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38fb00c3e816 | EBD36D034DAC | . Since the projects and/or school work will be teacher-designed, their teachers can make sure it's relating to things they will eventually go more in depth with but be put into summer assignments to give some challenge or hints to students for what they're gonna go into more throughout the school year. The summer assignment from their upcoming teachers can also give the student an understanding of how the teachers teaching style is. And the expectations the teacher has since the work is given directly to the student by the teacher themselves. | Evidence | Adequate |
f377bf386534 | EBD36D034DAC | Teachers can also make sure to include in their summer project some previously learned information on their summer assignments to not only see if they remember and fully learned that particular concept, but to also see where as a student they stand and if they need more help or attention with that topic | Claim | Effective |
df6d2e139aa7 | EBD36D034DAC | It can help a teacher get to know a student better by seeing where they stand as a student after the work they did in their previous classes/grade. Also, putting in some challenging work from the previous grade can also tell the students that the particular topic or concept could be something their upcoming teacher thinks is very important to fully understand in order to move forward, or just to understand in general. It can give the student an idea of how their teacher thinks and will be doing things from now on. | Evidence | Adequate |
7004f7609db7 | EBD36D034DAC | Since teachers became teachers by going to graduate school and some having other degrees included for their job, they usually have a good, if not, great understanding of good teaching skills and tactics and work format styles from their own past professors and previous teaching experiences. If they have a lot experience, it could help them gain knowledge over the time being on what worked well for them as a teacher and their students versus what didn't work. The teachers could have also been exposed to many different teaching styles and found one they believe is easiest to understand and/or thinks is easiest or their level of students to understand | Evidence | Effective |
bb19b2adcf24 | EBD36D034DAC | Teachers can know ways to make sure projects or assignments could be organized good while also not entirely taking up a whole students summer with school work. | Claim | Effective |
8c519d9ee35e | EBD36D034DAC | They can organize it so it's spread out or split up into parts at a time so they don't put much pressure on the student who could feel overwhelmed by all the work they have to complete in a short amount of time. Especially if the student waits until the last minute to complete their summer assignment because they thought the assignment was really long and time consuming.
| Evidence | Effective |
710aec83a4ab | EBD36D034DAC | some students could think that they could make an assignment just as equally as efficient themselves just as teachers would, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c8f56d86b167 | EBD36D034DAC | teacher-designed projects would be more efficient regardless since it could be more helpful to teacher because it could be based on exactly what the teacher wants to know about what the student knows to help them succeed for the rest of the school year. And most summer assignments are different depending on the class too. If a student is going into a class they've never taken before, how could they make up a student-designed summer assignment to help them when their teacher could just give them a direct summer assignment as a jump start for the school year. | Rebuttal | Effective |
fd4984bd5d93 | EBD36D034DAC | Teacher-designed jump-start summer assignments are just less problematic, more reliable, and reasonable for everyone overall. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
68f1aee58746 | EBDFD68450A0 | there are many benifits of doing this act. At the same time there might be some small downsides to going on this trip. | Position | Ineffective |
27c198f3546a | EBDFD68450A0 | if you get sick easy you might not go on this trip | Evidence | Adequate |
ffec78be3d75 | EBDFD68450A0 | Lets just get the not so good facts out of the way. | Claim | Ineffective |
584ee8097a10 | EBDFD68450A0 | If you are allergic to animals with fur or just animals in general this is not the job for you. Because you are going to be on the ocean, if you sea sick easy. Do not do this job. | Evidence | Adequate |
f8570887c2ce | EBDFD68450A0 | These are the terrific things about going on this trip. | Claim | Adequate |
c6be35ee76af | EBDFD68450A0 | Well first of all you get to meet new people. Also you can get to know animals and lear ablout animals, too. So this will help you if you plan to work with animals when you grow up. You get to travel to new and incredible places that you haven't been to before. If that does not grab your attention then I still have more to tell you how amazing this would be! "The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy." Stated Luke. Luke had fun you would, too. If you think you had fun working with the animals on the boat, just think about what incredible things you do when you unload all the animals. Well I will tell you what they do. The cowboys play baseball, and volleyball, boxing, fencing, and so many other games when there are no animals on the ship. This is also a good time to get to know people. | Evidence | Adequate |
6a7db2b98bc3 | EBDFD68450A0 | So do you think that you are going to join now? All the games and fun you have. All the people you meet. It's amazing what you can fing on a trip like this. Isn't it? I think it's facinating what you will learn, see, do, and discover. I will leave the chose up to you now. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b92ad79b36e5 | EC12EE97A834 | I think that having communityes without cars is great for the inviroment and if people want to do that then good for them. but i dont think i could survive with out a car | Position | Ineffective |
40c33c9015d2 | EC12EE97A834 | and i dont think many people could just to get to work it may take and 1 hour- 30 minutes to get there. but if there was a community where no one had a car and everyone rode there bike ir walked. Then there would be no reason to have a car because then all your job oppertunitys would be close by and you would not need to drive to get there. So i really dont see my self ever being able to go and doing somethuing like not using a car.
