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db0df62a2c15	ACE3E472041C	I think kids do home classes and it does benefits them and yes they learn from it .	Position	Adequate
0c62387d9d29	ACE3E472041C	Parents are famous and they cant send their kids to a regular school,	Claim	Ineffective
dc6de0e33465	ACE3E472041C	kids might be in danger and they can attend school because of tha	Claim	Adequate
5b1f6760f243	ACE3E472041C	it might be because they have any medical condition.	Claim	Adequate
45950fb68733	ACE3E472041C	First reason why students take classes from home is probably because their parents are famous people and they know that, if they send their kid to any school, people will be chasing them,asking for pictures all the time or may be telling them bad stuff.	Claim	Ineffective
45b21e18e88e	ACE3E472041C	Parents know that in that situation kids are going to be frustrated about it, sad, angry and defently they will not be able to concentrated at school. It will be hard for them to be free and enjoy school. For example on of my friends he is very famous in my country and also in here wherever he goes people is always chasing him, hi has a kid that is 6 .years old but he said that the hardest part is when the little boy goes out all of these people get to him and he gets scared. That's why he said that he decided to pay for home classes, and they prefer their kids to take classes at home. Kids will feel free and no body will be making them feel uncomfortable.	Evidence	Adequate
d5fdb8858602	ACE3E472041C	Second reason it could be because the life of any kid can be in danger and the parent of the kid and also any school will know it.	Claim	Adequate
671edd73a7fa	ACE3E472041C	They know that if any kid, that is been treated lets said by any organization, attends to school people will try to harm him or it can become a bigger problem. Because the school will defently knows that if they received that kid at school they will be putting the life of many other kids at school in risk and they will not take that change. Of course parents are not going to allow that their kids to be harm or kill. That's why the school or parents proffered to have their kid to take his/her classes from home he/she will be safe and other people too, the kid will get a really good benefit from it because he will learn and he will be safe and other people will be too.	Evidence	Adequate
a25693c5e751	ACE3E472041C	Last reason why students get benefits from taking classes at home is probably because they have any medical condition and it's hard for them to attend any school.	Claim	Adequate
1e4b48b5d9f6	ACE3E472041C	They will feel shame,afraid,scared and they will be thinking that everyone at school is going to make fun of He/She, that they will bully Him/Her and of course as I have said before parents will never for any reason are going to let their kids to be unhappy to feel bad to feel frustrated and feel that no body love them that's why they let their ids stay at home and take classes from it so that way they learn and no body will harm them make they feel worthless.	Evidence	Adequate
d1c761ae6327	ACE3E472041C	in conclusion,parents who made the decision to let their kids stay at home and take classes from home they make one of the biggest and hardest decisions in life. Because they know that kids will be safe nobody will hurt them, be hunting them , no body will hurt them, tell them mean stuff. They will not feel embarrassed to let people see them, Parents know that defently is not going to be the same that it will not be the same as if he was listening directly to his teacher and getting his note but they know that at least his kids are going to be safe and they will learn to they will still get benefits from it. When you want the best for your kids and you love them more that life itself, you do what you got to do if that means to pay for his classes in other to keep them safe,and we all know that people might talk and told you that doing home classes isn't going to help you. But you know that is not true, you got to keep working working hard because sometimes students come to school, but they do nothing. What they do is get in problems fight, with other classmates or eventhey fight whith their teachers,they used drugs at school but. If you know your kid is at home working and you see that he wants to learn the don't listen to the rest of the people.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
cc01307709b6	AD005493F9BF	To the state and the state's country, the election of our president must be seen carefully and wisely. As the citizens of the state, people must realize that choosing someone to take control of orders and regulations and the way the country evolves, is a process that needs to be thought of and taken fairly. The president is to serve the people of his country well with responisbilities that can vary to meet the needs of the country,but the electoral college seems to become more and more unfair to those who vote.	Lead	Effective
9b5781be5689	AD005493F9BF	It must be changed to meet the needs of giving a responisble president, a more trustworthy election and the votes cast must be directly towards him rather than the electors. In other words, the Electoral College must be changed to become more fair towards the citizens.	Position	Effective
0c845b40e210	AD005493F9BF	The United States Of America, is of course a massive country with large variations of different needs. All over, there are people who vary in opinions, beliefs and lifestyle which can cause the Election of the president to become an important subject matter. To meet the needs of so many people, instead the Electoral college must not choose a president that takes up space, but instead have a right mind to be responisble in taking charge of the country and the people.	Evidence	Adequate
12e74d6b4290	AD005493F9BF	Things like creating rules to attend the needs of all citizens and create equality amongst them, to keeping harm from out of reach, the Electoral College should become much more wiser in choosing the right ruler to take control.	Claim	Adequate
b1e293664d07	AD005493F9BF	In the article What Is The Electoral College by the office of the Federal Register, it states that the election process is held every four years along with the after election prepared by the govenor titled "Certificate Of Ascertainment" which sums the canadidates and electors as well as the winning canadidate. It is obvious that the voters only know so much of what they vote for and do not really get a good taste of how the presidential canadidate is like. It can be clear that as a blind election, the voters have no hints of who they might be voting towards and in the end can cause a major catasrophe if a canadidate has very little intentions for the states. In agreement to the article the text In the defense of the electoral college by Richard A. Posner it begins to sate the election of Romney who, by increasing his plurality and possesing only regional appeal, lost the peoples desire to vote for him thinking that the man has no regards for their interest and does not have any intentions of improving their needs or helping with creating a community where the people can rely on Romney. The actions taken began to change the thoughts of the citizens and create a petrifying conclusion that the man was not on the run to be everyone's president. This dilema could have been changed around if Romney had shown that he had cared more for his state and his country and thought more about the needs he could fill and the actions he could improve, then many of the voters would have most likely shown repsect and a desire for the man to be choosen as their new president. On the opposing hand Romney had not shown any of those qualities or passion which had caused for him to be thought of as unresponisble and selfish. The country has more than thousands and thousands of people to serve and direct. It can be understood that having a large amount of citizens can result in uncertainty towards the election and the votes cast, yet it is yet to be changed to a more reasonable way of confronting it. With many systems such as "Winner-Take -All" due to states titled as the "Swing States," it can be an untrustworthy election fo rmany voters around the country. The election process not only need to be changed to select a more responsible canadidate, but to create a more trustworthy system of itself.	Evidence	Effective
