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24e9750dcd82 | 70FA630251FB | You can see that aliens didnt make it because when they took the picture in 1998 you couldnt really see the face, but in 2001 you could see it 3 times better than the first one. When taking pictures you always have to get the right angle because either something gets left out or something dosent shows up. | Evidence | Ineffective |
10b091107727 | 70FA630251FB | If there were any aliens we would have seen them due to the fact that we have spacecrafts taking pictures of it and we have been on the planet ourselves. | Claim | Ineffective |
41035e4bf249 | 70FA630251FB | If aliens did make it why are we just noticing it why didnt we notice it the other times. or better than that why havent we seen any aliens working on it. If aliens did do it why is that the only thing they made why havent they made other things why just a face? We all know that aliens dosent exsist so stop saying that until we have evidence that aliens exsist. | Evidence | Ineffective |
53e5056c339b | 70FBC86A01C6 | Studying venus is a worthy persuit despite its dangers | Position | Adequate |
eee4ff59f6d5 | 70FBC86A01C6 | The author has a few reasons of why he thinks this | Claim | Ineffective |
2d0fc41bb277 | 70FBC86A01C6 | Some of them are to find out what it is made up of | Claim | Adequate |
5ffe563954eb | 70FBC86A01C6 | Another one is to try and find out why there is no life on mars | Claim | Adequate |
67560c30084b | 70FBC86A01C6 | Also even though he thinks they should explore it he talks about the dangers and how really dangerous it is. There are a lot of risks to exploring venus but it would be worth it.
| Claim | Adequate |
2ed83fdc4c8d | 70FBC86A01C6 | One thing that the authro does well to support his idea is he gives a lot of compelling resons of why he thiks venus is worth exploring | Claim | Ineffective |
a9f9c1912b5c | 70FBC86A01C6 | One of the reasons why he things its worth exploring is because they can find out what venus is made up of by taking rock samples. I think this is a good reason becuase it explains how the author wants to explore venus despite its dangers | Evidence | Adequate |
8179a0b84781 | 70FBC86A01C6 | Another reason why he thinks it should be explored despite its dangers is becuase they can figure out why there is no life on venus | Claim | Adequate |
2228b8d50ed7 | 70FBC86A01C6 | I also think this is a good reason becuase it proves why venus should be explored even though it is dangerous according to the author. | Evidence | Adequate |
730924ce0834 | 70FBC86A01C6 | In conclusion the author has a good point of why venus should be explored despite the dangers. One of his reasons is to find out why there is no life on venus. Another reason is to find out what venus is made up of. I think these are good supporting reasons because they prove why venus should be explored even though it has dangers. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
347e497e107f | 710EFFD2AFE1 | The Facial Action Coding System is should not be use in classroom, or in anywhere | Position | Adequate |
01c40a95999a | 710EFFD2AFE1 | It's not good to know how everyone feels about each others | Claim | Adequate |
67fbdc51155b | 710EFFD2AFE1 | because if we do know how we feel about each other we will all hate each other. Even for a computer it's not good to know how humans feels about the other human, only polices should have this device because if the polices cought bad guys they will use it to them. | Evidence | Adequate |
9e4d21a8f13c | 710EFFD2AFE1 | According to Prof. Thomas Huang this device can recognize the subtle facial movements humans use to express how humans feel. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
255652e89af4 | 710EFFD2AFE1 | However, this device is still not trust worthty | Rebuttal | Adequate |
87bbd45e41db | 710EFFD2AFE1 | because if this device did not tell the truth every would hate each other. A computer that knows when you're happy or sad is not good for humans. For example, if this Facial Action Coding System could be use in humans kids will not have go to school anymore because they will start doing something else. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c3ab0e4b6fd9 | 710EFFD2AFE1 | The Facial Action Coding System should not be use in anywhere | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a5af316dcde5 | 711483807C59 | I think that tthe Facial Action Coding Sysytem or the facs for short is a great tool that could opne new door that were prevasily clouse befor. | Position | Adequate |
0a3bacb7caf8 | 711483807C59 | We should take anvteng of this new tecnoligy to better help the people of today. | Evidence | Adequate |
7707926961a9 | 711483807C59 | Imeag you could tell if someone is facking a exspressen or forceing it with this tec we could. | Claim | Adequate |
621bdf023e3c | 711483807C59 | We could detormen if someone daprise and help them or cipadiseing with them | Evidence | Ineffective |
639511796684 | 711483807C59 | One way the athur say in the text is " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored". | Evidence | Adequate |
340ba625f9ab | 711483807C59 | Not olny would this benafaet the studens it would be a great help for the teacher who can't tell can be a way of letting them now. And help the studen that are confused. | Claim | Adequate |
9894d57f8a16 | 711483807C59 | The text also say "then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instctors". That is one of only many thing it can do by helping the teachers by better understanding the classroom.
