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a0513e3aa82e | 82223F37DDCC | but thinking about the author feels versus the way every one else would feel puts this topic on hold. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
54abbb1bd9b3 | 82223F37DDCC | Not every one wants their child to be watched through a computer screen that's looking at their faces to show how they feel. If some one is happy on the inside but frowing on the outside then how would the computer sense that? Sometimes we hide our emotions on the indside and show neutral expressions to everyone else outside of our hearts and mind. Computers can only detect what they see and not what is actually going on. | Evidence | Adequate |
3b60f52a8e6b | 82223F37DDCC | That is why I believe that the value of using technology to read students' emotional expressions should be forgotten. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2b1be576a726 | 82514A286403 | The face is a landform because the planet must of formed it a long time ago. | Position | Adequate |
29b24e5d6b7f | 82514A286403 | Or some where there was life on that planet and they died right there where the surface rose up andnformed its face | Claim | Ineffective |
039104c0f619 | 82514A286403 | Most people think it was created by aliens but it was clarified as a natural landform.
| Claim | Adequate |
70be161858ed | 82514A286403 | We took picture ten times more sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site,revealing a natural landform.
| Evidence | Adequate |
a08955d08d6c | 82514A286403 | When they unveiled the image for all to see the caption noted a huge rock formation thee author thought it was a good way to attract attention to mars it certainly did. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a3b7ae6c5b00 | 82514A286403 | But before they could see the face they had to go thorght wispy clouds and they had to wait for winter to be over. But after all that on a cloudless summer day they finally got to see the face. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1db4f53659f0 | 827472D8F8A9 | There are always peple saying that aliens are alive and maybe that there is going to be an alien invasion. In 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) found an image of a peron or as MGS says a "a Viking photo." | Lead | Adequate |
7e6c88c102fa | 827472D8F8A9 | I believe the image of the Viking is just a landform and it wasn't created by aliens. I will explain to you why i think it's a landform. | Position | Effective |
9c78e6e39be8 | 827472D8F8A9 | I believe the image is a just a landform because scientists haven't discovered life yet on mars even though they have found water on Mars. | Claim | Effective |
49fb395104ea | 827472D8F8A9 | "Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, | Claim | Adequate |
78721c5167b6 | 827472D8F8A9 | common enough around Cydnia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah." I agree with this statement because if the Martian mesa was made again, that means that they will be around for a long time and it will never disappear. | Evidence | Adequate |
bf977b1ceed5 | 827472D8F8A9 | The author also states that people think the image or the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
74c389eb92db | 827472D8F8A9 | By the looks of the images, I could see that every year they have taken it, I can see that it's disappearing. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
5c068ff1bc18 | 827472D8F8A9 | In the introduction, it says, "New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is is: A mesa. | Evidence | Adequate |
a09f7f1b1860 | 827472D8F8A9 | If people want evidence of aliens or other creatures, they will have to do research on their spare time because scientists have a job to do and they will only do what they are ordered to do | Evidence | Ineffective |
1549d0951b19 | 827472D8F8A9 | Just to be clear, when they took the photos of the Face on 1976,1998, and 2001, the technology wasn't as advanced as it is today but, if we take a photo of it today, I believe there will probably be another one of the landfoms | Claim | Adequate |
857b85c332e8 | 827472D8F8A9 | or probably we might see the Face but just slowly disappearing. These were some of my reasons to argue with to support my belief of the Face being a natural landform.
