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56d69ea0366d | 806100760821 | Paris bans driving to clean the air of the global city because of pollution. Due to the ban of driving people who are caught driving will be fined 22-euro which is $31 in america. France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Its hard to believe that diesels make up 67% of France, compared to 53.3% of average diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe. The smog cleared enough that French part rescind to ban odd numbered plates on Tuesday. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7f5bae7b7d29 | 806100760821 | Today Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. This thing has left people like researchers woundering a fundamental question " Has America pass peak driving?" As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was neraly 9% below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. | Evidence | Ineffective |
95d68fd14b6e | 806100760821 | Its carzy how some countries have no cars allowed policy. Some countries baned cars, dont allow them on the streets. People would go carzy if they didnt have their cars and had to walk everywhere they want to go | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0a8a1026320b | 807DA420BA94 | Isn't it strange that cars are one of the most used transporting verhicles around? Well, of course besides busses, trains, airplanes, and all that. Almost everyone has a car, or adleast knows someone who does. | Lead | Adequate |
738fbbc5a19c | 807DA420BA94 | Unfortunatley, in German Suburbs life goes on without cars. The Vauban's streets are completely "car-free" so the article says. They say car owner ship is allowed but there are only two places to park, large garages but that would take up to $40,000. Also, along with a home. 70% of people in the Vaubans family believe that life is better with out cars, of course they do not own cars. 57% sold a car to move here. In 2006 there was a growing trend in Europe, The United States, and else where to seperate suburban life from auto use. They call this "Smart Planning" Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in car-intensive areas in the United States.
Vauban. Home to 5,500 people within a rectaugular square mile, may be the most experimented place with low-car suburban life. Levittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs spread-out homes and private places (such as garages, homes, etc) They were the dream towns of 1950s and still and exert a stong appeal. But some new suburbs look like the Vaubans. Not only in developed countries but also in the developing world. The United States, the Enviornmental Protection Agency is promoting "car reduced" communties. Meaning the lack of usage with cars. In previous bills, 80 percent or appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent go towards other transport. On Monday, motorists were ordered to leave there cars ar home or suffer a fine of $31. Amost 4,000 drivers were fined according to reuters. 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. Down 60 percent Congestion in the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog. Dieasel fuel was blamed. They make up 67 percent of vehicles in France compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in Western Europe.
The days without cars started in Bogota in the mid-1990s. President Obama's goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions unvieled last week. The United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily after. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to the countrys rate in January 1995. Americans can not afford new cars and the unemployed wern't going to work anyway. The next few years will be telling. | Evidence | Ineffective |
af2d83addb04 | 809AD723F37C | The "Face on Mars" was not created by aliens. NASA has literal proof of the Face. It may be on pictures, but the things they put in movies and magazines isn't real. They use that to get attention, but they didnt actually go into space and get the pictures. NASA took time to build those space technologies that are made to go into space and look for things like that. | Lead | Adequate |
54621de50891 | 809AD723F37C | Hollywood movies and fiction magazines aren't true about the "Face on Mars." | Claim | Ineffective |
33664e15f6ae | 809AD723F37C | They say the "Face on Mars" was made by natural land forming. That is true | Position | Adequate |
0db1334234d8 | 809AD723F37C | On Earth we have rocks formed naturally, or fossils were made using the imprint of dead animals and plants, but still formed naturally over time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ee9369b3cf91 | 809AD723F37C | Do not believe what movies and sometimes even the internet says. Who you should really believe is the people who actually saw the "Face on Mars" with the technology they have built to study it. You should listen to the team of scientist who know all about space and the planets. They study the galaxy inside and out and know way more about the "Face on Mars" and the planets then the movies and magazines do. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
259d8c591fb3 | 80FE1A70F85C | People go to school not only because they have to, but because a school's job is to advance students knowledge to set up kids and teens for their future goals. A teacher's job in the workplace is to give students knowledge on things they must know and help them with their next step in life. Their next step could be; college, applying for a job, help writing a resume, applying for a college, looking for a major, etc. After a long 9 months of school, some schools require students to complete a summer project to assure learning over the break. | Lead | Effective |
48c5208c89d2 | 80FE1A70F85C | If students are required to complete a summer project, it must be student-designed | Position | Adequate |
d28c83616171 | 80FE1A70F85C | it introduces themselves, | Claim | Effective |
fa5c96f10de6 | 80FE1A70F85C | helps students discover their interest, | Claim | Effective |
e34216592631 | 80FE1A70F85C | develops creativity. | Claim | Effective |
7fa02c2bdf9e | 80FE1A70F85C | Summer projects should be student-designed to introduce themselves to their teachers the following school year | Claim | Effective |
7ef989a9d027 | 80FE1A70F85C | Martin Luther King Jr. created a " I had a dream..."