but if thats what people want to do then thats good for them. i want people as a whole to be happy. i think that we can make our own decisions in our life and you know what people should not be judging someone else for there life decisions. its your life live it how you want i really makes me mad when people start getting mad at someone for something they have done because if it has already beeen done they cant go back and change it. it is already done and thats not cool. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a9c9647ad0d6 | EC12EE97A834 | i think that a community with no cars would be good but not for me and i think there will be a good ammount of people would not give up a car just so they could go run and bike places? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4b1019ed1ef2 | EC1DD5C739B9 | I wounder why Venus called the "Evening star" I think venus sometimes call the evening star because its a bright planet and it shine like a star & its the second planet from our sun. And venus referred to earth's twin because venus is the closest planet to earth | Lead | Adequate |
a97cb4d468a5 | EC1DD5C739B9 | If I was an anstronount I would love to explore venus because it would be fun to be walking on venus. | Position | Ineffective |
5b25855b4e3c | EC1DD5C739B9 | Most people should join venus just to see how it look and how is it | Claim | Ineffective |
8c178d58e473 | EC1DD5C739B9 | I think NASA
as our jet airplanes travel at higher altitude to fly over many storms to go into space and explore many plants. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7d1054aa1255 | EC1DD5C739B9 | The national aeronautics and space administartion have done a great job when they go into space and discover planets | Claim | Ineffective |
a8f0bbceb0a6 | EC1DD5C739B9 | I think it is very cool to go on other planets venus is sometimes closers to mars. The earth rotated its self and people dont nocited it.
The sun is the hottest planet in the solar system it is over 100's degrees. Long ago venus was probaly coverd largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
157606a6f063 | EC1DD5C739B9 | Today, venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth but venus is one of the best planet in the solar system. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d2f8a8f5b5e3 | EC3DD758D9F0 | Venus, a planet, also know was Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky which is a misleading point since Venus is a planet thats is the second planet from our sun and often referred as Earth's twin due it being the closest planet to Earth in terms of its density and size and its occasionally distance as well. In space terms Venus is considered to be right around corner which has lead to humans sending many of their spacecraft to land their spacecraft on Venus which caused each previous mission to be considered unmanned mainly because no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours and as a result it explains the reason why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades | Lead | Ineffective |
e62edf4c224f | EC3DD758D9F0 | nemerous factors contribute to Venus´sreputation as a challenging planet to study, despite is proximity to us.
