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Yes i think the students are benefit because they don't need come to schol just what they have to use is a cumputer. and i think is more better because you can do more thinks in you home you can help you family. and you have time to work and you can study in the same time. and they can make money because after you done with the high schhol if you want to continue in the university. and you have money you can continue. and if you come to school you have time to work. and if you study from you home you have time to study and so more think. Because a lot of people don't came to school because they need money to buy food and pay his rent because they don't take help from his family. For my example i came to school because my family help me but a lot of people from others country came to this country and they don't have family here so they wanna study but they wanna help his family and his county and if a lot of school have the program what you can take class from you home i think is more better because you can do a lot of thinks for example i know a lot of people they wanna study but they need to work so they say they can't study and work in the same time so they have to take one of two option so they have to pick one and they say they wanna work because if they go to school they can't make money and if they work they can buy his food and they can pay the rent for example i have one cousin he was in school and he need just one year to graduate but when he was in schhol his mom said he need to work because she don't wanna pay his rent anymore and he leave the school and he dedicated just to work because he need pay his rent and if school have the program he can work and he can study too that one is to sad because he ned just one more year to graduated and he don't graduated because he need pay his rent tha's want i think is a lot of school have the program they help a lot of guys
Here is one more example a lot of people live in mountains and the bus don't go so they don't have transportaion so they don't come to school that is sad because maybe they wanna study and they can't come. i know people in west virginia. they don. t go school because the school is like 1 hours and they don't have transportation. and if all the school in united state have the program they can help a lot of familys and they cxan open a lot of doors for the people.
Here is another example i have one friend. He come to school just one or two days per week. Because he need to work. Because he said he have to work because he don't have money for buy food and pay rent in the same time that is sad because he said i want to graduated but i can't because i havde to work for pay my rent and buy my thinks. and if schools have the program they can help him to do his gol.
I meet one friend in walmart last week i play for soccer team in Generic_City . and i was with my short that say barsity in the from of the short. and the guy said hey in think i know you and i said where you saw me. and he said in Generic_City and. He ask me if i'm in Generic_City now and i said yes and you and said i'm not in school anymore. and i said why and he said because inmigration took my parents and they send to my country and i'm alone in this country so i need to work for pay a lot of think. and he said i wanna study but i can't because i can't do two thinks in the same time. and said my gol is work with police and i said hey wanna you don't study in the day and work in the night and he said i can't because i have to help my parents in honduras because id i don't send money to then they can buy food.
my mom maybe love if i take class onlines because she work all day. if i take class online and can help her to do thinks in my home because she go to work in the morning at 7 am and she came back at 5 pm and the end she go to the part time and she come back at 11:45 pm and if i take class online i can wok too and i can help her with think in the home and money to pay a rent she is to old.
There are some kids that don't go to school, having the schhol next to thenm, but there is alot of people out here that are thing to go to school or at less take onlne classes but they can't because they have to wotk some of the people even have two jobs.
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I agree
I think it's a good idea for the students to start a specific career young,because you can be getting early experience to working in a certain field that their future career my require.
Its good to choose a career now instead of later because reaching early adulthood with no planned career in mind, because you may have a certain job that you may not like since you didnt plan ahead for your dream career and you be stuck with a 9-5 job.
With things like finishing high school and not going into college to further your education for that dream job you want will make your chances of getting the job you want scarce or even impossible.
2. What makes It worse Is, not having the diploma required for that certain job which means you could end up in community college again re-taking class for your job you didnt decide to choose while in high school.
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And another thing I've seen Is having one career not work out and a person ends up not having a backup plan for their second career. adding to that some of these careers require years of school some specific schools like law school or going to a school for doctors.
I don't agree with choosing a career early in high school,
because most high school students don't know what they want to be or they don't have a career in mind at the moment.
Students should not be required to take a career path so early, when they have yet to experience their first job or paycheck. and not having any interest in the job offers that are shown to them on the application.
Most students are young, and requiring them to have a career plan will end up having them feel like they will be rushed, into doing things like going to career interest fairs choosing what he's interested in and why and talking about with others and what things he or she will need to do.
2. Some high schools care about future jobs they want while most don't so most will not care about their future career and just choose a random career to get started on because they dont know what they like.
3. Some high school students genuinely do not care about school or their own career, so they just drop out mainly because they don't like high school and want to do other "things" outside of school adding to that there could be a stress level that is being put on high school kids thinking about the future instead of enjoying the present.
so in conclusion students should have their own decision on weather they want to have a career plan now or later.
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some peole believe distance learning is a good opcion for students, because they can be at home, and they can take the classes they need and with this opcion they are able to do others activities, they need to do everyday.
for example, students who don't have the enought of money and they need to work.
this show that many students get benefits from this opcion that school give to students, because students can work by the day and take the class by the night.
in another example we have students that for any reason can not attend to school.
they could stay at home and also get the credits they need to graduate from schoool.
this opcion is also good for the students who want to graduate early from school. for example, students that only want to be by 3 years at school, they can take the regular classes and also can take some classes as distance learning. this suggest that every schools should have this program, because it is so helpfuly for students who want to graduate from school, but they can't attend school.
online classes also help people who already finish the school, but they want to continue studing and they can take clases online. for example a teacher who have a basic degree to teach, but he want to get a master degree. he or she can teach by the they, and he can take his classes online, when he get free time.
in conclusion this opcion is very helpfuly for students , and it is a opcion wich all the schools should have.
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peple can changes they first impresion
In this ocation i am disagree with this statment because sometimes people act different like when I firt meet my grilfrind I
was thinking that she was a happy person but with the thime I see that she was not that happy my impresion changes of that situation.
The majority of the people act different when they meet some a person that they going to meet for example, when you going to see a job you need to act happy and smile to they can acept you but in realiti you are sad so with the timethey changes that first impresion.
So alot of people when they meet a person they have a diffferent impresion so the other person can think that she or he is happy or have a good firt impresion or some times you act normal but we the tome you changes and your impresion too.
another reason is when you whent at new school at the first time you act that you are cool and you say things that they like to they can acept you so with the time they going to know that was a diferent impresion.
In my opinion I think that your first impresion can changes, because in the first Iimpresion it is not your self so when you go to work they can know who are you and they going to acept you like that so when you going to mmet a person be your self because that going to be your impresion.
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Do you like to extend your school hours?
I think extending the school hours do your life more easier because you don't have to do homework at home. You can do your homework in the school and you can ask for help.
I agree with extending the school day because I like go to the school and you have more time to stay with your family because you don't have to do your homework.
My first reason is I like to extending the school day because when the teachers give you homework you can do it in the class, and I like it because you can have more time to stay with your friends.
By this I mean, when I come back to my home I don't have to do any homework because I do my homework in the school and I can go outside and play with my friends. This is why is good to have more hours of school.
For example, one day I was in the school, and my science teacher give me so much homework, she told me I need to do projects, quizzes, and extra work but I told her I can't do it because I don't have internet at home and I can't do my homework in the school because I don't have so much time because the school end early. I go to the school principal and I asked him if he can extend the school day because many students need more time to do their homework and then a few week ago he told me," I want to expend the school days because I was thinking and you are right." I feel happy in that moment because I will have more time to do my homework and pass the grade.
Conclusion, extending the school hour can help you to do your homework and missing work, and you don't need to do it at home.
My second reason is I like to have school hours because you have more time to eat and when you do your testes you can study one hour and not is a matter because you still have time to do your test.
By this I mean I have more time to eat my lunch and talk with my friends in the cafeteria, and when I have testes I do it with more calm, and I don't stressful because I have time to do my test.
To illustrate, I was in the school, and I was doing my math test and I was so hungry and I asked my teacher if I can ate and he said " No because we don't have a lot of time, and we need to finish the test." I was so mad because I was hungry, and we don't have time to ate. When the test finished we go to ate and then we have to go to another class but I was so tired because them don't give us time to rest .
To wrap up, you need to have time for everything and do the thing with calm. Is good if the school extend the school hours because you have time for do your homework, your quizzes, or your projects.
To wrap up, the school need to extend the school day because like this every student will have time to do what they need to do in their classes, and they don't have to worry about the homework in their houses.
I feel if the school extend the hours should be great and more peaceful because you can because you can do your work and other things with more tranquility.
I think if in your school extend the school hours you have more time to do your homework, and you can have more time to stay with your family.
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some schools have available program, and some do'nt have program because some kids are to young or to small to have program. Butt youngers kids have program because they are growing up. Some school do'nt have program, and some school have program. Exsample are school have program because we have enternet. Some schools do'nt have enternet.
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I don't believe the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. First of all, the research showing there is a lot of chance to know about the distance. It's hard to make the online or video to offer the distance. Because when the students are in online or when they try to make video they are not going to take care them self. For example: I remember when I was six grade my friend PROPER_NAME was making online video. We went to classes from home to know how far it is. On that time she just focus on her video she wasn't focus on her way. After that, she try to cross the way but she still making video. She didn't saw the car she try to cross the road. So,she got some accident because of the video and she just focusing what she is doing.
The most important way is to offer the distance classes from home is using map. It's easy to know how far or how close it is. Other ways, the students have to take care there self when they are in the way because there is a lot of car.
Additional, there are not going to take care them self when they are making online or video. They just focus what there are doing. For example: when I was tine grade I remember my friend PROPER_NAME she was eleven grade.
She try to offer the distance for her friend by making video. When She was school from home. Then, she started showing the way. On that time, she wasn't take care her self because she was focusing the video.
Next, she try to cross the way by raining. She didn't pay attention the way and she got car accident. On that time she passed away she died. I agree some students think they would benefits from being able to attend classes from home. But most of them are not going to take care them self because there are not focusing the way. They just focusing what there are doing or they just focusing online or video. Additional, using map is butter than making online or video. Other ways its hard to make online or video for offer the distance. Most students are not going to focus when there are making that.
In conclusion, I don't believe the students would benefits by way of online or video to offer the distance. There is other way to offer the distance from classes to home.
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Do you agree or disagree about the importance of attitude? I agree with the importance of attitude, because with your atitude you can motivate yourself to do the best in your life, and you can motivate other people to do the best in their life. Some people think that in this life your positive attitude is the key to do good in everything, because if you go to any place, job, or to the school with positive attitude your life its going to be excellent.
In this life the success is the key, because if people have negative attitude in everywhere, they just don't want to nothig. For example, if they go to the school/collage with negative attitude, maybe they don't want to learn new things about the class, because they are going to be mad, and they don't want to do work with negative attitude, but if the people go with positive attitude they can learn averything they want, or learn more than they know about the class, because be positive means that you want be success in your life, also means that people want to do the best in everything.
Second, people can do better in this life with positive attitude, because they want be graduated from collage wih positive attitude, and with them positive attituted they maybe motive to other people to do the same thing, with their positive attitude they learn more, they are going to do work, homework, and classwork, because in this life the key is the attituded, that means everything you do, do with positive attitute,if you do that you are going to learn new things easy.
Some people argue that in this life you don't need positive attitude, because they only think if you pay attention, do homework, and finish classwork in the school/ collage so you can be success in this life, they only think about to be responsible with their works, not about to have positive attitude. People also argue that in the works you don't need positive attitude, because the only thing you need is experience, work, and be resposible.
In conclusion, if you do everything with positive attitude we can learn things more easy, and you are going to be success in this life, because you motivate yourself to do the best, also you can motivate people to do the same thing, to be success in this life, with positive attituded you can do everything, because you want to learn new things in this life.
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Did you know that the Bahamas is one of the most wonderful places in the world.
One place that I would like to visit is the Bahamas. Bahamas has one of the most incredible views in the world for example the oceans and their colorful fishes they have in, the wonderful long mountings, and the the breezy weather they have there with the colorful tasty food. There are so many activities you can choose to do there for example mounting climbing, food competitions, dancing, and swimming. Some places don't have these types of activities, food, and weather.
The Bahamas is expensive, and its one of the most expensive places but it is worth it to go there for fun and entertainment. Some people would rather waste their money on other fun place for example Paris, Germany, and Italy. One thing that I would like to see when I get to the Bahamas is the wonderful culture of the Bahamas .After seeing the culture I would climb the mounting all day to just see the view from the mounting, and to see the colorful plants. Visiting the Bahamas could help me lose my stress,
and help me learn more about the cultures, and more about the language.
Have you ever thought of what new skills you can learn from just visiting a new place?
Some people learn new skills when they visit a new place for example cooking, climbing, skiing, and biking.
One talent that I would like to learn or become better at it is biking. I love biking that why I choose this talent, and
I could get on a biking team if I become better at it. Bahamas could help me because of its large safe streets some places don't have these types of streets and some do. I could bike throughout the whole city without getting hit by a car.
Have you ever asked your self what is it like to live in the Bahamas?
I would like to live in the Bahamas but its expensive like every other place some places are less and some places are more because of the food, views, and living. Some people live in the Bahamas even tho its expensive these people might have found a job there that pays well or they were born wealthy. Living on the beach is hard because it is expensive, and dangerous because of the storms and other natural disasters. I choose to live away from the beach because it is safer. The Bahamas have enormous amount of colorful plants and animals that is why I want to visit the Bahamas.
In conclusion the Bahamas is one of the most beautiful colorful places in the world with enormous amount of activities, talents, and cultures that is why I want to visit The Bahamas.
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One of the most frequently debated questions in today's society is whether or not first impression are possible to change. Many people argue that first impression are almost impossible to change. They say that is not possible and inevitable. I disagree with the statement. I believe that first impressions can be can be changed because we cannot judge people just by looking at them, everyone has different viewpoints, and we dont know the struggles that the other people are going through. Words can also hurt!
The first reason as to why i disagree with the statement is because we cannot judge people from first impressions. The way people act or interact is not essential information to see the intellectual development and capacity of those individuals who are being judge. There is a famous quote that says, "Our words can sometimes hurt even more than a punch." We all can relate to this, sometimes the words that other people use to express are very damaging and hard to listen; even when is just a silly joke that one of your friends is saying.
Nevertheless, everyone has different perspectives and view points, but just because we may think differently, doesn't mean we have to get driven by our perceptions or speculations. There are millions of people in this planet, and every single one of us think and look different. We are all not the same. The complementary diversity we have nowadays is a great example of this. It is good to have a great range of diversity, but the race we all come from cannot define us, nor the judgments that other people make from us.
The last and final reason is that we don't know the struggles that the other person is going through. Sometimes, we may look tired, weary, or even depressed. Sometimes we are having problems with our families or with our own selves. The judgments we make can potentially affect those individuals life. Sometime we make decisions without thinking about consequences or how those decisions are going to impact others. Decisions, such as the judgments from different speculations we make.
As you have read, I disagree with the statement. I believe that the judgment from our first impressions is not inevitable. We are capable to change our own perception from other people that can potentially affect their lives throughout the struggles that he or she may be facing.
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Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, " To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' Even though some people disagree, I agree with Emerson's statement. The world that we live in has always been cruel and it will always be.
Growing up in life you will see a lot of people trying to bring you down, do the wrong things and take the wrong path, it is your job to make the right decisions. For example, friends will invite you to do wrong things such as doing drugs, something you are not suppose to do, it will only get you addicted, poor, homeless or all of these combined. They will ask you if you want to try it and they will tell you that it is just for fun and that you will like it, don't listen.
You will see people trying to make you do other bad things,even worse then doing drugs, such as stealing from other people,
beating somebody up or even killing someone. Be yourself and don't listen to those type of people. Stealing, beating or killing is illegal acts and it will only get you in jail or even maybe killed.
Another reason why I
agree with Emerson's statement is because y ou should stay away from people that doesn't care about their acts,life or future. Don't try doing crazy things just to fit in because someone told you to do it, be yourself, be happy, and people will like you the way you are, they will accept you the way you are, even with all your problems.
Forget about what the world wants you to be and focus on yourself so you can be whatever you want to be. Life is too short for people to tell you how to live your life, you only get to live once, it should be your right to live right. And this is why I believe being yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.
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Do you like to be yourself? Many people around the world love to be original. To be yourself is the greatest accomplishment in the world because you can earn your own credits, you can make your own way and you can have your goals clearly.
In school I am always making my own effort to earn my own credits and never be a cheater because I feel satisfied with the result of my own work.
Make your own way have a big advantage because you decide where you want to go or when you will move forward although it is hard because have a lot of obstacle this is one of the risk you may have to take to be yourself.
Have your goals clearly is an advantage because you know what you want and need to be an exceptional person in the society and that every one would see that you are different person and never give up at your goals.
To be your self is to try your best in whatever you want. To be our self sometimes carried us, but t be our selves it is a beautiful and unique feeling. In the feature everyone will want to be their selves because it bring us security, exceptional personality and love of our own. every one is invited to feel this beautiful feeling
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My opinion about performing a community service is that they should have a community service. i think that they should have that because the a community service gives a help to the community because helping out in the community is very good and could give a good help to residents in the community because some communities have old people or even paralised person which can't help out in the community. So i think the students should have a community service. The principal should required the students to have a community service. If students would decide to have community service they would do a awesome job by helping out residents and helping out the environment because your helping it out by not letting that much trash get in to our world. You would help the plants by letting them grow more and live more. Then will have much more food and vegetables. So i think having a community service is good so will help out the environment to stay clean and have a better and cleaner community. I think those students who say community service takes too much time they should just give some time when they are just sitting their in the couch and go help out your community and the environment.
