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72a51cd28fcc | 3BDE1763ECDA | Even though Venus has harsh conditions that humans are not able to survive on, there are still technological avdvances that could lead us to exploring or living on the planet. Most scientists are curious of new things even if they can not physically study it in which the, "Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." such as Venus. The conditions of Venus will not stop scientists or researchers from trying to gather more and more information of Venus. The study of Venus could be an oppertunity to a whole new world. There are ways and technological ways that will allow humans to live on Venus but it just has not been discovered yet. | Evidence | Adequate |
e7535c075ae0 | 3BDE1763ECDA | Venus is a harmful planet with dangerous conditions. However, with developing technology we figure out ways to study the planet | Evidence | Adequate |
13a065edcdd0 | 3BDE1763ECDA | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because one day our population could be living on it | Position | Adequate |
2fa08ca28b72 | 3BDE1763ECDA | Even though there are dangers, there is no way in studying more about Venus if we never try to come up with ways to safely research it. Venus could be our next planet. To find out if it is then more research and risks will need to come into affect. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
39d22503c70f | 3BF8370D18A6 | " It's 2016 and i still look young!" said Luke. he was the cowboy who rode waves "Ok dad since Forever ago!" said his daughter. She was in town for special reasons.
" Can you tell me a story of when you were young?" his daughter asked. " Oh all right,but just one. When I was young I was a wave surfer and-" he was enturupted by his daughter. " that part changes every time last time you told me this story it was a sailor and then it was a -" "Alright mabey I was just a guy on a cattle boat." he said.
" His daugter laughed at him, just a guy on a cattle boat,huh." she said "Hey it payed the bills, got food on the table,and payed the hospital bills too!" he said angerly. His dauhter sat there with nothing to say. "You promised to never talke about her ever again!" not knowing what he said. she left the room with nothing to say.
She left the hous got in her car and drove off without a hug or a kiss goodbye. She never had done this before. She never knew her mother.
But of course she came back and he talked about his journeys to china and all different places. | Evidence | Ineffective |
103642391d49 | 3BFD98581812 | in the artical the autoer shows how they would like to see venus get explored dispite the harsh condisons and odd wether | Position | Adequate |
91ff4de85cc5 | 3BFD98581812 | the autoer gives many resons why they would like to see venus such as how it is earths twin | Claim | Adequate |
e86124e006ab | 3BFD98581812 | flying over it with a blimp or jet of some kind | Claim | Adequate |
a2aa289c212b | 3BFD98581812 | as well as a mecanical computer.
| Claim | Adequate |
2ec94add1a53 | 3BFD98581812 | the authoer states that venus is eraths twin | Claim | Adequate |
f128289a123f | 3BFD98581812 | this would a huge milestone and would be amazing. one of many resons would be to use it for the study of earth and our sun. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5237f80f2f8a | 3BFD98581812 | the next way would be a bilmp or jet of some kind that would fly over venus at an altutude that is safe for use. | Claim | Adequate |
dc3f884db3d3 | 3BFD98581812 | this is however a bad way to get there for the astronuts would be there for a short time becuse of fuel cost and coservaton. as well as there would be no real way to test the surfuse of venus from there ass you could not get to the surfuce. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7d7f60625902 | 3BFD98581812 | the last way to get there is by sneding a mecalical computer | Claim | Adequate |
5642898e63cc | 3BFD98581812 | this would give use amazing resalts. but a the cost of developing a computer that the last time these were largly used was in the 1940's wolud be a fotune and they left that out for they relly whant to go. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e623375b37ae | 3BFD98581812 | the from the artical how the auther relliy wants to go to venus so they gave us the resons how it is earths twin, flying over it with a blimp or jet of some kind, as well as a mecanical computer. so in conclusen the auther relly whant to go to venus | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b36658b0b3df | 3C01D1FB2BBF | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author provides a compelling and efficient argument to support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Using statistics, factual information, and specific plans being developed as we speak, the author convinces the audience that exploring Venus is worth the risks involved. | Position | Effective |
d31a62e06861 | 3C01D1FB2BBF | The author throroughly describes the immersive learning possibilities that could be discovered by studying the foreign planet, the surviveable and safe travel conditions for humans, and other exploration options to ensure a safe and efficient venture to Venus. | Evidence | Effective |