2bc6c1704369	AD005493F9BF	There is very little equality when it comes to elections especially, when the states are giving an unreliable system to choose for them.	Claim	Effective
292b6db04f40	AD005493F9BF	States that are considered "Toss Ups" are selfishly awarded the system named "Winner-Takes-All" due to how they apparently pay closer attention to the campaign. In the article What Is The Electotal College by the office of the Federal Register, the method is first introduced in paragraph 7. Stating that the purpose of the "Winner-Take-All" system is not only,but to award all electors to the winning canadidate. It is said to be unrelaible and untrustworthy due to it's focus on states that appear t have more attention towards the election. On a more basic level, some states such as Rhode Island and South Carolina had not even witness the campaign and even leaving a few voters to have no say. Going back to the misunderstanding of the election of Romney,the country wittnessed an iresponsible canadidate that had ran for president. With the unreliable ridiculous system "Winner-Take-All" some states may or may not have even experienced how Romney had acted and his intentions towards the elections and the campiagn. With very little knowledge of the presidential canadidate and with limitations of voting and campaign ads, there is very little trust given towards the election process especially with more than a few states that are not being taken very seriously, with very little say. If the Electorial College could give off more information and more become more reliable towards all states, the process would be less sinister and more apreciated.	Evidence	Effective
c946804bfc84	AD005493F9BF	There are many more other factors in which the Electorial College must be changed to meet the appropriate dilemas and needs of the voters and their intentions towards the campaign.	Claim	Effective
9fc5e37dcbe1	AD005493F9BF	On the other hand, it has not changed at all only to stay unfair towards the entire country and possibly cause a catasrophe.	Counterclaim	Adequate
f75cccebe930	AD005493F9BF	Let us say, there have been many incidents where elections have been on the edge of a major dilema. Wondering why a straight up orderly process can go to the point of a catasrophe, can all be easily explained as unfair. All can be simplified in the article Why Even The Best-Laid Defesnes of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer, states back to the disater factor of the election of John F.Kennedy. It states back to the 1960's where faithless electors had pushed aside the votes and sayings of Louisiana had decided to vote for whomever they had wanted. It had caused a problem of course since the votes where not even of the people, but of the selfish sick minds of the electors who toke the process into their own hands. In the same paragraph it staes back to when the state of Hawaii had sent in two slates of electors to congress. With the unreliable actions of Richard Nixion, had validated his opponent's electors of course to win over the campaign. once again another issue arises in the article Five Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of Choosing The President, it agrees with the unfairness of the electorals by giving the example of how the Electorial College had turned off the potential voters due to the knowledge that their votes will be uncared for. In paragraph 23, it states that in the state of Texas, it was known that the votes would have know effect of the campaign what so ever. It aslo had staes that voters in politcal elections have no care rather than to express the political refrence than what the peole think or decide.	Evidence	Effective
fdcca4acf665	AD005493F9BF	This sums up that the process is unfair to many of the states voters and must be changed to become more open and share the equality with those who are losing thier trust.	Rebuttal	Effective
cb7fe6607fbd	AD005493F9BF	In conclusion, the Electorial College mut be changed to meet the need of those who agree that is it irresponisble when givng a repsonisble president, a more trustworhty election and an unfair process. Yet this can all be fixed simply by changing the ways it is run and to give more freedom for the people	Concluding Statement	Adequate
9f76d590ee25	AD1914496798	The elector college is a controversial subject today in america, based on many questionable policies that leave many americans confused and cheated.	Lead	Effective
46d03ccd8c3d	AD1914496798	This is why I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states.	Position	Effective
9df75cb9913e	AD1914496798	With the electoral college way of electing a president voters arent actually voting for the president, they are voting for a slate of electors who will then vote for the candidate. There are so many things that can go wrong when electing like this	Claim	Effective
abd4c6fc0163	AD1914496798	Voters can't neccessarily control who their electors vote for, you may vote for a certain slate of electors but they may still go ahead and vote for someone else. Sometimes voters get confused and may vote for a slate of electors who are for the wrong candidate. For example, in 1960 segragationists in the Louisiana Legislature almost succeded in replacing the democratic electors with new ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy, so a popular vote for Kennedy would not actually go to him. Although these things dont happen all time their is always the possibility and why take that chance on such an important event, choosing our president the person who will lead our country.	Evidence	Effective
962bb29c09dd	AD1914496798	In an election their really is a process of voting and voting again. Instead of couting the number of people who want a certain president and so on. We are viewed as a state and some states having more say than other even if the votes are in the same margin. This is the reason why some states are focused on more by the candidates and are heavily educated on the topic and given more attention than smaller states whose votes wont change much. an even bigger problem is te fact that most states operate on a winner-take-all basis so even a slight majority vote one way will give that person all of the votes. A very worrying prospect as expressed in source two is the possibility of a tie. in which the election would be given to the house of representatives. Each state only gets on vote so a representative representing 500,000 people would have as much say as representatives representing 35 million people.	Evidence	Effective
2916b2eaac60	AD1914496798	Why not just cut out all of the extra processes and focuses on the decision of the people directly	Claim	Adequate
e4f3ea210ba6	AD1914496798	Although there are many arguments against the electoral college there still are people who argue in favor of it. There is a certainty of outcome with this process. There will less likely be a run off election with this process	Counterclaim	Effective
