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6daa09c8a5b4	2CFF8146A4BC	First of all, it lets you get the ideas of others.	Claim	Effective
034e7f312398	2CFF8146A4BC	All people will most certainly not have the same ideas, so you can see what other people have to say about things. You might be sided with one persons idea, then after being able to view other peoples idea, you might shift your viewpoints. This can be a good thing because you might not always have the best, or even the right idea for yourself. Viewing other peoples ideas and thinking about them can cause you to think about more than just one idea, so you can make the best out of others ideas. This can help you make good choices because it allows you to see multiple angles, not just one.	Evidence	Effective
507a1d351748	2CFF8146A4BC	It can strengthen your ability to view all parts of the situation, which leads the ability to make the best possible choice you can make, in any given situation.	Claim	Adequate
99766ae90130	2CFF8146A4BC	some people might have more experience with the sort of situation you are in.	Claim	Effective
391671df02b2	2CFF8146A4BC	For example, a person that is 15 might not have that good of advice for, let's say, parenting. Their advice is not valid because they have no experience. However, going to someone else, like a person in their thirties to forties, would have a much better advice that would help you in the situation, because they have had at least five to ten years of experience behind them.	Evidence	Effective
4bbcce3d935e	2CFF8146A4BC	I know that getting advice from more than one person is one of the best things you can do, is because it have done it in my life, and i have had some rewarding benefits. I had to do a project for school, where I had to make a model that displayed what I had learned in that unit. I did not really know what I was going to do, so I asked my parents. They helped me come up with an idea, but the rest was up to me. I then came to ask my older friend, who had done this project before. He helped me come up with how I was going to make it, and display it with confidence to the class. When all was said and done, I got an A on the project. Afterward, I pondered what I did in order to get the good grade. I remembered that I had sought the opinion and ideas of 3 different people, and I had done the very best I could have done. In the future, I would remember that project, and how rewarding it was to get help from multiple people.	Evidence	Effective
f5250a37b93a	2CFF8146A4BC	Why is getting help from multiple people the best thing you can do? I helps you make the best possible choice, you can see different peoples views and ideas, and it strengthens your ability to see all sides of the situation, whatever it may be.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
3c5d67ad6bcd	2D976D9E1787	When people ask for advice why do they sometimes ask many people?	Lead	Adequate
82616934627e	2D976D9E1787	In my opinion i think that asking more than one person can help you get more information than just asking one person.	Position	Adequate
8a633577cf44	2D976D9E1787	By asking many people it can get you more advice on the subject and help you know more about what your asking about.	Claim	Adequate
a39c9f5fb353	2D976D9E1787	Getting more opinions can help you because it can get you more advice and by getting more advice helps the person asking know more. What does it help by asking more than one person it can get you get you more advice just in case you did not know.	Evidence	Ineffective
15d0d25b5be3	2D976D9E1787	People like to ask other because the one that they are asking might know more than if you where to not ask	Claim	Adequate
44e566bb9ca8	2D976D9E1787	Not knowing what you want to know can effect you because if you will need to know it. Asking others helps you because it can make what ever your wanting to know easier by getting help and asking.	Evidence	Ineffective
04cbd0f6d923	2D976D9E1787	Why do they like to get multiple opinions on what their asking and not just asking one person for their opinion. People ask for many others opinions so that they can make sure there right and not wrong because if you ask for one persons opinion they might be wrong. The benefits of asking multiple people are you ca learn more than you wanted and know exactly what you needed to know. So in conclusion is better to ask multiple people rather than just one person because it can get you to know more so asking more than one person is a good thing to do so next time you want to know something ask multiple people rather than one.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
d567bcae2924	2DE95E7D6776	The feeling of indecisiveness where your brain is waging war on itself, Google is giving out useless information, time is ticking, and you just wish someone was there to tell you what they think	Lead	Effective
0f4666b51b89	2DE95E7D6776	Asking multiple people for their advice and opinion is better when making decisions.	Position	Effective
701d2dac6b67	2DE95E7D6776	Other people offer contrasting solutions	Claim	Effective
26ebb2c5055d	2DE95E7D6776	different opinions from life experiences	Claim	Effective
ad83763ccf9c	2DE95E7D6776	and give confidence and ease of mind.	Claim	Effective
9aace8a362b6	2DE95E7D6776	When talking to different people about your problem, each of them will conjure very different solutions	Claim	Effective
7fa40fc9e8d5	2DE95E7D6776	Listening to different ideas may inspire you to tweak you decision. When I had just moved into a different house, I was presented with an age old teenage dilemma: how to decorate my room? Consulting with my parents, sister, friends, and my wise pet dog, I settled on a blue comforter and yellow walls. However, when sometimes you've strained your brain but no solution has been thought up, the presented advice may end up being the one you pick. In the book Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Harry Potter has no idea how to contact Sirius Black. Luckily for him, his friends do. With their help, a plan was hatched with the involvement of invisible gas and breaking into the headmaster's office, all things he wouldn't have thought of himself. My grandmother's saying, "Our brains are crazy in different ways," in this case, is an extremely accurate expression.	Evidence	Effective
ae9265b9e8d7	2DE95E7D6776	Consulting with many people gives you a broader perspective and more knowledge towards making your decision	Claim	Effective
910f07bcd245	2DE95E7D6776	When more people from different walks of life-whether it be age, ethnicity, or financial situation-give you advice, it allows you to realize which of their advice fits you the best. When my older brother was presented with the life deciding question of the future career path, the whole family weighed in. My grandfather, who survived the famine in China and grew up in poverty, suggested she strive for a stable and well paying office job. My aunt, a freelancer who grew up in the U.S, simply said, "Follow your heart." Compiling information from people who all lead very different lives allows you to see the bigger picture.	Evidence	Effective
aa29602dde84	2DE95E7D6776	Listening to other people explain what they think allows you to have confidence in your own decision and ease self doubt, which some people experience.	Claim	Effective
44f2fb4cf6ff	2DE95E7D6776	Whenever I have to make an important decision, I often become agitated and start doubting myself, listing reasons why I wasn't correct. Versus when advice is given from a unbiased outsider's point of view, it is often more rational and factual, rather than emotional. Yesterday, when my homework folder mysteriously disappeared, hearing my friends explain what they would do made me realize my problem wasn't as extreme as I made it out to be. The advice given to you can strengthen your decision by explaining why your choice is stronger, while adding points to why other options are weaker. A quote, this time from my little sister: "A little confidence never hurt nobody."	Evidence	Effective
