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." in this new approach stores are places a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway". this mean we will don't have dependent on cars to take us to places that we can walk to or ride bikes to. In source number 3 by bogota limting are use "Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rus our restritions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shoping districts have cropped up". this is just making a better communite just by limiting car usage.
Evidence
Adequate
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479B6050859E
they are many adavantages to limitng car usuage we shoud just have a car free day it would have so many chances of making the Untied States are better place a better country that is already is.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Extracurricular activities are great but do we need them? The principal deciding we must participate in at least one is not well thought upon. Us as students are not all the same and live very different life styles.
Lead
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
I disagree with the principals actions
Position
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
there is no time
Claim
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
some families can not afford it
Claim
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
most can not even get a way there!
Claim
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
I say there is no time because students have homework, jobs, or even take care of a family member.
Claim
Effective
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47CAD052900E
Teens do sports if they want to have fun. A percentage of teens do not enjoy sports. There are even the teens that want to do sports but can't because their parents are working all the time! I am one of those teens. Most parents are busy so it is not us teens being lazy.
Evidence
Ineffective
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47CAD052900E
a lot of families have no money!
Claim
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
By "no money" I don't mean the have none at all, I am saying that they need the extra money for food, gas, clothing, etc. Playing sports or being in a extracurricular activity costs money. That money can go to better Things. Having that little bit of extra money is what is keeping some families off the streets.
Evidence
Adequate
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47CAD052900E
No money? No car! Along with having no money and no time, you have no way to get there!
Claim
Adequate
b67aef51f14a
47CAD052900E
If a students parents can not pick them up they can't go. A lot of students are only children so they do not have an older sibling to pick them up. Even if students are old enough to drive it is very unlikely for them to have their own vehicle.
Evidence
Adequate
a291ed2f2f9a
47CAD052900E
No time, no money and no way to get to your extracurricular activity means you would get kicked out of it. These are my reasons for disagreeing with the principal. If you can't or don't want to, you shouldn't have to.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
f47473a965d8
4801AC90F66F
" Attention students, participate in at least one extracurricular activity," said my principal. ' "One of these days again?" "I hate this school, we do this every week." Generic_Name why do you like doing this so much?" "Hes letting us play sports, work on the year book, and even have free talking time." Generic_Name said. Out of nowhere, "Generic_Name and Generic_Name come here!" Me and Generic_Name looked at each other and said 'where in trouble' We went to Mr. Generic_Name Office and he asked "are you boys going to do any activity's?' We were shaking harder than ever. "Yes sir "Generic_Name said, Me and Generic_Name headed to the basketball court and there were no ball's, "its Generic_Name" I said, Generic_Name was very mad, "Im done getting bullied by him!" "We have to confront him Cory." "OK lets do it" I said. "Are you sure you want to do this Generic_Name?' "Yes I will not getting bullied by him again." We walked up to him, "give us a ball Generic_Name" he laughs "play me for one." "OK two on one." Generic_Name said, "OK nerd" with a smile on his face. Generic_Name gets ball first, game to five First possession Generic_Name loses the ball I pass to Generic_Name and he hits the three,"score two to zero Generic_Name" i said. " Yeah yeah play ball" Generic_Name hits me for a layup, but Generic_Name was too fast we kept passing back and forth until Generic_Name got tired. A loud noise I heard before I shot, I turned around and seen Generic_Name passed out on the floor. "Generic_Name did we go to hard?" i asked, "No he got what he deserved." Generic_Name said We went to Mr. Generic_Name office and told him what happened and I was shocked. He is suspending us for seven days so i said, "I dont like fun Friday Because something bad is always happening just take it out!" "I'm trying to do nice things for the school its better than sitting down and doing work on Frid-" "No its not I will rather do work!" "Generic_Name do you agree with me?" "No" said Generic_Name "I like doing fun Friday better than doing work just like Generic_Name said,you are a nerd." I left the office and went to the bathroom and cried. "Its OK all of us have friendship problems" "Generic_Name is that you?" "Yes, i'm sorry about all them years ago when i bullied you and Generic_Name." i thought thats what a friendship was," in a sad voice. "Can we be friends?" he asked. "Yeah we can" i said with courage. Me and Generic_Name went back to the office and I said my apologies to Mr. Generic_Name and Generic_Name." I guess fun Friday's are not so bad after all." 'I will unsuspend you guy's time, and keep you in school'" said Mr. Generic_Name.
Evidence
Ineffective
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4801AC90F66F
I now know to agree to this idea and respect my principal choices and rules.
