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F2DE30047DF9 | They shouldn't extend the school day two hours , because every student have a schedule they run everyday like going to work , playing a sport , or any a school club they are in. The student would like a four day school week but they don't want a extra two hour in school this is a disadvantages if they was considering doing a four day school and only get a few hours to them self and going to school really early. The good benefits of it is that the student gets to have a three day weekend for the whole school year and more time to finish there homework or the work they missing to catch up with there grade for that class. The other disadvantages is if those other two was added the student is not going to pay attention and lose there focus on the lesson also there work or fall asleep in class. If i went to a school that had extra two hours I probable not pay any attention to my teacher or lose my focus and go to sleep till school finish. A other good benefit is that they can shorty the school year and make the holidays week longer or spring break longer. Those are same of good and bad reason toward this topic about having a four day school week i think it could be a some what a great idea so they can have a extra day to relax. Overall this is my opinion and thoughts for having a four day school week. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F30AD5A2B74A | Do you agree with "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm, yes or not? I agree with Churchill's statement of success consists of going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiams because not all the time we can win or make the things perfect. For example, when I took my English test last year in my English class. I practiced a lot and I did my best for taking A+ or maybe B+, but I did pass the test. I was very sad, however, my teacher told me that I had a second chance. So, I took it and this time I passed with A-, I was so excited. To fall out the test made me to understand that it doesn't matter how many times we can fall out about what we want, we only need to be strong and try as much as we can for being successful. Moreover, this year my aunt was trying to travel to El salvador, but when she called to the airline for buying the ticket, the tickets were so spends and she doesn't have to much money, so she decided to wait few months. seven month ago she called again to the airline and the prices tickests increase more money, but she didn't want to continue waiting more time so she decided to buy it, when she was buying the tickets the person told to her of her ID was already expire, so she can not buy the ticket. My aunt was sad because she did not remember about to renew her documents, but she went to renew her documents some weeks later and after that she has to wait at less three months to receive the new ID. at this time the three months already pass and she didn't receive her ID, she's really sad because she wants to go visit my grandmother. even thoug she can't travel yet, she doesn't lose her enthusiasm of travel this year to my country. Churchill's statement of success consists of going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm is more than true because anybody is perfect and we need to fall out for learn lessons and learn to be stronger persons in the life. some people think this statement is not true because some of them loss multiple times for being successful in their life. also, they say when the person loss the first two times they're losers, stupy persons, or other bad things that are not right. in my oponion this cause happend to them or they are saing that because they loss their enthusiams and become weak person. in conclusion, for being successful we have to fall out in the life, like when i fall out my test and with my aunt cause. this teach to everyone to be stronger person and never lose their enthusiams of be successful in each persons life. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
F3259CFA6566 | Being yourself brings out the better you in a person. When you are yourself your a better person because your not changing yourself to be someone your not. Sometimes its good to change in your life but don't loose the way you are to be someone worse because your attitude and personality is what stands out the most in you. Most people change because they want to be a better person or they are tired of being so quiet and keep to themselves. The way someone is shows the kind of person you are and to try to change back to the person your not anymore could be difficult because you are changing your ways as a person.
Firstly; being yourself means you are unique in your own way. You don't have to change yourself to prove a point to someone. No matter how mean, rude, disrespectful you are you can't really change the reason I say that is because that is how you are already as a person. Most changes can occur maybe from someone loosing another person like they passed away and it hurts you so much you loose yourself as a person. Changes can reflect you as to what goes on in your life. Like maybe you suffer from abuse, violent actions, or even depression that can change you as a person. Just by being yourself and pushing yourself to change can be such a big change in your life even maybe to your family that are already used to you being a certain way. If you want to change your way of being change to be someone better the who you are now because out don't want to be the person everyone talks about. Just by being yourself you should care about what other people think about you because you are who you are and no one can change that.
Secondly; just by changing you can loose your inner self. You had already been trying to be someone that you like or maybe even respect. If you want to change you should do it for yourself don,t do it for your friends because at the end of the day they won't care who you are or what you are. Most of who you are and what you do can reflect you as a person of good. One thing my grandma would say to me is " sweetie be yourself don't change yourself for anyone because no one will respect you and love you like your family will". Be you don't push your inner self away because no matter how rude and annoying you are your still one of the best person in your family. No one deserves to be changed just because people think your not a good person already. Show your inner person because you are probably hiding someone you haven't brought out yet. Most people can bring you down just by talking about you are even getting other people to hate you maybe because your to quite or your not a good person. Be you unique in your own way and show everyone that you are good with who are already.
Thirdly; your personality shows your character as one. No one wants to b friends with someone that he or she is better than everyone else because thats not true. You should always show where you come from even if you are poor and dont live in such a beautiful house. One reason i could say is because most of those things show that you dont care about what people think or say bout you because everyone stands out as who they are. Don't be someone you'll eventually regret being because that could reflect on you changing. If one of your friends, cousins, siblings stops talking to you dont bring out a mean person you weren't supposed to be because they could pull away from you and not want to be near you again. You also can't be a coward just because someone gives you advice on changing the way you are because maybe they are trying to help you be someone better and of good. Be the person that stands out for being himself or herself and not the one that everyone says oh they copy everything
I get or ever wanted to be more popular somewhere be more known as a person.
Fourthly; Changing back someone you had already change to can be difficult because you had already pushed away the person you didnt want to be. Trying to go back to that person you used to be can be long ago by the time you try to change back to that person. Most of the people that pushed away from you now may never come back because of you changing who you are and or were at one point. Most of things you did to change yourself can just now affect you and can never be out back together again. Be yourself dont be that person that tries to back to him or herself just because you dont like the now you. You decide to change to be a better person so move on and keeping that person you wanted to be at one point. You've changed for a reason so now you should em braise it and love your change. Who you chose to be will be that same person you'll possibly be one you are more grown into life.
Lastly; be yourself and dont try to change yourself to be someone your not. Who you are now could help you throughout the rest of your life. Maybe not always be yourself but dont do it or someone that doesnt deserve to see a change in you do it for yourself. Do everything to try and be your own and unique person all at one because a lot of people would like to around you. Just by being yourself could always reflect on who you want to be once you grown up and leave from your families home. | 5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 |
F347A054A1AF | The positive attitude is the key to success in life? The people that have positive attitude is happy most of the time. However people with a bad negative attitude is upset and angry most of the time. The Marjory of people think that been positive is the key to success in life. Because been positive in your life help you to not get stress, and in your future you will be a happy person with a good friends. The positive attitude is the key to success in life, because when people have a positive attitude they are more interesting, amusing, and responsible.
People with a positive attitude are more interesting than someone that have a negative attitude because when someone is positive they transmit that positive to other people. And that is interesting how a person with a positive attitude can change someone just been positive. This happened more on teenangers. Teens that are positive looks like they always are happy, and they transmit that. Example: you are sad for any reason and some came that always have a positive attitude and you started talk to him and little by little you do not know how, but started feeling better is because that person transmitted you confidence, just been positive. Have a positive attitude helps a lot because you can help many people just been a nice and good person with everyone and never have a negative attitude.
Been amusing person is good and help you to success in life, because people is more positive when they are amusing. People when is amusing they will do everything that they like, and thats good, because when you do what you like that means is fun and thats good for you future. People that are amusing they look like a confidence people, people that you think you can trust and that can help you like in a job, because your boos will trust you and you could get an assent. Been amusing help in your future, because people will look at you like a nice person and you will get friends and have friends could help in your future, because they can help you in the later.
Have a positive attitude make people be more responsible, because people are more focus in their jobs or studies when they are positive. People are focus in what they want and that make them be responsible. People with positive attitude always try to find a solution to their problems they dont give up. However a person with a negative attitude when they have a problem they give up or they get mad just for a problem. Thats why people should have a positive attitude because is the key to success in life.
Be responsible make you be focus in your job or studies, be amusing help you to have fun and have a good life, and be interesting means that you have as positive attitude because you are always happy and you can transmit that to others persons. In conclusion be or have a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because make you more responsible, amusing, and interesting. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
F3550CF50ABC | Have you ever wonder how our character is formed? John Lubbock once wrote, " Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it." I personally think that our character is formed by our friends, social media, and so that people can like us.
Many people believe that we choose our own character by being ourself and not caring what anyone thinks however, I think that our character is formed by our friends since were always with them. For example, if my friends are always skipping school and they ask me to skip school with them and I am going to say yes since, they are my friends. What most do us do is ,that we can not say no to our friends and by saying yes, it makes up our character because now people see us as a person who skips school.
Another reason on why our character is influenced by other people is, because of social media. Social media plays a big part on how our character is formed. For example, on social media there is a lot of models, and singers. A lot of young teens want to be like them so they will change the way the look and act. Since society has made it seem that if you don't look like Kylie Jenner or any other famous person that you're not pretty and because, of that people want to change their character.
Finally, our character is formed by who we are around is because we want people to like us. For example, if I am at school and I want to be friends with a group of girls I will do what they like and do what they do all the time so, that they can like me. Since I want them to like me I will end up changing my personality and look just so that they can like me; this makes my character be influenced by others.
I urge you to think about your character if it's formed by the way you choose or if it is formed by who you surround yourself with. We should not let people choose how they want our character to be. I personally think that our character is formed by our friends, social media, and so that people can like us. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F3604BAC5D79 | I agree with the Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill because in my opinion, the failure makes to the people strong and the next time they can do it better. Sometimes we are making failures day per day, but if we become sad and we are closed that we can not do it again, we are losing something important in our life, but if we are doing it with enthusiasm we can improve our failures and do it better every time. Success is the achievement of doing what you have tried to do or what to do. Winston Churchill is referring that no one have to loss the enthusiasm, however if you are making mistakes in your life and you are saying that you can not do it and you will try it but you are going to get the same results and you are giving excuse by excuse you will fail in your life because you are giving up easily and you dont see that every cost and fight at the end it has a benefit or something that you really wanted to get or a goal that you are trying to reach and you will see that you dont have to loss the hope and the enthusiasm in every dream that you want.
The failure has an important role in the pursuit of success, sometimes a lot of people do not have the enthusiasm and they think that it is the end of everything, the failure can be the destruction for a lot of people, but if you make a lot of mistakes and you are keeping fighting still to get your goals you will see how important is not give up easy and watch the positive part of your failures. When Winston Churchill said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm," he is only saying that sentence but it has a big meaning everybody can apply it in their lives, you can find the best outcomes just smiling to the problems. It does not mean that you will not care the problems, of course you have to resolve the problems and make them clear, because if you are making failures and people is affected and you dont care you just want to get your outcomes it will be a big problem, no body needs to be involved in your failures because the people around you will see that you are making a mistake and you are selfish.
Churchill's statement has big meanings and has good outcomes, everybody wants success but what happen when someone is trying to get success and miss? of course everyone will feel so sad and no one wants to try it again because the person is afraid of their failures, it is like if the failure is tying you and it does not want to leave you. The persons will be sad and their hopes will be down because they think that they are going the get the same outcome, but what happen if you raise your head with enthusiasm? Winston is trying to say us that the enthusiasm is very important to get the success because if you have enthusiasm you will fight with love for something that you really want. An enthusiasm person has more possibilities to get success than a person sad, broken and a person who is thinking just negative thoughts or who is close that they will get the same result and give up easily like nothing will happen if he/she is going to try it.
The enthusiasm has an important role in the success because you will keep your head up and keep fighting for your goals all the time and every time that you will make a failure it will be more easy to resolve it, because you have a key and you are enrolling every time when you get one failure. The enthusiasm help to the people to see the answer of the problems easily because the brain will be relaxed and will think the best things, however, when the brain is frustrated the brain can not think correctly. So, if you are enthusiasm you will do it very good because you want something that you want and also it will be something that will improve your life not just in the success of work or study it can be in all your whole life you can get success and everything if you apply this in your life, and the people around you like your family will see how important is this role in the life and they will want to learn about the enthusiasm in the failures and they will understand that sometimes we dont need to destroy ourselves or lost the head in something that we can resolve in an easy way that enthusiasm is helping us to improve ourselves.
I agree with Churchill's statement because the enthusiasm it is an important role you can motive to other people to be enthusiasm and they can resolve their problems using the same method. Sometimes the failure are really hard to resolve but if you really want to reach it you have to feel enthusiasm because I think that automatically you will see the answer clearly and easily and if you are frustrated your brain will not work and will be closed and sometimes when we are frustrated we are getting extras failure because we dont think clearly and we dont think about it. Sometimes we have to learn a lot from the failure and we dont see it, the failure can be some steps just to reach the success and the goods outcomes. Winston is showing us that the failure can be defeated it does not matter how long it is going to take but before the success you have to keep strong and smiling to the big failure. Winston Churchill is using a statement that means that we dont have to give up easily we have to fight for something that we want to make real.
Example: The success in the school can be really difficult and more than one time we can fail because we dont do homework but we want to pass, so if we want to reach this goal we have to enthusiasm ourselves because we have a goal that we want to reach, so we are going to fix our failure and we are going to do everything because after school we want to go to college and get a good job.
In conclusion, the Churchill's statement has an important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success. The failure is just a difficult step to reach the success and with enthusiasm we can defeat to the failures. The enthusiasm is a supply very important in the enroll for the success. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F386245C7C21 | Have you ever wondered about your working skills do you prefer working in groups or on your own? How they benefit you in your job or anywhere else?
people say that working together is a better way of doing stuff then just working alone. But theirs other people who prefer working alone. Here are some of the benefits to both sides.
I feel like working in a group is more beneficial because it lets you have a chance to ear new ideas. You can also finish the work faster if everyone is doing something. For example this one time. My friends and I were doing a project for drives Ed. We had sometime to think and write down ideas. After that all of us got together and agreed on some ideas. Then we each had our own part to do and we finished it during class.
Some people believe that working alone is better. You can be more focused on you work. In addtion you can be more creative in your own way. I remember this girl in my biology class had to do her finial exam project. She decided to work by herself. The girl was res reaching and was really focused on that she was looking for. She got her information then made a really creative poster that went with the theme of the project. The teacher loved it and gave her an A for it.
In conclusion working in a group benefits me the most. Their is less work to do. Everyone has good ideas. You get to express thoughts and feelings about your topic. So many more things that working alone doesn't give. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 2 | 3.5 | 3 |
F38E063ED945 | Being yourself doesn't depends in how people see you, it depends on you because you are the only one that can choose to change or not, it makes no difference if you did something right or wrong the society always will discriminate and see that at the way they think it is,and you can't do anything about it, you are doing the things that you feel that are correct and how is the way how is has to be, however being in a world that is trying to make you something else is a great accomplishment because there is not way people make you change;
you had to live your life at the way you want it, you have the opportunity to express your feelings everywhere, and you are in the world to be happy and not to satisfy every single person
Sometimes it's hard for you to be deal in the society with opinions that hurt you and make you feel bad about it, and that is something that you cannot change, but it is something that help you to learn how to be more responsible when you are growing up and to be overconfident about what are your thoughts, you have to know that in the world are many people want to see you go down and change the way you are, in that situation you have to be with your head up and be who you really want to be, you can do the difference in your life, but not in others person life
In addition, you have to be proud and brave everywhere you go to because you have the opportunity to express what are yours feelings, there is not way that somebody can change what is in you heart, only you choose who can hurt you and if you want that continue, try to stay positive all the time not matter what is going on in your life, do not let someone know what are your debilities and how you feel about things go in on in your life that person can hurt you every time he/she want it, do the things that make you feel better with yourself
Finally, be happy all the time with the things that you have because it might be the little things, but are things for which you work really hard to have it, you have to be brave especially when you have done something that probably other person will see that bad, however that doesn't mean you are wrong is just what they think about it, you need to be how you feel comfortable and not to maintain happy the society, reach your goals how you want it, don't let anyone destroy your dreams because if that happen you are not going to be cheerful about it
In conclusion, live your life how you want it because is only one, do what you think is correct and follow your dreams, since the moment you let the time past by doing what other people want; you will not be happy nor proud about what you really want to achieve, it's difficult to trust people that one day made you feel safe and in peace and then did things that they knew that it hurt you; if you really want something good for somebody else you will do everything to protect that person and make it feel unique, simply be yourself without get involved in other person's life. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F3996EB91406 | I'm agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson because people in this world want you to be another person that yourself. I have two examples, my family want me to be another person that my self, and the second example is if you want to be yourself in this world you will never find a job; You have to be another person the they want you to be.
I start with my family; How i said my family they don't like when you try to be yourself, they want you to be what they said, like jobs for your future they want me to be something the I don't want to be like: Soldier, Fireman, Lawyer, and president; I want to be someone else the they don't like to much, they don't like when I think in my self just what they want, they think if you are someone else you will have a big accomplishment.
In the case of jobs if you try to be yourself, and not what the company want you will never find a job; The happen to me alot of times when I try to apply to a job, they want you to be another person with different expression like: happy, active, team work, and accurate; If you are opposite of the expression you will never find a job with the expression the you have, so you have to be like the company want you to be and they would give you the job, then you will have a big accomplishment from the company because you are someone else.
That's why I'm agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson, we live in a world the people don't like when you are yourself and they like when you are someone else; I don't think the accomplishment is just for be someone else and not yourself, if you try hard when you are yourself you will have the greatest accomplisment in life and for people who don't belived in their self like: Family, company, manager,people, and you; If you belived in yourself everthing will be good and the accomplishment would be often. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
F39FFFB63840 | I agree that failing plays a important role of success. Is because you can learn form your miss tack, you can understand why your keep failing and fix the problem, and you don't make a same miss tack again. However, I do see why some people don't think the same way. It because they don't want take a risk to fail at anything and no one want to admit that they failed on something. But it not as bad as you think, hears why.
First, everyone my miss tack and you can learn from that miss tack . For examples, when I failed to shot a goal, I what to know why I keep missing a goal. After a weal I learn how to properly shot it. A nuder examples are, my friend like to draw a person but he always have a problem to draw a hands. He try to learn why he keep failed to draw a hands and time go by, he finally learn how to draw a hands.
Then, you can understand why you keep failing and fix the problem. For instens, I always keep failing to payatensh, so I understand what was a problem and trying to fix that problem. A nuder examples are, when I keep reading I always keep miss pushing it . So I be reading thirty mines every day and it help me.
Lastly, you won't make a same miss tack again. For examples, when I found out that I failed my reading test I what to know what part that I miss, when I toked again I pass the reading test. A nuder examples are, when I made a miss tack to get a figure that almost filthy baler, and at the same time I have to pay my bills. So I learn my miss tack, at the time when I pay my bills I won't get a figure that almost filthy baler.
Inconclusun, failure is not as bad as you think, it can help you to success for instens you can learn form your miss tack, you can understand why your keep failing and fix the problem, and you don't make a same miss tack again. I hope you understand why failing plays a big role of success. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
F3A5981B0288 | Is a good idea that the students identify a career by the time they enter high school, and think about the future.
The importance of decide what career the students want to take before they leave of the high school,
is to prevent to be confused when they enter to the University . For example , if the students take mechanic courses or courses about how to be a Doctor in High School , would help them to experiment what career they would like to take after High School .
If the students decide experiment to be a nurse or doctor , they will go to a Central Medic or Hospital and get information about that career , or they will go to a mechanic workshop to learn and get knowledge about how to be a mechanic .
Is a good idea for students think about a career to young age or try to be prepare for the future and take some courses of study in high school because if the teenagers try to found some career that can be agreeable for them and try to learn about it , it is a good form that they can be prepare in the future .
With the opportunity of learn in different courses in high school , will be more easy for the students to decide what specific career they like more and they want to learn and study after high school
In other hand , the specific courses in high school , would be selected by the students , because if they decide to take a course that they like , they will enjoy at the same time , and they will try to do the better they can
, and this is a good manner in that the students can get good grades . | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
F3ACD9A99ADA | Success is about to enforced our self and to accomplish our goals, as I know nobody was born knowing something everyone was born to learn and to fail every time that is possible to learn more However I agree with Churchill's statement that is about the important role that failure plays in the success, My reasons are that we can protrude, influenced others, more personal experience.
My first reason is that everyone can protrude and be proud over our self ,and protrude means to take the best of us and show it, for example, in my case lass year I loss my job because I didn't have enough age to work in the company this year I start my own company and I have my own employees, this is a example how failure didn't take my enthusiasm, and that we can loss twice maybe but not forever because be will be success later.
My second reason is that our attitude is everything we can infused others that have been losing their life and their enthusiasm and show them that everyone can enforced and get what they want,
A example will be my cousin she had been in 12 grade for 3 years that at the first year that she didn't pass her grade herself confidence went down and she had loss her goals, but this year she will graduate because this year she is been preparing to pass her classes and to get her diploma, this is a example of been failing, and failing and then get the success.
