tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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e55d00e5c5a6	C1E2F0C453B3	When you tell a friend about your feeeling by the look on her face. Some people can tell that when you are upset or even more. It depends on the people. Da Vinci stuided human anatomy to help him painy facial muscles precisely enough to have emotions in the paintings. The new softwat stores similar anatomical information as elctronic code.	Evidence	Adequate
be693fdb761a	C1E2F0C453B3	when you look at the mona lisa it brings a smile to your face	Claim	Ineffective
3ad25f8cf591	C1E2F0C453B3	It shows you how much a computer can do. The computer knows when you are sad and happy. It's like a dog knowing when you are upset or happy.	Evidence	Ineffective
34655e4adc85	C1E2F0C453B3	Not everything should be abe to be on the computer alot of things aren't even on the paper. It's all online. It take a lot of emotions. When you paint monia lisa you are puting emotions on the way that it being painted. It can be different on every painting but it shows more emotions then having it online. When working online with emotions. When it's online it not how it done. The computer is doing with what some people want. Emotions shouldn't be read by computer becuse they do mess up and someone would have to fix what the computer picks out. emotions should be painted or drawed out on a paper not on a screen that you can easily delete. When on paper make a mistake then easer it. It shows maybe using the coumputer's can mess what they want.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
8634511f5258	C1EAD0C50570	I agree all students must partticipate in at leasat one extracurricular activity at school,	Position	Adequate
e0f7828f0738	C1EAD0C50570	it's good for them	Claim	Adequate
5f4ada348251	C1EAD0C50570	they can spend more they'er time at school playing sport or doing some other activity like math clup or working on the school yearbook any other cluping or activity, and help student learn more new stuff.	Claim	Adequate
04ba314cf8c5	C1EAD0C50570	students could leaen more about sports an be healther and know how to play it other thing is that they can do there homework at school if they cant do it at home or if they have no one at the house to help them. participate at schools activity something that all school should have and make students have a better guatction in there furcht and help how to become good person later in life.	Evidence	Adequate
892120adde3d	C1EAD0C50570	The most importent thing about participate to school activity is you can spend time with your friend and teacher and your principal too, and it help students with there grades too.	Claim	Adequate
ea1ceba18fc7	C1EAD0C50570	Not all students have or must participate to school activity, but is there choses rather they want to or not but i thing is impoent to partticipate an actiticy at school is for there good.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
1a1f6b5a15a2	C1F74C98535E	The author supports their idea very well.	Position	Ineffective
0ab31e89c2e9	C1F74C98535E	The story is very convincing to start off. The authornmakes sure to mention a lot of evidence to back up his/her statements. The author mentions a lot of facts with another fact to prove it is true. The author did good with trying to get their point across because of all the points they made to back up his statement.	Evidence	Adequate
45f0ed2fa094	C1F74C98535E	The reason I think the author did good is because the author seemed to know what they were talking about.	Claim	Adequate
56dc01c96047	C1F74C98535E	The author mentions how Venus is most alike to Earth. Also that is just one of the many statements the author makes. The author had also used other statements to compare to why we could go to Venus. The author even gave their own idea on what think is possible. The author uses plenty of facts to help his idea and what he/she is trying to say. The author even says how NASA is working on approachesto study Venus and that helps make the essay even better. The author does not see his idea as a risk and more as a challenge. The author seeing it as a challenge shows he confidence in his idea. The author also uses how Venus has so many things alike with earth that it should be explored.	Evidence	Adequate
b4be71854bdf	C1F74C98535E	So all in all the author made a good essay and did well supporting his idea. The author was consistent with his/her idea. The author made sure to use important facts to support their idea. The author was well rounded and did not seemed biased with their idea and was very convincing with what they said.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
ba117716e26b	C21E1457C1D4	Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Mona Lisa is a Painting that is drawn by the use of color painting and other handful material, when humans are drawing with their hand and feelings it shows the facial expression and emoyion of the drawing	Lead	Ineffective
a974b9317724	C21E1457C1D4	Technology cannot be used to express humans feelins or emotions, even with what is installed in it.	Position	Adequate
43cd8f54d706	C21E1457C1D4	With the use of technology, the facial expression and emotion of Mona Lisa and even other drawing emotions and feelings cannot be expressed because technology has no feelings or emotions, also emtoins cannot be calculated, "Hold on! Can we actually "calculate" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?".	Evidence	Adequate
266455cccdcd	C21E1457C1D4	Technology cannot express feelings to human, so it cannot be used to calculate human emotional expression.	Claim	Adequate
cb9789f75b00	C21E1457C1D4	In technology, the human muscles, 3-D computer model of the face and all major humans muscles are installed in the computer, "The process begins when the computer constructa 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit". Technology should not be use to paint or even draw because technology cannot express human feelings and behavior.	Evidence	Ineffective
87394d57c45e	C21E1457C1D4	The use of technology to read emotions expressions of student in the classroom is not valueable because technology can never calculate the feelings or expression of humans.	Claim	Adequate