83d7ef9191e6	AD1914496798	All in all the major arguments agaisnt this process outweigh the pros of it, which are few.	Rebuttal	Adequate
97935cb3f636	AD1914496798	With all of the reasons to go against this process I think it is necessary to change the election to popular vote for the president. We need to give the voice directly back to the people of our country so we know that we really do choose our fate in these elections.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
4382006d8a07	AD3C6F02167E	I believe that community service is extremely important and that all students should be required to perform some community service.	Position	Effective
17c53c628843	AD3C6F02167E	Community service helps out the community a lot, so the students will be making their homes a better place to live and learn.	Claim	Effective
c2c47a305f4c	AD3C6F02167E	Another thing that community service does is that it helps build character in a child, because they are constantly helping people out and doing the right thing.	Claim	Adequate
4b6d09fdcbff	AD3C6F02167E	Next, community service will help with your education, because kids who do community service are more likely to get into a good college.	Claim	Effective
8f652034110f	AD3C6F02167E	First of all, community service makes the place you live a better place, by creating a better environment to work, learn and live, as well as make everyone happier. The community benefits a lot from kids or adults actively participating in community service.	Claim	Effective
bc294c605af8	AD3C6F02167E	Research shows, that the cleaner and more beautiful the town or city is, the happier the people are. Who is happy when they are living in a trash can? Community service helps clean up the town, by simple things like picking up trash, or larger projects like planting trees. Education also benefits from community service, because we can teach the younger generation skills they need to grow up. Also, a better looking school, would be a better place to learn, because the students will be happier and more motivated.	Evidence	Effective
8eb80a887440	AD3C6F02167E	Secondly, students and adults who perform community service build a lot of character.	Claim	Adequate
6c005b340a2c	AD3C6F02167E	This is because they are constantly helping people out, and doing the right thing. This way they will feel good about themselves, and will be a better person overall. I am a boy scout, and i always participate in activities such as, help cleaning up a state park, and help cleaning up the Connecticut River. After i do these things, i feel ready good about myself because i did the right thing, and helped out our community a lot. Furthermore, scientist have shown that students who do community service have a better chance of having a happy life than people who don't, because you will always feel good about yourself and how you have helped your community.	Evidence	Effective
7e19a722b7fe	AD3C6F02167E	Another reason that community service is very important, is because many ivy league colleges, and other colleges in general, are always looking for people who regularly participate in community service and also volunteer.	Claim	Effective
454895f65f4c	AD3C6F02167E	I personally knew a person, who didn't have all A's in school, and didn't get a great score on the SAT's, but she was an volunteer at a hospital and part of a organization that helps homeless people. She got accepted into Harvard University because she did all that community service. Community service helps out a lot in our lives, by both building character and also it helps tremendously in applying for college. In addition, it also helps a lot with our education, because last year we won our regional science bowl, because some high school students decided to help out our them and come to our practices to teach us. This was very helpful for us and we benefited a lot because of that. They probably also felt better about themselves that they were teaching the younger generation and helping us out. People don't know how much you can learn from kids older than you. you can probably learn more from them than teachers, because you look up to them and respect them the same or maybe more than your teachers. So community service is extremely in education.	Evidence	Effective
92f786cb9a7f	AD3C6F02167E	In conclusion, I believe that community service helps out a lot with our growth and development, either by education, or building character. Both of those are super important in our life.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
e50f4d72fac3	AD3C6F02167E	Studies show that people who do community service are 3 times more likely to succeed than people who don't. And the community benefits from these acts too, because you are making your town a happier and better place to live.	Evidence	Adequate
43117f97ea58	ADB68BCD2874	This face is not because of aliens it was just a landform.	Position	Adequate
743de40e08fc	ADB68BCD2874	"Nevertheless on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Sureyor drew close enough for a second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the Face in the field of view," said Garvin. "Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution." Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 merterd per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."	Evidence	Ineffective
83645376434f	ADB68BCD2874	"as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size,"	Evidence	Adequate
2212fad86a41	ADB68BCD2874	if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"	Claim	Adequate
66fe178688a1	ADB68BCD2874	What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.	Claim	Adequate
ca31293ee103	ADB68BCD2874	"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," says Garvin	Evidence	Adequate
d628a6adda3a	ADB68BCD2874	"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."	Evidence	Adequate
1a2ee1d7ba5f	ADB68BCD2874	These are all reasons that this is no because of aliens but it is a landform.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
02e5b0f37696	ADD7CE85B73C	Students should be able to have cell phones at school	Position	Adequate
a1f93176b400	ADD7CE85B73C	what harm is it doing to the child if they text during a passing period or during lunch?	Claim	Adequate
13fe87a6a8d9	ADD7CE85B73C	Its not hurting anybody as long as the phone is turned off and doesn't cause a distraction during class time then why would it be a problem?	Evidence	Adequate
2f0463961ae2	ADD7CE85B73C	I know that some teenagers will still try to text during class but the number of people who do will go down	Claim	Adequate
e44f0f48f7f5	ADD7CE85B73C	The school should treat students and teachers fairly. If there trying to be fair then the teachers shouldn't be aloud to use there cell phones during class either.	Evidence	Ineffective
991c8096c7e9	ADD7CE85B73C	Cell phones aren't even that bad in the first place.	Claim	Adequate
fdbc4d8561a0	ADD7CE85B73C	Yes, most of Americans use them to much, and they are a huge distraction most of the time	Counterclaim	Adequate
d80d452cc950	ADD7CE85B73C	but they still haven't done any harm to the American society.	Rebuttal	Ineffective
476304ae8a01	ADD7CE85B73C	Actually cell phones have actually brought a lot of people closer together. They also serve the purpose to help people out.	Evidence	Adequate
ae9a8e36784c	ADD7CE85B73C	I understand there's not that great of a purpose to having a cell phone at school, but it would make the student body a whole lot happier than it is today.	Claim	Adequate
