tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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25d9d1d42ee7	F2D723344069	On his second trip, Luke served as night watchman. His job was to check on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. But he couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.	Evidence	Adequate
677b07cda924	F2D723344069	Who would ever want to go through that and get broken ribs	Claim	Adequate
8bdad2ef97d7	F2D723344069	That is my argument to not be a Seagoing Cowboy.	Position	Ineffective
001a03dec4e8	F2D89425BF9C	This stroy is talking abour a planet name Venus	Claim	Ineffective
275dfb6f5016	F2D89425BF9C	Thier saying that Venus is the Brightest in the evening. Venus is the secound plaent form the sun. Sicencetest are saying that Venus is like Earth's tiwn?.Earth and Venus have the same terms of density and size and occasionally Fomr the closest in distance too. NASA is wroking on approaching and study Venus. Tos see what dose it have in the air or dose it have and disaes. The aother projects is looking back to an old technology called the mechanical Computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an inprtan role in the 1940s during World War \|\|.They are going to meet challenges oresented by venus has value and its not only because of the insight by gaind on the plaent itself.	Evidence	Ineffective
f329ef7731b2	F2D89425BF9C	On Earths travels and beyound should not be Be limited by dangers travels abd doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of the imantion.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
6d3008ec7d83	F2FA6B69F481	I think people should and shouldn't use their phones while driving.	Position	Adequate
a1f67cb7beb1	F2FA6B69F481	I think people who drive and pay more attention to their phones should be arrested and have their lisecen taken away because the could cause crashes , deaths and traffic	Evidence	Adequate
7238f7c86723	F2FA6B69F481	the most common death in America is car crashes because of stupid drivers and people looking at their phone while driving.	Claim	Adequate
986947147f01	F2FA6B69F481	Now the reason I say people should have their phones is in case of emergency like if they get in a car crash or if they have to call 911 to help someone.	Claim	Adequate
b6e37d65e3ee	F2FA6B69F481	in the u. s. it is a law that you have to have your phone down from your hands while driving or at least have a Bluetooth device that can connect to your phone to your car so you don't have to look at your phone to call or answer a call while your driving a car	Evidence	Ineffective
621a8034380d	F2FA6B69F481	so I'm both with and against with this argument about if drivers should and shouldn't have their phones while driving	Concluding Statement	Adequate
6c0977457853	F324DBEBCAFA	In this article they share about the Facial Acting Coding System. They ask us if we agree with it or not.	Lead	Ineffective
dfc29d37de54	F324DBEBCAFA	My answer would be yes, I think there is nothing wrong with it.	Position	Adequate
2b1e9b520090	F324DBEBCAFA	My personal opinon is it is actually kind of cool.	Claim	Adequate
390efc8a8298	F324DBEBCAFA	This can really help people out knowing others emotions.	Claim	Adequate
fd638fe28733	F324DBEBCAFA	The reason I think there isn't anything wrong with this is because I dont see its harming anything.	Claim	Adequate
0b7551b6d111	F324DBEBCAFA	When I said it could help people I was refering to when they said that it can show when someone is bored and that the teacher could try to make it less boring. If I was a teacher or I wondered hiow someone is I9 would want to use this.	Evidence	Adequate
7845789c074b	F324DBEBCAFA	Another reason this is helpful is that it can detect when someone is feeling down or mad or something else.	Claim	Adequate
4b0f1411cc93	F324DBEBCAFA	When someone sees what it detected they can see if the student needs someone to talk to or help. When a teacher uses this and they see that the student is bored and not focus they could try to make it fun or do something at the moment and make the focus and awake.	Evidence	Adequate
2e7eb560d8fa	F324DBEBCAFA	This system can be compareded to peoples thoughts on what some are feeling.	Claim	Ineffective
2cc7d3067f20	F324DBEBCAFA	There are some people that can almost do the same as this. But this system can do it pretty fast and tell yus exactly everything. They say when you do this you move your muscles and whatever ones you usae can make you happy. Which I think is cool and smart.	Evidence	Ineffective
78683972ffc4	F324DBEBCAFA	In conclusion I totally agree with this. Almost everything I put is my feeling on this Facial Action Coding System. Overall I can say it can really help some people out and that it is very smart. This is a thing they could use in an everyday thing. It could aso correct how people feel about teachers lessons or just anything like that.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
02e0e38d979b	F34BB022A303	In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy but also dangerous.	Position	Adequate
40033aeafd61	F34BB022A303	The idea of studying Venus is a very scary idea because of all the dangers it can cuase for humans to get close to the very hot and stormy planet.	Claim	Ineffective
e22117642fea	F34BB022A303	In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" they are wanting to explore Venus but they realized the dangers it can have and the worthiness of also trying this experiment.	Claim	Adequate
bf15a3f8bfc2	F34BB022A303	In the text the author states that Venus is a very hard place to land a spacecraft on thats why we haven't done it in 3 decades. A reason for them not landing a spacecraft on Venus is the extreme temperatures that humans can face. The temperatures o Venus can get up to over 800 degrees fahrenheit, also the atmosphric pressure is 90 times greater than wht we experience on Earth. The author states that a "submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals." The author is saying that if went to Venus with a spacecraft there would be a great possibility that the spacecraft could melt right then and there on Venus.	Evidence	Adequate
9d6d3c86f03a	F34BB022A303	In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author gaves us many reasons why the experiment would be a worthy but also very risky experiment. Knowing what the people from NASA said about Venus's temperatures and atmosphere would be very risky for the humand they would take to that planet.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
c87141e031f2	F34DD475F104	Have you ever wanted to help somebody? Everybody should help someone when they are in need. You should always help someone even if you dont know them. Sometimes you should just do thinks to be nice and not for money.	Lead	Adequate
a825bc37f642	F34DD475F104	You also get to visit other places and see unusual things	Claim	Adequate
47b46aeba402	F34DD475F104	One of the dangers of going on a cattle boat though is being out in the middle of the sea so you always have to watch your back and becareful what you do.	Claim	Ineffective
78426baff5e5	F34DD475F104	One of the good things about going on a cattle boat is when you do go on one you might learn somethings about animals.	Claim	Adequate
f4673d1b5ef7	F34DD475F104	Another thing is that you get to help people in need.	Claim	Adequate