24a96f82d083	2DE95E7D6776	Hearing others' advice and solutions allows better decision-making. It gives room for wildly different ideas, wider perspectives, and more confidence in your own choice	Concluding Statement	Effective
120579c38d83	2E4A88C4D580	Have you ever had to face a daunting challenge, and wondered why you didn't seek multiple people's advice for help? Whenever you find yourself in a new situation, there are plenty of people willing to voice their opinions out to you.	Lead	Effective
f9f3a46513c1	2E4A88C4D580	Instead of only seeking advice from one person, the superior option is to talk to multiple people	Position	Adequate
cb3f1c5f9d39	2E4A88C4D580	it is likely those people probably experienced the same things as you,	Claim	Effective
3d6ba781c991	2E4A88C4D580	it is important to get several viewpoints on your scenario in case something unexpected happens	Claim	Effective
aefd7d0dd9ba	2E4A88C4D580	simply talking to more people can get more of the nerves and bad emotions out.	Claim	Effective
fb842221bf37	2E4A88C4D580	The more people you have to guide you, the less confused you will be. Sometimes when someone is faced with a new situation, they don't know what to do. They may be frightened about the situation, and find it difficult to cope. Talking to multiple people who have faced the problem will be your light at the end of the tunnel. The more people you talk to, the brighter that light will be.	Evidence	Adequate
24c9f2de918b	2E4A88C4D580	When we talk to more people, we have more viewpoints on what to do to attack the challenge. Talking to only one person will give you only one solution as to what to do, but seeking advice from multiple people will result in a stronger you! You will have several plans in your head when something goes wrong. Imagine the regret you will feel if someone offers you advice that could've got you out of your sticky situation, and you don't even listen! Always listen to people who want to voice out their opinions to you, because their perspective on the scenario could save a future problem you may have.	Evidence	Adequate
090e61800743	2E4A88C4D580	Facing a new scenario can be hard, and you probably will have bad emotions eating at your brain. Most people would agree that having someone to listen to you while you rant about these emotions will help you in the long run. They will inspire you to think optimistically. Being optimistic may even help you achieve greater accomplishments! You may be scared to talk to multiple people, but the more people you seek for advice, the better you will attack the situation with a clear mind.	Evidence	Effective
c6aea2f2d415	2E4A88C4D580	In conclusion, seeking multiple people's opinions is more beneficial than only seeking one. You can face the situation knowing you did the best you could to prepare for it. Next time you you resort to only asking one person for advice, think twice because it will be helpful to talk to people who have experienced your situation, you will have more ways to overcome an unexpected challenge, and you can let all of your emotions out to everyone.	Concluding Statement	Effective
688b2de20572	2EAE515F6F39	Multiple opinions can help people decide on what to do.	Position	Adequate
a6e44eb7454b	2EAE515F6F39	When asking for an opinion you might want to ask more than one person because the person you ask might have better advice than the other person.	Claim	Effective
5000129aa4cd	2EAE515F6F39	people could have different personal opinions and points of view than others and their advice could help you out a lot in the future.	Claim	Effective
5f980a3cf5c6	2EAE515F6F39	When you ask for someones opinion you should listen carefully to what they have to say.	Evidence	Effective
14cc71f48107	2EAE515F6F39	if someone gives you advice that you do not agree with and you get upset just remember that everyone does not think exactly like you. People have their own personal opinions and they will sometimes tell you something that you do not like or want to hear . Now if someone gave you advice that you do not like do not ignore it take it as constructive criticism and listen to what they say and have a open mind about it. For example: Lets say you made some food and you add a little to much salt and your friend tells you that it is was to salty and that maybe you should have added less salt but you find the food to taste just right. Next time maybe dont add as much salt. This way you listen to your friends advice even though you disagree and if you find it alright and if they find the food better then you both dont lose nothing. And theres other ways to deal with this situation like not cooking that meal, but you decided to listen to your friends advice and in the end it all worked out. Its ok if people have different opinions then you and their advice isnt what you would like to hear but its good that you learn from them.	Evidence	Effective
b51ad7248c41	2EAE515F6F39	when seeking advice its good to ask more than one person because everyone is different and they will tell you different things. Some of those things could be bad advice but as long as you find the good in what everyone says and not just what one person says youll find the advice your looking for.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
de76b160e2f3	2F1FD58DEA2F	You are walking through all the different houses. There are so many to pick, and you have to choose the right one for the right price. This house looks aesthetic, but this one's cheaper. This one has a bigger backyard, but this one is in a better community. There are too many ways where you could go wrong. You end up calling up your friends to help you look through the options. You've all been there before, whether it was making decisions as big as buying the right house or as small as what restaurant to eat at.	Lead	Effective
1b0c0cb91cb9	2F1FD58DEA2F	In order to get the good advice you need, you should ask more than one person.	Position	Effective
c52f83286e65	2F1FD58DEA2F	you will have more options on what to do,	Claim	Effective
0a061112c4ff	2F1FD58DEA2F	different views and opinions on the situation,	Claim	Effective
9a9d8e0ff0d9	2F1FD58DEA2F	less stress about the decision.	Claim	Effective
5427bd580855	2F1FD58DEA2F	While one solution may not work very well, another may be the best one for you. Asking more people also increases the chances of finding someone who had to make the same decision or was in the same situation. This would be incredibly helpful because they could give advice on what they chose to do and the result. For example, when I was working on a difficult math problem, I asked many people for their ideas on how to approach it. Though some of them could not solve the problem or help me, others came up with brilliant solutions. One of them had seen a similar problem before, so he pointed me in the right direction. By asking more than one person for advice, I received many choices from which I could pick the best one.	Evidence	Effective
49189d3b403d	2F1FD58DEA2F	sometimes choices are not enough, and we need to understand the options better.	Claim	Effective
f203518ce006	2F1FD58DEA2F	Everyone can view an issue differently depending on personal experience or background knowledge.	Evidence	Effective
