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bc17d05e851e | EDD12BA31EE3 | They say Venus has value because human curiosity will likely lead into intimidating endeavors. They also say that even though there are dangers here that means that we shouldn't stop what we are doing we keep pushing. They also say beacuse of doubts they shouldn't give up. If a spacecraft can't stay there for more than two hours then how do you explore it with out having risks. This could put people in dnager. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ac1053497f89 | EDD12BA31EE3 | They shouldn't go Because of the risks, Some peopel might want to go because of the golory of acheaving that goal for NASA but its just not safe to risk exploring a plant that has bad condictions. | Claim | Adequate |
1fe1d9728a43 | EDD12BA31EE3 | In conclusion exploring a plant with 800 deagrees and 90 percet worse preasure than Earth. A spacecraft has not been able to land there more than two hous you need more than two hours to descover a plant. The risk is huge for exploring Venus. It is also the hotest plant in our atmosphere. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2bc71073061d | EDD12BA31EE3 | They should not travel Venus at all to big of risk and a lot of doughts to even consider going. | Position | Adequate |
615347704fdd | EDF7F5BCBD05 | Extracurricular activities can be the thing that a student looks forward to doing that day, counting down the hours and minutes until school ends. They are a great place to interact with others and develop an interest or skill, where lasting friendships can be made outside of a student's normal social circles. The students have a greater control over how things are run, providing kids the chance to step into leadership roles. However, they are not for everyone. | Lead | Effective |
0f8c8fdacce6 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | Students should not be required to participate in at least one extracurricular activity | Position | Adequate |
a17a69ec1195 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | the school could not cover the wide range of interests students have, | Claim | Effective |
10f327b3dee9 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | would waste time that students need, | Claim | Effective |
2147e707ad1f | EDF7F5BCBD05 | would ruin the experiences of other people participating in the activity. | Claim | Effective |
bc250e5a0037 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | The point of extracurricular activities, after all, is to develop skills farther than what students learn in school. While some people with interests like football and journalism can join school-sponsored extracurricular activities like the football team or the school newspaper, other students enjoy more niche or specific subjects. Incorporating these subjects into school extracurricular clubs would be difficult due to high equipment costs, lack of space, lack of widespread interest, or several other reasons. For example, some students consider fencing to be their favorite activity. However, the equipment required to do fencing is expensive and prone to breaking. This may not be extremely hard for one person to afford, but starting a school fencing club would require the school to buy several sets. Furthermore, fencing also requires a 14 meter strip as well as extra room so other students will not get hit by any stray blades. The school's resources are limited, and could not sponsor an activity like this without the kind of support that only mainstream sports have. In the meantime, it is not fair to the students who fence to force them into another activity when they could be practicing fencing outside of school. | Evidence | Effective |
d27158638015 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | School already takes up a large chunk of the day, but by requiring students to do extracurricular activities, kids are forced to stay for one or two more hours doing activities that do not seem worth spending time on. If a student chooses to join an extracurricular because they wanted to and not because it was required, the activity wouldn't seem like a waste of time. For the other students, however, those few hours could be spent on homework, catching up on sleep, connecting with friends and family, or pursuing their interests outside of school. Many students are on sports travel teams, and they need the time to practice with their team. Some people take classes outside of school or just prefer to do activities they like at home. Although these students are not joining school clubs, they are still doing extracurricular activities and should be able to continue doing so without worrying about running out of time for homework or missing out on sleep. | Evidence | Effective |
40c8c59128eb | EDF7F5BCBD05 | Making extracurricular activities a requirement would cause people to join clubs without genuine interest in the activity. These students will show less enthusiasm and put in less effort towards club activities and can drag things down for other students. They could be unwilling to do work or serve as a distraction to other students. There is a similar situation in elective courses, where some students only select a course because they believe it will be an easy class. Those students tend to participate less or be loud and off-topic. During group projects, they don't contribute as much. For many other students, it is frustrating to deal with these people, especially since there is no common interest in the activity they are doing.
