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df29aebf9b87	352CEEDDF08C	That is the reasoning behind the fact that I agree with both sides here	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
012804dd845a	3544D0B1BCDB	I am writing you in concern of the new policy which you have been considering with the school board. In case you have forgotten, and I mean so in the utmost respect, it is just that people have a tendency to forget things, the new policy which has been suggested is to change school policy so that students are not allowed to participate in sports or other activities unless they have a B grade average.	Lead	Effective
0213e105a8c9	3544D0B1BCDB	In my opinion, this change is immensely unfair to the student body, will cause disarray among the different clubs, and will hurt the school much more than it will aid the school. My understanding is that you are considering this policy change so that students will work harder to retain a B average and so the student body will improve, however, you must also consider the numerous possible negative consequences.	Position	Effective
9cbb5f640412	3544D0B1BCDB	First however, I believe some background knowledge is required. As you know already, a C grade average is considered average in most of our country, where as a B or an A average are considered above average, and outstanding, respectively. Also, as you may know already, most of the student body retains a C average. Your change in school policy would mean that everybody who is currently participating in school activities would be kicked out of them until new term grades come in at which point they may only hope that they did well enough to continue their sport. Our competitive would all fail do to the almost complete rooting of the students. Now this may only last a term, but who knows how long it might take to raise your grade average by a whole letter? You obviously went to school when you were a child, and I assume you enjoyed the extra curricular clubs which your school had to offer. Now imagine this. Imagine that you learned that you had to maintain an A or B average to continue in these sports. Now this was one of the years where you didn't do so well, and therefore got a C average. Wouldn't such a thing be detrimental to you? It would cause you to be kicked out of every activity which you participated in unless you managed to raise your grade! That is one the main points I am putting forth.	Evidence	Effective
f304562cfa82	3544D0B1BCDB	Such a change is not fair to the student body because the student body usually only maintains a C average!	Claim	Effective
88d852d7e180	3544D0B1BCDB	people's grades are not always constant.	Claim	Effective
d8bc0fe1bd19	3544D0B1BCDB	A student may get straight As one term but in the next term may get straight Cs. That would mean the activities would have an inconsistent flow of students for every term. The students who had improved their average would join their respective clubs but the students who had not would be forced to withdraw from their activities. The sports teams would fail because every player they got with the new term would not be as practised as the ones which they had from the old term. And what if their all-star line-up could not retain the necessary grade point average? Then victory for our sports teams would almost be impossible. I do not doubt the skills of the students within our school, but skill given and skill learned are to different things to consider. A person who is not great at basketball but who goes to every practice and tries as hard as he can at home might as well match a natural-born super star at basketball who doesn't practice due to arrogance. Which also brings me back to how such a change would be unfair.	Evidence	Effective
a237f64f5292	3544D0B1BCDB	A person who might spend a huge amount of time practicing their sport but who was not the best academic wise would find themselves in an incredibly bad spot. They would not be allowed to participate in the sport which they loved until they academically improved.	Evidence	Adequate
7a33b6ab16b8	3544D0B1BCDB	And this change might cause them to much stress to be able to improve.	Claim	Effective
35831da4fd34	3544D0B1BCDB	Students would easily find themselves in depression when they are unable to retain the correct grade average and such a thing would never be good for a school. Also people would have to deal with the stress of knowing that if they do not do well enough in school, they will not be able to participate in the things which they love. Such a thing is almost the same as bribing students to do well in school. Because they do well enough they're allowed to play a sport or join a club but if they don't they cannot do anything extra-curricular.	Evidence	Effective
4548d54f0740	3544D0B1BCDB	this would thoroughly disorganise after-school help due to the fact that after-school help falls under the category an "other activity." Students who needed help would not be able to get it through conventional methods within school.	Claim	Effective
5380501e632b	3544D0B1BCDB	And what about the special education children or the less intelligent students who struggle just to pass? What about the people who can only get a C if they try their hardest? They would find themselves isolated, neither able to do well in school, nor able to do well in sports or other activities because they wouldn't be allowed to participate in them. Though I may be talking extremes, such a thing would be likely to increase the possibility that one of those misfortunate students would commit suicide! And a life is a life no matter how that person does in academics.	Evidence	Effective
88301bb07ebb	3544D0B1BCDB	Certainly you cannot think that such a change would be a good thing for the school! All it would bring is chaos and stress and the amount of people who improve would also find themselves always under pressure, always struggling to be above average. There are various things that could go wrong under such a monumental change. It would certainly be unfair to the students, the activities would be very disorganized (some of them might even be forced to close due to lack of participants), and it would be unhealthy for all your students.	Concluding Statement	Effective
20b929ddef5f	3583374DF150	Electoral voting is a voting system that is trash. No one likes it, its not fair for the people to have somone else (The Electors) vote for them. How do we have freedom of speech if were not the one's who are voting? Electoral votes are not what we need if we the people what a good president.	Lead	Adequate
43477c4b573f	3583374DF150	The majority of the popular vote in the united states should determine who sits in the White House	Position	Adequate
d62e196a6c86	3583374DF150	Abolishing the Electoral College is the best thing the the United States could do. Under the Electoral Cololege system, we the voters (people) vote not for our president but for a slate of electors that hopefully elect the president you want.	Claim	Adequate
4c144d089e35	3583374DF150	We can not controll who the elects vote for, plus we somtimes dont know the electors we are voting for. If the people of the state of Florida wants to have a Republican president but the elector wants a Democratic president then most likely thats who he is going to vote for is the Democratic candidate.	Evidence	Adequate
ac176a652ea4	3583374DF150	The popular vote is fair and is more likely to get sucessful persidents that people will like	Claim	Adequate
