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cbace205564e | E4FACBE9AC22 | Now yes you can put more than 1 teacher in the rooms but if you think about it teachers have to plan there classes and what they are going to do for the rest of the week , and some teachers dont have time because they have other things they need to do after school and in school. Like what if a teacher got sick the other teacher would be by its self with all those kids . Some kids should do this because they never have or never had experience with this type of stuff and some kids will try and take advantage to this and only do it to get out of doing other stuff, thats why i think this is not a good idea , | Evidence | Adequate |
60c848d71f9d | E570BB4A5B5B | I think the reason why they have advantages of limiting car usage cause all these changes | Position | Ineffective |
ac04f1d682f0 | E570BB4A5B5B | people who have stooped car commuting as a result of the recession may found less reason to resume the habit... | Evidence | Adequate |
34998c40880c | E570BB4A5B5B | differnt thing are converging which are suggest that we are witessing a long-term cultural shirt. | Claim | Ineffective |
a3cd0f2c65d6 | E570BB4A5B5B | another reason is that if that pattern persists they believe it will have a benfiicial implications for cabon emissions | Claim | Ineffective |
afec862d7cac | E570BB4A5B5B | aslo the environment and they aslo they sayed it might have a negative implicatins for the car industry. and because the cash-srapped americans could not afford new cars and the unempolyed weren't going to work either and young people decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0b940ec9a0d0 | E570BB4A5B5B | they had demographic shifts in the drving poulation suggest that the trrends may have accelerate it | Claim | Ineffective |
b8b02898fa31 | E570BB4A5B5B | the percentage had drop while older people are likey to retain there license as they age. Aslo like cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements and they had reserachers had pondering a fundamental ques:Has America passed peak drving? | Evidence | Adequate |
7d19c141b74c | E5856BB0C34A | The face on Mars is actually just a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
59261b6622c2 | E5856BB0C34A | The "Face on Mars" has became a pop icon, it has starrd in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows and even haunted grocerys tore checkout lines for 25 years. Its the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. " It reminds me the morst of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," says Garvin. "That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." | Evidence | Adequate |
44676c9e0a75 | E5856BB0C34A | When,
NASA unveiled the image for all to see, the caption noted a "huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth." The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.
Though, When Mars Global Surveryor flew over the Cydonia for the first time, Michael and his Mars Obiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all
For example: As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size." "So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see where they were." The picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. | Evidence | Ineffective |
fae4566857e7 | E5856BB0C34A | Although, some people people think it was created by aliens or that few scientists believe the face was an alien artifact, but actually its just a natural landforms common around the American West. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4678c9dbe144 | E595E218D423 | Would you join a seagoing cowboys program? | Lead | Ineffective |
1d171d53a13c | E595E218D423 | Just imagine how good of a idea this would be | Position | Adequate |
1ffb8f3e0c9f | E595E218D423 | you can visit many unique places | Claim | Adequate |
24340aa23a4e | E595E218D423 | experience adventures | Claim | Adequate |
22652d3ea749 | E595E218D423 | there is travelling if you work. | Claim | Adequate |
0449c8fa41ff | E595E218D423 | you can see many unique things during the Seagoing Cowboys program | Claim | Adequate |
32eb0385f90c | E595E218D423 | You can also visit unique things while traveling, and find unique stuff during this program. This proves that you should join this program. | Evidence | Ineffective |
dab7fcc97bc3 | E595E218D423 | you can experience adventures | Claim | Adequate |
9960d221ca47 | E595E218D423 | You can experience adventures by going over the oceas. You can slso experience adventures by taking care of the animals. This is another reason why you should join Seagoing Cowboys program. | Evidence | Ineffective |
acb2cb30fb5b | E595E218D423 | you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becasue there is traveliling if you work | Claim | Adequate |
ed2e4a6616c5 | E595E218D423 | So you work to experience unique places and things. Also experience adventures and all you have to do is work a little bit. This is the final reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
7e6477ffd271 | E595E218D423 | If you join this program it is a good idea because you can visit many unique places, experience advcentures, and and travelling if you work on the ship. So you should really consider joing this program. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7c18f0592868 | E5B076EB95A7 | Do you belive in aliens? | Lead | Ineffective |
b34f63cff3d0 | E5B076EB95A7 | the face was just natural landforms | Position | Adequate |
8d14bff6636b | E5B076EB95A7 | there is no such things as aliens! | Claim | Adequate |
e43ae2d6ed4a | E5B076EB95A7 | For example the text says" a shadowy likeness of a human face." This example show that likeness isn't always certain you have to be absolutley sure before you start making claims about what the picture is showing. | Evidence | Adequate |
22c027125e60 | E5B076EB95A7 | Another reason why the alien story is real is because ,no one officially approved it. | Claim | Ineffective |
7854eccb6c00 | E5B076EB95A7 | They only took pictures of the face.
