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Not only can online learning provide much needed flexibility, but it also allows students to learn at their own pace.
Claim
Effective
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Some students are faster in some subjects then others, and even within subjects, students may struggle with different learning objectives. The freedom of learning online allows students to work at a pace that is comfortable for them. This by itself eliminates assignments such as "busy work" given to students that fully understand the material faster then others. This also allows students to fully understand the material before moving on, instead of rushing to keep up with a class that is moving to fast to allow a struggling student to keep up. Some students are very intelligent and work well in higher level classes, but simply need slightly more time to practice and understand concepts then others, which is a matter that online classes solve completely.
Evidence
Effective
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Finally, online schooling allows for the removal of distractions that are commonly found in the classroom.
Claim
Adequate
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At every school, there is always a group of individuals that have no interest in being at school, and focus all of their efforts into disrupting the class. At home, you can not only rid yourself of these students who curse loudly, blast music throughout the halls and classrooms, and often start fights in the middle of class, but also other distractions such as the droning artificial lights and loud air conditioning. Schools have small budgets for large amounts of students and this causes the school to make financial choices that sacrifice quality school equipment, such as quieter air-conditioning and plumbing that doesnt shake the walls of surrounding classrooms every time someone needs to relieve themselves.
Evidence
Effective
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While some may say that giving a student these freedoms leaves them at greater risk for slacking off completely,
Counterclaim
Effective
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they dont take into consideration that once these downfalls of the school system have been fixed by online schooling, students can see and enjoy firsthand what learning the the right environment can be like. Students will want to learn. Students will want to experience the joy of knowledge.
Rebuttal
Effective
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Online schooling prevents all of the downfalls of the school system while highlighting the positive aspects, allowing students to greatly benefit.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Advice, The act of sharing wisdom between people. Advice is one of the core foundations of human culture and one of the ways as humans to transfer information between people, but one of the flaws of advice is that it could be wrong.
Lead
Adequate
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One way to get that variable out of the way is to as more that one person.
Position
Adequate
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Most of the time this get rid of the people that don't know what their talking about or are just flat out wrong.
Claim
Adequate
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When I was in second grade I had to go to the bathroom, so i asked my friend (also in second grade) where the bathroom was. My friend pointed at the art room not the bathroom, so when i asked my teacher where the bathroom was she said is was right across the hall. The lesson to take out of this is more then one person can be got to get the wrong out of the equation.
Evidence
Adequate
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Advice is an opinion, opinions have bias in them. Asking more that one person can help cut down that bias by adding other opinions in to a big pool making one bias less of a influence then what is was before you got more opinions, making your choice more accurate
Claim
Effective
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more then one opinion is always going to be better then just one.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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When creating movies, games, or any other art, its a good idea to get advice from others instead of just one person,
Position
Adequate
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its a good strategy to make your work more diverse
Claim
Adequate
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makes it more appealing
Claim
Ineffective
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more opinions is better than one
Claim
Ineffective
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its important to get advice from others, but the more you get, the more clearer and more diverse it becomes.
Claim
Adequate
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They can tell you if you messed up and why. They can give you ideas to make characters to fill in the gaps, They can also help expand the story.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you want to seem as appealing as possible, you should ask people for what they want and work with them.
Claim
Adequate
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If you want your work to succeed you must work with others so you both get what you want. appealing to peoples opinions also helps your work by showing that you care. everyone has different opinions, one person might like one thing while everyone else hates it. appeal to the bigger opinion.
Evidence
Adequate
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the more opinions you have, the more messages your art will have.
Claim
Adequate
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One person isnt enough to give enough opinions. instead of just one opinion, you should have multible opinions so you can give your art a message. listening and getting feedback from multible sources will help you
Evidence
Adequate
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n conclusion, three good reasons why to get multible opinions is; making it more appealing to a general audience, fill in gaps, and get feedback.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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When asking for advice, it's better to seek multiple opinions
Position
Effective
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you could view different perspectives,
Claim
Effective
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you might receive better ideas,
Claim
Effective
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you could learn from others opinions and could make better choices next time.