ac2f9c88bc06	F34DD475F104	Another good thing is that you might make a new friend in another country. You also might go back to that country for a trip with your family.	Claim	Adequate
e9a46f8fca8e	F34DD475F104	Its nice when your friends ask you to do something like going to another country and helping people out. When you go and help people like Luke did just think about those people and how they felt about you helping them with getting food and water. After your done helping someone in need like Luke did it kinda makes you feel happy that you did that for that person.	Evidence	Adequate
9a874cc17d40	F34DD475F104	Plus if you were to go on a cattle boat its not all just work you can also have a little fun playing tennis, boxing, fencing, Table tennis,and whittling and reading.	Claim	Adequate
c89925896d5e	F34DD475F104	Thats why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.	Position	Adequate
06a5c4396175	F3580A6BAFA8	Almost everyone owns a car because people are traveling constantly to get from point A to point B. No matter who it may be, that person at some point in their lives needs some way to get around. Everyday people need to either go to the store, pick up their kids, go to work, go to school, you name it. That doesn't mean that owning a car is a necessity, all around the world many people are trying to cut down and limit their car usage by having a whole lot of other options. There are buses, people can car pool, walk, skate, bike, and many more	Lead	Adequate
6b32e9553db0	F3580A6BAFA8	People are coming to the conclusion that if we, as a whole, decide to start cutting down on our usage of cars it can benefit the way we live.	Position	Effective
9701cdb33e8e	F3580A6BAFA8	Lots of people actually don't mind not having a car just yet. Most teenagers do want to get their license and a car but there's so much other things they need to focus on. It really is not a priority for them because they have school, work, plus if they do need to get somewhere they can always take the bus and get a ride from a friend (Source 4). In Germany, there is a city by the name of Vauban, that is known to be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life (Source 1). Vauban's goal and idea, which is to cut down on cars for a better living, has made it'a way around the world, so that other states and countries can aspire to do the same and little by little we could have a world that is not so dependent on cars.	Evidence	Adequate
fc0881c9cc7b	F3580A6BAFA8	The idea of using cars, for some, it causes them stress	Claim	Effective
aa0bfae9b4cd	F3580A6BAFA8	they're always tense, not using a car makes them happier, as stated by Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two (Source 1). The stress aspect of this could be due to the fact that in the most recent years, the percentage of car crashes and accidents have gone up. Many people abhor the idea of using cars because they have been in an terible accident themselves or someone close to them. Also, it can even just be all the traffic jams that occur during rush hour, which makes people late and accidents do happen. For example in Bogota, Colombia, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to their designated location, to leave the streets due to traffic jams (Source 3). Since they knew that lots of their citizens were deciding not to use cars they started making uneven, pitted sidewalks into nice, smooth, replaced ones for them (Source 3).	Evidence	Effective
f0a325d18aee	F3580A6BAFA8	Another reason why people want to limit their usage on cars is because of all the pollution cars create.	Claim	Effective
e07a277e7c35	F3580A6BAFA8	Passenger cars are rsponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States (Source 1). Not many people think about the effects of air pollution like smog, but it is a big deal. Since people don't think about it often, there is no way for the majority of us to try and find a solution to put into action to stop it or help it go down. In Paris, there was a partial driving ban to clear the air around the city (Source 2). Paris' partial ban was their idea to try and make their city a better place. With the ban being enforced and put into play there were about 4,000 drivers fined (Source 2). It turns out that since the driving ban was made the congestion, car traffic, had gone down 60 percent in the capital of France, just after five days of less smog pollution and Paris is typically known to have more smog than any other European capitals (Source 2). This goes to show, that slowly people are actually becoming aware of what's going on and they actually care enought to try and make things better.	Evidence	Effective
c8d7756d1ae5	F3580A6BAFA8	All in all, there are many ways to try and cut down on our car usage for the better. It can be anything from not buying as many cars, to deciding to not use cars at all and deciding to walk, skate, and bike, etc. Not only will limiting our car usage as a whole stop traffic jams, car accidents, air pollution, and more, it will help to benefit our lives for the better whether or not people want to believe it. If things keep going from here, and more and more decide that less car usage is better than over a time span of let's say 20-30 years, there could be a lot less dangerous things occuring in our lives.	Concluding Statement	Effective
e624e338577b	F36E4C217F66	Venus is an second planet for the sun. Sometime Venus is called the "Evening Star," because Venus is one of the brightest points on light in the night sky. Venus also have a nickname like other planets have different nicknames. Venus nickname is misleading. - Earth, Venus, and Mars are our other planetary neighbor, they orbit in a different speeds. there is a time when Mars is getting closer to our planet Earth and there is a time when Venus is getting closer to the Earth. Often Venus referred to as Earth's twin because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in a size and occasionlly the closest in distance. - Like other planets have atmosphere and different temperture, Venus also have atmospere and differents temperture. When a spaceship when to Venus it couldn't survived the landing for more than a few hours because unlike Venus's surface is hottest in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Venus's clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in it atmosphere.	Evidence	Ineffective
1288ef0ec580	F36E4C217F66	Venus may be dangerous but sometime it can be our nearest option for a planetary visit.	Position	Ineffective
9137ca20efaf	F36E4C217F66	Long ago, Venus was like our planet Earth because back then it has trees and same atmosphere as Earth. But now Venus is dry up and only a dry vellays where water used to flow a montains left.	Evidence	Adequate
387f47ba4397	F3928951775C	Many people throughout the world, would agree that car usage plays a significant role in daily lives. Although some may argue it plays an important role or a not so important role, the limitation of car usuage would be a very helpful thing for everyone, and the world we are surrounded by.	Lead	Effective
4e66a5dbfb0c	F3928951775C	There are many advantages to cities being able to control the amount of cars being used everyday.	Position	Adequate
d27bb78a399b	F3928951775C	Advantages such as, less pollution in the enviroment by creating less smog,	Claim	Effective
