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Although teachers argue that they have taught for many years and they know the weak points students have for certain topics,
Counterclaim
Adequate
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they are all basing it off of statistics
Rebuttal
Adequate
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Just because students on average found a certain topic difficult does not mean that all will; and some will find a different one difficult. By gathering a group students, the students will be able to pin point which topics are easy and which will require more explaining. Additionally even if teachers were able to successfully identify which topics are troublesome for students, they will not be able to solve the issue present in the most simplest way. Recently the demand for tutors is growing and the reason is that is many of these tutors are young. They have only recently finished their studies. But most importantly, their age gap between their tutees, the students that tutors help, is a measly couple of years, compared to the decades of years between students and teachers. Because of this minuscule age gap, these tutors understand a student's difficulties better. They have gone through the problems that their tutee is going through very recently. As result of this, unlike teachers who will provide a lengthy explanation that was told to them by their professors many years prior, tutors will explain how to solve these problems more efficiently and accurately. Similarly, that is why students, knowing where their peers' difficulties lay, will be able to able to create assignments that are specifically targeted towards students and their success in the content.
Evidence
Effective
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With these summer projects, students will successfully master their acquired skills from the previous year and get a head start in their studies for their year to come. Due to this, students will face a smooth transition from their prior grade to their next. Additionally, by making these projects student designed, the projects will not interfere in their day to day activities during the summer and will provide assignments that will efficiently target students' weak areas and strengthen them. Both of these goals will be met by including enough time each assignment and including easy to follow videos, created by students, explaining difficult topics.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Well, I suppose it coud have been made by aliens
Counterclaim
Adequate
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but as we continued to research it. It became known to us that something was casting a shadow as we said in our article about the "Unmasking the Face on Mars"
Evidence
Adequate
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NASA releasing it in the hopes while it was coming to public. To sale in stores and area in business ,and it did. Hoping it to be real so we can lead people into the existence of it being real.
Evidence
Ineffective
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But noticing ourself that it wasn't true that it wasn't real.
Position
Adequate
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Sadly for us as believers of life on other planets and creation of art from other living things.
Evidence
Ineffective
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In April 5, 1998 when we snapped some pictures ten times as better than the Viking did we notice that it was just a landform a big rock formation.
Claim
Adequate
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The location of the Face of Mars is 41 degrees north martian latitude where it is winter in April on Mars very cloudy during this time so lots of winds,and dust blow past and covers the rock formation. The picture actually just shows us that is just like a regular formation on Earth as said in paragraph 12 ,and also looking identical to landforms in the American West area.
Evidence
Adequate
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Our nation could use Facial Action Coding system, It could better our nation a a whole, that we can dectect when a person is scared and angery, and upster. it could help, us at boarders, and when we let rugees come to our country, to see if they are actually here to be saved or here to hurt us, that way we can better as a country, and a nation
Lead
Ineffective
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i dont think its need in our schopols
Position
Adequate
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what can school childern do, we would all be constantly, have the disgusted, or have a sadness look on our faces
Claim
Ineffective
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the school wouldnt be happy, but its our emotion, it shouldnt matter what our emotions are, the schools dont control us, we are humans, we are the next generation
Evidence
Adequate
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we should be able to pick and choose what's in our schools
Claim
Ineffective
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we have to deal with whats goes on inside our schools, weather we aren't smart or not, we deserve that right, our parents, the law makers, dont know what we goes on in our schools, or how we feel about, the standard testing, why should be garde on stuff, our parents dont know, we shouldnt be forced on tests, that decides if we graduate.
Evidence
Ineffective
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So you want to do a extracurricular activity? If you want to do an activity, There are many different thing to do like Sports,Yearbooks work,or serve on the student council.
Lead
Adequate
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So i say you should go and get a extracurricular activity it would be fun!
Position
Ineffective
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There are plenty of sports like Basketball, Track, Soccer, Baseball, Football its endless.