| Evidence | Adequate |
4fea16dff3a4 | 827472D8F8A9 | In conclusion, the image of the Face was just a myth and I will never say it was created by aliens. Aliens aren't even real, that hasn't benn confirmed or said. Not one scientist has said that they have seen a living creature on any planet walking or doing anything. These were just rumors and it can be said as a myth if people want. Based on these reasons, I believe the Face is just a natural landform on Mars. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
01ebc495b451 | 82B175592A9D | I think the new Facial Action Coding could be true, because nowadays we have more technology. The 3-D computer model of the face could actually see our face expressions. Maybe it wont actually know what we feel inside like our mood. The Facial Action Coding update can just tell us if we have a annoyed,sad,mad etc face. Sometimes, people seem sad or mad but that's just their thinking or worried face. | Lead | Adequate |
36b87824ac17 | 82B175592A9D | If the technology of the Facial Action Coding System was that powerful ir smart to read students emotions, it would be good and cool. | Position | Adequate |
45f156cd1988 | 82B175592A9D | Teachers would actually know why there student is quiet or why they're not doing anything in class | Claim | Adequate |
188ef63323df | 82B175592A9D | My evidence is that " by weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci" masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotions). if you're really close with a friend or family member you'll know if their upset or not. | Evidence | Adequate |
a8029a0e4d37 | 82B175592A9D | You see them everyday you already know how they are | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6760c4c65448 | 82B175592A9D | The Facial Action Coding System would just study your face and tell you how you are. Whoever came up with that software and the emotional expressions came out wrong. Then, people wouldn't trust it anymore. When you smile and your cheek bones raise then that a real smile and a showing all your teeth. | Evidence | Adequate |
cdd3d9da8c64 | 82B175592A9D | Sometimes, when someone is really upset or don't want to be rude they can fake a smile that looks so realist. The software update also could follow is the student is bored or not knowing what to do. We honestly need that in all school. Some kids are always disrespectful or always getting in trouble, never doing work | Evidence | Adequate |
b34269190b22 | 82B175592A9D | The Facial Action Coding System would be so much help for everyone. | Claim | Adequate |
48ceafab0b85 | 82B175592A9D | The software update knew about the painting Monsa Lisa face expressions. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4994df65a29f | 82B39D03262F | Venus will be a great planet to live on. Imagine if you could have a house on earth and one on Venus. | Position | Ineffective |
5eaa562838ec | 82B39D03262F | There are alot of bad things about Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
44b6bd725239 | 82B39D03262F | Also there is alot of good things about it to. | Claim | Adequate |
2204f2a908df | 82B39D03262F | Some of those not so good facts from the passage will be no space craft survies the landing on venus for more than a few hours. It has a thickness atmosphere of almost a 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Verus. | Evidence | Adequate |
018b3c5b78c2 | 82B39D03262F | Some more not so good facts about venus will be some of the clouds have highly corrosire sulfurie acid. Also on that planet surface temp is over 800 degrees ferhight. Then the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experrence on our own planet. This may scare you away but dont let it do that. People is coming out with new things everday. It just takes time. | Evidence | Adequate |
9a7c0f420389 | 82B39D03262F | Venus was probably coverd with large oceans and could have supported varrious forms of life just like earth. Venus still has some features that are similer to earth. Temperatures would still be very warm at 170 degrees fahrenneit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Radiation would not exceed Earth levels but survivable for humans. Old techtology called mechanical computers were first envisoned in the 1800 and played in 1940s during world war 2. It make calculations by using gears and levers and dont require electronic at all. Which on venus it will be some time intell electronic will be there | Evidence | Ineffective |
6301b8234003 | 82B39D03262F | All in all, give it some time do some research study and some day we will be on venus. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f130909cb219 | 82BB2259D709 | Do you wanna take care of horses,young cows,and mules? Well if you do,Join the Seagoing Cowboys in taking our adventure ot help people anad places bombed in World War ll.
| Position | Effective |
aed4f4f93fd2 | 82BB2259D709 | When Luke and Don were traveling over seas in the Seagoing Cowboys,They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, Headed for Greece. The cargo was 335 horses and enough oats to feed all the horses.
Before arrivingt in Greece,Luke turned 18, Which back then meant that Luke could be drafted for military service.
A couple years later he was discharged,Luke had made nine trips,The most of any Seagoing Cowboy ever. The cattle boat trips were an unbelieveable experience for Luke being a small town boy. Before helping anyone he had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. But Luke also got to see the Acropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice,Itlay.
Luke also toured at the evacuated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern United States and a month to China.