No one went down on mars to examine or observe the face. An example for this would be that the passage says" only this one had unusual shadws that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh". This example shows that if it looks like a Egyptian Pharaoh how would the aliens know about it? | Evidence | Adequate |
3ad5a6bbb38f | E5B076EB95A7 | The next reason why the alien myth isnt true is because in the passage it says the word"illusion" the word illusion means something that you can see but is not there. | Claim | Adequate |
a944330135b8 | E5B076EB95A7 | For example in the tex it states that " formed shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth". This example shows that an illusion may seem real but it is not real. You have to make sure that your facts are reliable and your resources are reliable. | Evidence | Adequate |
0ef731039ba2 | E5B076EB95A7 | Finally, why people say that the landfrom was formed by aliens is because it
" appered in books, magazines and radio talk shows--- even haunted grocery store for 25 years". | Counterclaim | Adequate |
a6dad5a281b9 | E5B076EB95A7 | They don't know just because this thing goes publice dosen't mean it is true. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
3595cc99ffd1 | E5B076EB95A7 | For example" Some people thimk that it is bona fide evidence". The people that think taht it is bona fide evidence did they do any research or did they just rely on what the social media says | Evidence | Adequate |
4c87ed3d2e96 | E5B076EB95A7 | In conclusion you should believe that the face is a natural landform is because aliens isn't real. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
fbd066d5ebf2 | E5F4C8EB99A4 | I think the technologhy to read students emotional spreeions is a great idea | Position | Ineffective |
f87dab7e1afe | E5F4C8EB99A4 | because it can tell you if you sad happy angery disgusted or fear. | Claim | Ineffective |
64fdacfdf142 | E5F4C8EB99A4 | On the Mona Lisa smile it tells you how are you felling when you are looking at it. That ehy people and student go look at the Mona Lisa smile panting to go see how are they filling. In the pragh 1 it says that shes 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusred 6 percent fearful. Dr Huang asked if they can calculate emotions like math homework and how can a computer recongnize the subtle facial. | Evidence | Adequate |
30a526341f5e | E5F4C8EB99A4 | In this process it begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model on the face. Dr huang relies on the work of the pyschologists as Dr Paul Eckman creator of FACS the did the test on Eckman and he had happiness surprise anger disgust fear and sadness. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intened to bring a smile to eveybody face when you go and see the painting. | Evidence | Adequate |
8f0c7da34d1a | E5F4C8EB99A4 | Making a happy face was a great idea because its bring people happyniess to you becacuse its does not making you angery or sad. that why it was a grat idea about this painting. | Claim | Ineffective |
24d124ecbd7e | E609C36EC225 | In the article the author tells that even though there is alot of dangerous challenges in exploring venus and that he is willing to face them challenges. | Position | Adequate |
a20694480a35 | E609C36EC225 | In paragraph 2 the author starts out saying how venus is earth's twin and that venus is the closest planet to us in terms of density and size. In the body paragrpah i am going to talk about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems. | Evidence | Adequate |
cfcebdcb5a22 | E609C36EC225 | Some challenges the author says that venus is thowing at us | Claim | Ineffective |
4c24ff6c3950 | E609C36EC225 | venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that is covering the planet. In paragraph the the author also states that venus is on average 800 degrees Fahrenheit, that is hotter than mars and mars is the closest planet to the sun. The author also states that the atmosherpic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. If the earth had that muh atmospheric pressure than there would be no one left on this planet because that is so much pressure that it can crush a submarine. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes to land on its surface. | Evidence | Adequate |
6909674c64cf | E609C36EC225 | Some thing that NASA is saying is that there only possible solution for how hot it is and how much pressure is in the air is that with these hostile conditions that venus shoudl allow scientists to float above the fray. | Claim | Adequate |
c1e877d8413b | E609C36EC225 | Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the rolling Venusain landspace, with that venus would avoid the unfriendly group conditions by staying up and out of the way. The temperatures over the ground would still be 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. These conditons are not easy, but thye are surviable for human's | Evidence | Adequate |