Evidence
Adequate
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as you play sports it would be enjoyable
Claim
Adequate
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I went to play basketball and i had a blast it was fun to play with my friends and me However, let's say you don't like basketball and you would rather prefer Track You can do that! track can help you in different ways like your running. Track is also entertaining as well There is also football who does not enjoy football it is a sport that i love to watch,play etc football is a excellent sport because 1 It can make your body healthy and fit. 2 If your extremely good at the game you can make a lot of money off it. thats why you should play sports.
Evidence
Adequate
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What if you want to do yearbook, the yearbook could be a excellent idea
Claim
Adequate
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you can take pictures also have all your friends in the yearbook and take pictures of them with you making memories with them.
Evidence
Adequate
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Also there are reading clubs i you love reading this is the right club for you
Claim
Adequate
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reading you can explore different books and the adventure could be exciting for you and others with this club to the libraries that can show new books could make your jaw drop because they know you would love the reading club it will be awesome.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you don't want to do any of those you can serve as the student council, as a result you will have to council others.
Claim
Adequate
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And you can try to help anyone that needs help you can understand students better when someone has a problem you can try to help them fix it, make things easier with them to support them with thing that can make them happier. Also it can make you just as happy as them because you the one who is helping them to just be kind and nice is the best feelings ever to make someones day can boost your confidence and theirs.
Evidence
Adequate
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So if your ever trying to decide what extracurricular you want to do these are some that can get you into the activity you would want to do.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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I think we should use this technology
Position
Adequate
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it say in the article that "a classroom computer cand recognize when a student when a student is becoming confused or bored
Claim
Adequate
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This technology could make the lesson easier, some people don't like to ask for help from teachers for certain reasons, with this new technology you won't have to and it will make life so much easier.
Evidence
Adequate
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They use video imagery the software tracks the facial movements. The painted face of mona lisa by tweaking diffrent units the computer can identify mixed emotions. every expression is compared against a face, The demonstration could bring a smile to your face, for example. If you smile when a AD appears on your screen the computer will bring up another AD that is similar to the AD your looking at right now. But if you frown the next AD won't be the same. According to the facial feedback using your facial mucsles doesn't only express human emotion they also help produce them.
Evidence
Ineffective
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After reading this article, I have grown a nutreal side of this topic. The reason why is becuase I found a liking for the discovery, but there is also some things that I dislike as well
Lead
Ineffective
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This tech can become useless and useful in many situations.
Position
Ineffective
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One reason why this is a good piece of technology is for court cases or things such as that
Claim
Adequate
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People could check if a persons emotions are set of fear, anger, sadness, and other emotions as well. If this technology becomes advaced we could see if a person is lieing just by their facial actions. This could help court cases become justified and more crimes solved.
Evidence
Adequate
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A reason why this is bad is due to people and their privacy.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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I would like it to be scanned just to see my emotions, many people would agree with me on this as well. People who could get their hands on this could use it too much or go over the top with this tech. Also, since there is people who probobly don't like this type of technology, they would throw a fit it they would have to use it.
Evidence
Adequate
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Also another reason why this is bad is the portablity of this technology
Counterclaim
Adequate
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For this to work they would need a high end computer to check someone, and not everyone can just wheel in a computer like that and check someones emotions out of the labatory. This technology is usless without a lab becuase you need a lot of tech to do this expierment on someone.
Evidence
Adequate
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Another reason why I partly side with this technology is for old painting, such as this article explains.
Claim
Adequate
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The artcile talks about finding the emotions of one of the most world wide known paintings in the world, the Mona Lisa. We could find out people emotions from years ago, dating back from the first detailed paintings. This could also work on not just paintings, but old photos. Imagine seeing what emotions people had in pictures from World War 1 or other wars. Seeing this could bring a new sight into history.
Evidence
Adequate
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One of my most favorite reasons why we need this is for classrooms. Many people get bored in school, so this computing could help out.
Claim
Adequate
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The article claims that it could tell if a student is bored or confused, and could change the way the lesson is in seconds. This could help kids out with learing and could future their education. But with that computers would have to understand if a student is making a face to confuse the computer into thinking the kid is confused or not, because we all know that one student that would play with the computer to mess up peoples education for the day.