Claim
Effective
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For example, if you were working on a project and you didn't seem like you were working fast, someone could give you advice that you could learn from to work more diligently. Another example could be when you were writing an essay but was struggling on your topic and got help from someone for an easier and better topic.
Evidence
Effective
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One example was when I was picking sides for a debate and already knew which side I wanted to go to. But luckily, I received a vast amount of reasons from classmates why the other side was better which changed my decision and helped me win the debate. Another example was when I went go-kart racing and kept losing because I thought my vehicle was terrible but it was actually how I was racing. Then, I got fed up and asked my dad what I was doing wrong and he gave me advice which helped me win the next race. My third example was when I was little and always thought that everything on the internet was true. I realized I was wrong when I was checking my facts and sources for an essay and was told that some of my facts were wrong because their sources were bias and untrustworthy. Lastly, I always viewed that my friend and I was the best duo in beach volleyball and that we'd be first in the nation. I thought this until the time of the tournament that would determine our rank in the nation and saw that there wer so many duos that were extremely good as well. We then ended up placing second in the nation although we were playing even better than we normally played.
Evidence
Effective
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For example, I was writing a paper for one of my classes and was struggling due to the topic of my subject. I went and asked my classmates for better topics and one of them had an amazing idea for my topic. I then used it for my essay and received an outstanding grade of one hundred out of one hundred. My second example was when my friend asked me for help on a project he was assigned and was struggling on. I told him an idea that could be great for his project which led to him receiving an A as his grade. My third example was when I needed to help to win a video game competition. I asked my friends and watched videos on great ways and strategies to win this competition and applied what I learned from them to the competition and won first place. Lastly, I was participating in a sports tournament and was doing terrible and asked my coach what I could do to improve. He gave me a few tips and points that I used to win and be the MVP of the tournament.
Evidence
Effective
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My first example was when I was trying to get work done quickly but didn't know what to do to become more efficient. But luckily, I remembered a time when I faced a similar problem and got help to learn how to work efficiently, so I took what I had learned and applied it to my current situation and worked very efficiently. My second example was when I was playing terrible in a sports tournament and kept fuming and paying even worse as the game progressed. My team took a time out and I remembered how to regain focus and lose your temper by breathing and and forgetting everything in the past. I took what I learned, used it to my advantage, and played exceptionally well for the rest of the tournament. My last example was when I was playing a video game with my friend and I kept losing to him. But thankfully, I recalled a time when I was watched a video on overcoming a situation like this and strategies to win and applied it so he couldn't beat me anymore.
Evidence
Effective
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You should always ask for advice and opinions of multiple people to view different perspectives and receive ideas that might be outstanding. Lastly you could learn from their decisions and better yourself for later situations.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing. Other school don't offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home because that's not great way to learn.
Lead
Adequate
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Students wouldn't benefit being able to attend classes from home because if they don't understand something who can help them. 2: Distance learning is not the best way to learn because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are.
Evidence
Adequate
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: If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.
Position
Adequate
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distance learning is not the best way to learn
Claim
Adequate
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because you need some school to learn what you need to know like student that you are and If you take classes from home you can learn but if you take the classes direcly from some school thatone is the best way that you to learn.
Evidence
Adequate
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Some school offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way online or video conferencing because for some students that's the best way to take their classes but for other student is not the best way because some student have to work after school and they have other responsabilities to do
Counterclaim
Ineffective
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like the people who came to this country from another country and don't live with their parents this guys have to work and study at the time so that's why I think is not benefit to attend classes at home. For example the people who came to this country, they came for a better future, better opportunities and they need to learn a new languaje and that's not easy for everybady some people learn very quickly but other people not.
Evidence
Adequate
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calsses by way online that's great for some student
Counterclaim
Adequate
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they have a great idea and reasons to take classes from home for example some student have child and they have to care about their baby's so they can't go to school for them that's a great opportunuty to study and do what they want, this people just need motivation to keep going and they can gain their goals.
Evidence
Adequate
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I think students they don't be benefit attend classes from home because at home they have too many things that can be disctracte for them
Claim
Adequate
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with things like electronic devices, or persons like childrens, and any other distract thing.
