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ea9802ea1381 | 3A98BE969D1F | Year book gives students a chance to interact with other students by giving new students a chance to make friends, and it helps them find other students they can relate to. | Claim | Effective |
dc1321fe246f | 3A98BE969D1F | In the 6th grade I was going to a new school, that I new nothing about and then club sign ups came, and I decided to sign up for year book. when I started out they gave me a camera and told me what kind of pictures they were looking for. When I went around the school and asked students if I could take their picture they were nice about it and said sure. Out of the 25 people I asked to take their picture 17 of them asked me if I wanted to be friends, and I said yes. Also the people in the year book club were new to the school just like me we talked about how we came to a new school and none of are friends came with us. Year book helped me find friends and find people who understood what I was going trough.
| Evidence | Effective |
9c7150f679ff | 3A98BE969D1F | Student council is a good way to give back to your school, by showing that they appreciate your school and to show school spirit | Claim | Effective |
e24bb52fa360 | 3A98BE969D1F | Students on student council show that they appreciate their school when they represent them. For example when student council does a sock drive and then goes and distributes the socks to the less fortunate, they are showing how their school feels, and that they want to give back to the community we live in. When the students on student council show school spirit they go to the school sports games, show up for fund raisers, and set an example for how other students should act in school. By showing this appreciation and spirit they set the bar higher for other schools and show that they support our's. | Evidence | Effective |
a2e2c5f94f72 | 3A98BE969D1F | Students should participate in sports, working on year book, or serving on student council because they will have good grades, a chance to interact with other students, and a way to give back to the community. Students will build character buy interacting with other students and have fun while doing it. Ding, ding, ding, thats the sound of the bell for after school. All the students flood into the hallways talking to each other about sports, year book, and student council. No student fells left out and every student has a friend. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
531aecb5b192 | 3AA63F8F7D47 | Venus and Earth are very similiar | Claim | Adequate |
833a81b166b8 | 3AA63F8F7D47 | somtimes Venus is just right around the corner from Earth. | Claim | Adequate |
dc241e317f6b | 3AA63F8F7D47 | The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" supports the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because he provides sufficient evidence. | Position | Adequate |
f9321105e55a | 3AA63F8F7D47 | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because of the similarities with Earth. | Claim | Adequate |
21eeb6c36be0 | 3AA63F8F7D47 | The Author explains that "Today, Venus still some features that are analogous to those on Earth" (4). Analogous means the outside has changed but the inside or function are similiar to that pf something else. If Venus still has valleys and mountains similiar to the of Earth then if we studied those features we could find out what happened to Venus decades ago. | Evidence | Adequate |
91185976db83 | 3AA63F8F7D47 | The Author also states, "Venus can somtimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit" (4). | Claim | Adequate |
ed7b1b75942c | 3AA63F8F7D47 | Launching space crafts to other planets is very expensive and even more so for a planet light year away, but if we can send space crafts to Venus when it is closest to us then it will Americans hundreds in tax dollars and we will learn a great deal from Venus. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b18c6bf86356 | 3AA63F8F7D47 | In conclusion, Venus is worthy to be explored because there is so much we do not know about it yet and we could find something on that planet that we mever thought exsisted before. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
37c05a8013e7 | 3AED5A7D58F8 | What makes this a valueable tool to students? Can this tool be used on cell phones? Can we make this tool worldwide for all schools? what will the outcome of students emotional expressions if this tool is valuable? | Lead | Adequate |
d21f9961334a | 3AED5A7D58F8 | What makes this a valuable tool to students? This would actually be wonderful tool in schools everywhere. A student can use this tool for many differnt reason in school. A student could have really big exam, test etc. the student may believe their ready. | Evidence | Adequate |
f7aff5d0fb3f | 3AED5A7D58F8 | this would system would detect if the student is really ready or not. | Claim | Ineffective |
efe644d2f83e | 3AED5A7D58F8 | Instead of going to computer lad, waiting on your teacher. A good way to keep this system in route. It should be an app on your celluar device to use this tool. with this being on your cell phone,it makes it easier way for a stuidents that has a friend thats always in differnt moods. | Evidence | Adequate |
02d4bf6bc9ec | 3AED5A7D58F8 | With this tool we can detect that friends mood.
| Claim | Adequate |
6d969c5b3516 | 3AED5A7D58F8 |
What will it take for this tool to make it worldwide? It will half to have many great response | Evidence | Ineffective |
d3d5212bcacf | 3AED5A7D58F8 | This tool should be used many other places than schools. | Claim | Ineffective |
5ebb40ee24a3 | 3AED5A7D58F8 | It will be awesom for police officers, doctors etc. Once one school has great feedback. It make other school try it out.