ec6b75982199	3583374DF150	It's like " American Idole " you have to perform good, you have to sound good, and u have to be sucessful. You have to get two out of the three judges to say yes in order for you to go to Hollywood. Same thing with the popular vote system, u have to get two-thirds of the popular vote in order to be persident. It's alot better than to worry about who your elector is going to vote for, all they care about (sadly) is the money. We look beyond the money and look at things like: Food, Education, Gas, Roads, Highways, Trade, Money,etc...	Evidence	Ineffective
844591cade38	3583374DF150	Lets make a differnce as a country and not let people do things for us because thats takeing our freedom away. Lets get rid of the dumb electoral system and lets use the popular vote becasue thats when your voice is herd and your vote counts.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
3ce6bfd05589	35DE2CC6BBD9	I think it is a good idea for the student's to be in community service.	Position	Adequate
c33bb9f67948	35DE2CC6BBD9	It will help the environment so the earth can be healthy.	Claim	Adequate
ead8966d3a0d	35DE2CC6BBD9	I knew a friend that was in community service in 2009 he now lives in Rosemont, Illinois he picked up trash all over were he lives. But some of the students don't want to do something like this to prevent gases of pollution on earth.	Evidence	Adequate
c5783ef6d7e3	35DE2CC6BBD9	I have been trying to make people under stand what it mean's to help. They don't want to help because they just want to litter throw can's not recycle or any thing to help	Evidence	Adequate
ea57b2f8dc64	35DE2CC6BBD9	What I need are some people that care to do some of the community service	Claim	Adequate
b27f13725cf6	35DE2CC6BBD9	Take Disney's friend for change they are helping kid's unpollute there town's or cities.	Evidence	Adequate
096753b4c10f	35DE2CC6BBD9	What we really need are some special people to help for this community service one's that care for there planet.	Claim	Adequate
06d391da1bea	35DE2CC6BBD9	these crises on our planet need to stop all what they have done. i have received a letter from my friend that moved to Illinois has cleaned up the whole city with some help in just 1 month. If you know any one who can help with this call.	Evidence	Adequate
255389f5e00f	35DE2CC6BBD9	This is my idea what we should do to help our community.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
a3543e94178b	360F4E7D2631	I strongly believe that community service is something good,	Lead	Ineffective
df2e08aedadf	360F4E7D2631	that all the students should be willing to perform community service in some way.	Position	Adequate
226f2ea729d3	360F4E7D2631	Community service teaches us many valuable things.	Claim	Adequate
23dd7cacb5d9	360F4E7D2631	And it also gives us the opportunity to aid others that need it.	Claim	Adequate
a0b9baa39376	360F4E7D2631	First, is a way of helping, and growing together as a community.	Claim	Adequate
d56faf369f3f	360F4E7D2631	we shouldn't expect someone else to do our job. We are the future of our community/country; and if we are growing up expecting we don't have to do anything, we will have very few chances of being successful.	Evidence	Adequate
e5194bfedb24	360F4E7D2631	Like if we like math, or are good at it, we could tutor those who need more help. Or if we are interested in justice, or working for peace, we could volunteer at places that do that kind of work.	Evidence	Adequate
d7503b8027df	360F4E7D2631	Furthermore, community service doesn't have to be boring, we could take our friends, or siblings. Then they will learn from our example, we will have company, and our virtues will spread throughout our community.	Evidence	Ineffective
41ce7423b8ab	360F4E7D2631	Finding ways to perform community service is very easy; just talk to your parents, neighbors, classmates, etc. Something else is that it doesn't have to be the biggest thing ever. Small actions will lead to great achievements. Doing small actions every day, sometimes without even planning, will help our community grow in many ways.	Evidence	Adequate
2bf6befd28ee	360F4E7D2631	When we need help we will know that our neighbor or classmate will be there to help us and will take care of us. When we are older, the younger kids we showed all those virtues, will keep passing them to their family, friends. Soon we will see all the great things we achieved.	Evidence	Adequate
c4d5eef6f862	360F4E7D2631	Please help us develop a great community, learn great things, and give us different	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
f6a9182ddb50	36403757FA10	I personally feel that the electoral college is just plain unfair	Position	Adequate
47d35ee79352	36403757FA10	I don't think it's necessary to even have it at all because what's the point if the votes aren't equal for all states? it's a very irrational process.	Claim	Adequate
40c6cd544321	36403757FA10	It isn't right if a president wins the popular votes but doesn't win by electoral votes and it results in him/her not becoming president. If someone votes for a slate of electors and they end up not even voting for who they're "supposed" to be voting for then what's the purpose of electing them anyway? There is no purpose unless you want the other party to win which i highly doubt that. The electoral college affects the voting of states because if the majority of their state is republicans and they're democratic, there vote isn't really going to matter because majority wins. This process makes no sense to me.	Evidence	Adequate
0301e35023f8	36403757FA10	The amount of electoral votes that your state gets depends on your states population and not the size of it. I somewhat understand why they do this but at the same time it doesn't seem very fair.	Claim	Adequate
554b7f1a3284	36403757FA10	Yeah, i know life isn't fair but for something like this that has a possible way of being fair doesn't make sense not to be. Alaska with only 3 electoral votes should be able to have the same amount as california with 55 electoral votes. Since it isn't actually equal like that i feel that they should just choose who wins and becomes president by popular votes. This way would be a lot more fair because it wouldn't actually matter how many people lived in your state, it would just matter how many people voted for which canidate.	Evidence	Adequate
80306634c9ce	36403757FA10	Another reason electoral votes aren't right to me is because if a president wins the popular votes but not the electoral votes then it almost seems likes one of the types of votes is useful	Claim	Ineffective
88aac0a1c84a	36403757FA10	It seems like this because then he/she may not win and become president even though they won the popular votes. The canidates shouldn't have to rely on 2 different types of votes because obviously one isn't fair. I feel that in a situation like this having popular votes is just a watse of time because it seems that the electoral votes are what matter the most. Not having an equal amount of electoral votes for each state really defeats the purpose.	Evidence	Ineffective
da377dc20b85	36403757FA10	The voting is done by the party's nominee that then elects a slate of electors to vote for the canidate but the problem is you can't always trust that they will actually vote for the canidate that they're supposed to be voting for.	Claim	Adequate
4dff2b0675f2	36403757FA10	This isn't the only issue, sometimes the voters get confused and accidentally vote for the wrong canidate resulting in more votes for the opposing side. This is a another reason why i feel that the electoral college should be abolished for good.	Evidence	Adequate