It could do all of that by " Classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness" by accociated with characteristic movements of facial muscles. | Evidence | Adequate |
6864ecc72fa0 | 711483807C59 | We could use this tecnogly more then just the classroomn like a better secroty system or a more exsprenol imeag to help doctores of what the pasent is feeling. That this tecnolgyn could work on pc or maby a phone is just mind blowing. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a5f4fad4cf50 | 713EA4487525 | in the "challenge of exploring venus" the author says that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. He supports all his claims further in to the article. | Position | Adequate |
beb61eeb8c03 | 713EA4487525 | he says that it is one of the hottest planets even though its not directly next to the sun the pressure holds the heat in, its hot enough to melt certain metals | Evidence | Ineffective |
ec12debb6628 | 713EA4487525 | he says that scientists ar taking the risk because its so far the only planet that could have been just like earth in the past. | Claim | Adequate |
ca4bfcbbbcb5 | 713EA4487525 | he brings up some of the characteristics that venus has that earth has too and he also brings up some of the physical features that makes them think there was living life on it at some point and time in the past. Our sister planet could have been covered in many oceans and held many kinds of life. just those little two facts bring the scientists in and make them wanna learn more about it. venus has rocky sediment, mountains and craters which earth all has. | Evidence | Adequate |
fccae0c0d6ce | 713EA4487525 | in order to explore venus they would have to be very careful because how deadly and dangerous it could be | Claim | Adequate |
4e1ee7ca4f34 | 713EA4487525 | they bring up a spacecraft very relative to a blimp that they would be able to use and study and explore venus from a very safe area without causing any harm to the scientists on board they would be about 30 or so miles above the surface area it would still be very hot around 170 degrees farenheight but do able because the blimps outer layer would keep the scientists from burning up or getting too hot . they are coming up with other ideas other than the blimp like spacecraft they havee also come up with the idea to send a roverthat is made out of silicon carbide that has lasted 3 weeks in venus like conditions. the scientists only want to learn more about venus mostly for its path and what it could have looked like and to make a breakthrough with some big news that venus was almost identical to the place we live on called earth. | Evidence | Adequate |
b7785ffde76e | 713EA4487525 | as the author says in his last paragraph "striving to explore venus has value not only because of the insight that will be gained but out of your normal human curiosity" for the last point he says " our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." which in total supports his whole statement of is venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
dc9c0a6af240 | 714651DE19D4 | Remember thst one day you were sad ? Just never showed that emotion/ expression so you would not get ask ? Your apperence is never what you actually feel on the inside is it ? That is because face expression hids it all. Now there is a computer system that catches your human emotions.
