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These reasons why seeking multiple opinions are helpful are seen everywhere and have a major impact on the world. It has been seen when Europe found how to fight a disease, when one man switched the opinion of a jury, and how a democracy functions.
Evidence
Effective
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This is highly beneficial as one could hear advice that they would not have even thought of. Different answers derive from one's cultural background. One example would be medicine itself. In the 17th century, diseases ran rampant, especially smallpox, as there was no method of combating the virus. Europe had no cure for smallpox, and a large percent of Europe's population passed, as well as the American Indians later, who lost 50 to 90 percent of their population due to the disease. Many years of trying to find a cure for this disease failed, even when all of Europe was trying. However, a European came back from Asia (most likely China) with knowledge of inoculation. China and parts of Asia had suffered from the Bubonic Plague, and created inoculation, which today is known as vaccination. One received a small amount of the virus so one's immune system learned to fight it. This method of disease prevention was widely used in England, then in the rest of Europe. Because of the advice from another side of the world and the widespread use of this "new cure," smallpox and other viral infections were eradicated from Europe.
Evidence
Effective
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The idea of asking multiple people for advice is prevalent today, and can decide the fate of others. An example would be a jury. A jury listens to a court case and then decides whether one is guilty, or not guilty.
Evidence
Effective
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Many countries around the world, such as the US, are a democracy. This means that the government is fueled by the opinions of the people, and value those thoughts. This version of government is functional as those countries are standing today.
Evidence
Effective
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When faced with a choice, it is better to listen to the opinions of others on the matter. This is as one can absorb knowledge from different viewpoints, one person could completely change the others' thoughts, and a majority vote could provide the decision that one needed. Past events that impact the whole world occur because the person that brings the change strove for these reasons why seeking multiple opinions allows for a better, more beneficial decision. 
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Think back to the last time you attended school and how tedious it was progressing through each day. Chances are you quickly grew tired of the monotonous cycle every week, and would prefer to have an easier and more efficient way to learn. Luckily, students have no need to worry over this with the recent introduction of a new learning method, and that is through online or video conferencing. This outstanding idea has allowed an immense amount of people to learn even though the numerous amount of obstacles facing their way, be it poor health or even just being away from school for a definite period of time. With this new way of processing the knowledge one would normally learn in a school environment, it has proved itself to be a great alternative to the normal learning process
Lead
Effective
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students do indeed benefit from attending classes at home, since it allows for an efficient and easy method of learning the courses one would normally obtain all the while being in the comfort of a distant area such as their own home.
Position
Effective
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School is indeed an essential part in the development of one's mind and future. However, it's not the perfect solution for everybody, as some people produce a higher performance rate when it comes to learning at home through digital methods. A common reason would be the people who aren't as socially adept in comparison to the others, and encounter some difficulties learning in such a public area filled with a large amount of people. They would usually work better in a more secluded workplace such as their home. I can personally attest to this myself, as I've occasionally resorted to partaking in online conferences, as on occasions, I would have difficulty learning in an area with people I lacked the determination to interact with. This doesn't just only include social aspects though, as even people with poor health, like the common cold or even more detrimental illnesses, will find it very beneficial to learn through virtual means
Evidence
Effective
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Having the ability to partake in classes and obtaining the same knowledge as your peers while being in a different area as them, makes you feel like the illness never was there in the first place at all. This allows the users to learn at the same, or sometimes even faster pace than regular students in schools.
Claim
Effective
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Online learning can also help people who just need to complete work that they would've have missed due to personal reasons, such as a family trip to another state
Claim
Effective
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Normally, when they return back to school, the students would encounter a myriad of incomplete work that had accumulated over their course of inactivity. The pile of work would be required to be completed if they wanted to maintain their grades all the while having to simultaneously obtain the current information and tasks the teacher was distributing to the rest of their peers during that time. As you can see, this can prove to be physically and mentally taxing for one's mind. With the introduction of online learning, it allows for the students to be able to accomplish their work virtually, which allows them to keep up with their peers and have a smooth transition back into their school without the hassle of what I stated previously.