9e81422c3671	ADD7CE85B73C	Just the short time we have during class would just be so much better for everybody in the entire school. I still don't even understand why we aren't aloud to use them during class. Why do the teachers care, there getting paid? If a student doesn't want to listen then they shouldn't be forced too. Kids go to school to get a education i understand it shouldn't be interrupted by cell phones. but kids need to have a good time well learning. School is a place for education but come on at least let kids have some socialization.	Evidence	Adequate
28f036fc6597	ADD7CE85B73C	Letting kids use cell phones during class would be a huge deal to everybody at SCHOOL_NAME it will make the three years we have at this school go by as fast as possiable.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
dbed156df07f	ADDA081EE98A	I would like to in favor of keeping the Electoral College for many purposes	Position	Adequate
1a456088d4ec	ADDA081EE98A	The Electoral College know the process of becoming a president and some of the people voting dont really know how the process works.	Claim	Adequate
35fdc69f6577	ADDA081EE98A	The eletors are the one to elect the president and not the people,people's vote will not have any affect of the election of the president.	Claim	Ineffective
f11b2e020800	ADDA081EE98A	what if we the people just vote and we dont know if our vote counts. The excerpt states"when you vote for a presidential candiate you're actually voting for a slate of electors". This indicates that we think our vote if for the election of the president but its not. Therefore,we should pay attention of who we elect and knowing how the voting system work out. keep on mind that the electoral college is a good system and that we should count on them.	Evidence	Adequate
51de3fd69091	ADDA081EE98A	"270 electoral votes is requierd to elect the president",this indicates that we dont really have control of picking the president. "it's possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote", but does'nt often happen.	Evidence	Ineffective
474749be4296	ADDA081EE98A	It all comes down to one point,we should let the Electoral College choose who they want to elect the president.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
0279ba5d32a0	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home	Position	Adequate
6a3f9a62f4cd	ADFE2CDB6FF1	in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus.	Evidence	Ineffective
001d99b4f21b	ADFE2CDB6FF1	The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them,	Claim	Ineffective
8bbdd59974fe	ADFE2CDB6FF1	" the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school. -For example: If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about what he is doing in his online class. He will try to find the way to solve the problem by himself.	Evidence	Adequate
19f4ec788307	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting.	Claim	Ineffective
080bfca90a5d	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking.	Claim	Adequate
1f646887a73f	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school.	Claim	Ineffective
493e27a0b73b	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too.	Claim	Adequate
07747812be5b	ADFE2CDB6FF1	i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many time she was so tired with her belly and then when she has her baby yet she take in her house the next classes i was surprise about it either i do not how unconfortable it was for her that a teacher was with her when the baby start cry or when the baby need to eat, later she was done she back to the school but she didn't feel ok for leave her baby at home. This story make me think about it if i have the election to choose how i can study i prefer study and take the classes in my house better that school.	Evidence	Adequate
207b5f73bb0f	ADFE2CDB6FF1	I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems;	Counterclaim	Adequate
a1622e278a08	ADFE2CDB6FF1	what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we are no pay attention what the teacher is talk about the class, So i think this if a student want money need to work and continue study online maybe in that way is more easy pass the class and the SOL	Evidence	Adequate
0e2b23791b2e	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes	Rebuttal	Adequate
48173a428b6f	ADFE2CDB6FF1	in summary "NEVER GIVE UP" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have to do is study. sometimes the other people make feel us so bad or without no reason to be in this world, go ahead and desmostrate to that person who do not believe in you that you can do it.	Evidence	Adequate
1ac5424c12fd	ADFE2CDB6FF1	During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials.	Claim	Adequate
3d32e360e6d2	ADFE2CDB6FF1	Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are: - Spend more time in the computer - More focus in the homework - Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want - Study all the day - No talk with your friends during your class - Finish more fast with no distraction	Evidence	Adequate
3bb1952fbda9	ADFE2CDB6FF1	All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be involve in problems with another student. Could fine stay at home by self in own class than go to the school. Many student suffer of depreciation and that is so bad for them. If they school giving to them the opportunities to take the classes online it is more better for their healthy, this is my opinion about attend classes on the home.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
5bca4b9d2c20	AE3C9DE4FA94	I'm in favor of kipping the Electoral college	Position	Adequate
8d8e4f99f5a7	AE3C9DE4FA94	keep out problems and its fare to evry one.	Claim	Adequate
43b70e8ab521	AE3C9DE4FA94	In the text state that ''The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the president.'' that shows that the popular vote is the one who wins.	Evidence	Ineffective
9c6191ac4a29	AE3C9DE4FA94	''The college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast;''	Claim	Adequate
32ebefc2324f	AE3C9DE4FA94	is tre because without the electoral college it will have a lot of candidates that they will not get a majority of vote nether one.	Evidence	Ineffective
29d724099354	AE3C9DE4FA94	by the way, a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible and it hat happend before	Counterclaim	Adequate
c197e862ed9f	AE3C9DE4FA94	but it's less likely than a dispute over the populat vote.	Rebuttal	Adequate
b592daf021be	AE3C9DE4FA94	Voters in presidential elections are people who wants to express a political preference eather than people who thinks that a single vote may decide an elections	Evidence	Ineffective
436a45ee8e0f	AE3CD422AAF4	The President should be chosen by popular vote.	Position	Adequate
fcd48b7e2724	AE3CD422AAF4	By letting the people choose who sould be their President they are able to get what they want, not what Congress thinks they want.	Claim	Adequate
3650285cf0eb	AE3CD422AAF4	The Electoral College system is old news and now that we are in 2015 there are all sorts of new things going on. The Electoral College system is just too much and seems like a hassle that can be made easier by having qualified citizens vote for their President.	Claim	Ineffective
79c754ed89ea	AE3CD422AAF4	Under The Electoral College system voters are voting for electors who choose the President for them.	Evidence	Adequate
44e9781cfde0	AE3CD422AAF4	I feel that the people should be able to put in their votes and the man (or woman) who has the majority of the votes should be the President. I am aware that choosing the President is a big deal but by doing this, things are much easier and more efficent.	Claim	Adequate
49327dff2e2e	AE3CD422AAF4	What I am trying to say is that the Electoral College system is way too flawed and complicated to be good for us. I feel as though the Electoral College system is unfair, and irrational.	Claim	Adequate

