tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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92da3a4535b2	321FA7E39731	Its easy to do because you don't have to count them up yourself.	Claim	Effective
547a7f1d84e9	321FA7E39731	I facts that these four guys even like it (Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole). Do you know over 60% of voters would prefer voteing direct election	Evidence	Adequate
35c046e5e55e	321FA7E39731	We need more people to vote the more voters the better it will look,we don't need to beat aound the tree. This make people feel better to vote then doing it another way.	Claim	Ineffective
082c88131d35	321FA7E39731	The only con of doing this is we don't know who did it. You want think that really matter but it does because some can cheat for somebody.	Counterclaim	Adequate
58c74b37d9d2	321FA7E39731	The state legislatures been picking electors since 1960. In Kennedy days when he was running he got cheated out his vote,so he lost	Evidence	Adequate
0ec71c7728de	321FA7E39731	but they done fixed all that things going well.	Rebuttal	Ineffective
8f2c65859cab	321FA7E39731	This is five reasons the keep the method of voting like that	Claim	Adequate
58dd97be8f07	321FA7E39731	#1 fact there is a certainty of outcome by that i mean it show the popular votes. In 2012 Obama received 61.7% vote and Romney popualr vote was 51.3%.#2 is he/she have to be everybody president. He/she can't play sides like her cant just do the most for the south havt to be fair fot all of them.#3 swing states by sayig that the winner-take-all. So whoever win they take it all the awarding and everything else.#4 big states with big states the elsctoral collegethe balance all it out by the popualr votes. So it compare as a small states so u bout say its even. Last #5 it can stop and avoid run-offs when Nixon and Clinton was running it was a tied at 43%.	Evidence	Effective
b866e4eb7253	321FA7E39731	So do you understand where i'm coming from with this. So keep it easy just let the electoral college stay around.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
101801f34585	326DEFF8D486	Most of the teenagers use there phones half of there life, Reconsidering the school's cell phone policy is a great idea, for many reason and some of the reasons are these	Lead	Adequate
b48a5cddcab9	326DEFF8D486	Even though you say not to bring cell phones to school students still do it , some of the students need to bring there phones to school to communicate with there parents telling them that they're at school.	Claim	Adequate
85e630acc405	326DEFF8D486	Other students need there phones incase of an emergency, and there parents need to contact there kids or the parents need to be contacted, the school can use there phones.	Evidence	Adequate
9f3ba89eb008	326DEFF8D486	It is a great idea letting the students use there phones during lunch or free periods that gives the students a feeling of trust from the school.	Position	Adequate
ba3b0e0a939b	326DEFF8D486	Not allowing students to use there phones at all	Counterclaim	Ineffective
03cefce881b9	326DEFF8D486	is not really going to help.	Rebuttal	Adequate
5d000e280638	326DEFF8D486	The students will find a way to bring there phones to school and use them while the teachers are not looking. Most of the students are already doing it, why you think putting a new policy is going to help the school it really is not, but by letting the students bring there phones in school and giving them time to use them is going to let the students know that the school trusts them, that the school doesn't think of them as children but as young and responsible adults	Evidence	Effective
40deac8d2817	326DEFF8D486	To change the policy you have to look at the problem is booth ways in the mind of a teacher and in the mind of a student.	Claim	Adequate
2262b055436f	326DEFF8D486	Some of the teachers may think by bringing a phone to school is a sign of not having respect	Counterclaim	Adequate
977767b65357	326DEFF8D486	but it really isn't students don't mean to be rude.	Rebuttal	Adequate
dcd48207d71d	326DEFF8D486	Sometimes there parents even ask them to bring there phones, other times the students want to bring there phones. The students in the other side feel as if the school doesn't trust them by not letting them bring there phones to school, they feel like children	Evidence	Adequate
81db57c34d05	326DEFF8D486	All of this can be resolved if you let the students bring there phones to school and have them off and not use them, and letting them use them in there free time	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a76716de0290	327AAC23CF5D	On my Opinion i think is a good way to the student that they can take classes on online or on video chat is a good way to do it	Position	Adequate
cdcf1d9c4fa5	327AAC23CF5D	some students sometimes some of then they live so far of the school so they dont have other way to educate they self and i think is a good communication to learn.	Claim	Adequate
337a73733dd2	327AAC23CF5D	Is a good benefit because is a easy way to do it, easy and fast and is good too because sometimes some days is snowing and when is snowing all school are closed	Claim	Adequate
e2275cc02fa5	327AAC23CF5D	And they close the school because the students can not trasportate to the like that because the streets are freeze and really complicate to transport to the school.	Evidence	Adequate
a6cb9a279192	327AAC23CF5D	If i have to take classes on online or video chat i will because more easy for me and is not difficult to learn on online or video chat	Claim	Adequate
25bcececc433	327AAC23CF5D	And because i can have more free time i can do more things and i can have a job.	Claim	Adequate
352da6199b8b	327AAC23CF5D	And think too for some student is not good because they dont have the opportunity to have a computer t do they classes online or they dont have internet is difficult for them.	Evidence	Adequate
e4b26d927ee2	327AAC23CF5D	Is a good option online classes but not for all students some of them are benefit and some of them dot.	Claim	Adequate