cd673b0a6966	C21E1457C1D4	In conclusion to the use of technology to calculate humans emotional expression. Technology cannot calculate humans expressions because humans emotion and facial expression varies from time to time and based on what there are seeing and feeling at the moment, so technology cannot calculate human expressions. If technology can calculate humans feelings the our phone or other electronics devices should have been able to tell us where we want to go to at a particular moment, and be able to know when calls should come in or not.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
1eea86023d4a	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke Bomberger became a Seagoing Cowboy he helps people whose lives had been affected by World War ll.	Lead	Ineffective
917d834fe27f	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime, as he says in paragraph one. Luke also wanted to help others who had been affected by World War ll.	Position	Adequate
9d6ba2134b7b	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke crossed the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times and the Pacific Ocean twice, to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and much more as it says in paragraph two. Even though it was a long journey across the oceans and the waters were rough	Evidence	Ineffective
9ccc9b2214bd	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke loved being a Seagoing Cowboy and he loved to help the people.	Claim	Adequate
74d568e33b2f	C24C0AF54AB1	Some people would probably refuse to go to another country that had just been through war some people would say it was to risky and unsafe well it is, some people might say that it is too dangerous to cross the ocean	Counterclaim	Adequate
a0a4fbe56dd1	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke felt that these were things that he needed to do and is something that is important to him.	Rebuttal	Adequate
f6f1b11c1a3d	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke also got to visit many great places in between his journeys	Claim	Adequate
77f22de75688	C24C0AF54AB1	he got to see many different places such as the Panama Canal on his way to China in paragraph five Luke says that "seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special" and "so was taking a gondola ride in Venice , Italy a city with streets of water. Luke thought that it was all so great.	Evidence	Ineffective
c64dabc16654	C24C0AF54AB1	But some people might say that they wouldnt go there because once again it's just too dangerous or that if they wanted to go there then they definetly not go on a boat and they would much more want to fly there	Counterclaim	Adequate
456187934eda	C24C0AF54AB1	Well once again that is their opinion and Luke was happy the way that he went and was happy that he could see it and that he go to experience the jouney.	Rebuttal	Adequate
4abf85458f17	C24C0AF54AB1	Luke loves being a Seagoing Cowboy he loves all the sights, all the help that he can give to these other people, and that he could have this opportunity in life.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
c8323a1784b8	C268CF77D6E0	Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy has a lot of ups and downs but the ups are accually pretty cool	Position	Adequate
0b12d879c8af	C268CF77D6E0	You might find an uncharted island and make a lot of money off of it.	Claim	Ineffective
39b6d05f5d83	C268CF77D6E0	You would see interesting and cool places while you were travleing to the destination. I have always wanted to go to Ireland but i dont think that i will ever go there... Unless i become a SeaGoing Cowboy of corse!	Evidence	Adequate
90ed252f8191	C268CF77D6E0	You get a lot of excersise by traveling a lot.	Claim	Adequate
de29d2420ecf	C268CF77D6E0	If you are the kind or person who really likes to travel, then you would like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy. You get a chance to be on a boat in the open sea. I would really like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy because your always out at sea and i love the ocean, i could live on the ocean if I could.	Evidence	Adequate
9eb956391999	C268CF77D6E0	You would try new things on the on the way	Claim	Adequate
2eb42ba41ebb	C268CF77D6E0	you would land on countries or islands that you have always wanted to go to. You might also get respect from the other landgoers. I mean, who wouldn't like to have respect from other people! (Plus you get an awesome name)	Evidence	Adequate
829bf2c50d47	C268CF77D6E0	So try it, it might be your kind of thing, or maybe you could just sit around at home doing dishes, chopping logs or something, Who knows maybe you will become a SeaGoing Cowboy one day.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
c34c3eaaa41d	C295FC9B8627	the author is right in this passage because in paragraph 8 nassa is trying to shut down all the towers	Position	Ineffective
c3d84ca3d229	C295FC9B8627	the author about this story he wishes nassa could go away but that will be inpossonle	Claim	Ineffective
b4751c2145a0	C295FC9B8627	these differences from nassa are in speed mars and other times to venus because venus is sometimes around the corner cloud drapped world	Evidence	Ineffective
cdd5fc4adfa2	C295FC9B8627	each previous mission is unmanned and for a good reason cause nassa can handle there men unmanned they all survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why venus spaceship hasnt touched down in almost 3 decades	Evidence	Ineffective
d58642a93c2f	C295FC9B8627	So nassa is concerned about venus spaceship	Claim	Ineffective
d86854c9855b	C295FC9B8627	A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. if our sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing futher visits to its surface	Evidence	Ineffective
a4dd1213d47f	C295FC9B8627	there wasting there time for all the importanty of nassa.	Claim	Ineffective
c12bb9e2c92f	C295FC9B8627	the surfce was rockey and couldnt be walled on because of that reason or drove on there was mountains and craters furthermore. the nationL aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.	Evidence	Ineffective
d24b1758e413	C30B2AD4AF0A	According to the LA Times, 253 million vehicles are on the roads in the US. Since there are so many cars on the road, safety is a pressing issue for the American public. At first it was concern over seatbelts, then drinking and driving, and now it is cell phone usage while driving. Since the rise of cell phones, more cases of drivers crashing due to being distracted by their phones.	Lead	Effective