Evidence
Adequate
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Another bad reason for this is becuase people could fake their emotions
Counterclaim
Adequate
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Many people know how to act on stage, so they could easily do that to a computer to fake their emotions. This could trick computers to doing things that it really shouldn't. This means that this technology could become tricked, making it usless in many situations
Evidence
Adequate
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A good reason for this is for advertising.
Claim
Adequate
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The article states that ads can be modifyed to show things that make you happy and could make you purchase it. If you see a ad you don't like you won't get ads like those anymore, insted it will supply ones that will possibly make you happy, if you still don't like those ads, the process will repeat will you do find a interesting ad. This could lead to higher sales, but also lower sales.
Evidence
Adequate
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Lastly, my final reason is how hard it will be to access this tech.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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It states in the article that a home PC will not be able to handle to algorithims to understand facial emotions. Many people will not be able to expirement with this nor use it at all. So this technology will not be know to the public unlike other technology.
Evidence
Adequate
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All in all, this technology will recive mixed opinions, manly due to the fact that people will not be able to get their hands on it unlike phones, laptops, PC's, and consoles. This item can be very useful, but needs to be polished to be absolutely useful in every situation. This technology will grow as long as they work hard enough to make this tech one-hundered percent useful in this world.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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The author suggest the reader to study Venus isnt directly in the text but he/she gives you the idea that you should look into it.
Position
Ineffective
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Throughout the article the author talks about Venus and others planets in out solar system. but he mainly talks about Venus and Mars.
Claim
Ineffective
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The author tells us that Venus isn't actaully a Evening star, it just has that name because it is closer to the sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's "twin" because it is the closest planet to us in density and size and sometimes distance. In the text it says "Venus can be right around the corner in space'. Even though Venus is right around the corner we have still yet to land an actually spaceship on it. There hasn't been any space craft the a has been successfully on Venus for more than a few hours.. Although in paragraph 6 it says ''many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to long enough to contribute meaning to our knowledge of Venus
Evidence
Ineffective
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This is tell us that there is still stuff to learn about mars and this story isnt complete.
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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the reason why their is the techonoly of people to know how to understand on how the reason the potrites are in this world today. By showing on how the way the pictures in the text is showing how she is smileing.
Lead
Ineffective
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I think we should leave her face the way is orginally on the way it is from the way the arginol person painted it. It is being very respectful on how the painting is being displaied in different musemes here around the world.
Position
Ineffective
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the reason why I think this is because lets say that we painted something and someone goes in and paint it completely different. Than what you made it to be in the first place. So I feel like we all should leave things they were when they were created. The respect we give we get in return from the same reson y we gave it to others because the more you give the more it looks good on you in the long run. So just remember that the next time you see someone changing someone else's painting or others works. They work so hard on because why would they work so hard on somthing that someone else is just gonna go back in and change it.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Teachers should be the ones to design our summer projects for many different reasons.
Position
Adequate
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They know what is needed for us to know by the time the next school year comes around,
Claim
Effective
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most of the time they have a better understanding of what we need to learn
Claim
Effective
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if kids were to design the summer projects they will most likely forget many factors or make it too easy and not put as much effort into it.
Claim
Effective
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Teachers should gather together and create the summer projects based off what they know that we will need to know for the upcoming years.
Claim
Effective
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This can be really helpful because most kids think that some things we learn will not be useful or won't do us any good but the only ones who really know what will be needed for the years to come, are the teachers. This can be such an advantage for the students and teachers. Instead of the teachers spending so much time in the beginning of the year going back over what we learned the year before they can just get right into the lesson because what needed to be reviewed has already been refreshed in our memories over the summer because of the project. By teachers creating the summer project, it can help make class time more valuable and it can help spend less time on reviewing things from previous years.