5fe4601e39fb	327AAC23CF5D	Only classes are a good reason to use because is a good way to cominitate in a long distance	Claim	Ineffective
385f6e33aaa6	327AAC23CF5D	but Free online schools, have to be free all schools online for all students they dont have to pay nothing.	Evidence	Ineffective
ced3a46bb369	327AAC23CF5D	The time if they take online classes they they go not miss nothing because they can star when they want.	Claim	Adequate
a721fbe31399	327AAC23CF5D	On my oponion is a goog way to do it.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
b1158744408c	329C6644B488	I personally think that by you changing the school policy it would make it hard for all the people that enjoy sports with a "C" average to even enjoy the activities . I believe that you should not change the school policy because the most kids that enjoy playing academic sports such as Basketball, Track , Cheerleading, Football, soccer ,etc. they wouldn't get a chance to play because the new rule you trying to enforce . I think sports isn't just for everyone with a " B" average it should be for everyone that would like to play as long as the have a good grade point average.	Lead	Adequate
7da555ba070e	329C6644B488	As far as the new policy goes I disagree because i feel everybody should be able to participate in activities	Position	Effective
c32627eeddb3	329C6644B488	This is their time to represent with good character and attitude and also have fun and enjoy their time at school . Instead of not being able to play for having a "C" grade point average	Evidence	Ineffective
6a1acb4e87f7	329C6644B488	They have shown effort and that is all that is required is that all students show effort	Claim	Adequate
49ff665fdab3	329C6644B488	I feel as though it helps to keep the students motivated and on the right path	Claim	Adequate
02876d5067c3	329C6644B488	knowing they have a reward to look forward to as the go on the field or the track or court. This keep their confidence goes up and the are more energetic to learn and be ready to work and other thing	Evidence	Adequate
0be002d8d5fc	329C6644B488	not all people have a passion for the same thing and not all students can keep a "B" average while working or while playing a sport	Claim	Adequate
e38af873e5d4	329C6644B488	i believe we should keep our current policy and the both "B &C" average students play sports as well as the others .	Concluding Statement	Adequate
8b3bc04406a6	32B2D5592E1D	This teens manual I talk to talk about expectation. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.	Lead	Adequate
68d810e68433	32B2D5592E1D	The first I ready to talk about some expectation.	Claim	Adequate
31fe31e53e2c	32B2D5592E1D	That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home,	Position	Adequate
4192ee9319b0	32B2D5592E1D	for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. Other example, regularity students nope have the opportunity go to the schools because the students things they not equality or things he/her can't do anythings to learning. I support the way to some teachers or one person is working to schools or some people have permission to teacher to go the house the person nope lost any classes they provide.	Evidence	Adequate
a81df8dff145	32B2D5592E1D	The another reason, Responsability,	Claim	Adequate
037513b6ae8e	32B2D5592E1D	for example, the place where I born people need to walk a lot distance to go learning and graduation some teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. Other example, some time the people nope have transport or some people not have money to pay the transport to go schools. To graduate or learning more you do a lot things to graduate, however, if you put you responsibility you can do a lot or things to learning. Always the people is intelligent to great in school they can obtain beneficial scholarship to helping you and the family.	Evidence	Adequate
b5d290957c96	32B2D5592E1D	Reason of this teens.	Claim	Ineffective
68831886f01d	32B2D5592E1D	People take classes the way online, some examples, a lot people taking that's way because some people are elder; but they things is better to graduate because he/she work and others things. Some people things that's is more better for then I things that's is great to do both side. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Always one person in class is coming four or less days to schools the attends is so bad students things is better go to work that's why a lot students take that's route. Some students don't matter anythings about the school, however, students particularity not a lot both some person things bad.	Evidence	Ineffective
4b77ca53e96b	32B2D5592E1D	Next reason, offer to learning to night is better too,	Claim	Ineffective
c1e560353c82	32B2D5592E1D	for example, some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. A lot students take the opportunity to finish the school online. Person take that opportunity is because they have another weigh, for example, they go to work or stay in home to do nothing about his life.	Evidence	Adequate
472d7686b1f1	32B2D5592E1D	That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. The place where I born person walk a lot distance to learning and somethings to graduation some when teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. My options I take the position to learning or finish my high school online, because that's really great to explain another person your experience about to finish school online. Always the person things somethings they not have good ideas to his life or something similarity. Opportunity great things for the person have major action. Great take both ideas in this teens.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
b97117677267	32C41C1CBA06	I understand that you are considering two possible policies that have to do with using cell phones in school	Lead	Adequate
4268ac0bd591	32C41C1CBA06	I think that you should think of allowing students to bring phones to school and let them use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time.	Position	Effective