Evidence
Effective
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Although there are numerous benefits to learning digitally, some people are still doubting online education, One prominent reason why some people would still have some doubts, would be that not learning in a regular school environment isn't quite as beneficial or effective in contrast to the average student learning in the school area itself.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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However, this is quite the opposite, as virtual education provides many benefits that even normal schools would most likely be not able to help.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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15EAD0CC9F3D
For starters, online courses allow for better understanding between one another, as methods such as video conferencing eliminates the background noises that makes it difficult to for the student to converse with the teacher and vice versa. If video conferencing isn't a preferred method of interaction, one can simply just type out their responses and inquiries they may have to the teacher, which makes it an efficient and clear way of understanding what they're trying to say.
Evidence
Effective
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Furthering explaining on why the concept of online learning is actually beneficial and effective on the student, understanding something in school varies and depends on what kind of teacher they have, and their method of instructing
Claim
Adequate
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15EAD0CC9F3D
On the other hand however, online courses are usually uniform with how they teach people, as they have clear and typed wording while also providing the users other forms of information sources to further develop their knowledge of the subject. This makes it easier for the viewers to follow and have a deeper understanding of the given concept, as they can simply backtrack onto the previous sections of the course without requiring the hassle of requesting the teacher to explain a concept again verbally, which often promotes tedious work ethics with teachers having to explain or rephrase the idea repeatedly until the class understands the idea before moving on.
Evidence
Effective
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Online education, although fairly recent, will bring forth a new wave of educational tactics and support for the students that will surely provide an immense amount of education support to multiple generations. Even through a myriad of obstacles, like their health or simply just finishing missed work, virtual courses will greatly help a wide pool of people with different types of problems to accomplish whatever they're trying to do with great success. Although there are still some who doubt the benefits the online courses provide to the users, I firmly believe that they will gradually realize how this will actually promote a clear and effective workplace
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Students may view school as an obligation, wishing that they could just stay home all day and relax. At first, the introduction of allowing students to learn through a computer screen in the comfort of their own home may seem like an excellent idea, however, after a while students may begin to feel lonely and as if they are not benefiting much from it.
Lead
Adequate
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I think that students would not benefit from an at home learning system due to the fact that a face to face learning experience is much more efficient than one behind a screen.
Position
Effective
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There are lots of students that are home schooled, which does not allow them to have a real school like experience. For most of society, having the school experience taught them things, such as work ethic, time management, how to deal with people, and much more. If a student does online schooling through video calls and conferences, they are just like home schooled students, meaning they will not receive the benefit of having a school experience. For some, the school experience may not have been as pleasing as it was for others, but everyone has gone to a physical school got to make mistakes, learn from them, and apply it to their life later on
Evidence
Effective
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If a student goes to school through an online program, they will have not gotten to learn from the experience of being in a physical school, which could cause them incredible difficulties later on, such as the social aspect of life.
Claim
Effective
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A big part of society is social interaction. It has been proved that humans need social interaction to live happily, and if they don't get that, it can have some very bad consequences. For some criminals, the government will put them into isolation as a form of punishment, meaning no interaction with other humans for a period of time. This is a form of punishment due to the fact that humans need the social aspect of life in order to mentally survive. Even though classes through video calls and conferences is nowhere near as bad as isolation is, they may not have many friends outside of their school unless it is because of a sports team or a community project they are involved in. Students who participate in public school are constantly interacting with their peers and teachers, asking questions, talking to friends in the hallways, and so much more. It is through school that so many students have formed close and solid friend groups, who go and hangout on a Friday or Saturday night. Those who do school online find it much harder to make close friends, and this is due to the fact that they are not around their peers all the time, which makes them have to put in a lot more work to find friends to hangout with.
Evidence
Effective
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Those who are able to form close social bonds with people through school is a reason why students benefit much more by physically going to school rather than an online video call or conference.
Claim
Effective
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Another reason as to why physically attending school is significantly more beneficial than doing classes online is because of the interactive and hands on experience students receive
Claim
Effective
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In classrooms, students get the chance to learn through interaction by participating in labs, presentations, class discussions, and many other interactive experiences. Students can use presentations and class discussions to bounce ideas off of each other, and if a student has a question after a lesson, they do not have to email or call the teacher back, they can simply go up and ask to get the information they need right away. There are lots of students who state that they learn better through visuals and hands on experiences. Those who take classes at home do not have the opportunity to have a real hands on learning experience, which for some could alter how much material their brain actually grasps on to. Students would not be able to physically pick apart the subject they are learning, especially in science areas, which could lead them to not obtain as much information as they could have with an interactive experience.
