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e66951e39d4e | C5C6DED9C790 | ''paris bans driving due to smog''that is the most dangerous part in driving cars when it smog in the air ,people have 55 percent chance to got yourself killing or cars crash. this idea was the greatest idea ever. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cb4d5c3ef73e | C5EDEF3A8C35 | Classes nationwide usually have a required summer assignment. Whether it is reading a book, solving math equations, or writing a paper. The teachers hand pick and choose certain tasks for each subject. Teachers give out homework to keep their students always in check of their knowledge. | Lead | Adequate |
c93e4c336ebe | C5EDEF3A8C35 | teachers should design the summer work | Position | Adequate |
16a8fe0ab171 | C5EDEF3A8C35 | it allows caters to their classroom experience, | Claim | Effective |
2d194c4ed201 | C5EDEF3A8C35 | it lets students know the expectations in the class, | Claim | Effective |
27aa08316bb8 | C5EDEF3A8C35 | students are opened up with new knowledge. | Claim | Effective |
705d18c5d226 | C5EDEF3A8C35 |
Every teacher is made differently; their way of presenting and showing materials differ. Therefore, teachers should make their own homework for the students. For example, if a student make a study guide for a test verses a teacher, who's will be more effective and useful? This is very obvious however, it clears up the air. Teachers make the classroom's atmosphere and lead the class to its maximum success. To expand, imagine if there were no teachers,only students teaching each other. Frankly, it would be chaotic and a disaster. The teachers are there to keep students in check and to create lesson plans and work for the students: to know how the well students are doing. Students do not check how well the teachers do because as students they receive the knowledge while the teachers pass it on to them.
| Evidence | Effective |
cc3bb929353c | C5EDEF3A8C35 | If the teacher sets an example such as the summer assignments, students can see what type of expectation that teacher and subject has for them. It allows students to see what the teacher has to offer them. If the students make their own image of the class, it could be a hard adjustment for both the student and the teacher. For example, a student comes into AP Environmental Science with a bright colored poster, hardly any sentences and fill with visual diagrams, that student came in with a mindset of expecting that class was going to be visual filled, but in reality, they take notes and notes on end. However, if the teacher assigned to each student that they will be needing to watch a documentary and have notes filled out, every student will come in knowing the rigorousness of the class. If students were allowed to freestyle and choose their own assignment, the likelihood of them knowing the expectation of the class is close to nothing. Like so, using the teacher, can expose the students to the class before stepping in it. | Evidence | Effective |
70f39349b22d | C5EDEF3A8C35 | If a student wrote a summer assignment paper about what they thoroughly know, it does not teach them anything new. They are not receiving any new information, but on the contrary, if they were exposed to a new topic and researched about it, they would be able to retain new information and learn more. It could lead the students to more success to; if they are opened to new ideas and points of views, the student will learn more and be able to grow in knowledge rather than be stuck in the same perspective that they are in. For example, if a student was bias against the creation of country clubs and corporate made communities, but was to read about why those were created due to an assignment, he or she may have a shift in perspective and mind. This does not apply that he or she has changed their mind, but it has opened up their knowledge and gave them a fuller picture rather than it magnified.
Regardless, if students like the subject of research, or not, that practice will help them grow in writing, reading, and critical thinking skills as well. This increase in knowledge applies to when the teacher is designing the assignments. | Evidence | Effective |
b6a31b65b076 | C5EDEF3A8C35 | the teachers knows best. Every teacher creates worksheets or something for a particular reason, they do not give anything away without reason, and that is the same with the summer assignments. The teachers makes these because they want the students to be able to know and continue on retaining the lessons. It allows teachers to give students a heads up on the future needs, lets students know what type of teaching style they are getting into, and it increases minds and helps students grow for the future. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
672ffa794f44 | C6204A4BFD65 | You know what i do agree on what this article is saying why because people tend to use their cars all the time and yea what if we live far from town ok thats fine but i see people in my naighborhood driving two streets down just to hang out with there friends when one could simply just i mean put it this way | Lead | Adequate |
8678691030b3 | C6204A4BFD65 | if we were to drive less | Position | Ineffective |
e912d40b7331 | C6204A4BFD65 | we would limit accidents | Claim | Adequate |
041d0e64baaf | C6204A4BFD65 | tickets, | Claim | Adequate |
29b3bd2a0df6 | C6204A4BFD65 | polution | Claim | Adequate |
d43541f7442f | C6204A4BFD65 | You might ask your self how would this limit accidents well say you were driving one night to your best friend jeffs house and jeff lives three streets but you wanted to get there faster and the car on the oppisite lane the driver falls asleep and all of a sudden boom!! you dont know what just happen think about you could of been dead right in that instant but if you would of walked no accident you could of dodged the car. | Evidence | Adequate |
50555452b148 | C6204A4BFD65 | Tickets and people might say " man, police be racist pulling me over for know reason and now i have to pay a fine and go to court" no buddy you were pulled over because you were being stupid on the road trying to act cool in front of your friend but see maybe if you where riding a bike or walking you probaly would of never got pulled over and wouldnt have to pay a fine.