34c718e53f40	32C41C1CBA06	thirty percent of the population of children are getting in trouble in school because of the use of cell phones in school.	Evidence	Adequate
4938fdca3ef8	32C41C1CBA06	First of all, if students have cell phones then they will be tempted to use it and might get in trouble if they use it in class secretly because they are not allowed to use them in school	Claim	Effective
642e9b122383	32C41C1CBA06	. Lets say that students are in class and they feel the urge to text because they have not used the phone that day. They will want to use it in class but they will do it secretly so the teacher wont take it away. For example there was this kid in my class and while we were in the middle of the lesson he would take out the phone while the teacher had her back to us and start using it. If you put the policy that will let us use our cell phones in school during lunch periods and free time then we will have enough texting done so that we will not need to text anymore until school is finished or until their next free time.	Evidence	Effective
3358817c88cf	32C41C1CBA06	Second of all, if we were able to use our phones in lunch periods or free times then what will be the point of students getting in trouble all the time because of cell phones.	Claim	Effective
d4ebb39b81a5	32C41C1CBA06	Just think about it, if students aren't able to use their phones in school at all then they will use it no matter what the case is because they feel the urge to do it. They will feel the need to do it because either they receive text that will make them want to reply back or they become so obsessed with using them that they think that they have to use it.	Evidence	Effective
d0704e5912d1	32C41C1CBA06	Lastly, you wont have teachers complaining about their students not paying attention in class due to the fact that the students are always on their cell phones. Most teachers have to stop the lesson because they have to waste their time taking students cell phones away.	Evidence	Effective
0b4f01aef31d	32C41C1CBA06	If you put the policy that students can use their phones at free times and lunch periods then teachers wont be interrupted anymore and will just have to worry about teaching the students about what they have to learn to pass to the next grade.	Claim	Effective
92720b1c6289	32C41C1CBA06	Finally, that is why it would be a great idea to put the policy that will let the students use their cell phones at free times and lunch periods.	Concluding Statement	Effective
f1bd30295c56	32C41C1CBA06	I mean sure if students aren't allowed to use their phone at all because of school rules then they might be willing to not use it because they wouldn't want it taken away.	Counterclaim	Adequate
ad5f8d4bb183	32C41C1CBA06	But just think about the amount of students that will be able to pay attention in class because they won't need to use their phone.	Rebuttal	Adequate
274ee48b95fb	32C41C1CBA06	I hope you take my letter to consideration and put a policy that will allow students to use their phones freely during free times and lunch periods.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
95ca3e7f2065	32D0A06A0A23	Principal such not do this become most students have c' s in there class	Position	Adequate
6d806811424a	32D0A06A0A23	what happen if you were that student that want to play a sport. Most kid will not be happy if you did this.	Claim	Adequate
fb4bff1fd12d	32D0A06A0A23	The kid will get there grade up when they can not do it. Your school will win against other school in the united states. your school be know as the best sport teams.	Evidence	Ineffective
45dab5d389af	32D0A06A0A23	other activities help students in class room. same activities are good for the students in different class room	Claim	Adequate
f6f71e217f14	32D0A06A0A23	same other students came from other place for this activities. same kid will leave there families to get this education. those kid go back after there education is finish to help there family.	Evidence	Ineffective
fbfa58998bcd	32D0A06A0A23	same love playing sport like basketball,soccer,baseball,and other sports they have only c' s grade. students that love sport they will do whatever to be in that sport	Claim	Adequate
9d2818aca5c3	32D0A06A0A23	same of there grade are C' s and that all there grade in there class room. most kid have grades of a c' s they sould still be in sports or activities. the kid listen, pass test, do they homework just to be in a sport or activities.	Evidence	Ineffective
fa7c5d6ab9ac	32E3A5BDD0B2	I believe that we should not keep the Electoral College because i feel as if it would be easier for people to vote somore people would actually vote.	Position	Adequate
79d00e980196	32E3A5BDD0B2	I know the Electoral College was established by our fouding fathers, but it is time to tart with something new and for something new to be established. I would honestly choose the popular vote because it also puts a suspence on people about who will win. The Electoral College may be widely regrded as an anachronism but when we vote we do not vote for a presidential candidate we're actually voting for slate electors. The college does not have a democratic pedigree which is another reason why we should use popular vote.	Evidence	Adequate
48bafcc0936b	32E3A5BDD0B2	When i vote i like to know as soon as possible and i feel as if we had popular vote it would be faster to do. Opinoins may not be taken inconcideration but my opinion is strong that we should use popular vote i really feel like more people would come to vote if we used that. People may feel like the Electoarl College is too long of a process so they just say oh i dont have to go vote so im not going to. The Electoral College avoids elections but without them how would we know about our future president and how would we know whether or not the person would do a good job at running our country?	Evidence	Ineffective