Evidence
Effective
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Having a physical in class learning experience is much more beneficial than one over the internet due to the school experience students receive, the social interaction, and the hands on learning they get to experience.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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However, even though there is much evidence to backup why going to a classroom to learn is better, it can be stated that learning online through video calls is the way to go. If students have anxiety or are constantly stressed out, learning online may be a much more relaxing way to gain material.
Counterclaim
Effective
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Since there is so much more reasoning as to why a physical learning system is so much better than an online one, all evidence gathered to support this overpowers any evidence to support doing classes online
Evidence
Adequate
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16D2B327B978
Because of the evidence and reasoning presented, having a physical learning experience is incredibly more beneficial having a learning system online. 
Rebuttal
Adequate
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I personally think that when you need advice you should ask more than two of your close friends,
Position
Adequate
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i say this because not all friends give good advice and by asking a friend that doesnt give good advice you put yourself at risk of them giving you bad advice and it steers you into the wrong direction.
Claim
Effective
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This happened to me and it put me into a situation i didn't want to be in. It all started when i asked one of my closest friends to help me out with a situation i was in with my best friend at the time, my best friend was mad at me for some unknown reason and i had no clue what to do she never responded to my texts and she wouldn't talk to me when i saw her in person. I was really worried considering she was my best friend and she meant everything to me. when i asked my close friend what to do she told me to just to ignore the problem until my best friend got over it, and i for some dumb reason listened to her. After a while my best friend got even more upset that i wasnt trying to resolve the situation and she called me and said that she never wants to be friends with me again, and that really hurt my feeling. But i couldn't help but think if i asked 2 more of my close friends i wouldn't have been in that situation and they would have told me to talk it over with my then best friend.
Evidence
Effective
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not all of your so called "friends" wants whats best for you.
Claim
Adequate
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I learned that when my close friend gave me the awful advice of ignoring a problem with my best friend until it "went" away, i later learned she told me to do that because she was jealous of the relationship i had with my best friend at the time. so she purposely gave me bad advice so she could have me all to herself, and thats when i realized not all "friends" have your back. so thats why you have to make sure your asking a true friend for advice.
Evidence
Adequate
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18EDFBD73F06
you should make sure your asking true friend that you know you can count on when you want advice.
Claim
Ineffective
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This has to be someone that you trust and you know only wants the best for you, because if you dont take a step back and dont see those qualities in your "friend" you shouldnt be going to that person for advice, and if you dont't realize at the time that that person dosn't want the best for you, you have your other people to aske for advice.
Evidence
Adequate
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18EDFBD73F06
This brings be back to the prompt on my you should seek multiple opinions when needing advice. In my i said why youshould seek/ask multiple people for advice when needed.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In the world of education, there have been many arguments about which way of learning could benefit the most people. Some agree that the system we have now is the pinnacle of what we can do to help younger generations learn. However, there is definitely more we could do so the next firemen or police officers in line don't make the same mistakes we have. One of these things is autonomy, the chance to build a new road for one's self. Who wouldn't love the true freedom to become anything by just working to improve skills? One of these bits of autonomy is the chance to try distance learning.
Lead
Effective
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What is distance learning? It is when a child decides to take school from home, online, or have video courses with a teacher. It isn't exactly homeschooling or tutoring, in the sense that instead of having a family member, or specialized teacher come to enlighten; rather, it is when a teacher from the school that the student has probably gone to takes the time to teach one-on-one, along with online courses.
Evidence
Ineffective
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As of now, only a percentage of schools allow this, but if this opportunity were introduced to more schools, the whole county would have a higher success overall
Position
Adequate
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it helps those who learn better in a small environment,
Claim
Adequate
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there isn't the stress of actually going to school.
Claim
Adequate
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There are many children all over the world with social anxiety, learning disabilities, or who are just very introverted.
Claim
Adequate
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When compared to the much more prominent demographic, they are often looked over and left out. If, however, we put them in a more solitary environment, they most likely would excel in academic studies, due to it being less stressful for them. Just imagine people running all about, bumping into and pushing others, when they normally can't even go up to the staff to ask for help. Having the choice of distance learning could take away that stress, and open a whole new road for them to go.
