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7e52611ee02e | 3BE93D14041D | There are many reasons I can think of why people need more than one persons advice and some are life changing. | Position | Effective |
641b32f7d0c8 | 3BE93D14041D | Although I feel I need to clarify why we need advice in general. Advice is mainly helpful for learning, also it can help those who don't see what they should do, | Rebuttal | Adequate |
49703472d429 | 3BE93D14041D | if you got bad advice it might effect your whole life | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c67883429d6d | 3BE93D14041D | multiple viewpoints on the topic or compare and contrast. | Claim | Adequate |
f31482a996af | 3BE93D14041D | Now this reason would probably apply to someone who is seeking advice before a decision. An example of this reason : Generic_Name needs a new bike,so he goes in the bike shop and ask his friends for advice on which bike he should get and they do now. Generic_Name goes to the counter and the cashier gives him some advice so now he can compare and contrast the bikes in his head and decide which one to get. In the example Generic_Name has three point of views on the different bikes so he could easily make a choice. This is like research but from people who have done the research. Also Advice comes from friends and family mostly so you Know it isn't bad advice. | Evidence | Effective |
d3d73e73aca3 | 3BE93D14041D | bad advice. when you get bad advice you what to get more advice from some one else | Claim | Adequate |
2054959e2128 | 3BE93D14041D | maybe you don't even know if it is bad advice that is why always get more than one person to get advice from. Now for an example: You just turned twenty and you're still living with your parents so you go to your bad friend house because you think he has cool job probably. So you get to his house then ask him and he says you could join my gang we do cool things and get a lot a money you think about talking to your other friend but then you say yes anyway. The next day you go to jail for murder because your friend comited murder to rob a bank. You were sitting in a car waiting for your friend to get out of the bank you didn't think that he hurt or robed anyone. Now you in prison for forty years and your friend for life. When you were about to get your good friends advice you didn't but if you did you would realize how bad of an idea that is and would of been fine, so never be to careful. | Evidence | Effective |
44feb695f229 | 3BE93D14041D | The first reason is useful and the second is for your safety. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0c30c21629b0 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Have you ever wanted to know if your attending a classes from home does it benefit you ? Many students want to be educated and successful but, many problems come in there way causing public or private schools not to be the best decision for them. They decide they want to do school online and have said it has befitted them so much because, when they were doing public school they were failing there classes or the problems they were facing got harder for them to be in school. | Lead | Effective |
957daad8d93e | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Many students have done online school and have been so successful and not only being successful but it has benefited them in whatever situation They're in right now. | Position | Effective |
6af29222474e | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Although some may argue otherwise, but through family experiences | Claim | Effective |
ca7ac5781839 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | prodcasts i've watched on the radio | Claim | Effective |
8658227a5620 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | from hearing some celebrities talk. | Claim | Effective |
611e81b13b09 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | One of my cousins named Generic_Name has been through so much and has not been able to continue going to public school. she's struggling a lot trying to keep her grades up and trying to get to school on time. she has an eating disorder. An eating disorder can be really hard at times when dealing with that and school . | Evidence | Effective |
a8b9937cabce | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Her family has decided to let her do online school , and has helped her so much because while being at home eating and also going to doctor appointments she has the option to do her assignments online and also sometimes some teachers come to her house do homework assignments with her that help her a ton. | Claim | Effective |
3fef8e9e9ad0 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Through online school she has overcame her struggle with her eating disorder and has also been so successful. As many years went by she has studied more an more. "it's so crazy"
because while having so many problems she was facing she became a lawyer. | Evidence | Effective |
70f10976854b | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Some may argue that it's impossible how she became a lawyer after just doing online school, that its unfair how she got to where she is now because of home schooling, some people may say that by doing online school it can't benefit you nor can it make you a successful person it's just they way to failure. | Counterclaim | Effective |
e1db3779bb5a | 3C693CBFEFB5 | That's not true because when you hear so many stories and people talking about their experiences with home schooling you have to take to consideration that maybe it helps some and not others. | Rebuttal | Effective |
152626e14efa | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Many prodcasts on the radio have mentioned many real life situations on this subject . | Claim | Effective |
f19439c6773b | 3C693CBFEFB5 | One i've heard that struck out to me was when this mom was talking about her son Generic_Name being really popular on social media, She said that all throughout his high school years students his age and older have been bullying him and trying to get in fights with him for no reason. The mom signed her son up for online schooling. Generic_Name did online school as well as he did video conferences with his teachers every other day . Generic_Name has found it to be more easy he said that he is more concentrated because, it's just him and his laptop there's no distractions no more students bothering him trying to fight him. Since social media is such a big thing to keep up with when doing online school ,he can do both social media and be educated. | Evidence | Effective |
a7370d8cb2e9 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | However, some may argue that Generic_Name has to be a man and grow up, he can't always hide from people that are mean to him. That's true he can't always hide from people like that, | Counterclaim | Effective |
603cb2ff65f2 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | but if he's fed up with it then maybe it was the best decision you can only handle so much hate.