speech that explained his struggle with racism and segregation. M.L.K. Jr. wrote and executed the speech in front of a live audience on his own, later making him the leader of the civil rights movement. The speech gave him a name worldwide, everyone knew "Martin Luther King Jr."
During the holocaust time period, a young Jew, Ann Frank kept a diary for people of the future so they knew what happened to all the Jews who were killed by the Germans. Her diary is now a famous book and in the Holocaust Museum in D.C. Ann Frank's diary was written herself, before that she was just one of many Jews, but because of her words, everyone know's who she is. A student-designed project would set up a teacher idea for how much their students know and help them to learn about their students. | Evidence | Adequate |
de56bc247355 | 80FE1A70F85C | Students developing a project on their own develops creativity | Claim | Effective |
e3468d7fe21b | 80FE1A70F85C | Albert Einstein is known as one of the smartest people in the world. He created a robot, Frankenstein. Einstein blocked out others, used his own knowledge, got creative, and made history on his own. Helen Keller was born with the default of not being able to hear or to see. This was a tragedy, making it hard for Keller to walk and successfully know where she was going. Growing up with this issue she became extremely smart and used her problem, got creative, and began helping others by tutoring people who are deaf and blind. If students created their own projects it would give them an opportunity to come up with something incredible using what they, causing them to be creative, and generate ideas | Evidence | Ineffective |
50b77014ba61 | 80FE1A70F85C | Students are in school receiving teacher-designed projects all year. On a students summer break, they should at least be able to create a project that interest them. Many young kids, between 3-7, try many different sports like; soccer, basketball, dance, gymnastics, baseball, cheer leading, flag football, etc. parents enroll their kids in different things so they can discover their interest young and stick to what does interest them to improve. Many high schools have electives to chose from as an extra class for students to find their interest. If teachers picked the elective classes for the students there is a good chance the student would not enjoy the class, destroying the point of an elective. By letting students branch out and selecting things that they enjoy could create an amazing project. | Evidence | Effective |
c82f6a01cf64 | 80FE1A70F85C | Students wait all year for their three month summer break. Most schools dont require a summer project, however, some schools do. Over break there should be no project but if required give students the opportunity to design their own. This could not only benefit the students, but the teachers as well. A student-designed project would introduce students to their teachers, giving the teachers an idea of what the student does and does not know. It would cause students to brainstorm and come up with creative projects and help student's to find what interest them. A student-designed summer project would be effective for students as well as teachers. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
128116685be9 | 8105CDA99A3C | Nobody know how the face got on mars because we never been their. This face could of been their from the jump and ya'll said it was a human face i never seen a face of a human shaped like that a day in my life. You see how the earth changed dont you think ohther plantes form in other shapes like i said people we have no evidence that an alien shaped this face on mars. How we know NASA didnt do this? they can do every thing eles like having a little car drive around on mars and see whats all their and bring littel rocks back from mras. People we got to understand that they is just trying to get our MONEY out of us why you think strang things come out of no were and then they put it on the web. Thats why they make us think stuff is out their like this how you know they didnt just make something that can carve this face on mars an now they trying to say it was aliens that did this. You got to think outside the box people dont let these people trick you for your money because the more attention you give them the more money you give them so please people open your eyes. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e0bb6cc275de | 811B878CE2C1 | They should do the program because in the program you will learn how to be a cowboy | Position | Adequate |
