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14bed50bf54f | 86FD29FA8938 | Another reason I feel that it might work is because sensing peoples emotions is great. | Claim | Adequate |
c4e45f1c4ca9 | 86FD29FA8938 | Peoples emotions shows alot it can say so much about their personality or how they feel about life, it could even gives you signs about that person and could get people aware so they can put thst person in a safe place if they need to. There should also be bounderies because most people arn't gonna want a computer screen or phone screen watching them, their emotions or even listening to them. But to even fix that you could always have were you could turn the senseor on an off just so people could feel more surcure. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ca52d84bd666 | 86FD29FA8938 | Overall my thought about the Facial Action Coding System is great. You can take it so far and you can keep it how it is. Even if graphing shows that people don't like it I still think it is a good idea for me thinking saftey wise.
Thats just the people life and you can also take it very far with paintings. I think this idea is a million dollar hit and it should be tested out. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
375561f0c457 | 86FFB72A8AE3 | here are the great value of using technology.
there is sofeware that can recongize emotions better ways foe human and computer to commmunic. | Position | Adequate |
06f3e7dafae2 | 86FFB72A8AE3 | the process begins with thecomputer conster a 3-d mold of the face there are 44 mojor muscles in model that make a action untit.
classfild as happyiness , suprise , anger , disgust , fear , and sadness when your frontails rise when suprise or you orbicular oris will tightens your lips to show anger . facial expression are univer observers .
Can track exprees in the mona lisa as human everyday we perfrom samne imprees calculation every day tell if your freind is sad by looking at her or his face look at human art we can see what the painter or paniting was express . with this you could ue a mirror that look at your face express to see a differt of a genunie smile and a forec one new computer sofeware we cold maybe croack a new da vinvi vode thing tenconly is be come great use of our time see what engone the paint is desiceing | Evidence | Ineffective |
d8a718976b5d | 877F6174E222 | The author uses connotations by suggesting that venus is a worthy pursuit is studying but the dangers that it has is that it's the hottest planet in the solar system | Position | Adequate |
0a9f776916bd | 877F6174E222 | went through the greenhouse effect while is was being created. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets around it. The temperatures on average is around 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus has more powerful earthquakes,erupting volcanoes and frequent lightning strikes. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5f13da52b754 | 877F6174E222 | It says that NASA is working on approaches for getting to venus. Like for example,simplified electronics made of silicon carbide has been tested through a chamber. A vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the ground but the surface would still be hot at around 170 degrees fahrenheit. Venus can sometimes be a good planetary visit. The planet has rocky sediments on its surface such as valleys,mountains and craters. | Evidence | Ineffective |
5239bb768e3b | 877F6174E222 | A phone or a tablet being exposed to acid could be heat capable to melting just imagine what that would be like. By comparing it with a system that uses mechanical parts the system can be made to be more resistant from pressure and heat resources. Many researchers cannot take gas or rock from a distance. Humans would survive if there is solar power from venus. When trying to meet the challenge venus presented it has value the human curiosity will lead to us to many intimidating endeavors. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4fd4c1134610 | 8783DB652376 | There are advantages of limiting car usage, but not as much as you thought. | Position | Ineffective |
d688636d4107 | 8783DB652376 | According to Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother, when she had a car, she was always tense. Now that she told it, Walter seemed to be much happier. In Freiburg, Vurban's streets are "care-free". But, once you go to the main thoroughfare, cars will be sworming down the road. Most people may think, "I need a car to get to where I need to go faster." "I can't live without a car."
In 2006, trend in Europe grew... No cars or anything. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs where middle class families from Chicago to Shanghai make their homes. Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions. 50 percent in some car intensive area in US. Home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low car suburban life.
Levittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs with enormous rich people homes with private garages were dream towns back in the 1950s. The US is promoting "car reduced" communities, and legislators are starting to act. | Evidence | Ineffective |
16d353f09011 | 878BE2C1F6FB | Cell phones one of the most important technology in today world since cells phones have been created almost no one can do without them. Phones are so important to us that we need them in case of emergency. family or friends that are away from us or international from a different county. we all known that driving is one of the number one cause of death. | Lead | Adequate |
61cebeaf91d7 | 878BE2C1F6FB | While driving is a privilege we have today. When you text and drive you not only put yourself at risk you put innocent drives at stake | Position | Adequate |
7a8b34fb67af | 878BE2C1F6FB | Just recently the state of Georgia ban the use of cell phones while driving. I believe there is no text back to that person that can not wait. We should take life precious. in the UK cell phones are banned. I believe all call phones should be banned. Recently researchers have come up with a way of using our phones while driving.