f359f97f9f10	2F1FD58DEA2F	However, when others also understand your situation, it is a lot less of a weight to carry. Talking to more than one person can help relieve the stress a lot more than if it is carried by only one or two people. For instance, I was very stressed about an upcoming competition and I could not focus on studying. I explained my situation to many of my friends and they helped me calm down and gave me advice on how to focus and study. Getting advice from many people helped me relieve my stress and do well at the competition. I felt more calm because of the support from my friends after getting advice. Making sure you are not stressed is very important because it could affect your studies and relationship with friends and family. By asking more than one person for advice, you will most likely be less stressed.	Evidence	Effective
4a75a6e62311	2F1FD58DEA2F	Listening to multiple options, knowing the pros and cons of each side, and relieving decision-making stress are all reasons why you should ask more than one person for advice. You always want to make the right choice, especially for bigger decisions like buying a house. Getting to know all your options and the pros and cons of each is very important for making the best choice for you. However, this could be very stressful and asking all your friends for advice will make sure you feel supported and less stressed.	Concluding Statement	Effective
7876be2eb6a5	2FA001A3D229	When asking people for advice, usually asking a close friend or a trusted adult is what first comes to mind. In some cases, More than one person needs to be asked.	Position	Effective
d068ef6853b8	2FA001A3D229	When advice is needed asking more than one person can be better than just asking one.	Claim	Effective
c847041de6ef	2FA001A3D229	In the event that advice is needed, asking two or maybe even three people can be a lot more reassuring. New ideas are brought to the table meaning more options to choose from when the decision needs to be made. As an example, Generic_Name might not know what to do when the school bully tells him to meet him after school on the blacktop to fight. Generic_Name asks his friend what to do and his friend has the same idea as him. Asking two or three people might give new or maybe even better ideas than the one that he thought of. So now Generic_Name is avoiding the fight, and is safe because his other friends told him to tell the principal.	Evidence	Effective
081b3b2f65b7	2FA001A3D229	Asking more than one person might also add to your idea.	Claim	Effective
1841129175bc	2FA001A3D229	For an example, Generic_Name wants salad but doesn't know what to put on it. He puts the lettuce shredded cheese and ham on it but he knows he's missing something. He asks his friends to see what they say. One friend asks if he has put tomatoes on it, and another asks if he put croutons on it yet. so with these new ideas at hand, he can now add these items to his salad, and has a salad ready for lunch tomorrow.	Evidence	Adequate
e33aa53b2832	2FA001A3D229	Making better decisions is another outcome for asking multiple people for advice.	Claim	Effective
213daeb5cf0e	2FA001A3D229	As an example, Generic_Name is at the shoe store looking for some new shoes for school. He is trying to get the newest pairs of Jordans' because he wanted to be the first at his school to have them, but they are way too expensive. On the other hand, he could get a much cheaper pair of Air Force Ones but then he would look like everyone else. Generic_Name is really indecisive, so he calls his friend to see what he says. his friend tells him to buy the Jordan but they are too expensive. Generic_Name then asks his dad, and his dad says the Air Force Ones are much more affordable and look good too. Generic_Name not knowing what to do suddenly remembers that basketball season is coming up, and the only pair of basketball shoes are beaten up and dirty. Generic_Name then asks one of the employees that work there is they have any basketball shoes. The employee directs him to the basketball section and Generic_Name sees the basketball shoes hes been wanting, and at an affordable price.	Evidence	Effective
580ce7fc01eb	2FA001A3D229	There are times when you need some advice, and a lot of it. Asking more than one person is better in many different ways. Some for making better decisions, and some just to hear the opinions of others and what they think is the best thing to do. Someone once said, " two heads are better than one".	Concluding Statement	Effective
3b3df8fac661	31998D3364B9	Recently more and more schools are offering online classes as an alternative to attending classes in a school building. Although some parents may argue that online classes could potentially make students lazy, students would actually benefit greatly from online classes. Students could get their eight hour sleep schedules each night if they attend classes online because their schedules would be more flexible. Online classes could have a schedule that accommodates to all its students needs. Online classes will be beneficial to students suffering from sickness and mental health issues and stress levels among students could lower.	Lead	Effective
cc8d4e89cb2f	31998D3364B9	Distance learning is an option all students should have because it would be beneficial to students.	Position	Effective
0767f037b61d	31998D3364B9	Online classes could have a more flexible schedule that could accommodate for each of their student's needs.	Claim	Effective
60bd6b523967	31998D3364B9	All students have different circumstances. Some students have sicknesses or mental health issues that make attending schools difficult but online classes would help no one fall behind. Students with social anxiety and depression struggle to be motivated to attend school each day but online classes could help these students. People suffering from depression can often feel unmotivated to leave their houses or be around other people, but online classes would limit the amount of unwanted interaction students would have to have and allow them to feel more comfortable, and work at their own pace.	Evidence	Effective
3eff369e1084	31998D3364B9	Students with social anxiety can feel overwhelmed in a school setting, and can even experience panic attacks. If schools gave students the option to have online classes, the ones suffering from anxiety would feel more motivated to do school work. Unfortunately, some students are suffering from sicknesses which make them feel weak and physically unable to attend school everyday.	Evidence	Effective
e9f4cf4f8d9a	31998D3364B9	Online classes would allow sick students to remain attending classes and not fall behind while remaining comfortable in their homes or hospitals.	Claim	Adequate
4af2728e19f8	31998D3364B9	Most middle school and high school students don't receive the recommended eight hours of sleep each night because of how early they have to attend school, but online classes could change this.	Claim	Effective
b30c02fdfa0e	31998D3364B9	Usually students go to bed around 10:00pm or even later than this; and wake up at around 5:30am or 6:00am depending on what time school starts. Many AP or IB students lose sleep because of the large homework load they receive. So students that take AP or IB classes could start their online courses later in the day and receive the right amount of sleep each day. Having eight hours of sleep can increase productivity among students and possibly receive better grades on worksheets, homework, and tests. If students are able to wake up later and get plenty of time to sleep, they will feel more motivated to work hard and finish their assignments. School can be stressful and getting the right amount of sleep can help ease this.	Evidence	Effective
cf6a6008d763	31998D3364B9	Recently, students haven't felt safe in their schools. During a crisis, students could have classes online to keep students feeling safe.	Claim	Effective