Other might say that success and failing isn't good for our society, however I sill disagree because to get success or to win we have to learn from the beginning, my third reason is that with the experience what we have of been losing and failure twice and twice we will know that we are going to do and be successful later. According to a quote that say ''You can loss a battle but not the war'', In fact we can loss everything but not our enthusiasm.
In conclusion, this is why I agree with Churchill's statement that is about the important role that failure plays in the success, My reasons are that we can protrude, influenced others, more personal experience. everyone is exert to failure but what we have to do is to continue and don't surrender don't give up with our goals, always been happy doesn't paying attention to the situation. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
F3B7C2480747 | Do you wonder is a great idea to choose a career at a young age?
In my position is a exellent idea to choose career at a young age, Because in some socities, student are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. their are many courses of classes are selected to guide them toward to choose a speficic carrer. for example: first it benefits them to start at the age to have in mind what are some types of career the student want for his or her future after graduated high school. Second thing it would persuade them which type of diploma they would like to have if the advances diploma or the standard diploma, the advance diploma it requires to have 9 sol pass and all the classes and for the for standard it requires 6 sol and all the clases. when you enter to high shool your counselor would guide you which diploma the student want to have and which career for the future. third when you are in high school they give the student basic classes that you need to pass for 9 grade and 10 grade to persuade faster and easier , to have some experiencies and knowleged on what are your goals and be prepared on the others two years,
if you like the same career you pick when you enter high school or you want to change your mind on a diffrent type career want to do, teachers and counselor are a great full help for student to succes to guide the student what are some great benefits the career the students pick to study to give him the amount of money to lived and work with the career and be succesful in the future when the student finished the high school. Finally for 11 grade and 12 grade they give the student some diffult classes to pass to graduated from high school , 11 grade is more diffult to pass, Beacuse it requires 2 classes to graduated pass for to get 12 grade the student only come for the classes the counselor give student to be prepared for what diploma the student choose , if his the advance diploma or standard diploma for his or her carrer the student choose to graudated.
for my conclusion is a wonderful way to start in a young age , To start thiking what would you want for your future if this is a great career to pick and whats benefits give you for your future, in high school they prepared you for what the student planing to do when he or her graduated from high school , if his going to college to have a better life or go nova to be prepared on what you like to do in the future, You hvae some knowleges of what carrer you would succes in the future and start thiking this is what you like for your carrer and make it real the dream what you want to become in the future.
there many career you can choose to become someone in life , this is way i think they should start at the young age when they enter to high school teacher and counselor would do the best to make the student to choose one career studen is interested on. to study in the future and sucess on college to have a better life for her or his family in the future, thats why is great idea to start at the age to pick the career they want to do on future. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F3BFC265844A | Some people are not agree with the Summer break, because is to short.
They said that the Summer break needs to be change and they need to take out spring break too, because they spring break can be used to do SOL. The need to star the Summer in June and end in August. May is to early to go out of school .
The schools need to take out spring break. If they take out spring break we could have more time and to the SOL in that week that they take out. In April we shut have more fun activities in schools and class. The school can take the time to test us in that week or have more time practicing for the SOL.
They shut change the summer time to June and August. May is to early to go out of school for summer in May sometimes is cold and not that hot and in June is perfect to go out of school because the sun is hot and ready to go to vacations with you family and friend and to have more fun.
The school shut take out the spring break only because is close to summer time and student could have more time to take the SOL , To study more for your final test and have more time in the classed that you have and the teacher can help you more and teach you more schools shut have more activities in that week for the students to have fun and learn at the same time.
More sport and new abilities for the student and teachers to have fun. to have more trip to go see musics and universidad and the art museum and etc.
So we are agree with the people said that the schools need to change summer time and spring break so that we can have more time in school and more time for summer 3 months for summer and 0 weeks for spring more time to have for the SOLS and study for the final test. | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
F3E0762BFA43 | Some people say working alone is more benifical. Well I think working in a group is more benifical.
My first reason is it keeps you away from boredom. It keeps you away from starring at a wall for hours. And it keeps you away from sleeping in a class room. Its more helpful having someone to raise and boost your energy and being the confident person you are. Now days in a classroom were haveing 60 percentr on students being unsure about there answers and being unsure if they should even speak up. Being in a group helps you raise your voice. Manny Adult and students are suffering boredom and thats not healthy. Talking to your peers and being around people more keeps you away from depression. Making your self feel more confident about yourself shows who you really are its like the next step to being a risk taker. My second reason is you can talk and discuss with your group about your project or work together. Its more faster being in a group where you can actually discuss about your thoughts and idea and feeling more confident than ever. Having a partner check it look togerther for any mistake or errors. My final reason is you save lots of time for yourself. And not everyone is right. But creating these ideas from yourself and your group could make something turn out to be unthinkable. Being in a group makes your mind grow and learn new things and ideas from other people. Your having a good time with your friends and if not you meet new people that may become friends with you. You want to talk and move around and meet new people getting out. Not being shy or denying yourself wrong. Being in a group is like your bring peace in a table. I belive that everyone should try new things being in a groups and its okay if your wrong because there is no right answer. Being in a group helps you become bigger and bold about yourself your trusting you self and your classmate. I believe working in a group is more benificaial rather than working along cecking your self and thinking if your rong and feeling unpositive about yourself. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
F3E2F311D829 | people should not make their own decisions because people hurts someone feelings about the decisions they are making, people always need someone to be agree if their decisions are good to make it, and people think just because they are old enough can make better decisions.
People hurts someone feelings because they made something really bad even if a person tells them that they are doing wrong things, they keep doing it, because for them the decisions that they are making are great for them. One example, lets say, when we were young that we fall a lot time in love. we were wishing to have someone to advise us because we think if the decision that we are going to make is not going to hurt someone. We always think about what is going to happen if we do things that we know are not good choices. We need somebody to advise us about anything. Another example, when I was planing to leave my house with my boyfriend because I did not wanted to go to school. I get really mad. I did not think on anything. I just wanted to do it even if Mom gets a heart attack because she wants me be more educate and have a better future, so someone that I have not seen in my whole life get close to me and say " You are too young, think about what life can brings you if you go to school, if you graduate from college that many wonderful thing you can have. Do not throw your life in that way. You will have time to be with someone" I realized that I was making the worse decision ever.
Everyone always need someone to be agree about their decisions, because someone may have a lot of experience about life that way they can be the guide for them. they can talk about the decisions that they were making in the past and that can helps to make a good decisions. One example, one friend made a bad a really bad decision. His family told him to stop doing the things he was doing because it will be a lot consequences. That is what happened he made a wrong decision. He did not listen and now is dead because of his decisions.
Most think that they are old enough to take their own decisions, as we can see, it does not matter what age we have. What matters is how mature we are, because we have to be aware of the responsibility about any kind of decisions we are going to make. We have to say to ourselves " okay if I do this I have to be conform about the result that I am going to get".
Clearly, All we do is because someone is making us better by telling that we do not always have to trust on ourselves. Sometimes for some discussion we do not do the right thing, we do not think and we use our bad mood and due to that we make bad choices. We have to be more responsible. " Make good choices, do not let your mood take position of your actions".
Think before your decisions. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F3F4454A2E3B | Most companies look for specific characteristics in potential employees. Some people think that companies shouldn't look for specific characteristic in people and let the person thats applying, get the job and learn while he/she is working with the company.
Some people have a better education than others, which that would be one of the characteristics that company would be looking for, trying to hire someone. But sometimes those people aren't good working with other people and in my opinion that is very important to keep and good work environment. I think I'm a very good candidate because, I'm good working with people, I am always willing to work extra hours if you need me to, and finally I'm may not have much experience on this kind of work but I'm a pretty hard worker and will try my absolute best to learn the job.
One reason, I think I should be hired is that I'm good working with people. One of the things I enjoy the most about working is the ability to work and share ideas with people in my past jobs, I feel like it makes the work environment a lot better because it make the work easier and more enjoyable. Because the more are working together the job gets done faster, I'm always willing to help if anybody needs me I'll be there planning things out with the person give him/her feed back on what she thinks and work out something that can work for both the company and themselves. I try get along with all my work partners so I can make it the best experience for me and for everyone else around me.
Another reason, is I'm always willing to work extra hours if needed. I worked extra hours in past jobs before because for one my work co workers because they were sick. So if you ever need me to work for extra hours don't hesitate to give me a call. Because we all need a break sometimes, but there are times where we can't give the workers that break because the company doesn't have enough people to cover that person. That's why I'm willing to work longer hours so those workers can take that break they so much desire.
Finally, I'm a hard worker like you read in the last paragraph I'm willing to work longer hours, so that should give you an idea. What ever job you give me I'll do it at the best of my ability, it doesn't matter what it is I'll do it. Although I dont know how to do much of what this type of does, I'll do my best to learn it as fast as possible so I can give you the best results I can give. I'm always willing to do something new and challenging so I can extend the things I know, All I want you to know is that what ever you tell to do I will give my one hundred percent.
As you have read this why I think I make a good candidate and a good addition to your team. I'm good working with people, I'm willing work longer hours if needed, and I'm a hard worker. I hope you consider hiring me and i hope the best for the company. I think only when you see me actually working in your company and see the things I'm able to bring to the table you will see I was the best option for the job. Thank you for reading and taking my application for consideration. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
F40D707EC722 | We all have our own goals that we would like to accomplish in the future. Perhaps you still want the same thing as when you were a kid, maybe the technology has changed your plans. I personally want my dream to go to college accomplished by the future, get a career, high education, be the first one in my family that has gone to college.
First of all going to college can help me get the career I want which is game designing. game designing is a career I have wanted to get since I turned twelve years old when I first started playing minecraft. Minecfrat is an awesome game where you can build really cool things that come out of your mind, yo may create a whole new entire world in there. When I turned twelve I always wonder how did they make games go so real so I started reading articles, books, etc. then I stared playing more games and it was incredible. I want to go to college and be able to make my own games because I know people would love playing them. I want to make my own gaming company and kids going around talking about my games. but the only way I can actually do that is by having a college career.
My second reason why I want to go to college is because the majority of people in the United States just drop out of high school. People who dropped out of high school have a really low education degree. I personally want people to think I am smart just by looking at my education record. If u completed your goal in college, if you graduate, people would offer really good jobs to you with a high salary only because your education is high and you know what your doing because they've taught you that in college.
Last but not least I want to be the first one in my family that has actually gone, completed, and graduate out of college. My family is not poor nor is rich we are in the middle class, which I understand why some of my family could not actually afford to go to college. but some people in my family had has the opportunity and they just din't wanted to go because they wanted to live the life, was they're excuse but living the life is not working at a pizza place or McDonald's. I want to demonstrate to all my family, who actually had the opportunity of going to college and din't, that the way they think living the life is wrong. I want them to see that even going to college you can still live the life and probably even better when you have actually graduate. I want for my two little brothers to see, to be proud of their sister and be a good role model for them, so they can follow my steps and get a good live.
We all have our goals that we would like to accomplished in the future. maybe when you grow up you are just going to change plans and do something more important. I want to go to college so I can get a career, I want to go to college so i have a high education degree, I want to go to college to be a good role model to my little brothers and kids in general. going to college is just a really important thing in your live that some people dont get the opportunity to do and some do. | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F43067F5C920 | I'm strongly agree with Thomas Jefferson statement about..."determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". There is many motives to don't be idle, but I consider that the most significant could be your own health. Doing something productive keep your body and mind working, and as we know exercise help us to avoid many kinds of diseases, and perhaps raising our lifetime. It's like my grandfather told me someday in the past..."
if I stop to work, I'll die,because, work help me to forget all my bad situations in my life even my diseases, and instead of that I always thinking... what would be my next task to accomplish
?". My grandfather is 80 year old and he worked all his life, all my family members says that he is so intelligent, and can see the satisfaction in his eyes when he accomplish something,
I used to be idle when I'm in a difficult situation in my life, that don't make me feel good enough at all, is quite the opposite, that make me feel in a situation or stress or anxiety. Even my doctor says that I need to distract myself practicing some sport or at least walk around the street. that something simple but changed my life, because I met people, I made new friends and I've got a job where I feel so confident. but that wasn't easy, because I fought and I'm still fighting against my pride and my arrogance that don't let share good times with the people around me.
You can learn more if you are always doing something, even if you make mistakes, because of mistakes you will know how to avoid them in the future,at the same time that would help you to develop new skills which is a good benefit for yourself when your looking for a good job or social position.
You going to be able to make more task easily, making you more intelligent. , because you are earning experience, the experience also you will help you, to know what you really want to do in the future.
If you determine never to be a idle, and make the decision to be an active person, you can know more about yourself and life and you also will find your path in this world; what really is your purpose in this life. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F440ECCF9E67 | The idea of planning for a career is to perpar yourself and other for the future, career planning is to perpar yourself and other for a colleges that is specific to the career of what your looking for specific, and help plans for the career job that you or others had work for in the past.
Students that enters high school should start looking for the their career, becaue it keeps the student commit to the career, and keeps the students focas toward their future careers. If a student start seaching for his or her career can focas more on their career to find the specific college and the job that they study for their career. "I want to be a computer engineer for my career".
Students that starts to look for their specific career can plan earily for their futrue career, student that are working on their careers can work on looking for the specific college that the student that he or she is looking for their career that they plan for. "The plans I did for my career planning was to take the class that are specific to the career i'm planning for".
Students that study for their specific careers for the future, have a higher chance to go to their specific career college, their career job, student that worked for their career have been studying the specific career topic that they been working for, when they graduate high school they have a higher chance to get except to their career college, and their career job. "My chances on getting to the college I worked for is a high chance to get except, and I would not have no problem facing college and, my career planning to be a Computer Engineer". | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F44AE6192EA9 | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote "Unless you try to do something beyond What you already mastered, you will never grow."
I agree with author Ralph Waldo Emerson because base on each experience of every people that they had mastered, i think that what you already mastered in life it can make you be more stronger base on the experience that you had.
I agree with the quote because unless you try to something you need to have pasion and focused in things that you can grow in life over things that you already mastered. You can grow beyond and over things that you already master and learn new things to keep growing not just staying in the same spot.
Experince new things in life are going to make you feel more stronger and make you think that you can do things that you maybe never thought about that you were going to do beyond what you already mastered.
Unless that you need to reach and make new goals to grow you need to make an efort no matter how hard it can be for you, you need to focus in that goals that you want to grow more and have more experience just for keep practecing.
Base on my experiences, i could do something beyond what i already mastered because i want to learn new things and try to make good things and that's going to make me grow more and experiences new things that i never thought that i can do. To grow exterior and interion i need to be confident with my self and letting me know thing that i can do better thing that i already mastered and be more suscescfull.
I agree with author Emerson's statement because of what he wrote it make me feel confident with me and keep trying beyond what i already know and already master you need to push your thought to make your goals come true.
Thank you | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F44D5A636C2F | Generic_Name
Generic_Name
Octuber 23, 2019
English 11
Enviroment of Impressions
Two million years ago a person named Jesus arrive to this planet to dwell for a several amount of years, an history we all have been told about witch it takes us to it's death, he spoke to us saying he was our Father. However, he was killed becasue of whom he show up to be, and it's here where we see that it does not matter what impression ypu show up with, people don't mind about it, we all live in a world thst only care for our own good, our onw benefits.
I don't agree in frist impressions are impossible to change, I've meet people that I use to hate now they are part of my life their my family. Independence day, you have an job interview, the first thing they get about us it's first impression no matter what we do and pretent to be someone that we obviuosly aren't they only care about your eargerness, charisma, garment, manners, etc. The popular one meeting new people at school at the beginning we can hate everyone but untli we don't meet that person we won't change our perspective about it personality. In fact, most of us guide by first impressions, and thats the same towards us.
Primaly get can easily get impressed by someone or completely disinterested. we are humans it's imossble to represent our reality we are just like social media when we are with our frineds or at a public place, we fake we act we pretent and thats a common thing we aren't realistic with us and thats where we are given first impression. In conclusion, we are who we choose to be and who we deserve to be, we are in the place that we a re supposed to becasue thats what we deserve, whatever we give it;s what we are going to recieve, and we shouldn't be worried about what we're going to get, what matters it's what we give and judging people woon't tkaes us to the highest place. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
F45967CEFA55 | Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill stated a quote that said, "success consists of going from failure to failure with out loss." There are 3 reasons why I agree with this statement. The first reason is, failing will want to make you push for a success, the second reason being that you'll have more of enthusiasm when you're find more ways to succesed, and the third reason is achiving for higher goals.
I agree strongly with this prompt and Winston Chruchill's quote, yet some people think it's something at may not be true and think less of them self. In the first paragraph I will explain my first reasoning with a strong example of it.
First, reasoning to this prompt would be, falling will want to make you push for success. Even though not many people think that is the way that many of our past inventors had learned. Albert Enstine was one of the smartest people out there, yet he had come face to face with failure many times in his life. The only way he learned was to try many other different ways to solve his problems. He used failure as an insperation to to keep trying like our first inventor of the light blub. Even though many people found it frusterated and diffivult when they've failed, which pushes on to my second reasoning.
Next, the reason would be that many people think different about them selfs when they fail in something. Thomas Edison thought different, even though he had failed 100 times, he had not gave up. When he finally successed, he said a quote that is in my mind till today in this presnet day. That quote was "I didn't fail 100 times, I found 100 ways that it didn't work." Even though, Thomas Edison had failed he maintaned him self with a lot of enthusiasm, Failure is never an option, but finding a solution to it is a success.
Finally, the last and final reason is achiving for high goals that you want to reach. It don't matter what others may think of it or if you'll be able to achive or not. Show them that they are wrong even if you come to a failure don't stop, find a solution and fix it to make it better than before. You'll reach higher goals with higher potential then what you'll ever imagine. Then later on you will be able to do anything you put your mind to and demonstrate your knowlage to the world.
In conclusion, doubting yourself is not how you achive your success. Finding a way to solve it is achive your success. Get the insperation from the people who had once been in your spot and they done to successed to there goal. Even if failure is a role in life to find success it's the only way youll reach it. Failure is only a motivation to get you to successed. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F45F03EBB2CA | Dear Principal
I think we should perform community service to support our community to help out clean our streets, and parks and help the people who are starving for food . All students should require to help out with the animals and the people from starvation. It doesn't take time off of you want to do It would help out to make our place a whole lot better than a mess. Its important to help out our community to live in a better place to live. The people who need food you can donate to the people who are starving out there right now. Also You can donate to you're charity to help out the homeless that are starving to eat and donate for the winter of the cold because they might be cold and with no food they can start dying. You can clean up with the littering its not right for the animals to eat our plastic it can kill them and start to clean you're streets.
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F47F7676912A | I met a friend online from Generic_City, therefore I went to visit him and learn a lot about his culture. In this paper I will argue about that the use of technology haves a positive effect on peoples lives and human contact. In my opinion technology haves a positive effect on people lives because they can find new jobs, meet new people , and communicate with other people that you are nervous to talk in person.
Having a hard time finding a job? Theres a lot of jobs available online and you can sign up online without going to the store and ask for a job application. If your sick and can't go to work, therefore you can contact your boss online and ask for a day off and avoid getting fired by not coming to work. If you need to talk to your boss and he is not in work you can send him a online message. You can see that technology helps your job to be more easier without having any problems.
Dont you feel bored knowing only about your culture? You can meet people from different culture online and learn more about there style of life. Technology helps you vision other peoples thoughts and opinion from another country. Technology is the glue that helps a lot of people from different culture work together and hate each other less. people can learn how to fix there mistakes by seeing other people online from different cultures instead of fixing it on your own tradition way that may be harder or useless. For example i learn how to fix a car much more easier by following my friend method from Generic_City.
I havent seen my family for six years and only talk to them by sending text messages. Im shy and nervous to communicate with them in person. Technology helps you built that confidence to talk with other people from around the world or people that you care for. It Doesnt matter if you only communicate with them sending only online messages. At least you are expressing your feelings your thoughts and your opinion to your loves one or your friend that you are shy to talk in person.
Some say technology is ruining human contact with other people in person . But they are wrong because technology helps you to meet new people, find a job, and communicate with people that your are nervous to speak with. I hope one day people around the world understands that without technology we wouldnt have the diversity we have in this world today. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
F48D7BBAF52D | Do you think that have a positive attitude is the key to success in life?
