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02e117ab9a47 | A29CD7941E1D | And so we can be apart of the school. Most the people that i know don't do affer school actiry and they have nothing to do when school is done. They could be doing sothing but no. So if we all did sothing affer school what woud it be. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b87020f7d361 | A2A9327526F7 | Why do you think Don Reist want Luke Bomberger to join the Seagoing Cowboys program ? | Lead | Adequate |
42d15cd0a8d4 | A2A9327526F7 | Well , i think he wants him to join the Seagoing cowboys program because he probably really like it , and want his friend to join . | Position | Adequate |
9cb40c5ee9c7 | A2A9327526F7 | One reason i think Luke joined because like he say , he think it would be an opportunity of a lifetime | Claim | Adequate |
5891555dcf97 | A2A9327526F7 | in the passage it states UNRRA hires seagoing cowboys to take care of horses , young cows , and mules that were shipped overseas , Luke and Don signed up . The passage also states in August 1945 , they recieved their orders to report to New Orleans . They arrived August 14 which was the day pacific war ended . | Evidence | Ineffective |
eea0b26a3432 | A2A9327526F7 | Another reason i think Luke wanted to join , because his friend was their and he wanted to be with his friend , and do what he are doing now . | Claim | Adequate |
1ce38c70d7c4 | A2A9327526F7 | The passage states when Luke's draft board learned that he was on a cattle boat , they told him to just keep doing that for his service . The passage also states Luke turned 18 before arriving in greece , which meant he could be drafted in military service | Evidence | Ineffective |
f6545ceaf1c1 | A2A9327526F7 | The whole thing to the paragraphs and all the supporting details is that Don wanted Luke to be like him and asked him to sign up so they could be with eachother . They wanted to have good opportunities with eachother t, they wanted to grow up and become something just from being stated in the seagoing cowboy program . Like they say in the story at 18 before arriving in Greece you could be drafted in military . That right there means they wanted to be something like a star that everyone wants to meat or be important or be famous , because lots of times it gets boring sitting around all the time . They said " hey lets get up and go sign up for something to become something together since we are close friends . " | Evidence | Ineffective |
2b0be6cf755e | A2DAADAB1433 | Should drivers be able to use their phone in shape form or fashion? No | Position | Adequate |
b6df77ca4e6e | A2DAADAB1433 | it's a distraction to anyone, no matter how skilled they are | Claim | Adequate |
38614429f241 | A2DAADAB1433 | It is a safety hazard for the people you share the road with and to yourself. The leading cause of a wreck is because of drivers are paying attention to their phones and not the road | Evidence | Adequate |
ad5626610c8c | A2DAADAB1433 | One the other hand if there is an actual emergency and you need to answer it pull over as soon as possible.
| Counterclaim | Adequate |
5182a6c333ce | A2DAADAB1433 | How many times have you been in the car and you look around and see people using their phones while driving? A lot of times, am I correct? Of Course I am around about 10% of drivers use their phone while driving, during the holiday that number increase a whole 15% | Evidence | Adequate |
fddf18dd808e | A2DAADAB1433 | About 26% of accidents are caused by people using their phones while being behind the wheel. | Claim | Adequate |
46acfc06da8d | A2DAADAB1433 |
In the state of Georgia there is a law called the hands free law. Which states that driver a prohibited to have their cellular devices in their possession while driving | Claim | Adequate |
d8d5b109a5bd | A2DAADAB1433 | So with that being said that backes my argument up even more. And it isn't just Georgia there is so many other states that have it to. So we all know if the government has a law on it its a real problem. If caught breaking this law you can be written a ticket 50 dollars or more depending if its is your first offence or not. | Evidence | Adequate |
0f9e3e6e70c8 | A2DAADAB1433 | Now there are some moments when you just have to use your phone. Like when you are switching a song. Or even when you know its an emergency and you just have to answer it. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
69d0d4c5a1e0 | A2DAADAB1433 | If you are a parent and you child text saying they need you because they're not feeling well, have to text them back because they are not allowed to really use their phone in school so you can't call them. | Evidence | Ineffective |
3d5f7832af25 | A2DAADAB1433 | So therefore drivers should not be able to use their phones while driving. It is a distraction. It is one of the leading causes for car accidents. It is also a very expensive ticket so I encourage drivers to stay away from their phones while driving. Unless you absolutely need to use it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7752f3aaf616 | A2DAD0A2B796 | these summer projects should be student - designed | Position | Adequate |
7510bed54d73 | A2DAD0A2B796 | students can be more creative with what they want to do | Claim | Adequate |
685838a1d659 | A2DAD0A2B796 | students work best when they can do their own project their way | Claim | Adequate |