Caring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to eat and give the animals water three times a day. Bales of hay and oats had to be pulled from the lower ship. The stalls had to be cleaned. | Evidence | Ineffective |
dde199748487 | 82BC11EA5744 | According to the article venus is dangerous, But scientist dont care. they are fascinated by Venus because it may once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Scientist has been sending spacecrafts on Venus but no spacecraft has survived the landing | Lead | Adequate |
b24239a298eb | 82BC11EA5744 | Thats one of the many reasons why Venus is dangerous to mankind | Position | Adequate |
5f5793a55efa | 82BC11EA5744 | The clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere." doesn't that sound cool? Yea it surely does but that is dangerous to mankind, Who would want to breath in acid? Venus has harmful sections that Astronomers are going to try and over come, they are going to expand their limits and try to learn more about whats in the atmosphere. According to the passage scientist has been testing a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surfce. It have lasted for 3 weeks in such a condition according to the passage. There has been many more projects | Evidence | Adequate |
ec8b6830a5bc | 82BC11EA5744 | Astronomers are not going to give up. there going to try and fight/fix the differences and let nothing get in there way.
| Claim | Ineffective |
31b5d3fa8d05 | 82BC11EA5744 | Astronomers curiosty is whats going to help us learn about things and planets besides earth. Woudn't you want to learn more about our world even though theres going to be a little difficutly during the way? Maybe one day scientist can overcome these small problems and learn more about the Atmosphere. I think Astronomers are going to take on that challenge. Remember anythings possible if you put your mind to it, and thats what Astronomers are doing. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a40aadd41670 | 82F91FFC49DE | Drivers shouldn't be able to use devices while driving. | Position | Adequate |
1801e0799c01 | 82F91FFC49DE | It causes them to lose concentration. | Claim | Adequate |
3bf8c82417a3 | 82F91FFC49DE | If they lose concentration they could end up running a red light, not stopping at a stop sign, or even a wreck. They could also run off the run or into something. | Evidence | Adequate |
fdcd60129b4b | 82F91FFC49DE | If they were to use a phone it's if they are at a complete start and not driving. If they get a call just put it on speaker or tell them to hold while you driving. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3d2a0160dcac | 82F91FFC49DE | They should text while driving either its more dangerous than being on the phone. | Claim | Adequate |
0f24b8498744 | 82F91FFC49DE | If they text while driving their eyes will be completely off the road and they won't know who's in front of them. Texting and driving is what most people get arrested for. People should get all their texting and calls out the way before driving in traffic. Texting and driving can cause an accident quicker than being on the phone. | Evidence | Adequate |
6e5465383aa4 | 839FDA058989 | Have you ever seen a landmark that looks like something else? In 1976 a Mars roover named Viking 1 spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. This just hapened to be huge rocks together looking like a face. NASA named this the "Face on Mars." The "Face on Mars" has become a pop icon. It has appeared in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! | Lead | Adequate |
62c68ccbc883 | 839FDA058989 | The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face, | Claim | Adequate |
4d7edb7c894c | 839FDA058989 | its on Mars which could be an alien | Claim | Ineffective |
efb73db320d0 | 839FDA058989 | many roovers have seen the Face when they go to Mars. | Claim | Adequate |
646c3d031e62 | 839FDA058989 | The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face. | Claim | Adequate |
05ae1c66000f | 839FDA058989 | How can we not know that it is not an alien. NASA people can't go up to Mars to look at it face-to-face. Roovers can only take pictures of it. Mars is too far away that NASA can't send people up there to make sure it is an alien. There isn't any oxygen up there so people could breathe. | Evidence | Adequate |
d4657431fa56 | 839FDA058989 | The Face is on Mars, which could be an alien. | Claim | Ineffective |
e4559e2d844a | 839FDA058989 | People have always thought that there were aliens on Mars. This time there actually could be one on Mars. Life on Mars could be a real thing. Mars is a eird place because it is red, unlike Earth which is mostly blue and green. | Evidence | Ineffective |
416df8ad3c59 | 839FDA058989 | The Face is a natural landform because NASA has proven that there can't be any life form on Mars | Claim | Adequate |
fd23773fa844 | 839FDA058989 | There is nothing that they would be able to eat to stay alive. The planet is red and there isn't any water or anything to drink for them to survive. There is no possible way for any life form to survive on Mars.