According to some new technonlgy named, Facial Action Coding, this system identifies humans emotions. | Lead | Adequate |
60d298c0e0f4 | 714651DE19D4 | This technology is not the right way to find students human emotions. | Position | Adequate |
b18b2a8900ce | 714651DE19D4 | Facial Action Coding seems to just identify just your face. A face expression can hid your actual emotion | Claim | Ineffective |
46185c4dd485 | 714651DE19D4 | Systems like this have the chance to not be right. Make believe what this system is all about. | Evidence | Ineffective |
150871e08657 | 714651DE19D4 | Secondly, the students expression may change during the day | Claim | Adequate |
00a17cfa1760 | 714651DE19D4 | At some point a studnets can feel pressered after a class of even before there next class. These emotion have the accursy to not be the same during a students day. Calculating these emotion, can not be like working on a math problem. Emotions can change in the matter of a second. You just dont know what can happen at any minute that changes your expressions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9c15c80445ca | 714651DE19D4 | Lastly, this system would not be good to keep students emotion | Claim | Ineffective |
8d523ea9ae58 | 714651DE19D4 | It would be better to talk the student face to face, if you ever see or feel like something it going wrong with them. Like the article says you never know how your teacher feel when she is grading your assigment. | Evidence | Adequate |
a16b72990bbb | 714651DE19D4 | I believe the Facial Action Coding should not be used on students. I would rather let a teacher talk face to face with there studnets to see what the situation is all about. Rather then just guessing or coding there face and believe a system like the one that Prof. Thomas Huang invented. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
abec8175fd6a | 71A166CD0D13 | the use of using cras less it a much saver | Claim | Adequate |
b798e26d456e | 71A166CD0D13 | healthier to the air | Claim | Adequate |
ea66ae389fbf | 71A166CD0D13 | this essay is to imfomr felloe citizens about the advantages og limiting car usage | Position | Adequate |
0b9dab0e4749 | 71A166CD0D13 | As it is stated in the passage Residents of the upscale communtiy in german hav e given up their cars "Street parking ,drive ways and home garages are geneally forbiddean in the experimental new district". Car ownership is allowed but there are only two places that you can park ,large garages at the end of the development(2) ,car owners buy the space for $40000 alone with a home(2). Becaus of this 70 percent of the families dont own cars while 57 percent do own cars (3)."When i had a car i was always tense ,i am much happier this way " said heidrun walter . Completed in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in Europe also the United states and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto life use , as a componet of a movement called "smart planning (4) ". Passengers cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in europe ,up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the united states . Past few decades efforts have been made to make cities denser and better for walking ,planners are nikw taking this concept to the suburs ,home to 5500 residents within a rectangular square mile .In this new appocah stores will be placed in a walk way on the main streest rather then in malls alone some distant high ways .
"ALL of our developement since world war 2 have been centered on the car ,and that will have to change " (7) said david goldberg .
Paris enforced a partical ban unpon driving to clear the glabal city ,almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction fine .Because of that congestion was down 60 percent in the captail of france ,the smog rivaled beijing ,china which is known as one of the most polluted citesbin the world. Diseal fuel was blamed ,diseal makes up 67 percent of vehicles in france while 53.3 percent are diseal engines in the western europe. The smog was cleared enough on monday for french party to recined the ban for odd numbers plates on tuesday. In colombia a program was set ,leaving the streets of the capital city devoid of traffic jams ". Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution " , day without cars is an improvenment campagin that begun in the mid 1990's .Parks ,sports centers bloomed throughout the city ,uneven pitted sidewalks hace been replaced and so on .Recent studies suggest that americans are buyiinh fewer cars etc ..which left reserches poundering 'Has americs passed peak driving"? But americans love affair with its vehicles seemse to be cooling adjusted for population growth number of miles driven peaked in 2005 than droopend after that .Many meaures the decrease in driving preced the downturn which is persisitinbg now that recover is under way . | Evidence | Ineffective |
89463c946be2 | 71A166CD0D13 | if this pattern persists it will be benefical impliactiins for carbon emissions and environment. With all these changes people who stopped car commutin as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ad90d26038d3 | 71B6B3BAAD43 | "Venus, is sometimes called the "Evening Star,".