Evidence
Effective
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There are others that, unlike the people in the last paragraph, love socializing. They go out a lot, talk with their friends every day, and just love being around people, but there is just one problem; they absolutely loathe the school system and the way it sucks the life out of them.
Claim
Adequate
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Well, if they tried distance learning, those students wouldn't have the troubles of the system lingering over them, and they could just get the work done. Sure, one would say that it takes away valuable social time, but if one thinks about it, it could also leave some free time to hang out with friends. Having that option, they wouldn't have to worry about whether or not they're precisely following the rules, if they're causing too much of a ruckus, or simply about what others might think of them.
Evidence
Adequate
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1A2E1741BF9F
Autonomy is a wonderful thing. It's nice to just relax and not feel like you have to go down a certain path. I do agree, though, that there needs to be some rules so people won't take advantage of everything. Distance learning is the very middle of those two extremes, understanding that one has the power to be anything they want as long as they work hard, while also knowing that there are still certain tasks they need to accomplish, and certain rules they need to abide by while doing said task. If we all let the small stars shine, they will shine brighter than any other.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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i agree with this prompt because some school should have the ability for all student to take online classes ,
Position
Adequate
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1BB2EB85C41C
if they dont want to go to school or if they have a problem with someone and if they are scared of what people are saying to them. But i think it is the best opportunit to have because a lot of people dont like going to school and online classes would be the best idea for the people.
Evidence
Adequate
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Doing online classes would be better for the teachers and administration because they wont be dealing with a lot of students and they wont be having to repeat their selfs for those who don't listen and the school would have less cost if there wasnt a lot of students going to school
Claim
Ineffective
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They wouldn't have to pay a lot of bills or pay a lot for school food or books , laptops, pencils. notebooks that is a lot of money for the school to buy for the students. Some students dont even bother buying school stuff and the teachers are the ones that have to buy the meterals for the students. They should at least just have school open for the lower grades such as elementray and middle schools because from middle school you learn the same meteral as high school.
Evidence
Ineffective
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If you attend any online classes at home it would be the best benefit for the student to work on there own paces.
Claim
Adequate
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It would help a lot of students that are slow chasing up with the teachers telling them to write things down or to do work in class for some kids it's hard because some student dont progress things that fast and other progress the work faster then the other students. For example if u do your work at home it would be much better because you can take the classes whenever you want and work on your own thing for a while with out anyone telling you what to do. Teachers wont be scraming at you if you dont get your work done or a project done. A lot students like to work at home because there is not a lot of noise or people getting in trouble in class because they dont wanna get their work done.
Evidence
Adequate
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1BB2EB85C41C
There is a higher ability that students would get more sleep if they do online classes
Claim
Adequate
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because when u wake up later your body is not gonna be tired or stressed that you gonna misses the bus or that you not gonna have a good breakfast because there is gonna be a long line or you just dont wanna be late to class. For example i would love to do online classes at home because it would be way better for me becuase im not gonna have to be waking up at five , to get my self ready and my little sister ready for school like it's really stressful doing one thing at a time and making sure to be on time to the bus or to school so like that you dont get in trouble for coming in late. You can also make a good breakfast at home so you can make up better and to learn better because not all students have the opportunity to buy breakfast or lunch at school. So they have to strave because they dont have free luch or can't afford to pay at school. But it would be good if you get to wake up later and eat a good breakfast at home without being rushed to finish. Student would probably would like to sleep in and be at home just working when they wanna work and not getting told what to do.
Evidence
Adequate
915daaec0ad4
1BB2EB85C41C
in clounsion ,this is the best choose for students because they would get more time to sleep and get more time to eat a healthly breakfast. At the same time it is gonna be better for kids to work in there own paces and to finish doing work late when yoy have all the time you can at home. Its gonna be better for school because they are gonna have less costs at school for the students .
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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1BF9FD62E30B
When making an important choice, do people ever wonder if they should have asked more than that one person? Do they ever wonder if that one kid they asked had a biased opinion or if people in general have different opinions?