7e9d5ca13124 | 3C01D1FB2BBF | First of all, the author immediately combats the argument of Venus being too dangerous to venture. | Claim | Effective |
a68ca3fe3bf3 | 3C01D1FB2BBF | When discussing the exploration of Venus, most people are turned off by its reputation as a dangerous and challenging planet for humans to study. While the author doesn't stray away from these harsh extremities, they make sure to prove how these details seem insignificant and how safe travel can still be executed. The author thoroughly describes the plan provided by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) to allow astronauts to float above the fray and avoid the hazardous conditions. They provide specific qualities of the plan, such as the air pressure being close to the sea level on Earth, the abundance of solar power, and the containment of radiation, to prove how humans would be kept in a safe atmosphere. They even provide a real world connection between NASA's possible solution and a blimp-like vheicle hovering around the ground to make it easier for the audience to understand. The author combats the speculaiton of Venus being too dangerous to explore in order to further support the idea of it being a worthy pursuit. | Evidence | Effective |
9c39ce72acdb | 3C01D1FB2BBF | Furthermore, the author heavily emphasizes the learning opportunities that exploring the foreign planet would undoubtedly provide us. | Claim | Effective |
2bbf2426c702 | 3C01D1FB2BBF | While providing simple, yet interesting facts about Venus, such as it being the planet closest to Earth's density and size, may be enough to intrigue the audience into wanting to learn more about the planet, the author takes it a step further. The author goes in depth about the possibility of Venus being the most Earth-like planet in our solar system long ago. They detail the planet's environment today, consisting of Earth-like structures such as rocky sediment surfaces, valleys, mountans, craters, and other geological findings. They also state "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." This information opens up an entirely new realm of possibilites for the audience to consider, and is more likely to interest them as it directly relates to our life on Earth. The way the author has set up the comparisons of Earth and Venus have allowed the audience to view the exploration of the planet as an opportunity to see a planet that could be like us; a planet with living, breathing forms of life similar to what we see everyday. The author uses this information to encourage the audience to view the pursuit of Venus as a chance to gain information on the things we see in our everyday life, and not just complex ideas that are difficult to understand and most-likely won't affect them. | Evidence | Effective |
7cacbcfb82be | 3C01D1FB2BBF | Finally, the author provides numerous options being developed for humans to embark in safe and efficient travel to Venus. | Claim | Effective |
904e1bcf2cc3 | 3C01D1FB2BBF | When discussing the potential plans to explore the planet, the author states "Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." This quote makes it clear to the audience that scientists are doing whatever it takes to develop multiple, efficient plans for space travel. The author also goes onto provide different examples to further convey how close scientists are to developing the safest plan possible. They specifically mention the use of simplified electronics made of silicon carbide and explain how they've already been tested in a chamber that simulate the conditions of Venus's surfaces, yet how they're still being improved upon. They also describe an old technology called mechanical computer, noting how this technology has already been used frequently in the 1940's and how it can be incorporated into space travel now. The author has given detailed descriptions of the efforts made and the options available to provide a safe embarkment for humans to support the ideas that Venus is a worthy pursit. | Evidence | Effective |
407d4d7a304a | 3C01D1FB2BBF | Clearly, the author has efficiently and convincingly supported the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. By describing all the information about the existence of other life forms and the similarities to Earth that we could potentially learn from the study, the author proves how worthy Venus is to be discovered. The author also rebuttals one of the main concerns for traveling to the planet by explaining how plans are being developed to make travel and living conditions surviveable, safe, and efficient for both humans and machines. In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author was able to convey and support the idea that Venus is worthy of exploration. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
dc4936042b3f | 3C0AD7817D49 | My claim for, "Making Mona Lisa Smile," would go against what the author is trying to say. | Position | Ineffective |
d7ed71d7ffaf | 3C0AD7817D49 | The reason is, because anybody can say that they made a Facial Action Coding System computers. | Claim | Ineffective |
86c348000711 | 3C0AD7817D49 | Also the Author says that the Facial Action Coding System computers can Deteced when you are happy or when you are sad.