| Evidence | Effective |
5320e4acfc12 | EDF7F5BCBD05 | Requiring participation in extracurricular activities ultimately does more harm than good to students because it disregards that broad range of activities students enjoy and takes valuable time from students who should be free to choose how to spend it. It also detracts from the value of extracurricular activities- which are created by people cooperating and acting on a common interest -by adding people who don't enjoy the activity. Inspiring students to be curious and passionate should be the school's priority, but by requiring students to do an extracurricular club the schools are only boxing students into a mold that ignores the complexity and individuality of each person. Students are required to get an education that will help them survive as adults, but they should be able to decide which hobbies and skills they want to specialize in. In the end, the unique path they decide to carve out for themselves should be of their own making. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
7c9e16ceb9e7 | EDFF7735A6F7 | Many years ago NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars, trying to get any photos of possible landing sites for it's sister ship known as Viking 2. As the spacecraft was taking these photos, they spotted a cohesive head. At first the scientists thought that it was probably just another Martian mesa, but the thing about this one was that it had very unusual shadows that made it look like and Egyptian Pharaoh. | Lead | Adequate |
789dfe875bbc | EDFF7735A6F7 | Days later NASA let the picture out for the world to see. The picture went viral within days. This had become one of the most famous talked about things in the world. It appeared in books, magazines, radio talks, shows, etc. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a2a403aa2733 | EDFF7735A6F7 | There were very few scientists who believed the Face could've been an alien artifact, but photographing Cydonia became a major priority for NASA. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the very first time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
8b1dbe823264 | EDFF7735A6F7 | At this time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team captured a picture of the Face that was very sharp and you could tell what it was. | Claim | Adequate |
65f52a014cec | EDFF7735A6F7 | On April 5, 1998 many excited and anxious web surfers were waiting for the image to show up somewhere. The image did pop up but it wasn't what the web surfers were expecting. Most people were dissapointed when they found out that the picture of the face they had been waiting for, turned out to be just a natural land form. | Evidence | Adequate |
abbc6094062e | EDFF7735A6F7 | What I have stated proves that the Face is a natural land form. It may have looked like a face in the blurred picture, but we now know that it was just a landform. | Position | Adequate |
1a6f15d57fbf | EE0229233F51 | Venus is known as the second planet from our sun, it's sometimes called the "Evening Star" despite it wasn't a star at all. It was also referred as Earth's "twin," since Venus is the closest with density and size in terms of Earth's. But, we really don't know alot about Venus. Now why is that we don't sent any rovers, satelites, ANYTHING to get some few informations about Venus for the last three decades?
Because anything that touched the surface of Venus surrvived less than three hours. Which gathered the reputation as the as the challenging planet to study. | Lead | Adequate |
2d0dd24051d8 | EE0229233F51 | What is the challenges of studying Venus? | Claim | Adequate |
85ae1c06f7a5 | EE0229233F51 | Well, first of all, The atmospere of Venus has a THICK layer of carbon dioxide the covers 98% of the planet, in which makes Everything a much hoter place,but, to top it of with the atmosphere problem, the clouds in there have highly corrosive sulfuric acid. If we some how passes through the atmosphere, than we'll face ANOTHER problem with the ground. Since Venus is the second planet from our sun and with all those carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, the surface ground temperature is over 800 DEGREES FAHRENHEIT. In which with the surface and the atmosphere, it could basically melt many types of metal with no problem. Another Problem is that the atmosphereic preassure is 90x greater than our Earth, with that much preassure could easily crushed a submarine that is built to surrvive the deeper end of the ocean. From what we gather small information from our space craft, the geology of venus pretty much have erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. | Evidence | Effective |
a51e514c6e71 | EE0229233F51 | Despite all of the troubles and challenges that Venus caused, many of the scientists, astronomers, and including the author themself think that it's worth all of the trouble to get s much information as possible to get to know more of Venus | Position | Adequate |