Lead
Effective
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When making a big, important choice, people, especially young adults and teens, should seek more than one person's opinion. People could have different past experience with lots of things and might help people decide when making an important choice. People should seek more than one opinion when making an important choice
Position
Effective
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people can have different past experience,
Claim
Adequate
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people can be biased
Claim
Adequate
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1BF9FD62E30B
people can have different opinions about the subject matter.
Claim
Adequate
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When making an important decision, lets say adopting a dog. People would want to ask multiple people if this would be a good idea or not. Adopting a dog is a big choice in someone's life and the person should seriously think this through. For example, lets say the person asks somebody who, in the past, had a dog who would always use the restroom in their house. That person probably would not recommend getting a dog. But then, if you ask a little kid who loves their dog very much and cuddles with it daily, they would recommend a dog. Now what if this individual had only asked the person with the bad dog? This person would now be denied their life time companion and emotional support. This exemplifies why people should ask multiple people before making an important choice. Now what if somebody wants to travel the world and they ask somebody about it. One person hated traveling, they were sick,got a bunch of stuff stolen from them,and got lost. This person hated traveling and would not recommend it to the person wanting to travel. This person had a bad past experience. But what if the person asked another person about traveling. This person absolutely loved traveling. They loved everything from the unique culture, to the flying in airplanes, to trying new things. This person had a good past experience with traveling and would recommend it to the person wanting to travel the world.
Evidence
Effective
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This is another example of why getting multiple opinions before doing something because they could have different past experience. People with different past experience will have different opinions on certain matters.
Claim
Effective
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People have biased opinions about certain matters
Claim
Adequate
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Imagine if a person is trying to open a farm, but the person's best friend hates all farmers. The best friend has a biased opinion towards farmers and hates all of them. When the person asks the best friend if they should start a farm, naturally the best friend will say no. But if the person asks someone who loves animals and the outdoors, that person would say they should open a farm. If the person had only asked the biased best friend who hates farms, they would now not have a job and place to live that they are happy with. This is one example of why people should ask multiple people before making an important choice because people have biased opinions. What if a girl wants to try out for a football team. All of her friends say that is gross and annoying because girls can not play football. This is a biased opinion about girls who play football. While all of the girl's teachers and family say that is a great idea and the change the school needs. If she would not have asked her teachers, she wouldn't be on the team. That is why you should ask multiple people before making an important choice like starting a farm or joining the football team.
Evidence
Effective
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People feel differently about lots of different things, whether they are small issues like shoes being ugly, or big issues like political opinions and whether schools should have dress code. What if someone wants to buy a Cadillac. Obviously, Cadillacs are expensive and the person would ask somebody before spending their hard earned money on a Cadillac. If the person asks their best friend who thinks they are ugly if they should get a Cadillac, they would obviously say no. The best friend has an opinion on Cadillacs. If the person had asked somebody who thinks Cadillacs are amazing, they would say to buy it. This is an example of why asking multiple people before making a choice is good because they might have different opinions. If someone wants to open a donut shop, but their uncle hates donuts. When they ask their uncle if they should open a donut shop, he will say no. He has an opinion of thinking donuts taste gross. But when they ask their sister who loves all desserts and will always support her sibling. She will say yes because she has an opinion of loving sweet foods and her siblings. This is an example of why people should ask more than one person before they do something. The student president might want to start a book club. A lot of students a do not like books because their teacher made them read a boring book three years ago and they have not liked books since then, they have an opinion on books from a long time ago. The teachers, on the other hand, love this idea because they think that students these days do not get enough reading time in and a book club would be a good idea. If the student president would not have asked the teachers if they liked the idea there would be no book club
Evidence
Effective
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This is why people should get multiple opinions before they do something because people have different opinions about things.
Claim
Effective
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When people ask for advice, they should always seek more than one opinion because the people they ask could have different past experience, be biased, or have different opinions about the matter. When asking for an opinion in something, always ask different people and different kinds of people. People can have different opinions about things and be biased. Asking biased people for an opinion on something is never good so that is why people ask more than one individual before they make an important choice. In conclusion, this is why people need to get multiple opinions before they make a big choice.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Well the best option for my is what you attend the classes from home by way of online .
