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64abb0fb5804 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | According to NHTSA it is by 3x. you also could get fined for at least $20 to thousands of dollars depending on what state you are in.
More then 10% of teens get into car crashes. You can hit people in the street. You can hit another car and you can kill people while doing it. | Evidence | Adequate |
f63bf024294e | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | All country's have laws on texting and driving. | Claim | Adequate |
d3ec20a86123 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | Alabama its you have to pay $25 dollars on ticket. Arizona you have to pay $75-$149. In GA you have to pay $50 on ticket.
On paragraph 6 on From https://behavioralscientist. org it say. When you are engaged in conversation, be it on a call or texting-or even with someone else in the car-your attention is divided. And as fallible humans, we only have so much attention to spare.
| Evidence | Adequate |
595745bbea7c | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | In fact, while there are very few magic numbers in life, there is a magic number associated with how many things we can attend to at once. And it's not a lot.
| Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a21ae5c8b337 | EAED55A47DC5 | The fact that this tecnoligy is avalible to human kind is amizing it can be used in many ways | Position | Ineffective |
651391fe85b8 | EAED55A47DC5 | The passage says that "to an expert faces dont lie these muscle clues are sometime used to spot when a smiling polotition or celebirty isn't being truthfull | Evidence | Adequate |
ee389ed3ed8e | EAED55A47DC5 | its amazing isn't it all we have to do is take a picture and voala we know what the choice is because if he is being truethfull we can say yes he fits but if he is lying we know that we have to make a better choice that just vote on him right of way . | Claim | Ineffective |
81a8f133e920 | EAED55A47DC5 | Can you emagine being able to use this like for more than just polotitions like maybe the presedent or a school teacher a dilinquent or maybe even a spouse. | Claim | Ineffective |
1eef66aac166 | EAED55A47DC5 | this would bring alot of contriversy yes | Counterclaim | Adequate |
015c9218f1d5 | EAED55A47DC5 | but it is stil amazing because they wont have to do much just snap a picture and thee program will caulculate it think about how many crimes this will solve . | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
d3121a9315d1 | EAED55A47DC5 | In conclusion this invention is revolutionary program will have a huge inpact in every social aspect. The world wont be the same every thing will be diffrent because we will now what the presedent is really thinking and when he is lying or when he is scared and then we can better protect our selves . | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
75c9bb5d528d | EAF6BCA737BD | In the article "The Challenge od Exploring Venus," the author states that NASA has a compelling idea to send humans to Venus to study it." | Position | Ineffective |
c7829f5ddddf | EAF6BCA737BD | Their solution to surving the harsh environment would be to float above the fray. Avoiding the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of thier way. | Claim | Adequate |
39d283e9bc49 | EAF6BCA737BD | In paragraph 6 it states that," Researchers cannot take sample of rock,gas or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to uderstand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite therisks." Meeaning that if they want to be able to study Venus from the ground they would have to build something to allow them to safetly gather samples and information first hand. | Evidence | Adequate |
48933ae1194e | EAF6BCA737BD | In paragraph 7 the author mentions that looking back to world war ll they could use mechanical computers instead of using eletcronic ones. | Claim | Adequate |
b5c9fcaa868a | EAF6BCA737BD | The mechanical computers could be made to widthstand the damage of acid,heat and pressure. To test the mechanical computers they can put it through the series of test that they can create in the test chambers to see if they can widthstand it. | Evidence | Adequate |
1d83d69c2364 | EAF6BCA737BD | In conclusion if we wanted to get a closer look at Venus then we would have to send scientist to venus in specially made space crafts to be able to widthstand the dangers of the sulfuric acid in it's atmosphere. n | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7020d427f2aa | EB10F93974CA | This article of ''Making Mona Lisa Smile'' it talks about how a computer seastem can raed student emotional expressions such a Mona lisa emotion. | Lead | Ineffective |
d5f32c8bee75 | EB10F93974CA | This sieastem can recognize emotions whether you're angry, happy, surprise, disgust, fearles and ect. This process begins when the computer constrac a 3-D computer model of the face. all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Action unit are movement of one ore more muscle. Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman wich are the creators of FACS.
Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions; happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle, above your eyes, reased your eyebrows whe you surprise also your orbicularis around your mouth, and tightens your lips to sho anger. This example we can se it in the firts pharaghaph when it talks when shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and r percent angry. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ac6a4140edf7 | EB10F93974CA | And yeah i dont have nothing to arguing because i think the cumputer is a good a idea for student because it can tell whether the emotions are | Position | Ineffective |
7a1237116353 | EB10F93974CA | Thats what i think about this article of ''Making the Mona Lisa smile''. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
08d94bb21f5f | EB3398FD0FF5 | In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author states that exploring Venus would be an immense challenge to overcome due to all of the extremely harsh conditions. Venus, also known as the "Evening Star," is an extremely dangerous planet to explore | Lead | Adequate |
4711b93a580e | EB3398FD0FF5 | Even though scientists are aware of these difficult factors, people like the author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" still think that being informed about this bright point of light is worth it.
| Position | Effective |
1dfa53b923f4 | EB3398FD0FF5 | According to astronomers, Venus may have at one point been the planet with the most Earth-like features. | Claim | Adequate |
40b855fb8785 | EB3398FD0FF5 | Venus is said to now have a "surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." These characteristics are one of the reasons as to why the author states that Venus is a pursuit worth risking many things for. | Evidence | Adequate |
5b7ea80b2d1f | EB3398FD0FF5 | Another reason is because in paragraph 4, the author states "Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit." | Claim | Adequate |
11cfad37eca7 | EB3398FD0FF5 | Although these are all fair reasons to want to visit Venus once again, astronomers have to keep in mind all of the negative characteristics that will set their exploration behind. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c0368e40bb3b | EB3398FD0FF5 | All astronomers and explorers are well aware of all of the challenging conditions such as the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere and the atmospheric pressure being 90 times greater in Venus than the pressure in Earth. These are not the only challenging conditions; another dangerous feature is that temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit in Venus's surface. | Evidence | Adequate |
1f0257e0fde1 | EB3398FD0FF5 | Consequently, the author states in paragraph six that there are now many scienstist searching for technology that will be able to stand the harsh conditions in Venus | Rebuttal | Effective |
359e0afb0d2b | EB3398FD0FF5 | "Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." | Claim | Adequate |
340730bd25ba | EB3398FD0FF5 | In the previous paragraph, the author informs the readers about an idea that NASA has thought of. | Evidence | Ineffective |
119b6be63ee7 | EB3398FD0FF5 | The plan for sending people to study Venus would not give the necessary information to be properly informed of this volatile planet. All of these obstacles are not enough to calm human's desire of knowledge about unearthly topics. In paragraph eight, the author says that all of the challenges are not enough to mellow down our curiosity enough to quit studying Venus. | Evidence | Adequate |
ea16b9f4c4c0 | EB3398FD0FF5 | In conclusion, the claim about Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents that the author of "The Challenges of Exploring Venus" states is well supported by facts and perfectly thought out ideas. Although Venus is an extremely dangerous planet packed with many reasons as to why exploration is currently held back, NASA is still looking for ways to be able to gain more valuable insight about the Evening Star. Just like the author said, learning and travelling should not be limited by doubts, and scientists will not let doubts and fears stop them. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
985233221c04 | EB763115B6CD | Do you use your phone while driving? If you said yes, then you need to stop. If you don't then you may end up dead and if you don't believe me then let me tell you some facts. | Lead | Adequate |
0e4089ff31cd | EB763115B6CD | I don't think people should be able to use their phones while operating a vehicle. | Position | Adequate |
85ea5b9bebc2 | EB763115B6CD | Firstly, driving requires your full attention, but phones compromise this focus. | Claim | Effective |