In order to do that they have came up with advanced vehicle that we can make phone calls with touching our phones by using the aux. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9c1bce9f1e80 | 878BE2C1F6FB | I hope as we move forward in life people can learn from each other's mistakes. Texting while driving is the worst thing to do you can . loose your privilege or suspended license. Even worse you could kill someone while walking. So the question is does it really worth texting while driving? | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d17150c970b1 | 879F0C1C09CD | If I was in this situation I would like tell them to take an even better camera. | Claim | Adequate |
b504626fd538 | 879F0C1C09CD | And my explanation for that is because if they want to have a more clearer picture then they should take another one up there. And again they might even get an even bettere and bigger because of the technology we have today. It might be even in high definition so that they can see if thats actually a face or if its just a mountain with craters. But they might get me wrong and thats ok but as long as they have a better camera to explain how or what i'm right about. Like in the beginning of this article it said that they had take pictures in 1976, 1998, and in 2001 but all of those pictures are on cameras that make pictures blury and in order to see if the picture was actually a face they had to do something to make that picure clearer than it shows. | Evidence | Effective |
db55718022c9 | 879F0C1C09CD | They might argue that im wrong because they might say that why will they need the technology and they might say like well we already have a picture and its a face. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7c199bca6699 | 879F0C1C09CD | But it could possibly be something else. It could be a mountain with craters, it can be mostly anything. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
8b5f7c5299e7 | 879F0C1C09CD | I also could be wrong becuase they do have a Mars rover up there so my theory can be wrong and it is a face all along. | Evidence | Ineffective |
87cb12b5a718 | 879F0C1C09CD | If I was the a scientist at NASA talking to someone about why the face on mars wasent created by aliens i would tell them that extra terrestrial life couldn't of done that | Position | Adequate |
5ed25c938e10 | 879F0C1C09CD | because we dont have enough evidence to prove that they exist. | Claim | Adequate |
3ee735cf06a0 | 879F0C1C09CD | But for now we don't know 100% that aliens did it or if metors hit it and it looked like a face or if aliens did it. And if aliens really did it then we need to get nother camera up there and see if there is any other life out there. Then the person who is asking that question would say "havent you guys already put one up there and theres nothing". Then I would come back and say then why do you think that aliens did it if we got nothing on the cameras that we sent up there. So he would be kind of wrong if we dont have any evidence that aliens are out there. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5b9b5e7ce1a8 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | The principal has decided that all students should participate in at least one school activity. For example they can participate in sports, SCA member, or even gaming club. | Lead | Adequate |
27d64378f857 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | Me myself agreed with this decision | Position | Adequate |
e309208f8785 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | we all need to stay active in some type of sport or school activity if not we are not going to be involved in things. Also if you dont like any of the activities talk to your principal about adding some other things that you like. | Evidence | Adequate |
da33289ab97b | 87A3A28A5EB8 | Students should try out sports | Claim | Adequate |
2c05d317572d | 87A3A28A5EB8 | if you have been practicing basketball or football and you think your good enough to make the team just try out and see if you'll make it. Also as well if you dont play sports but you try out for a team you might just like and get real good at that sport. We even have a better idea say if you can dance or cheer you might can talk to your principal about being your school mascot you might can get some fans,or have a cheer leading team for the sports. Try to talk to your principal about having a concession stand to sell snacks to the players and people who come watch the game. If you are good at keeping record you can be the person who keeps track of the fouls, timeouts, and keeping track of the numbers scored. | Evidence | Adequate |
6c499ddf84a4 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | The SCA is when host the school dances or fundraisers. | Claim | Ineffective |
28f36e78fbed | 87A3A28A5EB8 | They do school dances by getting it all planed like getting a DJ, food, games, buses. Also they do fundraisers because this is how they get money for school equipment like new PE equipment and better technology so we can have better computers. But the school dances help with these things to. This is why we need all the school dances and fundraisers. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2678868f6285 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | The gaming club is not a sport but it's competitive thing | Claim | Ineffective |