Evidence
Adequate
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Video conferencing that's good form to learn for some people who want to attend classes from home but if you have any question or any dude you can't ask to this video that's why I thing that the best way to learn is going to school and work hard every day to do and study what we want to do in the future, we have our future in our hand if we do any bad thing some day we pay for that, always we have to think and be sure for what we want and do. in this life everything the we do to somebody good or but someday that thing comeback to you and there woud you feel what other people someday fool for your foult. The old people who have esperience in life they said to students keep going ''if you want you can...''
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Why they are think studnets should have classes from home by way of online or video conferencing? Many of the studnets home is to far and maybe can't come or is come let.
Lead
Adequate
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Every schools should have this option for students.
Position
Adequate
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This is make easy for some students.
Evidence
Adequate
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First,some students wanna to stay home for classes this is good thing because you can fouces carfully and take you time and no body can't make you obsess.
Claim
Adequate
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Some students maybe just need focuse to classes and he can't do in schools and he want to be school home. For Example; We have firend family him name is Generic_Name,Generic_Name wanted to be home school and do work in home. He do like to come school early. He told to him Mother and Father but they are is not agree with him because they says you have to go school and you can learning better and he do not have any option and he start to go school.
Evidence
Adequate
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Second,the student want to stay home school they should know home school make your lazy because you don't have any activity to do you you stay home all time.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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For friendship you can't find good friend. this is make you unfriendly. for the class maybe you not understand what teachers means and you have some question. For Example;Generic_Name she is school home and she all time in home she doesn't have any friend she talk with her mother and father and her mother father is agree with she and she start to go school and she find alot friend and she understand better then befor.
Evidence
Adequate
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Lastly,some teachers like to teach online and I think this is good option to for teachers because maybe teachers can teach better and maybe can foucse better then in class.
Claim
Adequate
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Some teachers go to students home for the teaching just for one student and focuse to just one student. For Example;Generic_Name every Thusday have teacher she come every Thusday in Generic_Name home and she was help to Generic_Name to all home work. she talk to Generic_Name about home teacher is good then teacher in school because you focuse just for one student but in school you focuse just for maybe twenty students this is to hardc for me.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Studnets, should go schools this is not matter do you want go home school or normal school.
Claim
Ineffective
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some students have some physically problem I think they are need home schools because is easy then school because in school maybe somebody push and like some accident. For the physically students schools home is good because they can learning easly and they can focause better and nobody obsses.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Some students, need go school for the understand better. Some students need go school because if they are stay in home and they want home schools maybe in not listen to teacher or make copy. For friendly some people is unsocial and need make friend in school. Ithink school good option for this studnets.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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when you ask for advice for people's help you might want to ask more than one person.
Position
Adequate
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If you ask more people you can get the same pr different responses from the people.
Claim
Adequate
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you had seen a cute girl but you don't know what to do so you need some help to make something and you need advice on how to make it. Let's say that your in a small town but you just move here and you son had seen a cute girl so he ask he's dad if he knew any advice for him to make a move. He's dad had some good advice but the son want more advice like who do I get her to like me back so we went to get some more advice from is family. The son went to is grandpa first then is uncle and they both said the same thing to but the his dad's advice was totally different. The second week of school the son had had seen her again probably because she is in his class the day went on and on then the school day's over and the boy went home. Before the boy left the school a different girl came up to him but he rejected her and carried his day back home and told his dad what happened at school. the dad's son sawed his younger brother who is one year younger than him but he sawed him crying so he ask him what had happen at school and the brother told him. So the brother told his younger brother that his girlfriend just broke up with him and said that the girl that ask you out was my girlfriend. None of this would have happened if you staid in your grade and stayed of moving up two grades and almost taking my girlfriend. The younger brother told that he said no to her and wanted a other girl but not her because he knew that his younger brother was dating her for the past few years. Three years later the brothers are in the same school but different grade the older brother is now one grade above than the younger brother and the younger brother got the girl he had a crush on. when the two brothers got really old and they had to use wheel chairs to get where their going the brothers still had their girlfriends. But the younger brother got married and the other brother did't because his girl died in a hospital from smoking. Then the older brother died from a car crash by a drunk driver on the interstate and is younger and only brother was very sad when he died so now he is the only boy left in the family besies the dad and uncle oh and the grandpa died to because of age. The young son lived in till he got the age of 56 and his wife died at the age of 54 very sad time at lest they are in one big grave with rest of the family.