ca642fb9244d | EE0229233F51 | But WHY is it worth studying it? Well, Astronomers are fascinated and interested in the past of Venus as many of them has theorized that might've used to be a lot like Earth from long time ago, with Venus used to oceans that support life like ours. Another reasons why it's worth the trouble and money to study it is that Venus could be our next Planetery visit as our nearest option. | Evidence | Adequate |
208d4f91dfbc | EE0229233F51 | To me, I'd thought that it wouldn't be worth all the trouble to study more of this when we can study other planets like mars that support life better than Venus since it's surface and atmosphere wasn't as crazy as Venus'. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4247b0b51fed | EE377D38C330 | A lot of people don't know that this techonolgy nowadays could determine the way you feel, it could determine the emotions that peope feel. It also shows the emotions or feelings of others. People probably think that this some type of joke or laugher kind of way when its not there really is techonology nowadays that could detect it. There's probably many ways people can detect to read the emotional expressions of students. Some ways that you probably didn't even know of. | Lead | Adequate |
41a55d57095f | EE377D38C330 | A lot of people wonder how this works they don't really know that one easy way to show emotion or to show how you feel is by looking at them and looking at their actions. Once you have already seen them and that they are feeling some kind of way that's when you realize that there is something going on or that their sad or happy or that they are just going through stuff. People know that by the facial expressions on their face. They say that us as humans perform the same impressive "calculation". Some people struggle or have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried,sad,etc. | Evidence | Adequate |
13f9f8c94bf2 | EE377D38C330 | This would be one easy way students can detect emotions. | Claim | Ineffective |
5ec275def16f | EE377D38C330 | Parents probably disagree about using technology when showing their emotions. Not just parents but maybe some students wouldn't like it either | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e228ae822955 | EE377D38C330 | but if they think about it instead of waisting your time just guessing what their emotions are you would know if they use the proper techonology. They had made a process that began when the computer constructed a 3-D computer model of the face and it showed that all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
c29a64b0b033 | EE377D38C330 | Another interesting thing that they discovered was that Dr. Paul Eckman was the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). He had classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It also associated each with characterestic movements of the facial muscles. They invented somethIng else called video imagery, the new emotion software is that they track facial movement | Evidence | Adequate |
1f9e19767fc1 | EE377D38C330 | As you can see its so easy to see their emotions or how they feel. They even show different weighting of units. | Claim | Ineffective |
e79ebdbfe4b2 | EE377D38C330 | The author says that the Mona Lisa demonstrates is really to bring a smile to peoples face while it shows how much the computer can do. | Claim | Ineffective |
e057fa54073f | EE377D38C330 | It would be really strange if a computer can tell you if your happy or sad.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
7a98ba3e3437 | EE377D38C330 | In my opinion parents and students should get the idea of using techonology | Position | Adequate |
2c3731c3f841 | EE377D38C330 | its way easier to detect peoples emotions instead of just guessing or thinking you know how they feel. They shouldn't have a problem trying to make the place better. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2f439152f59c | EE6CE96959D4 | I have mixed feelings about the FACS technology it could be great now but when people or robots with their own minds want to do bad or harm the people of the world this would be a great start. | Position | Ineffective |
bdcbab229146 | EE6CE96959D4 | See, now this could be used as something just for fun then it's gonna get upgraded to federal level and be able to decieve criminals. Then a deranged rogue is gonna get the hold of it and try to take over the world | Claim | Adequate |
651d8f5d202d | EE6CE96959D4 | Sounds like a movie doesn't it, but stuff like the FACS were in movies way back when and now have we them in real life. I can't be the only one that sees this happening. | Evidence | Adequate |
b301c067087b | EE6CE96959D4 | But the good side I heve for this technology is that it can help people. Or help people to help other people. | Claim | Ineffective |
d49bd1337e03 | EE6CE96959D4 | Like such, what if our friend is acting wierd. Which they commonly do. Just out of the ordinary behavior like being more quiet or not wanting to spend as much time with you as usual. So you trick i mean tell them stand in front of your wierd computer, your FACS. They do it, it scans the 44 major muscles in their face. It tells you that she's 20% mad, 10% happy, and 70% sad. So now you help her with he predicaments and you guys live happily ever after. | Evidence | Adequate |
7c21f23e98ca | EE6CE96959D4 | Some other ways the FACS may be good invention is that it can be used as a lie detector | Claim | Adequate |