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I think kids do home classes and it does benefits them and yes they learn from it .

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Parents are famous and they cant send their kids to a regular school,

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kids might be in danger and they can attend school because of tha

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it might be because they have any medical condition.

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First reason why students take classes from home is probably because their parents are famous people and they know that, if they send their kid to any school, people will be chasing them,asking for pictures all the time or may be telling them bad stuff.

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Parents know that in that situation kids are going to be frustrated about it, sad, angry and defently they will not be able to concentrated at school. It will be hard for them to be free and enjoy school. For example on of my friends he is very famous in my country and also in here wherever he goes people is always chasing him, hi has a kid that is 6 .years old but he said that the hardest part is when the little boy goes out all of these people get to him and he gets scared. That's why he said that he decided to pay for home classes, and they prefer their kids to take classes at home. Kids will feel free and no body will be making them feel uncomfortable.

Evidence

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Second reason it could be because the life of any kid can be in danger and the parent of the kid and also any school will know it.

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They know that if any kid, that is been treated lets said by any organization, attends to school people will try to harm him or it can become a bigger problem. Because the school will defently knows that if they received that kid at school they will be putting the life of many other kids at school in risk and they will not take that change. Of course parents are not going to allow that their kids to be harm or kill. That's why the school or parents proffered to have their kid to take his/her classes from home he/she will be safe and other people too, the kid will get a really good benefit from it because he will learn and he will be safe and other people will be too.

Evidence

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Last reason why students get benefits from taking classes at home is probably because they have any medical condition and it's hard for them to attend any school.

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They will feel shame,afraid,scared and they will be thinking that everyone at school is going to make fun of He/She, that they will bully Him/Her and of course as I have said before parents will never for any reason are going to let their kids to be unhappy to feel bad to feel frustrated and feel that no body love them that's why they let their ids stay at home and take classes from it so that way they learn and no body will harm them make they feel worthless.

Evidence

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in conclusion,parents who made the decision to let their kids stay at home and take classes from home they make one of the biggest and hardest decisions in life. Because they know that kids will be safe nobody will hurt them, be hunting them , no body will hurt them, tell them mean stuff. They will not feel embarrassed to let people see them, Parents know that defently is not going to be the same that it will not be the same as if he was listening directly to his teacher and getting his note but they know that at least his kids are going to be safe and they will learn to they will still get benefits from it. When you want the best for your kids and you love them more that life itself, you do what you got to do if that means to pay for his classes in other to keep them safe,and we all know that people might talk and told you that doing home classes isn't going to help you. But you know that is not true, you got to keep working working hard because sometimes students come to school, but they do nothing. What they do is get in problems fight, with other classmates or eventhey fight whith their teachers,they used drugs at school but. If you know your kid is at home working and you see that he wants to learn the don't listen to the rest of the people.

