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cd067be7b8e2 | 5A230824A066 | because when a kid is doing there homework and the kid is bored the computer is going to detect that the kid is bored from doing his/her homework and put a add with a video game and the kid is going to get distracted and fail the assingment. | Evidence | Ineffective |
962c1da754ab | 5A3BABA1AE21 | I agree that some schools should let students do summer projects sometime over the summer. | Position | Ineffective |
5b9d965d840c | 5A3BABA1AE21 | staying active | Claim | Adequate |
ea7b2309fbbf | 5A3BABA1AE21 | not being lazy, | Claim | Adequate |
090665637847 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | keeping your brain and yourself on track | Claim | Adequate |
d081d58d2b67 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | During the summer you should want to go out and enjoy the outside world, you can do other things as well and to be creative about things for your school summer project, other than staying indoors and deciding to only sit around and do nothing.
| Evidence | Adequate |
2348813dc823 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | the reason I said to stay active is because when you are outside you never know what you will find or discover if you are doing a project, or just simply exploring the world or the envoirment you live in. Discovering new things helps you think about nature and physical activity that is happening all around you. If you are doing a specific project, then maybe you should look for certain things outside, or even think about what would be great to add on to your project. Stay focused and try to look forward into new things that you see for your summer project. | Evidence | Adequate |
4e240b17d7d3 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | for my reason of not being lazy is mostly saying that instead of being at home watching television commercials, or being on your phone all the time, maybe even just sitting and play video games is way worse than enjoying yourself. You could be missing so much fun things that are just waiting for you to explore with outside. It could be new animals you never seen before, something interesting that you might want to experience or hanging with friends. They can even help you on your project to if you want them to join as well. Don't just sit around and put boring things on your project, or words that dont make any since to you or the topic of the project. You want to be creative with your ideas think positive about finding new things and most importantly ,have fun with what you are doing. | Evidence | Adequate |
a0517df870aa | 5A3BABA1AE21 | Although, you might not be lazy but you must have your brain and yourself on track at all times. School projects are made for you to have fun while doing them, and to meet new people if you are working in groups , or even if you are by yourself and still have positive thoughts for you and your project then everything its going just fine. You must make sure that you feel comfortable to do your school project and to have all the things you need to make your project creative, strong, and well written. Over the summer, you want to go places to enjoy your self and not to sit around and be off tasks all day long.
| Evidence | Adequate |
1648eb2db786 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | , whatever you do over your summer break is up to you | Claim | Adequate |
fe01a3eae08d | 5A3BABA1AE21 | You can be outside having fun or maybe even inside as well enjoying yourself. Some people would not like to do a creative project outside sometimes but that is okay as well because you can do your project inside too. A lot of times, projects can be for fun or just to be graded when you come back to school. While you are doing your project, it helps you learn more over the summer break and you become interested to do certain things over the break and thats fine to. Being creative is another way of saying, you got this no matter what. | Evidence | Adequate |
57bc60f35f48 | 5A3BABA1AE21 | have fun with your project. Don't be afraid to do anything with your project that mainly talks about you or what you like to do in your life. Doing projects makes kids want to do them more over time, and then they might just might, be able to describe many things specifically for their projects. Learning on the other hand, makes you think more than just to not think at all. Just remember, while you are doing these projects once again you must continue to have fun with them. Tell about your life, family, or other and to have a great summer as well. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2e0cbd74c073 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | The author supports his idea by adding tons of pro-Venus exploration details throughout the passage. | Position | Adequate |
a6ea60440df5 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | Multiple reasons where given such as comparing Venus to Earth, | Claim | Ineffective |
d34e683ada7d | 5AEA8070C6B1 | looking back at the two planets history, | Claim | Ineffective |
28456b1057f4 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | shared natural events. | Claim | Adequate |
468e4314eb21 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | All are things that push us to keep observing Venus even with difficult conditions. | Claim | Adequate |