88e5e4790156 | A2DAD0A2B796 | they can ask a friend or a relative to help them with the project over the summer . | Claim | Adequate |
7062f68db789 | A2DAD0A2B796 | Some people may think these summer projects should be student - designed because , students can be more creative with what they want to do | Claim | Adequate |
eee66805c617 | A2DAD0A2B796 | This will help students in a large way because , every time students get assigned a project it's what the teacher want them to do , this time the project is going to be about what the students want to do . It's a bigger chance of a student getting a better grade on the project because , they can do a project about sports , music , hobbies , and things students like to do during off time . If the project was teacher - designed , students will have to do projects about math , social studies , and science , things that students wouldn't want to do a project on because it's less fun and boring . | Evidence | Adequate |
5d6220e6aa8d | A2DAD0A2B796 | Students work best when they can do their own project their way | Claim | Adequate |
f2016fa8e49b | A2DAD0A2B796 | Students work best when they can do their own project their way because , a lot of students dislike when the teacher want them to do a project their way and the project is about something they dislike doing , and the teacher have things set up their way . Students will also like to do they project on their own , so they can be more focused about what they want to do , not what the teacher wants to do . | Evidence | Ineffective |
dd749d48114e | A2DAD0A2B796 | If a student was to ask a friend or a relative to help them with their project over the summer , it would be better for the student | Claim | Adequate |
ed628afda92e | A2DAD0A2B796 | that friend or relative could be really good in a subject or maybe something your not good at and they can help you with that subject or that one thing your not good at but they are . | Evidence | Ineffective |
317e3d2ec4c0 | A2DAD0A2B796 | some people may think these summer projects should be student - designed because , students can be more creative with what they want to do , students work best when they can do their own project their way , and students can ask a friend or a relative to help them with the project over the summer . | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
22ca75bd6376 | A3041B0D7D5E | In the article "The challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy to go explore from the dangers that Venus has. | Position | Ineffective |
7acfd6ee30cd | A3041B0D7D5E | An evidence that it says that the author is supporting this idea is in paragraph five. In paragraph it says that " Solor power would be plentiful, and raidiation would not exceed Earth level. Not easy condition, but survivable for humans." | Claim | Adequate |
a592e4584b5f | A3041B0D7D5E | In the bottom of the second paragraph it says "Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge plant for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." | Claim | Adequate |
9b04367dac0a | A3041B0D7D5E | In paragraph the author is describing how Venus was like a long time ago, covered with large oceans and that it could of have supported various forms of life. The author also describes how the planet looks like today with rocks, valleys, and mountains.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
72b226214ac7 | A3041B0D7D5E | In paragragh six it talks about how researchers and scientist are working on innovations that would make the machines last long enough while exploring Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
e708c72cb1fd | A3041B0D7D5E | Paragraph six also talks about how researchers can't take any rocks, gas, or anything that is from Venus, to no make it a risk and researchers can't take pictures or videos that well because the light of the picture or video cannot penetrate the dense of the atmoshere which is ineffective. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e1a9a63186b5 | A3041B0D7D5E | In the bottom of paragraph seven it says that " Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin | Claim | Ineffective |
28334db6f9ae | A3041B0D7D5E | . By comparison, system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces | Evidence | Ineffective |
d2c66347c959 | A3041B0D7D5E | I think that reseachers and scientist are learning more and more about humans going to Venus to see if it is safe to go. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
313ec2e8764b | A3047C282C45 | Planing. Can the tecnologic read face of the emocion of human. Scientit are makeing computer to keeping growing u. The most comun expression is the paint of Mona Lisa Smile. This paint can be express the emotion of happy, sadness and same more. The computer can read your face with your own muscle.
| Lead | Ineffective |
921101ade8dd | A3047C282C45 | "Dr. Huang and his collenge are experts at developing better ways for human and computers to communicate". The main computer are growing up to be able accepting human. In the past nobody know the real face of tecnologic. The scientits are proving evidents the human can comunite witha none human. In other way the expression to seem a emotion through a computer is complice to understand, but the reason to develop the tectologic is to understand the human.