| Evidence | Adequate |
80bfff8416e7 | C6204A4BFD65 | Less polution polution is really bad in alot of countries i mean its so bad that its kind of hard to breathe i mean it would suck if yoy were on vacation in the carrabians trying to enjoy a nice tropical day outside but you can't why because you can bearly breathe with all that polluted air around so yea. | Evidence | Adequate |
e2f0b7cd9712 | C6204A4BFD65 | its not hard to ride a bike or to get a electric scooter or a moped or walk it benefits you and our earth i mean i agree with driving just to places you need to go like traval or grocrey shopping not to race act dumb or black smoke people i we made a don't drive your car week it would really benefit our earth alot. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cc74ed80cb9e | C620D8B8466B | About twenty-five years ago, something happened around Mars. NASA, snapped photos of the object. On Mars, there is a face printed on the plant. People think it was created by aliens. NASA said it was created on it's own. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa. Those are common around Cydonia. A couple of days later NASA saw a nose, eyes, and a mouth. | Lead | Effective |
33fffff1cf39 | C620D8B8466B | Everyone belived it to be a face of an alien, but NASA said it's just a face on Mars.
| Position | Adequate |
fb9c90a24f72 | C620D8B8466B | The face on Mars has become a popular icon. It has starred in Hollywood films, appeared in books, magazines and more | Evidence | Ineffective |
09eb9de1db69 | C620D8B8466B | Some people think the face is "bona fide" evidence of life on Mars | Counterclaim | Adequate |
f6f6162fe4d4 | C620D8B8466B | Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars | Rebuttal | Adequate |
19ad86f70055 | C620D8B8466B | The face, is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98. | Evidence | Adequate |
35d01ae20f25 | C620D8B8466B | Mission controllers prepared to look again. Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the plant like a fax machine. Thousand of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site. | Evidence | Adequate |
b9136c68f6d9 | C620D8B8466B | The pictures were revealing a natural landform | Claim | Adequate |
c2c3899d0f56 | C620D8B8466B | Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, com[ared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.
"As a rule of thumb, you can discern thinkgs in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size". In egyptia-style prramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were! There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Proupulsion Lab when the face apperared on their moniters. NASA, a few days later, unveiled the image for all to see. The authors thought it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. | Evidence | Adequate |
ebaeaa51fe36 | C620D8B8466B | What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa. Landforms common around American West. People say thst it's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
22fbac70d65a | C6C49435744E | The idea of useing technology to read students emotions can have two different sides to it.
People can like or hate this subjuect | Position | Ineffective |
f36a0091a7ca | C6C49435744E | because it could cause alot of problems for that student ifthat student dose want to talk to the school oficals about something thats going on with them then | Evidence | Adequate |
4fb2917982d2 | C6C49435744E | studensts shouldnt have to talk to school aoficlas about their personal problems. | Claim | Adequate |
b5e82bb74f1e | C6C49435744E | The other way this could go is that useing this machine or whatever it could be to read students emotions could be a way to try to stop the student suicides. | Claim | Adequate |
7d56a56dbf7d | C6C49435744E | The ways that this argument would go could have many many problems even getting into the school. | Claim | Adequate |
542d063bbf1d | C6C49435744E | The way that the school would have to use this if the students would not want to talk would be an evation of privacy which is against school reguations and is against the law.