| Evidence | Adequate |
3bcc110bd0f2 | 3AED5A7D58F8 | The outcome of this system is wonderful. I done used this system over a millions times at school. It has actually worked great at othere school to. | Position | Ineffective |
86230f5ad698 | 3AED5A7D58F8 | Now we have a great way of dectecting someone else emotions. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
719a506233a6 | 3B10FD21BF95 | Do you guys think that venus is dangers? Well for our part venus need to get up close and personal despite the risk or maybe they should think of them as challenges. | Lead | Adequate |
e4973642843c | 3B10FD21BF95 | Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. | Claim | Adequate |
82866344115d | 3B10FD21BF95 | Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. | Claim | Adequate |
6a51eaa96fba | 3B10FD21BF95 | Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it had proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. | Claim | Adequate |
23b51e0e40d7 | 3B10FD21BF95 | Venus would need to get uo close and personal despite the risk and maybe should think of them as challenges. | Position | Ineffective |
dd0d27a561a5 | 3B10FD21BF95 | Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in the solar system because people from long time had to covered the oceans to support carious forms of life to them just how earth is from us today. | Claim | Adequate |
f1a5f47981d3 | 3B10FD21BF95 | Also because the value of the returning of the venus seem to be a little difficult but there was other option to make a mission to be safe and productive to both of them for the astronomers to be by venus and know the planets in the solar system. | Evidence | Adequate |
81860bef0c8d | 3B10FD21BF95 | Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosvie sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere because they think that the challenging for venus might not be working for them but now they do work because the conditions are now more extreme then any human encounter out there and all of the environment can crush of a submarine | Claim | Adequate |
4c39bd95588c | 3B10FD21BF95 | But then venus has the hottest surface temperature to any of the planet in the solar system that their is even when mercury is close to the sun venus can still be hot for the system being beside another planet.
| Evidence | Adequate |
9ecb1e45c92c | 3B10FD21BF95 | Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. | Claim | Adequate |
d095b55d89ad | 3B10FD21BF95 | Venus can be the closest planet to earth even in terms of size and density. Also each of the previous mission can have an unmanned and for a reason no sacecraft has been survived for the time of landing for more than hours or even minutes. Venus had more than three decades, but venus reputation for a challenge planet is for humans to work on and study for and to despite the proximity to it. | Evidence | Adequate |
7aa81f9b21db | 3B10FD21BF95 | This is what I think the author suggests to the study of venus because venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk and maybe should think of them for a challenge, because astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may once have been the most earth-like planet in the solar system, even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere, and venus is simple to see from the distant but can be safe vantage point in earth and has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely to it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
312f08ce7706 | 3B20A3B52316 | Life is a marathon not a sprint; therefore, people can not take breaks from educating themselves, even in the summer. However, long, boring, and useless summer project persuade students to avoid the project; forcing life's marathon to become a sprint. | Lead | Effective |
3f07549b2101 | 3B20A3B52316 | Summer projects need a change and can be by students, | Position | Effective |
940a150ebd30 | 3B20A3B52316 | students know how long to make it, | Claim | Effective |
a0109d10d202 | 3B20A3B52316 | how to make it interesting, | Claim | Effective |
bc8a4a8ca9c7 | 3B20A3B52316 | what it must include. | Claim | Effective |
9d120b1e3675 | 3B20A3B52316 | Summer gives students a break from the long and hard work of the strenuous school year, therefore the stack of an eight page summer packet that may not be difficult, is enough to intimidate a student to cheat on it or simply not finish it. Student-summer-packet-designers understand the struggle and can make it a length at persuades the students to complete it on their own. | Evidence | Effective |
e72547190316 | 3B20A3B52316 | Others might suggest that having fewer questions and less pages will just decrease a student's time spent learning or reviewing material. | Counterclaim | Effective |
b0ccfc839a47 | 3B20A3B52316 | However, the decrease in the amount of problems and page length will only urge students to complete the packet instead of copying.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
e10c327c24ae | 3B20A3B52316 | Summer is meant for students to take a break from the boring and uninteresting work of the school year, therefore, the dull material in a summer packet only validates their choice to start and finish the packet a day before the start of the new school year, if at all. If student-summer-packet-designers take control over the content of these packets other students will find the information more alluring. | Evidence | Effective |
a7fd3fc1f2d9 | 3B20A3B52316 | Some can argue that teachers can pick just as fascinating topics as students. | Counterclaim | Effective |
96d5db734c1e | 3B20A3B52316 | However, because of age gaps and other variables many teacher do not know what students find entertaining. | Rebuttal | Effective |
629d140b6f76 | 3B20A3B52316 | Many items in the packet also lack the ability to teach valuable information that can lead to the success in the course. Student-summer-packet-designers can use their knowledge from taking the course to make a packet filled with example that they would have benefited from and with problems they struggled with; allowing the new students to be better prepared. | Evidence | Effective |
