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The software can even identify mixed emotions as in da Vinci's masterpiece. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. We humans perfrom this same impressive " calculation" everyday. "Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to covey specific emotions."
Evidence
Adequate
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The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intened to bring a big smile to your face, while it shows how much this computer can do.
Claim
Adequate
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For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar add might follow. Dr. Huang predict that " A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored." Another prediction that Dr. Huang did was that "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." Every human or most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping pictures of possible landing sites for Viking 2, then it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end. It seemed to be staring back at the cameras on Viking 1. These photos were taken from the region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. Viking 1 took a picture of something call a butte or mesa. They're most common in the American West. It's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on mars. Their is one in the Snake RIver Plain in Idaho. On April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. "As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 rimes larger than the pixel size. If there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!" said Jim Garvin. The picture actually shows is the Martian Equivalent of a butte or mesa. This landform is most common in the American west. "It reminds me most of the MIddle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," says Jim Garvin.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Some Schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Projects are used to enhance learning in a different way. During the summer no student wants to work on school work or even think about school.
Lead
Adequate
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summer projects should be teacher- designed
Position
Adequate
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students may take a while to come up with a project or idea,
Claim
Effective
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teacher- designed projects are already made and ready to go,
Claim
Effective
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Projects would be less confusing when made by the teacher themselves.
Claim
Effective
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Students are in school at least 8 to 9 months or for some students all year around, so when it comes to summer break students are ready to relax, go on vacation, or just sleep. Students already have done tons of projects for classes or even just for one class and those projects are very stressful for some. Summer in a lot of cases are relax time and forget about school time so when they are given a project to do a lot would just put it to the side and dont do it at all. When coming up with ideas on what to do some will not know or just not even try that's why it think it should be teacher-base.
Evidence
Effective
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If students are given the instructions and already know the idea it makes it a little easier to get done over the summer. Students tend to procrastinate and take their time, which they should, but that time may be at the last minute. It could be August and they have to go back to school that following week and haven't even came up with an idea yet. Teacher-based projects already have the idea and the instructions on how to do it and it saves time depending on the project. Students can still not do it at all but at least they have the foundation on what to do and start it and have it done with in weeks or days.
Evidence
Effective
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Students already dont want to do the project in the first place so the idea may be very confusing to other students or the teacher. If the project is a group project the idea may not be understood fully and may get taking the wrong way. Students school brains are already shut down so when to making ideas students tend to wing it and just throw it out especially when it is a group project. They think that the other is just going to figure it out on their own and that may not be the case or they leave each other hanging. Teacher- based projects make it easier because the idea and instructions are already there and all the students have to do is just follow them.
Evidence
Effective
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Teacher-based projects do have a downside to them.
Claim
Effective
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Teachers, of course, have been teaching and assigning projects all year and some are easy and some are not. Projects that are given by the teacher have to be completed by the instructions given and if it is not completed that way or in that way all that hard work just went down the drain. Student- based project do make it easier because it is their idea, their instructions, and their own way. So all that hard work doesn't have to go the drain for nothing. Student-based projects can be more creative because it is made from scratch and from their own head. Teacher-based projects are usually less creative because students are just trying to finish it and get it over with. In contrast, students may take a lot of time or wait till the last minute.
Evidence
Effective
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Teacher- based projects or student based projects can all be very good projects. Summer projects can be challenging because the summer is relaxing time, even though all of adults think otherwise, but summer projects do keep the brain fresh. I think that summer projects should be teacher based because it makes it easier on them and the students. 
Concluding Statement
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This essay is about phones and driving. Phones are devices that allow you to communicate with each other. Now modern technology phones allow you to download apps and different types of social media that you can talk to or meet different people around the world. Cars allow people to travel long distances in a short period of time. Nowadays cars are being used for everything and there are many different types of cars to help get the job.
Lead
Adequate
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There are many people using phones to communicate with one and the other or taking pictures to post on social media.
Claim
Adequate
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Phones nowadays are getting harder and harder to put down. Phones have app stores that allow you to play games, different social media, and Youtube/other streaming content. By having these on your phones, you will also get addicted to playing your favorite game, checking to see what's new or people's status on social media, and seeing what people are streaming about on Youtube or what episode/movie you miss.