f2d997daf6d7	36403757FA10	In conclusion, the electoral college is just really not needed in our goverment. It is equal for all states which affects the vote. Also the canidate doesn't win based on only popular votes, they must win they majority of the electoral votes. Lastly but definetly not least, the voting by the slate of electors isn't certain and isn't always accurate. These are some of the main reasons why i feel that the electoral college should be left in the past as an anachronism.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
7f66b18a5559	364FBA0A27EA	Driverless cars are another one of the world's technological marvels, that not only take away the prevalent nuisance of driving for long periods of time, but in terms of safety and efficiency, prevail.	Lead	Effective
89d0c6805adc	364FBA0A27EA	When flexibility increases,	Claim	Effective
e3cf223a3617	364FBA0A27EA	prices decrease	Claim	Effective
727f8ebc48a7	364FBA0A27EA	the safety of consumers is protected,	Claim	Effective
acfe4328b666	364FBA0A27EA	then there is no reason that semi-autonomous cars should not replace the commercial vehicles that we see today.	Position	Adequate
dd5331b8de0b	364FBA0A27EA	One of the key issues that consumers have today in terms of purchasing a vehicle is the fuel consumption. Sergey Brin, the cofounder of Google, provides evidence that suggests that these vehichles would use around half of the fuel that the vehicles today consume	Evidence	Adequate
0fd4bee485ac	364FBA0A27EA	. Not only that, but Brin continues to state that the flexibility is increased as well, surpassing that of a bus.	Claim	Effective
26900b60ffc4	364FBA0A27EA	Safety is also increased as a result of these vehicles.	Claim	Effective
1c4a304d3ec3	364FBA0A27EA	The fact that these vehicles are semi-autonomous and not completely autonomous enables a human driver to take control whenever they deem it necessary to do so. For example, Google's semi-autonomous creations are "not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways and when other complicated traffic issues arise." Sensors are what enable these vehicles to perform the tasks that astonish many to this day. Due to the fact that sensors have been used since the 1980s, vast improvements and tests have been conducted over the years to ensure that the safety of the consumer and those around he/she are preserved. The article even states that "Within 10 years, those sensors [from the 1980s] had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers." These vehicles allow for the potential decrease in drunk driving, which further emphasizes that safety is not only preserved with semi-autonomous cars, but is heavily increased.	Evidence	Effective
1744feab88c1	364FBA0A27EA	There is a common misconception that by implementing the production of these vehicles, drivers will "get bored of waiting for their turn to drive."	Counterclaim	Adequate
bffa821b367d	364FBA0A27EA	Although this is an issue that many psychologists are considering, some manufacturers are working to eliminate this issue.	Rebuttal	Adequate
8f5317e816a6	364FBA0A27EA	For example, the article suggests that there are a few car manufacturers that are hoping to rid of this anxiety by bringing in-car diplays and information systems that use heads-up displays. Not only is it a source of entertainment, but also an additional safety feature, which is also a major concern that is alleviated with semi-autonomous cars.	Evidence	Adequate
4ed0f04929bc	364FBA0A27EA	The fact that so many automobile companies, such as Tesla, BMW, Nissan, Mercedes-Benz, and Audi, are striving to integrate the idea of semi-autonomous vehicles into their production vehicles, provides even further assurance that the benefits undoubtedly outweigh the harms. Furthermore, this article explicitly states that, as a nation based on progression and safety, semi-autonomous vehicles are the means of achieving the road to a truly autonomous car, and a road to a dramatic increase in safety.	Concluding Statement	Effective
f9254699c214	3671DB5110C0	I think students who have less than a B average should be able to do sports, because doing sports teaches us students responsibility, and self discipline	Position	Effective
83da78ca7728	3671DB5110C0	It might not seem like it to you, but coming from a student who enjoys sports, I know how it makes most students act, and feel.	Evidence	Adequate
59afdc42ef5c	3671DB5110C0	I think you should at least give the students a chance to show you that they would be able to get their grade up so they could play on teams and show their pride for their school.	Claim	Adequate
835344700ed8	3671DB5110C0	I know I enjoy getting out there, and just playing what I want to play. It motivates me to do my homework, study for tests, focus more in class. That seems to be one of the problems why you don't want students doing sports, because you want them to focus more on their work, well, I'm not sure that would be the best idea.	Evidence	Adequate
2c71fe4d2cc6	3671DB5110C0	A lot of students find it irritating that they can't play because of their work, or grades, or something like that. And It makes them not want to do any other work. I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but I am just trying to let you know how the other students would probably feel about this.	Evidence	Adequate
8a7d4a43feff	3671DB5110C0	I just don't think it's fair that some students wouldn't be able to play because of a grade.	Claim	Adequate
cd0f06871ed3	3671DB5110C0	Yes, some students might not be as devoted as other students to get their work done	Counterclaim	Adequate
d4e9675a3b99	3671DB5110C0	definitely most students would think that if they can't play a sport then they better get their work done.	Rebuttal	Adequate
4ca281e399b2	3671DB5110C0	It's just depends on the kid, but I know most of us teenagers would definitely try for that spot on the team if we just got the chance!	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
9c6ec2b7eef2	36929B945E29	Do you believe in life on Mars? Well I don't and here is why. There is no evidence what so ever of life on Mars. What about the Face on Mars you ask? Well I was hopeing you would ask about that. You see that is what this essay is about. The Face on Mars.	Lead	Adequate
357768449822	36929B945E29	The Face on Mars is just a naturel land form. From 1976 to 2001 People have been taking pictures of the Face on Mars and every time they took a picture of the Face on Mars they got closer to it and as you look at the pictures you can see that the space in which the Face on Mars is located you can see that it is just a mesa that formed naturely on Mars.	Evidence	Adequate
71cb548db1fe	36929B945E29	So in conclusion the Face on Mars is just a naturel land form created by god when he made the universe.	Position	Adequate
31e883a3b888	36929B945E29	Oh! You are an atheast? Well then looks like we will have to have a nother conversation some time? Well until then, bye.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
5df739dac0e2	3697185C117D	When election day comes and you finally drop your vote in the ballet box after waiting in line for the past hour, you walk away knowing that you have helped the candidate of your choice to rise to the top of the voting pole. Oh how wrong you are. The United States works on a voting system called the Electoral College. "Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."	Lead	Effective
205238e53970	3697185C117D	This system has stood the test of time, however it has masked its flaws for long enough. "60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." (Plumer 9). The people have spoken,	Position	Effective