edb5292a1e5b | 3B20A3B52316 | People might suggest that teachers know the material the best so they will form the best summer packet. | Counterclaim | Effective |
9d65701bb3c1 | 3B20A3B52316 | However, students know what they struggled with more than the teachers; therefore, they know what to put in the packet to avoid struggle for future students. | Rebuttal | Effective |
c1b2eeb74788 | 3B20A3B52316 | Students should undoubtedly make the summer packet for upcoming students. In the past, teachers have made a long, boring, and useless summer projects. In the future, students should find that their summer projects aren't a disservice. Teachers can now give students the opportunity to create summer projects that keep students engaged in learning over there rejuvenating break. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
696533ab92ce | 3B563576DE31 | Sometimes having to be a scientist is not the best idea. Scientist discover different things at different paces,such as the ones that these scientists discovered on Mars. | Lead | Adequate |
e7dc60239aa3 | 3B563576DE31 | This face that the scientists discovered have evidence that it is just a natural landform | Position | Adequate |
02fe3eee5a40 | 3B563576DE31 | It could also be proven that the face that was found on Mars was not created by aliens. | Evidence | Adequate |
9744e13247b0 | 3B563576DE31 | First off,the face that was found has no signs of being an alien because any planet has those wierd funky looking holes right? | Claim | Adequate |
3bfe6059b644 | 3B563576DE31 | It could have been that with the temperature and time those holes could have appeared making it look like a human face. It could of just simply have been a coincidence that it happened like that. Either way we could say that maybe it was an alien or just a natural landform,nobody has been able to personally prove it because there has not been one astronaut that has went up to Mars and looked at it with its own eyes. The human being has made assumptions about a lot of different things and the majority of the time the human being is incorrect because they do not have evidence to prove that what they said was correct. | Evidence | Adequate |
2523bba9314b | 3B563576DE31 | Next,lets say that maybe the human being is correct,how could scientists prove that it is what the human being suspects? | Claim | Ineffective |
218ac77d3d85 | 3B563576DE31 | In the article in paragraph 2 it reads,"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa,common enough around Cydonia,only this one had usually shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh." In this part of the reading the author of this article are saying that it could have just been another Martian mesa,but that this one had the unusual shadows that make it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. Like it says in the text it could have just been the shadows something that make it look like an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. It could have maybe been that Martian that the scientists have said it is.
| Evidence | Adequate |
342bf43c44f8 | 3B563576DE31 | Finally,in this situation scientists might be correct again. It could only be a natural landform that formed with the weather or something different that helps little things like these form up. | Claim | Adequate |
74becce7879c | 3B563576DE31 | There are no certain clues or evidence that this "face" could be a human or an ancient Egyptian Pharoh. Sometimes the human being wants to suspect things that are not close or correct to what a specialized scientist can do. Sometimes it is just probably that the human brain gets carried away by what it looks at. Sometimes it helps to pay close attention to what we are doing or looking at, for the hiumans good. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0a0fad823542 | 3B59052B8DAF | This new technology is very useful to find peoples emotions or even to what they're thinking about | Position | Adequate |
ad85660c4068 | 3B59052B8DAF | But also it can be very bad to read other peoples emotions because it can become very personal. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
399d2e34875c | 3B59052B8DAF | I say this because what if a kid is having a bad day in the class room and you read their emotions or even thoughts, it can be very rude. An example would be what if some kid was aving some hard times at home before they went to school and they're thinking about what happened the night before they went to school or what will happen to them when they go home from school. | Evidence | Adequate |
4fbe91d51a03 | 3B59052B8DAF | But this new technology can be very helpful because what if that student is struggling in their classes and they're too shy to say anything or to get any help. | Claim | Adequate |
68ba016ed8c7 | 3B59052B8DAF | It can be very stressful and may lead to the student to want to just shut down and shut anyone out. But if you had this tachnology in the classroom it can help the student, becausse then the teacher will know that there is something wrong and try to help the student out with his or her problems in a different way like in tuduring only that select student. Or the teacher could go up to the student and figure out what's wrong and persude the student to be more open and talk about what all is wrong. | Evidence | Adequate |
b7e76afc821b | 3B59052B8DAF | But like I had said it can be very helpful or very harmful in ways. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
6c12f2c8d172 | 3BA0E26A657F | I think this facial action codig system would be really helpfull to people who work on computers or students | Position | Adequate |
e0f9f78d30a6 | 3BA0E26A657F | comptuer work is boring and lame so i would want it to send me somethjing that makes me laugh or smile.
