and the first thing I do before talking to them is judge them in good way. For example, if I'm going to a new school and I go my first day of classes, and I don't know no one in that school, and I want to talk to someone or be friends with someone, I'm going to have to talk to people in the new school, and before I talk to them I always think if they are good people or bad people. And if think that someone is bad, but in reality she/he is a really nice person. That is an example of first impressions.
I think that if you're trying to change your first impressions is going to be difficult, because you can't change something that is going to happen before you meet someone new. First impressions is something that every human has in their lives and they can't change it, because is a part of their lives. Even the animals have first impressions, because when you are trying to buy a dog, the dog is going to have a first impression because the dog is getting an owner. So that's why First impressions are almost impossible to change.
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Yeah because, pepople need to enjoy summer with the family and friend. And yeah is good idea to me because, we can get a week off in the spring and fall. People can go to the beach or king dominion, to have fun with family and friend. No body enjoy summer because, some people going summer school when somebody fail class. This year I want to have a great summer, because I want to know thing. Like I want to go to my country other country. And I want to know new friends to play with him.
This summer I want to play new sport like basketball, football and other sport. This summer I want to have fun, and play with my cousin and friend. Going everywhere with them, play pool with them practice boxing. And play soccer every day because soccer is my favorite sport. My dream is going to Generic_City that is my dream, because one day when I have my money I am going. When I have my job and have a good money, I am going to Generic_City to know thing like new people, and my other dream is going to Generic_City, because I want know new beach and new people too and to have new friend. I want to know new country, like I want to go to Generic_City to know my favorite singer and to have more thing to know. And to have my favorite food because, I want to know new food to eat.
And this summer I want to do a lot of thing, I dont like to stay home or when I am going to summer school and no do nothing just do homework and summer like is no fair. This I want to have a ood grade to no go to summer school if you don't pass you classes you are going summer school, if you study hard and have a good grade you can have fun and summer. And going with my cousin swing because, I like to swiming because is fun to go to the pool and have a lilte a fun to do. And then going to the beach with my family and have fun, because summer is fun to do thing or watching movie with my cousin and friend's is nice to have good friend. And this summer I want to practice my license driving because, I wanna drive and going everywhere like Generic_City. Last year I went to Generic_City to see new thing, I buy my favority thing like my shoes I buy my favorite shoes.
My last summer was great because, I went to king dominion with my mom and sister and cousin last year was fun. This year I want to go again to king dominion because, the place is a great place to have fun and going to the beach going to Generic_City to know people and to know new friend. And Spring Brake I am going to my country to see my grandmother, because I have 5 years I am no going to my country and to know thing going to the pool going to the beach and other places and to see my old friends.
Summer is great because, you can do a lot of thing like play outside with my friend, play pool , play soccer, play basketball.
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Is it good for students to to finish high school early?. Students should be allowed to take classes early because they do all their work in time , they take classes over the summer or even after school. They also get to go to college faster. They also get to walk and get there diploma faster. The student get's to go to college to study for what he wanted to study for.
The students who study harder or finish the work they do should be allowed to finish school in three years. If they study hard and take extra classes let them fish early. That's all up to them , if they care about their study let them walk early. The student put's his or her mind set to finish school early witch is great for them. The student who finishes school gets more time off of school. But at the same time more stress on them.
At the end of the day the more students that finish school early have one full year of no school. They get to focus on what they wanna go to college for to study. But that's only some schools, some schools don't even allow students to finish school in three years. In some schools they make you do the full 4 years of high school. Some schools probley want the students to do the the full 4 years of high school because they probley need a class on 12th grade.
If some schools let some students finish in the 3 years then the school wont be as packed. The schools need more space cause of more students coming in. They need to have more space and it would be less work for them. But at the same time it would take some time off the teachers. Some teachers have the time to help students and some don't.
Welp that's all have to say about schools letting students finish school in three years. I really think schools should let students finish early because they work hard to get there.
If the student finishes his or her work they should be allowed to walk early. I think that all schools should allow all the students who want to finish early to let them. It's good for the student that means he or her is educated and can get a good job and go to college to study for something really good.
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Dear, manager i want to know more about your business. What opportunities do you give your employees? I want to know new things from your business. I would love to go and have a position there. I'm interested to give it a try in your business. A professional like you can teach me how everything works and how you maintain everything under control with your employees. Also, it be delightful if i could ask questions about how is it difficult to be such a big person as a manager?
Therefore,I choose your company because I feel like its great for me to start working in a place that i could be conformable with. And specially if its from a company with great quality and management. Also i can learn how to socialize with people. Learning how to communicate is important for a company so everything is in order. Some companies don't know how to communicate and to be organize. They've to be anti-social so they can focus on their work and not on other employees otherwise there's consequence. Some companies are very strict with their employees. For examples employees have to be obedient to every single thing. As in they've to follow every step correctly or they would get fired or worst.
Thirdly, Your company is understandable to your employees. You treat them with respect and love as if they were your family. I heard that if your employees had a emergency you would be generous and support them no matter what. I never heard one complain from your company either. However, its the exact opposite. people who works there seems to love it and to enjoy it! They've learned to be responsible and respectful in your company. You also are fair with your employees. Employees in that company gets payed well with no complains. They get payed exact the hours they've been working.
However, the way you manage your customers is incredible. Your customers are never disappointed what they order is exactly what they get. Employees always have a smile on their faces when receiving a customer. They're always gentle and polite. But more importantly patient because they're a lot of customers who are slow or aggressive, they like to get attention. As great employees they handle any challenges. And i think it's a perfect start for me because I'll do everything right with no excuses. In the other hand, your company is always nice and neat you make sure that the place looks good and prepared just in case important visitors come to visit your company.
Mean while, i think the environment needs more companies as an this one. because everything about this company is splendid and spectacular. They've great service and employees. They make sure their customers come in and out happy. Your company takes responsibility for any errors that could happen. You also give great deals for customers. you teach your employees have to be a great worker. You give your employees plenty of time to get along with their job because you know that in the future they will do way much better. You also persuade your employees that they can do anything. That giving up is not a answer. I would like to be a outstanding person for your company. I want to tell everyone about how amazing your company is and how wonderful everyone who work there is. The organization in your company is great you keep everything in order.
In conclusion, I think i am very interested in learning about your company more and actually try to work there. I want to feel that joy and that responsibility i have to have. I want to spend time learning and practicing in your company. Your company has shown me that not all companies are bad as they say nor terrible. In my opinion i think companies should be more like this one. So if i could get the opportunity to go and check it out and learn that would be amazing. Because i never heard of a company this generous before. And i would definitely would love to know more about it. Everything about your company is great for example communication,organization,employees and deals. It sounds entertaining and enjoyable. This is a enormous deal for me. So Mr. Manager i would like to go and visit it. I could also work that exact day if you want me to it would be a pleasure to work in a amazing company.
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A positive attitude is the key to success in life. A position of the body or manner of carrying oneself. Do yo prefer a person whit bad attitude or good attitude?, think about it. In my position i agree with the statement, because; people get better communication with others, get more jobs, and students have more opportunities.
Some people think attitude reflect self confidence to society, as positive attitude reflect peace and happiness. For example: When i have a positive atittude; i see more people want to know about me , but when i have a bad attitude nobody want to know me, because they know people with a positive attitude reflect more friendly, furthermore people with positive attitude have better relation with their family, friends and communitie as they energy is more pleasant.
A positive person with good attitude get more jobs. In some companies a positive attitude is a requirement for the employer. People who have a positive attitude do better works. for example: I am waitress and my boss say all the time " if you want to be a good customer service you need to have a good attitude" and thats true because when i have a good attitude with the costumers they give me a good tips, but when i have a bad attitude i get bad tips. Customers want a good service, employer want to make good money and companies want a good workers.
Some Schools want students with positive attitude. A student attitude is important because help them to get a better school opportunities. For example: Sports, Science, and others Team's in schools; the good attitude is a requirement if you want to be part of them. Students with a negative attitude have difficulties to connect with the class and work in a group. However, students with a good attitude facility they own work, and the teachers work, because if a student have a bad attitude is more difficult that teacher or coach teach them and help as student is good in those things, but have a bad attitude he/she loss the opportunitie to show their capacities.
In conclusion, a positive attitude is the key to success in life, as important and help to people get more opportunities at jobs furthermore be great in studies and get a better communication with all people, that make a success person in their life.
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My thoughts on this are that it is good time and this should actually occur for many reasons first of all during the weekdays young people have school everyday only if it is a holiday or if sick. By implying this more young people will get out of the streets so late at night there is no need to be out so late at night in the first place. Second of all, at 10 p. m is a great time to be home during the weekdays it will keep you out of trouble and there will be less chances of young people dying to other criminals at night. Late at night is where most of all crimes occur and now the chances of this will be lower. Third of all , as their are so many people that sell drugs and if young people have to be home so early the chance of them getting into all types of drugs will be so much lower.
If this does become a law the times are also very appropriate Monday through Friday until 10 p. m and then Saturday through Sunday until 12 p. m no one needs to be on the streets later then this time that is being given. If they are their out so late there should be a extreme reason as to why they would be "breaking the law". This will most likely keep young people out of more troubles then they all ready are. This time is not unfair it is a very generous time to be home. This really should not be interfering with any ones life you can still go out but not be out for so late at night. I would understand if this law was also for people over the age of 18 because young adults like to party. But this law should actually be for people under the age of 18 that would make more sense and being a "adult"(over the age of 18) they know what is right from wrong,what they should be doing, and what they should not be doing.
This law is not to harm anyone but it would to improve the community curfews to keep teenagers out of trouble I can very much agree with that. But those young teenagers are not doing the right thing then no matter what law that is added nothing will change the fact of how they act(keep them out of trouble). Going back to the time it is not like this law will be implying that the young people do not hang out with their friends this is just so more people can stay safe from all the trouble that is the streets. A lot of innocent people die every year by being so late at night and in the streets where some of the bad people come out. They have all after school to be doing after school activities this will not keep anyone from doing what they want. It is just a way to keep young people out of trouble there should be excuses to all of this like going to a party but there as well should be a limit to all of this. The consequence if they break the law should start of as a warning and then just be adding on to that.
My position on this curfew law is also that I would understand why people do not want this to happen but at the same time teenagers do know what they should be doing and what they should not be doing. I have two different view points why they should be worried and why they should not be worried. I know that people like to have sleep overs and would this be included or do they have to specifically in their house on can they be sleeping at someone else . Back into my other view if they go to a party lets say over the weekend where the curfew is at 12 p. m because it is on a Saturday and they come back at 1 p. m or later .They are not keeping track of time and lose the time. They are having fun with all of their friends and then they get caught because someone calls the police. Then the police comes and now they have to face the law and all that. Now what is next that being on their record just because they stayed out longer then they had and were on the streets. This would honestly suck and then going home and getting in trouble by your parent because of a mistake you made. After all this wanting to go to a very good college and they not accepting them just because they made a mistake for staying to late at the party. This would be a down side because if anyone breaks the law that will go on there record and not come out of there permit sadly this is a consequence that can happen and would suck. A college not accepting them because they " broke the law" not fun at all because colleges do look at everything anyone does before getting accepted and being a very good student with a high GPA and hearing this would not be good they will be carrying that guilt for their whole life by not getting into the college that they want to get into.
On the other note right now there is not a curfew to what time teenagers should be home yet but there is a curfew to when who ever has their permit for driving. So that is also a big restriction no young teenager is out in their car at a late time the only time you can actually see them is when they are getting out of school. There are pros and cons to this "law" but I think there are mostly pros then cons everything is very much reasonable and understanding. The only down/con that I can personally thin of right now is that they get caught and that going in their record does not sound good at all. But overall there are a lot of pros to this and this law should be seriously implied to all of the United States not only to one city but to all of them. This will keep more people safe yes pf course there is always that one person who wants to break the law as a joke or something that really should not be anything to play around with or anything but something that all young people listen to it take it serious.
In conclusion this law or curfew will stop all of these thieves from stealing young girls or boys and then selling them as well as to stop rape from happening so much because sometime it is very hard to detected people because of how dark it is. But this will most likely lower the chance of all these negative things to happen so frequently to anyone. It will also keep young people out of lots of trouble by being so late at night less danger.
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"unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered"
, you will never grow im agree i think if you wanna do something you can try. think febore to do. He says if you never grow and you have already mastered. He say you will try, because if you dont try you never know if you can to do. For example if you think osmethin and you can do so you do it if you never try you can know if you do it. So you can try something.
1. Desagree, the persons don think after do something
2. Agree they can try to do somethin better
You try to do something beyond yours hands and that is a little bit imposible if you can do you can do and thats all. The humanity do things inimaginables and thas is cool but the thing is they can try to do is impossible understannding, and if you can try and fail thats is your problem then personas can do whatever they want and thats it.
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Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". I absolutely agree with that statement, because in my opinion I see success as a goal that everyone on this earth should somehow reach to. However, it's not that easy and not everyone is able to to that.
For example, my father is a successful business man by helping others and our family, he has done a lot for me. He also took risks and failed multiple times in order for him to be successful in life. Not just because he has a lot of money, because otherwise not every rich individual is successful. You must fail in order to better yourself and learn from your mistakes, because that will benefit you in the long run.
For me, I want to be a successful business man, just like my dad. I also want to travel around the world, and gain knowledge. but my goal for know is to pass all my classes with a high GPA, to show my parents and myself that I can do it. Yes, I failed one of my classes before but I didn't give up. As Winston said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". I'm going to keep working hard in order to graduate and chase my dreams, just like my father did.
In the conclusion, I think that Winston said a true statement. I personally agree with him, because in order to be successful in life you will either need to learn from your personal mistakes or others. That's honestly what I am doing right now, since I'm still a teenager. Learning from others help you develop new skills and knowledge, especially from the old generation.
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Dear Principal:
I personally don't think its a good idea that your considering changing school policy so that people may not participate in sports or other activities unless they have at least a grade B average.
Sports has nothing no do with school, that's just another activity that's after school and the better you play sports the better your going to be good at school, specially with your grades. It keeps you organized and makes you stay on topic. For people sports are really important and really fun to play, it makes you runs and concentrated on how you play. You might think that for some reason that's why people are getting a bad grade average, but its not like that. I consider that sports are really important to me, and even if i don't play in a team i still love to play any kind of sport. It keeps me awake and motivated. It keeps me from stop being lazy all the time. There are 2 main reasons why i don't think its a good idea that you should change that policy. My first main reason is sports have nothing to do with school ,is just another amazing activity that people would enjoy instead of just watching TV or being on the computer. My second reason is like my mom always told me a story. When she was little and lived back in Mexico, she would tell me all about her childhood and what she would do at my age. She used to tell me that she would run every morning to exercise and breath the fresh air outside, after that she would be with my grandfather and helping him with everything that she could and then she would play Basketball with her friends. Having a little challenge to see who would win and just to have fun. I remember asking her if sports had to do anything with school? if that was an activity to bring my grades up ?' What she said Exactly was " They invented sports so that kids, teenagers and people would have a routine and be a better person. Believe it or not mostly for teenagers, sports brings there grade up and well organized , and when i started playing sports, it did bring my grade up. What the captains do is that they show you how to be on time and do all your assignments so its similar to sports.''
I'll never forget the message that my mom gave me about sports.
Sincerely : STUDENT_NAME
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" Why stay home bored out of your mind when there are enjoyable ways you can spend outdoors? "
I think outdoors activities are more enjoyable then indoors activities because you can spend more time with family, spending more time exploring the world, and take time away from all those electronic devices. Being outdoors provides a wide variety of interesting ways to enjoy being outdoors for example going to the park where there awesome activities for the kids and parents, taking a stroll outside with you dog or family, and it can also be a stress reliever.
First, Family is important, and spending more time with family is important, because it allow you to get to know them. For example your mom and dad work really hard to affords all the stuff you need and you and your brothers and sisters are barely able to see them. On Saturdays and Sundays are the only time your able to see them and have quality time with them but you are to busy in your room chatting with friends a d doing your homework, but all you have to do is take a break and spend time with them. Going to the park with them , walking around, talking have a nice conversation without a rush, joking around are ways you can spend time with family. Having fun at a carnival or festival with your family, eating hot dogs, cotton candy , riding fun rides, you might even find your cousins there and also spend time with them. All of these are enjoyable ways you can spend with your family outdoors.
Secondly, spending more time with the outside world is an amazing experiences because it allows you to discover all the amazing living creatures, food, cultures, countries , other ways other people live, etc. It can be very enjoyable to explore for example you can go to South Africa there are amazing food, animals if you go to the zoo its amazing, and fun to do with family or friends or even alone. Exploring can also be fun you can go out meet people you can go to book fairs, concert from your favorite bands or singers, try out different restaurant, try something crazy like jumping from a cliff and going into the river, swimming with sharks or dolphins, you can meet people who might be with you your whole entire life, have connections with them, visiting a museum, a aquarium. There are fun ways you can explore the world with all these outdoors activities.
Thirdly, spending time away from electronics helps enjoys quality times with other for examples your family, friends,and it helps be more focus in school and homework. Humans have tendency to procrastinate and be like
" oh i'm going to do my homework and this or that tomorrow I have so much stuff to do"
but at the same time stay on there phone for hours. Some people cant even have a decent conversation with family or spend time outdoors with their brothers and sister because they are too busy on their phone for hours. Parks, museums, and other places have good outdoors activities that helps humans stay away from technologies. There and millions of ways you can enjoy outdoors activities without being on your devices.
In conclusion, going to the park with your family and spending time together, visiting different countries, taking time away from your phone, and enjoying all the beautiful things this earth has, are enjoyable ways you can spend outdoors, all of the activities can also be a stress reliever, going to the park with your cousin and sibling are fun to do and are enjoyable time outside .
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Accomplishing more if we are always doing something, is how Thomas Jefferson determined it. It's recommend day after day that we motivate ourselves to move forward as we learn to progress in new skills we learn. Accomplishing more if we are always doing something is a huge motivation for people because; it helps the person in many ways, they get benfits , and it helps them be productive. This is why each day we see more and more people becoming greater then what they already are in life.
When accomplishing more things if we always doing something, people seem to get or fine benefits by doing by doing this task. People are being able to gain more knowledge from this because, they're simply putting in lots of detication and time into always doing tasks. Most people that are always doing more seem to find what they truly like to do and having a passion for, therefore this helps them a lot because it is leading them to find a carrer that they're truly passionate about. Lastly it helps the person keep their mindset clear and puts a postive energy inside their self.