In order to get this into the schoolsthey would have to get this past through not only the board of dirctors but through hte court to because of the way that they would have to use this machine they would have to have it pasted through the court system and have them say that thaey agree to allow this to happen and alow them to invade peoples privacy in hope of helping them with what is going on in their presonal life that they are having trouble with. | Evidence | Adequate |
a01105b65ba8 | C6C49435744E | The other way that this argument could go is that the way that the machine could help | Claim | Adequate |
86ff184c0568 | C6C49435744E | it would give the people that dont want to ask for help or are scared to ask for it a chance to be helped and a chance to be saved form whatever they would try to do to themselves. | Evidence | Adequate |
202f45df3129 | C6C49435744E | This machine could help stop bulling this machine could also stop alot of the student suicides that happen every year because students are afriad to speak up and they dont think that doing so could ever help them. | Evidence | Adequate |
977f2a99d749 | C6C49435744E | The different sides of this argument have very imortant details.
The way that is could hurt or help students is something that really should be looked at.
If it helps more than it hurts it should be looked into because that could mean alot of saved lifes. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
88d466cb405c | C71DC2FEAD0C | The new software can make 3-D models based off your face, to be able to do this software need to have fine accuracy. the software could identify humans emotions, but should be used in some cases. As in making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. | Lead | Ineffective |
cbc32a7e4b1e | C71DC2FEAD0C | What they shouldnt be allowed to do, is to choose certein ads and tv shows based off your emotions. | Position | Adequate |
632df873eb50 | C71DC2FEAD0C | The new software is a compter that can know someones emotions just baseed off of one photo, or painting. This compter has such fine accuracy that it can make 3-D animated faces by the 44 major muscles thats in your face. This compter can know weather if your happy, surprised, anger, etc. This makes it easier for game designers to create people with better expressive faces, can help with video surgery. | Evidence | Ineffective |
11b971727068 | C71DC2FEAD0C | The desgners of the computer also want it to show peolpe ads based off the peoples emotions, weather if there sad, happy, mad, etc. | Claim | Adequate |
ce048810e842 | C71DC2FEAD0C | This would make people more incline to buy something based off there emotions. Which shouldn't be allowed, beacuse the computer could take control over peoples wants and there needs based off there emotions. | Evidence | Adequate |
2bd01462cca4 | C71DC2FEAD0C | This also is a lake of privite life, meaning that, beacuse your computer is scanning your face to "finger out your emotions" it also have a copy of your face. Which if people can get a hold that, they would have personal info | Claim | Adequate |
701cd484fe9f | C71DC2FEAD0C | For example, with the new Iphone X. you can unlock your phone by putting your camera towards face. so if you happen to fall asleep, someone could get a hold of your phone and unlock it by putting it towards your face. | Evidence | Adequate |
d036dfae792e | C71DC2FEAD0C | In conclusion the new computer software is a great creation which could help with computer animation and video surgery. But shouldn't be allowed to be used for ads, to make people but stuff based off there emotions. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ed371a731530 | C71F197DD70A | I beileve the author supports this acticle very well humans could survive on Venus. It would take time and work but I beileve it could happen. | Position | Adequate |
d5ac071ae6bd | C71F197DD70A | Often referred to as Earth's "twin," Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c319782cb526 | C71F197DD70A | These diffrences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. The Harsh tempatures and low air pressure the raidation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
46481a4e6567 | C71F197DD70A | NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplifed electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted weeks in such condtions.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
e57152994c58 | C71F197DD70A | Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On planet's surface tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. | Evidence | Ineffective |
86fa6af4b51a | C71F197DD70A | Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our solar system, though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on it's surface. If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronmers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. | Evidence | Ineffective |
70f4c42cb302 | C71F197DD70A | In conclusion I believe humans could live on Venus unless It orbits too close to the sun it could get to hot. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dnagers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Would you want to live on Venus with the high tempatures and low air pressure? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e47c1ddb2dc3 | C7373B980F7E | Why call it extracurricular when you are required to do it? | Lead | Adequate |
029d7a2062f1 | C7373B980F7E | I disagree that you have to stay after school | Position | Adequate |
a36d0bb1e806 | C7373B980F7E | what if you have a job | Claim | Adequate |
31b6ca67e4f4 | C7373B980F7E | parents are divorced | Claim | Adequate |
7b97d8eb4deb | C7373B980F7E | have no time to chill with friends | Claim | Adequate |
01ff591fa152 | C7373B980F7E | if you have to walk home with your siblings.