Some people think that have a positive attitude is definitely helpful to get a greatest accomplishment, when we longing to be someone in life you need to have two important things; positive attitude and courage to be what you want to be it does not matter what is you career is, if you don't have a positive attitude you will be nothing in life, a expert of university said, ''Have a positive attitude for students is very important when they decide to go a college, it will help them to get their career done easily.''
Have a positive attitude is good because it make you to do things better in life, it make you feel proud of you , you positive attitude help other people to feel positive, to feel with a good attitude, and to feel them comfortable with you, have a positive attitude it help you everywhere, anytime, and every single day of your life.
Many people today have a positive attitude that help them many time to get gretest complishment, the positive attitude help me on many ways one of this is that it help me to get gretes things like to get my job that I have now and have a good grade at school and transmit my positive attitude to others students.
In conclusion, have a good positive attitude is something that help you up every day, a lot of people get gretest success in life through positive attitude, in other words, if we have a good possitive attitude we can obtain great things to reach our dreams, but this depent of what we want to be , what we want to reach. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F49521C3494B | In some schools they have programs that pairs older students with younger students, and the older students can assist younger students if younger students are having troubles with their education or any other problems. This program can help old and young students because students get to support each other , and older students get to know how to be responsible , and they have a good experience.
First the older students can support younger students by communicating with each other if they are having problems studying, or problem with another students , or probably they have problems outside of schools for example they are having problems at home students can support each other by helping them to find a better solution so that everyone can feel better.
Next this program can help older students, because they get to know how to be responsible by helping young students to improve in their school subjects, and they can improve confidence in themselves by helping each other.
Finally at the end of the day older students are going to have a good experience knowing that they help a younger student to improve in their school subjects ,and they improve in their communication skills .
Schools with programs that pair old and young students can help students in a lot of thing , for example communication skills , responsibility,and be confident in themselves. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
F495D071AE60 | Students should be allow to bring cell phones to because maybe some students may have an emergency and they need to call there parents ,or if there parents had an emergency ,or a car accidents an need to call her child to make sure they aren't picking them up after school. And maybe they need there cell phones if they walk to school and they kidnapped them and they need to call someone to help them.thats why the principal should allow the students to bring cell phones to school and turned them off in call.
They can use there cell phones in lunch time only but to make sure they have them off in class .And in the hall way they can use them just for a emergency or if a kid faints someone can call the nurse to come for him that.student shou | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
F4B3B2CAB030 | I belief in this issue about the students are responsible with their class is favorable for them, take a class at home . Also Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend class from home by way online or video conferencing. I think is good idea, students would benefits from being able to attend class from home.
Some students take class in home because they do not have time to go to the school. For example, this e students need to take class from online because they work at night or at day . Clearly, they do not have time to go the school because they time is short and they need to organize their day for take a class so, some students take a class from online because their have many reason . In summary, some students need time for study , and they need this position from online for study and they can finish their class.
To day in the world exist many disease, and we need to get precautions with this dangerous disease. So for this problem some students can't go to the school for this big problem. Relating, this problem with school because the students health is so important. For example, the corona virus is so dangerous, students need a protection, because this illness inflict many death. Is so easy to get sick. For this reason,
is important to students to get class from online or video conferencing,
is better study at home and also a good place, is the best way for students not get sick from this dangerous disease. However, this disease not have medication, but students we cant to prevent get to sick also, studying at home. In summary, is important to caring students they are the future for the world. For this reason some school need to get dis option, learning from online or video conferencing.
In another hand , i think is good idea, students would benefits from being able to attend class from home, and other people belief, this not a good idea , students would benefits from being able to attend class from home for this issue, students not leaning in one video conference but, some students don't want to go to the school because they have more than 17 years old or they can't enter to school for their age. Because, for you can enter to school minimal you need to have 15 to 17. Also, you have 18 you can't not to enter at school and is a problem because you can't find a good work if you dont have a graduation certificate from school. For example, some students want to study , but they can't because they can't enter to school for their age, I think is so important to exist a program when the people older the age can study line or video conferencing. However, many people need to get a certification but they can't for this problem, also the best solution is studying online is more accessible for them. They can have more opportunities in their life , they can get a better job. For instance students can learning online , is a big benefit for this students was can't enter at school. In definition everybody need a opportunity for study, for get a certificate from school. obviously the students are responsible with their class at home.
The benefit was school online or video conference represent is the student get more concentration at home , they do not have distraction for any other students, they do not suffer by bulling and they can get a good grade studying a lone in home. For example, sometime students get bad grade for this reason , distraction , they can't sleep at night also, they need to wake up to early for this reason they sleep in class,and they not put attention because they are tired. Also, the students have the opportunity to studying online they can organize their time and pass their class easy because they are focus with their class online also they not have distraction and its for that reason they get a good grades, students need class online or video conferencing , this program help many studying or many young girl are pregnant. Some young girl want to finish her high school but she can't because her are pregnant. However, some school get a program studying online is to much better for this students are pregnant is more easy, to studying at home because she can eating when she hungry and carrying her health for her baby. The program studying online is important to exist help to many students with different problems situations or health problems. In summary learning as action for students who wants to study online or video conferencing. I think is a good program for many students who want to study. Clearly,
everybody has the opportunity to study obviously the students who get study online has a responsible to attend every day their class and get their certification high school.
In conclusion, class online or video conferencing have many option to study, just is question of time for the students , they need to organize time for study online and can graduate , this program no have many different then the school just, the student need to stay alone and the benefit of that is you can concentrate better alone by your self. Also is better studying at home for this many disease dangerous is more comfortable state at home. However students no need age for study, what they need is inspiration and intelligent for study not need age. In summary distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F4BE7BB77A43 | Tomas Jefferson say is wonderful how much may be done if always diong. And is one of the reason I deagree with Jomas because if the person always doing something learning stuff they never before do. Is wonderful how much the person can be do and learning new stuff if always work hard. One of the many reason of the human is a intelligent,stroong,smart and do new stuff no matter if they are easy or difficult. If they work hard can be do everithing.
For example the human not born with the capacity to walk or speak all human learng how do new stuff not matter how dificult ther are because more do more learng. One of the big point of always do somehing is prepare for life,is not easy but diong something to make sure the person is in the right way is the most important things the person need to know. Teaching personality and work hard is the big stuff, however one point of life the thing come hard but teaching how go and do resolve the problem. Not matter how be is the problem you need to go and do something then make how strong the person are. The person need to struggle with problems but learning and work hard is the main reason why the person is strong. On one point has the access to take something and work on that, but doing something is how learning new need stuff. Example the person who invent the technology they work hard and always do somethig to make they dream to come real and thas why diong somethihg and do the best potential is how make all the stuff of life. The person who study and prepare to make thay dreams are those work and not matter hoe big is the way they make one aesy way to continue they dream.
Doing somethigs always is the reason why the society do big work define new thing new technology new life becuase always are doing somethis. The person not born with all the intelligent not they learn how walk,speak and one point of life they go to school they not know everything. Not they do something the work hard, however a lot person are very smart but they continue to learn always doing something because they want to a better because they want to suppor the world and they family a better place. Likely the most professional always do something to make sure they life are excel of the most difficult piont of they life becuase always work hard and make new things, because not matter how low they education the person take always can be a better person because always try to define the best decition and the best example to the society. A different way to make the personality strong is find new ways to the problem. Life is like a game more things more work more aesy is to make the things.
If the person always are diong something new and the not choose to stay an d the same place all the time. And the person choose to continue doing new stuff and new work they not need to be the most smart person on the world. They need to work and show they can be do,however they walt to be not matter if they how be a stong personality and not matter is they't go the best school or the best college. Only matter how they be and the profession and the work. If the person or the society do somethig they can be the future. For example one day the person get up and choose to do something and make sure they days are very beautiful do new projects they can be came be make they life more aesy to continue. Life and work are like a gardener more flowes the person add more beautiful they came to be is like work more thing you learng more easy life come. one point they persono can't be continue but all the things thy learn more aesy came to be going up.
That why more things do make goals they persons can find, not matter were the person came or were the born always doing something more intellegent the person can to be. However a lot person are very smart but they continue to learn always doing something because they want to a better or find new technology or make a different on this world. One of the big point of always do somehing is prepare for life. All the persons are not the same one they has more technology to they dream,but others person not and this is not one obstacle to make they dream. Because all the time are be doing something and not wait to came things came not they go find and work hard to make all be came to be positibe they not have obstacles they have the strong to be come a better person. And show everyone not matter how difficult are the problem they came be successfuly person. Like Thomas Jefferson say always diong somethings much be done and is true because the person came to this life and learng everything, a lot person move to other place, need to learng need lenguage, need tradititiones and need people is hard but with the time can be learnig everything and continue the life again with need stuff thas is what is important to always diong on and be done what they need to be done and make sure do the best and hork hard and show a good and strong personality. And accomplish more if always they're something on specific point of life can to be so difficult but working hard and with discipline all can be come more aesy and undertake a new dream and new stuff of life can be come the best tool to widely and known as the most expert guidance to life. Base of all the information always doing somethig more thigs can be done and the persons can be accomplish and determine what strong thye personality they are. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F4BEEA034AA5 | When you try something that already you have do, and that thing didn't work, don't be worry about that because than more time your're trying to do it you will get more strong and have control by your self, always keep strong and keep the calm, and belief that you'll be a great person and all the doors will be open for you. Trying new things helps you to understand that you can do more things,everything depends on you if you really wants to do something that you like, just do it , never do the opinions of others people because is only you, the people can't control you life everything. The thing that you already done and you was doing and everything was wrong,what the Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote is not right because doing something that you already done but you didn't get it that's doesn't mean that you life is done or you will never grow that's wrong, when you're sure that what you want you'll be fairing for that thing that you'll lose for many times but you'll be fairing for that and you'll not get tired until you get your dream.
My father is a singer and he's very strong and he really know what he want, one day he participated on one big project about music, he was a really good singer but on the day of the presentation he completely lose his voice, but he won the presentation trying he's best , when he won many people tall him that they wanna to do a big different projects with him ,and now he is a big star and he grow a lot, that;s means that if you try something you'll grow a lot because you have to belief and be very sure what you want and if see if you like, never give up just like me, when I came to United Estates I didn't speak any English and it was difficult to stay here and don't know any English all my homework and my project was difficult, but I didn't give up and i'm steel growing a lot and i have been trying a lot a things and I steel growing. Many people think that if you're so expert and mastered you'll have a really good future , but some people think that the more time you're trying to do the think that you want you'll miss time on your life because the only thing that it's important to you is that think that you really want.
Some people try a lot a things but if they didn't get and they fail and some of they stop what they wanted ,but some of them keep trying and trying their best to get what they want, always try your best and don't give up, when your families or friends tell you that you will not grow more or nothings don't belief that because your're more strong that you know just keep doing and if you're a expert doing that thing you like you'll grow a lot because you have to demonstrate to the people that who you're what you can do. steel faith for that and i'm not agree with Author Ralph Waldo Emerson is wrong just keep wronging and never stop everything depends on you. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F4C52358CE03 | In this reasons from Churchill's statement. I am not agree because, They are many reasons important in the role that failure plays in the pursuit of success.
First some people are in someone problems like a Job maybe need once step to better position or salary. The second reasons is for the young people in the (school or college) is very difficult to do study, work, etc. There last one reasons is pursuit of success is important in the life for each people for better future.
First some people are in someone problems like a job maybe need one step to better (position or salary), example somebody have a Job and once
Office but they need more experience, and more ideas for increase the production and the best thing to do would be is to trust in self.
The second reasons is for the young people in the (school or college) is very difficult to do study, work,etc. For example, is hard to complete the academic studious and dont loss of enthusiasm is the key for they are success.
There last one reasons, is pursuit of success is important in the life for each people for better future. Because some people have many projects from school, Offices, Jobs, and Family need to make sure that from many ideas and to put the best ideas, and dont loss the enthusiasm. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F4CFA4007C99 | Technalogy is the line that get the world people's in the cirlce, and create a group that make cummunication oaver cyber way by saving their time also best way of connection between people it make it really easy to people who are far away from each other by taking seconds to contact them. Using new technalogy is fun like video game's that is the famous creation of new technalogy.
Technalogy doesn't create limition of connection between people, because it help people to create new connection over best cumunicting sites, fastest way of connection between humans that are far located from each other, also less cost of contact between people.
Technalogy was the solution for the less connection between human that been misconstrue by minorityof people those are who never used the way should be used. secientestes people who find out after alots of research that technalogy is the best way to persuad people connect with each other. Technalogy created for one purpose to make easy life for humans, and create a great cumuniction way through the world that connected with each other.
Technalogy planned, designed to make the fastest way between human's by not taking longer time it make so easy people doesn't needed any more to go to our relatives place to cumnicate with them know it totally changed by cellphone the new technalogy. One of the most amizing creation of technalogy is news that people around the world get know about every knew stuff.
Technalogy beside saving time it also cost less to connect with each other it make it so easy to people who are willing to contact other's over fastest connection, and less cost .
Using new technalogy is fun like video game's that is the famous creation of new technalogy. It designed for different ages by different version, and level. Also now days technalogy is the most biggest part of humans life our life almost run with technalogy in every part. but still some people think's that it's not helpful to have the advance system of technalogy.
Minority of people misconstrue about technalogy because they never used the advance technalogy or they might be used it but they never realize because at some points there are some how people should be aware of how to should use it, and it all need knowledge that some people doesn't have that so it's really hard for them to use it.
Technalogy might be useful to comunicate with people but sometimes it's hard for those group of people that doesn't have the knowledge how to use it, get benfite from it. So everything comes back to the circle that people connected with it but this circle also need to have knowledge of writing, reading, lessning that all include a great system of eduction. So eduction help to learn about know technalogy, and technalogy helps to make life easier also connected with other easily. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F4D07B2A60F9 | Do you think that positive attitude would make you successful?
For my point of view, I think that is good to be positive, becaus if you are positive you have more chance to be successful in life, most of the times you can or can not regreat good things. Is good to be positive on the bad times, that way you do not feel worse. If you have a positive attitud, some people that have negative attitude is going to try to make you change, do not let that happend. be positive can make you a better person.
If you are going through bad times is always good to be and think positive, if you are a negative person you are going to see only the bad things of the good things, you can lose friends or you're family members, if you are a negative person, no body is going to like to be next to you.
negative people is going to try to make you change; some people can be selfish and if you always think positive and most of the times you regreat positive things, they are going to want to have what you have even though that you work hard for if.
However some pople can think positive things but they can act negstive, it does not means that that good or not to think one thing and act with another thing, but if you want positive thigs happend to you most of the times, do positive things too. Be positive can help you to be successful but remember "actions talks more than 1,000 words." | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F4D23BAA49AE | Although some say failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm, actually some say failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life and it makes people smarter.
Those who believed that failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm. "weak people get tired when they try to find success but they loss". For example, have you ever had been in a situation where you think you will succeed but you only get bad news.
However, people who say that failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life. "Professional people face hard times, sad days and they suffer before they get a high position".
Also, people who say that failure plays in the pursuit of success because it makes people smarter. "A result of a survey say that smarter people learn from their lessons and try to not give up". For example,
If you lost an opportunity it doesn't matter if you try so many times but never give up.
Although some say failure doesn't play in the pursuit of success because people can loss enthusiasm, actually some say failure plays in the pursuit of success because it helps people to grow in life and it makes people smarter.
We should encourage that going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm we can achieve success in life. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
F4E879AE7FBA | The greater danger for most of us is setting our aims too high and falling short because many people try to aim for something that's imposible for them to accomplish, falling short on your goal will make you want to give up, and not having the motivation and energy will get you no where.
Most of us should set a realistic goal for them to aim; but sometime we aim too high and set an impossible goal that we can't accoplish it.
For example: some people aim to be perfect; but that's imposible because no one is perfect.
Some people will do so much work for no reason because if they don't have the materials or a plan for that impossible goal th,en they're wasting their time.
The danger of this is that no one will accomplish a single goal if they're aiming to high.
Many people try to get the results that they want; but many fall short.
Falling short on a goal can be a big danger, because it could lead many people to calling themselfs a failure.
This can also make people want to give up on what they were aiming for.
Everyone wants to be successful in life and not a failure, because if you're a failure, then you'll face many challenges and suffer.
Many successful people in the world accomplish their goals because they have the motivation and energy on doing better; but many people don't have a motivation or energy that they get no where in life. Motivation and having energy are some keys that can help people aim for something big and be albe to accoplish their goals.
Another way people can aim big or be successful with their goals is if they have a positive mind set.
The great artist Michelangele once said, "The greater danger for most of us lies in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."
Setting your aims low and achieving your marks is not the great danger or a danger. However, setting your aim too high and falling short is a great danger because you can learn from it. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F4EA60BCBC2C | Many people prefer to work in a group, because they think it can be more helpful, and others people said that they prefer to work alone. There are some benefits of working in a group and working alone. I think that the best option is to work in a group.
When you work in a group you can finish faster. For example, if there is a group of three people, one people can be doing a job, while you are doing an other, and the third people can be doing an other. That is a smart and easy way to finish the work faster.
Working in the group can be very helpful for planing how to do a project. Like as, all the people in the group gives their opinion of how to do the project and everyone in the group hears the ideas and them, they vote for the best idea in the group. That is a key point of working in the group everyone express them self and the work become easily.
In a group you can have better ideas. For example, you are in a group, and you have an idea and you tell the idea to the group, all the people in the group is going to give an opinion, and they will tell you if your idea is good or it is bad. In that way you can have more ideas for you and your group, and your group and you can learn more from your ideas.
Working in a group can be more helpful, because you and all the people in the group can have more ideas and finish faster. Even thought some people prefer to work alone, because they think that they can be more concentrate and they can learn faster.
In conclusion in a group you can finish faster and have more ideas for you and your group. While working alone you can concentrate more because you have less talking, and you are less distracting,when you work alone you can learn more, because you find the answer at your own. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F4F054797227 | I believe that people yes should make their own decisions and follow their instincts because that is what make us different from others. Follow your intincts and what you think that it is right can make a big change in what you are and what you want to be.
First. People need to believe in themselves and do what they think that it is right. Sometime we are afraid to make ours onw decision because we think that is wrong or because what others can think about us. But just think about, all the things that people had been invented along the time. What would will happend if they did not make their onw decisions, nothing that what we have today will not exist. So do not be afraid to make your onw decisions because others. Is not bad to look what other had been done and see if what you are about to do can be good or not. But always follow your ideas and do your onw work.
The instincts is a natural aptitude that human have, is something that make us do things without a well reason. The instincts make us do things that we think are right because a felling that we felt. No matter, sometime that felling can be rigth or not. But sometime bad decisions teach us what we do wrong and learned how do it better in a future. people should follow their instincts and ideas because that is what make us defferent. Learn of what we do wrong make us a better person. Poeple always are going to judge you and talk about your decisions no matter if are good or bad. So do not let others stop you and doing the things that you believe are right.
The decisions that we make today can harm us in the future. That may be is right, but if we always are thinking about what is going to happend. we never are going to know what is really going to happend. So make own ours decisions can make a big change ir our life for good or bad. It is important to listen to experts because can be helpful in what you are abuot to do. But always do it because you want to do it, not because other tell you. Always do may make you happy, no metter if you are wrong or not because that is what is going to make the difference.
In conclision yes people should follows their instincts and ideas. But also make their own decisions. Never stop doing that things that they like. Always do and follows what they believe and think carfully and what they want and where they want to be. The goods and bads decisiones and experiences and learn of they if what really teach you about life's important matter and make you succeed. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
F4FC2D64C127 | Inactive Times and Its Benefits
Should people have inactive times in their life? By doing work all the time people can achieve more goals; however, is better for people to have inactive times. It is better for people to have inactive times because they can have a longer life, fresh ideas, and get more energy.
Firstly, it is better for people to have inactive times because they can have a longer life. People's body works better when they have time to rest. For example, my mother's friend had a heart attack for not having inactive times. His doctor recommend him to have lazy times because he was working eighteen hours per day, but he did not listen to what the doctor said. As a consequence, he pass away; however, before he was told to have inactive times, his Neuron System stopped working properly. He stared having bad times at night while he was sleeping, his body started shaking, and he started having heavy breathing. The doctor asked my mother to talk to him and explained one of bad results, and that was death. Right after my mother's friend pass away, the doctor wrote on his blog about how not having inactive times can kill us. In sum, having inactive times help people live a longer life.