In Paragraph 4 it says that each expression is compared against a neutral face showing no emotion. Also it says that it can scan movements in a real face or in the the painted face of Mona Lisa. Plus it can be used for a video as well that show a new emotion with the software. | Evidence | Adequate |
f59faeef1c55 | 3C0AD7817D49 | If somebody did make a computer like that then why did nobody put it in a Newspaper or even a magazine | Claim | Adequate |
af083f1c57fb | 3C0AD7817D49 | If you are reading this then you would understand what I am trying to say or try to tell you. I think also if they did come put with the computer then people would like to be able to hear what the computer is capable of. If you understand then you would agree with me that the people should know what it does and what it can not do. If it can stop fight's then it should be brought to the people's attention, but if it can not stop fight's then it should not be brought to the people's attention | Evidence | Ineffective |
a02c1db5d864 | 3C0AD7817D49 | What if you the reader are using this and it tells you that you are mad then keep it. Then on the other hand you got to realize that if it says that you are mad but you are happy, then give it back to the company that you bought the item from and get your money back. So that is why my claim is going to be against what the author is trying to say. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6bb68e710705 | 3C0AD7817D49 | The reason why that is my claim is because you can never trust if the item will work or not. | Claim | Adequate |
f37ceabbeb0b | 3C0AD7817D49 | If a real person is reading this then you will understand what I am trying to tell you. Also if you were wise as well then you can understand what I am trying say by, "you can never trust if the item will work or not." | Evidence | Ineffective |
ae0e595e7567 | 3C0AD7817D49 | So this is why my claim is what it is. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
8e80cd25b6d5 | 3C2FB67A96CB | I think that the new technology to read students faces in the class room could be of some use, but I also think that it would not be of use in the classroom. | Position | Ineffective |
09e05c3c073f | 3C2FB67A96CB | The reason I think it would be useful is it could help a teacher understand some of the kids facial expressions. | Claim | Adequate |
f19a4878cd6f | 3C2FB67A96CB | A teacher can read the childs face to see if they can help then when they are sad and dont tell anyone, but I also think that it would be an invasion of the childs space, because sometimes when kids or even adults get mad or sad and they dont say anything to anyone it's because they dont want people to know. It could help in somecases like when a child is being bulllied at school and they dont tell someone then the teacher could use the device to see that the child is either sad or mad or even both. | Evidence | Adequate |
5548ca6d015f | 3C2FB67A96CB |
I support and do not support this at ther same time. i support it because I feel it could be helpful but I do not suppot this because I feel if a child needs help with how they are feeling they will go to an adult they trust, weather it be a teacher at school or a parent or even a friend at achool. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
1fff20c5639e | 3C7CCE3A0596 | People that think that the face was created by alliens think that beacuase they probably heard that from someone else or someone told them without having any real facts | Position | Adequate |
d407b8905805 | 3C7CCE3A0596 | But if we go into more details i remember once i read/seen something about that there might be some alliens out there in space. The face of the earth was created by natrual landform as NASA has said. On May 24,2001 a spacecraft was circling around when they fount a shadowy figure like a human face! The thing is how will we ever know the real truth behind that. Yeah i know people tell us differnt things but how will we know witch one to belive out of all them. We obviosly have to belive NASA because they are the ones that go up there often and let us know if there is anything new up there. | Evidence | Ineffective |
909fe7d88e71 | 3C7CCE3A0596 | Its not like we can go up there anytime we want and cheke for ourselfs! The bad thing is that we will never find out for our ownselfs but thats just the way things are! | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
45cc778bd831 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus,"the author suggests that studying planet Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents | Position | Ineffective |
8e51a0790934 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | Since Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, the distance are similar too. This planet has different speeds. Though, humans have sent many spacecrafts to this dangerous land. Each mission was unmanned sicne no spacecraft ever survived the landing for a few hours.