fb4c6d58d218	3697185C117D	In order to understand the flaws in the electoral college, you need to know what the electoral college is, and how it came to be. "The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress." (Office of the Federal Register 2). This system was created by the founding fathers as a compromise between the congressional vote and the popular vote. However there was a reason for this new, seperated voting system. During their time the founding fathers where among the most educated men in the country. Back then education was not standard and very few people could read or write. The founding fathers did not want uneducated citizens voting on the individual who would lead the country. So they created a system where the uneducated would vote for a group of educated men, who would in turn vote on a president. Thus the electoral college was born.	Evidence	Effective
0ef005c748c0	3697185C117D	The founding fathers reasons for forging this system where justified in their day and age. However the world has changed since then.	Claim	Effective
c14d2a4adf41	3697185C117D	Another large issue with the electoral college is its favoritism towards larger states. The United States was founded on federalism and democracy, giving power to the people instead of an over-arching central government ruling everything. So any policy that goes against our right to equal say in politics ought to be abbolished, right?	Claim	Effective
437cd82c3aa3	3697185C117D	The number of electors per state under the Electoral College is determined by the number of representatives the state has in congress. "... one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators..." (Office of the Federal Register 3). Since this system is based on population, bigger states get a emense priority over smaller states. "The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote , got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes." (Posner 21). This means that presidential candidates are going to focus on appealing to larger swing states that have more electoral votes, rather than smaller ones who only provide a few votes. That is not fair now is it? No matter how small a state may be its population still consists of United States' citizens, and they deserve just as much say as a bigger state. After all, that is the concept our country was founded on, equality and freedom.	Evidence	Effective
60f5d96199fd	3697185C117D	If the Electoral College does not seem like a flawed system now, allow me to open your eyes to one last variable in our little Electoral equation. The disaster factor. The disaster factor deals with the will of the people, and them doing anything to get what they want.	Claim	Effective
07ccbf91e58d	3697185C117D	"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that the popular vote for Kennedy would not actually gone to Kennedy.)" (Plumer 11). That kind of scenario could completely change a close call to a landslide victory! The 1960 election is not the only case of this either. It happened again when Hawaii sent two slates of electors to congress, and in other various cases electors did not vote for their designated candidate. Finally there is the case of the 2000 election, where Al Gore won the popular vote, but lost the Electoral College! If just one person decides to go against the grain, everything gets thrown off.	Evidence	Effective
30d9adac4396	3697185C117D	Case and point, the Electoral College is a flawed system. People are educated and can make a smart choice for a president, everyone deserves fair say in the political world, and people need to open their eyes to the corruption that the Electoral College allows for. It may have made sense back in the day of the founding fathers, but it is time to move on and adopt the popular vote system that the people have asked for.	Concluding Statement	Effective
439a5888d007	36D263A9ECC7	What Would Our Country Yet The World Be Like With Driverless Cars ? Having Driverless Cars Would Have Both Positive And Negative Aspects	Position	Ineffective
9b41ffc9b7ac	36D263A9ECC7	Driverless Cars Would Be Positive Aspects Due To The Fact That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis	Claim	Adequate
7c27f13038bf	36D263A9ECC7	They Offer Far More Flexibility Than A Bus Would	Claim	Adequate
3f0304569512	36D263A9ECC7	The Driverless Cars Can Not Navigate Work Zones Or Go Around Accidents Without A Drive	Claim	Adequate
68b9d87c6857	36D263A9ECC7	That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis ,	Claim	Adequate
4d4db479de4c	36D263A9ECC7	Is Because Who Wants To Keep Causing Global Warming By The Gases That Come Out Of Your Car ? In Order To Even Have Driverless Cars We Have To Have An Earth To Keep Them On . Global Warming Is Basically Over Heating Our Earth And Is Caused By Many Things Including The Gases That Come From Cars . Using Half The Fuel Of Today's Cars For A Far More Better Transportation Sounds Pretty Good To Me .	Evidence	Adequate
38a81179a89c	36D263A9ECC7	They Offer Far More Flexiblity Than A Bus	Claim	Adequate
5845676208f1	36D263A9ECC7	Is Because Buses Have Certain Routes And They Hold More Than One Person . I Assume That The Driverless Car Would Be A Mix Of A Bus And A Taxi Not Physically Though . Meaning It Would Pick You Up Wherever You Are Like A Bus And Taxi But It Would Drop You Off At An Exact Location Like A Taxi . Only Its A Far More Upadated Version Meaning Its Takes Half The gass We Use Not & Can Do & Go More Places Then Buses	Evidence	Ineffective
3923e6c1bb16	36D263A9ECC7	So If Your Riding In A Driverless Car It Doesnt Know Where Work Sites Would Be Causing Traffic Jams And Maybe Even Crashes . Everyone Wants To Know Whether Their Drive Home Will Be Safe Or Not . Because There Is No Way For You To Inform A Driverless Car That Work Zones Are Ahead If They Dont Have A Driver .	Evidence	Adequate
3127227b629e	36D263A9ECC7	A Driverless Car Is Not Able To Go Around Accidents Without A Driver	Claim	Adequate
64e3e8a88059	36D263A9ECC7	. This Means That The Driverless Car Would Either Do Three Things If Confronted By A Accident . It Would Either Cause A Big Traffic Jam , Cause Another Accident , Or Even Cause Angry Citizens . Everyone Knows An Angry Citize Is Not A Nice Citizen. Then If There Is Already A Traffic Jam Due To The First Accident And A Driverless Care Cant Get Around It , That Would Cause A Huge Traffic Jam .	Evidence	Adequate
55373c9bafbc	36D263A9ECC7	All In All Those Were My Reasons Why Driverless Cars Are Both Positive And Negative Aspectd . The Positive Aspects Would Be That It Uses Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis And It Offers far More Flexibility Than A Bus . The Negative Aspects Would Be That They Cant Go Around Work Zones Or Accidents Without A Driver .	Concluding Statement	Adequate
2c25fc7e70a2	37019C8C1ECD	The Electoral College has been here for many years. Over the past years many people think it is unfair to the voters. There are many conflicts that have risen about it. Without a doubt , the Electoral College is unfair and irrational to voters because they voters are basically voting for no reason. The president they want to vote for doesnt count and instead the votes of the Electoral College do , the electors shouldnt be the only people to vote just because they are qualified doesnt mean only their opinion and choice should be heard.	Lead	Adequate
4387e3f82b8a	37019C8C1ECD	a direct election would be much better	Position	Adequate
9d7ac8692c39	37019C8C1ECD	everyones votes count	Claim	Adequate