385b614f56d1 | 811B878CE2C1 | Also you will learn how to travel the seas and survive in cold wheather | Claim | Adequate |
7d2743b948d5 | 811B878CE2C1 | being in the program could be fun because you will learn how to be a cowboy | Claim | Adequate |
f9b7195c6185 | 811B878CE2C1 | Luke wants to be a segoing cowboy because he likes to travel the seas and he also likes to be a cowboy. Another reason is because he wants to have fun as a cowboy and he really wants to go travel the seas. He wants to have fun because he never has fun at his house so that is why he wants to have some fun. His house is probably boring so that is also why he wants to go outside and have some fun at the program because he wants to get out of his house and have fun. He wants to go outside and do the program so he can be a cowboy and have fun. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e41301fce765 | 811B878CE2C1 | To train to be a cowboy you have go through obstacles and overcome your fears so you can travel the seas. | Claim | Adequate |
57fbdb96a4bf | 811B878CE2C1 | You also want to be able to ride the waves so you be brave and save people from your enemies | Evidence | Adequate |
61ac695a18b5 | 811B878CE2C1 | You also defenitely need to be strong so you can overcome your fears and fight bad guys | Claim | Adequate |
65464201ebee | 811B878CE2C1 | so you can take them down so that is why you need to be strong. | Evidence | Adequate |
218300a3c735 | 811B878CE2C1 | You also need to be brave so if you get put in a bad situation | Claim | Adequate |
9f5a1b341103 | 811B878CE2C1 | you will know how to get out of the bad situation so you won't get hurt while you are in the bad situation so that is why need to learn how to get out of a bad situation. | Evidence | Adequate |
bffd6a7d90e2 | 811B878CE2C1 | You also need to learn how to stay calm in a bad situation | Claim | Adequate |
ca3d4630d274 | 811B878CE2C1 | if you do not stay calm then you will get hurt so that is why you need to learn how to stay calm in a bad situation. | Evidence | Adequate |
b7959ada8c04 | 811B878CE2C1 | You need to watch out for the terrible situations in the terrible situations then you will get hurt | Claim | Effective |
055c60ad0bf5 | 811B878CE2C1 | . In the bad situations you usually will not get hurt or injured. So if you are a cowboy you need to watch out for the bad situations and the terrible situations because you will get hurt. So that is why you have to watch out for the bad situations and the terrible situations. | Evidence | Adequate |
8bfb9bf246e8 | 811B878CE2C1 | you have to at least tryout for the seagoing cowboys program because you never know what could happen at the program. You could have fun or you could get hurt or injured. So you have to watch out for that so you do not get hurt or injured. If you want to be a cowboy you have guns to protect yourself and when enemies try to shoot you then you can shoot them instead. So you might not get hurt if you carry guns on you for protection. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6df20a227c5f | 81587E82D64B | i disgress using value of technology to read students emotional expresstion ,in the modern the technology its very prosperity,the social devemplmant well, we can invent something using we life to be the convenience, its also confine the someing. like the article. | Lead | Ineffective |
2ff73f2173a4 | 81587E82D64B | and i think the facial actial action coding system maybe good maybe bad.
| Position | Ineffective |
78b5e6b1d1b0 | 81587E82D64B | from the "makig mona lisa smile" we can read to 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry, that it is we want,i think it is very precise,maybe we can find than more expressions but l think taht not we want ,the famous drawed it syomby the history, i think the author drawing this he never this can have so many emotion, further say the emotional expression to value for person the emotional it is not very good , we dont prohibition this technology just for the student its is not very.
i read to the paragraph 6, i read to the dr. huang say a" classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored"that good we can using the technology to the good way ,is not demolition the classic,we can using to home pc to convenience,like we can down some simple insttructions that"encode"different emotions,fact its a good idea,they difference between a genuine smile and a forced one,lift the corners of your mouth.
