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E4FF635779B8 | People say working in groups is better than working alone, but thats their opinion even though it helps others more than it helps other individual's. I still know working alone is better because all my life i've been working alone since sixth grade. I wasnt really the person to just jump in and meet others or ask for help when i needed them.
Every person has to go through many difficult times looking for a group but, Their just too shy or too nervous to say a word to other people, I would know because i was in the same problem. It can be hard but, the reward is so worth it.
People say working alone has no distractions, finishing faster than others, or learning things on our own. Other individual's say that having no distractions can help them work without stopping but, sometimes there are many difficult situations where we cant do much to work while being distracted, maybe being in quiet place may help. Finishing our work can easily be done without a group, like in our jobs, an office, or even at school. Not everyone has a group to be in except for people that know each other , They have many people that wish to be in a group like them. Back then when i was a little boy, I didnt know English so it was harder for me to understand teachers, or even students till i met two other kids that spoke the same language as me. I was happy to actually find two people that speak the same language as me but, that didnt last long because i never got to see them again. Till then i worked alone, avoiding others, sticking close to myself, even studying alone without anybody. My mother or father couldnt help me as much. That made things worse for me. Thats how i learned to do things all on my own without help. In a quiet place, We'er able to finish other assighment's from our jobs or school work. Teachers and students love to be in a quiet place because it helps them concentrate more than being in a group.
In conclusion working alone is better than working in groups. next time try working on alone, in a quiet room. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
E501D2D7FC83 | According to the prompt i would have to agree because impression is something you get when you get to see a old picture of you when you was a kid, or when someone makes a surprise for you, you get that impression , you start crying or just smiling .
For example,one of my experiences was meeting my whole family for the first time in my life, when we came to the united states my first impression was that i saw a lot of new things , a lot of nice cars , big houses , and a lot of people.
We stayed in texas for 2 days, we call my uncle the first day we stayed in texas, he told everyone in my family that we made it , we took different buses like for 3 days just to get to were my family was.
When we get there they went to pick us up , my first impression was to see all my family back again and that impression i will never forget it , and it will be never be change.
We went to my grandmother's house, i was nervous because in that day i haven't see my dad for more than 8 years, and when he came through the door i got that impression of seeing him again, i was so happy to see him again. | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E508BAFC3BF9 | Yes I agree with this quote, beacuse every students have a chance to learn, so in my opinion, I think that is a great opportunity, for all of them to learn. Some of them has a job, maybe with that same job. I think some of them they have a chance to surpport they family.
Maybe they leave lonely, far aways from they family, or they have to help theire parent pay the rent, or other stuff to pay in they own too.
I think they will have a benefit from being able to attend classes from home, because the schools give them a new way to progress.
First of all I think it's would be a great benefit is, at same same time you can do other activity, and you can took it whenever you want, before or after work it all depend on what you think will be better for you.
Secondly if you have some family problem or you have to go somewhere immediately for a long time. That is an opportunity for you to learn or to not loss all the days you have been absent at the school.
An other opportunity is if you go to college and you have a job at same time, if your classes are in the morning fron 8 AM to 4 PM, and you job schedule is at 1 PM to 11 pm .
At that time you have this big opportynity to sturdy and learning online, before work and you have some time left to do your homework, or other thing that you have to or you want to do in that day.
It's not noly online you take the class online but, you will have a viedo conferencing to motivate you, that if you not understand, that can explain it to you.
The school give them a big opportunity to progress, to have a good education and a better future.
For me it is a great option for them to attend it. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E51754AD1D38 | Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people.
People can see that you are being a good person and setting a good example.
They can see you are being good and that they will get influence by it and would want to be a better good person.
People that are not behaving good can see that you are being good and they would want to change to become a better person instead of setting a bad example.
I think people that set bad example's should change to become a better influencing person instead of showing a bad example there will be alot of good people in this world if everyone showed a good example so everyone can see that being a good person is better than being a bad person.
Like in school you can show that you are doing your homework getting good grade. s showing good example's to other's and they would want to be the same like you so they can do good in school just like you get good grades pass the grade and do homework to not fail.
Showing a good example to better to show it with the way you behave. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E52ADC86DFFC | Based on my experiences i would say that is not true because people always can change.
Im my opinion i think people say that because with the person that they are talking to or they are meeting does not show interest on them.
The first impression is not the best sometimes, but that it does not mean that it can not be changed. You can not classify or judge a person for their first impression because that person can change.
One reason why you do not have to say that first impression is almost impossible to change is because if the person that you are meeting is not having a good day that can affect the first impression because he/she is not going to be comfortable talking or having a conversation in that moment.
If i would have to give an example it would be the history of me and my best friend.
The first time when i met him was in my math class, He did not even wanted talk to me and be my partner, when i asked him about problems that i did not understand he ignored me and he did not answer.
To conclude If i would have to to take a position on this issue i would disagree, the reason why i would disagree is because in my circle of friends there is 2 of them that they did not give me a good impression and if you look at us today we are good friend and that is why you do not have to say that the first impression is literally impossible to change. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E52BA6E4D7EE | Technology in people's live.
Technology have a positive effects in people's live, make you do thing better and easy, like if you don't want to go to the library you can read a book in the internet, or if yo don't want to go to the store and buy something you can buy that thing online technology is one of the more important thing in the world for many reasons, doctors use the technology to help you wen you have a problem and see what it is, or in the airports to see if you don't have something illegal if places like this don't use the technology is very complicate to do the job and more time to due.
In school we net the computer all of the time to do the homework and test and now is an important thing to have if you are in the school and no't only in the school also people that work from home or in any other job they net the technology, most of the job in this time net a computer, or any other type of technology, some people say that technology make negative effects in people life but on my opinion is not true because must of the people who say that use the technology to say that is bad and affect the population.
I know the must of the people use the technology, or sometime of their live they use the technology and the technology help they to do something,a lot of the medicament that we know on this days are create for the technology, technology is not only computers and phones technology can be something pretty simple like a clock, is not necessary has to ve something very sophisticate, some people say that if you use the technology you don't have contact whit other people and something is true but that happen when you use the technology to much, but it does't mean that technology is bad if you use appropriate.
What people net is responsibility to use the technology and know when they net to use, that way we can be more sophisticates, we can use the technology to talk, play video games,etc but we can also have time to stay whit the family and friends. | 3.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E52BD4FC3FF0 | Have you ever done a enjoyable educational activity. It is fun because you can play instrument, make a science fair project, or act in a play.
The reason why playing a insturment is fun you can play instruments such as play the tuba,clarinet,trumpet and many more you can also preform at a concert in school or out of school those are all the reasons I think playing a istrument is a enjoyable educational activity.
Next, are the reasons why completing a science fair project is also, a educational activity you cn do many projects like figure how long it takes until a apple rotts, or even see how far your paper aiplane will fly those are all the reasons why doing a science fair projectis a enjoyable educational activity.
Third, why I think acting in a play is a enjoyable educational activity. One of the reasons why i think this is because you can wear a costume, preform on stage and, also read plays from william shakespeare.
Those are all the reasons why educational activity's are enjoyable. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
E52C094A1DAA | Having good attitude can be helpful by, helping others when they have a hard time in something, and when you and I are going through tough times, you can also have a good attitue a good minset on what your doing.
A way of having a good attitude is by seeing things n the bright side of things, even though it's bad. Another reason why having a good attitude is important, is because people appreciate when someone gives them a good feeling either their sad or mad. Another reason why its important to have a good attitude is becasue you get things done properly, for an example, when you have to do a project due in two days you take your time and don't rush, you do things with a good attitude. If not your project will be at the end a mess, and you're going to be frusterated.
Having a good atitude is impotant because, you can help other when they're going trough tough times, for an example, whn my mom was sick and she was dealing with asma, we had to take her to the ER mant times. It was sad for me to see her all sick, not only that but she was pregnat and could'nrt anything because she had acid reflux. So whenever she felt sad and stressed out, I knew I had to support her and have a good attitude. By having a good attitude I had to help her with some house hold things because she could'nt really do anything.
Another reason of having a good attitude is by also having a good mindset, because when you have a good minset you can go through your tough times easly. And when you are stresse out abput something you have to have a good minset and a good attitude. For an example when I had to deal with by spine problembecause my disk was moved,I had to hae a good attitude because if I am ther complaining about my pain, it's not going to help me. So if I just relax and take rest and tak my medications then I will have a good attitude, because I know that everything will be okay.
So this is why having a good attitude is very helpful, because you can help others when they are going through tough times, or whenever you and I are going through tough times, and how it helps you succed in things. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E545B850725F | Although some say extracurricular activities are to enrich educational experiences many say otherwise. Students should definitely be involved in after school activities, whether if it's a sport or club, students will enjoy their time. Extracurricular activities could help a student get into collage. The student should be allowed to be apart of as many after school activities as they choose, they should first discusses with their families. The schools should not have the decision if students are in a activity or not based of if they will have time to do homework or study they should let the student make the decision and here's why.
The students should be allowed to be in as many activities as possible, while managing their time. The student will have to add the activity to their schedule, and know they will now be doing this on a daily basses or if not multiple times a week. The students family will be able to help the student out when in need of it. There will be time for homework and studying, because with a well put together schedule the student will go to school their choice of activity and go home and do their work. The student and their family should be in control of the management of school work and activities the school shouldnt be involved. When you know something works for you do not let anyone get in between what works for and what doesnt work. Students will have many opportunities in high school the extracurricular activities will just bring more and this is how.
Opportunities come and go in high school, but when a student is in a after school activity they will lots of opportunities. Collage could be one of those opportunities, collages like to see a student that is or was apart of a club or sport team. Athletes can get full ride scholarships to collage, when they can manage to do their school work and the activities it could help them in the future. A student managing their time can be difficult but with a well put together schedule can help them get to where they want to be. This is why schools shouldnt control student involvement in extracurricular activities but many have their opinions against this one.
Other say that the schools should have control over students and what activities the can do and however many they can do. The school wants the student to be able to have time to study and do homework but by doing that they will take away from the extracurricular activities students are in or want to be in. They say the school should have the power to be able to do this, the student and their families will not really have a say in the final decision. They say the school knows what is right for the student in making the decision on if they should be apart of a after school activity. The school wants the students to be able to do school work outside of school so they will want to take away from a club or sport so a student can have time to do the work.
The extracurricular activities should be in control of the students and their family, the school should not limit the amount of activities a student can do. The student should be in control in what they want to do if it's a cub or sport, they will have to make time to put this in their schedule and still have time to study and do homework. Doing this can help a student reach goals and they can enjoy their time while doing it. This is why the student should be in control of the activities they do. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E54E238C6DDB | I would think that some student's would stay home so they can catch up on things they need but some stay so they can get the help they really need. For example if a parent see's his child struggling they could ask their child and be like do you need help or what do you want us to do to help you. I'm pretty sure that some students are gonna take this opportunity, and take online classes or get the help they need from a teacher or someone they know who can help them. The real reason that I think they will do it is because they would want to graduate from school so they can get the diploma and be happy that they did it with the help of a parent. Yes, I do believe that student's would benefit with taking classes at home or by online classes with a video conferencing. Student's should be grateful that some school's are giving them the opportunity to take some classes at home or even with a teacher they can video chat with and they can help them too. If it wasn't for the school who was giving us the privilege do take this opportunity for the help then we wouldn't be passing anything or getting the help we need. For example, if a student goes to the school and tell's them hey i'm having trouble getting this subject i know for sure the teacher are gonna give them a choice to pick if they want help or take online classes at home with like a teacher who's helping them. Another reason kids ask for help is because they probably ask at home and sometimes's parent's dont have the time to help them cause they are tired from work or they just tell them to ask someone else and then they don't get the help they need. For some student's it's easy for them but for some it isn't easy so some students can help each other so they can understand it. For other reason's it's better for kids to try on there own first and then if they still dont get it then they ask for the help or ask the teacher for help at the same time. In conclusion i think it's a good idea that the school can give the benefit for student's to take online classes so they can get the help they need. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E55289EA6492 | The author who wrote this line was very smart based in the life actuality the people when say, " you will never grow" I'm agree with the author I think in this world some people not are conform with the that have. However the problem is that some people are avaricious, think that are better that others people and want all at the same time.
The first reason is that some people are avaricious, is a bad influence for the people that want grown in the jobs, school and in the milieu family, for example my brother not finish the school, Because He like the money and He think the best solution will be leak of the school for work more and have more money. And now He say that is not good idea leave the school for money.
So they's think that are better that other people, for the society cause indifference to the other people, rejection would be also bulling. I am disagree with the thought of this type of people for example, if she/he can make something grand also the other people can the major greatness is the humility.
The third reason is want all at the same time, when the author talk about "you will never grow." Is because the knowledge of the life is not obtain things materials amount, because in this life all is vanity if you want grow start for conform with the little that you have for example, the education help for that you will be a good person with principles.
The conclusion is that the life have many opportunities bad you have the option take one opportunity. For that you can grow and can be a good person, and be intelligent because the vanity is bad adviser. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
E5621447B675 | Did you know that everyone choose their onw character traits? I choose my charecter trait in my house,I cgoose my character trait in my job, and I choose my character trait in the school.
In my house I can choose my character trait with my action. my brothe character trait is to lied everydoby at home.
In my job I can choose how to use my character trait from my customer and my friend at my job. for example If I use the same character trait from my friend to my customers my customer can feel bad. my character trait at the school can be a happy or serious caracter trait. for example when I am in clases I am serious but when I am with my friend in lunch my character trait is happy.
In conclution my character trait is how I desided to make it. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
E566F0D20F98 | I don't think it would benefit students to attend classes from home by online such as video conference Why? because they would get distracted by anything else at home and also they wouldn't have the chance to experience what it would be like in school.
If they attend school from home how would they get things done at home? they have the chance to do something else other then school work because they are going on their time. They also are not supervised with teacher like they would at school. They could easily get answers when it comes to tests and quizzes so where would the challenge be when you could just do that. When you are at school you are supervised so there is no looking up answer,you actually have to study to accomplish things. You could easily get distracted by things at home even say I dont want to do it anymore and I feel like thats the risk it would take if students are allowed to take classes at home online.
Students also would miss the chance to experience what it would be like in school. The chance to meet new people, make friends,and just simple socialize with other peers. It would also help students for the real world because when you work you can't do it from home on a computer. You actually have to show up to work and work with others. You also miss the chance to do other things that you would in school that you can't at home like join a club or play a sport and actually do so much that you can't at home. Have that motivation to wake up and go to school and challenge your self and prepare yourself for the world. When you are at home,wouldn't you get board being home all day instead of being at school and just enjoying it. Yes it's a struggle waking up early in the morning to go to school but also it's boring staying home and missing all the things you can do and learn at school with friends and teachers.
I understand why some students would consider taking classes from home maybe they have a personally reason or they can't keep up and rather take their time at home but for that reason you would have to do your best and not get distracted. Being home may help them do better then at school I understand but I think you miss a lot and all the experience that you could get at school. I personally don't think it would benefit missing all that and knowing how it would be. When you get a job that you dont have the option to do it home in the computer so how would you learn and know what it's like.
Therefor I don't think students would benefit from attending classes at home by online or video conferencing. Student should attend school and experience it all not be home distracted and miss many chances to learn new things and socialize with peers. Maybe even discover what they are good and take that for their future. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E56AA3BD89AD | If I could go any where in the world I would go to France. The reason I would go to France is because a lot of people said that
France was a romantic and beautiful place to go. And the food there is amazing in France they also have a really good accent. But the main reason i want to go to France is because of the thing to see their stuff like the ifle tower. the other reason is to meet other people so in that case i would have to travel on a day theres going to be a lot of people.
The reason I would go to France is to have the knowledge to be able to tell someone about how it changes you and how it's like and different temperature like how the country is to going to change on bad temperature their might just a small amount of people outside. On a good day there is going to a people are walking around having fun. You also try to see if the people their nice or mean to other people.
If I ever had a choice to go to France I would say yes and when I get the first thing i would try is there food. Because a lot of people said that the food in France is delicious so I thought what if i try to get my own opinion. To me it feels good to be apart of something it doesn't feel good to be the third wheel just staying back watching them give there feedback but have no clue what they'er talking about.
The animals in France are not that dangerous and the cats and dogs are exreamly cute. Like chuwawas are so cute and the most known animals in France at lest that what i have seen on television. Most people in France like animals and chuwawas design which makes them look better.
I hope after reading this prompt you know more about France and it also persuade you to go visit France. France is also a beautiful place to visit with a wife or girlfriend to enjoy or relax with your loved ones. I hoped you liked my prompt and enjoy reading it. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
E56D4253DFE7 | I think to extending the school day two hours, that can be something bad, because not all students agree with that, and also that can be something complicated. To all student because we can be out to late.
That's why I think that expending the school day two hours is something not very good. For some students are very complicate to extending the school day two hours. Because some student have to work in the afternoon,
and others have to do others thing.
I think the benefits and disadvantage to a four-day school week, can be good, but also can be sad.
Becauase not everyone is agree with all this that happens in the school, a four-day school week have good ideas and bad ideas. For the disagvantage is that we can be out so late, and that is something that not everyone liked, and the benefits is that is only four-day per week. But the benefits is that all students only come four-day per week. And i think is better get out early, because some student have something to do, and get out so late is not a good idea for all students.
Some student can be not agree with all this, that extending the school for two hours. Beacuse I think that is not a good idea for all the students, and that can effect because if they working in the afternoon. That's why | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
E56D7CC27444 | Some people believe that glorifying a student's work might help them build self-steem, even when they have not put a lot of effort into it. They believe that students should be confidents in themselves in so they can learn. Others believe that glorifying a student's work that does not have a lot of effort into it lowers their levels of learning. They believe that in order to build self-steem they must complete achievements. I believe that students do not need others to praise their work, even when they did not put enough effort into it. It would make students think that what they did is perfect and that they do not need to work more on it or to do some more effort to achieve what they want. Although some people might not agree. They would think that it is a good thing to glorify students work only to make them feel confident. However, I firmly believe that students should put effort on what they do and that they do not need other people to praise their work only to make the feel confidents with themselves.
One reason I believe students do not need to be praised on their work is because it would only make them rely on what they have and not work to achieve more results. They will not do more of what they are capable of. In addition, they will not put more effort on what they need to do. They do not need others to praise their work only to make them feel confident with themselves. Finally, students will always need others to tell them what they did is amazing to raise their self-steem. This matters because there are people who still believe that praising a student's work will help them to be self-consident.
Second reason I believe that students do not need to other people to glorify their work is beacause it would make them think that everything they do is correct. Students will think that they are not capable of doing more than what they believe they can do. For example, they will always check their work with others only to feel confident with what they did. In addition, I think it is best to tell students that they need to be confident with themselves instead of praising their work. FInally, students do not need others to praise their work in order to be self-confident. This is importan because people have to tell students that they need to be self-confident, even when what they did has not their best effort.
