tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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2e49515e8533	4ACC669C808C	Venus is an extraorandraiy planet	Claim	Adequate
34ce4d3b4182	4ACC669C808C	the atmosphere is almost all carbon dioxide so we would not be able to breath. Its avrage tempchure is 800 degrees fahrenheit so yeah be sure to bring your swim suit for a tan but wait theres more with the rain you will feel amazing and just melt away because all the rain is acid	Evidence	Ineffective
2ce92de75f71	4ACC669C808C	Now reschers want to explore Venus because they think long ago venus was just like earth	Claim	Adequate
232b41195f1c	4ACC669C808C	It has mauntian ranges and vallys. "Long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth today.	Evidence	Adequate
229d217b65c6	4ACC669C808C	We cant get on Venus because we dont have tech or metals that can stand the harsh enviroment of Venus.	Claim	Adequate
cd89ace2dceb	4ACC669C808C	Of course we have little info because we can orbet around venus safely but this can only give us so much info. You would think oh wjy dont you just take picuters. Well you know all that acid rain i told you about well there are thick clouds around Venus all the time.	Evidence	Adequate
dc78ad7f2482	4ACC669C808C	You migh think we are at a dead end on trying to explore Venus but if you think that you are right. NASA needs to be able to form new techonagly before we can do anything else on Venus. That is a challenge NASA has accetpiced is to keep trying for Venus.	Position	Adequate
8712b243c548	4AE962B7BDAA	I don't think that this is valuable for students in a classroom just to read their emotions	Position	Adequate
7778bac1c396	4AE962B7BDAA	It invades their privacy on if they want to share whats going on in their life or not	Claim	Adequate
3249d3c19867	4AE962B7BDAA	The students can share if they want to but they should't have their emotions identify by a computer and have their teacher to see what results came in for their emotions	Evidence	Adequate
2dcdb082e91b	4AE962B7BDAA	In the article it states that "we humans perform this same impressive "calculations" everyday" when actually you just sense it or study their face to see which emotion you can see through their eyes or facial expressions	Evidence	Adequate
007626702265	4AE962B7BDAA	We don't need a computer to detect our emotions when we could say how were feeling and not have a computer tell for us	Claim	Adequate
8001eae58718	4AE962B7BDAA	In the article it states that "Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."	Evidence	Adequate
7b9375531ece	4AE962B7BDAA	I pretty much don't beileve a computer can detect emtions from our faces when we could use a computer for many other things instead of emotions. What about our other emotions? gulity? curious? love? etc. How exactly can a computer detect our emotions? When a real human can detect it by the look of our face and talking about it	Concluding Statement	Adequate
437002998511	4AE962B7BDAA	Yea it might have some good sides to it for crimes and all that	Counterclaim	Ineffective
b5e0ec19bd75	4AE962B7BDAA	but please this is not for our students just for their teachers to read their emotions and invading their privacy	Rebuttal	Adequate
97c8dfc8a7d6	4AEA13D034F3	The expressions would be a good tool to use in classrooms	Position	Adequate
ff86124f7bb9	4AEA13D034F3	There are a lot of things that can back this up. In the text is say " that you can tell how other people are feeling when they are trying to hide their emotions. The software can recognize, it was created by Dr. Huang.	Evidence	Ineffective
d0c372aa9210	4AEA13D034F3	The software can tel when people are having different emotions	Claim	Adequate
0634066e53cd	4AEA13D034F3	A good thing about the tool is that a, teacher would be able to tell when a student is having a bad day or when you are having mixed emotions. An nother good thing about the software is that teachers would be a ble to tell when students are getting bored in class or are lost in class. The software gives off a prectage of your body by telling if you are happy, nice, mean, fearful, and being disgusted with people.	Evidence	Adequate
9a3c809aed7c	4AEA13D034F3	If I was a teacher in high school i would use this tool. There are so many ways that I would be able to help students in calss.	Claim	Adequate
71aec6c61844	4AEA13D034F3	If a student was having a bad day I would be able to know becasue of the software tool. I would be able to know if a student was struggling in class or that if a student was becoming bored in class.	Evidence	Adequate
689bfd7de5cf	4B048F74F3E7	You should join the Seagoing Cowboy and UNRRA program	Position	Adequate
d90471712efd	4B048F74F3E7	you get to see many unique places.	Claim	Adequate
40b22a7c9215	4B048F74F3E7	you get to help people by getting them food and helping them stay alive	Claim	Adequate
7351dd88d80c	4B048F74F3E7	you get to help hungry soldiers thatare helping our country.	Claim	Adequate
dbffe11e3650	4B048F74F3E7	In the passage Luke wanted to join the program not just to help people but to see all the amazing places in the story Luke said his favorite place was Greece. You could also see some amazing animals along the way. Luke liked Greece and the other places so much is in Greece he liked Acropolis. He liked the other places but Greece was his favorite. He also went on nine trips! The most of any Seagoing Cowboys.	Evidence	Adequate
eb1fc00aa58c	4B048F74F3E7	He also had to clean the stalls of the lower levels of the ship sometimes. One day he had to stop working for a couple of days because of cracked ribs because of flying overboard.	Evidence	Adequate
d3c2cc253b2c	4B048F74F3E7	The best part of being a Seagoing Cowboy is having fun.	Claim	Adequate
9757eeb7bf9e	4B048F74F3E7	The cowboys played baseball,volleyball,and table-tennis and alot of other things too but Luke really loved being a Seagoing Cowboy.	Evidence	Ineffective
90bc3a6a96f3	4B358CFBD575	Venus is an interesting planet for various reasons.	Position	Ineffective
3e7aa2f88ac7	4B358CFBD575	Scientists believe that Venus is alike to earth.	Claim	Adequate
04ec051e51d6	4B358CFBD575	It has about the same density and size compared to earth. In the article it states in paragraph 4 that "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life, just like Earth." This quote helps state that it is a interesting planet and alike Earth they want to study and learn about it knowing the conditons.	Evidence	Adequate
82672b40f7c4	4B358CFBD575	Another example of how Venus is an interesting planet is because of the atmosphere and the ground conditions it has.	Claim	Adequate
e4622a3b41cc	4B358CFBD575	Astronomers believe humans could survive there, however it wouldn't be easy with the conditions it has. A beam of light can barely pass throught the atmosphere; this causes the standard cameras to be ineffective.	Evidence	Adequate