ac018c8a9b57	F3928951775C	making the cities and roads a lot safer, by lowering the risk of getting into or even causing a wreck,	Claim	Effective
668d9c23dc45	F3928951775C	even something as simple as making your life, and the lives around you much more peaceful.	Claim	Effective
78a5658368b0	F3928951775C	"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. (paragraph 5)" Cars are the number one cause of pollution in most cities, espcially ones that have large amounts of drivers on the road in a single day. The author of source one, states in pargraph 8 that "..some new suburbs may well look more Vauban-like not only in developed countries, but also in the developing world, where emissons from an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities" All authors state that limiting car usage, is a great way to reduce air pollution. Paragraph 10, of source two, states that "After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"	Evidence	Adequate
816c4763d613	F3928951775C	If car usuage was limited in cities there would be less smog, and pollution in the air. Not only would it be better for the enviroment, it would also be better for your health.	Claim	Effective
17a0f1492995	F3928951775C	Wrecks are things that claim the lives of people each and everyday. Some can be prevented, yet not all can. Think of how many lives are taken each day, due to wrecks because of things like congestion in big cities. Or even things such as someone behind the wheel who is stressed, and driving wrecklessly. A source from paragraph 3, states "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way" Many people, get tense and stressed from the drivers around them. Limiting how much you use a car, can improve things such as stress levels. Imagine how much more at ease you would be if you constantly heard, a bicylest wizzing by you, or hearing children chattering and laughing among themselves, instead of hearing horns honking, loud motors, or even the sound of a car crash. Roads and streets take up much more space than we think or even realize. With less cars on the road everyday and more people walking, or riding a bike, could only mean one thing; less roads and bigger sidewalks. More cities are trying to make limiting car usage a much bigger thing, "...in attempts to make suburbs more compact..." Source one, also states that "In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather that in malls along some distant highway. (paragraph 6)	Evidence	Effective
b109d1343706	F3928951775C	Getting to these places will become safer for everyone.	Claim	Effective
0eda976662bb	F3928951775C	As you can see, there are many advantages to limiting car usage, such as, limiting the amount of pollution there is, lowering the risks of getting into, or even causing a wreck, and even something as simple as making it a more peaceful enviroment to live in, not only for yourself, but for others around you. Our world, and daily lives would be affected in great ways, in more cities, and even more countries, participated in lessing the amount of car usage.	Concluding Statement	Effective
7d3b6961fd16	F3A980C4613A	Have you ever seen something unusual in the ground? If so do you think it was created by humans or just a natural landform of some sort. Many people believe that most landforms on earth are made by humans	Lead	Adequate
5494bc3dd72c	F3A980C4613A	The face on mars is a natural landform.	Position	Adequate
3768063bd559	F3A980C4613A	If the "face' on mars was created by alliens it would look a lot different.	Claim	Ineffective
7d2f9607a751	F3A980C4613A	Many people think alliens look weird, Well the "face" on mars wastn't so weird looking. It looked almost like a human face. You would think that alliens would make something radical and not just a face in their planet. Many people seem to believe that they would make something simple.	Evidence	Ineffective
4fa38e13fe5f	F3A980C4613A	Eventhough many people were not satisfied with the theory that NASA gave them, NASA went on to search for more clues as to which "alliens made the landform."	Claim	Adequate
6c36df6335aa	F3A980C4613A	From the pictures that they took you would think that they would be able to detect whether alliens even walked/ touched the surface of the landform.	Evidence	Adequate
c06888d3bdad	F3A980C4613A	If you think that alliens made the landform, I would suggest you look at the picture more closely. Just because its on a planet like mars doesnt mean it was made by an allien.	Claim	Ineffective
02fd9d1cc628	F3A980C4613A	I mean how many people actually believe in alliens anyway? If you've never seen them how do you know if they even exist? Take another quick look at the picture tell what you think. Is it even possible for alliens to be alive even if it is on another planet?	Evidence	Ineffective
03d41232df66	F3A980C4613A	The "face" on mars is a natural landform. What leads me to beieve that, is that i dont think alliens are real. Maybe they are real, but why would they make something so simple as a face. Dont you think they wouldve went a little overboard with their creations?	Concluding Statement	Adequate
aa1b4b9353fd	F3E8A109AE05	I believe that the use of techonology to read student emotional expression is valuable.	Position	Adequate
9723a52ba7dd	F3E8A109AE05	It be awesome to read somebody's emotions thorugh a machine.	Claim	Adequate
e023632a464e	F3E8A109AE05	it would tell you alot about what a person is feeling and thats important to know. their are many excellent and well reasoned examples of why this technology is valuable.	Evidence	Adequate
212d859b463c	F3E8A109AE05	My one reason i believe this is valuable technology is if somebody was feeling depressed and was not willing to open up to anybody that individual could do self harm to himself	Claim	Adequate
d2a3111dafb3	F3E8A109AE05	If they know how that individual was feeling maybe they would have helped he/she. in the passage it says " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused and bored". Then Dr. Huang says" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. This technology could become really usful for many different situations. Thats one of the reasons of why this makes this machine so valuable.	Evidence	Adequate
2d830416ecbe	F3E8A109AE05	The creator of FACS[ [Facial Action Coding System] Dr. Paul Eckman has "classified six basic emotions". The machine can read happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. this type of technology can aid and solve world wide problem. For example what if an individual person or more were having issues with a certain subject at school but dont know how to ask for help	Evidence	Adequate
b96fefeaf115	F3E8A109AE05	The Computer would make " 3-D computer model of the face" and they can anaylze what they might be feeling about the subject. then thats when the help comes.	Claim	Adequate
91934cd45075	F3E8A109AE05	Another example is reading different emotions is some how very important. It can be used against people who have commited crime.	Claim	Ineffective
5377ddc63b3f	F3E8A109AE05	An example is if a person who murdered somebody and nobody knew if he was being honest or not, the machine can read his emotions and has a better chance to tell if the person is lying or not. It can be used for celebritys and politician as said in the article. This can identify many human being feelings and it doesnt take to much time.	Evidence	Adequate