| Evidence | Adequate |
503e3955480d | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | Some dangerous this planet planet presents | Claim | Adequate |
5607aadd7ffc | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | the atmosphere is thick and is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere and the conditions are more extreme than human encounter in Earth. "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system, even though Mercury is closeer to our Sun"(Paragraph 3). It has so much heat and pressure and the weather presents additional dangerous which are, erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and excesive amount of lighting strikes. | Evidence | Adequate |
79d4ccfad82a | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | This dangerous can really affect humans and humans won't really be able to survive in that planet. | Claim | Adequate |
e31d22643b42 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | Scientists believe Venus was once covered largely wiht oceans and could of supported forms of life | Evidence | Ineffective |
6d02241179a8 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | scientists are now able to knwo more about technology and ivent new spacecrafts. We now have new information of the Planet Venus | Claim | Adequate |
91c24afc9cc4 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | Now, we know it's surface is rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. | Evidence | Adequate |
2af9dfdc40a0 | 3C9D9C9C1A16 | In conclusion, I think the more we learn the more we can be able to experience more things and have more knwoledge. Technology has been playin a big part of this situations and expriences. The more technology advances the more we will be able to exprience more. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4be5e6c32e08 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | My principal has decided that students should do at least on extracurricular activity | Lead | Adequate |
b54740fbd07c | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | I disagree with this because i think that students can do what they feel like doing and not be forced into something. | Position | Effective |
fbe165be8ef2 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | This will probably change a lot of things | Claim | Ineffective |
32a0b05cabd6 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | We will be forced to do sports some students dont't like sports either they're not fit for it or they just don't like sports at all. | Claim | Adequate |
e74c522b464a | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | Some people might want to work on there yearbooks but not everyone gets yearbooks. | Claim | Adequate |
c121007634e6 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | The student council i don't feel like any student would really want to do it. | Claim | Adequate |
d3f98694c2fa | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | Because what will it be about what will they say they might hurt or say something a student does not want to hear. | Evidence | Ineffective |
506dcafcf9bb | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | Sports what will they will have to do and what they will need. In sports you have to have the equipment your so pose to have for that sport. It could be Baseball, Football, Basketball or Soccer and whatever sport there is chosen for that student. Most sports you have to do conditioning so you have to run a lot and some people don't like running. Some people are not athletic and there just not good enough for sports. They might want to have a job and trying to go for what they want to do later in life. A lot of sports you can get seriously injured and some students might not want that to happen to them.
| Evidence | Adequate |
5fe909312e60 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | What is wrong with the yearbook. What are they going to do with the yearbook because all you have to do is set the students that took there picture in alphabetical order. What will they do when there done with It.
There not going to let a lot of people do it because you don't need half the school. Plus It's going to be hard if everyone wants to do the yearbooks. | Evidence | Adequate |
b05a05f62861 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | What will they do with the student council. I don't think this is a good idea at all because hoe are they going to go threw the whole school for whatever they have to say to every individual student. It might take a while for a lot of students or it might be quick. It's going to be hard because some people are good and don't need it. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a130be310a53 | 3CA8BC5FDD12 | I think these things are bad ideas.
I don't think this will be good because students want to focus on there education and to go for an higher future. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
fa27249e1ccd | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | Why should you join the Seagoing Cowboys program? | Lead | Adequate |
c191235bb1b1 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program | Position | Adequate |
ab3b11a153fb | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you could help people over seas and in other countries. | Claim | Adequate |
181808396ba1 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | A boy named Luke Bomberger got to do all of the things that you could be able to do, by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Evidence | Ineffective |
dad8537a10e5 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you could get to see many unique places all over the world. | Claim | Adequate |
71caf28acded | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | A lot of people do not get to see some of the things that you could be able to see during the Seagoing Cowboys program. After the animals are unloaded and you have some free time, you could so site seeing and do all of it for free! Luke Bomberger got to do this while visiting many different countries for free. Now that is a once in a lifetime opportunity. | Evidence | Adequate |