Third reason I believe that achievement is the key to build self-steem is because only achieving what we want we can feel confident with ourselves. I think that to build self-steem we must put a lot of effort to achieve what we have to do. Students need to achieve what they have to do in order to be self-confident. This matters because students should know that they need to work hard and that means to put their best effort, if they want to build self-steem.
In conclusion, I believe that people should not praise the students work only to help them build their self-steem. Sometimes they have not put their best effort in their work. They are going to feel that they are always doing exactly what they needed to do, even if is not like that. In order to be self- confident students must do achievements. However, some people will not agree with my opinion and they will say that it is best to tell students that their work is well done, even when is not only not to make them feel bad or to damage their self-steem. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
E57E60E07425 | Conserving Energy and Resources
To conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. Should your school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? Conserve energy and resources through this model could be a helpfully way for the school. It can be a support form for the community area. Following this model by extending the school day two hours can be method to conserve energy and resources.
First, conserve energy and resources through extend the school day two hours, the school can give necessary resources for whom need those resources in the community. For example, in the community close to the school live some families with not much resources. They do not have money for pay the energy or buy needs as water or food. The only way that they can have resources as energy is through a big building as a school in the community. In other words, if the school follow this model by extending the school day two hours can conserve energy and resources and give to the community as a needs. Thus, through follow the model by extending the school day two hours, the school can give necessary resources for whom need it in the community.
Second, conserve energy and resources through the model by extending the school day two hours can be helpfully for the school in emergency situations. For example, at Generic_City occurred a strong earthquake at the beginning of this year. Generic_School was one of the school which adopted and follows the model to conserve energy and resources, as a result they were supported in their necessities in this disaster. In other words, by extending the school day two hours and conserve energy and resources ,they were supported with this conserved energy and resources in this emergency situation. Thus, conserving energy and resources following the model by extending the school day two hours can be a helpfully way for emergency school situations.
Conversely, some people may claim that follow this model by extending the school day two hours would not conserve energy and resources because the school will still consuming this energy and resources with this two more hours. However, it can be true, but to retake my point, following this model by extending the school day two hours would conserve energy and resources. It could be helpful for community needs and emergency situations in the school area. This conserve energy and resources could be a way to support the school and the community. Therefore, adopting the model by extending the school day two hours can be a helpfully method to support the school area and the community.
In conclusion, to conserve energy and resources, some businesses adopted a four day work week,each day consisting of ten hours. The school could follows this model by extending the school day two hours because it can be a helpfully way to support the school area in emergency situations. It can be a form to give necessary resources for whom need it in the community. In other hands, some people may argue that follow this model by extending the school day two hours would not be a conserve form for energy and resources because the school will still consuming this energy and resources. However, following this model, by extending the school two hours would conserve energy and resources for school area and community. Thus, following this model, by extending the school day two hours will be a helpfully way to support emergencies situations in the school area and support community needs. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4.5 |
E587CBD5D1E4 | How we know the first impression is important and not always it's impossible to change it with our actions, and attitude, it depends of the situation.
Sometimes the first impression can be good. For example if I going to meet my girlfriend parents or if I go to meet my friend parents I need to have a good appearances to give a good impression but we can have a good impression but that can change. However if we do bad things like with our girlfriend if we treat bad her the parents are going to have a bad impression and that can change or with our friend if we don't help or if we give bad adviser to him the parents can think bad about us even if the first time we get a good impression.
Sometimes the first impression can be bad. For example in a job interview, during the interview if we don't use the correct language or if we go with bad aspect we can't get the job. However even if I give a first bad impression that will change if in the same interview we use a good language and if we respond the answer properly that can help you and finally in my own interview a give a bad aspect but I use the correct language in the interview and I get the job that's why I think that can help you in a interview when you get a bad impression.
In conclusion the first impression not always It's impossible to change if we know how to deal with it. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E597A35FA323 | Negative, We have to take Information about the Books, Play games etc. Ok We do what we want, but not everthing we do it is correct There is will be correct some will be incorrect because we don't know all the information about this games, books, shop etc.
Everyone in the world not have all the information for Example: I know how to bring the books online. My Sister know how to do Shopping online than she will tell me how to do the shopping online, and I
will say to here how to bring the books online like that she tell information and I tell her Information now she know all the informations about books and I know all the Informations about the shopping. We have to share informations to each other.
We can connect with each other the Technology not only do Shopping online, Playing games is also to connect with each other in Facebook , Twitter , Whatsapp etc. If the Technology is limits it will be bored life and the Technology will be bored if we have limits to connect with people there is some people will say no the technology is bored for Example: people like to chat 24 hours to each other if there is limits the life will be bored.
Ok it is good not speak to each other everyday but we have to be connect with the world around us.
Know what is happening in there Country there is a Fires, Earthquakes etc. We have to connect with bad people and the good people because the bad people we can take the informations from them and the good we can take informations and the good habites also if you know only few peoples is better than you live without any one and only doing all things you know it only.
Private life is Perfect life but not too much we not talk too each other and know information at some time there is limits in our talking with people because not all people give you all informations correct there is bad people can give you the informations and when you do it you will go the police, or you get in terrible with this person. don't trust everyone. Not everyone want you to be perfect there is people want they only to be perfect but still you have to ask and connect with the others you can take the information and leave them if they are not good because no is Perfect in our Life and every were. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E5B3346016BA | A POSITIVE ATTITUDE IS THE KEY IN
LIFE
A positive attitude is the key to success in life? Attitude is a behavior that people has inside of them, and is impossible to see it, but by action you can tell. A person may born without attitude, but parents are one reason to teach their children to have an excellent attitude. A positive attitude is the key to success in life, because it assist to live with different people in world, and gives other a desire to impress someone who have a positive attitude.
First, a positive attitude is the key in life because, people loves someone who is kind and helpful. Having a better attitude in front of community make people feel pride. For example, school there is different people from different countries, and they have their own behavior. some student doesn't like to talk to other, and It gives them a hard time to learn new things in life. Without thinking attitude prove what kind of person he or she is.
Secondly, a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because it may entice people to see other are important, and being able to help each other. For instance, doctors they have an opportunity to keep a person alive. They do all of that because of their adorable attitude; and care a lot about another people's life. Small thing can make a difference in the world.
Nevertheless, some people say a positive attitude is not the key to success in life. They argue that thus born with positive attitude, but they start to change themselves later. The point has merit, because not all people has positive attitude success in life, some of them are struggle. However, positive attitude benefits people to receive a lot of knowledge, and become more successful. Therefore, positive attitude can give a person chances, to make connection with different people.
To conclude, positive attitude carry the mean of being a human. Because you can't say you're a good person with negative attitude. It's necessary to have a quality attitude, that may persuade other to change theirs. Lastly,
a guest person who have positive attitude can live anywhere he or she goes. The lesson, if you see your attitude people are not happy with try to modifying it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
E5C9AD14EB2D | People talk more then one person because they may need help and solve the problem. They will make a better choice what will they do and not doing bad choice like, staling money, selling drag. A advice can help people make other people do the right thing.
Just one people can not make a good choice but more people can. People can choice their opinion for what thing can make then better. They can take ideas. If they talk only one that not a good advice. For a examples if you have a math problem and you use only one idea and that a hard one, use other choices that will help you. If you did not pick a idea it will be hard and you will fail. Pick the best that work for you, and that how advice work so people can make better choice like picking the right for them. A example when kids not follow the direction, they need to make a idea for better choice at school and that how advice work. If like what the rules for the class and list thing so you can make the classroom better and safe.
For not follow the direction and not make good choice can lead problem. Kids need advice too. Sometime people can make silly choice like selling drag or taking money on someone. Advice could be safe too. So those people need advice for what can happen and what the better things. But people don't allow talk to more then 1 people they can talk to one people if they feel good about. But when people don't really make good choice they need more then 1 person. For example if their was a bad guy and he keep staling money he need the better thing so a he can make a better choice so that how advice works. Advice does'n mean bad people do it and can be good people even kids because kids sometime do silly and act bad at school.
Advice is a good thing to make choice and it good for school so kid can make better choices. It like rules and need to follow, so that how advice work. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E5F1CCC31762 | Positive attitude is the key to success in life.
Although have not Positive attitude the key to become success. neverthiess I am agree to everyone have a positive attitude,because positive attitude indicator of curage,honor,and personality of a person. so everyone mast have a Positive attitude in their life to become success. Having a Positive attitude is cause and effective on people's life,that they can attian and progress in their life.
Person who have a positive attitude he/she is Curage,and they can do their work with out needs of anyone. for example Generic_Name,at first he dosen't have anything after he pass through the hard life,he tryed alot with his positive attitude and now he originate all his success in life. now a days he become a Curage man in the world. he make a lot of good facilitation in his life and on people life that he support them. and he is the best political man and his life is like Royal. so he is very success in life with his positive attitude.
So when a person is Honor. than everybody like that person,because of their positive attitude. for example if a person always in life have a good opinion or speculation,they can recived thier biggest achivment in life. also they can make their own bussines or they can work in a place that they like it. e. g Teachers they are trying for their success and high progress in their life. and they use alot of positive attitude in daily day to understanding the student how to became success in life. than they try alot to make the best new genration with a positive attitude,that they helpful for country and for their futuer life.
People that they have a good personality,they make their personaltiy by a good attitude and they are lovely person in socity. for example in school one of the student have a good personality,and he or she is very suitable or talented in every subject. and they use their best positive attitude in front of everyone. and they look a good persom on Principal,Teachers,Friends,and her or his Families. so by having a positive attitudet they become a successful person in their life. than he or she recived alot of achevment by hard working.
As a result that I get in my life is,the best way to become success and become the best person in life,is having a positive attitude in everywhere,like Home,Job,School and etc...and the positive attitude shows the personality and the civility or politeness of people. and having a positive attitude in effectfull on everybody's life. and by having a positive attitude and hard working we can get our wishes to come ture and we are also become a successful person in every step of our life. | 3.5 | 2 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E6122E9ABFA3 | Are first impression almost impossible to change? Most people would say no, but actually it is possible. You just need willingness, hard work, and a litle of confidence.
First of all, if you want to change any first impression, you have to will it. You need to have a vision of how you want to change it. Most people try to change their first impression, but the thing is they don't have a vision. Without a vision you are going nowhere, you most have a vision. Lots of people give up but I know you can do it, because failure is not an option. Always remember will is power.
Second of all, willing something is just the first part to change our first impression. The hard work is probably the most complicated, becasue is where you gonna find some challenges. Challenges are part of life, so don't see them as impossibles, but see them as oportunities. You have to work hard to reach your goal, no matter what. Keep this in mind life is not fair, so you better keep doing and don't look back of what have you done. Always have a clear vision og what you do.
Finally, this is probably the most importamt part, confidence. Confidence plays a big roll to change our fisrt impresion. If your not a cofident person, it migth be hard for you to change but not impossible. You can take classes to gain cofidence like me which is helpful. I'm not cofident person but took the JROTC class which has help me to be more confident amd not olny that, I have learned to be a leardership too. If I can do it, that mean you can. Don't let anything to stop you.
Inconclusion, think about your future is very important. Changeing your fist impression is a good start. You never know if that will affect your future. Just will it, work har for it, and be confident. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E6338A929654 | Having self reliance is a important key to success in life because self reliance is making your own efforts and decisions. I agree that people should make their own decisions because they should have freedom to make their own choices. They should think for them self.
Having the freedom to make their own choices is important because if they can have the freedom to choose what they want the experts are going to choose something that they dont like, or want. For example, the person wants to buy some fancy shoes but the authorities dont like those shoes they are going to say no and decide to buy other shoes. In my thinking I would not like to someone choose for me because they dont know what I like, or what I dont like. If they let other people make there choices they are not going to be happy because the expert or the authorities are going to choose what they like not what the people want. For example, they go to the lunch room and there is a lot of food there and they are trying to get something but they dont let them get what they want because they dont have the freedom to make there own choice, so the authorities are going to come and choose the food for them.
Another reason is that the person can think for them self. If the persons cant think for them self they are going to have a lot of problems in there life because if the expert, or the authorities comes and ask the persons something and they cant think, the experts are going to think for the persons and make choose something that the persons will not like.
In conclusion, having the right, or the freedom to make the decisions for them self is a good think because everyone wants to make their own decisions they dont want no one to be telling them what to do, or what to think. The persons are going to have the freedom to choose what they want to do with there life. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E6346D434004 | It is a most important thing to be yourself. At first pass, it would seem to be obvious that you would aspire to be yourself. But we all know of the pressures to please others as we grow up. First the pressure comes from your parents, then your young peers, on to teachers and bosses. You find yourself constantly trying to live up to the expectations of others and why not? It is usually a good things to follow the wishes of those who have raised you, and it is natural to conform to the ways of people who help you along the way. it is alot like osmosis. It is also expected that prescribed pathways are followed, in a way, to repay kindness and debts. As an example, parents pay for your education, including arts and sports activities so surely it makes sense that you would try to excel in those endeavours as a form of Thank you. The same goes for showing a good teacher or mentor that you understand their lesson and often end up developing further on the path they revealed and recommended.
However, at some point your own predictions and dreams emerge. Let them and pay attention to them as they will become your guide to your ultimate destiny. While showing respect for your parents and elders, start to forge your own identity. Those who truly love you will be on the sidelines cheering your every step. Consider he words of Dr. Seuss, "Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't care''. I couldn't have said it any better.
Essentially, and ultimately, you don't have any choice in the decision about being yourself. Since the time of Socrates, and no doubt before, a predominant human instinct has been to know thyself. The problem for some people however is that they harbour the inner self and keep it separate from the self they display to the world. This predicament can eventually morph into a personality disorder if the gap between your inner person and public persona is too wide. Soon being in public will become a chore you will feel like a phony. you will probably end up living the life of the recluse. Not a good result for most people except the odd monk.
The best way to allow your inner self, that part of you that holds your real aspirations and dreams, to become what the world sees is to start cultivating the key aspects of those chracter traits. Start becoming that person in your mind and begin to feel this is yourtrue self soon actions will follow. You will begin to feel comfortable in your own skin. For example, if you want to become a musician then slowly tell people that you "are planning a career in music" and start acting that way. Surprisingly, this will start you help you as other people will begin to look at you in that light. Eventually they will tell others who are interested in the same path. Soon that will led to communications between you and a host of other like-minded people. Your network will expand and you will soon be part of a musically inclined community nurtured and growing professionally all the while gaining confidence in the new you.
Another way to look at ''finding'' yourself involves a more prosctive, less reflective path. Life is not about finding yourself ; Life is about creating yourself".
This is the other side of the coin. Maybe our "selves" are like a blank slate waiting for someone to write the future. Maybe we should not dwell too much on ourselves. Too much soul searching can lead to a sort of paralysis an inertia brought on by excessive searching for the meaning.
I think we all instinctively know what we want to do it is just some of us are a little hesitant to breakout. But, it is the only way you will reduce anxiety and eventually find a sense of fulfillment. So just do it as the Nike ads encourage. Step into that real you and have some fun along the way. Be Yourself. Everyone else is taken. So, we need to keep this things into our selves that way we could improve our selves as the best human being in the world. No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.
So, I totally agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson that "To be yourself in a world is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E64FBE962223 | The technology had negative effects on people's lives because now they can not do nothing without phone or they dont talk in person with nobody that importan to talk in person because you can see with who are talking. If you do everything with your phone you can loose you vision beacuse the telephone has to much light, but you can play the games and not talking with nobody.
for example in this time the parents when their children start crying they just give them the cell phone, why they do that beause they now the kids gonna addicted to wacht videos then that gonna be a problem with the kids when they grow up they don ganna talk with nobody but that not de kids fall beacuse they parents teach then how to use the cell phone but they dont teach them how to talk with people, they need to lear how to talk with older people or teach them how to do other stuff.
this is another example when parents go to the shopping stores and they are in the store they losse their kids they are always in the phone they never can missed call but they can missed their kids that not make sense because when they found the kids they star to saying thing.
my opinion is we need to talk more share our ideas or meet more friend that better to be everyday in the phone talking with people's like my mother always told me dont tlak with bad people but the thing is we never now when they are bad but that why we need to do everything carefull, is better to meet peoples in person. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
E65D5A2616D2 | Imagine an old proverb said honestly was the best policy. What would you if some one used honesty in a bad was would you disagree or agree? I would agree because some acts of honesty can really mean a lot to someone. An old proverb says honesty is the best policy because it is the key of telling the truth and it can also create new friend ships in life.
I would agree that honesty is the best policy, but if you miss treat honesty it can be very lethal to your trust with people. To lose someone's honesty is very hard I have seen car crash which someone got severely hurt and the person who crash into him won the court battle because he was not showing honesty. My father has told me honesty is a great part in peoples life. My father has told me stories were his friends have seen people get robed and their honesty has helped find who did it and convict the criminal. Even just a little bit of honesty can help anyone. But when you use honesty you should never use it in a way that might hurt someone's feelings. I once was playing a game and the opposing team was not being very honest which hurt some of the kids feeling's on my team. But a persons honesty can always change at all times. I once had a friend who was never honest but changed through out his life and started to realize why honest is so important. I even have made new friend ships in life just from being honest. As we can see you might be able to get something from being honest.
If you are always honest people respect you. I have been in instances ware honesty has created respect for me. When you show some form of honesty it creates a good environment around you which can make good relationship you. But when people use honesty to hurt your feelings by not being honest it makes you feel like you just have been hit by a train or it feels like you have been betrayed. Once I was walking down my street and saw that there was lots of police cars out side one my neighbors houses. I heard that she got robed a couple months ago and found a witness that saw who the thief was because the witness was honest with the police it helped find who did the crime. As I can see honesty is the best policy.
In conclusion, no matter the incident that happened you always should be honest. Even in the future your actions can be justified from your honesty. Honesty is the best policy because it impacts you to do the right thing and creates a good environment. When being honest it shows that you have a high self steam which is can be very good for you in the long run. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E660157F81B4 | A lot of people ask for an advice, but others ask more then one person for an advice. An advice means talking to someone for a recommendation. Some people ask one person for an advice. Other people talk to different people. Talking to one person can help, but asking more than one person can help you understand something better. If i am about to do something that i can get in a big trouble for should ask my parents or other adults for an advice.
I would ask different people for an advice, because i can understand something i could do better. Another good thing about asking for an advice is that if i go to like prison for murder, drugs or alcohol, in the future when i go look for a job nobody will want to hire me because of the stuff i did. If i am going to do something really bad in school i should think about consequences that will be and ask someone or more people if it is going to be worth of doing. When i am having trouble doing something or understanding something i should ask others a advice of whats a good way or doing it.