1bb898a5e6de	4B358CFBD575	In conclusion, Venus is a very interesting planet and despite the dangers it has, it is worth it to study. It will be harder to study knowing that you can't take anything from the planet back, or the fact that in order to do anything you need to actually be there on the planet to get a better understanding.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
27a536dea6e8	4BD30FA12457	Some believe that it should be teacher designed, but others say it should be student designed to benefit them and make the summer project less difficult for the students. Their are many more other opinion since most parents believes that students should not have a summer project since it will stress and pressure them too much over brake. Another reason is to allow the students to take a brake since summer brake is meant fro the students to relax. Some students need to go out of state for family or other reason to enjoy the time they have before starting the learning process again the following year and this will allow students to think of what they will do different in school compared to last year. If the school does decide to remove summer project it will also help the teachers out so they have less work and more time to prepare for next year enrolling students.	Lead	Adequate
79bf518ba030	4BD30FA12457	Their are many benefits to having the summer project and it being teacher designed since most students do almost all school work teacher designed so the students have some experience.	Position	Adequate
8dfa779f2ec0	4BD30FA12457	Students also have more time to complete the summer project since they don't have classes or work during their brake.	Claim	Ineffective
8f8d45b2acab	4BD30FA12457	The students environment will be great for the students with the hot weather, great light, and more day time. They could also communicate with one another to talk about the summer project since they are not in a school zone so they are not restricted from using any cellular devices.	Evidence	Adequate
8a6c7275b419	4BD30FA12457	With the summer project being teacher designed the students could email the teacher if they are having a difficult task finishing the project so the teachers feedback will be a great help to any struggling students that need some assistance.	Claim	Adequate
d6ab77d704d3	4BD30FA12457	Some students do benefit from the summer project but others don't even have the time to even complete the project at all.	Claim	Ineffective
04adee0c32c2	4BD30FA12457	Certain students need to go out of the country to see family. Others start to get a summer job to save up money or for some other personal reason. They could get to lazy since they don't have any classes in the summer than they push it to the side or they do it the last week it is due. Students could also forget about the project over the brake.	Evidence	Adequate
2b77c4e647c7	4BD30FA12457	Summer project could be a great way for students academically but is it gonna benefit them in the long run as they choose their own path. A majority of schools in the U.S don't even have summer projects for students to do over brake.	Claim	Ineffective
fd858600deff	4BD30FA12457	Most colleges don't even look or seem interested if you done summer projects your entire school year. Even if the project is either teacher or student designed it won't really help the students after school. Future courses may not even need you do have a summer project done as a requirement to enroll into any courses.	Evidence	Adequate
407b4f7ff7e5	4BD30FA12457	In conclusion the summer project should be teacher designed for the students to make it easier to complete. Having it teacher based makes it more familiar to the students and more understanding. The summer project should be something optional not a requirement for any school. If the summer project was student based than some students may not try up to their own potential. Teachers are less stress over the summer with less work with the summer project and they can focus on future enrolling students.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
97e2b6366167	4BDD636AAE13	Drivers should not be allowed to use cell phones while driving.	Position	Adequate
d30312812702	4BDD636AAE13	Drivers should not be able to use their cellphones while driving, for the reason that the use of a cell phone while operating a motor vehicle is exceedingly hazardous for the driver, as well as others who are traveling along the same road.	Claim	Effective
6478ae118a25	4BDD636AAE13	The use of mobile devices while on the road leads to distracted driving which means that the driver is less likely to notice road and safety signals, Pedestrians and the signals coming from other vehicles. Failure to heed these signals has led to injuries and death that could have been prevented had the driver not been using a mobile device while on the wheel. In the U.S., there are laws banning the use of mobile devices or the act of texting while someone is on the wheel. The National Safety Council reports that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the U.S. is caused by texting and driving ("Texting and Driving Accident Statistics"). Cell phone distraction rates are alarmingly high and can pose serious safety risks. You can be charged with murder for texting and driving. Texting is the most alarming distraction sending or reading a text takes your eyes off the road for a couple of seconds. Using a cellphone while driving creates enormous potential for deaths and injuries on U.S. roads. In 2017 alone 3,166 people were killed in motor vehicle crashes including distracted drivers. Texting and driving is against the law ("The Dangers of Distracted Driving").	Evidence	Effective
d204c49958af	4BDD636AAE13	In an effort to fight these problems, more than 30 states now have a law when it comes to texting and driving("The Risks of Texting While Driving").	Claim	Effective
bbcf4737f9c2	4BDD636AAE13	The penalties for texting while driving could include hefty fines, license suspension, a rise in auto insurance rates, and prison time. The consequences you'll face for texting and driving are similar to those you'd get for another of the most serious driving offenses. (DUI) sometimes drivers who keep on texting do not see any people or animals crossing the street so there is a tendency to hit somebody crossing the road. Texting while driving is bad because it can bring fatal damages towards life. It may ruin the lives of others or worse might cause your life to end. Texting is a huge distraction to all drivers. Numerous drivers do not take this life threatening habit seriously and try to argue that these are an exception to these rules.	Evidence	Effective
7a5e67151297	4BDD636AAE13	Texting may be useful, but the use of it can also be very bad. You can not keep both hands on the wheel so accidents may occur.	Claim	Adequate