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Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment". In this day ling life to be yourself individuality in this world. distinguish, normal, healthy, sane condition, and selves. Is the greats accomplishment by Author Ralph Waldo Emerson.
I agree with this, In this time we has a human being trying to be an unique person. A music artists, drawing artists, or a teacher etc.. as an example; A teacher can trying to do something especial with his students. That can be something that nobody did it before. That make an unique teacher and that can end really bad or good either this, people going to judge he/she, however; the world constantly trying to make you different. And that change is gonna be to make you a unique person. When Author wrote "To make you something else".
Negative persons consisting trying to change you, make you something else or judge. For my opinion that simple thing can be strong. Why? is the way that you looking, as an example; they gonna judge, but you gonna be strong and not worry about that, because you are a human being in this life nobody is "perfect". We can be unique in this life, we also can guide by people are already death. In the past, a member of your family, a artists, or a person that did a great job or something unique. that can also help us to get some ideas, as an example; the men who created "Facebook", this person is unique. because he created something inclusive that beans created before Is a positive change of the "life system". What I trying to say it is. In the cycle of life, we as a human being; born, growing up, reproducing, and dead end. In the cycle an example; when we are in the stage of growing up, they let us know to understand that we have to made a decision. For example: "What you want to be in this life when you old?". this trying to understand that we have to make a decision to contribute to this "life system". To make it better world as an example; teenager trying to decide a career for college, to contribute something good for this world, however; that decision of the teenager can be, wherever he or she want. People can judge or be bad with you, but the end of the day. It no important anymore. This is only one life to live wherever you do with this life, is your decision. But we have to smart.
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Dear Generic_Name,
I know you're still a little young to understand what technology means ,but I believe that technology has had a negative impact on us. Technology has increased the rates of kidnapping, human trafficking ,sexual abuse ,and murder.
Due to technology we are also losing our eye sight. It has also limited our communication skills .
Young adults usually download dating apps to meet new people ,but they don't understand the risk they can get them self into. For example they usually meet someone online and start talking. After awhile the guy probably ask her out on a date to go for a dinner ,and of course the girl is going to say yes because she's interest in the guy. Few days later the guy ask her out on another date to go and watch a movie ,but he say's that he's going to pick her up; and that were it all start she get in the car thinking he going to take her to the movies ,but instead he's taking her somewhere else he's going to kidnapping her and she doesnt know. she goes missing for weeks and no one knows where she's at. A few days later they find her body dead.
Now in day more and more people are using glasses. Technology is ruining our eye vision. People that work in offices are more likely to be using glasses now in day. They sit all day looking that their computer ,but they don't realize that their eye sight is getting bad. Young adults are also using glasses too because they use their phone to much or watch to much TV . One way to prevent that is you could put your light dimer on your computer and phone. You could also set your self a limit for how long you're going to use your phone or computer.
Another reason why technology is bad because it limits our communication skills. More people are getting used to working independently. Teacher will usually give us a project assignment; we can either work with a partner or work independently. Most students like to work independently because they don't like to rely on someone else finishing the part they had to work on for the project and not doing it. We are also able to text or video chat with other people instead of talking to them in person. By talking to someone in person it can also increase your self esteem.
In conclusion these are my reason why I believe that technology is not good for us. Technology has impacted us a lot in society. We need to be more careful and caution about the new technology we are going to be inventing in the future. we also need to be careful with the action we take. No one can predict what going to happen in the future.
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Many high schools have opportunities for students that want to run a business .However, before they run their business I need some learning experience from a manager. I wanted to reach out to you Generic_Name to talk about what my interests are . The school I attend at is Generic_school and I am 17 Years of age. I want to learn how to start my own restaurant ,
know how you manage the prices , how to run the business , and also how to manage people.
However, I work at a restaurant at the moment and I am trying to become a manager. Although, I heard you have to do a lot before you become one . I want to know how to run the prices and how to make deals because I dont have that much experience , and must know how to do that to become a manager. Furthermore, I researched your job and read the reviews your customers love your restaurant . They say it is not to expensive but not too cheap ,also they say it is worth a drive down their. Thats why I wanted to ask to if i could get some experience from you.
Moreover, I wanted to know how to actually learn how to run the entire business. For instance, if i wanted to open up my own business I want knowledge from an expert before I do. My school does not have the right experience that you have . Also, I had spoke to one of my classmates they told me that you do training classes for students that are very interested in business she applied and she told me that she got really far in her business and that she is already getting started. I wanted to apply for the training so I have a clue on what is going on so I can eventually start my own restaurant.
Lastly, I wanted to know how to manage people around , know how to be a right trainer for a perfect restaurant. Nevertheless, people say it is hard opening up a business if you dont have the right training . For example, I had a friend that decided to run a business without experience she did not know how to mange the line in the kitchen , the people in the front, nor the prices. Later on the business ran out of service and got shut down. However, that is not how I want to end my career . I want to go somewhere and be in a place where people will love to socialize with the waiters, and to get their orders right .Thats an important part on why I came today to experience the way of training.
Based on this talk, I want to start my own business and work on becoming a better trainer . Even though, I have no experience with running my own business, managing the people, and how to manage the prices . I hope by the end of today I can get applied and start my training so I can get some ideas on how to do things around a restaurant and start my own business by 18 years of age.
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In this passage i will tell you my point of view of this, I believe that it dosen't matter how much experience someone has over the other person, it only increases there chances of getting picked, and only by a small margin. my reason is that people shouldn't pick a person by what or how much experience they have, but pick the people that are best for the job such as being a hard worker, fast learner, or by being determined to work. you might not have the experience but they can still pick you for the job, all you have to do is to prove to them that you can do learn it and will be able to do after it.
I think getting a new job is like learning a new unit in a class all you need is a person to show you how they do it and improve on that and, you will have setbacks or things that you won't understand. but you will still have the teacher or the person that is helping you, that can tell you if your doing something wrong or to answer your questions. once you had enough practice with it, you can help other people that have the same problems as you or the same questions. by getting the job you've learned how to do those things and how to teach other people how to do it too. you don't need experience you need people with experience to teach you so you can teach other people.
In my experience to have a good worker they don't need to have experience, they only need people to teach them while there working seeing what they are doing wrong and improving on that. while i was working in a construction job, i was making mistakes all over the place, i wasn't doing well with tools or machines, sometimes i would cut the materials too small or too large, so most of the time i would hand it over to one of my coworkers and with the tools, most of the time would get them mixed up, for example one coworker will ask for a tool and my mind would just be blank then they would just get it themselves, so after i had to practice with the tools and by the end of the time i was working there i never got one thing wrong, this proves that all you need is practice during the job or work, it dosen't matter if you have never done it before all you need to practice.
Although i do acknowledge the people with experience have more of a chance to get the job there going for but all i'm saying is that you shouldn't doubt yourself when someone has experience and you don't, just keep your eyes open and your head strong and see if you got the job, and if you didn't, try another time, it dosen't matter if you fail to get the job once or multiple times, it dosen't matter if someone has more experience then you, if you prove to them that you can work harder then them, and learn more then them they will pick you for the job. all you need to do is go to the interview and show what you can do and what sort of person you are.
In this passage i have show that you don't need to have the experience to get the job or being a good worker, you just need to be determined to do the work and they will recognize that, and they will respect you more. but only if you do good work you can't expect good things to happen because of bad results, but if you prove to them that you will be able to learn how to do it then you will get the job. i have also shown my own experience with it of being a worker that had no experience to being the one that never messed up at the end.
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When you try new things you learn and when you learn you grow.
Do not conform of what you already have try to be better, because if you do not try you would not get chance to do thing and you probability would not grow. In my opinion you should try new things and not be stock in what you already mastered because ,You can learn new things, You can grow as a individual and as a community and You can help others.
When you try new things we learn because the make us grow,
for example if you want to open a buisness of finances in your community but you do not know how because you never try to do it you ask someone that have already mastered of doing it and you can start doing your buisness because you already try and you learn how to do it. another example would be going to college and there is a class that you already know because you take it in high school and you explain the thing to your friend and you are a mastered doing it and one of you friends ask you for another class problem but you do not because you haven try the class but it sound interesting and you want to try it because you want to learn new thing and try not matter what your situation is in your life be confident of your self. other example would be try to cook and learn your self that can teach you that you can try by your self and learn by your self but you try and that what it matter you try.
Try new thing help you learn and learn help you grow as an individual and as a community for example you grow as an individual because you take the class that you friend ask you before and you did it answer him because you haven even try then you try and become a mastered doing it and you open a buisness the community start growing and you open more buisness you become more important and the community grow more as well as you and you became someone important for the community and you keep having chance to be better every time that you learn you start helping people that do not have a chance to imprube them self. an for teach your self of cooking is a motivation to other to try the same thing.
You can help people when you grow because you learn how to do the work and now you teach the work to other to they can have a better chance in life giving them a place to work and having them grow as well the community grow because the buisness that you open people was more interesting in your buisness and they make you offers and tell you to work with them but you are scared that you work may not work but you remember that if you do not try and stay of what you are mastered you would not grow. cooking your self help the community to have people to get in head and teach others.
Even if you do not have try something and you think you can do it and you fell, you would be more sad that you do not try before you do it or ask someone for help that ready do it is a big mistake, try before you do not grow ,you do not have to be conform of what you already have because you can help others and make your self be proud and cooking for other and tell then that you learn by your self is a inspiration to other do the some thing and the way that you grow as trying thing would make the community more interesting try to grow before you give up.
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We all may have failure in life. In fact, we live in a world where everyone decides whether to be success or not to be success. In these days people are giving up on things that they might can do it, but they do not believe in themselves, going from failure to failure it does not mean to give up without trying. To be success, you must have to think positive and try it as many times as possible or as needed.
The pursuit of success is a key to be someone in life. However, each individual has their own thoughts or opinions. Unfortunately people loss their enthusiasm that takes them to never be successful. For example, many people play sports; they do not always win. They have failures. Sometimes they win, sometime they loose. Having those failures makes them to keep practicing, learn from the mistakes they made and try to fix them. It is a important role that later on in other games will help them to win. Deciding to give up will help them to be successful in many things in the future.
I had have many failures in my life. One of them is when I started to play the piano. I was twelve years old when I started. There was a time when I felt to give up because it was hard to play it, but I never loss my enthusiasm, I kept practicing untill I learned it. Having this failure make me think that if I never try, then I will never be able to success in life and neither to accomplish things in my own. Another thing, people had told me that I would not be a successful person because I have a son, who is only five months, my answer has been that I know it will be difficult to success, but not matters I will never give up untill I have achive my goals. Believing in myself is a thing that have help me to success.
In conclusion, success is a word that everyone should think with positive. Having a positive attitude will also help to be success. We all should take advantage of those thing that are worth it, instead of being success in things that might not be value in life. Having success in life will matter in your future life. Although is true that many people believe that success is not that important as others things might be.
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Imagine a world where everyone behaved same way. Positive attitude is the key to success in the life because it helps you reach a goal with confidences and brings the better outcome for their future.
As may many people say that the negative attitude is way to succeed, however, a positive attitude, explain the performances of your doing for example Generic_Name got 50 out of 100, which she wanted on her presentation not because she did not do the work properly,but because the way she present her presentation and she was scared and nervous to present it in front of everyone. It was majorly graded on her performance, but next time she practiced her way to present her presentation five-six times and thought about how she can do this and she doesn't have to be scared of anything and she got 100 on it, which was her goal. Also. a sports team lose few time because the players not getting along or one is better than other, which they can change by thinking equally and being friendly to each other. It shows the optimistic behavior of human supports during their task.
Your past always reflects on your future. Everyone learns something from their mistakes or good memories. For example if Generic_Name did good on her presentation because she the way she presented, it illustrates that she more confident and positive to do her same presentation without worrying. If the sports player lost couple times they would not make same mistakes as they did it before. if you think and feel positives it will show it on your work. The effect changes your perspective to your life.
In conclusion, the way you display your input in feeling true helps the output for your future life, Like Generic_Name positive behaving helped her getting 100 on her presentation and the way that showed on her future presentation and the sports team which practiced and improved their co working to wins the games and their future games. The way you think, feel and perform helps you support your life
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Dear, Principal
I think students should perform in community service because
I'll show little kids to think of others and not just them self's because when they get older the little kids aren't going to care but if they see the older kids help maybe the little kids would think how the big kids helped n see how much they helped them and would still want to help others when they get older. The little kids always look up to the big kids. Also maybe the little kids won't gave up so easy. Helping in community service would also help the big kids because they would be thinking of other, they will feel good about them self's when their done, and that well help them get into a good collage when they are older just for helping in the community. When the older kids have kids of their own they can tell them how they helped the community and will want their kids to be in it too. Helping others is the right way to go and to never give up in what you believe in.
Your Student,
STUDENT_NAME
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People often use a good attitudes to successed their goals for their life. A good attitudes can help other in suretin prombles. People use a good attitude to help other like job, homework, or chorse even if they having difficult time. Having a good attitudes provide peoples with helping other and successed your goals.
Helping other is a good way to provide them with a good attitude for their life. For example, I help my friends with homework or a study guide. If they're stuck on a questions or a promblem I can help answer the questions and give them a easy way for them to know. Even if they having a difficult time. I can help them if there is a problem, so I can help them. Helping other is a good attitude becuase it's help other if they have a problem and people can help others in the future.
Successed what your goals is a other way for them with a good attitude. For example, my goals is to get good grades, so can go to colleg. I work hard on my homework so I can get good grabes, but sometime it's difficult to do my homework even if I don't have much timein class to get some help. All though I still get some help from my parents at home. Aachiveing your goals is a good attitude because it's help me achiveing my gaols and it can help in the future.
It concluded that having a good attitudes helps other to succesed their goals. There are still many ways to have a good attitudes like helping other that provide people will helps other if needed or achiveing your gaols that helps what your achiveing. Even in life can hard sometime we'll always need something that's good for once to get our self together.
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Thomas Jefferson wrote that "Determine never to be idle.. It wonderful how much may ti be done if we are always doing". He think about that person have to be determine to do have the focus in something, But I think that it is not a good idea have the focus in something Because Everyone need to have time for their own, Also maybe try something different or find another way to do it, And maybe some plans have a lot of frustration and mental problems.
First, Every person should have time for their own because having time to relax have help to have the focus later, Also have free time you can have fun, playing videogames, dancing, singing, or meet somebody, and have time with the family or just time to sleep can be a great help for a person. I think is very important have time ourown because something we don't pay attention what happen around us, or just can be tired for everyone.
Second, try something new can be a good idea to have a brain storm, To really find what you or what we want to do to have all the success like Tesla of SpaceX, They are traying a lot of different things, Maybe be idle can be good sometimes and be determine but Is not a good idea.
In addition, a lot of person think same like Jefferson that is a good idea be determine to do somethinng and They want to be expert in that thing , and great for They, But I think detemine to do something can have a lot of problems sometimes like frustration problems. Just imagine a person, That spend a lot of time in here determine think to do, But something really bad happen, And that work, that this person dedicate a lot of effort, and dedication, just go away and that can cause psychologist problem, Like the Real Madrid, They wogsrk very hard all season and they make a plan but everyone see what happen, nothing work and just their season just end 3 month before finish. So I think have all the focus in just one think can have a lot of problems.
In conclusion, I think is very hard to say that be determine in something can cause a lot of problems like frustration or depression, And also is important to have to ourown or our family, friends, or pets, and try new things or cool thing is always is good, Never is good to do same always just you have you own thinking or own critical.
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Small kindness can impact others. Because you can make their day go much better if they not felling "Okay" we can get a smile out of their face or saying "everything is going to be okay" saying something nice can impact something that motivates them or making their day go better saying positives things not negative stuff that's going to make their day go even worse and making them feel like they are nothing in this world everybody comes to this word for a purpose they not just here to do nothing but if we make that person feel like he is nobody in this world he might saying "there is no point of me being here" And that person might finish with his life because they treating him like he is nobody. There is two types of people in this world one of them are the nice people and the other ones are just mean and bad be choose what type of people do we want to be nobody can force us to be someone we dont want to be we do it are self this word will be full of hate if kind people didn't exist. people might go and say something negative to the other Pearson and if you hurting that p[person feelings your just hurting yourself too or you might not even care about yourself you just care about what people might say to you or think about you and you just making other people feel bad. Because if they treat you like trash your not just going to treat others like that or you can just not talk to other people or they might try to help you out you choose you get help or you can stay the way you are and not get help but we all gotta treat people with kindness no matter who they are just treat people like you wanna be treat it or get help. Good people still exist start treat everybody with respect and kindness.
Get a smile out of people face they want to be happy but they just need to learn how to smile and be happy with others being kind and treat them with respect thats what is all about helping a friend out not giving a friend your back when they really need you staying with them in the good or bad moments.