| Position | Adequate |
ed5d9bfd14b1 | EC3DD758D9F0 | Venus has conditions that are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter on Earth | Claim | Ineffective |
d2a78fa37a4b | EC3DD758D9F0 | also notable Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Mercury planet surface temperature averages over 8000 degrees Fahrenheit and the atomsphereic pressure that is 90 times greature than we experience on our planet and such an environment would even crush a subermarine that is made to explore the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venus has a thick atmosphere that is made of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and blankets Venus. The most challenging are the clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus´s atmosphere. Venus geology and weather introduces natural disaters such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes, which makes it harder to land on Venus without experiencing one of these dangers. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e6de22dddf5f | EC3DD758D9F0 | astronomers are fascinated by Venus because they believed it was once have been the most Earth-like planets | Claim | Ineffective |
f35ae88228d0 | EC3DD758D9F0 | Astronomers also believed Venus was once covered largely with Oceans could have supported various form of life we may have not been familiar with just like on Earth. Venus also some things that are simlar to Earth such as the rocky surface that include familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can also be considered our nearest option for a planetary visit, which is a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
92ebb19365d8 | EC3DD758D9F0 | Trying to exceed the challenges showned by Venus has its uses because human cruiosity will likely lead us into many equally problems in the futures. and our adventures on Earth should be limited by dangers and doubts but a determination of that should expand our very limits. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
41c8c6a30362 | EC3DE6D436F2 | having limiting car usage in this world wil be saveing yourself some great deal of money also save money for the system | Claim | Adequate |
559c3c588095 | EC3DE6D436F2 | for instance many expect public transport serving the suburds to play a larg role in a six-year federal transportion bill als one of the places for limited cars is apart in paris suggested that on monday mortorists with even numbered license plates are ordered to leave there vechlies at there home or get punish with a fine of 31$ the same thing will apply to odd plates the next day. studies shows that 4,000 people with cars had theire car impounded with a high fine plus tax in bogota cars have beeb banned with only buses and taxies are the only two transpotion are allwoed studies showed that fewer of americans are getting cars and driving less even lees and less people are getting licenses year by year studies are now pointing is americans passed peaking point? thats is still uncertain for now,some places in new york shows that bike sharing programs and ints shyrocketing bridge and tunnels tolls reflected thode new priorities as they do prolifered of cars sharing the same programs across the nation and we do see a high percentage of it droping down like apples. reaches showed that they found that young people that are driving decreased of by 23 percent since the year of 01 to 09 in an article i read showed that moblie world last year in oversees sports suggiested a business plan in a world in which vehicles ownership is impractical and public transporation save the system more money and lower the risk of danger. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3ee39bb7e1d3 | EC7C81E59E9E | In many schools the physical expression of everyones face doesnt really matter to a computer. The communication with students and computers is a bad idea because it won't have good outcomes to many people involved | Lead | Adequate |
5e05e37477a3 | EC7C81E59E9E | The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable | Position | Adequate |
948fc5ad7cbe | EC7C81E59E9E | because it won't have any affect on the students | Claim | Adequate |
9c917c1d5bb9 | EC7C81E59E9E | it will cost a lot of money to build | Claim | Adequate |
b109cf6cce2b | EC7C81E59E9E | and it will be completely useless. | Claim | Adequate |
75a82b969fd5 | EC7C81E59E9E | The use of this technology won't have any affect on the students. | Claim | Adequate |
045aeffe1677 | EC7C81E59E9E | Many of the students nowadays will not be surprised by this idea. This explains why the use of this technology won'þ affect the students. Another reason, is that if the use of this technology goes to the schools many students won't care. This also helps explain why the use of this technology won't affect the students. The students and their physical emotions towards others aren't important to them. | Evidence | Adequate |
e0ed63bb53ce | EC7C81E59E9E | Having the use of this technology in school will cost too much money to build | Claim | Adequate |
59e9bbcf0b18 | EC7C81E59E9E | The cost's be a lot to program in each computer at very school. This explains that the school budget will be oout of hand. Also constructing a camera that detects emotion in a 3-D face model will be the most expensive piece to the computer. This reason helps explain why many of the computers would be expensive to purchase. Schools being able to buy this will cost way to much money and could even have a budget problem. | Evidence | Adequate |
a4ff2fa0b794 | EC7C81E59E9E | Also the idea of using this technology in school is completely useless | Claim | Adequate |