7e493b33b6e2	4BDD636AAE13	It may put you at greater risk because you fail to see important road signs and signals. Sometimes a stressful text can provoke anger, which might affect your driving behavior. Texting while driving is a horrible idea because you need to look at the phone as you type and read incoming text messages. The vehicle might run over hole or wrong rails which might lead to car accidents. Texting while driving is dangerous and does kill, and has many times. Using a cell phone particularly texting while driving requires the driver to turn his mental attention to the device manipulate it with his hand to look at it.	Evidence	Effective
f28d193aa016	4BDD636AAE13	Texting and driving should be banned because it is a hazard, and is an alert that needs to be reduced. The first reason for texting or using a cell phone while driving is very hazardous to yourself and the people surrounding you. Texting and driving is the act of composing, sending, reading text messages, emails or making similar use of the web on a mobile device while operating a motor vehicle. Texting while driving is considered extremely dangerous by many people, including authorities and in some places have either been outlawed or restricted. No one should text and drive. Be an example for others and if you need to text or talk on the phone, pull over to a safe place. Set rules for yourself and your household regarding texting and driving, lead by example. Currently there is no national ban on texting or using a wireless phone while driving, but a number of states passed laws banning texting or wireless phones requiring hands-free use of wireless phones while driving.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
4682283e78c2	4C0EB60473E1	The Facial Action system ,Detects exactly how other peple are feeling this system has promising applications for a variety of industries. This urguing people that if it is a good idea to put this system to use in classrooms. This systems can extract even the most minimal detal on a paintings. Such as the Mona Lisa from Leonardo da Vinci. And real live people to.	Lead	Adequate
f545f77f4dcb	4C0EB60473E1	I think that it is a good support the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions.	Position	Adequate
3c37fed7a010	4C0EB60473E1	But at the same time they should ask their students before going further.	Claim	Adequate
da3f840221ef	4C0EB60473E1	If is okay with them and their privacy because this machine or systems can read or noticed the most little detail in ur face expresions. Or if they are minors they will have to ask their parents or guardians. The founders or workers of this system or company.	Evidence	Adequate
1cd403826cb7	4C0EB60473E1	it can also benefit the students to learn more about them self and what they need to succed in life.	Claim	Adequate
db0eef4a11d0	4C0EB60473E1	It can also give the researches of this systems new information based on he research gather. From students partipating in the facial system. As the text states that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Using the machine.	Evidence	Adequate
460a244425ca	4C0EB60473E1	By showing they could also see if the students are happy or isgusting with their clases or even their. By saying all of this i think it is a good i dea for this facial device to be use in classrooms.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
f1170d8cf824	4C1F76298E24	Many people believe that " the Face" on Mars is actually a alien of some sort or a human. I can truly convince you why it's not a alien, it's only a landform. I can see why people can believe its an actual face because it has the qualities of a face: eyes, mouth, and nose.	Lead	Adequate
fc247dcb4d97	4C1F76298E24	Here are my reasons why this is definetly a landform.	Position	Adequate
a7f164026010	4C1F76298E24	First, there is no evidence of anyone going to Mars.	Claim	Ineffective
0845a8409483	4C1F76298E24	" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all."	Evidence	Ineffective
ea0933a517b9	4C1F76298E24	Mars has a very harsh climate and no one would even dare go off to a terrible, deserted planet to just not come back.	Evidence	Adequate
ad2ad5e880fa	4C1F76298E24	Secondly, there is no history of anything in space involving aliens and their artifacts.	Claim	Adequate
9d1bfe2ca0cd	4C1F76298E24	Many would say that the aliens didn't want us to knw they exist	Counterclaim	Adequate
46d357df32b4	4C1F76298E24	but the article states it could have been a person going to Mars. Scientists would have contacted the world and said we have evidence or living organisms on Mars.	Evidence	Ineffective
a4eb099ffdd6	4C1F76298E24	Yet many people would believe living organisms on Mars and I can agree with that if they have fantastic reasoning to their theory.	Counterclaim	Adequate
dbe072eee108	4C1F76298E24	They might say that if someone went to Mars they coud have not brought back anything or they got stranded on Mars and that could have been their body. People may believe that anyone on Mars would not survive the deserted planet with harsh climate and they would surely die there. Some sort of creature may have made it and they would give us evidencce of life on Mars.	Evidence	Adequate
4715971d56ba	4C1F76298E24	You never really know if there may be some sort of living organim on Mars unless you study it closer. Either I may be correct and it just being a landscape made from a storm or I could be wrong and its a living organism. We will never know unless we do the research.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
022d8a40c1ab	4C2AC8A4704A	I will be telling you about a story called "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves." I think it is a good story.	Lead	Ineffective
d65c484be259	4C2AC8A4704A	In the story it tells about a boy who signs up with his friend to be in a cattle boat job in the passage it said " The UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys to take care of cows,horses,mules,and more over seas. Luke and Don signed up for the job." Luke got to go all around the earth and deliver cattle. Lukes job on the boat was to check the cattle every hour.	Evidence	Adequate
e02cad8db71a	4C2AC8A4704A	Luke got to go all around the world and see amazing places	Claim	Adequate
db1c7a3afdaa	4C2AC8A4704A	Luke had allot of fun and Luke got to see allot of things in other countrys. I think it was a good story. At the end of the story Luke says "I'm grateful for the opprotunity. It mad me aware of people in other countrys.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a88b4ccfd03e	4C2AC8A4704A	I hope that you saw Lukes point of view and it convinced you to be in the Seagoing Coyboy in the program.	Position	Adequate
b21486d46df4	4C30EEDA3A8F	There shouldn't be a discussion when it comes to texting and driving for obvious reasons. It's just as dangerous as driving under the influence.	Position	Adequate
bd6ad6811ac5	4C30EEDA3A8F	And there are plenty of ways to send a message using hands free technology. It also being illegal should really mean that you shouldn't be doing it. And you can also kill someone just to send a text message. But it is common in the United States.	Evidence	Adequate