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That is the reasoning behind the fact that I agree with both sides here

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I am writing you in concern of the new policy which you have been considering with the school board. In case you have forgotten, and I mean so in the utmost respect, it is just that people have a tendency to forget things, the new policy which has been suggested is to change school policy so that students are not allowed to participate in sports or other activities unless they have a B grade average.

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In my opinion, this change is immensely unfair to the student body, will cause disarray among the different clubs, and will hurt the school much more than it will aid the school. My understanding is that you are considering this policy change so that students will work harder to retain a B average and so the student body will improve, however, you must also consider the numerous possible negative consequences.

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First however, I believe some background knowledge is required. As you know already, a C grade average is considered average in most of our country, where as a B or an A average are considered above average, and outstanding, respectively. Also, as you may know already, most of the student body retains a C average. Your change in school policy would mean that everybody who is currently participating in school activities would be kicked out of them until new term grades come in at which point they may only hope that they did well enough to continue their sport. Our competitive would all fail do to the almost complete rooting of the students. Now this may only last a term, but who knows how long it might take to raise your grade average by a whole letter? You obviously went to school when you were a child, and I assume you enjoyed the extra curricular clubs which your school had to offer. Now imagine this. Imagine that you learned that you had to maintain an A or B average to continue in these sports. Now this was one of the years where you didn't do so well, and therefore got a C average. Wouldn't such a thing be detrimental to you? It would cause you to be kicked out of every activity which you participated in unless you managed to raise your grade! That is one the main points I am putting forth.

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Such a change is not fair to the student body because the student body usually only maintains a C average!

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people's grades are not always constant.

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A student may get straight As one term but in the next term may get straight Cs. That would mean the activities would have an inconsistent flow of students for every term. The students who had improved their average would join their respective clubs but the students who had not would be forced to withdraw from their activities. The sports teams would fail because every player they got with the new term would not be as practised as the ones which they had from the old term. And what if their all-star line-up could not retain the necessary grade point average? Then victory for our sports teams would almost be impossible. I do not doubt the skills of the students within our school, but skill given and skill learned are to different things to consider. A person who is not great at basketball but who goes to every practice and tries as hard as he can at home might as well match a natural-born super star at basketball who doesn't practice due to arrogance. Which also brings me back to how such a change would be unfair.