cd0c9aadf783 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you could travel all over the world for free! | Claim | Adequate |
878ae7dd8a93 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | That is a once in a lifetime opportunity. You don't get to travel to places for free very often. Luke Bomberger had the chance to go to many different countries and see many different things in those countries. | Evidence | Adequate |
16b30dda34b1 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | when you are in the different countries and you have freetime over in those places, is that you can meet people and learn their about cutures. | Claim | Adequate |
4259e5150ec7 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | Luke got to go see and meet new people during his free time while people were still unloading the animals, and probably learned new things about those peoples cultures too. | Evidence | Ineffective |
92444990a713 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you can learn a lot of survival skills on the ships that you are on. | Claim | Adequate |
e85bccd5bdbe | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | If you ever are a capatin of a ship in the Seagoing Cowboys program or in any program, is that you will already know how to control a ship, keep your ship members in order, and know what to do when you are on that ship. Luke Bomberger got to learn a few things on how to contol a ship and what to do when a storm hits and you sail right through the storm. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6dbfad5d5213 | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you could meet new people on the ship and get to know them | Claim | Adequate |
9db28401c8ec | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | A lot of people do not have friends or just want to be more social. A way you could do that is by joining the program. After all of the animals are unloaded and you are heading back to your home to pick up more animals, you could play games with some of your ship members. Luke Bomberger got to meet new people and probably made some new friends while on some of those trips, even though he already had a friend that was going with him on the ships and things. | Evidence | Adequate |
3a795618b1ae | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | you can spend a lot of time with animals. | Claim | Adequate |
fd09da94e00f | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | After you are finished with the program, and you need to find a job, you could open a new farm and already know how to take care of most of your animals. When Luke was on the ship he already knew how to take care of the animals but he probable go to learn new things on how to take care of them. | Evidence | Ineffective |
27eaa262290f | 3CB7F7FC1F29 | Those are the reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to help people, see unique places, you could travel all ofver the world, you get to learn about peoples cultures, you can learn a alot of survival skills, you can meet new people on the ship and make friends, and you get to learn a lot about animals and how to take care of them. Those are some of the many reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
87bb472ef800 | 3D26F9BC9F2C | Luke didn't paticipate in the Seagoing Cowboys because he hat to stay at home. And because he had just graduated from high school. he didn't think it was nessisary to go and he had a leave at home even tho he had a family at home. He didn't want to just leave them at home with out him. Becuase he had no one to watch them when they was at home alone with no one to talk to. He desided to stay and not go so he can be there with them and he was going to pertect them from harmes way. he loved his family to much to just leaver to join a cowboy group with people her didn't know at all so he said No and that he was staying with them. Because if he would have left it would proboly change ther life and his forever. they didn't want to stay home by there self for a long time he wanted to stay and help them out around there house and other stuff. And because it was to danges for him any way that is why he didn't want to go. And he just wanted to stay and not put himself in danger because it was a war and he didn't want to die and never return. | Evidence | Ineffective |
42fd2a83aa95 | 3D303A57E7A4 | "SCORE! Three points to the Wildcats," an announcer exclaims. The crowd goes absolutely wild, and the players feel proud about their effort. Basketball is only one of the many amazing and exciting extracurricular activities students have the privilege to pick from. There's a variety to what's available, from art to softball to helping produce the school yearbook. Each of those activities are creative, entertaining, and helpful one way or another. In addition, our principal has decided that all students should take part in at least one extracurricular activity. As a result, some students are complaining and disapproving about this decision while others, such as me, think this is an opportunity for students to have a incredible time doing whatever activity they choose. | Lead | Effective |
ddc45b422e5e | 3D303A57E7A4 | Our school should have these extracurricular activities | Position | Adequate |
de22ec3545c0 | 3D303A57E7A4 | because it gives students a chance to socialize with new people, | Claim | Effective |
c7a7ff1bb009 | 3D303A57E7A4 | learn new skills and experience new things, | Claim | Effective |
b1cee69b8595 | 3D303A57E7A4 | entertain themselves while impacting the school as well as the community. | Claim | Effective |
1ded58c9dd1d | 3D303A57E7A4 | To elaborate, drama, or theater, involves everyone to communicate with each other to create a scene that will dazzle the audience. They must decide how to react, talk, and act to one another to make the performance truly spectacular.