26e899e0e0e6	4C30EEDA3A8F	Texting and driving has been banned in most of the United States there are only 2 states that haven't banned texting and driving. And of you get caught by a cop you will be fined up to $400. And that is a lot of money for just sending a text. And may also cause your license to get suspended	Evidence	Adequate
119c85b3387e	4C30EEDA3A8F	It makes sense because when you text and drive you are twenty three percent more likely to get into a car crash. That makes just as dangerous as driving under the influence.	Claim	Effective
04e2541c98c4	4C30EEDA3A8F	A lot of people don't actually know how dangerous and common texting and driving really is	Claim	Adequate
841eb8b89c71	4C30EEDA3A8F	It makes up eighteen percent of fatal car crashes. And more than 35 percent of teens and adults admit to texting and driving. So even though people know what could happen they still do it either way. And more then ninety percent of people know how dangerous texting and driving is. People take there eyes off the road for four seconds on average which is long enough for you to swerve on to another lane. And at least 9 people are killed every day by distracted drivers.	Evidence	Effective
e9b6c1c913cd	4C30EEDA3A8F	There are plenty of easy ways to prevent texting and driving.	Claim	Ineffective
62661cae65f5	4C30EEDA3A8F	One way is to have your phone out of reach and on silent so if you get a message or a call you won't be able to get tempted to reach for your phone. Another way is to use an app to block incoming texts or calls. Some apps can send an auto response back, letting the sender know that you are driving and will respond when you are not driving. And one way is to be committed to not texting and driving.	Evidence	Adequate
b53fcad60f03	4C30EEDA3A8F	In conclusion texting and driving and driving distracted is a big problem that can easily be avoided. But people still tend to do it anyways. People should pay a fine if caught by a police officer. And should get there license suspended if they do it a lot. People should be more aware about the consciences that can be caused by this petty action. To keep it simple would you drive 1 ton of pure machinery at 60 miles per hour blindfolded.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
fd15c3f2529d	4C3F7CDF30EB	There are many advantages of limiting car usage .	Position	Adequate
77d518df6eae	4C3F7CDF30EB	There are 3 important sources that tell us why people should limit car usage . Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture .	Evidence	Ineffective
00c0f79b8487	4C3F7CDF30EB	To begin with , In sources 1 & 2 you can tie in the two sources to conclude that limiting car usage is going on in Germany and Paris. Most people walk , ride bikes, or catch the train. Car ownership is allowed but there are only 2 places to put them in large garages at the edge of the development , where a car - owner buys a space for 40,000 along with a home ( 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars para 2 ). Paris decided to ban driving to clear the air of global cities. ( Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog para 10 ). Diesel was blamed , since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline . As well in sources 3 & 4 Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota and cars have come to an end with culture. They feel as though when people ride bikes , and trains it can prevent car jams. ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 20 ).The goal was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. In ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 35 ). shows that for example van services can share services to have less cars and less gasoline . They also have a bike sharing company that you can share bikes and dont even need to use a vehicle.	Evidence	Ineffective
d58c8bcaa438	4C3F7CDF30EB	There are advantages in limiting the use of cars. With 3 helpful Sources Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture prove the advanges of limiting cars.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
c11733820fca	4C51280DE2A8	First of all, NASA only gets their information from research and cameras which they depend on to help them with their research too.	Lead	Adequate
927af62d043a	4C51280DE2A8	According to the text it states,"New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa." Well, the Face of Mars does indeed exist but there is not any proof that there was life on Mars once because it seems impossible.	Position	Adequate
e101902bf1ee	4C51280DE2A8	To add to that it has been twenty five years since the discovery, and there is not a for sure explanation that is logical because some people think there is smething behind it.	Evidence	Adequate
bb394ddc5bb1	4C51280DE2A8	Second, now to the conspiracy theorists, they think there was life on Mars like aliens. Anything is possible for one so they can't be entirely incorrect because even a few scientists got to thinking about the Face of Mars could be an alien too.	Counterclaim	Adequate
8798fdaec8b0	4C51280DE2A8	According to the text it says,"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor(MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended." Even scientists believed it too and NASA has logical thinkers in their coorporation too.	Evidence	Adequate
cf84ed2ade47	4C51280DE2A8	Next, on April 8,2001 they got a picture of the Face,"Malin's team captured an extraordinary using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo." So overall the technology for the camera was very equiped.	Rebuttal	Adequate
6a5204384c8a	4C51280DE2A8	Therefore, the conspiracy theorists may have some thoughts that make NASA ponder about	Counterclaim	Adequate
918dcbc39ebd	4C51280DE2A8	Such as, NASA could be lying to us all and making us to believe that there is no such thing as extra terestrial objects and such. Here are some interesting theories that government should give us answers on, is the world really round, do aliens exist, is NASA lying, is there really a so called space, could aliens be demons, and overall is the government lying and hiding a bunch of theories from us. In fact they may have those answers to our natural questions about life	Evidence	Ineffective
5bdaad361085	4C51280DE2A8	In conclusion, NASA goes by research and proven facts and conspiracy theories have nothing to back them up. There are so many questions about life and Man do not have all the answers. We do not even know of all the organisms that could be living in the ocean. We may never know these questions, but NASA goes by research, cameras, and approximations about these discoveries and us the people just have to believe in what they are telling us.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
997c27a58c94	4C587D63904C	I think there pros and more cons in driving and using your Cell phone is unacceptable.	Lead	Adequate