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A person who might spend a huge amount of time practicing their sport but who was not the best academic wise would find themselves in an incredibly bad spot. They would not be allowed to participate in the sport which they loved until they academically improved.

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And this change might cause them to much stress to be able to improve.

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Students would easily find themselves in depression when they are unable to retain the correct grade average and such a thing would never be good for a school. Also people would have to deal with the stress of knowing that if they do not do well enough in school, they will not be able to participate in the things which they love. Such a thing is almost the same as bribing students to do well in school. Because they do well enough they're allowed to play a sport or join a club but if they don't they cannot do anything extra-curricular.

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this would thoroughly disorganise after-school help due to the fact that after-school help falls under the category an "other activity." Students who needed help would not be able to get it through conventional methods within school.

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And what about the special education children or the less intelligent students who struggle just to pass? What about the people who can only get a C if they try their hardest? They would find themselves isolated, neither able to do well in school, nor able to do well in sports or other activities because they wouldn't be allowed to participate in them. Though I may be talking extremes, such a thing would be likely to increase the possibility that one of those misfortunate students would commit suicide! And a life is a life no matter how that person does in academics.

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Certainly you cannot think that such a change would be a good thing for the school! All it would bring is chaos and stress and the amount of people who improve would also find themselves always under pressure, always struggling to be above average. There are various things that could go wrong under such a monumental change. It would certainly be unfair to the students, the activities would be very disorganized (some of them might even be forced to close due to lack of participants), and it would be unhealthy for all your students.

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Electoral voting is a voting system that is trash. No one likes it, its not fair for the people to have somone else (The Electors) vote for them. How do we have freedom of speech if were not the one's who are voting? Electoral votes are not what we need if we the people what a good president.

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The majority of the popular vote in the united states should determine who sits in the White House

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Abolishing the Electoral College is the best thing the the United States could do. Under the Electoral Cololege system, we the voters (people) vote not for our president but for a slate of electors that hopefully elect the president you want.

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We can not controll who the elects vote for, plus we somtimes dont know the electors we are voting for. If the people of the state of Florida wants to have a Republican president but the elector wants a Democratic president then most likely thats who he is going to vote for is the Democratic candidate.

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The popular vote is fair and is more likely to get sucessful persidents that people will like

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It's like " American Idole " you have to perform good, you have to sound good, and u have to be sucessful. You have to get two out of the three judges to say yes in order for you to go to Hollywood. Same thing with the popular vote system, u have to get two-thirds of the popular vote in order to be persident. It's alot better than to worry about who your elector is going to vote for, all they care about (sadly) is the money. We look beyond the money and look at things like: Food, Education, Gas, Roads, Highways, Trade, Money,etc...

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Lets make a differnce as a country and not let people do things for us because thats takeing our freedom away. Lets get rid of the dumb electoral system and lets use the popular vote becasue thats when your voice is herd and your vote counts.

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I think it is a good idea for the student's to be in community service.

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It will help the environment so the earth can be healthy.

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I knew a friend that was in community service in 2009 he now lives in Rosemont, Illinois he picked up trash all over were he lives. But some of the students don't want to do something like this to prevent gases of pollution on earth.

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I have been trying to make people under stand what it mean's to help. They don't want to help because they just want to litter throw can's not recycle or any thing to help

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What I need are some people that care to do some of the community service

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Take Disney's friend for change they are helping kid's unpollute there town's or cities.

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What we really need are some special people to help for this community service one's that care for there planet.

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these crises on our planet need to stop all what they have done. i have received a letter from my friend that moved to Illinois has cleaned up the whole city with some help in just 1 month. If you know any one who can help with this call.

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This is my idea what we should do to help our community.

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I strongly believe that community service is something good,

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that all the students should be willing to perform community service in some way.

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Community service teaches us many valuable things.

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And it also gives us the opportunity to aid others that need it.

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First, is a way of helping, and growing together as a community.

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we shouldn't expect someone else to do our job. We are the future of our community/country; and if we are growing up expecting we don't have to do anything, we will have very few chances of being successful.

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Like if we like math, or are good at it, we could tutor those who need more help. Or if we are interested in justice, or working for peace, we could volunteer at places that do that kind of work.

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Furthermore, community service doesn't have to be boring, we could take our friends, or siblings. Then they will learn from our example, we will have company, and our virtues will spread throughout our community.

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Finding ways to perform community service is very easy; just talk to your parents, neighbors, classmates, etc. Something else is that it doesn't have to be the biggest thing ever. Small actions will lead to great achievements. Doing small actions every day, sometimes without even planning, will help our community grow in many ways.

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When we need help we will know that our neighbor or classmate will be there to help us and will take care of us. When we are older, the younger kids we showed all those virtues, will keep passing them to their family, friends. Soon we will see all the great things we achieved.

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Please help us develop a great community, learn great things, and give us different

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I personally feel that the electoral college is just plain unfair

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I don't think it's necessary to even have it at all because what's the point if the votes aren't equal for all states? it's a very irrational process.

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It isn't right if a president wins the popular votes but doesn't win by electoral votes and it results in him/her not becoming president. If someone votes for a slate of electors and they end up not even voting for who they're "supposed" to be voting for then what's the purpose of electing them anyway? There is no purpose unless you want the other party to win which i highly doubt that. The electoral college affects the voting of states because if the majority of their state is republicans and they're democratic, there vote isn't really going to matter because majority wins. This process makes no sense to me.

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The amount of electoral votes that your state gets depends on your states population and not the size of it. I somewhat understand why they do this but at the same time it doesn't seem very fair.