42f2baadbe08 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | The gaming club is for people who does not like to play outside don't like getting hurt. You can compete against people in battle games or sport games. Say if you like sports you just dont like playing it in real life only in video games because it seems better to you thats okay. Thats why the gaming club is so cool you can play it on TV instead of in real life. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a4cd7bdabc08 | 87A3A28A5EB8 | This is why you should be involved in at least one activity its so many to choose from. So there is no reason to not be involved at all. You might just want to try other activitys out just to how those ones are and you might just like it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
62201cf4a3ae | 87A6EF3113C6 | The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", uses many scientific facts, data, and explanations to support their idea of exploring Venus. In the passage, many examples are given of why scientists would want to explore the possibilities of the contents of Venus despite all the dangers. | Position | Effective |
00c3cb8cb453 | 87A6EF3113C6 | The text gives some support like declaring it the most Earth-like planet, | Claim | Adequate |
23a1bb23f9b5 | 87A6EF3113C6 | the possibility of supporting life forms, | Claim | Adequate |
e86fb6461efa | 87A6EF3113C6 | multiple explorations to Venus that have been successful. | Claim | Adequate |
11fa51ac176e | 87A6EF3113C6 | Venus' relation to Earth is significant because it is the closest example of another planet like Earth. | Claim | Effective |
c147d343fbf5 | 87A6EF3113C6 | The author claims that Venus is even called Earth's twin and that not only is it like Earth in its density and size, but also in the distance between the two planets. | Evidence | Adequate |
4336f1e73855 | 87A6EF3113C6 | Even though the planet is very similar to Earth there are challenges to get accurate data on the planet because of the many spacecrafts that were unable to withstand the harshness of the planet. | Claim | Adequate |
4f4b7a43f219 | 87A6EF3113C6 | As technology advanced, the author claims that more and more missions to Venus occured, and even around the time of World War II there was a spacecraft that survived in Venus conditions for about three weeks. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9af414182462 | 87A6EF3113C6 | Venus' conditions are very harmful to the life on Earth but there may have been a possibility that life could sustain on the planet. | Claim | Adequate |
a434f155cc57 | 87A6EF3113C6 | The author describes Venus as a planet mostly covered in large oceans that could have suppported life growing there. All of these examples that the author has given supports his idea of the need to explore Venus tremedously and gives very convincing evidence and data that supports his idea. | Evidence | Adequate |
f50a1a2f6eb8 | 87A6EF3113C6 | Although Venus is a very harsh planet and there may not be any possibility of life, it would still be worth it to explore this planet and how it works. The author explains in detail what Venus is like and supports his ideas with scientific facts and data. There is a possibility that life could sustain on Venus but that is unknown unless the option is explored. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1be8599ab534 | 882808C92A6E | using the techonology of emotionalnally expressions of students in a classrom is valuable | Position | Adequate |
7bfff9defc82 | 882808C92A6E | because it identfies mona lisa's emotions how one picture can describe her self as calculating emotions. constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human mules. movent one of one or more musles. movent of one or more musles is called an action untit in fact we humans preform this same impressive caluculation every day for instance you can prolly tell a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face of corce most of us would have trouble actully describing each facial trait that conveys happy wooried etc ..... i oberserved that artist such as da vicci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial musles precilely enough to convey specific emotions his new compuer sofftware stores simlar anatomical imformation as electronical code. the mona lisa demostrating is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad . by the way, did making a happy face in this experiment also mmake you feel slightly happy ? accoring to the facial feed back therory of emotion moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them. whoever thought that amking faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions! | Evidence | Ineffective |
f14f8e7eae47 | 8836AD393A34 | Around the world we have been seeing trends of reducing automobile usage. Reducing automile usage would have a number of advantages but it must be approached in the right way. If the US were to attempt to "limit car usage" as the prompt states, the movement would undoubtedly recieve a lot of push back and would slow to a stop | Lead | Adequate |
6f73f35cc2b3 | 8836AD393A34 | . Reducing car usage by building public transportation and smart suburbs would be ideal. | Position | Effective |
b37345e8a1d0 | 8836AD393A34 | cut down our co2 emissions | Claim | Adequate |
01bc305dbebe | 8836AD393A34 | reduce the number of car related injuries and deaths.