f1a71f5d3a74 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | In the fourth paragraph of the article, the author talks about how Venus may have once been covered in majestic oceans, and most likely able to support numerous forms of life. | Evidence | Adequate |
fdb313b79170 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | The author uses this to explain why astronomers are so intrigued by Venus. Even if Venus is inhospitable right now NASA would still like to explore the surface grab samples and bring them back to be tested. | Evidence | Adequate |
a3257e01239e | 5AEA8070C6B1 | Paragraph two elaborates mostly on comparing the planets Stating, "Often referred to as Earth's "twin" Venus is the closest planent to Earth in terms of density and size." | Evidence | Adequate |
922638ddb622 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | Connections and inferences can be made from this statement on how Earth and Venus might be similar. | Claim | Adequate |
1008afdb3750 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | in the 8th paragraph the author claims, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. | Evidence | Adequate |
c1801c36493e | 5AEA8070C6B1 | technology should grow enough to keep us hungry for exploring Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
e81a5b6abbc3 | 5AEA8070C6B1 | In conclusion The author wants us to keep trying to explore venus no matter the dangerous obstacle. He shows this by adding plenty of positive and interesting facts about the relationship between Earth and Venus. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
50c927f9836b | 5AF04068D0B9 | Well certenly we all have different facial expressions. But have you ever looked at somone and they look like they are made but they really are not? | Lead | Adequate |
fe7a9e6fc32e | 5AF04068D0B9 | Well I feel that we shlould not use tecnology to view somone's feelings. | Position | Adequate |
14dabc10340a | 5AF04068D0B9 | A lot of differnt things can be misunderstood just with one little mistake. | Evidence | Adequate |
7188e06e50ae | 5AF04068D0B9 | Tecnolgy does not alwys read ot tell the truth. | Claim | Adequate |
7af6f7d5c287 | 5AF04068D0B9 | It will be hard to tell if someone is really mad or has some feelings indide themselves if using tecnolgy. Mayeb the person can be happy and excited from the inside but from they outside they show a differnt facial expression. I feel that tecnology will just mess evrything up. We need to keep it all natural and they was it is now.
| Evidence | Adequate |
618dcdeb931c | 5AF04068D0B9 | If somoene is das you can see it nut you don't know how they feel inside. | Claim | Ineffective |
b50b9a448e54 | 5AF04068D0B9 | You can probobbly draw a picture of them or soemthing instead of using tecnology. Also any type of facial expression sould be valuable in the classroom. You can't really judge a book by it cover. So really there is no need of using tecnology to see somones looks or to make them that way. Everyone has differnt reactions to differnt things. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9cedb136bff1 | 5AF04068D0B9 | So I think that tecnology shpuld not be usted to identify somone or to give them a value. They are how they are and that is how it is. In a classroom ther can also be differnt values and differnt emoltional expressions. Someone might feel down but we don't know that until they talk to us or let us help them. So no tecnoligy shpuld not be allowed to try and guess someone's value or feelings. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8b411e8a348e | 5B1286DD196F | Plan My claim would have to be that computers who identify human emotions would be a valubale thinkg because many students come to class felling down or sad sometimes and instead of them keeping i to them selves. | Position | Adequate |
e0800e70597b | 5B1286DD196F | Somebody would hopefully be kind enough and ask if there doing okay or if they need somebody to talk to instead of just having to go thruogh it them selves, just like a child going thru depresion at the end of the day you want to look for those children and help them | Evidence | Adequate |
bb9bb1d35e3a | 5B1286DD196F | But another think would be why would we need this in class instead of using money for this technology they should fix the schools and bring more learning experiences around the country instead of wasting money to see how somebody is feeling | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e9669072ff78 | 5B1286DD196F | youll make somebody happy by just saying have a wonderful day today like the person grading this test i hope you have a wonderful day | Evidence | Adequate |
717d0027dd5d | 5B1286DD196F | this invension would be a good project to go around at the airport or banks just to see peoples reaction when they walk in and as there going out to see the diffrence of there face reactions. | Claim | Ineffective |
f97ed5815e1a | 5B1286DD196F | the mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile while it shows how much this computer can do,imagine a computer that knows when youre happy or sad, thatll be really creapy once it knows how you're feeling. | Evidence | Ineffective |
bffdf27e4d67 | 5B1286DD196F | LIke example "if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. but if you frown the next ad will be different." this sounds good so when you want certain kind of apps to pop up but once the system knows how youre feeling is another thing instead of seeing how im feeling they should help out people in need who need the help to help them keep there emotions better, Also crazy how theis technology would make it easy for a computer to recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored. | Evidence | Adequate |
