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53ec2695258c | 106394519512 | Similarly, some students choose not to interact with their teachers they see on a daily basis at school on a more meaningful level where they should be developing better relationships with them. | Claim | Effective |
b246565fe987 | 106394519512 | Email, video conferences, and other ways of communicating from home will provide this for students at home. Instead of constantly seeing them in school hallways and in class, the student can choose how they will develop their relationships with and get to know their teachers. | Evidence | Effective |
1576c1eb78c4 | 106394519512 | Overall, students should have access to a path of learning that is catered to them. This path should accomadate for teachers and learners ease, saftey, and the students social needs. Home is the best place for a student to learn away from the school campus especially when point-blank bullying and mass schootings are taken into consideration. However, the students social life will not be diminished in anyway with the aid of group video conferences. The students online acedemic career will reflect how they learn best. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e62e5488b6bd | 108C28958E5B | Lots of people go through life based upon their own opinions, but truthfully, having multiple peoples' opinion leads to making better choices.
If you try and make an important decision based off of only your own opinion, you could face a truckload of consequences. | Position | Effective |
78e1aae76fc6 | 108C28958E5B | Going to friends, family, or someone else you trust for advice is a great way to have more input while facing a decision.
These people could have a different point of view on the matter, have more experience on the topic, or they've made mistakes and can help you learn from them. | Claim | Effective |
911f741bda9d | 108C28958E5B | If someone has a different opinion or reasoning on a topic, they could help you to look at the issue from their point of view, which might change your mind on the matter.
Being able to look at a problem from both sides of the argument could positively affect your decision, whether it's choosing a side or settling on a compromise.
For example, if you're not sure you should tryout for a team, or be involved in a school play, ask for opinions from your parents and friends to see what they think you should do.
Their input would not only help you make a decision, but also build your confidence in what you're trying to achieve.
Getting multiple opinions on an issue would really help to make better choices on the topic. | Evidence | Effective |
d13e92670476 | 108C28958E5B | finding someone with a lot of experience on the subject can help improve your choice making. | Claim | Adequate |
15d75f1aaca7 | 108C28958E5B | They've gone through the process, or possess a lot of knowledge on the topic, that could help inform you on the best choice to make.
For instance, let's say you really want to buy a brand new surfboard, but you don't know which brands and models are the best.
You could go on a professional surfers' website and see what board he uses and/or recommends.
This would let you know that the surfboard is a top-notch board, considering someone who surfs for a living uses it.
Finding someone with lots of experience and getting their opinion is crucial in making an important decision. | Evidence | Effective |
14da010e3548 | 108C28958E5B | getting peoples' opinion based off not only their own, but also your mistakes can result in improved decisions/results in the future. | Claim | Adequate |
8c75eae3b8b6 | 108C28958E5B | You could learn what to do because of something they did wrong, or you could've been the one to make a mistake, and they could tell where you messed up.
Let's suppose you went fishing with your dad and put your bait on wrong, causing it to slip off the hook when you cast the line.
Your dad could help show what you did wrong, and correct it, because he has made the same mistake before.
Learning from mistakes is a great way to improve and have better judgment next time. | Evidence | Adequate |
4b47d1d85634 | 108C28958E5B | Getting an opinion from a different point of view, receiving advice from a person with lots of experience, and creating opinions based on your own or others mistakes are all great ways to making better choices.
The person could change your mind on the topic, inform you with knowledge that you didn't possess before, or tell you what they did wrong and what not to do.
Whatever it is, talking with someone will help you choose, and feel more confident making a decision.
Seeking multiple opinions is the best way to help make a better choice. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a15193ec0e9d | 11647A73E2B9 | Sometimes you need to ask for advise from your peers or even from older people, like your parents or teachers.
This can be difficult as not everyone is very good at giving or asking for advise.
Often times, some people might give bad advise, on purpose or not.
Also, naturally, people are prone to bias | Lead | Effective |
9be771e8dbc0 | 11647A73E2B9 | Asking multiple people for opinions can help get down to certain details that you would like to obtain. | Position | Effective |
a1d4b9795089 | 11647A73E2B9 | Whether people know it or not, sometimes they give bad advise.
| Claim | Effective |
61bc169f6554 | 11647A73E2B9 | This can be due to having different experiences, or just not knowing exactly what's best.