Secondly, it is better for people to have inactive times because they can have fresh ideas. When our brain is full of tasks we cannot think clearly and have new ideas. Being busy makes our mind blocked. For example, Generic_Name is a teacher and she is planning to have a party. However, Generic_Name is been so busy because her class is having a competition. All she thinks about is the competition and how to prepared her class. Generic_Name is not having inactive times and she does not know how to organized the party. She tried to focused on the party, but each small action was in vane. Her boss noticed she was tired and did not have new ideas, so her boss let her have two days off. During those two day Generic_Name could came up with lots of ideas to her party and also ideas to the competition. Generic_Name was happy because her main was full of new and fresh ideas. Her class won the competition and her party was amazing. In conclusion, by having inactive times people can get fresh ideas.
Thirdly, it is better for people to have inactive times because they get more energy. People who rest feel more energetic to start or finish an activity. For example, when I have many homework ,exams coming up, and track practice I feel upset, frustrated, and with no energy. So what I do is rest for a while to get energy. This make me feel powerful and energetic to finish my different activities. Furthermore, in my Psychology class I learned that people who rest or get an inactive time after they done with an activity for twenty five minutes have more energy to continue another task. In my personal experience, I have tested it on my sister and the results were successful. For example, She had to do an Algebra II homework and then, an English homework. So when she took the first twenty five minutes after she finished her first homework she said, she had energy to do the other one. We test it again without having twenty five minutes break. She said she was tired to do the next homework because she did not have energy. In sum, it is better for people to have inactive times because get more energy.
In conclusion, it is better for people to have inactive times because they can have a longer life, fresh ideas, and get more energy.
People can faced catastrophic result as death by not having inactive times and affect our life time. In addition, when people have lazy times they can came up with new ideas to complete different tasks. Finally, when people rest a certain time after an activity they get more energy. Each individual on earth must have an inactive times. | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
F50C9936F416 | Some schools have a program that older students pair with younger students and lets talk about how the effects can be very beneficial in the students future.
One reason this would be most beneficial is that the younger students are getting there education from someone who already knows about the basic of reading, pronouncing words the younger students just have not reach potentacil and these older students are pushing these younger kids the right way.
Another reason Having older students pair up with younger students is a very beneficial idea is that it teaches a students what skills are necessary to be a teacher just encase they want to be a teacher one day.
Third reason a younger student pairing up with an older student is beneficial is because it makes the older student feel more responsible for somebody else is learning like making sure the younger student knows this like making sure he/she knows how to pronounce words correctly make sure the younger student can be organized.
A fourth reason that proves younger kids pairing up with older kids is beneficial is that the teacher has a couple less students to deal with so less stress to deal with younger kids can be annoying to deal with sometimes. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F51C77EFF5D8 | Thomas Jefferson once said "Determined never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing ." Lening never wanted to be idle,for he kept on playing Apex Legends to be good at it. He worked hard. He reached his goal of winning a match on Apex Legends. Lening reached his goals because he was never idle, for he was always doing something in his life. Although some say that inactivity serves a purpose because we can wait for the right moment to start an errand or chore, actually being active serves a purpose because we can increase our knowledge in; work,home and gaming and if we are studying a subject such as; Medicine, 3D Animated Cartoons and CyberSecurity we can master it ,and later on we can teach others.
Some say that inactivity serves a purpose because we can wait for the right moment to start an errand or chore. Once a read an article on Newsela that was about how a men waited to start his goal, and he ended up getting his goal very quick. The man was called Generic_Name. Generic_Name wanted to save up to buy a house. He started ti save up for two months, later on he won the lottery, Generic_Name was very happy about it, then he deposited all his money into his savings account. Time pass by and he realized he had enough money to buy his dreamed house. Generic_Name bought the house, and he lived happily ever after.
If we are inactive we can wait for the right moment to start and errand or chore. My Aunt(Generic_Name) wanted to do and errand but she decided to wait because she saw on CNN News that if we wait to do and errand or chore the succession rate increases by 25%. She did the errand and it went more smoothly than ever, he waited to do it and she succeeded on doing it.
Being inactive for a while it's good because if we decide to rush things the odds might be against us. My friend Generic_Name always like to rush things. One day he couldn't wait to buy a game that he went in the middle of the night to buy it. When he got to the store, the store was already closed. He walked form the game store to his house. He was very sad that he could not bought the game, later on he saw a women in white standing right in front of him. He woman in white turn down and he saw her.. the we ran like crazy. It's always better to wait to do something such as buying a game, don;t rush things or you will end up like Generic_Name.
It's so good how many we can accomplish if we are always doing something, but if we are inactive we can always wait for the right moment to start doing something. "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"-Thomas Jefferson. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F52394B3500C | I think that school should not follow the business model. Adding two more hours to the schedule is not worth it for example some student need that time to other activities like go to the gym or play any sport and by adding two more hours that means that they are not going to be able to do all kinds of activities after they get out of school. There are some student whom work after they get out from school, they need that time to go work and make their money and having to stay on school two more hours means that are not going to have the same time as before to work also means that they are going to make less money. Staying on school two more hours will be a difficult task like myself I need go home after I am done with school because I have to take care of my house like make my sister food and clean my house I have to do that every day after I get out from 0school that is why it will be difficult task to do for me to stay two more hours on school.
I think that adding two more hours to the schedule and only having to go to school for four days only is not good idea sure we want to save energy as well but school can not afford to follow the businesses model. For example student can not afford to stay on school for 10 straight hours they are going be really tired and by being like that they might do their work wrong. Also those student whom work after school if they stay two more hours I think that they are going to be really tired for work I have some friends they start working at 5pm they get out of 3pm that means that they will have time to rest for two hours but if they have two stay on school for two more hours that means that they will get out of school at 5pm so they are not going to have time rest an just have to go straight to work. Another disadvantage of getting two more hours of school is that for those students whom works and get homework that means that they will not have time to do their homework for example myself I have to go home early to take care of my house I have to care of my house quickly so I can start doing my homework so staying two more hours on school for me it will be difficult to do all of that task after I get out from school.
Of course there are some benefits from adding two more hours to the school schedule like saving resources and saving energy also those student whom does not do anything after school can learn more because they can concentrate more they does no to worry about what they are going to do after school. There are some student whom does not do anything after they get out from school so for them it does not really matter whether they have o stay two more hours or they does not have to stay like my friend Generic_Name he is a student who does not do any actives or their go to work after school so for him it does not matter if have to stay two more hours. Having two more hours means that those student whom does not do anything after school can have more time con do their school work as well study more for their test. The benefit of adding two more hours only benefits those who does not do anything after school.
In conclusion trying to follow the businesses model is not good idea for our school, so many student are going to arguing for it they are going be saying that just by trying to save a little bit of energy and resources they have to change so many things and sacrifice their money and their time in fact is not a big different adding two more hours two the schedule every day because that means that we till have to use energy in those hours. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F530741D2297 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing." Jefferson's quote is accurate because we can not accomplish something without doing something in life. Everyone has a goal in life; to meet those goals we have to prepare and take steps to complete them. Some people may say that inactivity can also serve a purpose because there are people, including: famous people, family members, or teachers who has once been passionate about something they have done in their lives who quit and became someone bigger, but they are wrong. There is a lot that can be done and steps to take if we are always doing something for ourselves or for others because instead of doing nothing we can focus on our education to help us in the future or to make this world a better and wonderful place for everyone.
For starters, when students focus on their education all the time there is a lot that can be done. One reason why students can do so much with our education is because often education can prepare us for a big exams. For example, in class students are learning and reviewing different tropics repeatedly, which will help us pass any exams that will be given to us. This proves that when students are constantly learning something they can accomplish anything that they were leaning or reviewing throughout the year. This shows students how much they have done by focusing, instead of doing nothing. Another reason why students can do so much with their education is because it can help them graduate and accomplish bigger things in life. For example, most students that are always on task and doing everything that they should be doing have bigger plans in life than those who do not. This proves that students that accomplish more by being on task with their education will graduate with a future ahead of them. As a result, students that are focus and on task are more likely to feel incredible for everything they have accomplished in their education.
Second, a lot of people around the world can do so much to help other communities by volunteering and to make this world a better place. A reason why it is wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing something is because we can help those around us. For instances, there is a lot of people around the world that need our help, such as homeless people or families who live poor. We as a community can feed those who are homeless or can help families who need help with jobs or to get health insurance. This shows, that if we gather together as a group we can see how much we have done to help these people in need. Another reason to see how much we can do together is by making great choices in life. For example, we can plant fruits and vegetables and give them out for free to help people around us to consider to make better food choices. As a result, there is many opportunities we can take to make this world become a better place for everyone. We can only accomplish a lot by doing everything in our power to make better this world a better place.
In Jefferson's quote, he was saying that we can do so much by doing something and it is true. If we put our mind into something and do everything we can to accomplish what we have in mind we can do anything, but if we just sit there doing nothing, we will not have the outcome we expected to want. Everyone lives in different ways, but it is important to see what each of us individuals can accomplish in life. The only way we can graduate is by focusing and staying on task. Some may see the see the world as being lazy, but we can change that by helping out and planning something together as a group to make a change in the world. It is important that we are making a change for ourselves and our communities. These are some reason why we should always do something to get the outcome that we want to see. | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
F531D21A72F6 | The success is achieve something, is like a goal that we want reach. Nobody is perfect in this life, at contrary all the people make mistakes. For example: When I try to cook something to eat, sometimes I forgot to add an ingredient. As a result of this mistake the food obtain a different flavor, but of this failure I can learn and upgrade my skills like a chef.
Another example could be: when a student fail in a test, but has the chance to take a retake, is there when the student spend all their time studying to get a better grade. Daily the people commit diverse mistakes, but depend of us to determine if this mistakes will define us. Also we can take with enthusiasm this kind of failures and learn from them. Don't give up, we have to be strong. That a mistake don't stop you of achieve your goals. A characteristic of the humans is that we try to overcome all the challenges that we have in our life.
The failures teach us how to be a best person. The people just have to be more optimistics and see the failures from a good point of view. If you are negative with a failure or mistake, let me tell you that maybe you will loss the battle with yourself. If you are negative, is very probably that you will start to have bad thoughts about yourself. If you are negative, you never will be happy again, because you will stay thinking in the failure you had. I'm telling you all this, because I had this kind of problems previously.
In conclusion, don't let to the failures defeat you. You have to be strong and learn of them, to be a best person in the future. Or you want stay in the same place, with the same problems forever? No, right? You have to figth to overcome all the challenges that will appear in your life, and remember never give up. Let me tell you something else, I don't know a lot of english and I'm taking this test that have to be in english. I'm bringing all of me to get a good grade, what I mean with this. Well, even if I don't have a good grade, I learn many things that will help me in the future. I will not let the failure defeat me again, I will return more strong and with more knowledge. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F53B14C7F455 | One topic that people debate a lot is that students expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. they courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific career. I think is not a good idea for a student to commit to a career at a young age. because students are not old enough they careless and not make the best decision when they at a young age.
One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because, students are not old enough to know what they career in specific. they not prepared for the world students in high school don't have any experience of any career.
I think is a little to early. I will explore all type of career when my senior junior year starts I would make sure to select the right courses and the better one to be prepared or have experience for your career.
One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because sometimes teenagers are careless something may go wrong with your life or you just wanna do something new. all those classes that I selected from freshman year are not gonna be worth it because you gonna have to take new classes. for example my friend selected a technology class in freshman year, and he search it up how much they make in a year and that was not what he expected. so he change to materials and process to learn how to cut, and built houses.
One Reason why this would not be a good idea is because, when you are in a young are you make the wrong decision well sometimes but I think the best decision for me during high school is to to wait and study the better classes and the best and better career. and to be able to do that you have to care about classes and be responsible with school and career.
As you read you can see the reasons,I think the best idea for students is to focus in high school and get good grades when you get to senior year or college, you know more about life and careers I think that would be the best time to selected the best classes that are gonna guide you toward a specific career. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F53E50C57938 | Technically, students spend seven hours in school and seventeen hours at home regardless of what time they sleep or what they do when they get home. Students should have more time to study at home, rest and prepare for the next day. More hours in school will ware out the student causing it to effect their grades. I disagree with the school board's plan to extend the school day because students have extracurricular activities to do when they are not at school,and it disturb both the students and the teachers personal life.
Not all activities student perform happens in school. Adding an hour and a half to the school day can affect the student progress at home. For example, a student can be a player in a local soccer or basketball team, adding more hour will give the student less time to practice and get ready to the game or match and the student will also have little time to do his/her homework or complete an assignment or project given to them. The student having less time to practice is going to take a big tow on his/her team. Maybe the student is a very good player and his/her team needs him/her,he/she having small time to practice will make the team lose the match. This decision will not only effect the student but the teachers too.
Everyone wants to go home and relax from a long day work. The decision of adding ninety minutes to the school day is going to interrupt what the teacher and student do in their everyday life. Some teachers have families they have to take care of. They may have to pick their child or children from the babysitter, preschool or school if the don't use the bus. They also have doctor or dentist appointment they have to attend or have to take their children to. Teachers have chores or duties they must preform at home like shopping for groceries or picking little brother or sister from school. It could also be that they have another place to work at after school in order to earn more money. Both students and teacher have busy lives this decision is going to effect them.
There are many reasons why adding one hour and a half is bad but these are the ones I could come up with. I disagree with the school board's idea to extend the school day because students have extracurricular activities to do when they are not at school,and it disturb both the students and the teachers personal life. I think if the school board is going to add more time to the school they should high the pay of the teacher because it take time off their schedule. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
F54386A8122B | Today i will be discuss if it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age? most may disagree with this statement, but i will hopefully grab your attention and hope you could agree with me.
I think it is a good for students to decide on there career this early because number one in today's society everything is depended on technology. What are students into nowadays there phones, video game, IPads , computers, etc. So pretty high advanced technology is everywhere, My point that i'm trying to make here is that the majority of students get either there phones or computers at a young age. So in my opinion i think that there future is set way before high school. But again my point here is that yes i do agree that careers should be set when they enter high school.
With entering high school students are introduced to a lot of programs at the start of there new journey to life. theres programs in high school that take students to colleges and take them on tours or they either tell the what to major on in that specific college, With planning early for your future you save time for stressing out last minute. I feel like this shouldn't just be small societies making students plan really early this should be the whole nation because as students we are the future of the united states so why not start 4 or 5 years ahead. Although some people may say that this is a huge distraction only because students would want to just focus on the future instead of focusing on whats happening right now.
So the main argument is that I 100% agree with students choosing there careers at a young age. My main reason is that the early the better with chances of programs and guidelines to help you on your way to a better education theres no way that you can stress for a career. in addition to my statement I also think that schools should have a bunch of programs helping students out with there future that way they won't stress there last year of high school, and they won't have to apply to colleges not knowing what to do. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F55F4FD90B3C | Some schools used cell phone during classroom because for educational purposes. If students doesn't used cell phone during class, how can students find information about the assignment. Some school doesn't allow students to used cell phone because the teachers says that students can find the information in books. Students says that by using cell phone is much easier to find information than in books.
Some teachers allow students to use cell phone during class so that students can find information easier. If students used books, some of the students can't even find the information that the students needed. for example, students that used cell phone is more likely to finish earlier than students that using books. in additions, Cell phone have more information than book. So, teachers should allow students to used cell phone during class for educational purposes.
Schools should allow the students to used cell phone in the class, so that students can work much faster and easier. If schools doesn't allow the students used phone in the class, some students going to have a hard time to work and students is going to take to much time on the assignment. Lots of students prefer cell phone because it much easier to find information. If students used books, students will take time to go back and forth and find the information that the students needed. Schools should allow the students to used cell phone in the class.
Technology is getting efficient and faster, so schools should let students used the technology so that students can get more information and can search any assignment that students need. Technology is adding new stuff every day, so that the students can learn something new every day. If students used the technology, students can get smarter and technology will improve every day. If students used books, students will never learn new things and students will have the same information. Schools should let the students use the technology so that the students will have more knowledge.
In conclusion, Teachers should not keep giving students books to study because students will never learn new thing in life. In addition, school should let students used technology in the classroom so that students will undertand technology and new information. Schools should improve the technology for the students, so that students can work faster. Technology will improve and students will get smarter, so that shools will provide technology for students. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
F5609AECDD96 | People think that working with a group is because they can talk to other more. If they work together they can talk more and joke around. The can even get lunch and hang out if they have a break time. Some people like to talk a lot and geting to know the people they work with.
If you are working with a group you can get more frends they can get more friends by talking to them. Second by doing things for them like helping them with their homework. You also ge more friends by making them laugh and giving them things.
I know it is hard getting to know people more getting to know people can be hard because some people are shy like me. It might take them a while to met new poeple. Some people just do not like talking because they can be really shy and get nervous their hands can get really sweaty.
I chose working wih a group because the benefis can help out a lot of people like me that are really shy and onse I get to know them I won't get shy as much like I use to be. Finally people are fun to hang out with like my English teacher Generic_Name she is a really good teacher and makes everyone smile and laugh. That is why I chose working with a group because people like Generic_Name can make their job fun and exiced also making it fun to learn. I hope you enjoy reading this and I also wish this makes sense when you are reading this. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F57B95D17755 | No not good for older and younger students to be in a program. But sometimes older kids become mean and don't care about the younger just care themself to have fun. It's not normal for that to happen and it will feel weird harder stuff for the younger ones don't know and the older kids think it's too easy. There's so much reasons that it shouldn't happen doesnn't feel right.
If it was like in the summer for an activity that would be great because you learn about how the older and younger kids are. The younger kids will want to do childess stuff and the older ones want to just be on there phones and just talk. Sometimes the older ones need to teach the younger ones to be more grown up so they learn about the older ones. The teachers mostly will try to tell the older ones to help the younger ones to be grown up.
So usually they shouldn't create schools like that it will feel completly different because there will be different stuff then real schools with older and older kids and younger and younger kids. The younger ones could sometimes scream and run or goof around a lot and the older ones sometimes will feel annoyed by them. So lot's times I feel like the older ones will feel unconfortable from the little ones. When you grow older you learn what you do now and not like when you were younger.
Most the time you usually want to be friends with people your age not too much of a different age. Sometimes it can happen to be friends with someone older or younger but most times your age. Always try to be yourself and not change your additude. Sometimes the older kids will need to try make the little kids happy by talking with them and have fun with them. But not for to long you should because it will get boring doing it for a long time. When u finshis they will sometimes try bothering you because they liked what you did but just leave them alone after.
These are examples why sometimes you should or shouldn't allow those schools with older and younger students. After when you grow older you the one teaching the new kids to be grown up. Try remeber the times you were little and what the older kids did to you do that with others. But there could be lot's of times younger ones a different and you were that way 8 years ago. Help everyone be a grown up kid and still think not too much they should add schools with older and younger kids. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F58106266977 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to idle...
It is wonderful how much may be done.
If we are always ." Do what we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose.
I try to do my best to Accomplish everything, i can as fast i can to catch up. Not being active its not good nor healthy, and It wouldn't help you progress in future reference. it helps you to be more prepare and organize and. ready for everything. Always have a mindset goal, realistic goals, and measurable.
We do Accomplish more if we're doing something, keeping yourself occupied. Sometimes when you're not doing nothing, (meaning) being inactive, It's to rest for an amount of time. To think and, analize our point of views and,ideas.
"Determine to never be Idle" (meaning lazy) I know there's time when we all want to be lazy and not doing nothing, but thats not get you no where near your Goals. As Thomas Jefferson said " It's Wonderful how much can be done if we are always doing".
Thomas Jefferson has an amazing point with this Qoute.
This qoute Has alot of meanful information behind it, and i think everyone
Has a their own way to learns about it.
Not any person create a good qoute mostly, Qoute are written or said by people Whom were Famous , or made a great impact in our world, and, they're always going to be remember as the person and their story. This is all i have to say about my prompt. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F581373D36A4 | Generic_Name
Generic_School
Generic_City
Generic_City
Generic_Name
04/9/2019
Teacher: Generic_Name
1 ST Period
Room 3119
Generic_School
Generic_City
Dear Generic_Name
I write to teacher Generic_Name today with the benefit of work in group. The work in group is more better then work alone, in the beneficial is the student work in group is have more opportunity of learn more with other students in the class, they can work more better and understand more quickly the theme in the class and have more collaboration, learn to respect other students. They in the group can say new ideas for the team.
I think in the personal the work in group is more productivity in the student because have a good communication with the students and teacher, they have more positive attitude in the ideas and participation.
For example, students in the group work more and learn more quickly because in group have a higher quality of ideas, and students can change ideas together about the theme in the class and have a better determination in the job of the class.
Second, work in group have a big benefit in the class because students understand problems more quickly, and they have solution in theme complicated with ideas and dedication in class.
Third, students have collaboration with other students have a good relation and learn to respect others person for religion or ideas. They have more communication in the class and have more better grade in the school.