| Evidence | Adequate |
47890609db4c | 3BA0E26A657F | I think the facial acting coding system will be a good idea on life on this plane. t it could help out our students | Claim | Adequate |
9e84a639f366 | 3BA0E26A657F | like it said in paragraph 6 it said the computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then the computer could modify the lesson like an effective human instuctor. or when you get on anybody it could see your emotion and give you something that woukld help with it. it could make video games better and in paragraph 6 it says that
"most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication so computers need to understand that to". | Evidence | Adequate |
ac7a23e82711 | 3BA0E26A657F | Then again some people would think that its weird to have a computer watching your face 24/7 | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7d3cf21840d6 | 3BA0E26A657F | aybe it could turn into a robot and take over the world. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5cc7ce9e02b7 | 3BA0E26A657F | but if they did come out with the facial action coding system it would be kinda cool | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
7993293a3b7e | 3BA0E26A657F | to have videos and stuff to cheer you up if your sad if your in a good mood could send you something to make you laugh. Even if your just doing homework and it could tell that your upset or confused or just bugged out by the problem it could help you without even asking fo9r help it would help you out right away i think thats coool cause alot of kids need help on stuff like that and for teachers they cant help alot of students with work. So before the teacher even gets to them the computer could be helping them alreadfy its like a teaher thats already there and lord knows every student wants that extra help to pass. | Evidence | Adequate |
ca3f08b3ae35 | 3BB86ECD4F58 | Yes, I think technology is good for everyone because your computor can tell when you are bored, happy, and sad | Position | Adequate |
20601e614a47 | 3BB86ECD4F58 | I feel like it would be an great idea to create something like this because if you are bored your computor may have something different for you to do instead of sitting there bored about the work you are doing. Also if you are sad and not feeling likr your normal self the computor can cheer you up by doing something to make you feel better. What if you have an computor and it can tell you having mixed emotions and the computor help you with that? I really think if we have this technology today everything would be much better. I say everything would be much better because kids today get bored fast and we need something that would help them not to get bored fast. We really should have an computor that can tell if we'er happy, sad, and even mad because what if it help us out of them type of emotions? What if we'er sad and the computor help us through the day? What if we'er bored and the computor make he work be fun? | Evidence | Adequate |
2a6a59e8f135 | 3BB86ECD4F58 | I really wish we had this type of technologhy in our generation today. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
6b089812d866 | 3BBD17BCB443 | Venus, Venus is known as Earths twin because of having similarity's. NASA hasn't yet found a way to have a rocketship to last on the palnet, so let alone a person could last up there. The longest a rocket has lasted on the planet was three weeks. NASA is still working on a way to send a rocket and people onto Venus wothout failing.
| Lead | Ineffective |
f4c10234006b | 3BBD17BCB443 | Venus is supposed to be the Earth's twin. | Claim | Ineffective |
35e35d4e57ce | 3BBD17BCB443 | Venus has the closest density, size and occasionally the cloest planet in distance too. This planet is the second planext from the Earth. All the planets orbit the sun at different speeds, and sometimes Eath is closer to Mars and other times it is closer to Venus. Venus is called the "Evening star" | Evidence | Adequate |
3bb24db1b05d | 3BBD17BCB443 | At the begining no space craft had survived on Venus for hours, but one of the space crafts have lasted for three weeks | Claim | Ineffective |
6346c223b898 | 3BBD17BCB443 | They may call Venus Earth's twin but it isnt a livable place. The pressuure of the planet is 90 times grater than Earth's. Venus has a very thick atmospere of 97% carbon dixide. The conditions are far to extreme to humans. The enviorment would be able to crush even a submarine that can take a lot of water pressure at the deepest point, Venus would liquefy the metal.
