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700dc776b45f | BDC4070CF21E | I believe that students should be able to design their own summer assignments because, they are the only ones capable of knowing what they personally need to improve on, teachers may try to take advantage of the summer assignment and assign too much work, and everyone learns differently so students should be able to tailor the summer assignment to fit their learning styles. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8808627fa613 | BDCD981437BB | Students strongly dislike summer assignments. It is a known fact, and completing them is the last thing on a child's agenda. One thing students do enjoy, is choosing everything themselves. Teacher's have a dramatic affect on a student's learning, most of the time being beneficial, but students tend to procrastinate on assignments that require a large amount of effort to work on. | Lead | Adequate |
86299005849f | BDCD981437BB | Summer projects should be student-designed | Position | Adequate |
be56762931b7 | BDCD981437BB | students are able to work with comfortable material, | Claim | Effective |
d4d3eddff869 | BDCD981437BB | personalize the project to their liking which would make them more eager to complete it, | Claim | Effective |
01d26f19768e | BDCD981437BB | have the ability to produce less time-consuming projects that can make room for summer activities during the break. | Claim | Effective |
5d110b03059d | BDCD981437BB | There are beliefs that teachers should be monitoring and producing summer work for the students themselves. Supposedly, the perspectives of the teachers are valuable, and the projects produced would be putting a massive amount of pressure than of being produced by the students themselves. Although teachers do have high standards and expect the best amount of effort possible, | Counterclaim | Effective |
ab70c4ffc92e | BDCD981437BB | students know what best suites their own knowledge and what levels they can withstand.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
a357a87b979c | BDCD981437BB | The Great Gatsby , a book that takes place in the 1920s, is about a rich man and the times of the stock market crash, among other things. Gatsby is a mysterious man who is hard to come by. Gatsby throws parties in his enormous mansion, and everyone human possible is invited. As time passes, he stops throwing these parties, and he is not heard from for a significant amount of time. The man could not withstand the massive amount of pressure of the parties; every individual expects the greatest out of Gatsby, but the stress that it all brings him results in isolation, especially with the Great Depression playing a large role. If students have the ability to produce their own projects and not have such high standards coming from a teachers standpoint, the students will have less stress and be able to find work that is compatible with their abilities | Evidence | Adequate |
3a56585c7cf4 | BDCD981437BB | A great example of this circumstance would be from the book
Divergent , written by Veronica Ross. In this novel, the main character, Tris, undergoes a significant change in her life; switching factions. The system does not choose for the individuals, every individual has the right to choose accordingly among a set of factions. The ability that one has to make the decision for themselves allows them to be comfortable with a future lifestyle that results in new friends, family, and the way of life. Students being able to personalize how they are going to perform the project, whether or not it will involve partners, and the form of work given will result in students being at a higher level of comfort than if a teacher were to produce the project top to bottom, not knowing if students will be satisfied or comfortable. | Evidence | Effective |
89acc7785da7 | BDCD981437BB | Students have the tendency to not to things if told by another individual, but when the idea is introduced by oneself, the individual is more inclined to do it.
The Hunger Games is a novel that displays a similar effect; being based off of a numerous amount of decisions that could either end up in an individual's death, or survival, a certain scene in this book depicts the choosing of a weapon. The main character, Katniss, chooses a bow and arrow, being a weapon that the character has a great strength in and has a higher chance in succeeding with it. Having the ability to choose and having a personalized approach to the task makes one's task more likely to be completed with great excellence, especially if the individual personalizes the project to aid their strengths rather than their weaknesses. A teacher would not be able to identify a student's weaknesses, resulting in a weaker result than anticipated. | Evidence | Effective |
900db52fa690 | BDCD981437BB | Summer break is called a break for a reason, and if teachers assign projects that are more time consuming than anticipated, the time that students are given would be wasted. For example, an individual that brings similarity to the topic is Frederick Douglass. Frederick Douglass is an inspirational figure in America's History. The man wants the abolition of slavery. By fighting for his beliefs and going through excruciating pain by his slaveholders, Douglass becomes more and more passionate about gaining the freedom that the man and every other slave deserves. With the ability to control one's own life and decisions, one will have more freedom and space to breathe. Giving students the opportunity to customize the projects to a more time conservative approach aids in both the learning experience because the work is still getting done accordingly, and there is still time reserved for a summer break that the students deserve and should be able to fully enjoy.