I think that other people should really ask for a advice. If someone wants to do something bad that they can get in trouble or they can ask for an advice. Is someone wants to make new friends they can ask something for an advice to tell them how they can talk to new people. If i am having bad grades i can talk to my teacher to tell me how i can get my grades up. And that is why i think an advice means. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E69D5E1FEAB4 | should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matter? one of the common questions i get ask. Many people have different thoughts about this questions,
my opinion is depending the sittuation. For example people can learn from there dicision but in other hand listening to people's advice can stop you from doing wrong. Ever since i was little i always wanted to make my own decision and wont have to listen to no one but i the more i got older i realized that sometimes what people say to do can turn out to be better then the decision you took. Making your own decision can make you more independent and know how life works and those are the people we look up too. Depending on the situation your in listening to others give us life lesson can be one of the most unforgetables momments because that show you they care and want the best for you because maybe they didnt end up making the right decision and want you to prevent from doing it . | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
E69E62149A87 | I say we all choose are own characteristic traits because everyone has a option. For example: The British naturalist John Lubbock was sophisticated person as one his characteristics traits therefore he had the right to write and read when other didnt have the choice. When John Lubbock choose to become an politician , but also a naturalist which he chose to become one. When John Lubbock wrote this prompt he took action to write it instead of be influence by others and becoming the same as them. Because if all politician were the same and influence by each other every time they would all be the same and wouldnt have made their mark. Back then I havent known a lot of British politicians that were naturalist as John Lubbock but, until now because he made his mark. People should have to make their own choices anyways because you cant work as a politician and always agree with what people say and be influence by it you have to make your own choices. In between that John Lubbock shows he's made his own choices about this and you as the reader to think about it also and makes a choice. When it come to talking about what characteristic traits we have its based on the person who decided to become whoever they want to become and control their out come in life. In conclusion the way were based on the way we act or show who we are, for are traits | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
E6A0D625F9C3 | I am disagree with this statement because thing that are made up from mind seems to be not real. First, Knowledge created stuff that is real. Lastly, Knowledge can make you be rich.
Knowledge created stuff that exist. For examples: a car that had been made by a knowledgeable person, can solve your life time problems, but an imaginary car is not real at all. all human have the knowledge to read. People today have invented a lot of things because of their knowledge. In conclusion, there are so many stuff that had been invented(created) true knowledge.
If you present the thing you invented from your knowledge, a company might respond to you and say,"hey, people really loved your invention. we should work together." For example you have the skill to invented a phone, and you solled that phone to a person and you made a huge amount of money. You would want to invent more and more to make a lot of money. You learn that skill from knowledgeable teacher. In conclusion, knowledge can help you with your life time.
In conclusion, Knowledge created stuff that are real. People have made a lot of money true their knowledge. Finally, knowledge is more power full then imagination. | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E6CF2D3B4FA2 | Examples are what makes a readers/audiences be able to get attracted with what the reason the writer is talking about. Since I have used examples in many things things in my life, I personally think that they could help you with a topic that other people are trying to talking about. And since the question is basically asking if "examples are good to influences people that are trying to do something or does examples are useless and are not really helpful at all?" I said that Examples are good to influence other people. And here are the reasons why it is a good influential if you are striving for a long- term goal.
Not many reasons are able to support what you are trying to basically explain or prove. What made me think of this is because if you put a reason that isn't strong enough to even support what you are saying, then basically a reason isn't strong enough if you are trying to influence someone. Like for example, if the topic says that anyone can become famous and the reason is "work hard and never give up." that really isn't strong enough to influences someone that actually wants to become that type of guy. But if you put a real life example like "this person name Generic_Name that was a low-class, lives in a 1 bedroom apartment, and makes not a lot of money. And he heard that he can become a rich person. So he was working hard and he saved up on investment. And somehow he actually became the person that he wanted to be." that is a example that could be used if you are trying to persuade someone.
Examples can be kept as like a precious thing for people. Why this is also important is because if you actually lets say achieve something that you wanted to accomplish for such a long time. You can always remember that thing that made you kept pushing forward, and to never let down what you wanted to do for such a long time. Like for example, a person named Generic_Name made his dream become a reality; which it was to become a architect that works under a famous person. And when he had to make a speech, he remembered a women who was going through exactly the same thing he was going through. And he said that her life will be something he is going to cherish forever because her background is what made him become who he is now. Which everyone can look at for being influenced by this person right here.
Examples can actually change many peoples lives because of what they say or just their background. What made me choose this reason? well it was because for the past 16 years of my life, I have always seen many people change their lifestyle because of what people are saying to change them. Like for example, when I was in 8th grade, I had a science teacher that was really nice to everyone and respected them as if we were like his child. And all of the students asked him "why did you decide to become a science teacher?" And his response was "I became a science teacher because I like teaching about sciences and the life of our society. And because of a man that i was inspired by. And everyone knows who this guy is? His name is Bill Nye The Science Guy. The reason why i choose him was because during my time when i was in collage , he was the only person that i knew that actually did science. And I wanted to watch his show. And I was amazed by all the chemicals, types of rocks, everything that has to do with science. And since that happened, i have enjoyed being a science teacher for 10 years." And this speech shows that people will not be able to reach their goal unless you have a motivational quote, speech, or background of a famous person.
While i do think that Examples are good to influence other people that are trying to reach their goal, I still kind of personally think that there are examples that don't really help/influence people. Why I think of that is because people don't find examples of influential that aren't interesting or appealing to them at all because it's doesn't suit them. Like for example, there was a kid who wanted a game that could make him play it all the time. And he saw a commericial about a game that is coming out next week, and he was getting suprised at first, but when he saw a interview about the game, he wasn't really amazed anymore because what the game director talked about wasn't influencing other poeple at all. So there are some examples that really can't influences them. But most of the time, there are so many examples that are out there in the world that actually changed peoples lives, and their mind about something. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
E6EF69520940 | Most of the times, the students don't get the help they need by the school. The reason for this is because some teachers don't really care about whether the students are learning or not, but about their money. Also, some students get bullied by other students and there is no one who could defend them. This happens in a many schools, such as schools in Mexico, United States, Central America, etc. So, in my opinion, attending classes at home is a great option for the students.
Classes online, well known as "homeschooling", is a method in which students can do the assignment of their classes at home in their computer. This idea emerged because there is many conflicts that school has to deal with, for example discrimination, and violence and between the students. So, thanks to the advances of technology, the school can provide their services at home. Is a great method, but not as going to the school, sit in your chair and learn. This method has its advantages, but also its disadvantages.
One of the advantages attending classes online is that is more comfortable and secure for the students. For example, the rate for shooting will be reduced, and the students will not suffer any discrimination against other students. Another reason are that it is less stressful because the students would more time to complete any work. Also, it helps the students to better subject. For example, students can watch videos about any specific subject, observe the procedures, and replay them if they are confused. Also parents can supervise their children and help them if they need, and they would not have to worry about attendances.
Classes online are a great benefit for students but they their disadvantages as well. For example there will be no jobs for teachers who really want to teach, share experiences to their students, and help them to improve in their lives. Another example is that students would not communicate with other students and would not know the importance of Team Work. Also, they would not have an experience by doing activities (such as playing sports, instruments, going to filmstrips, etc,)
which help them to develop useful skills. Another disadvantage is that schools would not have alternate classes that helps them to chose the career they want to. For example construction, cosmetics, arts, music, engineering, technology, etc.
In conclusion, attending classes online is a great method, but not as much as going to the school. The school is always going to be a learning center. If the school applies more fair rules, the students would feel more safety and gain a lot of confidence. Also, the school has to have better teachers who really want to help their students and not teachers that only care about their job. Anyways, the school helps us to get right path for our lives, so without it, we would not the education we need to improve in our lives and in the world. | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
E70DD00622DB | From my personal experience back in middle school, I had to use technology for many different reasons. One of the reasons were for research purposes. I was able to use technology as a tool to provide information on my assignments and projects. So far technology has made a positive effect in my life not only in school but in real life. Technology has helped me accomplish and complete many difficult task in life. I believe that technology has made a positive effect on people's lives; consequently, it makes peoples lives a lot easier and convenient.
One reason that technology has a positive effect on people is that they are able to study without having to go out on a library and pay for books or a tutor to teach them. For example, people who are disabled or unable to travel out of their houses are able to go online and research for books and look for a site to teach them what they need to learn. The availability to go online and research for information also helps students who are too busy to go outside and ask others for help. Many schools started providing laptops and iPad's to students who are unable to connect online. Schools are using these electronics because they provide an easier way to help student learn and complete work.
Technology can also help people do many other things online other than researching for information.
Furthermore, technology may also be used as a way to shop whatever and whenever. For example, eBay and amazon is an online shopping website for many things such as: furniture, clothes, food, and many other reliable things. This has made it a lot easier for people to purchase items that they want at any time. Online shopping helps a lot of people who are looking for items that cannot be found in local stores. For example, many custom equipment's and items can only be found online and in places that may not even be located in your place. Not only does technology may be use as an online tool, it may also used as a way to communicate to others in the world.
Lastly, communication has been a major part of the world; in addition, technology has been one of their ways to communicate. For example, our military has improved a lot throughout the years due to the inventions of many technologies. Technologies such as: cellular devices, radar, satellite and many other communicating tools has helped us win wars and accomplish many things around the world. Another reason why technology has had a positive effect on people is that they use it for emergency purposes. For example, if an adult needs to call out of work for the day because of family problems, he may use his cellular device to call and inform his supervisor about it.
Many people say that technology is a way to showcase yourself as a lazy person and I disagree with that. I believe that technology allowed many people to accomplish and complete many task. Technology is not only important to the civilians who are either students or adults who are working in the industry, but it is also important for the military who are using these tools to provide protection to our country and keep our people safe. In conclusion, technology has had a positive effect on people's lives and that is due to many reasons such as online researching, online shopping, and wide spread communication. | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 5 |
E71DABB44645 | This essay has been written to take in consideration the advantages and disavantages of a four-day school week with each day considering to be ten hours which for some people it might seems to be a better way to conserve energy and resources.
As a student I can say that I agree with this "benefit" but in this case I don't agree with making school two hours longer than usual for some students spending eight hours in school is consider to be enough becuase people get exhausted by spending most of the day sitting in a classroom. For example: in every classroom there is someone who is always sleeping during class due to the a lot of work school leave us to do, people who has work after school, and even sports. These reasons of why people gets to be too tired to stay up during class, imagine having to spend two additional hours in school just to have a three day weekend which might seems good but it really doesn't.
Spending two hours more than usual for four days it just a way to still using energy even though people think they are saving energy but they really are not doing any better, let's use this as a example: the two hours we are using extra for the four day it still makes up for the eight hours we are losing for the fifth day of class. The extra two hours of Monday-Thursday sum to be eight hours that people still use the energy, which means they aren't really saving energy
Example number 1: my friend Generic_Name loves the idea to have a four day school because this means that he will have a extra day to do homework and to spend time with his girlfriend Generic_Name. For him this new programs works perfectly and is an advantage for him.
Example number 2: My boyfriend Generic_Name loves to study but he does not agree with this new idea because he has sports to do after school for like about 2 hours of training for the basketball team in our school and then after that he works for 4 hours to help his mom with his car insurance which means that he won't get enough to sleep at night because after he gets home from work he has to do homework so we won't have to turn in it late. Like him there is a lot of more students in the same situation. Who does thing sacrifies to help their parents to make the payments.
However, teacher's opinion matter too and they will be tired of speaking ten straight hours too, remember that they aren't robots who are just set up by the government. This means that they might not even agree with this new idea of making school loger for students and teachers.
My school should not follow this model because they should think in everybody's benefits including teachers and students plus the staff of every department in the school's main office to make a fair decision for everyone in school. We don't know if this new adaptation will work in the schooling system which we don't have guarantee of this idea working well for us as a community. Consideranting that this program is working for some business that have adopted this new schedule might not work for us as a High School because here we have differents actitvities that the people in businees companies doesn't have, which make us a different environment than the business. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E71EFBE547CF | Everyone has a talent or skill. Everyone can do anything, Imagine going to America's got talent and seeing people's talents and skills. I am identifying a talent or skill I have, and explaining how i develop and use it.
To begin with my talent, my talent is roaring like a lion, is like a deep voice and just pushing air in my throat. My other talent is hoola-hooping with my arms, just making circles with my arms for the movement of the hoola-hoop. My final talent is drawing, i enjoy drawing because i can draw what i'm feeling but i need to be more detailed.
Next my skill, my skill is swimming fast, I only use my arms and legs for more movement and i would need a lot of energy for it. My other skill is running fast, I use my legs and ball up my fist for more movement. My final skill is holding my breathe long, it's risky but I would beat my friend's scores.
Finally both of my skill and talent, my favorite talent is roaring because I would scare my friends and it's funny. My favorite skill is swimming fast because I can possibly beat anyone's scores. My least favorite talent is hoola-hooping with my arms because it's not really impressive anymore.
In conclusion, now I believe that everyone has a talent and skill. Don't be afraid to share your talent, embrace it and share it to the world. I am identifying a skill i have using specific details and examples. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
E7328989C861 | I agree that imagination is more inportant than kowledge beacus in imagination I feel like you learn more about your brain and that will help you a lot knowledge you really dont learn anything you just learn how to other people choose what you like. Imagination you can think about what to choose like if there is a car you like imagen if you didint choose the other one that one is going to the dumster if was one good car and one ugly car but if it was knowledge you will have pressure. You will not know what to pick or you will know what to pick if you use your imagination. Knowledge you really have to decide what you want but imagination you just can imagen like what are you going to need that in your life like if you had to choose a house or a car what will you need more in life thats why you use your imagination so i rather pick a house beacus you will need that house when you grow up like for your kids. knowledge i feel its bad for you in the futcher. When you go to college you will have to use your knowledge for school i guss that is preety good but you are just going to imagen like you are done in college. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E733508EEB84 | I think we can't compare between businesses and school because these two themes are different in how they work.
To fallow this model of conserve energy and resources we have to know the reason to adopt if this model can benefit or not the school , following this model the school can confront many problems also can have many benefits but there are many reasons why the school have to follow this model and why school don't have to follow,
First,
we will talk about the disadvantages, extending two hours to the school days will be weary for the students, students will gonna be tired in the classroom and that's not benefit the students, if having eight hours in a regular week students feel tired, so adding two hours to the class days will be disastrous to the students.
Students, teachers would be affect by this changes the reason why can be affect is because they will not have time to pass with their families or things that they need to do after school.
Many students from school works to help their families or because they are living alone and they need to work to provide their personal things,
so they will not have time and that's will be a reason why they can left the school.
Students from the sports teams, club members will be affect because most of their activities are after school,so if the school adopt the new model that is adding two hours to the regular calender all they can be affected because of time.
Teachers also can be affect because they have personal life they need to grade the students work and in this new calender they can't do all.
People who works in schools will be affected because they will have one day off of their regular week.
Parents and Students will not feel comfortable they can be disagree with this change and this can cause conflict with the school principle and this can bring many other conflicts follow this model can bring many changes where the students can be benefits by this change of the new calender, also teacher people who works in school can be benefit.
One reason can be the four days of school that means the students will have three days off.
Students can have more time to do the homework because most students work during the weekend and they don't have time to do the homework so they will have an extra day to do all the things that they need to do.
students can learn more and this can be a reason to change the calender, adding two hours to the schedule will help the students because they will have more time to learn.
Also teachers can be benefit because also they have to evaluate the students and they have just the weekend to do that and that is short time , so they will have one day to grade and do all that they need to do.
all the the people are benefit because they have time to pass with their families or do whatever that they need to do, a lot of students work so they can work in this extra day.
In conclusion extending the school days and the four days of school week have many benefits and many disadvantages . As we can see there many things that can benefit the school but also there are many disadvantages .
I think the school have to be stay with the same calender, actually the schedule works great so I think there is no reason why we have to change. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E738D8E24101 | Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something,or does inactivity also serve a purpose? Students should be active in all the school year even for the intire life. I belive that be active help us to increase our skills and the practice made an expert. In the other hand,others belive that be inactive can result good and help them to don't become tired and old to fast. The people do more accomplish if they are always doing somenthing,students who practice sports can become better they have more resistence,and Moreover,Stay active can help us to be more profecional even in a jod. Exercise help our body to stay healthy.
However not everyone is agree with this position. Some people belive that stay inactive is more accomplish because doing the same thing can become bored,Doing nothing doesn't help us to progress and be success for the intire life,The students who don't practice any sport or are not involve in any school program have more time to study and rest their maind that can result good in their final grade.
Forthemore,be active help us to increase our skils and the practice made an expert because if we are always active in what the teacher tell us to do at school,we can increase and be more and more faster the next time,that also can help to find a job because every boss want a good worker, and also that give us a good reffert because anyone can say good things about us depending on what we have done do far at schools,even outside the school like comunity service.
In addition,students who practice sports can become better because they can have more resistence and their body is healthy,also they can be hard worker in the future because their body is already made to bear that,practice sports at the schools is good because students recive credits for that and a reward if they win,that can give us new experiences and fun time also makes new friends who like to be active like me and others students around the country and around the world.
Moreover,sleep good and having the hours to rest help us to be active the next day don't feeling tired and sleepy because the students have to wake up early on the morning and gives all what they have at the school,everyone want to be a good student and pass the tests and everything,also be active depend in how much energy we have thats way we have to eat on the morning to have energy and be active the all day.
Finally,it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing something because we can get our goals working hard,students making goals to the end of the school year, stay active help to makes goals and get what we want to the of the school year,stay active can include be participate en class,colarate in a school proyet,sport team,drama,school announcement and everything that involve school learning,after Hig School or in the collage,be active helps to go to the collage because we can get a Beca for our work in Hing School.
Overall,stay active is more accomplish and help us to the entire life and make us better now and in the future because if we do the things rigth,we can earn more money when we start to work,stay active not only benifit us also the people around us because they can see us that we never stay in one place thats mean we are not conformist a person or student who want to overcome their self. Students should be give all they have by participating and be active. but be active deppend in everyone be active is not by force is how they want to be. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E73CF852AC12 | Positive attitude is the key to be successful in life. Most of the time older people or somebody you don't really know they will tell you to give all your effort and think smart. By having a positive attitude people feel more happy and comfortable. For example,when they have a positive attitude people stars to give you some advises from the experiences they have been through. In life to have a positive attitude we have to know how to deal with our problems even tho sometimes we might think we can not do it but, there is always a solution and after all that has happened we learn how to have a smart thinking and not giving up.
Having a positive attitude makes people have a good communication with others. When having a conversation with another person you can learn more about anything. Sometimes the people who has good skills or positive attitude in their jobs or any other occupations they have the opportunity to earn a higher position in their job. For example,all managers have that position because they have showed that they can have a good attitude with themselves and other people. This gives them the chance to be a successful person in life and help to become as them.