cf123b878d5f	31998D3364B9	School shootings have struck fear into many students and have caused them to feel unsafe in schools. Online classes could prevent any of these tragedies from potentially occurring again and students can feel safe again. Students will be in the safety of their own homes and won't have to worry about the about the possibility of any intruders harming them or their peers. The Coronavirus has also fear in many people. People don't want to leave their homes or even travel anymore because of the possibility of obtaining this sickness, and this includes students. Many areas have had people infected with the virus which has caused many outbreaks to cancel schools because students are afraid of getting the Coronavirus. If students attended classes online, they wouldn't have to worry about getting inflected with the Coronavirus.	Evidence	Effective
d1289efcf874	31998D3364B9	Students in all kinds of difficult circumstances would benefit greatly from taking online classes. Students suffering from mental health issues like anxiety and depression and students with sicknesses will have the option to take online classes and they will have a schedule more accommodated to their needs. All students including students that take AP, IB, or harder level classes classes will be able to receive more hours of sleep if online classes are an option, and during a crisis students would feel much safer attending classes online from home.	Concluding Statement	Effective
56c88d7a6fee	32D3B300954A	Schools are now starting to provide new methods of students being able to learn. With having school at home there is many benefits and cons about it. Students now have more ways to go to school and get a education that maybe they weren't able to get before	Lead	Adequate
b2de6159f98f	32D3B300954A	I think that students wouldn't really benefit from taking classes from home	Position	Adequate
22572027580c	32D3B300954A	because they are more distractions	Claim	Adequate
35d281e60142	32D3B300954A	the student would probably will be on their phone	Claim	Adequate
7baa9b05c499	32D3B300954A	the lack of communication with others.	Claim	Adequate
40af5728c0db	32D3B300954A	Distractions become more noticeable at home because there are loads of things that could distract you	Claim	Adequate
4296fb42e250	32D3B300954A	For example, if your taking your classes in the living room, the TV might be on or you're attempted to go watch TV. Another example, could be that your in the kitchen and you happen to start eating and you happen to take a break from your class. I honesty think that if you take classes from home it's a waste of time.	Evidence	Adequate
ecd8c2018695	32D3B300954A	These almost everyone has a phone and even now at schools everyone is on them. I think that the with being home and having classes the phone will be like one of the main problem because of how addicting it is	Claim	Effective
d711d61b4565	32D3B300954A	For example during a session you get a call or text and your mind gets preoccupied with that text or call that you receive. It also takes away time from learning because if your constantly on the phone you aren't paying attention to whats happening.	Evidence	Adequate
cd4754795476	32D3B300954A	Another reason that I think that we don't really benefit is that theres a lack of communication with other people	Claim	Adequate
a6c20c749b2c	32D3B300954A	Having good communication skills is important to have because you might need it for a future job	Evidence	Adequate
61c5dc6d735f	32D3B300954A	With taking online or video conferences it sort of helps with that	Counterclaim	Adequate
f2e66ba8f801	32D3B300954A	but not fully	Rebuttal	Ineffective
bee6bf0ca91d	32D3B300954A	It's more beneficial that they go to a public or private school because they are different types of people and you get more experience on the communication. For example, with doing a video conference most likely you'll be talking to the same teacher every day, while going to school somewhere you won't talk to the same one or couple of people.	Evidence	Adequate
39064a94001d	32D3B300954A	With all being said, students should attend school instead of taking classes at home because of all the distractions, phones being in the way, and of lack of communication. Even though I might think a certain way, you shouldn't just take all my advice, many people happen to learn or educate themselves in different ways. I would like to thank whomever is reading this and thank them for the effort they put into reading this. By the way never stop learning in the long run it helps out a lot.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
159a56a82ce9	331588D6432C	I believe that if you get multiple peoples advice	Position	Ineffective
ad7619dbecd8	331588D6432C	you can see there view on it, see what they would do in the situation,	Claim	Adequate
22f696a2d7d2	331588D6432C	to see which one had the best advice	Claim	Adequate
e91a6b4f6f0e	331588D6432C	reason one is that sometimes if people give you advice you do not listen to your own. also, you could see if anyone was in this situation before. secondly is some people have been in the situation your in so if they give you advice listen to it because their just trying to get you out of it. third reason is listen to their advice and never think about it again you could remember everything that happen. also, when you listen to other peoples advice you could learn from your mistakes because they probably did it before. if you listen to other peoples advice you can not make the mistake you made again.	Evidence	Adequate
540bff40bab5	331588D6432C	if you listen to other peoples advice you could see the view of what they would do.	Claim	Adequate
00b5a0d2d5b8	331588D6432C	if you listen to other peoples advice you could see what they would do in this situation. if you listen to more then one person they could tell you what they did to get out of the situation. also if you listen to peoples advise it can not always be good so you have to watch out. many times when you listen to your own advise you do not listen to your own. you should always listen to your parents advise because they probably have been in your shoes before so they can tell you how to get away from it. in conclusion you should listen to parents or friends and see what they would do in your situation.	Evidence	Adequate
27c748ffee06	331588D6432C	if you listen to multiple people you could see which one had the better advice.	Claim	Adequate
f140f1cc7d63	331588D6432C	if you listen to many people two people might have great advice you just might have to choose the one you think is right. also if you listen to your friends they could help you because they maybe have be there to. another reason is if you listen to family they could help you get rid of your problem or situation. listening to parents and friends to see which one is better is hard because you have to choose your family or friends to help and it could be hard.	Evidence	Adequate
c5350ad57df4	331588D6432C	giving advise to people could really help them because they might would want to hurt themselves or hurt other people and that could be really bad because they could go to jail.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
5a8b56c597d3	331CA007D0AD	When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person.	Lead	Adequate
bca7e4b563b0	331CA007D0AD	Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. Because if someone ask for advice to multiple people thats good.	Position	Adequate
351c6caddad1	331CA007D0AD	Because one person might have better advice than some other person they asked if they asked multiple people for advice	Claim	Effective
88da96c63401	331CA007D0AD	. Also you can ask for advice when you need help or you don't know how to do something	Evidence	Adequate
0b09f97ff779	331CA007D0AD	Also asking muliple people for advice can help people make a better choice becauce other people might have diffrent advice or diffrent expereances with thething the person is asking them.	Claim	Effective
16ce09f7f308	331CA007D0AD	Thats one reason why asking more than one person can help people make a better choice	Evidence	Ineffective