| Claim | Adequate |
345ed08d6dd5 | C7373B980F7E | What if you have a job then you would not be able to sat after. | Claim | Adequate |
11a5fe5a5370 | C7373B980F7E | The reason why you can't stay after is if you have a job you have to get ready, you have to take a shower. You might even have to do choirs if your parents give you some when you come home from school then you have to leave for work and on top of that you might have to do homework. | Evidence | Adequate |
76f3b42a6249 | C7373B980F7E | What if your parents are divorced. | Claim | Adequate |
af9a4498d7ee | C7373B980F7E | If your parents are divorced then then you might not be able to see your mom and your dad as much. Without being able to see your parents as much that will leave you and your parents depressed do to the mental health problems that occurs when your parents divorce. | Evidence | Adequate |
85b01e5ddce0 | C7373B980F7E | If you are required to stay after school then you wont have as much time to hang out with your friends. | Claim | Adequate |
41be049df90d | C7373B980F7E | When you are at school for so long you get anxious because all you are doing is traveling to room to room all day then they add even more time to the day its just bound to have more frequent fights. But not only that you dont get to see your friends as much because by the time you are getting home its becoming dark outside | Evidence | Adequate |
b80ed3a28e62 | C7373B980F7E | When you have to stay after you can't walk your siblings to your house. | Claim | Adequate |
86440fe262b7 | C7373B980F7E | The nice thing about getting off ealer then the elementary school kids is when you get out of school you can walk to there school then wait for your siblings. But if you are required to stay after school then you cant walk them to the house which would mean that they would walk by them self or a parent would have to quit there job to make sure there child gets home safely. | Evidence | Adequate |
c72f404af989 | C7373B980F7E | You should not make it required to stay after school because we might have a job,parents that are divorced,wont have much time to chill, and our siblings might have to walk there house by them self. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
65002a85a809 | C74CBEFD0B9E | There are many ways to limiting car usage | Position | Ineffective |
f1e4ca2189d5 | C74CBEFD0B9E | it would be better for the enviorment | Claim | Adequate |
4192fa467acc | C74CBEFD0B9E | more cash in ur poket | Claim | Adequate |
f5c6715b768f | C74CBEFD0B9E | useing less gas | Evidence | Adequate |
78f83f495c71 | C74CBEFD0B9E | it would be much safer for your if it gona have a cerfiu. | Claim | Ineffective |
2d9dfd2d39ce | C74CBEFD0B9E | getting to places faster | Claim | Adequate |
62f8f34f72b2 | C74CBEFD0B9E | If you dont have one you have to walk which means exersicse so youd be in better shape then in all the car riders | Claim | Effective |
680a6c561de2 | C74CBEFD0B9E | youd also have more money because with no car you dont have to buy no 40,000 parking spot or waste money on gass ever week and a half | Evidence | Adequate |
b88e3064730c | C74CBEFD0B9E | youd e saving the enviorment by not realysing toxic fumes in to our atmosphere which creates global warning which mealts the ice in our poles and your basicly killing pinguens. dont be a pinguen killer. | Evidence | Adequate |
33312df8b2d3 | C74CBEFD0B9E | i think if they were to put a cerfui on driving out at night time less bad stuff would happen let me explain my self. If i somthing were to happen to me like getting kid naped and i dont retuen home by 3;30 yor gona knoe somthing is wrong and maybe it might even save my life.
then our goverment could make money by giving us tickets but hopefully its not a lot because ufortuanetly not every one has a little cash in there pockets like some of us do.