91cc34a4ed8f | EB763115B6CD | You need to keep both hands on the steering wheel to be the most effective driver. But, every time you text, read messages or talk on a cell phone without a hands-free device, not only is your focus compromised, but you can't keep both hands on the wheel. Phone use when you are driving can also affect your alertness of the surroundings, which can make you prone to collisions. Also, distraction and inattention are the number one cause of traffic accidents and it is estimated that nearly every collision involves one of these two related errors. Driving takes all your attention and it is your responsibility to keep your eyes on the road, so put down the phones and pay attention to the road. | Evidence | Effective |
d957ac9ea61e | EB763115B6CD | Secondly, people who use a cell phone in the car can drive erratically, which puts others at risk | Claim | Effective |
4f99dec4bb13 | EB763115B6CD | They may fail to give the proper signals, miss road signs, change lanes abruptly or respond slowly to hazards. Erratic driving patterns can be extremely dangerous to everyone else on the road, including other drivers, pedestrians, and animals. Also, motorist involved in a stressful or emotional phone conversation may exhibit aggressive behavior while they drive, such as road rage. This may cause the erratic driving to worsen and this greatly increases the chance of causing an accident. So, if checking your phone is going to cause you to get mad and drive like you've got no sense and possibly kill someone, then there's no need in even picking it up. | Evidence | Effective |
6fc94e9ec1d6 | EB763115B6CD |
Lastly, there are now legal ramifications when it comes to using phones while driving. | Claim | Effective |
c58368b50f52 | EB763115B6CD | You can have criminal penalties placed on you such as fines and tickets and depending on if you had an accident and killed someone you may face more serious criminal consequences such as jail time. Driving with a device can cause you to have higher insurance premiums because insurance rates are tied to a driver's driving history and if you get pulled over for using your phone while driving too many times, it could cause your insurance premiums to spike. Also, you can lose your driving privileges because just like your insurance, you accumulate points for your recklessness. So, if you accumulate too many, you can no longer drive. So, unless your like tickets, fines, jail time, or losing your driver's license, I suggest you wait till you get home to check you phone. | Evidence | Effective |
48298b48ac80 | EB763115B6CD |
Well there you have it, everything wrong with using your phone while operating a vehicle. Hopefully, you all learned something from this. Hopefully, what you learned was that you shouldn't use your phone while driving. But, if you haven't, that's fine. Just ask yourself a question for me. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f8eb17944ab6 | EB793B72A8C4 | Extracurricular activities are important for students, and I agree that all students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity. | Position | Adequate |
74669bfa437d | EB793B72A8C4 | Students should try something new instead of doing nothing | Claim | Ineffective |
7055650e1b39 | EB793B72A8C4 | Students can gain a lot from this experience, so I believe that they should participate in them. | Claim | Adequate |
9ab969375513 | EB793B72A8C4 | I think that even if students don't want to participate in these activities, they should because they can learn things that they never knew before, and I think that it could make an impact on their lives. | Claim | Adequate |
b1e2afdc0fef | EB793B72A8C4 | Extracurricular activities are good for students to participate in because they can give you something to do | Claim | Adequate |
5898bb63b092 | EB793B72A8C4 | they can help you meet and befriend new people | Claim | Ineffective |
ded0f3b4f7d9 | EB793B72A8C4 | and they can help kids find potential ideas and hobbies. | Claim | Ineffective |
f81d83b71a4b | EB793B72A8C4 | Extracurricular activities can give you something to do | Claim | Adequate |
88f91e2dc963 | EB793B72A8C4 | Some of my friends go home and do nothing after school. It can get boring to have nothing to do for the remainder of the day. Participating in an after-school activity can pass time and help you to not be bored, especially if you are participating in an activity you enjoy. When I was in elementary school, I went to an after-school art club so I could pass the time doing something that I liked. I also did after-school soccer in the fourth grade, and I started playing volleyball in the fourth grade. I am still playing volleyball to this day. These kinds of activities can give you something to do instead of going on your phone and doing nothing. I have gotten more productive over the past couple of years because I participate in extracurricular activities. I believe that kids can be more productive, and extracurricular activities are a vital way to achieve this goal. Not only is it a good way to spend your time, but it is also a good way to meet people.