Evidence
Adequate
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Driving can be learned at the age of 16 in most countries. Some people can learn at different age groups by their parents or they can go to a driving school.
Evidence
Adequate
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Today age driving is one of the things you need in life if you travel a lot and go from place to place.
Claim
Ineffective
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Cars can help you travel long distances, can hold more than one/two people, and cars can be used as storage by helping by holding grocery or holding the thing in your house because you're moving.
Evidence
Adequate
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Phones and Driving can be extremely dangerous.
Position
Adequate
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Driving needs your full attention and phones are an addiction that people constantly get destricted by the driver.
Claim
Adequate
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Drivers constantly get destructed by text messages, games alert, social media updates, and other. Textingand driving or driving and getting distracted by their phones are the most common thing that killed people and having car accident. Most of these things that are happening are caused by teens. Teenagers are the number one reason texting and driving are happening and going on.
Evidence
Adequate
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The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is a wonderful idea in my opinion.
Position
Adequate
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The computor for the students can be a interesting dissision for video imagery.
Claim
Ineffective
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The author explain"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa"(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 4). It proves that the video imagery can be a interesting thing because the software can tract facial movement if it's real or not.
Evidence
Adequate
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Anothor thing about the computor for the students can read the student's emotions.
Claim
Adequate
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The author states" The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computor can do"(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 6). It shows that the facial expressions can be read by a computor because the computor can know when you are feeling happy,sad,mad,etc.
Evidence
Adequate
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The last thing about the computor for the students is that they can be a reowned drama coach.
Claim
Ineffective
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The artical saids" Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage. Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions"(Makeing Mona Lisa Smile 9).Therefore it explains that the computor can be a reowned drama coach because the computor is carfully produce of the emotions on stage.
Evidence
Ineffective
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In conclusion the computors reading emotions are a best idea in time and only time will tell if we can create artifitial intellegence to the computor for the best in the world.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Humans are so diverse. Some may be similar, but none are the exact same. Students are no different, even though they may be learning the same information, the way students understand and learn that information can be vastly different. Teachers help students learn materials through a variety of methods, like projects and tests.
Lead
Adequate
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Schools that require students to complete summer projects should make the projects student designed, proving that there are many different ways of learning.
Position
Effective
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Depending on the student, some methods of learning are incredibly more beneficial than others.
Claim
Effective
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When I learned vital concepts such as multiplication, the way my teacher taught was through constant out loud repetition of the material, which helped my classmates along, but not me. I needed to see the problem worked out and look at the numbers because I had trouble picturing all the math and numbers in my head. Not being able to understand that basic concept of multiplication was detrimental to my math abilities and led the following years of my math career to be absolutely exhausting. This same scenario could take place involving summer projects. A teacher could give a student a summer assignment to help them learn about a concept in that class, but if the design of the assignment was difficult for the student to understand, it could be more hurtful than helpful. The entire reason teachers and schools assign projects over the summer is to assure that students will continue to learn during their break, but how are the students supposed to learn if they can't understand or have trouble with the assignment?
Evidence
Effective
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Projects are meant to provoke students to think, and having students design the project themselves is a great way for them to think more and therefore learn more.
Claim
Effective
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If students designed a summer project, they would have to think about what to do since they most likely won't have as many guidelines that a teacher typically would give. This allows students the opportunity to be creative and think outside the box. Students could then potentially learn a lot about themselves and not just whatever the subject of the project is.
Evidence
Effective
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If the student creates the project themselves, it seems more likely that they would actually enjoy the project. And if they enjoyed doing the project, they will remember it more.
Claim
Effective
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I don't remember the material from my psychology summer assignment this year. All we had to do was research and write about a basic concept from psychology. I do, however, remember the Latin project I did in seventh grade. I think this is because I was allowed to do the project on anything related to Latin that I wanted. All my teacher asked of us was that the project was somehow Latin related. I decided to do my project on ancient roman customs, specifically the different rituals performed as a person reaches certain ages. From that project I remember things like that at six months old a young roman boy gets a round pendant called a bulla to protect them from evil spirits and when they reach age twelve the receive a new type of toga and more. I could not tell you about the five methods of observation used in psychology, which is what my summer assignment this year (11th grade) was about.
Evidence
Effective
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Some may argue that having students design summer projects is a bad idea because the typical student is lazy and will make an easy project design so that they won't have to actually learn anything.