Position
Ineffective
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4801AC90F66F
I learned that doing activity's can bring you together with so many people its basicly changing how we act around or with others.
Claim
Ineffective
6467d50d19e4
48984D541995
Scientists and more specifically astronomers are extremley fascinated in Earth's sister planet, Venus, as it is similar to Earth in certain ways, and is a close enough distance for travel. Venus was believed to once be very similar to Earth in terms of its geology, so therefore scientists are interested in discovering how the features have changed. However, the author of "The Challenge Exploring Venus," explains the great dangers that the planet offers for both humans and technology to explore the planet. The act of returning to Venus seems impossible due to the risks, although the insight that is wanted to be gained on the planet could lead to "intimidating endeavors."
Lead
Effective
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48984D541995
The author claims that the studying of Venus is still an active pursuit despite the dangers that come along with it. The claim is supported well
Position
Effective
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48984D541995
by using previous experiences of missions and spacecrafts
Claim
Adequate
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48984D541995
as well as shocking factual statistics that catch the readers attention.
Claim
Adequate
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48984D541995
The author tells the story of previous missions that have been sent to Venus in hopes to persuade the audience that the planet's harsh conditions are too intense for even high technology to withstand
Claim
Effective
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48984D541995
He mentions, "...no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades." This quote uses ethos to ensure the reliablity of the author, and to emphasize that scientists are truly struggling to develop devices that are well enough developed to explains the dangers. The understanding that technology made by scientists who have succesfully researched across the milky way cannot withstand Venus's circumstanes demonstrates how dangerous the planet is.
Evidence
Effective
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48984D541995
The use of statistics is presented by the author to take a more logical view on their argument to prove the dangers of Venus
Claim
Effective
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48984D541995
The article mentions that "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent blankets Venus." As carbon dioxide is waste product of human respiration, the inhalation of this gas would be very dangerous for life to visit Venus. It also says that "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." Without shelter that can withold these extreme temperatures and amounts of pressure, the human body, similar to the spacecrafts, would be lucky to survive for more than a few hours. These numbers support the author's claim to focus on the horrific dangerous of exploring Venus to present a logical standpoint on this issue.
Evidence
Effective
92a1222240d3
48984D541995
Throughout the article, it suggests that studying Venus is still a worthy mission for astronomers, however, the dangers that come along with these missions are extremely dangerous and life-threatening. The author mentions the curiosity that scientists have involving Earth's sister planet, and the desire to still visit Venus regardless of the harsh conditions. With the article's use of both previous experiences of missions and spacecrafts, as well as shocking factual statistics of Venus, the claim is very strongly supported with evidence.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Schools argue whether projects should be teacher-designed or student-designed. They both have benefits and different impacts on students.
Lead
Adequate
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490867E5D019
However, summer projects should be teacher-designed,
Position
Adequate
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490867E5D019
teachers can integrate what they will teach
Claim
Effective
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490867E5D019
they also have professional experience.
Claim
Effective
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490867E5D019
One main reason summer projects should be teacher-designed is that teachers can integrate what they will be teaching.
Claim
Effective
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490867E5D019
A small, but very important thing teachers have in common is that they have a lesson plan. A lesson plan is what teachers utilize to understand what curriculum they will teach and how they will teach it. As a result, the teacher can use the curriculum as their foundation of the project. For example, the International Baccalaureate, IB, program requires students to complete a Summer Reading Project. As an IB student, I had to complete it this past summer. We had a list of books to choose from, and we had to write an essay about the message of the book and make a poster about what we learned from the book. What I didn't realize, was that the book had a connection to what we were going to learn in class. The project helped the students make a connection to the class and learn faster and more efficiently. This results would not be possible, if a student designed the project so this is why summer project should be designed by a teacher.
Evidence
Effective
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490867E5D019
Another reason summer projects should be teacher-designed is, because they have more professional experience than students.
Claim
Effective
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490867E5D019
Teachers most go to college to become teachers and be hired by a school. This means: they have a degree on education, are certified to be teachers, and they understand the subject better than students. In addition, they have experience from previous years and students. So they understand that students learn differently. Consequently, they can come up with a method to make the project educative and impactful for every student; regardless, of how different they learn. For these reasons, the summer projects should be teacher designed.
Evidence
Effective
9b310da4cafe
490867E5D019
Some may argue that summer projects should be student-designed, because students understand each other.
Counterclaim
Effective
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490867E5D019
While this statement is true it is bias.