"everything is going to be okay" giving people advice of whats good and bad and being kind to one another.
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Did you know that some teachers/educators want year round of school. My decision for this topic would be, I want year round of school. I feel it would benefit students and teachers to actually focus and maintain on school work. Some students would disagree with this, but there are some supportive reasons why this would benefit the both.
Reasoning number one, Most students take a 3 to 4 month summer break. If there was year round schools it would 3 to 4 week summer break, a longer winter break, and one week off for winter and fall time. This would benefit students to be able to retain lots of amounts of information. Also students would have an extra break for the one week off in the fall time.
Reasoning number two, Students who take more than a 2 month break will most likely forget what they have been taught in school. That adds more work to teachers because they would have to re teach the information back to the students, and it would take longer for the students to remember the information. Students who would do year round of school would be able to remember the information that they were taught and it would be less work for teachers for them to re teach it.
Last reasoning, After when students come back for a break most teachers have to re teach what they taught the students before break. Also normally when students come back from long breaks some teachers start giving tests or even quizzes. Most students don't study while they are on break, so they are likely not able to recieve a good grade on the test and quizzes. But with year round school the students would be able to obtain the information and less likely fto orgot what they have been taught before Summer, Spring or Winter break.
Overall, It just seems students and teachers would benefit a lot more with school being year round. The teachers would have less to re teach and students can obtain more information. Also it would help studnets do better when it comes to taking to tests or quizzes. So it would be a win win for everybody.
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Break out of comfort zone.
life is boring without expanding your horizons.
no growth.
have to fail to learn a lesson to move on.
learn more from failure than success.
If never try something new, you'll never know if you life it or if you're good at it.
real life experience.
Helen Keller
Michael Jordan
After mastered basketball, he want to baseball. Can't stay at tee ball , have to practice to get to actual baseball.
Emerson is therefore correct in stating " Unless you try to do something beyond what have already mastered , you will never grow" because to grow one must break out of comfort zone and failure leads to success.
Failure lead to success, comfort zone knee jerk reaction, "well I haven't mastered anything yet so I can't adequately answer this questions" Generic_Name's example wants to mas painting.
Opposition, mastering something is impossible scientific theories disproved got to school for 12 years, still have not learned everything therefore Emerson is wrong.
Also, Ralph Waldo Emerson Wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow". This quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson states if people do not go beyond what they have already accomplished. They will never progress in life. Some people's initial reaction would be " I have not Masters anything, so I am unable to respond to this question." There are a couple reasons why Emerson's quote is correct. Growing requires breaking out of comfort zones and broadening horizon. If a person does not go beyond what they are capable of archiving they will not grow. Failure assists to growing and learning to lead to success.
If people never expand their horizons, the they never experience new adventure life can offer. Without the thrill of a new experience, life would become aborning repetition of activities we have already mastered. Therefore, to break out of a comfort zone, people must go beyond what we have already mastered. One day at school, our band class attended a piano recital put on by Generic_School students. Even though, I was not part pf their piano class, I decided to perform unannounced. As I walked upon the stage, a my emotions flooded my body, such as nervous, anxious. However, to become a better piano performed, I needed to step out of my comfort zone and perform for entire piano and band classes. Just as Emerson said humans must go beyond a mastered trait, or comfort zone, to better themselves and not miss possible opportunities.
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There are many benefits of you knowing what you want to be in a young age and many people take advantage of it. Knowing your dream and what you want to be, in the fetcher can help you in many way. First of all, you can get more time to focus on your dream and try to accomplish them. Also, knowing what you want to be and studying it at a young age can effect your knowledge on it. And also can help you accomplish it, for example my cousin he know that he want to be a doctor by the time he was in high school. He took class such as biology and chemistry and many other sines class. Now he knows a lot about what it take to be a doctor and what are the responsibility.
knowing what you want to be in high school can help you when get to college in many ways. Getting some of your fetcher job class in high school can help you in college. It can help you to be more provisional and responsible in your college class. also it can help you in your financial life by taking most of your courses in high school. And also it can help you get in a good college. for example, my cousin got in a good college that have cross that relate to the felled that he want to work in.
knowing what you want to be before high school can even help you when you finely have your job. It can help you get more exuberance and, most of the combines want their employees to have a exuberance. Also knowing what you want to be at a young age it can help to be more compatible in you job. My cousin once said to me the the key to my successful life now was that I know what I wanted to be from the binning. That's why I think that knowing what you want to do at a young age is a good idea.
To conclude, my point was if student know what they want to be by the time they are in high school, they will benefits and have more exuberance. Also, it will be easy to them achieving there dreams and goals. And have an easy life and a nice life. And they can be more successful in their job.
And in their daily life also in their fetcher.
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Some people say that to converse resources, some businesses have adopted a four-day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. our school is deciding if they should do a four day school week, with nine hours consisting each day. Others rather to have a normal school week.
I agree with having the normal school week because, The majorly of the high school students have part times jobs they work after school and having a nine hours school day would not leave enough time for students to work in a part time job, There are some girls at high school that have babies, and they are paying babysits, with a nine hours school days moms would spend less time with their babies and they would have to pay more hours to babysits, With an nine hours school day the amount of time to study, do homework or prepare for projects would be less then a normal school day of seven hours that can affects students grade.
Other people say schools should follow this model because, A nine hour school day means more time for each class and having more time in all classes its helpful for homework or late work, They can take advantage of having Friday off students can have a job only on Fridays.
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Having after school homework clubs can have so many ways to get work done .For and example, it allows students from any grade to get more help after school , students get amazing grades or scores , and afterwards , you get free time to do anything you always wanted to do after school .
Staying after school to get more help , can give you many advantages like able to ask for help on certain subject and understanding the subject more . You are also able to ask more than usual questions out of class , and it can help with finishing work faster and easier with the help of a teacher or a fellow student .
When staying after and getting help , it can change a students grades easily to a bad grade to an amazing grade . Getting a wonderful grade, can also have a student in a positive attitude , and also feel wonderful because they are passing the class . When getting good grades , parent get proud for all the hard work they are doing to understand every subject in school . When parent are happy , you're also happy .
Afterwards you're done with all the hard work and you've done all the homework you've been given , you have free time. In that free time you get to do multiple things you,ve never done , play a favorite sport that you like , or even spend time with family and friends but if you have nothing else to do , just continue your hard work on studding note or look or your old homework to see you understand it .
In retor spect , establishing homework clubs can make a difference , it can really help with student that are strugling to understand whats happening in the class .
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Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something?. We accomplish excellent grades at school by studying , at sports by practicing everyday and never giving up to become an amazing player, and at work by learning and giving a lot of effort to realize our goals.
First of all, students stay after school or ask for a raise pass to study more about the subject they have a test or quiz.
In the actuality, there is a lot of schools from South America like Peru, Chile, Bolivia, etc. that do not have after school or raise pass for students to study more. Some students have to pay approximate 30 dollars per hour for a personal teacher to help them at home. Students from South America do not have the facility to study with their teachers without paying for extra classes. Another example, when I came to United States, there was a day that I had an important test, and I did not know nothing about the topic. So, I stayed after school with my teacher, and we practiced a lot. When I took the test, I answered all the questions without problem. The next day, my teacher gave me back the test and I was the highest grade of the class. That made me stayed more often at school with my teachers to study different classes. Furthermore, to get good grades, students have to do homework, projects, and participate a lot in class.
Secondly, it is important for people that want to get better at sports to practice everyday to become an excellent player.
Additionally, people success in sports, when they never give up and try to learn by their mistakes. When I was in Generic_City, at school I was part of a volleyball team, and we played against another school. That day, I was not ready to play with the other school. My team lost the game because I did not played good. I did not want to play anymore, because I was scared of losing again. But I did not give up because I was fascinated with this sport and
I kept practicing and becoming better at volleyball.
I know that the best way to success at sports is practicing all the time, and never give up in something that you love. I learned that if I stayed in inactivity, and do not practice, I would never become a good player in volleyball.
Finally, people accomplish at work when they do new projects to grow the company each day. Another reason is, people have to be responsible with their duties at work. Besides, if you want to get a higher level position, then you can do it by learning more about your job and showing your effort and hard working everyday. In this days, is hard to get a good and stable job because it requires effort and knowledge, but being active and always doing something to make a wonderful work will let you find an amazing job. By the other hand, being idle can give you bad consequences like, you can be fired, never find a job or never be successful in life.
I am sure that most people accomplish more when they study at school to get good grades, at sport when they practice and believe in themselves to become an extraordinary player, and at work when they learn and give a lot of effort to fulfill their goals.
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_Yes i think yes its can by a benefit to attend classes from home because many students come late in the school and the teachers sometimes they mark they students are absents or late, but may the school can give the opportunity to who work or to who need it because many student we are working in at the night and sometimes we see many of they students sleep in classes.
_But if we attend classes from home that will by better because we will sleep more time at home and we will don't come at the school every day or wake up the same time all day, but the teachers will by attent for their students who has take their classes from home to send their work or to help they students when they don't understand or sometimes we stock to do or how to do and then the teachers will by help.
_But is a bad idea to because many students are may don't wants to doing all they work at home because they knowing they are home and when we are home we prefer doing others things except the school work and that can by a problem when we take the test because many students can fail their test, because in home we can find the answers in internet or anywhere but when we are in the school every day we can't use our phone or anything to find the answers because the teachers wants to test us what are we know or what we are need to know to by better and to resolve all you'r work in you'r own idea may the teaher can give you some ideas or examples or explain how you can do it but is diferent like when you finding the answer in internet because the internet can give you all the answer and yuo will be no learn nothing because it's just copy what are you see except with the teachers you learn more because they tell to you to try to do it in your own and you have an idea to what are you going to do.
_And it can by hard for the students to graduate because can affect they attend in the school and will many students going to skiping because they can come in the school but they can leave early because they can find a excuse to to leave and to do the attendece at home or just skiping classes and don't doing nothing. Well it okay to come in the school every day because if one has attend in home then all students wasts to have attend at home
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It has been said that first impression are impossible to change. Based on my experience, I totally disagree with this statement. Here is my reasons why I disagree first impression are impossible to change.
First, When you get to know a person, you always have a first impression on them. It could be negative or positive; however, it could change over time. For example, when I met my best friend for the first time, I had a bad impression on him. I thought he was serious and boring but it turns out he was actually fun to be around with and joyful.
Secondly, It's not the same knowing the person for the first time than knowing the person for a long period of time. For example, people don't have the confidence of showing their selves when they meet the person for the first time. Although they are cases that first impression stays the same; however, it could change depend on how the person treats them.
In conclusion, first impression could always change based on how you act. You need to get to know the person more to be able to change thier first impression. And here are my reason on why I disagree first impression are impossible to change.
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Do you remember a time you hated cleaning you house?
Well if people hate doing that imagine them doing community service and how that don't have air conditioning like a house do its outside in the hot sunny day and just have water to drink sweet coming down your face. some people complain of what they have and what they don't have, how nasty the food is and not, how one person got something better then they do, how hard it is to keep on cleaning everyday of their life. But, the best thing to have is a beautiful place to live but we wont have that if we don't keep our self together and keep our environment clean because if we don't then we would be living in a nasty ugly place then a nice and beautiful one like LOCATION_NAME how sweet and beautiful the air is. But some people are to selfish to give up a little bet of their time to help and keep our community safe and clean for each another i mean how hard is it. Why would they rather live in a nasty dirty place? we should all in school accepted to work together and do community service and change mother earth and livings around us. So i think we should do community service don't you?
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Every students expect that they are going to have a great time in a summer break. Some students enjoy their long summer vacation because they do not have to worry about the school for a while. But some students want to reduce summer vacation and have longer breaks in winter, spring, and fall. There are some pros and cons on both sides, but I agree with long summer vacation and short breaks in winter and spring. Among the numerous reasons, my most important reasons are students cannot make a long time plan during the vacation; it is not effective to have a short shcool time and then have a break.
One of my most important reason is that students cannot make a long time plan during the vacation. I believe that many students want to go travel or want to tour other countries with a long time plan, but if they have short vacation, they have to worry about the assignment and school while they are traveling. Sometimes, it is hard to see everything you want with a short time, so you regret that you did not have bunch of time. If one of their family lives in another country and it is hard to see each other, they have to make a plan to have a wonderful time with each other during the break. They, obviously, want to stay together for a long time because they do not know when they are going to meet each other again; It could be next year or 10 years later. They, however, cannot enjoy their time as much as they want if the student have to go back early. Because of these evidences, I agree with the long summer vacation.
Another my most important reason is that it is not effective to have a short school time and then have a break. Every sports have a season and the players or coaches focus on their duty during the season; they do not have a break for like 3-4 weeks because of their body rhythm. I believe that it works for students, too. For example, people who want to be good at music instruments have to practice consistently; practicing 10 hours a day and doing nothing for a week does not help you at all. Even though the practicing time is shorter, using the instruments everyday reminds you and help you to get better. It is hard to come back to school after having a long break, but it is more effective when the students change their body rhythm for the school time than having a short break after a short school time. Because of these evidences, I agree with the long summer vacation.
There are some advantages on the other opinion because not every single person has the same studying style. Some of the students study very hard during the short time period and then take a break, and it works for them. However, this type of studying has a risk that the students can forget what they have learned during the break because they tried to put much informations like math, science, english, and history in a short time. Even though the students who cram for the tests or assignments can get a good grade, they have to go over it after few moments later. Therefore, it is better to have a long summer vacation than a short summer vacation.
As I mentioned, summer break is what students' best time in a whole year. Almost every students makes their own plans on what they should do. Students, however, have a difficult before they have a summer vacation, so some of them want to reduce the summer break and make longer the other breaks. It is not a bad idea to move on, but they have to know that taking longer breaks in winter and fall would affect their whole summer plans. They also have to realize that they can do much more thing with longer break. That depends on how people use their own time, but if you have longer break it would give you wide opportunity.
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thi don't really select a work in wat iam interest wight now but i think i can fget in the technology business because i is fun i like, and is interesting if i had a job i had to like it and thats why i pick this type of biseness and i think that position fo what the manger can give to me is like the guy who makes works from the computer like a graphics work like to create games because thats what i like and a'im good doing it so thats one of my options what i can get for work in a company of thechnology, If i get in a technologi company i wish it canbe about video games like i wish i can be like a graphic desainer so i can create characters of a videogame and olso i can money in the job that i like like oing what i like the most. thats the bsusiness i want to geot into it.
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Is it hard to be yourself on a world that is trying to make you something else?, think about it?, we live on this world, trying to be like everyone else, instead of just being yourself and live happy. In this paper i will argue of how the world is trying to change us day by day, how we get influence by it and end up changing, and how every year that goes by our generation gets worst and worst.
The world is everyday is trying to find a way to make us change, we as humans have stop, and think, what we want for our future? why would i want to be like everyone else? Do i want to be a wealthy person in this society? Do i want to accomplish all my goals?, those are the types of question that we should ask our self, and think deeply, were will we end up on the future following the steps of the rest of the world?, because in this world, if you want successful, you have to be yourself, the world is not going to do it for you.
We get very influence by world, on activities, the way we talk, the way that we dress, the clothes that we use, our religion, and a lot of stuff that if we dont like, or we dont do, we are not cool for the world. A good example is the clothes that we use, if we dont us the clothes and shoes that are trending or popular right now we are not cool for the society, and maybe the reason why we dont use it because, you dont have money, or you dont have time or access to buy or simply you just dont like it, and for the world that means your not cool or cute, because, you dont us a certain clothes, and is shouldnt be like that, because, some people get bully by that and some even get to a depression because they cant afford any of that and is very sad to know that this world is like this.
Sadly, by every year that goes by, our generation get worst and worst, and the reason of that is the world. The world has influence us, in such a bad way that is sad, all the new drugs that are killing people, the war between countries, the new artist that are coming out that just sing about drugs, killing people and sex is of a very bad influence for our generation and sadly if we dont start being our own selves, and start the right stuff, eventually we are going to end up really bad.
some people say that this world is bad, and just gives us bad influence, but they are not right, because is not neccesarly the world, it could be us, letting ourselves get involved or influence in bad stuff,and then say that is the world fault, when is really your fault, for getting involved on bad stuff overall, in the future, i hope that this world changes, because we still have time to do it and is not impossible, i just hope that this generation that is coming up, have the courage to change the world and make it a good friendly world.
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Most successful people keep study new carrers or leanirng new tasks to do in order to became even wealthier and to not get bored of doing the same job daily. Ralph Emerson states that, you will never grow if you do not try something new that you already know. Meaning that if people do not expand their knowledge after of what they already know they will never accomplish more to became more successful in life. However, if you are willing to expand you horizons and break out the comfort zone, you will grow and achieve higher goals. Trying something new of what you already mastered help people to grow because it lead people will live real experiences and it provide more opportunities. and it break the comfort zone.