for the 9 say "we unconsciously imitate another person facil expressions. i greass it. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ec09b028304c | 81587E82D64B | so i this system have benfitie and bay way just lets we hao to use it | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
5c962de3511f | 81A4938D3986 | Making mona lisa smile agian was the main topic detail in the story. For one reason it would have to be when they painted a picture of her for acomplishing the process of the model of a great model she smiled for that picture. So that is why that gave her own picture of herself and the computer model picture is a little bit better than the orignal one. The computer model has better details in the picture and it also tightens her lips for the picture. More reason is that they express the emotion of her picture in paragraph 2. In paragraph 7 the experts for the picture tell Mona Lisa how to pose for the picture in the first sentence. Paragraph 8 explains Mona being truthful and smiling in the last sentence. Inside Paragraph 4 it is telling about how the expression of the real face is inside the art of Mona Lisa. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c3e95fdb2ea7 | 81BC51842FBB | This face has been the talk of NASA and the talk of headlines for quite sometime. The topic has been argued many times and there are many different opinions on whether or not its a face or a natural landform. What do you think?
| Lead | Adequate |
eb73846571a0 | 81BC51842FBB | The discussions of this being a face are all over the place, poeple believe that ailens have caused this "face" on Mars surface. There are three different pictures, one from 1976, one from 1998, and one from 2001. In the first pictuere you see a outline of a face and a mouth, but back in the 70's the quality of technology wasn't very advanced. In the first photo, due to poor quality, it is just a land mass that has trhe outline of a face | Evidence | Adequate |
28c6e741badb | 81BC51842FBB | There is no form of life on Mars, otherwise, NASA would have detected in years ago. | Claim | Effective |
f54b44714185 | 81BC51842FBB | In the article it says that the camera that was used to capture the 1976 photo only had 43 meters per pixel, in other words meaning that there's almost no way in telling what the first picture was or resembled. | Evidence | Adequate |
b5dadfa067f6 | 81BC51842FBB | In 1998 and 2001, you can see the picture more clearly due to the advancement in technology you clean clearly see that there is no outline or resembalance of a face. | Evidence | Adequate |
14eacb142f7a | 81BC51842FBB | The Face is nothing but a landmass, the scientific name: A mesa. | Claim | Effective |
f71d168dad7f | 81BC51842FBB | In the '98 photo the picture is foggy and unclear because it was winter on Mars and they had to take a photo through a cloud. When the photographs began to be released online there was many observations but many realized it was infacr not a face. | Evidence | Adequate |
021a650e3a75 | 81BC51842FBB | After all the questions blew over, Directors began putting images and shots into movies which again started raising talk. In movies or films there are special effects people that are able to enchance photos and clips. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7b03e0a08b60 | 81BC51842FBB | So most of the photographs and clips are not actually NASA recorded and theres a good chance most of them had been edited to make more money on a film or movie because people want to know more about myterious things like this.
| Claim | Adequate |
fb40784931b2 | 81BC51842FBB | Concluding with what i said at the beginning, the pictures we see are nothing more than a mesa. | Position | Adequate |
e8f0890042f3 | 81BC51842FBB | Science it to greatly advanced now and if there was any form of life on any other planets NASA would atleast have an idea of it. I don't believe this is an alien artifact, because Mars cannot support life. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cf0f3d6f03b7 | 81EE0A1746B9 | I agree with the article | Position | Ineffective |
e9eb46302bda | 81EE0A1746B9 | according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions' which mean they can tell how a picture is feeling" | Claim | Adequate |
80ccdc9a6ae0 | 81EE0A1746B9 | I know, its weired lmao, but its also true | Evidence | Ineffective |
c339f89eb764 | 81EE0A1746B9 | "The classroom computer could recognize when a student is being confused or bored" | Claim | Adequate |
e0801b3dce18 | 81EE0A1746B9 | the class got a new update to tell how people are feeling | Evidence | Ineffective |
db314500d5d7 | 81EE0A1746B9 | I thiink everybody and everyschool should get something like this it's a really cool thing,
| Evidence | Ineffective |
8860cb1a0b03 | 81EE0A1746B9 | You would really know how people really feel if we got something like this | Claim | Adequate |
fe80adfd10a0 | 81EE0A1746B9 | Good way to boost up techology as well, I'll say." Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry, no thats not your science teacher, grading your latst lab, it is the Mona Lisa " so you're saying a computer fugured that out? | Evidence | Ineffective |
a4c6d2c34de0 | 81EE0A1746B9 | if a compute can do all that then | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
21b6d5934ee8 | 81F537995AC6 | In this essay I will be talking about if people should be able to be on their cellular device while they drive or should they not be able to? | Lead | Adequate |
6e9fbc169739 | 81F537995AC6 | In my opinion I don't think we should be able to | Position | Adequate |
4e9da1b89956 | 81F537995AC6 | because there are many dumb drivers without phones in their hands and the good drivers turn worse with one in their hands. | Claim | Adequate |