Rebuttal
Adequate
0d5bdd03df9d
490867E5D019
It's bias, because students are often with their friend group which often understand each other. On the other hand, friend groups are all different, meaning they have different beliefs and values. Another reason, the statement is bias is that students have different learning styles. A student can be a fast learner and don't need to study as hard as others students; however, another student might need more reinforcement to learn.
Evidence
Effective
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490867E5D019
So if a student was to design a project it would be based on their personal preference and not about everyone. Concluding, that summer projects should not be designed by students because they can be bias.
Claim
Effective
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490867E5D019
As a conclusion, summer projects have to be teacher-designed. It must be designed by teachers, so students can learn efficiently and effectively. Also, it can help the teacher understand and get to know the student through their summer project. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
d48ce05e5aae
495DF8DE2896
In German suburb, this is a "car-free" place, this may seem shocking to many for people who use cars to go where they need to everyday...  Car ownership is only allowed in two places; large parking garages at the edge of development, where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.  Some say that it's good for the earth due to the bad pollution. 
Evidence
Adequate
f7c176e1dea7
495DF8DE2896
Some countries around the world is trying to put an end to polluting the earth and one of the ways they did that was to ban driving cars.  People would think that as crazy but it is actually a brilliant idea
Position
Adequate
d9b79d694244
495DF8DE2896
it would lessen the Ozone whole that is being crerated by polluting. 
Claim
Adequate
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495DF8DE2896
We actaully need this Ozone hole to protect us from the dangerous sun rays. 
Evidence
Adequate
5812ab64b143
495DF8DE2896
My honest opinions on this subject matter is I think it's creative in a way but I don't like it just because of how much I have to travel everyday.  First I go to school of course, then I go home then I drive to practice which is a 30 minute drive, that also means driving all the way home too. 
Evidence
Ineffective
ed3bb56f2f44
495DF8DE2896
it saves gas money since gas prices are going up soon due to economy. 
Claim
Adequate
9ab7a80451c6
495DF8DE2896
A mother of two who is also a media trainer name Heidrun Walter gave her honest opinion of this "car-banning".  "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way."  Another man name David Gold berg, an offical of Transportation for America said "All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.
Evidence
Adequate
cd1a039017ea
495DF8DE2896
Although our development is changing it may have a good effective role on our earth. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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If I were a scientist at NASA I will not believed alien because most of scientists said aliens are not real and I think they just made up of alien.
Position
Adequate
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496EB21D745B
A face on Mars is maybe when the wind blow the dust it trun that face or when they goes there they died and their dead body face is still there. But it's really interesting because that face is really big and it image 3 times bigger than th epixel size. But I believed there are not alien in the other planets or in earth because alien are not real but I have to makesure that I have to ask more question to the smartest scientist and ask about how did that face happen and how are we gonna prove about that. I have to ask more question about that too and they said that face look like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian style pyrmaids or even small shacks, you could see what they were. Some of them don't believe it because they don't see it and they just guess that answer. But when I looked at the picture I think I saw that crown and their face look shiney and in 2001 that face look destroy . I don't believe in aliens but if there was some aliens in that planet they might made that face too and they hid away from that face. I wish I see that picture for real and take some picture and prove it.
Evidence
Ineffective
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497E63C46A84
I believe that this computer would work wonders in a classroom.
Position
Adequate
8c9412fbd192
497E63C46A84
It could allow teachers to know which of the children in the classroom are having problems understanding the lesson, allowing the teacher to help them more. This could also help other studys of the human anatomy, as it shows how facial expressions are done and also what they mean.
Claim
Adequate
ff9ad11f2256
497E63C46A84
In the famous, "Mona Lisa" painting, many people observe her smile and think that she is being forced to smile, and that she is actually scared, frighted, or just angry. Using this computer means that we could debunk/prove this theory. This could also solve crimes, some that have not been solved to this day!
Evidence
Ineffective
bfd932e0a6ce
497E63C46A84
This computer could also help with crimes as it could show that if a suspect is making a certain facial expression, they are lying or telling the truth.
Claim
Adequate
b5cff00fe58d
497E63C46A84
This could help police catch people who are breaking the law, but not put others in prison for nothing. This computer could help with these problems that occur in the real world, and it would save lives in the process
Evidence
Adequate
303cf65dea35
497E63C46A84
This would be very helpful in peoples daily lives, and it could help people who have problem such as mental health.
Claim
Adequate
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497E63C46A84
If a child is slower than other children, this test could help decide whether or whether not these children need the extra help. If they do need help, this machine could even put them in the correct classes!
Evidence
Adequate
9d2aef4c1a4f
49D71438EA8F
The story of Making Mona Lisa Smile is about a Prof named Thomas Huang making a computer that can tell your emotions and the way you are feeling that day.