Education is also a big influence and how a person can have a good attitude and good values. Life teaches people how to control their emotions and help those who need it. In life to become successful people needs to have a goal and a plan how they are going to accomplish that. I know sometimes we have many problems and we think it not possible to have a good attitude but, there is a way how to deal with bad attitude and always have in mind the goal we want to accomplish one day.
There is always people who is going to say negative things to others instead of give them advises. Also many people think they can not do it after they try the first time and did not happened how they expected. People has to keep in mind that not always everything will be easy to get and there will be obstacles in life that will make you feel that you can not get what you want. By thinking and having a positive attitude people can make it become true just don not give until you have reached your goal.
In conclusion,in my opinion having a positive attitude can make people become successful in life. Be some educated persons and listen to what others say to them. Many older people or family might not want to see you fail and that is the reason for those who keep a positive attitude so they will be proud of those who protrude in life. Giving up would never be option for those who really have the desire to accomplish what they want. It is not going to be easy to always have a positive mind but,if the person really wants that then it will give all it's effort. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E7510A2A4F0A | I disagree with this statement because you are supposed to have knowledge imagination is like dreaming but when you have knowledge you can put your mind to something to create something big in the future like having your own company and you can signed workers and to make them delivered stuff to people and all of this is reality even though you need to finish school and go to college and get a degree there it take time you have to get your mind set and encourage your self to do better. You can also help people if they need help on something cause you already been threw all of this like how to get a job or how to make your own job and to encourage somebody else to just put there mind to it so that person that you helped they can also helped somebody then it goes own forever and forever and you can tell them how you succeed in they can follow in your foot step and they can tell another person who they succeed and they can tell there story imagination isnt reality it is when you are sleeping or thinking but knowledge you will need it if you are in a situation. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
E7585113D7EC | The type of work I would like to have is a stalyst professional and paint landscapes.
Stalyst professional is a really good job you get a lot of money only doing hairstyles.
Painting landscapes is a really good job too because you are doing what you want doing a really good art and a lot of people like how it looks like they pay a lot of money for the landscapes if you do a really good job.
I chose stalyst professional because is interesting to do, you learn a lot about girls hairstyles and boys hairstyles I think is a really good job because a lot of people likes to do hairstyles and people likes to do haicuts because there is a lot of different things for example new hair color or a new hairstylt and stalyst is a really good job because you get a lot of money and you can do whatever you want with your own money but working hard.
I think the workplace will be in a place that there is a lot of people, because when is people they are interesting to have new haistyles for example if someone goes to have a new hairstyle and is really cool people are going to wish have the same hairstyle or a different hairstyle.
People are going to be really happy to have a new hairstyle because some people are bored to have the same haircut and if is a place with a lot of people they are going to love that place.
I chose doing landscapes because is interesting for a lot of people, because if you do a really good lanscapes people are going to love it and they are going to be interest to have one.
landscapes are so beutiful because you see how the paints are combinated houw the color are mixted and you see a really cool landscape. The work for the landscapes with acrilic paint it looks really nice because it looks realistic, and that's interesting for people that like to have landscapes.
I think the workplace for landscapes is like where is a lor of people that like to see landscapes and buy them because landscapes are so pretty. I chose to do landscapes because I like to paint
I like to see the color and how they are mixted that's so cool. I li9ke to paint landscapes because I
feel relax and am not thinking nothing I forget about everything and I reflect how I feel doing landscapes
I also like to paint landscapes because I love acrilic paints and how they mix and how they work. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
E76B3F5205CD | Yes i am agrey life's is important and people who value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to Follow his or her own ideas, the have experinse aboute life is good way to get a bettar life, and everyday there try To be a besst person for won life thare chaling his/her self that people working hart,stady hart they wnat a good life In the futchar.
Some people's take essy own life like relaxe there not try anyway there needit, they are not wary about own life They are not save meony thay are not wary if somting expansef just the want buy it.
So many people's follow a faumos perons life thare raed thare books or some of them make vidoes and people Wacting the know somting more aboute life, i like that people they be a good perosn, try to get a good life in the futchar.
Eevar life is impart to me or for others people any wnat a good life respacat anyone heple anyone for anyway the can helpe people, .
some people wnat a bat person, that persons life is nothiong, like thery kile person, or they are sell somting, Alot of yonge kids not going to the school they are ideas school not important that kids going to the worge way there wnat moeny just moeny, that people not wary for tommaro what happen on life one day they go to the jale for wohel life. they know we are going so wrong at this part they can't noting in the world so many ting living animal, person anythig try a good person .
Smart people follow a faumos person life they want batter life for whole life,and that people red the books and They know somting more aboute life, some of tame resching aboute life before thare start somting taking with that Perons his expersns for that job or anything alos, they are dowing a hart work to make a more many and save many For the futchar, with hart workig the grow up his or her stady in the futchar geting what they wnat do be, and wnat Take ideas for life what thare tining what happen if a i am lost what happen if i am lost all my mony, thare thiking Everthig which is they want to lost his or her life, and they are chaling his or her self for the batter life.
Every life is important to me , everyone wnat do somtiong or helpe some one or be a good thing for other people in the world some of people jobs is Dctor and helpe sick people or if some one very sick helpe them to gave back his or her life anyone can helpe some needs helpe and gave backe his or her life, we are coming on this word for one times do somting in the futchar prowd of we are self rescpakt anyone and no one wants one day do it somting get your self sad, some of cuntury is war alot of people dia and in the war, but the others cunturys is not war, and meybey for one day four or morethin four kids coming a life, life for some one is Nice but others is not is very short very short. | 1 | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 | 1 |
E770240CAEE1 | The first impression that is impossible to change,is surpise. Because in the life always we learn somenthing new,for example,when I start in the first job and don't know anything, I need to learn the things that,I need to do rigth. One example,when I work in the kitchen,so I need to learn the ingredients,the plate name and how to make. After that I can start. Then, I want to change the work,because I tired of the chefs,fire,bad manager or bad pay, and I can look for another job.
Now I start again,because I take a different job like a Secretary. Now I to learn new things,because I not work with food again, now I start with papers, computers and minister calls.
So this is the Surprise,the life change all the time,but we need to have positive attitude and face up to all the bad things that coming.
Is the same with the school, some times the attitude change,because is impossible that somebody knows all the information about one class or two. We have differents impressions impossible to change. Because some people hate some class, for example math, but some liked. Normally I hate this class, because is just number,equations,square rules. I disagree with this class, but I know that in the future I need. But all we have differents positions, because some people love the numbers and others love another class for example, I like History why. The reason is that I like learn new things that I don't know, is very interesting.
But, I agree with one thing, all the class are very important for my life, because in the future I can take any job because I know differents things for differents carrers and I can help to other people in any class.
We are agree in one thing. Wherever we going always the school is very important in our life. I know that we can disagree in differents things,but I think that is impossible to change the scary impression why, because always we scary to fail but, I agree that we can fight for change the future and achieve everything that we want. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E78C1D3328E3 | I think what you can take summer school for to finished the school in three years is a good idea because you can leave to school in start working or doing other somethings how example you can get a good job and make good money or you can start work for to help in the hause like your mom, father, and making money for buy something for yourself like a car, clothes, and the another rason.
If the student have 17 or 18 years old he can leave the school and not when they have 22 years old like the hispanic because they coming with 15 or 16 years old and the school put they in grade nine and if you graduate in only three years is better for you, becuase they going to was 18 years old and they already for to work in learned more english but that not is the same case for American People.
With the work force for to finish the school in one year early, I think that is hard but is so good for students with 18,19,20 years old because they can finish early in lirobic time in one year.
If you're hispanic that's not better choice for you, because you can't learn more english and that's going to be hard for you when you start work, but that not is the samein the case with American People because the english not is a problem with they and if they have the same years old they can get a good job and leave the school in lirobic time.
That's what i think about the finish the school in three and not four years and the work force for to finish the school in one year early, If the school give me the oportunity choice I say ''I want to finish the school in three years'' because is better for me for my years old . | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E792CBEB06C5 | I think that students should bring phones to school but turn then off and put them in their locker.
If the students don't do that job they might be in a big problem. in SCHOOL_NAME if the students do not turn theirs phone off and it rings during class the teachers automatically will take the phone from the students.
Eventually the parents have to come and get the phone from school and give them to their kids.
If the students bring their phones to school they will text their friends, call their friends and take pictures.
In contrast if the students are doing those jobs during classes and there were no school rules the students would play with their phone during class time.
During class time students might listen to their favorite songs on their phone and don't pay attention to the teacher which they will get a worst citizenship in their report card and they will not graduate and they will feel sad and shocked about what they have done to hurt them.
lastly these are the reasons that students allow and not bring their phones to school, | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E7A370A15B49 | Yes agree with it, because if you fail one time you will try to do it in a different way, but you never have to loss your enthusiasm if you have a goal you need try to to get it otherways you will never make it always try to do your best never let anybody tell you what to do anything can be possible.
when i was young i wanted to be good at soccer but when i play with my cousings they allways make fun of me, and i stare crying i never try to be good a soceer never. then i was always staying after to play with peolpe at my age, I was getting better and better at soccer, and after like one year after i went to my aunt house my cousings told me to play with then, they were surprise because better then they.
When i first came to USA all my family was tellimg to learn english. First when i was learning a little be of english, and my teacher told me to practice english in the class (talk to others students in class), but i was scare that the student make fun of me, so that day i did not spoke english in class i told my self ( i going to learn and make my self proud)
at the end of the school year my english was better i was always epeaking english with my sister and to my teachers too.
Others people think taht if you can"t do something you have to stop doing it or stop trying, others will told you that you can"t do it, but remember you can do everything you propouse .
So if you want to do something just do it don't be afraid of failing doesn't matter if you fail you can keep trying to do it make your family proud meke your self proud. Life is beautiful try to get your goals done. And remember you can do anything you want just if you try really hard. At the end you will remember all of the people who told you that you will fail, and the people that always believe on you. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E7A76C48340D | I think this council is debating the adoption. If the curfew adopt the teenagers, the situation will change to the better. the council said the teenagers don't have to be in the street after 10 p. m. in the weekdays because they want the teenagers out of troubles. and they found teenagers in the street after 10 P.M. that's mean is breaking the law. that warning for the people because sometimes the bad people walk around have a knife or have a gun these people can kill someone kidnapping anyone. Or someone make a bomb and try to put it in street. and also is danger because maybe someone drank a lot and he drove the car maybe can hit anybody by the car that's why the police check the city a lot of time to make sure no bad things will happen and also the police check the city because if someone have something wrong they will help them. if the teenagers don't break the law this will help the police to try make the city safe the safety in city is so important. Like example that happen with me when I was 15 years old I was walking in the street at 11 p. m. and I was going to my home I see one man behind me but I thought is regular man but he was have a knife and he said to me give anything you have I was have my wallet had on it my ID and not too much money and I don't have anyone in the street to help me and he took my phone and he told me leave and don't look behind you I ran away because he was almost gonna kill me. be in your home early to be safe. The police doesn't want to control on you but he want to be safely. because the world is not safe now the world have a lot of bad people. And also I was have my friend was in street at 1 a. m. and someone was drank and hit my friend by the car. And my friend is dead all of these to show you how the world is not safe. the police have a lot of situations with the bad people. and if you look at the countries is not safe the reason is because every day around the country you will find everyday someone killed. That's tells you how the world is not safe. a lot of people dead because of the people is drank or the someone have a gun or knife. if you search in internet about the people is succeed in their life the internet will show you these people focused in their future when they finish their work the going to their home to take a rest. try to make your schedule early like in the mid day in the morning to go to your home early.
a lot of people kidnapped every day make sure you're safe. And also I saw before a guy have a gun and he stopped a girl and his husband and he took from them the all gold that girl have it and he took the wallet from the man. and if you don't care about yourself no someone will care about you keep yourself safe. your life is expensive don't make your life is free for someone. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
E7A9FD471BE3 | Graduating earlly should be a good idea because students are abkt to accomplish it early, students may have goals in life they want to achive and they might have other responsibilities to take care off. Some poeple said that graduating early is a good idea becasue students can relive some stress but some student say that is not a good idea because students may miss the best year of thier life. So thinking about it, should you graduate early or not.
First of graduating early is a goog idea because of the responsiblity a student have outside of school. Students may have work or some issue that are not school base things. For example my friend had a kid. She graduated early last year, now shes able to go to college or go to work force while taking care of her kid. Some student may have sport team outside the school that may help them to be professional player. For example soccer players can go professional without going to college. Beach Fc or anyone soccer club out there may help those players become a pro.
Seconly. Students may want to acoomplush it early as possible. Students may want to graduate early becasue thet want a time off school before going to college. Students may be sick of going to school because of how many lesure are there everyday. For example my friend graduate early last year because he wanted to get it done early. He wanted to step back for a bit before going to college. Going to school is stressfull enough for students, Exams, Sol, Text, ect. Students use this meated to have a years off school before going to college or going stright to work force,
Thirdly. Students may have goals in their life that they wanted to accomplish early after school. Students may have a sport team that are able to help they turn into a pro. or a gaming team to turn them a pro. students have a lot of goals in there life also. Graduating early may help them to get a head start so they wont be falling behind with people. I read a story once that a guy that graduted early. He became a proffetional soccer player on are 17 or 18. He is a incredible player, One of the best in the world.
If a student could graduate early; the students can accomplish things that they couldn't after highschool. if a student can graduate, they can focus on other responsinilities outside of school. If I can graduate early, I can accomplish my goals early than others. Graduating early can be a good idea. for example student may graduate early becuase of they're responsibilities outside of school, students may have goals in life that they want to accomplish first or a student just wanted a time off school. You have a chose. take it or leave it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E7C8F254C841 | PROBLEMS WHITH MINISTER WINTON
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"success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm".
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E7DB2DC8B151 | I think curfews do keep teenagers out of trouble and it helps them sleep on time because after those hours a lot of law breaker are on the streets and something bad could be happening outside or on the streets like gang fights , shootings , robbers , durg dealers, drunk drivers and many more. The first reason is shootings mostly happens at night late after 10 p. m and it would be better to stay inside in those hours than to go outside and for example a teenager is walking home from a friends house late in the midnight and gets in a fight with gang member and gets shot. while it would have been better with the curfew in place.
Curfews help teenagers go to sleep on time well like on the weekdays when they got school the next day and sleep on time and wake up on time and be refreshed for a test or something for example a teenager has school the next day and since he does not have a curfew he sleeps late and he misses the bus and forgets he has a test that day. And another example a teenager has a game he does not sleep early and he wakes up tried and is not able to play the game as well as he could.
Curfews could also help teenagers mange their time appropritely and how they spend the day for example a teenagers has a project or a home work the curfew time will help know what he/she must do first before he/she have some free time and goes to sleep.
In conclusion adopting the curfew idea would be good because it will keep the teenagers out of trouble and help them mange their time appropritely. | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
E7E6102C559E | Im completly agree with this quote, because actually is hard to be youself, a person who dont even know who him is and his proposit in this world and a society were literally nobody cares about who you are, your aspect and your skills that probably gonna be used to enrich other people who doesnt even know you. Sometimes life could be misleading and maybe will be hard to find yourself or your proposit.
even your family could have 2 faces and make your way harder, thats why you need to take care who you trust and select correctly, theres bad people and just because the blood is shared doesnt make them your family. Nobody has born yo be the center of everything, even if everything looks immposible you are still able and free to be the person you wants to be even thought is hard when the world is facing you and making imposible little things,but sometimes you need to accept that somethings aint for you, nothing is just when they was maded to people with more opportunitys sometimes you will feel that you will never get a good chance to do what you actually wants. The future and the time could be creppy but you need to rememember all dreams are possible if when you keep them in mind, is not impossible to be yourself is hard ans sometimes sad when you get lost tryng to find who you are but at the end life will be good because you finally gonna be the person you wants; Because trying to be yourself in this ugly and unfear world is the greatest accomplishment, at the end nothing is more important than you. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E7EBDBDD703F | Do curfews keep teenagers from getting into trouble? The city council is still currently debating on either adopting the curfew to be at 10 p. m. during the week days or at midnight on the weekends. If teenagers were to be out after the hours selected, it would be considered breaking the law. The laws are choosen for many reasons, even if we don't agree with most of them; we have to obey the laws. I believe the city council should adopt the cerfew for the minnors. When it comes to under age people in this world we have to be more conserned for their safety, it is best to have curfews. We should consider all the dangerous things going on in this world.
Have you considered all the things that could happen when your child is out? There is many dangerous things going on in this world. I'm not saying something will happen but honestly nowadays anything could happen. Without an adults care vision many things could occur. Many minnors are being killed or harmed for reasons we don't know. A curfew is one way from preventing those things from happening to your children. Even though a curfew at midnight on a weekend could still be dangerous; it is our responsability to teach the minnors from right to wrong. If we get them to understand why it is important to have a curfew they would be exrta careful. Theres a high possability they won't want to listen about their curfew; I can speak for myself I would want to spend more time with my friends there was a few times I didn't listen to my mom. I relized how much my safety ment to my mother and how worried she would be when i would be out late.
Have you heard about what happened to Generic_Name in New York? He was such a good child. His mother talk about how he loved hanging out with his nephews and family. She said he wouldn't go out with friends, he would always be home. He was very close to his sister, they'd always be together. Generic_Name had good grades in school, he would never get into trouble at all. The reason I bring his story life into this essay is because he was killed a few blocks away from is house, outside a little food market. I'm not so sure about the time but it was after dark. It was a group of guys who saw him, dragged him out the market and stabbed him under his arm. He tryed asking for help but no one would help him; he tryed getting to a hospital by foot unfortunaly Generic_Name didn't make it and died on the sidewalk. Those guy were caught a few months later and said they confused him with another guy. Generic_Name had no fault in any of it,he didn't deserve it. Maybe if he would of wanted for the next day or if his mom would of took him things could of happened diffrently. My point is leaving your house alone isn't so safe, when your with your parents it goes completey different.
Some people might think they would give the freedom they wanted as a child to there children. They might think there isn't a problem with them going out when ever they'd like and don't think they need a curfew. Everyone wants to enjoy their life and live it fully. Enjoying life doen't have to be passed your curfew, theres more to see during the day. Yes, you might trust your child so much you believe it's okay for them to leave but do you believe in the other people with your child being out in pulic? During day is much more safe then at night time when it's dark. One reason being is because of how many peolpe are out during the day. You could scream for help, run or give signs of being in danger. At night everyone is sleeping, and barely anyone is around.