Counterclaim
Effective
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If this is true, having a teacher designed project does not change that situation. The reality is that if a student is lazy and doesn't want to learn, they will not learn.
Rebuttal
Effective
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For my psychology summer assignment, I was lazy during the summer and did not want to do it, but eventually I did it the day before they school year started and learned nothing because it was boring and I wanted to get it over with. However, if the assignment was to research anything I wanted about psychology, perhaps it could have turned out like my 7th grade Latin assignment and I would've actually learned something. From personal experience I can say that the best way to combat an apathetic student is to gain their interest somehow, which could be done by allowing them the freedom to design their own project. For example, I loved reading Frankenstein in English, but after having to write so much about it I no longer like it and don't really remember much of what happened. Even if a subject is interesting, the desire to do a project on it can be crushed by the formatting of the project. Allowing students to do whatever format they want could make students gain interest and want to learn more about a subject compared to doing something they don't want, like writing an essay, which may make them harbor resentment toward the subject instead.
Evidence
Effective
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If a school decides to assign a summer project, the students should be the ones to design them, which shows that there are many ways people learn. By understanding that some children need to be taught in different ways, people can better educate the youth of America. Improving the way the people are educated can give society more informed citizens who are confident in their abilities and work better and smarter. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Should people have the privilege and/or the right to be able to have their phone out inside the car? While there are some good reasons why you should have the right, there are some things that people just can't help.
Lead
Adequate
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We already can't stop all the people that use their phones while they drive and now a days more and more people are getting addicted to their phones almost making it impossible to put down even while just having a simple dinner let alone putting it down while there driving most people don't even realize that there even doing
Evidence
Ineffective
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most care now a days have the Bluetooth or people sell Bluetooth devices so you can be on call and drive while you drive making it better for the people
Claim
Adequate
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but as tested on "MythBusters" changes a little but still distracts you in some sort of way people also know there way around things already and sometimes work or no most of the times it works but some of the times it doesn't
Counterclaim
Adequate
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under a code of law because there are not enough laws in places or "fine print" and they can just say oh well it's like a Bluetooth but it wasn't type of stuff and the court can't do anything about it
Evidence
Ineffective
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This is what I think about the phones calls and driving is may not be clear cause there really is no answer to this question for me personally I don't care what they do or say all I care about is if our people our safe there really is no reason for people to be not allowed to have there phones in a car or make calls or answer them
Position
Adequate
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maybe there should a cam in every car that shows whenever your texting and driving or have your phone up against your ear just so if the other person that gets hit they have the cam to see if there were texting or on a call whenever you are driving and get into accident (hopefully no) but still you would have the prove that they were on it meaning the phone or not.
Evidence
Ineffective
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They (cops) think they can just lie as well but with that cam they can't lie, or anything even know they shouldn't even if it's an exsaturration it still means something in the court of law it could either mean good or bad for the person testifying what they did or didn't do and with that cam there is no more lying anymore and takes away more problems like for example who/what happened before the crash how many people were really in the car and finally how they got hit and out of the car if camera is in correct placement in every car sadly they all have to be in different placement in each variety of car.
Evidence
Ineffective
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This is what I think and what people should do about cars and phones the true ones would understand this message thank you so much for taking your time to read till again bye.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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Mercury is closer to Earth's sun, yet Venus is the highest temperature planet in the solar system. This temperature has presented many difficulties trying to put a person on the planet. Landing someone on Venus has not been succeded yet. Many scientist and astronomers are working on creating a spacecraft that will hold together, although all of the dangers that are presented
Lead
Adequate
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F0740AF01F22
In the text of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it shows many dangers and reason not to put a person on this planet, yet if they succeed the outcome would be much greater and rewarding. Studying Venus is a pursuit that should be taken.
Position
Adequate
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The outcomes of previous attempts to put a spacecraft on Venus have been unsuccessful. The previous trys have only survived a few hours long. It only takes one very thought out and well planned try to be successful. It would be a great place to reach and put living organisms on
Evidence
Adequate
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F0740AF01F22
Venus has many dangers although astronomers are trying to put a person on it.
Claim
Adequate
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Some of the dangers may seem unthinkable to put a person through but NASA is working on a spacecraft that will protect the person.