Venus is a planet where life cannot exist because of it's life surviving and high temperature conditions. In our solar system Venus is our second plannet close to our sun. | Lead | Adequate |
fc30e1c7be52 | 71B6B3BAAD43 | The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pusuit despite th dager is presents. | Position | Adequate |
62117798488f | 71B6B3BAAD43 | There is a lot of danger in this planet | Claim | Adequate |
8b45ceacb30b | 71B6B3BAAD43 | Life can't be found in this planet do to the extreme temperature of the sun which it could go up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit and 90 times more the pressure of the Earth. | Evidence | Adequate |
4eb77b6cfe83 | 71B6B3BAAD43 | Why would the author think that studyng venus would be a good idea? According to the text " Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like."
| Claim | Adequate |
244f0dce69dc | 71B6B3BAAD43 | This show how the author that studying venus is a worthy.
Another reason why the author suggest that studying venus would be a worthy pusuit despite the danger is that Venus was probably covered with oceans and it could be our nerest option for a planetary visit. According to the text " The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famliar feature sych as valleys,mountains,and creaters. Furthermore, recall the Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crusial consideration given the long time frames of space travel". This supports what the author suggets. | Evidence | Adequate |
99fa10ded50c | 71B6B3BAAD43 | What the author suggests is something thst is really worthy pusuit the danger is presents because Venus could even become the next "Earth" in a near future. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
63bade827385 | 71BF2F475B65 | By doing a Facial Action Coding to a classroom full of students would be different and interesring | Position | Ineffective |
ef7cebbe5a6f | 71BF2F475B65 | This would be the first time anyone has done something that like. But the results could vary cause of how the students are feeling. | Claim | Adequate |
6c2f17c52ec6 | 71BF2F475B65 | Say there is a girl who is having a really good day, she got asked to Prom and she said yes. It made her day and she was happy for the rest of the day. And then take a boy who was late for the bus and had to walk to school. He would be tired and upset. They both have two different emotions, so the results would be different.
| Evidence | Adequate |
f3c6d3c63a5d | 71BF2F475B65 | "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor" | Evidence | Adequate |
6f00e7a87822 | 71BF2F475B65 | If a classroom did a scan and all the students were tired, not interested, and ready to go home, the teacher could take those results and make the class more interesring for the students. | Claim | Adequate |
56c97414c254 | 71BF2F475B65 | The students would probably have more fun and want to do the work if the teacher made it fun and interesting for the students. But don't make it too difficult for the students cause they could shut down again. | Evidence | Adequate |
6793624329db | 71BF2F475B65 | By doing the Facial Action Coding, the result could be different for some students. But it would be fun and interesting to switch things up a bit and have while learning. By doing the Facial Action Coding, you can see how the students really feel. And it cpuld help them and you (the teacher) get a better understanding of how to teach. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
519a2b76342b | 71CF98E09876 | The author talks about how the value of retuning to vanes is important and worth it. | Position | Adequate |
853c3cc9edec | 71CF98E09876 | The author say's vanes is the twin of of our solar systame. Venus is the closeist to see from the earth scood planet from the point in life earth . The author talks about that venus is the clostes to the plant to earth in the terms of density and size and occasionaly the clostest distance too. In the texts the author talks about approaches to studinng venuse examples, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaso of venuse surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. In the text it say's however peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safety far above of the planet can provide only limited insights on the ground conditions becuase most forms of light can not penetrate the dese atmospher. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2397326a9855 | 71CF98E09876 | Its's worth it to study and learen about venus | Claim | Adequate |
2e725d676006 | 71CF98E09876 | you can see up close and learen about the forms of lights and the desenics atmosphere and standerd forms of photography and videography ineffective but there are risks like in anything you study or do in life there are risk's. In the texts it also says striving to meet the challege present by venuse has values, not only beacuse of of the insights to be gained on the planet, or on it' self, but also beacuse humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors | Evidence | Adequate |