| Evidence | Effective |
8d6c46a619a4 | EB793B72A8C4 | Extracurricular activities are a good way to socialize with people because you are participating in activities and games that you enjoy with other people. | Claim | Adequate |
043c305a27c2 | EB793B72A8C4 | You share the same interests, and liking the same things as someone else is a good way to bond and socialize with people. I met a lot of people through after-school volleyball, and I am still friends with most of them to this day. Our team would go out to restaurants after our games whether we won or lost because we were friends, and we liked to play together. We all liked playing the sport, so it was easy to make friends with each other. I also met a lot of people through my art club because we liked to draw, and we liked to talk to each other. If you have trouble making friends, you will most likely be able to socialize and bond with others through these events. I met one of my best friends through after-school dance classes when I was in elementary school. We enjoy dancing and listening to music together. Not only are extracurricular activities able to help you get to know people, but they can also help you find your interests. | Evidence | Effective |
9dbf3e46cc76 | EB793B72A8C4 | Having schools require students to take at least one extracurricular activity can help them find hobbies, and they can help students find things that they didn't know they were interested in | Claim | Adequate |
92fa67c53731 | EB793B72A8C4 | For example, I once convinced my sister to play volleyball. She didn't really want to do it. After school that day, she came to our volleyball practice. She ended up loving the sport, and she also plays it to this day. There are many different activities, such as theater, art, sports, science and math clubs, and the student council. Students are most likely going to find an activity they like and stick with it as they get older. Doing an activity that you enjoy can be very entertaining, and you might keep doing it in the future. I am in my school's eighth grade chorus, and I want to continue this activity as I get into high school. If you really enjoy these activities at school, you might also try to practice them at home. If you like to go to an art club at your school, you might continue to draw at home. These activities can also lead to trying to improve in your hobby as well. I continue to draw at home so I can improve. Schools give access to these potential new hobbies and activities, and I think that students should go to them and give them a chance. | Evidence | Effective |
69bd0e35047c | EB793B72A8C4 | In conclusion, I believe that students should be required to take at least one extracurricular activity. It is something that I believe is crucial to who students grow up to be. If students join an after-school activity, they can become more responsible. Having them sit around all day can make that person lazy in the future. They not might want to try new things in the future because they were raised that way. Giving kids these potential interests can help impact their choices in life, such as what they want to do for a job or what they want to do for a hobby. People might already have their future planned, but joining an extracurricular activity can change their views and can give them new ideas. Overall, I think that extracurricular activities are a good way for students and kids to spend their time participating in and enjoying. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3e9820c3666f | EB7944FDAF63 | Technology has been used for decades in education, from the basic computer to smart boards technology has been commonly used to improve the learning capabilities of students in modern times. The 'Facial Action Coding System'
technology has the ability to help professors and teachers around the world get more into the minds of their students and engage the students into a classroom where learning is not a unified thing, but more customized and free depending on student ability. | Lead | Effective |
9f033fc51cce | EB7944FDAF63 | Firstly, with technology becomming more popular, an increasing number students are having the ability to learn through technology | Claim | Adequate |
5814277ae107 | EB7944FDAF63 | Along with that teachers and professors around the world have had to adapt to the higher usage of technology and programs to teach their students. This program gives teachers and technology the ability to adapt to their students, and encourage even confused or fearful students to learn by engaging a learning environment where a student's computer or device could read and recognize the confusion or joy a student is undergoing while learning,and therefor helping the teacher know the students level of understanding. | Evidence | Effective |
4bc2e270e8bb | EB7944FDAF63 | Secondly, having a program installed into the lense of cameras in students devices would open up new insight to teachers | Claim | Effective |
8cf3b3031081 | EB7944FDAF63 | For example, if a student watches a video lesson in a History class and is confused by something then their teacher could find the question, or peice of video, and simply adjust the lesson to fit the demographic and understanding of that child. There are many benifits to this technology including in the home, if a parent were to have the ability to see where their child was confused or frusterated the parent could also take some time to cover the missing material. This also prevents students who are fustrated but are to fearful or anxious to ask for help to not recive the assistance they need. This technology could open up door ways for students instead of them being lost in the information, but this technology is still new. . | Evidence | Effective |
40969969a915 | EB7944FDAF63 | Finnaly, one of the main reasons students do poorly in the current education system is that the student feels like they are not reciveing enough help or that they are lost. | Claim | Adequate |
0ec4f8470390 | EB7944FDAF63 | With average class sizing being anywhere from 22-32 students, a single or even two teachesr cannot assist all of the students individualy, and this creates a problem. Using the 'Facial Action Coding System' teachers can register which students need help and those who dont and pay more attention to the students who need help. This would therefore increase the amount of students able to retain information and help the school. Being lost in a lesson wouldn't be so common of a problem. | Evidence | Adequate |