How does this help the person? Well by accomplishing more it helps the person get some type of payment if working under emploment or simply they're just starting off working. Seeing that someone can get money by doing more is always gonna be a motivation on someone's mind because, they're seeing differnent life styles around the community. Getting money by accomplishing more is a big achievement for mostly everone, they are able to save,spend, and as well as helping family or close friends. There're are many people out there that wanna give back to their love ones for many reasons and the only way by doing this is being preductive in accomplishing more.
The most important part of accomplishing more of someting is by, by being productive when deciding to part the amount of affort you want to accomplish what someone one wants. People that seek goals for themselves always seem to be the most preductive, only because they visualize big things in their futrue. Being Preductive is amazing thing, because it doesnt show a weakness inside the person, and it is a way to show strength, as well as showing hunger for what you are striving for in life. Setting examples to others that you are preductive and are accomplishing more and big things, is gonna look good on someone simply because, they see the outcome of the hardwork, and detication put into doing more of something.
In conclusion, if we accomplish more by doing something; we will become remarkable in many differnent ways.
By challenging their selves to go down the road as something big all they need to do is be preductive with thierselves, actknowlege that they will have benefits, and learn why it will help them beocme who they want to be. Therefore if they is someone out there in the world that wants to accomlish big things, all they need to do is do more of somehting and strive for their success.
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Befits For An Extra Hour of School
85% of students who study more can pass more test. I feel like some students could befits from an extra half an hour of school because it could help students learn more. Also some students struggle with some subjects so it could also befits some students who can not stay back. School should add an extra half of a hour to school because it could help students get more education, better job opportunity, and help students to be better prepared for test.
First, students with more education could help students lead to success. Education is helpful because it is need in a lot of daily activities. Education is also super important because it is through out life. Also some students who want to get in a good collage but do not have the money for it if they have a good education they can get in for free but they have to have good grades. Some students might want to become a teacher but might not have the right education for that so that why education is important.
Second, students could have better job opportunity. Some students would not like the job they get. Also students with good education could give students a job they want. Another thing a better job could make the students get more money from higher paying job and also some students could want to become a teacher. Students also do not have to worry about how much they are getting paid and what type of job they have. Some students could have a better job opportunity if they get an extra 30 minutes because they get more education are more likely to pass their test.
Third, students will be better prepared for test. Some students struggle with a lot of test because they can not stay back. So I think an extra 30 minutes could help students get a little more education and it could help students learn more and be better prepared for test. An also passing test is important because it is one of the highest grade and if u fail them it could make your grade go down a lot. An some student may struggle and that could help student do more activities and maybe they can pass more.
In conclusion, I think an extra 30 minutes could hep students get more education. It is also good for some student. It will also help students be better prepared and it could let them lead to success. So I feel like an extra 30 minutes is not that long so some student would also not mine. So it could benefits some student to make them more successful.
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Students committing to a career at a young age can actually be very helpful. Although, some students prefer not to be committed to a specific career in their high school years. Some students just like to take their time and explore new things and that way it can give them ideas about what to do in the future. Other students just decide what to do when they are in college. That being said, committed at young age, exploring new things, deciding in college.
Students being committed at a young age is helpful and will benefit themselves for the future. Students sticking to one area for their career at a young age and just being focused on it is what they need in order to get there. Especially if they are focusing and putting hard work at a young age. However, some students may not enjoy having to just stick with one area. Students will not be able to enjoy what other students enjoy. Exploring new things at the young age is very fun.
With students being committed at a young age and all, exploring new things at a young age is very fun. Students do not have to worry or stress about being committed to just one thing. Students exploring at a young age will have more opportunities to see what they like. Students will enjoy more of their time rather than other students who are committed to one thing. Unless if students really love to what they are committed to, they wont enjoy much of their time. For example, if one student is committed to one thing but does not love what he is doing and the other student who is exploring new things and enjoying his time, then the student exploring will enjoy more of his time and be happy as well.
Being committed at a young age, exploring new things are fun but Lastly, students decide what to do as they enter college. Students deciding as they head to college is pretty tough. Some students wont be able to prepare for whats coming. For example, if students had chose what to do while they were in high school then they would have time to prepare for what they would be doing in college. But choosing what to do as you head in to college can be tough for some students.
In conclusion, being committed at a young age is good and beneficial for students but it can get boring and sad, unless if students truly love what they are doing. Students entering college and immediately deciding what to do without actually knowing anything about what they chose is not so fun. Now students who explore new things at a young age is what most students should do. This way they know what they will enjoy and what they wont enjoy. Students can do whatever they want to at a young age. Once students find what they love. They can stick to it and have it as their career.
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Forty-five percent of people in the world enjoy doing outdoor activities. Something like going to community parks, state parks, and even national parks. The other percentage of people are indoors sleeping, watching TV, or playing video games. I personally can do both, there are other days when I just want to stay in the house and there are other days when I want to get out the house and do things like playing soccer with my brother and father. Enjoyable ways to spend you time outdoors can be going to festivals hanging out with friend or even reading a book in the park.
Some interesting and enjoyable outdoor activities that I like doing is going to the zoo, going on a picnic, hanging out with friends and family, playing some type of sport, or visiting a amusement park. Away that I would spend my time outdoors is hanging out with family and friends. By doing that I can go to the zoo with friends or go to a park and play sports with them. There are many thing you can do you just have to find the right activity the you like and enjoy. Another activity that I enjoy is playing soccer with
my dad and brother we always go to the park and play with my cousin then after that we would go out to eat and its better than sitting home all day and doing nothing.
These activities can be enjoyable because you together with family and friends and that can make things fun. People can use these activities to take their minds off certain situation like problem at home or something going on at school . People can use going to the park and reading a book as an escape of reality and life and going into their imagination. There are many reason why these activities can be enjoyable. Just sitting home all day doing nothing can cause you to be lazy and hide away from the world but also going outside is good for you mental growth. My mother has always told my sibings and I that we should go outside more often and I think to myself why is it important for us to go outside if there are more problems in the world the being indoors.
I think that being outdoors can help you open you mind up more to new things and experiences. For example my friend PROPER_NAME had skin cancer and he was so scared of being out side and he wanted to hangout with his friends, play sports, and go to the park and have picnic. This story is what motivates me to go out side because I dont want the freedom of going outside to be taken away.
everyone like a little bit of fun for example last week me and my friend went bowling and then we went to the mall it was pretty enjoyable because I forget about everything and focus on myself and the people I am with. I find it interesting the when we were younger we loved being outdoors playing with our friend and now that we are older and have electronics we decide to stay inside because its more entertaining. In conclusion, there are many enjoyable things to do outdoors you just have to find the right activity that suites you or maybe even try new things do to by yourself or find someone to do it with.
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Do you like Kpop? Well guess what Korea is the home of Kpop and it's a great expeirince. Over all korea is a great place to visit. These are the reason why I would love to go to Korea beacuse of there food, the beautiful places, and the time I can get to myself.
One reason, why I love Korea as much is beacuse of the food. The food in Korea is so tasty for example the korean BBQ (Barbeque). Korean BBQ'S is where everyone sits down at a table order some raw meat, they also get some side dishes like to go with it. Once they get the raw meat they cook it have ever they want, in the small grill in the mibble of the table. Kimchi is another type of food that I like beacuse it's spicy and I love spicy foods. But the best part adout the food in Korea is the street food beacuse it's so cheap but yet so tasty that I could die for it.
Another reason, is the beautiful places in Korea. Visiting the Han River a great first place to go when you get to Korea. Han River has lots of beautiful pink bloosom tree's which are great for taking photograghs. Generic_City is a city that is very populated with people. Generic_City is just like California here in the United State beacuse it's where all the famous people live at. The best part of Generic_City is the performances beacuse you get to see so many talented people show off there skills with rapping, dancing, and singing. The beaches in Korea are a great place for families to have bonding time together, especially in Busan.
Finally, the best part is "me time" which means I can get time for myself. Decent hotels are really hard to find but every single hotel in Korea looks amazing from the inside and from the outside. Every single thing in the hotel in is clean beacuse korean people don't like to be messy they love to be organized. The relaxition spa's are great, to have some "me time" they do foot massages, faciaul treatment and more. Yoga is even more relaxing then anything else beacuse it helps your mind conitrait and balance its self in order to distress. These are the main things I suggest you to do if you want to realease the stress and have some "me time".
In conlusion, I suggest you to take a trip to korea. One, is beacuse the food is great, especially the street food. Second, it have the most amazing places to visit like Han River. Last but not least, is the relaxation time i can get for myself. Well its time for me to catch a flight to korea. I hope i see you there too. You might even chatch a glipse of your favorite Kpop idol.
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Dear Teacher,
I've been asked if is more beneficial working in a group with students or working alone. In my opinion I think working as a group is more beneficial than doing all the work alone. I think working as a group is less stress on the student but helps get the work done faster and easier. I've noticed that people do better in group projects because the work can be split between the students and not just one person doing all the work that may be hard to understand or do all the work on time. Working as a groups helps mostly those students who really don't do their work on time or having problems in understanding what to do and also they can ask the students in the group for more support or in explaining something more clear.
For example, if a student that is working alone doesn't understand the concept of the project and has no one to ask or just doesn't want to ask the teacher they will either do it wrong or just not do it because they don't have that extra support. In a group you usually have that person that is on top of you if you are doing you part and asking if you need help or need more explaination. Being a group creates communication skill and helps those who have trouble with interacting with other students. Working as a group get the work done faster and helps not go to hard on youself. This is why when a teacher asks me if I want to work alone or with a group or partner, I always work with someone else becasue it just helps me get my assighnment done on time because I have done big projects by myself and I see that I struggle do it , then at the end I get a bad grade or I just end up not doing it because I feel like I can ask th teacher for help. Some students have this problem in reaching out to their teacher because they are either shy or they just can't find a way to get their help.
Many students will agree that working as a group is helpful and beneficial instead of working alone where is hard to do everything alone and having to plan what to do to get an assignment done and hoping for the best.
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I think by having older students with younger students would be helpful. Because older students can help the younger students with homework,projects and classwork. Older students how to do the right things that can help the younger students.
To begin with, having older students can teach the younger students on what they need help with in school. This can be really helpful to younger students because with help someone that is older then you they can help you improve in school. Like for example my friend is one year older then me and helps me with school work when I need it. Older students can help teachers by help the students with classwork. Having older students in a program can be useful because they can show the younger students how to act the right way in class,and show others to do what they need to do.
Additionally, younger students can look up to older students that they trust. Because they have helped them in school and having fun spending time with each other. Some younger students might think an older student can treat them as a sibling. Like for example I see one of my friends as a sibling because we have been friends since we where little and I trust them. So it's good to look up to some one that you trust and count on and be their for you when you need them.
Finally , I think having older students and younger students in the same program would be great. Because older students can show the younger students how to be right and do what your teacher tells you what to do. And parents want their kid to do good in school so they can have a good life to live. Having a mix of older and younger students can learn to do things together. By having older students it can effect the younger students to do good in school.
In conclusion, I think it's good to have a mix of older and younger students to be in the same program. This can help older and younger students to work together. And helping one in other is to help improve what they need help on. Like on homework,classwork,and projects to see what the need to improve.
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Students would benefit attending school from home in many ways.... students would be able to work in a quiet environment with no distractions from other students. Another reason why it would be better would be because, some students work in their own speed and won't be worried about how fast others finish. Sometimes students are more focused on who finishes first and sometimes think it's a race. students would also have the chance of working on their own time when they can,like that students could proprobly finish their work faster. Online school could also be better for students sleep schedule, like that students could be more rested and would be able to focus on their work.
Better sleeping schedule would help kids focus more on their work and would be able to stay up, whens students dont sleep well the tend for fall asleep in class. Falling asleep in class effects on class grades because student pay less attention. Having to wake up early and get ready on time is hard work,making it on time to school is a big task. Just having online classes from home would be better for everyone in general, would honestly make students life much more easier. Online school should just be a thing for students because its less stressful and much easier.
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I disagree,and here on my reasons. If you just believe on your imagination then knowledge it wouldnt end up go for you. 1,people would think your crazy. 2,people would not even believe it would even work or would ever come true. Lastly,people would just think its plain old dumb if you believe in that.
I think people would think your crazy because if you keep living on your imagination then you'll get to stcuk in your own little games your in,and you'll sometimes forget what the real world thinks of you. The worst to come is that you'll get to scared to come to even go out into the real world. Knowledge is a powerful thing that everyone has,and its more powerful than your own imagination. If yo keeping thinking about your own little world your own little world you live in,then you would just forget on how the real world is a scary place.
Second of all,If you have a big imagination,people would not even believe that it would ever come true. Reson number 1,people would just believe in whatever you do. Think about it,their are so many ideas that just shut down,like how bills get made but they dont even get to the second step of becoming a law. Reason number 2,Everyone judges on what you think and what you believe. Some might agree,but most of all they just think your werid or crazy. So yes, it's scary to think on what people believe in what you imagine.
Finally,People would just think your plain on dumb. If your imagination gets to out od hand,people would just think your dumb or disagree with you. Yes,it's werid or even sad to have people judge or think your done with your own fantasy. People won't take you seriosly. And if they don't take you like you mean business,then they just won't talk to you at all. And your left with nothing but your own ideas. So,its risky to have a really big imagination because people would just think your plain on dumb or they might take your ideas and leave you with nothing.
In conculsion,I don't think it would be a great idea to have a big imagination. Knowledge is best because people won't judge you,they wont think your crazy,and they would believe you a 100%. I think its great having a big imagination,but dont get to attach to your imagination.
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When older student work with smaller students, it can make friends, it can also help smaller student and older student.
When older student and smaller student work together it can make friends because both student have to work together so they have to listen and talk to each other, so they can be friends. When they talk to each other they can learn more about the other person like they can know what they like or what they don't like. So they can learn a lot from each other. It mean that when you make friend it can help the smaller kids.
It can help the smaller kid because they can uderstand better about the lesson because they know then if they don't understand something someone is gonna to help them to understand. They can say their opinion because ththe older and smaller student do not have a lot of different age like could have 4 or 5 years old more then tem so that is not a lot, so it can be easyer to the small kid to explain you what their opinion is. They can also ask a question when they want because sormely they have to wait that the teacher is finish an other student to ask the question but if there are also older student which alredy do the lesso you can ask them your question. The work by different age help the small kid but it can also help the old kid.
It can help the old kid because it help them to stay calm to do not be in stress, because with small kid you have to dpeak slow and do not be angry because they do not understand you are saying. If they understand what you are saying it mean that you have to find an other way to explain it like speak cleerly with simple words because don't know all the long and difficult word. The older student have maby forget this lesson so they can relearn the less at the same time then the small kids, but it will be easyer for the older student because he will remenber quicly. So when the small and big kid work together it can creat benefits and it can help the both of the student.
So when older student work with smaller students, it can make friends, it can also help smaller student and older student. So I realy think it is importante for the small and old kid to work together, because they both have benefits to do it.
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Prime Minister Winston Churchill said that " success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm" is a great idea. Although some people might say If you keep from failure to failure that means you can not done It,because you are not genius. But in my opinion If you don't loss your enthusiasm you will be success.
The best example is when AiDiSheng developed light blob he had thousands of fails but he didn't give up, he didn't loss enthusiasm,after more fails finally he made the first light blob in human life. It tells me If you don't loss your enthusiasm on something thing you focus on keep doing it you will done it perfectly like what you wished.
My other reason is be audacious keep trying. when you are failure to failure, your friends might say stop doing it you are not going to make It .they just giving you a suggestion.
If you stop you will loss your enthusiasm on something that is attracting you just because they said are not going to make it, trust yourself keep trying don't loss your enthusiasm.
In my opinion enthusiasm is not easy to have, the only ways to have Is someone or something that is attracting me. I would like to focus on I will have enthusiasm like video games I can play for a whole day,but I can't study for whole day It will be tough to me what If I have enthusiasm on study I will be success too.
Fail is not dreadful, the awful thing is loss enthusiasm that will be incurable. Believing yourself even you have many fails continue trying you will be succeed.
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I recommend to the students take the tradicional four years. If the students take four years of high school they are able to take elective classes. The students will have more time to do their homeworks to concentrate more in classes. Many high schools the tradicional is four years of high school that is a good choice for the students. Students will have more experience having four years of high school. The students will learn more things in one more year of high school.
The benefits taking four years of high school.
Students are able to take elective classes.
Concentrate more taking four years of high school.
Students will have more time to do their homeworks.
Students will be more prepare for college.
They will have more time to study for the exams.
Free time.
Less stress.
I do not recomment to the students take three years of high school. Because there is many classes that students cannot take that are elective classes take three years of high school is not a good choice for the students who work after school.
2. Three years of school.
More stress.
The students will do not have enough time.
The students will do not concentrate in classes.
Not pay atention in classes.
Students have to stay after school.
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I think that something positive and negative for this reasons if you have a work and work just 4 days for ten hours you don't have sufficient money for pay your bills, have a trip with your family or other things but you have more time for pass time with your family,to relax,watch the tv, stay in home with your wife and children and this is good because sometime you can't share with your family and friends so i think that this is a good proposal.
I think that this is an good idea because if the school follow this model by extending the school day two hours the benefits are you have more time for study and complete all your work three days to relax in home and do your homework or get a jod and work for three days all this is a benefits.
I believe that with this proposal don't have disadvantages because support all students for more opportunity in the school and be a better student.
In my conclution this is a big opportunity for better jods and better school but we have to know that all pruposal have benefits and disasvantages for everyone.
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"Succes consists of going from failure to failure without loss enthusiasm".
-Former British Minister Winston Churchill
Immigrants who came from differents countries to United States are the most strongest people in the world.
These people really know what failure means and how brave they are to leave their families and find the success that they could not get on their countries.
That's the meaning of this statement and I'll explain you why I am agrre with this powerful phrase.
I believe that immigrants who came to United States are the strongest people because they have to do a lot of sacrificies before to come here, for example, some parents live theirs children with their grandparents or take the risk to come with them even knowing how hard is the way to come to America.
Its really difficult to come to a new country without know the lenguage, the city, and what kind of peolpe will you find in the way, some are good persons who helps them some of them are racist, they start from cero without a hosue, a car, a good job, being alone and so far from their families, this is how they get the strength to keep moving up and help their families in their countries.
They are the best example for this statement to teach us how can we start from down in a new place and get the opportunity to be in the top without never give up making clear our goals and purposes,
sometimes we want to do something that we really love but we feel afraid to fail, but if we never try we never going to know how it feels like to see ours dreams realized. If you believe in what you think , then it worths and do not let anyone tell you that you can not.
