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Another reason why asking multiple people for advice is good is that some people might give you more advice then others.
Claim
Adequate
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A reason someone might not ask for advice might not want to get advice beacuse they might think it will make them look weak for asking for advice. A second reason someone might not ask for advice might be beacuse their nervous to ask. A third reason might be because they might won't have that much people they can ask for advice.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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331CA007D0AD
When poeple ask for advice they might sometimes ask multiple people for advice. Thats good beacuse one person might have more advice then someone alse. Also someone might have better advice then the first person you asked or the second person you asked. Also asking more then one person for advice is good because some ither persons might have diffrent expereances with the thing your asking for.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Distance Learning can be very beneficial in some aspects, but in others it can be very detrimental to kids and their families. If kids started taking more online classes it could ruin their high school experience. It can also cause them to become very anti-social with them being at home all of the time and not being at school in class. This may also cause them to get in to more trouble with being at home 24/7, which can also lead to kids not doing their work and not graduating because of it
Lead
Effective
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Kids need to go to school
Position
Effective
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have a good experience of high school before college,
Claim
Effective
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stay connected with friends so they do not feel left out when they try to speak with people in public
Claim
Effective
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succeed in getting a job for them to make money
Claim
Adequate
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Kids can lose their high school experience if taking online classes.
Claim
Effective
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There will be no dances that are held for the students that take online classes and they will not be able to participate in regular after school activities. They won't have a homecoming or prom that they can get a date to because of this. This is one of the biggest parts of high school; being able to go to prom and have fun with your friends or significant other. School Dances are meant to be fun, and if they take online courses this is something they can not attend. Another big loss is they won't have the chance to go see big sports events and participate in the crowd while cheering on their team, or even play on the team and create a bond with their teammates. Students will miss out on spirit week which a very special week that everyone in the school looks forward to because everyone loves this week. It is a laid back week of where you decorate floats and class rooms all leading up to the big varsity football game, which they won't be able to have if they take these online classes at home. High school is something you need to experience in life, and if students stayed home and took online classes they wouldn't have an actual high school, so they would be missing out on most things if not everything that happens throughout high school.
Evidence
Effective
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This can also hurt students because of them not being in a classroom with other students; they can very easily become very anti-social, and not know how to communicate very well to others.
Claim
Effective
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They will not constantly have to talk to teachers or other classmates about work, or have to work on a project in a group, which can help them tremendously with people skills. They generally will not make friends or see any of their friends because of them being at home while their friends are at school, which can cause anti-socialism. They will not be in class interacting with other teachers and students, which can lead to them not having confidence in talking or not wanting to talk to other people or students.
Evidence
Effective
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This is also just an important thing you need in life cause everything you do will require human interaction when you become an adult and try to get a job.
Claim
Effective
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If they can not speak and be comfortable how are they going to do an interview for someone they are trying to work for and probably have never seen before.
Evidence
Adequate
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Although this can open many doors for students and their families
Counterclaim
Adequate
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They will be able to learn at their own pace and not have to try and keep up with the teachers while taking notes or doing work. They might learn better through taking an online course because of them being able to go slower than a teacher would. This can help students from being bullied because they are safe at home away from the kids that might try to bully them if they already don't do it. This can also save the family if the parents are not in a very good financial state at the time of when the kids take the classes because they do not have to take them to school everyday which can cause more gas money, but can also keep them away from bullies on the bus and keep them in a safer environment.
Evidence
Adequate
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In conclusion, this can be very beneficial to kids because of not having to travel or walk anywhere to go to school, but it also can hurt the students futures, which they need because what they experience now; bad or good, will affect how they act and conduct themselves later. Online classes is something that can be very beneficial, but at the same time can hurt the students in a very bad way and take away their high school experience.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When you are seeking for help, what do you do? You probably ask people. When I ask people for help I get lots of good answers.
Lead
Effective
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Asking for questions is better than staying quiet and not knowing.
Position
Effective
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hen you ask mulitiple people for help, you can get a wide variety of answers that will help answer your question.
Claim
Effective
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For example: When I had difficulty learning a unit in math, I asked multiple friends and got multiple answers that helped me learn it. Asking one person alone can get you answers but asking more people is better because maybe if you ask one, they could be wrong and all the others could be right. For example: I asked my friend the answer to a question, he was wrong but I asked my other friends and they were right. When you are seeking for help try to ask questions. When you ask questions you get right answers. In conclusion, asking questions leads to answers and less questions.
Evidence
Effective
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Do you think it is important to seek out advice from more than one person?