| Evidence | Effective |
425816a4caae | BDCD981437BB | projects given during the summer should be designed by the students themselves because students then have the ability to work with material that best fits their comfort zone, customize a satisfactory project that persuades students to being more eager to complete it, and have the ability to make projects that consume less time, providing a larger window for students to use for summer activities. Students should be able to have freedom when it comes to their summer, and if given the opportunity to customize the work they receive during this time period, the results would be nowhere near disappointing. Making summer projects student-designed is a must. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
57fd04db6a56 | BE1F20C5B099 | The advantages of limiting car usage | Position | Ineffective |
19c030134240 | BE1F20C5B099 | it helps the envirornment to stay healthy, | Claim | Adequate |
0dfa4d7c6e8d | BE1F20C5B099 | it helps bring the rate of high car usage down | Claim | Adequate |
50a21a62569e | BE1F20C5B099 | lets people take bikes, skates, and ect. and so people can be more actice, | Claim | Adequate |
acb2c3978c95 | BE1F20C5B099 | cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath. | Claim | Adequate |
cca35d0b1f73 | BE1F20C5B099 | it helps the envirornment to stay healthy because with so many countries with over populated cities have alot of cars which causes smog. | Claim | Adequate |
e82af3d1b393 | BE1F20C5B099 | Like in Vauban Germany they have gave up on there cars so they have baned cars, and that most of the population has got rid of their car, and or sold them to stay in Vauban which has a population of 5,500 residents. The people now in Vuaban walk of side walks, and are more actice most of the citizens like it that way. which that is a good way to get over car is to use bikes, skateboards, and ect. So that people can be more active, and social. It is also good that they do that so they can get a exercise than just sitting in a car, and driving to a location. | Evidence | Adequate |
fc76d5b9afb9 | BE1F20C5B099 | it help prevents harmful chemicals and gases thar are bad for the air we breath because if we keep polluting the streets with cars those harmful and deadly chemicals, and gases go to the atmosphere and come back to us as air we breath, and those are not good things to put in your body. | Claim | Adequate |
f7af09d2f98a | BE1F20C5B099 | The cause of over populated cities like in paris, or bogota have cause alot of smog. So now what they have to lower the smog is that they have days when they dont drive cars, and that if you rode a car you would get fined. In Colombia Bogota they have time where that the people didnt mind not driving cars, and they would hike, bike or even take the bus. | Evidence | Adequate |
4c6e6dcfb523 | BE1F20C5B099 | the advantages of limiting car usage is that it helps the envirorment to stay healthy, help bring people together and make them more active by taking bikes, skates, and ect. and also cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
865f5e538d39 | BE243683124A | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break | Lead | Adequate |
1f2c155db6ce | BE243683124A | . Teacher should not assign project during summer break | Position | Ineffective |
c72787d2d67b | BE243683124A | students will forget and will become stressed out | Claim | Adequate |
38d4092353d3 | BE243683124A | , students may have other summer actives such as Generic_School sports or camps | Claim | Adequate |
c0170d09c2c2 | BE243683124A | all in all students just need a break away from learning. | Claim | Adequate |
c82867ce9cc5 | BE243683124A |
To begin, students should not be assigned summer project because students will forget and will become stressed out | Claim | Adequate |
79dc40f7384c | BE243683124A | We as students assume a lot from our teacher throughout that 11 months we are in school, we do not need a summer project during our three months of summer vacation. For example, my friend Generic_Name, had to read two books and write a six page essay about each books, Generic_Name was so stressed due to the fact she forgot about the papers till the last month. Generic_Name had taken several vacation that summer with her family and never really had any down time to read and write a paper on the stories. This is a prime example of why students should not have summer project assigned to them. Another example of how summer projects could be stressful is, my brother Generic_Name. Generic_Name had to write a play for English and didnt get reminded about it till the day before school was back in. Generic_Name stressed himself out to the point where he had to go to the ER because it was so my stress of trying to get his summer assignment done on time. Summer project can be very stressful on many students and also many students may forget about it. | Evidence | Adequate |
011d12664c33 | BE243683124A | Secondly, students should not be assigned summer project because they may have other summer actives planned | Claim | Adequate |
c4189e41cebe | BE243683124A | For example, my friend Generic_Name, had a lot of actives and things should wanted to do over the summer such as, getting a job, playing sports, and taking trips. Generic_Name could not fit all that and school work in her plans. Generic_Name of course did not want to start off the school year with a bad grade but she also had some personal things she wanted to achieve that summer. PROPER_NAME made some adjustments to her summer plan so that she could get the work done but had to miss out on getting a job this summer. We as students all have things to do just like adults. For instant, my mom as a child was the oldest sister and had to always watch her younger siblings when her mom was at work. "Watching younger kids may be difficult sometimes," she said even with the very little down time she had she wanted to go out with friends and play basketball. The school work that was assigned to her took away her time of doing what she loved when she was not watching her siblings. Summer assignment take over kids summer that why we should not be assigned them.