Claim
Adequate
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They have so many advantages that are helping them succeed. The planet used to be covered in oceans and other forms of life. The text states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." This shows that it has similarities to Earth and has water and used to have other living organisms. The danger of not having any water or being able to hold any kind of life form is not there.
Evidence
Adequate
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The temperatures and the terrain of Venus are both dangers and good qualities.
Claim
Adequate
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Although the danger of having such high temperatures around 170 degrees Fahrenheit the air pressure is around the same as Earth's. The text states, "At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth." This shows the air pressure would be subseptable for a human to land and be able to breathe. With the right spacecraft the temperatures can be avoided and would not be an issue.
Evidence
Adequate
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Venus has similar terrain and weather conditions as Earth.
Claim
Adequate
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The similar features include rocks, mountians, valleys, and many more. The text states, "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountians, and craters." This shows that the surface and ground are similar to Earth. This also shows great potential to land a spacecraft there.
Evidence
Adequate
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The extreme weather conditions on Venus is also similar to the ones on Earth.
Claim
Ineffective
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The text states, "Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent ligtning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface." This shows that the weather conditions are similar, so this would help the manufactures of the spacecraft be prepaired for the conditions and help build a better craft. Although there are many dangers with every advantage the Venus is still a good planet to try and put living organisims on.
Evidence
Ineffective
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In conclusion, the studying that is being done on Venus and the more found out the less dangerous the mission will be. The advantages are much greater than the dangers. If they are successful then there will be another planet for people to live on. The similar weather conditions is a tremendous advantage. There being water already on the planet and the possibility of living organisms being on the planet shoes that it is possible. The possibilty of something great over rules the possibility failing. If the astronomers give up and say that the dangers are to big then they will never know if the dangers were not defeatable or not. Venus has all of these dangers but is a worthy pursuit to put living creatures on.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Many people may argue about the advantages of limited car usage. "When i had a car, i was always tense, im much happier this way" (Source 1)
Lead
Adequate
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Many countries including France, Colombia, and Germany seem to have no problem with limited car usuage
Claim
Adequate
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Germany is one of the greatest countries that is against low car life. 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars. 57 percent sold a car to move Germany. (Source 1). In total their is approximatly 5,500 residents and has a low car life because their are less space for parking.
Evidence
Adequate
4a0602e05e0c
F074E15D7250
One of the most populated city in France is Paris. Paris enforced a driving ban to clear up the polution. A 22-euro fine was given if one failed to corespond with the rules. Around 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine . After 5 days of almost car free roads (not including bus and taxis) the traffic went down by 60 percent.(Source 2). The biggest problem of the smog was Diesel fuel. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France compared to the rest of Western Europe that has 53.3 percent average on Diesel.
Evidence
Adequate
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For 3 straight years, Bogota has been doing "Day Without Cars" that limites transportation only allowing buses and taxis. the goal for this day is to reduce smog in the capital city. Violators who failed to corespond was faced with a $25 fines. " Millons of colombians hiked,biked,skated, or took the buses to work during this car-free day" (Source 3). The whole family went to parks and sports centers to occupy their day. Even two others Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar joined in on this event.
Evidence
Adequate
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What both countries are trying to do is limited cars so less polution.
Position
Ineffective
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Their are other transportation besides cars that we can use.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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This technology to read and find out the emotinal expressions of students is crazy and weird.
Position
Adequate
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Its spooky how looking at Mona Lisa picture can express yoiur emotions
Claim
Ineffective
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Shes actually smiling, but if your mad she'll look mad. So creepy how that works. I feel like they should'nt of told us that. Now when we look and think so deep about this picture we can be frightened, in our dreams or whenever.
Evidence
Adequate
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Its talking about shes 83% happy and the rest of percentages are mad, sad and all them emotional feelings. They said with this software they can caculate emotions. The picture in the software uses 44 major muscles, and the model must move like a human.
Evidence
Adequate
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This is kinda smart to caculate emotions, and empressive with the picture where it really moves with 44 major muscles and tells you your emotions.
Claim
Adequate
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Its true how we can tell how somebody feels by thier face expression, but not evreybody shows it. Some people must be going throught the roughest time in their life and still smile through it. So not everything can work.
