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different solutions,
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a chance to ask someone who has experience with the problem for advice.
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This can come in a few forms, depending on what the problem is and what is needed. It can be hands-on help with the issue, guidance to another person that can help more, or even as simple as some encouraging words, any of those can help solve a problem. For example, person one goes to person two and says, "Can you give me some advice on how to fix a flat tire on my car?" Then person two gives some advice. Person one asks for help with it because he/she didnt'd understand, person two declines. Person one goes to person three and asks the same questions, person 3 gives different advice, but person one still doesn't understand, so they go to person four, and person four offers to help person one. Person one and person four fix the flat tire, and that couldn't have been achieved if person one had just given up when he/she didn't understand person two's advice. Basically, getting advice from multiple can lead to someone just offering help.
Evidence
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If someone were to ask one hundred different people what their favorite food is, they would probably get 100 different answers. This can be applied to advice because, if someone were to ask several different people for advice, they could get completely different advice from different people, and, chances are, some of the advice can really help instead of giving the person that needs advice useless information floating around. For a moment, imagine that it's time to vote for the President, and person 1 has no idea of who to vote for. So person one goes back to his/her good friend person 2, then asks, "Person two, who are you voting for?" Person two replies with his/her chosen candidate, and person one asks several other people, and finally, person four tells person one about the candidate that he/she has chosen, and person one also votes for that person, because from what person four said, that person will do great things as President. If person one had just asked person two who to vote for, he/she never would've known that person four had chosen the candidate that was right for person one's beliefs. Another benefit to getting multiple people's solutions is that the different advice can be applied to the same problem until something works. For example, person one is trying to fix that pesky flat tire on his/her car, and then the advice that person two and person three gave. Because person one can't get person four to help, because person four is on vacation in Norway, person one decides to apply the advice of person two and person three to see if something works, and it turns out that person two had good advice once person one figured out what person two was trying to say. Basically, multiple answers can lead to the best answer and many solutions can be applied to the same problem until something works.
Evidence
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This is beneficial because, of course, past experience with the problem can lead to better advice than advice from someone that has never faced the problem. For example, person one, once again, is having trouble with the cursed car, so person one goes to person two, person three, person four, person five, person six, and person seven. Person two, person three, and person five all give some advice that they found on the internet, person four offers to help but really doesn't know what he/she is doing. Person six just shrugs and says, "I don't know what to do." But person seven was a car mechanic for a few years, and person one didn't know that. So person seven not only gives advice that helps fix the car's current problem, he/she also fixes it to the point where it doesn't break down twice every week. The point is, if you go to multiple people for advice, chances are, you'll find someone with hands-on experience that can help you with the problem.
Evidence
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seeking advice from multiple people can be extremely useful for a multitude of problems. From fixing a car that can't seem to stay fixed to not knowing who to vote for, multiple people giving advice can help a lot. The President of the United States has the cabinet, which is a group of people dedicated to giving the president advice. So, if there's a big problem that needs to get solved and the advice of one person isn't working, try one more person, and if that doesn't work, one more, if that doesn't work, keep going until it does, because there's a high chance that someone can help with whatever the problem is, even if it isn't your inner circle of friends or colleagues, the advice that you need could be close by and you could never even realize it, it could be at multiple points nearby, and you could never even know that several people is what you're looking for. Sometimes, if there's a puzzle with missing pieces, you need to ask multiple people to help solve the puzzle, because they could have the missing pieces in their pockets.
Concluding Statement
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Talking to three people will help anybody with something they cant decide on. If somebody says one thing and then you say another. The only solution is to only get help from one other person. So that you could have three including yourself.
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Their is no reason to have only ask one person something because when anyone ask three people something, its bound to have a answer because its three people and there is an odd number of people.
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Studies have shown, when anybody ask more than one person a for advice then it gets solved quickly.
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Whenever there is two people and they gives you advice that you disagree with. All everyone should do is just ask one more person for advice. After that then you will finally know just side with the person that likes your idea. The next time you you want advice from one person remember this. One person is greater than two. If anyone were to ask a group of three. With you making four, there will most likely be a tie. Lets say you pick blue and one other person goes with you, that remains two more and they like orange. that means there is a tie. So basically what i'm am saying is that. When a group of people have a even number there is a impossible chance of solving witch person to go with for advice
Evidence
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Okay when you talk to one person then it could be helpful to take advice from them.