To star with, the more people learn, the more opportunities they have. Opportunities are provide for people that are open to learn new things and grow in what they do. For instance, I have been working in a part-time in a salad place for two years. The first year I learned all the work stations which I was really good at it. After a year, I realized that it was the time to expand my knowledge and also to ask for a raise. I became a valid trainer in all the store's stations. Now I teach new workers and assist them how to do their task in the correct way and they are paying me better. This shows that if I would not be open to learn how to be a trainer at the store, I would not be paying as well as today. Being capable to try something new offer better opportunities in order to grow rather than getting stuck in the same place without trying to achieve higher goals.
Moreover, the desire to try different things make people to live many wonderful experiences. If people never expand their horizons , they will never experiences the adventures life has to offer. For instance, Last summer I went to a campus in a university to get more information about careers that I was interested in. I meet wonderful students from other schools and learned computer science. The teachers provided me the information and requirements to get into the University and the different classes that I have to take in order to get a degree in computer sciences. Also, we practiced several methods to create graphs and draw in the computers. Since, I visited that place I got more convince to study computer science in the future and it is a experience that I will never forget because I realized that I have the skills to study that career as my major. If I would not go , I will never notice that I could study computer science in the out coming. Learning new things lead to live and learn experiences that help people to grow in their future.
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it is better to try something new because people can explore experiences that will never forget and and they will learn new things to became even more successful in their lives. People have the right to never stop learning and get new skills that will prepared them for whatever they want to accomplish and change about their routine. If the whole world have the willing to keep learning despite they are mastered in something already, they will be more professionals and a wealthier society.
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Student-designed Projects Encourage Learning
Summers can be boring for students, especially when homework is assigned. Students have creative minds and a variety of interests which can be specialized to a topic of interest; however, schools tend to assign a generic assignment to all students despite their differences. Summer projects are intended to enable students to continue learning and exploring the world through a lense of their interest. Therefore, allowing students to design their own summer projects allows for their interests to spark, their creativity to grow, and their areas of knowledge to expand.
Firstly, student-designed summer projects will allow for every student to specify the project on his or her interests. Every child is different and shows admiration towards different subjects in school. If teachers design the summer project, the students will lack incentive to explore an area of interest as that has already been done for them. Additionally, teachers will attempt to design the summer project in a way that it applies to all students; however, not all students think alike. For example, most middle schools conduct science fairs that allow kids to explore an area of science that particularly interests them. This allows for children to research heavily into a subject and even enjoy doing so. This not only sparks an interest for science, but it also allows students to show off their abilities and specialize in their talents. This science fair analogy can be applied to summer projects because children will develop their admiration towards an educational topic and will enjoy the learning process. This creates a positive incentive for learning despite it being summer.
Secondly, if students are enabled to design their own summer projects, creativity will occur and develop. When teachers design projects, students are incentified to simply follow instructions and do as they are told. This results in surface level researching and a lack of interest in actually learning and retaining knowledge. This is understandable as most students do not enjoy a generic assignment that does not apply specifically to their interests. However, if students were given the opportunity to design their own project, they could research a subject that sparks their interest and creativity. This will lead to a deeper understanding of the topic and will result in a better quality of summer projects completed over all. For example, refering back to the science fair analogy, most students will become creative and design their own experiments if they are given the opportunity to do so. Most students enjoy being given the freedom and trust to become creative and show off their interests.
Lastly, when students return to school after summer break, they will see a variety of interesting summer projects completed by their classmates. The student-designed projects allow for a large variety of topics to be explored, and will benefit the students intensely. If all students, for example, have the same assignment, they would be less interested in their classmates projects as they would all be generically similar. However, if the students have the opportunity to design and conduct their own research into their favorite topic, then the students can share each others interesting new insights with each other and spread their knowledge. This increases students admiration for learning and will inentify them to study something interesting for their classmates.
In conclusion, allowing students to design their own summer projects allows for their interests to be explored, their creativity to flourish, and their areas of knowledge to expand. Schools tend to fail to recognise that each student is different, and that he or she requires different learning styles in order to be successfull in learning. It is vital that students are given the opportunity to become creative and explore an interest that is dear to them. If this is not prioritized, schools will continue to foster the idea of simply following instructions.
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Introduction, i going to writing a issay about the possitive attitude the first paragrah is going to be about the jod that you always need to has a possitive attitude. In the second paragraph i gooidn to talk about the meaning about life and the possitive attitude. In the third i goint to talk about personal positive attitude.
First, I think that has a positive attitude is always good to your life and help you to give a sense a everything. We always need to has a reason to has positive attitude because without a good attitude you never getting a jod because in a jod you always to has a possitive attitude with the coustumer. Life is beautiful every morning we need to start we a happy face because is another day to thanks that we wake up because not everyone has a bed or a warm house but somenthing the people live in the street has always good and positive atitude than the others.
Second, the meaning of the life is always somenthing that motivate that never give up and we need to know that is depend that we has a good attitude. if we dont has a good or posititve atitude we are going to fail everything. Example one girl want to study in Generic_School and she really want to finish schools but she come with a bad behavior they dont let her come to be a student. In thats why we need to has a possitve attitude to comply the goals we has. I think the meaning for positive attitude is somenthing that we really need no better what because we need to show a people that no better has going though us life we always show up we a possitive attitude.
third, I remenber that my mom always tell me that everything depend in my attitude because the persons around me they always look my attitude. We make friends whit the attitude why? the reason we my friends with the attitude because the attitude make us different in many differents ways. Us attitude is everything. some people does not about attitude because they never learn what is attitude means. I learn about positive attitude because my mother show me how has a possitive attitude. everybody need to has a possitve attitude o has a happy life with big goals. Something in life we always know some people that they dont know about attitude but we need to be nice we them.
Conclusion the topic was about positive attitude that we all need to has a possitive attitude and their life to demostrate the we are discipline.
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I do agree with what Ralph Emerson wrote. Being myself in a world that is being nonstop trying to make you something else that is not you, is a very good accomplishment you've overcome. There is always challenges in life where you would have to be yourself. If you can't be yourself then you should ask for advice from your family on how you can be yourself. If you aren't yourself and you've become different from yourself and its not always good. It's like letting the world win by changing you. You should always be yourself no matter what you come across, listen to you and your family, and don't lose to the world by not being yourself.
In life no matter what you come across, you should always be yourself. Don't let anyone force you to be someone else because you might not even like who you've become. People who aren't themselves usually are going through some serious stuff or just want attention. Being yourself is really hard when there are hard challenges you have come across that tries to make you different from yourself. Being yourself is the best accomplishment you can earn when in a world that is trying to make you something else.
You should always listen to yourself and your family. Getting advice from your family is the best because they've been alive longer than you and have more knowledge in how they've became there self and not anything else. Listening to yourself is good because you're doing what you want to do, what your mind is telling you. If you become something else and your mind was telling you not to, then you should re-evaluate your thoughts and be yourself. Family are related to you, they have similar mindset as you, and they should understand you more than anyone else in this world.
At the end of the day, you know who you are; if you aren't yourself its like letting the world win by changing you and losing because you aren't yourself. You're showing us you aren't capable of the world, you can't handle the world because you're not thinking about your decisions and letting the world change you. You know what you can do and can't do. If you know you can change then go for it and change. Changing can be hard but you should take it slow, think about what you want to change. It's a great feeling knowing you've changed because you know you have achieved your goal.
Ralph Emerson won against the world trying to change him because he realized people change and aren't themselves anymore and spoke out. Don't let anything try to change you, you do you. Listen to people that are close to you and you trust. Aim for your goals and take your time, don't be anyone else. Therefor win, not lose and be you.
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There is some schools that let the students use their cell phones to do classwork or any other educational purposes, and that follows some advantages and disadvantages. Some of the advantages are, you will be able to finish your work in class and not having work left to do for homework. This was very helpful for me, because I had the chance to do my classwork or my homework using my cell phone or the other devices to finish as much as I can of work before I get home. Some of the disadvantages will be, after the students finish using their cell phones to do the classwork, they will keep using it for things other than the classwork, like checking social media, or texting,
or watching youtube, that what I saw in my classroom, I saw students were watching youtube videos or texting, or some other things that they shouldn't be doing it and wasting their time on it. People sometimes don't realize or think about how are they wasting their time by using the cell phone. Teachers should be stricts about having and using a cell phone in classroom. Students get in trouble because of the cell phone, they don't think before they use the phone, they do what they want without thinkng about the risk that they might get into. Use your cell phone, but you got to use it wisley, so you won't get in trouble and wasting time.
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Student who live far or have a hard time learning will not help them succeed with there classes Teachers are feeling worried about there Student and they try everything to help. So the Teacher report to the Principal and notice the score are very low. They have to find a way to make there student successful, so they had a meeting and suggest that Student should do there assignment at home they called Home School.
Home school is a program to allow Student to do there homework, quizzes, assignments, and tests. This program help the Student to become successful, Student give there thought about home school and they say is more easy then School. What good about home School that you can stay at Home, eat your lunch watch T.V, and you will still have time to do your assignment on time.
But some other Student didn't want to be home school because they feel them self bored in home. They don't get to make friends, they need help with their assignments, They won't get the information they need. Student often get Home School because they probably don't have schools in there location but Parents want the best for there kids to have a good education so they gotta do whatever it takes to have there kids to become successful in the future.
If I was in the position or suggestion on the issue I would let the Student know to should take regular school. Because you will have better chances to succeed better then home school you will still have your friend in fact they can even help you with your assignments, even better chances to get to college with Teacher help you will know more information to be ready in the future. Student still suggest to be in Home School Because is still a good program to in to help be successful but not in the future People should take School more seriously if they want the better chance.
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Well I want to start saying that the first impressions about people can change but if the impressions change is because something happen. I'm saying it because of some of my experiences with other people that I met and change my impressions about them. Sometimes people don't change,instead of saying that people change your impressions about them maybe you need to know your self first and see what is happening also you need to known why that person change your impressions because maybe something sad or bad is happening on their life and you don't know it.
So let me tell you an experience that happen to me a few moths ago so I met this girl and she was very nice with me and I start thinking that she was that nice with everyone and no I was wrong she only was that nice with me so I decide to date her so I tell her if she want go to see a movie next weekend and she tell me, yes! and I say great so like 3 days before going to see the movie she start acting weird and I ask her if she was OK? and she tell me yes,so the next day I start talking with her and she tell me what was happening and she tell me that her mother was sick and she was sad,so she tell me everything that was happening and I understand why she was acting weird.
In conclusion my impressions about her it was starting to change but I decide to talk with her to see what was happening, before that I start saying that she change and my impressions about her change. is bad to change the impressions about a person without knowing what is happening in their life,because you don't know if that person is waiting for you to ask them what is happening. So I think you should ask that person what is happening and then you decide what are you going to do. These are some of the many reason why I disagree with the statement.
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As I'm part of Generic_City community, the majority of students have been changing the opinions about the transformation of our cafeteria foods that will occur. Recently the cafeteria have decided to become a new healthier school lunch menu by eliminating some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods and providing a completely new meats. This change is a good idea, I'am certain this action was taken to awareness as students to eat healthier also to build a efficient body .
Eating healthier will make people aware of the fact that they must change their meats and life routine, Also it encourages them to practice sports as the athletes students and at some point they will prefer so much to take care of their health by dieting, being familiar with the vegetables, fruits, and milk. And going to the gym constantly on purpose to build a beautiful body.
In addition, Eating unhealthier causes the disperses and the isolation when we became adults. Furthermore, this strategic will reduce the percentage of getting cancers and dangerous diseases in the future due to lack of knowledge of nutrition. Being fat makes our life more difficult imperfection, and tiny. It is so necessary to be flexible and active in our life. the spastics says that many people die young cause of heart attack that occurred from the unhealthy food such as the poison ingredients.
My primary reason that i support this action is the important of eating healthy. it increases our intelligence the students will notice their progress in school by paying more attention in the classroom. Also, it benefices our beauty of body by making the person looks much better and attractive. and it makes us feel so much powerful in our life.
In conclusion, Many students are affirmative with this action, whereas there are many students criticize it too.
i'am going to support highly this idea by making them aware of its importance.
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in order for students to have a good experience at the school, we would like to partner up with your company so students can have just have that. because many schools doesnt allow that offer to students but here at Generic_School we would like to take learning differently and fun. so we would like to have in total of one-thousands of Hershey chocolate milk because it seems that students like it so much to the point where students even made a paper bringing back chocolate milk. so we would like to partner up and get Hershey milk for students here. so the students can be happy and think that this school is a wonderful place for others and Hershey milk seems to make all the students happy and if you have any other products we will like to try them!. in order to see whats the healthiest and tastiest for our students and we would like them in a small container in order to be clean and organized and good for nature and make the milk low fat as well for those other students so they can have a try them self.
- the manager
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students who take an online classes do not have much benefits because, they feel lazy to study on their own, sometimes do not their assignments and also do not have people they will be compete with. They also do not have much confident to speak with lots of people or give a speech in front of many people, which makes someone who attends an everyday class with a lot of people to be experienced than a person who takes an online class. people with much experience in a lot of things do not always have fake people in their lives.
People always think that taking an online class is very good, which is totally wrong. When taking online classes you do not get to know the people who are performing much better than you in class, but when you go to an everyday class in a school, you know the people who are better than you in different subjects. When you take an online class you do not get people who will help you solve your problems in much courses; for example, when you take an online class and you fail in a subject you would not know those who performed good in that subject, that means that you will not know how to study hard to perform good next time. Online students always find it difficult to study because, they do not see their mates in school learning which will also encourage them to that same thing. This means that taking an online classes will not be advisable for students.
Also when taking an online class, you do not get to interact with different kind of people through out the world. People who take an online class do not always have the confident to speak in public and do not always have lot of friends. Having friends is one of the important things in our life. When you have friends you share each others problems and solve it together. This means that when you take an online class you do not always have enough friends to speak to or to share your problems with. For instance,when you are given the opportunity to give a speech in front of a lot of people, you begin to shiver or start stammering because you are not use to speaking in public. but when a person who attends classes which involves a lot of individuals, they always have the confident not to only speak in front of their mates but to also speak to those who are much older than them without any fears.
Moreover, people who always involve themselves in a video conference do not always know the people their dealing with in their business or do not always have much idea about their business meeting. When one is present at work place all the time, he or she runs the business smoothly without any misunderstanding with anybody. Again when having a business with someone on a video conference, you do not know if the person you are dealing with is a fraud a fraud or not. So people who do an online businesses always end up putting themselves into trouble. When one is always present at their business places, they always know the people who are hard working and can make the business go much further and those who are lazy. When you are always at your work place,you make your members to respect and adopt your policies.
People who take online classes do not understand much better because, the teacher is not always around them when they need help with the topic that they not understand. But hen you are in an everyday school classes, when a teacher always teach and you do not understand you always know where to locate him to ask for help. Even when the teacher is not around, you can find different teachers who also teaches that subject and they will always find a solution to your problem. So students who attend an everyday classes perform much better than those who take an online classes.
All the above mentioned, which includes, it makes them interact with different people, find a lot of friends, get to know good people in a business, ask teachers for help when they have a problem really shows that taking an online class or a video conference is not really beneficial for an individual. Once all these measures are taken into consideration, people will see that going to an everyday class or making yourself present at a business meeting is more important to a person.
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It's better to have an elective class because it simple, forgiving and doesnt take skills doesn't take time in the schedule and more Students will likely to pass the classes and both elective and art have the same principle with the same accomplishment. The difference about the two is art classes and electives how they would set a skills some sudents have good skills in drawing or writing it will take student time on school work than outside job that they working on; Art classes are hands on class is for students who wants advanced skills in writing or any type of work or job related to technology or language skills, good scholarship and art classes not for students who procastinate than doing their work. As My i would prefer elective classes because it doesnt get my school work on my path and I have to complete it. elective class helps students who doesnt have time to do their work also benfit any students to have jobs outside of schools. Some students in elective class can have the same credits for graduation same as the art class but more students would rather have elective beacue ii is much more relax than getting alot of class work in front;
As a student i would rather have an elective class ,
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I agree with the principal because some school work may include working together as a team and if they do an activity like sports,they can learn now things like find different ways to score or if they are losing they find ways to comeback. And i think its a good idea for students to participate in a extracurricular activity because they can spend time with friends or you can join a club that can help you with your homework and if you want to play a sport,you can sigh up for a activity that doesnt need to tryout for that sport And if you want to get some college credits then you can sigh up for an activity that can help you get some college credit a good way to get some,there is multiple ways to get some college credits like a good one is learning a language that is a good way to some college credit. you have nothing to do after school you can join an activity that can keep you busy. And this is why i agree with the principal because it can help us in the further on in life.
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People who vale self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas. Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? people should take the decisions from guidance and authorities.
First, In my opinion, people should follow the guidance and authorities about life's matters. The guidance people have more experience than the other people who make their own decisions. people can learn more new things from the other people about life.
Second, Some people like to make their own decisions and some poeple like to share their decisions with other people. But they have to tell their own story to the guidance, so they can get more experience and they learn more new information.
Third, the people who make their own decisions thinks the life its esay for them. No, not esay. They have to meet the people who has great level of decisions
.In concluion, people have to learn and study more information about decisions, and they have meet people who have good experience about life.
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Imagine having nothing but sweet time on the palm for your hands. Wouldn't things be easier to do? Imagine the things you can get done with the right equipment. Technology allows such great effects in our lives.