The more opinions you get from multiple people, the less likely it is you are receiving bad advise.
If everyone except for one person is giving you the same advise, chances are that the one person is most likely giving you bad advise.
Also, if you don't know much about the subject, it can be tough to figure out what is bad advise and what is good.
Plus, you don't have to check your facts as deeply. | Evidence | Adequate |
417b2b198196 | 11647A73E2B9 | People are very subjective to bias, it happens to all of us, whether we want it to or not.
| Claim | Effective |
c8075b00de3c | 11647A73E2B9 | Everyone has their own opinion, and most people have very different opinions from everyone else.
If you get multiple opinions from different sides of the story, you will probably get several different answers, but then you will be able to decide which one will most likely work the best for you.
Also, older and younger people usually give different advise, because times have changed, and also because older people have had different experiences, and more experience, than younger people have.
Bias is a big factor that you need to take in when asking for your receiving advise. | Evidence | Adequate |
7f5aa9d8458a | 11647A73E2B9 | Seeking multiple opinions can help you make a better choice by getting down to specific details.
| Claim | Effective |
4522d1868895 | 11647A73E2B9 | Multiple people will give multiple parts of the story and then you can piece them together to get a whole.
Having more detail will help you form a stronger opinion based on the opinions that your advisers gave you.
It is hard to get a lot of details from just one person, but the more people, the better.
In certain situations, you may not have been advised on, but having more detail will help you figure it out.
| Evidence | Effective |
3bcc22616d92 | 11647A73E2B9 | All of these will help you form a more secure, well-rounded opinion.
Even still, there is no right or wrong answer to life or how to live it.
However, asking for multiple opinions can, and most likely will, help you form your own opinion on life and how to deal with things.
This happens by removing bias, getting down to details, and asking from multiple sides of the story, young and old.
We have to ask for advise often, and getting multiple opinions is a great addition to that, that is almost always necessary. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
ad967e8fdfaf | 12988594D953 | Getting advice is crucial to success. No matter where you are from or what your future holds, asking for advice stays the same. Advice has many interpretations but to me advice is, asking someone their opinion on how you should do something. This could mean how a person should run a new business or what type of dog food they could buy. One reason I believe advice is so important is because whether you use the advice or not, you still gain knowledge and understanding of that person's point of view. Advice, as important as it is, should not be taken lightly (even for dog food). | Lead | Effective |
7e1f8a06d9c3 | 12988594D953 | Taking multiple opinions increases your chance of success | Position | Effective |
3f458dbe20e0 | 12988594D953 | it explores different point of views, | Claim | Effective |
2fcceca7b66c | 12988594D953 | eliminates biases | Claim | Effective |
6250890bb4c9 | 12988594D953 | applies different experiences.
| Claim | Effective |
d48bedb8a30b | 12988594D953 | Every person has ideals and every persons ideals are different. This is important because with every person's ideals comes a different opinion which effects the advice they give you. Combining the multitude of advice you get with every person you ask will compile a grand list of choices, which is great for you. Now your job is to find the advice that fits you best and execute. | Evidence | Effective |
7cb66f7a49e7 | 12988594D953 | Opinions are everything when seeking advice and exploring different views is one of the most solid ways to make the right decision. | Claim | Effective |
0845c4fa97c2 | 12988594D953 | Bias is a trait of every human being. When given the choice most people would rather go to their family or a close friend for advice rather than a co-worker they hardly know. Although most people would stick to those that are close to them for advice, I believe going to new people could bode shockingly well. Sticking to biases will lower your range of differentiating ideals, which I mentioned earlier, in turn ending up with similar advice which is not beneficial to someone who really wants the best advice possible. | Evidence | Effective |
c22c2f26634c | 12988594D953 | In some cases talking to a loved one is all you need but new people could add a fresh opinion that could change your course of action for the better. | Claim | Effective |
c8f74672e3e8 | 12988594D953 | Everyone is different and has had different experiences. These experiences change us and are the very thing that form friendship, ideals and views. | Evidence | Effective |
a26d170322e4 | 12988594D953 | the most important thing when trying to seek advice is to consider different experiences. | Claim | Effective |
6e3c43f2e850 | 12988594D953 | This complied understanding from different ideals, new people and diverse people will give you a great advantage when seeking advice. Once you have this information you must find the advice that best applies to you and you situation. Taking to bias into account make the decision, whether it is life business opportunity or a new brand of dog food, being thorough with advice will always benefit you. Once you have your new advice you have gained more than just an idea on what to do, you have also gained new understanding of the people you have asked and a lot of information that will make a smarter person. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
ef83efaa1a00 | 12C4FDD062F3 | Image if you can stay home and get your education that would be fantastic...wait would it really.