9de32b48ff31	32E3A5BDD0B2	Overall i will stay with popular vote but if they choose not to do it that will not stop me from voting to choose who will run my country and do a good job at it! i know that whatever desicion is made was for the best intrest for our country.11	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7d5ed6771a8b	33008B95DE9C	I think that our president's should be chosen by popular vote	Position	Adequate
7bcb7c8bf302	33008B95DE9C	they have better chances of winning	Claim	Adequate
2ae155c49d2e	33008B95DE9C	they will know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States.	Claim	Adequate
3abaae47f1cc	33008B95DE9C	The president's have better chances of winning because they can have the most votes and wouldn't have to wait on the Electoral College.	Claim	Adequate
eab4c9bcef0b	33008B95DE9C	Such as paragraph 9 says, "Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." I think that was unfair because Al Gore could of been the president but instead he was not, after all the campaigning he did to get those voters to vote for him it ended up as a waste because the voting didn't get him anywhere. If I was a president I would be highly upset because I knew I could have a big chance of losing just because of the Electoral College.	Evidence	Adequate
eb27fb55fc6c	33008B95DE9C	What doesn't make any sense to me is that the voters are not voting for the president but are voting for a slate of electors.	Claim	Effective
600c9424a27f	33008B95DE9C	What's the whole point of voting then? People are out here voting for electors that they don't even know and most of the electors are people who not holding public office. In paragraph 13 it says, "During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad." To me they are cheating people out of their votes, people vote for the one that they think could make a change not just voting just to be voting.	Evidence	Adequate
4c85e30d7e16	33008B95DE9C	The president would know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States.	Claim	Adequate
9758efc74c5a	33008B95DE9C	The electoral college votes won't help them know who is really for them and who's not because if someone win over electoral votes there are going to be people out there mad about the fact that they had won. This will make people not want to vote at all because 9 times out of 10 the person they are voting for gone lose. The electoral college just makes it difficult for the people that are running for president.	Evidence	Adequate
0e452fe34f5d	33008B95DE9C	I'm not saying that it should be easy to just become something big, but if you worked hard enough I think that you should be honored enough to become president through popular votes.	Claim	Adequate
a7d2e1b578a5	33008B95DE9C	This will make the incoming president feel appreciated for all the hard work they did to recieve all these votes. They will know that what they are trying to set forward is good for some people and not just for them. Such as paragraph 12 says, "Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote." What would happen then? That's why you should just give it to the person with the most votes because they deserve it.	Evidence	Ineffective
4026c04798f5	33008B95DE9C	I hope what I have really proved my argument that we should change the way a president is chosen so it can be fair to everyone. I think this will make the incoming president feel confident in himself to make this happen.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
82a658005c72	33475A71956C	Dear, Principal I think students at our school should be required to do community service. There are many reasons they should do community service.	Position	Adequate
76446efef0ec	33475A71956C	One of the reasons is that all the students should be involved in the community	Claim	Adequate
01a0b07d04fa	33475A71956C	Another reason is so that instead of the students going out and doing drugs and hurting the community they could help the community.	Claim	Adequate
88cc2c70ece6	33475A71956C	The only reason that people get bored in school is because they don't think that they are helping there future in school because they don't feel involved. But if they are required to do community service they would feel involved and it would help there future.	Evidence	Adequate
87106df84d38	33475A71956C	If the students volunteered at a elementary school it won't just help the volunteer it would also help the elementary student. If we help the elementary student it would not just help his future but ours to.	Evidence	Adequate
afeee6cc6dc7	33475A71956C	Here at our school it would be great to have to require community service it wont just help us but it would also help our future.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
cc3773fabd15	336787F2B202	Dear senatoris it posible for you to change the electoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the united states because its better.	Position	Adequate
d24e1b1f7b3d	336787F2B202	Acording to source one, the electoral college consists of 538 electors"."A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president". Thats alot of votes that electoral college needs.	Evidence	Ineffective
3939452253ee	336787F2B202	In source two it says "over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now".	Claim	Adequate
367b6ea04880	336787F2B202	More people prefer the direct vote because under the electoral college system voters vote for for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. acording to the article in reason one."In 2012 obama received 61.7 persent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romeny. because almost all states award electoral college votes on a winner- takes-all basis".	Evidence	Adequate
34f5e4b002c9	336787F2B202	for example in reaosn five "nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in the electoral college(301 and 370 electoral votes,respectively).alot of people say that electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candident. people that are in presidental elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a singel vote may decide an election.	Evidence	Ineffective
54ca1a46f1c0	339048408CDE	No I think that the Electoral College does not work,	Position	Adequate