However, work alone not have good result because almost all the student have fear to say ideas for the critic of other students in the class, and they have slow work in the class for complication of the theme.
The preference is work with a group have more benefit in the student and teacher to learn and teach other students in the school have more communication, better work and good relation in the school.
sincerely
Generic_Name | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 |
F5817C081342 | Is a positive attitude key to success? Well, In my opinion I strongly agree, I believe a positive attitude will take you far in life and will let you accomplish many goals you've set for yourself. For instance having a positive attitude doesnt just affect you but it also affects others in a negative or positive way, for example motivation; you could motivate someone and inspire them just by doing you and accomplishing youre goals or you could even brighten somebodies day up by doing small gestures. In the other hand there will be people that dont want too see you do good, people that want to bring you down and people that have envy over you. That shouldn't bring you down that should be more motivation to do better because those are people who are jealous, people that are jealous of something you have and that they dont have. There are people who have started from the bottom with very little and are now doing big things, by having a positive mind set and believing in themselves. A positive attitude is the key to success all you need is to believe in yourself, have patience, and ignore all the ignorant people.
In my experience a positive attitude is a key to success, why? Well, when I was younger I had a difficult time with the English language because I only spoke Spanish at the time, which then resulted that I had to repeat a grade. Being left behind made me feel dumb and stupid, I also felt embarrassed; embarrassed of saying my age to the other kids when they would ask how old I was, I thought they would make fun of me and call me names. Through out the years I got more mature and I didnt really care no more about my age, I then found out that there were other kids that were in the same situation as me, which made me feel better about myself after.
When I got to high school I met my case manager, he was and still is a really nice guy and really cares about the students. When I met him he asked me many questions one of them was how old I was when I told him he was surprised because I was older then the other students. He then asked why I was 16 years old with freshmen classes, I told him why and he understood. A few days pasted by and he asked me how I felt being behind the sophomore class, I told him I didnt like it and how I felt a little dumb. He then told me how I would feel about graduating with that class, I then knew what he was about to tell me and I liked the idea of it. He told me I could do three years but I would have to do two years in one, I didnt care if it would be more work all I was thinking of was graduating on time. So, of course I accepted and now I am here taking my writing SOL with my positive attitude! If I didnt have a positive attitude I wouldnt be here right now, and for sure I wouldnt be graduating in May of 2020. Im very happy and thankful that I have this opportunity, and I know I will make it through this school year if I believe in my self.
The other night I was going through my Facebook feed and I stumbled upon a link that one of my friends re-post, on that link there was an article of a women that is from El Salvador, and that women use to live near to where we used to live. On that article it said "First women Pilot from El Salvador" when I first read it I could not believe what I was reading, I was very happy for her and I know she worked so hard to get to where she's at. It is incredible knowing a women from a country that does not have much to give is now flying in the air going around the world. Reading that article motivated me to set goals for my self and to keep on going, if she can accomplish her dream I can to.
I admire my mother, she's gone through so much and has risked her life to have a better one, not just for her but also for her family that she had to leave behind. Before she came to the United States her mother didn't want her to come she thought it was to much of a risk. My mom knew what she was getting her self into she believed everything would come out fine, the day my aunt was about to leave to Mexico my mother begged her to take her. My aunt would deny and deny her until she finally said yes. My mom packed up her stuff and left with my aunt behind her mothers back, but before she left she left a note for her mother saying if she doesnt leave now they'll never have a better future. My mother has walked thousands of miles and has nearly starved to death to get to where she is now. She worked her head off trying to make enough money to support her family, she had three jobs and as soon as she clocked out of one she would walk miles to get to the other one. Years later my grandma got her Visa and was able to come visit, she regretted doubting her and apologized for not believing in her. If my mom didnt have a positive mind set and if she listened to my grandma she would still be in El Salvador; washing her clothes in the river, eating beans and eggs everyday, and earning six dollars a day. She has a better life now then she had before, but she still has more to accomplish and I am here to help her. With her positively she can go far.
Therefore a positive attitude is the key to success, negativity won't take you anywhere all it does is let you watch others have fun while they enjoy life. Positivity allows you to set goals and to accomplish them. Many people have met their goal by believing in them selves, no matter how difficult it is they keep on pushing.
I believe attitude does have an impact on life choices, if you put no effort on a task your set to do, that task will never be done or it'll turn out horribly. A positive attitude is the key to success all you need is to believe in yourself, have patience, and ignore all the ignorant people. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
F584D9BB5F5C | " Has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had a positive or negative affects on people's lives?". As we know, technology has became one of the most important things in our lives, and people now are abusing the use of technology and forgetting to contact with the others around them. Although it has both positive and negative affects on people, but we cannot declaim that our lives have been easier and better since we have had techonlogy.
First, technology are used everyday by people at all ages because of its functions. We can complete many things online by using technology such as study, entertain, shopping, etc. For example, students use technology to serve for their learning like stuyding online or researching important things for their lessons. Lots of people also use it to play game, chat with their friends, or shopping online to relax after a hard-working day.
With technology, we can find and do almost things we need so we can save our times and will have more times to do the other activities like spending time with family, or hanging out with friends.
Second, technology helps us adpot hot problems, new informations of society faster and easier. We can read news on the websites, or watch the agenda to update more things everyday so we can have better knowlegde about things around us. Besides, many poor people have been helped by the others because the news about them have been shared wide-spread. This showed the major of technology and the care of people give to the others.
Many people said the use of technology has the limitation of human contact, and it's not all right. We can easily contact to the others by texting, calling as technology is developing . Using technology in general and social media in particular also can help us make friends. People often use Facebook, Instagram, or Snapchat to add friends over the world and follow them. It is a best way to know our friends, family members' activities without asking because we don't have too much time to speak with them everyday. Otherwises, we still have to speak face to face to the others as much as possible so we can understand them better, and it also shows our care to them.
Not only technology, everything in the world also has both positive and negative sides, and the main idea is ourselves. If we use technology for the right purposes, and can limit the time of using it, technology will be very useful to our lives. In short, technology can limit human contact or not based on us so let's try using it as limited as we can and don't forget to use it right ways, right times, and right purposes. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
F58DF8739B42 | Dear Mr. Principal today I want to talk abot how most employees are looking for a specific characteristics in potential employee even if they don't know the job. I agree with this prompt because a person not always know how to do a job, but they can learn.
Some people when they are new on a job they don't really know what to do, they have to be trainig for another person that alredy know the job like a manager, maybe employees are looking for a manager, the person they contract to be the manager maybe her/ him don't have the experience at all, but they can learn over the time they are working. For example when I came to this country I start to work with my stepfahter to put ruffin, I didn't know how to do the job, bit I learn over the time that I work with him. Last summer I was working on a restaurant like a cashier and I had a problem because I didn't know the differences on the coins because in my country it was really different, but I learn a lot because the manager from the restaurant help me to be succesful on the job, and I put a lot of eargerness to leanr the job.
A lot of people when they know the job they like to work hard becuase they want to learn more about it, some people that alreayd know the job they can learn new things about the job from another employee or manager. A lot of people here in United States work hard for the benefits of their family not just for a benefit to be hired, They know that if they work hard their childrens can leanr abot their experience, and they can be a better person, a lot of parents like to be a example for their childrens, so the way their childrens know that work hard is something that you need to be proud of. Some of them work hard to achieve their goals, or to have a better future.
However, be responsable is another important thing that you need to keep in mind, be responsable can help you to get hired on the job, if you are responsable the main boss are going to see that they need people that are responsable to be more succesful. A lot of companies grow up because their employee are responsable, and they complete all the activities their boss ask them to do. When I was in my country a lot of people tried to put like a store, but it never work because the people they put to work they didn't show up on time, and they weren't responsale on their activities, and the store had to close because they didn't improve what they want to do. Be responsable is one thing that is going to help you to be succesful in life becuase if you are new to a job and you show up on time they are going to see that you are really responsable with your activities and that's what most of the jobs are looking for people how are responsable.
Another thing that employers need to know that they have to contract a person that is going to have patient, in every job they have a manager and employers should know if the manager have the patient to be training people that is new on the jop. Lets do a example some managers are impatient they don't like to help people that don't know the job because they said that they don't have the time to be training people because they think that the person is never going to learn how to do the job, or they have another important activitie to do instead of be training a new person. In a lot of restaurants or stores the managers are always with good actitude and they like to help people.
In my conclusion I would say that a employee don't have to know how to do a job if they are responsable and they like the job him/her are going to learn what they need to do to be succesful on the job. Another thing is that you don't born with experiences you need to learn from the callenges life give to you and you can learn from your mistakes. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 |
F591A84185A4 | I was thinking to work at the police station because I can work on cases that could allow me to travel around the world and some cases that can be cool and super fun. It would be fun to work at the police station because you can travel to different countries and cities you have never been to. Therefore, you can explore from above when riding a air plane and you can meet different people. Also experience of what type of cultures people do in their country.
Working at the police station would be cool and super fun because I can work on fun cases, involving to ride different vehicles or going undercover and going places. Just imagine your manager assigned you to go to Korea and you stayed there for a few years. You have made new friends and learned the Korean language. You had to take Tae Kwan Do and you made it to black belt. However you still work with the U.S. police. And you also observe of what they do in Korea, for example, how they harvest rice and at what type of climate they need to be in or how the people eat their food and how younger children greet the older men and women. Also experience what people do in their specific culture and what laws they follow and things they need to respect. And also how they sell to get money.
Also working with police means you are not alone, you have teammates with you. They can also help you on cases that can be dangerous. Your teammates can be helpful and fun because they can help make wise decisions and on something risky, like you have their back and they have yours. They can also be help and caring/fun when you are stressed out and they try to make you feel better or trying to comfort you and not making you feel lonely. For example, On one Sunday morning you felt sick and a strange feeling you had something missing. You ate breakfast and you remembered you needed to finish on one of your assignments your manager had gave you. you felt even more sick. All day you tried to erase the fact that you didn't complete you assignment, you tried to throw that thought away, but you couldn't. You wanted to not even think about and wishing the thought could just disappear. You felt like brain was rotting for thinking too, much. You called you best friend ( that also worked at the police station:) because you wanted some company. When she entered your apartment, she saw that you weren't in the living room. She went to your bedroom noticed that you had been eating junk food all day because you had lots of your favorite corn chips and an empty box of pizza beside you. Just then she started to stare at you, and you were reaching for a bucket of your favorite ice cream, strawberry. She looked at you and saw that you scooped a spoonful of ice cream and you shoved it into your mouth, with your TV on. (You were watching the Titanic with the lights off because you felt sad and had nothing to do) She went up to you and hugged you and asked what has happened to you and why you were feeling down. You told her why you were so miserable and guilty for not finishing your assignment. She stoop up and told you that she was going to help you. You also stoop up lazily, but you felt excitement. You went to go change and finished the assignment on time. This is why it's a good thing to be friends at work for you can't be so lonley. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F5A5B0906BE8 | Technology
Technology could bring both positive and negative effects to people's lives, I think there more positive effect to technology, then negative. Technology is very effective, in many positive ways. People use technology to do many things, with out even going out there homes. Technology can even bring emergency help, way more faster. Technology is big effect to people's daily lives by helping them get locations faster, and keeps us informed on what's going on in the world, and also helps people get educated straight from home. Technology is not negative, its made this country, the strong country it is today because of technology.
People will say technology is bad, because of horrible stories they have heard. From people going crazy over technology, and on how little kids now cant even be happy if they dont have a phone in front of there face. also because they think its bad that young kids dont even want to go outside anymore, because there to busy staring at a TV all day. So most people think that technology is a negative effect on lives, because of those reasons. Thats not the case, if you really think about it, technology is in our hands, if we use it in a bad way thats a choice on us. Technology isnt the one to blame for all the bad stories over it. Technology is the key factor on why were still here today breathing and staying healthy.
Technology is a positive effect on our lives, it keeps us informed on what is happening in the world. also on what happened in the world millions of years ago. So many good ways technology has helped this world and now we know more about earth then we ever did because of technology, but not just that. It has also'ed saves lives with its help. My mom almost died in a car crash in the highway 10 years ago, but only cause someone stopped by, to help her, and called 911 with there phone the ambulance came just in time to save my moms life, Because of that one phone call, technology has had a huge positive effect on my life, and others.
It will always have a big positive effect on peoples lives, and will always have many ways to help us. it keeps us entertained, educated, healthy, and safe. what else could we ask for, technology is always going to be more positively effective then negatively, because of the stuff it does for peoples daily lives. Technology is good and a positive resource to always have with you. No matter what, if your in a horrible situation it will be there to help you, and if your in a beautiful situation, it will be there to help you take a nice video or picture of the moment to remember because of technology. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F5A6427C32CA | Are you interested in pursuing your interest business career.? Many schools have the partnership with companies that allow students to explore certain occupation through interships and shadowing opportunities to discover their interest in pursuing their type of employment.
They can accomplish this with their ability of communication, talent,
Students like me would like to have the oppurtunity to discover a business employment in your company. I can bring a lot of benifits to it. I have good communication with others and a positive attidude and mindset. I have the ability to come up with many ideas for your makeup line.
My ability of working with others is very good I think is important in a business industry to have that type mindset with other people. Working with others brings positive outcomes, businesses grow more when people know how to work together and know how to communicate with each others. The partnership work is what you need in your comapany, i am a very hard worker.
However, I am very good at doing my makeup I think you would really like to have me in your comapony, I know a lot about makeup than you might think I do. I use to work in a salon where i use to do makeup for partys. A lot people really liked my work and at one point in my life i had to do a celeberty makeups, I got to work with Annastasyas makeup line and Morph but not only that i got to work with Huda beauty makeup. I brought a lot to them and that is why their makeup line is so will known now. Bussines can grow more threw out the time when their is , better ideas, new stuff, more hard work something i offering to bring to you. I am interested in pursuin this type of employment because I know i can make a goo improvent in leaning more about makeup.
I can learn very fast that one of the other benifts i have for you i learn fast just by looking sometimes you dont even have to explain to me the stuff that is very benifecial for you compay my ability of learning is great for you.
You having me to visit and learning more about this employment can really make you improve. Students like me just want to have that oppurtunity to have a good carrer and be suseful in life. Shadowing opportunities to discover whether they are interested in pursuing that type of opportunities will make a big change on everyones componies, they will have a lot of new oppportunies to proof that they are really good at what they say they are and proof to them selfs that they are.
Student partnerships pursue students to have new jobs and have a better tabeled life. These are my reasons on why you should let me have the opportunity to have this chance on working on your company. My ability of commu ication will bring you a lot. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
F5B510BCCA2D | Enjoyable activity is a good thing when it comes to being yourself and having fun. Enjoyable activities can be sports and ban.
Sports is enjoyable activity because athletes use sports as a excuses to get good grades, so they wont have to tell there friends that they are really smart. They do this because they dont want there friends to call them a nerd or what not. Sports can be a fun thing to some people, but others use that to show there smartness without getting laughed at. They can also, use sports to prove to there parents that they are worthy. Sports can be used in a fun way too. Such as, going out on the court or the field, just being yourself, and acting a fool.
Another joy able activity is band. Band can be a enjoyable activity by showing who you really are through music. Music is always a big part of somebody or something. The reason why is they can express them selfs through music. Some examples can be, when your trying to explain yourself to somebody, you can do that by using music. Such as, find a song that you think tells people of you the most and tell them if you want to get to know me listen to this song.
In closing, enjoyable activities can be fun and hard sometimes but u have to stick with it and pass through that. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F5BC1532013D | Some schools offer distance learning as and option for students to attend classes from home by way of online video conferencing ,Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? There are too many ways to appreciate the opportunity to take online classes ,at my point of view this is a good tool to people who's not able to attend to a regular school or for people who needs more credits to graduated .Some people attend to take online classes because they don't have enough time to attend to a regular school because they have to work in the morning to support a family, take classes online is the best way to get a career ,and get a better job. This tools would benefits people ,I have my own example that take classes online is really helpful to graduate because ,I am taking classes online because i need credits to graduate and it is a good opportunity that some schools offer to students in the same way as me .one of the advantage at being taking classes at home is that you can work and study at the same time ,and you can have your own schedule and the best thing is at home you dont have to travel to other place
. When you are taking online classes you are allow to work whenever you want
,and also you can eating at the same time because you dont have nobody to pressure you to do the assignment because you have the enough time
.
However there also some disadvantage of take online classes because sometimes the students don't use this opportunity from the best way .One disadvantage is that some students when they are taking online classes they can uses the phone and those devices distract them so much,Sometimes they don't have nobody to help them if have any question or needs help with something . One more disadvantage is that when the students are taking classes online they attend to loss interest and prefers do other things instead of do their assignments
,because they don't even care about their grades because they don't have a teacher to pressure them to do their assignments ,but everything depends how much interest the student put in pass the online classes to improve the grades and gained more knowledge .Sometimes when the students take online classes and regular school they attend to violated the rules of the school because they are accustomed to be in the habit of work at home they dont want to follow the directions of the teacher, and they also what to do whatever they want and that is not fear for the teacher who has to tolerate it.
There are some advantages and disadvantage of attend classes from home by online classes ,but everything depends the way that you uses this tools to gained more knowledge and be prepared for life . | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
F5CB9849B913 | To accomplish something there is always gonna be some inactivity once and a while. Well everyone has their own different type of way to accomplish something, but there is always some kind of inactivity at times; but not always. I think that we really do accomplish more when there is something else happening.
Everyone in this world is different compared to the next person. Everyone has their own unique style of completing an assignment. Some examples are Listening to music , working outside, working with someone else, and basically anywhere else. These small things can help somebody to Stay in task to complete something. Myself personally I love to be listening to music to get my assignments done. I am able to accomplish more than what I usually do. Before i never got my school work completed cause i was really bored of doing it, but when I first played music. I was flowing threw to get my work done.
Sometimes when trying to accomplish anything in life. Some people may experience some inactivity. Two things that happen the most to people are Zoning out or a phone notification. These two things are what happens to people the most, But they can always prevent it from happening. Me for myself i love using my phone. I never get bored of it. Sometimes while i'm working to get my assignments done and complete. There will always be a notification that will make my phone go "Buzz buzz" and then ill have the courage to see what it is. Now I have overcome that. What i do now is i put my phone on silent away from me while its connected to my Bluetooth speaker playing music. This always helps me from zoning out. Music playing in the background prevents me from zoning out.
some people can complete everything without a doubt, But not everyone could stay on task to complete something to accomplish it. We all had accomplish something in this world; but some people havent accomplish anything at all. Their minds are not set for reality I must say. Their minds are inactive and not set for anything. People can change. Anything can happen. Nothing in this world is really impossible, well if you set your mind to it. People dont believe in themselves to Accomplish anything. The inactivity that they got can change. Before i used to never get anything completed/Accomplish. I was thought I wasnt enough to do anything. I always made bad choices. My mind wasnt set for anything. I didnt care. I thought my life was a joke and soon it will be over as soon as I know it. School was hard. I didnt really get anything done. I was never the perfect student. My grades were bad. I had no faith in myself. I thought i could not do anything right. I never accomplished anything. The only thing I could accomplish is messing up everything. School, at home, In a public area, Anywhere.
I made bad choices back in my pass; But now its completed different. I have learn and seen everything that I did. My mind wasnt set on success only failure. Only I realized that I could change not just who i am but everything. If i set my mind into it. I started to accomplish assignments at school. I was doing very well then I thought i could do. I started to see a huge change in myself. It felt like i was a whole new person. I had accomplish to change my life. I saw the success. It wasnt hard. I just had to believe in myself to do it. If I could change then i know people in this world can change also.
Although accomplishing something no matter if its simple, Difficult, short, or long. Its still better off to accomplish it even tho there is always gonna be a little bit of inactivity, and its okay there are always a way to over come it. Everyone can always change. With the power of your mind and yourself you can always accomplish more if you are always doing something else with maybe a little of inactivity. | 2.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
F5D2D8C81370 | Cellphones should be allowed because that might help students to communicate with their parents if they have any kind of emergency while they are in school. It would be helpful for students to find any kind of information on internet when they forget their computers or other devices that they might use as a resource to find information. Another reason is that students will have the advantage to use their cellphones while they are in the middle of the class, and it means that those schools trust students that they use their cellphones properly during class and they are proving to others schools that student can be trusted to use their cellphones during classes. Students also can give an example to other students that cellphones are little machines that help us in everyday lives, and they also might be giving advice to students in how they can be benefited from chance that the school provides to them.