Other then learning, a part of school is meeting new people and making friends. Also,if you play a sport for the school you'll have to get up out of bed to get to school anyway for practice. It could be a good work out to get up and go to school, you'll never know | Lead | Adequate |
b19a395c7a09 | 12C4FDD062F3 | Although, some may think going to your classes on your computer or phone is a good thing but,I rather go to the actual school.
| Position | Adequate |
d2e54280b3fe | 12C4FDD062F3 | Some may argue,staying home for school is amazing because they think its going to help them way more in school. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
25175b70fa61 | 12C4FDD062F3 | Lets be real one of the biggest reasons is that there lazy. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
06f25594418a | 12C4FDD062F3 | They would think you'll get to wake up whenever you want to. If your having trouble in a class or you just miss a lesson you can always go back to the video conferencing and re watch it. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
635f9b16abd3 | 12C4FDD062F3 | To me I still dont think thats enough evidence and detail to say I would stay home. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
d362acabbb4b | 12C4FDD062F3 | Other people would say going to school is the right place for it. | Claim | Adequate |
5f6dcc63973e | 12C4FDD062F3 | Everybody can't do things on their own time they would end up forgetting. Some people would have to be force to do what they got do do somewhat like me.
| Evidence | Adequate |
3aa4f8dde330 | 12C4FDD062F3 | They would be outside or somewhere other then working at home before going outside. | Evidence | Ineffective |
19a6114a6d5f | 12C4FDD062F3 | Another reason is what if you don't have internet or a computer;You will have to do your work at school unless you want to find a local library. | Claim | Adequate |
b1b72f314b19 | 12C4FDD062F3 | The teacher might speak slower or just not as clear as every one else is because of the type of computer. | Claim | Adequate |
fd9a9e70b071 | 12C4FDD062F3 | For example,if they glitching you not going to understanding the lesson she is teaching you.
Furthermore,in school would be in a better learning environment then it is to be at home. | Evidence | Adequate |
c3dd3b324b42 | 12C4FDD062F3 | A student family could be a loud family causing him not to be as successful as he would be if he was at school | Claim | Adequate |
96da2bdae8bf | 12C4FDD062F3 | . One of their family members could go to his house while he watching the video conference and distract the student from learning. If we think about it, it can help you be prepared for the real world for working. Can make you on time for your job as in getting up early. Going to school everyday is a big part you can't go on a video online to start working at a job. | Evidence | Adequate |
2946a353ffad | 12C4FDD062F3 | lthough, some may still think going to your classes is a good thing i don't agree.
Some students don't take school in a serous matter like other students who cares about their education;Students that don't care will most likely use online classes as their way to get out of doing work. Allowing people to have a option would be a huge change in the school system.