Position
Adequate
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1DB195AA7BE3
My reason or my thought is, what you cant learn, in online classes, and thought what you can do it , doing others wor,k in you free time, and the school has good ideas for student what take, classes like after school just in home
Claim
Ineffective
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1DB195AA7BE3
So in my position is that because if you work so is you cant take the class for one hours, and you work ,and is more benefit for myself but ,each person has diferent ideas . Examples: If you not have work is more time for you ,for what you keep doing you class online. If you wnat the class . you has more time for to think best for work online and make a good work and your class. With this examples are much more for what you take any option or my option what is the best or most better already is in you home . If you not have time like time complete is for that what you take this option ya what has work and not time like for stay in the school all the time .
Evidence
Ineffective
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1DB195AA7BE3
Others examples is whent you have 18 year old has to much resposabilities and others case it 's not easy .
Claim
Adequate
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1DB195AA7BE3
I think whent a teacher said you need that class is for one reason, and you nedd take that class but you cant took with you teacher what, is most better for you. So and my opinion or my position is take class from home in online, and to much better what ,take video coferencing
Evidence
Ineffective
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One reason because im take that option is because in my home is relax, and with food and alone and not voices and nothing, and in my home take my time for think most better
Claim
Adequate
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1DB195AA7BE3
i think is the most important for my work in home and i think what the work in online is not easy so need my time for to think, and good ideas and good answer, and the idea is what you learn with any option you take for this case . The student in this time has more option for any problem .
Evidence
Ineffective
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One reason for what i take this option is for the time ya what much student are major or not have much time for coming a school because the work or others case.
Claim
Adequate
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1DB195AA7BE3
Other reasons what the student take this option is beacuse is home not in other pleace ya what not has ride or cars for take that class or classes en other pleace .
Claim
Adequate
2ab234ef260c
1DB195AA7BE3
My intentions is what others student take this option what is classes from HOME because is the best ,option for any case too if you want free time is more easy for you take this class or classes home by way of online, and is more choice that idea and minus dificult just what in home or online you not have teacher for explain any question so for that reason is little complicate but not impossible make you work so you cant do it , forever you want , nothing is this life is impossible but too not is easy everthing is sacrifice. Abd you has see you work good and past the class sin difucult . My reference is the option class FROM HOME BY WAY OF ONLINE. Is the best option and more benefif for learn in home, and more easy for the time or others problem and i cant wait what everthing stay good for my cass or classes .                                                                                                                                                 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Asking for opinions and advice from multiple people, helps one gain perspective.
Position
Adequate
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By asking of another's opinion, one can base their opinion off what they have heard, or know.
Claim
Effective
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one can determine the best method for them self, or to check if something is valid.
Claim
Effective
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if a student were to talk to a math teacher versus an civics teacher about which subject is most important for middle school, the math teacher would likely say math is the most important subject, while the civics teacher would say civics is most useful subject. If we looked from either one of the teachers perspective, we would easily identify on of the main causes of the biased. The math teacher chose math as the most important middle school subject immediately, this is because they have spent more time studying and have learned more than what is necessary to graduate college, and have grown to love math. The civics teacher would do the same for civics because they have learned more than most others in civics and have grown more attached to the subject. By listening to both teachers opinions, the student is a to better determine which subject they believe is more important in middle school.
Evidence
Effective
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1F58CB4D5847
if a patient is unsure if they need braces, and as a result they talk to multiple dentists. The patient can use all the information to determine which dentist is best for them by putting what all the dentists said together. If Dr. One, says the patient needs braces for 6 months, but Dr. Two says the patient needs braces for a year and a half, the patient is likely to see a third dentist. Dr. Three says something completely different, that she needs no braces, with no evidence, so the patient knows the orthodontist is untrustworthy. However, Dr. Four confirms the patient will need braces for a year in a half so the patient knows both Dr. Two and Dr. Four are their best options because they agree. By asking so many professionals whether the patient needs braces or not, the patient can ensure they get the best care for their teeth.
Evidence
Effective
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The method of asking many people for their advice helps people look at perspective and detect biased. By doing this, one can find the most helpful, accurate advice or answer possible. This helps one gain their own perspective and opinions based on what they have learned from others.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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I think that the schools have good idea for the students for them is better because study more in at home, and also is interesting that each student have time for study in home the reasons is because this can to be benefit for the student. I think for some student is more easy take the class for online, but also if the schools have the opportunity about how the student can study in their home. Also because some student don't like coming in schools and for they is easy study in home, maybe they have more time for make homework, and for me is very important because the student is learning more.