Everything is easier to get, games, books, news, and even shopping would be easier for everyone. Say your teacher wants students to read a certain book but there isn't any left in class. What would you do?. Technology will allow students to download the book and still be on task with students. Some teaches don't allow you to take the book home but with any device you can simply download the book and still be caught up with the chapter. You wouldn't be behind.
Therefore, individuals like being updated whether it's about schools or any world news. Technology allows parent to see what's happening around them and even around the world. They don't like to miss the days news or any news. If they did, they can type the date and see what's happening. You wouldn't miss a thing! alerts will pop up on your device to inform you. Therefore, everyone stays connected to the world in any device. Technology, also allows you to stay connected with other, such as your parents and friends. Imagine having something really important to share with your friends but you don't know when you'll see them, they're just a text away. Let's say you stayed after school but forgot to tell your parents, just call them and tell them to pick you up a certain time. Information will be much easier to receive.
However, some parents say technology is a waste of time but once they try it they'll get many things done. The more we use technology, the more we realize it should have been something back then and how easy things would've been. Technology is for everyone to use not only young adults. It can even be used to keep babies quiet and calm. Some find multitasking hard, but with simple devices, we can do many things at once.
Getting things done makes people feel relieved,for getting things out of the way on to the next. It's like an endless cycle but with the technology we have now, we have much power in just our hands. It may be little power but at least we got things done in an easy matter. We may not see it now, but technology is a very positive effect on individuals.
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Do you think Students should know what career they want by the time they"re in high school? I don't think so because students will feel pressured and probably won't know what they want to do until after of high school. But some argue that students should know what to do while in high school. In my opinion, students should not feel rushed on their career because students would feel pressured and students probably won't know what to do until after they get out of high school. although, some would argue that students would be well prepared to study that job during high school.
My first example is that students should take their time. If students take their time and still think about it, they can have different options. Instead of pressuring them they should let them learn new things in school because they can check out a lot of different jobs they can be interested in and take it after school . Another thing is that students can focus more on their school work, education, and focus on graduating. Some students cant focus on careers during high school because they need to figure out what classes they have to take and pass in order to graduate from high school, and then focus on a career. So I think students should take their time on their own pace and figure it out little by little.
My second example is that students wont figure it out until after high school and if needed, take some time of from school . Students if they choose a career after school they can focus on that specific job and not worry about anything else besides their interest. they can focus more on their career that they chose because they dont focus on anything else school related, and give their full on attentions to their job. One other thing is that students after high school will feel less stressed and more relaxed. they can take however much time off on thinking what job to get.
Whenever they are ready to get a job they go to collage and study for it. I think students should feel stress free.
Some would argue that students should know what to do career they want to do during high school. For example students will know what to study for, before they get that job. Also, they can be well prepared and learn a lot of new things for the job. Sure students can be well prepared and learn about the job way before. however, students shouldnt have a lot of stress on them with school and their future career at the same time. Also, students grades will probably dramaticly go down because they try to focus on both things.
In conclusion, I think that students should not feel rushed. They will feel pressured and wont know until maybe after school. But some people think that they should know while in high school because they will be prepared confident for the job. I dont think that they should stress themselves a lot. so that they can focus on their education and focus on graduating and make their family proud. So teachers, and counselors don't try to blow they're heads up.
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Should people be able to make their own decisions or should people find some help?
As we know, sometimes we just dont take bad decisions at work, we also take bad decisions in our personal life, and it is not just because you felt it was right. Every day for some reason your feelings are involve so that makes that your ideology of your decisions change, and lets talk about meet someone or get a new job opportunity, every little detail change the way that you think, feel, talk, and yes the way you make decisions and that is okay and normal.
Make our own decisions is one of the things that characterize us as a humans, our necessity to express what we feel, what we wish, is the thing that have show us what are we capable of make, do, learn, built, invent, all the things that you can imagine in here are because humanity express their thoughts and make their own decisions.
Otherwise you are autonomous and you do not need that someone tells you what to do all the time, but do not take my point wrong, I am not saying you can do whatever you want because sometimes you would need some help and I can give you some examples where and how sometimes you would need help and your decisions and choices can not be just yours.
It can be in a court, your job, school or when you are not an adult, as you can see that there are some places, situations and times you can not decide for you own.
I believe we can make our owns decisions because I know if we do everything according to the rules that are around us, we can really choose our life and take responsibilities for that.
In fact, you are free to take your own decisions and be responsible for them(when you choose wrong) because it does not mater if you take a wrong decision, it matter that if you have the opportunity to try and figure what you want, it is okay to be wrong sometimes and also is wonderful to be right, the important thing is that you can choose because deserve to have the right to build your life, be wrong, learn and be free.
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some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. i think student would benefit form being able to attend classesfrom home. you are authorized take the electronic version of this you will taking this promptsome student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from homr by wat of online pr video conferencing. some student offer distance learning as an option.
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Will has you can see getting advice from other's is not a bad idea. I think getting advice from others has a great point of view and a bad point of view by the way someone can look at. When you are trying to get advice from someone remember to ask more then one person for advice. One of my reasons is that how ever is trying to get advice should get it form multiple people not just from one person. My other reason is that getting advice form people can have a good or bad point of view but it also can depends on how you take the advice. My last reason is asking people for advice can hurt it's not always going to make you happy.
My first statement is that how ever is trying to get advice should get it form multiple people not just from one person. Most of the people in this world have different point of view for each person on the way they see them or maybe by the way they you act and look. Asking only one people is not a good idea because someone might just be looking at you how you look and how you dress. They might just say bad things to you because they thing your not worth nothing and they are the only one's that actually are worth something in this world. People in this time don't gave good advice to people because all they want to do is make people look bad in front of others.
My second statement is that getting advice form people can have a good or bad point of view but it also can depends on how you take the advice. Will in my point of view asking people for advice is not a great idea because some people might just till you lies when you are asking for advice. Sometimes people just tell you lies because they know that you need help but all they are going to do is make you look bad. They are some people that all they want you is to suffer just because they are having problems at home. Getting advice form one person is not a good idea because you might not know if they hate you or that you might have done something that hurt them and you didn't know and you asked them for advice they would gave you bad advice just for what you did to them.
My last statement is that asking people that you thing that will tell you the truth no matter if it hurts or not is not a bad idea. They are some people that would tell you the truth even if it's going to hurt a lot but the only thing they want for you is too be happy. Asking people older then you is a great idea like your family because maybe they have been though a lot maybe they might even hate you or something else but they would never lie to you because you are there children they care about you. Getting advice is not bad it also can depend on the way you decide to take it if you take it as a good or bad way because most of the people that are always there in your bad a good moment always want the best thing for you because they love you.
In conclusion, asking for advice sometimes and talking to others more advice can help you make good choice but at the same times bad choice it all depend on you if you want to be a great or bad person. Everyone has there point of view to take the advice that someone gives you in a good or bad way. Mostly the people that love you are going to tell you the truth even though if it hurt because they know that later or after you are going to find out the truth.
In this world you should take most of the advice that other people gave you because they have already been thought a lot but they don't want you to through the same thing because they actually want you to be someone if life even if they couldn't be someone in life. The advice that someone gives you is not bad it to help you see how hard they work because they didn't take the advice that they gave you are they didn't get the chance like you have so if someone gives you a great advice you should be grateful.
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Philosopher Albert Schweitzer once said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." meaning setting a good example by your own behavior to influence other people. Some say setting a good example is the best way for one to influence others, on the other hand, there are better ways to influence others. The best ways to influence other is to show motivation and to be positive in what is being accomplished.
Motivation is a major aspect to those trying to reach or accomplish a certain goal. For example, a person is trying to lose weight and be in better shape to do or a sport in school, but that person isn't feeling motivated to do anything, with even a little motivation by saying "it's going to be tough at the start, but once you feel like giving up ask yourself why you started" can get that person moving and determined to reach the goal that's being aimed for. Not only is Motivation a huge impact in influencing other, Being positive is a major key to get others moving.
Being positive can affect others in a way to get them more influenced. For example, a person is trying to write a song but just can't seem to figure out what or how to write it, stress and anger is taking over but showing the positive can allow that person to relax and have a clear mind on knowing what to write about. Being positive can easily affect those that are around and by saying, thinking, and listening to positive things is can influence so many others.
There are millions of other ways to influence people, and it most certainly is the best way to do so. Motivation and being positive can indeed help those who need the influence, even when they can't reach their goal or can't be able to write a certain song, these following reasons have showed how it can help and many more can be done to influence others.
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It's good to change the school cafeteria food and make it healthier, because most of the students needs to eat healthy to live a longer life, students will preform better in the school activities and students will get in a better shape.
First, having a healthier school lunch in the school cafeteria will give students a healthy long life. They won't have any blood pressure problems. There body will be able to preform better as there brain. For example, if a student eats vegetable he/she will have much more clear blood than a student who eats meat.
Next, foods that are healthier will have a huge impact on students performance. If a student keeps eating unhealthy food they will constantly be tired and will not be able to perform as well as possible, but healthier food helps the students to perform better and get better grades.
Next, the healthier food means a healthier body which leads to looking good and keeps you away from going to doctor as often as a person who eats unhealthy food. Getting in shape doesn't mean working out, you must eat healthy to be in a good shape. Also, Students will not be sick as often which means that they will not need to visit doctors more often.
In conclusion, having healthier food in the school cafeteria is a great idea. Students will be able to perform better, they will live a longer and healthier life and students will be in a good shape so they will not have to visit doctors and pay a lots of money for there body which they can control.
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What are some good attitudes you can show it to your friends. I saw people have good attitudes in their way like one of my friend. If people have good attitudes that doesn't mean they don't have attitudes. Having good attitudes mean they have attitudes in a good way. My friend showed attitudes to different people in a different way. You can tell when people have bad attitudes or good attitudes. The good attitudes helps you to success in your life even when you have difficult time. The benefits of have good attitudes is you can success in your life, be happy, and have friends.
You can only success in your life by getting support from your family and your friends. Most of the people show their attitudes at school like one of my friend does. She never showed bad attitudes with her teacher or other adults but she does show attitudes with her friends but not bad way. She showed bad attitudes some time and good attitudes sometime. She think its fun because we are all same. She don't feel bad when she show us attitudes. She knows we are not going to feel bad for that. We all will help her out when she needed.
Like I said you can success in your life by getting support from you friends. If she have fake friends she knows they never will help her when she needed.
Be happy, I mean that by getting good grades at school. If you get good grades that mean everyone happy even your teacher. My friend, she always try to get our help before she ask her teacher. Is not that she is bad at school. Everyone get confused at something. I saw lots of difficult time at her life and we all tried to help. If she wasn't being kind to us no one would of friend with her. Also one time a teacher tried to help her to get good grades at class. She had C+ at class she needed only some point to get B- so that she can get A B honor roll. She request her teacher if she can help her out with it ,and her teacher gave extra point on test she took. Her teacher told her 'I only did that because you are a kind person.' 'I will love to help someone like you.'
Its not easy to make friends. Some people like to have friends who is kind to them, have good attitudes, have some similarities between each other. Some people make friends who has bad attitudes like them. They think talking with a nice person is embarrassing. Some people like having a good friends who never will leave them behind. If you make a friend who have bad attitudes all the time that means she/he is your fake friends. Also, a kind person can be also a fake friend. For example, when I moved into a new school I had friend. She always helped me. She was really polite to me. She helped me to find my classes, she helped me make new friends because I was a shy person. After some days letter there was a another girl moved in there. After that girl moved int here she never talked me. I tried to go talk to her but she didn't really care. Sometime when I saw her in the hall I said "hi" and she also said it back. After while she never even look at me. Its like she don't even know who I am. So yeah, its hard to find friend who really care about you.
In conclusions, some good attitudes you show it to your friends is be with them when they need you the most, be polite to them. Having good attitudes can help people future a lot. You have to explore that good attitudes. Some people don't even know what is good attitudes mean. They think attitudes is attitudes, they think having attitudes mean being really mean to people. But there is so many way to show attitudes, good way and bad way. Good attitudes helps people to success in their life. In additional, to success in life you also need your family and friends help.
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Technology is a super useful and daily component we use in our daily lives,however in my opinion technology is being misused and taken advantage of by society. For example your social life becomes different, it get's addicting, or changes you as a person, it shows that people change overall. Those are some of the many reasons why people take advantage of technology.
Technology can change your social life, for example you stop communicating with friends and your social skills start to grow weak,such as confidence and being specific while talking. Secondly technology can be an addiction or something people depend on a lot. For example spending hours on hours on your phone or a computer could be consider addiction. While taking tests or quizzes you can't depend on technology to help you and that shows that you depend on the internet. At last technology changes you as a person. Another words whatever you see on the internet it becomes real to you which means, now you're living in a fantasy instead of reality. It also makes you think differently instead of using your brain and you also depend on the internet way much more.
Technology can be useful and can save our life sometimes. One out of the two reason why technology is useful is the time your saving. For example if you have to get work sent to your boss, the internet comes in handy, or if you have a project due at school you can also use the internet to turn it in on time. Technology will forever be useful for educational purposes. For example if you need any type of information you can find it on the internet. There's a lot of things you could learn on the internet also. Technology can be a very inconsistent feature for people, therefore it can benefit people and change someone's life in a negative way. Use technology wisely because it brings a lot of negatives with it.
There's many ways to solve the problems that come with the usage of technology. Your limitations to the usage of technology could be lowered so the addiction doesn't get out of hand. The things you use technology for should be only things that benefit you, therefore it doesn't become your social life. Always try to be yourself and don't let things on the internet change you because technology is will forever be here and will always change, therefore you don't want to adapt to it for the rest of your life.
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Dear sir:
It is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing.'' But i think we always need i break during our activity and work, when we work alot we can't make all dreams true, but remember that we something have a family and this can't cause family problem, if you are not expent time with them.
During work time all the employee has to have break . because the help everybody, to have a good mental work in their job. no break during work time, can't cause bad discuss, bad service bad comunication with all constumers, family problems.
Break can't help the empoyee to be good at work, and the way we can't have a good comunication with everybody and also with all constomers.
And also if you have family, you can't prevent problems problems with them too
. Sometimes some people work alot but they forget that they has a family in home waiting for them, that's why alot of people divorse, because they don't have a good cominication.
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some school offer distance learning as an option from students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. and my opinion the student would benefit from being able to attend classes from home; the student have more freedom of concentrate in the home, student have problem for go to the school or the is student is sick of a illness and have more responsibility in the school or classes, home and job.
First, the student have more freedom of concentrate in the home that school because student not have noisy peoples, student work more quickly and have interests in the class. The corporation a student of regular school and home student, in the regular school have lass time in the class and home have more time and focus in the class.
Second, some student cannot go to the school for problem in the health or is sick of a illness. Today al the peoples can student and learn for class online or video conferencing, student with problem can learn and study like other student from regular school.
Finally, other people have responsibility in the class like the job because some not have time for go to the school and work all the day and only have time after work in the night. The person can study all the night for online or video conferencing. The principal parts of the online is you can study any day or time.
in conclusion the student can take class for online or video conferencing in the home because today the technology have a good benefit in the peoples. student can study and learn in the home in any moment or day, have more concentration, focus, responsibility and the person have problem of health can study and learn of your home.
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I don't think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because when students coming home, they need to do the homework first. Maybe that's day some people have a lot of homework so they couldn't attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. If they could open some video of online then I think some students can''t watching whole video. Because when I finish my homework, I feeling so tired and I just want go to my bedroom or play game, message, Facebook, ... I guess that's habit all students because almost students doesn't wanna be work too much and parent will be for son or daughter spend time for favorite like soccer, bamboo, ukulele, ... If the students might relaxing then I think they will learning better and faster.
Some parent want my son or daughter go to the bedroom early. Because parent can control them easy, example like some students will say I still do home work on the Laptop, but they playing game with friends. The best way is for students go to sleep early. If your might for students sleep early, It really good for eyes and healthy because one young people can sleeping enough eight our every night, you can feel comfortable for star learning better new day. And if you don't sleeping enough, you can't learning anything at school because you always sleeping in classes and teachers always say ''wake up, wake up''. It not good for you and teachers. And when you go home, time for sleep but you don't feel sleep because you sleeping in classes too much. That's why you don't feel want to sleep, and today to tomorrow to whole life, you still don't want to sleep early. Maybe that will be become the cycle in your bad life, If you don't wanna change your style.
I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home is not good. Because when parents coming home, they need talking, do something or have a dinner with family. It's will be better you do a lot homework. If you have dinner every night, you will have a lot of conversation with your wife or daughter, Since you will be know what your family want and your sentiment with family will be better and better.
When students learning online or video at home, maybe they don't understand what video say and if they have a question, what teachers they will ask ? And if everybody have a question to asked teachers, the teachers can't responded the question too much for students. If students waiting for tomorrow go to school, maybe students will be forgot the question they want ask right now.