edd71f4ac571 | EE6CE96959D4 | As said in paragraph 8 you use different muscles for a genuine smile than for a false or fake one. It can be used by the FBI in interviewing or interogation. Or you could see when a politician is faking it also conveyed in pagraph 8. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9455891e6e3b | EE6CE96959D4 | So yeah, I dont really know how to feel. There's bad good way this thing couls affect the world. But there's pro and cons to everything I guess. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c2c57d639abc | EE71095197E1 | Imagine being able to detect what other people are feeling? She's 83 % happy,9% disgusted,6% fearful and 2% angry. How does this computer tell all this information if this painting was painted hundred of years ago? | Lead | Ineffective |
95779b3fff0a | EE71095197E1 | I think it would be a great idea to tell how people are feeling. | Position | Adequate |
21595b1a8bf0 | EE71095197E1 | Because someone might be having a bad day and you might not know, but if you could read facial expressions you would know. | Claim | Adequate |
555561b2069c | EE71095197E1 | This computer than could tell you how Mona Lisa was feeling is a 3-D constructer computer. In oreder for it to detect a painting,Picture, or even an actual person's face Right now it has to have all 44 muscle movements of a human. the only thing i'd change about this experiment is instead of making everything nowadays computerized and robotic why dont we do this with paper and pencil, collect data and figure it out,if it doesn't work on the first try then change your hypothnose and do the experiment all over again. | Evidence | Adequate |
6164203610b1 | EE71095197E1 | My final conclusion is that decoding people's facial expressions is pretty neat. It gives us a look at the past and present day of people's reactions and expressions. They also told us how to look in the mirror and dot eh 3 steps by yourself and see if you can decode your own facial expression. This article was pretty interesting and I would like to look forward in more details about this. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
99ebbdf380ad | EEBA14D4C42B | Have you ever wondered about natural formations? You would think that someone or something had to help form it, right? | Lead | Adequate |
2d31b3deec34 | EEBA14D4C42B | As a NASA scientist, I'm here to tell you that these strange, yet amazing things can happen on there own. | Position | Adequate |
c0d10e49ca15 | EEBA14D4C42B | There are some people that do not believe in natural landforms in other planets. | Claim | Adequate |
c9c40e48f78e | EEBA14D4C42B | In 1976, an image from a satellite-related object took a photograph of a piece of Mars. In the image, there was a piece of land which appeared to look much like a human face. Once NASA reveiled the shocking news, Many people did not believe them. Humans thought that aliens were the ones who contrusted such a thing. | Evidence | Adequate |
4a16bd8a1fcf | EEBA14D4C42B | NASA has more than enough facts and evidence to prove that it was made naturally. | Claim | Adequate |
f850d0a7d7da | EEBA14D4C42B | The article says "Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars." This means that the landform was made by natural occurances. The landform is natural. The passage also says "Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reavealing... a natural landform. This means that there was no alien monument after all." There is much more proof of this landform being natural than there is being made by aliens. | Evidence | Adequate |
0708a502b3e7 | EEBA14D4C42B | Others say, that aliens made this formation. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6f545148a6a4 | EEBA14D4C42B | The article states that "Conspiracy theorists say that the Face is evidence that NASA would rather hide." | Evidence | Adequate |
c08636187649 | EEBA14D4C42B | The thing that they do not realize is the fact that they have no proof of NASA "making up" a story like this. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
078353e8b84f | EEBA14D4C42B | Theorists have not studied the landform as much as we have. How can people think that the Face is created by aliens when theres absolutely no proof of their existance? | Evidence | Adequate |
e63c72cc3ba9 | EEBA14D4C42B | Making up fake stories for publicity is extremely wrong. If theres no evidence of something being fake, than just belive that it is real. Theres more to the world than people think and believe. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
720caabe6ee6 | EEC492D89CEB | The first thing im gonna talk about is in the store it sayed they took there right to drive away and fined them if they do drive that is stupid. | Position | Ineffective |
b101411b962a | EEC492D89CEB | If u pay for that car or truck and pay for the the gas that they sale you should be able to drive that car or truck wherever u want to. And if they new it was gonna cause harm to the environment then why did they do it i mean that's pretty dumb. They new that them hazardous gasses and fumes were gonna mess things up so why would they do it.