5f96bcf8b2df | 71CF98E09876 |
. One thing shows you that studing venus is worth it is that you travel and you will meet the vary edges of imagination and innovation, travels on earth and beyone should not be limited by danger and doubts . | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0fe1fdd8cc41 | 71DF40C12652 | I do not think that the use of this technology on the students in the classroom is valuable | Position | Adequate |
3f655a08fe6c | 71DF40C12652 | I think this because we don't need technology to see how someone is feelings or to show us someone's emotions. We can tell just by looking at them that they are fine or not. | Claim | Adequate |
a4480187a835 | 71DF40C12652 | Technology is used to much in the world. My question is why would we even use that technology, because later on generations won't be able to look at someone and tell their emotions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4e7dcb7f9e40 | 71DF40C12652 | In the story, the author gives an example of how we don't use technology to tell one's emotions. "You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face." | Evidence | Adequate |
18122aca001d | 71DF40C12652 | Even though, its a great invention would be even use it. Its not appropriate to use in a classroom setting. A teacher using that just to see what the kids' emotions are on the lesson. The teacher could just look at them and see how they feel towards this | Evidence | Adequate |
fbd5ca6b114b | 71DF40C12652 | The teacher would probably say that it would be useful for that technology. Some students probably wouldn't mine | Counterclaim | Adequate |
00e479384b67 | 71DF40C12652 | but others would. Students don't like to show their emotions sometimes | Rebuttal | Adequate |
9216e700befe | 71DF40C12652 | Then all of a sudden a teacher can just tell your emotions in a second. The students would probably feel uncomfortable, because the teacher can see how they are feeling. Feelings or emotions are meant for that certain person. That certain person can show off his/her emotions to other students around them. | Evidence | Adequate |
fa5d23a6e794 | 71DF40C12652 | Also where would you even put the emotional expression technology, because having a huge thing in the front of the classroom would be a distraction. | Claim | Adequate |
cf43857ab094 | 71DF40C12652 | That technology is also a distraction, because students would mess around with it when they probably aren't supposed too. Also the students would keep asking the teacher what their emotions are. | Evidence | Adequate |
09c791c67155 | 71DF40C12652 | "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." | Evidence | Adequate |
3d7b4e732da3 | 71DF40C12652 | That quote sounds like its better than a teacher, because it can read the emotions and tell when the students get bored so they can change it. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
040e863e6812 | 71DF40C12652 | The invention would be nice, but not in a classroom settings. Its just not appropriate there | Claim | Adequate |
e441589ecda9 | 71DF40C12652 | In the story, it makes you do a little motions with your face. This is demonstrating that the technology will use the muscular part of your face to determine your emotions at that current time. The technology is cool on how it works and operates, but reading the students' muscular emotions would not be right. | Evidence | Adequate |
f29d2a7e48c2 | 71DF40C12652 | Towards the end of the text, they said they used it for a theatre thing. That is an appropriate place to use it, because you are supposed to show a lot of emotions there. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
025675ba2589 | 71DF40C12652 | Also they could read your emotions and help improve them because the technology told you what the emotion mostly was. The technology does reveal a lot about the science of emotions, but other places would have better use on it. | Evidence | Adequate |
e88beeef0341 | 71DF40C12652 | Some students like to hide their emotions from the teacher or other students. Some don't want people to know what they are feeling, because its their own business. Students wouldn't want their teachers walking up to them asking what is wrong, and the students said something like how do you know there is something wrong. Then the teacher says I used the emotional expression technology. The student would just feel awkward, because the teacher just figured out their emotions when they probably wanted to keep it to themselves. This is why the use of technology to read the emotion expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
