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limiting your car usage benifits you and the environment. As quoted in the essay people express how they feel less stressed from not using their cars. Countries and communities around the world are taking part in less car usage and feeling great from it. So i advise you do the same and help yourself and the environment.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In this article or passage the author idea was to explore venues more find out what are it values. because if earth would suffer a damage of nature venues would be the only safe place for humans
Position
Ineffective
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but first of all water got to be in venues in other for human to stay a live why because us the human ca not live without whater why because we need it to drink it also we need it for our crops to grow an give us fruits and vestables for our food. scientist think that onces there was water in venues if fresh air could be infume by humans there's could be a chage that human would survive out of space in a different planet. scientist are peeking over venues to get rock samples also air sample to see the enviroment values on fact about venues is that is one of the closets plate to the sun which means that the climate there is going to be high cause the planet being clos to the sun and that why we need water in venues cause of it's high temperatures humans would be thirsty for water.
Evidence
Ineffective
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i think we should use the facial action because you can go anywhere and see how pepole are today to see if they are mad or angery sad and etc
Lead
Adequate
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A8A25F94F5B6
The facial action coding system should be use in class room
Position
Adequate
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A8A25F94F5B6
we can see how student are feeling and to see if they are having a good day or a bad day
Claim
Ineffective
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A8A25F94F5B6
we can use the facial action coding system to see there facial expersion to every student in class
Evidence
Adequate
9a8d4979f3f7
A8A25F94F5B6
in a way did making a happy face make you slightly happy in the artical it tells us by making a happy face your muscles not only expresses emtions but they will also may even help produce them
Evidence
Ineffective
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A8A25F94F5B6
Yes we should use the facial action coding system in schools or anywhere in stores,work,airports so we can see how peoples facial expresions are
Claim
Adequate
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A8A25F94F5B6
so we can see if can help them or talk to them so they can have a smile on there faces
Evidence
Adequate
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I would like to talk to you about car-free cities it is about 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars and another thing about this article is tat 57 percent sold a car to move to german and that in 2006, the united states was to seperate suburban life from the auto as a componenet of traveling and another word for hat is smart planning. and a most important fact is that 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in europe is up to 50 percent in some car -intensive areas in the united states .and in 1950 percent in the town of levittown are still exert a strong appeal. next, in paris ban driving due to smog and it talks about almost 4,000 drivers were fined,according to an international news agency headquartered in london. And the gas prices for diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in france, compared with 114 in brussels and that 79.7 in london reuters found. and the next reasn is that 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe, according to reuters. and that it was the third straight  year cars have been banned with only buses  and taxis permmited for the day without cars in this capital city of 7 milllion. the goal is that to promote aletrnative transporation and reduce smog. and faced of a fine of $25 fines. and in april in 2013 the number, of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below he peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995. because, cash- strapped americans could not afford new cars now. and that now that they recoverd is under way.  the next few years will be telling. what most intrigues me is that rates of cars ownersip per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn. next reason is that a study last ear found that driing by young people decresased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. and that at an initial stage begginning to happen or they develop. and that a famous street in paris and that car traffic
Evidence
Ineffective
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My claim for this story is people are trying see how are people feeling in a picture and trying to hdie thir emotions
Claim
Ineffective
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My quote from the story is "Imagine being able to dectect exactly how other people are feelings, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. Mona Lisa is in the picture, she 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. At some schools there are some computers sofware that can recognize emotions but not all of them. Dr. Huang is terying to find better ways for humans and computers to communicate. they are suing alot of techology to find how are people emotions in the picture. I know when people lok at a picture people wanna know how are that person is feeling in that picture. Dr. Huang is putting the computer constructs in 3D and trying to put 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Eckman has classified six basic emotions like happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. when your in a picture your going to have some type of face expression. It all depends on what type of face that the person in the picture is looking like. Even your mouth can depend if your face expression is good or bad by tighting your lips to show anger. When your round people you can tell their face expression just by the look of their face. A lot of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy. And their face expressions can depend on how their hair looks. If their hair looks all over the place its probably bad and if their hair looks all nice its probably happy.