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First of all, it lets you get the ideas of others.

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All people will most certainly not have the same ideas, so you can see what other people have to say about things. You might be sided with one persons idea, then after being able to view other peoples idea, you might shift your viewpoints. This can be a good thing because you might not always have the best, or even the right idea for yourself. Viewing other peoples ideas and thinking about them can cause you to think about more than just one idea, so you can make the best out of others ideas. This can help you make good choices because it allows you to see multiple angles, not just one.

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It can strengthen your ability to view all parts of the situation, which leads the ability to make the best possible choice you can make, in any given situation.

Claim

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some people might have more experience with the sort of situation you are in.

Claim

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For example, a person that is 15 might not have that good of advice for, let's say, parenting. Their advice is not valid because they have no experience. However, going to someone else, like a person in their thirties to forties, would have a much better advice that would help you in the situation, because they have had at least five to ten years of experience behind them.

Evidence

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I know that getting advice from more than one person is one of the best things you can do, is because it have done it in my life, and i have had some rewarding benefits. I had to do a project for school, where I had to make a model that displayed what I had learned in that unit. I did not really know what I was going to do, so I asked my parents. They helped me come up with an idea, but the rest was up to me. I then came to ask my older friend, who had done this project before. He helped me come up with how I was going to make it, and display it with confidence to the class. When all was said and done, I got an A on the project. Afterward, I pondered what I did in order to get the good grade. I remembered that I had sought the opinion and ideas of 3 different people, and I had done the very best I could have done. In the future, I would remember that project, and how rewarding it was to get help from multiple people.

Evidence

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Why is getting help from multiple people the best thing you can do? I helps you make the best possible choice, you can see different peoples views and ideas, and it strengthens your ability to see all sides of the situation, whatever it may be.

Concluding Statement

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When people ask for advice why do they sometimes ask many people?

Lead

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In my opinion i think that asking more than one person can help you get more information than just asking one person.

Position

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By asking many people it can get you more advice on the subject and help you know more about what your asking about.

Claim

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Getting more opinions can help you because it can get you more advice and by getting more advice helps the person asking know more. What does it help by asking more than one person it can get you get you more advice just in case you did not know.

Evidence

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People like to ask other because the one that they are asking might know more than if you where to not ask

Claim

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Not knowing what you want to know can effect you because if you will need to know it. Asking others helps you because it can make what ever your wanting to know easier by getting help and asking.

Evidence

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Why do they like to get multiple opinions on what their asking and not just asking one person for their opinion. People ask for many others opinions so that they can make sure there right and not wrong because if you ask for one persons opinion they might be wrong. The benefits of asking multiple people are you ca learn more than you wanted and know exactly what you needed to know. So in conclusion is better to ask multiple people rather than just one person because it can get you to know more so asking more than one person is a good thing to do so next time you want to know something ask multiple people rather than one.