a635208bfb88 | EB7944FDAF63 | In conclusion, the 'Facial Action Coding System' opens new advancments in the the education systems by encourgaing an environment where teachers could have the technology to know when a student was confused or not understanding information, and also giving the ability for teachers to construct a lesson to fit the children who don't directly understand. It also proves a good method for parents to get involved in their child's learning and help the student with direct problems at the root instead of complications with the entire subject | Concluding Statement | Effective |
9899f275d7b1 | EB7944FDAF63 | So yes, this technology is very vaulable to the education of millions of students around the world who don't fully grasp their teachers learning methods or are just confused. | Position | Effective |
98de7cdd2380 | EB8B27A81300 | The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" thinks that exploring Venus is worth the risks that are required. | Position | Effective |
380f9aae222e | EB8B27A81300 | Venus is a planet that most people think are a star because of how brightly it shines at night which makes it very noticeable. Not many other things are known about Venus: Not many people think about exploring Venus when they think of space exploration. In the article the author talks about both the problems with exploring Venus, but he also talks about how exploring Venus is something that is a possibility for the future. | Evidence | Adequate |
b3aa8a25390e | EB8B27A81300 | The author states that Venus is "often referred to as Earth's 'twin'" because out of all the planets Venus has a similar density and size compared to Earth. The terrain of Venus is also very similar to the terrain of Earth. They both have landmarks that are similar "to familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." | Evidence | Adequate |
0c44f627d74b | EB8B27A81300 | This evidence shows how the landscape of Venus has the possibility to be a home for humans. The similarities between Earth and Venus make Venus a valuable place to explore in greater depth. | Claim | Effective |
0e963758a7bb | EB8B27A81300 | Although Venus has a similar terrain to Earth, the ground climate is too rough for anyone to safely land in Venus. | Claim | Effective |
a274cfe0d976 | EB8B27A81300 | Venus has a temperature that humans can not survive in, 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Also on Venus the pressure is 90 times what humans experience on Earth. Humans have never experienced conditions as extreme as those on Venus: "Even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of [the] oceans" would be crushed and the high temperatures "would liquefy many metals." Something that was made to be able to go withstand high pressures, like a submarine, would be crushed on Venus, and metals can withstand very high temperatures but on venus they would liqeufy. It is unsafe and humanly impossible for humans to try to explore the land of Venus when some of the best technology can not even withstand the climate of Venus. | Evidence | Effective |
fff4acc6dd8b | EB8B27A81300 | As of now there is not enough technology for humans to explore Venus on the surface, but they can explore Venus from above. It is a possibility for scientists to hover 30 miles above Venus | Claim | Effective |
478257f55bea | EB8B27A81300 | This way the scientists will not have to experience the total wrath of Venus's surface, but they would experince "temperatures that would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, [and] the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth." Humans can live in those conditions, even though they may not be ideal. Scientists would be able to explore Venus without putting them at risk. There is still not technology for the scientists to throughly explore Venus the way they want to. They would only get a glimpse into what Venus is like. New inivations are being worked on that can withstand Venus's tumultous surface, so that scientists can get the full picture of
Venus. | Evidence | Effective |
c6fbd05d3455 | EB8B27A81300 | Venus has great potential for exploration, but with that great potential comes great risk. The author of the article talks about the problems with exploring Venus, but he also talks about how exploring Venus is something that is a possibilty for the future. Venus is very similar to Earth in the terrain that they both have, but the surface conditions of Venus are deadly to humans. There is the possibilty of hovering above Venus to be closer to the surface without having to experince the extreme conditions. With the advancements in technology and new innovations scientists are hoping that there is a way for them to get closer to the surface without endangering their lives. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a20ed016c33e | EBA557BABACB | in my opinon i do not think their should be a machine that could read my emotions ever i belive privacy is important and the will for someone to express their emotions to someone whom they may care about is sometimes sacred or personal varying on the person. | Lead | Adequate |
85f512d68cd4 | EBA557BABACB | technology that tracks the way our muscles move could be used for other puposes | Position | Adequate |
ec76f4b7cd41 | EBA557BABACB | the machine can even track if were angry and how our lips tighten around our mouth | Evidence | Adequate |
21127f24fe07 | EBA557BABACB | this other ways we could use such as facial recongtion, | Claim | Adequate |
883ad939b557 | EBA557BABACB | best said himself " even though indiviuals showing varying degrees of expression" these could identify someones facial muscles even if they had face suregy or we could use this as machinery as facial reconstructions benifts | Evidence | Adequate |
13fed68e32e3 | EBA557BABACB | if its able to identify muscles of every unique person even famous art work like the mona lisa then this could have other benifts | Claim | Adequate |