In conclusion i believe my central idea is supported and with well given reasons. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
fa1aa492ea02 | 13224DF00A6A | Good advice can be tricky to come by. Most people, when looking for an answer, tend to go to family or friends. Seeking out a trusted person in your life could be good, but only asking one person most likely won't help you to the extent you may be looking for. Not everyone is the same, and one person could give you advice that worked for them, but might not benefit you. | Lead | Effective |
de6138c21cbb | 13224DF00A6A | Asking multiple people gives you different viewpoints and options to think over. | Position | Effective |
74c49fd99870 | 13224DF00A6A | What makes up good advice? Well advice in general is a piece of information or and opinion on a situation. You could be asking for help ranging from a moral issue to a fight with friends. Advice can be found everywhere, in quotes, poems, books, from your friends, family, teachers, or even strangers. Good advice usually comes from a known source, or someone you can trust. Everybody looks for a different type of advice, even if it doesn't work for you, it could still work for someone else. | Evidence | Effective |
d5851c6ad61d | 13224DF00A6A | Good advice is something that will help you fix a problem or help you see things differently than you have before. | Claim | Effective |
17c56989c2c2 | 13224DF00A6A | When faced with a problem, many people ask for advice. Advice is one of those things that anyone can give, but not all are good at. If you have one friend who always gives good advice, you may gravitate towards them first, rather than someone who may not be as skilled. However, everybody has different experiences, and may be able to relate to your problem more than someone else. | Evidence | Effective |
c506deca035c | 13224DF00A6A | Asking people who have been in your situation is a great way to hear what they did and weigh the options. | Claim | Effective |
09ce48aa0dbe | 13224DF00A6A | If someone is given two options, they will likely take less time thinking over the options and choosing between the two than they would if given multiple. | Evidence | Effective |
a56b6825ed30 | 13224DF00A6A | Having a variety of opinions and solutions may help you weigh out the good and bad. | Claim | Effective |
0b3ac23246ff | 13224DF00A6A | Only having one option could keep you from seeing the bad parts of the plan because you have nothing else to compare it to. Though it may take longer, deciding which works best for you may be worth it in the end.
| Evidence | Effective |
8b673bd5f6b8 | 13224DF00A6A | There are multiple ways to compare advice. First, make a pros and cons list. These are very simple to make and are a good way to see exactly what each bit of advice entails. Another good way is to just simply think through each scenario. Say to yourself, if I follow this advice, then what would happen. If any piece of advice leads to a bad or undesirable outcome, you may want to eliminate it and choose a different one. The last way to compare could be to think of the source. Did this advice come from someone reputable, or trustworthy, do they have experience in my situation, and would they possibly lie to protect me or to keep my feelings from being hurt? If the source turns out to be bad, then move onto your next option. | Evidence | Effective |
b66e7a6ee1f0 | 13224DF00A6A | Not all people like talking about their problems to many people. These people may decide on a solution, then simply to a sort of poll, to validate it. They may ask someone, should I do this, and weigh the amount of "yes" to the amount of "no" and decide whether or not it is good based off of that. Though this method works, you may be blind sided and not be able to see both parts of your solution. Rather than doing a yes or no poll, asking people for advice and instead, writing them down and grouping them together by what they mean is a better way to conduct a poll. If someone tells you yes or no, they aren't able to tell you exactly what they do or do not like about your idea. | Evidence | Effective |
89a2de81cd4e | 13224DF00A6A | Asking advice from multiple people could benefit you in many ways. You have more options, more sources, and more to think about. Even though not every bit of advice you get may work for you, it is important to hear different points of view. Just because you know someone and trust them, doesn't mean they always know what is best for you.
In the end, it is up to you to decide what you listen to. Choose the advice you take carefully, not all of it is there to help you. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
1d0cfdcd0c55 | 13457D2F2557 | Having different opinions can help an individual a lot, even though you may not realize it. Your way of life can come from your parent's, grandparent's, and even your own opinion. Therefore It is very good to listen to your peers, they might have information that you never even imagined to think about, they can improve your character without you even knowing. | Lead | Effective |
1ca6445399eb | 13457D2F2557 | This is why I think getting different opinions is a spectacular life skill to have and will help you in many different ways.