15e66f14f4cc	F3E8A109AE05	In conclusion their are still many reasons why i believe this technology is valuable. This type of technology would be nice to have around and would be really usful. It would prevent many accidents and help solve probelms. Techonology like this cant go to waste and should be used to our adavntage. this is my reason why i think this technology is valuable.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
d7eb4685c150	F42FF5B7D208	Teachers have more often than not been the epicenter of academic negativity. There always has been and always will complain about teaching styles. If students could take the steering wheel, chances are they will understand the material taught and retain that information.	Lead	Effective
04f561e39da6	F42FF5B7D208	summer projects should be student designed rather than teacher designed	Position	Effective
55544d564401	F42FF5B7D208	it allows for a more positve and creative atmosphere,	Claim	Effective
f637e7e07c34	F42FF5B7D208	improved scheduling	Claim	Effective
d4071eafcda7	F42FF5B7D208	higher pass rates.	Claim	Effective
aa822ece9a94	F42FF5B7D208	Virtually nobody wants to spend their summer doing classwork and projects.	Counterclaim	Adequate
9c0347c212da	F42FF5B7D208	However, if the projects were both educational and entertaining, then summer would be that much more enjoyable. It would also allow the content to soak in much better.	Rebuttal	Effective
afcef43e886b	F42FF5B7D208	For instance, say a student wanted to to a project on auto mechanics. With a teacher designed rubric, the would want the project to be somewhat generc in its presentation. On the flip side of that, if the rubric was composed by students, that student now has a variety of options as far as presentation.	Evidence	Adequate
7008101b9f48	F42FF5B7D208	intstead of having to worry about one big poject, student could decide to break the project up into shorter, more managable dates. It would also allow for a more balanced schedule in general.	Evidence	Adequate
4f4a0a6b9799	F42FF5B7D208	Some people say that if the old rubric works, then keep on using it. They have been working for years now, so why change it; because students are sick and tired of repititon. Doing the same thing over and over for an extended amount of time is not good. It starts to blur the summers together, to the point where someone will not remember what they did because of the summers being so similar.	Evidence	Adequate
89ac6ac031c9	F42FF5B7D208	With that being said, student designed projects are the much better route. With students being able to choose the subject and presentation style of the project, it will allow for creative juices to flow through everyones' minds and really intrigue the students. It would also allow for better time management on the development of said project. Finally, if students are interested in their projects and they genuinely want to do it, then the grades will improve. They will also be able to gather and retain the information that is being introduced to them.	Concluding Statement	Effective
69d112a8111f	F43B82E81D75	Teacher-based or student-based summer project, which is better? Some schools require students to keep their mind thinking even during summer break. They use summer projects to help their mind stay awake.	Lead	Adequate
f8abc2aae046	F43B82E81D75	students completing the project would rather make it themselves than have a teacher assign the project to them.	Position	Effective
b917ece1784b	F43B82E81D75	they will make it more fun and interesting for themselves,	Claim	Effective
42de094708c5	F43B82E81D75	they will make the project easier for them to understand,	Claim	Effective
c962e25966ec	F43B82E81D75	they will enjoy doing the project since it will be from their prospective.	Claim	Effective
b73fa8c85069	F43B82E81D75	Although a student-based project would be more enjoyable for them to complete, a teacher based project would be more effective for both the teacher and the student. The teacher would make the project how it's supposed to be because they know what the students are supposed to learn over the summer. Having the students make their own project would make it to easy for them and the teacher would not really know what is going on because the kids are not going to school. Teachers would want the students to know the proper materials for the next school year even if it mean't just writing a summary of a book.	Evidence	Effective
db065f298d79	F43B82E81D75	The summer project should be a teacher-based project because it informs the teacher of what is happening and what they are doing during the project, it helps the student learn what they need to maintain in their brain during the summer, and it also makes sure the project is not to easy or hard for the students.	Counterclaim	Effective
4b94da0d00da	F43B82E81D75	The student would not want to spend their summer doing a boring project because that would mean that they would put it off until the end of summer or they might just not do it at all. Having a project that makes them go outside and explore the world is very interesting and would make anyone want to do it. Students need motivation and having the project be something fun like go to an amusement park and explain what your see. If a teacher really wants a student to spend their summer doing a project, there has to be a motivation factor or something that makes them want to complete the project.	Evidence	Effective
e55e85ad98d6	F43B82E81D75	Student could work in groups to make it easier. It would not necessarily be the whole project being easier it would just be making short cuts to get to one point faster. The groups would be people who are already friends and that would motivate them to do the project because then while doing work they still hang out with their friends. Making the project easier might also mean that the students might be able to understand it better and if they do need help the can ask their peers or email the teacher.	Evidence	Effective
4a6af9318a19	F43B82E81D75	What older teachers think young students like might not always be what they like. Students like to explore and be who they want to be but teachers might make a stay at home project. Teenagers and students are also very impatient they do not like to do activities for a long time. This project should have a two week period to complete then the students will complete it faster and will make them more prepared for the next school year.	Evidence	Adequate
d110b04244f9	F43B82E81D75	This all makes the students and teachers life easier. Summer is mean't to be spent away from school so having to complete a project is more then enough fro the students. If the student has a problem which their project they can just ask their peers or they can ask the teacher. It should not be very difficult for the student and schools should only make this a mandatory projects but not make it take up all of the students summer. Neither do teachers want to be grading a bunch of projects at the beginning of the school year when everything just started again.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
2374a547e375	F456754DA472	The face on Mars is just a natural landform	Position	Adequate