Evidence
Ineffective
3363d78e8320
A8C8456C352B
My conclusion is to find someone feelsing is look ing at their face and their hai and how their face looks. Just like actors be doing reproduce smilling and frowning. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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A8D21847EA6D
The author explains to us how worthy it is to study Venus
Position
Adequate
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for example in the articel he claimes that Venus has so many features like earth
Claim
Adequate
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for example like an ocean or a mountain he alos said there could even be some type of life form that could live there.
Evidence
Adequate
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A8D21847EA6D
There has been more and more people wanting to study this because of the fact that this one day might become another earth that we can live on and form some type of life on there but people have to test it out to see if we are able to live there for example to see if any animal life form can live there or even start bringing other to Venus for some testing.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The big issue though is that the tempture gets really high like around 800 degrees for example it siads that "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volecanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightn skrikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."
Counterclaim
Adequate
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A8D21847EA6D
For example in paragraph 5 it saids " The National Aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solutions to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Vesusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms , a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of there way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface , temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be plentiful,and radiation would notexceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable enough for humans."
Evidence
Adequate
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A8D9AE4B4259
Imagine this routine. Wake up, go to school, come home, do homework, go to bed, repeat. Sounds boring right? But somewhere between those steps, imagine doing an activity that you love. Makes it a lot more fun doesn't it?
Lead
Effective
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I believe that all students should participate in an extracurricular activity
Position
Adequate
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A8D9AE4B4259
it helps them try new things,
Claim
Effective
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A8D9AE4B4259
I am also in an extracurricular activity,
Claim
Ineffective
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it allows people to focus on something besides schoolwork.
Claim
Effective
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A8D9AE4B4259
It's hard to try a new thing because it's scary to get out of your comfort zone. But very soon, it can become enjoyable and fun. Meeting new people is always a great thing to do in an activity. The students will get new friends and it will let them have someone to do the activity with. In activities, a lot of people come in not knowing that they may be good at it. Participating in activities can help someone find their "thing". Extracurricular activities let students try new things that help them find out whether or not they like it.
Evidence
Adequate
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A8D9AE4B4259
I am involved in dance and it has really helped me become a more diverse person.
Claim
Adequate
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A8D9AE4B4259
I have been dancing since I was three years old and I only did ballet back then but as I got older I started more styles such as tap, jazz, lyrical, musical theatre, contemporary, and I still do ballet. Doing all of those styles has made me a versatile dancer. On average I dance about 14 hours a week and it's incredibly tiring but it's also my passion and I love it. I wouldn't want to be doing anything else. Dancing has made me branch out, make new friends, and do what I love. Doing this activity has helped me figure out what I want to be doing forever. Being involved in dance has let me find out my passion and allowed me to become a stronger person.
Evidence
Effective
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A8D9AE4B4259
A lot of people just go to school, come home, do homework, and then just sit around doing nothing. It's get boring but activities let students do something fun. Schoolwork can become stressful if that's all that someone does. Sometimes focusing on something else can help take their mind off of it. Extracurricular activities can be relaxing. For example, some people do yoga or paint to forget about their stress. Those things can help people not stress as much. Activities allow kids to work on something non-school related.
Evidence
Adequate
ea8675ccdb7a
A8D9AE4B4259
it's clear that out of school activities are great for students because it helps them try new things, I am in an activity and I love it, and it allows kids to do something besides schoolwork. I think that all students should do an extracurricular activity that they love.         
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A8FD11F16108
This painting is was made a long time ago. Many people found this painting weird because, back then there wasn't a lot of people happy, also poor. So when you see this picture this girl is happy and looks like she has nice cloths on. People took this picutre into inspiration. And brought a lot to the picture.
Lead
Ineffective
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A8FD11F16108
In my perceptative I like this idea but then I don't
Position
Ineffective
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A8FD11F16108
It is pretty nice that we have a software that can be able to do something like this. it is pretty cool to tell people that we need a picture of you or someone and we will see how happy you are, how mad you are, etc. But I'm really not for it that much. There can be more things we can do instead of doing this. But doing this picture was preety cool.