ea7aec34d224 | E609C36EC225 | how we can solve the high pressure and high temperature. The first way we can solve these conditions are if we started having people go and live on venus and took some other living organisms with them. The second way we could solve it is if we found away to connect venus to earth and that would take away all ot the problems. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4fd075b89cfe | E609C36EC225 | I would have to agree more with NASA's ideas on how to solve the problems venus is dealing with. i agree with the author it is just i don't think his idea's will wokr as well. One day i think we will be able to live on Venus and have it connected to Earth. In this essay i told you about about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ae9adef651a2 | E60A91172B20 | Luke should use these reason's to convince other people. | Position | Adequate |
7e611c857e1c | E60A91172B20 | The program helps with people in need | Claim | Adequate |
57bf837cb252 | E60A91172B20 | people around the world that need supplies, and livestock. The Seagoing Coyboys program is a program for helping other's.
The first reason is the program helps with people in need. Luke and Don go help people and sign up for program. Example-
Luke helped Katie's farm for checking the animals every night. Then he slipped and cracked his ribs so he coudn't work for a couple days. He also took care of cattle while on board. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b85d608deb8c | E60A91172B20 | Luke going around the world. | Claim | Adequate |
48cb51f8b780 | E60A91172B20 | He went to many parts of Europe. In Greece he got drafted with the military. He went to China to help animals with crossings. In the Pacific and atlantic ocean he took care of animals, while going to Europe. There were alot things to do.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
1eb8083941a3 | E60A91172B20 | Luke going around and giving supplies | Claim | Adequate |
cc3d4eeb2fd6 | E60A91172B20 | In the first paragraph he worked a two- part job. Then when going to Europe he gave cattle to people or farmers. He probably gave them food and water. The reason is because is the end of WWII and buildings are down. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b9ee653bd06a | E60A91172B20 | The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program for helping others. To sum marize the reasons. The program helps with people in need, the program goes around the world, and the program helps with livestock and supplies. Luke did a great thing to help with the world. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7fd8d8cbd821 | E60EB5C35194 | I think that the use of the technolohy should not be used | Position | Adequate |
2f889898f95b | E60EB5C35194 | because then parent would be complaining how it is not fair for a teacher or students to know her sons/daughters expression. | Evidence | Adequate |
f0959b2e35e2 | E60EB5C35194 | Also I personally think that we shouldn't allow them because then teachers would always be focused on the kids that aren't as happy and are confused on the work or lesson they are learning. | Evidence | Adequate |
5cb6cd9c8065 | E60EB5C35194 | I also think that it would also be a good idea for the whole school because if a student is to shy to speak up and they dont know how to do something then the teacher can talk to him/her after class. | Evidence | Adequate |
2aec574339e6 | E60EB5C35194 | I think that using this technology will be to much too and the school will have to use millions of dollars just to buy some for a whole class. | Claim | Adequate |
9942706bd811 | E60EB5C35194 | I know this becuase the author says "Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode mocode Mona Lisa's smile. | Evidence | Adequate |
e833a9c61ea1 | E60EB5C35194 | Then they show us how we can do it at home and how we can make use smile or happy. | Evidence | Ineffective |
39df25e1b0b5 | E60EB5C35194 | In the artical is states "According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. ("Putting on a happy face" actually works" | Evidence | Adequate |
1f205af7c048 | E60EB5C35194 | So at the end of the day I personally don't think we schools should have this type of technogoly and be more focused on other technologys like finger print sign in or school resources. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3b00ef1fd4c2 | E61D1C3EC9DD | Do you think aliens exsist? The face has been said to be a natural landform or made by aliens. The face has been told from different perspectives. Conspiracy theorists thinks NASA wants to hide the face, when they really dont. There's different stand points for different topics.