On the other side why cellphones should not be allowed in schools is because schools think that students will not use their cellphones in a right path, and they will become more addictive to their cellphones where social media it's included. Most of the population have shown that a big percent of the population use their cellphones to spend their time in social media, whether is Facebook, Twitter, and Instragram. Another percent of the population spend their time in YouTube which that YouTube brings us some advantage and disadvantage. The advantage might be the tutorials that can help us to find information, how to fix something that you are capable to repair, and how to provide some skills from something that you like. The disadvantage might be that people might spend too much time watching video games or a new episodes from their favorite comics characters. Another reason to not use cellphones in school is because when there is a fight between two students, they start to take pictures or videos of the fight rather than prevent and called anyone who can help.
Most of the student will agree to have cellphones in schools because some of them use their cellphones in a right path and some of them do not. For those who use their cellphones in a properly way will say that cellphones are going to help them more than what teachers expect. Some of this students also will help them to find whatever meaning of a word that they do not understand. There are going to be some students who speak different language as their first language and it is very helpful to have cellphone while they are in school. For example some of the students who speak Spanish and they do not understand what the word say, they directly go to their cellphones and translate the word. Then they start to use it in some sentences to challenge themselves and improve their English. Those students who agree to have cellphones in school and do not accomplish the rules in how to use their cellphones properly, they will be playing around while they are in class, listen to music, and probably they will be texting with their friends. For some students will be annoying to have cellphones in class because it is going to be a distraction even if they are not using their cellphones.
From other perspective teachers might believe that is wrong to have cellphones in class, whether they are using it in a proper way or not because they might believe that it's a distraction for every students, and even if they are good students they will use their cellphones while teachers are explaining some important information. They also believe that some of them will use their cellphones to finish homework that is not for their class and will cause that students will not be paying attention in what the teacher is saying. Teachers also say that students will be texting in class and some of them playing video games and then when they tell them to put their cellphones away, they do not obey and some of them insult the teacher. Some teacher do not bother them if a student have a cellphone or not because they think that as long the student is doing his homework and classwork, they are going to be fine.
I believe cellphones should be allowed in schools, but under supervision of the teachers and principles. One of the reason why I believe that should be allowed is because cellphones are very useful and helpful for me in many ways. In my situation I speak Spanish as my first language and when I do not understand a word I go to my cellphone and I translate the word and then I try to understand what the word means. I also use my cellphone when I do not have my computer with me, and I do my classwork with my cellphone, and then I turn my work in. But some students do not understand when they have to use their cellphones and when I see students listening to music it does distracted me because I am trying to concentrate in what the teachers is explaining because If I don not pay attention it is hard to understand later on. I also see how teachers get mad when a student do not obey when they have to put their cellphones away, and then the student start to argue with the teacher. I strongly agree that school should allow students to have cellphones because it does provide a lot of advantages. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
F5E70573B058 | The prompt talk about who people have own instincts and ideas or to make their own decisions. People make decisions in their own life. Nobody have to tell them what to do in their life. He or her can follow their own instincts or idea. Everyone should make own choice or own decisions in their life. Their life is so important to them that they could make own decisions without people tell what to do or ruin their life. People should be wrong about their life not other people life. If they want to help they should talk with the people if want help or not. I know everyone want to help out but sometime they don't want help for other people,friends or their family. They could solve their problem at there own.
For example we don't need people to tell other people how to live their life. They can make their decisions. They a lot people that make bad decision or good decisions in their life. It good that they did bad choice because they real what they did and they won't do it again in their life. People can live their life but they have to make good choice their life not bad choice. They should have good friends that make good decision in their that always help them in their life. If you have a friend that make bad decision sometime at friends won't help you out. Then you are on your own with you're problem. Sometime good to hang out with friends but you have to make good choice if you're going to hang out with your friend's.
I know people can make own decision and can help other people to not make bad choice in life. Is good you got friends and family that have your back when you want to make own decisions in your own life. Sometime family don't agree with your choice or decision you want to make. You're life is important you should make good choice in you're life to happy or live your life with you're family's and friends. You don't have to wrong about other people opinion. Sometime good to listing to other people opinion if it will help you understand your problem or to make good decision or not. Some people don't want help for other people. They don't want other people to be wrong about their life or be noise. The only who makes decision are the adults or the teenager but not the kid's. It's great that teenager are make decision in their life. Teenager sometime make bad choice when they are with their friends hang out. They learn the lesson to don't make bad choice in their life or to not hang out with their friends. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3.5 |
F5EA98F42452 | Have you ever dreamed of visiting a place you wanted to visit for a long time? A place famous for it's culture, traditions, food, advanced cities, etc. Well, Japan is a place which is famous for most of the things I have mentioned.
I want to visit Japan because it's a place famous for their culture, tradition, advanced cities, technology and food. Japan is a place where all animes are created. Their famous food "Sushi" is also an reason for me to visit Japan. This food is liked by many people all over the world.
Once I reach there, I will explore all the major cities, eat their famous dishes and watch the anime which is famous over there. I will also try to learn Japanese and understand their tradition and culture. Another reason why I want to visit is because, Japan ranks at Top 10 for having low crime rates in the world and Japan ranks Top 5 for being a busiest country in the world.
I've seen many YouTubers making video of their stay in Japan and how they enjoyed staying there. Those videos are an another reason for me to visit Japan. I also want to enjoy those amazing moments like they did.
Japan is the country where I would like to visit because of their culture, technology, busiest cities, food and all the other videos which makes me to visit there. Another reason for me to visit Japan is because Japan is at Top 10 for having lowest crime rates in the world. and Japan has also been ranked at Top 5 for being busiest country in the world. Once I reach there, I will eat their famous dishes, explore the major cities, meet many people and watch animes. | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 |
F5EFA67354E6 | Yes, I do agree with Former British Prime Minister Winston Churchill's statement, because people do fail over and over again without loosing enthusiasm.
I have good enthusiasm. For example I failed a lot of classes in high school and I had to repeat them I gave all of my best effort on every class I had to take even if I wasn't good at it or if I didn't like it because I don't want to keep repeating them just because I didn't try i have great confidence on every skill I have and i always try to improve them in a better way I ask for help to see what i need improve on and I eventually did get better and it was worth it because it made things much easier i understood all of the problems I had trouble with I brought my grades up on the class I was failing on i mostly got B's on the tests and quizzes it's way better than getting a D I was glad that I was making changes and improvement on my skills it was the best thing I have ever done.
I have dont ever give up, for example one time i remember i had to do make a little video game for my school project and as i was making it i didn't know what kind of video game to make i didn't have any ideas of what to make and i thought of giving up because i didn't know what to make and then i started thinking of making a first person shooting game and it was mostly like the game Call of Duty but i made a little change to it i put in the choices to choose any gun from the previous games it can be a gun from any Call of Duty game i feel like that was a good idea because some people would really like to have some of the old weapons back and they like a game that is boots on the ground and i also made a zombie game mode i put in some better things in that mode and i kept adding more details to the game and i am actually glad that i didn't give up because it tells me that I am not a quitter and that i wont be giving up so easily.
some people would disagree with Winston Churchill statement because they dont believe that failure would consist to success they think that if you fail your gonna fail again over and over no matter how hard you try your always gonna fail i know some people say that because i had a friend that literally gave up so fast it was pretty sad and i kept telling him that you have to keep trying there's no other choice you can do but push yourself and he didn't he just gave up and didn't even bother to try. However not everyone gives up so fast because they believe in themselves they don't loose their confidence even when they are not at their best they still wont give up because they know they can do better the next time they do it you just got to keep trying till you make it. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
F5FAD709AAFC | Some people say that people should make their own decision. Other people say that people should not make their own decision .
People should make their their own decision because life is important other people can't choes my decision and my life, and every one has free dom, every thing they want they can make it for their future. So if we do hard work and study more, then every thing we want we can get it. Every family should suport their child to studay hard and think about their futur life, and also if our family does't support us then we can't choes our decision and we can't grow. So we have to care about our futur and family to suport them also and have great life. No boday want to their life compare to some one eals. We have to be powerful person in our life. A person need to be establish our decision,and sociologist person. The person should receptive to admonition of their family because family always choes the good stuff for us, and never chiets. So if we don't have family suports then we have to support our self and choes our decision. If some one want to have the good futur, job and famous person their live they have to be have a good defender behind them, or someone does't have some one to support them, then they have to support their self. A person should listen other people idea and make their one futur. People can't make my decision. Every want to be like seek person in their life. If some one is seeker in their life then they can get their goals easly. In real life if someone do more pattient they can grow more and more, they can get their goals very easy. Finay a person should be a seek, bold, ect to make their decision and get their goal and have great live and futur. | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F5FF5E9E553C | On september 2, 2015 Generic_Name was entering his first year of high school, and already knew what he wanted to do with his life, and that was to be a doctor, but was having trouble on what kind of doctor he wanted to be. So he decided to do some research on what kind of doctor he wanted to be before entering high school. Finally, Generic_Name decided he wanted to be, a surgeon. Took all of the classes he needed to be one. Few years later, became a surgeon, making lots of money, living in a nice house, and is living the best life he could dream of. In some societies, students are expected to identify a career by the time they enter high school. Personally I think they should identify a career by the time they enter high school. So they can have the opportunities on what they need to do to get the job and not to be stressed out too much. Those are the reasons why they should commit to a career by the time they get to high school.
The first reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school is to have opportunities on what you need to get the job. In order to get the job, you need to go check out some places on what they do, so then you would know what to do. The other opportunity you have is you would know what classes you would need to take. For example, if you want to be a history teacher you basically just have to take most of the history classes, or if you want to be doctor you would basically take all sciene classes. The other opportunity is that if you want to make a lot of money have a plan set up. That's the reason why you should identify a career by the time you enter high school to have opportunities on what you need to get the job.
The second reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school is, so they don't get stressed out too much. If you know what you want to do then you're fine because the more you know the less stress you'll be in. If you know what you want to do then you'll be able to know what classes you will need to take, so then you won't have to take extra classes for no reason. Also if you need help don't hesitate to ask because everyone is here to help. The more you ask for help the less you'll be stressed. That's the reason why they should identify a career by the time they enter high school, so they don't get stressed out too much.
Some people would disagree with me because they think it's ok to wait to identify a career before they enter high school. They say that because they think high school is a place where you just hang out with friends, and not care about their grades when they should. Also, they think their interest in what they want to do will pop up eventually probably like in their senior year. No, that would be hard to figure out what college you would need to go to, don't even have a plan, and would just be stressed out.
In conclusion, in society they think that they should have an idea on a career by the time they enter high school. I strongly agree with that and there are many reasons why. So they can have opportunities on what you need to get the job, and that is know what classes you would need to take. Also, so they don't get too stressed out for it.
If you know what you want to do then you're fine because the more you know the less stress you'll be in. Those are the reasons why i agree with this statement. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
F60545D8271E | I think that schools must have a after school homework club because students who are having difficulty in school can get extra help from teachers, students could improve their grades, and teachers and students can work together to fulfill the students needs.
The first reason I think that schools must have an after school homework club is because students who are having difficulty in class can get extra help form their teachers and students.
One time
I had trouble understanding how to answer the questions my teacher gave to me about the civil war 2 years ago, and my teacher said that I could stay after school in the homework club and to meet her their.
That was the reason how I understood how to answer the questions on the quiz.
That is one reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.
The second reason why I think that schools must have a after school homework club is so students could improve their grades in their classes.
One time I had a D in my science class because I needed more help with remembering the parts of a cell.
My science teacher then told me that I could stay after school and go to the homework club with her to practice on the parts of a cell.
One week later my grade went up to a B because my teacher helped me pass my test.
This is the second reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.
The third reason why I think that schools should have a after school homework club is so teachers and students can work together to fulfill the students needs.
One time I stayed after school for the homework club and a teacher was having a heard time explaining a question to a student who spoke Spanish.
The teacher asked me if I could translate what she is saying to the student.
the teacher and I both helped the student understand the question.
This is the third reason why I think schools must have a after school homework club.
In conclusion, these are the three reasons why I think that schools must have a after school homework club. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F610B3CBF3DF | Winston Churchill once said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm", Meaning success can only be achieved by having few mistakes along the way. Many believe achieving success means doing everything perfect and not making one single mistake, having a couple of mistakes doesn't mean failure it means progress to be successful because one can learn from the mistakes that are made and helps improve to achieve something better.
To be successful, there will be some mistakes in the journey but when those mistakes are made learning from them is the best way to accomplish your goal. For example, when one is constructing a house but have little knowledge on construction, the one building the house will mess up and fail at times but the best way to finish something is to learn from what went wrong. To clarify, to accomplish a certain goal, learning from the mistakes along the journey is the best way to do it. Not only learning from mistakes help be successful but it also helps improve one another.
Improvement is a big key in success. Failure will always have a role in success but it happens to help improve to become or do something better. For example, famous altheles in sports make mistakes in games all the time, but from the failures in the past, pro altheles train to improve more to become better and to not make the same mistakes again. In other words, failure may be the worse but it's a way to show what to improve. From mistakes made in the past one will become better or do better than expected.
Having a couple of mistakes doesn't mean failure it means progress to be successful. Failure will play an important role during the journey of success but you learn from mistakes and improve to be better, success isn't perfect, the little mistakes along the way are actually the things that make one get to the top and become successful. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
F610C7BCD9EC | Technology seems to be becoming more and more important now. As the technology improves year by year, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But people have very different thoughts to this idea, then the problem comes. Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Although some think students should attend classes from home, actually they shouldn't attend classes from home because students might be doing other things during the online class time. And students would get less opportunities to communicate with their friends if they attend classes from home.
Those who believe students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home have their reasons. They think it's much safer for students to take an online class at home. And they also believe it might be better for students to study under a quite environment.
One reason of why students shouldn't attend classes from home is that they might be doing other things during the online class time. An example of this would be my cousin, Generic_Name. He took an online class on the computer few months ago. In the beginning, he was so exciting because it was the first time for him to take a class at home. And his parents were happy to see that because it's difficult to send Generic_Name to school everyday, both of them had work to do. After a few weeks, Generic_Name got his first test grade of online study. It was much lower than the grade he used to get. I asked the reason later, he explained he was playing his cell phone during the class time and didn't pay attention. If he normally took classes in the school, I thought he would get at least a "B" in this test. He was smart,just too lazy to study. It's undeniable that online classes brought a lot of convinces to Generic_Name and his family, but it was not the best way to help him to improve his grade.
Another reason of why students shouldn't attend classes from home is that students would get less opportunities to communicate with their friends. An example of this would be my friend, Generic_Name. Although he wasn't like to talk, he had a lot of friends in the school because he was nice to everyone. But everything has changed, since he attended classes from home . We didn't see him for a long time even the class was over. His parents told us he won't come to school anymore because he hated school. If Generic_Name took classes at school like before, he would meet more friends. I can't say if it's a bad choice to attend classes from home, but at least not the way for those students who wasn't like to talk.
In conclusion, although some think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, I believe students shouldn't attend classes from home. They should get more opportunities to communicate with their friends, and enjoy their short, but wonderful school life. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
F6194DEBEFA7 | Teenage is a part of life where everyone wants to be cool. Most teenagers are not mature at this specific point of age. They think if they will not follow rules they will look cool. Some people think curfew should be adopted for teenagers and other think it should not be adopted for teenagers. Curfew keeps teenager out of trouble after midnight on weekends and after 10 pm on weekdays. It will keep them safe, healthy, and smart.
The curfew will keep teenagers safe. Most of teenagers like to party at midnight. Some of them like to have alcohol at party. It is illegal to have alcohol under age of 21. There are many issues that will concern their safety. Someone can bully them and also most crimes happens at night time. One day I asked my mom to go at party with my friends at night. She did not allowed me to go at party, at that time I was badly mad at her. In the morning, I heard that my some of friends got caught by police because they were having alcohol. At this point of time I thought my mom was mean but after hearing a story, I thanks to my mom for not allowing me to go at party. I was safe at home while others girls were in trouble. The lesson that I got from this story is that never break rules and it is better to stay home at night because of safety issues.
Curfew will keep teenagers healthy. A normal person should have sleep of maximum eight hours. When teenagers go out at weekdays it really effect their health because they have to go to school in the morning. If you are not healthy it will effect your studies. A person health should be a first priority. Most teenagers are not mature enough curfew will keep them healthy. There was a day when I was out with my friends on shopping. We went to mall together. I went back at home at 12:30 pm, than in morning I went to school. I did the same routine for a week. After that I started getting sick. It effected my brain. I went to doctor they said it happened because of lack of sleep. After that I try to sleep at 9:30 everyday, now I am feeling much healthier and stronger. The more you will get good sleep the better your health will be.
Curfew will keep teenagers smart. Most of teenagers like to study at night unless they get distracted by extra stuff. Teenagers go school in the morning some of them do extracurricular activities. They are busy in the day, so they like to have fun at night. They don't do their homework because they go out at night. It effects their studies really bad. If teenagers stay at home at nights they can complete their homework and get a good night sleep. In tenth grade, I used to play basket ball everyday after school. I never had time to spend quality time with my friends. I started going out at night and also, skipping my homework. After a week, I checked my grades I had "D" in my three classes. My mom also got a call from school that I am not doing good in my classes. My mom got really upset on me. She stopped me going out at night. I started working on my homework. Now I have very good grades in class. The curfew will help a lot of teenagers with their studies. It will keep them smart and intelligent.
There should be a curfew for teenagers after 10 pm on weekdays and midnight curfew on weekends. Curfew will stop them because if they go out at night they will be breaking the rules. If teenagers follow the rule they will be protected, strong and intelligent. So, safety is the first priority. Everyone should follow rules because it will be best for them. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
F61FB474D85F | The city council adoption the curfew for teenagers.
There need have curfew for teenagers why because need be outside midnight , weekend need to be at home going to sleep. A study say that teenagers how have cufew work hard at school , but how didn't have a cufew breake the law more have trouble do great at school. Why a teenagers need to be street midnight do something wrong or you came back from a party , or you do gang thing. What are you going midnight , how do that outisde i know not me evergybody this tired want be outside.
It the cufew is adoption teenagers in the street can be no more.
There new law at Generic_City council say that cufew for teenagers for 10pm .
It meain the a teenage walk the on street after 10 pm you breaken the law
Ever a police see he can take to jail . The city make the law for safe of teenage didn't see how onsafe it to be out midnight. we trought you was inside at home on the street we thing in home you not .
The commerity say why can you make law for teenagers cufew make one .
Evergyone say why do you make that law not great for are teenagers intertere in there live.
Do cufew keep teenagers out of trouble ?
The cufew keep teenagers out of trouble this not one man job evergyone need to work like a tearm for teenager can say out of trrouble .
the first thing what time are teenagers going outside ,where are you going . Talk to are police man lit know see a teenagers , walk midnight ask me where your home they're listing take him to jail .
Are one thing are child safetin we can have are teenage midnight do wrong thing.For police man it hard pickup the phone to a mother say yhat her son ,or her dougther are deid . This why have a cufew it ver need to have so know one have go to hard time last son, dougther ,
we intertere in teenagers live beacuse they didb't know what bad or good see what on the other side can bad or good .
The teenagers do think they thing after see they large preplem they need help this why were say safe go first.
A city coyncil is adoptiion cufew .
What time cufew start 10pm .
Do cufew keep teenagers out of trouble.
The teenager need a cufew
Yes ! | 2 | 1.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
F628F0D46CCC | It is important to share a lesson with elementary school students because, as they get older they can know what they have learned when they were younger. Elementary school students learn way more when someone is teaching them a lesson instead of the kids learning it by there self. Teaching kids a lesson in school or out of school is not a bad thing to do because kids and others can learn anything out of school walls, once they start go grow up they will understand what they have learn and what not have learn in elementary school, and of the hard effort the kids have put into there work in school and at home.
Why is giving a lesson to elementary schools important ? I feel like it is important because your teaching them something they have not learned or know about what they will be learning about yet, teaching younger kids can be really nice and all, but some of these kids can be very hard to take care of and handle like upper up classes/grades.