I'm agree with this statement because it shows us a different way to see what we call difficult or imposible to make. When the things are getting hard just think in the price that you will earn at the end or how proud you will be for made that thing that you wanted to do and someone told you that you could not make. Just be as an immigrant, brave, able, capable to risk all that they have to get a new opportunity, a different way of live but always thinking about the yearned price.
I hope you have an idea about this statement means , and do not give up on your dreams and the goals that you made some day thinking about make them reallity and if you always want to triumph you have to spend time on it.
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To Begin with, many student have many excuses to not attend school. Of curse, that we can change this to not be happen anymore. Student may not complete the school if they lose the year.
What would happen if student get affected for all student that not attend school? For example, like I seen in me that I have a lot of appointment that is affecting me and my grade. We can not let this happen we need to do many thing in order to not let our child lose. In addition,
principal should offer distance learning for student that the way could not affect them because student might have a natural disaster in their neighborhood, student might be sick in such manner that could not attend school, that might affect their grade and they might repeat the year.
First reason, student might be absent for a reason like to be sick in such manner that could not attend school. All included student that is special that they go for a week or more in the hospital. Moreover, student sometime the doctor let a lot of appointment for them to check up or appointment with the dentist. Also, student who have allergies when the weather change they got affect in that they may not come to school. In high school, student sometime they get pregnant and the doctor let them many appointment including when they delivery they lose many school days and that affect many student lose the year or they may get affect their grade. Because we don't know in the future what will happen to some of our student that many of them don't find any solution of their problem. In fact, we don't know what it will happen if we don't give an opportunity to our students. We must pay attention to them if they lose many days of school sometime they are afraid to talk about their problem.
Second reason, student in their neighborhood might have a natural disaster also might need the distance learning in order to not lose school days. Sometime the weather get so angry that may bring accident or can bring tree crashing in our hose or may get rain and rain that could bring floating that may cause a lot of problem to some our students. In addition, the school bus may not get as in order to come to school. If it a student that walk that student could not get to school and the County could not cancel the school or even in there's no light and that may tell an announcement that student could not get informed about the school information weather. Because, if student get that problem the principal could not believe and it can not give an chance to those student to take the test or the exam that they had in class. After all, in the school no one care about you even if you have a teacher that it is so inpatient.
To end with, the school should offer the distance learning to some of our students. Student may got sick for a little reason and if they had natural disaster, we should care about it. If we find a student that always is absent we should ask them what is the matter or what is the problem with them? While some may argue that if we offer the distance learning student may not lose school days and even they could not lose their grade student could have benefit from this way student could not lose, however some may argue that if we gave the distance learning to student student could not enjoy this learning they just will playing even if we give the distance learning in computer they just see it they they will start playing video game or they just will watch a video. Finally, we should give the student an opportunity they will enjoy it and they will not throw it away.
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When you're looking for advice, you might not go to the same exact person. Hopefully you do talk to more than one person to make a better choice and give up the less opportunity cost. Most people talk to more than one person to see their other options instead of putting all one decision into one person's own opinion.
One thing I like about talking to multiple people for advice is that they can give you so many open options to pick and decide from. Most likely if all the people you talk to about advice or help, you will pick what they have choose. Which can be good or it could lead to a bad cause. Your always gonna have a opportunity cost. You either make a good or a bad move, which can lead in different directions. including the rest of your life, your mood for the rest of the day, the improvement, or the impact. There are multiple options that can occur.
Another reason this option is good is because you can hear all the others people's opinion's about your choice and you can mark out the ones you have already happened to you in a perfect or an awful way. You can also, pick their opinions or options and learn from it either if it's gonna be a bad time or a good time. After you have learned you can help out the one's in your same position or a little more different. But still can be able to help others in need. You can learn from it and help other's or you can learn from it and help yourself in the future if you ever come upon the same situation. Or even teach the one's need in teaching
One dislike I don't like about talking to a couple of people for advice, is hearing their opinions and advice it could possibly change your mind of you were thinking about before, But also it could be the better choice of the 2 or more open options. Different people can give you different responses about your situation. Which can make your problem worse of the option your gonna have decide to pick which advice could outrun the rest. Even picking which choice your gonna make can put more stress and pressure on you. Maybe even after picking your choice it could turn out the worst day of your life or the best. It's really hard to make the selection of which advice your gonna pick.
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This generation is influenced by technology and they are used to it. They would be more comfortable with it as they are used to it . It's beneficial for students to do distant learning more than to go to school and do it.
Distant learning is already being used through online and video conferencing, This days colleges and universities allows students to choose online courses of their own choices . Students are used to online stuff like, web browsing, gaming, and etc. which gives them an extra advantage already. They would be more successful using online browsing. Video conferencing is another way of distant learning; this would let the teachers talk to students in case they need help. People has been using video conferencing to even take tests at home.
Distant learning would also help them have success in education socially. If students are to stay at home to learn, they would feel more comfortable around somewhere they been for a long time. They could ask people, family members who they are comfortable with, for help if they wanted to. They would be more fit and ready than going to school considering that you have to wake up early in the morning, get ready and walk to school. They wouldn't have to do any of this, and have enough sleep to have a fresh mind to work with.
It is beneficial for students to use distant learning to attend classes such as, video conferencing and online browsing. I personally think that its better for me and lots of other students to use distant learning as it can help in a social and educational way.
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Are vacations a necessity to us and to our success? Why do we need them? While some say that inactivity gives us time to reinvent ourselves. Others believe that it instigates procrastination. Inactivity serves a purpose because it keeps us from giving up and it allows us time for new ideas.
Inactivity serves a purpose because it keeps us from giving up. For example, I was once taking a very long test that lasted around 4 to 5 hours. At first, I was just guessing my way through it because I was very tired and ready to give up. Then, we were given a five minute break so I got up and walked around a bit. After walking for a few minutes, I was energized and ready to finish the test. With my new found energy, I was very content with the test and my score. In fact, students who take mental breaks during long testing periods score 31% higher than the ones who did not take any breaks. In conclusion, inactivity keeps us enthusiastic about our work.
Inactivity serves a purpose because it allows us time for new ideas. For example, one of my friends named Generic_Name once did not go to school for three days. During these three days, she organized her school essentials and cleaned up her room. Since she was working on a project before the break, she had time to finish it and she even had another project idea for her science class. She obtained a good grade on both projects. In fact, students who have taken breaks during long tests, like the SOL, say that after their break they had a better understanding of the test. Even the workforce workers are encouraged to take a few days off. It helps the worker get more creative. Even the owner of a business need a vacation. In fact, around 56% of entrepreneurs say that they came up with at least one new idea after a vacation. Inactivity helps prepare our minds for when we are active.
Inactivity serves a purpose. Inactivity keeps us from throwing in the towel. it gives us a mental break; which, creates time for new ideas. Some believe that inactivity encourages laziness. However, it gives us time to rejuvenate our attitude and our mindset. If we take more breaks, to let our mind wonder, we would be more effective in anything it is we are doing.
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In my opinion
Thomas Jefferson wrote a statement that makes people think that, there's people out there who don't accomplish if we are doing something or we are not doing something. No one is grateful for peoples struggles and hard work they may thank you but they won't mean it.
Imagine being in a world where people thank you for every single thing that makes you feel respected and needed for more work and accomplish what we suffer for and we do it because of the need of some personal struggles your going through. If humans were different by showing others there help and respectful this world would of make every single thing differently. Some people are accomplish of your hard work , some people never care others people hard work they just say thanks without meaning it and can say stuff behind your back.
Although humans think they doing the right thing, they aren't we should be a world without cruel no one knows how damage a person can be and fake it just because they want to accomplish the work they have to turn in or be finish with because they will know that if they don't finish the work it would be harder for them to get rid of you with your negativity. For example people don't serve Hispanics equally for differences but most of us have but our effort on work hard to earn some cents to take to our family but no one sees that all they do is put there own rude opinion on us. We shouldn't care what others say as long as you know your a great person with a huge heart your good.
It would be wonderful how much may be done if we are always accomplishing others people work and being grateful for peoples effort, it would be a great idea if every single person listen to our life story before talking. Can't you imagine how many kids needs our help and we might see them with some eyes that we think there okay but they are really not. Humans have the benefit to change and become a different person and accomplish a goal to become someone grateful for little things and make the world a different place with different though.
We should take a position to serve people with kindness, respect and give them a hand for there need of help sometimes helping others can make you a great person you can never know one day you will need the help of someone too and you will feel how much it hurts to not receive help from others or by someone you though wold of help you out you should always tell people how grateful you are for having them because they will realize you once helped them and they will help you out on the need of help, they will serve you as how you will serve them by now on, you can't judge a book by it's cover,
Thomas Jefferson wrote " Determine never to be idle.." and what i think about what that means is that you should not be ungrateful and you should help others, with simple words that are accomplishments.
The studies of
Thomas Jefferson old days history probably were different they did things differently and though different ladies suffer in the old days, now everything is sort of different they accomplish women for the things they do and treat us better than how women were treated back in the days ,
Thomas Jefferson wants things to be different and probably doesn't want people to do the same mistakes they did in time of history. We should all be a group of good people and do the right things the right way. We can make this world different if we stand up for others and help the world who need help and accomplish them with needs they need and everything would be different and make people think different.
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Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote a quote that has Inspired me,"To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment". I truly agree with this quote because it demonstrates who you really are by doing hard work,everyone has something to give to the world and it is important for self esteem.
By doing a lot of hard work and not giving up, it demonstrates to people who you really are, that you are a person who is determined to get where they want to be and who preservers no matter what the chanlleges are. People may or may not agree with what want you want to do, their are always going to be someone who is going to try to bring you down emotionaly, physically or mentally but you have to show them that you are going to be yourself and do what whatever it needs to take to accomplish it. This reminds me of myself because in my senior year of High School I didn't have enough credits in order to graduate that really got my family disappoint that the time I was going to an online school and it was harder for me to make up for all the classes but I saw how my own family started to put me down and it did hurt my feelings but that used that feeling to pick myself up and work everyday on the classes to be able to graduate on time. This showed people and most importantly it showed me that im capable of showing people who I really am by doing hardwork.
I think everyone has a lot to offer to this world, you never know who will be the next person to discover a cure for a illness that people thought it was terminal. Everyone is capable of doing what there heart desires it just take determination, hard work and desire to accomplish what you want. People should not listen to what other's say it only matters what you know that you can accomplish and that you believe in yourself that is all it takes to became and be where you want to be. My plans after High School is to go to college to become a ultrasound technician. I speak two languages Spanish and English and I believe because I speak two languages fluently I have something to give to the world, to the community and to any one in need. I know my own family wanted me to be a lawyer to help people with immigration lawsuits and for a while I started to consider following my parents dream of me being a lawyer to make them happy but my passion for the medical field was bigger and from my knowledge a big percent of pregnant women are Hispanic and as a person who speaks Spanish very well,I think I could help out people who don't know English in order to get the resources they need.
Being yourself and showing the world what you are capable of shows the world that you believe in yourself and it is important for your self esteem too because it makes you feel good about yourself and most of time your going to be alone doing your own stuff, taking care of your business. You can not always depend on people to get you what you need, to get you where you want to be. I remember when I moved out of my parents house with my son and having my own room, my own space and paying bills made me feel so good about myself. I finally felt like I was doing something for myself because my parents wanted to keep me at home but I managed to get through everything and anything while living on my own and It made me more independent person and it helped me boost my energy and believe in myself.
Nevertheless, Author Ralph Waldo Emerson quote "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment". This quote has reminded that you should truly believe in yourself, be yourself, do hard work and it will motivate you to be where you want to be. I think this quote has a lot of different meanings and I think it depends on your own personal experiences and It has honestly helped me a lot through my teenage year and overall my biggest accomplishment was to follow my heart and be who I really want to be in life just like the Ralph Waldo Emerson said.
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~Aesop said: "
No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. "
Examples of kindness:
Opening a door.
Giving compliments.
Helping someone with bag's.
asking about their day.
Impact on other people:
The impact on other people can be so important that even can save lives! and example of that can be that if you notice someone that is passing trough bad moments but you doun't know how to help the simple act of kindness of asking "how is your day?" can actually help that person by knowing that someone cares about him/her. Other ways that the small act's of kindness can change things is by making a person do good things for others. For example, if you help someone with bags, they will see how that little help makes them feel, that will make them do it for someone else or even back to you. The hole point of this is to make people know the importance of doing little act's of kindness and to show how you can do it.
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So many people at my middle school want to start a after school homework club and this because studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start a homework club. Well I think this idea is not going to work because student will think that they will only have to do homework at the homework club therefor when there no after school most kids won't turn in there homework. Also another problem is the volunteer work no kid wants to stay after school to help and if there only teacher I am certain that kids would lose focus. And the subject I
don't think that 45 minute Are enough to learn 4 main class plus the homework that's not enough time to finish homework and learn.
And many people just want to go to this homework club just to finish fast I think that people that really need it should be in this group not just cause they want to finish fast they can do that at home and after school wasting time and the teachers time. This one of the main problems I have with the homework club is that if kids go there they are only go to fool around with there friends. And not let other kids learn and do there homework and learn being a middle school er my self I have seen how most kids with there friends u would think that they are mauter but not as much. But many people say maybe if you let them they will change but so many people have goin't chances but they keep doing the same thing.
As a conclusion I think that this after school program has no use because homework is called homework for a reason and if u do at school they would not do at home when there's no after school so this after school program will not work for many reason like no a enough time not enough focus distractions. And people who just want ot play and not do work and volunteering kids dont want to stay extra and kids won't pay anttion to the teacher.
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Do you want to see a temple made with gold? I am not sure about you, but I want to see it.
It is in India (Generic_City). India is a country in Asia. It is the second most populated country in the world. Because of LOCATION_NAME I want to visit there, but this is not the only reason I want to meet my friends and family in India, and I want to enjoy the tasty food, and I also want to see LOCATION_NAME in Generic_City.
Firstly, the reason why I want to go to India is because my friends and my family lives there. India is my home country I grew and study there. Family and friends are important. I miss them all. I still remember my last day at school . Did you have that experience that you really like someone, but you have to leave them? It is not good when your family or friend leave you. Next, The problems I face when I come to U.S.A. I had some language problems. I do not want to go to school because I did not had any friends. To sum up, family and friends are important to make sure that you do not feel alone.
Secondly,I want to go to India because
I think Indian street stalls have tasty and spice food. One day, I was in front of super market and there was a burger stall called NFC they have the best burgers in the world. After, eating our burger my dad ask for bill and it was so cheep. I love that place if you visit India go and try that place. Finally, I love the taste of Indian street stalls and they are cheep.
Lastly, I want to learn how to dance because every one have their own thing, and I want to proof that if we are different that means we are unique. Secondly, I want to see LOCATION_NAME (Generic_City) and LOCATION_NAME (Generic_City) because it is something different and it is fun to take pictures. "We all are different and that is beautiful." To conclude, it is fun to see and learn new things.
To sum up, I want to visit India because I want to see my friends and family, and I want to taste the delicious food , and I want to see and learn new things. In future, where you want to visit? Think, if
you were on my place would you like to tell them about your country. If people say that,"Your country is not good.'' Then tell them that,'If something have some bad parts it also have something good, that makes it different.'' It can change how people think. ''I want you'' to find the good parts that can surprise them like I ask you have you seen a temple made with real gold?
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It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to be successful in life. I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life, Because if you have a negative attitude that means you don't believe in your self or you are insecure so you may not be successful in life; but if you have a positive attitude, and know what you doing is correct, so what you doing will make you successful in life. being positive will make you successful. if you are successful in life that means you are positive, and you are happy that you are doing everything as you want.
being successful means that you have achieve most of the things you want in life like buying a house, a nice car, going to college, or getting a diploma; so you always should stay positive,and try hard for something you want in life. being negative won't help you get what you want, or achieve a goal or a dream because you won't believe in your self and you will just let everything just go, and not really try hard for what you want. you make your life successful by doing what you want, and trying hard for and not giving up and being negative to be successful you will make mistakes, but you learn of those mistakes, and not make them again , or do better at something you din't do good on the first time, so just keep trying, and stay positive, and be successful in life
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Imagine someone asking another person wheither they should go to a friend's party or to the movies, but he or she told them something like, "It's up to you to decide, not me". That person eventually agrees; but when they finally decide on wheither to go to the party or to the movies at the last minuate, they end up missing out on both. Sometimes, making decisions on your own can be pretty tough and frustrating, but it helps you become more independent and you do not have to relay on other people's decisions.
People can not depend on other people for what they think all the time. It shows that instead of being progressive with their work or anything else they're doing, that person can not make up their minds or is just being lazy and is always looking for someone else's opinions instead of their own. This also shows that they are not self-reliant or progressive like how most people usually are.
Making our own decisions also means following our own intincts. For example, a group of teenagers are planning to skip school to got the beach for the entire day. They try to convince two other of their classmates to join them, but they told them no and that they are going to get in trouble for missing out on their classes. Trusting our intincts can be very helpful when it comes to things like skipping school, alcohol, or even having sex with someone. It can maybe even save your life or someone else's in the future.
It also helps people become more independent on their own. People can not always depend on their parents for the rest of their lives, they will have to move out of the home they grow up in to start looking for jobs and earning to support themselves. Another example is when a teenager starts appling for colleges that they want to go once they graduate from high school. They probably have been told that college will help them get ready for when they are ready to get a full-time job (which also has to be something they want to do for a long period of time), pay taxes and bills for when they have a house or apartment to live in, and maybe even take care of their familes.
People should make their own decisions because they can not always depend on other people's opinions, they should follow their own intincts that can probably save their lives one day, and it helps them become more independent to get ready for the future.
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I think my preference is working with a group have more benefits with the working alone with myself. Because working with a group is more better have more ideas about of projects, every vary collaborate with the work making all together not distracting with the other students, and all in the group help with the ideas, what work need for the project, what talk about in the work, or what type of project made, what are doing the teacher said with the work.
Need stand enfouces all in the group for making the best work together, and make the nice grade for the group some students in the group don't have the perfect score but is the opportunity for the make change of the grades and working with a group, and someone not sustain what are you do try to the express the ideas and collaborate with all the group and working in one thing, what talk about in the project or the work in the class or need help can to help to what type of expression need more learn in the working with a group.
Sometimes working with a group all have ideas, what are doing first, who make the tittle of the work , of who have the perfect idea of present ate the work or explain with the group what is the best are doing in talk about of the work and projects. when some students working alone is more complicate for sustain with take the best idea sometimes don't likes what are doing with the work. But when the students working together with a group i feel more benefits. Because when take one best decision some students said i like this idea or the others.