Evidence
Ineffective
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People search for different opinions when trying to make a dission that could help benefit the person.
Lead
Ineffective
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One reason people seek multiple opinions is because they want to go with the majority of the people.
Claim
Adequate
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people want to base their choice on the others opinions instead of just go with the flow.
Claim
Adequate
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Seeking multiple opinions is a great way of making tough disisons.
Position
Adequate
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People ask multiple people for opinions and go with the majority
Claim
Adequate
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One reason is, they usually don't have much time or have better things to do. A second reason is, the person trusts the people to give honest opinions about the subject. Third the person doesn't care to bring unnecessary attention to them self if the choice somehow brings it.
Evidence
Adequate
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People want to base their choice on the others opinions instead of just go with the flow.
Claim
Adequate
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The first reason is, people have the time to carefully examine the answers given to them to make their choice. A second reason is because, the person does not trust the person giving them their opinion is honest. And finally, the person does care if the choice brings unnecessary attention that they don't want.
Evidence
Adequate
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People seek multiple opinions for many reasons. The ones I mentioned where ones I find important to most people.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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When looking for advice on a decision, do you ask multiple people, or just one? Chances are that you ask many people in search of advice. You do this all the time, such as when you go to multiple doctors for different takes on your problem to help you to decide what action to take.
Lead
Effective
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Searching for multiple opinions and advice can help you
Position
Adequate
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to slow down and not act on impulse,
Claim
Adequate
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discover the consequences the choices you have
Claim
Adequate
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find more options to take.
Claim
Adequate
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When you take the time to get advice from others, you prevent yourself from making an impulsive decision.
Claim
Effective
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Making a choice on impulse will rarely turn out well as you probably have very little knowledge and advice from others going behind it. It is when you step back and get advice from others that you prevent yourself from making these kinds of decisions. As an example, think about leaders in government. Often times they take a long time to make a decision as they hear from all of their advisers and take their time, as they do not want to make a impulsive choice. By forcing yourself to slow down and get advice form others, you are making better choices by having other's advice and making yourself think a little harder about what choice you are going to make. Getting advice does more than just slowing you down to make a better choice, it also allows others to make sure you are making one that will have serious consequences.
Evidence
Effective
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By getting advice from multiple people you can discover and understand repercussions of your actions that you might have taken and caused even more problems.
Claim
Effective
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If you never took anybody else advice, you would have really no idea about what might happen as a result of your choice. Getting advice from other's on your problem would give you ideas about the consequences of the your choices, helping you to make a better decision. For example, let's say you have a dental problem where your front teeth don't have enough space to come out of your gum. You may go to a orthodontist who tells you that you would be fine if you just put braces on to give your teeth more space. Now let's say that you go to another orthodontist who tells you that just putting braces on may cause your back teeth to get bunched too close together, causing unnecessary pain. You just averted a crisis by simply getting advice from multiple people. By not being impulsive with your actions and getting advice form the people around you, you can make good decisions.
Evidence
Effective
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You could also discover different options to take through getting other's advice. Seeking multiple opinions can help you to discover new choices that you never thought about
Claim
Effective
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If you were to talk with one person, they may be able to give you a few different options, one, or none at all, but if you ask for advice from many people, you could learn of all sorts of different choices that you could make. By having more options, you have a better chance at being able to make the best decision for yourself. Going back to our dental example, let's say you go to another orthodontist, but this time he is an expert on your problem specifically. He tells you that you could get braces on only the teeth that need to move, or you could also have surgery to move the teeth to where they need to be instantly. Although, he tells you that the former would be easier and a bit cheaper, but both are immensely better options than your first two choices. By getting more options you are able to make much more informed decisions and have a easier time making the best decision for yourself and others.