Evidence
Ineffective
337c01b0b038
A8FD11F16108
In paragrpah 5 it states that people can tell how your friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. I totally agree with it
Claim
Ineffective
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A8FD11F16108
If this is your best friend and they are the same to you when you see each other you should smile. But when they don't and still look down then you know there is a problem. Friends are there for each other.
Evidence
Ineffective
1f7b6bfaa00f
A8FD11F16108
One thing that I argue about this is on paragrpah 6. When you are happy then when a ad pops up then it should be happy. Same way if you were mad then a mad or something down ad will pop up. I don't really agree to this because when people see ads they dont really pay attention to ads. When they see an ad they look at the close button for it and they close it. But if there is an advertisment they of coarse people will have to watch it until the ad is over
Evidence
Adequate
03aaeb48cac5
A8FD11F16108
I don't like the idea that computers should have computer appresions on what we do.
Claim
Adequate
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A8FD11F16108
This article is very good. I like this but of coarse there are some down falls to everything. I like how they did this software on "Making Mona Lisa Smile" becuase this picture inspired other people. But the computer expressions isn't a good idea. They aren't doing this for a good cause. When people have a chance to skip an ad or an advertisment they will.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A90D70556372
Do you think that a new technology called Facial Action Coding System an enables computer to identifyhuman emotions can tell your emotion.? I think that its true because you can look at someone and tell how they're feeling.
Lead
Adequate
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A90D70556372
In my mind i think i can tell how a person is feeling.
Claim
Ineffective
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A90D70556372
If it happy, sad man depressed, or even just trying to hid it. Even your friends and family . For example in the article it says " In fact, we humans perform this same impressive " calculation" every da. for instance, you can oribably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of cours, most of us would hve trouble actually describing ech facil trait that conveys happy, worried, etc."
Evidence
Adequate
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A90D70556372
So yes i think that this technology can tell emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.
Position
Adequate
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A90D70556372
some students get bored easy and with technology like this it could helo that from happening.
Claim
Adequate
51231f2cf2f4
A92899103F3B
How can a facial action coding system can identify a persons initial facial exspretion? Well what it does and how it can be helpful, useful and then it can solv a lot of mystreys in some cases
Lead
Adequate
1b0cb0140c50
A92899103F3B
If somebody can tell what feelings there exspressing can be helpful in a way by telling somebody like a doctors that studys people when there just angry, sad or happy.
Claim
Adequate
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A92899103F3B
that tecnology can help when others are in a certain state of depresion and that certain somebody doesent want to be noticed that machine can help with a person they may commit suicide. When no one knows it but the machiene can tell if there just trying to put on a good face over a really bad time. So then how can it be useful it will also sovle some unusal cases like some artisis make and no one will ever understand what they were trying to go for inside the person. Like the Mona Lisa some people will probably never understand what if just is smiling or grining for the picture
Evidence
Adequate
3f1644083158
A92899103F3B
If this invention coms out permanatly that it can show a poll of how kids view homework and then show how some people view work places
Claim
Adequate
1c2800226088
A92899103F3B
If they are dicustuing or just p a place you dont want to goto. Then it also solves the basic stuff like make face detecting how people fell about some presidents andit can solve cases if a person was happy or he was mad to tell if a person was a killer or not
Evidence
Ineffective
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A92899103F3B
in conclusion I think it is very useful in my opinon and I hope they make more of these inventions
Position
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining and reasoning about Venus. Venus is a simple to see from the distant. Each previous mission was unmanned. Venus is a challenging planet and no spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.
Lead
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
I believe that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of dangers
Position
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
because it's a challenging place to examine more closely
Claim
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
has different speeds
Claim
Ineffective
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A93C6DA5B026
and the atmosphere and heat
Claim
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
Venus is sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest points of the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is the second planet from our sun. The nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet.
Evidence
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
According to Paragraph 1 it says that, "While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."
Claim
Adequate
8af57d74b046
A93C6DA5B026
This quote states that Venus is danger and challenging to observe.