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To the state and the state's country, the election of our president must be seen carefully and wisely. As the citizens of the state, people must realize that choosing someone to take control of orders and regulations and the way the country evolves, is a process that needs to be thought of and taken fairly. The president is to serve the people of his country well with responisbilities that can vary to meet the needs of the country,but the electoral college seems to become more and more unfair to those who vote.

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It must be changed to meet the needs of giving a responisble president, a more trustworthy election and the votes cast must be directly towards him rather than the electors. In other words, the Electoral College must be changed to become more fair towards the citizens.

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The United States Of America, is of course a massive country with large variations of different needs. All over, there are people who vary in opinions, beliefs and lifestyle which can cause the Election of the president to become an important subject matter. To meet the needs of so many people, instead the Electoral college must not choose a president that takes up space, but instead have a right mind to be responisble in taking charge of the country and the people.

Evidence

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Things like creating rules to attend the needs of all citizens and create equality amongst them, to keeping harm from out of reach, the Electoral College should become much more wiser in choosing the right ruler to take control.

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In the article What Is The Electoral College by the office of the Federal Register, it states that the election process is held every four years along with the after election prepared by the govenor titled "Certificate Of Ascertainment" which sums the canadidates and electors as well as the winning canadidate. It is obvious that the voters only know so much of what they vote for and do not really get a good taste of how the presidential canadidate is like. It can be clear that as a blind election, the voters have no hints of who they might be voting towards and in the end can cause a major catasrophe if a canadidate has very little intentions for the states. In agreement to the article the text In the defense of the electoral college by Richard A. Posner it begins to sate the election of Romney who, by increasing his plurality and possesing only regional appeal, lost the peoples desire to vote for him thinking that the man has no regards for their interest and does not have any intentions of improving their needs or helping with creating a community where the people can rely on Romney. The actions taken began to change the thoughts of the citizens and create a petrifying conclusion that the man was not on the run to be everyone's president. This dilema could have been changed around if Romney had shown that he had cared more for his state and his country and thought more about the needs he could fill and the actions he could improve, then many of the voters would have most likely shown repsect and a desire for the man to be choosen as their new president. On the opposing hand Romney had not shown any of those qualities or passion which had caused for him to be thought of as unresponisble and selfish. The country has more than thousands and thousands of people to serve and direct. It can be understood that having a large amount of citizens can result in uncertainty towards the election and the votes cast, yet it is yet to be changed to a more reasonable way of confronting it. With many systems such as "Winner-Take -All" due to states titled as the "Swing States," it can be an untrustworthy election fo rmany voters around the country. The election process not only need to be changed to select a more responsible canadidate, but to create a more trustworthy system of itself.

Evidence

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There is very little equality when it comes to elections especially, when the states are giving an unreliable system to choose for them.

Claim

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States that are considered "Toss Ups" are selfishly awarded the system named "Winner-Takes-All" due to how they apparently pay closer attention to the campaign. In the article What Is The Electotal College by the office of the Federal Register, the method is first introduced in paragraph 7. Stating that the purpose of the "Winner-Take-All" system is not only,but to award all electors to the winning canadidate. It is said to be unrelaible and untrustworthy due to it's focus on states that appear t have more attention towards the election. On a more basic level, some states such as Rhode Island and South Carolina had not even witness the campaign and even leaving a few voters to have no say. Going back to the misunderstanding of the election of Romney,the country wittnessed an iresponsible canadidate that had ran for president. With the unreliable ridiculous system "Winner-Take-All" some states may or may not have even experienced how Romney had acted and his intentions towards the elections and the campiagn. With very little knowledge of the presidential canadidate and with limitations of voting and campaign ads, there is very little trust given towards the election process especially with more than a few states that are not being taken very seriously, with very little say. If the Electorial College could give off more information and more become more reliable towards all states, the process would be less sinister and more apreciated.

Evidence

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There are many more other factors in which the Electorial College must be changed to meet the appropriate dilemas and needs of the voters and their intentions towards the campaign.

Claim

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On the other hand, it has not changed at all only to stay unfair towards the entire country and possibly cause a catasrophe.

Counterclaim

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Let us say, there have been many incidents where elections have been on the edge of a major dilema. Wondering why a straight up orderly process can go to the point of a catasrophe, can all be easily explained as unfair. All can be simplified in the article Why Even The Best-Laid Defesnes of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer, states back to the disater factor of the election of John F.Kennedy. It states back to the 1960's where faithless electors had pushed aside the votes and sayings of Louisiana had decided to vote for whomever they had wanted. It had caused a problem of course since the votes where not even of the people, but of the selfish sick minds of the electors who toke the process into their own hands. In the same paragraph it staes back to when the state of Hawaii had sent in two slates of electors to congress. With the unreliable actions of Richard Nixion, had validated his opponent's electors of course to win over the campaign. once again another issue arises in the article Five Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of Choosing The President, it agrees with the unfairness of the electorals by giving the example of how the Electorial College had turned off the potential voters due to the knowledge that their votes will be uncared for. In paragraph 23, it states that in the state of Texas, it was known that the votes would have know effect of the campaign what so ever. It aslo had staes that voters in politcal elections have no care rather than to express the political refrence than what the peole think or decide.