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Its easy to do because you don't have to count them up yourself.

Claim

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I facts that these four guys even like it (Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole). Do you know over 60% of voters would prefer voteing direct election

Evidence

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We need more people to vote the more voters the better it will look,we don't need to beat aound the tree. This make people feel better to vote then doing it another way.

Claim

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The only con of doing this is we don't know who did it. You want think that really matter but it does because some can cheat for somebody.

Counterclaim

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The state legislatures been picking electors since 1960. In Kennedy days when he was running he got cheated out his vote,so he lost

Evidence

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but they done fixed all that things going well.

Rebuttal

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This is five reasons the keep the method of voting like that

Claim

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#1 fact there is a certainty of outcome by that i mean it show the popular votes. In 2012 Obama received 61.7% vote and Romney popualr vote was 51.3%.#2 is he/she have to be everybody president. He/she can't play sides like her cant just do the most for the south havt to be fair fot all of them.#3 swing states by sayig that the winner-take-all. So whoever win they take it all the awarding and everything else.#4 big states with big states the elsctoral collegethe balance all it out by the popualr votes. So it compare as a small states so u bout say its even. Last #5 it can stop and avoid run-offs when Nixon and Clinton was running it was a tied at 43%.

Evidence

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So do you understand where i'm coming from with this. So keep it easy just let the electoral college stay around.

Concluding Statement

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Most of the teenagers use there phones half of there life, Reconsidering the school's cell phone policy is a great idea, for many reason and some of the reasons are these

Lead

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Even though you say not to bring cell phones to school students still do it , some of the students need to bring there phones to school to communicate with there parents telling them that they're at school.

Claim

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Other students need there phones incase of an emergency, and there parents need to contact there kids or the parents need to be contacted, the school can use there phones.

Evidence

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It is a great idea letting the students use there phones during lunch or free periods that gives the students a feeling of trust from the school.

Position

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Not allowing students to use there phones at all

Counterclaim

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is not really going to help.

Rebuttal

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The students will find a way to bring there phones to school and use them while the teachers are not looking. Most of the students are already doing it, why you think putting a new policy is going to help the school it really is not, but by letting the students bring there phones in school and giving them time to use them is going to let the students know that the school trusts them, that the school doesn't think of them as children but as young and responsible adults

Evidence

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To change the policy you have to look at the problem is booth ways in the mind of a teacher and in the mind of a student.