57dd1365ce4c	C30B2AD4AF0A	Due to this, it should not be allowed for individuals to use their phones	Position	Effective
e0f845648207	C30B2AD4AF0A	they have increased the risk of crashes	Claim	Effective
ba138e4ec9b2	C30B2AD4AF0A	fatalites	Claim	Effective
fe41019a1e46	C30B2AD4AF0A	injuries.	Claim	Effective
fd871bdc0621	C30B2AD4AF0A	It was reported by Edgarsnyder. com, that according to the National Safety Council, 1.6 million crashes are caused by cell phones every year.	Claim	Effective
e71dfd3ae303	C30B2AD4AF0A	This displays the danger that cell phones pose to the everyday driver. And the danger only becomes more clear when one compares the cell phone crashes to the total number of crashes per year. According to USA Today, out of all the crashes that happen in the United States everyday, 1 out of 4 are caused by cell phones. These statistics are exactly what shows how dangerous cell phones can be. Distracted driving is one of the main sources of crashes and they are a danger to the modern driver.	Evidence	Effective
3b3e503646d4	C30B2AD4AF0A	Edgarsynder. com reports that every year, 390,000 people are injured in cell phone related incidents on the road.	Claim	Effective
44de40184dea	C30B2AD4AF0A	Distracted driving has now become more dangerous than drunk driving. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, 101,000 more people are injured by distracted driving than drunk driving. This clearly demonstrates the inherent danger cell phones displaywhen drivers use them. And since this past time is so dangerous, insurance for those have been caught texting and driving are paying the price. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, in 2011 the penalty for texting and driving was $2.35 added to the premium price. In 2017, the fine added was $226.36. That is an increase of 7,944% in the penalty price. So not only is distracted driving dangerous for the drivers' life, it is also dangerous for the drivers' wallet as well.	Evidence	Effective
183daddd4976	C30B2AD4AF0A	In a article posted by the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA), 3,166 people a year are killed because they were texting and driving.	Claim	Effective
e52603e61b96	C30B2AD4AF0A	That is almost half the number people killed due to drunk driving, which also according to the NHTSA, is 7,000 people a year. Edgarsnyder. com reported that 21% of all fatal teen crashes are caused by distracted driving. The action of using cell phones while driving is not only an unnecessary risk to the American public's safety, it does not seem to have an impact on how dangerous it is to the teens of America. Also mentioned by Edgarsnyder. com, AAA conducted a survey in which 94% of teens said they knew that texting and driving is dangerous, but 35% of those teens said they did it regardless of how dangerous it was. This shows just how little the youth of America know about the dangers of distracted driving.	Evidence	Effective
12cb3d3e7c3c	C30B2AD4AF0A	The NHTSA says that at any given time, 660,000 people are using their cell phones while they drive. This means that 660,000 Americans are gambling with their lives. Distracted driving is a epidemic in America, and it should not be allowed under any circumstances. It is a deadly and costly endeavour that does not have any benefit to those who choose to participate in this affair. Texting and driving is illegal for a reason, because it has been proven that it should not be done.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a94146749142	C30DD2DB1F70	The use of technology can be operated for many different reasons. Is technology valuable for emotional expressions of students in a classroom? Everyone has their own opinion in the use of technology based on facial expressions.	Lead	Adequate
7b07c89ea910	C30DD2DB1F70	In my opinion, I believe reading emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.	Position	Adequate
27b29f092009	C30DD2DB1F70	This can be taught as if you we're being instructed by math.	Evidence	Ineffective
59409263b57b	C30DD2DB1F70	You may be thinking to yourself "How can this be possible for a computer to be recognized by a facial expression?"	Claim	Adequate
07caa3e69d0b	C30DD2DB1F70	According to the passage, the computer process begins using a 3-D computer model of the face. The appromixate number of 44 muscles must move just like a human. A man, Dr. Paul Eckman created six different emotions such as, happy, surprised, angry, sad, fear, and disgust. Then each characteristic would be assocaiated by the moventment of the facial muscles.	Evidence	Adequate
c355e0b4e652	C30DD2DB1F70	This technology can be helpful for students because of new emotion-recognized software tracks these facial movements	Claim	Adequate
928263377c14	C30DD2DB1F70	By weighting the different units, the software can identified by the using mixed emotions. Each emotion is compared against neutral face, in other words no expression shown. You can tell the difference of a person's face of how they're feeling just by looking at their face.	Evidence	Adequate
0b5a08f06bee	C30DD2DB1F70	But they might alsp, have other feelings within inside them. The new software stories similar anatomical information as an electic code.	Evidence	Ineffective
1df3bc40c14e	C31E318BE4C1	Having a extracurricular activity will actaully help you out in life ,if you put in effort you could even get a full-ride to harvard if your an athlete all you have to do is some extracurricular activity and try it. I used to do basketball when i was smaller ,and when i was doing that i met one of the funniest people i've ever met ,and now she became my bestfriend	Lead	Adequate
994be51ecacd	C31E318BE4C1	if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity	Claim	Adequate
e4452be499f0	C31E318BE4C1	get a scholarship.	Claim	Adequate
f9660722fa90	C31E318BE4C1	when you go to your activity you'll meet lots of new people ,and slowly you'll start to trust them and them too ,and then boom! your friends ,	Claim	Adequate
9892345927dd	C31E318BE4C1	when you try a dress on for example they'll say wow! that looks beautiful on you and then you'll have a much better self-esteem/ more confidence, also when you go to the mall and your looking for jeans for example and you say what about this one? one will say yeah it'll look great on you while others might say it looks fine but this one will look better on you and you'll have different peoples opinions	Evidence	Ineffective