| Rebuttal | Effective |
c02d83957c78 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Celebrities have talked in their interviews about them choosing home school over school and how beneficial it was to them. | Claim | Effective |
e8db6c8bcc4a | 3C693CBFEFB5 | There's this girl named Generic_Name .She said Being big on social media is really hard Dealing with the hate, dealing with people exposing you constantly for nothing, dealing with your name always being in people's mouth. Generic_Name has said that she's been bullied so many times and has found it harder for to deal with it. She has said that at one point she got depression and got harder and harder for her to continue going to public schools. Teachers recommended her to do online school. She took that advice and did home schooling for the rest of high school and also did online school for college as well. She said that she feels more successful. Generic_Name said that online school was the best thing she did and that she decided that for college she is going to a public college and she is also going to continue being big on social media. | Evidence | Effective |
82815d97e885 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | Some may argue that, They don't see how it benefited her. It have a major change on her, she knew what she wanted to do or be so how did it benefit her. | Counterclaim | Effective |
61180062e039 | 3C693CBFEFB5 | It benefited her in so many ways, she no longer is afraid of what people think of her on social media. Sometimes people need space from public school and then when they feel that they are ready they can go to public schools again. | Rebuttal | Effective |
f68043a2a60c | 3C693CBFEFB5 | The importance is for people that are going through the same problems for them to look and read from past experiences. For them to see if online school is beneficial for them. In the future people can look back at this and see what people were going through and how much they were struggling. This helps to see about how the past was like to compare to how it's like now. A solution is for people to do online school if they feel like being in public school is harder for them or for, whatever reason it may be. Also for people to notice and to realize that as being said multiple times that for people that are big on social media It's hard to cope with all the hate they get. A solution is for people not to give hate to others. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
ba085e840496 | 3C8360258FE5 | Have ever asked someone for their opinion on something and then turn around and ask someone else the exact same question, and then you just keep asking more and more people for their opinions. | Lead | Adequate |
725c21a83c94 | 3C8360258FE5 | Well what if I told you that it was a good thing and keep asking for their opinions,and here are my reasons why | Position | Adequate |
7a30aa6ad5d6 | 3C8360258FE5 | it helps you understand how other people feel about the matter. | Claim | Adequate |
8035304c6033 | 3C8360258FE5 | you might like what the person has to say. | Claim | Adequate |
39400fb08934 | 3C8360258FE5 | we all have an opinion so lets share it with each other and you may agree and you might disagree but that is life. | Claim | Adequate |
074f8934dacd | 3C8360258FE5 | When someone tells you their opinion on a matter you can tell how they by the sound of their voice or by their body movement | Evidence | Adequate |
eb6c39cafa49 | 3C8360258FE5 | Like with the new virus that is spreading it is a big discussion all over the world talking about it some are scared and some are happy because they are shutting down schools al over the world, but what I'm trying to say is it is all in their point of view. | Evidence | Adequate |
8e4727abe0e0 | 3C8360258FE5 | Like when i was younger me and my friends had a argument about who had the better phones and I liked what they had to say and I gave my point. See how I listened and it turned out that they said something I liked but at the same time I still gave my opinion. You will ever know what they might say so listen and you might like it. | Evidence | Adequate |
1d099d3ea2ca | 3C8360258FE5 | but you can't just start blurting out stuff and talk over them you have to wait. Once they finish talking then you can say what you have to say but there still is no guarantee that they will agree with you. | Evidence | Ineffective |
19b23a76a0e9 | 3DAC64829E27 | Do you think students would benefit from being able to attent classes from home? | Lead | Adequate |
1d6687044ae1 | 3DAC64829E27 | on my opinion students would not like the idea of taking more time to study, because nowdays students are very busy, stressed, and tired of school, | Position | Ineffective |
a9692cd474d7 | 3DAC64829E27 | they would not like to have to hear more stuff that has to do with school . besides some people are more smart and they could take the class just to see how thats going to help, but sometimes people dont try the stuff and thats why, they never know if they are going to like it or not.
Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students from home by way of online video conferencing | Evidence | Ineffective |
dc629bce42e3 | 3DAC64829E27 | I think, students are not going to have any benefit to attent classes from home. | Claim | Adequate |
736428d8ad06 | 3DAC64829E27 | some of the studends have to work, do stuff at home, or stay in school on other activities. students sometimes, actually need some help with some classes but they might not like to be taking the classes at home, The studend taking the class at home could get distracted by so many things at his house. While some other studends that have better grades and like school they could take the class, but they also will have homework and things to do at home. | Evidence | Adequate |
73912f0a09ca | 3DAC64829E27 | Students would not get any benefits by taking classes at home because, the online class could be also start teaching the same work that the teacher already teach you, or either the online class could be teaching different ways how to solve a problem that the student will get very stressed and after that its not going to be able to learn something from it and instead helping the student the online class is going to make it more difficult. | Evidence | Ineffective |
84441a85b778 | 3DC336733E9F | some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from by way of online or video conferening. I think everyone hsa different ideas about offeing this option that stuednts attend classes from by way of online or video conferencing. I am completly disagree with this offer or option | Lead | Adequate |
faec969d478d | 3DC336733E9F | In my oppinion, it is not a good idea to set at home learning and take classes at home and watching videos. | Position | Effective |
54487c61b7b5 | 3DC336733E9F | This offer and option makes a gap between society, and different clture all humans need to be live together | Claim | Adequate |
c6c0ac717fa9 | 3DC336733E9F | If all schools excpet this option or offer to take classes at home from by way of online or video that will effect humans nature too,for example, being alone and do not have contact or communcation with people that bring a big change in humans nature. This offer or option to attend classes from by way of online or video conferencing will be another change in some students presonality,for exmple, they will perfer to be alone in any part in daliy life | Evidence | Adequate |
9b9f57479a6c | 3DC336733E9F | So,taking classes in school helps students a lot than taking online classes, students learn better in school. | Claim | Adequate |
6e348089aa28 | 3DC336733E9F | personally, I would llike or perfer school classes, not online classes, because, I have experience of online classes, that I had for sometimes, I did not learned anything from thoes online classes or watching videos. I think, school has a especil effect on humans brin. School classes engarage students to try their best in their studies than taking online classes or videos | Evidence | Adequate |
55a116b34a7b | 3DC336733E9F | Another things school classe give this feeling that you leaned something, school classes is helpful you can reach your goal or destination, because, you give more tension to your teachers and studies. | Evidence | Adequate |
15087d37086e | 3DC336733E9F | Therefore, it not a good idea to offer option for students to attend classes fron by way of online or video conferencing, this offer or option create abstcle or problems for students in life, insteat of helping,this offer or option has bad effect on some part students life | Claim | Adequate |
067f7e461e2e | 3DC336733E9F | ,before, offering or option this idea the ministration of education should think about all things and compare all things, the ministration of education should take and ask everyone ideas, for offering or option, may be the majority of people will not like this big change in education filed, with this offer or option their will be change in everything in life, as, I told before, changing in humanes natuer and life, like not commnicate with people, for away from different culture and society,and will perfer to be alone, as I told online calssse and watching videos are not helpful for students , this offer or option not benefcial for students who takes online classes,and taking school classes helpful for stdents | Evidence | Adequate |
89b145be76ec | 3DC336733E9F | however; attending online classes and watching videos save students time | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e88fd283d915 | 3DC336733E9F | ,but, it is not a good idea | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
9f910972d02c | 3DC336733E9F | that if the ministration of education offer this for students,as I told my personal,experince of taking online classes did not help me that much,like taking school calsses helpped me, now I am learning better than I had online classes,so, there is a big different between online classes, watching videos, being in school has a especil effect on humans brain, students learn studies well or faster than online classes. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e87ba8cd223c | 3EA7F29FFED8 | From the minute we are born we are taught to always talk to a parent or guardian if we have an issue. But there are so many other people you could go to that would save you so much time and effort and they would give the exact same response as your parents. I believe you should always go to a separate opinion from that of your parental guardian and what you will find when you do so, is these other sources can teach you a lot more than your family and they have different experiences from those of your parents. your parents will always want the best and nothing more from you but think to yourself, "do my parents really care about my issue or are they just trying to make me feel better about the problem at hand. So when you are done talking to your parents your decision is not made any easier, truthfully it's become a lot more challenging. Because you have been told what you expected them to say it's not helpful and you are disappointed. | Lead | Adequate |