55bcfc7f490a | EC7C81E59E9E | Many schools will have no point of having this being in their computer system. This is why many schools will most likely reject this idea. Another reaosn, is that schools will have no benfit of having this for their students. This is why having this new technology is completely useless. These reason show why the the use of this technology is useless. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f350fba60b54 | EC7C81E59E9E | The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable because it won't have any affect on the students, it will cost a lot of money to build, and it will be completely useless. The idea of even having this technology in our schools won't be good for the benefit of our schools and students. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
532e17f58eea | EC8FCCDB698A | Venus is worth studying | Position | Ineffective |
3947c68ac6b6 | EC8FCCDB698A | when they study it they called it an "Evening Star" also a "twin" of earth | Claim | Ineffective |
e993011cf002 | EC8FCCDB698A | It's the closest planet to earth, It is the closest in distence as well. Venus also has a 97% carbon diocide blanket, but on the surface its 800 degrees Fahrenheight. | Evidence | Adequate |
103e795ddd3a | EC8FCCDB698A | the conditions of the planet are like that its way to extreme for humans to live there. | Claim | Adequate |
0925b9179506 | EC8FCCDB698A | Venus is also has the hottest suface temperature in our solar system, even thou Mercury is closest to the sun Venus is till hotter. It has eruputing volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequesnt lightning strikes that happen on the surface of the planet | Evidence | Adequate |
172e614dfa40 | EC8FCCDB698A | Scientist think that long ago Venus was like Earth, but even now it still has some of the features that Earth has | Claim | Adequate |
73dd3d4a589f | EC8FCCDB698A | One of the things is that they are still striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
26aa79c9405c | EC8FCCDB698A | So if there is a way that they are able to go there and get more samples from Venus, then maybe that might tell the scientist what might have been there before and help them out with the previous clues as what happened. They also didn't think about how fast the computers we have today would be. But they also said that just imagine exposing a cell phone, tablet to acid, or heat compatible of a metling tin, that must be what the heat is like on Venus. And since they can't be on Venus just orbiting or hovering safely they can't get the samples that they want from that distance. | Evidence | Adequate |
f9a6e460e1ca | ECD640058D57 | Students should do their own kind of projects | Position | Adequate |
ba1ceca7956a | ECD640058D57 | they can show they've learned over time and make it into a project where they show what they've learned. | Claim | Effective |
9eb445ffe411 | ECD640058D57 | If it was teacher- designed, it wouldn't allow kids to express what they've been learning when the teacher is giving them instruction on what do. When kids show what they can do and put into a project, it shows that they've really payed attention and understood the lessons over the years. Also, the projects can allow students to reflect on what they learned and make something creative out of it. | Evidence | Adequate |
dffda4e0d6a5 | ECD640058D57 | My Friend Generic_Name, had to do a project over summer during middle school. Her teacher allowed them to do it on their own and see what they can do. At first, she was startled because she didn't know what to do. She asked me for help but i couldn't cause i was struggling as well on what to do. We started planning one day, and remembering what we've learned over the past year. The thing she remembered most was in her history class, her teacher taught her something valuable and it was " You work hard enough, you can achieve anything in the world." That stuck with her for 5 years and she still remembered it. So for her project she did something based on that quote. She designed a poster where it shows the quote and little pictures of each class and showing what she liked about it. | Evidence | Adequate |
665b1688046c | ECD640058D57 | In the end, She liked doing her own project without any instructions from her teacher. It made her think what she mostly remember from that year, and reflect on it. If she didn't have the confidence to do that, then who knows if she could've done it without her teacher's help. | Claim | Adequate |
5d5e458eea0f | ECD640058D57 | My brother Generic_Name, when it was his last year of high school, his teacher made him do a project on what they have learned and remembered most out of their 4 years of high school. The thing he remembers most was his mechanical teacher having faith in him and telling him he could do it when no one believed in him. In his project, he made a poster based on his teacher and something he said " You believe in yourself, you can accomplish anything what the world gives you." During those 4 years, he struggled with school. He though he couldn't do it and he didn't even know what he was going to do after high school. But when he joined this mechanics class, he fell in loved with everything. All his time was invested into mechanics. His teacher saw potential in him when he first walked into class. Then one day, his teacher called him up and asked what he wants to do after high school, He had no answer because he didnt know what to do. So his gave him a opportunity to get an interview with this company he know and worked their before. And at first he was speechless, because no one in that school believed in him and thinks that he wouldn't do nothing with his life. So in the poster, he wrote a passage on why he fell in love with that class and he added pictures of him and his teacher working together | Evidence | Adequate |
8010e3af2e44 | ECD640058D57 | It showed that, with someones faith you can and you will achieve something great out of life. If no believed in him, then he wouldn't be working in that company that his teacher told him to join and he wouldnt be doing nothing in his life that he would've liked.