76356bf08b46	C31E318BE4C1	if you try new things you'll probably find something that you'll actually like,	Claim	Adequate
35a469128f33	C31E318BE4C1	like soccer my dad used to teach me how to play soccer but i didn't end up liking it but my cousin did he even ended up traveling the world because of soccer everyone is different i'm not saying that if you try soccer you'll like it but what i'm saying is you should try new things who knows you might end up traveling the world. you might even turn out to be outgoing you'll try something like skydiving something that i've been wanting to do for years or you might even like to do checkers something which i find pretty interesting but who knows only you will know when you try new things.	Evidence	Adequate
2dcb3e67f896	C31E318BE4C1	if you were doing football and you were really good you would most likely get a scholarship to a really good school and play for their team and if you put that on your resume ,	Claim	Adequate
e74ef36fa236	C31E318BE4C1	that job is like athletic or anything in general then your most likely gonna get the job, scholarships are good for your resume but their also good because your perants would be so proud that you got that scholarship all your friends and teachers would show some respect too.	Evidence	Adequate
90cb5b934ccf	C31E318BE4C1	in overall i agree, i think that students should do extracurricular activity	Position	Adequate
25bef84b6d54	C31E318BE4C1	cause it can actually help them allot like if you stay for afterschool you can learn more, and if you do a sport and you try your best im sure you can achieve anything in life. if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity and get a scholarship.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a8b6fb892f82	C323ACC08DC7	You may belive that it was aliens that created this "face" on mars, Where is your proof to support that eveidence	Lead	Ineffective
24452148a58d	C323ACC08DC7	The face could just be a natural landform like many other things like we have found out about.	Position	Adequate
7ba2fa789cbd	C323ACC08DC7	Whats your proof that its aliens, Becasue when we have circled the rest of the planet we have not found civilizations or colonies of alien life.	Claim	Ineffective
e688b7801285	C323ACC08DC7	For instensts a metior could have just hit the planet in that spot leaving a mark that looked like a human face leaving you to belive this. There could be aliens out there but there is no proof that we have them in our universe yet, There are many diffrent reasons why there could be natrual causes as to why it would look like there is a face on the planet.	Evidence	Ineffective
5d2bae9011d5	C323ACC08DC7	Mars has clouds around its planet and other planets do that may be where aliens hide and have there villiages. You beliveing in them could be correct but also wrong at the same time. We just dont know what could have caused that face on mars aliens, natural formation, crator. You maybe belive this because even the scientist have gotten the false imput that they were real and that this was a aien artifact	Evidence	Adequate
cdd1dd2c0242	C323ACC08DC7	We jsut have no evidence proveing wether or not this is an alien artifact or its just a natual landform.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
42eb8c4024e6	C33B92E8D3FE	Why would the author ignore the dangers of venus	Lead	Ineffective
0f7350d07844	C33B92E8D3FE	The author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.	Position	Adequate
bc26108766a0	C33B92E8D3FE	Because of how hot it is it's very dangerous .	Evidence	Ineffective
c8a4533088ba	C33B92E8D3FE	" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system ." The author has believed that the ,"Conditions aren't easy but humans can survive in venus	Claim	Adequate
9ce17d2b8fd8	C33B92E8D3FE	." The author wants to explore it no matter how dangerous venus is it's like earth and if so they want to see if there is people living on venus and if there like us since humans could live there. Reseachers can't take gas or rock samples from venus so that is why no matter how dangerous venus it's so interesting for the author. The astronomers are planning visit so they can see the different things on venus or the earth like things on venus. The dangers of venus aren't dangerous to astronomers they are just challeneges.	Evidence	Adequate
ef34e93a9416	C33B92E8D3FE	Why is venus called the evening star? Well it is as know as that because it is one of the brightest points of light.	Evidence	Ineffective
143f057dfff3	C33B92E8D3FE	Or the twin of earth. Venus and earth are just like each other same density, size, the closest distance. They both could have humans living on both planets.	Evidence	Adequate
ee8fe621ef31	C33B92E8D3FE	That is why the author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers it presents.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
9a63a9b8713b	C3EEDCA21B42	Warm air and salty hair, whats better than summer? Nothing! Summer is all about swimming, sleeping and hanging out at the pool with friends. However, that all ends in august, when it's back to waking up at six o'clock in the morning and all that awful hoemwork. Would'nt it be nice if there was a way students could adjust to school without physically beging there?	Lead	Effective
dc2f66a5f43d	C3EEDCA21B42	Teachers should design summer projects to help with this very issue,	Position	Adequate
bdc658b5f79a	C3EEDCA21B42	it prepares students for the upcoming cirriculum	Claim	Effective
a9fc72f11ba0	C3EEDCA21B42	aids students in adjusting to their teaching style	Claim	Effective
1c089bc732b1	C3EEDCA21B42	it will help students get back into the swing of school.	Claim	Effective
9b92c3dd73f8	C3EEDCA21B42	Going back to school after summer break isnt fun for teacher or students, nor is it easy. Having a summer project may seem dreadful, however it can actually be very benefital. As students age into their next year of school the cirriculum gets harder and harder. Having a project to help ease them into their next year of school would alliveate the anxious feelings surrounding that course. In fact, many students are taking advanced placement courses, surrounding those advanced courses is stress and anxiety, a project designed by their advanced placement teacher will help prepare them in what to expect for the year ahead.	Evidence	Effective