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Yeah, i know life isn't fair but for something like this that has a possible way of being fair doesn't make sense not to be. Alaska with only 3 electoral votes should be able to have the same amount as california with 55 electoral votes. Since it isn't actually equal like that i feel that they should just choose who wins and becomes president by popular votes. This way would be a lot more fair because it wouldn't actually matter how many people lived in your state, it would just matter how many people voted for which canidate.

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Another reason electoral votes aren't right to me is because if a president wins the popular votes but not the electoral votes then it almost seems likes one of the types of votes is useful

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It seems like this because then he/she may not win and become president even though they won the popular votes. The canidates shouldn't have to rely on 2 different types of votes because obviously one isn't fair. I feel that in a situation like this having popular votes is just a watse of time because it seems that the electoral votes are what matter the most. Not having an equal amount of electoral votes for each state really defeats the purpose.

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The voting is done by the party's nominee that then elects a slate of electors to vote for the canidate but the problem is you can't always trust that they will actually vote for the canidate that they're supposed to be voting for.

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This isn't the only issue, sometimes the voters get confused and accidentally vote for the wrong canidate resulting in more votes for the opposing side. This is a another reason why i feel that the electoral college should be abolished for good.

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In conclusion, the electoral college is just really not needed in our goverment. It is equal for all states which affects the vote. Also the canidate doesn't win based on only popular votes, they must win they majority of the electoral votes. Lastly but definetly not least, the voting by the slate of electors isn't certain and isn't always accurate. These are some of the main reasons why i feel that the electoral college should be left in the past as an anachronism.

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Driverless cars are another one of the world's technological marvels, that not only take away the prevalent nuisance of driving for long periods of time, but in terms of safety and efficiency, prevail.

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When flexibility increases,

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prices decrease

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the safety of consumers is protected,

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then there is no reason that semi-autonomous cars should not replace the commercial vehicles that we see today.

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One of the key issues that consumers have today in terms of purchasing a vehicle is the fuel consumption. Sergey Brin, the cofounder of Google, provides evidence that suggests that these vehichles would use around half of the fuel that the vehicles today consume

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. Not only that, but Brin continues to state that the flexibility is increased as well, surpassing that of a bus.

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Safety is also increased as a result of these vehicles.

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The fact that these vehicles are semi-autonomous and not completely autonomous enables a human driver to take control whenever they deem it necessary to do so. For example, Google's semi-autonomous creations are "not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways and when other complicated traffic issues arise." Sensors are what enable these vehicles to perform the tasks that astonish many to this day. Due to the fact that sensors have been used since the 1980s, vast improvements and tests have been conducted over the years to ensure that the safety of the consumer and those around he/she are preserved. The article even states that "Within 10 years, those sensors [from the 1980s] had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers." These vehicles allow for the potential decrease in drunk driving, which further emphasizes that safety is not only preserved with semi-autonomous cars, but is heavily increased.

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There is a common misconception that by implementing the production of these vehicles, drivers will "get bored of waiting for their turn to drive."

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Although this is an issue that many psychologists are considering, some manufacturers are working to eliminate this issue.

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For example, the article suggests that there are a few car manufacturers that are hoping to rid of this anxiety by bringing in-car diplays and information systems that use heads-up displays. Not only is it a source of entertainment, but also an additional safety feature, which is also a major concern that is alleviated with semi-autonomous cars.

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The fact that so many automobile companies, such as Tesla, BMW, Nissan, Mercedes-Benz, and Audi, are striving to integrate the idea of semi-autonomous vehicles into their production vehicles, provides even further assurance that the benefits undoubtedly outweigh the harms. Furthermore, this article explicitly states that, as a nation based on progression and safety, semi-autonomous vehicles are the means of achieving the road to a truly autonomous car, and a road to a dramatic increase in safety.

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I think students who have less than a B average should be able to do sports, because doing sports teaches us students responsibility, and self discipline

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It might not seem like it to you, but coming from a student who enjoys sports, I know how it makes most students act, and feel.

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I think you should at least give the students a chance to show you that they would be able to get their grade up so they could play on teams and show their pride for their school.

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I know I enjoy getting out there, and just playing what I want to play. It motivates me to do my homework, study for tests, focus more in class. That seems to be one of the problems why you don't want students doing sports, because you want them to focus more on their work, well, I'm not sure that would be the best idea.

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A lot of students find it irritating that they can't play because of their work, or grades, or something like that. And It makes them not want to do any other work. I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but I am just trying to let you know how the other students would probably feel about this.

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I just don't think it's fair that some students wouldn't be able to play because of a grade.

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Yes, some students might not be as devoted as other students to get their work done

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definitely most students would think that if they can't play a sport then they better get their work done.

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It's just depends on the kid, but I know most of us teenagers would definitely try for that spot on the team if we just got the chance!

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Do you believe in life on Mars? Well I don't and here is why. There is no evidence what so ever of life on Mars. What about the Face on Mars you ask? Well I was hopeing you would ask about that. You see that is what this essay is about. The Face on Mars.

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The Face on Mars is just a naturel land form. From 1976 to 2001 People have been taking pictures of the Face on Mars and every time they took a picture of the Face on Mars they got closer to it and as you look at the pictures you can see that the space in which the Face on Mars is located you can see that it is just a mesa that formed naturely on Mars.

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So in conclusion the Face on Mars is just a naturel land form created by god when he made the universe.

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Oh! You are an atheast? Well then looks like we will have to have a nother conversation some time? Well until then, bye.