Evidence

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This sums up that the process is unfair to many of the states voters and must be changed to become more open and share the equality with those who are losing thier trust.

Rebuttal

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In conclusion, the Electorial College mut be changed to meet the need of those who agree that is it irresponisble when givng a repsonisble president, a more trustworhty election and an unfair process. Yet this can all be fixed simply by changing the ways it is run and to give more freedom for the people

Concluding Statement

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The elector college is a controversial subject today in america, based on many questionable policies that leave many americans confused and cheated.

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This is why I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states.

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With the electoral college way of electing a president voters arent actually voting for the president, they are voting for a slate of electors who will then vote for the candidate. There are so many things that can go wrong when electing like this

Claim

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Voters can't neccessarily control who their electors vote for, you may vote for a certain slate of electors but they may still go ahead and vote for someone else. Sometimes voters get confused and may vote for a slate of electors who are for the wrong candidate. For example, in 1960 segragationists in the Louisiana Legislature almost succeded in replacing the democratic electors with new ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy, so a popular vote for Kennedy would not actually go to him. Although these things dont happen all time their is always the possibility and why take that chance on such an important event, choosing our president the person who will lead our country.

Evidence

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In an election their really is a process of voting and voting again. Instead of couting the number of people who want a certain president and so on. We are viewed as a state and some states having more say than other even if the votes are in the same margin. This is the reason why some states are focused on more by the candidates and are heavily educated on the topic and given more attention than smaller states whose votes wont change much. an even bigger problem is te fact that most states operate on a winner-take-all basis so even a slight majority vote one way will give that person all of the votes. A very worrying prospect as expressed in source two is the possibility of a tie. in which the election would be given to the house of representatives. Each state only gets on vote so a representative representing 500,000 people would have as much say as representatives representing 35 million people.

Evidence

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Why not just cut out all of the extra processes and focuses on the decision of the people directly

Claim

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Although there are many arguments against the electoral college there still are people who argue in favor of it. There is a certainty of outcome with this process. There will less likely be a run off election with this process

Counterclaim

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All in all the major arguments agaisnt this process outweigh the pros of it, which are few.

Rebuttal

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With all of the reasons to go against this process I think it is necessary to change the election to popular vote for the president. We need to give the voice directly back to the people of our country so we know that we really do choose our fate in these elections.

Concluding Statement

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I believe that community service is extremely important and that all students should be required to perform some community service.

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Community service helps out the community a lot, so the students will be making their homes a better place to live and learn.

Claim

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Another thing that community service does is that it helps build character in a child, because they are constantly helping people out and doing the right thing.

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Next, community service will help with your education, because kids who do community service are more likely to get into a good college.

Claim

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First of all, community service makes the place you live a better place, by creating a better environment to work, learn and live, as well as make everyone happier. The community benefits a lot from kids or adults actively participating in community service.

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Research shows, that the cleaner and more beautiful the town or city is, the happier the people are. Who is happy when they are living in a trash can? Community service helps clean up the town, by simple things like picking up trash, or larger projects like planting trees. Education also benefits from community service, because we can teach the younger generation skills they need to grow up. Also, a better looking school, would be a better place to learn, because the students will be happier and more motivated.

Evidence

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Secondly, students and adults who perform community service build a lot of character.

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This is because they are constantly helping people out, and doing the right thing. This way they will feel good about themselves, and will be a better person overall. I am a boy scout, and i always participate in activities such as, help cleaning up a state park, and help cleaning up the Connecticut River. After i do these things, i feel ready good about myself because i did the right thing, and helped out our community a lot. Furthermore, scientist have shown that students who do community service have a better chance of having a happy life than people who don't, because you will always feel good about yourself and how you have helped your community.

Evidence

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Another reason that community service is very important, is because many ivy league colleges, and other colleges in general, are always looking for people who regularly participate in community service and also volunteer.

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I personally knew a person, who didn't have all A's in school, and didn't get a great score on the SAT's, but she was an volunteer at a hospital and part of a organization that helps homeless people. She got accepted into Harvard University because she did all that community service. Community service helps out a lot in our lives, by both building character and also it helps tremendously in applying for college. In addition, it also helps a lot with our education, because last year we won our regional science bowl, because some high school students decided to help out our them and come to our practices to teach us. This was very helpful for us and we benefited a lot because of that. They probably also felt better about themselves that they were teaching the younger generation and helping us out. People don't know how much you can learn from kids older than you. you can probably learn more from them than teachers, because you look up to them and respect them the same or maybe more than your teachers. So community service is extremely in education.

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In conclusion, I believe that community service helps out a lot with our growth and development, either by education, or building character. Both of those are super important in our life.

Concluding Statement

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Studies show that people who do community service are 3 times more likely to succeed than people who don't. And the community benefits from these acts too, because you are making your town a happier and better place to live.

Evidence

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This face is not because of aliens it was just a landform.