In conclusion, the city council should think about the things going on in this world and do what's best for the teenagers, which is to have a curfew. Teenagers can still have their freedom and enjoy every bit of their lifes with curfews. I think it would be for the best; everyone would be safe in that way. Mostly everyone can agree that their minnors safety is important. Curfews would also keep teenagers from getting into trouble. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
E7EFD51B632F | The most persuasive, efficient way to influence others takes someone to set a good example of their behavior. Those examples sets an image in people's minds of how they want to see themselves in an ideal state. Moreover, every single human being on this Earth has a certain vibe or energy they give off due to their actions and thinking that people perceive or take in to judge that person. When people see that someone else has an energy or vibe he/she likes or agrees with, he/she will tend to gravitate towards it. Setting a good example is the best way to influence others because people want to know what is morally right or wrong, to see change and improvement, and to take on similar motives.
The first reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people want to know what is morally right or wrong. Martin Luther King Jr. is demonstrated as a great example of influencing others about what is right and wrong by leading a protest that many African Americans were involved in. Martin Luther King Jr. gave a famous speech called "
I Have A Dream
" which radiated strong energy that gave African Americans the strength and pride to protest the whites' racist segregation laws. The great example set by Martin Luther King Jr. displayed that he was a capable and high-thinking individual that African Americans gravitated towards. Due to the fact that African Americans were influenced by Martin Luther King Jr., they were able to understand what their rights as a human being were and how wrong the whites' segregation laws was.
The second reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people want to see change and improvement within themselves. A personal trainer could be a figure for some people as they are persistent and passionate at what they do. This can lead people to being motivated at the gym and encouraged to become more fit and healthy. Also, It sets a postitive message in their mind saying they have what it takes to get to the point of where their personal trainer is. Having the personal trainer as a figure to gain motivation from led to a person seeing improvement and change in their body and mindset.
The final reason why setting a good example is the best way to influence others is people desire to take on similar motives. At an early stage of development as a child, they tend to look up to their parents or popular figures in awe as they gain inspiration to become a certain profession. A child may have seen an astronaut on television and became inspired to become one when he/she grows up. This inspiration may have led this upcoming astronaut to take astronomy and other space-related classes. Then an amateur astronaut is born because the astronaut on TV decades ago set a good example on how interesting tasks an astronaut has to do which led to the inspiration.
In conclusion, people better themselves due to influence. Influencing others to know what is morally right or wrong, to see change and improvement, and to take on similar motives are all based on good examples that are set. The examples set must give off something that interests the other person to be able to connect with the person. Also, that person must retain an energy and vibe that coinsides with the other person for that person to be influenced. This is indeed the best way on influencing individuals. | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
E7F9A77683D2 | I would pick policy 1 because lunch is free time to eat talk to your friends and to use the restroom. If u need to tell your mom something you can text her or call her but when your in class and u want to text someone you will miss the work and you won't know how to do the activity because your texting. When you have free time that's when you can text call but not in class because if you do then we won't know how to do the work and we would get a bad grade.
So when it's after school lunch or your free time you can use a phone but when your in class you need to turn it off because your teacher is trying to teach you something. When your in class every day you know something new about something, someone, somewhere. So when your in class no phones when your out of class you can text make a phone call take pictures of friends. Who wants to pass i know i do because i want to get a good job because if you don.t pass your classes then you can't get a good job. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E80B0AD2A9D7 | I think is important because de Churchill have a important place and the ministery British work in that.
Also is important because is recognized for many people.
The ministery British is play for that important role.
I think the people is interested for that.
That help many people.
sometimes the people helps to others and work together for had a good ministery and for help the government or the country and if that some people obtained any help for the education for the kids.
Also the mayor is a good person he received the support of his country and all the community has a good life. | 1.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
E80C88E9837C | I agree with Churchill' statement about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of succes, because the way to become to the success is not gonna be easy. All the people that try to have a good success they gonna have failure on the way and sometime they fall apart, but they never have to loss their enthusianm, because the succes consists in fall apart and wake up again, and keep going looking for a good success that gonna be graet for their life and their family gonna be haughty of them.
I agree because, the life gonna put many impediment to have a good success we have to keep going do not have to loss aur enthusiasm, for example. My family came of a poor family, but I have an ancle that he never loss his enthusiasm of has a good success, so he worked too hard for it. One failure that he has on his way to the succes was the poorness, but he keep going wrestlering for get uot of the poorness and help his father and mother, one day he found a job and begin to meke money and his first thing that he made was to buy a bed for him, then he to begin to save money to come to this country, now he has a lot money in his bank account because he put his own company of landscaping, but he never loss his enthusiasm about his success.
I agree with this statement, because there is a lot example of how the people have many failure and they keep going never loss their enthusiasm of their success, one of this example is of one soccer player his name is Cristiano Ronaldo. He is a famous soccer player, but to have a great success he had many failure one of thase failure was that his father died when hi was a kid it was hard for him even has to see a psychologist and he to overcome that, he keep going looking for his success, but he failure again because the people and couche's that saw him, don't believe him they say like he doesn't has future, but he keep work in his success and show to all the people that don't believe him that they was wrong. Because he has a future and he gonna has a great success, now he is the best soccer player in the world for many people, but he always worked so hard to get out of the failure and he to obtain a good success.
I agree with Mister Churchill, because the way for a great success is gonna be long and we gonna have many filure to obtain this, for example. I am trying to graduate from high school, but one of failure was that it is not been easy for me, because this is a new language for me and it is dificult to talk, but I keeping going trying to get my diploma , another failure is that I have to work for pay may rent and buy my own stuff, shoes, clothes, and food, it make more dificult to have my success, but I know that success consists on fall apart and wake up, but I never loss my enthusiasm of to be graduate from high school. One day I gonna say that my success wasn't easy but I obtain a good success.
In Conclution I agree with "churchill's statement about success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". I agree with him because on the way to a great success we gonna have many failure but we don'thave to loss our enthusiasm, because in the world there is a lot people that they never loss their enthusiasm, even when they have a failure they always weke up and keek going, now they have a good success, so if we want a great success in our life we have to keep going wrestlering with all the failure that we gonna have. One day we gonna say I made it and we gonna have a great success. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E812CBED82E3 | Older and younger students are different. Older studentss are smarter then the younger because younger student hasn't been teach alot like the older students on any subjects. Students have different ages then others. Teacher teaches different students becuase of their age. Other student have different grade then young students.
First, yong students are late born then older student. Their parent might atempt their student early or late to school. Young students needs alot of stuff to be teach. Some studednt might be smart or intelligant then other. It depends on their skills of listening and reading. If they do well on listening or reading or others, they will gete smarter.
Second, when the young students gets older, their starting to change and turning into a teenager. Student also start growing like the other older students. When the students gets older, they will have a deploma paper like other studetns will get. Students starts at a different subject then others.
Most likely, olderer students are brilliant then the younger students. They're are available to any program with other students. The older students studys alot then the younger because they get prepare for any test their gonna take. Students also goes to many program when teachers assign them to go, and get important details about that program.
Finally, older and younger students are most likely different comparing to each other. Their both have different reading, writing, and speaking skills. The most important thing about older and younger student is that the older studentes like to help the younger students. What they have in common is that they read and work hard alot each day they go to school. Older and younger students are pair because that's how the law was made. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
E81B50098AAC | In my opinion students should come to school. Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students,which allows the students to be irresponsibles and not to show their work to the teacher. As we can see taking classes online is not a good option to us, for instance if we dont make the time to attend the classes online, or by the time we are taking the online classes we received a text for friend we stop doing what we are doing and got distracted by the electronic devices and, others words if we come to school received classes we are going to be able to get the knowledge that we need to be great in our academic life.
I consider myself that taking online classes is not a good option for students. Some students that take online classes are procrastinators,they dont care about their homework, or they wait until the last minute to do it. The truth is, if we dont take our online classes seriously how we are going to learn. For example,
My friend Generic_Name is taking online classes and she said that taking online classes allow her to be irresponsible by not doing her homework.
Some students dont make the time to take the online classes and we just forget to take it. I wonder how we are going to learn if we dont make the time to do it. Sometimes we got distracted for something that have nothing to with the class that we are taking. However, if we have a job and we got home late, and in our mind is to get home and take the online classes, but when we get home we are so tired and we just want to go to bed, and forget about what we have to do.
The last and more important reason what we should take classes in school is, if we attend to school,we can ask questions to the teacher and he can provides us with a powerful answers and specific examples, if we attend to school that will helps us to get a responsibility to be every day at school and not to miss any important class, and also that would gives the knowledge that we would need to be great in life.
In final consideration I think students should come to school and take our classes, that way we would learn more better than taking it in online, and also that we will makes us more responsible. As we take the classes in school we will get the knowledge that we would need to success in our academic life in general we would be great in our professional life. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E8257C027079 | Is true that many students would like to graduate early with all the credits they need already, few students get to have that many good grades of all their school years the makes them able to graduate earlier,but of course, thats not something easy to achieve, some students maybe don't mind to taking all 4 years of high school to graduate,but others would like to take the 3 years and still get all the credits they need to graduate,even tho that may take them more work to do to achieve that.
I think it would be a good idea for students to be able to graduate with three years of high school, with the same idea that they will have to take summer courses and evenings to get all credits in three years, and the advantages of that would be that they will get out of school earlier and be able to star college, work, and a career at a earlier age, and also for students who don't like to spend too much time on school stuff, that would be like a way to get out of that faster and achieve their goals quickly, i have some friends that they graduated earlier because they had good grades, which made them have enough credits to graduate,and they doing good right now, because now they in college and achieving their goals, and i believe it would be a good idea to give other students the same opportunity, if they want to take it. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
E83134C87EFA | Let's be honest when a stranger smiles at you it makes your day 10 times better. Many people believes that if you have positive attitude in life you will success in life. I think that positive attitude is the key to be successful in life because if you show positive attitude to someone it will make your day better and theirs too, when you show negative attitude about something you always fail, and having negative attitude can also effect your mental health.
Although showing positive attitude can not solve someones problems, but it sure makes their day better, But if you show negative attitude to someone it will make their day worse. Having positive attitude can give you a lots of opportunity in life. and having positive attitude can also prevents you from failing in life.
Many people fail in life because they always show negative attitude, for example if you show positive attitude at work you will have coworkers and boss who appreciate your positive attitude. You will be successful because you are not worry, or stress about it. But if your show negative attitude about it you will lose the job and fail which can cause depression. Having negative attitude in life not only make you fail in life, but also make you not try it again because you are too scared to fail again which can be very effective one your mental health. although being positive does not solve all of your problems, but it will help your mental health.
Some teens in high school are always worried, depressed, and desperate because they always show negative attitude to teachers' and their friends'. Which effects their mental health. Having negative attitude can prevent you from having friends' and it can also prevents you from having good teachers' who help you in test. Which can cause you fail the class and not graduate high school. Which will impact on your health.
Overall, positive attitude is the key to be successful in life because it gives you a lots of opportunity in life. Which can make you successful in life. Having positive attitude can also cause you have coworkers and boss who appreciate your positive attitude. And although being positive does not solve all of your problems, but it will help your mental health. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
E83BE2C46D0D | In some schools they have a program that pairs older student with younger student. The older student are available to assist the younger student in order to succeed on their goal. "Aww man, I **** hate this, I don't know how to make this spaghetti and meatball sandwich I had the wheat bread, the sauce, manssreala cheese, spaghetti and my meatballs what else in this world am I missing. Did you know that 50% of the population of older student have often fail because of lack of communication and the other half is lack of knowledge. I believed, If older student help the younger kids they will they both will succeed in different things. For example, communicating more helps the older student talk to the younger ones more often. For the younger ones they will understand their conflict and what they need to work on.
Learning to communicate more helps the older student talk to the younger ones more often. For the younger ones they will understand their conflict and what they need to work on. I learn my mistake because one of the older student name Generic_Name, help me with a problem involving math and science. Generic_Name love math and would love to help me, their were a lot of steps I need to do it was only five minutes when he was done, but it felt like an eternal. I understand why I was wrong and what I need to do in order to get it right. From my point of view I knew he was having trouble communicating with me because he was studding a lot and made mistakes. We both learn a lesson that nobody is perfect the first time. I love the quote that Leon Missie said at the convention. He said "Nobody Is Perfect The First Time, and remember that everyone has a talent or skill." That means everyone has made a mistake more than once and try to fix it." I remember the time I did a terrible mistake, I was in a chemistry class In Generic_School I was doing in a experiment, I had to put on my safety first. I over did with the salt a little bit. In a dangerous chemical called La Muete, which means that it is poisonous, so the becker exploded in to a million pieces and all I saw was fire on my cloth and on the teacher desk .The teacher quickly got the fire extinguisher and put it on me first and then the fire form letting spread more and boy I got my **** kick by my mom and dad so hard that they made me pay for all the damage I created. So my teacher got me an assist too help me with the calculation so I don't mess up again. Eventually, I pass the class with a B-, I was relief that it was over and I won't do that chemical bond ever again."
Often successes can help both young and older student. Sometimes the older student can make a mistake too and teach the younger student. That it is okay if you made a mistake, but make sure that you don't know something don't leave it blank just try and figure out what missing because the assist won't be there all ways. Life dosen't work like that, their are thing that we have to figure out on our own. My job is teach you what the problem that your stuck on and me learning how to communicate with others and you learning your problems, and trying to fix them."I remember when I got my license at the age 21 and yes that means I crash a lot, turning in the wrong direction, and even broken into people yards. Yes, it really hard driving and I had this final attempt that if I don't pass then I don't ever get my license even when I really old. So I study hard and where i'm I supposed to go, stop when the light is red, Break when something is moving in the road, read the speed limit, park in a specific position ,and most importantly turn on the signal. I had an assist or should I say my friend Generic_Name, was with me and telling me what to do. I thought I was going to crash in to someones yard again but not this time, I was driving pretty go actually .So the day had come and I need to relaxed and not think about failing, and them my family will laugh at me for not passing, and I had to live with my parents all the time just because I can't drive. I stared to do go and the instructor showing me where to turn. After a few hours had passed I barely had passed with a C- and that not to go and not to bad. I had my license and my life was going go too.
To sum it all up, all over the world school have a program called "Two is better than One" it a program that allows older student assist the younger student in order for them to succeed in the conflicts there having trouble on It helps both old and younger students. It helps the older student to communicate more with people and so on and so forth. When the older student learn how to communicate with others they with eventually learn to help or talk to strangers more often. Failure can eventually lead to successes, like my driving license, I fail lots of times but that never stop me from getting my driving license. From that chemistry class that I almost took the whole school down with me. From that final attempt I learn that no matter how many time you fall there will always be a way to succeed. But there will be time were you need someone assist so they can help you. Did you have a difficult time on something and ask someone to help you or fail at a test and the teacher have you an assist in order for you to pass it again? | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
E8445DB18983 | Scientist Albert Eisnste sad " imagination is more important than knowledge " I disagree with the statement.
I disagree imagination is more important that knowledge.
I disagree because, I think knowledge it's more important because, you have to knowledge after you imagine because, I think knowledge it'a more important because you have to knowledge. The situation to think really good if you dont due you can not think what it's gonna happen.
because if you only imagine you don't gonna knowledge good because, if you only imajinate and say the words after you knowledge the words you what to says. and if you knowledge first after think you can be able to due son tings.
If you gonna to due a story if you only imagine you can not be able to due because you have to Knowles the situation first after you think because son times you can get good imagination and you have to knowledge.
like for example if don't knowledge you don't gonna now were put tings to knowledge the situation were you gonna put things and the ca n be better.
I don't no what scientists Albert Einstein think and i gonna now what he thinks because, people have different opinion like how it's more better to they can use, and because persons have different ideas,like me i think then knowledge it's more important, then imagination but others people they can think it'snot because for people to see things it's different, because if the person am gonna write the story am gonna use the knowledge to knowledge, the situation better and make good story.
The knowledge it's like then a group because you have to search or knowledge to now what you gonna due because, if you only have in a imagination to what you gonna due that can work, like when you go to your job and you have to knowledge,what you gonna due for the day.
when you go to school and you go to science if you have to examine the a plant you have to knowledge the plant to now were you can star to examine the plant.
when you due sometimes you have to knowledge the situation,like for example,when a person quilled to another person, the police they have to knowledge,the scene and who was the criminal and knowledge the situation how died and who was .
some people think the imagination it's was first and it's more important would, I think the people see for different forms to due would a think some people it's right because, I see for different forms like when you imajinate it's like when you imajinate the things would you can have a picture in your minds like you can see pictures like were you what to put things.
but you can have im imajine in your mied but you have to knowledge first because i think if you knowleged because i feel more necesary to knowleged beause when you knowledged you can feel it's more easy or if you look like the pictures way it's more easy, because you see the things more specific en your miend.
it's alot ways to you can see things because for people some people looks diferets to others you can see more better in you way if you don't get.
i think people it's look things different ways and other they look like the same but the most important it's the way you see the tings for you. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
E847B658E4DA | Is it important to express your emotions? Is it good to live a healthy life? The way you move, the way you control your movment is all up to you. Is this activity enjoyable for you?
First, this activity has been done by everyone in the world. Which is dancing, everydody at least dances once in their lives. As we speak some people take this activity to the next level. Performing at competitions or shows people pay to watch. This activity is not only enjoyable but educational for those who seek interest in dancing. There are so many things you can learn froming dancing like tap, ballet, hip pop, jazz, and ballroom dancing and more.
Second, you express your emotion, all that anger and sadness you hide, you put that into your dance its what makes it special. Do what your body tells you to do, let out whatever it is your feeling, let your emotion tell a story. Its like writing a story in a book but the only thing different is that you are moving.
Third, dancing takes alot of energy, so that means you have to have a good meal before you can dance. Streach your body so you won't pull a muscle, which can be very painful and sometimes can lead to surgery. After streaching, warm up yourself so you can build your stigma, it will help you when you are feeling weak and tired. Always drink water because you are always sweating and you need to hydrate your body.
Fourth, when you are dancing there is never a right to wrong. Its like a test with no answer key, it just keeps going without stoping. Don't doubt yourself because nobody is going to be perfect, if you want to dance like you run the world then trust yourself.
Finally if you enjoy dancing and you have passion, You are going to be unstopable. All you just have to remember is to just have fun and be you. Teach others and show them that if they are feeling alone, they are never alone because you will be right there next to them guideing them every step of the way.
In conclusion this activity is super enjoyable and fun because you will meet new people and you will have new friends and people who share the same intrest as you. Just remeber as long as you, put your mind and heart into whatever you want to do, anything is possible thats why this activity taught me so much about loving myself. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 |
E8485EFFC9A2 | The outdoor activities parks, get people to know each other better. The activities outside is fun, because you get to meet new people, where there is always competition and competitors. The main thing what makes an activity fun, is the enthusiasm of the people, having an enjoyable moment. However, how people or siblings cheered for you and others for the other team, is sensational. In Conclusion that's what makes a game great, the fact that has many memorable moments, that you will never forget.