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On his second trip, Luke served as night watchman. His job was to check on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. But he couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.

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Who would ever want to go through that and get broken ribs

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That is my argument to not be a Seagoing Cowboy.

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This stroy is talking abour a planet name Venus

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Thier saying that Venus is the Brightest in the evening. Venus is the secound plaent form the sun. Sicencetest are saying that Venus is like Earth's tiwn?.Earth and Venus have the same terms of density and size and occasionally Fomr the closest in distance too. NASA is wroking on approaching and study Venus. Tos see what dose it have in the air or dose it have and disaes. The aother projects is looking back to an old technology called the mechanical Computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an inprtan role in the 1940s during World War ||.They are going to meet challenges oresented by venus has value and its not only because of the insight by gaind on the plaent itself.

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On Earths travels and beyound should not be Be limited by dangers travels abd doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of the imantion.

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I think people should and shouldn't use their phones while driving.

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I think people who drive and pay more attention to their phones should be arrested and have their lisecen taken away because the could cause crashes , deaths and traffic

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the most common death in America is car crashes because of stupid drivers and people looking at their phone while driving.

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Now the reason I say people should have their phones is in case of emergency like if they get in a car crash or if they have to call 911 to help someone.

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in the u. s. it is a law that you have to have your phone down from your hands while driving or at least have a Bluetooth device that can connect to your phone to your car so you don't have to look at your phone to call or answer a call while your driving a car

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so I'm both with and against with this argument about if drivers should and shouldn't have their phones while driving

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In this article they share about the Facial Acting Coding System. They ask us if we agree with it or not.

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My answer would be yes, I think there is nothing wrong with it.

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My personal opinon is it is actually kind of cool.

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This can really help people out knowing others emotions.

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The reason I think there isn't anything wrong with this is because I dont see its harming anything.