| Claim | Adequate |
20c36426418c | 8836AD393A34 | if there is one thing I know about American politics, its that political parties will oppose just about anything, no matter how advantageous or logical, "limiting car usage" is no exception, if the Democratic party were to suggest such a thing, it would create an upoar from the Republican and Libertarian parties. This would become more controversial than gun restrictions, we would have another surge of anti-environmentalism propoganda, Limbaugh would be spitting "tree-huggers" again, and more likely than not, our country would drift even further away from any sort of environmental solutions. Trying to limit car usage on a Federal level would be met by utter failure. | Evidence | Ineffective |
11fac50d24fc | 8836AD393A34 | there is a right way to approach this issue in the US. If we were to ask for grants to build public transportation systems, encourage car-pooling, and build efficient bike paths, car usage could be significantly reduced. | Evidence | Adequate |
13a9a0b4b001 | 8836AD393A34 | The advantages of reducing our use of automobiles in the US are well worth the cost. Transportation is the second largest contributor of co2 emissions, just behind power plants. (Rosenthal, paragraph 34) | Evidence | Adequate |
484b14777ac9 | 8836AD393A34 | Cutting these emissions, even by a fraction would have great benefits to our environment | Claim | Adequate |
106a22165f18 | 8836AD393A34 | David Goldburg, an official of Transportation for America states, "All of our development since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will have to change, how much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid." (7) The US has been moving towards a lower car use trend since the recession, "recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by" (29). | Evidence | Adequate |
2ad86450e30f | 8836AD393A34 | reducing automoblie use in the US should be a goal, but it cannot be approached through laws or restrictions. We can model our suburbs and cities to be more friendly to alternate transportations, and we can build public transportation systems across America. The reduction of co2 emissions from cars will curb our contribution to Global Climate Change and make a better future for generations to come. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
810e267880d6 | 8855A0898835 | Have you guys ever seen the unmasking face on Mars? If not you probably should! | Position | Ineffective |
d78c8998d49a | 8855A0898835 | It's located on Mars at 41 degrees north martian latitiude. If you're sitting around bored at home just imagine all the amazing sites to see when you are visiting The Face of Mars. | Evidence | Ineffective |
202cae0842b6 | 8855A0898835 | One reason people might go here is because of all the fun, excitement,and interesting tings on or around the face of Mars. | Claim | Ineffective |
1c5c532806a4 | 8855A0898835 | Like just imagine all the craters and the amazement for people all ages. Why sit at home when you can be emjoying yourself with various adventures. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e8f508e413f5 | 8855A0898835 | Another reason may be just getting out of the house and exploring. | Claim | Ineffective |
1bf8b44e31d0 | 8855A0898835 | You don't just have to stay in one area on mars you can go anywhere. Let me start by saying it would be an excellent experience for both kids and adults. | Evidence | Ineffective |
92d3052b0675 | 8855A0898835 | Others say that hey found it boring and uninteresting. Look on the bright side not all people are like that some people might like the outerspace world. It just depends in what you like and dont like. Well I hope you enjoy your time while visiting The Face of Mars. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
7d1c1ea6ead1 | 887BBBE0CCC5 |
From now, human can say we are have most feeling in the world, We can be sad we can be happy, we can be angry about something we can also say'' what's a pity'' but how to show us emotion? Use our face! someone said, how to know somebody emotion? Use our eyes! Somebody day again, but do you know that now we have now the number of you emotion.