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When you tell a friend about your feeeling by the look on her face. Some people can tell that when you are upset or even more. It depends on the people. Da Vinci stuided human anatomy to help him painy facial muscles precisely enough to have emotions in the paintings. The new softwat stores similar anatomical information as elctronic code.

Evidence

Adequate

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when you look at the mona lisa it brings a smile to your face

Claim

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It shows you how much a computer can do. The computer knows when you are sad and happy. It's like a dog knowing when you are upset or happy.

Evidence

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Not everything should be abe to be on the computer alot of things aren't even on the paper. It's all online. It take a lot of emotions. When you paint monia lisa you are puting emotions on the way that it being painted. It can be different on every painting but it shows more emotions then having it online. When working online with emotions. When it's online it not how it done. The computer is doing with what some people want. Emotions shouldn't be read by computer becuse they do mess up and someone would have to fix what the computer picks out. emotions should be painted or drawed out on a paper not on a screen that you can easily delete. When on paper make a mistake then easer it. It shows maybe using the coumputer's can mess what they want.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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I agree all students must partticipate in at leasat one extracurricular activity at school,

Position

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it's good for them

Claim

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they can spend more they'er time at school playing sport or doing some other activity like math clup or working on the school yearbook any other cluping or activity, and help student learn more new stuff.

Claim

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students could leaen more about sports an be healther and know how to play it other thing is that they can do there homework at school if they cant do it at home or if they have no one at the house to help them. participate at schools activity something that all school should have and make students have a better guatction in there furcht and help how to become good person later in life.

Evidence

Adequate

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The most importent thing about participate to school activity is you can spend time with your friend and teacher and your principal too, and it help students with there grades too.

Claim

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Not all students have or must participate to school activity, but is there choses rather they want to or not but i thing is impoent to partticipate an actiticy at school is for there good.

Concluding Statement

Ineffective

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The author supports their idea very well.

Position

Ineffective

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The story is very convincing to start off. The authornmakes sure to mention a lot of evidence to back up his/her statements. The author mentions a lot of facts with another fact to prove it is true. The author did good with trying to get their point across because of all the points they made to back up his statement.

Evidence

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The reason I think the author did good is because the author seemed to know what they were talking about.