Counterclaim
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But its a better idea to ask two because now there is another side to just that one earlier.
Rebuttal
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If your friend were to get in a fight. And you were right there. The principle isn't just going to take you side. They will see if the other kid could tell there side, so that they will have more than one side of the story
Evidence
Adequate
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The next time you ever take advice from one person remember to just ask one more.
Concluding Statement
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Attending school practically takes up our entire day, and our entire lives. By the time we get up, get ready, travel to school, attend class, then come home to do additional homework, or entire day is gone. Additionally, we also spend five of the seven days of the week attending class, and those other two days of the weekend are overwhelmed with more homework. What about those who live far away? If they were at home, they would actually be able to get more work done as their commute time is absent. Where is their time allotted to spend time with family when your whole life is centered around school? Lastly, what about those who have a mental illness, that disables them to attend school for a whole day?
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Students would benefit to a great extent if they could take classes online
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it would cut out commute time, allowing them to work more
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would permit more time to do other activities like spending time with family,
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would also benefit those who have chronic mental illnesses as these individuals struggle to spend eight hours a day physically at school.
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For those who live a great distance away from a school, online classes would benefit them to a great extent.
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The commute time takes up hours of there day, especially if they ride the bus. School is only eight hours a day, but including travel time, the act of going to school can take up ten or more hours of an individual's 24 hour time period. This permits them from being able to get all there homework done, and can also make them more tired since they must get up early to travel, and then stay up late since they get home much later. This results in an unfocused student, who hardly pays attention in class and additionally, a student who doesn't get as much work done. With online classes, the travel time is absent. This allows a student to learn and work more. The student would have more time in the day to spend quality time working. This would result in a more focused, determined individual.
Evidence
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When your entire day is centered around school- the traveling, class, and homework- students have little time to participate in activities they enjoy and spend time with family, which is crucial for mental stability. Teachers preach of having good grades, extracurriculars, and family time, but school is eliminating these options for the majority of students
Evidence
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With online courses, students can take their time working on school, but would also have time to spend with family and do extracurriculars.
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This would result in a balanced lifestyle; a lifestyle that isn't overwhelmed with work. The balanced lifestyle would reflect in the student's learning ability, as they would now be more calm and focused to do their work.
Evidence
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For those who have a disabling mental illness, online classes would benefit them greatly.
Claim
Adequate
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When a student has depression, anxiety etc., they often find themselves unable to attend school for a full day, or even at all. Likewise, if they are present, they cannot focus and by the end of the school day, they are so mentally and physically exhausted that they cannot get their homework done. Their grades suffer as a result. With distance learning, they can work at their own pace, taking the necessary breaks when needed. The individuals would not be concerned with falling behind, because they would be able to do the work when they were mentally stable. Mental illnesses are just as serious as physical illnesses, and the act of physically going to school can be detrimental to their health, and to their grades. Online schooling would allow them to achieve a stable well-being, and a higher state of learning.
Evidence
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The act of physically going to school does not benefit everyone, therefore, online learning would be a beneficial option. Distance learning would still allow for those to achieve an education, but in a more peaceful environment. It would allow students to spend more time on their work since travel time is cut out, and would also permit those to have a balanced life as they spend time doing extracurriculars, being social, and spending time with family. It would greatly impact those with mental illnesses, as it would allow them to work when they are in a healthy mental state, and allow them to work at anytime. This would result in a higher level of knowledge, a more stable mental health, and better grades
Concluding Statement
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Some may argue that school is necessary for social interactions.
Counterclaim
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This argument can be rebutted, as those who choose online courses would actually have more time to be social
Rebuttal
Adequate
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Imagine you receiving advice from someone, but you go ask other people because you're not sure if it's considerable. What I would do in this situation is to not ask one person for advice, I would go to other people and listen to their opinions.
Lead
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Just by listening to different people's perspective you gain more information to help you find a reliable solution. For me, that is the correct choice because it makes more sense to absorb others advice to find a better choice
Position
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I believe everyone has the opportunity to seek others opinions to make a better choice by involving others,
Claim
Adequate
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being curious
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relying on your peers.
Claim
Ineffective
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By involving others, you can learn a lot of new things just by including multiple opinions.