| Evidence | Adequate |
6b2a7deee49f | BE243683124A | Lastly, students should not be assigned summer project because they need a break from learning all in all | Claim | Adequate |
d87e42e69152 | BE243683124A | We as students are always told, " you learn something new each and everyday." Learning take place in our everyday life. For instant, students with jobs learn how to do mental math when customers purchase something. Learning does not just come from our teachers, we are taught by just the people we are around during our summer break. Summer break should be our time to have fun and do what we want, not having to deal with a school project. Another example students just need a break from learning is that we are in school for a 11 months, we assume a lot of great information from our teachers throughout that time period. We as students should not have to have a assignment to keep us learning, we learn from each other and many other people in this world. These are some of the reasons students do not need assignments over summer break. | Evidence | Adequate |
66f0707a0d16 | BE243683124A | In conclusion, some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Students do not need projects over summer break because students will forget and will become stressed out, students may have other summer actives planned, and all in all students just need a break from learning.I personal feel like students learn enough in the 11 month that they are in school. Summer projects is just something that getting in the way of students having fun and letting loose once in a while.Summer break should be our one time to forget about school for 3 months, lets keep it that way! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
af36e59d6f09 | BE24907D6684 | From Luke's experieance he know's that he is lucky to life in america. And that other people in other countires don't get a chance to live a good life. So Luke let people from other places stay at his home so they could go to a good school. And that awarness stayed with him for the rest of his days. Like he said it was an opportunity of a life time.
Luke had just graduated from high school and was working 2 part time jobs. One at the bank. One at the grocery. Untill one day his friend Don Reist came along and asked him to be a "Seagoing Cowboy" with him. He knew this was the oppertunity of a life time. So obivisly he went.
In August 1995, World War ll was over in Europe, many countries were gone. So luke and the other Seagoing Cowboys were sent there with food, animals, and more. Luke and his friend were shiped over seas to help as part of the UNRRA. He was shocked to see all the countries ruined. There was nothing left!
After all of that he was shiped to China with lots of suplies. One his way he got to see ols castles. He also traveled down the Panama Canal. The aniamls keep Luke very busy. They needed to be feed 3 times a day. They played lots of ball games to pass the time. Like volleyball and table tennis.
Being a
Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure to Bomberger. On all over his nine missions he learned that he was very lucky. LIke he said,"It made me more aware of people of other countries and thier needs." And the awareness stayed with him, he became a host for international students and exchage visitors for many years. That oppertunity chaged Luke Bomberger's live forever! We are very lucky to live in the USA becuase we have many more oppertunities the anyone else does. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a1f6e9a164cb | BE464F52C63D | have you ever done at least one extracurricular activity at your school before ? i have never had a no expedients in doing a extracurricular activity before | Lead | Ineffective |
c7c0fe6635d2 | BE464F52C63D | i think my school should make students do extracurricular activity at school | Position | Adequate |
db869c2d9b6e | BE464F52C63D | it will be a good way to have more movement in your body and learning new things to do | Claim | Adequate |
370c876e6e36 | BE464F52C63D | not always sitting and copping down notes but its not always boring doing those things but maybe having extracurricular activity at my school could be a good thing for all the students so they could have something to do instead of shitting down doing nothing and just being lazy. | Evidence | Ineffective |
adb4adf0e320 | BE464F52C63D | i support this division that the principal is making because students could learn how to make new friends | Claim | Adequate |
8b2f0d81239c | BE464F52C63D | students can learn how to talk to one an other and can learn how to do things as a team making new friends isnt always a bad thing to do when making a new friends they could show you new things that you have never done or speak laggugis you have never spoke or food you have never seen before thats why when you make new friends you might just learn new things, students should communicate with more people because it could take them to so may places when they learn how to communicate to other people in the world and not always to the same people like your friends it really import that students at a young age should learn how to talk to other people without being shy. and when communicating to people thats how to make new friends,, | Evidence | Adequate |