| Claim | Adequate |
ae83d0040693 | ECD640058D57 | My Best Friend Generic_Name, had a teacher that liked her personality and the way she made people feel loved and included when no one wanted to. At the end of middle school, her teacher asked everyone to do a project. So for her project, she did it on one person which it was about her teacher. Her Spanish teacher, was strict on students but never lost faith in each student she had. But something about her made my friend and her have a connection. My friend has a mom that supports her in everything, but her Spanish teacher never had a kid. So my friend Generic_Name was like a daughter to her. She felt like she had a bond like her mom. Then one day for parent's night, Generic_Name's mom went to her Spanish class, and her teacher and her mom clicked away. They've became best friends out of no where. She was surprised because she didnt know if they would like each other or something she thought wouldn't work out. They've been friend's for 8 years already, and have so much in common. Her teacher was a person she can go for anything and without one question be afraid to tell her anything. So for her project, she did a poster of her mom and Spanish teacher. The connection they have, no one in the world could have that. Her Spanish teacher was important to her because she felt alone sometimes and had no one to talk to and she felt like she can go to her and talk about her problems with her. They have a bond she won't forget ever. She added pictures and saying thank you for everything for and nothing less. And for helping her in her rough days and making them somewhat better | Evidence | Adequate |
a410d8df4085 | ECD640058D57 | If no one helped her in her bad times or no asked whats wrong, then who knows if she still be in school. | Claim | Ineffective |
efa504da7d0e | ECD640058D57 | Although some might think, my friend Generic_Name, my brother Generic_Name, and my best friend Generic_Name. If they each didn't have a teacher who had faith in them who knows what they would be doing right now. They each had someone that cared and loved them when one wanna to. I think having that special someone can do wonders in life and help out a lot. So teachers should let their students do their own project without no instructions and let them rethink what they they have learned and make it into a project where they could lay out their ideas and make it into something wonderful. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e7a91f75b2f1 | ECF8296772E9 | In the story the aurther is describing why Venus is the 2nd Earth | Lead | Ineffective |
adcd6737707e | ECF8296772E9 | and there coomon and there diffrents and what would be the best matterial to use for the Vehicle Witch Nasa is working with some simplified electrons made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditions . Then Nasa also has a nother project were they are looking to work with the old technology called mechanical computers werefirst envisioned in the 1800's and played a inportant part in the 1940s during the World war ll. But the reason for the old tecnolagy is because if we were to have a cell phone on Venus is because it would melt because of the acid or heat capable of meting tin. | Evidence | Ineffective |
fa4b84d3af64 | ECF8296772E9 | You all so have people striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value ,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimedating endeavors. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3b5db773e234 | ECFF63C8CC8C | The use of technology is not valuable when comes to reading emotions in classroom | Position | Adequate |
a5c1f865a1fa | ECFF63C8CC8C | because even though we express ourselves so easily however those of us with ability manipulate others and or manipulate the technology it self like hacking or reprogrammming data based and operating systems of the computer which by the way is softer that completly allows the hardware and software talk to each other examples of operating systems is Microsoft's Windows 10 and Apple's Mac os X or as I call it Mac os 10 because X in roman numbers means 10 can be hacked by viruses and malware and worst of all ransomware itself and we all know for every key you bet their is always a lock and vice versa why do you think computer security specialist exist to work and counter each other for sake of technology. | Evidence | Ineffective |
92c69bb91479 | ECFF63C8CC8C | Also yes while emotions are mixed we may feel one emotion more than other when going through mixed emotions | Claim | Adequate |