"She'83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. It's the subject of leonardo de Vinci's Renaissance painting."This argument can be decription of Leanardo's paint. The Mona Lisa Smile can be dectetive by a computer too. The way to decribe the same way. The happyness of the paint can tranfer us. She is happy but the same way to be happy is afear to do a mistake . The computer are showing work to be able to do it. The paint is the best work of Leonedo because is showing the real face of the human.
"Yet Dr. Huang OBserves that artists such as da Vinci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to covery specific emotions."That way to identifies a reason to able read your face is the muscle. The way in each part of your face have a muscle that crear a feelinf acceptable. The face have a lot of muscle. The most muscle able to express is the smile. "Empathy (feeling sameone else's emocional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person;s facial expressions."The next or side of the smile can show where is happyness. The term to asomeone accep you. Is the way to understand them first.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
d1ec8145a5f1 | A3047C282C45 | In coclusion a computer are able to read your face. The computer are developing to a human understand themself. The first moment of your face can be good or bad. Well sametime are deficult ourself to able smeli or cry. To have affect is a great emotion to feel. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
1d4c9a60d3ba | A319351F1036 | I think the claim would be that the new technology that they called the Facial Action Coding System is and good and bad idea | Position | Adequate |
ac2d45075de4 | A319351F1036 | some times it could brake down and you don't have anything else to use to see what your face look like when you are not happy. | Claim | Adequate |
8472c2387c29 | A319351F1036 | Some times it work | Claim | Adequate |
32df1bdc4202 | A319351F1036 | some people would now how to keep it up and nothing would happen to it but if something did happen to it they wold know how to fits it real fast then you would be able to use it again if not you could build a new one if you would want too. | Evidence | Adequate |
c0c44f9440a6 | A319351F1036 | They would show you if your really happy or surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness by using the new technology that they built for you to see if you feel bad or anything you need to. now if you don't now already.
They might even make you look at youself in the mirror even if you don't really want to so you can see what you look like even if you really don't want to look at your face even though you look pretty.
If they make a paintting of you would keep beause you should it will make you have some feeling inside your body telling you that you are very pertty and you should be happy about it but if you think that you are very ugly then their is something wrong with you cause everyone is pertty in thier own ways even if you think your not. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f535f4745eda | A32414F5B216 | In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile," the author describes how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions, that's a really smart idea right?. The software can see your emotions, six emotions, and facial muscles.
First, the person who made this software was Prof. Thomas Huang, the Beckman institute fro Advanced Science at the University of Illinois who started to find better ways for humans and computers to communicate. The first subject he wanted to do was Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. Your maybe thinking how do u use a software just to find out how someone is feeling well...
In fact, the computer takes the model of the picture or what ever is there,but it must have human muscles in the picture ir 3-D model the human muscles is called "acton unit". It only takes in the model if it see's it have forty-four major muscles like a human would have. Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman has classified for the software to have six emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness.