a75611199cd1 | BE464F52C63D | team work is a good thing to do | Claim | Adequate |
4501c7e2be98 | BE464F52C63D | it will teach you hoe to work as a team and not be alone it will teach you hoe to talk to one an other and also make you learn that you dont always have to do things alone also make new friends team work make people closer people they help each other when they need help on something and if you dont like to do team work things you should at least give it a chance because if you dont gibe things first chances how are you gonna know if you like it or not. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f5408a3ecbb5 | BE464F52C63D | this would be good for the students because they could talk to more people they dont know and they can do more active activities and learn how to work together as a team | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
58b2be1d9049 | BE58ABE09429 | A UFO lands in your front yard. Apart from the screaming, you hear beeps and boops. You turn to the side and see an Alien standing in your doorway. He opens his mouth and a loud alarm sound comes out. You open your eyes and then realize it was all a dream. That's the only reasonable explanation for you seeing a UFO or an alien. To this day scientist have not encountered signs of life on any other planet. So what makes you think aliens could have created the face on Mars? | Lead | Adequate |
430eb98e1c81 | BE58ABE09429 | Two decades and a half ago scientist discovered a face like shape on Mars. It was about two miles long. Scientist claimed it was staring at the cameras, but there was nothing surrounding it. No power tools, or hammers, not even a few sculpting tools. How would aliens create such a thing? With alien-y tools? Magic powers maybe? No, because it was a natural formation | Evidence | Adequate |
e7f1ee33ae2a | BE58ABE09429 | Scientist figured out it was just another Martian mesa, which are frequent around the Cydonia. | Claim | Adequate |
6d04f5fe773a | BE58ABE09429 | According to the article the only thing different about this one was that it "had unusual shawdows make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh." Which made people go wild. | Evidence | Adequate |
17810263d989 | BE58ABE09429 | When Mars' face started its fifteen minutes of fame it became a beloved "pop icon." It was featured in movies, books, and radio talk shows. It "haunted grocery checkout lines" for years. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f849e88b74ad | BE58ABE09429 | people, mostly conspiracy theorists, started thinking "What if aliens formed it?" Some scientist even started to believe that it was an alien artificat. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
27b0091f3ad3 | BE58ABE09429 | So more research was done. Scientist took more pictures, which were ten times sharper than the first ones, and stutdied them. Discovering, the obivious, that it was a natural landform.
There was dissapointment all over the place, not only for the people, but scientist too. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
060e5e626ac2 | BE58ABE09429 | It was a mesa, a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
8574ecf7a7ca | BE58ABE09429 | It was even compared to the "MIddle Butte in the Snaler River Plain of Idaho" | Evidence | Adequate |
755e24f8c3bc | BE58ABE09429 | Since then the popularity of the face has gone downhill. Maybe one day it'll resurface on the social media as a funny meme that teens will talk about for two weeks. Tragic. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
451b9932e6d6 | BE80D73EC131 | The education system is designed around the process of preparing children for successful living in society, whether that is pursuing higher education or entering the working world. In reality, students are unlikely to actually use most of the information taught to them during primary education, so school is a method of building skills that can be used for life rather than facts and ideas that are actually necessary. | Lead | Adequate |
7c8a5875a473 | BE80D73EC131 | When examining a summer project, it can be assumed that learning is encouraged for the purpose of keeping these necessary skills free from decay, so these projects should be student-designed | Position | Effective |
995261cca9f3 | BE80D73EC131 | they hone important skills regardless of the origin of their design, | Claim | Effective |
517f50a963d5 | BE80D73EC131 | give students a sense of freedom and responsibility, | Claim | Effective |
b55be8b1d114 | BE80D73EC131 | encourage children to learn information that they are actually interested in. | Claim | Effective |
bf1ff38375e6 | BE80D73EC131 | If a project is to be completed during the summer, it is unlikely that the information that the student must learn is specific to one area. If the knowledge is going to be general, then the focus of the research is unimportant, due to the fact that the basis of the project is to build skills rather than to build knowledge. | Evidence | Effective |