Lead
Ineffective
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When found in a situation, many people ask others for their advice during the situation to very the outcome.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you ask more than one person for their advise or opinion on how to handle something, you will get multiple different answers.
Claim
Adequate
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That should make the situation easier to handle, because you can see how it might end if you choose a certain way to deal with it. Someone you ask for advice from might have been in the same situation you are in, and can help you handle it. But you won't know if they have been in the same situation if you don't ask multiple people.
Evidence
Adequate
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Asking multiple people for advice can, help you with a delimia, get you different opinions from different standpoints on a situation, and can make sure you are making a wise decision instead of an impulsive one.
Position
Effective
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You have a job at a retail marketing company as the social media manager, making 13 dollars and hour, have only been working for them for 4 months, and is only a 15 minute drive from your house. But there is another job offer, it is also a retail market company, but you would handle finances, and get paid 22 dollars an hour, and it is the next state over and is a 3 hour drive, you have all of your family here and just bought a house, your degree is in consumer finances. What do you do? You seek advice from a lot of people, get their opinions, see which one is better for you future, and make a decision off of the advice given to you. Remember, get multiple peoples' advice and opinions to make a wise decision instead of an impulsive one.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Have you ever wanted to get advice on something? So you went and asked some people for some advice, and you got various answers.
Lead
Adequate
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When ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when you get various answers you still know what to do
Claim
Adequate
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Getting multiple opinions could help someone
Position
Adequate
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get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Claim
Adequate
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When ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when they get various answers they still know what to do
Claim
Adequate
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What that means is if you're looking for advice and you get various answers most of the answers may all be the same so you know what to do. Another reason is all of the answers in some way may link to form the same type of advice.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Getting multiple opinions could help someone get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Claim
Adequate
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If someone is looking for advice and they get multiple answers on what type of advice to take, they'll ask other people if it's good advice or not so they can narrow down if they want to take that advice or ask for better advice. Another way getting multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is if they are making a bad decision getting multiple good opinions on why that decision is bad could help them stop doing bad things and make them do good things.
Evidence
Adequate
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getting multiple opinions can help people in many ways like when ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when you get various answers you still know what to do. Getting multiple opinions could help someone get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Not all students are the same and their varied conditions may affect their opportunity to obtain an education. Distance learning is a new innovative technique that some schools implement to offer online education at home. This technique can be offered in many ways such as: online video, conferencing, and online courses. Distance learning can be very beneficial for all students in any level of education
Lead
Effective
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I think that students should be given the opportunity to obtain distance learning
Position
Adequate
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it can be very convenient for students who suffer from illnesses and can't attend school
Claim
Effective
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it allows students to work at their own pace
Claim
Effective
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it allows students to work when it is mostly convenient for them.
Claim
Effective
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Implementing distance learning can decrease the attendance issue most schools face.
Claim
Effective
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Students miss school due to many factors; One of the main reasons why students miss schools is due to illnesses. Students who deal with very severe illnesses such as cancer are forced to not attend school for long periods of time. Which can hinder the student's future. Even illnesses that aren't very severe can still negatively affect students because most illnesses can be easily transmitted, such as the common cold, which can put other students' health at risk. To prevent this issue schools should offer distance learning by allowing the students to attend classes from anywhere whether it's their homes or hospitals. Students who suffer from health problems don't have to miss out on their education and get the same opportunity to learn like every healthy student.
Evidence
Effective
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Distance learning also allows students to work at their own pace which can be an advantage to students;
Claim
Effective
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Specially to those who have learning disabilities. Teachers work at the same pace with every student. Which isn't helpful for students as their minds work differently and their comprehension levels vary. Some students learn slower than others and most teachers don't recognize that. With distance learning each student can learn at the pace that is appropriate for them. Distance learning is also very helpful as the teacher's focus shifts to each individual student rather than the class as a whole. Online conferencing allows the teacher to understand the student more and asses their abilities. This helps teachers divide students based on what learning techniques is appropriate for them. Which can result in increased student performance.
Evidence
Effective
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Distance learning is very beneficial for students as they have the option to work when they are motivated and when it is convenient for them
Claim
Effective
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Most students attend school with less than 5 hours to sleep due to sleeping late because of homework. Students who have the opportunity to work from home don't have to wake up early. Distance learning allows students to do online courses when they are energized, which doesn't have to be in the morning. This can improve the student's efficiency level and improve their performance. Not all students' physiological needs are met yet they are expected to work with no breaks during school hours. This is due to school hours not being enough for teachers to cover all the content that needs to be covered. Distance learning allows students to take breaks when they feel the need to. Giving students this autonomy can be more motivating to them.