But u have to have these vehicles and semis to be able to transport goods from place to place do i mean your really just gonna have to deal with it cause u have to have them cause whose gonna hall all that stuff by hand one by one nobody and its just a waste of time cause u would kill yourself trying to do it so why not just use a semi that uses left over stuff from gas that way there not dumping all that stuff out on the ground ans its not going down and pouluting our water let it puluote our air but if we don't have that water we couldnt go 3 days and we could were gas masks if it come down to it its really not that big of a deal.
There making this how smog thing a big deal they can come up with something to help that or go away that is just so stupid that they do that cause they can prevent some of it with safe idle and emmisind but they dont want to hold to there laws ad people that are doing it they just let them go on like there doing and they do nothing about. Why would they do wat they are doing and not help us out and quit taking our rights away. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c8f5678ee2b6 | EEC9540E73FD | Some schools have debated if they should make every single student participate in extracurricular activities. I believe that they should not make kids do extracurricular activities they don't want to do. It would be extra work for the school and it would be bad for the students. If the principal decided to change the school's system so that each and every student would have to do an extracurricular activity it would end up negatively for most students. The main reasons it would be bad are | Lead | Effective |
558ff2e12cd7 | EEC9540E73FD | many children will not have the time to do work they shouldn't have to do, | Claim | Effective |
52141956ab27 | EEC9540E73FD | kids are already stressed enough with their school work and other things, | Claim | Effective |
36c2299cb379 | EEC9540E73FD | many kids who are being forced into doing this probably wouldn't enjoy these activities. | Claim | Effective |
8ed6af5c4c90 | EEC9540E73FD | I believe that we should just keep our school's system the same and the school should not make someone do an unnecessary activity that they didn't want to take part in in the first place. | Position | Effective |
1ad5bac629d9 | EEC9540E73FD | While some may say that kids have too much free time and we should give them something to do so they aren't on electronics, | Counterclaim | Effective |
e3504a412f07 | EEC9540E73FD | I strongly disagree with that statement. I am a student, and a majority of my peers take part in many other activities, such as sports, musical instruments, plays, and any other things along those lines, that wouldn't allow them to have any spare time to do another activity. | Rebuttal | Effective |
03de0e67b265 | EEC9540E73FD | In fact, according to a study performed by Harvard University, almost 85 percent of students participate in after school activities that take up more than 8 hours of time per week. This would include practicing the activity and for many activities you would have to compete. For example, one of my friends, Generic_Name, does many activities. She plays on a competitive lacrosse team, she plays a musical instrument, and she takes all honor classes. She barely finishes all of her homework, and she has stupendous time management skills. If she had to take part in another after school activity, she wouldn't have time to do it all. Because kids do other things, if you made them partake in a new activity they would also become a lot more stressed. | Evidence | Effective |
36f1ceee6271 | EEC9540E73FD | If you make them participate in another activity, that will make their stress levels go up and could possibly push them over the edge. It's obvious that students won't have the best time management skills because they are kids. Since they don't have these skills, they will end up being stressed about completing their work. In a survey I compiled with seventh and eighth graders at my middle school, I discovered that a whopping 94 percent of students considered themselves stressed. 76 percent even went as far to say that they are overly stressed. This puts into perspective how students are already very stressed without the excess activities. Personally, I partake in a travel volleyball team, a musical instrument, all honor classes, I make sure that I study enough and do all of my homework, and I make time to spend maximum amounts of time with my family and friends as possible. I manage to finish all of this, but many days I do not get much sleep. On most week days I get about 6 hours and the recommended amount of sleep for a thirteen year old is about 8. It can get very tough to finish all of my tasks I have to complete in one day. I know that if my school made me participate in another extracurricular activity I would not be able to complete all of this work I previously had to finish. And obviously school would be my top priority to complete, so I would possibly have to drop some of my hobbies and interests that I love. Another reason we shouldn't enforce this rule is that many kids that the school is forcing to do the activity probably won't enjoy it. | Evidence | Effective |