Lead
Ineffective
a290d3807d42
49D71438EA8F
You might not be the mood for anything and the computer can tell when your bored or not feeling anything it will modify the way it work so you will be in a better mood i think its great.
Counterclaim
Adequate
60b76cd7c50d
49D71438EA8F
Beacuse kids might not fall asleep in class as much if thcomputer sees it and will fix it and it will help whats wrong with people
Evidence
Adequate
5f18e7febc30
49D71438EA8F
Part of me say its a bad idea becuase most people dont like talking about their emotions so that will make things worse if a computer does it and feel their emotions
Claim
Adequate
a49b33e2dc2a
49D71438EA8F
I would say no to it becuase i myself and like telling my emotions about things and dont a computer telling me about them
Position
Adequate
d54cededda9a
49ED588E79B1
"Making Mona Lisa Smile" Is a famous painting that includes this new technology that tells your emotion. In this famous painting she seems to be smiling in this case she really wasn't. With this technology you can see all 44 muscles.
Lead
Ineffective
64d412b7dfcd
49ED588E79B1
In the article it says that, "the computer can classified six basic emotions which include happines,suprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness." This shows how a computer can do so much just by seeing you're face.
Evidence
Adequate
7512780e93a6
49ED588E79B1
With all this they want people to identify a students emotion. This is valuable because when a student is doing their work they could get confused.
Claim
Adequate
f40c4adec7dc
49ED588E79B1
With this new system you can caculate their emotions and quickly identify if a student is confued. This can really help a teacher with their lessons.
Evidence
Adequate
269828cadef7
49ED588E79B1
Another way that you can tell is by looking yourself in the mirror. You have muscular units that help you identify how your felling whether your happy or sad.
Evidence
Ineffective
fb58db5a4eec
49ED588E79B1
This famous painting is Mona Lisa in which you find her smiliing can demonstrate her emotions while they did the painting. In the article it shows that, "shes 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful and 2% angry." With this Information a computer can recognize your emotions. Mona Lisa wasn't really happy but in the painting you see her with a small smile.
Evidence
Ineffective
3e0f3ab9311f
49ED588E79B1
This technology is helpful and useful in so many ways.
Position
Adequate
aff6f4b4cd47
49EE396B474E
Honestly truth be told there is a valuable cause in this because alot of technology today will ask you to rate this website or did you like this song?.The computer will read only what u tell them. Although the computer cannot read how you really feel because sometimes people lie about what they do and dont like. So just because you rate that website a 7 doesnt mean you like it you might just want them to think its a good website.
Lead
Adequate
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49EE396B474E
The computer would have to be very reliable and trusting for it to be valuable.
Claim
Adequate
7da78d38e3cd
49EE396B474E
The students these days is hard to tell because they just don't care anymore. If they don't care then there is no way to tell if they like something or not.
Evidence
Ineffective
d7747c2a2a85
49EE396B474E
In the article it says "The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is call and "action unit." In that paragraph its technically talking about how the computer will recognize facial expressions
Evidence
Adequate
2ee3574c65ab
49EE396B474E
I feel like that would take alot of work for computer technicians to actually put more devices in a computer just to see what people think about them.
Claim
Ineffective
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49EE396B474E
So in my opinion no I don't think they should use the technology to read emotions
Position
Adequate
dd7d48056eae
49EE396B474E
it will make things more expensive and less people will buy them. Some people wouldn't like technology to read their emotions because alot of times people wont be angry at the computer they would be mad because the computer is trying to tell them how they are feeling.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
b5338910ecfa
4A4A502DE26A
In this story the author is talking about how humas have not made it on the planet of Venis. At least that we know about
Lead
Ineffective
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4A4A502DE26A
The article said that scientits think there may be life or have been life on the planet
Position
Ineffective
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4A4A502DE26A
With scientists thinking if there is something up there on the planet there is a good chance that they will be able to find out soon with all the technology we have today. With all the things we have today I think we will find something on venus. If we do then there is a fact that there is aliens that are alive, unless they are just like us but from another planet. And that planet is closer to the sun than earth.