| Position | Adequate |
832b1d828287 | 13457D2F2557 | Whether it comes to picking out an outfit, or watching the news, I like to have more than one opinion on what I should be wearing, or hearing on the news. | Claim | Effective |
462a08082591 | 13457D2F2557 | Especially in politics, I advise you to listen to more than one channel on the television to prevent bias. One station could be feeding you false information that will prevent you from knowing what is right. If you listen to two or more channels, you can piece them all together and learn something from it. For example you might have learned from an article that a local grocery store was selling horribly infected apples. Then you ask your parents and they say it was one apple with a worm in it. The article was over exaggerating just to make a big deal out of it and make money off of it. Different views can also help support you when it comes to applying for a college and job interviews, and when you have that job one day, you will want to know what to say, and when to say it. | Evidence | Effective |
34837f5a6710 | 13457D2F2557 | Communication is another key life skill that having different views on different things may come in handy. | Claim | Adequate |
8f56c23ddbc4 | 13457D2F2557 | When it comes to negotiating with a car dealer to attempt to get a new car, you will need to be prepared so you can both be happy. Communication is something in life you will use quite frequently, and I recommend attempting to master, because it can make someone's day in a heart beat if you use opinionated conversations the right way. You can even spark a pleasant conversation with your neighbor by asking them about football if they are big football fans, especially if you both like the same team. A specific opinion is needed here as well because you might have learned in the past that your neighbor does not like to talk about politics or the media, this is why you need to learn boundaries.
| Evidence | Effective |
0e8a9a5ac18f | 13457D2F2557 | It is very easy to cross someone's boundaries and get in trouble in the blink of an eye. This could happen frequently if you only have one opinion from one source or person. | Claim | Effective |
9ef237407f49 | 13457D2F2557 | Nothing good will ever come out of having one opinion, or even no opinion. If someone has a missing leg and has crutches, do not ask them about it, that could be a sensitive time in their lives and they may not feel comfortable talking to you about it. If they bring it up, then have at it, you just have to be vigilant and smart with these types of things. Try to avoid boundary crossing as much as possible. | Evidence | Effective |
06e29401f45d | 13457D2F2557 | when it comes to communication and big events in your life, learning different opinions from different sources can be very useful in your life and should be used fluently in life. You never know if it will help you if you don't try. If you use this skill frequently, you don't know how many people you will make happy. The fact that it will help you make the right decisions, and make you successful, definitely would make me want to learn and adapt to different opinions. If you are prepared and know how to use this, the outcome of the deisions you make will be outstanding. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
010b4ec562a3 | 134BAA2D43CF | The class online is a good then for students | Position | Adequate |
7a6085304905 | 134BAA2D43CF | because it at home and it can be eays for the students to work on the class. In school it can be hired for some kids in the classrooms it can be claing for them like in fert of thr class things like at. But home schools or online class can be good in a way no people are alone no laged studnts.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
2fdc95045735 | 134BAA2D43CF | Videos can help poeple that need to see exsples and if they look at it, play it and play it and take notes on what it is says in the video. One of the things that can be good by home schools is that you can have time to go outside or go to a store have fun at the same time. In schools you can not go to a store or someing in that way. | Evidence | Adequate |
47c2c1ee8099 | 134BAA2D43CF | The way to get home because home school your in home so that is and in schools there bus that is it. So yes I feel like students have to learing sameing new says if a person is thing of be comeing home shools because I thing that is a little more freedome that they can have online school can be different in a way if it is the first time but it is haveing a good time. And all the problems in school you that in home that may not happing so that is one of the thing at can stop. if someone has online class say if work is not due a week you can have a long brak. In school you can not do that a long brak. | Evidence | Adequate |
9b883298ec34 | 134BAA2D43CF | So yes that is way I think that onilne or video class are good for students if they want someing new or there in onilne class. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e5cf051f69c7 | 1385E7A90736 | When you get stuck on something whether or not it is to buy a cat or buy a dog. You always ask someone their opinion right? If you don't, you really should it can help you make great decisions like, whether or not should you buy that cat or chose that job. | Lead | Effective |
1d889a5f1b98 | 1385E7A90736 | Thats why Im here to show you why asking opinions with multiple people is a great thing. | Position | Adequate |
127f3287ba7a | 1385E7A90736 | Lets say you want to go on a cruise and you ask your friends and family their opinions about money wise, your friends most likely think its really cool, worth the money you can pay it off right. Your thinking, "Yeah, this sounds like so much fun and its not that much I will work over time."