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The author mentions how Venus is most alike to Earth. Also that is just one of the many statements the author makes. The author had also used other statements to compare to why we could go to Venus. The author even gave their own idea on what think is possible. The author uses plenty of facts to help his idea and what he/she is trying to say. The author even says how NASA is working on approachesto study Venus and that helps make the essay even better. The author does not see his idea as a risk and more as a challenge. The author seeing it as a challenge shows he confidence in his idea. The author also uses how Venus has so many things alike with earth that it should be explored.

Evidence

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So all in all the author made a good essay and did well supporting his idea. The author was consistent with his/her idea. The author made sure to use important facts to support their idea. The author was well rounded and did not seemed biased with their idea and was very convincing with what they said.

Concluding Statement

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Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Mona Lisa is a Painting that is drawn by the use of color painting and other handful material, when humans are drawing with their hand and feelings it shows the facial expression and emoyion of the drawing

Lead

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Technology cannot be used to express humans feelins or emotions, even with what is installed in it.

Position

Adequate

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With the use of technology, the facial expression and emotion of Mona Lisa and even other drawing emotions and feelings cannot be expressed because technology has no feelings or emotions, also emtoins cannot be calculated, "Hold on! Can we actually "calculate" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?".

Evidence

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Technology cannot express feelings to human, so it cannot be used to calculate human emotional expression.

Claim

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In technology, the human muscles, 3-D computer model of the face and all major humans muscles are installed in the computer, "The process begins when the computer constructa 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit". Technology should not be use to paint or even draw because technology cannot express human feelings and behavior.

Evidence

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The use of technology to read emotions expressions of student in the classroom is not valueable because technology can never calculate the feelings or expression of humans.

Claim

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In conclusion to the use of technology to calculate humans emotional expression. Technology cannot calculate humans expressions because humans emotion and facial expression varies from time to time and based on what there are seeing and feeling at the moment, so technology cannot calculate human expressions. If technology can calculate humans feelings the our phone or other electronics devices should have been able to tell us where we want to go to at a particular moment, and be able to know when calls should come in or not.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Luke Bomberger became a Seagoing Cowboy he helps people whose lives had been affected by World War ll.

Lead

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Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime, as he says in paragraph one. Luke also wanted to help others who had been affected by World War ll.

Position

Adequate

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Luke crossed the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times and the Pacific Ocean twice, to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and much more as it says in paragraph two. Even though it was a long journey across the oceans and the waters were rough

Evidence

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Luke loved being a Seagoing Cowboy and he loved to help the people.

Claim

Adequate

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Some people would probably refuse to go to another country that had just been through war some people would say it was to risky and unsafe well it is, some people might say that it is too dangerous to cross the ocean

Counterclaim

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Luke felt that these were things that he needed to do and is something that is important to him.

Rebuttal

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Luke also got to visit many great places in between his journeys

Claim

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he got to see many different places such as the Panama Canal on his way to China in paragraph five Luke says that "seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special" and "so was taking a gondola ride in Venice , Italy a city with streets of water. Luke thought that it was all so great.

Evidence

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But some people might say that they wouldnt go there because once again it's just too dangerous or that if they wanted to go there then they definetly not go on a boat and they would much more want to fly there

Counterclaim

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Well once again that is their opinion and Luke was happy the way that he went and was happy that he could see it and that he go to experience the jouney.

Rebuttal

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Luke loves being a Seagoing Cowboy he loves all the sights, all the help that he can give to these other people, and that he could have this opportunity in life.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy has a lot of ups and downs but the ups are accually pretty cool

Position

Adequate

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You might find an uncharted island and make a lot of money off of it.

Claim

Ineffective

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You would see interesting and cool places while you were travleing to the destination. I have always wanted to go to Ireland but i dont think that i will ever go there... Unless i become a SeaGoing Cowboy of corse!

Evidence

Adequate

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You get a lot of excersise by traveling a lot.

Claim

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If you are the kind or person who really likes to travel, then you would like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy. You get a chance to be on a boat in the open sea. I would really like to be a SeaGoing Cowboy because your always out at sea and i love the ocean, i could live on the ocean if I could.

Evidence

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You would try new things on the on the way

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you would land on countries or islands that you have always wanted to go to. You might also get respect from the other landgoers. I mean, who wouldn't like to have respect from other people! (Plus you get an awesome name)

Evidence

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So try it, it might be your kind of thing, or maybe you could just sit around at home doing dishes, chopping logs or something, Who knows maybe you will become a SeaGoing Cowboy one day.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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the author is right in this passage because in paragraph 8 nassa is trying to shut down all the towers

Position

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the author about this story he wishes nassa could go away but that will be inpossonle

Claim

Ineffective

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these differences from nassa are in speed mars and other times to venus because venus is sometimes around the corner cloud drapped world

Evidence

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each previous mission is unmanned and for a good reason cause nassa can handle there men unmanned they all survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why venus spaceship hasnt touched down in almost 3 decades

Evidence

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So nassa is concerned about venus spaceship

Claim

Ineffective

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A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. if our sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing futher visits to its surface

Evidence

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there wasting there time for all the importanty of nassa.