I think students need learning at school better learning at home. Because one people one idea, that's mean have a lot of answers your guess and you will be know the best the answers from teacher. It'll be helping you how to do work team. Work team so important with students because in your future, labor need you know how to work together. If you know how to work, you will be become the manager or boss. If I work with teachers, maybe I will better for my way.
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Does the people that have mastered something can grow, even if they do not try nothing else? Some people believe they are very okay only with what they have mastered. People knows they could master one profession, but they also know they wont grow in nothing else if they do not try nothing else. If someone decides to only master in one thing that is okay, but that person's knowledge will only increase on what he master, nothing else. People cannot grow if their mindset is stuck with what they mastered and they wont increase in knowledge.
People cannot grow more if they stick only with what they mastered. For example, Ms. Generic_Name, a really good looking woman, had a store for plants and she also teaches about plants. One day Ms. Generic_Name had to let some kids know that the plants do not grow by itself, people make them grow. She called the kids to the back of the store to show them apple's seed. Ms. Generic_Name told the kids that she used to take care of them but she stopped, because she thought that once the plants grow enough, she would not have to deal with that again. She saw the plant standing and she thought her work was done. She did not take care of her plants no more because she thought they were okay in that position, but she did not know that the plants were not gonna grow more. That is exactly what happen with people that mastered something and they just stick with that, they did not try nothing else and now they are just steady they can't grow no more. Thus, if people believe they are okay with what they mastered and they don't try nothing else, they wont grow no more.
Knowledge is one of the things that mostly deals with growth. For example, Ms. Generic_Name had the knowledge of every plant. At first Ms. Generic_Name did not know that she had to take care of them, at least until they could be strong enough. Now that she have years on plants she knows a lot. She did not want to stick with what she knew and now she is grown in knowledge. She is in college studying more about different types of plants from other countries. Thank to her enthusiasm for plants, Estency Generic_Name is now one of the biggest specialist on plants in the world. Nobody should be comfortable with knowing just what they want to know, people should start seeking more for knowledge based on what they want, just as Ms. Generic_Name did.
Some people may say that people could grow if they have mastered only once, because they only need whatever they have passion for, or whatever they want to do. For example,Generic_Name went to college with the dream of being a constructor and he graduated from college, now he is a constructor but not how he wanted to. Generic_Name could have being an architect but he decided to be less; however, people should seek for knowledge and not only stick with one master. People could get master at something but after that people have to be open to learn knew things every day.
In conclusion, people will never grow if they do not try out. A person's knowledge increase with the amount of time and interest. Knowledge is one of the things that most deals with growth. People could just get their master, but is better to always be open to learn more,
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In the future what would you like to accomplish in school. Well I would like to know how to play the clarinet and learn how to play it for many reasons.
First, the good thing about about the clarinets is that I like when someone plays the clarinet and it sounds smooth it gives me the chills. Also when they hit a high note on it it gives me chills too. When playing high notes on it it looks easy.
Although when playing the clarinet sometimes when I go to a concert there is always at least one person that squeaks when playing it. I tried to play on it once and its hard to play when I try to play it fast. But the worst part when playing the clarinet is chipping the reed, once when you chip it you won't be able to play as good on it.
The only reason I want to learn how to play the clarinet is because I like the way it sounds, it sounds to calming and soothing. In order for me to accomplish to play calming and soothing is to practice at least 1 hour everyday . Also my last reason to play the clarinet is because i kind of think that it looks easy to play but I guess that it is a hard instrument to play. These are my reason on why i would want to accomplish and play on the clarinet.
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Would you ever want to go Skydiving? I think Skydiving would be fun because you can see everything from up high and you can face your fears. If you are afraid of highs you can go and Skydive with your friends or one of your family members. When your are up in the sky you get to see trees,grass and other stuff from far away. I think it would be fun because you get to fly in the sky. If you Skydive you can see animals that you never saw in your entire life. You can also maybe see weird stuff that you never saw. You can see a dog,cat or small houses and tiny people. If you Skydive i think you would fine a lot of different kind of things in the air. If you were to scared to go on a roller coaster. You can go on a roller coaster now because you jumped off an airplane. And If you were to scared to go airplane because it was to high. Now you can go on a airplane and travel because you wouldn't be scared to be that high and where you jumped from the airplane. The airplane is going to be the same hight. I think you won't have fears of heights anymore and you would like to travel a lot. You can go to places that you can't go with a car. Like bora bora or the other tropical places. Skydiving can be a lot of fun but it can also be very dangerous. If you don't know any thing like how to turn on the air bag for you to float you could fall when you land. If you don't know how to land you could hurt yourself or land somewhere else. If you don't feel safe i think you should go to the indoor one first. After all, Skydiving can make you see weird stuff that you never seen before and you can face your fears by going on an airplane or riding on a roller coaster. I think one day you should go skydiving and see every thing that you can see. If you are scared of highs like mountains or going on high stuff. I think it is going to help you but if you think you are not going to know what to do for the air bag. I think you should go to the indoor one first. If you want to go to the outside one someone is going to be on top of you and they are going to be doing the air bag and the landing. You are just going to be flying with them and you don't have to worry about anything you can just see the view and see if you see anything interesting that you never seen before.
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This technology I dont thing so can effect people's because day of day the tencgnology is more and more i thing that can be helps you to do things like beginner your life. The technology sometime is good for contact with others person. That can help you in many things, you can play game and spiaking with others. That is positive because you can do whatever you want if you need fot do you work, you can bay if you don't want to go to the store, but that you can aid the people with need to know a bout technology, also in this world you need to know abaut technology, and some part of work you need to apply for work and you need to do for internet that's why sometime is good to know who yo make doing, for example you now can used the map to know the location, and a long time ago you can't to do that.
The reasan why is good is because you can do whatever you want to do if i want to do somenting but i dont know nothing a bout technology that's problem, because you dont know what to do so you need to practice who you can used the technology, fot work you need to know who you can used the computer, or you want to have a Iphone you need to know who you used some meny things you need. The most peolpe always aks you advice, and you need to explain, and you need to know for want you used the technology, do for something good not for bad things because somrtime you know what you doing and dont say yes a everything .
A thing some time is bad because the children know to much technology and that affect his life in many things now they can do overything his want because they know to much and they want to have they want, they need work mere in different things , you can build things about rechnology meke sometime your future, but always need to consult with people's who know, because if you know you cant contaminate your self you always need to convice your self, that's was very good what your doing.
listen what your self always tell you if is good or bad ner forget that.
With this technology now you can be a lot tings,but you need to have a limitation and what are you make duing because now the human only do things bad , they dont listen what they duing , they need to undertand they dont need to do bad things or negatives , they need to take a position en think what meken, and this time you now can kwon where the person are bacause the technology helps to much the you can do wherever you want only used the telephone and the compurer and you can do everything, you can play now and speak with your fiends in the game, yu can do online everithing now for the banck if you need to diposite check you can do online because the technology is to much.
that's why is important, .
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In my opinion disagree. Because some people said that is hard, take a lot of time. For example you gotta know how works all the processing, and people do not understand, so some time is very confuse. So in my opinion that first impressions, are very wrong because no everyone wants to be like different.
Secondly is very impossible to change because people do not have time to take care about that stuff. Also because they work they have boobies, shores, take care of their family so is very difficult to be part of that. But also people said that first impression is bad because is impossible to make right.
In addition, some people said that take a while to get used it because you need to be sure, to your goal come true. Also you have to work very hard, and if you do not have enough, time you not are able to get it so that mean, you have to work hard. Example like people said that impressions, are almost impossible to change well, for some reason it should be easy or hard we don't know.
In conclusion, I disagree because impressions, is not easy to take care too, many work in little of period of time so it will take me for ever to do it correct. But also people, said that is very hard and is total true so impressions are very hard to take care.
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I agree because this can help some student, for example some student have diffulty for to learning, maybe more activity can help the student, i gonna go give to you my example.
im brazilian and i see many videos for to learing more my ingles and this help me so much, i have class in the school but i study in my house, i know many people that learning ingles in the home.
i have a friend from brazil him never go to the school in the america and him work to translator and him to receive 1.000 dolares for week, him to learning ingles study in home, whating videos and practice study the ingles online have people can to learning history,math science and other online, i make duoling, this is a game online and i learning some words to play online in my house.
Some people can not like this idea because some people this not help they , maybe they student no leaening online or whating the videos .
i think this can help they because we need to try new things for make different this in the school, maybe make cool activity.
my friend its nspire me the want to study in my home because i want being architect but i need to strain.
some people need to try new things, becase if we no try new things we can not know to leave they try, because the life its feat of new experiment.
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I disagree with Thomas Jefferson because you need to be inactive sometimes to lay back and relax. If you're always up amd doing something then you wont really have much rest. You can be active and get stuff done but also kick back sometimes andrecharge your energy.
Im not saying that you shouldnt do you're work but dont forget to do that work you need to get energy. Another reason is if youre sick and cant move around so you dont have to do anything then as well. There are many excuses for you not to do something.
You should do stuff tho like the important things you need done. For instance go to a doctors appointment or get groceriec. Just because you dont have to do something all the time doesnt mean you shouldnt move from being an idle.
You should never be an idle tho. You should always get up and get an excersise or cardio because laying down and not doing anything can also cause sickness in your body that you dont want. Thats what i think of this prompt and those are the reasons i give.
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Studies have shown that one way to improve student achievement is to start an after school homework club. Do you think its a good idea to start an after school homework club? I think its a great idea let me tell you why its a good idea.
First you can get help with your work. the teacher can help you if you dont understand your work. If your having trouble with your work the teachers or students can help you and they will show you how to do it. The teachers will explain how your making mistakes. some students may not have a good home and the may not be able to complete there assignments because of the fact that they dont have supplies to complete there work so the teachers and students can help the student who needs help.
Second many students get low grades due to incomplete homework. In the club the students complete homework then turn it in the next day. students will turn homework in on time everyday. Students can work on classwork, projects, and homework. students can complet homework early so they will not do it on the last day.
Finaly other students can volunteer to help students. Students can get rewards for helping others. students can particpate for class grades. Both students learn from working together. They learn there mistakes and correct each others papers.
In concluson i think starting an after school homework club is a good idea heres why. You can get help with your work and many students will not have low grades due to incomplete homework. Other students can help students who need help with there work. as you can see thats why i think its a good idea to start a homework club.
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Some people say that students are better off attending classes online, mostly because they can feel a sense of comfort and no worries of school tardiness. I say that it's better to not attend distant classes and attend them from the school itself.
Students are better off attending classes from the actual school because students tend to have more concentration while actually attending the class. When attending the class from home, students will be more concentrated on their home atmosphere, or what happens at home. Concentrating onto something usually comes from the atmosphere you are in. Attend your classes are better and more effective when the person is alerted or more attentive to their classes or courses.
Moreover, students will develop social communication when interacting with other students. Social communication is important because not only will you get to know the other person's side of knowledge, but you can get experience from the other person that could benefit or impact your way of making desicions in your life. Students will be more of an introvert if attend classes from home or distant classes. In this way, students will definitely develop working skills when they start having a job as an older person.
However, even if they won't be able to go through or worry about tardiness if taking distant classes, going to school knowing that there is tardiness, will prepare them for the future when running to work and making it on time. Making to school or work on time depends on how the individual is smart enough to manage their own time wisely.
In conclusion, the more preferable method for students is coming to school or the class session wherever it's taking place. In this way, students develop better communication, better concentration and develop time management. Students will become better individuals.
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I agree on Prime Minister Churchilll quote that "success consist of failure,being successful" can be a different of what people might think and solving their problem to overcome any challenges that blocking their ways to being to improve and motivate them selves as a person.
Success is not just a dream is a dedication to be engage in everyday activity also success also a role for humans to think whats ahead and not lookig back to seek old habits.
Failure doesn't mean just to give up dreams and ideas but it gives the choice of pushing it to the limits and overcome any challenges,failure can also help to motivate any hopesand being prepared for any challenge thats around. its like how to motivate others to support and encourage them to help what their need is.
Despite having failure its not a end of the world situation but a test for confidence,skills and improvement or being a leader of some sort of ideas and real life. its like My self taking a test i was more likely to be more nervous but i was really confident that i would pass my class than thinking of failing it. some people want to be successful to persue the happiness and they dont the others to help get on track as their skills improves and its crucial for them to think futher down the road whats their future going to be and some people doesn't want to loose enthusiam its like loosing a video game and gave up easily and just throw the console to the trash and never play again for the rest.
but some people want challenges becase they can think hard and improve and know their weakness as they progress every level and they dont want to get beaten they want to stay on the top.
I agree on Prime Minister Churchilll success consist of failure,being successful" can be a different of what people might think and solving their problem to overcome any challenges. and improve and motivate them selves as a person. Success is not just a dream is a dedication to be engage in everyday activity also success also a role for humans to think whats ahead and not lookig back to seek old habits.
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Many people do not like to be a idle. In many states ,cities, and also country a lots of people like to work because many of them have responsibilities . If we are always doing something , Of course that we deserve more because we work for living , for pay taxes , and bills . People have different jobs , people who were young and get graduated and they went to university has a better jobs , they work in offices ,or like a doctors, nurses,lawyers,and many more. People who did not graduated for any reasons they don't have jobs like that others one . Its not bad to not get graduated many people do not get graduated , or not go to the university because maybe they did not have that money to pay that bills from the university . But anyways they also can get a great jobs .
Example, I have 2 old brothers one is 22 , and the second one is 27 they two have a different jobs , The oldest one he get graduated, and also he went to the university now he's a lawyer , he work 5 days of week , and he always told be that I have to be someone in this country (USA). My brother who is 22 and does not like school , does not like the university , and also do not like to work. So , who deserve more ? Of course that is my oldest bother because he's not a idle men .
Many people who doesn't work , They don't deserve nothing they are just a idle people. In many states , cities , and countries theres people who do not like to work they just do nothing all times . If they work they probability just work for couple of the month . How Tomas Jefferson said " Determine never be a idle "
People may think that persons who do not like to work are not good idea to be like a idle. Also many people may think that they maybe just don't have a huge responsibilities or they just their mothers giving then money for survey. And many people said that's really bad for keeping theirs sons that way .
In my opinion, Every people in the world is different , People we went to the university thats great because that way they can get a great jobs . And also people who did not go to the university, they also can get a greats jobs. and thats good , I think that people who do not work it just because maybe when they were young they parents did not teach them to be responsible. And now that they are adult they do not like to work , And that kind of people is always we they parents living in theirs houses.
In conclusion, Lets put in practice what Tomas Jefferson said " Determine never be a idle " Many people said lets do something with are life . We don't have to be idle .
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I believe that success comes from repeatedly failing but never losing interest on the task you're trying to accomplish. Trying to be successful in a certain task isn't something that can be done over night it requires extreme passion and patience, Certain scientist have been successful over time by failing but always getting back up on their feet and trying again hopefully to do things better. Scientist are driven by their enthusiasm over the life of science and what interesting things you could discover from studying it, their consistency of repeatedly failing and getting back up brought them a long way from nothing which eventually turned into something big for the society over time.
For example Christiano Ronaldo the world famous soccer player, Christiano worked very hard to become who he is now which is a world class famous soccer player. Becoming a pro soccer player isn't something that can be done over a couple weeks you have to work your way from the bottom you have to be extremely good to get into a club with years worth of practicing also comes with a lot of failure by not being able to do certain tricks, certain passes, or shots it's very difficult to perfect all those tricks or certain shots but that didn't stop Ronaldo from being the best. Soccer took multiple months of training and lots of failing and loosing matches for Ronaldo to get recognized after struggling and loosing Ronaldo eventually carried his team to multiple wins with tremendous skills, therefore soccer clubs came out to watch his games and soon he was offered a spot to play pro soccer, He worked his way up to becoming the best soccer player anyone has seen.
Most people in the world think failing is a bad thing and eventually give up after time, because of the lack of passion they have towards their task so tend to give up and move on with another task. The majority of our society are becoming more and more lazy over time which leads them push away all their work away for another time, therefore it's less of a chance for them to do bigger and better things in life like everyone wants. Some rappers, multi millionaires, and professional sports players became high school drop outs who worked at fast food places to get money to get through their day but they never gave up on what they loved the most regardless on how broke they were or how many problems they had they going on in their lives they never gave up on the thing they loved the most, they thought that one day they were gonna make it to the top and have a better life than they were living they never let go of that passion no matter how hard they had failed they always got back up and tried even harder than the last time.
Eventually, all that sweat and hard work they had put into what they were passionate about they got recognized more everyday which made them want to do much more in life, be better person from what they were yesterday. Anyone can be successful if they really put effort into what their passionate about no matter how many times you tend to fail as long as you're enthusiastic enough about your task to keep moving on and doing better.
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A diploma is a trophy we all want to have and be proud of, but unfortionally not all of us deserve it. We are graduating only once in our life, and to be able to graduate we must have an strong character that has confident, vision, and goals in life. The universe, destiny or even life won't share with us the opportunities that provides just for free, we have to move forward and challange our own person to dedicate every moment to taht goal we want to reach.