On the other hand your parents are thinking maybe its not so worth it your already in college dept that you need to pay off why have another thing. So you think to your self, "Maybe shes right this would be fun but I just really cant pay for it right now." | Evidence | Effective |
2b761fa85570 | 1385E7A90736 | This is why it is so important to ask multiple people opinions because they may be bias to the subject or don't want the best for you.
| Claim | Effective |
65bd8c7bfd1a | 1385E7A90736 | Lets say you want to buy a dog, your first dog. You dont know much about taking care of dogs so you ask a few people their opinion on your choice, your family loves the choice even though they never had a dog. So you go to ask your friends they say, "Yeah! You totally should do that, it would be so cute." Now you go ask a experienced co-worker he says, " Your dog can be one of the best things that happened in your life but you have to find the right moment, because if you work to much and cant take care of it its not worth it to you and your dog. Also it is a lot of money and time, you have to pay almost 100 dollars a month just to feed it on top of your time, taking it on walks in the morning, middle of the day, and at night. It just not might be fit for you right now." So you take that into you pile of opinions, sure its fun and cute but maybe your not ready for it, its not fair to the dog. This is also another reason why you should ask multiple people their opinions | Evidence | Effective |
61f83ea53efa | 1385E7A90736 | Because somepeople may say something to you you never thought of before. | Claim | Adequate |
d455e7a5d3e3 | 1385E7A90736 | So you want to either go to the army or the navy and you need help with choosing, you love the land and the sea so thats not a problem. You go to ask your family they might be full ride or not they love you so they dont want you making a decision that could maybe cause you your life. Now, you ask your friends about it they say army because its cooler and you get to shoot guns. You realize they wern't much help so you ask a army man and a navy man, they tell you all the things you have to go through in training and in the real world, you think about all the posiblites and dangers for going into it you havent thought about when you asked your friends. | Evidence | Effective |
125edd88540b | 1385E7A90736 | You realize sometimes asking people can change your life tremendly, it also can save your life, and change it forever | Claim | Effective |
9749f22a30a8 | 1385E7A90736 | The whole purpose of this was to show you that asking multiple people for their opinion can help you and the others around you a lot, you get to see the whole story, maybe they are experienced in the topic, or if the people you ask have no knowledge you know to just go to more people for more opinions. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
28d3f2c20737 | 14CD7481EF35 | All my life I have grown up with older people, people who are at least forty or higher. They have given me all sorts of advice, good and bad. | Lead | Adequate |
a14f3d27432c | 14CD7481EF35 | Asking for different advice can even change, for example, your perspective on the world. | Position | Adequate |
5318fb5418f8 | 14CD7481EF35 | You can probably see the world in this nasty or horrific way, but there can be someone right in front of you who loves the world, and they know it has problems, but they look on the positive side. The three main reasons I look for advice is because there are three things I want to be able to get from what was given to me. | Evidence | Adequate |
4a359ec661b4 | 14CD7481EF35 | I want to see the world in a different way, if you've seen me in public, if I see a shady looking person, I start curl my fist into a ball, I want to be able to see the world in a different light | Claim | Adequate |
320ae7767f13 | 14CD7481EF35 | taking advice from people who lived for a long time can lead you into the right direction. | Claim | Effective |
7724849deab4 | 14CD7481EF35 | it can help you and your future family if you have one because you will have this advice you got growing up and you want to help your family. You'll be able to tell them all of this and hopefully lead them in the right direction. | Claim | Effective |
e4abf319ac96 | 14CD7481EF35 | Just to show you what I mean, I'm going to get into more detail. Not to long ago my family, best friend, and I went out to go eat at Subway and when we got back into the car there was a man behind with all gold teeth, as soon as I saw him I didn't trust him because of his teeth and I started making a fist. Reasons like this is why I'm always trying to get advice from different people, I've seen how screwed up our world is right know and I've had trouble trusting people in public, what my parents always tell me is to welcome everyone. I know I should be following what they have told because I've done that my whole life, that's the reason I try my best not to cuss, I will sometimes say words like that, but I still try my best not to | Evidence | Effective |