Claim

Ineffective

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the surfce was rockey and couldnt be walled on because of that reason or drove on there was mountains and craters furthermore. the nationL aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.

Evidence

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According to the LA Times, 253 million vehicles are on the roads in the US. Since there are so many cars on the road, safety is a pressing issue for the American public. At first it was concern over seatbelts, then drinking and driving, and now it is cell phone usage while driving. Since the rise of cell phones, more cases of drivers crashing due to being distracted by their phones.

Lead

Effective

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Due to this, it should not be allowed for individuals to use their phones

Position

Effective

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they have increased the risk of crashes

Claim

Effective

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fatalites

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injuries.

Claim

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It was reported by Edgarsnyder. com, that according to the National Safety Council, 1.6 million crashes are caused by cell phones every year.

Claim

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This displays the danger that cell phones pose to the everyday driver. And the danger only becomes more clear when one compares the cell phone crashes to the total number of crashes per year. According to USA Today, out of all the crashes that happen in the United States everyday, 1 out of 4 are caused by cell phones. These statistics are exactly what shows how dangerous cell phones can be. Distracted driving is one of the main sources of crashes and they are a danger to the modern driver.

Evidence

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Edgarsynder. com reports that every year, 390,000 people are injured in cell phone related incidents on the road.

Claim

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Distracted driving has now become more dangerous than drunk driving. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, 101,000 more people are injured by distracted driving than drunk driving. This clearly demonstrates the inherent danger cell phones displaywhen drivers use them. And since this past time is so dangerous, insurance for those have been caught texting and driving are paying the price. In a report posted by TheZebra. com, in 2011 the penalty for texting and driving was $2.35 added to the premium price. In 2017, the fine added was $226.36. That is an increase of 7,944% in the penalty price. So not only is distracted driving dangerous for the drivers' life, it is also dangerous for the drivers' wallet as well.

Evidence

Effective

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In a article posted by the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA), 3,166 people a year are killed because they were texting and driving.

Claim

Effective

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That is almost half the number people killed due to drunk driving, which also according to the NHTSA, is 7,000 people a year. Edgarsnyder. com reported that 21% of all fatal teen crashes are caused by distracted driving. The action of using cell phones while driving is not only an unnecessary risk to the American public's safety, it does not seem to have an impact on how dangerous it is to the teens of America. Also mentioned by Edgarsnyder. com, AAA conducted a survey in which 94% of teens said they knew that texting and driving is dangerous, but 35% of those teens said they did it regardless of how dangerous it was. This shows just how little the youth of America know about the dangers of distracted driving.

Evidence

Effective

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The NHTSA says that at any given time, 660,000 people are using their cell phones while they drive. This means that 660,000 Americans are gambling with their lives. Distracted driving is a epidemic in America, and it should not be allowed under any circumstances. It is a deadly and costly endeavour that does not have any benefit to those who choose to participate in this affair. Texting and driving is illegal for a reason, because it has been proven that it should not be done.

Concluding Statement

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The use of technology can be operated for many different reasons. Is technology valuable for emotional expressions of students in a classroom? Everyone has their own opinion in the use of technology based on facial expressions.

Lead

Adequate

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In my opinion, I believe reading emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.

Position

Adequate

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This can be taught as if you we're being instructed by math.

Evidence

Ineffective

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You may be thinking to yourself "How can this be possible for a computer to be recognized by a facial expression?"

Claim

Adequate

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According to the passage, the computer process begins using a 3-D computer model of the face. The appromixate number of 44 muscles must move just like a human. A man, Dr. Paul Eckman created six different emotions such as, happy, surprised, angry, sad, fear, and disgust. Then each characteristic would be assocaiated by the moventment of the facial muscles.

Evidence

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This technology can be helpful for students because of new emotion-recognized software tracks these facial movements

Claim

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By weighting the different units, the software can identified by the using mixed emotions. Each emotion is compared against neutral face, in other words no expression shown. You can tell the difference of a person's face of how they're feeling just by looking at their face.

Evidence

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But they might alsp, have other feelings within inside them. The new software stories similar anatomical information as an electic code.

Evidence

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Having a extracurricular activity will actaully help you out in life ,if you put in effort you could even get a full-ride to harvard if your an athlete all you have to do is some extracurricular activity and try it. I used to do basketball when i was smaller ,and when i was doing that i met one of the funniest people i've ever met ,and now she became my bestfriend

Lead

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if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity

Claim

Adequate

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get a scholarship.