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To involve other people you can start off by asking for their point of view, so they can end up changing your mind about your situation for something better. You could also involve others by using their opinion, and ask different people about that person's perspective, and see which one would lead you to make a final choice. Finally, another way to involve others to seek a better choice is by expressing your own opinion, and talking to another person to observe your opinion. I find these ways better to trust, so you don't have to involve only one person
Evidence
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Being curious helps you find a better belief about a situation you are not sure of.
Claim
Adequate
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To be curious you could go up to people for advice, and possibly give them options to see which one has a better meaning. On the other hand, you could be curious by listening to what is important or not, and by asking for examples if you don't quite understand. Asking multiple questions of the person's advice and finding the pro's and con's of the situation is another way of being curious. Being curious is the key to lead you to the right path to find a better choice.
Evidence
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Relying on your peers can help you find a better understanding of their advice
Claim
Adequate
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An example of relying on others is to build trust with a variety of people to make sure you know that person will give you a positive result. Another way to rely on your peers is to make sure you know them well enough to ask them for advice, and so that you don't go the opposite way of making a consistent choice. However, relying on your peers will make you feel more confident about their opinions, and consider making the right choice. Relying on others will help you follow success by considering others perspectives.
Evidence
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Overall, I think listening to other people's point of view is the key to help you make a better choice. Using your peers and your surroundings will get you to the right path. To make better choices, and using the opportunity to seek opinions is to involve others, be curious, and rely on your peers to find your solution. Have you ever thought about talking to other people to find reliable advises? Do you think this will help in the future as well?
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Have you ever asked someone for advice? If so you might have asked multiple people. Some people say that it is good to ask more than one person for advice for different things. When you ask your friends they might tell you something different from what a family member might say.
Lead
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you ask different people. You might need advice for many different things
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relationship advice,
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how to take care of a pet,
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what to do when you and your best friend get in a fight and you want to fix the problem but you do not know how.
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you and your friend got in a really bad fight over the littlest thing like having the same dress. Now your friend will not talk to you because she had the dress first and then you got it. You may ask yourself what to do to fix this problem so you and your friend can be best friends. In your head you might want to get rid of the dress but you like it a lot. Now you go ask one of your other friends and they say just do not worry about it and find to go find a new friend to replace your best friend and you do not want to do that. So you decide to go ask your mother what should you do to stop the argument and she says to explain that you did not know she had the dress before you went to buy it. You decided to go with what your mother said and it works and now you have your best friend back!
Evidence
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Have you asked your mom or dad for advice with a relationship or with someone you like? You might think it is weird to talk about someone you like with your parents and that is okay. Since you think it is weird to talk to your parents you go ask your friends. Your best friend said to write a note and leave it on your crushes desk. Next you ask a person that you've known for a long time but you rarely ever talk to them, and they say to go up to that person and tell them. As you are on the way home from school you think how going up to that person might make you feel embarrassed and you do not want to be the laughing stock of the school so when you get home you ask your parents. Your parents tell you to think of a fun and clever way of doing it so they say to write whatever you want on a sticky note and put it on the persons locker. But you think to do what your best friend said and you write a note and you find out they like you back too.
Evidence
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when your parents said that you could never have a pet when you were a kid and now that you moved out you decide to get a puppy. You have planned this moment forever but you do not know what kind of dog you want to get. Say you were living in an apartment and the only breed of dog you cannot have is a Pit Bull but thats okay because you've always wanted a German Shepherd. So you find puppies for sale and go look at them and decide to buy one. But you did not do research and now you are lost and do not know what to do. You decide to ask your mom and she said to make sure you walk the puppy and make sure it gets enough exercise because it is a big dog. Then when you go get a check-up for the puppy you ask the vet and they say to make sure the puppy gets enough food, exercise, and water. Of course you go with what the vet said and now your puppy is the best looking dog in the whole apartment building.
Evidence
Effective
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Getting advice from different people is helpful most of the time except when they all say the same thing but you do not agree with it. Asking multiple people gives you choices and I do not know about you but I like to have many different choices. Some people might give you bad advice and other people might give you good advice and thats why you should ask multiple people for advice. If you ever need advice your parents are most likely that best people to go to depending on the problem. Your parents are almost always right for relationship advice and friend advice. But if you get a pet ask the vet.  