In general, activities exercises your body, ounce you get use to running ,or playing sports. Techniqually, you wanna do more when you really like the activity that your doing, thats enthusiam for a motivation. Then, you definitely wanna be the best at it and there is others, that have the same interests like you. So, there's people that are gonna get across your way, because their unstoppable like you. Since, a child they liked activities that motivated and inspired them, to be good at, eventually this two big starts find each other and there both nemesis. So, lets say your motivation was only getting a scholarship, by sports, and the goal, that you propose to yourself, eventually you completed it. Supponsendly after 30 years your in national TV playing the finals cup worldwide, for your team, thats were imagination can take you from a winner to a star.
It starts from just playing with friends, finding encouragement from siblings. Then just practicing and from there is your decision were you wanna take yourself. Along the way, you can become a successful professional player, like Messi,Lebron James,Usain bolt,etc. However, thats the main point goal for others, but nesecerally you dont have to be good or the best at a sport. Certainly, if you participate on activities is good, because your showing potential as your age grows. Also your forming you body in general, which makes you stay fit, fresh, and always hydrated which is good for your health.
Everybody starts from going from different clubs and parks, where you could start going from your community. Then the state and then national parks, provide you greater opportunities and that's were the journey begins. I like to think that activities generally sports develop your body in a sort of way, that it can also develop your brain into knowing more knowledge of that sport and knowing every detail of it. Neseceraily, not only physical effects can happen to your typical common general body muscles, but having an understanding of the game can be outstanding which requires critical thinking that can affect your organ brain in a good way . If you get to see chess not considered really a sport ,but an activity that exercises your mental thinking, others find this game or other games interesting too and really find the complexity of the game and thats how legends form in any type of game.
The community and people are starting to know each other better by Community activities along everywhere State communities, and National communities. If you asked people that do activities everyday, they will say almost everyone in the world, ounce upon a while everyone did a activity. Since, is what forms your body's growth, shape,and knowledge. The main thing is that there is activities for everyone, that everyone can be good at something and they can have a good time, on what they're doing. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 |
E853D5DD528D | People should be guidance by experts and authorities because in that way we can have less people killing each other; however, their are people that don't like to share their situation and there is where the suicide came from.
Although some say that people shouldn't to be guide by experts because they don't like to people tell them what to do, actually people should be guide by experts because they can show people to love each other and make a better world with no violence.
Their are people that don't like to be guide by others but they have a knowing in their life in what is good and bad by their experiences. For example my gram pa, he doesn't like to be guide by others but he said that he has an understanding in what is good and bad. He also told me that some people try to guide you for the bad way, by showing you how to drink beers or smoke cigarettes and you have to be ready to say not to those type of drugs but, I believe that we need to have experts and authorities to guide us about life's important.
Actually, people should seek guidance from experts and authorities because some experiences have better knowing then other ones and learn how to love each other. I would like to be guide by experts and learn about their experiences. That could be awesome.
Some times is better to make your own idea because that person that is by your side such as, your girlfriend or your mother could be wrong, and there is when you make a mistake and start to be disappointed with your self, In that time is when you are frustrated and you could kill your self or hurt someone else.
Violence can be make by a bad understanding. That's why people should seek guidance from experts and learn how to talk to each other. Usually if you are young , sometimes we don't know have to talk and their where problems came from. However
I encourage to al young people you seek guidance from experts until they have a better knowing in their decisions.
We as humans always make mistakes and we learn through them, but we need help from each other. We need to stopped the violence and start to love each other, but we have to seek guidance from expert and authorities about life important matter. Thats is how we can be better persons and we can change or thoughts. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E877D5AD16DA | Today I would like to talk about students averages and participations.
students are complain because they want to participate in sports, and other activities and they think it is not right that they have to have a grade of B average to enter a sport class so dear principal i would like you to keep the rule of havening a c average to enter sport or other class available, and i would thank you if you would not change it for the students that are doing good in there class's and there work.
student comment
I think you should not change the schools policy because it would not be fair.
I think if students don't have at least one fun class they should not come to school and school would be the boring thing ever and if you have to work all day you would be tired and your brain would stop working as good so that is what i think about the schools policy. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
E8795A1AA404 | When making life decisions it is good to ask someone for help then making the desicison yourself. Why is it better asking someone about the decision is because they could tell you either the desicison is good or they could tell you that don't do it and try to find a better idea. When making a life decision you have to think about the importance, how much it would cost me or whats the overall budget, and how its going to help me achieve in life.
When making life decisions it really matters on how its important to you or how its going to effect you in life. As life goes on do I think its going to help me improve what Im doing right now or is it going to drop me and destroy me for life. When making life decisions it also depends on how you're looking at that particular thing/object. Thats why you should ask someone else who is already doing that particular thing from before or ask someone who could give you an personal opinion/advice that would actually make you think if making this life decision is worth it or not.
When buying something big that will have a effect on my life i would have think about my budget and how am I going to afford this project without having any issues. So to do that I would ask someone for advice who is already doing that business or investment. When asking others for advice I would have to think about how they're going to respond and what they're going to say. This is why budget is also a very big thing when it comes to making life decisions is because I would have to pay that amount in order to have my business or investment stand out out the people around me.
Why would I have to ask someone to achieve my investment or business. To achieve my business i would have to ask someone for a advice who is already doing something similar to that. As Im asking for the opinion or the advice i would have to think how or what Im going to do to improve that decision. What hard work or thinking of mine or someone else's would have to go in that play to achieve the decision. As I would be achieving the decision I would have to see how Im being affected with it and how much pressure its putting on me. Why would I ask others for advice when I have brain and thats because they're going to have a different mind set from me. They probably think better than me or in some way where we both agree on the same fact to achieve the business or investment in a better way. This is why you should ask someone else for a advice or a opinion than going in alone in such a big decision that could impact your life in less than some days.
In conclusion to making life decisions it is a good idea to ask someone else for a advice than making the move alone. Its because someone else has a different mind set than you yourself. Thats why when making a life decision you should think about what things and what mind set you need to proceed with your investment or business. So the mains things you need is how important the investment or business is to me, How high or low my budget is, and what will I have to do to achieve this business/investment. For all these reasons you should always ask a person about their advice or opinion even though I might not listen to it but it doesn't hurt to ask. They'll give me the best advice or opinion even how big or little the investment/business is. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E883A8265183 | Is working with a group is Benefits? In my opinion working with a group is better then working by yourself,becuase when we work as a group we can finish our work faster then working alone furthermore in group work you can make new friends,you can learn how to work as a team because in group work you have to make sure you are being nice to your team mates and you must listen to everyone else point of viewe in group work people you learn how to respect others.
Working with a group have more benefits then woking alone becuase if you have a big project to do and your teacher allows you to work as an group but you choose not to join any group and decide to work alone so this will be hard for you to complete the project on time and the people who join the group can easily complete the project before you because they can help each other this is the biggiest benefit of working with a group.
In group work all the members of the group have to do equal work and this way they can do their part of the project very easily and if they work alone they are not abel to work that well because they have no one else to gave them advice or any kind of help therefore group work is always benefit.
Some people might think that group work should not be allow but in my opinion group work is the best way to study becuase this way you learn about how to be nice to some one and how to be responsibel for your work becuase in team work you always have to do some part of the work which your team memebers told you to do and you all can share your thoughts about your work and can get better grade on the project Group work always gives you benefits. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
E88DDF2C81EB | I believe that positive attitude is the key to success in life. What I mean by that is being nice and giving a good feedback to the things and actions people do and say. We can show how matured we are. We can be examples for others that are living with us too.
I have a friend and her name is Generic_Name. She plays a lot of sport and one of the sport she plays was soccer. Generic_Name's team always losses and she use to tell her team that it will be fine and that they just need more practice. The next Saturday they are having a game. All her team mates are scared because they are positive that they are gone be losing with out even being at the game. Generic_Name told them losing is not the end of the world and being scared does not help them to wine the game. At the end they all promised to each other even if they dont wine that they will be happy to be able to play.
On the other side there is my little brother Generic_Name. He is 12 years old. He never liked math. I always try to help him do his home work. One day I saw his test and he had them all right. I was not surprised because he was working so hard. Whenever he gets his answers wrong he wold say that its fine. I will do it again. After he came home he said his teacher gave him candy and that he gave it to his friend. I was so amazed. I couldnt wait to ask why. He said because his friend was studying so hard and did not get any candy he felt bad.
over all positive attitude is the key to success. Whenever we dont fell like we are having negative energy we should ask and understand that it could get worse. By positive altitude we could get more that we lose if we are having negative attitude. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E897534557AF | Recently technology have been a great impact in our lives and around the world. People use technology for contacting, social media, and ordering food online through an app without going and picking it up. But technology could be bad for some use like getting wrong information about an article that you read or you can get a virus on your computer by going to a insecure website. Technology is making humans beings life easier than how it looks like. I clearly believe that technology is a positive way to use cause you could do so much things with technology
I personally think that technology could make you accomplish many stuff and achievements. Reason why technology could be helpful is with school work. Say that your teacher give you this article and tells you to wright information about it and gives you book that has barely information about the article. You could just go on a computer and find a lot information about the article that the teacher assigned you with and complete your work.
In conclusion, thank you for your consideration of this important matter. the issue of my opnion on postive thinking about technolgy. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
E89C57CE37A6 | For some people that is not a good idea to finish the High School in three year, because in another part is not agreeable and unjust for some student who study for four year to see something new, so this is disagree because the students need to study four year in High School.
Finish the high school in three year is a big bad idea because is to short to finish the high school,
and another parts some students don't wants to go more to the school so they choose that new program for a short year to graduate in high school.
The other parts is not for all High schools to finish in three year, so is most better to delete that program and cancel about to finish the high school in three year and the students who follow that program they need to take the normal high school. To change the new program for all high school of the country is not easy, because some schools don't agree to doing that so is most better to continue the traditional four years.
If they change that program for all schools of the country they have a big responsibility about that, because most of
High Schools they have a big problem and work for example to change like that credit for graduate to the high school, the SOL text so is not a very good idea to doing that.
The conclusion, this is the best option, is to follow the rules of the schools. One should not make a big problem with the laws and the constitution of the schools. It is obligatory of the student need to take the high school for four year that is most better and continue with the traditional four years of school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E8AB23A796F1 | should we be honest or not? We should be honest because people that you know very well and you think that they would never lie to you thta's going to hurt you the must. and if you are not honest people would never believe you.
People in this world lie alot and they are not honest. who are we going to trust if people are not honest .if you lie all the time people will turn their backs on you and nobody is going to help you out if you a problem. when you lie to peolpe one way or another they will find out so be honest all the time. and if you lie to the people you love the most that's just sad because they give you so much incouregmentfor eveything.
I think that if you are not honest you shouldn't be trusted by anyone. you give all of your trust to that person and you say don't tell anyone, if that person does it anyways are you going to trust them again, I wouldn't. if you want to be trusted you need to start from zore. so stop lieing to ever one you trust and be honest and tell the truth to every one. and be nice and don't get in trouble. if people believe on you they're going to have your back no matter what.
People in this world don't liked to be lied to. alot of people like to be trusted so be honest all the time not sometimes all the time. and by being honest it can help you out by you'er parents having trust on you making sure that you don't do bad things or say bad things. and being honest breings good things in life you can get really great jobs and be responsible with everything .
if you are honest with everyone,evryone is going to believe you all the time. and believe in everything on what you said. and if you do what you said or promis people will believe on you and give you all of the trust that you need.
I know being honest can hurt someones feelings but insted of being sad make your wake ness in to streagth. and i'm telling you ,you will feel so much better then ever. some people can be mean when being honest but turn your back on them and don't talk to them but if they change give them a chance. and don't believe on what they say about you is not being honest to them self either. so be honest all the time. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
E8B0698217A3 | They say the you should never judge a book by its cover and, especially regarding people, its true. In this case, the cover is not necessary meaning the appearance, but the first impression of another person. Like the cover of a book, first impressions are not always as appealing as what is really there. its not until after you start "reading" or get to know someone, when you really find out that what you see is not always what you get. There are several factors that can affect the first impression that one receives from another. Differing personality, situations and representation of a person, make impressions often the worst means of judging people.
A person's personality has a big effect on the first impressions that they emit. Everybody is different but when it comes down to it first impressions are really based off of whether you are shy or not. I met my best friend after moving during my junior year, at my new high school. Before i knew her, she never said a word to me or anyone else in the classes that she was kind of odd, but then realized that I was the same way, i didn't talk to many people either because of my personality. I knew that I was shy person and after I get to know someone, I put down my front and show my true colors. I thought that maybe she would be same way. After starting to talk to her a little more each day, our friendship grew and I learned that she wasn't odd at all, but just like me an outgoing person hidden by their shyness. Some people like me and my friend, are shy and put up a reserved and quiet front when facing new people. Based on my first impressions of my friend, I thought something that was far from the truth. One who has a shy personality might in reality be outgoing, but uncomfortable showing it at first, making the first impression of that person a mistaken one.
Your first impression of someone is not suitable because you do not know the situation they may be in. When seeing or meeting someone new, you have no idea the kind of day,
difficulties or kind of disappointment that person may be experiencing. They may have have recently lost someone, or could be someone new and yet still have to deal with the routines and stresses going through out their day. All of these situations can create a barrier between themselves and others, and setting of a good impression is probably not at the top of their list of important things to do.
On my first day of senior year, I walked hurriedly to my first class, even thought I had plenty of time to get there. When I walked into my class, the only thing on my mind was to find a seat right away, no matter if it was by another person or not. when the time come to eat lunch, I sat by myself and ate it quickly so I could proceed to my next class. I was so worried about being late for a class, finding a seat and just doing things right, that i didn't have time to try to leave any good first impression, on any of my peers. It wasnt even on my mind to do so. My peers received the impression that i was nervous and not a sociable person, when really I was acting the way I was because of the situation that I was in.
There are many factors that lead to someone's first impression of another. Someone;s personality, current situation, or the way they happen to present themselves all influences the way someone thinks about another when seeing or meeting them for the first time. Since what they think is based off of these judgments, their first impressions is usually wrong. If all friendships were based on first impressions, there would be a lot less of them in the world. First impressions are more often worst means of judging a person because its not until you get to really know a person, you are better equipped to understand what kind person they truly are, and really know the individual based on real values, rather than their first impression or "book cover". | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
E8B836196ADB | I guess it's a good idea Because it helps the students to complete their homework with support from other people, with this club it will help a ton of students that has trouble or problems with their homework.
This will be a great idea for many students that has trouble doing their homework at home or doesn't understand or their stuck on their homework, but the other reason people don't want to add this club to the school is they don't like the idea of having it they say "it's a waste of time for us" or other more things that they say, some other students might say they don't have time for it or they don't wanna join the club. But it is a good idea to add this club for the students who don't understand how to do their homework, if other people don't wanna join they could just get a bad grade for not doing their homework. If you join the club for sure you will get a good score for doing your homework and probably get good grades for doing your homework because it helps you learn or practice at home for a test or a quiz, so maybe its a good idea to add this club to the school after school probably a few days, because it will be easy to complete your homework everyday and turn it in everyday if you join the club. If you join the club you could finish your homework early then your other classmates, if you do complete your homework early you could have free time at your house and not do any work cause you complete your homework early and not worry about doing work at home cause you already completed your work. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
E8BF036DCFA5 | Students should participate in extracurricular activities
I believe students should participate in extracurricular activities because one it keep them out of trouble, two some of the activities keep them healthy, and three they are fun.
One reason students should participate in extracurricular activities is because they keep most students out of trouble. For example, it can keep the students occupied so they don't have to be on the streets. Another example is sometimes these activities can help them relax and keep them calm so they stay out of trouble.
Another reason is some of the activities can keep them healthy. For example students can do football or basketball which keeps them running and keeps them in good shape. They can also do lift training after school which keep them fit and all around healthy.
Last but not least these activities are fun. There are always a lot of activities and you can always find something you like. For example if you like sports there are so many different sports you can do. There are also other things like drama club if you like acting, art club if you like drawing, even robotics club if you like technology and stuff like that.
Therefore these are the reasons I agree that all students should do at least one extracurricular activity. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
E8BFE6D45E41 | I think older kids should not be pair with younger kids because they can be a bad example,not being good around young ones, and not respectful to younger Kids
I think the should not be pair with younger kids. If a older kids does something bad the younger ones might do it to. It can go super wrong like if a older kid does a trick in a skateboard. The older knows how to do it. But the younger does not know how to do it he can break . Something arm or leg. One my brother was with his friend doing trick on his skateboard and i tried to do it but i fell and Brock my arm.\
I think older kid should not be around younger kids. Because they can be on drugs or be smoking who knows. That bad for younger kids if a kid see you smoking all the the smoke can go to his lungs and maybe give him cancer or die. My fiend Generic_Name brother was smoking around us we told that smoking can kill us and him bu he didn't Leasing.
I think older kid should be respectful to younger kid and everybody. So they don't to be like them if you're respectful to other younger kids can be respectful to others. But if you're not respectful other are not going to be respectful. One my friend brother was not being respectful to us so we were not being respectful to him.
This is why i think older kid should not be around younger kids. There not respectul,bad example and there not good around young kids. If the were repectful,responsible it would be ok around younger kids. | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
E8C3FA5907B0 | Dear Principle,
I think it is wrong for you to not let students with a C grade average to participate in sports or any fun activity! I think every student should be able to participate in sports and/or any other activity because the majority of the students here are still passing with a C. Also, it would be fair to any other student here to participate. Many students like to play sports such as Basketball, Baseball, Soccer, Volleyball, and much more! Also if they are not really interested into Sports they would love to go in Clubs such as a Recycle club, Art, Reading, Computers, and more! Many students would actually improve they're grades to keep on participating in sports or clubs. I really think you should let us students join.
We would appreciate the changing. Please and Thank you.
Sincerely, Student | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E8C554B25F19 | Do our character have to be formed by that way the we performed or by influences. Your character will be what yourself choose to make it. We should formed our character by influences beyond our control.
In addition, by the influences that we receive day by day we chooses how to be creating our character. For example, I introduced my character in the situations the I pass, that help me how to be a better person. Also, sometimes we take our family advice, they tried to persuade our character by doing incorrect things. In others words we can said that they just want to influences our self because they ready pass for al this things that is good because we can see how much love they have to us. Is wonderful when your mom tell you the she can't believe that way the you get influences because sometimes we don't want to get they advice but all that they said is correct event if we don't want to believe then. For example my parent always want the betters things to me but i know if i don't try to fix my character I going to have less opportunities to have a better job or a better future. Also, Things are necessary somethings is hart to change our character because we think the we are okay but other think all the appositive, so we never have to think the we are fine because the never is going to happened always we have to be better in some thing we need to be honest with our lives and accept what we are doing wrong is more better to accept our errors and there is went we are going to see how our character change in a better way and then we are going to feel happy about our character and our lives.