| Evidence | Adequate |
fc97c394fc0a | 3BBD17BCB443 | Venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in the solar system. | Claim | Ineffective |
40e450765e6c | 3BBD17BCB443 | Even thought Mercury is the closest planet to the sun Venus is still hottest within heat and pressure. The temeture is 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The air pressure is also almost sea level on Earth. The enviorment is very rocky, it has many valleys, mountains ans crates. It has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and freguent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. They say Venus used to be covered in Oceans. | Evidence | Adequate |
e0d2e813cef5 | 3BBD17BCB443 | NASA is doing hundreds of projects to get a space craft to land on Venus and to explore Venus. | Claim | Ineffective |
d649a40c9abb | 3BBD17BCB443 | NASA is experimenting with mechanical computers which were first envisioned in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during World War II. Its very shocking that modern computers can't last up on Venus. Modent computers do not have the gears and leavels that the mechanical computer has. That computer is much more controlable and is not more lyable to have problems. | Evidence | Adequate |
b6757673b734 | 3BBD17BCB443 | All together Venus is not a livable planet, yet and probally will not be one for a while. A human can live on Venus but it will be very hard to live on. As i said before it has 97% of Carbon dioxide and is more likely gonna be very hard to breath. Venus is very very hot at 170 degrees fahrenheit. The air pressure is really close to sea leavels on Earth imagine how hard it is to breath there. The planet is very rocky and has many valleys, moutains and caters. Let's not forget that you may wake up to erupting volcanos, powerful eathquakes, and freguent lightning stikes to probes seeking to land its surface. That all happens on the planet Venus. Would you want to live there? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c6045fa925b3 | 3BD4064486ED | What is Venus and how can we konw what it is? A Venus is sometime called the "Evening Star" and it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. | Lead | Adequate |
3692d9fc3f06 | 3BD4064486ED | The studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of how it said in page 2 "the Earth, Venus, Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds." | Position | Ineffective |
46419c0a7101 | 3BD4064486ED | The plant Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. In space terms humans is ometimes right around the corner in space ters humans have sent numerus spaceraft to land on this cloud draped world | Evidence | Adequate |
aa4fef2cfe8c | 3BD4064486ED | In Venus there are thing that we need because in page 3 it said " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." | Claim | Ineffective |
d98571acc4fe | 3BD4064486ED | Why are we trying to go to Venus? We are trying to go to Venus there are thing that need to have | Claim | Ineffective |
a06d3d528070 | 3BD4064486ED | In page 5 it said " Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape." It's trying to said it that how can we go there and can we live in that plane. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0d3ea54a2a40 | 3BD4064486ED | The time have come that we need to see what is out there and see if we can make it happen and try to make a different for everybody. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ff0b1515a589 | 3BDE1763ECDA | One of the brightest points of light in the night sky is the "Evening Star' which is also a close planet to us called Venus. Venus might seem harmless and pretty from a distance but when you get close it can be really dangerous. The conditions of Venus are hazardous to us. In fact we have had past missions that were never recorded becuase not a single mission succeded. However, NASA is trying to come up with technology that can survive these conditions so we can study Venus. | Lead | Adequate |
b8f800a1d646 | 3BDE1763ECDA | The closest planet to Earth in density, size, and sometimes distance also is, in fact, Venus. It was even once may have been known as the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus and Earth has come similar features such as rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. However, Venus isn't all that pretty. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e40b798a0dcf | 3BDE1763ECDA | There are some really big dangers when coming in contact with this planet. | Claim | Adequate |
02a81c4dd4fb | 3BDE1763ECDA | Venus has almost a 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket that covers the planet. The fluffy clouds are really just sulfuric acid in the atmosphere on Venus. The temperature on Venus is an average of 800 degrees Farenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth. Because of these harsh conditions the several missions to Venus were remain unknown because no spacecraft was able to survuve the landing for more than a few hours leading to us not being able to collect samples of the materials on Venus's surface. | Evidence | Adequate |
496377c7defc | 3BDE1763ECDA | Despite the harsh conditions and the unsuccessful missions, we could still be able to study Venus | Claim | Adequate |
6d95e9f647a3 | 3BDE1763ECDA | A possible solution to the conditions is to have the scientists float above the surface on the planet. Another way, is to have a vehicle instead of a person hover over the surface. NASA is working on new approaches to study Venus. They make devices such as electronics made of silicon carbide and test it in a chamber that resembles the same conditions as Venus. When comparing systems that use mechanical parts than modern electronics, the mechanical parts an be made to where they are more resistant to the forces on Venus such as pressure and heat. | Evidence | Adequate |
b66b57f27bd1 | 3BDE1763ECDA | Instead of looking at all the flaws in studying Venus, there are still some major components that can lead us to studying it | Claim | Adequate |
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