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When I said it could help people I was refering to when they said that it can show when someone is bored and that the teacher could try to make it less boring. If I was a teacher or I wondered hiow someone is I9 would want to use this.

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Another reason this is helpful is that it can detect when someone is feeling down or mad or something else.

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When someone sees what it detected they can see if the student needs someone to talk to or help. When a teacher uses this and they see that the student is bored and not focus they could try to make it fun or do something at the moment and make the focus and awake.

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This system can be compareded to peoples thoughts on what some are feeling.

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There are some people that can almost do the same as this. But this system can do it pretty fast and tell yus exactly everything. They say when you do this you move your muscles and whatever ones you usae can make you happy. Which I think is cool and smart.

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In conclusion I totally agree with this. Almost everything I put is my feeling on this Facial Action Coding System. Overall I can say it can really help some people out and that it is very smart. This is a thing they could use in an everyday thing. It could aso correct how people feel about teachers lessons or just anything like that.

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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy but also dangerous.

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The idea of studying Venus is a very scary idea because of all the dangers it can cuase for humans to get close to the very hot and stormy planet.

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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" they are wanting to explore Venus but they realized the dangers it can have and the worthiness of also trying this experiment.

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In the text the author states that Venus is a very hard place to land a spacecraft on thats why we haven't done it in 3 decades. A reason for them not landing a spacecraft on Venus is the extreme temperatures that humans can face. The temperatures o Venus can get up to over 800 degrees fahrenheit, also the atmosphric pressure is 90 times greater than wht we experience on Earth. The author states that a "submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals." The author is saying that if went to Venus with a spacecraft there would be a great possibility that the spacecraft could melt right then and there on Venus.

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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author gaves us many reasons why the experiment would be a worthy but also very risky experiment. Knowing what the people from NASA said about Venus's temperatures and atmosphere would be very risky for the humand they would take to that planet.

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Have you ever wanted to help somebody? Everybody should help someone when they are in need. You should always help someone even if you dont know them. Sometimes you should just do thinks to be nice and not for money.

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You also get to visit other places and see unusual things

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One of the dangers of going on a cattle boat though is being out in the middle of the sea so you always have to watch your back and becareful what you do.

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One of the good things about going on a cattle boat is when you do go on one you might learn somethings about animals.

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Another thing is that you get to help people in need.

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Another good thing is that you might make a new friend in another country. You also might go back to that country for a trip with your family.

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Its nice when your friends ask you to do something like going to another country and helping people out. When you go and help people like Luke did just think about those people and how they felt about you helping them with getting food and water. After your done helping someone in need like Luke did it kinda makes you feel happy that you did that for that person.

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Plus if you were to go on a cattle boat its not all just work you can also have a little fun playing tennis, boxing, fencing, Table tennis,and whittling and reading.

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Thats why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

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Almost everyone owns a car because people are traveling constantly to get from point A to point B. No matter who it may be, that person at some point in their lives needs some way to get around. Everyday people need to either go to the store, pick up their kids, go to work, go to school, you name it. That doesn't mean that owning a car is a necessity, all around the world many people are trying to cut down and limit their car usage by having a whole lot of other options. There are buses, people can car pool, walk, skate, bike, and many more

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People are coming to the conclusion that if we, as a whole, decide to start cutting down on our usage of cars it can benefit the way we live.

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Lots of people actually don't mind not having a car just yet. Most teenagers do want to get their license and a car but there's so much other things they need to focus on. It really is not a priority for them because they have school, work, plus if they do need to get somewhere they can always take the bus and get a ride from a friend (Source 4). In Germany, there is a city by the name of Vauban, that is known to be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life (Source 1). Vauban's goal and idea, which is to cut down on cars for a better living, has made it'a way around the world, so that other states and countries can aspire to do the same and little by little we could have a world that is not so dependent on cars.

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The idea of using cars, for some, it causes them stress

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they're always tense, not using a car makes them happier, as stated by Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two (Source 1). The stress aspect of this could be due to the fact that in the most recent years, the percentage of car crashes and accidents have gone up. Many people abhor the idea of using cars because they have been in an terible accident themselves or someone close to them. Also, it can even just be all the traffic jams that occur during rush hour, which makes people late and accidents do happen. For example in Bogota, Colombia, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to their designated location, to leave the streets due to traffic jams (Source 3). Since they knew that lots of their citizens were deciding not to use cars they started making uneven, pitted sidewalks into nice, smooth, replaced ones for them (Source 3).

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Another reason why people want to limit their usage on cars is because of all the pollution cars create.

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Passenger cars are rsponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States (Source 1). Not many people think about the effects of air pollution like smog, but it is a big deal. Since people don't think about it often, there is no way for the majority of us to try and find a solution to put into action to stop it or help it go down. In Paris, there was a partial driving ban to clear the air around the city (Source 2). Paris' partial ban was their idea to try and make their city a better place. With the ban being enforced and put into play there were about 4,000 drivers fined (Source 2). It turns out that since the driving ban was made the congestion, car traffic, had gone down 60 percent in the capital of France, just after five days of less smog pollution and Paris is typically known to have more smog than any other European capitals (Source 2). This goes to show, that slowly people are actually becoming aware of what's going on and they actually care enought to try and make things better.