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"Nevertheless on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Sureyor drew close enough for a second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the Face in the field of view," said Garvin. "Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution." Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 merterd per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo."

Evidence

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"as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size,"

Evidence

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if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"

Claim

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What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.

Claim

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"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," says Garvin

Evidence

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"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars."

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These are all reasons that this is no because of aliens but it is a landform.

Concluding Statement

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Students should be able to have cell phones at school

Position

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what harm is it doing to the child if they text during a passing period or during lunch?

Claim

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Its not hurting anybody as long as the phone is turned off and doesn't cause a distraction during class time then why would it be a problem?

Evidence

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I know that some teenagers will still try to text during class but the number of people who do will go down

Claim

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The school should treat students and teachers fairly. If there trying to be fair then the teachers shouldn't be aloud to use there cell phones during class either.

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Cell phones aren't even that bad in the first place.

Claim

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Yes, most of Americans use them to much, and they are a huge distraction most of the time

Counterclaim

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but they still haven't done any harm to the American society.

Rebuttal

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Actually cell phones have actually brought a lot of people closer together. They also serve the purpose to help people out.

Evidence

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I understand there's not that great of a purpose to having a cell phone at school, but it would make the student body a whole lot happier than it is today.

Claim

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Just the short time we have during class would just be so much better for everybody in the entire school. I still don't even understand why we aren't aloud to use them during class. Why do the teachers care, there getting paid? If a student doesn't want to listen then they shouldn't be forced too. Kids go to school to get a education i understand it shouldn't be interrupted by cell phones. but kids need to have a good time well learning. School is a place for education but come on at least let kids have some socialization.

Evidence

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Letting kids use cell phones during class would be a huge deal to everybody at SCHOOL_NAME it will make the three years we have at this school go by as fast as possiable.

Concluding Statement

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I would like to in favor of keeping the Electoral College for many purposes

Position

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The Electoral College know the process of becoming a president and some of the people voting dont really know how the process works.

Claim

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The eletors are the one to elect the president and not the people,people's vote will not have any affect of the election of the president.

Claim

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what if we the people just vote and we dont know if our vote counts. The excerpt states"when you vote for a presidential candiate you're actually voting for a slate of electors". This indicates that we think our vote if for the election of the president but its not. Therefore,we should pay attention of who we elect and knowing how the voting system work out. keep on mind that the electoral college is a good system and that we should count on them.

Evidence

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"270 electoral votes is requierd to elect the president",this indicates that we dont really have control of picking the president. "it's possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote", but does'nt often happen.

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It all comes down to one point,we should let the Electoral College choose who they want to elect the president.

Concluding Statement

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Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home

Position

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in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus.

Evidence

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The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them,

Claim

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" the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school. -For example: If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about what he is doing in his online class. He will try to find the way to solve the problem by himself.

Evidence

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Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting.

Claim

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Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking.

Claim

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Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school.

Claim

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Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too.

Claim

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i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many time she was so tired with her belly and then when she has her baby yet she take in her house the next classes i was surprise about it either i do not how unconfortable it was for her that a teacher was with her when the baby start cry or when the baby need to eat, later she was done she back to the school but she didn't feel ok for leave her baby at home. This story make me think about it if i have the election to choose how i can study i prefer study and take the classes in my house better that school.

Evidence

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I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems;

Counterclaim

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what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we are no pay attention what the teacher is talk about the class, So i think this if a student want money need to work and continue study online maybe in that way is more easy pass the class and the SOL

Evidence

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Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes

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in summary "NEVER GIVE UP" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have to do is study. sometimes the other people make feel us so bad or without no reason to be in this world, go ahead and desmostrate to that person who do not believe in you that you can do it.

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During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials.

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Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are: - Spend more time in the computer - More focus in the homework - Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want - Study all the day - No talk with your friends during your class - Finish more fast with no distraction

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All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be involve in problems with another student. Could fine stay at home by self in own class than go to the school. Many student suffer of depreciation and that is so bad for them. If they school giving to them the opportunities to take the classes online it is more better for their healthy, this is my opinion about attend classes on the home.

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I'm in favor of kipping the Electoral college

Position

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keep out problems and its fare to evry one.

Claim

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In the text state that ''The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the president.'' that shows that the popular vote is the one who wins.

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''The college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast;''

Claim

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is tre because without the electoral college it will have a lot of candidates that they will not get a majority of vote nether one.

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by the way, a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible and it hat happend before

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but it's less likely than a dispute over the populat vote.

Rebuttal

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Voters in presidential elections are people who wants to express a political preference eather than people who thinks that a single vote may decide an elections

Evidence

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The President should be chosen by popular vote.

Position

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By letting the people choose who sould be their President they are able to get what they want, not what Congress thinks they want.

Claim

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The Electoral College system is old news and now that we are in 2015 there are all sorts of new things going on. The Electoral College system is just too much and seems like a hassle that can be made easier by having qualified citizens vote for their President.

Claim

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Under The Electoral College system voters are voting for electors who choose the President for them.

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I feel that the people should be able to put in their votes and the man (or woman) who has the majority of the votes should be the President. I am aware that choosing the President is a big deal but by doing this, things are much easier and more efficent.

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What I am trying to say is that the Electoral College system is way too flawed and complicated to be good for us. I feel as though the Electoral College system is unfair, and irrational.

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