What's will like? For example one of most famouse art Mona Lisa, one lady always have a secret smille, she is 83 happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. So amazing right? When I saw the result maybe because of that Mona lisa have beautiful of time. Complate emotion very easy to touch people's heart. this software is form University of lllinois , they hope developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. How it work? The process begins with 3-D computer model easy to say just build a modle of the face and cumputer will calute the way muscles move and he can know the percent of your emotions, depend on each musclesthe cpmputer will know how ''happy'' you was. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b715517eeb2f | 887BBBE0CCC5 | So this prosses sound like cool but it just show how much computer can do it not meaing it 100 right. | Position | Ineffective |
d330f7809d41 | 88AF43473E2F | Why should you join the Seagoing Program? | Lead | Ineffective |
ec0e7655e08d | 88AF43473E2F | There are many reasons you should | Position | Adequate |
8361536495b6 | 88AF43473E2F | I had an amazing experience being a Seagoing cowboy myself. | Claim | Adequate |
439c3a93932d | 88AF43473E2F | I think that you would also have an amazing experience. I got the chance to have this experience and it was honestly life changing. You might not want to do it because of being on the ship, but you can still have fun while on the ship. While on board you have a good time to enjoy playing games and doing your hobbies, here are some, table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading, and whittling. | Evidence | Adequate |
a6d7dc520ab9 | 88AF43473E2F | When you're on the ship your demeanor will change right when you see the marvelouse sights | Claim | Adequate |
c146d2fbc5a7 | 88AF43473E2F | I had the experience of touring the excavated castle in Crete, seeing Europe and China, and marveling at the Panama Canal while on my way to China. As you arrive at where you are going, something to give you reassurance is knowing that you are doing something good. You are helping people rebuild and recover what they had lost. I had the I'm-on-top-of-the-world feeling as soon as I knew I was helping them get back what they had lost, and I think you will too. This chance is big for you. | Evidence | Adequate |
5b712705dfc6 | 88AF43473E2F | ''Boom!'' You think in your mind as you look back at the distruction from the war and bombs. That melancholy feeling you get as you see all that has went on will change as you think of why you are there, and what you are doing. I know that you should join this program because it is a once-in-a-life-time chance. You will have fun as I did in my exuberant experience in this program. I have given examples to why I think you should. Just join the program and you will like it, I can promise you that. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a5ca95e8393d | 88B8F8666DA0 | We all love our phones now a days and basically ever since they were invented. Everyone has one or wants one or the newest latest one | Lead | Adequate |
7365f15c0873 | 88B8F8666DA0 | .Ever since they were invented in 1700s people have taken the full advantage of the telephone presidents and war sargents used them to win battles and etc. Now the phone has evolved from tube looking phones to brick phones to flip phones to iphones and to smartphones | Lead | Ineffective |
0c4f99258df4 | 88B8F8666DA0 | With all the new technology and apps like facetime snapchat3 games music social media there's almost no way anyone could ever put their phones down. But according to statistics in 2013 about 3,154 people died in accidents 424,000 were injured. In 2013, 10% of all drivers ages 15 to 19 involved in fatal accidents were reported to be distracted at the time of the crash. | Evidence | Adequate |
9081cf65d1f7 | 88B8F8666DA0 | With all the crashes maybe we should drive without our phones but with the increments in technology we mind as well just use them cars are able to call people just like phones, so if you can call people in your car and be distracted anyways when your calling whom ever | Claim | Ineffective |
6c61182f03a8 | 88B8F8666DA0 | There putting almost smartphones in the car so you can most defiantly be distracted with that. The fact that they are and already are making cars able to drive by themselves is anther reason that is very distracting just as in Tulsa the electrically powered car has pilot mode so it drives itself. So many people have been distracted from the road and driving because the car can drive itself even though the car can drive itself you still need to pay attention to the road. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f1434a6b39ce | 88B8F8666DA0 | So you picking up a cellphone and calling someone can be distracting | Claim | Adequate |
7f8b8cfbbbd1 | 88B8F8666DA0 | there is a responsibility factor to firstly own a car and secondly to even own a phone. | Claim | Adequate |
be4ab66af0bf | 88B8F8666DA0 | It might seem like it is not a responsibility owning a phone but it is when you own a phone you have personal information in it. If you were lose your phone and have never put a password or security code on it you can lose your information to whoever has your phone could be a hacker could be a random thieve.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
02e116445c0a | 88B8F8666DA0 | it really depends on your responsibility level if you can't stay off your phone and it's life then you need to let someone drive but if you can be responsible while driving then I'd say you should us your phone responsibly | Position | Adequate |
47622869b43c | 88B8F8666DA0 | Cause if you drive irresponsibly you should have your phone. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a8929b663d6c | 88DD3D58EA57 | Driving a car has its ups and downs to life. It provides transportation, but it can also be very dangerous. | Lead | Adequate |