Moreover, The influences control our character by the way the we act and think. For example, I was a person the if something I don't like I really have to talk to you the was horrible. Also my mom help me to change my character in my way to act because went sometimes people tell me things the I really don't like I do bad faces to then, I was doing bad with that. In other way, we don't think in the consequences of having a bad character, sometimes we don't think if others are going to see the actions in our lives and they maybe are going to influences you but no we the same attitude, because some people have bad attitude to but all the influences help you in life because if you don't like the people act with a bad attitude you don't have to be like that to. Also, you have to be prepared to make the decisions of what changes you are going to make. Having a good character gives you large of opportunities people always is looking for person with a good character,because costumer look the. In addition, all thinks the people said about you help you with your character, don't feel sad because you change your way to think. Obviously the take your time because you are not going to change in one morning but with a professional character more doors are going to open and more opportunities came so take other people influences.
Some people argument the we should choose our own character traits, because some people just are going to tell you bad opinions in the way the you have to act. Moreover, some people believe the is no necessary to get a great character. In other hand we have to feel free in what we want to do we know what we need to change we don't have to do what others want because sometimes they just look for they benefits what is better for then and that dont have to be like that. In addition, some people don't care if you are okay, or how you feel. In addition others argument the is necessary listen to others influences because sometimes we don't find a way to resolve our character problems bur other know what to do and they try to find a way to make you live easy. For example, I know some people the dont know how to control they character when they are mad soy they contact person the know how to act in the situations. Also, some people take careers for find solution to person the have serious problems with they character I really dont know if is normal the people get mad went they want to eat, I have a friend with the problem in my point of view the is not normal because i never pass from the situation so I can't help her but people the have long time studying on the yes they can tell her what way to eat or i don't know but they have a solution for the problem in her character. In Addition all this problems can help you to have a good character a better attitude because is necessary for talk with other because we need to have a way a formed how to talk without breaking they feelings because as humans the we are we feel sad went other trade us with a mad face and sometimes we performed don't talk to then. So always remember the a good attitude change to many things.
In Conclusion, sometimes is necessary be influencing by other because they give you different ways how to be working in your character. In addition they received influences by other help you with the control in your character by changing a your way to act and covert you in a better person. Also help your character in a better way to think, in be focus on your ideas. In conclusion all this things are necessary in whatever way the you want to used then because in the proved of the live all things are necessary event if are smalls things they are necessary don't thing the people just influences your self in change your character because they just want to fight with not the is not like that is people is trying to give you a better influences about how you have to act because they always want better things to you. Always if you do bad on your character they are going to tell you and I thing the is more better if they tell you what you are doing wrong the others persons the you don't know came just for the just because you don't want to obey always think in you future. The is necessary a excellent character for a better work or food different's things the you want to realized. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
E8DAB90C65F7 | Working with a group or working by yourself.
There is nothing more beneficial than to have a team work, having to work with people that you like, and the people that know what to do; is one of the best thing that could ever happen to you. Now working by yourself gives you more benefits like, no one is going to steal your ideas or just copy what you do or write about which happens a lot when you are working with a team.
Working with a group is more like team work, is more like people doing less, what i mean by people doing less is that when you are working with a group you normally don't do a lot, you are all helping each others and that makes you more like a person that is not secure of yourself, is like a person that will always need someone to be helping you
Working with a group is not too bad but it can be, me as a student i do like to work with my friends but they always copying me which i do not like, it makes me feel like they will not be able to do good in life without me. Is sad the way they always have to be in a team to be a better person in life, which is not fair because some times they are not even the person that did the work.
I prefer to work alone better than to work with a team, is not like i do not like to work with other people; that is just how i am. When i work with other people i feel like it doesn't benefits me because they are either cheating or not helping, working by myself makes me feel more me, it makes me want to keep going without having to worry about others. It makes me feel like i can do more without having to need help from others.
In this world i have learned so much things, i have learned that you need to put you first, you need to think about you first, also that you need to have your own back. Working with a group in my opinion is something that should never happen, you might be asking why?. and my answer is that you should never feel useless, you should always think about yourself. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
E8E07D453C9B | Technology allows people to complete many tasks, without having contact with others. People can check out books, shop, and play games without speaking to another person has limitation on humans contact due to the use of technology had positive or negative effects on people's lives. I believe that technology had positive effects on people's lives because we can talk with people in long distance, working online without driving,and find new friends.
The first reason is that technology had positive effects on people's lives is because we can talk with our family that are not with us. Also when we missed them we can video call each other, and know about each others life. For example if there was no technology we can't talk with our families that are in long distance. And we don't know about each other, and maybe we will forget each others by the time past. That's why technology is the best thing that we have in our lives. Everyone should have technology because it's important for them and maybe something happen to you like accident and your family can find you by using their technology and find where the accident is happen. furthermore you can use technology when you are sick and you can't go to your work you can call your boss to tell him/her that you can't come today, if there was no technology it wasn't possible to do these things.
Second reason is that technology had positive effects on people's lives because people can work online without driving and vesting their time. Initially when you working online you can save your money and can do all of your work in your house. However that's good because if you have a children and you want to be with her/him it can help you because you can do your work and be with your child. Furthermore if you can't drive and you wish to work at home technology will help you to work online without driving long distance. Furthermore technology is good thing when you want to travel you can travel and at the same time you can work by your technology, and you can make more money.
Third reason is that technology had positive effects on people's lives that we can find new friends ,culture and new languages. Initially when you go to social media you can see different people with different culture and you want to know about their culture and their languages, so technology will help you to communicate with them and ask them question about their religion, country and etc. Furthermore when you going to some other country that you don't know your way technology will helps you to find your way. For example when you going to the country that you love to know about that country more but you can't ask question because you don't know the people, and their language in there, also you lost yourself in there you can't talk or ask them for help. That's when you can use technology to helps you, you can talk with them by using your phone translator.
Technology had positive effects on people's lives technology helps people with more stuff, and they can use technology as a useful thing we use technology for everything. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
E8E60E149B48 | New ideas always help us in life. Some people think people should make their on decisions, it's easy to see both sides, but one stands out people should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters, because new ideas can help us decide something and guidance help us when we're confused to make that decision.
First, new ideas can help us decide something that we're not sure to decide. Guidance can explain what you want; they can tell us what is better for us or if something going to work. Guidance is really help full in life, if we didn't have guidance in our life would be a little hard for decide things. New ideas can help you decide something.
next, guidance help us when we're confused to make decision or don't know what to do. Guidance can help in our future and they help you decide witch idea is better for you and for your future. They always know what is better for us.
The other side, some people think that we should make our on decision, it make since, because it make us have responsibility and always know what we want, but what if you do the wrong decision and you can't change the decision, because you already choose it. That's why people can't make decision alone.
Concluding, people should choose guidance, not just choose your own idea or talk about it with someone because you can make the wrong decisions. New ideas can make people think more and make a good idea. Always think twice before make your own decision. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 |
E8EE54F7A2AD | As students are getting involved in activities and extracurricular activities and get better in their educational experiences and others students are having short time to do their homework and assigments, so this decision should be left to students and families and sometimes school should control.
Some students already know what they want for their future life and doing this activities they are enriching their educational experiences and getting ready for what they want to do for their future, so in this possition shools should not control this envolment on this activites instead they have bad grades, missing classes or being absent to school. for example my friend Generic_Name likes technology and he is taking an academic class and to take that class he needs to go to another school but luckly his main school gives him the opportunty to take him to the another school, and he already know that this class will help him on his career and his taking care of his grades and at the same time taking care about his academic class.
Now there are other students that are doing this activiteis and they are nnot totaly about what they are doing and they are forgetting about their shool. So if this is happenning is when schools shouold control students envolment in this activities because they will have bad grades on their classes and will miss school year and this will afect thier careers. for example , I do not kniw what I really want for my future and I am getting involved in many activities at school but I am not forgettimg about my assigments for school and I do not have basd grades.
In conclusion there could be reasons when schools should or should not control about students involment in this extracurricular activities because sometimes they will have question aboout something so school may help to answer their questions. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E8F6D6EA06F1 | Should you agree to letting the school board add one and a half hour to the school days.
I disagree because it will make students less excited to come back to school the next day.
Students already have the work they have to do after school, adding more time to the schools will give less time for what the students have to do once they get home.
Students have the work in school that they get normally, but once the school board adds more time, the students will have the stress that they don't need.
The time that the school board adds will impact the students time, stress, and family management.
Students will come to school with less happiness.
Once the student gets to the school, they will have to do the same work with more time that they could have used to do their daily needs.
Students need the time with their love ones so that they could get work off of their minds.
Students will have to come back to school with one and a half less time to regain their thoughts and sleep for the next day.
Giving more time to schools will effect student's daily plans.
When the student goes home its for their time to get the work form the school done and to enjoy the time with their family.
Adding more time will effect the family time together, in replace that they will have to work on the time they wanted to talk with their family.
Students will argue to the school that it is unfair that they have to have more time in school, then they will be mad that they have to take one and a half hour away from the time they get out of school.
Adding more time to the school will put more stress on the students.
Students already have work on their mind when they are in school, adding more time will just add more work that leads to stress.
Once the student has stress they have to find a way to get it out but, they have to to work in the school and get work to do at home gives the student no time to get it out.
The stress that the student has can build up to make it turn to anger and frustration, the they can use it in means that they will regret in t he future.
Adding one and a half hour can put students in a tight spot.
Students will be upset to come to school, given what they have heard.
Students have to budget their time after school.
Work can give students stress that they don't need to have.
Having more time in school can lead to problems that the students don't want and need. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E8F77B7EB4D9 | Should people judge you what you want to do in life? or should you follow what your heart desire that is right for you? I think you should live your life how you want it to live it, what you want to achieve in the future, what is your main goal to do when you're done with high school or college. Nobody can't make you want you don't want to do life because it's your life not theirs they can't tell you what you can do or not, like no you're the that can control you body, mind and life not them.
The one person who has my back since I was kid and encourage me to keep from giving up in life is my older brother. My brother has taught me some many things that are good and what are bad in life. He told that I can live my life how I want it to live because nobody can't make your decisions what you want or not to do. He told me that he has gone through a lot things in the past like the people that he called as "friends" or "family"
try to take advantage of him what he didn't want to things that they wanted him to do, so what he did was that is he spoke up to all the people that wanted to do this and that you can't tell him what to do or can't push me to doing things that he doesn't like. Then after all that he learned that he will never let the haters get into his head and take his life and use him like a toy, so he told me that is that if people try to do use you or say that can't be this in the future all you have to is do ignore everyone who tries to get in the way in the way of your life. Fight for what you desire in life, don't let anyone get in negativity go through your head just turn it to them something postive or take that negativity and use as motivation to make you work harder in life to show them what you can do by yourself.
Life is everything you have one live to live to fullest your parents has brought you into this world becasue he knows you have something speical hidden you that can maybe change the world . I believe everyone can achieve there by just following there heart and mind with no one interfering what you like to do for a living, but if you get lost or need help along your path to success ask someone that is very close to you that you know who has back no matter what that understand you that ain't trying to ruin your life should always choose people wisely. Always be yourself and live your life how you want to live it and never give up. | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
E91431653DE3 | Prompt
The author Waldo Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, about to be individuality. I disagree with him because there are many occasions that you need help from someone in life. Is not just to be individual is to know how to management your life in your time. In this essay i will talk about some ways the we can work together. Firts i will explain about, job issues and results. Second i will explain about society, and how can be relative to be not a individual person. Finally i will expain how to take decisons, and to make them work. This may prove that individuality doesn't change the you can not be, what you want be.
There are many ways the can be a ocation of individuality. In your job, might be someone you do not like, because his or her behave. You can try to work with the person, is not just be a individual person, beause you might need the help of the person one day. If your try to work with the person to broke the individuality between the person in you, that can be a avance to be relative to other people. Another occasion on individuality in your job can might be because, you are not doing what you dreamed about to be in the future. The doesn't mean the you can not fight to get your goal, if you don't like your job try to do something the you like been working in a job that you don't like is typical of individuality behave. Many companies work together as a team to get there goels, you can work with other people in your job as a company.
Some people prefert to be alone in many times, these people we can know as asocial. This people just want to be alone becuase they feel comfortable like that. There another people the doesn't like to be around others people, because they like to do the things by there own. They like to be the one the everyone see, the point of attention these people we can call as indiviluatys. Not all them are the like that, because there might be a reason to makes them to be like that. Maybe for their background. Be around of society is sometimes is more complicate then what it looks, mostly if you know people like that, but you can try to work with them or somethings these people chage. Some them beacuse they look for help and others change because someone close to them help to change for good.
We all make decisions in life but some those decisons can make us to do something wrong or to be a different person. Try to be anoter person is not just to want to be the person is to make a decision. You can make the decision to be push it by the world, or you can make your own decision of what you want to do in life. Many people take the decision to stay in a world that management their life, because they think the is better or because is the easy way. The president can deciside to work alone, and make the things as he wants but he knows the he needs to work together, we the people in the congress beacuse by himself can not do everything. As the president we can make the same, decision as him to work together or not. you can make your own goal to fight for what you want or to be constantly push it by the world to change you to be something else.
In summary we all have the decision to select which way to follow. As i went throught about job and result. Also i wrote about hoe we can live around the society, and how we can result conflicts. Finally i explaned how we can take are own decision, to be what we want to do, and what can be goal to follow to change, or fight for it. This can be a result the Ralp Waldo Emerson, is wrong about to be push it by the world constantly, beacuse you change that and be what you want to be. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E91D1A0039C3 | Sometimes is really hard to get this opportunities. If students get the chance to learn about what they like they should take advantage of it. They might learn things that interested them. Although some students think this opportunities are useless, actually it opens a lot of doors at a young age to learn about the things they like. For some students this is a big privilege. Find out who they are.
A few of this students are not really insterested in this opportunities. They tend to think that is useless just because they don't have the program they are insterested in. Normally people get use to the things they like, and they don't want to learn new things. Sometimes is hard to see that learning about new things could give huge benefits.
Other students realize that it could be fun to learn about new things. If they are lucky enough they could find the career they like. When kids start to go to school teachers always ask them to think about what they want to be when they grow up. Almost everyone wants to be a policeman, a fireman, a teacher, or a doctor. When they grow up their way of thinking chances. Kids realize that there are a lot of other things that they could like. While others grow with the same mentality. Some of them make it happen, but some others change their mind in the way. It does not only happens when they are little. It could happen when they grow up, so they should give it a try to new things. It might be better than it looks.
Also, If they find the program they like and try it out they might find out if they truly like it. I had a friend, and he really loved psychology. He took the class this year because he thought it could be interesting. Midway through the year he found out that he is not so good at it. Although it was too late to back up he realized that psychology was not what he was looking for. Sometimes people believe they have what they want and that there is nothing that could stop it. They all should have a second plan in case plan A is not working so well. Everyone should be ready just incase there is a rush change, and they have to take a decision in less than a day. They have to hope the best and get ready for the worst.
Some students think this opportunity is lame for not having what they want to learn about. Some others see that there are a lot of benefits in it and go for it. I classify myself as the kind of student that takes new chances. I also have two careers in mind. I know if one of them fails me I still have the other one. This is why I should get the opportunity to go. I truly want to know if the careers I have in mind are what I want to do the rest of my life. If in any case there was not what I am interested in then I will try new things. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 |
E91F2E8986B2 | If you master a subject you like and dont try pushing your limits you wont succeed.
Why wouldnt you want to push your limits?
Theirs a reason why people get stuck in life, when they master their subject.
They get fustrated when they can't find jobs or good pay wage.
I agree on what Author Ralph Waldo Emereson because if you dont have that motivation on what you master it can affect you.
If you dont push yourself into doing more than beyond than life will not treat you as you wanted.
I agree on Author Ralph because I've experience things in life that if you dont try on something , than you wont be able to grow.
If you look at bill gates he master on his program and what did he do he share his product and open stores. He grew just by mastering his program. My experience was mastering in learning how rebuild a engine from just the block to how to make more power. Now im fixing peoples cars and doing tunes for their cars.
I know these guys that called themself diesel brothers. They are master diesel technician. So what did they do? They bought a shop , got a crew and got sign to do a tv show. They work on diesel trucks, diesel cars and anything that is diesel. Then they decided to do custom trucks and custom military cars. That wasn't enough for them, so they came up with ideas to use military axles and putting them on custom trucks making those trucks so heavy duty they can even pull a train!
My father told me that you should never stop, even if you reach that goal. He said," you reach that goal make another goal, you can't stop at what your doing and if you do,than theirs going to be bumps in the road and than your going to make huge mistakes." just from those words it's like million bucks to me. Why because if you stop at what you master ,than somebody is going to master it better than you ever thought and your not going to grow from it.
When they master their subject, those people get happy right but whats next? Lets say you master your subject and than you find a job that pays good. The money looks good and you stay at that job for a couple of years. I'd say that probably 75 percent of you staying at that job will make your miserable. People get bored and can't find nothing else to do,but do the exact samething over again. It's going to make you want ot quit and find something else to do. Then once you quit your job what's going to be in your mind? Probably nothing at the moment,but then your realize that you master that subject and want to share it, make it to your own business and improve from it.
So I do agree on what Author Ralph waldo Emerson wrote. I believe that if you dont go beyond your goal than you wont succeed in life. So make sure that you push yourself even if its harder. I promise you that you will succeed,have better thought, better examples and freedom. Remember having to do more you will get more in return. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
E926BE6F104E | Working in a group can be helpful. Working alone is also good for you because you can focus and get the job done without being distracted. Seeing people working in groups shows that really only 2 people do the work and the rest play around. You also dont get the full learning experince working in a group than you get working alone. When you work in a group you dont know your strengths and weaknesses your just wondering what to do but when working alone, you can realize what you need help on and what you dont need help on. Working in a group can make you lazy, because you depend on your group to do the work for you most of the time.
Personally I would rather work alone than work with a group. Working alone gives you peace, quiet and space that will help you work at a fast pace. When you work alone you tend to ask your teacher qustions in order to help you and thats good. Its also gives you the power to do what you thinks right. Working in a group, you cant do what you think is right the whole group gets to decide the answer. Working alone can also benifet you by your grade they show you how well you did on it or if you did bad. If you did bad then you can study and see what your missing out on and that can make you better and understand the topic correctly next time. My personal preference is working alone even though working in a group that could be a great experince I'd rather work alone. It gives me motivation to get my work done faster then not caring. You can get distracted and carried away fast at this day and age. Alot of students love to work alone its a great time to themselves and to finish their work. Working alone saves you the trouble of getting blamed for something you shouldn't have been blamed for.