Concluding Statement

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The feeling of indecisiveness where your brain is waging war on itself, Google is giving out useless information, time is ticking, and you just wish someone was there to tell you what they think

Lead

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Asking multiple people for their advice and opinion is better when making decisions.

Position

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Other people offer contrasting solutions

Claim

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different opinions from life experiences

Claim

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and give confidence and ease of mind.

Claim

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When talking to different people about your problem, each of them will conjure very different solutions

Claim

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Listening to different ideas may inspire you to tweak you decision. When I had just moved into a different house, I was presented with an age old teenage dilemma: how to decorate my room? Consulting with my parents, sister, friends, and my wise pet dog, I settled on a blue comforter and yellow walls. However, when sometimes you've strained your brain but no solution has been thought up, the presented advice may end up being the one you pick. In the book Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Harry Potter has no idea how to contact Sirius Black. Luckily for him, his friends do. With their help, a plan was hatched with the involvement of invisible gas and breaking into the headmaster's office, all things he wouldn't have thought of himself. My grandmother's saying, "Our brains are crazy in different ways," in this case, is an extremely accurate expression.

Evidence

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Consulting with many people gives you a broader perspective and more knowledge towards making your decision

Claim

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When more people from different walks of life-whether it be age, ethnicity, or financial situation-give you advice, it allows you to realize which of their advice fits you the best. When my older brother was presented with the life deciding question of the future career path, the whole family weighed in. My grandfather, who survived the famine in China and grew up in poverty, suggested she strive for a stable and well paying office job. My aunt, a freelancer who grew up in the U.S, simply said, "Follow your heart." Compiling information from people who all lead very different lives allows you to see the bigger picture.

Evidence

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Listening to other people explain what they think allows you to have confidence in your own decision and ease self doubt, which some people experience.

Claim

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Whenever I have to make an important decision, I often become agitated and start doubting myself, listing reasons why I wasn't correct. Versus when advice is given from a unbiased outsider's point of view, it is often more rational and factual, rather than emotional. Yesterday, when my homework folder mysteriously disappeared, hearing my friends explain what they would do made me realize my problem wasn't as extreme as I made it out to be. The advice given to you can strengthen your decision by explaining why your choice is stronger, while adding points to why other options are weaker. A quote, this time from my little sister: "A little confidence never hurt nobody."

Evidence

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Hearing others' advice and solutions allows better decision-making. It gives room for wildly different ideas, wider perspectives, and more confidence in your own choice

Concluding Statement

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Have you ever had to face a daunting challenge, and wondered why you didn't seek multiple people's advice for help? Whenever you find yourself in a new situation, there are plenty of people willing to voice their opinions out to you.

Lead

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Instead of only seeking advice from one person, the superior option is to talk to multiple people

Position

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it is likely those people probably experienced the same things as you,

Claim

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it is important to get several viewpoints on your scenario in case something unexpected happens

Claim

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simply talking to more people can get more of the nerves and bad emotions out.

Claim

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The more people you have to guide you, the less confused you will be. Sometimes when someone is faced with a new situation, they don't know what to do. They may be frightened about the situation, and find it difficult to cope. Talking to multiple people who have faced the problem will be your light at the end of the tunnel. The more people you talk to, the brighter that light will be.

Evidence

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When we talk to more people, we have more viewpoints on what to do to attack the challenge. Talking to only one person will give you only one solution as to what to do, but seeking advice from multiple people will result in a stronger you! You will have several plans in your head when something goes wrong. Imagine the regret you will feel if someone offers you advice that could've got you out of your sticky situation, and you don't even listen! Always listen to people who want to voice out their opinions to you, because their perspective on the scenario could save a future problem you may have.

Evidence

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Facing a new scenario can be hard, and you probably will have bad emotions eating at your brain. Most people would agree that having someone to listen to you while you rant about these emotions will help you in the long run. They will inspire you to think optimistically. Being optimistic may even help you achieve greater accomplishments! You may be scared to talk to multiple people, but the more people you seek for advice, the better you will attack the situation with a clear mind.

Evidence

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In conclusion, seeking multiple people's opinions is more beneficial than only seeking one. You can face the situation knowing you did the best you could to prepare for it. Next time you you resort to only asking one person for advice, think twice because it will be helpful to talk to people who have experienced your situation, you will have more ways to overcome an unexpected challenge, and you can let all of your emotions out to everyone.

Concluding Statement

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Multiple opinions can help people decide on what to do.

Position

Adequate

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When asking for an opinion you might want to ask more than one person because the person you ask might have better advice than the other person.

Claim

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people could have different personal opinions and points of view than others and their advice could help you out a lot in the future.

Claim

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When you ask for someones opinion you should listen carefully to what they have to say.

Evidence

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if someone gives you advice that you do not agree with and you get upset just remember that everyone does not think exactly like you. People have their own personal opinions and they will sometimes tell you something that you do not like or want to hear . Now if someone gave you advice that you do not like do not ignore it take it as constructive criticism and listen to what they say and have a open mind about it. For example: Lets say you made some food and you add a little to much salt and your friend tells you that it is was to salty and that maybe you should have added less salt but you find the food to taste just right. Next time maybe dont add as much salt. This way you listen to your friends advice even though you disagree and if you find it alright and if they find the food better then you both dont lose nothing. And theres other ways to deal with this situation like not cooking that meal, but you decided to listen to your friends advice and in the end it all worked out. Its ok if people have different opinions then you and their advice isnt what you would like to hear but its good that you learn from them.

Evidence

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when seeking advice its good to ask more than one person because everyone is different and they will tell you different things. Some of those things could be bad advice but as long as you find the good in what everyone says and not just what one person says youll find the advice your looking for.