dc5599f73c93 | EEC9540E73FD | The main extracurricular activities that people partake at my school are plays and clubs where you can compete in, such as Model United Nations, debate club, Science Olympiad, and many others. At my school with over 1,000 students, only about 100 decide to join these clubs. These clubs only appeal to certain people that enjoy academics. If you're interested in things related to sports, my school does not have much to offer for you. When my sister was in middle school, about 7 years ago, they had very few clubs. They had 3 official clubs. Our mom made her choose a club to participate in. All that she could choose from was debate club, chess club, and homework club.
She had little to no interest in doing any of these clubs that she thought were boring and dumb. She ended up doing chess club, but she ended up hating it immensely. She said that everyone was better than her and she didn't even know how to play. This all happened because she was forced to pick an activity from three, horrible sounding, activities. This all would not have happened if no one had made her do an activity she despised. The same thing will end up happening to many children if the schools make them participate in activities they don't wish to do. Kids doing something that they don't want to do will end up with them being unhappy, which will end up in a negative learning environment. | Evidence | Effective |
f35036530d91 | EEC9540E73FD | Many kids will suffer majorly if a school was to go through with this ridiculous plan of forcing people to do an extracurricular activity that they do not wish to take part in. In the end, this will benefit basically nobody, because if someone really needed or wanted to participate in extra activities, they could without having to affect every person other than themselves in the school. Many would be upset with this new plan, so I believe that it would be best to keep our system the same. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
74ed23544122 | EED67869F816 | The face on mars is a rock formation. No aliens made it | Position | Adequate |
073de8d96de0 | EED67869F816 | We have seen it and belive that it is just a mesa. | Claim | Adequate |
ae881a3ff7c5 | EED67869F816 | Some people are against nasa and sa that it is aliens. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
30e881a433e2 | EED67869F816 | In 1976 are satilite the viking 1 was orbiting mars and takeing pictures of the planet. When we looked at them we noticed this one. A picture of a face on mars. When we noticed it eas just a mesa in the face. | Evidence | Ineffective |
de44947b3826 | EED67869F816 | Ther is some like this one in the west. ONe is the middle butte in the snake river plain of Idaho. Some people say that nasa is hideing that there is life on mars and they say there is not. | Evidence | Adequate |
69a7f1d20bad | EED67869F816 | So that is why we are telling people that it is a mesa. We don't want them to freak out that aliens excicst when they do not . We also wish there was an acient civilization on mars. In conclusion it s just a rock formation. That was there for a long time that shadows made us think it was a face. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5dc1961533e2 | EF08234FA6BE | The article "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves" talks about a boy named Luck who recently graduated high school. Luck worked two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank, when Don Reist Luck's friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat Luck could never said no, because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.
To help the European cuntires recover from World War 2,the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to transport the horses,young cows,and mules Luck and Don signed up.
Luck and Don received their ordes to repot to New Orleans, they arrived August 14,the day the Pacific War ended. They were headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.