Claim

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Some of the teachers may think by bringing a phone to school is a sign of not having respect

Counterclaim

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but it really isn't students don't mean to be rude.

Rebuttal

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Sometimes there parents even ask them to bring there phones, other times the students want to bring there phones. The students in the other side feel as if the school doesn't trust them by not letting them bring there phones to school, they feel like children

Evidence

Adequate

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All of this can be resolved if you let the students bring there phones to school and have them off and not use them, and letting them use them in there free time

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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On my Opinion i think is a good way to the student that they can take classes on online or on video chat is a good way to do it

Position

Adequate

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some students sometimes some of then they live so far of the school so they dont have other way to educate they self and i think is a good communication to learn.

Claim

Adequate

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Is a good benefit because is a easy way to do it, easy and fast and is good too because sometimes some days is snowing and when is snowing all school are closed

Claim

Adequate

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And they close the school because the students can not trasportate to the like that because the streets are freeze and really complicate to transport to the school.

Evidence

Adequate

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If i have to take classes on online or video chat i will because more easy for me and is not difficult to learn on online or video chat

Claim

Adequate

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And because i can have more free time i can do more things and i can have a job.

Claim

Adequate

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And think too for some student is not good because they dont have the opportunity to have a computer t do they classes online or they dont have internet is difficult for them.

Evidence

Adequate

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Is a good option online classes but not for all students some of them are benefit and some of them dot.

Claim

Adequate

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Only classes are a good reason to use because is a good way to cominitate in a long distance

Claim

Ineffective

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but Free online schools, have to be free all schools online for all students they dont have to pay nothing.

Evidence

Ineffective

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The time if they take online classes they they go not miss nothing because they can star when they want.

Claim

Adequate

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On my oponion is a goog way to do it.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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I personally think that by you changing the school policy it would make it hard for all the people that enjoy sports with a "C" average to even enjoy the activities . I believe that you should not change the school policy because the most kids that enjoy playing academic sports such as Basketball, Track , Cheerleading, Football, soccer ,etc. they wouldn't get a chance to play because the new rule you trying to enforce . I think sports isn't just for everyone with a " B" average it should be for everyone that would like to play as long as the have a good grade point average.

Lead

Adequate

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As far as the new policy goes I disagree because i feel everybody should be able to participate in activities

Position

Effective

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This is their time to represent with good character and attitude and also have fun and enjoy their time at school . Instead of not being able to play for having a "C" grade point average

Evidence

Ineffective

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They have shown effort and that is all that is required is that all students show effort

Claim

Adequate

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I feel as though it helps to keep the students motivated and on the right path

Claim

Adequate

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knowing they have a reward to look forward to as the go on the field or the track or court. This keep their confidence goes up and the are more energetic to learn and be ready to work and other thing

Evidence

Adequate

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not all people have a passion for the same thing and not all students can keep a "B" average while working or while playing a sport

Claim

Adequate

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i believe we should keep our current policy and the both "B &C" average students play sports as well as the others .

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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This teens manual I talk to talk about expectation. Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.

Lead

Adequate

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The first I ready to talk about some expectation.

Claim

Adequate

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That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home,

Position

Adequate

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for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. Other example, regularity students nope have the opportunity go to the schools because the students things they not equality or things he/her can't do anythings to learning. I support the way to some teachers or one person is working to schools or some people have permission to teacher to go the house the person nope lost any classes they provide.

Evidence

Adequate

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The another reason, Responsability,

Claim

Adequate

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for example, the place where I born people need to walk a lot distance to go learning and graduation some teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. Other example, some time the people nope have transport or some people not have money to pay the transport to go schools. To graduate or learning more you do a lot things to graduate, however, if you put you responsibility you can do a lot or things to learning. Always the people is intelligent to great in school they can obtain beneficial scholarship to helping you and the family.

Evidence

Adequate

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Reason of this teens.

Claim

Ineffective

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People take classes the way online, some examples, a lot people taking that's way because some people are elder; but they things is better to graduate because he/she work and others things. Some people things that's is more better for then I things that's is great to do both side. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Always one person in class is coming four or less days to schools the attends is so bad students things is better go to work that's why a lot students take that's route. Some students don't matter anythings about the school, however, students particularity not a lot both some person things bad.