Evidence
Effective
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If the students were to design the summer project way more things would come into effect, like how the project will be graded, what is on there vs. what should've been on there, and everything important we left off. As students we dont know what we need to learn that is clearly why we are being taught.
Evidence
Adequate
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Teachers have the best way of helping us understand what we need to learn and most of the time they know what is best for our learning. That is why we have teachers, so we can be taught what we need to know.
Claim
Effective
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Students all have different ways of learning, and yes not every teacher is can cater to every student and teach them the way they needed to be taught but at the end of the day the teachers are the ones who help us the most with our education and teach us the important things we need to know. Not every student can just come up with a summer project already knowing everything that should be incorporated into it. Teachers have a much better understanding of what needs to be taught and what we need to go over so we can understand it better and know our material.
Evidence
Adequate
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A big part in learning for many students is being challenged.
Claim
Effective
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Do you really think if a student designed the summer project that it will be challenging ? or will it be so easy that it doesn't really help the student grasp the concept of the material ? Many students find ways to do just the bare minimum to get them by, or they find ways to get the project done without really knowing what they are even being taught or to get it done without knowing what they are really doing. Many teachers find or have many different ways to help students understand what is being taught and also make sure that student is actually trying and getting by so easy. Most students will do what they have to do to get them by and that isnt really helping us learn.
Evidence
Effective
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A165EEC2E930
In conclusion it is in the best interests of most students if the teachers make the summer projects because they have a much better understanding of what can help us and what we need to know for the upcoming school year. In most classes the teachers spend the beginning of the school year going over material from the previous year, if the teacher makes the summer the project they can easily see what we do need to go over and what we dont and it can save us so much time in the classroom to learn new things instead of going over what we already know and have been taught. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A187E6D70752
Extracurricular activities are extremely fun. For example, in my opinion I love being in a extracurricular activity. After a while of being in a extracurricular activity you get very stressed. Extracurricular activities are sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council. The principal at Generic_School has decided that all students must participate in a activity, but not everyone agrees with his decision.
Lead
Adequate
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I disagree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity
Position
Effective
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not all students have the time to be in a extracurricular activity
Claim
Effective
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and students have less time in their regular classes.
Claim
Ineffective
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A extracurricular activity is useless for some of the students.
Claim
Adequate
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According to teachers students get stress having to deal with an activity at school. Students worry about the activities and could get distracted. More projects or work having to deal with.
Evidence
Adequate
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Also most students are not very interested in sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council.
Evidence
Adequate
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Students could also stress parents with projects and more work from the activities that they have to deal with.
Claim
Adequate
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For example, my friend Generic_Name gets stressed with the work he already has in class and a extracurricular activity would not be very helpful for him.
Evidence
Adequate
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Having less time in their regular classes makes teachers also stress. Teachers have less time in class to teach students what they need to learn. Students learn less and goof more around in the activities. The grades of students could decrease badly because they are not learning enough. Also not all students are caught up in class and they would have less time in class to finish their makeup work. For example, some students do not show up to school and they would not have much time to catch up with the work that other students have finished in class.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Once my friend Generic_Name was in two extracurricular actives he was very stressed after only two weeks. He had so much work he owed and did not have enough time in class to catch up. So my friend Generic_Name decided to convince his principle to take the extracurricular activities away. The reason was because the activities made students stress to much.