48c530301145 | 5B1286DD196F | My claim would have to be that I would wan this in my class or around my school beacuse i personaly feel like many students will come into school with a diffrent mood if they knew there expresions or feelings are all being detected | Claim | Adequate |
91d038ab8dd9 | 5B1286DD196F | instead of them coming sad theyll probabaly chear up a bit since they maybe dont want anybody to know how there feeling and itll try to hid it and change there mood from what it was at first. | Evidence | Adequate |
e7b6db16bba1 | 5B1286DD196F | This process all beigins with a computer that constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model unit must move like a human muscles. Some coding system facial expressions that its going to be able to read is six basic emotions like happiness,surprise, anger, disgust, fear ,and sadness, many people are not gonna like the idea of this beause people don want to let everbody know what they are feeling or what there thinking of. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
095d6aee747a | 5B54CC4A1EBA | This technology should not be used in a classroom environment. | Position | Adequate |
c6b25e9d7c30 | 5B54CC4A1EBA | This way of telling emotions is just telling your facial expressions but not judging your emotions on the inside. | Evidence | Adequate |
be44ff719e93 | 5B54CC4A1EBA | The pronblem is that technology can't tell all emotions | Claim | Adequate |
1ecb6f6f9296 | 5B54CC4A1EBA | sometimes people look mad or sad but are really happy, if the computer is just looking the expression on your face then its really not doing anything. "Empathy (feeling someone else's emtional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression"(Ph9), when the author states this it shows that not all of our humanliy facial expressions give off our emotions. They have only tried this on a still frame pricture. | Evidence | Adequate |
2e4b28f7c20f | 5B54CC4A1EBA | Emotions are not just expressions on a face but its also a feeling inside so if the computer can actually feel the way someone is feeling then this sort of technology could work. | Claim | Adequate |
f9c3c91b5907 | 5B54CC4A1EBA | "of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait..."(Ph5), we have these troubles because we are notfeeling what they are feeling.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
ff223d9b544f | 5B54CC4A1EBA | In all this would not be a good idea because the results would not be accurate. Emotions are like feelings and can't 100% told by a computer. The pricing on this all of this must be tremendous and if school do want this technology they would have to consider that aspect of the deal. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
aed4d427aa2c | 5B66541ADDCD | Hello everyone I am Luke the Seagoing Cowboy | Lead | Ineffective |
ce6999ecf5cf | 5B66541ADDCD | Today. I think it will be a great opportunity for you too by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Position | Adequate |
087ec31dc132 | 5B66541ADDCD | I started with a help of my friend because I had no choice. He introduced me after the world war II where people still live in the ruins and are starving. It was a good thing for me back then because I had no hope. And that is how it started. | Evidence | Adequate |
72eded3eaabe | 5B66541ADDCD | When i joined the program it was hard definaty it a job after all my main purpose was to go of to the seas to another country and help poeple in needs. | Claim | Adequate |
0c977dc61bbf | 5B66541ADDCD | I was able to go to alot of places | Claim | Adequate |
6428d20da87d | 5B66541ADDCD | but moving wasent a easy job | Counterclaim | Adequate |
57c70850a846 | 5B66541ADDCD | I had time when I broke my ribs and could not even work for our crew and that is not all the tides in the oceans are strong very strong and if you were the night watcher too bad | Evidence | Adequate |
9e50bcaca5a2 | 5B66541ADDCD | I turned 18 when i was in way to Greece. I was able to be darte d for military service and they said to countine my military service. I also admit but it was a great oppertunity for me. | Evidence | Ineffective |
cdfddc9e29c7 | 5B66541ADDCD | There is also a fun side. | Claim | Adequate |
35e09f7c119b | 5B66541ADDCD | When all the cattles were gone our crew was able to stay and play games like vollyball tabletennis,boardgames and lot more it is definatly worth it do ing hard work for all that | Evidence | Adequate |
886b65d9b889 | 5B66541ADDCD | You could also tour the citys I visited the Acropolis,the Gondola ride in Venice,excavaded castle in Crete,Panama Canal an the way to China. | Evidence | Adequate |
a5e3b13136f2 | 5B66541ADDCD | You can tour big places while you are there. That is one of the big reasons I joined the program | Claim | Adequate |
ccf1ce0f379e | 5B66541ADDCD | You can really be aware of waht is going on. I saw th ruins and it was really bad horrible all houses colasped... | Claim | Adequate |
013c9e134565 | 5B66541ADDCD | You can help people in need and are starving for food even though they did not do any thing wrong. | Claim | Adequate |