99851ce6afa7 | 3EA7F29FFED8 | a great reason for going to another opinion for help is the fact that they won't sugarcoat the truth from you. | Claim | Effective |
524212eb30e8 | 3EA7F29FFED8 | They may not know you as well as your parents do and it could ultimately benefit you to hear the hard truth about the matter at hand. When you get constructive criticism from a peer it allows you to do a self evaluation on your problems and the different solutions you could use to solve your problems. That peer will always want the best out of you because it may be a close friend and they will understand you a bit better and they will always tell you your problem and try to help you understand what is wrong and what you should do. When you go to a second opinion you have to look back and think if you held back anything when you were talking to them, and if you didnt than you should expect them not to hold any of their emotions or feelings about the problem to you. | Evidence | Effective |
f2e238309b5d | 3EA7F29FFED8 | they will always want to listen and seek understanding about your problems. | Claim | Effective |
c3bccf2cfc48 | 3EA7F29FFED8 | If you are talking to family member they may not care about your problems or say something along the lines of "oh honey it's ok you will be fine" and them saying that is not fine and you should never be satisfied with that answer from anyone. Your friend or close peer, like a teacher or coach will want to understand your issue and they want to help you at all costs because they know that your a good kid and they never want to see you down,moody or upset ever. Your coaches put you through struggle and so do you teachers so they know you can handle the hard moments in life and want to always help you, so you can make the right decision. whenever you hear a question in class you want to seek understanding about the question so you can answer it the next time someone asks. The issue hear is very similar to that and when you have a problem or issue that you believe needs a second opinion they will always be willing to listen. That way they can ultimately impact your decision for the better and you will be so relieved and you will ask yourself why you didn't go to them earlier | Evidence | Effective |
d6265865cf79 | 3EA7F29FFED8 | when you go to an alternative opinion about a concern they can show you a different perspective of the situation at hand. Which then helps you become a better problem solver in general | Claim | Effective |
19c00c0638cc | 3EA7F29FFED8 | having that skill can make some of the tough decision seem very easy. The moment your eyes become fully opened to the different outcomes of what you could say or do based on a simple decision. You start to almost think more logically when you are given the task of answering the hard questions about yourself and you realize that all the decisions you make, impacts you and only you so don't worry about someone else when making a decision about your livelihood. This will ultimately always end up as a better decision because you took the time to hear another way of solving the issue and you can factor that into your decision making and how you will handle the problem you needed to get advice about. | Evidence | Adequate |
c6bc25c755b9 | 3EA7F29FFED8 | I personally have always believed in the idea of going to a second opinion about an issue and I always want to help people with their problems just like they help me with mine. You should never discredit your parent or guardians opinion because they could ultimately be correct when it's all said and done. However the minute you start only listening to your parents is the minute when your friends lose trust in you, and you lose trust in them. Remember that whenever a conflict is resolved or your problem is fixed you always have to credit someone for helping you with your problem and if that person is someone other than your parents than you have learned that your peers may be less experienced but they could be just as wise and just as intelligent as your parent or guardian. Finally when you make your ultimate decision based on the advice you were given you are very well informed and you can learn the different perspectives and different lessons that can be taught by different people and you come out of the experience so much wiser and smarter than you ever were before. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
51e23a6b686c | 3EA7F29FFED8 | going to a second opinion is beneficial towards your decision making and ultimately will help you in the long run with whatever issues arise. | Position | Effective |
1fb8a606a10b | 3EAC45B15D2C | Do you want your advice to help you make the best choice? When people ask for advice, they tend to ask more than one person because they want to make the better choice for themselves. People who want to make the best choice look for credibility, different ideas, and different views, and they do this by asking many different kinds of people from young to old, people from different countries, and more. They want as much opinions as possible so they can narrow it down to one idea that will help them make the best choice. For example, a student might be researching about the Civil War for their history paper. They might ask their history teacher for ideas because their teacher happens to be history major. The student decides to ask their parents about their views and ideas and it just so happens that they are both professors with a PhD in history. The student gathers all the opinions they got and writes the paper and gets an A. The student knew they were going to pass because they asked people who were experts on history, and listened to their different views and ideas. | Lead | Effective |