| Evidence | Adequate |
1e12879d7786 | 839FDA058989 | There is a natural landform on Mars that looks like a face because huge rocks were fromed together looking like a face | Claim | Adequate |
a3fbf275af76 | 839FDA058989 | This is all nature, there is no way that aliens could live on this planet. Natural landforms all around the universe. Mountains and hills are all over Earth. Nature takes control of everything that is alive. The Face is a natural landform and not some kind of alien.
| Evidence | Adequate |
35db27a1e21d | 839FDA058989 | The"Face on Mars" is a natural landform because aliens can't live on a planet without anything to survive, natural ladforms are all over the universe, and the Face is just huge rocks formed together looking like a face. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
59d43c4afe31 | 839FDA058989 | I strongly believe that this is not an alien, and that this is a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
46ccf60017dd | 83FB519F21F2 | Luke bomberger was just a normal high school graduate, Until his friend Don Reist asked him to go with him to Europe on a cattle boat. He was just given the opportunity of a lifetime. Luke and his friend Don had reasons to sign up for being a " Seagoing cowboy". World war II had now ended and many countries were left destroyed, to help the countries recover from war they will need things such as food, animals, and many other things. To help the people in those countries 44 nations united to form a group called UNRRA ( the united nations relief and rehabilitation administration). The " Seagoing Cowboys" were hired to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. In August 1945, they got orders to report to New Orleans. Luke and his friend arrived on August 14th, the same day the Pacific war ended. There was 335 horses to take care of. Before arriving in Greece Luke turned 18, which means that he is now eligable to be drafted for the military service. In 1947 Luke had made nine trips, more than any seagoing cowboy. Luke ended up touring many places around the world. Luke was doing his job chcking on the animals, but this time was different it was raining, Luke accidentally slid down a ladder and almost fell into the deep dark ocean but a piece of metal stopped him fromm falling. Luke was lucky to be alive but he still was injured with some cracked ribs. Although it wasn't always fun, Luke found things to do like baseball, volleyball, tennis, and many more things | Evidence | Ineffective |
49e39d85c6af | 83FB519F21F2 | Luke had an amazing adventure being a Seagoing Cowboy, he discovered the world and was given a once in a lifetime opportunity. | Position | Ineffective |
2afaf467c1d2 | 84305C417C4B | Extracurricular activities should be mandatory because kids could look forward to activities after school instead of going home and sitting around for hours. | Position | Effective |
3f3996c1cd0a | 84305C417C4B | It would help kids stay out of trouble, | Claim | Effective |
f429111abbbb | 84305C417C4B | keep students active, | Claim | Effective |
f113c667b980 | 84305C417C4B | help students build a social life. | Claim | Effective |
689ebb17f418 | 84305C417C4B | Most students parents have and office job. The average work time is from 9am to 5pm, and school gets out at around 2pm- 4pm, so most kids are left unsupervised for around 2-6 hours. Kids left alone can get into all sorts of trouble and can be persuaded to do things that they know they should not do. Kids can be convinced to do drugs, join gangs, and vandalize public property. Instead of doing these things they can be supervised at school doing something that is fun and enjoyable instead of being mischievous. The school environment would be much safer because students wouldnt be influenced be other people to do any bad things, so they would not be doing or selling drugs and they would not be in or associated with a gang. Therefore, students would not bring in bad things into our schools. | Evidence | Effective |
ca8515e28b51 | 84305C417C4B | Some kids go home and play sports outside or play a game with their siblings, but most kids go home and play video games for 5 hours till they have to eat dinner or go to bed. This is very unhealthy. An extracurricular activity would get a person who usually plays lots of video games to do something active. They could play sports after school and they would still have time for video games. Playing sports after school could convince them to play sports for fun, not because they have to do something after school and they could join a league and exercise more than just after school. This would help kids stay active and healthy. After school activities for all people is a good idea because it would help kids stay active and healthy. | Evidence | Effective |