376c81b4e2f7 | 5B66541ADDCD | I felt really pitty for them beacase the war has not started because of them and they are starvng well for no reason. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2cacdc362f6a | 5B66541ADDCD | I really think that you guys should join the program,ofcourse there are though times, but seeing people get satisfied by my work and visting places for free it is definatly worth at least trying out for this program. This program changed my life it might change yours too. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
61554023ecfd | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | Some peope think that the landform was created by alien's, but have no evidence. | Claim | Adequate |
7be0fb70409e | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | You can clearly see in the picture that theres a shadow on the landform. People have even proved that it was a shadow on the landform. | Evidence | Adequate |
12ec1d165ee6 | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | You can also conclude that there are no alien's roaming around in space making face's on landform's. | Position | Adequate |
c47902b56cc2 | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | People have no evidence that there are alien's roaming around in space. | Claim | Adequate |
06d22c759993 | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | Alien's are only in the movie's that you see, that's only my opinion though. Even if there were alien's out there, we should have found them by now. With all our space gadget's that we have that can look deep into space, i'm pretty sure we would have found alien's by now. | Evidence | Adequate |
bd0c9be30759 | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | Even though people have "spotted" alien UFO's, they have no proof. | Claim | Adequate |
955c28ac6c5b | 5B6E4D0EEB87 | People could have said they even spotted it, but then again since their on video, they could have photoshopped it. People can believe what they want to believe, but if you can see there's perfect evidence, you can't really argue if they have real proof. | Evidence | Ineffective |
bbec38834a37 | 5B9A44B2CF80 | In the passage the Author suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit desite the dangers it presents. | Position | Adequate |
b25ee149b40d | 5B9A44B2CF80 | In the first paragraph the author says ¨Venus, sometimes called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.¨. In that quote it is saying that the Evening star is so bright that someone is not really paying attention could see it because it is so bright it can not be missed. It is also saying that it is one of the brightest points of light which means if you are lost you could look up and hopefully see that star and it will give you some light to find your way. | Evidence | Ineffective |
11ca6754c1b2 | 5B9A44B2CF80 | Another quote from paragraph one is ¨However, this nickname is misleding since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun¨. This quote means that even though Venus looks like a star because it extremely bright, and shows off an extreme amout of light it is a planet. Many people mistake Venus as a star but once they find out it is a planet they are amazed because of the brightness of it | Evidence | Ineffective |
bfc970f7430f | 5B9A44B2CF80 | In paragraph two it says ¨Often referred to as Earths ¨twin¨, Venus is the closest planet to earth in tearms of density and size, and occasionally the closest distance to earth¨. In that quote it is saying that Venus is known as Earths twin because of the size. The Earth and Venus are about the same size. It also says that Earth and Venus have about the same density as each other. | Evidence | Adequate |
59357288fb19 | 5B9A44B2CF80 | In my opinion I think that the planets should all be different sizes and densities because of the fact that everything is different. When it comes to planets they should all be different sizes, so that people can easily point out the planets and be able to name them easily and not get them mixed up because of them looking the same size in the atomosphere | Claim | Ineffective |
49970c0ecb44 | 5B9A44B2CF80 | In the passage in paragraph three it says ¨A think atomosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankes Venus¨. In this quote it states that most of Venus is covered in carbon dioxide. If scientists wanted to go study Venus they would have to have many layers of protection on because carbon doxide can be very harmful to the human body. Especially since the carbon dioxide percentage is so high it can extrmely hurt the human body of anyone that goes to Venus to study it | Evidence | Ineffective |
1de39fc90ac4 | 5B9A44B2CF80 | My thoughts on this topic are that if they want to study it they should send up a professional to put something on Venus that can dectect any movement or anything on the planet. They should do that so the scientists wanting to study Venus can study it from a safe distance and out of harms way. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d60a788b594e | 5BBC05802470 | No i think having technology to read a emotional expressions of students. I think that is really not a good idea | Position | Adequate |
33dc99df949c | 5BBC05802470 | Why because somebody dont like to know how they feeling some people don't like to express their feelings cause it's nobodys bussnies | Claim | Adequate |
a6c628d08848 | 5BBC05802470 | Tell me would you let them use and technology to read your emotions somepeople would say yes somepeople would no because either the way it goes your still messing being in somebodys else bussnies and some people don't like when they do things like this makes people think that where watching their life | Evidence | Ineffective |