Evidence
Adequate
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I do not agree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity because not all students have the time to deal with a extracurricular activity, and students have less time in their regular classes.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Using technology to read student,s emotional expressions some student's are bored some sleeping and some stressing doing the test but the others are happy and working in the test averyone has the percent of the emotional. taking about Eckman i classified some basic emotions too people now are bored, sleeping, stress, sad, and fear because they want to pass the test and do good this work everyone has something in hi's face. The facial expressions shows some emotional like happy , anger ect. every day we have differnt caract or diferent emotional feeling and i don't know how Monna Lisa can be really intended tom bring a smile for us face. i thonk i cant recognize how my best friend feeling is just lokking her eyes cause i know her i and I know when she is happy, sad, bored, confusedand fear, I think people show the feelings but some people can's see because they don't care about it. I think that techonology is a great idea for us or some people who want to know feeling about some people important in their life. I think every emotional has one special moment sometimes are not special but its life and we can't do something abou it. Sonetines we have mixed of emotions like the Monna Lissa. She look happy but at the same time serious. Her smile look like different she can't smile like us. The reson of that is now she is just a painting. Leonardo da Vinci's paint the Monna Lisa but he die that the reason she doens't have the aye browns and thats why she sook serious. That is the reason she look like with different emotional feeling cause she don't have eye browns and she look likr that. we can see the movements in the people face and we can take an idea of how they are or how feeling and emotional are the face show everything. My conclussion is everyone have different emotional but if we want to know their feeling or emotional we need to stay with that person we need to meet the people spend time with him/her we can't say oh I need that techonology to see my wife feeling or my husband felling or a fried I mean is a good techonology but we need to spend time with the person the techonology can't do everything to us. We have the option let the techonology do that for us or do that for people if we really care about his feeling or emotional. For me the better option is the second one meet the people and ask some question to show the special boy or girls they are special for me and i want know more about him.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I like how the techonology work but we need to do the staff for us.
Position
Ineffective
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I believe it would be a smart idea because then you can tell how they're emotionally feeling
Position
Adequate
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It could make people happier.
Claim
Ineffective
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And you can tell if it's a real smile by there muscular actions the cheek bones lift the corner of your mouth. But if you got a fake smile, the mouth is stretched sideways faces don't lie professors say.
Evidence
Ineffective
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The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. "Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression" (like not smiling as broadly) Using video imagery. The new emotion-recognition software. They track these special movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units , the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.
Evidence
Adequate
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Imagine a computer thuat shows when you're happy or sad. If you smile when a web ab appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown , the next ad will be different. It could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. "The same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive- for videogames or video surgery most communication is non verbal ,including emotional communication so computers need to understand that too.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Hold on we can actually "calculate" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face ; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movements of one or more muscles is called an "action unit".
Evidence
Ineffective
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Venus exploration I can tell the author cares about venus by putting down many ways humans can exploer it
Position
Ineffective
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from going there he says it was very worthy of going we would just need a blimp like vehicle too hover over 30 miles above the land becuse the surface of venuse is very hot just in the blimp hovering over 30 miles would be 170 dagrees but where the blimp is sitting its at sae levels on earth. They are finding out ways too make electronics go onto venus because there is a lot of danger if we put a human on venus 170 dagrees is too hot for the human body unless they got the blimp at freezing tempatures the people inside will burn righht up blood will boil and people will get heat strokes. But if we put electronicson the planet that can survive the tempatures we might not have a problem with people being burned alive and we could actually exploer the lands of Venus we could make vheacles out of strong silicone for this mission it would be easier too make vehicle out of the stuff.
Evidence
Ineffective
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A29CD7941E1D
If i did sothing affer school i would be more in to school. Would you want to do sothing affer school. Like sports, Work on the yearbook,Or serve the student council,Or help clean up the school. If we did more thing's for the school and less about your self. You would be a better person. Be for i did affer school actirty i didn't have miny frinds. I was the kid that had no frinds i would eat at luch by my self. But then i did affer school actiry then i strared to make more and more frinds.
Lead
Adequate
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I think that we all should have affer school actiry
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so we can all have more frinds and so we can tust be a better person
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Some days i think we all need to sothing besides going home and doing noting.
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If we did affer school actiry. We would have more time out side or inside work. That or we could all so have a day that we thust sleep then we go out side and play. one day i was so crazy because i did noting that whole day and i need some thing to do affer school. Like if i had sothing to do affer scchool a would a lot more com.
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And if we all did a sport we would all would be storger and more fit.
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If we did football,soccer. bassball,bastkball, or sothing like that you wold be fine. Be for i did a affer school actiry i was a big boy. But then i did the affer school actirty then i was not so big iney more. i would be done with shool and i would go srate to the actirty.
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