So i think working alone is more benificial for everyone. Unless you are assigned a project and its due very quickly then thats the perfect way to work in a group. But thats a whole different story. At the end of the day i will rather choose to work alone than in a group but some might think otherwise. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
E952F0EB5083 | Former British Prime Minister once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". I disagree with this statement. In my own experiences I have never failed to succeed, I have always failed to fail. In 7-11th grade I have tried out for my school basketball team and never made the team. I have also experienced doing something on my first try and succeeding, Failure never brings success.
All through out my life i wanted to play basketball for my school. The only problem was every year I tried out i never made the team. This year I am a senior in high school and still havent played basketball for my school. I have realized that no matter how good I got it wasnt enough. Personally i can not relate with failing to succeed because it has not happened to me. I have never been able to fail and then succeed.
I can say from my own experiences. Somethings just come to you and your able to keep being good at it. While there are also things that are not able to do on the first try or ever. For instance my seventh grade year I was trying out for football. I had never played a game or ever tried out. First try and boom I am on the football team. I played left tackle and was a starter for "A-team". I had never played before and I was already starting. I didnt fail to succeed, I just succeeded.
As a result from the facts I have stated. I do not believe or agree in "failing comes success". Failing happens to everyone and I have yet to hear someone say " I failed to succeed". It is very uncommon for someone. If it has not happened to me in all of my seventeen soon to be eighteen years of life i dont believe it is possible. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
E966121134B7 | The life of the some student's, of wants superate.
I believe and think,that all student's already graduate of the schools or university,they can work in a place where they can have some opportunity. Also they can putting in practic or demostrate your habilities.
However , I think that they could should of the best effort about their, and then they can remember all the things about they learning while they be studied,as well i think that all the estudents that they do not have age for to work ,like student of the14 or 15 years ald they can have a righ for to have a part time. although,nobady can be deny one job for the students want to have a job for getting more experience.
In my opinion , every student, they can have a right, to demostrate your habilities,and then they can have more ideas,and get more experience for survive in his life. also they can be more smart, while they putting in practices your habilities,because they are gona putting the best effort. even think that they can be indepent by your self,also they gonna reconize all the effort of the parents didint for their Also too i think they can choice what carrier they would like to take or they can be think what is better for their or what is gonna helping in the future for getting a better life,that is my conclussion,about what are talking. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E969EF7D2D8A | Given students a long summer opportunities would give them the chance to take a restful break from all the ethic school year they have being having.
Most students enjoy summer break vacation. but some educators feel that the summer is too long because students has a long summer vacation would take the time to review their school year and go to summer school for makeup class while others are planing to spend time with their families . Though others are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. I think it not a great idea because Most students thinks the long summer is a great opportunity for them to participate in some various positive activities and for them to sets a standard goal for themselves.
Most students should get a long summer break because they have to take their time and review their work and go to summer school for a make up class that would help them to get credits back or graduates the coming years. Imagine have in a break during the summer, would any students have the chances of making up class work during the winter? or would they even think about the ideas of doing a class makeup?. I think no because they would be giving an excuse about the snowy weather and the real cold weather and schools would be canceling which would affects the process of curriculum on what the class are learning. for example during the winter when we sometimes gets a snowy weather we cancel schools and that one day that school get cancel it affects most teachers planing on what they should do for that day. For instance the school would have to take a week off of that summer break so that the teacher would have time to complete what he or she has to teach the students. Therefor students needs a longer summer break to succeed on their goal.
Meanwhile other students need a long summer breaks to spend a long time with their families because they has already spend a long school learn especially the once that had honors class also the students who are in college. Most students who spends some quality time with their family might have a better chance of setting up a goal for the next school year by all means because they are getting a better advice from their family, for example I had a understanding that students who spent the most time with their family discussing their school year would get motivated and has a goal for themselves before the new school year, meanwhile in the winter break, you wont have that much time to spend with your family, because most of your family who live far across would most likely not want to come visit because of the winter. For example when during the winter most of my family who lives abroad or out of states would never come to visit us during the winter break because they said it winter and it really cold, while in the summer each and everyone of our family would come to visit because we spend some quality time together and they always give me some good advice on how to be successful on my education and what goal I should set to gain my success.
Finally though other are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. With this opinion, I think am little bit agree because during the winter the snowy weather kind of disrupt everything or activities that was supposed to happened during the school year. Meanwhile another hands the students does not have to missed a week or weeks to school but a day or two. Therefor they should get a long summer break even tho they would gets a week or two off, for instance I believe if they get a a day or two there would be no chances for them to forgets everything they learned during the time school opens to the beginning of winter. for example if they miss one or two days they would have a day to revised their notes and maybe be prepare for a coming test or quiz in the future, never the ;less they wont have to study for too long for a test or quizzes again.
In conclusion
Most students enjoy summer break vacation. but some educators feel that the summer is too long because students has a long summer vacation would take the time to review their school year and go to summer school for makeup class while others are planing to spend time with their families .
because Most students thinks the long summer is a great opportunity for them to participate in some various positive activities and for them to sets a standard goal for themselves. Though others are thinking that students should have a year round school where there would be a three to four weeks in the summer and a longer winter break but meanwhile a week off in spring and fall break because during snow days the students would have no school and they would get to go to school while it really cold outside. And I believe that students should always have the opportunity to have a long break especially a long summer break. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
E96C0F9CE5E3 | True self-steem come from praise,praising someone for at least try to do their best built self confident. However,deficient work always need new ideas from experts and people that know about the topic,another praise given, can be tips, to get a work better next time.
Praising someone for their effort of trying to get a adecuated work done ,let them know that get better each day, its a opportunity, that they can make. When a student is self-confident, is less insecured with every step that they make and can keep going without tryng to go back to were they have started. Give away some ideas,tips and reasons to improve their self with a second chance. Sometimes people have no self confident and help then to built one,can be a really good praise, not apreciate someone else effort ,to make a really hard task for them, can give the impression of being a bad person or a person that does not want them to improve.
Others believe that praise given to deficient work undermines learning by lowering standards. They believe that the source of self-steem is achievement. That being hard and strict with students would make them strong to commite their task.
Student's can broke easily, help them find a good way to improve is being a good teacher,praise them for mistakes but still telling them one way to keep going. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
E96C123FAC95 | CHOOSE YOUR OWN CHARACTER
The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote,"Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? Take a position on this issue. Do we need to choose are own character traits yes, or no? In my opinion I will say yes we need choose our character because If we choose our character we can be wherever we want, good,or bad person, etc and we are going to do a good job if we choose our own character traits.
First, If I choose my own character I will give my best work because I choose my own character, and I'm going to feel very comfortable, and so happy to do it my character. For example, I remember one friend from my country hi's name were Generic_Name and he was doing a activity school was theater, and they were doing the story of Little Red Raiding Hod, and he was acting the wolf he was the bad gay, and he did a really good job I was so impressed, I remember he say in the stories I always I'm going to be the bad guy because the bad guy is the second most important character, and is the conflict of the story the one who make interesting the story.
Next, you can develop and demonstrate your skill acting, If you choose your own character because you are going to do a great work, and you are going act like you are a real actor and maybe you can discover acting, If have a passion of acting. For example, I hear some stories about actor. How they like acting, and they say in the first time they didn't liked to act but them there was starting like how they act, that how they like to acting because it's fun to act, and you can enjoying acting with your friends.
Finally, If I do one character I don't like, or I don't choose probably I'm not going to give my best work because I'm not going to feel comfortable or exacting to do it. For example, I remember like 3 years ago In my English 9 class we do a act about Romeo And Juliet and they give my the character of the guard and I was not exacting to do it, so I didn't do very well but I try I think If I try maybe I will like the character but I didn't liked that why I prefer to choose my own character.
In conclusion, If you choose your own character you are going to do a good job and great work, you are going to demonstrate and develop your skill acting If you do the character you choose, and if you do a character you did choose you probable are not going to do a great job, or maybe you are not going care about the character this are the reason why is good to choose a character them someone give you a character. So remember choose your own character don't wait Intel someone give you a character,and don't forget is telling you the one who wrote the article. >_< | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E9705A9C0FE5 | In this prompt i agree and disagree, because in societies now in days some students do know for sure what career they want to study/become when older. Some students don't know exactly what they want to study/ become when older. It all depends on the student, For example if the student is for sure on what they want to be when older. Thats because either since they where little they have always like firefighters or a police officer. Once growing up they notice they can become one too and follow there dream on being something they have always loved since they where young. Also it could be that there Mom or Dad, or a family member that was or in the military or a firefighter. That want to follow those steps too, and make their family members proud. They also took interest on what their family member do or have done in life.
Now for the student who are not sure of what they exactly want to be once their older/ study. Some students are actually not sure what they are interested in doing and need help finding what they would love to study about, or some students wants to explore and have options to see what they are most interested in doing for the future. Students who dont know for sure what they want to be when older , needs help finding their interest because most of the time their shy on going into a class with new people they don't know. Also in high school their are academy and sometimes the class you pick are not at the school you go to so a bus would take you to that school. And some students are scared to go to another school because they dont know that school so well. In other cases that i haven't really heard of as much as the other ones, that they are scared to study what they love because they dont want to be judged by other people or also because their parents wants them to study to become a doctor or a lawyer when really they want to be a police officer or something else that they are interested in. So its hard for them to become what they really want to be in the future.
I would agree and disagree in this prompt, i disagree because some students dont actually know what they want to be when older, and i agree because some students already know what they want to some as their career. Some are shy, some are scared, and some already know for sure what they want to study about. For example me, at first when i was little i didnt know what i wanted to be. my whole life till this day i am an animal lover. I rather live with animals then humans to be honest. So i thought of be a veterinarian, but people told me that i would have to do surgery on animals and stuff like that and at some things its good because i am saving their lives, but im not always going to save their lives so i didnt want to be a veterinarian because i didnt want to be hurt my whole life work like that. So i moved on to following my dads foot steps, becoming part of the Marine Corps. My dad was in the Marine Corps and fought in the Vietnam war, he also worked as security in the American embassy in Generic_City. I also love doing makeup, since i was little i would always play with makeup and growing up i would buy a lot of makeup but didnt really know how to use the products. until i started by little learning how to use the products. Now a big makeup store at the mall offered me a job their because they loved the way i do my makeup. Growing up i started seeing my interest and also had options on what i would like to do in the future. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
E974548BFD00 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered,you will never grow". Doing something that you have already mastered means that you won't grow. I agree with what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because it is always good to try new things. Would you want to try something new and master it or keep doing the same thing?
First, people can challenge themselves with new things so they can experience life with obstacles. Challenging themselves means that they will try to do something even when its hard. Challenging people with hard things means that they are not going to give up even when it gets hard. Why wouldn't you want to challenge yourself with new things?
It's good to try new thing because doing something that you have already mastered is good but what about trying to master something else. If you want to grow even more it would be better to step out of your comfort zone and experience new things.
Also, Having more experience with life means that you are growing up. Growing up means that you would have to try new things and not only stick to one subject. Wanting to try new things in life is good because your brain functions better and you get more knowledge. You will have more knowledge in your brain which means that you could master more and more things. Mastering something is good because you get to have more self esteem and you will feel good about yourself. Feeling good about your self is really important because you will need the motivation to master something in life. You can't master anything without having motivation because then it will be a mess and it wont turn out good.
Therefore, wanting to try new things is good because you can be open minded. You can also have many ideas that you could jot down. Wanting to try new things gives you a lot of ideas on what you want to master. In the process of thinking of an idea to master you get so excited that there is a lot of planning and ideas in your head on what to master in. It is always good to feel confident because without confidence and motivation you wont have the energy to do what you originally wanted to do in the first place. Trying new things is also good for your social life because you will come in contact with people that has so many creative ideas and you can talk to them and they would probably help you on what your ideas can be.
However, not challenging yourself with new thing,having more experience with life,and wanting to try new things may not be good you could end up being comfortable at where you are at. Being comfortable is good but not challenging yourself to do whats best is bad because your not giving yourself enough credit. If you don't work hard to master something that you truly want to master in then there is no point in trying to master it. If you dont try to master in anything you wont have any hope and you will become lazy and you will stop trying the hard work that you are trying to do. Trying new things is apart of life and if you don't do that than you would struggle a lot in life.
In conclusion, challenging yourself,having more experience with life,and wanting to try new things is better than being comfortable at where you are at in life, being lazy,stop trying,and don't want to try new things which means that you will start struggling in life. having new experiences is better than only having old experiences because with new experiences you have a fresh start and a clean plate. You get to have a better life because you're going to be having a lot of things that you would want to master. Giving up is never the right thing because than you wont get anything you want. You have to work in order to get what you want because life doesnt give you anything for free. Many people want to grow and do other things so that they can master at it. Wouldn't it be cool if you were the first person to master anything you wanted? | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
E98862049B2E | I would like to be a guidance counselor because to help kids with problems or personal. To show that the counselor is here to help with anything. To give them advice on how to be confident and everything goes all wrong and soon it will get better. If they are getting bully to support them and give them advice or with personal problems to. To show the its okay to fell sad and hurt soon it will okay and to show them to not let people boss you around to show that they can't boss you around you boss your self around and to be brave and take a risk and to see the world in a different way. Remember that some one will always be here to support you and will always be here for help and get you through thing that make you feel mad or sad. Cheer up you day with some happiness and I choose the job because I want to help kids on what they are going through and to put a smile on their faces and my counselor supported me and my family i want to help another family like he/she did you me. to help student that dont have money, food ,and clothing. Students can ask me for anything like my counselors did for me and my family and they inspired me to want to be a counselor and help others and to ask for help when you ever need it. In conclusion not asking for help to your counselor is not going to get you anywhere. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 |
E98FABC326F7 | ways to help improve students achievements in after school clubs.
after school homework clubs would be helpful because students can understand more about what they are doing, for example when a student has difficulty in one of there subjects,and they need help they can stay after school to get a better understanding on what they need help on.
other ways after school clubs would help the students focus more on the certain problems they need, but over all after school homework clubs is a great way for students to express there knolage and there concern on what help they might need help on over all.
after school homework club can help know the children strength and weakness for example me when I stay back for math after school my teacher helps me know what I need to work on to decrease my weakness for instance, me and my math teacher she helps me go throw steps to learn easy ways to decrease my weakness in different problems that I dont understand. other ways she helps me on to decrease my weakness is by giving real life problems and showing me ways to solve them and getting the questions right .
having after school clubs can help teachers and the students know were there strength and weakness are.
the after school club can help classmates have one on one conversations on what they understand and do not understand learning from other people can help you because they might know problems that you dont understand but they do. like for instance my friends at my school they get more help from classmates then they do teachers.
having a after school club for students can bring a positive impact on them and others around them and also it can be fun. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
E9947D032E7B | What is the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world? Today some people think the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world is doing, they favorite things and they feel proud to be like you want. In other hand, when you love yourself or if you value who are you in this world nobody can change yourself, as your accomplishment is to be better in this world and your best accomplishment is your goal, Because you accomplishment guide your future, you love how you are and never give up in your accomplishment.
People in day the greats accomplishment, it's to be better everyday, in make happy yourself when you try to better with you and always you do your accomplishment real, because you have a courage to do your think, although many time is had but never give up. You accomplishment in yourself can change your future. ' My dad one day he told me, if you don't have accomplishment, you don't can to live the life because you accomplishment make your future, no body can do your accomplishment just you my beautiful daughter" This show us like nobody can change yourself and decide for you just you can do it, because it's your decision what you want to do in your future, but never forget your accomplishment in yourself can be stronger in the future.
Some people don't like, how you are but in this life the most important is how much your love yourself, because other people can to critic you, but never put attention what people think or said because your plane it's to be better and you could be who change the world and put example in other people because if you don't love yourself you cannot be stronger in the future, but it's beautiful when you love yourself, you can to respect other people, you will be kind and always you be happy. "My Teacher told me Generic_Name. Are you love yourself? Why asking you that because you are beautiful and you have a future in your live you can be more like you can image." This show us like love yourself because nobody want to do for you and the love is for share with other people.
Finally, never give up in your accomplishment, because it's important to know what you want to do and what do you want, sometimes like you want it's not like how you planed but for that never give up, always will be a wake, but not always too everything be wrong, just you need to have a courage and to get everything in your accomplishment in yourself is the power. When you see your accomplishment real you will be proud, because was your brain and yourself
" My grandma told me. Never give up when you accomplishment is in front you." This show us although it's difficult to realize your accomplishment always think in everything what do you want in yourself.
Conclusion, the greats accomplishment to be yourself in the world, it's to do your things what you love and love yourself, because all this is important to have a better life and have a conversation with people, but happy an share all positive opinion with them. "The life is one so live like if you don't have tomorrow". | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
E9BFBEA772EF | I would like for you to consider hiring me for the job. I'm responsible and a quick learner I will take responsibility of my job that is given to me. I'll learn any skills necessary for the job. I'll be respectful of all my peers in our company show a good image of our company, so I'll do my job to the best of my ability. I'll show up on time to my job, and do my very best in my job.
To begin with, a good reason to hire me is I'm responsible and take responsibility of my duties in my job as an employee. If your looking for someone to hire here are some of my qualities to ensure your trust. For example, in school I always am on time to my classes and respectful of my teachers. If you hire me I will make sure to arrive on time and be respectful to all employees and customers. Then I'll work with you and improve on my skills and gain a lot of experience. In conclusion, I'll work hard and be responsible, but I also will learn quick the abilities needed for the job.
Secondly, I'll learn the skills necessary for the job as quick as possible. So that I'll help you in any situation to provide the best service to our customers. For instance, in school I'm a quick I've learned any subject in school within 2 to 3 days of practice. If I learn quickly I could use the knowledge I have to teach new employees that come to work. Then the company will have more production for our customers to benefit from. Simply put, I'll make sure to give my advice to new employees so our company can serve our customers to the best of our ability. I promise to be respectful to my peers and most importantly our customers.
Lastly, I'll be respectful to my boss and my peers and do as I'm instructed to do. I'm aware that being respectful to our customers is a priority in our company. As an employee I will give the best service possible to our customer and insure them of any doubts they may have. If I get the job I will ensure you that I'm qualified for the job and that you are getting a good employee. Then I will give the best of my service to any customer and learn more about other areas, so I can be of more help to other customers. These are the three reasons you should hire me for the job.
In conclusion, I would like to get hired to gain experience in any job position you may have. Learn new skills in any job position that will help me satisfy any customers needs. I'll learn my job as quick as possible to start helping as many people as I can. I will be respectful to customers, employees and managers. I'll show up on time to my job and take responsibility of my job and work hard and help in any situation I'm needed in. To conclude I want you to hire me knowing I'm the most qualified person for the job. | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
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