Lead
Adequate
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But there are many student that need study more in the school or home because the study for them is most important in the life
Position
Ineffective
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The student need more study
Claim
Adequate
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they have more time
Claim
Adequate
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and also is important for the future.
Claim
Adequate
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When the students have more time for study is more easy for they each day . for example I'm study in my home I take one class for online and this is more easy study in my home because I have my time,but always and focus in the class is important that the student take class in our home for the future this we help enough for to be good student.
Evidence
Adequate
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The first reason is about how the student need more study. The student can study in home because the school have many benefit for them. However we need study more in home or school. the reason is because when study more the homework or test is more easy for us
Claim
Adequate
3b5a4f47d72b
2089EF1099EB
for this is important study, and never we can study for the others if not for our self many time some student they don't want study for they self, but in the life only there one thing is study hard we can stop. and many times be a student is not easy is very hard, this dependent from us which is the most important in the life study or make another think. because always the passion for study is have more time for our study now need more study the others student need study more because this is the more important and is more easy when we have more benefits for take the some class in home because nothing is difficult in the life study in home or school is the same thing, for example some teacher need that the student learn more because some student can not study in the school not pay attention and while we have a benefit for take some class in home we need to be able and responsible.
Evidence
Adequate
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The second reason is about they have more time. when the some student study in home have more time because they take time for make another thing, some time when we study in home we find a place alone for study with more concentration,
Claim
Adequate
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2089EF1099EB
because the school we need have student with more good ideas y for this reason the student need take the attend classes in home because the school offer one option for each student. and the student need take more time for the study because is interesting take class in our home,many times the student have more time for another thing that for study, for example I'm student, but some times I think that the study is hard but the thing is that the study is the most important and is more better when we have a benefit from the schools, for this we need take more time for study in home is not hard take some classes in home because also we need to be a good person in the future. Today I need to say something I take one class in my home I have my time for make the another homework or something because don't matter how many classes we take in our home, and also we need to know the reason because we need take classes in home this is one opportunity more that when have like student, some student take more time and study because is the most important take more time is our study we need to study more we need to have more time for the good things for our self.
Evidence
Adequate
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Is important for the future when we studying our home or school is more easy each day. The third reason is about is important in the future. When we the students we have more benefit in the school is very interesting because this help our self because the school have the opportunity, how the students need have a good future and for this reason the schools offer how help each student.
Claim
Adequate
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2089EF1099EB
I think that is very interesting for the students because this is for that we have a good future in the life is important when we find a reason for our future but we can be good students when we study more, also because the schools need more students with interest in the school for make a good future because the school is the most important for each student and many time only some students have the opportunity of take the class in home, and this is important in the future when the student work hard each day for a better future,and also never wait that the others study for us because we are student is the most important is give every our effort. I think that this is important endeavor each day for our future better because not there anymore better in the life that the study, also having a good benefit from the school.
Evidence
Adequate
8f20e7904c2c
2089EF1099EB
Inconclusion when the students have more time is more easy for they each day, and also they have time and their home, this is important for the future. However we need to study more in home or school, because this is important for us and many time we think that study in our home is hard but is interesting study more not only in the schools the student need take more time for study in home because is more easy when the school give one option for this reason the students need study more because is the best always when we are students good,and many time the students lose the opportunity that the school offer. Also we need more time for study because many times we have time for an others thing,but not for study,when the schools give the opportunity for be a good students in the life. And the most important is when the effort from today is the most important for the future because in the life only exist one opportunity,and for this reason we need to study more don't matter if is difficult because our future always is the most important.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A village have a school and they are diside learning the people, they offer for distance learning. They do meeting for that and everybody agree for that. After few week start the class. Some students visit every where and they try to teach to viliage peoples and attend to them. They think village peoples learning everything . What they are need?
Lead
Adequate
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20A42E81AC2B
I think"yes" students would benefit from being able to atted classes from home.
Position
Adequate
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My first reason is some village have or had no one go to school.
Claim
Adequate