Evidence

Ineffective

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Next reason, offer to learning to night is better too,

Claim

Ineffective

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for example, some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. A lot students take the opportunity to finish the school online. Person take that opportunity is because they have another weigh, for example, they go to work or stay in home to do nothing about his life.

Evidence

Adequate

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That's great to some students learning option to take some class in home, for example, some people do others things to help in home one example is he/her work in some place to help his family. The place where I born person walk a lot distance to learning and somethings to graduation some when teachers sometime they go to the house where you live to teachers somethings to you. People can helps another person or example some reason why he/her taking that's journey to graduate. Some people things that is better option too, however, not a lot person have some opportunity to attend classes in home in the morning or late. My options I take the position to learning or finish my high school online, because that's really great to explain another person your experience about to finish school online. Always the person things somethings they not have good ideas to his life or something similarity. Opportunity great things for the person have major action. Great take both ideas in this teens.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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I understand that you are considering two possible policies that have to do with using cell phones in school

Lead

Adequate

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I think that you should think of allowing students to bring phones to school and let them use them during lunch periods and other free times, as long as the phones are turned off during class time.

Position

Effective

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thirty percent of the population of children are getting in trouble in school because of the use of cell phones in school.

Evidence

Adequate

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First of all, if students have cell phones then they will be tempted to use it and might get in trouble if they use it in class secretly because they are not allowed to use them in school

Claim

Effective

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. Lets say that students are in class and they feel the urge to text because they have not used the phone that day. They will want to use it in class but they will do it secretly so the teacher wont take it away. For example there was this kid in my class and while we were in the middle of the lesson he would take out the phone while the teacher had her back to us and start using it. If you put the policy that will let us use our cell phones in school during lunch periods and free time then we will have enough texting done so that we will not need to text anymore until school is finished or until their next free time.

Evidence

Effective

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Second of all, if we were able to use our phones in lunch periods or free times then what will be the point of students getting in trouble all the time because of cell phones.

Claim

Effective

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32C41C1CBA06

Just think about it, if students aren't able to use their phones in school at all then they will use it no matter what the case is because they feel the urge to do it. They will feel the need to do it because either they receive text that will make them want to reply back or they become so obsessed with using them that they think that they have to use it.

Evidence

Effective

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Lastly, you wont have teachers complaining about their students not paying attention in class due to the fact that the students are always on their cell phones. Most teachers have to stop the lesson because they have to waste their time taking students cell phones away.

Evidence

Effective

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If you put the policy that students can use their phones at free times and lunch periods then teachers wont be interrupted anymore and will just have to worry about teaching the students about what they have to learn to pass to the next grade.

Claim

Effective

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Finally, that is why it would be a great idea to put the policy that will let the students use their cell phones at free times and lunch periods.

Concluding Statement

Effective

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I mean sure if students aren't allowed to use their phone at all because of school rules then they might be willing to not use it because they wouldn't want it taken away.

Counterclaim

Adequate

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But just think about the amount of students that will be able to pay attention in class because they won't need to use their phone.

Rebuttal

Adequate

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I hope you take my letter to consideration and put a policy that will allow students to use their phones freely during free times and lunch periods.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Principal such not do this become most students have c' s in there class

Position

Adequate

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what happen if you were that student that want to play a sport. Most kid will not be happy if you did this.

Claim

Adequate

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The kid will get there grade up when they can not do it. Your school will win against other school in the united states. your school be know as the best sport teams.

Evidence

Ineffective

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other activities help students in class room. same activities are good for the students in different class room

Claim

Adequate

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same other students came from other place for this activities. same kid will leave there families to get this education. those kid go back after there education is finish to help there family.

Evidence

Ineffective

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same love playing sport like basketball,soccer,baseball,and other sports they have only c' s grade. students that love sport they will do whatever to be in that sport

Claim

Adequate

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32D0A06A0A23

same of there grade are C' s and that all there grade in there class room. most kid have grades of a c' s they sould still be in sports or activities. the kid listen, pass test, do they homework just to be in a sport or activities.

Evidence

Ineffective

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I believe that we should not keep the Electoral College because i feel as if it would be easier for people to vote somore people would actually vote.