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When election day comes and you finally drop your vote in the ballet box after waiting in line for the past hour, you walk away knowing that you have helped the candidate of your choice to rise to the top of the voting pole. Oh how wrong you are. The United States works on a voting system called the Electoral College. "Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president."

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This system has stood the test of time, however it has masked its flaws for long enough. "60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now." (Plumer 9). The people have spoken,

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In order to understand the flaws in the electoral college, you need to know what the electoral college is, and how it came to be. "The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress." (Office of the Federal Register 2). This system was created by the founding fathers as a compromise between the congressional vote and the popular vote. However there was a reason for this new, seperated voting system. During their time the founding fathers where among the most educated men in the country. Back then education was not standard and very few people could read or write. The founding fathers did not want uneducated citizens voting on the individual who would lead the country. So they created a system where the uneducated would vote for a group of educated men, who would in turn vote on a president. Thus the electoral college was born.

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The founding fathers reasons for forging this system where justified in their day and age. However the world has changed since then.

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Another large issue with the electoral college is its favoritism towards larger states. The United States was founded on federalism and democracy, giving power to the people instead of an over-arching central government ruling everything. So any policy that goes against our right to equal say in politics ought to be abbolished, right?

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The number of electors per state under the Electoral College is determined by the number of representatives the state has in congress. "... one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators..." (Office of the Federal Register 3). Since this system is based on population, bigger states get a emense priority over smaller states. "The popular vote was very close in Florida [in 2012]; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote , got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in Wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes." (Posner 21). This means that presidential candidates are going to focus on appealing to larger swing states that have more electoral votes, rather than smaller ones who only provide a few votes. That is not fair now is it? No matter how small a state may be its population still consists of United States' citizens, and they deserve just as much say as a bigger state. After all, that is the concept our country was founded on, equality and freedom.

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If the Electoral College does not seem like a flawed system now, allow me to open your eyes to one last variable in our little Electoral equation. The disaster factor. The disaster factor deals with the will of the people, and them doing anything to get what they want.

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"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that the popular vote for Kennedy would not actually gone to Kennedy.)" (Plumer 11). That kind of scenario could completely change a close call to a landslide victory! The 1960 election is not the only case of this either. It happened again when Hawaii sent two slates of electors to congress, and in other various cases electors did not vote for their designated candidate. Finally there is the case of the 2000 election, where Al Gore won the popular vote, but lost the Electoral College! If just one person decides to go against the grain, everything gets thrown off.

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Case and point, the Electoral College is a flawed system. People are educated and can make a smart choice for a president, everyone deserves fair say in the political world, and people need to open their eyes to the corruption that the Electoral College allows for. It may have made sense back in the day of the founding fathers, but it is time to move on and adopt the popular vote system that the people have asked for.

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What Would Our Country Yet The World Be Like With Driverless Cars ? Having Driverless Cars Would Have Both Positive And Negative Aspects

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Driverless Cars Would Be Positive Aspects Due To The Fact That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis

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They Offer Far More Flexibility Than A Bus Would

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The Driverless Cars Can Not Navigate Work Zones Or Go Around Accidents Without A Drive

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That They Use Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis ,

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Is Because Who Wants To Keep Causing Global Warming By The Gases That Come Out Of Your Car ? In Order To Even Have Driverless Cars We Have To Have An Earth To Keep Them On . Global Warming Is Basically Over Heating Our Earth And Is Caused By Many Things Including The Gases That Come From Cars . Using Half The Fuel Of Today's Cars For A Far More Better Transportation Sounds Pretty Good To Me .

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They Offer Far More Flexiblity Than A Bus

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Is Because Buses Have Certain Routes And They Hold More Than One Person . I Assume That The Driverless Car Would Be A Mix Of A Bus And A Taxi Not Physically Though . Meaning It Would Pick You Up Wherever You Are Like A Bus And Taxi But It Would Drop You Off At An Exact Location Like A Taxi . Only Its A Far More Upadated Version Meaning Its Takes Half The gass We Use Not & Can Do & Go More Places Then Buses

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So If Your Riding In A Driverless Car It Doesnt Know Where Work Sites Would Be Causing Traffic Jams And Maybe Even Crashes . Everyone Wants To Know Whether Their Drive Home Will Be Safe Or Not . Because There Is No Way For You To Inform A Driverless Car That Work Zones Are Ahead If They Dont Have A Driver .

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A Driverless Car Is Not Able To Go Around Accidents Without A Driver

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. This Means That The Driverless Car Would Either Do Three Things If Confronted By A Accident . It Would Either Cause A Big Traffic Jam , Cause Another Accident , Or Even Cause Angry Citizens . Everyone Knows An Angry Citize Is Not A Nice Citizen. Then If There Is Already A Traffic Jam Due To The First Accident And A Driverless Care Cant Get Around It , That Would Cause A Huge Traffic Jam .

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All In All Those Were My Reasons Why Driverless Cars Are Both Positive And Negative Aspectd . The Positive Aspects Would Be That It Uses Half The Feul Of Today's Taxis And It Offers far More Flexibility Than A Bus . The Negative Aspects Would Be That They Cant Go Around Work Zones Or Accidents Without A Driver .

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The Electoral College has been here for many years. Over the past years many people think it is unfair to the voters. There are many conflicts that have risen about it. Without a doubt , the Electoral College is unfair and irrational to voters because they voters are basically voting for no reason. The president they want to vote for doesnt count and instead the votes of the Electoral College do , the electors shouldnt be the only people to vote just because they are qualified doesnt mean only their opinion and choice should be heard.

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a direct election would be much better

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everyones votes count

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