If in case it past the curfui and u need to get home you could just walk home or have the cops take you home beause all cops are free taxis. If you didnt know. its aslo totaly free. cops arnt just here to give you tickets. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d2b7515628c8 | C79753F72EF8 | If it was an object created by aliens then why would they turn that landform into a human face. There have never been any reports of someone coming close to an alien face to face. Also how would the aliens know what humans look like, they have never even been to earth before | Lead | Adequate |
315580af4513 | C79753F72EF8 | All that face is, is a rock with shadows from the sun to make illusions to the human eye. | Position | Adequate |
03aa2e3d0bd1 | C79753F72EF8 | The face was used in grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! | Evidence | Ineffective |
d3b7f9313fdb | C79753F72EF8 | you may think think aliens did it and there is a chance they did, but that chance is very slim | Claim | Adequate |
25a5ed5e122a | C79753F72EF8 | yes, some scientist did believe it was an alien artifact but that was before they had HD cameras and now we can see the rock clearly. Garvin said that "If there were objects in that picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were". | Evidence | Adequate |
b87f1b099162 | C79753F72EF8 | In conclusion, there is no evidence that aliens have created that face and if there was, NASA would do all that it could to prove it a farce. Do not believe everyhting you see online or in books. You might just become too attatched to that topic. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b8d5d3659aa1 | C7AD757540AE | The facial action coding can be used in good ways and in bad ways | Lead | Adequate |
f95e737d6ed2 | C7AD757540AE | It can also be all up in peoples personal bussiness and maybe people don want that | Claim | Adequate |
0413ca1a284b | C7AD757540AE | dont want you knowing all about their life. | Claim | Adequate |
ef2636e02508 | C7AD757540AE | The technology is getting too advanced and people are starting to feel uncomfortable because they cant hide any secrets or any feelings that they have | Claim | Adequate |
b881cc518f06 | C7AD757540AE | the technology is getting so advanced that one day someone will make sonething that can read your mind or etc. This machine can only be valuable on some occasions like when someone says that they want you to know their emotions and how they are feeling then they will tell you theirelves you dont need a machine to do it. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e1622749989b | C7AD757540AE | Becuase then you will be all in their business and people dont like that | Claim | Ineffective |
9f87395e0f8c | C7AD757540AE | They want their personal space and they want their thoughts to be kept to theirselves without the whole world knowing or people knwoing what is wrong with them and what their thoughts are. This machine does not need to be bulit because people can just tell you how they feel you dont have to go make a machine to knwo.
If they wanted you to know then they can tell you theirselve. | Evidence | Adequate |
c9ba7c8ff3ed | C7AD757540AE | People can use this machine uncontrolbaly and it could get out of hand and share more things then it was suppose to and that could make people feel uncomfortable and not so happy | Claim | Ineffective |
c5189b6d3f7f | C7AD757540AE | Also if other people found out your secrets and things they can get spreaded and start rumors and other things that can be bad for you.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
c2b98cec8f3f | C7AD757540AE | I would not want this machine in my life | Position | Adequate |
f966e46d350d | C7AD757540AE | because i dont want people reading everything that i have and everyday because its my buiness and if i want to share it then i will. I want to keep everything to myself and not let anything get spreaded around and make my life worst or bad because of it. | Evidence | Adequate |
6a048c877807 | C7AD757540AE | If you want people to have good lives then you dont need these kind of things in the world. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e4fa3bd4d752 | C7FA88E9DF3B | Have you ever been assigned a project that you did not want to work on? This regularly happens to many students, due to a variety of reasons. Although summer projects are slightly different than those assigned during the school year, they cause similar problems. The student might have been lazy, did not have enough time to work on the project, or the topic did not interest them. While schools cannot help much with the former two reasons, they can with the latter reason. Teacher-designed projects can be biased, affecting the student's ability to gain a wide understanding of a topic. Additionally, teachers tend to assign projects on topics that students do not see much importance in, as the topic does not seem to affect the student in any way. | Lead | Effective |
7ddd3a05c50f | C7FA88E9DF3B | For these reasons, summer projects should be student-designed | Position | Effective |
3e15ebdca1ac | C7FA88E9DF3B | to allow students to be more passionate about the project, | Claim | Adequate |
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