765c9722a0be | 14CD7481EF35 | Like I said, getting advice from a lot of different people can help you get a different outlook in life, so try taking advice everyone once in a while | Claim | Effective |
4b26e8430b1d | 14CD7481EF35 | You can get advice from lots of different people, it can be good, or it can be bad. In elementary school I got into deep trouble because this guy was messing with someone else, I told him to stop, but he just started picking on me, but since I was in elementary school, he said something that caused me to break, so when he started to turn around, I picked up a rock and I chucked it at his back, luckily it missed, but I still got in trouble. The reason I did that was because my brother said if they hurt you, even with words, hit them back, that's some bad advice I followed. That's why I say right now, take advice that will lead you into the right direction, advice that won't cause any trouble, in middle school I'm surprised I haven't gone insane yet because there are some kids I want punch in the face because they mention race or call people names, but there is some advice I've been told that keeps me calm. One is these guys are my age, they can say what they want, but they are still my age, they can't do anything about it. Another is in the future I probably won't even see these guys, so once I tell myself that, I start to feel better and I show them that I could care less to what they are saying | Evidence | Effective |
176752bbd68a | 14CD7481EF35 | In other words, if you get advice that can do good for you, that's advice that can stick with you, that could be advice that makes you a path and leads you into the right direction | Claim | Effective |
3e2a372271d9 | 14CD7481EF35 | if you have kids in the future you can can gather up everything that's been said to you, and you can save for later. | Claim | Effective |
d82e33161691 | 14CD7481EF35 | My mom always used to tell me about her grandmother. Once upon a time, there was a civil war that broke out in the country of Generic_City, and my grandmother died and my mom's dad left earlier to the United States. In the end it was just my mom, her siblings, and her grandmother. My mom would always tell the story that one day during the war, there were soldiers walking around and they happen to stumble upon my mom's grandma's house. My great grandmother opened the door, looked at the soldiers, and told them to come in. My great grandmother got up got them a glass of water and got some food and told them stories, and even though they had guns right there in their hands, they finished their food and water got up and left. My family has always been a family who has lived by the bible, to my family that's the greatest advice you can get, even me, so because of that story my mom always told me she has put her life on the bible and now she's a pastor of Generic_City United Methodist Church. I know I'm talking about a lot of Christianity, but because of Christianity, her faith went up, and she used the advice she was given, from her grandmother and the bible, and passed it down onto us. What I'm saying here is, with all the advice that has been given to you, you can use that advice and pass it down to your kids if you have any, then they could pass it on to their kids and it could keep on going throughout the generations. Advice can really go a long way if you get advice that sticks with you your entire life. | Evidence | Effective |
0a1a5b1570db | 14CD7481EF35 | the fact how people told me advice really took me a long way, if I would've stuck the person who wasn't given any of this advice, my grades would suck real bad, I don't think I would even be I school right now, and I my life would've sucked, but just because I put my head up and listened to a lot of people, it made who I am today. I'm not saying go out and follow all of the advice you were given, I'm just saying consider it, if you think this is what you need, try get that piece of advice and keep it with you at all times. The advice I have been given is what I just explained, getting a different outlook in life, so that way I can trust people more, being able to get good advice and follow it to the point where I've accomplished what I need to, and lastly, take the advice I've been given and pass it on to everyone. Some of stuff in this prompt is really cheesy, but it's true. Advice can take you a long way. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
552bbbd9e069 | 1590FD8BEA8E | As a social species, humans interact and mingle with each other, such as when one needs advice for a choice, one brings the question to another. | Lead | Effective |
940578b905fe | 1590FD8BEA8E | Seeking multiple people for opinions on a matter allow one to make a better choice. | Position | Adequate |
13301386741c | 1590FD8BEA8E | one can absorb information coming from different people and therefore different viewpoints, | Claim | Effective |
11cf24cf44b7 | 1590FD8BEA8E | one person could change the opinion of everyone else, | Claim | Effective |
96a7fdc04c50 | 1590FD8BEA8E | one can reach the decision of a choice by a majority of one's peers. | Claim | Effective |
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