The Face on Mars is a mystery because we dont know if the face is there or is it shadows. | Lead | Adequate |
b96b4e395dc4 | E61D1C3EC9DD | In my opinion I think that the face is a natural landform like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. | Position | Adequate |
7ce4df80b35d | E61D1C3EC9DD | the face has also been seen as a pop icon, it has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, and radio talk shows. Defenders of the national budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Maybe there is life maybe there's not who knows for sure. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d4dddbfe7115 | E61D1C3EC9DD | Eighteen long years after Viking missions, we sent up the Global Surveyor. Once the it was in place for a good shot we took it ten times which were sharper than the viking photos. After the photos were posted on the web there was no congergations about aliens anymore. | Evidence | Adequate |
a4ed24750cf7 | E61D1C3EC9DD | It was proven to be a natural landform after all. | Claim | Adequate |
e0683c710a4f | E61D1C3EC9DD | The Face on mars is located at 41 degrees north martian lattitude where it was winter in April '98--a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. People still thought that it was an alien making that was hidden in the clouds. The team got another great look at it with the clearest view ever on a summer day and snapped a photo. | Evidence | Adequate |
38f14f8ab951 | E61D1C3EC9DD | The photo actually showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. | Claim | Adequate |
eb255ff59a93 | E61D1C3EC9DD | In my opinon I believe the Face is real. Others might argue that its still something crated by aliens. Especially sense it was clearified as a butte or mesa. No matter what its an opinon based topic that you can argue about all day. The real question is what do you think?
In conclusion there has been plenty of research and examinations on the Face of Mars. I still think that the Face is real, others might think differently. This topic can go both ways in opinon wise. Think wise about this topic. Consider talking about it with coleagues and come up with a conclusion for this topic. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
9820693cb4b4 | E627C066A0F1 | I think its true because some computers now have facial scan recognition but they cost a arm and a leg to buy but i dont think its worth it to buy a computer that cost a arm and a leg because if something goes wrong with the computer their will be no refunds but their should be refunds because they could probably sell u a broken or damaged computer. | Position | Ineffective |
321ee92e5700 | E627C066A0F1 | Next: do think it would be a good idea to make a computer thats u can only access with your face because now a days people tend to steal stuff that doesnt belong to them like for example i had a friend who tried to steal my headphones one day but i had officer force her to give them back but when she gave them back the were broke.
Conclusion: i think that mona lisa probably was a hard picture to face scan because there were so many differnt copys of the original paintning but im pretty sure the real painting is in a museum heavinly gauarded by people with heavy artilllery and grenades and army men with truck but inconclusion if your a great painter do your best because one day u might a famouse painter like Leanardo da Vinci or bettter | Evidence | Ineffective |
893157472a6b | E66C66D98801 | It was me and my other scientist friends in the lab discussing the ''The Face on Mars'' I told them it was just a enormous rock that was two miles long that's all we usullaly see things like this and they kept responding it does have a mouth, head, and eyes so what should we think. | Lead | Ineffective |
da9e8c0b1e44 | E66C66D98801 | All the scientist now believes that the face is an alien artifact but it is not and here is why. | Position | Adequate |
44a508955156 | E66C66D98801 | In May 24,2001 twenty five years ago when it happen. Our sister ship took a picture of a shadowy likeness of a human face. | Evidence | Adequate |
beb0ae076161 | E66C66D98801 | There's not an actual human face on the planet Mars then I told them there are two keywords likeness and shadowy. | Claim | Adequate |
eb3130f28457 | E66C66D98801 | Then my friend Ben said a few days later NASA unveiled the image , but then I quote it was a huge rock formation which rembles a human head formed by shadows giving illusion of human parts. | Evidence | Adequate |