When giving a lesson to a class can be difficult and all that, but it can also be fun to teach them some cool things they should know about and teach them easy work so they can understand the work faster and so they can see what level or understatement they are at, kids that go to elementary school can be way easier and faster to teach because upper grade level can get hard and exhausted, cause of there beavers and they way they love to act in front of other people which, they shouldnt be acting like that. Younger students know better then not to behave really bad and act crazy, thats why i think it is important to teach younger kids then older kids, younger students they well ,they know what they are doing, also understand of the the work we teach them but we always got to teach them very well and help them with the lesson we have given and show how it is done and how to do it with out being upset. | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
F62B971B739E | My plan is going to college and working after graduate .Then i will working for computer things make sure my job able good. But first time i need to do is graduate at Generic_School if you have more credit then you can finish high school to go college . You can working some where after school some where you can make money , But don't work a lot because you have school ,
Remember to do homework and work in school . Some student don't have money going to college that why they need working after school . I see a lot people have money to going the college because they lucky they parents take care of them . School is not cheap to pay that why a lot people don't want going to college. I fell sad for them to because they have the same problem with me they don't have money to pay for school , Some people need to move out when they going to college they have to pay bills .I think you can finish high school for three year it good . You can go working for first year, when are you finish high school, or you don't need to go the college right now, you can go college later. They don't care about the age. I see a lot older people still going the college . you can take online class to finish high school early during the summer time or evening. Then you can going to work like some hour , and you going home that is good deal to finish high school early . But also you still need to pay for summer school or evening that why you need to work and have money to pay for , That does't matter you want finish for four year high school or three year you still graduate . You need to find the job you really want to do , Because you plan is you choice you have to choose the right one , But i think that not bad idea because they tells you the good thing if you don't want to hear is fine trust yourself | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F65622698950 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing"?
I believe, when most of the people don't understand how relevant is to do something instead of being inactivity that also serve purpose because like everybody else it is normal to always do or make good things for someone, and it could be family or close friends for example.
My reason is if we try to done good stuff for people, and not receiving anything back for example: If I give people chance to not try anything, then how are we gonna communicate? how are we going to accomplish our goal when you don't deserve it? so my point and my reason is the we need to do something about not being inactivity with people are around you. I understand that not everyone are gonna have the same thoughts as me or with other person. However we need to be on the side to the change for good.
I grew up knowing when people put a lot of their afford to you, it means a lot because you'll never know when people will trust you and believe in you again it's a huge difference between those, and we people show us or make us see how important is when almost everything is easy when we ask for it example: Trying to hard to show how many things you have done for that person without asking, but it means a lot to you because you give a lot to that person and you hope that person can give you the same thing you've done for her or him.
Sometimes some people misunderstood about always doing something for her or him like you don't have to do it for them, but believe you'll feel great if someone do something for you isn't a bad thing then you will be fine and grateful knowing that theres good people around you, and ready for help you. You ain't alone anymore believe theres people for you and try to not think too much about it.
My conclusion is about to always do something for people because there is people who will need you, and being around, and everything you want to do for them it will make it better like. Thomas Jefferson wanted to do good stuff as a president caring about his people, and making him one of the best presidents, so it is wonderful to done much for them than yourself. | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F65D9047F656 | Thomas Jefferson said enjoy your life for as long a you can what is a enjoyable way to spend time outdoors?
a lot of people like to go outside and spend their time because its fun and they wants to enjoy their life.
there is a lot of places that people can spend their time for ex: community park, state parks, and national parks.
There is thousand of people that cant go outside because they have to do work or their busy.
Their is a lot of places where people can go and spend their time outdoors for example: national parks, and museum etc. their is a lot of fun things to do in a nation park or museum. in the museum there is a lot of old things to see for example: a dinousor bone or a bone of some old animal that dosent exist these day.
Their is a lot of places that have been made for people to come and check it out and enjoy everything.
The reason people find that activity enjoyable because there is al ot of cool stuff to do, and its just fun for them and that what they are interested on. their is a lot of people that like different kinds of things. for example one guy likes to go to a park and another guy like to go to a museum. there is some people that dosent like to go to the park or other places. because they just dont enjoy it.
A lot of people like to go outside and spend their time because its fun and they wants to enjoy their life. their is a lot of places that people can find interested for example: community park, state parks, and national parks. there is a lot of people that goes to national park with their family because they all can enjoy it and have a fun day. there is some people that dosent like to go to the park or other places. because they just dont enjoy it. all of us are different and everybody likes different kind of things. | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F66B2BAB7E4C | Do we choose our own behavior or is it controlled by other influences. Well it all has to depend on the type of person you are. For example if you are somebody who gets influenced by other people then you are going to act like those people. And usually those people are bad influences, but if you are somebody that chooses to be who they are then that is really who they are. And mostly it is to be nice to others, and those are some reasons why it can go either way, but for me i personally think you have a choice to be who you desire to be without any influeces.
When you get to be who you want to be life is easier. You are going to be true to yourself and people will have respect for you. And many people all over the world are scared to be themselfs, and would rather get controlled by other people. And because of those type of people they spread that nagative influence off to other people that get controlled easily. But in the end it depends on who you hang around with.
Choosing the way you act is very important not just for you but for your future. Because your future is what matters at the end of the day. And because of that reason is because if you want to find a good job you have to be respectful and kind. But if you didn't have a good attitude then nobody won't hire you. It's reasonable too, because nobody wants a bad attitude person in their jobs.
Many people who have chose their characters have been successful because of it. And cause they have confedenced they can achieve anything they want in the world. And all that just because they went on to be themselfs. Meanwhile those who have been influenced by others have been stuck like that their whole lifes.
Depending on what type of influences they get, because some are good and they get to high places in life.
So at the end of the day as long as you choose something that is good for you and won't take you to bad places you will be great in life. But unfortunally it usually ends in bad places for those who are weak and would rather take influences by others who are in bad situations. And thats why for me it is better to choose to be yourself then to follow others. But if you are somebody that likes the influences then choose people who are good. That is how i see it in my eyes. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
F673BCEC3BD1 | People who value self-reliance define dependence. Following your own instincts and making your own decisions is the whole point of life in my opinion. It makes a person more independent and trustworthy. Also, helps a person learn from own mistakes.
A person will always have guidance. Whether its from parents, teachers, police officers, or even a person you dont even know can give you some type of guidance. It always goes back on how the individual is going to view it. Independence is very important. Having full control and capability of standing alone can make a person realize what is best for them. Also, not being easily influenced can help a lot. Understanding what is best for you can make your decisions much easier.
People need to learn from their own mistakes. Mistakes happen every day. A persons instincts may not always be right but it will benefit them in the future. Another person is not going to tell you something you want to hear or give you the assurance you need for something. They may think they know whats best for you but personally for you, it could not be the best. Knowing yourself and knowing how you like things to be done is another example of self-reliance.
Seeking guidance from experts and authorities can be the right thing to do. It can save a person from debating too much on a decision. Help a person plan better for the future and not really let the person struggle. As well, as to prevent the individual to stress out of what not knowing to do. However, a persons own instincts and ideas is what makes the person value self-reliance. And know whats best for them. Who knows you better than you?
To conclude, its all about self perspective. On how you view things for yourself and your future. Being independent and not rely on others opinions. Having your own thoughts and opinions. Accepting that making mistakes is okay not everything has to be right and perfect. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
F6886170FAA3 | I agree with first impressions are almost impossible to change, because this is one of the things that only happend one time, well it can happend again, but not at the same way than the first one. So you can not change it because that is what you felt at the moment when you experienced this feeling in your life and you will not want to change it because you liked what you felt and you might probably want to repeat it again.
Then it is like when you see someone on the street or in the city that is wearing completely different clothe or extrange clothes than you or than everybody around you, and he or she inmediatly is catching everybody's attention, because probably they never have seen someone like them before or they not normally used to see people wearin like that. Sometimes people might probably start talking about them like given own opinions, or some people just judge them because of their dreasing, others just are corious because they might probably want to know something about this people because they or their culture seem interested to them and the want to experience sort of activities with this people or have fun with them.
Constantly people experience this kind of impressions, because they normally are around so many people like their family, their friends, or even with people they not even not at all. So that make them to experienced this type of circunstances and because of that, is that they are exposed to experience this feelings at any time or anywhere. It do not matter because you going to see so many things and those things are going make you feel this way.
Inmediatly it do not matter where you go or where you are with, you are going to experience this, even with yourself bacause this always happend and you will want to go and to be talking of that with your friends or you might be probably get a clue and put it like an example and your life. Sometimes first impressions help you to be even better in life, because you will be thinking about it and you might start making something different on you because you saw something special on someone which you got first impression.
In conclusion first impressions normally will be impossible to change, bacause it is unique and you can not change that. You might can change the way you think of it and probably if you experience it again it will not be the same because you will know what it is already, and it will be like it is not making sense and you will wondering the reason why is this happening. Sometimes first impressions will help you to understand people or their kind of life they have, it do not matter the race because people have something different something that we might need. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F69C85F4C3CA | the memorable teacher ever had
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wild all students | 1 | 1 | 1.5 | 1 | 1 | 1.5 |
F6AA88DC9ACA | Although it may seen that "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow" it actually right. But having something that you master it doesn't mean that trying something new you would failed. But giving up it's what would cost you to never grow, for example changing your life style by eating right and going to the gym is not going to be easy but you still going to give it a try. The reason why is that we want to challenge our self in a new environment that we never thought our self would be challenge our self in. Another reason would be that trying something new mean that we are looking for something that we would enjoy or like.
For example we teach our self how to cook but we know that we never knew how to cook but that doesn't mean we are not going to give it a try. That why we try new things because we want to challenge our self in a situation that we never knew that we could solve it or give up. Another reason is that we love trying new things because we are curious if we can master it another example would be is raising a kid wondering if we got everything and teaching them what is right and what is wrong. That what we love trying new things to see if we can do it or not. That what is more important trying new things and see if we can master it because we are capable of doing thing not a computer can't do and that it trying to learn new things.
We can master anything in our way because we are willing to find out if we can do this, if can not fear it, if we got this, give our self ideas that anything we do it possible when we put our mind it nothing can't stop us. For example we got our freedom from England long time ago, we ended slaves, and we ended racism which was big in the United State. Those are the reason why we can master things even if they are hard to master but we do it for a reason, and the reason is that we love to try new things even is bad but every challenge we are giving, we master them. But there is no dough we would failed those challenge that the world has giving us. Mastering is a challenge that is difficult because there is in our lifetime were we give up and we don't want it anymore. Were our mind and our body just doesn't want it, doesn't keep trying, at some point we start calling our selves looser, quitter.
We bring ourselves down because that how we punish ourselves without physical pain but emotion pain. In our life time that we have live in this earth the most pain that brought us down was emotional pain when we give up in life and we haven't master it. That is the big challenge that we haven't try to complete because it has beating us since the beginning that we are born we haven't control our emotion and that is the challenge that we haven't master it.
For that we have issues that we aren't able to figure it out because it's hard for us to figure what make us mad ,sad, happy, but people who has master it because they did give it a try and they successfully master that does emotions that give us hard time in life. Those people are therapy who want to understand does type emotion because they want to help those people who doesn't understand why they react like that.
That what make us to try new things in life because we are curious about what interest us as human being and see if can master it so "unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered keep trying new thing that you would be able to do and get your attention to it ". | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F6AEEC01F174 | Although some say students should that self-esteem come from praise because students do this when can have a test or when they need to pass a class, actually students should not that self-esteem come from achievement because students effort to do their best work, students try to get some energy to do that, and students work all the time to get the best works.
Students effort to do their work. They when are absent, they stay after school with their teachers to complete their work missed. Some students praise when they need to do something good but they study first and then they praise to have good grade or something like that. They sometimes don't like to do their homeworks in breaks.
Students try to get more energy to do that. They are eat breakfast in the morning. They bring some snack to their house. They believe that students must be self-confident in order to learn. Some studens need help to their teachers and they help them. They need to organize their work when the teacher give some papers.
Students work all the time to get the best work. They study after school at home. They do their homework and they practice some exercise when they have some break or when they complete their all work. Some students go to the library and get some books to read about the class, they need to pass.
Although some say students should that self-esteem come from praise because students do this when have a test or when they need to pass a class, actually students should not that self-esteem come from achievment because students effort to do their best work, students try to get some energy to do tat and students works all the time to get the best work. This is praise to do self-esteem work and do the best. | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
F6B1E10F02C8 | The first impression does't mean that you are like your look, or because your look angry you are a bad person.
One day in the morning my dad show me a picture of my grandfather, he was a tall and stronger men, more later my dad come to my room and he tell me "We are going to know you grandfather", i was scared but , when i see hem, he was adorable and so loving with me, when a know my grandfather more, i change my opinion of the first impression, he was not a rude men.
When i see for the first time a girl that i never seem, the first that i see is how the girl look if she look angry, i think is that she is disagreeable, but in the future, when i know more about that girl i know that she is not how i was thinking in the first impressions, is not good to judge people for how they act, it does't care the color of the eye, the color of the skin or what language they speak. Some people look bad, sad, happy, angry, or evil but that's not mean that they are like they look.
In conclusion the first impression it's possible to change, because the people can not act how you think they act or they can change the attitude in the future, when i know more about this person my opinion of the first impression change. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
F6C88F801A8A | I would have to disagree to this statements. Letting be controlled by the world
(people)
it's not a good idea. There is so many things to accomplish, by not being controlled by other people. We can so many things without people controlling us, we can succeed our life. We can actually be someone though our hard work and deduction.
being us:
just being who you are would be the best and great choice to do. You would think properly with correct knowledge, just by doing that, You would accomplish so many things in life without people going agents you. NOT being you or being someone you really not are, is not a good idea.
Don't let them control you:
letting people control who you are, isn't a good thing. Many people think is a good thing because they can fame or attention, Its like having a double life, 1: living the regular life, being who you really are, 2: Being out in public pretending to be someone when your not. You won't accomplish the things you want to do when your not yourself. You will feel important when the world wants you be someone. Be yourself and accomplish the things you want to do and you will improve your skills and achivments. They will just control your life and they won't help you on the long run. No one can control someones life who they want them to be.
being us, not them:
We need let people do what they want we shouldn't be controlling their life. Everyone should chose there who they want to be and what to do. Not everyone should be controlling them. Not everyone are they same, they are different from others. They don't know their weaknesses to be telling them to be.
We shouldn't be controlling other people what to become. Many people do it for the fame and attention but they are the most unsuscceful people. They dont achieve things they go by there fame and people. We should be us and not be someone we cant be. They end up being embarrassed. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
F6DEF203DCD1 | First impressions is what the person show you. The first impression is almost impossible to change. In my opinion I'm agree with this statement. Some people can think in a diffent way for they experiences. Most peoples can think the same way that I think. People can change with time not at the first impression when you meet someone. People can deside is they want to know the person better. People can change in there own way, or if they really want to change they need to deside to be better in life. The first impression is impossible to change. They need time,effort, and dedication to change. Most people can said that you do not need all those things to cange. The people at the fist impression. The first impression is what the person make you feel.
The first impression is what the person show you. The person can not change at the first impression, they most need to have the specific time to change. One of the most important fact to change is time. For example, is a person is fighting with a employee at the Ice cream story, you can not can change that person that way the he think. Maybe you must wants that. He need to realise what he is doing is something wrong .The person most have his reason for the fight. The person need time to change not at the firt moment the you meet. Most people can determine that they need time to cange. Another example of that is someone have a really bad adiction to do someting that do not have none benefict for his life. You most want to change that person. The first impression that this person make in you most be the most terrible impression. First impression is impossible to change.
First impression is actually what the person make in you. Sometimes is not the best impression that the person make .Sometimes you must want to change that at the same moment even is you do not know the person. The person can change with effort is you talk to the person and let her know that what is doing is not right. Maybe the person can change but not at the first impression that need take time. For example is a student is copy in a test and you realize what the student is doing you must want to change the way the he is thinking. The student need to have effort and act of actitude that he can do anything in life and have the effort to do it .Another example of that is you meet someone for the first ime in the attitude is so bad you most want to tell the people to change. The person need to have the effort to change is the person wants that. The first impression are almost imposible to change. First impression is what the person show you. Some people are more complicate they do not want to any effort to change. The first impression is the way the you most guess the personality of the person.
First impression is what the person show you. A good first impression is what the person guess of on you. First impression is what the person wakes you feel. You most not espect the negatives accion of the person, because you do not really know that .The specific time you most know that person is it something that you do not like of the person with dedication can change. For example is you meet someone at the park for the firts time and you and the person start talking. Most one of the two person want to change something in you or oppsite. The people can not change at the first time they need time and dedication. The first impression is more important when you meet someone for first time. For example is a father leave at him son when he was a baby , and when they meet for first time the father have to have the best impression for his son. The son wants to espect how his father is he most want to know that. The first impression is the most important for that father. That father have to change is he have something that his son do not like. He need to have dedication to achieve that. The first impression the more imprtant when you meet someone for the first time.
The people can not change at the first time. Many people think that we can not change a person with the first impression. A person need there own respected goal to change. The person need the time, and effort and dediaction to change. Nobody can not change people at the first moment they need time to analyze what they want. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
F6EAE029B20B | Today world, everything start to moving forward. People start to invent the new ideas and those ideas make life more easily. In medical world, people make a new kind of medicine to cure the disease, compare to the old world a lot of people had die. In technology world, people put those ideas into the physical objects that it is so important for today life. From all we see everything is start from the ideas and who invent the idea? This is the kind of the question that no one ever ask. It is us the people that invent the idea.
People can make a change to the world if they start to think or we can call the attitude. The attitude of the people have a big impact to the surrounding. But not all the attitude have a good impact to the world it also have a bad impact. This is led to one of the controversial question from the science; that said do you agree or disagree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. From my perception I agree that the positive attitude is the key to success in life because it make a people have a good communication in the community between people and people, make us being more productive on everything we do, developed our self and also things surround us quickly.
Everyday people need to make a connection to one another. And exchange the information from that connection. But the important thing is the way we thinking. Like in the school, there are a lot of student from different place and family. But some student is isolate and other is sociable. Most people think that the isolate student mostly are bad and the sociable student mostly are good. The reason that the student being isolated because there is something in the school that student can not accept so they become isolated. It kind like when you move from place to place you try to fit yourself in. It take time for them to being sociable like other student. This is not the reason for us to think that the isolate student have a negative attitude. And also not all the sociable student have a positive attitude. We can learn from the past that thing happen in high school led the student to commit suicide. The student that have a negative attitude like to bullying other student and left them no choice. For the student that commit suicide also have a negative attitude because they take the outside source seriously then them self. This is the small example that we can compare for what the meaning of the word attitude is.
People like to say that most millionaire are a bad person. We can not believe in this conventional wisdom. People sometime said the bad thing to other to make them self look good. But from what I see most millionaire have a good attitude because it led them to being more productive. Productive person is the person that you should be friend with. They always share the good things in their mind to you. Not just in the business world that have a productive person. Also in the community that we live in everyday. People we meet everyday that like to talk about the good things that happening to them. They share the idea how to get there and how to do it. It not means that they try to show off to you. Don't thing them wrong. We can see when the people get their new job, they like to share the idea . You just need to open your heart and listen to them. It might one day you can use this idea to do other things too. Also in the political world, a lot of Prime minister, President, try to keep them self productive by doing a charity to the poor people. This is why the world become smaller and smaller.
There are a lot of country in the world with a different culture, tradition and religion. And a lot of people know at least one language that is not their mother tough language. But also a lot of people that only know how to speak their mother tough language. When we were young, we spending time mostly in school and they teaching us the art, history, science, literature but the important thing is the language. We learn just one language and spending almost the ten years for us to able to speak. For those years, we learn the basic how to speak in a formal way. Also our parent watch our behavior and manner along the way. When we reach to the puberty, mostly everything is start to change. The important thing is the way we thinking. Everything that we been learning from our parent, teacher, friend, society start to root inside our brain and also define who we are. One famous quote from smart human that we call him Buddha said " You are what you think you are". This quote not designed just for his religion but for the worldwide. If you think you can become success, you will be success one day. If you think you want to be a doctor, you will become a doctor one day.
No matter what you say always say a good things to the people around you. No matter what you do always do a good things to the people around you. If you want the people to do or say a good things to you too. And everything is start from us the way we thinking. Positive attitude is an important key for all success in life. And for my experience whenever I feeling down, discouragement, disappointment, anxiety, hopeless I always repeat this quote to myself "You are what you think you are". So after that if I had a bad time I keep thinking to myself that I can get through it. Even you have a small chance to success just keep thinking to yourself that you can make it through. One student asked the teacher will I pass the test if I do not know anything and the teacher answer even if you know that you can not make it just go to the test center. When they hand out the test just do what you know. And after that you will know that you have at least 1 percent chance of passing the test. The student do as the teacher told. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
F70288B24094 | No i do not think that we should add one hour and a half to school. I think it is bad anough that we have to stay for about 7 hours i have a lot of reasons why i think they should not add an hour to school. One of the reasons i would not want them to add an hour to school is because if they add an hour to school they would have to add class to the chool to. but one of the main resons that i would not want another hour at school is becuase kids just want to go home and adding an hour would just get kids and parents mad for there kids getting home late.