Luck had just turned eighteen before they arriving in Greece. By the time he was discharged in '47
Luke had made nine trips. To past the time on return trips they would play baseball, volleyball,table-tennis tournaments,fencing boxing ,reading whitting and games also helped to pass the time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0f4d889ad8cd | EF08234FA6BE | Luck had the most amazing two years of his life. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
796964b59e04 | EF70A0E7826B | I will have to say no because you can't use technology to see someone emotional. | Position | Adequate |
9c55cf9df23b | EF70A0E7826B | what if you try to see if someone is happy but it come up with an erorr on your computer. like ib the text said that some comupter can't do it. so i say why can't some comupter can do it. | Evidence | Adequate |
79b4752fb14b | EF70A0E7826B | so what i think is that technology can't tell show how we feel. | Claim | Adequate |
9beaa7116691 | EF70A0E7826B | how we feel can't be calculat by technology. in some people may say that it is not right to think that technology can so how we feel. sometime technology can like stop working what are we going to do now that it's not working know more. what i think is that this is not smart todo because what if technology chage what they are feeling like lying to them like that are really happy but it change to say that they are sad but they are not. | Evidence | Adequate |
5aa17967786a | EF70A0E7826B | so tell me this what do you think we should do keep on leting technology teel us how we feel or go deep down in your heart in tell yourself how you really feel. but i don't thing that the people that say yes we should let technolgy tell us what we should feel. they are never goingto give up on leting technology tell them how they are going to feel. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c24853d1fbeb | EF7631952FB3 | When you think about Venus ,do you think about Oceans or Mountains? With the new and the old technology they can figure just about anything out. Venus is considered Earths "Twin", but should it be | Lead | Adequate |
9b0d7e73fefb | EF7631952FB3 | Venus is know to be one of the more dangerous planets, but it should not. In the passage paragraph 4 it says " Long ago, venus was probably covered largerly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." | Evidence | Adequate |
92c8f75027c9 | EF7631952FB3 | Venus hasnt always been bad, or dangerous becase it used to be just like Earth. | Claim | Adequate |
ab718bb6020d | EF7631952FB3 | Humans live on Earth so Humans could have lived on Venus, which makes it not dangerous. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e1586f90bdff | EF7631952FB3 | Another reason Venus should not be considered dangerous is becase of the technology they can use to see if it is ok for people to be there | Claim | Adequate |
46cd01d521ec | EF7631952FB3 | In the 1800s they used to use mechanical computers. This device could do calculations. In the passage in paragraph 7 it says " These devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all." This is showing that technology can help people see if the planet is dangerous or not by using the power and flexible and quick power it has.
| Evidence | Adequate |
57f282dc92c3 | EF7631952FB3 | Venus should not be considered dangerous. | Position | Adequate |
518eb05e0e93 | EF7631952FB3 | In todays time our technology has improved and its surface has goten to be mountains, valleys, and craters. All in all Earth and Venus are twins. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8f9b7edc1068 | EFA46BC5A89A | Does the Facial Acton Coding really identify humans emotions | Lead | Ineffective |
d7105dff4196 | EFA46BC5A89A | The Facial Action Coding really helps identify human emotions | Position | Ineffective |
11543d01ac69 | EFA46BC5A89A | Since some people can't identify or know if your happy,sad,angry,surprise,shock,disgust, and scared they won't be able to know your emotions. | Claim | Ineffective |
a0bd4a11f071 | EFA46BC5A89A | Let me tell you how it works, the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. All and every 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. The movement of one or more muscles is called an "action unit." The Facial Action Coding will really help you identify your own emotions, family, and friends | Evidence | Adequate |
832c6bd15af3 | EFA46BC5A89A | But some people will start thinking about the Facial Action Coding will malfunction on them and they won't be able to identify their emotions. | Claim | Ineffective |
0e9f7ed41900 | EFA46BC5A89A | The Facial Acion Coding identify emotions from paintings and on human. | Claim | Adequate |
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