20658067ffdb | 88DD3D58EA57 | Another issue with cars today is the amount of pollution that cars give off. | Claim | Adequate |
28ba35d73c54 | 88DD3D58EA57 | Smog is caused by cars and is not good to the environment and certainly not good for people to be breathing in. Both "Paris bans driving due to smog" and "Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota" discuss the affects cars can have on the evironment. | Evidence | Adequate |
59d80cbe81be | 88DD3D58EA57 | "In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars" and "The End of Car Culture" talk about the decrease of the amount of cars used today. Many communities today are turning into car-free places to clear up the smog and dangers of driving. | Evidence | Adequate |
4214fa0f8cf0 | 88DD3D58EA57 | Smog in Paris, France and Bogota, Columbia have reached record pollutions and both cities do not want to deal with it any longer. Robert Duffer writes about how the Paris government enforced a new rule which allowed both even and odd numbered license plates to drive on a certain day and would alternate everyday. This was very beneficial, however some people needed transportation but would be fined $31 if their car was used on the wrong day. Being that Paris is one of the most famous capitals of the world, one would expect to see more smog than usual. Andrew Selsky also writes that in Bogota, Columbia, a day without cars was put into place in the 1990's and still continues today. Once a year, buses and taxis are the only transportation allowed in the whole city. If not obeyed, there would be a $25 fine. This day was put into place as an improvement campaign which also benefitted the city. Bike paths and smooth sidewalks were put in and during rush hour has cut the traffic in half. It also opened up restaurants and shopping malls which were widely used by the public. | Evidence | Effective |
7b04727c41e6 | 88DD3D58EA57 | Life without cars can also be beneficial to ones community | Position | Ineffective |
96944ffdee9d | 88DD3D58EA57 | few people will be buying gas or diesel fuel for their cars. Elisabeth Rosenthal tells her audience that Vauban, Germany has an upscale community where nearly everyone has given up their cars. Here, people sold their cars just so that they could buy a house in peace without having to hear traffic jams and honking horns all the time. Many say that this environment makes them happier because it is so peaceful. 70% of the community do nott own cars and the ones that do must leave it in a large parking garage outside the developement that is purchased with the home. In another article, also written by Elisabeth Rosenthal, discusses America and the recent decrease of the amount of driven by a single person. Research shows that the amount driven in 1995 is about the same as the amount driven in 2013. This is due to environmental protectionists who walk evrywhere they go and due to the dangers of driving. There are fewer young adults driving today as well; in eight years, the amount has decreased 23% | Evidence | Effective |
87ee62052151 | 88DD3D58EA57 | Many are giving up their cars today to make a better, happier living. | Claim | Adequate |
58678c01d2d3 | 88DD3D58EA57 | There are cities all across the world that are limiting the amount of cars being used. Smog is a very pollutive that many don't even realize. Many say that walking and biking around provides them with a more peaceful lifestyle. Limiting car usage will provide less smog in the air and will save you money from having to buy gas or diesel fuel. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1f0c8ec8383a | 88FD7FAAFA90 | Some school require students to complete summer projects. | Lead | Ineffective |
365f2cba9b4e | 88FD7FAAFA90 | This is a great idea, and it would be better if the students would be able to pick the topic. | Position | Adequate |
c5730ca328d6 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | One of the reasons is students know what interest them more | Claim | Adequate |
56832d613e48 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | they would put more effort and time on the project | Claim | Adequate |
bb11a6cfee48 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | studenst inprove there skills when writing something they enjoy.
| Claim | Adequate |
a2eb5bfc1c7b | 88FD7FAAFA90 | Students should be able to pick their topic do to they know what interest them and what doesnt. | Claim | Adequate |
0d6eabd43f17 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | Generic_Name a student at Generic_School was given a project about sea animals. Generic_Name doesnt know nothing about marine animals and has no interest on the project. Therefor, Generic_Name has no idea what to say and its not in his interest. Furthermore, Generic_Name will be in summer break it would be less stressful to talk bout a topic he likes instead of a boring one the teacher would give out. Also the students would put more effort and time to the project. | Evidence | Adequate |
96ea3dec0224 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | by the student knowing what he likes and his strength they'll aim for that A on the project. Students alfound do poorly on school project due to the topic they were given. For example, Generic_Name was given the topic to right about sports Generic_Name. Generic_Name has never done sports her self so there she has no interest on it. Generic_Name will do the project and get finished on time but, did not put time and effort to do her best. | Evidence | Adequate |
6d5906a5c556 | 88FD7FAAFA90 | Undoubtedly, students do better on a topic they all feel good about. | Claim | Adequate |
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