Evidence
Ineffective
00d3953bff85
4A4A502DE26A
I think with all the things in the article we will find somthing or that there was something there on venus at some point. It could of been a trillion years ago or there is still life on it today we will just have to find out. Time is the only thing that we have on are side.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
418ba4eb4b8f
4A5760917477
The distinct responsibility of having students learn rests on the very shoulders of teachers throughout nine out of the twelve months that are in a year, so the students should direly be permitted to design how they learn over the three month break that they get. This three month break, summer, to most students, is a time where they can finally let go of all their responsibilities and worries and leave them right in the classroom. Most do not think twice about what they have learned over the past semester, but instead are already steps ahead on planning what events. attractions, and/or vacations they may embark on. Teachers still try to make an effort for learners to still store information they have learned and even try add on to it by assigning projects that are aimed directly for students to complete by the next school year. More often than not, projects are long-term, and that causes the student to be continuously involved with the material and truly grasp the knowledge coming at them.
Lead
Effective
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4A5760917477
Summer projects should be student-designed
Position
Adequate
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4A5760917477
they are more likely to retain the knowledge,
Claim
Effective
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4A5760917477
it lets them express their creativity and uniqueness,
Claim
Effective
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4A5760917477
they would be more inclined to complete the project.
Claim
Effective
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4A5760917477
Every student will be likely to design a different version of the project and there will be no barriers to how they can let their creative minds visualize the project and ultimately complete it. Having them let their brain-storming abilities to take over and conceptualize on how they will continue to tackle the task at hand, truly sets them up for active learning and teaches them very useful future skills that they will use. Varying on the topic, students can create physical projects such as posters or tri-folds, or they can create online projects such as graphs or tables. Having the ability to express your mind is something that can not be so easily undermined or the very learning that is so emphasized in today's educational system will have failed.
Evidence
Effective
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4A5760917477
To actually learn an individual needs to be able to understand the knowledge that is going through their mind as they work on assignments, and there is truly no better way to learn than to self-learn while working on a project. Unlike tests or any other sort of assignment, projects give students more of a chance to actually learn rather than just memorizing knowledge for a sort period of time and then forgetting it the second they turn in the assignment. Making sure that their mind is continuously being subjected to complete the assignment over a long period of time consequently burns the knowledge into their brain and helps them to better retain it. Having students do the designing portion of the assignment as well would lead to even more learning due to them needing to know the content first and then being able to correctly complete it with no errors.
Evidence
Effective
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4A5760917477
Producing the best possible work can only come through the prosperity of motivation and the willingness to do the work.
Evidence
Effective
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Being able to learn and retain knowledge, express themselves in countless ways, and want to actually complete the assignment are all reasons why student-designed projects prove to be more resourceful and efficient in the life of a typical student.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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4A5760917477
However, teacher-designed projects are helpful too, they teach exactly what the teacher would teach them in class which gives learners an understanding of the content from the teachers perspective and could possibly give them knowledge on material they do not know.
Counterclaim
Effective
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4A5760917477
Learning is retaining, if the students do not retain any of the knowledge they are just trying to complete another teacher-given assignment, and they are not truly learning.
Rebuttal
Effective
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4A7EE66B4695
Don't you ever think of joining the Seagoing Cowboys? Well you should consider it.
Lead
Adequate
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4A7EE66B4695
Everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it's a great idea.
Position
Adequate
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4A7EE66B4695
you can learn so much stuff
Claim
Adequate
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4A7EE66B4695
have a wonderful time.
Claim
Adequate
09c0bbf0fb64
4A7EE66B4695
Joining the Seagoing Cowboys can be a terrific idea because you will have adventurous lives and so much fun!
Claim
Adequate
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4A7EE66B4695
Luke had said" The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy," He says." Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says." So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water."You will travel a lot and see so many places. You could also try new thing like the food. Their are so much cultures, and you will get to see many more you may also try and wear the clothes they wear, and do stuff like they are used to doing.
Evidence
Adequate
f3dc0186d0f6
4A7EE66B4695
If you join the Seagoing Cowboys it will be educational and you will end up finding yourself having a wonderful time.
Claim
Adequate
b5e9c8db6fe7
4A7EE66B4695
You will be looking forward to joining the Seagoing Cowboys, you won't even notice that the time flies by quickly. You may learn many stuff because you will be traveling to so many places, you won't even have to worry about gettiing lost because your team members will accompany you and, you'll even get supplies, if you need help they will help you they are really nice people and you don't need to have a worry.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Reuniting with the Seagoing Cowboys could be wonderful, you will have a great and adventurous trip. If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you won't even realize that the time flies by because of the wonderful time you'll be having. I think everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it will be educational and you will help many people that need help and meet many people because, of the World War II and you will be able to experience outdoor natures that way you are not stuck inside the house playing video games or watching TV and instead help those that are in need. What places would you visit if you wnet to China?
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Did you know earth had a twin? Venus is earths twin but they are not idencitlea twins they are quit the diffrent.
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