Evidence
Adequate
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A93C6DA5B026
Venus is oftened referred to as Earth's "twin". Earth and Venus orbit different speeds.
Claim
Ineffective
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A93C6DA5B026
These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous missions was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This issue explains why not a single spaceship had landed on Venus and numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study.
Evidence
Adequate
f759f2da52db
A93C6DA5B026
A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on our own planet
Claim
Adequate
a4d851197ce6
A93C6DA5B026
These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Venus does not have any easy conditions since it's dangerous but survivable for humans. Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.
Evidence
Ineffective
54f2bc2867f1
A93C6DA5B026
Strivinng to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Venus has many more experinces to go and finding out more about it. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exapned to meet very edges of imagination and innovation. Venus can sometimes be worthy pursuit despite the dangers.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
b07e9e674227
A954E3B54194
Brock was walking in the woods along the creek. At the edge of the water, he saw something that made a body type figure. Brock went down to see if it was a body, but when he got down there, it was really hard to see if it was a body because of the running water. He went back up to where he saw the body, and he coud see it clearly again. He took a picture of the body figure and sent it to the Elkart County Lab. They went to take a look at it and they posted the picture sent from Brock online. Most of the people who saw it, including some of the scientist, thought it was some sort of alien figure. They dug it out and found it to be a rock formed into a body shape by the shadows of the water, and the erosion that has been done to the rock
Lead
Ineffective
9e2272ac1207
A954E3B54194
I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform
Position
Adequate
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A954E3B54194
because it isn't an alien formation,
Claim
Adequate
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A954E3B54194
you can see what it is made of,
Claim
Adequate
24d67c572682
A954E3B54194
there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real.
Claim
Adequate
a02c58f1263c
A954E3B54194
One example that proves my claim is that the author explains in the excerpt that it isn't an alien formation
Claim
Adequate
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A954E3B54194
The author states that Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. This photo revealed that it was just a natural landform, not an alien monument. The author also states that it has unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.
Evidence
Adequate
98720b9308e9
A954E3B54194
Another example that demonstrates my claim is that according to the author, you can see what it is made of
Claim
Adequate
abd746024340
A954E3B54194
The author shows that the huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, is formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. The author also states that Garvin said, "as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size, so if there were objects in this picture like, airplaines on the ground, or Egytian-style pyramids, or even small shacks, you could see what they were!"
Evidence
Effective
ac015a8babf1
A954E3B54194
A final example that proves my claim is that the author demonstrates that there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real
Claim
Adequate
e5fbc44ca2e8
A954E3B54194
The author states that scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa when the face appeared. This shows that they have seen things like this before and they knew that it wasn't real, or alien like. Another example that the author proves is that Garvin said it reminded him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face and perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze. Also NASA can be hidding information about the Face. But, you can see that the Face is formed by shadows, and not an alien haze.
Evidence
Effective
0914d32c02c9
A954E3B54194
Now I hoped I gave you enough information to convince you that the Face is just a natural landform, and not created by aliens.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A969E6903C17
In the article ''Unmasking the Face on Mars'' NASA talks about how a spacecraft was circling the planet mars snapping possible landing sites for another spacecraft. When it suddenly spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face it seemed to be smiling back at the cameras.
Lead
Adequate
7a77954db9ce
A969E6903C17
The likeness face of a human most of been a rock formation as said in the article or a landing of an spacecrft or even from a take off but there so no such thing as aliens that would do that or they don't even exists.
Position
Ineffective
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They even mentioned in the artilce how the cameras on board of MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face clearly
Evidence
Ineffective
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A969E6903C17
but skeptics a different thing. That pobably aliens makings were being hidden by the haze.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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A969E6903C17
Which were not likely it could of been the air,because the human like face was located in the north martian latitude where it was already winter. It could of been the breeze from the snow.
Rebuttal
Ineffective
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A969E6903C17
Who would think that aliens would do that if they knew we were going to spot it evenutly.