Additionally, students don't just see their classmates when they go to their chosen activity, there are other kids from other grades there as well, so it's the perfect chance to meet unfamiliar people, and chat with familiar people, too. To add to that, the activity likely brings out skills in others that you didn't know they had, and that enables students to connect with one another and find out more about each other. | Evidence | Effective |
69e9fcef5661 | 3D303A57E7A4 | Most activity leaders allow field trips at least once a year. As an effect, students get to go places they've never been before, and if they have, they get to share their experience at that place with different people. Also, multiple activities, such as art, teach students to make certain things. In artistic cases, you get to learn about pottery, clay, watercolor and acrylic painting, different drawing tools, and more. In addition, music lets you explore your voice, public speaking lets you learn how to be a motivational speaker, marching band lets you play more pieces of music with your instrument, and experience more with it, and so many more activities teach you a variety of different things. | Evidence | Effective |
e72ea6eecccb | 3D303A57E7A4 | For example, teens in charge of the yearbook have a entertaining time making sure their product is pleasing to the eye, so that our school has something valuable to sell to students, and so that they can look back on all the great memories they had at our precious school. Nevertheless, at the same time they're expressing their creativity into the book. Also, the art students create posters and fliers to advertise upcoming school events so that everyone can enjoy that event with their friends. I know by experience that creating colorful, bright papers is a fun-filled activity to do. Plus, some students who are in the Environment Protection Youths of Virginia group volunteer to pick up litter along the sidewalks, in parks, and many other places that would harm the environment of our beloved state if they weren't cleared and cleaned. They have a wonderful time doing just that while chatting to their friends.
| Evidence | Effective |
2dadc48b8b27 | 3D303A57E7A4 | To summarize, because students get to socialize with people they never got the opportunity to talk to before, experience new things and get taught new skills, and impact the community as well as themselves, I believe extracurricular activities should definitely be included at our school. They are a very bright part of anyone's day, something that a kid could look forward to on a boring Monday. Also, they could find out new things they didn't have a clue about. A teen gets to talk to others near their age group who started out just being part of a crowd, but because they met them while playing the part of Juliet, they turned into a best friend. Additionally, we get to help the whole state while having a incredible time. So whether it's the applause of an audience at a play, the encouraging comment of a friend on a picture, or the announcement of a score it took a team effort to achieve, the activity that got someone there made a mark on their heart. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
ad131938feac | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. | Position | Adequate |
a13bd18b6f9b | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | Venus's knickname is sometimes called the "Evening Star" mainly because Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth has proved a very challenging place to examine closely.
It is also called the "Evening Star" because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. On Venus, the temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on Earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
46cde515ee1a | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | These conditions are far more extreme than anything human would encounter on Earth. | Claim | Adequate |
fc35886ff045 | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | It is not suprising that the temperature average is so high given the fact that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. So basically, if you walk on Venus you will get burns.
Studying Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky because it is simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.
Yes, Venus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely, but although it is not clear due to the fact that 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, it is still simple to see from the distant, safe vantage point.
No spacecraft survived for more than a few hours because of the carbon dioxide blanketing clouds of Venus.
The clouds of Venus most likely explains why not a single spacecraft torched down on Venus for more than three decades. Venus's atmosphere at night is not affected by carbon dioxide of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. This is exactly why studying Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky is simple for an amateur stargazer to spot. | Evidence | Adequate |
2c46f4fb275d | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.
| Claim | Adequate |
8766eca52a97 | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | Venus has value because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself just like intimidating endeavors does as well.
Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, it should only be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.
This helps to strive to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value. | Evidence | Ineffective |
90f6cea6cc76 | 3D3E4F0B74D2 | So, because our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts, intimidating endeavors should only be expanded to meet the imagination and innovation of the travel.
So, because Venus is simple to see from the distant and because our travels should be expanded, studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because it only presents a small amount of dangers.
So, If Venus was more of a dangerous planet to explore, walk on, and study, would this be a planet that everyone would be interested to study and afraid to walk on to explore? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
03e66ebd46db | 3D7B1F039322 | There are many ways to learn new things, through experience, being taught, and a multitude of other ways to obtain new information. School is the perfect place to learn new things from teachers that have extensive experience in their specific area of expertise. It is the teacher's and administration's job to help provide a well-rounded education for their students and part of that is assigning work that the students do not want to do. Summer projects are important so the students continue to use their brain and learn how to retain information. | Lead | Effective |
8b7e5305d2a1 | 3D7B1F039322 | Teachers should design the projects | Position | Adequate |
e844bfd20bbe | 3D7B1F039322 | they know the material, | Claim | Effective |
3dee8737c85f | 3D7B1F039322 | have experience making lessons and projects, | Claim | Effective |
9ab997fd5d20 | 3D7B1F039322 | if it was student designed then the work would be almost non-existent. | Claim | Effective |
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