For example if it was day light savings time it would be very dark once every one to go home. Or if a teacher staff memeber or student plays a sport they would be late or unbkle to go for the late releas at the school. In addition if there where to be a lockdown at that hour and a half that the school bored had added the parents of the students might want to sue the school bored for putting there children in danger at the time they added to the day. Another example is if ther is a fire they could get sued for the same thing that is why i feel like the school bored should not add an hour and a half to the school day. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 |
F711DAD6AA51 | I agree with Emerson's statement about individuality "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplisehment" because of Success,being yourself,and being the owner of you life.
First success is the most important thing for the sociaty because we all need great people like philantropist who help reducing povrety in the world,great inventor who creat thing tahat today we cannot live whith out it such as Car,internet,and computer. and the Evolution of Human being by creating a safe enviroment for everyone to live a long and healthy life.
Secondly being yourself is a great accomplishment because you truely the person you want to be, you are true to the people around you being showing them who you really are by acting truely without faking who you are,and you are live a meaninfull live by being yourself instead of what the world want you to be.
Thirdly being the owner of you life is really important because you can your own decide, you can decide what kind of futur you want ,and being able to make this decisision by yourself will make you life greatfull,and mostly an healthy live.
Some people will said that is worthless or is better to be told what to do,but being able to creat your Success,being yourself,and being the owner of you life is somthing really important for the development of Human life and for every individu to dicide what they want to be or what they have plan for they futur.
All this will drive a person to a great accomplishment because life is a text and every individu have a different text so being yourself in this world will always be a great accomplishment because some people a conditioner to live the live that the world gave them. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 |
F72B0C4DB804 | In today's world we accomplish many things by being active, and doing them. If we would like to achieve or accomplish something we have to be dedicated and actually try not just be inactive because this awesome life we have if full of amazing experiences.
Many of us go to high school, or have jobs that we to attend and we are expected to try our best which would benefit us. Being inactive or not doing something right could lead to getting fired or failing in school which is why inactivity is known for negative results. The way we accomplish is not on how smart we are, or what people tell us to do is on if we are willing to try and keep on doing it. In the other hand inactivity may give you the time to rest at home, catch up on things but it wouldn't get you nowhere because your not being productive. For example, if your trying to get a job theres always competition for that position, the manager might want to pick the other person simply because his resume, he has involve himself in way more things like clubs and also because his ability of proving hes way better than the other person. Which is why its all about doing something so you can succeed in life rather than just sitting there and then later having the time to have fun.
Lastly, the best feeling of accomplishing something is the reward, or enjoying what you have earned. For example, I am expected to do many things around the house like cleaning, feeding the dog, and even babysitting. Even though sometimes I dont want to do it, I end up accomplishing more than what I have to do because I am the type of person that likes being known for accomplishing things around the house and then having to enjoy that feeling of my parents being proud of me. Being inactive wouldn't result in a positive result to many people including me because you arent gaining anything from it. Im sure everyone loves that deep feeling when you have done something right and you get something out of it. Not many people know how wonderful it is if we are always doing something and how it can really benefit you, even on the smallest things.
In conclusion, people should consider always doing something even if it's something small because anyone can tell you being inactive isnt the way to live life or be. After all, the accomplishments you earned will really show off in the long run thanks to always doing something. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
F72B3EE2E414 | In some occasion you feel weary or oppress to think about that you have to take high school during 4-years when you know that you can do in 3-years? Some school districts are thinking is this wonderful ides to offer a programs to the students that they can graduate in 3-years, the school districts should be approve the idea to graduate in 3-years because it will be so helpful to the students to feel more motivate to graduate early, the students will use the other year to work and make money to pay some par of their career, and the students can enter and start college one year early .
The students will feel more motivate to graduate early becasue many students that come from middle school they really took class of high school like Algebra 1, Geometry, Earth Science, History 1 ect, they can easely graduate and 3-years. I have two brothers older than I my brother that is 20-years-old he graduate in 3-years he miss only one class, but he take during summers because the school have the programs to high school students graduate in 3-years.
Also some school districts don't offer this program to graduate in 3-years and the students lose their motivation to graduate and who want to go to school just for one class a whole year, what happed if a student miss only one class to graduate in 3 year,but the school districts don't have the programs and the student have to come for a whole year just for want class like my older brother that is 29-years-old he only miss one class to graduate in 3-years but the school from California did not have the programs to leave him graduate in 3-years it was so bad for him and a lot of students past the same thing.
The student will able to use the other year to work and make money to pay a part of their career, we know that a lot of students don't have parents that can pay for their career because is a lot of money that they have to pay for a career, this year off will be so fundamental to the students who don't have the help enough to pay their career. During this year they can work and make money and have the opportunity to enter a college and be some one in life.
The students who are a school don't have the time enough to get a work outside and pay their career through a work. This is why a lot of students who graduate from high school don't take a career because they don't have the money to pay it, or their parents don't have money to help them, I have a lot of friends and family who finished high school but they did not take a career because they did not have the money enough to pay it, and what happed if you want to take a career, but you don't have the money enough to take it.
In some cases occur that when the student finish they high school in 3-years they start college one year early, or they start to work to make the money for it, they can finish their career more younger , we know that some career take like 6 or 8 years it will be so long , but have finish high school one year early will be so helpful for the students life.
Some students feel weary when they are taking 4-years of high school, they don't even have time to think about what they want to be, which career they want to take. The students don't have the time enough and this is why some students take wrong career and is very harmful for their life.
In conclusion, all school districts should be allow to offer the programs that high school students can graduate in 3-years, some school districts want the traditional four years, they think that is so helpful for the students, but they are wrong because the traditional four years cause a graduate decrease and many students go to school just for one or two classes, in the future if all school districts approve the programs to students can graduate in 3-years. Many students will be taking their career in college some one starting one year early, and other making the money during the year off to pay their career. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
F72EA674A872 | For a student like me, working in a group is alot better than working by my by self. Here is some reasons why working in a group is better than working alone. Number one we finish the assignement alot faster. Number two everyone is working on something different. Number three everyone is helping each other if we struggling on something. There is the bad part about working in a group is that there is alot of distration, there is also different ideas that everyone wants to put in the assignment. Now lets look at the good part on woekinmg on the assignment alone. number one there is no distractions getting in between you working. Number two there is only your idea on how you want it to look like. Number three you can ask the teacher on how sheor he wants the assignment to be done, so that means that the assignment is going to be correctly done. The bad part on working alone is that there is going to take more time on the assignment to be done. the other part is that is that you have to do all the wrok by your self and have to rely on your self. Other words if you pick to work in a group or by your self, are going to be struugling kinda the same thing like how mush work you have to finish, the different ideas on how you wnat it to be looking linke or how you want it to be done. Ones again for a student like me i rather work in a group than by myself because knowing my self i wont finish my work or the assingment. In a group i can have one part on the assignment that i have to finish. You can say i am picking on working in a group to do less work, and you are right because its going to be done instead of not doing the whole assignment. so for my coclusion i would want to work in a group instead of working alone because "team work makes the deam work." | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F737FB396F2E | I Think that no matter if you are taking online classes, or going to school, you always going to graduate you can loarn alot if you'r taking online classes. Like if i were on the position of taking online classes, because im working and i don't have that much time i would loved to study when ever i could.
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some people that are here in the United States they have to go to school and work after school, and they got to pay rent, send money to their families back in there Contries.
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Some of the people don't have someone that can take them to school and the school is far away that the buses can not go all the way to their homes.
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There are some kids that don't go to school, having the school next to them, but there's alot of people out here thet would love to go to school or even take online classes but they can't because some of them are always working, some of them even have two jobs.
For Example: My mom wouold loved to take online classes at less but she can't because she has to work in the very morning like at 7 am, and she comes back like at one she cleans the house and then like at 3pm she goes to her other job and she gets out like at 11:30 pm so she doesn't have time but she would love if she could do it.
For Example: My dad he's going all the way to DC for school because he is taking classes for duster he pays each moth and my dad works to in countruction but weekends she goes to DC the classes start like at 10 and they end like at 1,
if you like someting work hard for what you like.
For Example: I have a friend that he takes online he work's everyday, he takes his computer to his work so when he's on break runs to the computer and he starts school online like that someone that wants to progress in this country. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
F73899060D94 | Do you remember when you decided what you wanted to be? ''your character will be what yourself choose to make it''.Do we choose our own character traits,or is our caracter formed by in fluences beyond our control.
I agree Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. because, you make your own desicions,you take responsability,and you have goals. However many,believe that people influence the way we choose our characters because they think they have the rigth to critize the way people decides. Actually,this is a bad idea because people makes their own decisions,In society most of the time we have to take a decision whether are rigth or wrong we must take it at some point but is also,your choice to make the best out of it. For example,My brother had to take a decision by himself which was doing something in life going to collage study or work as an Mcdonals co-worker he decided the best was going to collage and keep studying. If,my brother wouldn't have taken that decision then he had lost an opportunity to make it.
The second reason your character will be what your self choose to make it, is that you take responsability because taking responsabilities make a better character of your self. For example,when you wake up early just to be on time at work every day you feel you are giving the best of you yourself are choosing to make your character. If,you are not giving the best of you every day that means you are no choosing to make your own character.
The third reason your character will be what your self choose to make it,is that you have goals because you want to feel satified when you have achieve something important in your life. For example,when getting your first bachelor degree when getting your dream job or you worked so hard for your dream car you always wanted. If, you don't have goals to follow then you are no going to make it.
In conclusion,make your own path,you are encharge,and you have dreams to follow. | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
F73B27B9A443 | I think playing soccer it's an enjoyable activity.
To begin with, when you play soccer there are two teams. Each team has to work together to win. I think soccer is a fun activity to play, because you can learn how to work in teams . In my opinion it helps you improve your friendly skills. Soccer helps you on how to work in teams. I've seen some famous soccer players on TV play. At first when they join a team they don't get along with the rest. But when time goes by they start working as a team. It helps them talk to others and work as one team.
Also, when you play soccer you have to think what you're going to do next. So soccer helps you improve your thinking skills. Most people are not good at thinking fast. It would be helpful for them to play soccer. It can help you think of new ideas. maybe in an emergency it might help you think faster on what to do. it can also help you develop new ideas. It makes you pick the best choices you have and what to do with them. Playing a sport it's going to help you in the future, even if you think it's not.
Finally, soccer is a fun sport to play, because it helps you run around and exercise. It can help you stay healthy and stay in shape. Nowadays people don't like to play sports. They just be in their house watching TV shows,playing video games, or just doing nothing. People focus too much on the internet that they forget how to play sports and do fun stuff. I think that people should go outside and try something new while you can. Some people regret not playing any sports when they were younger. If you play this sport it's going to help you stay healthier and stay active. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 |
F747581D0782 | Many people believe that the infulences from others make us change on who we are, I believe that. Growing up we all had good and bad infulences at school, home, or in any other place. As a kid, every little thing you see or hear; you copy. Thats why you have to be careful what happens around kids, because it may affect them later on in life.
For an example, when parents argue infront of there kids its tramatizing and they may learn from that. Once there all grown up they can either be better then there parents or exactly the same or even worse, all because they were influenced by there parents arguments. Its not only just the arguments but when parents are abusive towards each other or when parents hit there childern, even the use of drugs, it will affect the child later on. Kids believe that because someone else did it, its okay for them to be able to do it too; and thats not right.
As a parent, it is very important to talk to your childern at a young age about the right way and the wrong way. Every parent wants the best for their child, they dont want to see them make misakes or anything. As a teenager we think its annoying or we think they dont understand the way were feeling, but thats not true. They give us advice and ground us when we do the wrong thing because they don't want us to go through any of that again. They were once teenagers too and they already went through what were going through. They just want the best for us, because half of the time they couldn't be succesful and they want you to be able to grow up and have the things they were not able to get you.
Another example could be the different types of infulences at school. Theres always gonna be the good kids and the bad kids, you just gotta see which side is gonna lead you into a better future. The good influences will want the best for you, for you to continue school, to not do drugs, to not do anything ilegal, ect. On the other hand, the bad kids will want you to ditch school, do drugs, do ilegal things, because as to them its all "fun". It may seem fun but there are consequences when you do the wrong thing.
As a teenager you already have to have an idea on what you wanna do later on in life. Half the teens don't know, because there stuck in a world where it invloves, parties, alcohol, drugs, sex, ect. When your stuck in a world like that, its very hard to get out. Being influenced by friends is very easy. Of all the times you guys hang out and everthing, it starts to change you; from being well influenced or bad influenced. perperssure is the reason alot of us take the wrong lane in life. Your friends can convince you of doing something then your going to want to keep doing it, even if you didn't like it, because you dont wanna seem as a boring person, you dont want your friends to leave you on the side. You can even be the reason why someone choosed the wrong lane. Even if you changed the way you are someone else is still suffering because they were influenced by you.
Majority of the time people regert the things they did in the past. They regert being infulenced that way, wishing they could have listened to the good, but sadly you can't change the past. Thats why its important to know exacty what were doing, to listen to the people who are telling us to do the right thing. we might not wanna seem boring but once we have an actual future, you will see that all the bad infuence wasn't worth it.
We are influenced by others, and we choice to become that person. Think today and make the decision to become someone better, don't follow the negative because it all leads to a bad ending. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
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Todays technology allows people to do many different tasks without having contact with others in a positive way. Technology today is now making it easier for us humans to do things and also showing us what the furture could look like in a couple of years. Why would this be a negative thing ? if people are just trying to make are lives easier. For an example lets say you need to get some where but fast and you don't have a ride there is now a app where you send your location and give the address to place you need to go and somebody will take you. Technology is such a great thing and its becoming greater each and everyday.
There are many different types of apps that you can download on your phone today for anything. lets say that your at home and your really hungry but you don't want to leave the house you can download an app called grubhub that will make sure you dont miss a meal. what is grubhub its an app that delivers food from anywhere. All you do is tell the person what you want to eat the location of the place to pick up the food and your address so they know where to drop it off. And its that easy this thing that we call a phone can make all this happen with a little bit of typing. these apps are for free too but it may cost for the food but not everything is free in life.
Computers are also a big part of technology. Computers and laptops are used everyday could be for school for work for anything. Computers help out a lot in school for anyone who needs to do research and any type of information he or she did not know about. Laptops are great aswell its a computers that folds and is for on the go great for anyone that travels a lot or somebody that works on computers alot. Laptops are becoming better everyday there are even touch screen ones some that fold backwards and its crazy to think about because what do you think is going to happen a couple years from now technology is perparing us for the furture.
Technology is making our lives easir each and everyday. With out technology I wouldn't be able to take this take I wouldn't be able to the police if I'm in danger. Its a great use for us humans this will never be a negative thing to me. We need technology in our lives so we know whats going on around us. Technology is a use and it always will be. | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F75BD3928377 | Most employers are looking for specific characteristics in a potential employee. A person who volunteer untakes a service or duty. If some boss has emty for worker set up, boss will hire for specific an adult. Although some says that you may not have experience in the type of work you seek, someone who is responsible are benifit because they are hard working, motive, and skill.
The employment are hard working in their businessperson. For example, teachers work in public school everyday. This shows that they are teaching more deep about science, history, english, and math. Also, more information share for students learn new something. And adults are willing to help employer in business.
An adult who they are motive their applicant. For example, buider is motivating to make house for long hours. This proves that patient never give up to still work so hard. However, anybody is enjoyable employment for positive their mind. Improving their energy vigrous action is hard working what their best. Some people are skill ability to use one's knowledge effectively in doing something. For example, some teenagers are skillful sciencetist. This shows that knowledge how to make science for medicines to help people solving sickness to becomes healthy. Sciencetist are proficiency and well advanced of major. They may who volunteer to get jobs, but employer will like that should be invite them.
some might agrees that some people not have experience in the major of work. However, someone is resposible are profit. They are hard working and well advenced. Also, energy vigorous action. In addition, a person skills major their job. They should be motive to hard working what they like the major. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 |
F75D6E5CCE78 | Imagine how life would feel like when you can't have your favorite food at your favorite spot in school? would it even be fun to go to school or not. About a week or two ago i went to Panda Express to grab some food on my way home but at the time that I got there, I asked to get some white rice with some orange chicken but the workers told me they have changed their menu a little bit so i can't have some,at that point i fell so sad because that was the only spot that sold some in town. I think the change of the school menu would be a bad idea because,it will make students leave the school ground to go get some food in a illegal way,it would also bring some money problems in school and it would also make some students keep on empty stomach during the school day till they get home to prepare some food.
secondly,If students leave the school ground to go get some food in a illegal way andthey never came back, this would leave the parents worried because since the principal decided to change the menu they would have a reason for leaving school ground. Mr. principal i would be happy to tell you to leave the menu like how it is because it would make some students get in trouble and a lot of incidents will happen when they leave.0nce a bad incident happen out of the school ground,the principal would be responsible for all the damages caused when they left, keeping the old menu would be a good idea but we don't want our accidents and school detentions to increase.
In addition to this it would cause some money problems because if students are going to have to eat healthy then how would they gain more money easily to support the school when they are in needs of something. This is some of the way you can make more money so, Mr principal if you decide to change it the school is going to have to shut down at a point because when is no money to operate the school and pay the teachers and custodians they would have to leave their job and get a better one and once everyone one is gone there would be any teachers to teach the students. Mr principal because of this reason we should keep the old menu so that students and teachers can enjoy their selves in the school.
Therefore if the principal end up using the healthy menu this will led to some students getting sick because they will have to leave their stomach empty and they can't have what they want. This will cause a protest in the county because they supposed to eat what they like, and what the cafeteria think will be good for them to eat. In case of this of this reason the teachers will teach for no reason because the student are so focused on going home to eat what their mom or dad have prepared waiting for them,so if the principal wants them to focus in class then he is supposed to give them what they like.
In conclusion i think leaving the old menu would be a good idea because if the principal wants the students to try to improve in their class then he should leave it. Therefore if the students wants to add th healthy menu on it then he should let them vote on it whether they agree on what he is saying but i would say leaving the old one should be the best for the students. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
F763D4DB9224 | I believe that having a positive attitude is important in life because having a positive attitude can be good in a relationship, getting a job and being always happy.
Positive attitude can be important in a relationship because in can bring your relationship more closer. Having a closer relationship is good because you get to understand each other better and be very happy together without being awkward and mad at each other. By taking care of each other it can lead to a very healthy relationship.
Having a positive attitude can be very good when getting a job. When you get a job managers are looking for people who are responsible, have positive attitude and very hard workers. Having a positive attitude is good when you get a job because you would know how to talk to customers and help them if needed.
Being happy can lead to having a positive attitude. When you are happy you feel like you can do anything and makes you feel more energetic, But when you have a negative attitude you are sad and dont feel motivated to do something. Having a negative attitude can lead to health problems and more.
In conclusion having a positive attitude is important in life it can lead to a very happy and healthy life. This is why i believe having a positive attitude is the key to success in life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
F771A9924D56 | I agree what Thomas Jefferson wrote,and peoples doesn't want to participate or do something in any activity to help other people. Idle people is big problem and they always ask for help from the government,but they don't want to work. People have take hand by hand and support each other and help the people who doesn't have a job. so we are going to accomplish more if we are always doing something,or create inactivity to serve a purpose. Thomas Jefferson gave this wrote because all the people doesn't have to be a idle,government have to support the people to a accomplish something to help the people,and people have to take the activities or jobs that governments gave to them as a series.
all the people doesn't have to be a idle because all people should have to work and help each other. People have to create a specific times and days work and divide the work between the people. Some people are old and want's to retirement that may get a opportunity to the other to have chance to get a job. It's really helpful when people support the other that will help everybody also, that will help the government to give more opportunities and create communities from different culture. To mix communities from many culture that help to have a people who have different job.
Government have to support the people to accomplish something to help other people. Many communities today serve a different jobs at that way many people can work if they have extra time from their day. However,students are very important element to this plan and they have the future in their hand. Schools and students can help to crate a activity for the any student who interested to work with this activity. Peoples from around the world who have many different idea how to create an activity or a community.
People have to take the activities or jobs that government gave as a series. It's very wonderful when people feel to their job as important job to them. Also people have to share any thing at news paper for the people to let them know that anyone need a job. people like to have something accomplish in their life. People like what Thomas Jefferson said and they accomplish what he said.
It's a good idea when all people working together and help each other. all the people doesn't have to be a idle,government have to support the people to a accomplish something to help the people,and people have to take the activities or jobs that governments gave to them as a series. Government have to support the people to accomplish something to help other people. People like what Thomas Jefferson said and they accomplish what he said. Many people disagree with this for many reason. Most of them have a hard life or sick,and they can't move from their bed because of retarded. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
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