5cbfb277c217 | 3EAC45B15D2C | seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice | Position | Adequate |
5934caa6121a | 3EAC45B15D2C | because of credibility | Claim | Effective |
41eae386d425 | 3EAC45B15D2C | people have different ideas, | Claim | Effective |
7f3e097fdcb8 | 3EAC45B15D2C | people have different views. | Claim | Effective |
fd57235b22da | 3EAC45B15D2C | Everybody wants their advice to be credible and not bogus, so they seek out different websites, books, and people. If a person was having an argument and says that Alexander Hamilton was the best Founding Father and wanted to know more about him, they might go watch the musical,
Hamilton . That is just one source, so they decide to read a biography about him. The person decides to go on History. com to research more about the Founding Father, and even visits New York City, the place where Hamilton lived most of his life. The person decides that that is enough information and is satisfied with what they have learned. They know all the information is credible because of all the primary and secondary sources they have used and declares that Alexander Hamilton was the best Founding Father. Credibility is really important when it comes to making a decision and can be difficult when there are many different sources to choose from. | Evidence | Effective |
5881e783a704 | 3EAC45B15D2C | People have different ideas when it comes to almost everything, for example, an art project, which song to perform, which restaurant to go to, and more. If an artist wanted to paint a mural, they would ask other artists for their opinions and what type of message they should go for. One artist might suggest to use vibrant colors, while another might suggest dark colors. One artist might suggest to spread the message on a humanitarian crisis, while another might suggest to spread the message on powerful women. The artist painting the mural decides to go for vibrant colors and to spread the message on powerful women to make it stand out and let people be informed. Getting different ideas from other people is useful when it comes to making a choice when ideas are not coming to mind. | Evidence | Effective |
60751a2247b9 | 3EAC45B15D2C | People have many types of different views when it comes to their favorite subject at school, their favorite genre of music, politics, and more. Politics, for instance, has people raging with which candidate and platform they think is the best, or they attend protests to support women's rights and to spread word about climate change. According to a recent survey, 95% of students at Generic_School think that everyone should be treated equally. Not everyone at Generic_School has the same views when it comes to equality, politics, or any sort of matter, so when a student wants different views on a certain topic, they might ask their peers. Another student might want to know more about a candidate running for president, so they ask people from different parties, goes to the candidate's website, and researches more about their platform. The student decides which candidate is the best after researching hearing about others' views. Hearing different views from people is a good way to make the final choice. | Evidence | Effective |
30bea874dd62 | 3EAC45B15D2C | making a choice is difficult than it already is, and making the best choice does not seem like it is any more luxurious. Some people might be able to decisions at the speed of light without getting any opinions, while others might need some more opinions in order to make their decision. Life is all about making choices everyday and people have to accept the results that come out of it. Some people might be more carefree about it, while others might need to think more before they make a choice. Wanting to make the best choice is not selfish at all and is just a part of life. Wanting the credibility, different ideas and views from people is just another way of making the best choice. Therefore, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice because of credibility, people have different ideas, and people have different views. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
4804799425e2 | 3ECE3D9AD865 | Everyone has an opinion, some are helpful, yet others just are going to make your life worse. You might ask why anyone would care about someone else's opinion, well it's hard to answer that question. You see, having multiple opinions can help limit the bias from the first opinion you received. Thus, why wouldn't you want to have multiple opinions, well it's quite simple, it's because people in our world are too scared to ask for others opinion or their advice. When asking for advice you are receiving wisdom, this wisdom can guide you to many great things, or it could lead you to absolute disaster. You will be guided into doing the wrong things in your life however you could stop all of that with a bit of advice. Having an opinion from one person can be very helpful, but just imagine if you could see both sides of your problem, thus leading you to obtain enough information on your problem and make the right choice. | Lead | Effective |
22cc9fb2da49 | 3ECE3D9AD865 | Seeking multiple opinions can help you make a better choice | Position | Adequate |
af013f1d74f5 | 3ECE3D9AD865 | wisdom from those around you is helpful, | Claim | Effective |
da7fe1ab1a0e | 3ECE3D9AD865 | it will help limit bias, | Claim | Effective |