Evidence
Effective
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By getting advice from others, you can make good decisions, as people can give you insights into your problem and help you to make the best choice. When you simply get advice from others, your ability to make the right decision is greatly increased, as you can find more options, understand the problem better, discover some of the repercussions your decision may have, and find out what others think the best action for you to take is. By discovering all of this, you can make an informed decision based on it, which will almost always be better than an impulsive decision that could have serious consequences. Getting advice from others will always be helpful in making the right choices.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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to make better choice for you , to make better life to work hard study ask teacher for help.
Position
Adequate
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If you suggests with something you can someone to help you what the problems.
Claim
Ineffective
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Learn good education will your brain getting big and very smart person that you already learn. If you work hard having a job you earned the money that have a more money that you were saving money, don't wasted the money. Better to be good role model most people try control themselves like if you were having a problem about you emotional can't control, ask your freinds or family help better control. You can't just stay home and doing nothing only on your phone all day. The best way is hang out with your friend is will make more energy and enjoy yourself laughs, talking and more happiest emotional. If you were sick and not feel well just stay home for 24 hour will make you feel better. The person can't take care of themselves you can go to. The doctors will help you better and healthy. Make better situation that which way is better for you like when go to food store buy something you need. When you find the food path and you don't know which food is good for junk food or healthy food. When you finish the school and when teacher gave you an homework that due. When your friend ask you want to hang out for party and you don't know which one is right thing to do. If the person that you don't know they want to help their work that will make better situation so they really think that you are friendly person ever seen. When you have families dinner together and some families won't give your food because you're older enough to do yourself just help yourself you don't need your parent give food.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Make better choice is good for you to be better yourself. If you change your better life will be easy not hard well maybe is hard for to make better decide. 
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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I don't believe the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
Position
Adequate
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First of all, the research showing there is a lot of chance to know about the distance. It's hard to make the online or video to offer the distance.
Claim
Ineffective
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Because when the students are in online or when they try to make video they are not going to take care them self. For example: I remember when I was six grade my friend PROPER_NAME was making online video. We went to classes from home to know how far it is. On that time she just focus on her video she wasn't focus on her way. After that, she try to cross the way but she still making video. She didn't saw the car she try to cross the road. So,she got some accident because of the video and she just focusing what she is doing.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The most important way is to offer the distance classes from home is using map.
Claim
Ineffective
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It's easy to know how far or how close it is. Other ways, the students have to take care there self when they are in the way because there is a lot of car.
Evidence
Ineffective
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For example: when I was tine grade I remember my friend PROPER_NAME she was eleven grade. She try to offer the distance for her friend by making video. When She was school from home. Then, she started showing the way. On that time, she wasn't take care her self because she was focusing the video. Next, she try to cross the way by raining. She didn't pay attention the way and she got car accident. On that time she passed away she died.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I agree some students think they would benefits from being able to attend classes from home.
Counterclaim
Ineffective
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But most of them are not going to take care them self because there are not focusing the way. They just focusing what there are doing or they just focusing online or video.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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In conclusion, I don't believe the students would benefits by way of online or video to offer the distance. There is other way to offer the distance from classes to home.
Concluding Statement
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Seeking multiple opinions on an issue helps people make the better choice in a situation in many ways. Hearing multiple people's stances in a situation helps make the solution clearer. Therefore helping someone make a better choice.
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advice is more credible when given from multiple sources. If many people give you the same advice the odds of it being correct are greatly increased.
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For instance, when someone has an issue and many trusted people believe in a solution, their opinions are almost certiainly the best option. In addition, it can help you find the better solution to have multiple people confirm that it is the best option in the situation.
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multiple viewpoints can help you better solve the issue at hand.
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Having input from both sides of a spectrum can help you find out what is better to do in a situation. In other words, a multitude of opinions can help you find a middleman of sorts to resolve the issue. Additionally, in some cases having multiple viewpoints can cause a realization that will please both sides.
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multiple pieces of advice gives you the chance to have other advice in the case that one is wrong.
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