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Venus is an extraorandraiy planet

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the atmosphere is almost all carbon dioxide so we would not be able to breath. Its avrage tempchure is 800 degrees fahrenheit so yeah be sure to bring your swim suit for a tan but wait theres more with the rain you will feel amazing and just melt away because all the rain is acid

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Now reschers want to explore Venus because they think long ago venus was just like earth

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It has mauntian ranges and vallys. "Long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth today.

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We cant get on Venus because we dont have tech or metals that can stand the harsh enviroment of Venus.

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Of course we have little info because we can orbet around venus safely but this can only give us so much info. You would think oh wjy dont you just take picuters. Well you know all that acid rain i told you about well there are thick clouds around Venus all the time.

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You migh think we are at a dead end on trying to explore Venus but if you think that you are right. NASA needs to be able to form new techonagly before we can do anything else on Venus. That is a challenge NASA has accetpiced is to keep trying for Venus.

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I don't think that this is valuable for students in a classroom just to read their emotions

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It invades their privacy on if they want to share whats going on in their life or not

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The students can share if they want to but they should't have their emotions identify by a computer and have their teacher to see what results came in for their emotions

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In the article it states that "we humans perform this same impressive "calculations" everyday" when actually you just sense it or study their face to see which emotion you can see through their eyes or facial expressions

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We don't need a computer to detect our emotions when we could say how were feeling and not have a computer tell for us

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In the article it states that "Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles."

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I pretty much don't beileve a computer can detect emtions from our faces when we could use a computer for many other things instead of emotions. What about our other emotions? gulity? curious? love? etc. How exactly can a computer detect our emotions? When a real human can detect it by the look of our face and talking about it

Concluding Statement

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Yea it might have some good sides to it for crimes and all that

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but please this is not for our students just for their teachers to read their emotions and invading their privacy

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The expressions would be a good tool to use in classrooms

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There are a lot of things that can back this up. In the text is say " that you can tell how other people are feeling when they are trying to hide their emotions. The software can recognize, it was created by Dr. Huang.