Evidence
Effective
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Overall students' conditions vary from student to student. Each student is unique in that they have different minds and thinking levels. Which is why i believe that distance learning is a very innovative and useful technique that should be provided by all schools as learning option for students. Distance learning provides many opportunities for all students because it can is very useful for students who are sick and can't attend school, it can be helpful for students as they are working at their own pace, and it allows students to work whenever is convenient to them.
Concluding Statement
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When needing advice due to a problem in life, people often go to someone to ask for advice and they generally go to multiple people to ask advice. For many people this can seem peculiar, going to multiple people for advice might seem point less to some, but when thought about, this method is a helpful way to make a better choice.
Lead
Adequate
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By using the method of asking multiple people for advice, this could help someone make a better choice
Position
Adequate
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the person could see the problem from different perspectives,
Claim
Effective
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the person could get information that the other person asked didnt know,
Claim
Effective
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there is the off chance that the person could be getting biased advice from the person without knowing.
Claim
Effective
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asking for advice from multiple people is helpful and is recommended to many people when dealing with a problem where they can use some advice with a problem they are struggling with.
Claim
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sometimes a problem can only be solved when you take a step back and try to look at in a new way, and talking to multiple people concerning the topic can help someone do this. For example, say someone got into an argument with a friend after being offended by something the friend said, after they talked to multiple people about this they then could see that the friend didnt mean to offend him/her. If the person had not gone to someone else for advice then they wouldn't have realized that the friend was sorry and didnt mean to offended him/her, by talking to multiple people it helped them make a better choice. Besides helping people look at their problem from a different perspective, talking to multiple people can still help people make better choices in other ways, they could get information from someone that the previous people that they talked to didnt know, and the information could help influence their decision.
Evidence
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For example, in a 6rd grade class there was a boy who had trouble in history class, there was a history test on the following Friday, the boy was worried so he asked his best friend, Generic_Name what he should do, Generic_Name told him not to stress and that to study and he'll be fine. He trusted his friend's advice but asked his other friend, Generic_Name, just to be sure, his other friend told him that the test was 20 questions mostly surrounding the declaration of independence, after getting this information he studied his notes surrounding the declaration of independence and ended up getting a 98% on his history test, due to knowing what to expect. The boy at first only asked his best friend but after getting advice from another person, he understood what the test was about and what he should do. This method of asking multiple people for advice helped him and if he had not asked his other friend for advice, he would have been unprepared for the test. Besides the reasons to ask multiple people for advice, getting a different perspective and getting additional information,there is still another major reason to ask multiple people for advice, which is on the off chance that the first person(s) they asked were biased, and didnt give them direct information based on facts and not opinions.
Evidence
Effective
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For example, at lunch there was an argument between 4 friends about DC vs Marvel movies and a mutual friend of the 4 was forced to chose a side in the argument, the mutual friend had never seen a DC or Marvel movie and didnt know anything about them, she went to ask advice about which side to choose from one of her friends that was on side DC, they told her that DC was better in special effects, plot and actors. She trusted her friend's advice but to make sure she had all the information she asked her older brother, someone who had seen all DC and Marvel movies and wasnt someone who had picked a side and genuinely supported both sided, her brother told her that DC and Marvel were both amazing franchises, but generally Marvel had a bigger budget and that they had more plot detail. After talking to her brother and her friend, she came to the conclusion that she believed Marvel was better franchise wise. The girl at first did not know what to do and after consulting her DC friend she was convinced DC was better, but after talking to her brother, who didnt chose a side, realized that she, personally, supported Marvel. If she did not go to another source for advice then she wouldn't have known that her DC friend was biased and embellished on a lot of details. With all of this it clear that asking for advice from multiple people helped her chose a better choice.
Evidence
Effective
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whether someone has a small problem like which franchise they support or if its a more intricate problem like a miss communication that could destroy a life long friendship, no matter how big or small the problem is asking advice is always something that helps and asking multiple people for advice could help make a better choice when dealing with a problem. Asking multiple people helps when someone needs a new perspective, additional information of the topic or if they just arent sure if the person they are getting advice from is biased. In all asking for advice from multiple people is helpful solution and is highly recommended to many people when dealing with a problem where they can use some advice with a problem they are struggling with.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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When receiving advice, the response you get will be different from everyone. This is because everyone views things from a different standpoint. Some people think it's best to keep their not so positive opinions to themselves, while other are going to share everything with you. It's important to have both these kinds of people in your life, because they're both needed in different situations. Let's say, for instance, you get a new shirt that you absolutely love. You probably want to hear from your peers that it looks great on you. Now, let's say you are shopping and find shoes that you aren't too sure about. In this situation, you're probably wanting to hear from your more honest friend, who will truthfully tell you how they look
Lead
Effective
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You also might want to hear from multiple people, because everyone has a different style and opinion.