Concluding Statement

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You are walking through all the different houses. There are so many to pick, and you have to choose the right one for the right price. This house looks aesthetic, but this one's cheaper. This one has a bigger backyard, but this one is in a better community. There are too many ways where you could go wrong. You end up calling up your friends to help you look through the options. You've all been there before, whether it was making decisions as big as buying the right house or as small as what restaurant to eat at.

Lead

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In order to get the good advice you need, you should ask more than one person.

Position

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you will have more options on what to do,

Claim

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different views and opinions on the situation,

Claim

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less stress about the decision.

Claim

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While one solution may not work very well, another may be the best one for you. Asking more people also increases the chances of finding someone who had to make the same decision or was in the same situation. This would be incredibly helpful because they could give advice on what they chose to do and the result. For example, when I was working on a difficult math problem, I asked many people for their ideas on how to approach it. Though some of them could not solve the problem or help me, others came up with brilliant solutions. One of them had seen a similar problem before, so he pointed me in the right direction. By asking more than one person for advice, I received many choices from which I could pick the best one.

Evidence

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sometimes choices are not enough, and we need to understand the options better.

Claim

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Everyone can view an issue differently depending on personal experience or background knowledge.

Evidence

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However, when others also understand your situation, it is a lot less of a weight to carry. Talking to more than one person can help relieve the stress a lot more than if it is carried by only one or two people. For instance, I was very stressed about an upcoming competition and I could not focus on studying. I explained my situation to many of my friends and they helped me calm down and gave me advice on how to focus and study. Getting advice from many people helped me relieve my stress and do well at the competition. I felt more calm because of the support from my friends after getting advice. Making sure you are not stressed is very important because it could affect your studies and relationship with friends and family. By asking more than one person for advice, you will most likely be less stressed.

Evidence

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Listening to multiple options, knowing the pros and cons of each side, and relieving decision-making stress are all reasons why you should ask more than one person for advice. You always want to make the right choice, especially for bigger decisions like buying a house. Getting to know all your options and the pros and cons of each is very important for making the best choice for you. However, this could be very stressful and asking all your friends for advice will make sure you feel supported and less stressed.

Concluding Statement

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When asking people for advice, usually asking a close friend or a trusted adult is what first comes to mind. In some cases, More than one person needs to be asked.

Position

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When advice is needed asking more than one person can be better than just asking one.

Claim

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In the event that advice is needed, asking two or maybe even three people can be a lot more reassuring. New ideas are brought to the table meaning more options to choose from when the decision needs to be made. As an example, Generic_Name might not know what to do when the school bully tells him to meet him after school on the blacktop to fight. Generic_Name asks his friend what to do and his friend has the same idea as him. Asking two or three people might give new or maybe even better ideas than the one that he thought of. So now Generic_Name is avoiding the fight, and is safe because his other friends told him to tell the principal.

Evidence

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Asking more than one person might also add to your idea.

Claim

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For an example, Generic_Name wants salad but doesn't know what to put on it. He puts the lettuce shredded cheese and ham on it but he knows he's missing something. He asks his friends to see what they say. One friend asks if he has put tomatoes on it, and another asks if he put croutons on it yet. so with these new ideas at hand, he can now add these items to his salad, and has a salad ready for lunch tomorrow.

Evidence

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Making better decisions is another outcome for asking multiple people for advice.

Claim

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As an example, Generic_Name is at the shoe store looking for some new shoes for school. He is trying to get the newest pairs of Jordans' because he wanted to be the first at his school to have them, but they are way too expensive. On the other hand, he could get a much cheaper pair of Air Force Ones but then he would look like everyone else. Generic_Name is really indecisive, so he calls his friend to see what he says. his friend tells him to buy the Jordan but they are too expensive. Generic_Name then asks his dad, and his dad says the Air Force Ones are much more affordable and look good too. Generic_Name not knowing what to do suddenly remembers that basketball season is coming up, and the only pair of basketball shoes are beaten up and dirty. Generic_Name then asks one of the employees that work there is they have any basketball shoes. The employee directs him to the basketball section and Generic_Name sees the basketball shoes hes been wanting, and at an affordable price.

Evidence

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There are times when you need some advice, and a lot of it. Asking more than one person is better in many different ways. Some for making better decisions, and some just to hear the opinions of others and what they think is the best thing to do. Someone once said, " two heads are better than one".

Concluding Statement

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Recently more and more schools are offering online classes as an alternative to attending classes in a school building. Although some parents may argue that online classes could potentially make students lazy, students would actually benefit greatly from online classes. Students could get their eight hour sleep schedules each night if they attend classes online because their schedules would be more flexible. Online classes could have a schedule that accommodates to all its students needs. Online classes will be beneficial to students suffering from sickness and mental health issues and stress levels among students could lower.

Lead

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Distance learning is an option all students should have because it would be beneficial to students.

Position

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Online classes could have a more flexible schedule that could accommodate for each of their student's needs.

Claim

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All students have different circumstances. Some students have sicknesses or mental health issues that make attending schools difficult but online classes would help no one fall behind. Students with social anxiety and depression struggle to be motivated to attend school each day but online classes could help these students. People suffering from depression can often feel unmotivated to leave their houses or be around other people, but online classes would limit the amount of unwanted interaction students would have to have and allow them to feel more comfortable, and work at their own pace.

Evidence

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Students with social anxiety can feel overwhelmed in a school setting, and can even experience panic attacks. If schools gave students the option to have online classes, the ones suffering from anxiety would feel more motivated to do school work. Unfortunately, some students are suffering from sicknesses which make them feel weak and physically unable to attend school everyday.