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The software can tel when people are having different emotions

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A good thing about the tool is that a, teacher would be able to tell when a student is having a bad day or when you are having mixed emotions. An nother good thing about the software is that teachers would be a ble to tell when students are getting bored in class or are lost in class. The software gives off a prectage of your body by telling if you are happy, nice, mean, fearful, and being disgusted with people.

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If I was a teacher in high school i would use this tool. There are so many ways that I would be able to help students in calss.

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If a student was having a bad day I would be able to know becasue of the software tool. I would be able to know if a student was struggling in class or that if a student was becoming bored in class.

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You should join the Seagoing Cowboy and UNRRA program

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you get to see many unique places.

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you get to help people by getting them food and helping them stay alive

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you get to help hungry soldiers thatare helping our country.

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In the passage Luke wanted to join the program not just to help people but to see all the amazing places in the story Luke said his favorite place was Greece. You could also see some amazing animals along the way. Luke liked Greece and the other places so much is in Greece he liked Acropolis. He liked the other places but Greece was his favorite. He also went on nine trips! The most of any Seagoing Cowboys.

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He also had to clean the stalls of the lower levels of the ship sometimes. One day he had to stop working for a couple of days because of cracked ribs because of flying overboard.

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The best part of being a Seagoing Cowboy is having fun.

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The cowboys played baseball,volleyball,and table-tennis and alot of other things too but Luke really loved being a Seagoing Cowboy.

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Venus is an interesting planet for various reasons.

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Scientists believe that Venus is alike to earth.

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It has about the same density and size compared to earth. In the article it states in paragraph 4 that "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life, just like Earth." This quote helps state that it is a interesting planet and alike Earth they want to study and learn about it knowing the conditons.

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Another example of how Venus is an interesting planet is because of the atmosphere and the ground conditions it has.

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Astronomers believe humans could survive there, however it wouldn't be easy with the conditions it has. A beam of light can barely pass throught the atmosphere; this causes the standard cameras to be ineffective.

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In conclusion, Venus is a very interesting planet and despite the dangers it has, it is worth it to study. It will be harder to study knowing that you can't take anything from the planet back, or the fact that in order to do anything you need to actually be there on the planet to get a better understanding.

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Some believe that it should be teacher designed, but others say it should be student designed to benefit them and make the summer project less difficult for the students. Their are many more other opinion since most parents believes that students should not have a summer project since it will stress and pressure them too much over brake. Another reason is to allow the students to take a brake since summer brake is meant fro the students to relax. Some students need to go out of state for family or other reason to enjoy the time they have before starting the learning process again the following year and this will allow students to think of what they will do different in school compared to last year. If the school does decide to remove summer project it will also help the teachers out so they have less work and more time to prepare for next year enrolling students.

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Their are many benefits to having the summer project and it being teacher designed since most students do almost all school work teacher designed so the students have some experience.

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Students also have more time to complete the summer project since they don't have classes or work during their brake.

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The students environment will be great for the students with the hot weather, great light, and more day time. They could also communicate with one another to talk about the summer project since they are not in a school zone so they are not restricted from using any cellular devices.

Evidence

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With the summer project being teacher designed the students could email the teacher if they are having a difficult task finishing the project so the teachers feedback will be a great help to any struggling students that need some assistance.

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Some students do benefit from the summer project but others don't even have the time to even complete the project at all.

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Certain students need to go out of the country to see family. Others start to get a summer job to save up money or for some other personal reason. They could get to lazy since they don't have any classes in the summer than they push it to the side or they do it the last week it is due. Students could also forget about the project over the brake.

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Summer project could be a great way for students academically but is it gonna benefit them in the long run as they choose their own path. A majority of schools in the U.S don't even have summer projects for students to do over brake.

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Most colleges don't even look or seem interested if you done summer projects your entire school year. Even if the project is either teacher or student designed it won't really help the students after school. Future courses may not even need you do have a summer project done as a requirement to enroll into any courses.

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In conclusion the summer project should be teacher designed for the students to make it easier to complete. Having it teacher based makes it more familiar to the students and more understanding. The summer project should be something optional not a requirement for any school. If the summer project was student based than some students may not try up to their own potential. Teachers are less stress over the summer with less work with the summer project and they can focus on future enrolling students.

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Drivers should not be allowed to use cell phones while driving.

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Drivers should not be able to use their cellphones while driving, for the reason that the use of a cell phone while operating a motor vehicle is exceedingly hazardous for the driver, as well as others who are traveling along the same road.