e46965effcd6 | EBA557BABACB | we could even look into the past to tell how historical figures were feeling in paintings or older photos. or we also could use to know animals emotions and how we can make an animal have a better day or stop animal related accidents from happening such as animal attacks. One good reason is if women could know if how we really felt about that dress the one they asked our opinons about then the trouble comes | Evidence | Adequate |
8ff987772b3e | EBA557BABACB | often times emotions are the reflection of the human spirit emotions are things that leads rebilons agaimts broken systems or start movements,emotions are what gives us the extra inch for the push, emotions soemtimes give a door to grieve, our even hold our opinons , see we have feelings inside that no one should look threw in todays society alot of mans virutues once held have gone, emotions are something that is deep imside us that we can hold onto , humanity always wants to know even it breaks or passes the limit but , if emotions were able to show they could stop so much possibilties , imagine if slave masters knew their slaves emotions, or britian during the american revoultion knew, emotitons is how cover ourselves . | Evidence | Ineffective |
ac83241817bd | EBBA6790B73B | Agree or disagree? | Lead | Ineffective |
89b504d8567e | EBBA6790B73B | I think joining in a extracurricular activity is very beneficial | Position | Adequate |
fda786a9e10f | EBBA6790B73B | students are able to be a little more active | Claim | Adequate |
b76a9768fc10 | EBBA6790B73B | help the community | Claim | Adequate |
d43bf2911bd4 | EBBA6790B73B | Extracurricular activities has so many outcomes to participating in these activities. Students may not have the opportunity to do there pleasures that may they do at home or once they get out of school. This can also interfere with a students social and sport life. Although there are down sides to extracurricular activities there is a huge benefit such as, knowing that a student has helped or even cared about what he was doing weather it was planting plants, trees, flowers, playing a sport, or even helping a student with their homework. | Evidence | Adequate |
ad8941a7e3e3 | EBBA6790B73B | Some activities that students are able to participate in are sports, yearbook committee, student council, and helping out with the environment | Evidence | Adequate |
db826f57f749 | EBBA6790B73B | While doing these activities you continue to make someones day by helping out just even a little bit. Many people, including myself enjoy watering the plants, a little goes a long way. Students often enjoy getting to know others and this is a great way to do so. How cool is it to know we have done an extracurricular activity and while helping our community? There are many activities that students are able to learn and put their brain to the test in a extracurricular session, for example student council. Student council is one of the many mind and brain focusing activities there are in these activities. | Evidence | Adequate |
551fd75fca51 | EBBA6790B73B | Extracurricular activities can be enjoyable and entertaining. | Claim | Adequate |
370bf7c2dee9 | EBBA6790B73B | I used to stay after for yearbook committee, and we all learned some new and interesting things. While I was in that that club I was given the opportunity to learn a little more about how I can work on the computer and cropping/fixing images. This activity was very helpful and fun. I now know how it all works out and how I can get involved. If it had not been for my teacher who told me to get involved I wouldn't be as involved as I am right now. I know enjoy doing extracurricular activities. | Evidence | Adequate |
a03720f46ec1 | EBBA6790B73B | Lastly, Helping out is not such a horrible thing.
Participating in activities at a local school doesn't have to be terrible. | Claim | Adequate |
beaa66460723 | EBBA6790B73B | There are so many activities out there that everyone can try and enjoy. Students get so many interesting things they ca do. | Evidence | Adequate |
7526e72775af | EBBA6790B73B | Should students participate, yes they should. Many students want to just go home and not do anything, this helps them come out of their shell a lot more. School is not always boring, have fun at school. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ca0e77125a17 | EBD36D034DAC | Lots of kids love having summer break off from school, but when it comes to summer assignments there's only so much time in the summer for students to fit all their prior plans in with all the over-the-summer school work their teachers assign. And majority of students would also rather not do school work on their break from school and would just want to enjoy the time off but many schools require students to do some sort of school work over the summer to keep their brains active and to help them continue to learn. Some students have take part in saying that they would like to design their own summer projects for many different reason. In contrast, some teachers don't agree with the students for the summer projects to be student-designed. | Lead | Effective |
a0dfea634196 | EBD36D034DAC | The required summer assignments should be teacher-designed by the students upcoming teacher | Position | Effective |
9c21e7824450 | EBD36D034DAC | the students can be prepared fully on what they are going to learn for the upcoming school year, | Claim | Effective |
92ea8ace597a | EBD36D034DAC | so that the their teachers can make sure they include work from last year so they don't forget about the stuff they previously learned about, | Claim | Effective |
faf8af3997b7 | EBD36D034DAC | because teachers will most likely organize the work to be an appropriate amount since they're use to giving school work with projects and due dates but also understand that there are students that go on vacations and won't have the whole summer to complete an assignment. | Claim | Effective |
ddbc0ccf1b71 | EBD36D034DAC | Teachers will know exactly how to format these projects and/or school work in correct ways to make their students stay active in learning and thinking to be prepared for the upcoming school year since they obviously will be teaching it for the rest of the school year | Claim | Effective |
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