d594c9715a1b | 3ECE3D9AD865 | two opinions is always better than one. | Claim | Effective |
2b67e722842e | 3ECE3D9AD865 | Bias, bias is a thing no one should want in the opinions they are receiving. It is never a good choice to make to accept a biased opinion as a truth. Staying away from a biased opinion will benefit in so many unbelievable ways one could be eliminating the untruthful opinions from your life. It can be very unhelpful as well, these biased opinions could lead you down a road you should not go down. You can have a very bright future awaiting for you, but the one bias opinion you listen to can and will destroy your life. You might ask how could it destroy your life in an instant, well people will look at you differently based off the one bad biased opinion you listened to, and building that former life you previously had will virtually be impossible. | Evidence | Effective |
645f63839849 | 3ECE3D9AD865 | Wisdom is one of the most important things you will ever receive. Wisdom can be received or given by anyone such as your peers and elders. Everyone you meet will always have a choice to make therefore for every choice you have to make daily will effect your life forever. Some however will not be as big as others deciding what you will have fir dinner is no where as big of a decision as what you will do when your house burns down or you lose your job. | Evidence | Effective |
d684a424d6fb | 3ECE3D9AD865 | It you have two opinions you will be able to see both sides of the problem therefore making it easier to for you to make the right choice. Having only one opinion is definitely worse than having multiple because you are unable to have the option to see the other side. The one opinion could lead you into making some wrong choices, yet have multiple will lead to make some of the better choices that you could have made. Having the most opinions possible could change your life for the better, and possibly make your life easier. Although, receiving multiple opinions could sound easy it is quite difficult, due to the fact that nit everyone is going to want to help you. Some people in our world will not want you to succeed. However one opinion is worse than having multiple because you are unable to see everything that could be harmful towards you. | Evidence | Effective |
c2346e32c79f | 3ECE3D9AD865 | Obtaining multiple opinions for your problem is helpful for making the right choice because personal experience or wisdom is helpful, helps take away biased opinions, and multiple opinions from others is always better than one opinion. Who would care about others opinions, finding the answer will be almost impossible. Multiple opinions can limit the bias you have previously been given. Why would you even want to obtain opinions from others if they are all bad, well that's not true, opinions from others can be good for you to listen to. Wisdom form others should be a big part in the choices you make. However, you will have to be sure that they persons' opinion you are listening is trying to help you. Opinions come in two forms good and bad however you must do everything in your power to only listen to the good and not harmful opinions. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
5c4d09ef2968 | 3F06BE2C68DF | Do you remember a time or moment when you where having trouble making a decision for yourself and sought for advice? I'm sure we all have done that. When we don't know what to do we often ask people for their opinion and ask what they would do in these type of situations | Lead | Effective |
30cbba5b863b | 3F06BE2C68DF | Once, i had no idea if i should take an instrumental class or an art class. I gathered different opinions in order to make a decision which helped me a lot! | Position | Adequate |
785bbd3f96ff | 3F06BE2C68DF | Multiple opinions make us feel more secure about a decision we make. | Claim | Effective |
0b6d805542a3 | 3F06BE2C68DF | We also get different point of views and feedback. | Claim | Effective |
7ac89578ad13 | 3F06BE2C68DF | In some cases, you even get opinions from personal experiences.
| Claim | Effective |
26790e3b6967 | 3F06BE2C68DF | When it comes to indecisive decisions, i tend to ask other people what they think and what they would do. When i was younger, i had two options of either joining a soccer team or learn how to play guitar. I was really into soccer but i've always wanted to learn how to play the guitar. This was obviously a very hard decision and i kept going back and forth about what i should choose. I ended up asking my cousins for their opinions. Most of them said i should learn guitar since i'd be learning something new instead of playing soccer which i had already knew how to play. I quickly made my mind and chose guitar lessons and didn't feel any regret when choosing guitar. | Evidence | Effective |
c94a807691d8 | 3F06BE2C68DF | Often times, when you ask for multiple opinions you get different point of views and feedback. My aunt was having trouble deciding if she should study to become a police officer or a doctor. She asked my parents for opinions and they had different point of views. My father said it'd be better to be a police officer since becoming a doctor takes more time and money but my mother said she thought it would be better to become a doctor since she would be saving lives and when the family needed help in terms of medical reasons, she would know and help us. However, my aunt received many other point of views but it helped her think about an important decision like this more carefully, but this time with more advice and she didn't have to decide blindly. Therefore, the feedback from the opinions she received helped her a lot and ended up studying to become a doctor. | Evidence | Adequate |