Some students like work with other students or not someone is quit not like express the idea or like only with self for example; Working with a group is more benefits work you can express your ideas for make the best work in the class or more best in the other students group some many student when make working alone sometimes catch good score or bad this students don't put penitencion in the class or distracting with cellphone or other things. When making work with a group other explain what are doing, what the teacher explain in the class what type of work make or project.
Working with a group all students feels more benefits for take the good grade for the make all together the nice job: However working in group is try the express the best idea in the group try help other, and one give the best example or make change the students in the group have the best grade to coming up someone students don't turn in the work this is affect the grades this is time to the change the grades for all sustain as making or learn more about what the teacher explain in the class for every vary pass the class.
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The technology is a great tool for ours life, because help to each people in different forms, tasks,communication,and entertainment. In this days, the technology is avancing in a form very quick in our society, because in cell phone, tablet, or computer we could see news what happened in the world only with look for in any machine technology, also how to communicate with parents , friends , or classmate.
The technology has a effect positive in our society , because we can help to shop, entertainment with games or listen to music , also our give an access a lot applications and functions that has as GPS, traductor, or books that any people has access with any cost in the market.
Any reasons, because the technology is very important in the life diary of any people are:
The help that our give each day, as for example when somebody is lost in a place unknown with a cell phone can use the GPS for can to arrive to his destiny or also for to go to a store or supermaket for this is very good has in our life the technology, if that is a good tool for is issues or cases that happen in any moments in the life.
Other reason is the entertainment that our give to technology is our life as for example, when is bored and not know that do with the technology can listen to music of any artist or genre that there in the world , also our give the option of download games or book that is more easy to find it in a cell phone or tablets that a bookstore because only our write down the name of book and the cell phone to give differents options the book as, also in internet our to give thousands of games for any kind of people as the sports, adventures,riddle or others.
Also the technology is a great form of communication in this time not import the distance the people as for example, with a lot applications as Facebook, Whatsapp, Instragram or Messenger between other are very easy of used and any people can use it without any problems and this applications to give the opportunities of is a little more close to our family or friends of our childhood as can see his pictures or videoclips of your family for this the technology is a great treasure in our life that should be use of a good form for not cause problem in our life.
Also other reason is when has any problem in as cook any food or how repair your car or in your house with the technology help us to find solutions to problems with any videoclip that we can to find in Google as in Youtube that are any page that our show tips or videoclip step to step for can has knowledge and know everything about any solutions to problem, however can to find as mechanical or other kind of people that can help in other isuess.
The technology our could help to find job in any area that you wish as for example, in any company if a person want a job should complete an application in online, because is a form very easy for any people , if that everybody has access to internet with his cellphone, computer, or tablets . Because in the world any business or company used the technology for give to know his products,quality and with this they think to arrive more away in the world for that to raise his profit with the internet any company can to become in an international company in a little days , if that the internet is the vial more easy of that the peoples to watch his products.
In conclusion, the technology is very great tool in the life human, for that our help to communicate, to intertainment, and to found until job and solutions in problems or well a person that help or work in repair , also help to find place unknown or stories, for this things the technology has a effects positive in the life of any people in the world, if that in a machine technology we can has a without end of applications that can help to various kinds issues or also as Facebook or Instragram to show about what happened in the world of your artist, athletics favorite,friends, or family without matter the distance , because the technology to close a each people that love for this each people should know that the technology was created for help a the people in his life and develop in the people a form of always to be together.
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Some people said that haveing a positive actitude is the key to success in life? How do we know this and, how can we demostrate this on real life, well here I have three examples of how to be a positive person it help me to be success in life.
In my first year as a freshman i was a lonely and boring person I didn't talk to any body, i was dumb I remember that i used to had a really good teacher her name was Generic_Name, i remember that i was bad with her and know i just want to aplogize with her, my point in here is that if my attitude was positive in that time thingscould be different in many ways and thats why i decide to chenge my attitude.
In my second year I decide to talk with more people and be positive person and because of that I star to have new friends and more teachers like me and when a teacher likes you they help you more and thats a small way to show that have a positive actitude is the key in life, and because i'm not a smart student, that extra help that the teachers give me, it help me to pass my classes.
In my third year, well it was pretty fun because when I change into a positive attitude i got new frinds and when i was in problems they help me, like i losse my pencil they borrow me one, or when i miss my bus they give me a ride to my home or they give me a number of a bus that is close to my house, when i was apsent they ask for my missing work so they can give it to me.
In conclution the positive attitude is the key in life because it makes you friendly and more people like you because of that.
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Technology has been a really good source of information for the past years people find technology the best way to communicate, relax, plan, search stuff by using the internet. Ordering food online its a normal thing nowadays, people rarely go out to eat because of the food service, this is keeping humanity from doing any physical activity but its way easier to get something done. This can improve human society in many ways by making life more easy, even kids nowadays are using different sources to find something fun to do or watch for example on the platform YouTube kids can find toys reviews or cartoons which its fine but that's also keeping them from playing outside.
There are a lot of problems in society now days one of them is ciber bullying, this can drive to many problems some people take it too seriously and that can start an argument,and some people can feel offended for other people opinions this can cause a big impact in those who are really sensitive in fact there are many cases when this drives them to commit suicide, for unlimited reason people get bullied everyday but its our decisions how you can take the respond. The best way to avoid ciber bullying is by not paying attention to whatever the other person has to say and walk away, focus on yourself and don't look back that's how life works.
In multiple situations kids enjoy watching something online than playing outside, but kids are not the only one who are being affected by this problems adults are also in the similar problem. My family orders food every night without going out of the house, and it's becoming a problem because theres no effort in that. By not doing any physical activity the body starts gaining weight and it can be critical if the person does nothing to stop it, by simply doing more outside activities people can get a better chance to experience more things in life as going to beach, play a sport that you haven't played before or going out shopping that's can be life changing for some people including my community.
Mobile devices are improving in a incredible speed in the past five years, nowadays it's way easier to find a place by using the GPS on a mobile device, this can also allow people from other countries to contact relatives from another country by making a simple phone call or a text. But this can be really expensive for some people a decent plan of data can cost up to fifty dollars per month, that's more money than it should be but somehow people are addicted to this. Phone updates can also help in many ways in your life Apple realized the group FaceTime not too long ago now up to four people can talk at the same time no matter where they live, this can help the plans for your future a bussnies project a wedding or a party this is life changing, this is the future.
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People don't have own decision becuase they like decision for others person?
People like decision for other person because they have more experiense for there future.
Some people need to go guide for talk to conselor because they need someone to have confidently with that person. example: people have to make good decision and confidently they life.
Old people have to make they own ideas because is help own ideas becuase they are olders and they have more experience from his heavy?
they have to make ideas with own life because is important to make own ideas because is help in the future.
people have to do ideas with own life because in the future when they have own family and they have experience from they parent. Example: parent have to make desicions for they son and daughter for they have good future and they life.
Some people have good decision is because they confidently with own life?
people who make good decision is becuase they cofidently with own life and experience when they are young.
some people when they are young have good decision becuase they think first to have one or two decision or they ask they perant from what opinion for that decision they have.
Example: When we are young we make good decision for future but with the advice of the parent.
They have lesson for make good decision for have good life?
because people have many lesson for they future and they life but they have one counselor for they can talk any day they can go with counselor to they can make good decision or thye can talk about life or problem.
becuse they have to trust life for decision and make good ideas for they life.
Example: People have to trust more and they life for have good lesson and good decision.
I am agree people need to make good decisions and they need to have good ideas for they life they need to have counselor for they can talk when people need to talk because somepeople need to have experiense for they life and they future sometime people can mot make good decisions and they need to talk with other person who have confidently for his can make that decision his have and his mind and they need to change the good decision with other person for they can thing about that decision some people take some position for make good ideas for change they life or future that more important and they life is matters what they think for have good family and they life. I agree with this because some people have alot problem and they life people and they can not make good ideas and good decision i hunderstand that because when we have problem and life is dificul to make good decision and make idaes some student have good decision and they make alot thing for they can help and they life because they think they want good future for they life and they want to make good ideas for they life because they want parent happy about good decision they have and they life because that ideas they have is more different of other student have good ides.
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A problem Is a chance for you to do your best.
Did you know that problems are a chance for you to do your best.
Problems builds up strength on you. They also show you to not repeat the past. Hard times like problems help you to keep your head up and never give up on a hard war.
A problem is a chance for you to do your best. My problems opened up so many chances for me to do my best in life. Problems will always have a chance for you, so you can do better in your life. Never lose that one chance in life. Those chances will not come back and you will regret not taking the chances. I took a chance to live with my mom and now I am happy with her.
Hard problems make you build up strength on yourself. When my father abandoned me and my sisters, it build up strength on me and my sisters because, we had to learn that are father is not always going to be there when we want him to be there and we have learned that we don't need a father for everthing and we can do it by ourselfs. I can't lie I really miss him and I really wish I could give him a big hug. All that is left are the good memories I made with him. I will never forget him and will always love him beause he is my father. All the tears I have cried over him have build up strength on me and thought me to never give up and keep fighting even if it is hard for me.
Hard issues show you to not repeat the past and do better then the past. My hard problems have showed me to not repeat the past and to do better then the past because, I would always try to give up on everything and always put a negitive thinking to my problems. This has showed me when you try to give up you are showing yourselfs and others that you are weak and can't handel it. It has also showed me to never put a negitve thinking and put a positive thinking, because if you but a negitive thinking everything could come up negitive and you will always try to give up if everything comes out negitive. Always put a positve thinking and everything will come out positive and you will feel motivated to keep fighting.
Really hard problems help you keep your head up and learn to never give up on a really hard war. When my father was so mean to me I would always put my head up and not let the mean words get me down. To never give up and show him and the haters that I am stronger and better. When i cried because my mom was not with me and my father would not let me see her that showd me that my head was up all ready because I fighted to be with her. I have turned all my haters into my motivators, because I wanted to show them that I can do it . Always keep your head up high and never down because, keeping it down won't help at all.
A problem is a chance for you to do your best. They are also helpful for you in your life because, they make you strong, so when you have an other problem it won't hurt you as much. Never give up of your problems, whatever problem you or your familly are going through never give up, because if you give up you won't be able to go to the past and change up everything that you gave up on. All those hater will always want to see you crying,mad, and sad and they also want you to feel like a big losser, all those haters turn them into your motivators, don't let them put you down. Stay strong and never forget that you are better, and stronger then that problem. Never feel bad that you showed the haters that you can do it. Always have a smile on you face, my mother told me ''even if you are upset always have a smile because, you have to smile to the hard world you are in." That's why I agree that a problem is a chance for you to do your best.
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Many people have been told about the fact that the students should know the career they want in high school and learn about it. Therefore, many societies around the world, are expect to provide help to the students to find the career they want to study by the time they enter high school. In fact, many schools select the courses for the students based on the career the students choose. In addition, many schools think that the students should be young when they think about the career they want, just to make sure that they will not change their minds in the future. So, it is a good idea to commit to a career at a young age.
Based on that, students will have time to prepare themselves to be ready for the career they choose. Students will be able to make sure that the career they choose is good for them. If students are prepare at a young age for the career they want, then they will be able to enjoy it. For example, I want to study interior design, therefore, I have to take art classes to learn about colors and how to combine them. If students choose their career at a young age, they will be more prepare and have better results while complete their life goals, because life goals are very importat to have a good life's quality.
Also, students will be able to see if they like the career they choose. It should be a good idea for students to know themselves and what they like, because it is unpleasant when a person have to study what the parents want him or her to study just because they could not have done what they wanted to do. So if the schools support students to find the perfect career for them, then this disagreeable situation will stop. In many cases, people that had to choose a wrong career have to deal with a unhappy life, because they do not feel well in their jobs. Once again, if students have the school's support, they will be able to find the perfect career for them.
In addition, students will learn about the career and how it works. It might not be noticeable for people the fact that nothing is how it seems, some careers might seem to be easy and be hard, or the opposit, the career might seem to be hard and be really easy. For example, it is easy to judge a lawyer when he do not win a case, but we have no idea how hard the work he did can be. In my 19 years in this world, I learned that nothing is as easy as we want it to be, but if we search information about what we want to do for life, we will be happier, that is a fact. Schools should require an essay in which students can write about what they like and what skills they have.
So, students should know what they want and what they are good in. If students learn about the career they want they will have the opportunity to be great professionals. If the students start learning about the career they want at a young age, then they will have plenty of time to prepare themselves mental and phisically for their future career. Also, students will be able to see if they like the career they choose so they do not regret it in the future. And last but not least, students will have time to learn how the careers work, so they will have many ideas of how to complete them. In conclusion, it is a great idea for students to commit to a career at a young age by the time they enter high school.
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Many students and teachers think that taking online classes are bad for the students and the school. The reason is that the students might not take any notes on what the teacher is saying. The other reason is that students will often get distracted from the lecture the teacher is giving to them. Students cannot be benefited of taking online classes because students might not take notes and that the students might not pay attention to the teacher.
Students might not take notes while being on a class that is online. For example, at school, students take notes because they are being watched by the teacher, so why would they do it if they are not being watched by the teacher; the students would not care about the notes. If the teacher is on the screen, but cannot see if the student is taking notes; most likely there are not because the students won't worry that the teacher could check them. Students should take notes when they get information about a topic, so that topic could stay in the mind of the student if they write it and they also try understand the topic from the notes. Teacher's won't even know there students are taking notes because it's online they cannot see them. also the students might not be paying attention.
The students might not pay any attention to the lecture the teacher is giving to them. For example, when a student looks around the classroom, but not at the teacher, they will miss valuable information that is needed, so it's like the same when it comes to online classes; information will be missed by the students. Missing information when distracted is terrible because students might miss out on what is going on in the class, might miss on something on they have to do, and miss on how to do there work. Students should pay attention; no one likes to miss any key information; therefore, students need to look at the teacher to get more information as needed to do an assignment. When students don't take notes, they will not only miss out on some key information, but might panic on how to do a problem on the assignment they were given.
The students cannot benefit from taking online classes because the students might not write valuable information in there notes and they might not pay attention to lecture that teacher is giving to them. The students won't take any notes because no one is watching them take the notes as the teacher goes on lecturing. The students could miss valuable information because they are not paying attention to the teacher, and the students might miss on how to do something in a assignment. From not taking notes to note paying attention is the reason why there cannot be students taking online classes because teachers might not know what the students are doing and students might not even care about all of this.
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do we accomplish more if we are always doing something or dose inactive server a purpose. severing a purpose would be more better then if inactive because your not doing any thing to accomplish something. In my opinion we accomplish more if we are doing something because we can accomplish something we always we wanted to do also we can learn something new but some would argue inactive servers a purpose because you wont make any mistake if you fail on doing things.
we can accomplish something we wanted to do by facing our fear and by doing that we can face a stage fight fear and a high fear by making them face them. also we can accomplish something and learn something about our self, and by doing that we can see what we dont like and what we do like . in conclusion you can accomplish something you want to do by facing them or by learning something about yourself we can accomplish learning something, we can learn new skills for our everyday life like, learning how to cook new dishes, fishing, and learning a new language this can be helpful to meeting new people. also learning how to be a better person of yourself or being better to other people by doing this you can make new friends or feel more confident about yourself . in conclusion learning new skill and improving our self is a good way to accomplish something some would argue and say inactivity servers no purpose for example you can not take the chance of doing something if you dont want to. for example you can learn how to ride a bike but you feel uncomfortable you can decide not do it. sure inactivity servers a purpose however it can be a safe call if you dont want to take the risk. but sometimes it can lead to regret and having doubt.
in conclusion if we accomplish more if we are always doing something, we can accomplish something we wanted to do by facing our fears and also we can accomplish by learning something and something about our self. but some would argue that inactivity servers a purpose to be more caution about what we do. final its better to go out and explore about yourself and see what accomplishment you can find and what you can do to your life. also we accomplish more by doing somthing instead of doing nothing.
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Generic_Name
State of Virginia
03/19/2019
Don't matter if we are youngs, we can learn everything. Some people think that the students can not identify a career by the time they enter to high school. Two years ago when I entered to high school
I was not sure what I want to be. Now, I know what I want to be, but that is thanks to my school that they have many ideas how we can identify a career. The last year I was in Internship class that was great because they give me the opportunity to get a job. The job was about secretery I was in love with this job; however, was not easy to learn but I liked. I would like to be a secretary. It is a good idea for students to commit to a carreer at a young age because we can mature our mind, develop our skills, and develop our passions. We are students of high shcool, and we can identify a career and more many things.
To begin, When we learn about career we can start to mature our minds. Students in high school get experiences learn about how they can find a job. In Generic_School my school, we have Internship class. This class consist to help students to find a job and they can see how to work in the comunity. Students develop their emotional knowledgel; also, we start to proceed as adult. We learn that the work is a big responsability. That's why we have to start to know about careers in high school. It is so important identify what we want to do when we grow-up.
Additionally, develop our skills is a great idea that can help us. Many students learn many laguages this is a great skill because we can travel every where, comunicate with other people, know other cultures; also, if we speak differents languages we can earn more money, get a better job. We can develop many many skills if we wants. Just we need to try. If we wants a great career we need to put in practice the dicipline. We can do everything what we want because we are intelligents,positives,and great students. keep going becauses that's is the only way that we have.
Lastly, When we develop our passions we can get a good career. If we have something that would like to be for example: doctors, secretary, actors, or nurse whatever we want. I would like to say go head! we can do it. The life is a challenge if we don't try we can never get a good career. Firts step we need to faces our fears. Second step we need to put all our efforts every day. Students in high school need to know these two steps. Students have all the capacity to learn everything, so let's go to do it.
To summarize, all the students should identify a career in high school. Students develop their emotional knowledgel; also, we start to proceed as adult.
Many students learn many laguages this is a great skill because we can travel every where, comunicate with other people, know other cultures; also, if we speak differents languages we can earn more money, get a better job. develop our skills is so important. The life is a challenge if we don't try we can never get a good career. Is for these reasons and many other that students should indentify a career in high school.
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the achievements can accomplish self esteem in students, however student always work hardly in every work. Even if is not the best, but praising student will help them to do the best they can do. or the praise is for students who did an achievements. these achievements build the self esteem. Self esteem come from praise or come from achievement.
Does true self esteem come from praise, students who work hardly in any work class, praising theme helps to raising theme auto esteem . That helps students to do the best they can in any work, actually helps to persuade to others students do the same thing, and raising each of theme in work and self esteem . Actually the students feel good when some body praise theme for some work, and eventually for students. Praise is the best thing you can do for theme, and they going to grow up withing self esteem and work.