51c8558cfc92 | BE80D73EC131 | This increase in responsibility will create better results from most students, because they must put more effort into the project to not only earn a good grade, but to also earn a sense of accomplishment from a well-done project that they solely created. The stress that this causes can also be a motivating factor that interrupts the natural process of procrastination that most students fall victim to during their summer break. Student-designed projects will create, or at least improve, a child's sense of accomplishment and self-fulfillment, an area that is widely ignored in the educational field. | Evidence | Effective |
4de03daa5642 | BE80D73EC131 | Children are often pressured to identify their interests from an early age, and the common overlook made by schools is that children are not often given opportunities to explore new things, and are rarely given a chance to make decisions based on what they want. They will produce better results when given freedom and are made to feel like their opinion actually makes a difference. If a student has interest in one academic field but not another, it would make no sense to stifle their passion and have them create a project that is just mediocre compared to encouraging their interest and receiving a spectacular product. | Evidence | Effective |
dfd3baf1d395 | BE80D73EC131 | Referring to the building of skills mentioned before, a worker who is passionate about their career is going to be leagues more productive than a worker who is not. Primary school is about building academic skills rather than the accumulation of facts and is about creating a passion for learning in students. For these reasons, schools have no reason not to allow summer projects to be designed by students. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e3fb333ba6aa | BE9881C4920A | The ways emontions work is the way we are feeling at that exact moment. We may feel sad, depreesed, angry, happy, excited, or just fantastic. Emotions is how we express ourselves. Emotions can do with a lot of things love, care, affection ect. Emotions is just how people coupe with things like depression & things like that.
"FACS" Is "Facial Action Coding System" It can tell how people emotions are & how they are feeling at that moment. The system can just look at you & tell you how you are feeling but by percentages. It can 10% sad 85% depressed & 5% hungry thats how their scanners work
| Evidence | Ineffective |
8be823916b7a | BE9881C4920A | Their technology is like te best in the world klike very hi-tech in this matter for thm to see how you are feeling is very amazing & can do magineficent things in this world | Position | Adequate |
e644d6a59eb7 | BEAA8D8A3EFD | HEY YOU!, you should join the seagoing cowboy program | Position | Adequate |
dbe94566a518 | BEAA8D8A3EFD | If you would like travelling mabe you hould go with | Claim | Adequate |
af8ab3976017 | BEAA8D8A3EFD | if you like contestes and roff stuff you should go with. | Claim | Adequate |
0c0c12766d10 | BEAA8D8A3EFD | if you like horuses you should go with | Claim | Adequate |
9c401243d21a | BEAA8D8A3EFD | You can see excavated castle in Crete and panama canal in on the way to china and acropolis in Greece. Also explorer Europe and China , gondola ride Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Also fed, gron, muck stales that the horses were in. | Evidence | Adequate |
4fe0f4cf46cf | BEAA8D8A3EFD | You can find fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You can play baseball, volleyball games in empty holds where animals were. Also table-tennis tournamennts, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games to pass the time. | Evidence | Adequate |
bf8dbb2b430e | BEAA8D8A3EFD | You can also help people because the war put them to rounes and the animals will help them live. Also saves people from dieing and starving. You need to be strong and kind and helpful. | Evidence | Adequate |
bc60ce0aa292 | BEAA8D8A3EFD | That is why you sould be a seagoing cowboy. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
2f84ccbc7738 | BF070C66EE96 | There is alot of advantages to limiting cars. Is there disadvantages? Yes, there is, but limiting cars can also be dangerous, well because the Law Enforcements needs cars and so does the Fire Department or even hospitals. The Law Enforement needs cars to catch criminals faster, and the Fire Departments need cars so they can save us from fires and to save cats from trees, how do they even climb up there? who knows, and the hospital needs them to save patients or to get them to the hospital faster so doctors can save them, | Lead | Adequate |
740b03f395b3 | BF070C66EE96 | i personally think its a great idea to have limited cars. | Position | Adequate |
61d9d0332eb6 | BF070C66EE96 | alot of people would lose their jobs due to limited cars, such as mechanics, car dealers, etc. mechanics will go out of business because of no business and so will the car dealers, and if cars dealers dont sell many cars, the company might go out of business too, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e5a5f735b4bd | BF070C66EE96 | its good because they might think of building better cars like the hybrid so we wont have much pollution or wont have to use natural gas. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