Position
Effective
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The examples I listed previously were very simple. Sometimes when you are in need of advice, the scenario is slightly more difficult to deal with. A lot of people deal with drama between peers. When these things occur, it's very helpful to have multiple friends whom you can talk to. It's hard to solve a problem when it comes to people, because everyone has a different relationship with each other
Evidence
Adequate
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If you have an issue with a friend and you only ask for advice from one person, you're only getting one side of the story. If you ask for advice from multiple people, you are going to get many different sides of the story
Claim
Effective
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This is helpful because certain people may know things which you don't know. The way you view a person is probably different from the way your friend views a person and whether it's positive or negative it's important to listen to that opinion because they could effect your decision.
Evidence
Adequate
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Another important detail is the age group you're talking to.
Claim
Adequate
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If you're talking to your parents they might give you different advice then a friend might give you. Generally, parents will be a little more comforting and give you good advice about not worrying too much about it, while a friend might know more about the person whom you're having issues with and give you more advice on how to actually solve the problem. Both these opinions are great, but they're both different, which shows that it's important to have both these opinions rather than just one. It's also very important to have someone who will just listen to you, while others will do the talking while you listen to them. It's also a good idea to get advice from both males and females, because they tend to have different perspectives, which can be beneficial in certain situations.
Evidence
Effective
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seeking multiple opinions on a topic is always a good idea. Whether it's as simple as choosing an outfit, or as complicated as loosing a friend, theres always room for more advice. Receiving advice from many people is helpful in many ways and always works out better then getting advice from just one person. It can be hard to make decisions, but with others help it can be a lot more simple and your decision will probably end up being better than if you were to make it yourself.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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When it comes to seeking advice, it is always good to look for different sources. It is very valuable to have opinions from other people that a person can lean on. It is common for people to ask others for things from simple, to complicated scenarios.
Position
Effective
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I believe looking for multiple opinions from different people when a person asks for advice to make a better decision is important because it could lead the person's mind up to more options
Claim
Effective
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it could lead the person to very opinionated or buyist thoughts
Claim
Effective
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could help take stress of the person when needing advice.
Claim
Effective
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Having different options when making a decision is very important because there are open choices that are good and bad. Every day people ask for advice whether it comes from finding what clothes to wear, to asking for advice if you should get married or not. That benefits a whole lot because sometimes all a person needs is a barrier to select between. Imagine if a person was at the store trying to buy something for their mom on her birthday. The person had to choose between a hand bag or some expensive sunglasses they had found; although, they didn't know what to get her. However they brought one of their siblings to help choose. I think having people to help you make a right decision every once in a while is necessity in life, even though you don't want to get overly used to it.
Evidence
Adequate
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It can help if you have a friend or family member you can trust that has a strong opinion, because sometimes you need it. There is always going to be a couple or strong people in your life that's going to help you make right decisions either if you are going down the wrong road, or if you are doing the right thing in life and you just need motivation. If a person was struggling in high school and they really needed to step up their life and grown up more, they would really need to good influences or somebody to tell them where they are going wrong. People that can step up with their own voice on the situation that has known the person, and that could really help them get their life together. Personally, the type of people everyone needs is somebody that has strong beliefs and values and that would care for their loved ones. That could especially help in benefiting someone's life going toward the future
Evidence
Effective
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It is hard at times when you are trying to do your best but you need help in doing the right thing. If a person didn't have someone role models or people to help with choosing the right things to do either growing up or in life, then they wouldn't know how to do anything but using their own way of thinking. A lot of stress people get in there lives is from being without anyone to help them and that could really mess with a person's mind. Most of the times when people do have other people in their lives, they make the right choices. If they do good in school, they will most likely go to college, then they could work and level up to be a manager or have their own business. There are so many benefits or having supporters to influence you to doing the right things. A lot of the time it isn't that hard to find a right clique.
Evidence
Adequate
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These were my reasons on how having advice and opinions from different people can definitely help a person out. All anyone needs in life is just a group of close people to be right by your side to help in life. I wish you enjoyed reading this and really could really understand how these reasons could help influence a person to make the right decisions just from a little advice.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When my dad was being educated in the 80s and early 90s, he had only 1 practical option: attend school. Missing school, intentionally or not, meant quickly catching up on late work and, at the same time, keeping up with upcoming work as well; not ideal in the slightest.