Evidence
Adequate
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I like how the the software of Mona Lisa is really intended to bring a smile to your face, but sometimes it could creep you out.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars states that street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden near the French and Swiss borders. Vauban's streets are completely "car free" as stated in the second paragraph. 57% of people sold their car just to move on Vauban's streets. When Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother two said that "when she had a car she was always tense. But is much happier this way." Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of growing trend in europe. The United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called "smart planning" stated in paragraph 4. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up 50% in some car intensive areas in the United States. When you don't have a car you had to walk to get where you need to go. But when you get a car you dont think about walking because all you wanna do is drive. As stated in paragraph 9, in the United States the Environmental Prtection Agency is promoting "car reduced" communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously. In source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog, states that paris enforced a partial drving ban to clear the air of the global city. In paris on Mondays motorists with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd numbered plates the following day. Keeping the air clear is very important. 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to fine. Car traffic was down 6o percent in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog. All the smog rivaled Beijing and China which is well know as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Being in class knowing that if the lesson gets boring on the computer, it can change it into a more interesting lesson for students
Claim
Adequate
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This machine created by Dr. Huang and his colleague prof. Nicu Sebe can impact students in ways that are good or bad. For some people it can be a good thing but for others it can mean a bad thing.
Position
Adequate
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The bad thing of this emotion recognition is that students with medical issues that affects their learning because of it affecting them from using technology.
Claim
Ineffective
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For u schools who use this technology have to focus on their students with medical problems that affects them from even using it.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Also another thing that schools have to worry about is the finance for the computers that break and has to be repaired.
Claim
Adequate
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The good things about having this type of technology in schools is that it have more students be more interested in learning and can help them plan out what they would like to do in their future
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Having the emotion recognition can help students in advanced classes who struggling with their classes have a more easier way for them to pass and graduate with the diploma they wanted. This can technology can have more students graduate and have less high school drop-outs.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The emotion recognition can be a good thing for certain students and can be a valuable thing, but for other students it can affect they way they learn if they are more hands on or have a medical problem that makes them unable to use technolgy. Even though this machine created by Dr. Huang and prof. Nicu Sebe is a great thing for schools but it can have different impacts on students wether it's good or bad.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A Facial Action Coding System is where it sees if you're happy, sad, surpised, anger, digust, and fear. How? It will tell by have a picture of a no emotional , than compare to your see what's the diifference
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Adequate
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Having Facial Action Coding System in the school, would be kinda great
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Adequate
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cause it would show the teachers what the student thinks about the assginment
Claim
Adequate
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Like, the Dr. Huang said ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'. But, the computer needs to understand that most communication is nonverbal, like emotional communication.
Evidence
Adequate
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But, than i'm against because how can the computer see what all the student are feeling like?
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Adequate
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Like, is going to look at every student face, if yes that had be a waste of time cause that would take the whole class period. If no, than do the teachers have to buy a Facial Action Coding System computer for every student.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Finally, I think it would be a good idea because the teachers would know how the students are feeling by something they had said or asign. If I was a student, I'd like it cause that would be a good new expreince.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In the story The Challenge Of Exploring Venus the authour talks about starts and where they all come from and how the earths twin is closets in the planetray neighbor he also talks about the solar system and ow its the secong planet from the sun and earths twin is the closet planted to the earth distance also he talks alot about hoe thivk the earth is and how everything is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets.. the sister of the planet is so inhospitable that the scientits started discussing more visits to the surfacde and astronomers where also fascinated by venus because it may well once have een the most earth like planet in our system in paragraph 5 the authour talks about how the air pressure in the sea level and he talk mainy about how the earths survivable for us humans also he includes things about nasa and how everthing is working for the study of venus such as electronics which is made from silicon carbide which has been tested in paragraph 8 hes talking about the striving challenge presented by venus and how it have value but notg only bbecause of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally
Evidence
Ineffective
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this story was about diffrent plantes and how eveything is set up also hoe everything be taveling in the earths eveviorments a ns solar systems.
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Ineffective
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The end of the school year has finally come, and you can't wait to be swimming with your friends and family, however , that day will not come. Instead you are assigned your worst fear; a dreadful , hideous , and disgusting summer assignment. When all hope is lost your teacher gives you a final decision.
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Adequate
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A teacher-designed project is best for the students
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Adequate