Position

Adequate

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I know the Electoral College was established by our fouding fathers, but it is time to tart with something new and for something new to be established. I would honestly choose the popular vote because it also puts a suspence on people about who will win. The Electoral College may be widely regrded as an anachronism but when we vote we do not vote for a presidential candidate we're actually voting for slate electors. The college does not have a democratic pedigree which is another reason why we should use popular vote.

Evidence

Adequate

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When i vote i like to know as soon as possible and i feel as if we had popular vote it would be faster to do. Opinoins may not be taken inconcideration but my opinion is strong that we should use popular vote i really feel like more people would come to vote if we used that. People may feel like the Electoarl College is too long of a process so they just say oh i dont have to go vote so im not going to. The Electoral College avoids elections but without them how would we know about our future president and how would we know whether or not the person would do a good job at running our country?

Evidence

Ineffective

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Overall i will stay with popular vote but if they choose not to do it that will not stop me from voting to choose who will run my country and do a good job at it! i know that whatever desicion is made was for the best intrest for our country.11

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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I think that our president's should be chosen by popular vote

Position

Adequate

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they have better chances of winning

Claim

Adequate

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they will know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States.

Claim

Adequate

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The president's have better chances of winning because they can have the most votes and wouldn't have to wait on the Electoral College.

Claim

Adequate

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Such as paragraph 9 says, "Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." I think that was unfair because Al Gore could of been the president but instead he was not, after all the campaigning he did to get those voters to vote for him it ended up as a waste because the voting didn't get him anywhere. If I was a president I would be highly upset because I knew I could have a big chance of losing just because of the Electoral College.

Evidence

Adequate

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What doesn't make any sense to me is that the voters are not voting for the president but are voting for a slate of electors.

Claim

Effective

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What's the whole point of voting then? People are out here voting for electors that they don't even know and most of the electors are people who not holding public office. In paragraph 13 it says, "During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad." To me they are cheating people out of their votes, people vote for the one that they think could make a change not just voting just to be voting.

Evidence

Adequate

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The president would know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States.

Claim

Adequate

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The electoral college votes won't help them know who is really for them and who's not because if someone win over electoral votes there are going to be people out there mad about the fact that they had won. This will make people not want to vote at all because 9 times out of 10 the person they are voting for gone lose. The electoral college just makes it difficult for the people that are running for president.

Evidence

Adequate

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I'm not saying that it should be easy to just become something big, but if you worked hard enough I think that you should be honored enough to become president through popular votes.

Claim

Adequate

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This will make the incoming president feel appreciated for all the hard work they did to recieve all these votes. They will know that what they are trying to set forward is good for some people and not just for them. Such as paragraph 12 says, "Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote." What would happen then? That's why you should just give it to the person with the most votes because they deserve it.

Evidence

Ineffective

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I hope what I have really proved my argument that we should change the way a president is chosen so it can be fair to everyone. I think this will make the incoming president feel confident in himself to make this happen.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Dear, Principal I think students at our school should be required to do community service. There are many reasons they should do community service.

Position

Adequate

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One of the reasons is that all the students should be involved in the community

Claim

Adequate

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Another reason is so that instead of the students going out and doing drugs and hurting the community they could help the community.

Claim

Adequate

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The only reason that people get bored in school is because they don't think that they are helping there future in school because they don't feel involved. But if they are required to do community service they would feel involved and it would help there future.

Evidence

Adequate

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If the students volunteered at a elementary school it won't just help the volunteer it would also help the elementary student. If we help the elementary student it would not just help his future but ours to.

Evidence

Adequate

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Here at our school it would be great to have to require community service it wont just help us but it would also help our future.

Concluding Statement

Ineffective

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Dear senatoris it posible for you to change the electoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the united states because its better.

Position

Adequate

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Acording to source one, the electoral college consists of 538 electors"."A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president". Thats alot of votes that electoral college needs.

Evidence

Ineffective

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In source two it says "over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now".

Claim

Adequate

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More people prefer the direct vote because under the electoral college system voters vote for for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. acording to the article in reason one."In 2012 obama received 61.7 persent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romeny. because almost all states award electoral college votes on a winner- takes-all basis".

Evidence

Adequate

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for example in reaosn five "nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in the electoral college(301 and 370 electoral votes,respectively).alot of people say that electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candident. people that are in presidental elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a singel vote may decide an election.

Evidence

Ineffective

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No I think that the Electoral College does not work,

Position

Adequate