Dr. Thomas Huang and his worjkers or friends that helped him with the software made six basic emotins that the human muscles have and made it to where it only workd if it have the 3-D effect with fourty-four human facial muscles witch is every smart. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a138687cf473 | A32A838D1C3F | Do you really want to visit Venus? Because I sure do. | Lead | Adequate |
025569850b17 | A32A838D1C3F | But the problem is it's extremely dangerous. | Claim | Adequate |
23babd6140ac | A32A838D1C3F | Mostly because the temperature there is 90 times greater than our normal temperature. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. That sound dangerous, and it is dangerous because it could hurt and possibly kill someone. | Evidence | Adequate |
14bbd701c6e2 | A32A838D1C3F | Venus is our sister planet. Some call us twins because of the sizes we both have. But, Venus is the closest to the sun like Mercury is the first panet next to the sun. So Venus is the warmer part of our sisterhood, and Earth are the cold part of our sisterhood. It's sort of like Venus is Anna because of her warm personality. And earth is like Elsa, because of her frozen powers, so she is extremely cold when it comes down to things. Earth at the moment is like Elsa because of its winter landish time of the year. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c21a72de7656 | A32A838D1C3F | To be truthful, trying to go to Venus is a good way to learn more about the planets and to see if there is any living sources out there in the galaxy. But at the same time it's a good way to get killed.(not saying you should do it for the fun of it or for suicide.) | Position | Adequate |
8ef1866b02f7 | A32A838D1C3F | You should at least make some sort of suit that is safe for acid to hit it and so it doesn't melt your suit. It will be pretty cool to finally go to other planets and explore them. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e350d385d046 | A32A838D1C3F | For this entire essay I learned about new stuff. I learned that there is acid rain in Venus. There is a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus, I thought that was cool to learn. I also learned that Mercury is the first planet in front of the sun. I totally forgot about that, so I was surprised. So that's what I learned. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d3b2485986e9 | A38F35A9F711 | The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," stated that meeting the challenge of exploring Venus is valuable because it will provide more knowledge of the planet, but also because humans will be curious about many dangerous things in the future. The author stated many dangers and doubts of exploring the planet, but then described solutions that may or may not work. | Lead | Adequate |
6cff2009b35a | A38F35A9F711 | It is contradictive that he decided to include facts and data that went against his own thoughts because he came back and listed data that went against the negative statements. The author created confusion to what he actually believes. | Position | Effective |
6af04b1824fb | A38F35A9F711 | The author of the article described Venus as Earth's "twin." | Claim | Ineffective |
31bc38b598f4 | A38F35A9F711 | That suggests that we already know some facts about Venus such as it's density and size, which is enough to make people curious to how much about Venus we already know. He said that we know that Venus has many similar structures to Earth, such as mountains, valleys, and craters. If Venus is Earth's "twin," doesn't mean that it is extremely similar to Earth? The statement could make people curious about how close Venus really is to Earth, or it could make them wonder why we should bother risking people's safety if we already know that Venus is just like Earth | Evidence | Effective |
764501b39767 | A38F35A9F711 | The author needed to be clearer on which way he wanted people to view that statement | Claim | Adequate |
953efa06886c | A38F35A9F711 | The author also brought up the dangers of visiting Venus multiple times. Then, he would proceed to follow the statement with tested and untested solutions. It was hard to tell which way he sided | Claim | Effective |
828774257e47 | A38F35A9F711 | According to the author, "Venusian geolegy and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes..." He later stated that NASA has a possible idea to send blimp-like vehicles to travel the surface of Venus, but that would not provide a detailed enough view of the ground. In order to get his point across to the audience, he should not have kept going agianst information | Evidence | Effective |
54264f7e326e | A38F35A9F711 | The author went off topic throughout the article. The different information created slight confusion as to what the message he was trying to convey | Claim | Effective |
7b21e5635a61 | A38F35A9F711 | The author stated that NASA is working on an approach to studying Venus that involves mechanical computers. He then said, "The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers..." It is irrelevant to the message when the mechanical computers were envisioned or the fact that it is shocking to hear that computers existed in 1940. It was hard to understand why computers were important to the article at all. The author made it difficult to focus on the message when he was stating random facts that were not important to the idea he was trying to support. | Evidence | Effective |