A graduation it's not a competition neither a race where only us will win because behind and in front of us there are million of other more people looking for what we are sacrifiying for. There are benefits that qualify to graduate before the traditional year and algo graduating at the right time. In three years you could acomplish what you wanted to do and go out and have more time to plan your life and what you want to do, however, completing the four years of high school will allow you to enjoy and experience more opportunities to do extra activities and spend that little time that you will never have. I agree in both options, I think we all choose the best for us, graduating before doesn't mean you are smarted neither that if you graduate in four years you are incapable.
in conclusion, we are not compiting we are reaching the goal we want to be proud of and deserve, we need self confident and to have an open mind to the reality we face day by day, we only have one opportunity in life, we decide how to spend it or how to waste it, we choose our who I really am and going to be, becasue all we do now it's what we are going to see in our future, if we don't prepare don't think your having a diploma to your position, but if you develop your plans and prepare the triumph will be mayor.
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My enjoyable educational activity I chose was soccer because it is a sport you do a lot of running. Soccer can be played all over the world. Long time ago people used to say that all sports were for men only but today men and women play sports thanks to the changing of the laws.
A day before a soccer game, players have to train so hard in order to win. They have to learn new tricks and they have to run a lot. All soccer players must have enough energy to run because it can lead to mistakes and can cause the team to lose. Soccer players need to be concentrating on the ball at all times and they have to make sure where they kick because if they kick too hard, they can hit someone in the stadium. During a game, there has been so many injuries due to running so fast and tripping players and then it causes a huge argument over the injured player. At all times if people want to be a soccer player, they have to play clean.
There are kids that want to grow up to be the best soccer player and for that they have to start early and join a team in a school or in other places that let kids play. Sometimes kids play at their house with siblings or other people in their family and that can be a good practice for a game in your team. Playing soccer is a great sport and it helps people lose weight because of the amount of running.
Some people play soccer for money because they got things to pay, others just play for fun. Some people say that soccer is just for Hispanics, but it isn't true because almost everyone plays soccer no matter the race. In soccer, it is best for your team to have a great coach and that he/she is good at teaching because sometimes its the coach's fault that they lose and he/she starts blaming everyone. Everyone has to try their best in any sport no matter what but its most important to concentrate on the sport and not be thinking about anything else but the sport because you can lose track and make your team lose and your team can be mad at you.
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Having a problem can lead to success if you try your best. "A problem is a chance for you to do your best"- Duke Ellington. Everyone has problems in their lives even if it's a small or big issue, everyone wants easy fix problems but sometimes having them can give people chances to do their best. Being in a big issue where people don't know what do to, they will have to take chances and having to think to get out of the situation.
For example if someone forgets their homework at school some choices are to print the homework at home or at a library. Not knowing what to do on a homework is never good but trying your best, even if it's wrong. Duke Ellington is right because taking chances to do your best is great and you never know if something you made or done could be used in the future. Every job have situations for example builders may not have the materials that are needed, or teachers may not be able to read the handwriting.
People who do parcor have to do their best to not fall off a building and if they are in a situation where they can jump to a different building or thing they might have to take chances and do their best to get to the other side. Anything can be a problem but if you try your best that is all that matters.
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Do you believe that in order to success is going though failure contently? People think that going though failure can help you be successful though out time. Some example could be emotions, not giving up, and a quote "Third time is the charm." These are some of the things that people do in order to succeed though failure.
First, when people can not got something right the first time they can get emotional such as upset, mad, and frustrated and many more. An example of this could be when you are working on a math problem and you did not get the right answer the first time people can get upset. That is why emotions can be a part of failing to get successful.
Moreover, when people can not get something done they tend to just give up and do nothing. People should never give up because not everyone gets it the fist time. One example can be when you are trying to find information about an animal and you can not find anything on it so you just give up and not do the research information and now you are going to get a zero for it which is not good. This is why you should never give up even if it is hard for you
Although, most people have heard this saying "third times the charm." This saying has a meaning to it because it is telling you that you have to keep on trying in order to get it right. Sometimes when you keep on trying it can turn out better then the other times that you tried. One example can be when are drawing something and you do not like it you can try again and do it better then the first time. Keep on trying in till you like it or in till you get it right. This is why this saying is very important to understand.
In conclusion, in order to succeed through failure can always be a good thing and it can help you to become better but most importantly to feel good about yourself and the success that you made.
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The one place that i want to go to in the world is Cailfornia . The one thing that i want to go see in Cailfornia the all of fame of all the famous people put thier moral on the ground . The next thing that i want to go is Generic_City .Generic_City is the best place to take a vaction . The third my place is Magic Mountain ( Six Flags) ,Me and my family love going to six flag because we have more time to spend time with each other. And the finally place that i want to go is Disneyland. Disneyland is the best place to playground with your friends and family go on rides have fun . The next place that i want to go is Generic_City and to Generic_City because they have lot of advenures and that what I love to have an adventures and go places .I really want to go to Generic_City because i want to see the fuller house .and do a lot of things in Generic_City . Now i want to go to Generic_City because the have a lot of thing to eat and to do . Like for exmaple in Generic_City you can eat crabs leg and whole crabs.
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In my opinion I believe that it is better that we accomplish more it will make us more active. Im a firm believer that inactivity does not serve any purpose. This is the reason there is daylight and also nighttime; when its day time you get things done and when its nighttime you can rest or spend time relaxing. I also seen that the more you do the less you are to complain. Now let me explain to you some reasons why you should always accomplish a lot through out the day.
My first thing I would like to start with is that there was a study at "The University of Florida" it showed that a person that does completes lots of tasks usually does better academically. Also you can get stressed if your not doing lots of work suffer health issues being active is important. The university tested 40 students 20 of them would show up to class on time get assignments done and come everyday. They would also be inspired to do better with there studies.
It is also sometimes good to be inactive but that would mostly be during the night time when you have had a long days work you can sit down and just relax.
Being a active person also makes you a more preferable person when you are working. People tell you that you are a hard worker when they see that you are doing your work on time. You are also preforming to the best of your availability. At my work I had this conflict with my co worker and instead of me arguing I just told her she was right and let it go. This lady would always be angry because her work she would be stressed out and yelling but that again comes in with being a lazy person.
Being active can keep you out of trouble or addiction because you will not be so bored throughout your days. You will keep your head so busy that you will be so tired that you wont think about anything else just about taking rest and going home. Keeping bust is also a huge stress deliver because it makes your brain process things more quickly. Unlike with being inactive you just stay at home and do not do anything. Your brain will just be thinking all day about what it will do and you will get worried from not doing anything throughout the day. These are some of the reasons I believe it is good to be positive and not to be to worried.
It is always good to consider why the night time and the day time was made the sunlight was to keep us awake and then the dark was made to make us fall asleep. Also keep in mind that the time you spend doing nothing can be put for good use and you can never take back the minutes or hours that you have spent doing nothing. These are some of the reasons it is always good to be a active human being so that you do not have any problems later in life.
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Who doesn't like getting an extra day off. Who doesn't love staying home on Mondays. I think schools should follow these businesses model by extending the school day two hours and adopt a four-day school week. Although the students might hate the hour extensions, they would love to have a four-day school week. However, there are a lot of benefits and disadvantages in this model.
Lots of students would agree to having a four-day school week. There are a lot of benefits for students if they only have to come for school for four days. Students would have extra time to finish their homework, they would also get some more time to spend with their family, and would be able to travel for an extra day. Students could get a lot of things done with that extra day they get off if they only have a four-day school week. Even though the model comes with lots of benefits there are also lots of disadvantage with it as well.
Students might not like having to stay in school for an extra two hours. This is a huge disadvantage because some students have after school jobs they might not be able to attend if school hours got extended. Other students might have to take care of their families after school. Extending school hours would be a disadvantage to everyone because it will most likely mess up schedules. If school hours got extended students might not be able to find jobs that work with their schedules. The school should think about having a four-day school week but shouldn't extend the school day two hours.
The model has its ups and downs, advantages and disadvantages but its still a good model. Students would love to only be in school for four days. They would probably hate having to stay for extra two hours so the school shouldn't do that. The four-day school week give a lot of benefit to the students. All school should consider only having a four-day school week.
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Should people follow their own instincts, or should they follow other people step?
If people seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters they would not fail in life; however, people should make their own decisions. People should make their own decisions because they can define their self, follow their instincts, and get experience through the life.
First, people should make their own decision because they can define their self. Every single person should make a difference on the world. For example, I do not like to be guide for others person, I like to be different than every one else, try new things, and have my own ideas. Also, around the world are many people that are known for define their personality and for try to change the world with their ideas. Barack Obama is one of them, he was known for his humanity and his charismatic. Every person was made it to perform extraordinary different decisions. People should make their own decisions because they can define their self.
Next, people should make their own decisions because they can follow their instincts. Many times ours instinct are right, but sometimes we let others person tell as what to do, therefore we fail. For example, when we are taking a test and we make cheating,
we fail the test because we not even like to try and follow our instincts. When I have to take a test and I do not know much about the test, I just follow my instincts and at the end, I got good result because is not necessary to do what others persons do. Is more about what you believe that is the best. There is not major accomplishment than do your best, to believe on your-self. People should make their own decisions because they can follow their instincts.
Finally, people should make their own decisions because they can get experience through the life. When a person make their owns decision do not matters if they are successful, or if they fail. Because at the end they learned how it was it and how to do next time. But if they never try, they never would know how hard, or easily is achieve something. For example, last year I fail all my SOL because an friend told me that he pass it all his SOL and was easily.
He suppose to be a expert, so I truth he. But was not tru and I learned that is better try by my self. now I capable to give advice to anthers students and help them. If I never had make my own decisions, I would never get experience. People should make their own decisions because they can get experience through the life.
In conclusion, people should make their own decisions because they can define their self, follow their instincts, and get experience. Every person should make the difference on the World and express their own ideas. When people follow their instincts we accomplish good result. Also, when people got experience through the life following their instinct they could be successful and are capable to advice other people. Every single person have different opinions, decisions, and experiences. With differents person we can build a rich world.
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Every day all the people in the world make a lot decisions and each one have different way to decided. Sometimes you have you have to ask for help, becasue there is a lot of people with experienced for example, parents,teachers and experts. I think decisions can affect your future and also can affect other people. Adults, specially old people have a lot advices for you to be a better person.
First of all, decisions are the key of the one person and can affect the future for the rest of the life. For example,education is one of the most important thing in the life, and that's why your parents always keep saying go to school, and finish the high school that advice is given to you because they want to see a better future for you and you have to listen because is the experienced that is talk is not your parents.
Second, adults have a lot of experience specially old people (grandmother and grandparent).For example, every time when your parents talk for your future, they know about the life because all they have experienced and maybe when they were young, make a bad decisions and that's why the given to you a lot advices because they worried about you.
Finally, most of the time specially (young girls and boys) when they decided something always is wrong because they only care they self but that decisions can affect other people. For expample I from Generic_City and in my country all the time you see young people make the decision to drop out of school and get to the gangs. As a result, they get to the jail or they died and the only people who cry is your family bacuse they want all the best for you.
In conclusion make decisions is not easy for each one because some are easily and some are hard, but I think you shoot ask all the time first for help with your parents and with experts because they have a lot experienced.
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Imagine oneself is a student in high school who is already stressed out by all of the homework and work that One must already finish during the day, but also all of the classwork that oneself did not get to finish during school. Students are already stressed out because of school work, letting a student use their phone as a learning tool would only benefit them in finishing their work on time. This is why teachers should let students utilize their phones as a learning tool and not be against the usage of it when doing school work.
Admittedly, students could get distracted with their phones and not get their work done in time. However, Teachers can specify that the use of phones is only for academic use only during classroom hours. That anybody who is not abiding by the rules will automatically get ISS. Therefore, students would understand that it is a serious matter and would not be playing around with their phones and getting distracted.
Furthermore, students would not have to wait on the schools slow internet and wifi to finish their classwork on time. Students phones work faster than most of the computers in school and they would be able to finish their work faster. For example at the beginning of the school year at SCHOOL_NAME the wifi and internet were down almost every day. Making everybody in the school that has online classes or just courses that require the use of the internet to be behind in all of their work. Also, schools computers are outdated and full of past information that makes the computers work at a much slower pace than a phone would. This is a contributing factor to students not being able to finish their work because the computers are outdated, it takes most of them at least twenty minutes to log in. Those are minutes lost that a student could have been using to have started their class work and possibly even finish it. Consequently, if phones were allowed to be used for class work then students would be able to finish their work on time and not have to worry is the wifi is working or if the computer is taking too long to log on.
In addition, students could take their work home if they are not done with it, and they would not have to worry about being behind on their class work. Students most of the time do not have enough time during class to finish all of their class work. Making their work pile up high and since the school does not let students take computers home they could not take their work home with them. If students have class work on a specific computer app like Microsoft word they would not be able to access it from a computer at their house because they do not have the same system we have in school. For example, one of the classes that I take is econ and personal finance and a lot, if not most of the class is online. If we have to do a vocabulary in Microsoft word
I have no way of accessing that document until the next day and by then we would have something completely different to do. Letting students use their phones to do work like in Microsoft word would mean that students could use their phones to type up their paper in Google classroom and send it in or leave it in the drop box in desire to learn. Hence, why letting students utilize their phones would be a great benefit to them.
In conclusion, letting students utilize their devices as a learning tool or experience would be easier on them. If students are permitted to utilize their phones in the class room then they would not have to worry about not finishing their work during class. This is why students should sign a petition and turn it in to the principal, so the use of cell phones during class work can be permitted and not be frowned upon.
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i as a standby and a typist (whatever that means). i am not fully agree to this extracurricular activity thing that is going around this school, because when i was a mere child. we had this sorta thing to but more easier,but since school nowadays is getting harder then it used to be back in 1950's. this perhaps may be excellent, but like i said before in the begin of my talk. i dont fully agree even though this will help the students. but the extracurricular activity here are well for kids who, are interested in sports, or kids who are interested in taking photos? (which sounds very boring for students at this particular age, well for some of them) or for students who want to make their speech sound like a good speech(a boring one) and sound more exsiqsitict (i dont know how to pronounce it) or whatever the kids like they should maybe join or perhaps join one activity. thats all i have to say from myself. thank you for your perticepice
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Is it a good idea to graduate high school in three years instead of additional four year? Based on my experiance in high school, i disagree with students who graduate high school in three years, besause students can take college credits while they have short schedual on their senior year, and also they can get into the clubs that would give them the idea of that they would do after the graduations. In order to graduate high school in three years students must take summer school, give up on their elective courses, and give up on their vacations.
Students have to take three years of summer school in order to graduate high school early. They are required to complete all the credits that is neccessary for graduations. They must complete the requirements for graduation before it is too late. If the students chooes to skip one year of summer school credit they cannot graduate in three years, and they will have rough time trying to cought up. If they still got lazy than there is no other way to graduate then four years plan. This is where their whole stuggles end up, and they still have to be in school for the fourth year.
Students have to give up on their electives during their high school year to graduate. They will have full schedual of requirements to finish up. They have to work hard, do all the work for all of their classes, turn in almost every homework for their classes. They will be struggling during school year since they do not have an elective class that they will be not hard to think about, also some schools offers courses that would give students the ideas for their college life, such as Generic_School. It is an engineering courses that give the students idea of what they would do if they want to be an engineer.
Students will give up on their summer vocations because they will be taking summer school to graduate high school in three years instead of additional four year. However students will be doing their school stuff while others will be celebrating their vocations. Students who want to finish up their schools early, they will be attending summer schools. Becide it they also be working, and maybe they wonld not have time to complete their assignments on time, it will make them to change their opinnoin on early graduation, they will give up on their early graduation plan.
To conclude, it is not the best choice to graduate high school in three years, additionally students would have rough and tamble time trying to finish high school. Therefore, it will be better if they stick with a normal school time and finish high school in four years, it will help them to get more knowledge, and better undrestainding of that they would do for their oncoming life. For the majority of people its better to graduate high school in four years, even though if they are aiming for advance deploma they will need to take full four years of high school, and summer school as well, but if the students are going for standard deploma they will have short schedual, and they can take advantage if it and take college credits for free on their senior year.
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Technology can be healthy in my life? I believe that this prompt will have negative effects in my life. Sometimes we need talk to somebody, we need help, we need to be sociable with people that is around me.
Everyone can be sociable without technology. Technology can help us with things that could be hard for us but sometimes, we need to be sociable ass well. The technology cannot be my friend because at the beginning we can feel satisfaction with technology. After, we'll see that technology is not everything and i start to asking my self what i do? where is everyone? and i never spent to much time with my family, friends, mom, dad. In fact, i can changes my mind and do the right things.
Sometimes, spent time with my family can help me because we can talk without phones, for example: When we are going to eat, nobody can have their phones in the table because my parents said that technology will be disrespectful and also, technology can take out my time with my family for example: Sometimes i need to do my test at home or homework but, i stay in the computer and i never go to eat with my family that's for i said that we can enjoy, and spend a lot of time with our parents.
The communication is very important in our life. If we have homework, work ships. We can share our ideas and help us each other for example: When i came here at the united states i don't even know English and i was scared in my first day at school because i thought that nobody could speak Spanish for help me but, there was many people to help me and give me information about what the teacher said. Now i understand and i can defect my self with English that's for i said the communication is very important in our life.