Claim
Adequate
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A969E6903C17
The picture that was taken in 2001 was more bigger and more proseize on what we would of been looking at then it was in 1976. The picture that was taken in 2001 made people see that there was nothing to worry about and that it was just a rock looking like a face. People even made it famous without knowing what it was at the time but then people saw the picture takened in 2001 that they had nothing be afraid of or suprised.
Evidence
Ineffective
eb31e2996064
A96CC7C93B2A
Having th advantage of source the population with no more cars is what i would have done.
Position
Ineffective
c2fc62a7c3b5
A96CC7C93B2A
With more people driveing behind the wheel what would happen next if you step on that road to get across while a person is driving behind th wheel over 90 miles an hour.
Evidence
Ineffective
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A96CC7C93B2A
In the U.S. there are people dying of accidents
Claim
Adequate
b8a4a0453d34
A96CC7C93B2A
drunk driveing traffic and so much more that you dont know of. How much more will suffer if a love one is dead lying there on the ground in front of your eyes in tears beacuse that person was killed by a non licesend driver.
Evidence
Adequate
dcca3a36006c
A96CC7C93B2A
Its rough trying too get scool in the morning know what will happen when that person is behind the wheel. A deer might jump in the way while it just got done eating its meal. Scary is what i will say it really is when you are in a situation like that once in your life.
Evidence
Ineffective
6591634b714f
A96CC7C93B2A
People need tranportation in this world to get to places all around.
Claim
Adequate
fb4b9f9ab967
A96CC7C93B2A
From here to there traveling in AC while in the heat on a hot day or keeping warm with the heater on a icy but cold day. If i have a job i need a car to get there to work while I make a living to put food on the table for you and our family. Hard it is with and without a vehicle but people still made it through with or without a vehicle. In my life my parents need a vehicle to get to work on time and need it to get home from a hards day at work.
Evidence
Adequate
8d939a881a3e
A96CC7C93B2A
To others its a dumb but a smart or nosmart thing to do but my opion is in between its a hard thing to agree on.
Claim
Adequate
431c62808587
A96CC7C93B2A
Cars a effecting our population with death of people and gas and fuel that is blowing out of the rough with expenses. Prices that is excending to others minds is that is becomeing higher thatn i can ever imagine it comes and goes like in a blink of an eye you would even think it was gone until somebody told you it was.
Evidence
Ineffective
99b268b2155b
A9B0314D6914
I go against this technology to read students emotional expressions. This is totaly BS
Position
Adequate
489da59c6c22
A9B0314D6914
Dr. Huang and Pro. Nicu made this really cool software called the Facial Action Coding System. Calculating emotions is diferent from coding your face with a 3-D mode of your face that could barely even look like you. Plus there are more than the basic six emotion everbody has. It is still a very cool idea but not for us students.
Evidence
Adequate
3f6cdbf7a5ae
A9B0314D6914
Dr. Huang said that every facial emotion is universaly the same in paragraph 4, but some people can feel emotions without making that facial emotion on thier face.
Claim
Adequate
5903bcc27ffc
A9B0314D6914
This software can be an evasion of privacy for students who would not like to be disterb by this software showing it to your teacher and then the teacher would call or give you a private lesson in school. Mixed emotions are even more complecated for the software to know. There are 44 major muscles in our faces are realy cool but, technology is not yet advanced for this to be true. And the Mona Lisa could just be happy.
Evidence
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How can this "Facial Action Coding System" even tell the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy. The technology is not advance enough to say what emotions we have.
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How can this software even know the emotions we have on a picture. The Mona Lisa is a painting not a picture, so that cannot be corect. Da Vinci Code is something different from Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms. Communication doesn't have to do anything with the software, but maybe us the students.
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And finaly this stuff can't be used in public, who is going to use this sofware than the school.
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Video games are mostly the freedom of choice for most people . And emotional communication will still need to wait for technology to advance. Who is even gona use this. People do not caare what think about us the students. Making privat lessons based on our faces isn't a good idea. Many bad culd use this software to invade privacy from others.
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And this is my reasons why I think this software sucks and should never be used
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So "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is a great little short story that includes very interesting facts a
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