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In ancient times, and also still today in some places, leaders of countries, such as presidents, prime ministers, kings, queens, and even the pharaohs of achient Egypt have all had advisers that they would consult to be sure they were making the best decision for their people. But these leaders would almost never have only one adviser, but more often than not they would have several in order to make sure they were doing what was right. But why would some of these leaders insist that they speak to multiple trusted advisers before they made any important decisions?
Lead
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seeking multiple opinions can help you feel better about your decision to know that other people agree with you,
Claim
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getting multiple opinions will increase the probability of one of those opinions being right.
Claim
Effective
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if the President thinks that this is the best time for their country to go to war, but they don't know if any of the people they rule over, or even the rest of the government, thinks the same way, it would almost certainly make the president feel less confident in their decision than if they knew what people thought about their decision, and they might not do as good a job running the country because they might stress about it. But if they consulted many advisers before making that vital decision, the advisers might agree with the president, resulting in the president feeling more confident with their decision and ultimately leading the country better than if they just went with what one person said and didn't ask multiple people for advice first.
Evidence
Effective
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if I'm not sure what college I want to attend, and I ask one friend where I should go, they might say "George Mason" as a suggestion. But if George Mason is not in fact the best college for me, even though the person I asked was trying to help, that one opinion could sway me to go there anyway and not have the best experience. But yet if I go to ten people to advice, including the person who suggested George Mason, they might be the only one who would say that and maybe five of the other people I asked might say Virginia Tech, and I would decide to go to Virginia Tech instead of to George Mason, and I would overall be happier and maybe even get better grades. Then I would be more successful because I went to multiple people before I made a decision that could affect my entire life. So therefore even though one person still has a chance to give valid advice, it is safer to talk to multiple people because it increases the chances of making a bad decision.
Evidence
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seeking multiple opinions before making a hard decision can be beneficial because of the reasons stated above. When I was in second grade, I passed the test to be admitted into the AAP (Advanced Academics Program) in my school. My best friend was also accepted, and wanted me to go to AAP with her, but I didnt really want to go into AAP. I told my parents this, and they agreed it would be best for me to stay in the normal class for on more year. Since I got my parents' opinions, I also felt more secure staying out of the advanced program even though my friend wanted me to do the opposite and go into the program. And so in third grade, I was not in AAP with my best friend, but nonetheless, I was happy and met many new friends in the normal class, some of whom are still my friends today. When I went into fourth grade, however, I decided that I wanted to go into the AAP program. Since I had already gotten in a year before, I was not required to retake the test and went in smoothly to the advanced program. In this example, I sought three opinions (my parents and my best friend) in order to make a decision, but if I had taken my friend's advice alone, I would have gone into AAP in third grade and not have been as happy as I was in the regular class. This shows clearly that
Evidence
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it is better to seek multiple opinions instead of just one.
Position
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The impact of asking people to help you make a decision can be big, like a country deciding to go to war, or small, like a third grader choosing if they want to go into the advanced program in school, but nonetheless, asking for other people's opinions instead of just one person's opinion can make a difference in someone's life, whether big or small.
Evidence
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there are many other reasons one might want to seek multiple opinions and pieces of advice instead of just one, but these are the two main ones that I think really make it worthwhile to ask for advice from multiple people instead of making decisions with only one piece of advice from one person. The key thing that all of these examples have shown is that it is better to seek multiple opinions from multiple different people than to only get advice from one. This is ultimately because asking multiple people for advice makes you feel better about the decisions you make and also increases the chances that one or more of the people you consulted with gave you the right advice at the right time to empower you do what is right for you (or perhaps what is right for the country you happen to be in charge of!).                                                                             
Concluding Statement
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Over ten precent of the students say that they would rather go to school instead of staying home. It would benefit the students learning abilites because some teachers will teach differently then other teachers
Lead
Adequate
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It is so much easier learning at school
Position
Adequate
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because the teachers at school know what the students needs to learn
Claim
Adequate
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The students needs someone who knows how to teach and has been teaching for a while.
Claim
Adequate
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If the students pick online learnig the teachers can be fake a pretend to teach the kids when they do not know anything.
Claim
Adequate
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The video conferencing can get messed up by the internet because some people might have slow connection or no connection at all.