In conclusion the technology can be a negative idea in our life because we just want to play in the computer or phones. Sometimes, the technology can help us in so many things for example: test, and work ships but, when we have time with our family, we has to enjoy, and pay attention to then. Family is very important also, the communication is another factor that we has to take care.
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'To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' I agree that it is the best thing to accomplishment because it makes that person become independent, helps you succeed and gain confidence, and gives you strength to help others out.
In addition, being yourself helps you succeed through so much, it helps you become independent to take care of your own actions. Being independent is the best thing why?. Well because it's better to accomplish your goals on your own instead of depending on another person you aren't going to have that person always by your side. People come and go not really just any person sticks by your side like that. This is why doing things yourself, achieving your goal is the best thing, you can show people that you don't need any ones help because you got yourself and that's all you need.
Also, being yourself motivates you to do better, you start to gain confidence and nothing is better than believing in yourself. Just how it's easy to gain weight it is also easy to gain confidence by telling yourself ''I can do this!.''
By having motivation you can do possibly anything, you can jump off a plane if you have the guts to. You start doing better in school or your job perhaps, you start getting good grades or start coming to work on time. Motivation is key in order to succeed in life you must have confidence.
In other words, once you start to gain confidence you need to have enough strength to help another person out perhaps they are depressed or it's just not their best time right now. Motivate them to never give up no matter how much stress you have it shouldn't give you a reason to just stop trying. We have to go through the rough times first in order to have a better life. If someone or yourself is having a really harsh time don't be pressed over it the past is the past and many things happen for a reason. I have gone through a rough time myself for 6 months now but it never gave me a reason to give up I am a strong independent woman and I won't ever stop trying to stop having confidence.
In conclusion, just how Author Waldo Emerson said '' To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' He is correct but, also making you into something else could also mean in a negative but we always need to have a positive mindset. We must be independent and have confidence so we can succeed and so we can help others succeed as well to become somebody in life. Never give up just be positive and everything will come your way remember confidence and motivation is key.
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A topic that is debated is if students should do online classes. Some people believe that there should be online classes. They believe that there should be online classes because the students can take there time and feel comfortable where they are . I belive that we shouldn't have online classes because student can ask for help when they need it, Students are better when they work together as a team and you can get extra help after school and before school .
Students can ask for help. Teacher can help students when they don't understand something instead of trying to look it up on the internet .Students don't learn from the internet or they will just forget. Online classes is good but what if the students doesn't understand then they would just stay confused. The teacher can show them in person then in a computer screen. If students did online classes what if they don't understand there work because they can't just call there teacher sometimes they don't answer.
Students work better when they work together. Group projects can help them in the future when they got to work with other people. They can learn from each other and there mistakes . When the students are in groups they don't do it solo and they can get the more work done. They get to meet new people that they never ever get to talk to and make new friends. Online classes you just listen to the teacher and ask question do the same thing but can never work with other people.
There extra help after and before school. Online classes there no before or after school it just the time of your classes. In School the teacher stay after or come before school to help students with their work or the ones that just doesn't understand . The Teacher helps them with homework so they don't have to do it at home and the same with classwork if they don't get it done there after school. There also people who have to do stuff after school so there is before school where they can come early and do there workk.
I believe that we shouln't have Online classes because student can ask question,student have more fun doing group activity and if the students need help they have after and before school to get extra help.
Online classes isn't really necessary it wouldn't effect anything.
Teacher are more helpful then computer.
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Hello my name is Generic_Name. Im grateful to be writing this letter to you, i hope i am fortunate to get picked to visit and learn from you and your staff. Cyber security is a career i would like to pursue as i get older, it would be a dream come true to come work with you and your staff. Being able to hack for a living would be amazing.
Cyber security interest me ever since i got introduced into hacking. I did little hacks like into my brothers computer or jail braking my phone, Little things like that. I would like to one day work for the FBI ,and help protect important information from other hackers. If i were to get selected to come visit and learn ,it would one day would help me in the future. i hope to make it big one day and hope to work along you.
It would be great to get a feel of what it would feel like to work in that environment. i wonder what it feels like is the; place quiet, what equipment do they use, how long have they been working as a hacker. Ive never visited a FBI agency, i hope i do though to witness all of you guys in action and what you do on a daily basis. This program would because it would give me an idea of the work environment so when i get older i know what im getting into. Also it would get even more motivated to wor harder every day to make it big and work with the FBI.
I would consider my self a good a focus person and most importantly i am very patient. Im a very responsible person im evan a very hard work i always try my best evan way over on what i do. Especially when it come to computer work, i have very supportive parents but in the future i would like to make good money. Nothing would make me happier then to be a hacker for the FBI for my caree, it would be a dream come true. That is why i think i should be considered to be selected to learn from you and your fellow staff.
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In this world everyone has a talent or skill. Some people use their talent for good things, and some for bad things. My talent is honety, and I use this talent for good things like, I tell the truth all the time, never betray someone, and I am always fair.
To begin, my first reason about how I use this talent for good things is that I tell the truth all the time. Because of that, everyone trusts me, and tell me their secrets. Telling the truth all the time also help people recognize me as a good person, and help me make lots of friends. Telling the truth all the time would not only help people recognize me as a good person, but it will also make everyone trust me.
To continue, my second reason is that I never betray someone. Never betraying someone will make people think that I am a good person, and people that didn't like me will start liking me. Never betraying someone is also a good thing because it will make you loyal, and faithfull. People that you never betrayed will like you and become your friend.
Further more, my last reason about how I use this talent for good things is that I am always fair. I treat everyone the same way I want to be treated, and that will make people treat me the same way they want to be treated. I also divide things evenly, so everyone have the same amount. If you want people to treat you fair than, you have to treat them fair.
In conclusion, my talent is honesty and I use it for good things like, telling the truth, never betraying, and being fair. I treat people the way I want to be treated and believe it or not they treat me the same way, so whatever talent you have use it for good things instead of bad things.
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It has been said that the first impression are almost impossible to change. I agree that the first impression is almost impossible to change about this topic because it's logical and very important about the first impression to life, and a have my own experience to share about this topic to share.
when i was7 years old my first impression comes in my mind is to have my own car but its was impossible because i was seven years old and I was a kid but I decide to come in united state but, also its was impossible for me because my parents was poor of money three years later I get the same impression that day its was the most important to my life and the impression it can be easy or hard to achieve but i did it and I come to the united state.
The fist impression is very important but is not easy to change all people was one impression and sometime they think thats impossible but if they work hard they will get it because is important for them.
The first impression that all people have is the most important to life because they can have a different stuff on mind my impression was to come in the united state and i did it because I its was my dream and my impression to have more opportunity to have more impression in mind.
there is not only one impression that i have theres so many things that i want to do maybe make a lot of money or buy my own house but the first impression is not impossible.
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I desagree whit this statement, because some people can change, how people look at them and given a good impression again, for example if the person dirend do well the first time, he would do better the second time, it is like given a second opportunity, second example is that the person who you are given the opportunity to change, is not doint nothing to change it, is better to not give them a second chanse.
For me the first impression is not to much important, because that firt impression can change at any time, and the the one how you diren t give him a second change, cand be better tha the firt one my experience whas one day i have do a poster, and my was ugly when the teacher say that whe have to do other poster in a group and nobody whant to join my group, and i finishet by myselft wen te teacher calify the poster, may whas te best one in the class.
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Im not agree to the schools districts programs for the students to finish their diploma in tree years because it is not enough time in three years then than four years and the students going to study to hard. in the summer and in the evenings the students brain is going to get tire they can not going ta have break they can not going to have the important courses of elective class can be force for the students. however if they finish in tree years the advantage is finish more faster but than can not help to the students also they going to do hard work to study in the summer and evening .
I thing that finish high school in tree years is not a good idea because is better to have the time necessary four years is important is more time.
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second is if the students finish the school in tree years the students they has to having must to work hard. in the summer and in the evening i thing that the students can be get very tire it is good to have the time and is get more focus before got the university.
it is better to study more and thing what route do you want to go and take the necessary time.
for the student is help more because four years is more time then. Thant tree years and they can no be frosted for then and they can have more free time to do the personals things.
it is better before go to the university and work force because is more time to prepare the students having to focus more on learned more things is good to now more before take the time it is important for the students that four years in the school is going to help for the students in the future for what carers they going to be doing.
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Yes, is a good idea because if high school selected to guide them towerd a specific career, because we can see how difficult be, or if be easy to go the college, however, is good idea, because you can see if you are soure of want the specific career, or you want change for other career, because some time the career you want is be difficult and you can`t do it. So we can have ideas how the college be, so if the high school put the this opcion be great, because when you finished the high school you really have a idea what you want to pick for the college or what career you want to take.
Some time was make difficult to pick the class or the career because din`t have ideas, so with this opcion is be great because we have ideas how take a college class.
When you are not soure what you want to pick for you career, this is a good opcion, because be help you to know how college is.
Is good idea, because the estudents be really have a idea how the college is, and when the estudents be have to go to the college be going with some ideas, and the estudents really know how the college or the class is, because they were had ideas from the high school.
I agreement with this opcion becuase is be helper for all the estudents, this is be helper for when we have to go the college or university, and you really know what talk about or what going on. This opcion is be great, becuase at a young age, they know somethink about the college, and when they be have to go the college or university they remind what laernd in the high school, so this be helper to all estudents becuase is be good think. When the estudent going to the college they going wiht ideas or think, so that is more easy because they have a somentink mind and that is be great.
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John Lubbock quotes on choosing your own character or letting influences form your is a passage I can live by.
For the reason of it being actually true because, sometimes things you see throughout your life would change your character. The people you look up to can can your character because you want to be just like them. but sometimes its not always a good change sometimes you can have a bad influence.
Things you see in life can change your character. Lets say you are in the streets and you get into a car accident then you are gonna have a chance to be afraid to drive a car. It can also be changed by a bad experience, lets say you are in an abusive relationship after that relationship ends you would think every girl/guy is an abusive person.
What if you are living in foster care and you never get adopted you will think that you will never among to nothing and be nothing your whole life.
The people you look up to can have a dramatic change in your character. Let's say your father is your biggest inspiration you will want to be just like him when your older and follow in his foot steps. But, if your inspiration isn't anyone in your family but it is a famous sport player you will grind your butt off just to be in the same team with them and hopefully play along side with that player. Newer influences these days are trough social media and movies and in my opinion those are the worst ones because they usually trying to sell you something or market something to their audience.
Sometimes its not always a good change sometimes you can have a bad influence. Having a bad influence can lead to a lot of trouble and you can even end up in jail for it. Let's say you look up to your father and he is a very toxic person and a violent person and you end up like him that's not a good thing. Also something that can happen is that you look up to a very bad very disturbing person and he likes to hurt people and then you start hurting people because you want to be just like him. Depending on who your inspiration is it will develop the way your character comes out.
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Computers in School technology in this years are helpful in the school to have more assessments and are many software to learn how to make presentation or projects.
Microsoft office we can learn word to make letters or power point to make presentations for business.
we can research,
i can find information for my projects or histories in Internet has many information typing we can use typing for accuracy we can typing fast end learn new words to make more easy for make projects and save more time .
devises can help the nature,
cannot need to cat more trees for peppers trees help our environment, we can planting more trees in parks to make more panoramic for every body can enjoyable,also we can take our computer or devise to the park to do the home work.
in conclusion computers help me to do many things projects take notes learn software rear books taping better. susesful and help me in my business.
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Imagine someone that you know, that is trying to show you what maturity looks like. And she set a example for you to see, by how she talk and how she treats her friends and family. You watch how the person act and talk. Later, you start to follow what that person does. This influenced you to also be respectful to the people around you. Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence others because people follow what you do,know right from wrong, they are going to influence more other people.
First reason, setting a good example to influence others is the best thing because people follow what you do. They look up to you as a role model for them. Whoever you hang around with, that is whoever going to influence you. For example, if someone is doing a act of kindness, then you are going to do the exact same thing, because it influenced you. Philosopher Albert Schweitzer said," Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." Overall, if one person set a good example in life, it influence the others also.
Second reason, setting a good example is the best way to influence others because you know right from wrong. If no one set examples for others to see, then they would not know what to do when difficult situation arrives. Examples guide you to do what you know is right. People would not know how to act if there's no examples to be set. In summary, examples setting by other people help you make good decisions in life.
Third reason, some people may believe that setting examples by someone's behavior is not the best way to influence others. However, I believe that setting examples is the best way to influence others because it's not just one person that they are influencing, but many more people. For example, if a girl help a elder lady that needed help with carrying groceries inside the house, then others will see that and learn to help people that are in need also. Because of that one influence, others will care for people that need help. If one person set a good example, then others will also set a good example for many more people. In conclusion, many people will be influenced because of that one example that people set.
The best way to influence someone is through examples that are set by others, and how their behavior and attitudes are towards people. Setting examples is a good way to show people what you are trying to teach them and it gives them a idea of what's happening. Through all of these examples that people had set for you, they will influence you. When you do the example, because it influenced you, others will also catch that influence from you. So yes, setting examples is the only thing that will influence people and make a big impact in people's lives.
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I agree that students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.My friend, PROEPR_NAME attend to school she has two jobs, but in the last few months she does not attend to classes because she works too much that is hurt herself , but she does not have any other option PROPER_NAME, is independent.
However some students work to help with pay the rent, pay bills I know some students that would like to attend to school, but the do not have the opportunity for some reason .For example does not have enough time, or falling sleep every time that try to weak up to go to school is not easy work and study every day that is brave.
The idea here is to support teenagers to prepare for the future
someone will be the next president of the United States, or a professional doctor that will help many people from many countries.We can help our teenagers for a better future as school is our responsibility to work with them.
In conclusion students,
Should have the opportunity to attend classes from home and work as the same time to help their parents and the most important prepare for the future.
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Over ten precent of the students say that they would rather go to school instead of staying home. It would benefit the students learning abilites because some teachers will teach differently then other teachers. It is so much easier learning at school because the teachers at school know what the students needs to learn. The students needs someone who knows how to teach and has been teaching for a while. If the students pick online learnig the teachers can be fake a pretend to teach the kids when they do not know anything. The video conferencing can get messed up by the internet because some people might have slow connection or no connection at all.
It would be easier for students because they will learn more at school then the video chat, or from online. Some students have a slower learning abilities then others. The students are learning by one teacher from the video chat some students will be done much quicker then the other students. At school th teachers wait for the other students finish then they let the rest of class to do other work. It will not help the students to learn from home because at home is where they have their games tv all of that stuff they will pretend to be doing work, but actually they will be doing other adn stuff and they will tell the teachers that they already finished the work.
Students needs someone who has a degree in teaching. It will be easier for the teachers because they will know what things they have to teach to the certain type of students. They would know how to teach it to them and it will be easier for them to learn the topic. It is easier to go to school becuase we will learn the topic with other students and students can ask for help from their friends or the the teachers in class.
The teachers on video chat can be a random person off the streets and teach the student the wrong infomation. Also it will cost a lot of money for the students learn from a video chat. Schools are free, so the students can go there and get education for free, nor the students, or parents have to pay. Some parents, nor students can afford online classes because it costs like over one hundred dollars.
Staying home and doing online classes is fun because we are able to stay in our night clothes and do school work. Students can get their blankets and anything they want and do work while being comfortable. The students do not have to get up and go to school. They can get up at anytime and do class work. As fun as that sounds some students will not be able to meet their friends because their friends might have a different sechdules then their other friends. They will have to do work wilhile they want to meet up.
Students should not do online classes because it will intefere with their other stuff like hanging out with friends and going to work. They will miss out on parties that their friends will host for them. It help the students and the teachers because not everyone has a good ability like the other students.
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I am not agree with this, because the school hours star at 7 am and end to 2:10 pm, in that time we can work after school, and do other important things that we have in the day, but if the school adopted this rule, the days for the students are gone ,because if the school take that rule , the students are going home from the school at 4 pm, and they are arrive home at 5 pm ,so they don't going to have time for do others things, like work or do the homework ,because they just go home to sleep and do some things that the students have to do in home for help in the house.
But for the work weeks are better because they are going to have more time or one more day for have fun with their family and they don't have any problems because they just have to stay two more hour and they going to have one more day off and that is better for they, because is like that they are working that day ,and they get the same pay and the workers just go to work and then go home.
Except for some students are different because they have to go to the school and they have to get up early ,and after school they have to go at work, that is difficult for some students, because they go in to the work after school like at 2:30 , and go out like at 12:00 am, and they don't sleep nothing the rest of the night, and they come tired to the school but they still come to the school, and they do the work that they have to do in the school, and the home too, so that is why that going to affect the students.
I don't think that this new rule going to benefit the students, that rule just benefit the workers, because they going to have one more day left, and to more hours of work in the day, but for the students they get up early and go out of the school late ,and that is bad because, we don't going to have more time for work, just for study and do home work and sleep, that is all the things that we going to do, if the school adopted that rule the day for students are going to be gone for them.
That is what i think about that prompt.
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