Lead
Adequate
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But with almost 30 years of technology being developed since he was last in a classroom, you can theoretically instead do it online and cut out physical school entirely from your educational life. This development has potential to change education for the better of pretty much all of us.
Position
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Recently, a virus known as Covid-19 has been threatening to have schools closed at the first sign of infection, but this is little to no problem with digital education.
Claim
Effective
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Teachers simply just post their assignments onto Google classroom and the students can be trusted to go through with said classwork as if they were present in school.
Evidence
Adequate
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This could be an important step forward into fully online schooling. education of the past has gone through various phases as technology and civilization as a whole becomes more advanced; going from purely parental, to small single room schooling, to where it is now: large scale public schools. The problem now is that we're struggling to move onto the next system as it's such a leap from what most of us are familiar with.
Evidence
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The advent of long distance schooling could very well be the middle man to bridge the gap, as it's essentially the current system, but augmented with the digital age.
Claim
Effective
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There is an argument that, in some cases, this could be negating some of the things that public school taught students, being present as much as possible along with just simply not being what some students are able to handle.
Counterclaim
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But this can easily be disputed, as various jobs are also shifting towards being heavily online. Being physically present is being phased out in almost every profession that doesn't need it in 2020. As for comprehension, digital technology is extremely versatile; it can be bent and modified to any extent that a person needs in order to be successful.
Rebuttal
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Now this isn't something as easily done in this in-between version we're talking about, but the virtual classroom of the possible future is more than up to the task; which is why it would also be important to have the evolution be steady but swift. Education really should only stick in the shifting phase for as long as it needs to, so that we can learn about the best course and make sure that the people caught in it aren't tossed around into confusion.
Evidence
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Essentially, education is about to become exceedingly easier and more efficient than ever before (that's a lot of Es but hang in there). As long as it is made sure that the right steps are taken, schooling will no longer be bound by a location or time and arguably be the way that a new large-scale revolution can take place, not bottle necked by the limitations of a system that, while did what it needed to do, was intended for a long gone era. But then again, as said long ago, constraints conjure creativity, and maybe there's a radically different thing set for the future of learning; we just don't know it yet.
Concluding Statement
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Some people might be scared to ask for advice. They may feel ashamed of doing so.
Lead
Effective
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Despite this, I strongly believe that asking for advice will help to result in a better decision.
Position
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by giving different points of view,
Claim
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allowing one to think about their decision,
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showing others you care .
Claim
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This results in being able to see how others actually feel. Someone else might see something in a totally different way then you see it. They might show something that is completely obvious that you never saw. Better ideology and reasons might be received as well. Doing so opens up new possibilities for different ideas. Asking others for their opinion certainly gives multiple points of view.
Evidence
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This gives the person seeking advice more time to decide how they feel. Time is needed to make a good decision so taking your time is strongly advised. It can also result in more in depth thoughts. The end result will conclude in a better final decision with a better reason behind it.
Evidence
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Whether it is the person your asking or asking about, they will appreciate the thought. Not only will they feel appreciative, but they know that you care. They will feel involved with ones life. They also might ask for your advice one day knowing you asked them. Wanting someones opinion will prove to them that you care about them in many ways.
Evidence
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seeking advice is strongly advised. Asking for opinions is a quality many will never receive. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by giving different points of view, allowing one to think about their decision, and by showing others you care.
Concluding Statement
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Hi my name is Generic_Name and i am going to tell you why people ask you for advice and then ask multiple people for advice
Lead
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Some people ask for more than one advice to see maybe if they look good. Also they my need more than one person advice for clothes just to see if it is good or not. Also you know when you go to a store you ask some one if this glasses look good on me and then you ask some one elas for advice.
Evidence
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However some times asking multiple people for advice may not good.
Counterclaim
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This may not be good some times because if you ask a friend if you should do something you may not hear what you what and then you ask your other friend for advice and they say the same thing. Also this may be bad because the advice people give you may not be positive a may be negative. And this could bring you down.
Evidence
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However the advice other people give you may be positive and make you happy
Claim
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And this could also help because the more people that give you positive advice the more you will fell good about your self. And the more positive you are the more you will give positive advice.
Evidence
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if you ask multiple people for advice it could be good and it could be bad but it is still good to ask for mutiple advice.
Position
Adequate