89978b51013f | ECFF63C8CC8C | ok I get that truly but when you say oh this person is 83% this and 9% this how can you accuratley say that when emotions aren't calcuated by math no we humans are too complex for that that's why we have people taking care of people not robots caring for people why it's because where made to be complex. That is like saying that weather guy like oh well its gonna be 60% chance of rain and thunderstorm here in the mid east of country no no not it all all because the weather guy only gets stuff right 80%-90% of weather right shoot weather people struggle to predict indiana weather because one season supposed be harsh and deadly potentional winter right while we may have that but like one day it wants be 60 degress fariheit like no its not supposed be that warm in indiana in winter when we think winter we think snow, hail ,snow storms , chilly winds any type extreme colds but warmth no no not at all partly cloudy ok sure some sunshine with cold windchill sure but extreme odd warmth for time of winter no | Evidence | Adequate |
c75511524082 | ECFF63C8CC8C | because these technologies that help us as people aren't always helping like there is always something wrong with technology | Claim | Ineffective |
9f08d966af4a | ECFF63C8CC8C | because we made the technology and one characteristic we passed down to technology and that is inperfection in fact we intentionally made the technolgy to some degree less smarter than us so we can always have room inprove ourselves and you wouldn't want something made to be a tool be superior to you right of course you don't so why use technology to replace humans why not except some things we have and here the thing paragraph number two even says I am right because you cannot calculate emotions with math no | Evidence | Adequate |
1c570f5289cb | ECFF63C8CC8C | as also talked in paragraph number 3 emotions are discovered when our muscles move certain way our body instinctively tells us to do so | Claim | Ineffective |
25ede17f22b1 | ECFF63C8CC8C | not fully instinctlively because our thoughts and nerves go so fast we sometimes in instant gratification stuff lose precious time to react when needed to and our nerves and speed of the nerves why we is limited by our very own fixed speed and thoughts and emotions and stuff. Also paragraph 4 says each facial expression is universal so even though we all have similar look when happy sad, angry , depresssed doesn't mean all angry and depressed people look same and we can hide or have our feelings mixed up with so much thoughts in our head that is happening. | Evidence | Ineffective |
74c41e873e20 | ED164A18D77F | This is a vey informative article but i would like to list most of the key ideas inside of it. i would like to inform of the positive and negatives
In the article there are many diffrent forms of evidence towards using this new technology in the classroom but i feel that some stick out more than others | Lead | Adequate |
6339cb14c898 | ED164A18D77F | In parargraph 6 the author told of the technology using our facial expressions to calculate whether we are bored or confused and i feel that,that is a very good idea. | Claim | Adequate |
45f340ad8e6e | ED164A18D77F | As a high school student i can relate to the lesson getting boring, confusing, or just too fast pace. I feel that if this machine was used to help make an ideal lesson plan for each student the percentage of students passing would increase. I would love to have something as inovative as this technology inside of my schools classrooms. | Evidence | Adequate |
4159e67b5aca | ED164A18D77F | I do support this but ; however, there is some things about this that do concern me as a student. Some students could be angered by the use of this new technology and want their old lesson plans back | Counterclaim | Adequate |
5f8adbecf243 | ED164A18D77F | Some students like the fast paced lesson plan and will get bored of the change. in some communitys this would not be avaliable due to money problems. | Evidence | Adequate |
15fcd15bb6d3 | ED164A18D77F | For the time being i think we should leave the schools how they are until we can finally bring this in for students in the future when its more avalible to everyone.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
f8fab2803916 | ED164A18D77F | In conclusion i feel that we should just leave everything as it is in our schools | Position | Ineffective |
494c8283c251 | ED164A18D77F | i feel that the lesson plans have worked for over 60 years and they will continue working. i like the idea but i feel that its too ahead of some schools with low money. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d1f2b26cd3ed | ED7F7B6E4C8E | Being able to prove someones true emotion through a science method is a bright idea. | Lead | Adequate |
999c5ef26676 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | Therefore, after reading about the Facial Action Coding System it is very benefical in many ways. | Position | Adequate |