Claim

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when you go to your activity you'll meet lots of new people ,and slowly you'll start to trust them and them too ,and then boom! your friends ,

Claim

Adequate

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when you try a dress on for example they'll say wow! that looks beautiful on you and then you'll have a much better self-esteem/ more confidence, also when you go to the mall and your looking for jeans for example and you say what about this one? one will say yeah it'll look great on you while others might say it looks fine but this one will look better on you and you'll have different peoples opinions

Evidence

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if you try new things you'll probably find something that you'll actually like,

Claim

Adequate

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like soccer my dad used to teach me how to play soccer but i didn't end up liking it but my cousin did he even ended up traveling the world because of soccer everyone is different i'm not saying that if you try soccer you'll like it but what i'm saying is you should try new things who knows you might end up traveling the world. you might even turn out to be outgoing you'll try something like skydiving something that i've been wanting to do for years or you might even like to do checkers something which i find pretty interesting but who knows only you will know when you try new things.

Evidence

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if you were doing football and you were really good you would most likely get a scholarship to a really good school and play for their team and if you put that on your resume ,

Claim

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that job is like athletic or anything in general then your most likely gonna get the job, scholarships are good for your resume but their also good because your perants would be so proud that you got that scholarship all your friends and teachers would show some respect too.

Evidence

Adequate

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in overall i agree, i think that students should do extracurricular activity

Position

Adequate

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cause it can actually help them allot like if you stay for afterschool you can learn more, and if you do a sport and you try your best im sure you can achieve anything in life. if you would like your life to be amazing when you grow up you should try a extracurricular activity and get a scholarship.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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You may belive that it was aliens that created this "face" on mars, Where is your proof to support that eveidence

Lead

Ineffective

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The face could just be a natural landform like many other things like we have found out about.

Position

Adequate

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Whats your proof that its aliens, Becasue when we have circled the rest of the planet we have not found civilizations or colonies of alien life.

Claim

Ineffective

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For instensts a metior could have just hit the planet in that spot leaving a mark that looked like a human face leaving you to belive this. There could be aliens out there but there is no proof that we have them in our universe yet, There are many diffrent reasons why there could be natrual causes as to why it would look like there is a face on the planet.

Evidence

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Mars has clouds around its planet and other planets do that may be where aliens hide and have there villiages. You beliveing in them could be correct but also wrong at the same time. We just dont know what could have caused that face on mars aliens, natural formation, crator. You maybe belive this because even the scientist have gotten the false imput that they were real and that this was a aien artifact

Evidence

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We jsut have no evidence proveing wether or not this is an alien artifact or its just a natual landform.

Concluding Statement

Ineffective

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Why would the author ignore the dangers of venus

Lead

Ineffective

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The author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.

Position

Adequate

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Because of how hot it is it's very dangerous .

Evidence

Ineffective

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" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system ." The author has believed that the ,"Conditions aren't easy but humans can survive in venus

Claim

Adequate

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." The author wants to explore it no matter how dangerous venus is it's like earth and if so they want to see if there is people living on venus and if there like us since humans could live there. Reseachers can't take gas or rock samples from venus so that is why no matter how dangerous venus it's so interesting for the author. The astronomers are planning visit so they can see the different things on venus or the earth like things on venus. The dangers of venus aren't dangerous to astronomers they are just challeneges.

Evidence

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Why is venus called the evening star? Well it is as know as that because it is one of the brightest points of light.

Evidence

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Or the twin of earth. Venus and earth are just like each other same density, size, the closest distance. They both could have humans living on both planets.

Evidence

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That is why the author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers it presents.

Concluding Statement

Adequate

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Warm air and salty hair, whats better than summer? Nothing! Summer is all about swimming, sleeping and hanging out at the pool with friends. However, that all ends in august, when it's back to waking up at six o'clock in the morning and all that awful hoemwork. Would'nt it be nice if there was a way students could adjust to school without physically beging there?

Lead

Effective

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Teachers should design summer projects to help with this very issue,

Position

Adequate

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it prepares students for the upcoming cirriculum

Claim

Effective

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aids students in adjusting to their teaching style

Claim

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it will help students get back into the swing of school.

Claim

Effective

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Going back to school after summer break isnt fun for teacher or students, nor is it easy. Having a summer project may seem dreadful, however it can actually be very benefital. As students age into their next year of school the cirriculum gets harder and harder. Having a project to help ease them into their next year of school would alliveate the anxious feelings surrounding that course. In fact, many students are taking advanced placement courses, surrounding those advanced courses is stress and anxiety, a project designed by their advanced placement teacher will help prepare them in what to expect for the year ahead.

Evidence

Effective