111e5c046b58 | E66C66D98801 | Then in April 5 1998, when Mars Global Surveyour flew overv Cydonia for the first time and there people took ten times better images and said it was just a natural landform. | Evidence | Adequate |
2c3e71673c6e | E66C66D98801 | There was no alien monument after all. | Claim | Adequate |
9fa5c1d7f4fc | E66C66D98801 | Then my friend Ben started to understand until his friend Jeff said April,1998, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet . The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy, white clouds to see the face. They say they were alien markings were hidden by haze. | Evidence | Adequate |
e69022bdae4b | E66C66D98801 | Finally I told him that it was just a big old rock with shadows covering it. And other scientist say it is just another enormous rock. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d21f92575732 | E686584E5508 | Eh, its cool, sorta but knowing me I really dont care about this facial action coding thing. I wanna find out the mood of the picture on my own. | Position | Ineffective |
3ccc6efaf281 | E686584E5508 | But its a cool thingy, the fact that you can find out what the person in a painting is feeling is insane. | Claim | Adequate |
6199927b7d4b | E686584E5508 | As Dr. Huang says in paragraph 4 "the facial expression for each emotions are universal," "even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression." and that you can also reproduce a smile is weird ( I never knew that was a thing).But yea FACs can show you what your mood(s) are in a picture just by scanning your facial parts. Muscles called orbiculariaris make crows feet around your eye, but in a false smile. the mouth is strectched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the riorius. So all the muscles can get the coding to scan your face and it'll tell you the percentage of the mood that you are in whether you're sad, mad, happy, bored, it will tell you all of that jazyy stuff. | Evidence | Adequate |
0a2ceb71affe | E6B9DA32FE13 | Studying Venus could lead us to a lot of stuff. There are many details we could get out of studying Venus | Lead | Adequate |
e624faecd8db | E6B9DA32FE13 | Even though visiting Venus could be dangerous to visit, but it would also be very interesting. Venus has a lot going on. | Position | Adequate |
52461d89fddd | E6B9DA32FE13 | Venus is planet in our solar system. At one point in time, Venus could have been like Earth. There are features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is our nearest option of planetery visit. Vistiting Venus could and would be very dangerous to visit. Venus has high pressure and lots of heat. There are erupoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. Studying why Venus does this could to lead to a lot. | Evidence | Adequate |
adaea2e8b2d3 | E6B9DA32FE13 | It could tell us about how Venus works and how it was created. | Claim | Adequate |
25d42207c67b | E6B9DA32FE13 | Venus is a very hot planet. If a blimp was 30 miles above Venus, the temperture could still reach the blimp. That is not survivable for humans | Evidence | Ineffective |
a4e2114a00d5 | E6B9DA32FE13 | Studying Venus on how it is so hot could solve a lot and tell us more about the planet. | Claim | Adequate |
c115c3271422 | E6B9DA32FE13 | To study Venus, scientists would need samples of rock, gas, or anthing else from Venus. On the other hand, there has been spacecrafts to land on Venus, but they only would survive for a couple of hours.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
495de337e424 | E6B9DA32FE13 | In conclusion of visiting Venus, it would be dangerous. It would also be very interesting. Knowing there could have been life on Venus is pretty cool. We need to find out a way to get close to Venus. We need samples of Venus on Earth. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9c7d1b26c96b | E6F8E5374615 | The story about "Making Mona Lisa Smile" describe how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enable computers to indentify humans emotion by writing a essay arguing weather the use of this technology or to read the emotional expression ? | Lead | Ineffective |
9cec85a25790 | E6F8E5374615 | Will I think by using this technology if it bring a smile to my face while it shows how much this computer can do. Then I might have to get it | Claim | Adequate |
1793006d54b6 | E6F8E5374615 | Like if the computer no if im happy or sad in my emotion then thats a be a good feeling I dont know why but it will | Evidence | Ineffective |
1cbe8ca86f8b | E6F8E5374615 | A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. | Claim | Adequate |
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