23a914b5f71d | 81F537995AC6 | More car crashes will happen and more deaths will come with it. I just don't think putting another distraction in drivers hands would be the best option for the road. | Evidence | Adequate |
a382ce5b253b | 81F537995AC6 | To start off this essay I believe having any type of electronic device while you are operating a vehicle is a distraction and can cause wrecks and deaths. | Claim | Ineffective |
0a95d2d68a3d | 81F537995AC6 | No type of electronic device should be in the drivers hand only type that should be allowed is the phone holders that are legal that clip onto your A/C vents but shouldn't be texting on it only phone calls and the driver should always have both hands on the steering wheel as you drive. | Evidence | Adequate |
501f6b5a69ff | 81F537995AC6 | To conclude my essay having a phone while driving is not necessary in any way. Just wait till you park somewhere or you get home to check it, because your life is more important than a text message. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cab684de6c2e | 8212DA6D0656 | Did you know on Mars there is a face? Some people think it was created by aliens. Other people think it is just a natural landform on Mars. The face on Mars was first discovered in 1976.
When they first saw it it looked like a "shadowy likeness of a human face". It was an enormous head nearly two miles away from end to end. When they first discovered it they saw it staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia | Lead | Adequate |
9ab75903cb76 | 8212DA6D0656 | I am going to be telling you why this is just a natural landform on Mars.
| Position | Adequate |
ade27ecea53a | 8212DA6D0656 |
When scientist first saw it in 1976, they thought it was just another Martian mesa which is common around Cydonia | Claim | Adequate |
72f2212d249a | 8212DA6D0656 | They knew is was some type of landform. A few days later, NASA unvieled the image for all to see. The caption was "huge rock formation which resembles a human head". The only reason they said it was aliens, was to get people's attention. That is exaclty what it did.
| Evidence | Adequate |
4f5d03fd39cd | 8212DA6D0656 | Eventually on April 5,1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over to Cydonia for the first time to check it out. | Claim | Adequate |
1b7e933bff6d | 8212DA6D0656 | While they were there Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture that was ten times sharper than the original photos. When the image first apperared on a JPL web site it revealed it was just a natural landform and there was no alien monument after all | Evidence | Adequate |
0ca1c3de7948 | 8212DA6D0656 | Not everyone was convinced it was just a landform. Many people still thought it had something to do with aliens | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6f121502ade4 | 8212DA6D0656 | But, how could aliens have done it? No one knows. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
c833ab38ab27 | 8212DA6D0656 | On April 8,2001 Mars Global Surveyor drew a close enough second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view,"Garvin stated. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. "As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size", Garvin added. "So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!" he added. | Evidence | Adequate |
e891572cbd64 | 8212DA6D0656 | They could tell there was nothing just the land its self. It could not have been aliens. | Claim | Adequate |
35ea4c6c67bb | 8212DA6D0656 | What the pictures they actually took show is a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common in the American West. "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho", Garvin says. Garvin ended his statement with,"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." | Evidence | Adequate |
c43290606102 | 8212DA6D0656 | Coming to a conclusion, the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Even Garvin, the Mars Global Surveyor said it himself,"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivlent of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American West". The Face on Mars is really, just an natural landform. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1118e91e8777 | 821972DE4E6C | Science could be where we can possibly find advances and great inventions for the future | Lead | Ineffective |
055dc69fb8c5 | 821972DE4E6C | Now in days a machines can tell you how exactly you feel!. We are humans, but technology could change how we think, how we act and high chances how we live | Position | Ineffective |
d553a8ce4284 | 821972DE4E6C | First of all, technology have changed how humans can be in the future like computers. | Claim | Adequate |
265169a3a1e7 | 821972DE4E6C | But technolgy can have a negative impact too. Proffesor Thomas Huan, invented A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can let humans know how they feel. They could even read your facial actiond
"There are more experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate." do you think science has gone too far? | Evidence | Adequate |
ebd3131e042b | 821972DE4E6C | Second, somethimes you can harshly tell when a friend its mad or happy. | Claim | Adequate |
14cc22281f20 | 821972DE4E6C | How would you feel knowing that a computer knows every single emotion that you are feeling at the moment and the percentage for example 5% angry, 78% happy, 2% disgusted etc. The creator of this technology started with the basic emotions which are happiness,surprie, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It would be creepy when you "Imagine a computer taht knows if your happy or sad."