Self esteem come from an achievement. Most of the students who did a good work from school, event is not, a achievement is one thing important for them to grow up, and important to a good self esteem. Most of the students who did a great job has a good auto esteem and that helps other students too to do the same thing. With an achievement student had, that help the auto esteem in student rising up, actually an achievement in any class or anything is always helping keeping your self esteem.
In conclusion both of this are really important to students, any achievement or any praise work they realize, help theme to have a high self esteem, everything about this are leanings they get of the life. An achievement accomplish keep's you doing the right thing and keeping you with a high self esteem, A praising a is good way to student to keep doing the best they can, And to do the better much they can even if is an effort work, that help student to learn and improve; in they self esteem and to get an achievement, and also praising students helps theme to get an achievement.
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Have you ever accomplishing something by what we are doing ? Our 3rd President of the U.S.A wrote a quote that say "Determine never to be idle .....it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing" Many people didn't believe in him. For a way that people would like to accomplish something is setting a goal, try hard, and showing them.
However, many people believed that setting a goal is a accomplishment. When some people set a goal they usually set an easy goal, so they can accomplish. For example, My sister when she set a goal she usually it so simple that she can accomplish it. But for some people they set their own goal really hard and they can't even accomplish it. After all for those who doesn't like setting a goal would likely accomplish something.
For many people that are accomplishing something they always try really hard. When some people accomplish something they would usually try their best to accomplishg something. For example, my brother accomlish something for trying his best at his final. But many people would not even try their best to accomplish some thing.
Therefor, many people could show what they accomplish. For those who show what they accomplish is that they usually do anything to accomplish sommething. For,exmple, Luke show to everyone what he accomplish for getting his mile run decreasing. But for some people think that is called show off. But what he did is that he accomplish something great.
As a result of accomplishing something it'swonderful thing. Like setting a goal, try your best,and showing what you have done. Accomplishing goal would be the best thing that ever happed to you.
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yes, I am agree with that ..
Because it's true the can show the the act of our felling in this three words ..
1.. be anxious
2.. Felling 3.. not to Belief the are self
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1.. Be anxious .
in the world 99% of population the have a lot of staff going on in the are idea or concept , to how to do the are work , how to do the are staff , and how to do the are poraplem self .
,, and the have lot of pressures on the thought
. an effect feeling or image retained after an experience . A mark produced on a surface by pressurre and the can show the felling thaey have . the did not seeying the are felling cuz the are sedition the are fell and the don't want to tell anyone and the are worry about it .
that why the can not change they are are life .
2. Felling. .
All the copies of the a pubilcition printed at one time from the same set of type.
some people did not showing the are felling . the are state of being withe the are self and the can exp lean what the have wane what the have need to do in the live the are confuse for anything and the are scyer for that to tell anyone.
same time the are thinks if the do sorting wrong it,s never gonna right and never gonna right.
3 . Not to Belief the are self.
sometime the not blivet or respect the are self and the are urgent to someone else to do the are work and the can impressions the are felling. some time the sending a person to do somting for it .
like they are sending the a person to giving for something the are need it cuz the shameful to to something by the are self . and the are can not doing the staff the .
In the life everything in impossible we can do anything in live we can do the best we can go the way we want to go. over time everything is going to change the live , the friends, the staff , the feeling . the every secant . don't be shay for samthin you really when it or need it you can not Chang you can not be the beast you never be porfect in the live . be porfect in live if you not make your miss tikesa you can not be perfect in the feucher . if you take the right way you you be the best in the all live thake the good posittion and do good live witout the any impressions fell ......
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Would you like to act like someone else when your not? You should always be yourself nobody should ever tell u how to carry yourself. You ever heard of the quote,"Don't judge a book by its cover?'' I honestly believe in that. I was once a scrawny kid getting bullied cause of the way I carried myself and dressed. I never got the chance to get the shoes I wanted or the clothes so other kids who were on the football team would bully me. But little did they know i was the nicest and honest kid at
Generic_School.
In the year 2015 throughout 2018 I was someone I really wasn't. I was in the streets doing the opposite of what my mother showed me. Robbing people, fighting, breaking curfew, breaking into peoples cars. I was going through it because I was tired of people bullying me, I was tired of people emberrassing me infront of other kids.
By the time I tried to get a job,all they woud do was look at me head to toe and say they arent looking for employees right now even though their was a help wanted sign out front. Even my moms friends would judge me on my looks just because I have tattoos and have a mean mugging face. I may have a bad background but that was me trying to be somebody im not, I was trying to fit in with the bullies, wiith the kids who used to bully me.
Moral of the story is don't let nobody get to you and make you into something your not. I wish I could go back and prevent myself into being someone whom im not. My uncle got caught smuggling narcotics and is praying everyday he gets out. This all happened because he was trying to be someone he wasn't.
To conclude, A couple misedemenors and felonies can ruin your entire life. Don't be someone your not, Be yourself.
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Thomas Jefferson wrote to never to be idle and he believes that is better to always be doing something, because if you do not try to do things you never will get a purpose in life, even though some says that inactivity also serve a purpose. Do things make you do better in life, also is better to have the mind busy in something, if you do things you can be someone in life.
Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that doing nothing, because if you do not try to do things in life you will never get a purpose, actually Thomas Jefferson says that if inactivity also serve a purpose, in my opinion people do not like to do things because they do not want to be someone in life and they are lazy.
Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that be doing nothing, because if you do not try to do something in life you will never get a purpose, people just like to be annoying with others, people try to do hard life for the others people.
Although Thomas Jefferson says if inactivity also serve a purpose in life, in my opinion, when you do not do anything you will never get a result of good things always we have to try to do some effort to be someone in life.
In addition, According to the prompt and "determine never to be a idle". I have never been idle in life, because i always do my responsibilities and i try to not be lazy, some times i also help other peoples cause we need to be good with others no matters how they are with us. I always like to do my own work because i want to be some one in the future that's why i like to do some effort in life. Everyone makes errors in life but, always we will try to fixed no matters how big they are, some day i want to my fathers be proud of my work in life. I never want to be a idle person.
In conclusion, is wonderful how we have done in life because life is so hard for everyone but, always we can do some effort to be proud of our self.
Although Thomas Jefferson believes that is always better be doing something that doing nothing, because if you do not try to do things in life you will never get a purpose, actually Thomas Jefferson says that if inactivity also serve a purpose, in my opinion people do not like to do things because they do not want to be someone in life and they are lazy.
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people are scare to make their own decisions , some of them when they have a conflict or a problems in their life, most probable ask an experts like psicologo to help or to they can give them a advice. I agree that each people with self-reliance follow they own instinct and ideas that matters if the make at mistake, and do not care what the other people can say about you.
People need to take they own decisions. Many people are scare to make their own decision and went this happened they decide to ask somebody else like a psicologo to help in their own problems, in my opinion this it is wrong because it is your life, you need to care no somebody else. In my case sometime i have a problems when i want to take a decision in my life, but in my opinion this is good because i care about my self and always i want to do everything good . Young people are scare to make they own decision and this is understanding, some of the people they do not follow their instincts and ideas, this means that sometime they take somebody else ideas.
people always have a conflict to believe in their self.
Many people do not believe and also do not trust they instincts and ideas, this happened went that person always take a decision but that decision it is a mistake. or sometime they care what the other people say about them, for this reasons i think they have a conflict and they are scare.
people with a self-reliance. People with reliance believe in they self, they take a decision with out any problems and also they do not ask for helps. This people when they decide to take action or give a ideas they do not scare what the people can say about they decisions. Many people have problems when they have to take any decision in theirs life, almost all the time is because they care what they people can say about them.
In conclusion, people do not need to care about what the they people say or think about their life,
it is your life you decide how you want to enjoy it. That matters if is with mistake, Some people are scare to make their own decisions, some of them ask for help or any advice. each persons need to trust in self and instincts.
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I think i agree because you can learn more and study more and the electives will be longer and it will get better and better and you can use it in any class so it will be longer and. The electives will be more longer and you won't be stress because you will have one and a half hours so you will not be stress and you can be good and you will have more time for electives and you can play whatever game your playing because it will be longer. you won't be stress because you will be playing games because you will have one and a half hour and it would be cool if there was one and a half in school.
It would be better for kids and they will have more time to play and it will be better because you will have one more hour everyday and it be better to learn and have more time for school and you will be more better in every subject if there was more hours in class and. Next your grades will be more better in class or in electives and that will be cool and more better and you will be a good student in class and your grades will be higher because you studied more in class and you had time for every class or in elective and you will be better if you had the time for whatever class.
it would be better because your parents would be proud of yourself because of your grades and they will probably buy you something and that is the reason why it would be better to have one and a half hour in class. After that it would be better for you and your parents because you keep having your grades up and it will be better for you because you kept having your grades up and your siblings will be proud of you and. After that you could have a good grade in classes and after that your you could have a better grade and then you can join a JV team and you will make it because of your grades.
It would be to have one and a half hour in class because your parents will be proud and your siblings and your parents will buy you whatever they want because you have a good grade in all classes and it would be cool because you can play in every sport and you can make it because of your grades and your parent will probably buy you and ps4 or an x box and next you can be a good student in class and you will have a good job and your parents will still be proud of you and next you can earn money and next that is the reson why i agree to this
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I disagree with what John Lubbock saids "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I strongly disagree because we are influnced by the people we hang out with. Like for example in America we have diferent accents all around the map and thats because the people near us influnce one another. They influnce one another by sharing cultures and beliefs. For example in louisiana they have martigra but it did not originate in louisiana, in new york they have a lot of italian people, and we all enjoy eating ethic food such as chinese food, tacos, pupusas, italian food. All of those things influnced americans and their traditions and customs which impacts thier morals.
As we all know everyone has morals but those morals are influnced by people, such as our friends, family, teachers and coworkers. Ones morals has a big role in character. I would even say its the biggest factor in what builds pur character. A persons moral is what tells them what is right and what is wrong, what they should do or what they should not do, wether to pick option A or option B. Morals are a part of someones character, its what builds thier charater. For example if someones morals aren't made up and they do not know what is good and bad then thier character might need some work.
I get where Mr. Lubbock gets the idea of "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it" but I also think that social class has alot to do with your character. I think that the different social groups have a varaity of character building factors. I believe this because for example a person that only makes 20 grand a year has a lot more struggles than a person that makes 100 grand a year and those struggles impact ones character.
In conclusion I disagree with John Lubbock because I believe morals, social class and people around us influnce our character. I believe all those factors play a major role on who we are because it is human nature to adapt to surroundings.
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Has there been anyone in your life that shared any wisdom or experience with you? If not, why not ask someone that is important to you? They would love to share maybe a dad, mom ,grandparents they have tones of experience in the past. A person who has shared wisdom or experience with me would be my father ,because he has showed me how to be respectful to adults and show me how to work some business papers.
One thing that my father had shared with me is how to respect adults. For example, my father wasn't always the best child. He would do bad choices like going out with his friends all the time and not listen to this parents. But as he got older he realized no one though he was serious and rejected him. They thought he was trouble child, Soon when I was born ,and when i was able to talk and walk my. My father would make me say please and thank you. As well as listening to the adults, bow when entering a door and greeting them. My father did not want me to me like him when he was younger so he made sure I was respectful to my grandparents. This shows that my father gave me some experience to get respected into the family.
Another thing that my father has shared with me is how to work at a business. For instance for the past few months my father has showed me how to do paper work at his second job. My dad has to count the money that he was getting and how much to give back the workers. So a few times my dad would come into my room and teach me how to split the money they were making and pay the bills. Those days he showed me showed me how much money everything is ,and made me realized that I need to work very hard because if I want a simple job that I doesn't do much that gave a job that can pay my bills I need to work hard in school. This shows that my father really cares about my future and want me to do well in life and showed me some wisdom in of how hard like will be if i don't do well in school. In closing my father taught me how to do business and how to process one because I want to do business.
In conclusion a person who has showed me wisdom and experience would be my father by teaching me to respect adult and how to do paper work at his job. H+e had showed me by telling about his past and show how to mange a business when I am older. So what are some people that is important to you that has shared wisdom and experince? Or what experince and wisdom would you share to people other people?
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It is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college. Some students want to graduate early than other students. There are some reassons that students have to graduate early. Some of the reassons are: they want to finish high school to earn money to go to college, to take some vacations to pass time with family, also if you are a Hispanic person, you're older, and you have resposabilities, you want to get a good job with a high school diploma, if you just want to gradute early, and if you are a great student with all that you need, you can graduate early. The students's graduation is basic in what they need and want.
Some students do hard work one year early to graduate from high school. For example, if a student is 16 years old, and the student is in eleven grade, the student do not have enough credits, or don't have what the student need to graduate, the student is not going to graduate from high school. But also there are students that they have all what they need to gradute and they can graduate early. A low percetage of students have a jod, resposabilities after school, or activities to do. Schools offer many activities that students can do after school, also students stay after school to retake quiz or get help from a teacher.
If a student need to graduate early for any reasson, the student need to work hard, and get all what the student need to gradute. Also the student have to do extra work. For example, if the student don't understand any subject, the student have to stay after school, and get help from a teacher to pass the subject and get the credits. One disadvantage that the student can have is that if the students have a job after school, the student can get tired from high school and his/her job. And the student can stop to do what the student need to gradute. The student have to make an effort to graduate early.
Some school offer programs that allow high school students to gradute in three years. Some of the programs are in summer, in the evening. Those programs help students to finish high school, it's a easy way to get credits in a short period time. The minimum of students are not able to be into theze type of programs. One of the reasson can be that the student work in summer.
If the students are not able to be in the programs, they have another opportunity, they can take courses online.
In conclusion it is a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter to college, but have advantage and disadvantages. One advantage are that some school offers programs or students can take courses online, that can help students to graduate. One disadvantage is that, students can get tired, they to do hard work, if they want to gradute early. Students that want to graduate in three years and enter college, some students have a job after school to earn money to college. All depends in the student, if the student do all the work, the student is going to graduate but, if the student don't do the work, the student is not goin to graduate.
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The one place that I would want to visit would be LOCATION_NAME.The reason on why I choose this place was because, I was born and raised there.I want to visit this place because I have so many memories there.Memories of my child hood,memories of when I had my first golden medal,memories of when me and my cousin got into a soccer team together and made a lot goals,and many more.
The main person that I want to see that lives in LOCATION_NAME is my dad.He was always there for me for my brother and my sister.He took us places that we wanted to go to,like LOCATION_NAME, LOCATION_NAME,and LOCATION_NAME.He gave us everything we asked for,but when my mom and him got seperated we didn't see him much.We only saw him for the weekends,and it was okay at least we were spending time together with our cousins and him.
When I arrive at Texas the first thing I want to do is hug my dad,and then go eat with him with my brother and sister.After doing that I want to see all of my family that lives there especially my favorite cousins.There are so many things I want to do once I get there, but it wouldn't happen in one day.
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Should students graduate earlier from high school? Graduation earlier have been the choice that a lot of students on make on their lives. They may feel over-confident when they are clear about what are their accomplishments and the things that they have to do to reach it. It is not that easy as it sounds because they need to prepared themselves and notify that it will be difficult to reach their goals. However at the end they will see that was for a good and valuable things for their lives. They might will need to work hard and feel like to exceed themselves. It is good idea to graduate earlier because students will have the opportunity to find a job after they graduate and earn money then later they can start going college, they will be more productive in society, and they will develop their skills and knowledge.
Students that graduate earlier need to have enthusiasm and know that they will have a more difficult life and realize that they will have more responsibilities and duties in society, when they are out of school they should take that as an advantage to use their time wisely and help themselves by trying to find a job and earn some money; if they are taking the decision to go to college in few years. It is hard to find a job when the time pass and they did not practice all the things that they learn in the past and then realize that they should do sometime productive same as when they were in high school before they graduate.
In addition they will be helping their parents same as they did it when they were in school, by supporting and care about of them, they will be contributing in home and society. Also, they will have others accomplishments that they might want to reach it and celebrate with their families and make them feel proud and happy of their goals. Understanding that all the things that they did are for have good benefits and others people will used as good thing to defend or help themselves.
Finally, all students have the same capacity to show up and do the right things, after they graduate they have the opportunity to find a job and demonstrate how the develop their skills and knowledge. Staying positive and knowing that they can do great and specials things will make them feel proud of their works and then they will prove that they can do amazing things like everybody does. Providing high qualities of themselves in a workplace can help them to know and find new information about what things are happening in the world that round them.
Students should be thinking what they want do in their future or after high school since when they are growing up because that will help them to clear their minds and thoughts. Working hard and doing it with enthusiasm that is how they will be success in their future. Earning money by working honestly later that will be a big step to start a career in college, helping people and communities will make them feel more productive and helping their attitudes to stay confident, brave, and strong all the time with themselves,demonstrating their abilities and capacities is how they will be success in their futures lives.
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The results of talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices can be absolutely helpful. People will be able to develop new ideas with the help of more than one person. They will be able too learn things way more faster. How ever you have to ask the right person for help. Some people are not able to help others, because they don't the right mind set as others. Last reason why talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better is helpful because people need someone too talk too and get ideas from. If someone is sad or they need help with problems that happen in their life. They need too find someone that can help them and seek for multiple opinions.
For instance i think that if you develop new ideas from the help of more than one person can be helpful in so many ways. One way is if you talk to the right person you will actually be able too get a good job in the future. Second reason why talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices and it will develop new ideas is because people will be able to get new opinions and for information to help them with their career. How ever theres many reasons why you can be able to develop new ideas.
If you wanna talk to someone about seeking for multiple opinions and making better choices. You need to find the right person. There are people that can lie about so many things. People like this can ruin so many careers and dreams from people. They do not have the right mind sets of others. Thats why you should find the right people too seek new opinion from.
There are so many people that need help and need ideas, because they are going through tough times in their lives. This is why i think its better for everyone to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions. They are able too talk too you and they will be able too make you feel better. Those people are able too make your day. If you have found the right people too talk to than they will easily solve your problems. They will also give you great opinions too seek.
In conclusion people say that talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choices is a bad thing. I disagree with their opinion. People need more than one person to seek new opinions. They also need others to make better choices. How ever the results of talking to more than one person too seek for multiple opinions and make better choice is a good thing. It makes other learn quicker, feel better and make people get better opinions from others.
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Do you think first impressions are impossible to change? Some people say that first impressions are possible to change by getting more in detail. I agree that first impression are impossible to change because first impressions are negative and peoples thoughts don't change.