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The use of mobile devices while on the road leads to distracted driving which means that the driver is less likely to notice road and safety signals, Pedestrians and the signals coming from other vehicles. Failure to heed these signals has led to injuries and death that could have been prevented had the driver not been using a mobile device while on the wheel. In the U.S., there are laws banning the use of mobile devices or the act of texting while someone is on the wheel. The National Safety Council reports that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the U.S. is caused by texting and driving ("Texting and Driving Accident Statistics"). Cell phone distraction rates are alarmingly high and can pose serious safety risks. You can be charged with murder for texting and driving. Texting is the most alarming distraction sending or reading a text takes your eyes off the road for a couple of seconds. Using a cellphone while driving creates enormous potential for deaths and injuries on U.S. roads. In 2017 alone 3,166 people were killed in motor vehicle crashes including distracted drivers. Texting and driving is against the law ("The Dangers of Distracted Driving").

Evidence

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In an effort to fight these problems, more than 30 states now have a law when it comes to texting and driving("The Risks of Texting While Driving").

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The penalties for texting while driving could include hefty fines, license suspension, a rise in auto insurance rates, and prison time. The consequences you'll face for texting and driving are similar to those you'd get for another of the most serious driving offenses. (DUI) sometimes drivers who keep on texting do not see any people or animals crossing the street so there is a tendency to hit somebody crossing the road. Texting while driving is bad because it can bring fatal damages towards life. It may ruin the lives of others or worse might cause your life to end. Texting is a huge distraction to all drivers. Numerous drivers do not take this life threatening habit seriously and try to argue that these are an exception to these rules.

Evidence

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Texting may be useful, but the use of it can also be very bad. You can not keep both hands on the wheel so accidents may occur.

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It may put you at greater risk because you fail to see important road signs and signals. Sometimes a stressful text can provoke anger, which might affect your driving behavior. Texting while driving is a horrible idea because you need to look at the phone as you type and read incoming text messages. The vehicle might run over hole or wrong rails which might lead to car accidents. Texting while driving is dangerous and does kill, and has many times. Using a cell phone particularly texting while driving requires the driver to turn his mental attention to the device manipulate it with his hand to look at it.

Evidence

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Texting and driving should be banned because it is a hazard, and is an alert that needs to be reduced. The first reason for texting or using a cell phone while driving is very hazardous to yourself and the people surrounding you. Texting and driving is the act of composing, sending, reading text messages, emails or making similar use of the web on a mobile device while operating a motor vehicle. Texting while driving is considered extremely dangerous by many people, including authorities and in some places have either been outlawed or restricted. No one should text and drive. Be an example for others and if you need to text or talk on the phone, pull over to a safe place. Set rules for yourself and your household regarding texting and driving, lead by example. Currently there is no national ban on texting or using a wireless phone while driving, but a number of states passed laws banning texting or wireless phones requiring hands-free use of wireless phones while driving.

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The Facial Action system ,Detects exactly how other peple are feeling this system has promising applications for a variety of industries. This urguing people that if it is a good idea to put this system to use in classrooms. This systems can extract even the most minimal detal on a paintings. Such as the Mona Lisa from Leonardo da Vinci. And real live people to.

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I think that it is a good support the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions.

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But at the same time they should ask their students before going further.

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If is okay with them and their privacy because this machine or systems can read or noticed the most little detail in ur face expresions. Or if they are minors they will have to ask their parents or guardians. The founders or workers of this system or company.

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it can also benefit the students to learn more about them self and what they need to succed in life.

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It can also give the researches of this systems new information based on he research gather. From students partipating in the facial system. As the text states that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Using the machine.

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By showing they could also see if the students are happy or isgusting with their clases or even their. By saying all of this i think it is a good i dea for this facial device to be use in classrooms.

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Many people believe that " the Face" on Mars is actually a alien of some sort or a human. I can truly convince you why it's not a alien, it's only a landform. I can see why people can believe its an actual face because it has the qualities of a face: eyes, mouth, and nose.

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Here are my reasons why this is definetly a landform.

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First, there is no evidence of anyone going to Mars.

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" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all."

Evidence

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Mars has a very harsh climate and no one would even dare go off to a terrible, deserted planet to just not come back.

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Secondly, there is no history of anything in space involving aliens and their artifacts.

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Many would say that the aliens didn't want us to knw they exist

Counterclaim

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but the article states it could have been a person going to Mars. Scientists would have contacted the world and said we have evidence or living organisms on Mars.

Evidence

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Yet many people would believe living organisms on Mars and I can agree with that if they have fantastic reasoning to their theory.

Counterclaim

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They might say that if someone went to Mars they coud have not brought back anything or they got stranded on Mars and that could have been their body. People may believe that anyone on Mars would not survive the deserted planet with harsh climate and they would surely die there. Some sort of creature may have made it and they would give us evidencce of life on Mars.

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You never really know if there may be some sort of living organim on Mars unless you study it closer. Either I may be correct and it just being a landscape made from a storm or I could be wrong and its a living organism. We will never know unless we do the research.

Concluding Statement

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I will be telling you about a story called "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves." I think it is a good story.