99773df7b310 | A38F35A9F711 | The author did not make it extremly obvious as to what he was truly trying to convey. If he would been more clear and less contradictive, then it would have been more obvious that he supports the idea that Venus is worthy of being explored. Also, it would have been easier to understand the point he was trying to put across if he would have stayed on topic throughout the article. The message of the article should be obviously supported by the author. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
54334f55a9f8 | A394F82B98D2 | The National Aeronautics and Space Administration also knon as (NASA) are studing the Venus the closest planet to our home, Earth. Venus is sometimes called the "Evening Star" because its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot | Lead | Ineffective |
718c581feaac | A394F82B98D2 | Venus is referred to as Earths twin in terms of density and size and its being studdied for more details about it. Venus has a thick athmosphere of almost 97b percent carbon dioxide that cover it like a blanket | Evidence | Adequate |
618f1561e41f | A394F82B98D2 | A danger to studying this planet is that the surface is hot very hot and normally has a surface temp of 800 degrease Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth making it risky and dangerous. | Claim | Adequate |
fa46b9a2872b | A394F82B98D2 | NASA is on a mission to send humans to Venus but the problem is that Venus surface sometimes gets to 170 degrease Farenheit. Which makes landing nearly impossible. | Claim | Adequate |
4bce8335f016 | A394F82B98D2 | The only way woukd be to hover 30 miles obove its surface. They cant take samples of rock, gas or anythiing else from a distance Therefore scientsts seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and use the risksas challenges. | Evidence | Adequate |
83528732f15f | A394F82B98D2 | Striving to meet Venus is challenging But one challenge were willin to take | Position | Ineffective |
e78631dd42c8 | A394F82B98D2 | their so many uknown descorvies waiting to be descovered and the risk will later turn in a challenge and that challenge will one day turn into sucess. With out advanced technology and the studying I know we cn make it their. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4789aa8fc34e | A3AD25786D36 | Earth as we know it has been striving for many years but our population is growing rapidly due to everyone havng children and deaths. We can only do so much one day this planet we call earth will be like the rest of the planets. Not being able to live on because of bad conditions | Lead | Adequate |
34e59942fbbc | A3AD25786D36 | Nasa has been doing other approaches to studying venus. they tried to send a couple space crafts to venus but the rough and cloudy planet made the spacecrafts fail due to the enviroment. Nasa has been doing test to figure out something that can stand the venus enviroment. They haven't sent a spacecraft to venus in three decades. ''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familir features such as valleys, mountains and craters.'' Venus is the nearest option for us. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans so it probaly could support human life but we still have to take the risks. how would we live on a planet that doesnt even have what we need to survive. A thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. would we be wearing suits around all day the averge temperture on venus is roughly 800 degress fahrenheit, we dont get past 105 degress fahrenheit | Evidence | Adequate |
6de875ddcec1 | A3AD25786D36 | Yes the planet sounds to good to be true but if that is what we have that is atleast like earth we should give it a try. considering the fact of life on another planet is fascinating | Position | Adequate |
dd07e78a90a2 | A3AD25786D36 | We can make the trip to venus but you cant even see it you will by flying over dense clouds and if you go under the clouds it's very hot | Evidence | Ineffective |
45a0bd5a438a | A3AD25786D36 | In conclusion Venus is like earths sister and if we can find a way to make it liveable to humans we should try it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1429a0014a8d | A3BB032558E2 | This article is abaut the platent of venus that are sometimes called Evening Star this is the secon planet from our sun,this planet is one that tje people can see from a large distance it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. this is the most dangerous for the people because the sun is like the fire the people can`t see and touch this in a short distance the sun and they light can be beautiful but is it most thing that is dangerous in the universe. | Lead | Ineffective |
c3ea7741dfd4 | A3BB032558E2 | Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size ,and occasionally the closest in distance too, venus is a planet visit for the people,venus have many things that are interesting the people vistit this place for know somethings that they don`t know but they need know venus is one planet that are close with mart and earth venus is study for the humsn science.
A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon blankets venus. On the planet the temperatures average can be over a 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is like 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet,the conditions of the this planet can be more extreme than anything humans encounteron the planet earth venus is the only planet that have hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,the other planet that are closer to the sun is mercury , beyond high pressure and heat.
Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting of volcanes powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to a lang on its surface. venus have nomerous factors that contribute reputation as a challenging platent for humans to study,despite its aproximity to us, venus should have a sulfuric acids in the venus atmosphera | Evidence | Ineffective |
6b32f24d5e25 | A3BB032558E2 | In all of this we have a question Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface.? Venus is a fascinated planet for the astronomers because it may wellonce have been mthe most Earth like planet in the solar sytem venus is a planet know for the rocks and gas that there is. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
72220bd33450 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Have you ever wondered what venus is like? Well studying venus can be very dangerous with its carbon dioxide atmosphere, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, extremely high temperature and more | Lead | Adequate |
66dc33592d58 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Even though it can be dangerous it is a worthy pursuit. | Position | Adequate |
6f49acd358d5 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Studying venus is a worthy pursuit because it is our sister planet | Claim | Adequate |
75f1a8eabc21 | A3BFEB7818C7 | we are very curious about it | Claim | Adequate |
6dbdfeef60f0 | A3BFEB7818C7 | human can survive venus conditions.
| Claim | Adequate |
fd0436a12536 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Venus is known as Earths sister planet but we don't know much about it and have never attempted going there | Claim | Adequate |
c0962a549217 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Venus is Earths sister planet because the text talks about how venus is the cloest planet to earth based on size and density. Also Venus has features like vlley, mountains, and craters like earth does and Venus shows that it was most likely covered in oceans long ago and could of supported various life forms. This is why we should explore venus because it is our sister planet | Evidence | Adequate |
423097d76a7b | A3BFEB7818C7 | Human curiosity plays a big role into why we should explore Venus. Humans are very curious about the planet since it shows signs that life could of lived there. | Claim | Adequate |
6f7b153fdf13 | A3BFEB7818C7 | Also it resembles Earth so much that we want to know more about its geogrpahy. In general we want to know more about this planet and get up close to it and observe it directly instead of from a far. We also want to know what gases there are and so maybe we could build something that wouldn't melt when it lands. This is how human curtiosity plays a role in discovering Venus. | Evidence | Adequate |
f48937ad0b6c | A3BFEB7818C7 | Venus also is a worthy pursuit becuase the text states the temperature is 170 degrees and it states humans can survive on this planet. | Claim | Ineffective |
707900911a2c | A3BFEB7818C7 | So even though the temperature and atmosphere seem very dangerous it is worth the exploration because humans can survive so with proper training we could explore Venus. The article also talks about NASA building something to get 30 feet off of Venus so if we can get that close then eventually we will be able to get on the planet. | Evidence | Adequate |
b5e7baf85676 | A3BFEB7818C7 | In conclusion Venus is a worthy pursuit even though it shows many dangers. We can overcome those dangers and make traveling to Venus less dangerous. Since its our sister planet it is worth exploring to find more out about our own planet even. Our human curiosity makes us want to explore Venus in more depth. Also humans can survive on it so with new technology and training they can travel there and be safe. This is why traveling to Venus is a worthy pursuit because it is our sister planet, we are curious about it, and humans can already survive on it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3015a3495812 | A43D4896E15A | Did you know at least one out of every three humans use their phone while in the capacity of an operating vehicle. In today's Essay I'm going to briefly explain why you should and should not operate a phone in an operating vehicle | Lead | Adequate |
bebbf88fe692 | A43D4896E15A | In my opinion you should not let anyone use a phone while in an operating video because it could become a distraction to everyone that's in the vehicle. | Position | Adequate |
2843462f2bb9 | A43D4896E15A | But they're a few pros and cons that come with using a phone in an operating vehicle.
In the first elace why would you want anyone in the vehicle to operate a phone in the vehicle which could become a distraction to the driver and everyone who's in the video. To me that extremely dangerous because if you didn't know in today's society everyone likes to use their phone while in the vehicle. Phones shouldn't be even be thought about while in the vehicle because that's how most accidents happen because of distracted drivers. Which is basically a second distraction to drivers. Just say your phone rings while your driving so you take your eyes off the road to see who's calling is intensively increasing your risk for an accident. | Evidence | Adequate |
e5e4b2e25259 | A43D4896E15A | In addition to not using your phone in an operating vehicle there are a few reasons on why you should. Well first off the driver should not be the one to hvsicallv use the ohone ut a resoonsi le ad It should. | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
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