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All in all, there are many ways to try and cut down on our car usage for the better. It can be anything from not buying as many cars, to deciding to not use cars at all and deciding to walk, skate, and bike, etc. Not only will limiting our car usage as a whole stop traffic jams, car accidents, air pollution, and more, it will help to benefit our lives for the better whether or not people want to believe it. If things keep going from here, and more and more decide that less car usage is better than over a time span of let's say 20-30 years, there could be a lot less dangerous things occuring in our lives.

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Venus is an second planet for the sun. Sometime Venus is called the "Evening Star," because Venus is one of the brightest points on light in the night sky. Venus also have a nickname like other planets have different nicknames. Venus nickname is misleading. - Earth, Venus, and Mars are our other planetary neighbor, they orbit in a different speeds. there is a time when Mars is getting closer to our planet Earth and there is a time when Venus is getting closer to the Earth. Often Venus referred to as Earth's twin because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in a size and occasionlly the closest in distance. - Like other planets have atmosphere and different temperture, Venus also have atmospere and differents temperture. When a spaceship when to Venus it couldn't survived the landing for more than a few hours because unlike Venus's surface is hottest in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Venus's clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in it atmosphere.

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Venus may be dangerous but sometime it can be our nearest option for a planetary visit.

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Long ago, Venus was like our planet Earth because back then it has trees and same atmosphere as Earth. But now Venus is dry up and only a dry vellays where water used to flow a montains left.

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Many people throughout the world, would agree that car usage plays a significant role in daily lives. Although some may argue it plays an important role or a not so important role, the limitation of car usuage would be a very helpful thing for everyone, and the world we are surrounded by.

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There are many advantages to cities being able to control the amount of cars being used everyday.

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Advantages such as, less pollution in the enviroment by creating less smog,

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making the cities and roads a lot safer, by lowering the risk of getting into or even causing a wreck,

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even something as simple as making your life, and the lives around you much more peaceful.

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"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. (paragraph 5)" Cars are the number one cause of pollution in most cities, espcially ones that have large amounts of drivers on the road in a single day. The author of source one, states in pargraph 8 that "..some new suburbs may well look more Vauban-like not only in developed countries, but also in the developing world, where emissons from an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities" All authors state that limiting car usage, is a great way to reduce air pollution. Paragraph 10, of source two, states that "After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city"

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If car usuage was limited in cities there would be less smog, and pollution in the air. Not only would it be better for the enviroment, it would also be better for your health.

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Wrecks are things that claim the lives of people each and everyday. Some can be prevented, yet not all can. Think of how many lives are taken each day, due to wrecks because of things like congestion in big cities. Or even things such as someone behind the wheel who is stressed, and driving wrecklessly. A source from paragraph 3, states "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way" Many people, get tense and stressed from the drivers around them. Limiting how much you use a car, can improve things such as stress levels. Imagine how much more at ease you would be if you constantly heard, a bicylest wizzing by you, or hearing children chattering and laughing among themselves, instead of hearing horns honking, loud motors, or even the sound of a car crash. Roads and streets take up much more space than we think or even realize. With less cars on the road everyday and more people walking, or riding a bike, could only mean one thing; less roads and bigger sidewalks. More cities are trying to make limiting car usage a much bigger thing, "...in attempts to make suburbs more compact..." Source one, also states that "In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather that in malls along some distant highway. (paragraph 6)

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Getting to these places will become safer for everyone.

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As you can see, there are many advantages to limiting car usage, such as, limiting the amount of pollution there is, lowering the risks of getting into, or even causing a wreck, and even something as simple as making it a more peaceful enviroment to live in, not only for yourself, but for others around you. Our world, and daily lives would be affected in great ways, in more cities, and even more countries, participated in lessing the amount of car usage.

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Have you ever seen something unusual in the ground? If so do you think it was created by humans or just a natural landform of some sort. Many people believe that most landforms on earth are made by humans

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The face on mars is a natural landform.

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If the "face' on mars was created by alliens it would look a lot different.

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Many people think alliens look weird, Well the "face" on mars wastn't so weird looking. It looked almost like a human face. You would think that alliens would make something radical and not just a face in their planet. Many people seem to believe that they would make something simple.

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Eventhough many people were not satisfied with the theory that NASA gave them, NASA went on to search for more clues as to which "alliens made the landform."

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From the pictures that they took you would think that they would be able to detect whether alliens even walked/ touched the surface of the landform.

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If you think that alliens made the landform, I would suggest you look at the picture more closely. Just because its on a planet like mars doesnt mean it was made by an allien.

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I mean how many people actually believe in alliens anyway? If you've never seen them how do you know if they even exist? Take another quick look at the picture tell what you think. Is it even possible for alliens to be alive even if it is on another planet?

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The "face" on mars is a natural landform. What leads me to beieve that, is that i dont think alliens are real. Maybe they are real, but why would they make something so simple as a face. Dont you think they wouldve went a little overboard with their creations?

Concluding Statement

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I believe that the use of techonology to read student emotional expression is valuable.

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It be awesome to read somebody's emotions thorugh a machine.