1fc89ff39cb2 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | In paragraph one the experts states that "She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Meaning this data isn't just something from a lab science teacher this is acurrate data from a new coming modern software. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c3d2d525846d | ED7F7B6E4C8E | Having a computer connect with humans on a different level than just historical information can only help the society. | Claim | Adequate |
d9b6d6a37af0 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | Experts are only trying to better the way the human brian and body functions. In the text it states that Dr. Huang and Dr. Nicu are coming together to increase better communication between computers and humans. "are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate". These two master minds are making sure readers know every step by step it takes to create this software without doing any harm. For example "computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the faces; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles". Meaning the software must reflect off a human like body or it wouldn't function correctly. "Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit". After the doctors finds out what it takes for the software to be a sucess they then go deeper into networking with a psychologist. Reaching out to the creater of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) Dr. Paul Eckman. Knowing that this software isn't basic Eckman simply starts out with the software using only the six basic emotions, which are happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness. In the text it states that these facial expressions are world wide | Evidence | Adequate |
7c9d84d41984 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | "The facial expressions for each emotion are universal", Experts say that the FACS can identify true emotions through a real face or painted one | Claim | Adequate |
f0b0ec8dbb1e | ED7F7B6E4C8E | "the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real or painted face". In paragraph 5 it states that experts studied closely to make sure a painted face could be useful with the software "studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions" | Evidence | Adequate |
7969f5d6f6a9 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | . This new software can help students function in the classroom when they are confused or bored they can easily get help rather than being ignored | Claim | Adequate |
ce6f7fc7b260 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored" says Dr. Huang. Using this software can let others know when someone is genuine happy or if they are just putting on a show. "They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one". experts say in a real smile the corners of your mouth is lifted rather in a forced on your mouth is being stretched. | Evidence | Adequate |
8cb16a73d3c0 | ED7F7B6E4C8E | The Facial Action Coding System isn't only helping society grow it's helping science better as well "making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions". | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a7c31fcf0ca0 | EDD12BA31EE3 | Is venus worth it? Venus is a plant that is close to Earth. They call it Earths twin its the same density and size. Venus is closer to the sun than Earth is withc can make it dangerous for it to be explored. | Lead | Adequate |
c4ec5ed2dff8 | EDD12BA31EE3 | In the past they have tried to explore it they have sent numerous spacecraft to land Venus. Each of the missions have been unmanned. Since no spacecraft have even survied the land more that a few hours. | Evidence | Adequate |
ea56b4648966 | EDD12BA31EE3 | This explains why exploring Venus could be a good reason or a bad reason. | Claim | Ineffective |
31abb24ac012 | EDD12BA31EE3 | The passage states that they have been succesful in three decades. It is a very challenging plant for humans to study. The atmosphere makes it even worse to travel through it being 97 persent carbon dioxide. The preasure from it is 90 percent worse even on top of that it can reach up to 800 degrees fahrenheit. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d4c2a514f428 | EDD12BA31EE3 | Is the rish worth taking put humans in dnager just to explor the plant even if they are not sure of it. | Claim | Adequate |
a67eca5bb90c | EDD12BA31EE3 | venus has the hotest surface temperaature than any other plant in our solar system. They say astrnomers are fascinated by Venus because its like Earth. NASA
is also working on studying Venus.
| Evidence | Adequate |
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