In other words, first impressions are usually negative. For example, if you see a person and he or she just has a serious face, your first impression "that person has bad vibes''. Or a type of food that looks strange to you, you automatically start saying negative things about it.
Also, peoples thoughts never seem to really change you will always see that character or thing the same way. Why? Because nothing changes everything it remains if something does change ,it changes in negative way. As an example, people get more cruel or companies start inventing products that shouldn't be together. Your mind won't change unless that person ,place or thing changes in a positive way.
So, first impressions are almost impossible to change. First impressions can change by getting more involved and finding more information about that subject but, it is impossible to change that. In the futures lets hope this world and the people and objects in it will change in a postive way so our first impressions can be possible to change. Things should be possible to achieve not impossible.
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In this new year that we are now there are thosands of enjoyable and educational activitys. They can be fun because you get to do alot of things with them. These activitys should be done because they are very fun.
An activity can be fun is like playing a sport their are alot of sports out there that can be fun and aggresive but its exciting to play a sport because you get to go on trips and you get to verse other teams or with only one player. you get to even become a professional player
I played soccer for about two years and now i am good at it. Before in elemantary school i used to be bad at it and used to say "im bad at this" or ill say "im not good at it" but then i entered in a summer soccer program every evening or in the day i would go to a school and we would go to a soccer field. nI really loved that activity because you learn more and become good at it.
Another activity that can be fun and cool and enjoyable is playing an insturment. It is fun because i used to play an insturment the last three years and it was fun because you get to go to trips. Last year me and my friends went to Generic_City. We went with the orchestra class, band, and even chores. it was fun. and its nice to play an insrument because you have alot of oppsions to choose from and you even get to play nice soothing music or loud and extreame. And the fun part is that you get to be in a stage with your friends and play music infront of the audiance.
Another enjoyable activity is chemistry its fun because you get to mix different chemicals to objects or chemical to chemical. Me and my science class will be doing it this year i am happy to do it becaue i never mixed chemicals or never put on science goggles. i cant wait to do it this year we will be doing chemisry in april. Mixing chemicals can be hard and scary because what happens if you mix the chemcals and something happens in chemistry you have to be very careful with what chemicals are you mixing together.
I am very happy because you have thosands or hundres of activitys to choose from because their are alot of people who are loking for a good and fun activity. so i recommend you to go look for an activity that fits yoou right and that enjoyable and educational.
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I belief that the best option in our life is to be a student active, that to be a student inativity, is the better for our life how students that we are, also because we can learn about the all thing that exist on this world, for to be a best person and too for our future.
we can do more if we are people active,when put our mind to work, enrich at the brain, achievement may goals that we wish on our life, like when are on high school and us stutying hard we have great grades in the class, we pass the year and set all the effort, the result is have in the hands our diploma, we will feel a sensation of happiness, and go ahead with our goals, the university and with the future.
also we feel the satisfaction because we are people that we like to be doing differents things that obvious are good, may be no is easy because somtimes we fail, but we can continue to endeavor and to be a person with goals clean that go to comply, follow with the university, and to be a person succesful in the life.
the students that have a mind occupate have more opportunities because these student are smart and people that not are lazy, obtain more adds of have the best prosonal of jobs in company or industry, in any type of job if we are people efficent that doing more in the world ,
because we enrich our brain and body and that service in the future, a style of life unique, obtain a best job to be people that can improve the world.
I think so that be a person active or doing something create a way in our life that champion to be professional because we cannto be idle, we have that to be women and men productive and obtain the job of our dreams, cause if we not doing something we are people that not have clean their goals,
in change if we are people with a brain active we can do anything in the world and understand better tha things.
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Cell phone should be allow in classroom
Cell phone are very useful in our daily life, we use them at home to see our social media and to be in contact with our family and friends that are far away from us, to buy thing, at work for any emergency and to make our shop list, but in a classroom maybe not much. Although, Some people believe that the cell phones shouldn't be allow in classroom. Actually, I think that cell phone should be allow in classroom because it allow students to find information fast about what they need and they can write note on their cellphone that they can read at any time they want.
Some people that believe that cellphones shouldn't be allow in classroom have their reasons. They think that students that use their cell phone in classroom don't pay attention at what the teacher is teaching them and that could be something that might help them in the future and they think that it is really disrespectful for the teacher that the students use their cell phone during class while he is talking. Also they think that student might use their cell phone to cheat during a test.
Cellphone allow students to find any information fast about what they need for the class or group project. A school computer sometimes takes a several moment to log in. Waiting for the computer to log is really stressful because we might not have much in class and many students work after schools so they might not have time to finish it at home. Also help students that are new in this country and that do not know English. They can translate any word they don't know in English. This way students learn more English and faster.
The students can use their cell phone to write notes on their cell phone that they can read at any time they want because students are often using their cell phone. students might in their work, in their friend's house, walking home or any where else and they just need to take out their cell phone. Also students they can study for a test anywhere they go at any time they want to because they always have their cell phone with them.
In conclusion, the students should be allow to use their cellphone in classroom because it allow students to find information fast about what they need and they instead of using a computer or dictionary can write note on their cellphone that they can read at any time they want and wherever they go.
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Students work better alone rather than in groups. Students can have more support and ideas from others in groups; however, students works better alone than in groups. Working alone is beneficial for students because students can finish on time, focus more, and challenge them self.
Working alone is beneficial for students because students can finish on time. Students can work on their assignment at home and they can be more independently. Students while they are working independently, can managed their time by completing their assignment. Students can work as slow and fast, as they want. Students can finish on time.
Working alone is beneficial for students because students can focus more. Sometimes when students are working in groups they get distracted by other team member and that cause a negative impact in the students learning. Students while they are working alone can put more effort on it and being more creative. Students without distractions can gain more knowledge. Students focus more.
Working alone is beneficial for students because students challenge them self. Students when they are working alone, learn have to be responsible for their work and collaborate in challenging them self by doing it independently. Also, students can learn new vocabulary. Students can ask the teacher if they need support. Students challenged them self.
In conclusion, students learn many things by working alone. Students can learn have to be more independently. Students learning developed by focusing more in class and avoiding any distraction, so students can have better grades. Final, students learning depends on how much effort they put on their learning.
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By: Generic_Name 03/20/2019
Should people make their own decisions, or shoud they seek guidance from experts and authorties.
If you take decisions, you can have a good life for you'r future. For Exmaple if you want go to the College but you talk with your self and said no go to the college because you not are Intelligent, so you try to deisions go to the college or not go.
you can take your own decisions,For Example: if you take one decisions are bad or no the people need to repect you'r decisions because is you'r decisions,So They not want to know why you take that decisions in my opinion the people only want the bad for you.
You can take more control about you'r decisions,For Example: you can have more control about you'r decisionsFor Example:you can have more control about you'r decisions if you control you'r decisions you can take good decisions and that is good for take decisions
So, you need to have contro about decisions.
you can have you'r own decisions is good to take you'r decisions because you have more capacity to take other decisions, So in my opinion is good to have a decisions because can help to you in the Future but if you take something good for you'r life or for decisions.
In Conclucion: Should people make their own decisisons, or should they seek from experts and Authories. Take decisions for you is good because you can have good life for the future,if you want go to the college but you talk with you'r self and no go to the college because you not are Intelligent, so you try to decisisons go to the college or not go.
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I would play basketball for the school because you get to play against other teams in other different schools. Also, your friends can watch you play. Playing basketball for the school is a good thing,for an example:Your getting sponsored,you get to participate in activities like drills,and you get to play against teams from other county schools. If you make it to the basketball team you have to be healthy because high school is different how you play from different other leagues and also you have to work out a'lot to get in a good shape so you can have a higher advantage on driving a lane or shooting a three on you opponents while playing basketball.
One important thing is that you gotta listen to your coach and have good sportsmanship because if you do,then you will have a perfect team to win the championship game because if you do good college coaches might scout and look for good players that knows how to handle the ball and play defense so they can prevent the other team from scoring. If you do really good on both of those things then you might have a good advantage that college coaches might pick you to be on the team.
My second favorite sport that i would choose would be football because in my personal opinion football is the best sport because you get to tackle people. If you participate in football for your school you have to go training because there will be defensive and offensive coaches that will be there to train so you can get on the team for high school football. In training,you would do dead lifts,hills,drills,weigh lifting,and scrimmages. You have to do those things because thats what coaches want to see,they want to see their players train hard because the players want to make the coaches know that they will work and train hard to make the team.
Finally, the best sport to choose would be football because it is a very aggressive sport and also the sport is very hard and you have to be a lucky person to make it to the NFL.This will be a very hard thing because you also have to do good school but if you dont the coaches might think about cutting you out of the team because they want your grades to be perfect. If you make it to college and you do good, you can be the luckiest people to be invited ti the NFL combine. But if you dont like football just pick basketball because it doesn't really matter what sport you wanna choose to play for your school.
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I agree with the Author Emerson wrote, "To be yourself in a word that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment", because the most important in this world is to be yourself. To be yourself is to make you unique and different for the others. Some of things is important to be yourself is: To be yourself, to achieve goals by yourself, and don't let others people tell you to be different.
The first is to be yourself. Some people things if you don't be yourself is to make you successful in their life, but the case is not that. To be yourself is make the people in your work, family, and friends see the real person you are. In my case when I came in the United States, I don't like to be myself because I was a little scared the kind of people was here. Every time people talk to me, they look me different. After we finished the conversation I feel bad because I know was not me. One afternoon my mom talk me, " You need to be yourself, because inside you heart, you are a sweet person, beautiful, and you love help people." In that moment I changed my life and the way I look people.
The second things is to achieve goals by yourself is motivate you to continue do the right choices, and the things right. To be yourself had more opportunities for work, universities, and scholarship. To be yourself don't only implicate be a good person or help people, is to implicate say the truth, the things you think, and never lie to others people. To achieve your goals and objective is make proud of yourself in this world completely of opportunities. For examples, my sister for her dedication, and to be herself, so right now she is in college. To be herself, she achieve their goals and dreams, and she always saying the truth.
The third things what is important is don't let other people tell you to be different. If always to be yourself, you always be successful in life. Some people say you needs to change because they are jealous or they don't like you. Whose say you needs to change is because they want the bad things for you. In my case, I don't remember very well, but one person say to me that, " I need to change my personality." In that same afternoon I go to tell my mom what this person say to me, and what my mom say to me was, " Don't let any person to over shine the light you had."
In my conclusion, I feel this is very important for all people need to reflect, in this life the most important things is be yourself don't matter what. The are three things that one person never forget is to be yourself, to achieve goals by yourself, and don't let other people tell you to be different. If you let people do what ever they want with you life, you never be successful in life.
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Playing an instrument is fun because it can a hobby for the people who are just starting. For example, A piano is used for many types of music. Such as Smooth jazz, Rock, Orchestra, Rap and much more. Pianos requires a great amount of practice and knowing all the keys to create a good music at a play with the audience amused. Professional piano players gets most people's attention by knowing the right keys for the music that the piano players are playing. In addition, There are many tutorials of how to play the piano and learning the right key on social media to begin or improve your piano skills, due to technology. As a result, Pianos has been used frequently in the 1960's for music and people still listen to it everyday in the radio in their automobile. But sometimes Smooth jazz with a piano in the background is played at a cafe and restaurants to relief the stress that people are having in their personal lives. But there are way more instruments than just the piano.
A saxophone is fun to use and its kind of similar to a piano according to the similarity of what music type the instrument is used on, except for rock, rap, and maybe orchestra. The saxophone is famously known by smooth jazz, jazz, and night jazz and night jazz are commonly used in New York cafes at night and other states. Next, the saxophone is similar to a trumpet, trombone, and tuba by blowing on the top part of the saxophone and at the same time using your both of your hands to make a rhythm. However, an electric piano has more than 20 buttons of instruments to choose from. It has guitar, trumpet, flute, clarinet, and even a saxophone for a different sound for the keys just for the people who want to change their style. In addition, Saxophones can be taught in music class in middle school, high school, or just a music school in general. It takes a couple of years to practice for beginners or couple of months to practice a new music for experts. But if you master a saxophone, thats where the fun part starts. You can create relaxing jazz instrumentals for people to listen to for meditation and stress relieving. And you can also be well known for doing those kinds of stuff. But, there is a last instrument that is really famous and also really fun to use.
There are different types of guitars to choose from dealing with music. The acoustic guitar is one of the most calm sounding guitars in the world because it is used to make sad music and also relaxing. This guitar is fun to use by learning how to know which strings you should use first in order to make a good song or music with a acoustic guitar in the background. Next, the distorted guitar is mostly well known by rock and heavy metal. These guitars need to be plugged on an amplifier for it to work and they are loud. But thats what heavy metal fans like such as Intensity. The clean guitar is mostly used for country music and soft rock. This is another type of guitar that people really like the rhythm and can listen to it nonstop. These three types of guitars are very different and attracts people's taste of music because some people are different.
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The author Waldo Emerson wrote a statement or quote that it say ,"Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow" basing on my point of view or experiences, I agree with him, I think the same, we will never grow if we keep doing the samething that we already mastered.
I'm taking this position on this issue becasue I have my reasos to sopport my position and to explain why this author is right.
First reason is on point of view if you're already mastered in something and you're keep doing it , to be better or go beyond then my opinion is that you're wasting your time on something unnesesary because you're already mastered , just be happy with what you have and knows a sample are the
Childrens they always wanna something if they have it they want more and more or when they are playing they wanna play possiblely the all day when they realize the day is already gone but they don't care because they think that they have enough time to play so it is the same with us. sometimes we wanna be betters than another people or just feel good but we're wasting our time in somethin that we already mastered.
Secondly the author Emerson show us the true in a quote we can stop doing something that we already mastered we could try to do something else or try to learn something new that can help us in the future of that way we can start growing because we start to learn about differents things so we have more knowledge and we can survive and we can realize or knows how the life looks like. A sample to be a boss you need to know or have more knowledge at least than yours employs or to be amanager you have to know many things.
Finally unless you try to do it better or be better than the rest of the people always is gonna be someone else who is better than you then that time you're wasting doing something beyond than you knows ,use it to teach someone else or learn about some else how to be better in something , teaching someone else or learning from someone else you can start to grow. A example is a old brother he learn about his parents and also teach and care his youngest brother of the way he is starting to growing up because his taking a responsability .The example can show us that we need to about experiences or advices or people who has more knowledge of that way .
In conclusion for these reason and supporting with examples that I wrote, I agree and think the same with The author Waldo Emerson , I took this position because If we try to do something beyond what we already mastered, we will never grow. Also we wasting our time and we could use that time to learn from someone something else what we do not know or teach to someone else about our knowledge . what we can help us to grow or be better in the future concluding I agree with Emerson's statement.
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Do you think failure is a good thing or bad thing? Well, what a British prime minster ones said"success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Some people may think this is bad thinking because of how hard you try,but you have no success at the end. Yes,i agree with the statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success because of these three reasons,failure makes me better than i was at first,never giving up without motivation ,and be able to over come that obstacle that i work so hard for. My first reason, of why failure is a good thing because it makes every body better at what they started with. For example, when i first started learning how to ride a long board i was very afraid that i would fall and hurt myself. At first i really terrible and failed over and over again. Until one day my friend came over my house and showed him how i would do it. But once again i fell off my long board crazy like. Then my friend started to laugh but in a funny way,so i also stared to laugh too. I ask him why he laugh at me,he told me" i remember at was like you when i stared to learned long board". He also told me he was really proud of me not giving up and failing. what i understood of what he was trying to tell me is that failure can make me better from having that kind of enthusiasm in my spirit. related back to my first reason is that not just giving up,but having a motivation every time i do anything to keep going. In order to have that kind of motivation of getting out of bed and doing what you want to accomplish at the end of the day is looking up to someone who helps you get to work or hustle i can say. For example, famous people who did or was successful in life like Bill gates who found the gold rush,Arnold the best body builder of all times,and Stan lee who invited the marvel universe. All these people was in our shoes before they became famous. They can motivate us by what people probably said to them like "no" or "it can not be done". They did not listen to adorers Sayers would though that never would happen. My final reason of why failure is a good thing is to over come any obstacle that can get in your way. For example, the time when i was fifteen years old i had a problem with one of my classes in school where i had to learn to stay away from people who were not good influence on me. At first they looked like good people,but when i started to notice that they were hiding something from me i was really currouse what was it about. Until one day i was with my best friend in his room just chilling and later on he showed me on his phone what i never though they would do. I was really dissapionted what they were doing beyond my back. So on that day i had to over come my obstacle of not making friends with anybody who looks nice or their appraise. In conclusion i do agree with the British prime mister Winston Churchill quote that says "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". because of these three reasons failure makes every body better,never giving up without motivation,and lastly over coming any obstacle that can be on road to success. something that i always believed in is "no pain,no gain".
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my central idea is supported with introduction specific imformation to the other people that we can check other books the conclusion is bring good idea with the other contact and use the technology we need bring good idea together for more imformation and take good reasons the people need to have something for pay games without speaking with other people and they need stay together for to do that.
The people need the contact for comunication with the other human for to do more technology and for that can to do more games the people need to do more imformation for to do more something for comunication with the other human for pay the games without speaking with other person my idea is that they have more contact with the other companies for have good idea and together going to have good imformation and they need take good idea.
The person need to have good activite when to do the games and the people they need to have money for to do the games because the boss need pay to the employee and the employee need to think more better for to do good games, but they need to use more technology the people need use the comunication and the technology for pay their games and my other idea is that they need to have more technology for to do how a large screen for show the games to the anoher companies or to the other person who want buy the games and they can pay the game use the technology.
The other companies can check the books and the games in the large screen because they builded the large screen with their technology and they can speaking with other person and it's important to help to the person with their comunication because we need to learning about to the new tehnology that they builded and the employee need to brings good ideas for the boss for to do the games more better with the new technology.
with the other technology new they can show the books in the other companies and they need to do activite with the other employee then the need to have good life and they need to do vacation for relax for that have good ideas the employee to have access for get more better the games because they want to build good games for the persons the employee need get something that can they to do idea they can work with the other person that they can to do good work.
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Having a good attitude in a difficult time is a great way to stay calm and talk to others with respect. I witnessed one day a new kid came to my school with attitude he was giving out everyone what they want like many people asked him where he was coming from he said "I'm coming from
New York". He genially answer their question with respect and calmness like one kid asked how old are you, He replied saying that "I'm 14 years old" Even though
Some kids were being rude to him some of them even try to bully him,but cause of his attuide no one couldn't do much. He had no problem talking with teachers and other kids cause he wasn't feeling shy to talk with them he was happy and he was making an eye contact with everyone he's talking with. The kid probably had fun he made new friends earlier than other kids that were new. So that's why having a attitude not always means bad. So is your choice to be whatever you want how you wanna be treated because if you gonna treat others with bad attitude you should not expect them to treat you with respect. You can have a attitude and you still can be good is not always bad.