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it would tell you alot about what a person is feeling and thats important to know. their are many excellent and well reasoned examples of why this technology is valuable.

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My one reason i believe this is valuable technology is if somebody was feeling depressed and was not willing to open up to anybody that individual could do self harm to himself

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If they know how that individual was feeling maybe they would have helped he/she. in the passage it says " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused and bored". Then Dr. Huang says" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. This technology could become really usful for many different situations. Thats one of the reasons of why this makes this machine so valuable.

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The creator of FACS[ [Facial Action Coding System] Dr. Paul Eckman has "classified six basic emotions". The machine can read happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. this type of technology can aid and solve world wide problem. For example what if an individual person or more were having issues with a certain subject at school but dont know how to ask for help

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The Computer would make " 3-D computer model of the face" and they can anaylze what they might be feeling about the subject. then thats when the help comes.

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Another example is reading different emotions is some how very important. It can be used against people who have commited crime.

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An example is if a person who murdered somebody and nobody knew if he was being honest or not, the machine can read his emotions and has a better chance to tell if the person is lying or not. It can be used for celebritys and politician as said in the article. This can identify many human being feelings and it doesnt take to much time.

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In conclusion their are still many reasons why i believe this technology is valuable. This type of technology would be nice to have around and would be really usful. It would prevent many accidents and help solve probelms. Techonology like this cant go to waste and should be used to our adavntage. this is my reason why i think this technology is valuable.

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Teachers have more often than not been the epicenter of academic negativity. There always has been and always will complain about teaching styles. If students could take the steering wheel, chances are they will understand the material taught and retain that information.

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summer projects should be student designed rather than teacher designed

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it allows for a more positve and creative atmosphere,

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improved scheduling

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higher pass rates.

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Virtually nobody wants to spend their summer doing classwork and projects.

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However, if the projects were both educational and entertaining, then summer would be that much more enjoyable. It would also allow the content to soak in much better.

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For instance, say a student wanted to to a project on auto mechanics. With a teacher designed rubric, the would want the project to be somewhat generc in its presentation. On the flip side of that, if the rubric was composed by students, that student now has a variety of options as far as presentation.

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intstead of having to worry about one big poject, student could decide to break the project up into shorter, more managable dates. It would also allow for a more balanced schedule in general.

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Some people say that if the old rubric works, then keep on using it. They have been working for years now, so why change it; because students are sick and tired of repititon. Doing the same thing over and over for an extended amount of time is not good. It starts to blur the summers together, to the point where someone will not remember what they did because of the summers being so similar.

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With that being said, student designed projects are the much better route. With students being able to choose the subject and presentation style of the project, it will allow for creative juices to flow through everyones' minds and really intrigue the students. It would also allow for better time management on the development of said project. Finally, if students are interested in their projects and they genuinely want to do it, then the grades will improve. They will also be able to gather and retain the information that is being introduced to them.

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Teacher-based or student-based summer project, which is better? Some schools require students to keep their mind thinking even during summer break. They use summer projects to help their mind stay awake.

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students completing the project would rather make it themselves than have a teacher assign the project to them.

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they will make it more fun and interesting for themselves,

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they will make the project easier for them to understand,

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they will enjoy doing the project since it will be from their prospective.

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Although a student-based project would be more enjoyable for them to complete, a teacher based project would be more effective for both the teacher and the student. The teacher would make the project how it's supposed to be because they know what the students are supposed to learn over the summer. Having the students make their own project would make it to easy for them and the teacher would not really know what is going on because the kids are not going to school. Teachers would want the students to know the proper materials for the next school year even if it mean't just writing a summary of a book.

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The summer project should be a teacher-based project because it informs the teacher of what is happening and what they are doing during the project, it helps the student learn what they need to maintain in their brain during the summer, and it also makes sure the project is not to easy or hard for the students.

Counterclaim

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The student would not want to spend their summer doing a boring project because that would mean that they would put it off until the end of summer or they might just not do it at all. Having a project that makes them go outside and explore the world is very interesting and would make anyone want to do it. Students need motivation and having the project be something fun like go to an amusement park and explain what your see. If a teacher really wants a student to spend their summer doing a project, there has to be a motivation factor or something that makes them want to complete the project.

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Student could work in groups to make it easier. It would not necessarily be the whole project being easier it would just be making short cuts to get to one point faster. The groups would be people who are already friends and that would motivate them to do the project because then while doing work they still hang out with their friends. Making the project easier might also mean that the students might be able to understand it better and if they do need help the can ask their peers or email the teacher.

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What older teachers think young students like might not always be what they like. Students like to explore and be who they want to be but teachers might make a stay at home project. Teenagers and students are also very impatient they do not like to do activities for a long time. This project should have a two week period to complete then the students will complete it faster and will make them more prepared for the next school year.

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This all makes the students and teachers life easier. Summer is mean't to be spent away from school so having to complete a project is more then enough fro the students. If the student has a problem which their project they can just ask their peers or they can ask the teacher. It should not be very difficult for the student and schools should only make this a mandatory projects but not make it take up all of the students summer. Neither do teachers want to be grading a bunch of projects at the beginning of the school year when everything just started again.

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The face on Mars is just a natural landform

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