96b470b5de20 | 3F06BE2C68DF | My mother once told me a story about when she was younger and needed to buy a car. Her father knew a lot about cars so she asked him for his opinion. He recommended her multiple cars that don't waste much gasoline fast. This helped her a lot choosing a car that would help her save money and the car she ended up getting lasted a very long time. I often go to my older cousins and friends for opinions related to school. As mentioned in my introduction, there was a moment where i could not decide between an art class or an instrument class as one of my courses for next year. Some of my cousins that are in high school gave me their opinion and told me that they had friends that enjoyed their art classes more than their instrument classes. I was able to talk with their friends and i realized that the art class i wanted to take was the better choice thanks to my cousins friends. | Evidence | Adequate |
99361bf01592 | 3F06BE2C68DF | There are many other reasons opinions are so helpful but they help us in ways like making us feel more secure about a decision. They also give us feedback and different point of views. In some cases, opinions are given by personal experiences. Opinions are something you should consider when you're having trouble deciding something. It also helps you get a better understanding and make you feel more safe about decisions for important situations. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
b77e1eae3d04 | 3FC093EFB96C | You are sitting in your chair. The plastic hurts your legs and back as it curves in an uncomfortable position, ill-adapted to your person. The intolerable buzz of the air conditioning that does nothing to cool the over-heated room drones at your ears, making it impossible to focus. The dull, artificial bulbs that in no way compensate for natural sunlight burn away at your eyes, giving you headache after headache. The other kids are yelling and blasting music, talking instead of doing the work you have been told to complete in an unreasonable, almost impossible time. The work you are doing makes no sense to you and you feel incompetent as those around you breeze by effortlessly. You need to ask the teacher about your work but shes busy grading papers, paying no attention to the class you have been forced into. You can not focus on a single word of your assignment, and even if you could understand it, you would not be able to complete it, because that same day youve already had three tests and two quizzes and all you want is to go home and take a short nap to recharge your brain. You long for some solution to your endless problems in the classroom, and you realize there is another way. | Lead | Effective |
bb8ee1fa500c | 3FC093EFB96C | Learning from home can solve all these problems and more. | Position | Adequate |
983e25eded74 | 3FC093EFB96C | With the ability to work online, you not only have the comfort of being at home | Claim | Adequate |
ca668ca017a7 | 3FC093EFB96C | more flexibility in your schedule, | Claim | Adequate |
08226db9e2a4 | 3FC093EFB96C | can learn at your own pace, | Claim | Adequate |
78a04329c583 | 3FC093EFB96C | can eliminate almost any distractions. | Claim | Adequate |
97539cbb8e88 | 3FC093EFB96C | First and foremost, being able to work in a comfortable environment is crucial to focusing and being able to produce the best work possible. | Claim | Effective |
7aad6f0f89cb | 3FC093EFB96C | While at school, students are being crammed into small classrooms with masses of other students, leaving each individual cramped. With only a square foot of desk space to write on, and the inability to move freely due to the molecule ratio of classroom size to students present, students are unable to concentrate on a given task. Scientists have proven through various studies that being comfortable while working has a direct effect on ones ability to produce quality work. By giving students the opportunity to work away from school, the comforts of home will aid in excelling the learning process. Students are also fed ill-nutritious foods in unnaturally short lunch periods, causing masses of students to consume foods that decrease brain power. When students are given less then 15 minutes to stuff their faces with greasy carbs before being shoved back into their classrooms, the students ability to work is compromised in ways like never before. By allowing students to work at home, they also have access to more nutritious food with reasonable eating periods. | Evidence | Effective |
c93af9cd14b2 | 3FC093EFB96C | In addition to comfort, working with a more flexible schedule also benefits students. | Claim | Effective |
f965c6422f98 | 3FC093EFB96C | In high school, students are often faced with the dilemma of an overwhelming amount of tests, quizzes, or projects due on a single day. Working online with a more flexible schedule, allows a student to space out assignments as needed, improving the quality and ability to learn from each one. In addition to this, the student can also plan their learning around their personal life, and allows the student to create a schedule that does not force them to chose between an important test and seeing family that visits only once a year. The ability to have more flexibility is also scientifically proven to improve learning in scenarios at school where students are forced to sit for hours at a time. Scientists have shown that teens can only focus for hour long intervals with 30 minute breaks in between. At school, classes are, on average, one and a half hours with only seven minute breaks in between. This shows how much an online approach to schooling can greatly benefit students. | Evidence | Effective |
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