| Evidence | Adequate |
b43abbea65b6 | 821972DE4E6C | Third, humans make calculations and guess the emotions of others | Claim | Adequate |
f13ecfb96d1e | 821972DE4E6C | For instance, you can infer how a friend feels or just by looking at their face but you can't tell an accurate number of emotions like the computers."A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or boring." with the big advances of technology we might not act like humans in the future.
| Evidence | Adequate |
bc19104e9430 | 821972DE4E6C | In conclusion, Science play an importent roll in technology and technology have created machines that can tell your emotions. We are humans and by the advance of technology, future then might change the way we act, think and possibly live our lives. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5c117f335d71 | 821EFD80EE4D | People from the NASA think that aliens built the face on Mars, but actually it is a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
15c8a093e7df | 821EFD80EE4D | Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it llook like an Egyptian Pharaoh. | Claim | Adequate |
398eef829bbb | 821EFD80EE4D | A few days later NASA unveiled tthe image for all to see. The caption noted a "huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.
| Evidence | Adequate |
4327af53275a | 821EFD80EE4D | " The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The "Face on Mars" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store chechout lines for 25 years! But not everyone was satisfied.
The Face on Mars is located as 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. Mission controllers prepared to look again. "It's not easy to target Cydonia," says Garvin. "In fac, it's hard work.
" Mars Global Surveyor is mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. "We just don't pass over the Face very often," he noted.
What the picture actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common aroud the America West. "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River PLain of Idaho," says Garvin.
"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same heigh as the Face on Mars." | Evidence | Ineffective |
bfebf7cd66dd | 82223F37DDCC | In this passage "Making Mona Lisa Smile", the author made very detailed and valid points about the use of technology detecting what our expressions say about our moods, but, technology reading students facial expressions is over the top. I belive that this new technology would force students to always want to force a smile so that the computer doesn't fully recognize their real from their fake. | Lead | Adequate |
c99188277856 | 82223F37DDCC | I think that this new technology is bad for anyone to even have. | Position | Adequate |
00b105396821 | 82223F37DDCC | First, I would like to say that this is a really good topic the author brings forth to the table, | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
11cea288d2cc | 82223F37DDCC | but who would want to feel like their being watched? | Rebuttal | Adequate |
e56ad2fb135f | 82223F37DDCC | "For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different." This information is truly invalid. Smiling at an ad does not make it appear the next time you get on a different website, and frowning at an ad doesn't change it either. It's the way the ads are set up that it makes them leave or come back. Student's shouldn't have to feel like they have to fake their emotions just so that the computer doesn't recognize how they feel in reality. I do not believe in this "new technology" that seems to be changing the way we see ourselves. I would not want kids to feel like they are being watched or even judged on by what they look like through a computer screen. | Evidence | Adequate |
301b4aaa622c | 82223F37DDCC | Lastly, I would like to say that this point of view that the author is taking is a very good start, | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
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