7f0bfdd4e1ab | BF070C66EE96 | In the suburbs of Germany 70 percent of Vauban's families dont own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. "when i had a car i was always tense. Im much happier this way," said Heidrun Walter a resident in the suburb. | Evidence | Ineffective |
717db6495fd0 | BF070C66EE96 | it is much more peaceful and quiet | Claim | Adequate |
379c3c26690a | BF070C66EE96 | "the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor" this sentence from the "Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars" explains that it is very peaceful because theres no noise, | Evidence | Adequate |
933b79f802c1 | BF070C66EE96 | no pollution and much more healthier people | Claim | Adequate |
fa24d2ecdc3a | BF070C66EE96 | because they ride bikes everywhere and walk alot, and theres no pollution so theres probably people who dont have breath in nasty air of cars. Even the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting "car reduced" communities, and legislators are even starting to do the same. | Evidence | Adequate |
c75ba85e3967 | BF070C66EE96 | People that have no cars most likely walk alot and ride bikes, or even run, well because of that the amount of stress people have is probably very low, | Claim | Adequate |
ad420af152d3 | BF070C66EE96 | because of low stress people are happier, and thats because excersize relieves stress and even reduce headaches or other health problems | Evidence | Adequate |
40b10dba0fdd | BF070C66EE96 | the death rate will go decrease | Claim | Adequate |
b48f00c6047f | BF070C66EE96 | because there will less car accidents, and car accidents are the numer one reason of death and the United States. | Evidence | Adequate |
83cc1693574f | BF070C66EE96 | In Bogota they were in their third year where cars were banned but only buses and taxis were permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. Their goal is to promote alternative tranportation to reduce nasty smog and violators faced a $25 fines, the turnout of this was large, despite the gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers. "The rain hasnt stopped people from participating," said the Mayor of Bogota | Evidence | Adequate |
ccda741b3dc2 | BF070C66EE96 | the advantages of limited cars are great and the people of Car-less cities or areas are much happier without them, people are healthier, less stressed and even have less health problem due to it, but who will save the cats from climbing trees? maybe they wont climb it because of no pollution or scary car noises. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
85f19564b1df | BF2B46872736 | Im actually against the value of using technology to read students emotional expressions because thats would be a vialation of how you feel or like about something or someone. I think if you going use technology to calculate someones emotion they should aleast do it and keep it private. | Lead | Adequate |
b16506f8e45f | BF2B46872736 | Im going to be telling you a little bit about why using technology to read student emotion is bad.
| Position | Adequate |
e550f3700704 | BF2B46872736 | First of all i am against using this technology because, In the passage it says Faces dont lie and it can tell when someone is inmatating a fake smile and i dont really think that is true sometimes faces do lie. | Claim | Ineffective |
d37f24184cc1 | BF2B46872736 | I honestly think that being able to read student emotion is awsome in all but its kinda personal. i dont think people want other people know about their emotions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2d45d2f08b62 | BF2B46872736 | i also think that if this technology is used people will probably become addicted to it and it will probably start getting on people nerves | Claim | Adequate |
bdd811d98b0c | BF2B46872736 | In the passage it states that when a student becomes bored and confused Dr. huang predicts that it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor. | Evidence | Ineffective |
945067c0de9f | BF2B46872736 | In conclusion use this technology will probably effect people thoughs and emotions. It will also effect how people feel towards one they care about it will cause a whole lot of misunstands confustion effection and unsterstanding. i think that using a computer technology to calculate someone emotion is bad for the enviroment and if we just ramdomly add technology in the world to know people emotions it will get crazy and out of hand. These are all the reasons why i am against use technology to know people's emotion. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ae8da03c101b | BFA4685DCDC6 | The issue of driving while the person is on the cell phone and is a major issue in Georgia and all the other states of America. Many accidents are happening daily, and people are losing their lives. This way many fatal accidents happened, and even small kids lose their lives | Lead | Adequate |
9e903d830028 | BFA4685DCDC6 | The Law has been made in Georgia that requires hands free driving, that means people can drive and talk on the phone without touching the phone. The Law is still not as helpful as expected | Position | Ineffective |
ebf7967f1fe8 | BFA4685DCDC6 | because many people ignore law | Claim | Adequate |
94bb38d1356d | BFA4685DCDC6 | many people's mind is still distracted, | Claim | Adequate |
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