Claim
Adequate
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It would be easier for students because they will learn more at school then the video chat, or from online
Claim
Adequate
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Some students have a slower learning abilities then others. The students are learning by one teacher from the video chat some students will be done much quicker then the other students. At school th teachers wait for the other students finish then they let the rest of class to do other work. It will not help the students to learn from home because at home is where they have their games tv all of that stuff they will pretend to be doing work, but actually they will be doing other adn stuff and they will tell the teachers that they already finished the work.
Evidence
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Students needs someone who has a degree in teaching. It will be easier for the teachers because they will know what things they have to teach to the certain type of students. They would know how to teach it to them and it will be easier for them to learn the topic
Evidence
Ineffective
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It is easier to go to school becuase we will learn the topic with other students and students can ask for help from their friends or the the teachers in class.
Claim
Adequate
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The teachers on video chat can be a random person off the streets and teach the student the wrong infomation
Claim
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Also it will cost a lot of money for the students learn from a video chat.
Claim
Adequate
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Schools are free, so the students can go there and get education for free, nor the students, or parents have to pay. Some parents, nor students can afford online classes because it costs like over one hundred dollars.
Evidence
Adequate
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Staying home and doing online classes is fun because we are able to stay in our night clothes and do school work.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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Students can get their blankets and anything they want and do work while being comfortable. The students do not have to get up and go to school. They can get up at anytime and do class work
Evidence
Adequate
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As fun as that sounds some students will not be able to meet their friends because their friends might have a different sechdules then their other friends.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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They will have to do work wilhile they want to meet up.
Evidence
Adequate
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Students should not do online classes because it will intefere with their other stuff like hanging out with friends and going to work. They will miss out on parties that their friends will host for them. It help the students and the teachers because not everyone has a good ability like the other students. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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People often get stuck in serious situations, where they have to make important decisions. They usually get advice from more than one person.
Lead
Effective
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People may ask for advice from more than one person because, you can get more help
Position
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finding the best outcome,
Claim
Adequate
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you get to look at at the situation from another point of view.
Claim
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When you get advice from more than one person, you can find a great outcome in a much easier way.
Claim
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For example, " I facetime my best friend and my cousin and say, " I need help with finding something to wear to school tomorrow." My cousin says I should wear a skirt because it's cute and very trendy, but my best friend said I should wear my new overalls because, it's cold outside and and they could be the new 2020 trend. I took my time to compare the outcome and then i made my decision. " When you want two different things you can ask others to help make the decision.
Evidence
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Another reason why it's good to get advice from more than one person is that you can look at the situation from another point of view.
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For example, two of my friends see why the choice you're making is right and my other friends can see why it's wrong. I think to myself about how the point of view is different and which one I think can have the best outcome. You'll realize the differences in the outcome and make the best decision
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As you can see, when you get advice from multiple people, you're going to get the best option. Advice from other people can help you get through things that you can't get through alone. As the old saying says "Two heads are always better than one."
Concluding Statement
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School from home. Some school offer the option to take online classes at home,
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which is a great idea.
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Kids can work on their time to get stuff done.
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Kids have less pressure to get work done.
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Kids who have a hard time at school getting work done at school can benefit from online classes.
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Having a deadline is much easier then feeling rushed to do work.
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In school, one is taught that if you don't turn something in one will fail. Online classes get rid of this thinking. They give kids a certain amount of time to finish and eliminate stress. this can cause better grades for student. Online classes can eliminate the pressure of work getting done.
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Kids get pressure from teachers and other kids.
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Teacher pressure kids to finish their work. This cause the kids not to do work. online classes can help eliminate the feeling of being pressured of the feeling of someone looking over you constantly. Online school may not fixes these pressure but may make them worst.
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Online schools are messing with kids social interaction. When adding in Online school the argument is always that kid wont get the interaction they need.
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This could cause kids to antisocial when older. It can also cause them to have a disadvantage
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when talking about this stuff you need think logical but in end it all add up to everyone else discussion.
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school would be better with online classes. Kids can get there work done during their time. The pressure would be eliminated form outside parties . The one factor over this matter is will it work. What really matter is what the kids think and it all comes down to them.
Concluding Statement
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Everyone makes millions of choices in his or her lifetime. While making these choices, it is not uncommon for one to ask others for advice. Often, one will consult multiple people.
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