Evidence

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Online classes would allow sick students to remain attending classes and not fall behind while remaining comfortable in their homes or hospitals.

Claim

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Most middle school and high school students don't receive the recommended eight hours of sleep each night because of how early they have to attend school, but online classes could change this.

Claim

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Usually students go to bed around 10:00pm or even later than this; and wake up at around 5:30am or 6:00am depending on what time school starts. Many AP or IB students lose sleep because of the large homework load they receive. So students that take AP or IB classes could start their online courses later in the day and receive the right amount of sleep each day. Having eight hours of sleep can increase productivity among students and possibly receive better grades on worksheets, homework, and tests. If students are able to wake up later and get plenty of time to sleep, they will feel more motivated to work hard and finish their assignments. School can be stressful and getting the right amount of sleep can help ease this.

Evidence

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Recently, students haven't felt safe in their schools. During a crisis, students could have classes online to keep students feeling safe.

Claim

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School shootings have struck fear into many students and have caused them to feel unsafe in schools. Online classes could prevent any of these tragedies from potentially occurring again and students can feel safe again. Students will be in the safety of their own homes and won't have to worry about the about the possibility of any intruders harming them or their peers. The Coronavirus has also fear in many people. People don't want to leave their homes or even travel anymore because of the possibility of obtaining this sickness, and this includes students. Many areas have had people infected with the virus which has caused many outbreaks to cancel schools because students are afraid of getting the Coronavirus. If students attended classes online, they wouldn't have to worry about getting inflected with the Coronavirus.

Evidence

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Students in all kinds of difficult circumstances would benefit greatly from taking online classes. Students suffering from mental health issues like anxiety and depression and students with sicknesses will have the option to take online classes and they will have a schedule more accommodated to their needs. All students including students that take AP, IB, or harder level classes classes will be able to receive more hours of sleep if online classes are an option, and during a crisis students would feel much safer attending classes online from home.

Concluding Statement

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Schools are now starting to provide new methods of students being able to learn. With having school at home there is many benefits and cons about it. Students now have more ways to go to school and get a education that maybe they weren't able to get before

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I think that students wouldn't really benefit from taking classes from home

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because they are more distractions

Claim

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the student would probably will be on their phone

Claim

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the lack of communication with others.

Claim

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Distractions become more noticeable at home because there are loads of things that could distract you

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For example, if your taking your classes in the living room, the TV might be on or you're attempted to go watch TV. Another example, could be that your in the kitchen and you happen to start eating and you happen to take a break from your class. I honesty think that if you take classes from home it's a waste of time.

Evidence

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These almost everyone has a phone and even now at schools everyone is on them. I think that the with being home and having classes the phone will be like one of the main problem because of how addicting it is

Claim

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For example during a session you get a call or text and your mind gets preoccupied with that text or call that you receive. It also takes away time from learning because if your constantly on the phone you aren't paying attention to whats happening.

Evidence

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Another reason that I think that we don't really benefit is that theres a lack of communication with other people

Claim

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Having good communication skills is important to have because you might need it for a future job

Evidence

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With taking online or video conferences it sort of helps with that

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but not fully

Rebuttal

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It's more beneficial that they go to a public or private school because they are different types of people and you get more experience on the communication. For example, with doing a video conference most likely you'll be talking to the same teacher every day, while going to school somewhere you won't talk to the same one or couple of people.

Evidence

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With all being said, students should attend school instead of taking classes at home because of all the distractions, phones being in the way, and of lack of communication. Even though I might think a certain way, you shouldn't just take all my advice, many people happen to learn or educate themselves in different ways. I would like to thank whomever is reading this and thank them for the effort they put into reading this. By the way never stop learning in the long run it helps out a lot.

Concluding Statement

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I believe that if you get multiple peoples advice

Position

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you can see there view on it, see what they would do in the situation,

Claim

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to see which one had the best advice

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reason one is that sometimes if people give you advice you do not listen to your own. also, you could see if anyone was in this situation before. secondly is some people have been in the situation your in so if they give you advice listen to it because their just trying to get you out of it. third reason is listen to their advice and never think about it again you could remember everything that happen. also, when you listen to other peoples advice you could learn from your mistakes because they probably did it before. if you listen to other peoples advice you can not make the mistake you made again.

Evidence

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if you listen to other peoples advice you could see the view of what they would do.

Claim

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if you listen to other peoples advice you could see what they would do in this situation. if you listen to more then one person they could tell you what they did to get out of the situation. also if you listen to peoples advise it can not always be good so you have to watch out. many times when you listen to your own advise you do not listen to your own. you should always listen to your parents advise because they probably have been in your shoes before so they can tell you how to get away from it. in conclusion you should listen to parents or friends and see what they would do in your situation.

Evidence

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if you listen to multiple people you could see which one had the better advice.

Claim

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if you listen to many people two people might have great advice you just might have to choose the one you think is right. also if you listen to your friends they could help you because they maybe have be there to. another reason is if you listen to family they could help you get rid of your problem or situation. listening to parents and friends to see which one is better is hard because you have to choose your family or friends to help and it could be hard.

Evidence

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giving advise to people could really help them because they might would want to hurt themselves or hurt other people and that could be really bad because they could go to jail.

Concluding Statement

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When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person.

Lead

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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. Because if someone ask for advice to multiple people thats good.

Position

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Because one person might have better advice than some other person they asked if they asked multiple people for advice

Claim

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. Also you can ask for advice when you need help or you don't know how to do something

Evidence

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Also asking muliple people for advice can help people make a better choice becauce other people might have diffrent advice or diffrent expereances with thething the person is asking them.

Claim

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Thats one reason why asking more than one person can help people make a better choice

Evidence

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