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How do you want people to see you as a good or a bad person? In my personal opinion I want to be the good one; to make it happen I have to show the best of me at the first time. It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, I think that it is true. There is no second impression, once is enough to show the kind of person that you are. There are three reasons why I agree. I will not be the person that no one would like to believe in, I will not get help from anyone, and I will not have friends.
To begin with, I will become the person that no one would like to believe in. For example, if I show myself as a liar at the first impression, everyone will know that I am not the one or the incorrect person to believe in. Even though I am saying the truth no one would trust me, but the first impression can change it. My mom told me that doing the best since the begining will help me the rest of my life. She was right because of what she thought me, and I apply it in my life I see myself as the person who you can believe in.
Secondly, I will not get help from anyone. In my life I will need help from others because I am not able to do everything by myself. That's why I should make people to see me as a helpful person at the first impression, otherwise I will not get help. I heard someone said that "what I give to others is what I will recieve back from them".
What I understood is that if I do not help others, they will not help me. I always like to be the kind of person that help without waiting something back. I think that it makes my impression as a good one.
Finally, I could lose friends or I would not have any friends what is even worst. Since the first time when I
met my friends and showed them that I am the type of person or friend that is always with them no matter what. Furthermore, I have never betreyed one of them but if I've would did it when we met, they already kick me out of their life. As I said before one of the things that can make me the best friend is my first impression, show them that I am loyal.
In conclusion, first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, you can change them but it takes a long time and you will lost your patience waintig until it change. That's why giving a good first impression will prevent problem for you such as; to not become the person that no one would like to belive in, to not get help from others, or to not have friends. A simple good impression would make your life better or would make your life worst.
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Do you think individuality create a unique way to be your own of life style? Some say individuality make a specific way to achieve goals being yourself. I'm definitely argue with Ralph Waldo Emerson's statement about individuality because your own style of works,Nobody tell us what to change , freely to choose your way of thinking.
First, your own style of works. For example, my dear sister " Generic_Name" yesterday, she got a phone call.
I was with her, when she answered the phone call , it's was the teacher saying if my sister " Generic_Name " would come at her college, because she was the only one at her class to got a higher score for doing the project with her own creativity and unique steps at the project without following the steps that her teacher being teaching daily at the whole classroom. The teacher told my sister it's a good way to do something with your own ideas without the fear that would be good or bad its just exploring your ability to making great works being yourself .This explain my sister for being the only one to did the project with her own way got the most higher grade.
Second, Nobody tell us what to change. For example,
my sister " Generic_Name", every night, she tell me, how I need to brush my hair correctly, she thinks the hair need a proper care and treatment to brushing the hair . I dont like to do at her way because I feel her way to brush it's more slowly than mine own way to brush my hair, so every night she got mad with me because never use her style to brush the hair. I always said to her, I like to brush my hair at my way and my sister can not tell me to change my way at brushing my beautiful hair. This explain, my sister, don't need to get mad for doing the opposite the she wants to do, I got my style and nobody has to tell me what to change at doing any activity.
Third, Freely to choose your way of thinking. for examples. "Generic_Name " my sister told to my mom , if she can participate at the " project of making a novel " in her school , so my mom let to her participate. She thinks that would be the winner for being the most iconic novel might be existed in the world, so she starting to writing it down, each content at her novel but she dont need a examples of novel because she got her own style to write down, she say her novel would be a entertainment novel because her way to thinks it's different at the other types of novels, her novel will be a her own creativity and passion to make the novel the next most read novel in the world. This explain,free thinking its discovering a new person.
Individuality, makes us special to achieve it goals. style of works different than anyone else. we don't need to someone to tell us what to change. Being free to choosing thoughts it 's s a perfect way to express it with the real world .some says individuality is to be a selfish behavior for doing the things at ours own ways but Individuality it's just a sense of life to find your own way to work. In the future individuality would be the secret tool to reach different goals.
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If you don't do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow; From my past experiences i strongly agree. In life things aren't easily handed to you if you want something bad enough you have to work hard for it if you wanna become a better version of yourself. Most people around the world look up to certain successful people and wish to become just like them with all the money, cars, and fame like the famous rapper " Nba Youngboy " which has made himself known through his music rapping about his life and difficult obstacles he's had to go through to make it where he is now.
Growing in life and being successful isn't something that's going to happen over night it takes time and patience. With every task comes a difficult obstacle that'll try to put you down and make you wanna give up and people usually tend to give up easily. The only way you can over come obstacles and move forward is to get up from it and keep trying; Barack Obama one of our best well liked President worked hard for what he believed in and helped illegal immigrants around the country get an opportunity to get job legally. Obama had many difficult task but his passion and what he believed in never made him wanna give up he kept trying over and over again to grow and to help undocumented immigrants voices be heard too.
Immigrants nowadays tend to have it harder than most people; they come from around the world looking for a better life, well paid jobs, and a safe home for their family. The majority of immigrants come with nothing but a couple clothes and shoes and usually no where to stay more than half of immigrants work twice as hard to get food on the table and clothes for their kids and wifes. The mindset of having goals and being passionate about something is a powerful tool, Many immigrants work hard enough to eventually become a U.S citizen which has a lot of obstacles to complete. For immigrants to learn the english language is difficult but after studying and working hard long hours they master it and they tend to grow in the american society, Which shows anyone if you really put your head into it you can accomplish anything.
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Boom!One day PROPER_NAME mom decided that she wanted him to join the distance learning classes.Where they could have online or video conferences with there school teachers.PROPER_NAME would sit around all day on his phone playing videos games instead of doing his online or video conferences.PROPER_NAME is like many others who thinks school is not all that important.I believe that schools should not offer distance learning to students.Therefore,students would not benefit from attending classes at home because students would have more free-time, students would be discourage that school is not important,Also they would skip classes to meet up with friends.
First,students would have free-time.For example,PROPER_NAME was home alone because her mom and dad works at a fast-food restaurant called LOCATION_NAME.PROPER_NAME knows she would have online conferences in the morning the next day at 8:30.Next morning came PROPER_NAME decided that she was not doing any conferences because she wanted to go shopping at the mall
for a up coming beach day that her aunt PROPER_NAME was having.PROPER_NAME then spend all day at the mall walking around looking in stores and talking to friends.Another example,There was a Vybz Kartel performance in LOCATION_NAME where they would give away free food and drinks at the gate. PROPER_NAME mom make sure to call home and remind her that she would have video conference in the afternoon with the teacher she loves the most PROPER_NAME but there was no answer so her mom decided to leave a voice mail ad hope when she sees the message she will know what to do. PROPER_NAME then left home after listing to her moms voice mail saying that she needs some alone time so she have to attend this party because all her friends were going and she wanted not to feel left out.Additional, PROPER_NAME boyfriend PROPER_NAME texted her saying he want to spend the day with her because he was leaving on October the 26,to go and stay for sum time in LOCATION_NAME with his dad. PROPER_NAME then got up pack a bag with clothe then left without anyone know she was out of the house without studying for her online conference presentation.c
Secondly,students would skip classes to meet up with friends.For example, PROPER_NAME skip distance learning classes to go enjoy the day with her best friend PROPER_NAME because it was his birthday and he invites her out for ice-cream and horse back riding. In addition, as for PROPER_NAME hanging out with his friends skiing in glove on snowboard or ice hockey is way cooler then staying home listening to his online conference teacher talk. Another example, PROPER_NAME dad PROPER_NAME just brought this new speedboat.one day when her dad was not at home she decided it is better not to do her online or video conference she was just going to invite sum of her friends over and they could take the boat for a spin at a hotel called HOTEL_NAME.They spent all day boating around instead of her doing her online classes.Another example, PROPER_NAME woke up one Monday morning saying she doesn't feel like she has a need to be taking distance learning classes so she pack her bag and call her friend PROPER_NAME to go with her to the countyside to look on lakes,mountain,and also valley.
Lastly,students would get discourage that school is not that important.For example, PROPER_NAME was taking AP biology class because she wanted to be a doctor, but because her mom start letting her taking online conferences for biology and start staying home she get discourage that school is not that important because if it was why would they would her to stay her.Next example, PROPER_NAME wanted to be a color guard coach but her aunt was telling her she does not have enough money to pay for her to attend the color guard practices her aunt heard about this distance learning program where she could stay home and learning about the skills for color guard for free. PROPER_NAME decided that if that could help she would take the class after two days PROPER_NAME said to her mom that the distance learning is not working out the way she wanted it to be also that is lower her expectation about school.Some people believe that if school offer distance learning to students it would allow them to have freedom.They are incorrect because most students are responsible.
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Dear, Principal
I think your students should have community service but i think its only fair to the people that do something bad to do community service, because for example some of the students at school litter and if they do and you catch them you should make them do community service for littering. not all students should do that only the kids that act up because if you put all the kids in that your gana be taking their time away and its gana be worst there gana get mad.
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME
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Dear, Principle I have a complain that I will like to talk about I heard that you are changing the school policy on the sports and activities. I heard that us students we will not be able to participate in any of the sports or activity un less we have a B average in our classes. well i need to tell you that I disagree with that change and let me tell you why.
First a lot of kids like sports but some time school gets a little difficult and its a problem for some of us because we are not as smart as others which and it will be so unfair. we want to have good grads in school to but like I said before its not that es
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I belive that Going beyond what you have already mastered is a great way to accomplish in life it will motivate you to work hard and take more steps as you are trying to achieve more goals. Some people believed that going beyond what you have already mastered is not a great way to accomplished becuase you will never grow and that will lead you to fall back and it is beneficial because you have already accomplished.
In my opinion going beyond what you have already mastered is a great way to achieved more goals and the more steps you take the more experience you will get than just focusing on what you have already mastered,because achieving more and taking risk in every journey that you made is a great way to know how important each step you take is and going beyond that will prove how strong and passionate you are to be more successful. For example if you are in a soccer team and your team had already won three goal that should not give you the risk to relax and think that you have already mastered what you were trying to get ,go beyond that and play more harder and get to were you want to be until you feel accomplished that will give you the courage to try to do more and never look down.
Another reason why people should try to do something beyond what they have already mastered is it will set an example to the public by showing how ethusiatic you are in any part that you take ,because you are aiming to get more and win more and you will be a role model to the young generation, For example if someone is trying to let go because they had already got what they want they will take you as a mentor, because you at the other side never stop even though you have already mastered and accomplished more but you are still aiming to get more and you are still growing.
Another reason to go beyond is it will impact you in your after life and you will also feel proud that you never let go you take risk you go beyond your thought, for eaxample you another person who have already mastered what they want and they feel good withwhat they have already get and you gop beyond that makes you a hero.
In conclusion you will always expect more and accomplished more if you are willing to go beyong your gains and what you have already get.
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I'm agree with the statement, because in my experience everyone likes a job clean and professional, i think that is important when you witting something, it's good to take the attention from the person who reading, support the main ideas, need to have professional facts. is important the piece of statement have a good title and one of the important things when you writing a statement is that you need to use quotation marks. The reason why all this are important is because is easy to reader to under stand what do you want to transmitting in you writing.
For example, if i want to write about a a book about story, i need to have scenario, characters conflict and conclusion. i need that story make sense, ideas that support my story, and double check all my work to main sure that my story have specific facts, in my story i need to use quotation marks. if i want that my book cause a impact in that people, needs to have a professional title and cover. i think this the main important things that anyone need to do a professional work when it's time to make a statement or a story or anything you want to write.
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Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone? Opinions can help people by seeing the persons point of view and understand the persons view. Sometimes its better to ask multiple people for in advice because everyone thinks differently and you will probably get more different advise from people because the more people you ask for in advise then you will get more advise from people. Sometimes its even better to ask someone for in advice that has had in experienced of something that you might not be experienced with like going through something rough people will understand you because the have also been like that or you just feel worry about something or because you are curious or interested about something and you want to know or want to try something new for the first time. Sometime people want advice when they need help because they can't make the right decision or probably because they are going through something rough in there life. Sometimes people need in advise to help them make a better choice sometimes people need advice to help to let them know in what they need to work on or improve on next time. When making a decision you need to think about will my decision effect others or myself? or does it benefits them or me? sometimes people need advise then they are making a decision because sometime when making decision it can be challenging. What does advice help people for advice can helps in many ways like to not give up in things people try not giving up so they use advice sometime people just need a motivation in advice that can also be inspirational to some people advice can be very inspirational and that can help them be success in the future sometimes people need advice to help them get motivated advise can be used in many ways sometimes you will probably not get the advice that you want from people but Seeking multiple opinion that can help them answer their question multiple opinion can help someone see the other person point of view and understand easily and know in what they need to improve on next time.
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In my opinion, I think that true self-esteem comes from achievement and the only reason I think that is because when I achieve something huge say I got a very good grade on my project or got an acceptance letter from my dream college, it would make me feel great about myself and raise my self-esteem. It does not come from praise, when I hear the word praise I think of people praising you and you shouldn't rely on people to bring your self-esteem up. To know that you did a good job by seeing the acheivement it makes a person feel like they can do anything. I see why they say praising can bring self-esteem up, it is because people love to hear from others how well they did or how what they did was so incredible. Words can bring self-esteem up and I know this from experience. However you do not need peoples words to build your self-esteem up it's more a want then a need. Achievement is what you need to build your confidence up in yourself not words, I mean sure it's nice to get a couple compliments here and there but not for satisfaction. To acheive is like to do something outside of your bubble to make you feel like you can do anything, effort needs to be put in to achieve. I think our society now expects that getting praised is like the best thing but those people are the ones who realize that in the end thats not something that build your self-esteem up, sure it'll make them feel good for a little bit, but in my head I thought you don't need to depend on anybody to satisfy you as long as you're doing you and succeeding in life. I hope people come to their senses and realize that they cannot live their lives happy and succesful being praised their whole life they need to praise themselves. I used to be a person who loved getting praised for doing a good job or achieveing something I never praised myself though I wanted to. I realized then the praising is not gonna get me through my teenager years, early twenties and late twenties, I had to learn on my own to know that if I put the effort in something I will achieve. I feel like this whole praising, effort, achievement thing is all like one big repeat, put in effort, praise to boost up your confidence and then in the end achieve it's all linked together but peoples words are not going to satisfy you throughout your academic life it's like asking for attention right there, give yourself all the attention to achieve in life not to fail, I have praised myself so much that I got so many positive thoughts in my head telling myself keep pushing,your almost there,your going to graduate as long as the achievement matches the effort put in to achieve. I've always been that child that wanted to make everybody around me proud especially my parents, I want to show the people that have doubted me my whole life that I can do anything I can achieve it's just all if I put in effort or not. True self-esteem comes from achievement not from praise and if I didn't know that in my heart as true I wouldn't be the person I am today, suceeding.
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Yes, I believe curfew can keep citizens out of trouble by limiting how long they can stay out of their homes. It can improve the city in the process of making the citizens feel safe.
City council should adopt a curfew for teens. Curfew keep teenager from staying out for too long and helps them catch a midnight rest. It balances the world and helps teens managing the time they work in between their jobs and regular daily activities like a midnight jog. Curfews helps them plan to head home early because we dont know what may happen during the night. I love to have a limit on my time because I may lose track of time and be out for longer than I need to be.
Adding a curfew the city is a good choice keeping the citizens safe while improving the public law for less of a death potential. It wont go well if we dont get a curfew and I will explain why.
If we dont get a curfew things will be problematic. Everyone will be staying up late making noise and traffic comes as often while people will just do crazy things. Its important that the city needs a curfew so it keeps the citizens in check and makes sure that no one is up late who might be doing some illegal activities. Staying up all night is bad cause it doesnt help the brain function for u to gain strength for tomorrow. It makes you fatigued and dysfunctional as well as can make you miss important events in life as u go on restless. It is sad to see the amount of car crashes when people drive even though they didnt get enough sleep compared to drunk driving is another story. You can set a curfew for yourself to be safer and more energized for the next day because the early bird gets the worm.
Having a curfew isnt a bad thing. Its an mandatory rule that will helps u live longer, be healthy and keeps u awake for the next day. The earlier you go to bed the more awake you'll feel in the morning since u set a curfew for yourself. I personally set one for myself so I could can be ready to take a test and do my assignments as Im up and at em. The council is a genius for coming up with the idea of a curfew and I am proud to accept and support the idea.
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Its not a good idea for students to identiify a career by the time they enter high school. The three reasons are because it can cause to much stress on the student, they wont be able to focus on their school work, and it can unmotavite them to succesed in their careeer. If the student is expected to identify a career by highschool it can affect how their doing in school becuse all they will be thinking about is a career to pick. They wont focus on their work in class or pay attention in class which will make them fail and slump the class. That can unmotavite them and they can stop showing to school and drop out. Those are my reasons on why I think making a student choose a career by highschool is bad. Others might argue that a student who has a career in mind by the time they enter highschool will succesed because they know what they want to do in life. It will guide them to success in the future, they will have all highschool to study about their career they chose. However, that might work on some students but it wont work on all bacause not everyone knows what they wanna be in life. Some drop out of school cause of the stress it puts on them and just start working to make money. Those are my reasons why I think we shoudn't pressure students on choosing a career so early in high school.
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science experiment on thing like chemical change like color In my science classroom my teacher experiment on fire change color that is chemical change science love their job that is the enjoy for be science identify thing on the earth like plot that is not a is not plant science go to school to be what they are today they want to be science that was their dream they become methodological activity their discipline study.
people that is science they study hard on their educational they do not just wake one day they become science they want to be science for years become science you need to go to school and collage study on you test to activity regarded as requiring study and method they different type of science we have science fiction in which the plot based in speculative scientific discoveries drastic environmental change, or space travel science fiction based on they discoveries things and they travel around the world science thing they do experiment like a board curved sword with the edge on the conveside. when a science experiment on a cow that need their tools they will be like four or five science we need science with it science we will not know what is go on in the world like solar system and sky.
we have science notation a method of writing or displaying number in terms of a decimal number between 1 and 10 multiplied a power of 10
science notation do math like 10 is power than 1 that we need the science notation example my want to be a nurse she to go to school and collage she need to go collage for four years and go to nursing school for four year to be a nurse just be science i do not know how years you to be science .
scintilla a person having expert knowledge of one or more science example to throw off spark to be animated and brilliant for you to be a you need to study and work hard on you study you need gained through experience.