943d65352c21 | 84305C417C4B | During the school day some kids do not socialize with others because they are tired, shy, or they are very focused on academics. After school, activities would really help kids gain a social life. After school activities are laid back and are made too do something active after school, not to secretly trick kids into too staying an extra hour after school. The activities after school are fun, they are meant to be. Kids after school who are shy can communicate with others because the activities give them ways to start of conversations and communicate with others. | Evidence | Effective |
7e8d3a422d8f | 84305C417C4B | Extracurricular activities should be mandatory. This would help kids stay out of trouble because it would keep them doing something healthy instead of something mischievous. It would students kids stay healthy because it would force them to do something active. and finally, it would help students because it would help students gain a social life because they could communicate with others. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c78bac663deb | 8439B0D3B7DC | techonology called the ficial Action coding System enavles computer to identify human emotions is really good thing. | Position | Adequate |
95113d399630 | 8439B0D3B7DC | we would like to know If they are lying about their emotional. | Claim | Adequate |
b771e38c2794 | 8439B0D3B7DC | Dr. Huang is really smart but I think he is right. | Claim | Ineffective |
a73304618b2b | 8439B0D3B7DC | First,computer to identify human emotions is really good thing because we would know If they are lying to us or no. | Claim | Adequate |
34fac375037c | 8439B0D3B7DC | Acoording the text " can we actually "calculate"emotions like math homework",I think they got the right point because our emotional is like calculate. They have to calculate are we really sad or happy. Another example from the text" The Mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do". I Hope our school should do like that so people we could help other people whenever we are sad. | Evidence | Ineffective |
79168ca72394 | 8439B0D3B7DC | Second,these day a lot of people they are lying to another people to much. | Claim | Ineffective |
7587db4c465a | 8439B0D3B7DC | Honestly, I used to cheat on my girlfriend too back in the day but the good part is that we don't know facial action yet. If we both know that time I bet she will say" let do this because I want If you are cheating on me". Still right now she don't know that I cheat on her but we are already broke tho. I saw on social media a lot Boyfriend and girlfriend did that. When they know they both got cheating,both of them feel wierd. People is really good at hide thing I hope we are did Facial Action so we could know how is lying or nah. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6dd172a5010f | 8439B0D3B7DC | Finally,I think Dr huang is really smart doing those kind of thing." | Claim | Ineffective |
e950f67dbedd | 8439B0D3B7DC | The software is the latest innovation from prof,Thomas Huang if the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University OF
lllinois."Some day I want be like him,He is my idol from now. Also If someone ask me who would I want to meet right now,I would say" I want to meet with Dr. Huang". | Evidence | Ineffective |
c39dfe6f6f93 | 8439B0D3B7DC | Conclusion,every year different technology is coming out,I can't Imagine what is going be like in 20 year later. What kind of technology would be going out. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
8835735387f1 | 84CA98DC9D16 | Ford, Volkswagen, Kia, and Chevy's... while these car brands may have been a massive part of the American culture, its significance in our lives may be declining. According to recent studies and stories from around the world, car transportation popularity is decreasing dramatically. | Lead | Adequate |
ca07279bcb02 | 84CA98DC9D16 | Some advantages of limiting car usage that the United States will benifit from include | Position | Adequate |
0d9bccee85fc | 84CA98DC9D16 | reducing greenhouse gases emitted making for a better environment, | Claim | Effective |
ffb27da5b29c | 84CA98DC9D16 | less usage of cars can lower stress and is safer.