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In the story it tells about a boy who signs up with his friend to be in a cattle boat job in the passage it said " The UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys to take care of cows,horses,mules,and more over seas. Luke and Don signed up for the job." Luke got to go all around the earth and deliver cattle. Lukes job on the boat was to check the cattle every hour.

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Luke got to go all around the world and see amazing places

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Luke had allot of fun and Luke got to see allot of things in other countrys. I think it was a good story. At the end of the story Luke says "I'm grateful for the opprotunity. It mad me aware of people in other countrys.

Concluding Statement

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I hope that you saw Lukes point of view and it convinced you to be in the Seagoing Coyboy in the program.

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There shouldn't be a discussion when it comes to texting and driving for obvious reasons. It's just as dangerous as driving under the influence.

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And there are plenty of ways to send a message using hands free technology. It also being illegal should really mean that you shouldn't be doing it. And you can also kill someone just to send a text message. But it is common in the United States.

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Texting and driving has been banned in most of the United States there are only 2 states that haven't banned texting and driving. And of you get caught by a cop you will be fined up to $400. And that is a lot of money for just sending a text. And may also cause your license to get suspended

Evidence

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It makes sense because when you text and drive you are twenty three percent more likely to get into a car crash. That makes just as dangerous as driving under the influence.

Claim

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A lot of people don't actually know how dangerous and common texting and driving really is

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It makes up eighteen percent of fatal car crashes. And more than 35 percent of teens and adults admit to texting and driving. So even though people know what could happen they still do it either way. And more then ninety percent of people know how dangerous texting and driving is. People take there eyes off the road for four seconds on average which is long enough for you to swerve on to another lane. And at least 9 people are killed every day by distracted drivers.

Evidence

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There are plenty of easy ways to prevent texting and driving.

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One way is to have your phone out of reach and on silent so if you get a message or a call you won't be able to get tempted to reach for your phone. Another way is to use an app to block incoming texts or calls. Some apps can send an auto response back, letting the sender know that you are driving and will respond when you are not driving. And one way is to be committed to not texting and driving.

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In conclusion texting and driving and driving distracted is a big problem that can easily be avoided. But people still tend to do it anyways. People should pay a fine if caught by a police officer. And should get there license suspended if they do it a lot. People should be more aware about the consciences that can be caused by this petty action. To keep it simple would you drive 1 ton of pure machinery at 60 miles per hour blindfolded.

Concluding Statement

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There are many advantages of limiting car usage .

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There are 3 important sources that tell us why people should limit car usage . Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture .

Evidence

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To begin with , In sources 1 & 2 you can tie in the two sources to conclude that limiting car usage is going on in Germany and Paris. Most people walk , ride bikes, or catch the train. Car ownership is allowed but there are only 2 places to put them in large garages at the edge of the development , where a car - owner buys a space for 40,000 along with a home ( 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars para 2 ). Paris decided to ban driving to clear the air of global cities. ( Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog para 10 ). Diesel was blamed , since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline . As well in sources 3 & 4 Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota and cars have come to an end with culture. They feel as though when people ride bikes , and trains it can prevent car jams. ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 20 ).The goal was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. In ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 35 ). shows that for example van services can share services to have less cars and less gasoline . They also have a bike sharing company that you can share bikes and dont even need to use a vehicle.

Evidence

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There are advantages in limiting the use of cars. With 3 helpful Sources Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture prove the advanges of limiting cars.

Concluding Statement

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First of all, NASA only gets their information from research and cameras which they depend on to help them with their research too.

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According to the text it states,"New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa." Well, the Face of Mars does indeed exist but there is not any proof that there was life on Mars once because it seems impossible.

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To add to that it has been twenty five years since the discovery, and there is not a for sure explanation that is logical because some people think there is smething behind it.

Evidence

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Second, now to the conspiracy theorists, they think there was life on Mars like aliens. Anything is possible for one so they can't be entirely incorrect because even a few scientists got to thinking about the Face of Mars could be an alien too.

Counterclaim

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According to the text it says,"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor(MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended." Even scientists believed it too and NASA has logical thinkers in their coorporation too.

Evidence

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Next, on April 8,2001 they got a picture of the Face,"Malin's team captured an extraordinary using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo." So overall the technology for the camera was very equiped.

Rebuttal

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Therefore, the conspiracy theorists may have some thoughts that make NASA ponder about

Counterclaim

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Such as, NASA could be lying to us all and making us to believe that there is no such thing as extra terestrial objects and such. Here are some interesting theories that government should give us answers on, is the world really round, do aliens exist, is NASA lying, is there really a so called space, could aliens be demons, and overall is the government lying and hiding a bunch of theories from us. In fact they may have those answers to our natural questions about life

Evidence

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In conclusion, NASA goes by research and proven facts and conspiracy theories have nothing to back them up. There are so many questions about life and Man do not have all the answers. We do not even know of all the organisms that could be living in the ocean. We may never know these questions, but NASA goes by research, cameras, and approximations about these discoveries and us the people just have to believe in what they are telling us.

Concluding Statement

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I think there pros and more cons in driving and using your Cell phone is unacceptable.

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