78be90d2d03b | 71E9F0BA4A2D | In todays society pollution levels are higher than they have ever been. This is because of cars; every time u start up ur car you are polluting the earth . You may not can see it but it happens. There is a way to stop this though but it will take alot of time and convincing, becasuse who would wanna give up their car it is such a easy source of transportation and some people couldnt go without it. | Lead | Adequate |
8a9641c782fd | 71E9F0BA4A2D | There is also a possibility that we wouldnt have to go completely without cars. We could go to electric or just find a totally different resource to run a car. I am sure there has to be something else than just gas that could run a car. It amazes me how we make all these crazy futuristic inventions but we cant make another substance to run a car. I think we should stop worrying about just stopping car usage completely and try to make something else that will run a car. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ee9ba3432860 | 71E9F0BA4A2D | "you now how difficult it actually is to find something as precise and accurate working as gasoline?" | Claim | Adequate |
06933a8628cf | 71E9F0BA4A2D | Well yes i do understand that but if we all got the best brains inn the world together and tr to figure this out i most definitely think we can do it. Maybe we wouldnt have to just get the smartest people to help us, we could get everyone in the world to help us. Some may also ask "well how do you expect to do that?" well its simple you have to do the same thing we would to stop smoking SPREAD AWARENESS. Doing this would help a huge amount. | Evidence | Ineffective |
29fa42f142fa | 71E9F0BA4A2D | I think alot of people take the whole no car thing the wrong way, cause lets face it there no way we could go without cars. | Position | Ineffective |
3dfcab69ad29 | 71FD8098572A | Have you ever just wondered if there could be life somewhere else from earth?
If so then how about the face that they found on mars. Many people dont agree that it's just landform that built it's self up and just happened to resembul a face. Others would disagree and say that it is just land and that shodows were the main purpose of the enitre thing that made it look like a face. Why did the face on mars not look the same in 1976 i looked like a smilly face at first. | Lead | Adequate |
654e88694bb8 | 71FD8098572A | When the picuture was taken it was taken in many different angles. That shows that there is a posability that the picture that they took at the time was in a way that made it have shadows an some sides. | Claim | Adequate |
bbac6c08af37 | 71FD8098572A | The camara that took it could have been faceing in the direction that the sun was shining and got some of the light make shadows on the landform.
The scientist that looked at the picture taken by Viking 1 says it was only landform shaped in different ways. Makeing it appear like something that is not really there. Garvin says that it remindes him of a lava dome around the America West it's about the same height as the face that they found on mars. | Evidence | Adequate |
833392f53600 | 71FD8098572A | When they first took a picture of the face in 1976 it looked nothing like a face it only looked like a smily face and even that was hard to tell. After a couple of years in 1998 in looked like an oval shaped box and it was sunken in. And in 2001 is when started to shape into something over the years in changed and over more years it will change even more. | Evidence | Adequate |
d6b8be4727e4 | 71FD8098572A | After that and so on because that's just what landforms do they change but, you can't always see the same thing you sole once.
| Claim | Adequate |
fb1a04f58463 | 71FD8098572A | I can see why some people don't see why it could be a landform And that its actually something else it does look like a face .it could actually be a statue and not just land shaped in to something but the thing is of it was really a statue or remaines of something or someone | Counterclaim | Adequate |
57a5b32da0eb | 71FD8098572A | But,then why wouldn't it looks fuler or have actuale face there would be bones. And if there was a statues then why is it only it's head you would a lest find the other parts of the statue but we haven't and that's because it only a land form shaped into something almost everyone beleives to be actuale life. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
16623c7366c6 | 71FD8098572A | that object that was found on mars is only land built up that looks some what like a face and not a statue or remains of a living person or creature. but something that was a different landform a long time ago before it became what is know as the face on mars. | Position | Adequate |
ea09a6d7bb2c | 72705C852528 | I think that the Face is just a oddly shaped rock | Position | Adequate |
4f6b8aebe4dc | 72705C852528 | it probably just got there from sandy winds and erotion taking place on a mesa and that is what made it to be like that from, | Claim | Adequate |
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