Phys a multistage nuclear reaction esp a self sustain series of missions in which the release of neutron from the splitting of one atom leads to the splitting of other.
A series of reaction in which on one product of a a reacting set is a reactant in the folloe\wing set portable over saw with teeth linked an endless chain science was the first people to know about atom the thing abut at can splitting in two other.
science love do their job and love experiment on thing my science is the fun teacher are have my want be a teacher you need to be a by go to school and collage my advice to be want to be a science is to following the rule like go to school my mom sister about not to show off about any thing we do mat home my sister ask for ,me a advice about her boyfriend he to be a science and do not what to do about it my advice was to follow he heart and my want to be a nursing but that what he to be she to mm boy to go to some collage she is go to that was hard and the boy break up with her that was to follow he dream to be science i was happy and you will what are you happy that you sister boyfriend break up with her he to follow he dream will be happy for any one who to follow their dream.
my advice to science is to follow you dream no matter what happen follow it with your heart and with the science with not any one to tell us abut the solar system by happy with what you have and be really too follow you dream . my brother tell to be really because in life no can do you home work for you need to it ,by you me self o to might school is t real for it m,the home that is come so you to,be a science you need to work hard then you use to work.
science live to m,work it in the their blood so if you to be a science let no stop you to be one if want about cow that is you dream want to walk dog that is ,you dream be dace that is you dream.
chain change a group of convicts chained together esp outdoor labor to smpke in close succession chamleon to cut off the edge or corner of bevel to cut a groove in flute when you teacher is made science you wait and watch my advice to really a change to in life room ways shad is very different think do i love go to go school my English is fun and nice my ma the teacher is she very are that is my sister very good at math my art teacher is very nice to me i love to drawing my is very that my dream to is paint and be a nurse that is the problem .
i have a example it not about science Generic_Name have a friend they fight lot about thing she want a advice she ask her sister said do not have be friend she want to be so go to her mom her said that if she to be to friend so mush talk about their problem and solution it so they talk about about the problem and the solution it and have science have problem like friend all Que that is their problem.
my sister have a boyfriend she think her the her boyfriend is cheat is ask for my advice are ask if she have thing can tell her is cheat her she like are do not have think to said that me boyfriend is cheat on me and said that is not thing do thing like that my advice to mm her is not to be to mush nosing to think like this she was like can do any thing i want to do my was like are do care that science advice to talk if you do not have some to talk to you go crazy so me to so come together and take about the problem you like to do think together my advice talk about you you problem like i me now i am very writing but i am learning how to work my problem is come softer and talk .
so science come to together let talk about you problem do be like can like other people that acting that they can do it my is to people friend you wife if you are not marry come to you sister you brother and family science is import to the world so people who you to be and what people want you to be me do not like people do you work so science I also happy we have ence that we science so let come to together and be one so science please follow you dream do not like people be mean to you so let us follow our.
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A positive attitude can bring people together. Being nice to the people around you gives a positive vibe in the room or wherever you are.
Having a positive attitude is a nice thing when you meet people everyday. You can give them your first good impression if you are applying for a job or at school.
A positive attitude can get you in to many things firstly, make a good impression to you boss. Secondly,
when your team is ready to give, but it is you who persuade them not to. Thirdly, be nice to people if they're being nice to you too. Attitudes are one of the most important things in human characteristics and it also define us.
An attitude that people most adore is positivity. With a positive attitude it can also be a success in life. For example, a great job , good friends, and a wonderful family to spend for the rest of your life. So, a nice attitude can also one of the success leading to a successful life.
However, Having too nice or a very positive attitude can get people very annoyed or jealous. Because of how successful you are and to not ever give up. Being too positive to the peeple around you isn't always a good thing they might push you around of how nice you are, but do not let them drag you down just beacuse of who you are.
Success in life come from many things knowledge, great personlity, cleverness or a positive attitude.
Success comes from hard work, but it does not mean having a great personality or a positive attitude. Do not give up if you wanna have a succesful life.
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Do you think that we should have a program to help younger students?
I think that some schools should have a program, that pairs with older students. My First reason is sometimes they go to school and dont really understand nothing that the teacher are saying, so this is where the program comes to play. Then by using the program, you connect with a random student that learn the same subject as you. And they can teach you the same thing as what your teacher taught you, but they speak to you slowly so you and the other younger students can understand if they dont understand then how are they going to pass a test or a SOL, so basically its like your getting extra help.
My Second reason is, they help younger and older students is because theyre both learning from each other, but it will be hard to make a program because we will need a lot of stuff, but its worth it because the younger students need to understand what they are doing. I think we should have programs in other schools that pair with older students because, so they can help the younger student learn, and make sure that they understand what they are doing.
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In this paragraph I will write about how students can take classes from their homes and if they are going to do good in the works that the teachers give to the students on online, talk to the cousolers or tho his admistrator, the students will have some benefit, Students will have benefits with the grades.
If the student offer distance learning, First he must have to talk to his counsoler about doing classes online and disscus with her about he can stay home and do the classes online. Second, the students have to take test before they do the classes online because the teachers or another people from the school can see if he really is going to do the work at home and be prepaed for all the work that the teacher will give to him/students. Finally, the teachers will see and talk to his counsoler or administrator if they do good in the test and see if they can saty at home and do the classes online also the teacher should give a recomendation to the students if they have to take classes online.
The students will have some benefits if they take classes online, First, the students obiasly will have benefit because they will be doing all work at home and they can ask for help to his/her brothers or sister at home and they can help to do the work and if they have a test in the class that he is taking he will pass because he can see the notes or some works that he finished before. Second, They will have benefit because they are not going to school and he can go out during the day and also do the work when they're out. Finally, Students also will have benefit because they can do the work whenever they want bacuse if they have the classes online at the computers is more easier for example, if they only have to take notes they only can see another attachment of the same thing and if they have a test they will see the notes or another paper about the test.
Students will have benefits with the grades. Firts, the students will have good grades because they will have a lot of time do the work that is assigment for the next day or the same day and they will be concentrate because they are going to be alone at home. Second, The students will have a lot of benefit in that because they can see some work abouth the assigment and have a 100 points in the assigment or if they have a project that the students who are in the school they only will have a hour to do it because the others teacher will give a lot of homework to them but the student whp is taking classes online he will have a lot of work too bute he will have all the day to do it or the next day.
In conclusion they can't take classes online because they will have a lot of benefits that the students who is going to school and they can sleep a lot and the regular student has to wake up early and they can't have benefit with grades or other benefits,
In my opinoin students should not to take classes online because that is going to be more easy than the stduent who take classes at school becuase the students who is in the school they are not going to have he same benefits as the students who take classes online.
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I agree with Churchill's idea that success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm; Although, many people believe that failure will take you down and make you doubt about your potential; however, failure also help you to progress, gives you different ways to achive your goals, and makes you become even stronger than what you were before failing.
Failure is always there, a lot of times we thing failure is a bad thing, but failure is a key thing for success, it will prepare you efor even much harder situations, if you don't fail how are you going to progress?, fail and mistakes help you learn from them, help you to become stronger and they let you know that things are not easy. You have to put more effort on the things you want to get and mistakes are just there to help your progress.
Sometimes we just need different ways to solve problems and failure is there for us, when you fail you know what you are not going to do next, it give you choices and failure let you know the things you could've done to avoid it. When I started to play soccer, I didn't know how to kick the ball correctly, because I only knew one way to kick the ball, I failed a lot of times, but i didn't give up, I started to kick the ball in different ways, I placed my foot in different positions to kick the ball with more power or if wanted to kicked it with more precission. All those fails helped me to realized that there were many other ways and not only one way.
Failure also makes you stronger, because when you fail and you are beaten down and you go there even stronger and achieve what you wanted to achieve you are a new person, a new and strong person that doesn't give up for a simple mistake, a person that when everything looks like its over, comes back with more confidence to not make the same mistake again, that mistake helped you to become even stronger than what you were before it.
Edison was asked "How does it fell to fail 100 times?", and he answered, "I didn't failed, the light bulb was a proyect that took 100 steps to be done".
In conclusion, failure and mistakes help you learn from them, failure gives you other ways to accomplish your goals and it makes you stronger than what you were before, I think people shouldn't be afraid of failure, they have to start failing, because when they get to reach their goals, their satisfaction when they achive it, its going to be even bigger.
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Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because to have success is important to do a great effort. It is very important in the life, but to learn the value that it has sometimes failure is also necessary. Also success is not something easy to get, but without loss calm could get it with enthusiasm. Success has an role important in the life of many people since it is something that is necessary in their academic level, their jobs, and their goals to have a better future.
First, success is difficult to get at the academic level, but the students need know that although they are failing with effort they could get it. Since to get it, they need to study a lot without loss the hope of getting success. Also they need to practice each step to do more easy their activities and have a better success. For example: if students loss any test they need to study and practice a lot to get their success with enthusiam. For this reason, the importance of the success also depend of failure to failure to learn.
Second, in the work, the success depend of many dedication and is absolutely necessary working a lot to get it. If the employees is not working well, the problem could be that the company not could have success and the employees could be exonerated of their jobs. Moreover, if they are exonerated their jobs, they need to looking for another jobs without loss the calm to get their new jobs with a great enthusiasm. For example: An employee was farawell for does not a good report, but continuous practicing and learned to do a good report after that the employee found a good job did a very nice job. Sometimes the success in the work is not easy to get, but neither impossible.
Finally, the people have many goals in their future, but also have obstacles to get success. The goals are difficul to accomplish, but not difficult to do. Furthermore, to realize their goals, they need to keep completely firm their ideas to find the success. Sometimes, they can failure, but they have the capacity to do anything and accomplishment their success for example, A family want to go to the beach, the problem is that they do not loss money to their vactions, yet they were to the beach because winning money working hard and with a great emotion they arrived to the beach. All goals can get with dedication and effort.
In conclusion, from failure to failure, the success can be possible and get it with a great enthusiasm. In the academic level, job and goals for future there are not impossible to accomplish the success. Does not matter the difficulty that everything have, the most important is realizing all with success, but without loss enthusiasm. Success is important, but the most important is learning to surpass failure to get it with enthusiasm.
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Well if you want to make something that you always wanted to do or you wanted to have you will failed sometimes but you never have give up with out loos your enthusiasm like the statement said because if you always give up in things that are harder to you to do it you will always be like that and them you will never going to be waht you always wanted to be some reasons are the you have to superate in the life bacause life not always is easy to live sometimes you will have some troubles without you don't expect that it will come.
Examples are that if you are wasting your time doing things that are going to ruin your life you will always failure and you will loose your enthusiasm and if you don't think what you are doing one day you can do something that you will never wanted to do in your life and there is where going to be seriuos problems with the police and you will jail for a couple years.
So that's why you will need to be always positive with things that you wanted to do in your life never think that you will never going to make your dream because you can make it thare are people that love your family so you will never going to be alone some reasons are that if you make your dream that you always wanted to be and your family are working hard to help you they are going to be so proud of you them you will said thanks god for all you give me and you will be so appreciated with your family because without them will never do what you always wanted to be a good person you will have a good work and you will going to have that car that you always dream to have when you was a kid.
Nobody likes to fails even if it's something that you don't wanted to happen at you or someone else that you love or eather something material because it's harder to buy something or other thing that cost you alot of money and some else just come to break it or destroy that thing that you love and you take care of it like that was only thing that you will love in your whole life.
An importamt failure will be something that happen to you and you said I know i can't superate this and be better than I was before so you can have better ideas how be sucesful in life and don't comitte mistakes that just a child a child can comitte so that can an important failure.
Also taht's why i can not be agree baecause I think both needs to be the same but not both can be the same but with the help of anyone both statement can be equal.
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Asking alot of people for advice is always a great idea. Since you don't know whether the advice is good or not, its better to listen to different opinions from different people, in order to make better decisions.
For example, in four year i'll be going to college.When i'm choosing which college to go to, I will ask several people for advice. I'll ask my mom and dad to see how much money we have. Asking them can help me choose college that are not so expensive. Then i'll ask my siblings what they did after high school. One of them is planning to attend SCHOOL_NAME soon, and he told me that is a really good college for studying law. From hearing that, I might add SCHOOL_NAME to my list. Finally I'll ask my counselor where I should go, since she knows what my strength are and what my weakness are. She can suggest which college suits me the best. Hearing those advice from different people can help me choose the best college to attend.
After I enrolled in college, I will ask my parents for advice. They told me in college, studying is way more important than socializing. They also warned me to be careful and surround myself with people that will bring positive change in my life. After hearing from them, I asked my friends what they would do. They told me they would party all night and drink alcohol. Comparing my parents advice with my friends, obviously, my parent's advice are much better. It's always better to ask more people than one so you don't make a mistake.
College means independent life, before graduating high school, ask more people for advice! Everyone have different opinions, choose which one is best and which one will help you the most!
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Should the school board add one and a half hours to school each day?
School should not be extended any longer than it already is! Although the school board may think that school should be one hour and a half longer, students and parents believe that school hours should remain the same. I do not agree with the school board planning to add one hour and half every school day. School by its self puts a lot of pressure on the students and with a hour added its going to be much more difficult.
The school board should not add hours to school, since students are already used to the hours they get out of school. With a hour and a half students would probably get to much pressure on dealing with some school material. Students would also get much more school work. They would also get an hour taken away to spend that time with the family. It would also take time for the students to get used to leaving school an hour later! If the school hours remain the same then students would already be used to the hour schedule, and they would also have time to do after school activities!!
Because the school board wants to add an hours more of school, the school board should listen to the parents and not add another hour. It would give students much more stress. Without an hour added, it would give so much relief to alot of parents that wont have to fight for what they believe the school board should do with the time schedule.
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A study found that 87% of students that participate in extracurricular activities become more involved at school. Extracurricular activities are fun you once you let yourself try something new. Most kids judge something before trying it, but if they try it might be worth it. Most people that do extracurricular have a more happier time in school because of its positive effects. I agree that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity because students can make new friends, become more productive, and finding a passion for something new.
One reason, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity because you can make new friends. When I was kindergarten there was a healthy kids club and I was a shy kid at the time. So my parents thought it would be the best for me to join the club. I was very against but still went to the club. My neighbor joined the club too so we could be together at least. When my neighbor and I came to the first healthy kids club meeting, and we were separated into different groups. A teacher called my name to leave the room with a bunch of kids in my grade that I didn't know. After we got into the room people started talking and making new friends. This one girl named Generic_Name came up to me and we started talking. After becoming friends with her, the club wasn't that bad. Generic_Name and I started to sit by each other at lunch, and played together at recesses. We are still friends together to this very day. Another example is when my neighbor started to learn baseball. As he grew up no one else in the neighborhood knew how to play baseball. He always wished he had someone to play with. Once he got into middle school he heard they were having tryouts for the baseball team. So he decided to try out for the baseball team. He made the team. He started having more friends come over to his house. He even made friends in higher grades then him. He would always being playing baseball or out having fun with his new friends. I could tell he became a more happier person, and that he has now found people he can relate to and overall have fun with too. So this is why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because you can make new friends.
Furthermore, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students become more productive. My cousin she decided to join volleyball team her freshman year. She thought it would be fun to join. She started to focus too much on volleyball. Her grades started slipping and she was told she couldn't play any volleyball games till her grades were up. She had to stay up late nights to complete extra work that would raise her grades. She thought to herself, if she went back to the volleyball team she would have to find a balance to make sure volleyball doesn't take over her whole life. She got her grades back on track and she was allowed to play in games again. She started getting used to her new schedule to balance volleyball, and school. My next example is when my uncle was in high school, he joined an after school club for mechanics. My uncle wasn't a very good child growing up. He was always skipping classes, and never show up to class. Soon he joined a mechanics club with his friends. He instantly fell in love with it. He started showing up for school, and teachers started to see him be more productive. He so after choose his job as a mechanic, and he started to save money to have his own mechanic shop. He soon went to college to learn more about mechanics. He started working in a mechanic shop to learn the experiences of working and owning a shop. He then started his own successful company. Without extracurricular to change his attitude about school, he wouldn't be where he is today. These are a few reasons why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students become more productive.
Therefore, I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students can find a passion for something new. When I first joined band I didn't know what instrument I would be playing. I started to play the saxophone and became good at it. Once I started to show my teacher, he offered to put me in honor band and that I would need to stay after school to join it. I started to get new songs for honor band that challenged me. I knew when I grew up I wanted to play saxophone. I'm in middle school and I couldn't get into band this year due to my honor classes. This year I have missed playing the saxophone because its my passion. I have decided next year to do less honor classes to see if I can get back into band and get to do my passion again. My second example is about my closest cousin. She joined her after school baking classes. She started baking cakes for family events and special occasions. She finally found out when she was older she wanted to become a baker. She is now working in at a bakery nearby my house. She is always baking and learning new techniques to improve her baking skills. This year she will be graduating high school early and going to culinary school. She never knew what her passion was going to be and without extracurricular she would have never known. These are my reasons why I agree that all students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because students can find a passion for something new.
Students making new friends, people become more productive, and find a passion for something new are reasons why I agree that students must participate in at least one extracurricular activities. Without trying extracurricular people might never know the importance of trying something new. Overall this is why I believe extracurricular can change your life.
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We as a specie have lived as long as we have because we learned how to stay as one and to distribute the work. From this we learn that two heads are better than one, that there are thing that arent meant to be done by youre self. We have come far from those days, we build structures withe intricate designs, we build ways to cross oceans in no time at all. I still wonder if a single individual would been able to do it . That is why team work is important.
When you are acing to a team it is because you poses a ability or skill that benefits you. As a example you work on a company that creates websites for government projects, you poses a degree on couding and in graphic design. You have been employ as a content creator, you can see it this way you are a cog Pict meticulously to fit in a larger machine. One that runs at a constant pace, it dose not deviate or exert pressure on to the parts that compose it.
Second when you work in a team the work loud is divide in to the right proportion. In a construction crew you will always find that the cement worker will away divide the cement in to portions, this is to prevent over use of cement. In a team you will receive the amount you can handel to prevent that someone is overwork. Like when you go to a kitchen you will see that one is piling the carrots,a other one is preparing the cake mix, a other the toppings. Everyone has a task to complete
In conclusion we can see that team work has billions of benefits for every one. like a well oil machine you team work is all about communication. The result is one group working as one. Thers no error eache knows that the other is working on his part, like a in a kitchin one peals, theother mixes, and the last one refines there work. Team work is the most in portant leson we will have. Because remember the will alwase be some thing that you cant do by youre self.
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