598c5a06c45e | 5BBC05802470 | No i disager with the technology to read emotional expression becaue it's like their trying to find a good way to gets us totechnology againts use and try to take over are emotions think about it | Claim | Adequate |
bd77ac61a116 | 5BBC05802470 | Think about how something bad can happen ifthey use the technology to read expressed something can go wrong to where the technology ain't gone be working like its is supposed i think they trying to use itn against take over are mine makes us feel how they want us to feel say what they want us to say | Evidence | Adequate |
e25cfecd139b | 5C01C98F3655 | Would you be able to do what Luke Bomberger did? Just step right up folkes and sign up for free today! | Position | Adequate |
7dff03b6689e | 5C01C98F3655 | We cattle boat sailers don't give up we are resilient. I bet you are resilient to so sign up. You get to travel get to see some places you never seen before. Sometimes you might even go on a avanture. If you dont believe me you can scrutinize this sign up sheet. The ocean wheather can get surreal but we cattle boat sailers dont give up! You get to see China you'll see Europe. While your traveling you get to haul horses and cattle. The horses will have enough food to last for the trip the record for the most trips is nine trips aint that crazy. Well if you sign up today you might be the one to beat that record so get started by signing up right now for free today. | Evidence | Adequate |
8735b1ddecbb | 5C01C98F3655 | While your out at sea you can see some surreal things like new kind of fish you never seen or some new kind of shark you never even knew about. | Evidence | Adequate |
199d121ce7f4 | 5C01C98F3655 | Life of being a cattle boat sailer is not bad it is kind of fun. | Claim | Adequate |
d2fc5a1683a4 | 5C01C98F3655 | Your driving this big ship with horses by your self. Just picture youself out at sea with the wind blowing threw you hair the sound of the ocean the sunset. You can do all those fantastic things all you got to do is sign up now today. | Evidence | Adequate |
b0e49cb773c9 | 5C01C98F3655 | We need moore sailers to help us get these cattle to there destination. The best sailer we had was Luke Boberger he holds the record of the most trips. Luke was as audacious like a lion in the wild. Luke loved doing what he did. The trips Luke had done were unbelieveable. | Evidence | Adequate |
ae0ec7500d01 | 5C01C98F3655 | You get to be at sea with youself a bunch of horses and if you want a friend. | Claim | Adequate |
92bf9159fda0 | 5C01C98F3655 | With the ocean wheather you might loose some cattle but its okay as long as you get the rest of the cattle to the destination. We have had some brave and strong sailers but we need more. We need audacious and fearless sailers. | Evidence | Adequate |
699a1c666c68 | 5C01C98F3655 | If you sign up you'll get the im-not-gonna-regret-this kind of feeling. CRACK!Is what the boat does whenever you hit a rock but you wont have to pay for the damage we will. If you want to work for us more than two years the boat you drive will be yours thats right folkes well give you the boat. All you got to do is sign your name and well even throw in a free sailer out fit with new shoes and hat. Once you get the hang of it you'll be like this is a peace of cake. The boat comes with a horn that will-tell-everyone-the-boat-is-okay and so are you,but all you have to do is sign a couple of papers and fill some documents out. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5eb66b28ce5b | 5C01C98F3655 | We sailers get to travel all arounf the world inmagine how much money you'll get. | Claim | Adequate |
c805f2072337 | 5C01C98F3655 | The pay is also great. | Evidence | Adequate |
97ef29828cfe | 5C01C98F3655 | You might have to risk your life sometimes | Counterclaim | Adequate |
46eaa6f49b3d | 5C01C98F3655 | but you'll be fine. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
b1dd12bc272a | 5C01C98F3655 | This is all your decision. What the papers say is about your health care,what kind of cattle do you prefer to sail with intell six months later. These are all you decisions but we do need some resilient sailer to help us. Luke Bomberger would of wanted you to help us sail these poor animals. so please sign up today for free. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
783f3bc7cd81 | 5CC530A8C191 | I think that if we ever did find aliens on Mars or even a civilazation we should stay away from it. The reason why is because if we ever did find a other planet we never really be called the only planet in the universe. In the article we found out that we have a new way to find people. We never really thought that their was ever a civilazation on Mars. | Lead | Ineffective |
67d9b3e515be | 5CC530A8C191 | As we found out that we may have found a way to a other civilazation. I just recently told you that we should never go near Mars. The reason why I told you that is because we don't now their lifes, their ways, or even if they were freindly. When NASA told us that we have a way to find people we should never talk to them. Yes it does show that we had images of planet Mars or even that their might have been a culture.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
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