| Claim | Effective |
3e77978662e0 | 84CA98DC9D16 | By limiting the amount that the citizens of the United States operate their vehicles, the condition of our environment's atmosphere will improve. As stated in Source 1, "and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States." This passage is referring to the amount of greenhouse gas emitted here in America because of passenger cars. By not using car and taking advantage of other methods of transportation such as buses, walking, and riding a bike that number can be reduced significantly. In the United States we are also learning from mistakes made by other countries and cities. "After days of near-record pollution," Source 2 says, "Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city." A lesson can be taken from Paris of how we do not want to end up in a situation like that. By limiting our driving currently we can avoid having to take major steps to clean and clear our environment. "It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants," a sociologist predicts in Source 4. | Evidence | Effective |
71d5a4f09890 | 84CA98DC9D16 | A decent amount of stress comes with owning and operating a motorized vehicle. You are constantly worrying about if you will be late, or if you have enough gas to make it from point A to point B. Children are another concern and trying to keep them safe around roads and driving by themselves. Limiting the use of cars can create a less stressful, and safer society. In Source 3 it explains that, "Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up." Lowering the use of cars can make life a little less busy because it is one thing less that you have to worry about throughout your day. Heidrun Walter said, in Source 1, "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way." | Evidence | Effective |
36866d95f8f5 | 84CA98DC9D16 | Although the use of cars may be convienent, the benifits of limiting the usage may be beginning to outweight the inconviences. Between reducing the greenhouse gas creating a cleaner environment as well as lessening stress and making the roads safer, the advantages of limiting car usage in the United States are major. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
faf3891ae858 | 84DA3A4E84CC | Summer is the time of the year every student looks forward to. Apart from socializing with friends, enjoying the fresh air, and participating in outdoor activities, students have the chance to assure their learning abilities through summer projects. | Lead | Effective |
fdd628562102 | 84DA3A4E84CC | Summer projects should be school-designed because it allows flexibility, | Claim | Effective |
8904d2de6e0e | 84DA3A4E84CC | it develops leadership skills | Claim | Effective |
a5f41d9e0f0b | 84DA3A4E84CC | it increases creativity. | Claim | Effective |
cd80203578d5 | 84DA3A4E84CC | Student-designed projects allows flexibility during summer break. | Claim | Effective |
3e8986e2a92e | 84DA3A4E84CC | Generic_City's lifeguard program was very successful during the summer due to lifeguard availability. Being a lifeguard is a common job students pursue during the summer. Not only does it allow students to gain profit at a young age, but it also requires a high level of maturity and responsibility. Because it requires specific training and dedication, students must have the time to complete every task that is given. Having a student-designed summer project allows students to set their own study time instead of following a specific schedule that could intervene with working hours.
In 2019, the Pied-Piper Theater Association successfully rehearsed their summer musical: West Side Story The Musical, due to the availability and hard work of all actors. In West Side Story, the combination of performing arts and music are combined as one to produce an extraordinary musical. Rehearsing a musical is no simple task: lines must be memorized, choreography and blocking must be pristine, and every actor must be present on opening show days. A student-designed project over the summer can help students complete their required work in an flexible manner while still completing personal activities. | Evidence | Adequate |
c4a7859e3d57 | 84DA3A4E84CC | Developing leadership skills for the future are offered through student-designed projects. | Claim | Effective |
4af1e9829c7d | 84DA3A4E84CC | Designing their own promotional plans, students from the Technology Student Association were able to pursue college business majors. The Technology Student Association allowed students to be completely in charge of their own work to get a sense of the leadership that is needed in many technology and business fields today. As a result, the ones who were consistent in their work and created their own designs were the most successful at the TSA regional competitions. Student-designed projects allows students to be in control and have the opportunity to manage work responsibly. Even though having a teacher-designed project can help in follow instructions and meeting deadlines, being ones own boss opens doors to many leadership opportunities to excel in the work field, and in ones personal life.
Panera Bread employees that have shown leadership development have moved to higher job positions. In the food industry, like most jobs, employees must start off with a lower position and must enhance their abilities in order to move up to a higher position. For example, in Panera Bread, most new employees start of working as a cashier, dining room attendant, or produce worker; these minor positions prepare the employee with basic skills and prepare them for future duties. Later, when more experience is gained, employees move up to trainer or manager assistant. Similarly, student-designed projects help students learn to be self-sufficient and lead one another to success. As a result, future generations are encouraged to do the same. | Evidence | Effective |
1bb341afb96f | 84DA3A4E84CC | Student-designed projects allow students to show their full potential through creativity. | Claim | Effective |
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